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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Avinashraj

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UPDATE-125
Madhuri ko flat par chhodne ke baad lucifer ne socha tha ki vo vapas kaashvi ke pass jayega aur vo raste me bas thoda nasha kar raha tha ki payal ki call aagaye

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hie
Kaise ho?

Lucifer- theek hu
Batao?
Payal- kya?

Lucifer- tumne call kiya hai?
Kuch kaam to hoga na?
Payal- 9 baj gaye

Lucifer- shit
Late ho gaya
Kahi jana tha mujhe
Payal- kaha jana tha?

Lucifer- jana tha ateet me lekin ab to nahi ja paunga
Pata hi nahi chala
Payal- busy ho?

Lucifer- nahi batao kya kaam tha?
Payal- aapne kaha tha 9 baje ghumne chalenge?

Lucifer- ohh ha sorry bhul gaya tha
Payal- it's okay
Chaloge ya fir kabhi?

Lucifer- yaar aaj to nahi ja paunga
Thoda kaam me fas gaya
Payal- koe baat nahi fir kabhi dekh lenge
Theek ho aap?

Lucifer- ha theek hu
Payal- kuch stress me lag rahe ho

Lucifer- nahi nahi bas thak gaya hu thoda aur kuch nahi
Payal- theek hai rest kar lo

Lucifer- okay and sorry for the day ha?
Payal- koe baat nahi
Kaam jada jaruri hai

Lucifer- bye jaldi milte hai
Payal- jaldi milte hai aur lucifer phone kaat deta hai

Lucifer ka mood to madhuri se baat karte time hi chud gaya tha ab vo payal ke samne ja kar uska bhi mood kharab nahi karna chahta tha esliye usne mana kar diya tha kyuki ye to lucifer bhi janta tha ki agar vo madhuri par gussa ho sakta hai to fir kisi par bhi ho sakta hai

Vaise uska decision bhi theek hi tha kyuki payal soft hearted ladki hai vo lucifer ka gussa sahan bhi nahi kar payegi

Lucifer fir vaha se ek bar chala gaya aur khud jam kar saraab pee etne ki chalna bhi muskil ho gaya tha uska

Jab mid night bahar nikla to pair buri tarah lad khada rahe the aur vo landate hue chal raha tha

Vo thoda aur aage nikla hi tha ki samne ek ladki khadi thi aur vo bahut sare ladko se ladae kar rahi thi

Lucifer ne jab dekha to ladkhadate hue uske pass jane laga
Us tharki ko laga tha ladki problem me hai usse bachaega fir kuch mil jayega es raat me

Lekin jaise hi vo us ladki ke pass pahucha ek bahut jordaar aawaz aae lucifer ke kano me

Jab samne dekha to ek ladka jamin par gira hua tha aur dard me karha raha tha

Lucifer upar dekh pata us se pehle hi ek aur ladka jamin par ja gira fir to jo us ladki ne us ladko ko pela dekh kar maja hi aagya

Akeli ladki ne un sare ladko ko maar maar kar bhoot bana diya tha

Vahi lucifer side me khadi ek car ka sahara le kar saraab peeta hua maje lene laga

Kyuki us ladki ko lucifer ki help to bilkul bhi nahi chahiye thi
Ye mat sochna ki lucifer nashe me hai to kuch nahi kar pata
Vo devil tha aur ye raat ka time vo abhi bhi kisi ki gand faad ke ussi ke hath me de deta

Lekin es waqt maje se dekhna hi usse sahi laga

Jab sab ladko ko achi tarah peet liya aur us ladki ka man bhar gaya to usne piche khade lucifer ko dekha

Lucifer- I'm not with them
Uske dekhte hi lucifer bol pada
Vo lucifer ke pass aaye uske hatho se bottle li aur bilkul lucifer ki tarah hi neat peene lagi

Lucifer- bc my kind of girl
Vo man me bola

Kya ladki thi vo ek baar me hi puri bottle khatam kar di ha matlab aadhi to lucifer ne pee rakhi thi jitni usme thi vo sari ek ek bund vo ladki kheech gaye

Lucifer- thoda to chhod deti mere liye?
Ab ye pyaasa kaha bhatkega?
Ladki- pyaasa apni liye pani dund hi leta hai
Vo attitude ke sath boli aur mud kar apni super bike se vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer bas usse dekhta rah gaya
Sara nasha utar chuka tha uska aur ab aur saraab chahiye thi kyuki abhi to raat suru hi hue thi

Kisi tarah usne kahi se kuch jugaad kiya aur fir peete hue apne flat chala gaya****

Aadmi- sab tayar hai Ma'am
Kab karna hai?
Tara- dar lag raha hai

Aadmi- lucifer is a very dangerous man
Us se darna bhi chahiye
Tara- lekin ye karna bhi padega
Baad me dekh lenge jo consequences honge un ko

Aadmi- bas family ko bacha lena us se baki to sab handle ho jayenge
Tara- kuch nahi hoga tumhri family ko main guarantee deti hu

Ashmita- didi aapne vo file dekhi kya?
Ashmita sidhe bina knock kiye uske room me ghusi jis se tara thodi hadbada gaye

Tara- main baad me karti hu
Usne jaldi se bola aur phone kaat diya

Ashmita confused si tara ko dekhti rahi
Ashmita- galat time par aagaye kya main?

Tara- nahi nahi
Batho kya pure din kaam kaam karti rahti ho
Ashmita- bas ye last tendor hai
Fir ho jayega aaj ka kaam

Tara- aur kuch nahi karna ab aaj
Batho yaha mujhe tum se baat karni hai
Ashmita uske sath bath gaye

Tara- kaisi ho tum?
Ashmita- main to theek hi hu didi

Tara- aur kya chal raha hai?
Ashmita- aap lucifer ke bare me puch rahe ho kya?

Tara- main kyu puchungi uske bare me?
Mujhe kya matlab us se?
Mujhe to meri behan se matlab hai bas
Ashmita- hmm

Tara- batao kya chal raha hai?
Ashmita- bas kaam didi

Tara- ghumne chalegi mere sath?
Ashmita- abhi to bahut kaam hai didi

Tara- Waterpark?
Tumhra favorite
Ashmita- aap soch rahi ho ki main udaas hu lucifer ki vajah se?

Tara- main to nahi soch rahi
Ha mujhe pata hai ki tum udaas jarur ho
Ashmita- sab theek hai didi
Maine sikh liya sabak

Tara- achi baat hai
Lekin agar tumne sikh liya sabak to fir tum khush kyu nahi ho?
Ashmita- main khush hu didi

Tara- sach me?
Mujhe to kisi angle se nahi lag rahi
Ashmita- chhodo na didi
Aap kya baat leke bath gaye?

Tara- bachpan me jab bhi tujhe koe problem hoti thi tu sabse pehle mere pass aati thi
Ashmita- main aaj bhi aapke pass hi aaungi agar mujhe koe problem hue to

Tara- uske baad hum bade ho gaye aur ek dusre ke liye waqt nikalna hi muskil hoga
Main tujh se batana chahti hu ki main humesha tere sath hi thi
Besak hum pehle jitna sath nahi rahe aur na hi pehle jitni sharing hue lekin you will always be my baby sister
I want you to know that ki main humesha tere sath khadi rahungi no matter what

Ashmita- i know didi
Aap meri backbone ho aur agar backbone tooti to fir kuch nahi bachta
Tara- esliye aaj main tujhe kuch maang rahi hu

Ashmita- aapko kya mangana hai mujh se?
Tara- i dont know why I'm doing this aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki ye future me galat decision hoga lekin fir bhi main tujhse maang rahi hu

Ashmita- agar aap mujhse vada chahti ho ki main lucifer se door rahu to main aapko bata deti hu ki ab mera us se koe rishta nahi hai
Main bilkul nahi sochti uske bare me
Tara- main to eske bilkul opposite maang rahi thi

Ashmita- kya matlab?
Tara- i want you to talk to him

Ashmita- wait what????
Tara- sahi suna tum ne
Main chahti hu ki tum us se baat karo aur apni misunderstanding ko theek karo
Mujhe pata hai tum dono ki life ek dusre ke bina kuch nahi hai
Esliye main tum se bol rahi hu ki baat karke sab solve kar lo
Kyuki agar tumne nahi kiya to fir mujhe kuch karna padega aur fir khel ganda ho jayega

Ashmita- main kyu baat karu us se?
Vo bhi to kar sakta hai?
Galti bhi vo kare aur aur attitude bhi vo dikhaye?
Main to nahi karungi baat chahe kuch bhi ho jaye

Tara- attitude aur ego ki vajah se hi rishte toot jate hai ashu
Agar tum samne se baat karogi to tum chhoti nahi ho jaogi
Ashmita- ho jaungi main chhoti
Nahi karni mujhe us se baat

Tara- marji hai teri
Maine to bata diya jo mujhe mangana tha baki tumhri marji
Tara- ye aap galat kar rahe ho mere sath

Tara- mujhe jo sahi lag raha hai vo main kar rahi hu
Agar tumhe nahi manana to mat mano lekin baad me ye mat bolna ki didi ye aapne kya kar diya?
Aapko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha
Vagra vagra
Mere liye teri happiness sabse important hai aur main uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hu

Ashmita- please aap kuch mat karna
Mujhe aur problem nahi chahiye life me
Hum koe bhi lucifer ke against nahi jeet sake
Please didi main aapse request karti hu kuch bhi mat karna aap
Main aapko hurt hote nahi dekh sakti

Tara- maine to tumhe bata diya hai
Ya to tum apni problem khud apne tarike se solve kar lo ya fir main apne hisaab se dekhungi lekin fir tum us me involve nahi ho paogi chahe situation kaisi bhi ho
Ashmita- didi please mat karo
Mat jao aap lucifer ke samne
Please didi maan lo meri baat
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Acha theek hai main baat karungi lucifer se lekin aap kuch nahi karoge
Promise me aap kuch nahi karoge
Tara- tu baat karke apne problem solve kar le aur main kuch nahi karungi
Tere par hai sab kuch
Ab tu bath main tere liye kuch tasty sa bana kar lati hu....
Beautiful update bhai great going
 

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Muskan aage lucifer ne Madhuri ko apni dil halat Bata diya lakin Madhuri mane ne ko tyar hi nahi ulta lucifer ko suna raha hai ....

aaj lucifer pehli bar maam ke upar gusa Hua eski bajase wo payal ko milne ko tal diya ...lucifer ne acha v Kiya payal ke upar gussa hoti to wo bichari sehen nahi kar payega .....

Ek or ladki wo v lucifer ke jaisa e kon nikli dekhte lucifer kaise usko dhundta hai....

Tara jo v kar rahi hai acha nahi hoga ise lucifer jyada gussa or ho jayega ...ashmita av b lucifer ke yado me hai bas wo dikhana nahi chahati...

 

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Finally, Lucifer ne Maadhuri se sab kuchh khul kar keh diya... Maadhuri kitne hi time se Lucifer ki harkaten aur baatein samajh rahi thi, wo jaanti thi ki Lucifer uski taraf attracted hai, par saath hi Maadhuri ye bhi jaanti hai ki jo Lucifer chahta hai, agar wo hua to shayad future mein bohot kuchh jhelna padega, use aur shayad Alia ko bhi... Muddaton baad khushiyan lauti hain Maadhuri ke jeevan mein, jinpar wo apne hi hathon se grahan lagane ka soch bhi nahi sakti... Kisi bhi soorat mein us rishte ka anjaam achha nahin hone waala jiski kalpna Lucifer kar raha hai...

Abhi tak jo cheez wo Maadhuri se indirectly kaha karta tha wo ab saaf shabdon mein keh chuka hai, interesting rahega dekhna ki Maadhuri par iska kya asar hua hai... Pehla sawaal to yahi hai ki Maadhuri kya feel karti hai Lucifer ke liye? Lucifer ke aane se uski life change to huyi hai, Alia ko ek dost mil gaya hai, aur saath hi Maadhuri ko uska beta milne ki bhi possibilities ban gayin hain... Most importantly, khushiyan waapis aayin hain Maadhuri ki life mein... Jiski wajah kewal Lucifer hai!

Aise mein Maadhuri ka Lucifer ke prati kritagya hona nischit hai... Ek thankfulness aur respect ki bhaavna to zaroor hogi uske andar Lucifer ke liye par kya wo bhi wo feel karti hai jo Lucifer uske liye karta hai? Kya wo bhi Lucifer ko us nazar se dekhti hai, jis se Lucifer use dekhta hai? In other words, kya Maadhuri Lucifer se pyaar karti hai, at the moment, main yahi kahunga ki abhi to nahin... Shayad attracted ho wo Lucifer ki taraf, joki normal bhi hai, kayi ladkiyan attract ho hi rahi hain Lucifer ki taraf... Par kya future mein, especially Lucifer ke is khulaase ke baad, wo saari mixed feelings pyaar mein tabdeel hongi...

I hope aisa na ho... We know ki ek na ek din, Lucifer permanently is duniyaa se aur in sabki life se jaane hi waala hai... Ek baar wo bandhan bana Maadhuri aur Lucifer ke beech to I don't think ki Lucifer se bichhad kar sambhal paayegi Maadhuri... Iska major kaaran yahi hai ki wo pehle hi bohot kuchh bardaasht kar chuki hai, aur ab kuchh aur problems/dukh, use poori tarah tod denge... Alia ke baare mein bhi zaroor sochegi Maadhuri koyi bhi decision lene se pehle...

Idhar Muskaan ki haalat ab bohot behtar ho chuki hai... Agar Lucifer se nahin dar rahi hai matlab court mein gawahi bhi de hi degi... Kuchh hi baaton se aisa laga jaise Alia ka hi doosra roop ho wo... Definitely, jab donon genius ladkiyan ek hi scene mein dikhengi to maza hi aa jaayega... I think ab jaldi hi Maadhuri ke pati ka number lagne waala hai...

Idhar ek nayi ladki ya kahun ki 7th ladki ki entry ho gayi hai kahani mein... I think ab ginti poori ho jaani chahiye, until unless ye ladki Lucifer ki premika na hokar koyi aur hi ho... Lagta hai ki baaki ladkiyon se definitely bohot alag hone waali hai ye, means Lucifer ki band bajna nischit hai... Dekhte hain ki ye kaun hai aur iska past version kaun hogi...

Idhar Tara ne apna plan execute karne ka soch liya hai par saath hi use dar bhi lag raha hai... One thing I'm sure about is, ki agar Tara ne wo kiya jo bhi wo plan kar rahi hai to shayad jo thodi bohot umeed bachi hai Lucifer aur Ashmita ke waapis milne ki, wo bhi khatam ho jaayegi... Khair, ab Ashmita ko do options diye hain usne jiske mutaabik ya to wo khud hi Lucifer se baat kare ya fir Tara apne plan ko anjaam degi... Maan to gayi hai Ashmita par dekhna hoga ki sahi mein wo jayegi bhi Lucifer ke paas ya nahin... Kya uska ego use allow karega wahaan jaane ke liye...

In the end, Anisha ko bhi kuchh aisa mil gaya hai jiski use aur uski Mom ko talaash thi... Lucifer se door rehne ko keh to rahi hai uski Mom use, par ab ye possible nahin hai... Ek baar Lucifer ke contact mein aane ke baad, bechaari door jaaye bhi to kaise... Idhar Payal ko bhi Maadhuri waali ghatna ki wajah se mana kar Diya hai Lucifer ne, joki ek achha faisla tha...

Both the updates were Outstanding Bhai, Waiting For Next One...
 

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UPDATE-125
Madhuri ko flat par chhodne ke baad lucifer ne socha tha ki vo vapas kaashvi ke pass jayega aur vo raste me bas thoda nasha kar raha tha ki payal ki call aagaye

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hie
Kaise ho?

Lucifer- theek hu
Batao?
Payal- kya?

Lucifer- tumne call kiya hai?
Kuch kaam to hoga na?
Payal- 9 baj gaye

Lucifer- shit
Late ho gaya
Kahi jana tha mujhe
Payal- kaha jana tha?

Lucifer- jana tha ateet me lekin ab to nahi ja paunga
Pata hi nahi chala
Payal- busy ho?

Lucifer- nahi batao kya kaam tha?
Payal- aapne kaha tha 9 baje ghumne chalenge?

Lucifer- ohh ha sorry bhul gaya tha
Payal- it's okay
Chaloge ya fir kabhi?

Lucifer- yaar aaj to nahi ja paunga
Thoda kaam me fas gaya
Payal- koe baat nahi fir kabhi dekh lenge
Theek ho aap?

Lucifer- ha theek hu
Payal- kuch stress me lag rahe ho

Lucifer- nahi nahi bas thak gaya hu thoda aur kuch nahi
Payal- theek hai rest kar lo

Lucifer- okay and sorry for the day ha?
Payal- koe baat nahi
Kaam jada jaruri hai

Lucifer- bye jaldi milte hai
Payal- jaldi milte hai aur lucifer phone kaat deta hai

Lucifer ka mood to madhuri se baat karte time hi chud gaya tha ab vo payal ke samne ja kar uska bhi mood kharab nahi karna chahta tha esliye usne mana kar diya tha kyuki ye to lucifer bhi janta tha ki agar vo madhuri par gussa ho sakta hai to fir kisi par bhi ho sakta hai

Vaise uska decision bhi theek hi tha kyuki payal soft hearted ladki hai vo lucifer ka gussa sahan bhi nahi kar payegi

Lucifer fir vaha se ek bar chala gaya aur khud jam kar saraab pee etne ki chalna bhi muskil ho gaya tha uska

Jab mid night bahar nikla to pair buri tarah lad khada rahe the aur vo landate hue chal raha tha

Vo thoda aur aage nikla hi tha ki samne ek ladki khadi thi aur vo bahut sare ladko se ladae kar rahi thi

Lucifer ne jab dekha to ladkhadate hue uske pass jane laga
Us tharki ko laga tha ladki problem me hai usse bachaega fir kuch mil jayega es raat me

Lekin jaise hi vo us ladki ke pass pahucha ek bahut jordaar aawaz aae lucifer ke kano me

Jab samne dekha to ek ladka jamin par gira hua tha aur dard me karha raha tha

Lucifer upar dekh pata us se pehle hi ek aur ladka jamin par ja gira fir to jo us ladki ne us ladko ko pela dekh kar maja hi aagya

Akeli ladki ne un sare ladko ko maar maar kar bhoot bana diya tha

Vahi lucifer side me khadi ek car ka sahara le kar saraab peeta hua maje lene laga

Kyuki us ladki ko lucifer ki help to bilkul bhi nahi chahiye thi
Ye mat sochna ki lucifer nashe me hai to kuch nahi kar pata
Vo devil tha aur ye raat ka time vo abhi bhi kisi ki gand faad ke ussi ke hath me de deta

Lekin es waqt maje se dekhna hi usse sahi laga

Jab sab ladko ko achi tarah peet liya aur us ladki ka man bhar gaya to usne piche khade lucifer ko dekha

Lucifer- I'm not with them
Uske dekhte hi lucifer bol pada
Vo lucifer ke pass aaye uske hatho se bottle li aur bilkul lucifer ki tarah hi neat peene lagi

Lucifer- bc my kind of girl
Vo man me bola

Kya ladki thi vo ek baar me hi puri bottle khatam kar di ha matlab aadhi to lucifer ne pee rakhi thi jitni usme thi vo sari ek ek bund vo ladki kheech gaye

Lucifer- thoda to chhod deti mere liye?
Ab ye pyaasa kaha bhatkega?
Ladki- pyaasa apni liye pani dund hi leta hai
Vo attitude ke sath boli aur mud kar apni super bike se vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer bas usse dekhta rah gaya
Sara nasha utar chuka tha uska aur ab aur saraab chahiye thi kyuki abhi to raat suru hi hue thi

Kisi tarah usne kahi se kuch jugaad kiya aur fir peete hue apne flat chala gaya****

Aadmi- sab tayar hai Ma'am
Kab karna hai?
Tara- dar lag raha hai

Aadmi- lucifer is a very dangerous man
Us se darna bhi chahiye
Tara- lekin ye karna bhi padega
Baad me dekh lenge jo consequences honge un ko

Aadmi- bas family ko bacha lena us se baki to sab handle ho jayenge
Tara- kuch nahi hoga tumhri family ko main guarantee deti hu

Ashmita- didi aapne vo file dekhi kya?
Ashmita sidhe bina knock kiye uske room me ghusi jis se tara thodi hadbada gaye

Tara- main baad me karti hu
Usne jaldi se bola aur phone kaat diya

Ashmita confused si tara ko dekhti rahi
Ashmita- galat time par aagaye kya main?

Tara- nahi nahi
Batho kya pure din kaam kaam karti rahti ho
Ashmita- bas ye last tendor hai
Fir ho jayega aaj ka kaam

Tara- aur kuch nahi karna ab aaj
Batho yaha mujhe tum se baat karni hai
Ashmita uske sath bath gaye

Tara- kaisi ho tum?
Ashmita- main to theek hi hu didi

Tara- aur kya chal raha hai?
Ashmita- aap lucifer ke bare me puch rahe ho kya?

Tara- main kyu puchungi uske bare me?
Mujhe kya matlab us se?
Mujhe to meri behan se matlab hai bas
Ashmita- hmm

Tara- batao kya chal raha hai?
Ashmita- bas kaam didi

Tara- ghumne chalegi mere sath?
Ashmita- abhi to bahut kaam hai didi

Tara- Waterpark?
Tumhra favorite
Ashmita- aap soch rahi ho ki main udaas hu lucifer ki vajah se?

Tara- main to nahi soch rahi
Ha mujhe pata hai ki tum udaas jarur ho
Ashmita- sab theek hai didi
Maine sikh liya sabak

Tara- achi baat hai
Lekin agar tumne sikh liya sabak to fir tum khush kyu nahi ho?
Ashmita- main khush hu didi

Tara- sach me?
Mujhe to kisi angle se nahi lag rahi
Ashmita- chhodo na didi
Aap kya baat leke bath gaye?

Tara- bachpan me jab bhi tujhe koe problem hoti thi tu sabse pehle mere pass aati thi
Ashmita- main aaj bhi aapke pass hi aaungi agar mujhe koe problem hue to

Tara- uske baad hum bade ho gaye aur ek dusre ke liye waqt nikalna hi muskil hoga
Main tujh se batana chahti hu ki main humesha tere sath hi thi
Besak hum pehle jitna sath nahi rahe aur na hi pehle jitni sharing hue lekin you will always be my baby sister
I want you to know that ki main humesha tere sath khadi rahungi no matter what

Ashmita- i know didi
Aap meri backbone ho aur agar backbone tooti to fir kuch nahi bachta
Tara- esliye aaj main tujhe kuch maang rahi hu

Ashmita- aapko kya mangana hai mujh se?
Tara- i dont know why I'm doing this aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki ye future me galat decision hoga lekin fir bhi main tujhse maang rahi hu

Ashmita- agar aap mujhse vada chahti ho ki main lucifer se door rahu to main aapko bata deti hu ki ab mera us se koe rishta nahi hai
Main bilkul nahi sochti uske bare me
Tara- main to eske bilkul opposite maang rahi thi

Ashmita- kya matlab?
Tara- i want you to talk to him

Ashmita- wait what????
Tara- sahi suna tum ne
Main chahti hu ki tum us se baat karo aur apni misunderstanding ko theek karo
Mujhe pata hai tum dono ki life ek dusre ke bina kuch nahi hai
Esliye main tum se bol rahi hu ki baat karke sab solve kar lo
Kyuki agar tumne nahi kiya to fir mujhe kuch karna padega aur fir khel ganda ho jayega

Ashmita- main kyu baat karu us se?
Vo bhi to kar sakta hai?
Galti bhi vo kare aur aur attitude bhi vo dikhaye?
Main to nahi karungi baat chahe kuch bhi ho jaye

Tara- attitude aur ego ki vajah se hi rishte toot jate hai ashu
Agar tum samne se baat karogi to tum chhoti nahi ho jaogi
Ashmita- ho jaungi main chhoti
Nahi karni mujhe us se baat

Tara- marji hai teri
Maine to bata diya jo mujhe mangana tha baki tumhri marji
Tara- ye aap galat kar rahe ho mere sath

Tara- mujhe jo sahi lag raha hai vo main kar rahi hu
Agar tumhe nahi manana to mat mano lekin baad me ye mat bolna ki didi ye aapne kya kar diya?
Aapko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha
Vagra vagra
Mere liye teri happiness sabse important hai aur main uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hu

Ashmita- please aap kuch mat karna
Mujhe aur problem nahi chahiye life me
Hum koe bhi lucifer ke against nahi jeet sake
Please didi main aapse request karti hu kuch bhi mat karna aap
Main aapko hurt hote nahi dekh sakti

Tara- maine to tumhe bata diya hai
Ya to tum apni problem khud apne tarike se solve kar lo ya fir main apne hisaab se dekhungi lekin fir tum us me involve nahi ho paogi chahe situation kaisi bhi ho
Ashmita- didi please mat karo
Mat jao aap lucifer ke samne
Please didi maan lo meri baat
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Acha theek hai main baat karungi lucifer se lekin aap kuch nahi karoge
Promise me aap kuch nahi karoge
Tara- tu baat karke apne problem solve kar le aur main kuch nahi karungi
Tere par hai sab kuch
Ab tu bath main tere liye kuch tasty sa bana kar lati hu....
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
 

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Madhuri ko flat par chhodne ke baad lucifer ne socha tha ki vo vapas kaashvi ke pass jayega aur vo raste me bas thoda nasha kar raha tha ki payal ki call aagaye

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hie
Kaise ho?

Lucifer- theek hu
Batao?
Payal- kya?

Lucifer- tumne call kiya hai?
Kuch kaam to hoga na?
Payal- 9 baj gaye

Lucifer- shit
Late ho gaya
Kahi jana tha mujhe
Payal- kaha jana tha?

Lucifer- jana tha ateet me lekin ab to nahi ja paunga
Pata hi nahi chala
Payal- busy ho?

Lucifer- nahi batao kya kaam tha?
Payal- aapne kaha tha 9 baje ghumne chalenge?

Lucifer- ohh ha sorry bhul gaya tha
Payal- it's okay
Chaloge ya fir kabhi?

Lucifer- yaar aaj to nahi ja paunga
Thoda kaam me fas gaya
Payal- koe baat nahi fir kabhi dekh lenge
Theek ho aap?

Lucifer- ha theek hu
Payal- kuch stress me lag rahe ho

Lucifer- nahi nahi bas thak gaya hu thoda aur kuch nahi
Payal- theek hai rest kar lo

Lucifer- okay and sorry for the day ha?
Payal- koe baat nahi
Kaam jada jaruri hai

Lucifer- bye jaldi milte hai
Payal- jaldi milte hai aur lucifer phone kaat deta hai

Lucifer ka mood to madhuri se baat karte time hi chud gaya tha ab vo payal ke samne ja kar uska bhi mood kharab nahi karna chahta tha esliye usne mana kar diya tha kyuki ye to lucifer bhi janta tha ki agar vo madhuri par gussa ho sakta hai to fir kisi par bhi ho sakta hai

Vaise uska decision bhi theek hi tha kyuki payal soft hearted ladki hai vo lucifer ka gussa sahan bhi nahi kar payegi

Lucifer fir vaha se ek bar chala gaya aur khud jam kar saraab pee etne ki chalna bhi muskil ho gaya tha uska

Jab mid night bahar nikla to pair buri tarah lad khada rahe the aur vo landate hue chal raha tha

Vo thoda aur aage nikla hi tha ki samne ek ladki khadi thi aur vo bahut sare ladko se ladae kar rahi thi

Lucifer ne jab dekha to ladkhadate hue uske pass jane laga
Us tharki ko laga tha ladki problem me hai usse bachaega fir kuch mil jayega es raat me

Lekin jaise hi vo us ladki ke pass pahucha ek bahut jordaar aawaz aae lucifer ke kano me

Jab samne dekha to ek ladka jamin par gira hua tha aur dard me karha raha tha

Lucifer upar dekh pata us se pehle hi ek aur ladka jamin par ja gira fir to jo us ladki ne us ladko ko pela dekh kar maja hi aagya

Akeli ladki ne un sare ladko ko maar maar kar bhoot bana diya tha

Vahi lucifer side me khadi ek car ka sahara le kar saraab peeta hua maje lene laga

Kyuki us ladki ko lucifer ki help to bilkul bhi nahi chahiye thi
Ye mat sochna ki lucifer nashe me hai to kuch nahi kar pata
Vo devil tha aur ye raat ka time vo abhi bhi kisi ki gand faad ke ussi ke hath me de deta

Lekin es waqt maje se dekhna hi usse sahi laga

Jab sab ladko ko achi tarah peet liya aur us ladki ka man bhar gaya to usne piche khade lucifer ko dekha

Lucifer- I'm not with them
Uske dekhte hi lucifer bol pada
Vo lucifer ke pass aaye uske hatho se bottle li aur bilkul lucifer ki tarah hi neat peene lagi

Lucifer- bc my kind of girl
Vo man me bola

Kya ladki thi vo ek baar me hi puri bottle khatam kar di ha matlab aadhi to lucifer ne pee rakhi thi jitni usme thi vo sari ek ek bund vo ladki kheech gaye

Lucifer- thoda to chhod deti mere liye?
Ab ye pyaasa kaha bhatkega?
Ladki- pyaasa apni liye pani dund hi leta hai
Vo attitude ke sath boli aur mud kar apni super bike se vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer bas usse dekhta rah gaya
Sara nasha utar chuka tha uska aur ab aur saraab chahiye thi kyuki abhi to raat suru hi hue thi

Kisi tarah usne kahi se kuch jugaad kiya aur fir peete hue apne flat chala gaya****

Aadmi- sab tayar hai Ma'am
Kab karna hai?
Tara- dar lag raha hai

Aadmi- lucifer is a very dangerous man
Us se darna bhi chahiye
Tara- lekin ye karna bhi padega
Baad me dekh lenge jo consequences honge un ko

Aadmi- bas family ko bacha lena us se baki to sab handle ho jayenge
Tara- kuch nahi hoga tumhri family ko main guarantee deti hu

Ashmita- didi aapne vo file dekhi kya?
Ashmita sidhe bina knock kiye uske room me ghusi jis se tara thodi hadbada gaye

Tara- main baad me karti hu
Usne jaldi se bola aur phone kaat diya

Ashmita confused si tara ko dekhti rahi
Ashmita- galat time par aagaye kya main?

Tara- nahi nahi
Batho kya pure din kaam kaam karti rahti ho
Ashmita- bas ye last tendor hai
Fir ho jayega aaj ka kaam

Tara- aur kuch nahi karna ab aaj
Batho yaha mujhe tum se baat karni hai
Ashmita uske sath bath gaye

Tara- kaisi ho tum?
Ashmita- main to theek hi hu didi

Tara- aur kya chal raha hai?
Ashmita- aap lucifer ke bare me puch rahe ho kya?

Tara- main kyu puchungi uske bare me?
Mujhe kya matlab us se?
Mujhe to meri behan se matlab hai bas
Ashmita- hmm

Tara- batao kya chal raha hai?
Ashmita- bas kaam didi

Tara- ghumne chalegi mere sath?
Ashmita- abhi to bahut kaam hai didi

Tara- Waterpark?
Tumhra favorite
Ashmita- aap soch rahi ho ki main udaas hu lucifer ki vajah se?

Tara- main to nahi soch rahi
Ha mujhe pata hai ki tum udaas jarur ho
Ashmita- sab theek hai didi
Maine sikh liya sabak

Tara- achi baat hai
Lekin agar tumne sikh liya sabak to fir tum khush kyu nahi ho?
Ashmita- main khush hu didi

Tara- sach me?
Mujhe to kisi angle se nahi lag rahi
Ashmita- chhodo na didi
Aap kya baat leke bath gaye?

Tara- bachpan me jab bhi tujhe koe problem hoti thi tu sabse pehle mere pass aati thi
Ashmita- main aaj bhi aapke pass hi aaungi agar mujhe koe problem hue to

Tara- uske baad hum bade ho gaye aur ek dusre ke liye waqt nikalna hi muskil hoga
Main tujh se batana chahti hu ki main humesha tere sath hi thi
Besak hum pehle jitna sath nahi rahe aur na hi pehle jitni sharing hue lekin you will always be my baby sister
I want you to know that ki main humesha tere sath khadi rahungi no matter what

Ashmita- i know didi
Aap meri backbone ho aur agar backbone tooti to fir kuch nahi bachta
Tara- esliye aaj main tujhe kuch maang rahi hu

Ashmita- aapko kya mangana hai mujh se?
Tara- i dont know why I'm doing this aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki ye future me galat decision hoga lekin fir bhi main tujhse maang rahi hu

Ashmita- agar aap mujhse vada chahti ho ki main lucifer se door rahu to main aapko bata deti hu ki ab mera us se koe rishta nahi hai
Main bilkul nahi sochti uske bare me
Tara- main to eske bilkul opposite maang rahi thi

Ashmita- kya matlab?
Tara- i want you to talk to him

Ashmita- wait what????
Tara- sahi suna tum ne
Main chahti hu ki tum us se baat karo aur apni misunderstanding ko theek karo
Mujhe pata hai tum dono ki life ek dusre ke bina kuch nahi hai
Esliye main tum se bol rahi hu ki baat karke sab solve kar lo
Kyuki agar tumne nahi kiya to fir mujhe kuch karna padega aur fir khel ganda ho jayega

Ashmita- main kyu baat karu us se?
Vo bhi to kar sakta hai?
Galti bhi vo kare aur aur attitude bhi vo dikhaye?
Main to nahi karungi baat chahe kuch bhi ho jaye

Tara- attitude aur ego ki vajah se hi rishte toot jate hai ashu
Agar tum samne se baat karogi to tum chhoti nahi ho jaogi
Ashmita- ho jaungi main chhoti
Nahi karni mujhe us se baat

Tara- marji hai teri
Maine to bata diya jo mujhe mangana tha baki tumhri marji
Tara- ye aap galat kar rahe ho mere sath

Tara- mujhe jo sahi lag raha hai vo main kar rahi hu
Agar tumhe nahi manana to mat mano lekin baad me ye mat bolna ki didi ye aapne kya kar diya?
Aapko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha
Vagra vagra
Mere liye teri happiness sabse important hai aur main uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hu

Ashmita- please aap kuch mat karna
Mujhe aur problem nahi chahiye life me
Hum koe bhi lucifer ke against nahi jeet sake
Please didi main aapse request karti hu kuch bhi mat karna aap
Main aapko hurt hote nahi dekh sakti

Tara- maine to tumhe bata diya hai
Ya to tum apni problem khud apne tarike se solve kar lo ya fir main apne hisaab se dekhungi lekin fir tum us me involve nahi ho paogi chahe situation kaisi bhi ho
Ashmita- didi please mat karo
Mat jao aap lucifer ke samne
Please didi maan lo meri baat
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Acha theek hai main baat karungi lucifer se lekin aap kuch nahi karoge
Promise me aap kuch nahi karoge
Tara- tu baat karke apne problem solve kar le aur main kuch nahi karungi
Tere par hai sab kuch
Ab tu bath main tere liye kuch tasty sa bana kar lati hu....
Awesome update
 
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