Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

nice update dear

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Beautiful update bhai great going

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Muskan aage lucifer ne Madhuri ko apni dil halat Bata diya lakin Madhuri mane ne ko tyar hi nahi ulta lucifer ko suna raha hai ....​

Uski bhi majburiya hai

aaj lucifer pehli bar maam ke upar gusa Hua eski bajase wo payal ko milne ko tal diya ...lucifer ne acha v Kiya payal ke upar gussa hoti to wo bichari sehen nahi kar payega .....​

Kabhi kabhi soch leta hai lucifer

Ek or ladki wo v lucifer ke jaisa e kon nikli dekhte lucifer kaise usko dhundta hai....​

Kismat apne aap mila deti hai

Tara jo v kar rahi hai acha nahi hoga ise lucifer jyada gussa or ho jayega ...ashmita av b lucifer ke yado me hai bas wo dikhana nahi chahati...

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Abhi kiya nahi hai karegi tab result ka pata chalega

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

Thank you

 

[Though_Guy]

Congratulations For Completing 400 Pages

 

[Lone survivor]

Finally, Lucifer ne Maadhuri se sab kuchh khul kar keh diya... Maadhuri kitne hi time se Lucifer ki harkaten aur baatein samajh rahi thi, wo jaanti thi ki Lucifer uski taraf attracted hai, par saath hi Maadhuri ye bhi jaanti hai ki jo Lucifer chahta hai, agar wo hua to shayad future mein bohot kuchh jhelna padega, use aur shayad Alia ko bhi... Muddaton baad khushiyan lauti hain Maadhuri ke jeevan mein, jinpar wo apne hi hathon se grahan lagane ka soch bhi nahi sakti... Kisi bhi soorat mein us rishte ka anjaam achha nahin hone waala jiski kalpna Lucifer kar raha hai...

Ye to sach hai ki vo ye sab nahi karna chahta saalo baad ya fir pehli baar khusiya aaye hai uski life me

Abhi tak jo cheez wo Maadhuri se indirectly kaha karta tha wo ab saaf shabdon mein keh chuka hai, interesting rahega dekhna ki Maadhuri par iska kya asar hua hai... Pehla sawaal to yahi hai ki Maadhuri kya feel karti hai Lucifer ke liye? Lucifer ke aane se uski life change to huyi hai, Alia ko ek dost mil gaya hai, aur saath hi Maadhuri ko uska beta milne ki bhi possibilities ban gayin hain... Most importantly, khushiyan waapis aayin hain Maadhuri ki life mein... Jiski wajah kewal Lucifer hai!

Vajah to lucifer hi hai lekin kya sirf es vajah se vo lucifer se rishta banaegi?

Aise mein Maadhuri ka Lucifer ke prati kritagya hona nischit hai... Ek thankfulness aur respect ki bhaavna to zaroor hogi uske andar Lucifer ke liye par kya wo bhi wo feel karti hai jo Lucifer uske liye karta hai? Kya wo bhi Lucifer ko us nazar se dekhti hai, jis se Lucifer use dekhta hai? In other words, kya Maadhuri Lucifer se pyaar karti hai, at the moment, main yahi kahunga ki abhi to nahin... Shayad attracted ho wo Lucifer ki taraf, joki normal bhi hai, kayi ladkiyan attract ho hi rahi hain Lucifer ki taraf... Par kya future mein, especially Lucifer ke is khulaase ke baad, wo saari mixed feelings pyaar mein tabdeel hongi...

Mujhe bhi kafi had tak respect aur thankfulness hi dikhti hai ha thoda bahut mixed bhi ho sakti hai

I hope aisa na ho... We know ki ek na ek din, Lucifer permanently is duniyaa se aur in sabki life se jaane hi waala hai... Ek baar wo bandhan bana Maadhuri aur Lucifer ke beech to I don't think ki Lucifer se bichhad kar sambhal paayegi Maadhuri... Iska major kaaran yahi hai ki wo pehle hi bohot kuchh bardaasht kar chuki hai, aur ab kuchh aur problems/dukh, use poori tarah tod denge... Alia ke baare mein bhi zaroor sochegi Maadhuri koyi bhi decision lene se pehle...

Alia bahut bada role play karegi Madhuri ke decision me

Idhar Muskaan ki haalat ab bohot behtar ho chuki hai... Agar Lucifer se nahin dar rahi hai matlab court mein gawahi bhi de hi degi... Kuchh hi baaton se aisa laga jaise Alia ka hi doosra roop ho wo... Definitely, jab donon genius ladkiyan ek hi scene mein dikhengi to maza hi aa jaayega... I think ab jaldi hi Maadhuri ke pati ka number lagne waala hai...

Har baar yehi lagta hai ki ab waqt aa gaya ab waqt aagaya sala vo time aa nahi raha lekin

Idhar ek nayi ladki ya kahun ki 7th ladki ki entry ho gayi hai kahani mein... I think ab ginti poori ho jaani chahiye, until unless ye ladki Lucifer ki premika na hokar koyi aur hi ho... Lagta hai ki baaki ladkiyon se definitely bohot alag hone waali hai ye, means Lucifer ki band bajna nischit hai... Dekhte hain ki ye kaun hai aur iska past version kaun hogi...

Lucifer ki band to koe bhi aakar baja deti hai bechari bahut sareef hai

Idhar Tara ne apna plan execute karne ka soch liya hai par saath hi use dar bhi lag raha hai... One thing I'm sure about is, ki agar Tara ne wo kiya jo bhi wo plan kar rahi hai to shayad jo thodi bohot umeed bachi hai Lucifer aur Ashmita ke waapis milne ki, wo bhi khatam ho jaayegi... Khair, ab Ashmita ko do options diye hain usne jiske mutaabik ya to wo khud hi Lucifer se baat kare ya fir Tara apne plan ko anjaam degi... Maan to gayi hai Ashmita par dekhna hoga ki sahi mein wo jayegi bhi Lucifer ke paas ya nahin... Kya uska ego use allow karega wahaan jaane ke liye...

Sala ye ego pata nahi kya karke chhodega

In the end, Anisha ko bhi kuchh aisa mil gaya hai jiski use aur uski Mom ko talaash thi... Lucifer se door rehne ko keh to rahi hai uski Mom use, par ab ye possible nahin hai... Ek baar Lucifer ke contact mein aane ke baad, bechaari door jaaye bhi to kaise... Idhar Payal ko bhi Maadhuri waali ghatna ki wajah se mana kar Diya hai Lucifer ne, joki ek achha faisla tha...

Lucifer ka charm hi aisa hai koe us se door ho hi nahi sakta Madhuri eska prime example hai

Both the updates were Outstanding Bhai, Waiting For Next One...

Thank you bhai
Keep supporting

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesome update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

fantastic story sir kuchh samjh aaya kuchh nhi aaya pr aage ki story ke sath sb smjh aa jayega
waiting for next

Sab samjh me aaega ek baar dimag par jor daal kar dekhiye and thank you so much for coming and showing your support

 

[Lone survivor]

UPDATE-126
Next day lucifer bahut late tak sota raha subah ki shayam ho gaye thi lekin lucifer uthne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha

Uski raat bhi to bahut badi thi
Vaise to kitni bhi badi raat ho vo kabhi etna nahi sota tha
Actually me ashmita ya inaaya milne se pehle to vo bilkul nahi sota tha aur us time to vo aur bhi jada nashe me rahta tha

Abhi to fir bhi vo sirf raat ko hi nashe karta tha din to normal hi hota tha uska
Fir bhi aisa kya hua kal raat ko ki vo abhi tak soya hua tha?
Uske sath inaaya bhi nahi thi ki ye hi soch le ki uski bahoo me sukoon ki nind le raha ho lekin yaha to aaj vo akela hi sukoon se so raha tha

Kab tak?
The most important question kab tak usse aisa sukoon rahega?
Jada din to nahi rahne wala ye to pakka hi tha
Vo lucifer tha aur sukoon naam ki koe chhij uske life me thi hi nahi

Fir bhi aaj usse sukoon mila hai to usse sukoon se rahne dete hai
Kal ka kya hi pata ki kya ho jaye

Hum dusri taraf chalte hai


Present

Supreme- aapko yaha nahi aana chahiye tha
Vaha lucifer ko sambhalne wala hona bahut jaruri hai
Waqt nahi raha ab
Guruji- ab lucifer nahi sambhal sakta
Na mere se aur na kisi aur se
Usse koe nahi rok sakta

Supreme- usse control me rakhna bahut jaruri hai
Guruji- aapne usse had se jada chhije sikha di
Jo bilkul bhi sahi tha jaisa bhavisya likha gaya tha uske liye us hisaab se

Supreme- maine jo kiya bahut soch samjh ke kiya hai
Usse har us chhij ki jarurat padega jo usne sikhi thi
Guruji- kab?
Jab vo aadhi dunia tabha kar dega tab?

Supreme- aisi naubaat hi nahi aaegi
Guruji- aapne uske bare likhna band kar diya hai aur jaisa vo hai kisi bhi chhij ki naubaat aa sakti hai
Hum kuch nahi rok sakte

Supreme- hume nahi rokna usse
Usse rokne wale uske aas pass mojud hai
Guruji- vo nahi rukega
Dekh lena ye baat
Jab vo apni pe aaega tab sirf aur sirf tabhae hi hogi

Supreme- jaisa ki main humesha bolta hu ki sab kuch calculate kiya hua hai mera to matlab sab kuch calculate kiya hua hai
Usse bas thode thode time par dekhna jaruri hai baki uske aas pass ke log usse sambhal lenge
Guruji- jaise eda ne sambhala tha usse?
Vo eda se bahut pyaar karta tha aur eda bhi us se bahut pyaar karti thi
Fir bhi kya eda usse rok paye?
Ek minute nahi lagaya usne eda ko apne se door karne me
Aur vo ek minute nahi lagaye har us insaan ko apne se door karne me jo uske raste me aayega

Supreme- eda aur lucifer kabhi ek ho hi nahi sakte the aur ye baat sabko pata thi esliye kisi ne un dono ka sath nahi diya
Guruji- sach to ye hai ki lucifer kisi ka nahi ho sakta fir eda ke sath bhedbhav kyu hua?
Jab baki sab ladkiyo ko unke hisse ka pyaar mil raha hai to fir eda ko kyu nahi mil sakta tha?

Supreme- es kyu ka jawab etna bada hai ki aap abhi samjh hi nahi paoge
Jis din ye raaz khulega us din aapko meri sari baatein sach lagne lagegi
Aap sab ko lagta hai ki maine lucifer ke sath galat kiya hai
Lekin koe ye nahi samjhta ki lucifer mera first born tha aur fir bhi maine dunia ki bhalae ke liye usko kurbaan kar diya
Lucifer ka hona bahut jaruri hai es dunia ke liye
Guruji- vo bhurae ke khilaaf ladega ha bahut baar sun chuka hu
Lekin ab usse mukti de deni chahiye

Supreme- abhi nahi
Abhi sabse bada khatra aaya nahi hai jiske liye abhi lucifer tayar nahi hai
Ek baar vo tayar ho jaye fir aage ka dekhenge
Guruji- uski yaaddast vapas la do aur vo tayar hai

Supreme- uski yaaddast uske pass hi hai
Vo usse dundna hi nahi chahta to main kya karu?
Khojne do usko aur jab vo jagega to usse bahut logo ki jarurat padegi jis me aap bhi ek honge
Guruji- main us condition me uske samne bilkul nahi jaunga

Supreme- aapka student hai vo
Aapko kuch nahi kar payega
Guruji- kuch karne na karne ki baat nahi kar raha hu
Main uske samne nahi jaunga bas
Maine bhi bahut kuch dekh liya sah liya ab mujhe bhi mukti chahiye

Supreme- aapko abhi bahut logo ko bahut kuch sikhana hai guruji
Aap aise nahi ja sakte
Guruji- maine jitna sikhana tha na utna sikha chuka hu
Eske alava mujhe aur kuch nahi sikhana
Mera ho gaya ab
Ab main es matter par kuch nahi bolunga aur na kuch karunga****

Lucifer ko jagane aaye inaaya
Aaj usse morning me hi time mil gaya tha to vo sidhe lucifer ke pass aagaye

Flat ka gate to as usual khula hi tha to inaaya ander aagaye aur lucifer ke upar bath kar usse pyaar se kiss karne lagi

Kuch hi seconds me lucifer aur lucifer ka dono hi jaag gaye aur vo bhi inaaya ko full support karne laga

Ek gante baad jab enke raas leela khatam hue tab
Inaaya- chalo shower lo
Kitni smell aa rahi hai konse gutter me dubki maar ke aaye the raat ko?

Lucifer- raat ki baat raat me hi dafan ho jati hai
Inaaya- theek hai utho ab aur chalo

Lucifer- chalo fir
Inaaya- main to naha ke aaye hu

Lucifer- koe baat nahi fir naha lena
Aur lucifer aur inaaya ne shower liya sath me aur ek round aur hua

Inaaya- parso shadi hai
Lucifer- humari?
Aur mujhe pata bhi nahi tha

Inaaya- hum bhi kar lenge lekin abhi papa ki hai
Lucifer- mujhe invitation nahi aaya abhi tak?

Inaaya- aayega bhi nahi lekin tum aa jana main lene aaungi
Lucifer- pehle mujhe shopping karao

Inaaya- ladke karate hai ladkiyo ko shopping
Lucifer- yaha ulta hota hai

Inaaya- chalo fir abhi chalte hai
Lucifer- ek round aur ho jaye?
Fir chalte hai

Inaaya- ab main thak gaye aur nahi
Kapde pahne aur chalo
Lucifer- mera khada hai

Inaaya- vo humesha rahta hai
Jaldi chalo nahi to fir nange hi aana shadi me
Lucifer- main to aa jaunga lekin tumhe hi problem hogi

Inaaya- mujhe kya hogi?
Lucifer- mera dekh kar Ladkiya pagal ho jayegi vaha

Inaaya- mujhe us se koe problem nahi hai
Mere hisse ka pyaar mil raha hai mujhe baki tum kuch bhi kar sakte ho
Lucifer- hai?

Inaaya- maine khud hi bola tha tumhe ashmita se baat karne ko
Agar aisa hota to kyu bolti main?
Lucifer- aur baki ladkiya jo hai unka kya?

Inaaya- main kabhi kuch nahi bolungi
Lekin jab main sath hu tab bas main sath hu
Lucifer- chalo shopping par hi chalte hai

Uske baad dono kisi ache mall me jate hai aur inaaya lucifer ke liye kafi sari dresses select karti hai

Lucifer bhi kafi one piece inaaya ke liye kharidta hai jisne ek black dress thi jo alag hi kahar dhaegi jab inaaya pahnegi usse tab

Aise hi shopping karte hai fir kuch khate hai aur inaaya lucifer ko vapas drop karke apne ghar chali jati hai

Shadi ka mahool tha bahut kaam tha esliye vo rukti nahi hai

Apne flat par aane ke baad lucifer ek do chhilam maarta hai aur time pass karte karte shayam ho jati hai
To tayar ho kar apne flat se nikal jata hai

Aur pahuchta hai payal ke ghar ke bahar

Usse call lagata hai aur
Payal- hello
Lucifer- jaldi aajao main kab se bahar wait kar raha hu

Payal- bahar kaha?
Lucifer- tumhre ghar ke bahar

Payal- vaha kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- date par nahi chalna kya?

Payal- are batana to chahiye tha na?
Main ready bhi nahi hue hu
Lucifer- apne shadgi leke aajao us se acha kuch nahi hai

Payal- 5 minute wait karo main aati hu
Lucifer- 5 minutes?

Payal- ha matlab wait karo ab ladkiyo ko tayar hone me 5 minute to lagegi hi na?
Lucifer- aa jao fir 5 minute me hot ban kar

Payal- abhi bola shadgi leke aajao ab bol rahe ho hot ban kar
Kya karu main?
Lucifer- tumhri shaddgi hi tumhri hotness hai
Jaldi aao

Aur lucifer phone kaat deta hai aur intezaar karne lagta hai payal ka

Half hour ke baad jab payal aati hai to lucifer bas usse dekhta rah jata hai

Jaha inaaya aur ashmita mostly western dress me aati thi payal bilkul desi look me aaye

Ek bahut light color ka suit pahna tha mathe par chhoti se bindi aur chhote chhote jhumke

Vo aaj sach me saadgi me ek pari hi lagti thi aur aaj bhi vaisi hi lag rahi thi

Payal- hello?
Kaha kho gaye?
Payal lucifer ke pass aakar apne hath hilati hue bolti hai

Lucifer- you're looking like an angel...