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Baldev or devrani apne aap ko sainiko se ghire pate hai devrani darr k baldev se chipak jati hai

Rajpal:pakad lo in adharmio ko

do sainik baldev ki ore tezi se ghode ko daudate hai

devrani ishare se baldev ko bhagne k lye kehti hai baldev nadi k tat par ret k andar apna pair ghusata hai or ek jhatke se sainiko k upar de marta hai jis se pura vatavaran dhul dhul ho jata hai or sainiko k aakh me dhul jane se wo dekh nahi pate hai

mauqe ka fayda utha kar baldev jaldi se devrani ko uske saman sahit goad me utha k ghode per bithata hai or khud chhalang maar k bhagata hai

jab tak dhul chhat pata or sainik ko sab sujhta baldev or devrani ghode se nikal jate hai


Rajpal:wo bhag rahe hai paschim ki disha chalo

Senapati or sainik baldev or devrani k peeche apna ghoda bhagane lagte hai kuch doori par baldev devrani ko apne goad me lye ghode ko bhaga raha tha

Rajpal:ruk jao nahi to tum dono k lye acha nahi hoga

Devrani:rukna nahi beta le chalo mujhe ye sab se door khas kar ye rajpal se

baldev ghode ko bhagate bhagate jungle ki ore mode leta hai or uske peeche rajpal bhi jungle ki ore mod leta hai


Baldev ghane jungle me ghode ko kabhi daaye jhadion k andar modta to kabhi baye or rajpal bhi unka peecha karna chhor nahi raha tha..baldev k aage ek chhota sa pahad ata hai wo ghode k lagam ko kheechta hai ghoda samajhte hue hehhyate hue pahad k upar tezi se chadhne lagta hai or fir tezi se utarta hai par rajpal or senapati k ghoda bhut dheeme gati se chadhta hai or jab wo pahad par pahuchta hai tab tak baldev ghane jungle me ghode ko ghusa deta hai

Rajpal:ye fir hamare hath se nikal gaye

senapati:chinta na kijiye maharaj seema se bahar me inhe jane nahi dunga

rajpal:theek hai tum sainiko ko ye khabar pahucha do

Senapati:theek hai

rajpal:chalo ab wapas mahal

Rajpal or senapati wapas mahal ki ore chal dete hai

mahal pahuch kar rajpal dekhta hai ab tak uski maa jeevika hosh me aagayi hai or uske aakho me aasu the or lagbhag ghar ka har vyakti aaj udaas tha

Jeevika:aagaya beta hum sab tera he raah dekh rahe the

rajpal apne sar ka pagdi ko fekte hue baith ta hai

Rajpal:tum sab k ghar me rehte hue aisa kaise ho sakta mujhe is baat ki khabar q nahi ki gayi ..kaise mere naak k niche ye dono aisa karte rahe or aaj baldev ne apne maa ko bhaga le gaya par mujhe bhanak tak nahi hui Q aaaaakhir q mujhe uttar chahiye iska

Shurushti:maharaj jaise he mujhe shaq hua inpar me inke kaksha ki talashi ki or prem patra mila

Rajpal:maa kya aapko indono k lakshan se nahi lage k ye dono kya gul khila rahe hai?

jeevika:beta tum itni chinta mat karo we adharmi the wo tumhare layaq he nahi thi devrani jaisi bhrast mahila or baldev jaisan adharmi putra maine nahi dekhi

Rajpal:chinta kaise na karu maa aaj pure mahal me ye baat sabko pata chal gayi hai

utne me raja ratan singh apne kaksha se nikalte hue

Ratan:rajpal tum sahi me namard nikle tumhare samne se tumhari rani ko tumhari patni ko koi bhaga k le gaya or tum kuch nahi kar paye

Rajpal:humne koshish ki

Ratan:pakad to nahi paye na or unke prem pooja tumhe itne dino se nahi dikhi ab haath mal k kuch nahi hoga ek stree ko sambhal nahi sake tum

Rajpal ratan singh k gusse ko jayez samajh kar chup chap tha

Ratan:me aise adharmi pariwar k sath ek kshan nahi ruk sakta or rahi baat meri khwaish ki wo me janta hu kaise puri karni hai

Rajpal:ary ruko to abhi kaha jaoge

Ratan:apne rajya rajpal bass tum sab apna khyal rakho or dhund sako to dhund lo apne rani ko chhura lo apne bete k chungal se

ratan singh ye keh kar bahar aaajata hai or apne ghode se Kuberi ki ore chal deta hai


Rajpal apne aakhe band kya

rajpal:ye maa beta k wajah se mujhe kitne beizzati sahni pad rahi hai

Rajpal:kamla radha vaidh ji kya aap logo ko bhi in dono me kuch chal raha hai ye mehsus nahi hua ?

sab ne nakar dya or kaha unhe is baat ki khabar nahi thi

Rajpal:kamla tum sach batao mujhe q lagta hai tumhe pata tha

Kamla:nahi maharaj aise adharm hone ki bhanak bhi mujhe lagti to me sabse pehle me he unhe ghar me beizzat kar deti

Rajpal:jaao tum sab apne apne kaksha me mujhe akela chhor do

sab jane lagte hai or rajpal apne kaksha me ja kar let jata hai

thodi der me shurushti aajati ha

shurushti:maharaj

rajpal:han maharani

shurushti:aap inke baare me soch kar apni sehat kharab na kare in dono ne jo kiya uska fal unhe awashya milega

rajpal k paas baith kar shurushti rajpal ka sar dabane lagti hai


idhar baldev or devrani jungle ko cheerte hue tezi se ghatrashtra k seema tak pahuch jate hai or baldev apne talwar nikal kar ghoda bhagane lagta hai

seema par sainik jaise dekhta hai baldev ko inke peecha karne lagte hai

tabhi baldev apna talwar zor se gol gol ghuma kar

"sainiko hume jane do nahi to tum sab jante ho ye talwar tum sab ka khun pee sakti hai ek he sath"

Baldev k aakho me jalte angare dekh sainik peeche hat jate hai or baldev ghode ko aage badhate hue Ghatrashtra k seema ko paar kar leta hai

Baldev ab ghode ko dheere karte hue

Baldev:ab kaha jaye hum

devrani:hum bhaiya se baat karenge

Baldev:par mama ji kya hamara rishta swikar karenge

Devrani:hamare paas or koi rasta nahi hai senapati or rajpal hume kahi na kahi se dhund nikalenge or ratan bhi

Baldev:par maa

Devrani:prem kye ho tum ab pariksha deni padegi baldev ab samay aagaaya hai mera hath mango mere bhaiya se

Baldev:agar nahi mane to

Devrani:to bhi me tumhari he rahungi

Dono paras ki ore ghode ko modte hai

thodi door jane k baad devrani ko ek bazar nazar aata hai or ab lagbhag raat ho gayi thi


Devrani:mujhe bhuk lag gai subah se kuch nahi khaya tumne bhi chalo kuch kha le

Dono bazar me ja kar laddu wale k paaas ja kar ghode se utarte hai devrani sawdhani se apne chadar ko apne muh par odh leti hai jis se koi use pehchan na paye

Baldev:bhaiya laddu kaise diya

Ladduwala:bhaiya 30 sikke k ek ser hai

baldev sikke nikal k deta hai

Ladduwala:ary ye to ghatrashtra k sikke hai

Baldev:han

Ladduwala:aap dono ghatrashtra se ho kya

Baldev:nahi hum kuberi se hai ratan singh k rajya se sainik hu me

Ladduwala:or ye aapki patni

Baldev:ji han meri patni

Ladduwala:lagta hai inki tabyat theek nahi ya kuch zyada he thand lag rahi hai

Baldev:aap hume laddu do pehle

Ladduwala:kahe chidh rahe ho ..ghatrashtra se yaad aya aaj ek sainik aya tha waha ek adhbhut ghatna ghati hai

Baldev:kya ghatna"

devrani bhi ab dhyan se laddu wale halwai ki baat sun ne lagi

Ladduwala hasta hua kehta hai
"bhaiya kaliyug aagaya hai Ghatrashtra ki rani or unke putra ka prem prasang chal raha rha or aaj rajpal k putra apne maa ya fir ye kahiye rajpal ki chhoti rani ko bhaga le gaya"

Ye sunte he devrani darr se kaanp jati hai or ladduwale ko dekhne lagti hai

Baldev:bhaiya hume kya pata is bare me me khud chhutti par hu..kya aap dekhe ho wo yuvraj ko jo apne maa ko le ke bhag gaya

Ladduwala:dekha nahi hu or dekhna bhi nahi aise adharmi vyakti ko..aap ye sab chhoriye aap laddu khaye

Baldev apne hath me laddu leye devrani k sath ek vriksha k neeche baithak pe baith kar laddu khane lage wahi par baithe kuch log aapas me baat kar rahe the or sab k muh per sirf baldev or devrani ki baat he thi

baldev or devrani waha se jaldi nikalte hai or raat me rukna bhi theek nahi samajhte hai or paras ki ore ghoda bhagane lagte hai..


Raat bhare ghoda bhagane k baad devrani neend k maare thak jati hai or baldev k goad me he so jati hai or baldev bass ghode k lagam ko sambhalte hue paras ki ore badh raha tha

Subah me Ghatrashtra mahal

Rajpal apni talwar laga kar or puri tayyari kar k jaise yudha me ja raha ho mahal se bahar nikalta hai

rajpal:senapati somnath

senapati:ji maharaj

rajpal:unka kuch pata chala

tabhi mahal se shurushti bahar aati hai

shurushti:maharaj aap ne kal se kuch khaya nahi kha lijiye kuch

Rajpal:mai tab tak nahi khaunga jab tak wo dono mere samne na aajaye

Rajpal:senapati tum har padosi rajya me ye khabar faila do jo hamari madad karega un dono ko pakadne me hum use muh manga inaam denge

senapati:par maharaj waise to ye baat aag ki tarah puri dunya me fail jayegi

Rajpal:mujhe kuch nahi pata mujhe baldev or devrani chahiye zinda ya murda or abhi ghatrashtra k jitne gao hai or jitne chaudhri hai in gao k sabko bula kar keh do hum indono ko fansi ki saja suna dye sab ko pata chalna chahiye in dono kitna bada paap kiya hai

Senapati :jo aagya maharaj

senapati har gao k mukhiya ya chaudhri ko apat baithak me bulata hai or sari baat batate hue kehte hai maharaj ne apne chhoti rani or bete ko maut ki saza suna di hai sab hairan pareshan the ye sun kar or apas me baldev or devrani ko kosh rahe the itni buri harkat par


Sham ho jati hai or baldev or devrani paras pahuch he jate hai mahal k bahar sainik dekh samajh jate hai ye to wahi log hai jo kuch din pehle mehman ban k aaye the

Baldev or devrani paras k mahal pahuch kar sainik se puchte hai devraj kaha hai or sidha devraj k paas pahuch jate hai jo apne kaksha me the

Devraj:ary meri behan devrani tum ary bhanje tum dono bhut jaldi aagaye or ye kya haal bana lya tum dono ne

Baldev or devrani devraj ka pair chhute hai


Devrani:aap mere pita samman hai aap se ek anurodh hai

Devraj:kaho meri bachi

Baldev:baat ye hai mama ji k hume desh nikal ka hukm dya hai

devraj:kisne

devrani:rajpal ne

devraj achambhit ho kar

Devraj:par aisa kya apradh

Baldev:apradh kya prem ka maine

Devraj:mai samjha nahi

To be continued
 

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A very nice update upto the expectations, hope Devraj will understand and ask sultan to help. Hooriyaa will consolidate Sultan in understanding the situation why they have taken these steps and make Sultan ready to help Baldev and Devrani.

Or let them a safe passage away from his kingdom so that Rajpal can't do anything

At Ghatrastra front let Somnath take the kingdomship otherwise Maharani shurustri will remove Somnath out of the way
 
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Kahani serf or serf aak buray bhyanuk udh kee turaf jaty hay dekhay Davraj or Badshah meer Wahid in dono kee madaad kurty hay yaa nahi
 
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kya boss, tumhari tarrif mein kya likho sabdh hi nahi rahe. Essa dimag lagaya hai aur Varnan Kiya hai, majja aa gya.
 
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