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aaj shukrawar ka din tha or Paras me Mallika e jahan Hoor e jahan apne bete shamshera k aane par bhut khush thi
Shamshera:ammi kya kya hai khane me
Hooriya apne dasio se bulwa kar kai bade thalio me alag alag kism ka khana pados deti hai
Shamshera:ammi itni achi khushbu,or itne saare khane banane ki kya zarurat thi
me kaun sa mehman hu
Hooriya:mere laal ek waqfa beet gaya tha tujhe dekhe hue ye sab mere laal ki khushi me hai
Shamshera:shukria ammi jaan
Hooriya:tum kha lo fir aaj tumhe ibadat k lye bhi jana hai din to yad hai na tumhe Aaj
shamshera:zarur ammi jan
Hooriyar han apne abba huzur ko bhi le kar jana unhe khuda ki shakht zarurat hai
Hooriya waha se apne kamre me aa jati hai or nahane jane k lye jhat se apna Hijab nikal ne lagti hai
hooriya apne ap ko aayine me dekhti hai uska lamba badan uspe 42 ki chhati or uske 46 ki gaand qayamat dha rahi thi or wo naha kar ek alag kism ka hijab pehan leti hai
Or khud ko ibadat k lye tayyar karne lagti hai ,hooriya kabhi bhi bahar hijab me he jati thi ,hooriya ka chehra uske dasio k alawa or uske pariwar k alawa koi or nahi dekha tha
Ghatrashtra
Shukrawar dopahar k bhojan k baad badri or shayam ki apne ghar wapsi ki tayyari hone lagti hai
devrani apne rajya k har wo prasidh cheeze apne putra baldev k mitro ko bandhne lagti hai.
shayam:ary mausi ji itna kasht karne ki kya zarurat thi
Devrani:tum log ghatrashtra se jao or tumhe khali hath bhej de aisa nahi ho sakta
Baldev:man me) saale shayam mausi nahi bhabi bol to or zyada maan dan hoga
Badri:par fir bhi kya itna hum ghode pr le ja sakenge
devrani:aaram se chale jayenge ,bahane na banao
Baldev:man me) dekho aise jabardasti kar rahi hai jaise k inke dewar ho ye dono
devrani:tu udhar q khada hai baldev idhar aa kar madad karo
Baldev:haan maa
shayam:baldev dekho maa kitni kam karti hai ,ab ye bhari bharkam karne ki umar nahi tum to vivah kar lo
baldev:nahi maa itni kamzor nahi hui
baldev:man me)abe salo tumhe kya pata k me inse he vivah karne k firak me hu or tumhari bhabi devrani me itni shakti hai k tum dono ko ek sath pachar de
devrani mauqe ka fayda utha k,baldev ko chidhate hue
Devrani:han ek achi si ladki dekho tumhare rajya me(or halka muskurati hai)
Baldev ye sun kar apna muh utar leta hai or ruth jata hai
shayam:q nahi hum to koshish karenge k jaisi iski chahat hai usi anusar kanya mil jaye
baldev:aisi aaj kal milni mushkil hai,me to kehta hu milegi he nahi
shayam:bhai hume pata hai tumhe sanskari k sath sath naye soch rakhne wali kanya chahiye
Baldev:han aise kanyaye eki dukki milti hai
or devrani ki ore dekh kar "or milti bhi hai to unke hazar nakhre hote hai"
Badri:bhai ab tumhe waisi tewar ki majbut ladki chahiye to kuch sehan to karna padega
devrani is baat pe chutki lete hue
Devrani:han badri or waisi kanya ko sambhal lena kisi airu gairu khairu ki bass ki baat nahi
(baldev ko dekh muskurati hai)
baldevjosh me aa kar)Badri tum to jante ho mere shaili hai k me 10 ko sambhal lu ye ek kis khet ki muli hai,
ab devrani ko tana sun ne ki bari thi
devrani is baat par baldev ko na dekh andar se khush ho kar muskura kar apne ap ko dekhti hai
devrani:man me)is muli ko khane k lye tumhe din raat zameen ki sichai karni padegi baldev,
ye soch kar devrani ki chut paniya jati hai
inhi baato k beech sari tayyari ho jati hai or wo dono apne apne ghar ko nikal padte hai
badri or shayam waada karte hai k jab bhi baldev ko kisi bhi prakar ki zarurat hogi wo sahayta karenge or ghatrashtra bhut jald wapas aayenge
Paras me
Sham k 4 baje apni khuda ki ibadat kar hoorjahan apne sultan ko khojne nikalti hai,uski dasi use kehti hai k wo baithe kahi kitabe padh rahe hai hooriya waha pahuchti hai
Hooriya:sultan
Meer wahid:aayiye muhtarma
Hooriya:aapne aaj ibadat ki ya bas
hooriya:tumhare jaise ibadatgar biwi k rehte hue bhala sultan ki kya mazal k wo ibadat me hissedari na le
Hooriya:khuda aap per rehmat banaye rakhe
Sultan:to batayiye mallika e jahan Sultan meer wahid aapki kya khidmat kar sakta hai
Hooriya:aaj kal sulta jung me mashroof hote hai mallika e jahan ko bhala kaun puchta hai
Sultan:aap k husn k hum ab kayil hai or jab aap sawere kale hijab me khud ko dhak kar aai thi tab bhi aapke lachakte is bade gaand ko dekh or aapki hilte doodh ko dekh mera bura haal tha
hooriya:budhe ho gaye ho ap ab to 60 k upar ho
sultan:par meri biwi to jawan hai
sultan hoooriya k kareeb ja kar khada hota h
45 varshiya hooriya mishra ki rani thi jise meer wahid ne mishra fateh karne k baat laya tha
Sultan apne dahine hath se uske baye doodh ko pakad leta hai or sehlata hai
Hooriya:sach me aapko mujhe dekh jama karne ka dill hua to aap mujhe ishara kar dete,me kahi kone me aap se mil leti
Sultan:koi baat nahi abhi sari kasar nikal deta hu
or uske doodh ko zor se dabane laga
sultan:aah tumhare ye doodh kitne bade hai hooriya
hooriya sultan ka hath pakad kar apne hath se doodh ko dabwane lagti ha
kuch der khub ache se dono bade gendo ko ache masalne k baad sultan se raha nahi jata or wo apne kapde utar fekta hai
Sultan:ab jaldi karo hooriya jaan
Hooriya jhat se niche baith k sultan k aadhe khade land ko muh me le kar pehle uske tope pr chat ti hai fir use apne muh me thoos leti hai
Sultan:aaaah hoooriya aaah aise he chooso
Hooriya:uhmm uhmmm uhmm
Sultan ab hooriya ko uthata hai or upar se uski kameez ko utha kar uske bhari doodh ko nanga kar deta hai or use daboch leta hai
Sultan:kya kase hue or bhari mamme hai tumhare
Hooriya:aapke ise sakht se naram kar do daba k
ab sultan hooriya ko niche kar k hooriya k doodh k beech apne laude ko daal uske bhari mamme chodne lagta hai
sultan:aah hooriya
Sultan ab apna lauda apne hath se pakad kar zor se ek doodh par lauda "thap" se marta hai
Hooriya aakhe band kar "aaah sultan"
ab sultan paas me rakhe mez k upar hooriya ko jhukne ka ishara karta hai or hooriya apni badi gaand ko hilaye jhuk jati hai
sultan:thapp kar k gaand per ek lappad marrta hai"kyaa mote gaand hai tumhari mallika e jahan"
Hooriya:aaah nahi sultan..
Sultan:is par fateh kar k jitna maza mujhe aya utna puri dunya par fateh kar k nahi aya
sultan apna land ab jhuki hui hooriya k chut me daal deta hai
Sultan:ye lo ab budhe ka land
hooriya:aaaaah" sultan dheere
Hooriya:aaaaah basss sultan dheere se mujhe bhut dard ho raha hai
sultan:to seedha let ja meri jan
hooriya ab palat kar let jati hai
Hooriya k doodh hawa me kisi bade gend ki trah hil rahe the or sultan ek ba fir se dhakke lagana shuru karta hai
Hooriya:issshh aaah sultan
Sultan
Hooriya:nahi sultan abhi mat pani chhorna aaram se
hooriya smajh jati k sultan ka pani nikalne wala hai
Ye sab harkat in mia biwi k alawa koi or dekh rha tha wo tha inka sahzada Shamshera jo apne maa k ye roop ko dekh wahi ruk gaya tha darasal wo apne abba se kisi jungi kitab lene aaya tha par jaise he wo waha pahuchta hai to pata hai uske maa hooriya chilla rahi thi
Hooriya minnate kar rahi thi paani na chhore par 6 7 dhakke laga kar sultan nidhal ho jata hai
Hooriya:aaah nahi sultan
or niche sultan k laude ko dekhti hai jo murjhane laga tha
Shamshera:apne maa k bade gaand or doodh dekh pagal ho gaya tha
"ammi jaan itni ibadatgar hone k bad bhi kaise apne shauhar se din dahare chudwa rahi hai or aaj tak maine kabhi ammi ko bina hijab nahi dekha bachpana k baad or aaj inke bade doodh or gaand dekh yaqeen nahi hota k itne bade cheez ammi chhupa kaise leti hai "or shamshera wha se nikal jata hai
Ghatrashtra
Raat k bhojan k baad devrani ja kar snan karti hai or khub sajti sawarti hai ,fir apne kaksha k mandir se thoda sindur utha kar laga leti hai or apna mangal sutra pehan leti hai
Devrani:man me) aaj to baldev to mujhe dekh pagal ho jayega ,din me bhut bak bak kar raha tha na
Baldev apne kaksha se nikal kar devrani ki kaksha ki ore ja rha tha
baldev:man me) ye mere mitra bhi aise samay par aagaye jab me unki bhabi unke lye tayar kar raha hu ye do din badri or shayam k wajah se kharab ho gaya
Baldev tezi me chal raha tha k uske kaano me awaz aati hai
Jeevika:Baldev
Baldev:dadi ap
jeevika:han kaha ja rhe ho pote
Baldev:wo maa k kaksha me
jeevika:Q
baldev k paas iska jawab nahi tha
or jeevika ghur kar baldev ko dekh rahi thi
Baldev:wo dadi kuch rajya ki stithi ki bat karni thi
jeevika:acha beta( man me:rajya ki ya tumhare apne dill ki)
Baldev:theeek hai dadi aashirwad do
Jeevika :jeete raho
Baldev:man me) koi na koi aahe jata hai kam me bandha ban ne,pr koi bat nahi aaj sari kasar nikal lunga is devrani ka
Baldev devrani k kaksha me ata hai
devrani mez par rakhe aam ko kaat uska ras bana rahi baldev ki aahat use samajh aa jati hai
baldev dekhta hai uski maa halka jhuki kuch kaat rahi hai
baldev:man me)aaj to maa dulhan ki trah tayar hai jaise he aaj meri suhagrat ho or gaand niharta hai
Devrani ko darwaza ki chhitkali lagne ki kano me awaz aati hai or wo piche mud kar dekhti hai
Baldev uske gaand ko kha jane wali nazro se dekh raha tha jise dekh devrani ki chut me chiti daudne lagti hai
Devrani:tumne ye chhitkili q laga di baldev
Baldev:wo maa bass hum dono ko thoda sa ekant jagah chahiye na maa or waise bhi do dino se humne dhang se baatcheet nahi ki
devrani:Baldev me tumhari maa hu patni nahi jo baatcheet karne k lye
ekant jagah chahiye or chhitkili laga di tumne(muskurati hai)
Baldev:Maa din me tum he keh rahi thi na vivah karni hai meri to samjho me abhyas kar raha hu patni k sath rehne ka
devrani:me aam ras bana lu
or devrani jhukti hai
baldev apni maa se ja kar chipak jata hai
devrani:tum piyoge na aam ras
baldev:han pehle dabaunga fir nihcodke ras peeunga
devrani:agar me tumhe bina mehnat kiye ras nikal k du
Baldev:to bhi peeunga apka ras
baldev ab apne devrani k gaand pr tika deta hai apna land or maze lene lagta ha
Baldev:man me)haay kya gaddedaar gaand hai
devrani:aah" aakh band ho jati hai
devrani apne ap par qabu kar kisi bhi trah aam ras bana leti hai or ghum kar baldev ko deti hai
dono paas me sofe per baith jate hai
Devrani:kaisa laga aam ras
Baldev:kya ye dasehri aam k hai
or devrani k doodh k traf dekhta hai devrani k doodh k beech mangalsutra latak raha tha jis se uske ubhar or adhik sundar lag rahe the
Devrani:nahi ye maalde aam k hai
baldev k aakho me jhak k
Baldev:agar malde ka ras aisa hai to dasehri ka kaisa hoga
baldev devrani k u ubhare hue 38 ki chuchi dekh kehta hai
Devrani apni aakhe niche kar leti hai sharm se
Baldev:ek baat kahu
Devrani:han kaho
i
baldev devrani k chucho ko masti se dekh devrani k kan k pas ja kar uske kane me
"maa ye dono to dasehri se bhi bade hai "
or fir apne maa k doodh k taraf ishara karta hai
devrani:halke se uske kandhe pe chata marti hai" badmash hatt"
or uthh kar jane lagti hai
Baldev uska hath pakar kar
"maa sach kaha hai"
Devrani:siski lete hue "baldev"
Baldev:chhupaye nahi chhupte maa
or ye sun na tha k devrani k doodh pr se uska dupatta hatt jata hai or uske baaho ko pakar baldev tham leta hai
Devrani:muskura kar)tu sach nahi kehta tu jhutta hai
or lajja kar apna sar jhuka leti hai jab use baldev ab bhi uske doodh ko tadte dekhti h
Baldev mauqe ka fayda utha ka devrani ko apne goad me utha leta hai or bistar ki ore chalne lagta hai
Baldev:maa kya kaha tha tumne din me k sab k bass ki baat nahi k smbhal le
devrani:hmm maine tumhe tumhare patni k lye kaha tha
Baldev:dekho me tumhe smbhale khada hu or tum kisi bache ki trah latki ho
kya fayda tumhare is bhari shareer ka
devrani uske chhati pe mukka marti hai
"ye lo fir bade mahabali bante ho"
Baldev:maa me tumhe smbhal sakta hu to soch lo kisi ko bhi smbhal sakta hu
devrani:han baba tum ne mujh jaisi bhari bharkam ko smbhal lya to kisi ko bhi smbhal loge
Baldev:par mujhe kisi or ko nahi smbhalna
devrani:to kise smbhalna hai
devrani k chut paani chhor chhor laal ho gayi thi
or apne gaand k nichle hisse pr use land bhi mehsus ho rha tha
Baldev:bass tumhe smbhalna hai
Devrani:soch lo
baldev:soch lo
devrani:bhari pad sakta hai
baldev:me sb sahne tayyar hu
itne me baldev devrani ko palang pr lita ta hai
jeevika:baldev o baldev
baldev gussa hota hai or chidh kar
"ji dadi"
devrani has deti hai
devrani:man me)bada aya bache ki trah chidh gaya jaise iski patni hu or ise koi beech karyakarm me takleef de di
devrani ko haste dekh
Baldev:tumhe to me baad me dekh lunga
Baldev:aaya dadi
fir baldev devrani ko chhor dadi k paas chala jata hai.
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बेहतरीन, लाजवाब, अदभुतUpdate 45
Baldev leta hua palang par apni maa ko dekhta rah jata hai kaise uski badi maa ne uska pura maza kirkira kar dya tha or waha se devrani ko le kar chali gayi thi shurushti
“ye badi maa ko to sukun nahi maa ko thoda sa bhi khush nahi dekh sakti aadhi zindagi to barbad he kar dya meri rani ka inlogo ne aadhi zindagi baaki hai use me inlogo ko barbad nahi karne dunga “
Ab tak baldev ka land shant ho chuka tha or wo bujhe man k sath bahar aata hai to dekhta hai uski maa or badi maa dono rasoi me hai
Devrani dekhti hai k baldev ka chehra utra hua hai or wo rasoi me kam karte hue “baldev uth gaye tum ,tumhare lye aaj kya banau?”
shurushti wahi par thi
Baldev:Han
Bass itna keh kar muh latkaye sidhio par chadhne lagta hai
Shurushti:ary devrani isko kya hua
Devrani:muskura kar”kya hoga ise so kar utha hai na”
Man me)ise pyar ho gaya hai
Shurushti :par fir bhi devrani isne muh q bana rakha hai or tumhara jawab bhi nahi dya
Devrani:wo uski tabyat kharab hai na islye
Man me)wo bhale se nahi bola par me uske jazbaat samajh gayi
shurushti:han ho sakta hai wahi to mai bolu Baldev jaisa mehnati ladka bhare dopehri q so raha hai
Is baat par devrani sharm se sar jhuka kar muskura leti hai man he man”ye ladka to waise to mehnat he kar raha tha par apne maa par”
Devrani apne man me badbadati hai
Shurushti:kya ?
Devrani:nahi kuch nahi ,me keh rahi thi jaldi se khana bana leti hu aap jaao kamla ko bhej do
Shurushti:kya baat hai aaj meri sautan mujhe khanaa banane nahi de rahi or hamesha se. Mere se kaam karwane k lye tunakti thi aaj ulta ganga kaha se beh rahi hai
Devrani:kya kaha didi
Shurushti:kuch nahi me jati hu kamla jo bhej dungi
Shurushti chali jati hai or devrani apne kaam me lag jati hai
“Ye baldev bhi na ek pal nahi rahta mere bina aaj mujhe mehsus hua k ek mard ka sath kya hota hai or ek aurat k jeevan me purush ka kam kya hai”
“Nahi to ye Rajpal to jeevan bhar kabhi na mujhe khoja na pucha na pyar kya sabka badla lega mera baldev”
Or muskurati hai
Tabhi kamla aajati hai
Kamla:haay banno to badi muskura rahi hai lagta hai tumhare darya me gote laga lya baldev ne
devrani dekhti hai samne kamla khadi ho kar uspar taane kass rahi thi
devrani:chup kar kamini
Kamla:ha ha ab mujhe q bataogi dushman jo hu
Devrani:aisa nahi hai kamla
Kamla:to fir batao na udghatan ho gaya kya?
Devrani ek damm sharm se laal ho jati hai
Devrani:pagal wo sab nahi hua
Kamla:kya sab nahi hua ,ghanto bhar andar qais the tum dono darwaza laga k bhari dopahar me or kehte ho kuch nahi hua
“Burbak smjhi ho?
Devrani:ary kaha na kamla waisa kuch nahi hua
Kamla:to kya andar baith k pooja archana kar rahi thi or path padh rahi thi
Devrani:aisa nahi hai wo to bass
Upar upar se
Devrani apna sar jhuka leti hai or mare sharam ki gadi ja rahi thi
Kamla:acha to bass ragda ragdi hui hai,khub kass k ragda hai baldev ne dekho ab tak gardan laal hai
Devrani ye sun kar apne pair k angutho ko ungli par rakh kar”bass karo kamla khana banao”
Kamla:acha thek hai mahrani
Apko pata hai Mahrani shurushti kah rahi thi k baldev ki tabyat kharab hai or tum adhyay khatm kar rahi thi kaksha me
Or kamla has deti hai thhaka laga kar jise dekh devrani bhi has deti hai
“Ab kya kehti kamla”
Devrani masum bante hue kehti hai
Kamla:wo to hai apne sahi bewaqoof banaya use
Devrani:hmm jhut bolna pada
Kamla:han to kya batate aap k aap kuch or bhakti me leen the or waise bhi kuch jeevan me pane k lye or khaskar aaj k samay to jhut bolna he padta hai
Devrani:hmm
Kamla:kuch acha hone k lye kuch bura karna sansar ka niyam hai devrani
Or tum us niyam ko jitna jaldi seekh jao utna acha hai nahi to log sirf tumhara ishtemal karenge tumhare lye koi kuch nahi karega
Devrani:han kamla ab mujhe apne jeevan me khushi k lye kisi k bharose nahi rehna hai khud karna hai jo karna ,sab apne khushi k lye mere khushi ka gala ghote to sahi to me q kisi niyam or samaj ka sochu me to kisi ki khushi ka gala to nahi ghot rahi
“Or zarurat pade to wo bhi karungi q k mere sath bhi aisa he hua hai”
Kamla:aapka baldev sab theek kar dega ab zyada mat sochiye mahrani
Devrani:sun na
Devrani kamla k kaan me kuch kehti hai
Dono mil kar khana tayyar karte hai or kamla bari bari se sabko khana tayyar hone ka suchna de deti hai
Shurushti jeevika devrani baldev sab mil kar khane lagte hai q k aaj rajpal raat tak he aane wala tha
Sab chup chap kha rahe the baithe
Devrani k samne baldev baitha apna sar jhukaye kha raha tha par apna sar uthane ka nam nahi le raha tha
Devrani:man me)rus gaya mera kanhaiya
Shurushti:Kamla or sabzi laao
Kamla:abhi laai
Kamla sabzi le kar aati hai
Kamla:lagta hai aapko achi lagi bhut
Shurushti :ha swadisht to hai paneer aaj ka
Kaun banaya?
Kamla:banaya to maine par tel masala sab Mahrani devrani k hisab ka tha
Shurushti;oh
Devrani abhi bhi baldev ko dekhe ja rahi thi or wo apna sar jhukaye dheere dheer kha raha tha
Baldev ko gumshum dekh ab devrani ka bhi chehra utar jata hai
Devrani:baldev ye sabzi lo na tumhare pasand ki hai
Baldev chup rehta hai
Devrani chammach se uske plate me rakhne wali thi k wo apna hath se chamch ko piche karta hai
Jise dekh devrani wapas sabzi katore me rakh deti hai
Baldev uth jata hai or hath dho kar Mahal k bahar jata hai
Devrani ishare se kamla ko kehti hai k roko baldev ko wo khaya nahi
Kamla:ary yuvraj aap ne bhut kam khaya
Apka manpasand paneer tha
Baldev:bass meri khurak kam hai mera itne se he pet bhar jata hai aaj chaha wo koi cheez ho
Or ek nazar devrani ko tirchi nazar se dekhta hai or palat kar jane lagta hai mahal k bahar
Devrani jo ghumshum thi ab halka muskura k shararat se “kitna khayega baldev khilaungi na q ghabrata hai or jis din mujhe laga k mere se tera man bhar gaya us din bataungi aaj bada bhav kha raha hai”
Man me apne aap se baat krti hai devrani
Bhojan k baad sab ja kar apne apne kaksha me kuch samay sone k lye jate hai par devrani ab bhi bartan hata kar wahi baithi thi
Kuch der me baldev use wapas aata dikhai deta hai
“Kitne muchho par taav dye hua hai jaise iski patni hu me or iska milan karne de nahi rahe sab ,abhi se haal hai is ladke ka aage kya karega”
“Par pyar bhi to mujhse he karta hai na “
Devrani baldev ko dekhte hue seedhio pad chadhne lagti hai jise andar aata hua baldev dekhta hai
“Ye maa ko kya hua wo upar q ja rahi hai”
Baldev bass maa ko he dekhe na raha tha jo ek balkhati nagin si upar ja rahi thi
Jaise he devrani ko laga k baldev use ghur raha hai wo apne gaand ko matkati hai
Devrani k dono bade chutar ko yu matakta dekh baldev se raha nahi jata
Baldev man me:”ye gaand bhut matka rahi ho rani jab kutunga na apne musal se to pata chalega”
Devrani man me;ab to baldev ka bacha aayega he mere piche
Or ada se piche mud kar dekhti hai
Or apne gaand pe guman karte hue baldev k kaksha me jati hai
Baldev bhi piche piche choro ki tarah apne maa k gaand ka piche karte hue apne kaksha me pravesh karta hai
Baldev ko uski maa samne khidki per khadi milti hai par use apne palang k samne ek chitra latka hua dikhta hai
Deewar per chitra jo kuch devrani jaisi thi baldev samajh jata hai ye to maa ki he chitra hai
“Ye maa ki chitra kala kisne banai or mere kaksha me kaise ?”
Devrani ko dekhta hai to pata hai wo bade manmohak angadai k ada se khidki k dono ore apne haath rakhe apne gand ko failaye khadi thi
Baldev:man me)ji to chahta hai abhi khade khade he pel du par ye koi kamzor maal nahi hai mehnat karna padega aisi parsi maal ki malai khane k lye
Jalidar blouse or sadi me devrani k manmohak jism ko ghur kar baldev ka land sar uthane laga tha tabhi devrani apna hath piche le jati hai
Or apne blouse ka dori khol deti hai jise dekh fannn se baldev sher hunkar marne lagta hai or devrani ek ada se baldev per kahar barpate hue ghumti hai
Aisi muskan or uttezna se bhari andaz ne baldev ko kuch sochne samajhne ki shakti chheen li wo har gussa bhula kar devrani k paas jana chahta tha wo ja kar usse
Piche se ja kar chipak jata hai
Baldev:maa jaan loge kya
Baldev uske kaano me sargoshi karte hue kehta hai devrani aakh band kye
“Or uska kya jo dopahar se tum mujh se door door ja kar mere dill ko thes pahucha rahe ho”
“muaaf kar do meri raani”
“Uhh aaaah me smjhti hu tumhare pyad ko par tum shayad ye nahi jante baldev me is pyar k lye barso se tarsi hu”
“Maa to us din rajpal se q chipki thi or khub has has k batya rhe the tum dono”
“Wo mai gusse me thi tumhe bura laga mere raja”
“Han meri rani ko koi or chhue raja ko bura to lagega he na”
“Par wo tumhare baap hai uske patni hu me ab bhi tum unke patni k sath chhed chhad karte ho or apne pita ko naam se bula rahe ho”
Baldev ab kas k devrani ko peeche se daboch leta hai
“Isshh baldev”
“Waise pita ka kya jo meri rani ko jeevan bhar taklif dya hai wo mera shatru jo kisi ne mere rani ko dukh dya”
“Uhh aaah mere raja aaram se agar tumhe us din k lye bura laga ho to muaf kar do waise us din bhi tumhare pita ji bass hass kr baatcheet kye or fir us shurushti k kaksha me chale gaye mujhe chhor k aaaah “
“mai nahi chahta k wo rajpal tumhe chhue bhi meri rani”
“Bass tumne keh dya matlab aaj k bad mera koi nahi hai rajpal”
Ab tak gale lagne se chhed chhad se dono k jism garam ho gaye the or dono ek dusre me samana chahte the
“Wo sab chhoro baldev bade gussa the din me sham hote he fir pyar aagaya mujh per”
“Maa tumhare paas wo sab kuch jis se me kya koi bhi mard kisi ki hatya karna bhi gawara kare”
“Uhh sachi baldev”
“Muchhi meri rani”
Baldev ab niche aate hue blouse k dori ko hath se hata kar devrani k peeth par hath ferte hue
“Kya peeth hai tumhare kasam se ise to chatne ka man kar rha hai”
“To chaal lo “
Baldev apna muh laga kar peeth ko chumta hai or peeth ko jaban se chat te hue upar aane lagta ha
“Ummm maaa kya doodhiya peeth hai tumhari”
“Uhhh aaaah baldev aaram pura peeth bheeg gaya mera kitna garam jaban hai tumhari “” aaaaaH. Uhhhhhh”
Baldev upar apne hoth le kar aata hai
“Uhhmmmm ommmmmm aah maaa”
“Ufff baldev meri jaan loge tum ab”
“Agar tum aise bijliya giraogi din dahare to me uska badla aise he lunga”
“hey bhagwan ufff ghar per sab hai Sanyam rakhn seekho me kahi bhagi nahi ja rahu uhhh baldev”
Baldev ab seedha ho kar devrani k gaand par apna 9 inch ka land bhida deta hai
Devrani bhi apne 44 ki gaand par land mehsus kar aakhe band kar li
“Kaisa lag raha hai maa”
“Ohhh baldev besharam ahhh “
Baldev niche se apne maa ko hatho ko apne hatho se apne kabze me lya tha
“Bolo na maa kaisa lag raha hai”
“Uhh baldev acha “devrani ab apne pet pr rakhe baldev k hath ko aapne hath se dabati hai
“Kya itna maza kabhi tumhare pati ne dya “
“Iss chup karo baldev wo meri izzat nahi karta maza to door ki baathai”
“Tumhe mene hridaya se prem kya hai putra tum mere pehle pyar ho mere aashique”
“Pita ji ko unke galati ki saza milegi”
“Wo kya mujhe prem karega pichle 18 varsho me 18 baar bhi mere sath nahi soya”
“Kya maa kya keh rahi ho tum”
“Sachi baldev wo dusht 18 baar kya mere sath milan karega 18 mint bhi nahi kya”
“Iska matlab tumne abhi tak 18 bar bhi milap nabi kya” or baldev devrani k baalo me naak laga kar sunghta hai
“Nahi baldev me jhut nahi kahungi rajpal ne pehli raat me mujhe kuch samay dya suhagrat me uske baad teen ya char baar suhagrat k bad me hum mile”
“Uhh maa ummhaaa “baldev uske gardan par chum raha “tumhare ye zulfo ki khushbu maa”
“Uhh aaah beta tumhe pata hai teen char bar mai he chhup chhupa k unke pas gayi thi q k unko kasam tha shurushti k taraf se”
“Mere jeevan se khela hai is shurushti ne”
“Maa tumhari aayu kitni hai”
“Uhh aah aram se beta ‘me 35 varshiya hu”
“Abhi bhut samay hai paschim desho me ye umar me log vivah karte hai or waise me pure 18 saal ka kasar pura kar dunga”
Baldev ab dheere dheere apne laude ko devrani k darar me gusa dya
“Uh aaah baldev”devrani apni aakhe band kye maze le rahi thi
“Baldev main tumhe apna maana hai dill se rajpal ki tarah dhoka na dena”
“Me uske jaisa bewakoof nahi jo tum jaisi maal k rehte hue kahi muh maaru”
“Sab mard aisa he kahte hai”
Baldev devrani k baal ko khol deta hai
“Maa tumhara chand sa mukhra or sundar ho gaya tumhare surahi daar gardan uff maa tumhare aakh tumhare hoth ki laali tumhare ye gaal doodh se chamak rhe jee karta hai kaat lu”
“Uhh itna pyar karta hai mujhe”
“Yaqeen nahi hota to aazma kar dekha lena kabhi”
“Kitna pyar karte ho mujhse?”
“Apni jaan se bhi zyada”
“Or tum meri rani tum kitna chahti ho apne premi baldev ko”
“Itna k ab se tum mere bhagwan ho or tumhari ichha puri karna he meri bhakti hai baldev”
“Nahi maa pooja to mai karna chahta hu is sangemarmari badan ki tumhe to me Rani nahi maharani bana kar rakhunga or devi maa bana kar din rat upasna karunga “
Devrani baldev ko muskurate hue ek Ada se deewar ki ore dhakel ti hai
“Apne maa ko maharani banayega bada aaya maharaja”
“Maa Ghatrashtra ka agla maharaja mai hu or tum banogi meri maharani”devrani baldev k balisht seene per hath rakhi muskura rahi thi
“Or waise bhi maine Ghatrashtra ki Maharani ko jeet lya hu to maharaja to ho he gaya me mujhe pita ji banaye iski aavshyakta nahi”
“To fir seene me talwar khane k lye tayyar rahna Devrani ko apni maharani banane ka swapn agar dekh rhe ho to”
“Mar jaunga par tumhare har adhure sapne pure karunga is jaan ka kya karna jo apne pyar pe na mar sake”
Devrani k aakho me achanak ek alag sa pyar aajata hai
Baldev yu pyar se dekhte devrani k pas
Apna muh le jata hai
“Yahi karna chah raha tha na dopahar ko”
“Han meri Maharani”
“Aaja mere maharaja”
Devrani baldev k aakho me dekh rahi thi or baldev apne hoth halka khole hue devrani k hotho k kareeb dheere se la raha tha
Jaise he baldev ka hoth devrani k hoth se takrate hai wo aakhe band kar leti hai pad baldev ab bhi uske masum se chand se mukhre me khoya tha
“Uhhh aaaahh”
Baldev halka sa hoth ko pakda tha or fir apne dono hotho se devrani k nichle hotho ko pakad leta hai
“Uhhh bal....”
“Ummmm maa hhh””
Chapppppp chuuuuuu k aawaz se baldev chuse ja raha tha
Devrani ab apne hoth thoda baldev k hoth par ragadti hai
Baldev dono hotho se devrani k nichle hotho ko pakde kheechta hai
Devrani:uhh aaaaah
Zoro se apne chhati upar niche karti hai
Baldev hoth ko chaba k kheech raha tha
Devrani zoro se uttezna me baldev se chipak jati hai devrani apne doodh baldev k seene se satati hai
Baldev uske hoth ko chuste hue uske kamar par hath rakhe use apne paas kheechta hai
Or fir uske hotho ko khub zor se
Ab devrani k dono hoth ko khub zoro se chus raha tha baldev
Devrani:uhh aammmm
Sath dete hue wo bhi uske hotho me apne jibh dal deti hai
“Ummmm aahmmmm “
Uh chuuuu chooooo aaaah unmmmm”
An devrani bhi khub kas k chum chat rahi thi or uske saanse rukne lagi to wo baldev k muh se thoda door hoti hai
Apne andar thuk gatakte hue muskurate hue kehti hai
“Tum thak te nahi baldev”
“Tumhe pyar karte hue barso beet jaye to pata na chale itne jaldi “
“Tum thak gaye kya meri rani”
“Me tumhari maa hu paras ki rani” or baldev use apne se khub jakad k gale laga leta hai
“Ye tumhari chitra mere kaksha me kaise aai or kaha se aai”
“Ary mere raja to tumne dekh lya wo ,wo meri ore se uphar hai mere premi k lye”
“Us chitra me tum maal lag rahi ho tumhare mansal pet ubhar sab dikh rhe hai”
“Huh pagal to dekhna subah sham mere chitra ko”
Devrani baldev k seene ko sehlate hue kehti hai
Baldev ye sun kar fir se baho me devrani ko bharte hue “OOH MERI DEVRANI”
“MERI PREMIKA” or jhat se uske hotho ko fir apne hotho me daba leta hai chussne lagta hai ,devrani uske baho me simti chali jati hai or apne naam pukarne se or uttezit ho jati hai
Devrani:man me “hey bhagwan ye to apne maa ko naam se pukar raha hai jaise me iske patni ho gayi”
Devrani k hoth ki laali ko chuste hue khub zor se jakda tha baldev jise dekh kar devrani bhi apne man me “ab ise premi banaya hai to kahega he nam se”
Devrani ab zor se baldek hoth ko apne hoth
Me daba leti hai or chusti hai
Devrani ab paani chhorne lagti hai uska chut kisi bhatti ki tarah jal raha tha wo baldev k hoth ko jakad k chus k ras pee rahi thi
Baldev ab apne laude ko devrani k bur per khub zor se ragadta hai or hoth chuste hue ek lambi saans le kar apne maa k hoth chhorta hai,devrani ki chudi tan tan baj rahi thi
Baldev:devrani
Devrani:baldev:uhh
“Aise sar q niche jhuka rhi mere nam lene se koi aapatti hai mere premika ko”
“Nahi mere premi pehle bar suna to atpata laga par tumhe haq hai kehne ka”
“Mere premi kaho pukaro mere nam se “
“Devrani ji ...maharani devrani”
“Maharaja ji Maharaja baldev”
Or apne chut ko zor se ragadti hai baldev k land se thapp kar chot lagta hai chut par
Devrani apne hoth aage badhati hai k baldev uske hoth pura apne muh me bhar kar chusne lagta hai
Baldev k muh se halka sa nikalta hai”devrani”
Ab devrani kisi sherni ki trah uttezit ho kar baldev par bhari padti hui apni zibh ko nikal kar baldev k mukh me daal uske hoth ko buri tarah chusne lagti hai
“Uhmaaaa aaaha”
Devrani man me” mere raja abhi tujhe pata nahi tumne paras k sherni k muh khun lagne ka anjam”
Ummha chuu aaaaah
Devrani apne jibh ko andar ghusae or apne dono hotho se baldev k hotho ko khaye ja rahi thi or baldev bhi uske is tarah se chusne se hairan tha
“Uhmmm aaah bal”
Uhh maaa
Or baldev k hotho ko kat kar wo apne hotho par jaban ferte hue baldev ko choorti hai
Devrani ab bhi baldev k balisht seene pe hath rakhe thi or santushti se baldev ko dekh rahi thi
Baldev use dekh hairan tha
“Maa tumhara ye roop bada qatil tha”
“Tumhe ek tarse hue dill or paras k rani ko khun chakha dya hai ab ye sherni tumhara kya hashr karegi”
“Me mar mitne tayyar hu meri rani”
Devrani:tumhe sanyam rakhna sekha dungi tumhe sare sutra pata ho jayega kama k mere kam dev
Baldev:meri rati rani wahi to me chahta hu
Devrani:to aajana aaj rat bhojan k baad mere kaksha me
“Tumne kaha tha na devrani aaj raat tumhe maa nahi devrani milegi”
Devrani kisi bhuki sherni ki trah dekhti hai baldev k aakho me
Baldev devrani ka hath pakad kar chumta hai “meri devrani maharani”
Or gale laga leta hai
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Devrani apne bhaiya devraj ko baldev k bukhar hone ka bahana bana kar fattt se darwaza band karti hai or apne kaksha me baldev ki ore aa kar
Devrani:tum na ek na ek din marwa k rahoge
Baldev palang par leta apne maa k hilte doodh dekh kar
baldev:maa marwana to rajpal ko hai mai to ek din mar k rahunga
Devrani:ufff
baldev baat ko sambhalte hue
Baldev:kya hua kya keh rahe the mama ji
devrani:bhaiya ko laga me itni der se tayyar q nhi hui islye maine bata dya k tumko bukhar tha islye nahi ho payi tayyar
Baldev:tum to badi tez ho devrani apne bhaiya ko acha bewakoof banaya
devrani:jao abhi tayyar ho mujhe bhi tayyar hona hai
Baldev:par maa mujhe aapko dekh k jane ka dil nahi kar raha
devrani baldev k paas ja kar usko dhakka de kar snan ghar me dhakelti hai
thodi der me baldev tayyar ho kar aajata hai
Devrani:jao bahar me aati hu
baldev:q mere samne tayyar na ho sakti
devrani:uff baldev jao na bhut satate ho
Baldev:q mujhe apna pati nahi manti
Devrani:uff ho manti hu par hu to ek stree he na mujhe sharm aati hai
devrani baldev ka hath pakad k darwaze k pas le jati hai or darwaza khol k bahar dhakka dete hue samne baithe badri or shyam ko
Devrani:sambhalo apne mitra ko
Or devrani ek dhakka maar k baldev ko kaksha se bahar kar deti hai
shyam or badri ek sath haste hai
Baldev shyam or badri k paas aate hue
Baldev:ary tum log tayyar ho
Badri:han bhai hum to tum dono premio ka he pratiksha kar rahe h
shyam:bhabi maa ko zyada tang mat karo nahi to aaj dhakka di hai kal jhadu se maregi
Ye baat pe badri has padta hai or shyam bhi has deta hai
baldev ka chhota muh dekh dono fir se hasne lagte hai
Baldev:ary re mazak bana lo premi ko apne premika se maar khani he padti hai chahe wo kitna he bada veer yodha ho
Shyam:ary hum mazak kar rahe hai aaii hum devgadh ja rhe hai waha bazar bhut bada hai
Badri:han baldev hum khareedi karenge
Baldev:han avashya mitro mama kaha gaye
Badri:wo tum dono ka pratiksha kar k thak k bahar gaye
thodi der baad devraj aajata hai
devraj:bacho aaj baat he karoge ya chaloge bhi hume fir aaj he wapas aana hai
Baldev:han hume nikalna chahiye
devraj:tumhari tabyat ab kaisi hai bhanje
baldev:Ab theek hai
Devraj: devrani keh rahi thi k tumhe bukhar hone karan use samay lag gaya or tayyar nahi ho pai
ye baat sun k dono badri or shyam apna sar niche kar k muskurane lage or apni hasi rok li
baldev apni aakhe dikhate hue badri or shyam ko ishara karta hai k aisi harkat na kare
tabhi samne se darwaza khulta hai or devrani saji dhaji aayi
charo mard waha khade sirf devrani ko niharne lage
devrani:kya hua sab boot bane q khade ho chalo
devraj:chalo behana or baldev ko ausadhi ki aavshyakta to nahi bukhar k lye?
Devrani ek katil muskurahat k sath
devrani:bhaiya wo maine aaj ka khurak ise de dya hai
balde devrani k doodh ki ore dekh
baldev:ausadhi bhut meethi thi
baldev ki nazar bhanp kar devrani apne sadi se apne vaksha ko chhupan ki koshish karti hai or lajja kar muskan k sath apna muh dusri ore ghuma k
devrani:chaliye bhaiya hume jana chahiye
Charo bahar nikalte hai
bahar shamshera apni talwar se khel raha tha
Shamshera:kaha ja rahi hai puri hind ki fauj
Devraj:socha aaj behana ko devgadh ghuma lau
Shamshera:theek hai devraj ji sham tak wapas aa jaye
devrani:theek hai beta
Shamshera:khuda hafiz khala
sab apne apne ghode pe baith jate hai or devraj sabse aage apne ghode ko bhagana shuru karta hai or uske peeche peeche sab apne ghode se devraj k peeche jane lagte hai
charo jungle or kai basti hote hue ek chhote se mahal pe ja kar apne ghode ko rokte hai
devrani apne ghar ko dekh bhut khush thi or uske aakho se aasu tapakte hai
devrani apne ghode ko badri ko bandhne k lye kehti hai o wo sidha apne ghar me jati hai
Devrani:baldev yahi wo ghar hai yahi wo gao hai jaha hum pale badhe yaha ki mitti ki sugandh he nirali hai beta
Devraj:chalo behana darbar me
devraj darbar ki ore jata hai aneko sainiko ki aawajahi lag jati hai or sab aakar devraj ki jay jaykar karne lagte hai
anek mantrigan aakar devraj se bhet karte hai or sab se baat cheet krne lagte devraj
devraj apne sinhasan par ja kar baith tha hai sena or mantri
"Maharaj devraj ki jai ho"
devraj k aasan k bagal me devrani uske sath baldev baith ta hai
devraj k baye taraf badri or shyam baith te hai
Devraj:priya devgadh vasio aaj hamari behan devrani or bhanja baldev aaya hai barso baad
Devraj ishara kar k bata ta hai
Sab chillate hue
"rani devrani ki jay ho "
mantri:maharaj me to rani ko pehchan he nahi paya
devraj:itne barso baad aai hai na
Mantri:sainiko in sab k lye jalpan ka intezam karo
Devraj:aaj he hum laut jayenge
devrani or bache sultan k mahal he ruke hai ek din se
Mantri:ye kya baat hui maharaj aaj he aaye or aaj he
Devraj:tumhe to pata hai na yaha sirf mai hu hamara koi nahi koi pariwar nahi to devrani yaha kaise reh payegi or waha pr sultan ka pariwar hai
Devraj ye kehte hue aakhe nam ho jati hai
Mantri:aisa keh k hume paraya na kare mahara devgadh ka har ek sainik har ek vyakti aap k sath tha hai or rahega
Devrani:me hu na apka parivar bhaia
mantri:maharaj kya hua yudha tali ki nahi?
devraj:tum sultan ko to jante he ho or hum unke suraksha me he hai or mujhe na chahte hue bhi apne rajya k logo ki suraksha k lye yudha karna padta hai
devrani:bhaiya ap baat kijiye me bacho ko mahal dikha du
devrani uth ti hai or uske sath badri or shyam bh uth kar devrani k peeche aaane lagte hai
devrani:kaisa laga baldev hamara ghar
Baldev:bhut sundar ma
badri:bhabi maa par hum sultan ka sath dete q hai
Devrani ye sun kar apne bhaw upar kar k badri ko ek taak dekhne lagti hai
baldev muskurate hue
baldev:ghabrao nahi maa maine he kaha
devrani gusse se
"q maine mana kya tha na"
Baldev:maa wo
Devrani:Badri mujhe maa ya mausi he bolo
Baldev:nahi wo bhabi he kahega mera bhai hai wo
ye sun kar shyam or badri has dete hai or devrani chidh k baldev pa jhapat ti hai
baldev bhagta hai
devrani bhagne lagti hai
Baldev aakhir kar ek kaksha me ghus jata hai devrani bhi uske peeche
"aaj tumhe chhorungni nahi"
To be continued
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Baldev or devrani ko shamshera bacha kar le aata hai or udhar vaidh ji k sath maharani jeevika bhi gufa k raste se bach kar nikal jati hai.mahal me Rajpal or maharani shurushti fass jati hai or sath he radha kamla or senapati somnath bhi pakda jata hai
Shamshera apne sainiko ko dekhta hai jo aaram kar rahe the or wo ghode se utar kar
Shamshera:Aajao baldev
Baldev k ghode pe se pehle devrani utarti hai fir baldev ghode ki lagam pakad kar chalte hue use sena dekh hairani hoti hai
Baldev:Ye itne sainik yaha par kya kar rahe hai
Shamshera:ye to kam ho gaye hai aadhe fauz humne kuberi bhej diye
Baldev:Par q
Shamshera:Q k hum kuberi lootne aaye hai baldev islye ghatrashtra par chadhai kiye bina hum loot nahi sakte par raja ratan dikhai nahi diya
Devrani:wo mahal me nahi hai kab ka chala gaya apne rajya
Shamshera:sab baat to theek hai par Baldev tumhe q apne he rajya me bandi banaya gaya
Baldev ye sun kar devrani ki ore dekhta hai
Devrani baldev ko kahne ka han me ishara kar deti hai
Baldev:zara is taraf aao
Shamshera:bolo bhi fauz hum se door hai ..mujhe ye baat samajh nahi aati baap aakhir q apne bete ko bandi banayega
Baldev wahi ruk jata hai
"idhar aao shamshera"
shamshera peeche mud kar baldev k paas aata hai
Baldev:bhai baat kuch aisi hai k maine aisa kadam utha lya jiske wajah se ye sab hua
Shamshera:kaisa kadam baldev ..agar tum mujhe nahi batana chahte ho to koi baat nahi
Devrani:nahi nahi beta tumne to apne jaan par khel k hume bachaya tumhara ahsan hum nahi bhulenge
Shamshera,devrani khala kar diya na ek pal me paraya wo to hume shaq hua k aap dono khatre me ho or me to mahal sirf waha ki fauz ka jayza lene gaya tha k Shahzeb ki fauz or taqat kitni hai or waha mujhe baldev bandha hu dikh gaya
Baldev,dhanywad mere mitra..baat ye hai k Me inse prem karta hu
Shamshera:acha to isme kya nai baat hai
Baldev:tum samajh nahi rahe ho me maa ko ek stree k rup me chahta hu or hum ek dusre k bina reh nahi sakte
Shamshera apni aakhe badi karte hue
Shamshera:hmm agar me samajh pa raha hu to tum apne maa ko chahte ho ishq karte ho tum dono ek mard aurat jis trah karte hai
Devrani:Han beta hum kab ek dusre ko chahne lage pata bhi nahi chala
ye keh kar devrani apna sar niche kar leti hai
Shamshera:hhaahhahahaha
haste ja raha tha
Baldev:kya hua has q rahe ho
Devrani:beta tumhe pasand nahi aai ye baat
Shamshera apni hasi rokte hue
Shamshera:me isliye has raha hu k aap dono ek dusre ko pyar karte hai ek shauhar biwi ki trah to fir me aapko khala kehta hu to baldev ko kya khalu kahu?
or shamshera fir thhaka lagakar hasta hai
Baldev ye sun kar sharma jata hai or devrani apna sar niche kiye rehti hai
Shamshera:ya fir ye ho sakta hai k baldev mera chhota bhai hai to aap meri bhabi ho gayi devrani khala
Devrani:chup karo Shamshera shaitan ki trah hase ja rahe ho
Shamshera:muaf kar do
shamshera hasi rokte hue kehta hai
shamshera:Baat to ye hai k me bhut khush hu sun kar ye baat q k jaise baldev tum apne maa se muhabbat karte ho waise he dill he dill me mujhe bhi meri ammi jaan se muhabbat hai
Baldev or devrani is trah se shamshera k muh se saaf sapat sun or uski himmat ko dekh apne aakhe fade shamshera ko he dekh rahe the
Devrani:tumhari himmat ki daad deni padegi waise mujhe ye pehle se pata tha
or is baar devrani has deti hai
Ab baldev or shamshera devrani ko achambhit ho kar ghood rahe the
Devrani:tum dono ullu ki trah q ghood rahe ho
Shamshera:par khala aap ko kaise pata ?mai to kabhi kisi ko nahi bataya
Devrani:Babu ho tum mere samne bhale kitne bhi jasus bano ..pehle din he mai tumhare aakho ka peecha karte hue dekh li thi k tum kis nigah se apni ammi ko dekhte ho
Baldev or shamshera devrani ko he dekh rahe rhe the
Shamshera:aap to bhut tez nikli khair ab mujhe lagta hai ye mumkin hai
Devrani:namumkin ...
Shamshera:Q
Devrani:maine dana dalne ki koshish ki tumhare ammi ko par wo hamesha nakar di ye keh kar k kitna bada gunaah hai.jaha tak me samjhi hu hooriya didi mar jayegi par tumhare prem ko swikar nahi karegi
Shamshera:koi baat nahi khala jaan ab aap dono ko he dekh kar khush rah lunga
aakhe nam karte hue kehta hai
Devrani:Shamshera beta to tum vivah kar lena achi si ladki dekh kar
Shamshera:nahi khala jaan mere zindagi me unke siwa koi or nahi aa sakti
Devrani:islye tum hamesha shadi k lye mana kar dete ho..to kya jeevan bhar kuware rahoge?
Shamshera:yaado k sahare zindagi kaat lunga
Baldev,devrani iske baato ko kya sun rahi ho ye bhut bada tharki hai..
shamshera ye dekh k baldev apne maa ka nam le kar bula raha hai apne aakhe badi kar
Shamshera:jhute me or tharki
Baldev:mujhe vishwas nahi hota tum apne ammi ko aise nazar se dekhte ho
Shamshera ab mayus ho jata hai
Shamshera:Baldev tum isliye keh rahe ho na q k me kotha par jata hu?
Baldev:han shamshera premi kabhi dusre k taraf aakh utha kar nahi dekhte
Shamshera:dekho bhai mujhe wo jab bhut yaad aati hai to apne mehbooba hooriya k naam ka zaam gatak leta hu
Baldev:zaam tak to theek hai par tum jo sambandh
Devrani halka khasti hai
devrani:bhulo mat mai yahi par hu tum dono baat ko kaha se kaha le ja rahe ho
Baldev or shamshera sharma jate hai
Baldev:wo maa
Devrani:waise hooriya k naam ka zaam?
ye acha tha shamshera
Baldev:apne maa ko nam se bulata hai
Shamshera,or tumne abhi jo apne maa ko naam se bulaya uska kya ?
Ye sun ab baldev or devrani sharm se paani paani ho jate hai
Baldev:wo woo to hum ek dusre ko prem karte hai or hum dono ko is baat se koi apatti nahi
Shamshera:to jaise tum apne maa se pyar karte ho to nam le kar bula sakte waise he mera pyar ek tarfa he sahi me q nahi le sakta nam..tum to unke samne me le rahe ho me peeth peeche bhi nahi
baldev:ab tumhari marzi
Devrani:ab tum dono jhagdo mat
Shamshera:dekha na aapne khala ye zaam ki kotha ki har baat pardafash kar raha hai to ye galat nahi
Devrani:mujhe pata hai shamshera pehle se he k tumhari lat kharab hai par baldev ko mere samne tumhari pol nahi kholni chahiye
or devrani hasti hai
shamshera:khala wo me majburi me kabhi kabhi
Devrani:islye to kehti hu vivah kar lo patni aajayegi to idhar udhar nahi jaoge..or tum to baldev ko bhi bigad rahe the
Shamshera:han wo us din .tab mujhe kya pata tha ye majnu hai apne maa ka he ..agar pata hota to ise waha na le jata
Baldev or devrani ek sath
"koi baat nahi shamshera"
tabhi peeche se aawaz aati hai
"shahzade "
Shamshera peeche mud kar dekhta hai to sainik use bula rah the
teeno chal kar sainiko k paas pahuchte hai
Ghatrashtra Mahal
Mahal ka drishya aisa tha shahzeb ki sena mahal me ghus sab ko qaid kar rahi thi or udhar shurushti ko pakde badshah shahzeb chus raha tha
Shurusti:chhoro mujhe
shahzeb ko ek dhakka maarti hai
shahzeb shurushti k sar ko pakad k deewar de marta hai shurushti behosh ho jati hai
tabhi shahzeb k sainik aajate hai
Shahzeb:is kameeni ko hosh me laao ise hum dilli le kar jayenge isko hum apni harem me rakhenge
sainik1:Badshah salamat aap ka hukm ho to hum bhi koi murg musallam ka intezam kar le
Shahzeb:utha lo humare jane se pehle yaha ki jitni khoobsurat aurate hai
Sainik2:Badshah salamat to hum kuberi kab jayenge
Shahzeb:hum sham me niklenge thoda aaram kar lete hai jane se pehle Ghatrashtra k har mard ko maaro gao me jao har ek rajpal ko fansi de do uske khandan ka koi nahi bachna chahiye
Idhar jeevika or vaidh ji gufa k raaste chalte ja rahe the
Vaidh:Maharani aaj hum is gufa se bahar nikal payenge k nahi
Jeevika:Vaidh ji ab hum bass pahuchne wale hai
Ghatrashtra k har gao me me shahzeb k sena ja kar loot paat shuru kar dete hai or jo aurat unhe pasand aati unhe utha lete hai
Ghatrashtra me lagbhag 30 gaao the or har teen char gao ka ek chaudhari tha jo maharaja k lye kam karte the wo sab mil kar ek sabha bulate hai jisme kuch sainik wo hote hai jo yudha se apni jaan bacha kar bhage the or kuch wo jo mahal k pahredar the lad nahi sakte the or wo bhag kar aakar chaudhari se baat karte hai
Sab mil kar ye nirnay karte hai k wo sab mil Ghatrashtra k seema par jo surang ka rasta hai jo seedha mahal le kar jata hai waha jayenge
20 chaudhari 10 sainik or pahredar mil kar ghatrashtra k seema par jate hai
Chaudhari 1:Sainiko tum sahi keh rahe ho na Maharani jeevika mahal me nahi thi
sainik1:ha chaudhari sahab wo mahal me nahi thi
chaudhari2:theek hai hum us jungle k sameep hai jaha wo rasta khulta hai
tabhi ek sainik pahad par nazar ghumata hai or wo sena ko dekh
"hey bhagwan itni sena yaha kya kar rahi hai"
sab dekhte hai us taraf waha Shamshera ki sena pure pahad par chhayi thi jis se pahad ka rang badal gaya tha
Chaudhari1:ye sena ab kiski hai
sainik:hum sabka waha par jana theek nahi aap sab yahi ruke me thoda kareeb ja kar dekhta hu
Sainik:sena ka jhanda hara hai ye videshi sena hai
sainik apne ghode k taraf le jata hai or kuch door jane k baad wapas apna ghoda mod kar le aata hai
chaudhari1:kya hua tum wapas q aagaye
Sainik:chaudhari sahab wo sena paras ki hai uske jhande se samajh gaya or ek bat
Sainik:Unke sath baldev bhi dikhai diya
chaudhari1:kya
Chaudhari2:acha iska matlab hai Devrani k madad se ye fauz yaha khadi hai
Sainik2:iske peeche baat kuch or lag rahi hai
Chaudhari1:hume maharani jeevika ko dhundna chahiye baldev k paas jana thek nahi hoga
Sab jeevika ko lene k lye us jungle me pahuchte hai or us surang k raste ko kholte hai
jaise upar se jeevika or vaidh ko roshni dikhti hai wo samajh jate hai unhe lene koi agaya hai
Jeevika or vaidh ji ubhar khabar seedhio or patharo par chadhne ki koshish karte hai par chadh nahi pa rahe the
Chaudhari1:shayad wo log upar nahi aaparahe sainiko rassi andar feko
Sainik rassi le ata hai or rassi ko surang me fekta hai jise pakad kar vaidh ji or jeevika maharani upar aati hai
Jeevika upar aate he let jati hai
jeevika:paani
sainik turant apne baste me se pani nikal kar dete hai or jeevika paani pee kar apni aakhe band kya leti rehti hai
chaudhari2:maharani aap theek to hai na
Vaidh ja kar jungle se kuch jadi booti lete hai or jeevika ko khilate hai
Thode der bad jeevika hosh me aati hai
jeevika ko le kar sab paas me he ek gupt gufa me le aate hai
Jeevika:mujhe yaha kaha le aaye ..mera beta rajpal:.aaah
or foot foot kar ro padti hai
Chaudhari2:maharani aap roye nahi hum kuch karte hai
jeevika:maar dalenge wo mere pariwar ko chaudhari sahab
Jeevika:sab loot gaya barbad ho gaya hamare rashtra me ab videshio ne kabza kar lya
chaudhari2:Aap thek keh rahi hai Maharani jeevika aaj ghatrashtra k har gao har ghar me loot paat macha rakha hai shahzeb ne or hamari bahu betio ko bhi utha kar le ja rahe hai
jeevika:in sab ka karan me he hu ..hum aap sab ko surakshit nahi rakh sake
or khub zor se rone lagti hai
Sainik1:Maharani hum mahal se bhag aaye shahzeb ne hukm de deya hai k Maharaj rajpal ka pariwar me koi jeevit nahi rahe maharaja rajpal bhi bandi bane hai or wo sab jaane se pehle sab khatm kar denge
jeevika:nahi mera laal mar nahi sakta mera chirag
sainik2:maharani ab hamare paas koi raasta nahi sirf ek rasta hai
Jeevika:kya..me sab kuch karungi apne laa ko bachane k lye
Sainik2:Hum yuvraj baldev k madad se bach sakte hai
Jeevika:wo kaise
sainik2:maharani wo abhi hazaro sainiko k sath ghatrashtra k seema par hai shayad wo parasi sainik hai agar
chaudhari1:par wo hamara sath q denge abhi to Maharaj baldev ko fansi dene wale the
Sainik2:par hum baat kar k dekh sakte hai
Jeevika:theek hai unhe yaha bula lo
chaudhari2:han agar uske dill me zara bhi ghatrashtra k lye jagah hoga to zarur sath dega
Sainik2:hume jaldi jana hoga ..ho sakta hai parsi sena yuvraj baldev ko le jane k lye aai hai yaha to wo log kabhi bhi paras nikal sakte hai
Jeevika:aap chaudhary sahab do sainiko ko le kar jaye or pyar se le kar aye unhe
Ek chaudhary or do sainik gufa se nikal kar ghodo par sawar ho kar us pahad ki ore chal dete hai jaha baldev tha
Idhar baldev or devrani baith kar Shamshera se gappe maar rahe the or baldev or devrani puri kahani sunate hai kaise unhe pyar ho gaya or kaise wo dono pakde gaye
Devrani:to shamshera ab aage kya karna h
Shamshera:ab hum bina Shahzeb ko sabak sikhaye to jayenge nahi kya ap dono hamara sath doge
Devrani: Me chahti hu mujhe mera haq mile Gharrashtra me jis se mujhe vanchit rakha gaya par jabardasti nahi yudha kar k nahi
shamshera:aap log chahe to ruk jaye nahi to aap chahe to paras ja kar ruk sakte hai me shahzeb ka kam tamam kar k he aaunga
Baldev:maa aaj kal koi aapki nahi sochta
Itne me samne se teen ghudsawar aate dikhai dete hai or shamshera k sainik apne talwar nikale
"kaun ho tum log"
Chaudhri:Bhai me chaudhari hu Ghatrashtra ka yuvraj baldev se baat karne aaye hai
Ye sun kar k ghatrashtra ka koi hai Devrani apna pallu niche kar apna muh dhak leti hai
Baldev:ary chaudhari sahab
chaudhari:Yuvraj aapko dekh k prasannata hui
Baldev:Chalo koi to hai jise hum jeevit pasand hai nahi to sab chahte hai k hum mar jaye
chaudhadi:nahi aisa nahi hai..
Baldev:kahiye kya sewa kare aapki
chaudhari devrani ko dekhta hai jo apne pall se apna muh dhake khadi thi
chaudhari:Bahu rani bhi yahi hai kya
Baldev:Ji han bhagwan ne hum dono ko bachana tha
Chaudhari:Wo aapko apki dadi maharani jeevika yaad ki
tabhi devrani apne ek hath se apne pallu ko khaska kar bolti hai
devrani:Inki koi daadi wadi nahi hai na koi pariwar hai hamara
Baldev:Jane do maa mt kaho
Chaudhari:hum samajh sakte hai Bahu rani jis bahu ka aawaz mai aaj pehli bar sun raha hu wo agar aisa keh rahi hai to uske dill me kitna dard hoga
Baldev:hume nahi mina kisi se
devrani ko chaudhari baat pasand aata hai
devrani:theek hai hum chalte hai par humare sath kuch galat nahi hoga to
chaudhari:Me marr jaunga par aap dono ko kshati nahi pahuchane dunga kisi ko
wo to jeevika ji yahi aajati par itni sena dekh hum khud nahi aaana chahte the yaha
Ye sun baldev muskura deta hai
shamshera:agar inko kuch hua to soch lo.
chaudhari:aap log paras nikalne wale hai kya...aap log ruk jaye jab tak Yuvraj baldev nahi aajate
ye sun kar shamshera muskurata hai
Shamshera:man me)ye budhe ko kya batau k hum shahzeb ko liye bina yaha se nahi jayenge
Baldev or devrani chaudhari k sath chal dete hai usi gufa me jaha Ghatrashtra k kuch sainik or chaudhari ruke the jeevika or vaidh ji k sath
Thode der me he sab us gufa tak pahuch jate hai andar jate he jaise baldev ki nazar jeevika par padti hai uska aakhe gusse se laal ho jati hai
Devrani jeevika ko dekh apna muh fer kar ek kone me chali jati hai
Vaidh:aaye yuvraj baldev
Baldev:ji vaidh ji aap theek to ho na
jeevika k taraf dekh bhi nahi raha tha baldev
Chaudhari1:aaye aap log baithye
Sainik2:Yuvraj hamare ghatrashtra ka haal abhi Bhut bura hai shahzeb ne ati kar di hai
chaudhari2:han yuvraj hamare bahu beti koi surakshit nahi
Baldev:ab iska karan me to nahi ?
sainik2:par aap hamare madad kar sakte ho
chaudhari2:Maharani jeevika aap he kahiye
Jeevika:Baldev jo hua so hua abhi sirf mere bete rajpal ki jaan he nahi pure ghatrashtra vasio ki jaan or izzat tumhare hatho me hai agar tum hamari madad kar do to
Baldev:Jab mujhe marta hua chhor dya tha tab to koi meri madad k lye nahi aaya me q karu madad
Jeevika:tum hamari madad karo hum sab tumhara ahsan nahi bhulenge
Baldev:Maharani jeevika hum ne bhi aap se bhut baar kaha hum par ahsan kar dein
Jeevika:dekho abhi badla lena ka samay nahi bolo badle me tumhe kya chahiye
Baldev kuch sochta hai fir kehta hai
Baldev:Badle me Mujhe Ghatrashtra ka Raja ki gaddi chahiye aur
Chaudhari2:aur kya
jeevika bhi baldev ki ore dekh rahi thi or sab ek taak baldev ko dekhe ja rahe the
Baldev:Aur Devrani mujhe mere rani k roop me chahiye jise sab aadar satkar kare..Mujhe ban na hai Ghatrashtra ka Maharaja or Me devrani ko banaunga Maharani..agar meri maange puri hui to he me tum sab ki madad kar sakta hu
Ye sun kar waha par jitne chaudhari or sainik the sab ko saanp sungh gaya or devrani apne pallu ko halka sa upar uthaye baldev ko dekhti hai jo
muskura raha tha or devrani bhi muskura di
Jeevika ko ye sun chakkar sa aajata hai
Sannata chha jata hai or sab log is kashmakash me pad jate hai or sochne lagte hai aakhir kya kiye jaye...
To be continued
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Baldev:Aur Devrani mujhe mere rani k roop me chahiye jise sab aadar satkar kare..Mujhe ban na hai Ghatrashtra ka Maharaja or Me devrani ko banaunga Maharani..agar meri maange puri hui to he me tum sab ki madad kar sakta hu
Ye sun kar waha par jitne chaudhari or sainik the sab ko saanp sungh gaya or devrani apne pallu ko halka sa upar uthaye baldev ko dekhti hai jo muskura raha tha or devrani bhi muskura di
Jeevika ko ye sun chakkar sa aajata hai
Sannata chha jata hai or sab log is kashmakash me pad jate hai or sochne lagte hai aakhir kya kiye jaye
Baldev:kya hua saanp sungh gaye sabko?
jeevika:nahi ..tum ham se ye maang chhor kar kuch or maang lo tum chahe to maharaja ban jao Ghatrashtra ka jo chahe wo karo tum 10 vivah kar lo par devrani se vivah k lye anumati de nahi sakti
Chaudhari2:Baldev aap Maharaja ban jaye hume koi apatti nahi par apni maa se vivah karna to paap hoga aap khud sochiye
Baldev:Me soch kar he bol raha hu or devrani bhi is baat se sahmat hai
Jeevika:Hosh me aajao tum dono is se pehle samay hath se nikal jaye tumhe pata hai is rishte k wajah se hamara kitni beizzti hui hai or tum chahte ho vivah kar k dunya k samne hamara naak kat jaye
Tabhi devrani bol padti hai
Devrani:maa ji ye baat aap keh rahi hai ?aap ka beta mujhe jeevan bhar parayo sa vayvahar kya tab aapki naak nahi kati?
aapke bete ne mujhe apne mitra ratan singh k bistar par bhejne k lye jabardasti ki tab aap ki naak nahi kati ?
aapka beta rajpal piche 18 varsh se vaishyao k paas jata hai us se aap ki naak nahi kati ?
wah!Ghatrashtra vasio agar ye sab kaam se or meri jeevan narak banane k baad aap sab ki naak nahi kati to me sacha pyar karti hu baldev se iske lye naak kati to bhi mujhe parwah nahi
Ye sun sab k sab murat ban jate hai
Baldev:hamare paas zyada samay nahi hai or Dadi maa aap chahe na chahe hum fir bhi vivah karenge
Baldev apne kamar me lage chaku se apni anguthe par lagata hai chaku k tez dhar se angutha halka kat jata hai baldev ja kar devrani k mathe per apna anguthe k khun se devrani ka matha bhar deta hai
Devrani baldev ko dekhte reh jati hai
Baldev:banogi na meri jeevan sathi
devrani jhat se baldev k charan sparsh karte hue
Devrani:Baldev ji me hamesha aapka sath dungi chahe dukh ho ya sukh ho
Baldev:ye kya pair mat chhuo ..
baldev devrani ko pakad kar uthata hai
devrani:Pati bhagwan saman hota hai or apne bhagwan k pair chhuna galat nahi
Ye sab dekh kar gufa me maujud jeevika or jitne chaudhari the or sainik sab stabdh ho jate hai
Chaudhari2:Maharani jeevika aap anumati de na de ye to wahi karenge jo ye chahte hai iske wajah se hume Ghatrashtra ko khona theek nahi hoga
Jeevika:tumhare kahne ka arth kya hai mai inhe anumati de du Vivah ka ek maa bete ko tum pagal to nahi ho gaye
Chaudhari2:pagal hum nahi maharani aapka putra raja rajpal hai jo is bechari ko jeevan bhar dukh dya jiski saza tum sab bhugat rahe ho
Chaudhari1:muaaf karna maharani par aap apni ghar ki izzat bachane k lye pure Ghatrashtra ki bahu betio ki izzat ki parwah nahi kar rahi ho
Chaudhari1:hum sab pure ghatrashtra k mukhiya hai or saalo se ghatrashtra ka palan poshan me hamara yogdan raha hai..
chaudhari2:Maharani jeevika sab barbad ho jayega Wo shahzeb dill ki trah yaha bhi kabza kar lega or hamare bahu betio ko wo utha kar le jayega
chaudhari1:hamara rajya hum se chheen jayega or hume yaha se bhagna hoga ya to shahzeb k hatho marna hoga
Baldev or devrani ek dusre k baaho me baahe daal gufa k bahar nikal rahe the
Chaudhari2: maharani apni pariwar k maan samman k khatir pure ghatrashtra k maan samman ko kho dogi aap baldev ko han kah dijiye Ghatrashtra ki praza aapko kabhi muaf nahi karegi jab unhe pata chalega k aap unsab ko bacha sakti thi par aap ne nahi bachaya
Jeevika:man me)Hey bhagwan kya karu ek taraf pura ghatrashtra k log hai dusri traf mere bete ki pati kaise me use kisi or ko de du..(dusra man)devrani bhi to theek hai usne bhut takleef uthaya hai or waise bhi mera pota he to hai baldev )
Pure gufa me jitne sainik or chaudhari the sab zor zor se baate karne lagte hai or jeevika ko galat batane lagte hai tabhi ek zor ki aawaz aati hai or sab chup ho jate hai
"Ruk jaaaao Baldev"
Jeevika jate hue baldev or devrani ko rokte hai baldev or devrani peeche ghum kar dekhte hai
Jeevika:hume tumhari maange manzoor hai
Ye sun kar to jaise baldev or devrani k khushi ka thikana nahi hota hai devrani k aakho me khushi k aasu chhalak jate hai or wo baldev k seene per sar rakh
Devrani:aakhir hamari prem kahani rang laai
Baldev:Prem agar sache man se karo to aaj na kal jeet he hoti hai
Baldev or devrani wapas aate hai
Baldev:dhanywad daadi
jeevika apna muh fer leti hai
Baldevaadi apne pote ki hone wali patni ko pot bahu ko aashirwad nahi dogi
Ye sun devrani lajja jati hai
Baldev:pair chhuo dadi ki bhi
Devrani muskurate hue Jeevika k pair chhu leti hai par jeevika apna muh dusri taraf ghuma leti hai
Jeevika:kaam ki baat karo aaj sham me Shahzeb ja raha hai agar wo nikal gaya yaha se to
Baldev
chaudhari2:beta hamare paas samay bhut kam hai
Baldev:Chaudhari sahab aap chinta mat kijiye mujhe pata hai shahzeb apne kuch sainiko k sath Kuberi k traf kooch karega or apni aadhe se zyada sainiko ko yahi loot maar karne k lye rakhega ..par aisi uski mansha hai jo me kabhi puri nahi hone dunga
Chaudhari2:beta tum se yahi umeed thi
Baldev:Chaudhari ji Ghatrashtra ki har stree meri maa behan hai unke upar hue har ek apman ka badla me shahzeb se lunga
Ye sun kar waha par sab baldev ko gaur se dekhne lag jate hai
Baldev apna hath aage utha kar pran leta hai
"mai Baldev singh yani k ghatrashtra ka maharaja aaj pran lena hu Shahzeb k kiye ki saza use milegi or iska badla hum us se dill chhen kar lenge"
Sab aashcharyachakit ho kar dekhte hai baldev ki ore..
KUBERi
Idhar kuberi me mahal me aaram kar raha raja ratan singh k sath uski patni eliza thi jo use maadera pan karwa rahi thi ratan singh is baat se anjaan tha k uske rajya me do alag alag sena aakraman karne k lye lagbhag pahuch chuki hai ek Dilli ki sena or uske peeche sultan ki sena jiska sath devraj de raha tha
Ratan
Eliza use glass bhar k madeera deti hai or wo peene lagta hai
Shahzeb ki sena Kuberi ko paschim disha se aakaraman karne ki tayyari kar raha tha or sultan or devraj uttar disha se
To be continued