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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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UPDATE-270


Ek baar fir pura sehar dhamako se dahal gaya. Lucifer ki aankhon ke samne uska sahar tabah ho raha tha aur vo kuch bhi nahi kar pa raha tha

24 ghanto se bhi kam ke samay me ye tesri baar dhamaka hua tha. Ab sahar ke char kono me se teen jal rahe the aur chautha tha vo jaha lucifer khada tha

Use ye to pata chal gaya tha ki ye kaun kar raha hai lekin vo use rokne ka kuch bhi soch nahi pa raha tha. Bahar sakthi bahut thi aur agar vo kuch bhi unsual karta to police ya army ki najaro me aane ke pure pure chances the aur vahi agar vo kuch nahi karta hai to bahut jaldi sab khatam ho jane wala tha

Ashmita jo lucifer ki bahoo me thi uske kaano me bhi abhi tak dhamako ki aawaz gunj rahi thi aur yehi karan tha ki usne lucifer ko bahut jor se jakad raha tha. Esliye nahi ki use dar lag raha tha balki esliye ki vo lucifer ko kuch nahi hone dena chahti thi aur ye bhi chahti thi ki ab lucifer ghar se bahar nahi jaye

Lucifer use vaise hi khud me samete ander leke jane laga aur fir bade pyaar se sofe par batha kar uske pairo ke pass bath gaya

Lucifer- look at me
Behad shant lahje me lucifer bola

Lucifer- ashu?? Look at me?
Es baar usne khud hi ashmita ka chehra pakad par upar uthaya aur uski aankhon me dekhne laga

Lucifer- mujhe lagta hai mera hi koe dusman ye sab kar raha hai. Vo har us chhij par attack karega jis se mujhe pyaar hai. Es sehar ne mujhe tum sab diye ho aur esliye ye mere liye bahut ajeej hai aur esliye hi usne sabse pehle city ko target kiya.

Ab jab sehar ke har kone me se chhikhe gunjane lagegi tab vo un logo par aayega jinse mujhe pyaar hai matlab tu, inaaya, anisha, madhuri maam, tara, payal, anika sab. Ek ek karke vo enhe nuksaan pahuchane ki kosis karega aur jaha tak mujhe lagta hai vo suruvaat tumse ya inaaya se hi karega.

Lucifer- esliye jab tak ye sab khatam nahi kar du tum vohi karogi jo main bolunga. Naag jaha sab ko rakhe hue hai vaha rahoge mujhe pata hai tum bahut strong ho lekin baki sab nahi hai esliye aise hard time me tumhe unki dekhbaal karni hai, unhe sambhalna hai. Vo chahe tumse chhote ho ya fir tumse bade un sabko tumhri jarurat hai aur tumhe unka sath dena hoga

Lucifer- shhiss beech me nahi bolo. Mujhe khatam karne do pehle

Lucifer- abhi sirf film ka ek chhota sa teaser hi aaya hai bahut jaldi ek trailer aayega fir movie aur movie ke end me kya aata hai? Climax to jab tak ye kahani apne climax par nahi pahuch jati tab tak tumhe un sabka khayal rakhna hai aur sath me apna bhi

Lucifer- mujhe pata hai meri ashu bahut strong hai aur vo ye sab bahut aaram se kar legi. Karogi na tum? Mere liye?

Ashmita- promise me

Lucifer- mujhe pata hai tum kya promise mangogi lekin vo promise main nahi kar sakta. Mujhe nahi pata main vapas aaunga ya nahi lekin wada karta hu kisi na kisi roop me tumhre sath humesha rahunga. Tumhre pass tumhra lucifer humesha rahega

Ashmita- fir main bhi kuch nahi karungi. Agar tum vapas nahi aaoge to main tumhre sath hi rahungi aur tumhre sath hi jaungi. Parvaah nahi mujhe jamane ki agar us jamane me mera dost mere sath nahi

Lucifer- tumhe parvaah karni padegi. Jo aage hoga usme tumhra ek bahut bada yogdaan hoga aur ye ek behtar bhavisay ki sathpna karega

Ashmita- mujhe nahi chahiye behatar bhavisay. Agar es dunia me tum nahi to puri dunia ko aag laga dungi main

Lucifer- us se main vapas aa jaunga?

Ashmita- nahi. Lekin fir jala dungi main puri dunia ko

Lucifer- pata nahi maine jindagi me kaunsa acha kaam kiya tha jo mujhe tu mili. Ashu ek baat bata deta hu tujhe aaj jab bhi mera naam liya jayega uske sath humesha sabse pehle tera naam aayega. Lucifer ashmita ke bagair adhuri hi rahega jindagi bhar

Ashmita- let’s go and kill that fucker

Lucifer- i will do that for you don’t worry. Ab please meri jaan meri baat maan le aur sabke pass chali ja

Ashmita- main nahi jaungi lucifer aur nahi jaungi ka matlab hota hai nahi jaungi.

Lucifer- abhi mujhe sirf check karne jane de. I promise main raat ko aaunga tere pass

Ashmita- promise kar raha hai tu?

Lucifer- promise kar raha hu main aur tujhe to pata hi hai lucifer ka promise kabhi nahi tutata

Ashmita- and you’re gonna tell me everything. Every fucking thing

Lucifer- tumhe vaise hi pata chal jayega sab

Ashmita- mujhe tere muh se sunana hai

Lucifer- theek hai main tujhe sab bata dunga. Aur kuch? Ya chale ab?

Ashmita- mujhe puri raat chahiye teri

Lucifer- mera sab kuch tera hi to hai

Ashmita- aaj ki raat puri ki puri mujhe chahiye teri

Lucifer- theek hai aur kuch?

Ashmita- a…
Lucifer- aur kuch nahi ab. Bahut ho gaya. Chal chhup chhap nahi to tujhe tere dhungo se utha kar leke jaunga ab

Ashmita- acha? Hai etni himmat?

Lucifer- himmat to etni hai ki tujhe puri raat khadi na rahne du

Ashmita- vo bhi dekh lungi raat ko. Chal ab

Fir lucifer ashmita ko baki sab ke pass chhod deta hai

Lucifer ko sahi salamaat dekh kar sab bahut khush the lekin usne jaise hi jane ki kaha vaha mojud har ek jan ka chehra utar gaya. Ek ajeeb sa dar bath gaya unke ander

Inaaya- tum kyu ja rahe bahar? Pata hai na kitna khatra hai bahar? Please mat ja na

Lucifer- apno ke liye hume bahut kuch karna padta hai my love. Main bhi vohi karne ja raha hu

Inaaya- to fir hume bhi nahi rahna yaha. Hum bhi sath chalenge

Lucifer- main to tumhe samjhdar samjhta tha lekin tum to anisha se bhi bewakuf nikali?

Anisha jo ek kone me chhup chhap khadi sab dekh rahi thi. Ek vohi to thi jisko lucifer ki sachae ka pata tha aur uske tej dimag ne abhi tak ki ho rahi chhije ka bhi analysis kar liya tha esliye hi usko natija kya hone wala tha uska andaja tha. Lekin vo lucifer ko rok bhi nahi sakti thi. Bhale hi vo kitni bhi muhobat karti ho lucifer se lekin ye baat bahut ache se janti thi ki lucifer takleef me hai aur vo bhi sadiyo se aur agar use kuch mukti de sakti hai to vote hai maut. Esliye hi apni bhavnao ko kabu me rakhte hue vo shanti khade rahne ki kosis kar rahi thi

Lucifer- anisha?? Sahi soch rahi ho tum

“Sahi soch rahi hu main” ye sunte hi ek peeda uthi anisha ke dil me jo uske chehre par saaf saaf ubhar kar aa gaye thi lekin usne turant use chhupa liya

Anisha- mujhe pata hai aapko jana hi padega. Aapke pass aur koe rasta nahi hai aur agar aapko aapki manjil mili to sabse jada khushi mujhe hi hogi

Ashmita- manjil? Matlab?

Anisha- vo samjh gaye didi aap bhi jaldi hi samjh jaogi

Inaaya- sapne sach hote hai lucifer? Kya ye sab un sapno ki vajah se hi ho raha hai?

Lucifer- nahi ye sab ho raha hai uski vajah se vo sapne aa rahe the

Tara- mujhe to kuch samjh nahi aa raha

Lucifer- aapko bhi aa jaega. Maam? Sabka dhayan rakhogi na aap? Jaise aapne mera rakha tha?

Madhuri jo abhi ho rahi conversation ka matlab samjhne ki kosis kar rahi thi lucifer ke achanak pukarne se chaunk gaye

Madhuri- ha? Kya? Ha matlab kyu nahi. Tum sab mere apne hi ho

Lucifer- bache kaha hai?

Madhuri- sula diye

Lucifer- acha kiya vaise bhi raat bahut daravani aati hai

Ashmita- lucifer tu sidha baat kar le nahi to main tujhe kahi nahi jane dungi

Lucifer- aap sab ek dusre ka khayal rakhna main aaunga vapas

Anisha- i am having your back lucifer. You go and do what you need to do

Lucifer- i know.
Ek baar sabki taraf najar ghumaye usne. Vaha ek bhi aisa nahi tha jiske chehre par tension nahi ho. Koe nahi chahta tha ki lucifer vaha se jaye kyuki thoda bahut to sab lucifer ke behaviour se vakif the aur unhe lagne lag gaya tha ki ye jo abhi hone wala hai ye koe ache sanket bilkul nahi layega

Vahi door khadi payal jo baki se bilkul nahi ghuli mili thi uski aankhon me to kisi bhi waqt aashu aa sakte the. Halanki jada milan nahi hua tha uska aur lucifer ka lekin fir bhi jo atoot rishta bana tha vo chhikh chhikh kar kah raha tha ki lucifer vapas nahi aayega. Aur sabse dikhdayak ye tha ki vo kuch bhi nahi kar sakti thi. Na to vo lucifer ko rok sakti thi aur na hi vo lucifer ko bacha sakti thi

Kisi tarah apne aapko diwar ka sahara diye vo khadi rahne ki kosis kar rahi thi

Lucifer ne uski taraf dekha dono ki aankhen mili, dard sajha kiya fir lucifer muskraya aur mud kar vaha se chala gaya

Sab khade khade tab tak lucifer ko dekhte rahe jab tak vo unki aankhon se ojhal na ho gaya ho

Ab raat hone ko aa gaye thi aur raat ka matlab hi tha devil ka waqt

Lucifer bhi ghar se yehi soch kar nikla tha ki aaj es sehar ki galliya khoon se bhar dunga insaano ki nahi un sabki jinhone es sehar ko rulaya hai

Usko ye bhi samjh aa gaya tha ki ab uski identity jada der tak chhupane wali nahi hai esliye usne apne chehre par oddi hue nakli parat ke bare me bhi jada nahi socha aur utar pada madaan me

Raat hue aur uski sense din se kae guna badh gaye aur vo un kaali galliya me etne raftaar se udne laga ki agar koe beech me aa jaye to lucifer ki raftaar hi use do tukdo me baat kar rakh de aur kuch hi seconds me vo ek chorahe par ruk gaya

Samne andera tha lekin fir bhi vo aage ka najara saaf saaf dekh sakta tha. Ek darvani muskaan liye vo aage badh gaya aur…..
 

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UPDATE-270


Ek baar fir pura sehar dhamako se dahal gaya. Lucifer ki aankhon ke samne uska sahar tabah ho raha tha aur vo kuch bhi nahi kar pa raha tha

24 ghanto se bhi kam ke samay me ye tesri baar dhamaka hua tha. Ab sahar ke char kono me se teen jal rahe the aur chautha tha vo jaha lucifer khada tha

Use ye to pata chal gaya tha ki ye kaun kar raha hai lekin vo use rokne ka kuch bhi soch nahi pa raha tha. Bahar sakthi bahut thi aur agar vo kuch bhi unsual karta to police ya army ki najaro me aane ke pure pure chances the aur vahi agar vo kuch nahi karta hai to bahut jaldi sab khatam ho jane wala tha

Ashmita jo lucifer ki bahoo me thi uske kaano me bhi abhi tak dhamako ki aawaz gunj rahi thi aur yehi karan tha ki usne lucifer ko bahut jor se jakad raha tha. Esliye nahi ki use dar lag raha tha balki esliye ki vo lucifer ko kuch nahi hone dena chahti thi aur ye bhi chahti thi ki ab lucifer ghar se bahar nahi jaye

Lucifer use vaise hi khud me samete ander leke jane laga aur fir bade pyaar se sofe par batha kar uske pairo ke pass bath gaya

Lucifer- look at me
Behad shant lahje me lucifer bola

Lucifer- ashu?? Look at me?
Es baar usne khud hi ashmita ka chehra pakad par upar uthaya aur uski aankhon me dekhne laga

Lucifer- mujhe lagta hai mera hi koe dusman ye sab kar raha hai. Vo har us chhij par attack karega jis se mujhe pyaar hai. Es sehar ne mujhe tum sab diye ho aur esliye ye mere liye bahut ajeej hai aur esliye hi usne sabse pehle city ko target kiya.

Ab jab sehar ke har kone me se chhikhe gunjane lagegi tab vo un logo par aayega jinse mujhe pyaar hai matlab tu, inaaya, anisha, madhuri maam, tara, payal, anika sab. Ek ek karke vo enhe nuksaan pahuchane ki kosis karega aur jaha tak mujhe lagta hai vo suruvaat tumse ya inaaya se hi karega.

Lucifer- esliye jab tak ye sab khatam nahi kar du tum vohi karogi jo main bolunga. Naag jaha sab ko rakhe hue hai vaha rahoge mujhe pata hai tum bahut strong ho lekin baki sab nahi hai esliye aise hard time me tumhe unki dekhbaal karni hai, unhe sambhalna hai. Vo chahe tumse chhote ho ya fir tumse bade un sabko tumhri jarurat hai aur tumhe unka sath dena hoga

Lucifer- shhiss beech me nahi bolo. Mujhe khatam karne do pehle

Lucifer- abhi sirf film ka ek chhota sa teaser hi aaya hai bahut jaldi ek trailer aayega fir movie aur movie ke end me kya aata hai? Climax to jab tak ye kahani apne climax par nahi pahuch jati tab tak tumhe un sabka khayal rakhna hai aur sath me apna bhi

Lucifer- mujhe pata hai meri ashu bahut strong hai aur vo ye sab bahut aaram se kar legi. Karogi na tum? Mere liye?

Ashmita- promise me

Lucifer- mujhe pata hai tum kya promise mangogi lekin vo promise main nahi kar sakta. Mujhe nahi pata main vapas aaunga ya nahi lekin wada karta hu kisi na kisi roop me tumhre sath humesha rahunga. Tumhre pass tumhra lucifer humesha rahega

Ashmita- fir main bhi kuch nahi karungi. Agar tum vapas nahi aaoge to main tumhre sath hi rahungi aur tumhre sath hi jaungi. Parvaah nahi mujhe jamane ki agar us jamane me mera dost mere sath nahi

Lucifer- tumhe parvaah karni padegi. Jo aage hoga usme tumhra ek bahut bada yogdaan hoga aur ye ek behtar bhavisay ki sathpna karega

Ashmita- mujhe nahi chahiye behatar bhavisay. Agar es dunia me tum nahi to puri dunia ko aag laga dungi main

Lucifer- us se main vapas aa jaunga?

Ashmita- nahi. Lekin fir jala dungi main puri dunia ko

Lucifer- pata nahi maine jindagi me kaunsa acha kaam kiya tha jo mujhe tu mili. Ashu ek baat bata deta hu tujhe aaj jab bhi mera naam liya jayega uske sath humesha sabse pehle tera naam aayega. Lucifer ashmita ke bagair adhuri hi rahega jindagi bhar

Ashmita- let’s go and kill that fucker

Lucifer- i will do that for you don’t worry. Ab please meri jaan meri baat maan le aur sabke pass chali ja

Ashmita- main nahi jaungi lucifer aur nahi jaungi ka matlab hota hai nahi jaungi.

Lucifer- abhi mujhe sirf check karne jane de. I promise main raat ko aaunga tere pass

Ashmita- promise kar raha hai tu?

Lucifer- promise kar raha hu main aur tujhe to pata hi hai lucifer ka promise kabhi nahi tutata

Ashmita- and you’re gonna tell me everything. Every fucking thing

Lucifer- tumhe vaise hi pata chal jayega sab

Ashmita- mujhe tere muh se sunana hai

Lucifer- theek hai main tujhe sab bata dunga. Aur kuch? Ya chale ab?

Ashmita- mujhe puri raat chahiye teri

Lucifer- mera sab kuch tera hi to hai

Ashmita- aaj ki raat puri ki puri mujhe chahiye teri

Lucifer- theek hai aur kuch?

Ashmita- a…
Lucifer- aur kuch nahi ab. Bahut ho gaya. Chal chhup chhap nahi to tujhe tere dhungo se utha kar leke jaunga ab

Ashmita- acha? Hai etni himmat?

Lucifer- himmat to etni hai ki tujhe puri raat khadi na rahne du

Ashmita- vo bhi dekh lungi raat ko. Chal ab

Fir lucifer ashmita ko baki sab ke pass chhod deta hai

Lucifer ko sahi salamaat dekh kar sab bahut khush the lekin usne jaise hi jane ki kaha vaha mojud har ek jan ka chehra utar gaya. Ek ajeeb sa dar bath gaya unke ander

Inaaya- tum kyu ja rahe bahar? Pata hai na kitna khatra hai bahar? Please mat ja na

Lucifer- apno ke liye hume bahut kuch karna padta hai my love. Main bhi vohi karne ja raha hu

Inaaya- to fir hume bhi nahi rahna yaha. Hum bhi sath chalenge

Lucifer- main to tumhe samjhdar samjhta tha lekin tum to anisha se bhi bewakuf nikali?

Anisha jo ek kone me chhup chhap khadi sab dekh rahi thi. Ek vohi to thi jisko lucifer ki sachae ka pata tha aur uske tej dimag ne abhi tak ki ho rahi chhije ka bhi analysis kar liya tha esliye hi usko natija kya hone wala tha uska andaja tha. Lekin vo lucifer ko rok bhi nahi sakti thi. Bhale hi vo kitni bhi muhobat karti ho lucifer se lekin ye baat bahut ache se janti thi ki lucifer takleef me hai aur vo bhi sadiyo se aur agar use kuch mukti de sakti hai to vote hai maut. Esliye hi apni bhavnao ko kabu me rakhte hue vo shanti khade rahne ki kosis kar rahi thi

Lucifer- anisha?? Sahi soch rahi ho tum

“Sahi soch rahi hu main” ye sunte hi ek peeda uthi anisha ke dil me jo uske chehre par saaf saaf ubhar kar aa gaye thi lekin usne turant use chhupa liya

Anisha- mujhe pata hai aapko jana hi padega. Aapke pass aur koe rasta nahi hai aur agar aapko aapki manjil mili to sabse jada khushi mujhe hi hogi

Ashmita- manjil? Matlab?

Anisha- vo samjh gaye didi aap bhi jaldi hi samjh jaogi

Inaaya- sapne sach hote hai lucifer? Kya ye sab un sapno ki vajah se hi ho raha hai?

Lucifer- nahi ye sab ho raha hai uski vajah se vo sapne aa rahe the

Tara- mujhe to kuch samjh nahi aa raha

Lucifer- aapko bhi aa jaega. Maam? Sabka dhayan rakhogi na aap? Jaise aapne mera rakha tha?

Madhuri jo abhi ho rahi conversation ka matlab samjhne ki kosis kar rahi thi lucifer ke achanak pukarne se chaunk gaye

Madhuri- ha? Kya? Ha matlab kyu nahi. Tum sab mere apne hi ho

Lucifer- bache kaha hai?

Madhuri- sula diye

Lucifer- acha kiya vaise bhi raat bahut daravani aati hai

Ashmita- lucifer tu sidha baat kar le nahi to main tujhe kahi nahi jane dungi

Lucifer- aap sab ek dusre ka khayal rakhna main aaunga vapas

Anisha- i am having your back lucifer. You go and do what you need to do

Lucifer- i know.
Ek baar sabki taraf najar ghumaye usne. Vaha ek bhi aisa nahi tha jiske chehre par tension nahi ho. Koe nahi chahta tha ki lucifer vaha se jaye kyuki thoda bahut to sab lucifer ke behaviour se vakif the aur unhe lagne lag gaya tha ki ye jo abhi hone wala hai ye koe ache sanket bilkul nahi layega

Vahi door khadi payal jo baki se bilkul nahi ghuli mili thi uski aankhon me to kisi bhi waqt aashu aa sakte the. Halanki jada milan nahi hua tha uska aur lucifer ka lekin fir bhi jo atoot rishta bana tha vo chhikh chhikh kar kah raha tha ki lucifer vapas nahi aayega. Aur sabse dikhdayak ye tha ki vo kuch bhi nahi kar sakti thi. Na to vo lucifer ko rok sakti thi aur na hi vo lucifer ko bacha sakti thi

Kisi tarah apne aapko diwar ka sahara diye vo khadi rahne ki kosis kar rahi thi

Lucifer ne uski taraf dekha dono ki aankhen mili, dard sajha kiya fir lucifer muskraya aur mud kar vaha se chala gaya

Sab khade khade tab tak lucifer ko dekhte rahe jab tak vo unki aankhon se ojhal na ho gaya ho

Ab raat hone ko aa gaye thi aur raat ka matlab hi tha devil ka waqt

Lucifer bhi ghar se yehi soch kar nikla tha ki aaj es sehar ki galliya khoon se bhar dunga insaano ki nahi un sabki jinhone es sehar ko rulaya hai

Usko ye bhi samjh aa gaya tha ki ab uski identity jada der tak chhupane wali nahi hai esliye usne apne chehre par oddi hue nakli parat ke bare me bhi jada nahi socha aur utar pada madaan me

Raat hue aur uski sense din se kae guna badh gaye aur vo un kaali galliya me etne raftaar se udne laga ki agar koe beech me aa jaye to lucifer ki raftaar hi use do tukdo me baat kar rakh de aur kuch hi seconds me vo ek chorahe par ruk gaya

Samne andera tha lekin fir bhi vo aage ka najara saaf saaf dekh sakta tha. Ek darvani muskaan liye vo aage badh gaya aur…..
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
 

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Bhai apki story bahut shandar hai kafi time se padh Raha hu main I'd na hone k wajah se ab tak comments nhi Kiya tha main anyone ab yeh story apne end ki tarah badh Rahi hai jisme kafi kuch bhayanak hone wala hai shayad ?
 
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