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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 
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Bhai Maine ye toh nahin bola ki agar aapke paas nahin toh aa jao, Bhai log log ke sath milkar sharing joint funkne ka maza hi alag. Bas itna hi kahung Verna log kahenge review ke time par aata nahin faltu bakwas karne aa gaya hai baki agar kisi baat bura laga ho toh maaf Karo na karo kya farak padta hai 😂😂😂😂😂
Bhai main vo phase se nikal chuka jaha kuch acha bura lagta tha. Aur ab to sharing bas khud ke sath hi hoti hai. Review ka intezaar rahega
 

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“Ahhhhh” ek chhikh ke sath lucifer jamin par ja gira, unke neele khoon ne aaj ek baar fir heaven ki dharti seech di thi aakhiri baar lucifer ke sareer se khoon kab nikla tha ye to sayad kisi ko yaad bhi nahi hoga aur etni aasani se to sayad kabhi bhi nahi nikla hoga

Lucifer bahut ache se janta tha ki vo mata se jeet nahi payega lekin fir bhi gusse ne us se ye kara diya ya fir ye bhi uski ek sochi samjhi chaal thi jiska pata abhi nahi tha hume

Mata- apne hathiyaar niche kar lo lucifer. Tum jeet nahi sakte

Lucifer- mujhe bahut ache se pata hai aap kya chah rahi hai. Aap chahti hai main apna control khou aur sab kuch nast kar du lekin aisa nahi hoga. Aaj lucifer yaha se mar kar hi jayega lekin na hathiyaar niche rakhega aur na uthayega

Mata- mere sabar ka imtehaan le rahe ho tum. Mujhe majbur mat karo

Lucifer- aapne humesha mere sabar ka imtehaan liya hai. Aaj karz chukane ki baari aapki hai, aap piche nahi hat sakti

Mata- main tumhe nahi marunga ye hak kisi aur ka hai aur main us se uska ye hak nahi chhin sakti

Lucifer- mere marne se pehle se yudh bhi khatam nahi hoga

Mata ke chehre par halka halka gussa najar aane lag gaya tha aur unke ek aur jordar pachaad maari lucifer ko aur vo udta udta door jake gira

Lucifer- en sab se kuch nahi hone wala. Main lucifer hu hone wala ultimate god aur jab vo din aayega us din ek ek chhij ka hisaab liya jayega. Aapke aankhon ke samne aapke pyaare manusay ko tadpa tadpa ke jinda rahne ko majbur karunga lekin marunga nahi. Ek ko bhi nahi marunga. Jin jin ke ander achae hai vo sab tadpenge aur najara dekhoge aap

“Ahh” ek baar fir lucifer ke sareer par ek jordaar hamla hua lekin ab use dard lagbhag na ke barabar hone lag gaya tha

Lucifer- main aapka pura khel samjh gaya mata. Pura khel samjh gaya. Aap dharti ka vinaash nahi chahte, aapne to bahut pyaar se banaya hai esko. Aap har buri chhij ka vinaas chahte hai jo dharti par mojud hai taki ek baar fir se vohi sunhara kaal vapas aa sake aur esliye hi mujhe heaven bulaya gaya, esliye hi mujhe mere wings vapas diye gaye taki main vapas ek angel ban jau aur chah kar bhi burai nahi kar pau. Lekin aapne ek baat nahi sochi. Main burai karta nahi hu MAIN HI BURAI HU, main hi andhera hu.

Lucifer- dark lord to sirf naam se badnaam hai, aisa kya bura kiya usne ki main us se acha ho gaya? Ya kya acha kiya maine ki vo mujhse bura ho gaya?
Sadiyo se khoon ki pyaasi es dharti ki pyaas hi to bujhata aaya hu main. Usne jitne apne pure jeevan me log nahi maare honge utne to main sirf US ek raat ko maar diye the

Lucifer- aakhir hai to mera hi chhota bhai jo karega mujhse to kam hi karega. Ha ye satya hai ki main use mar dunga. Mazikeen ka badla uske sareer ka har ek hisse se lunga main lekin us se aapko koe fayda nahi hoga

Lucifer- aap mujhe maar sakti nahi ho aur main uski jaan hu vo apni jaan ko maar payegi nahi matlab saaf hai main hi hu es dunia ka ek matar satya THE ULTIMATE ONE

Mata ke chehre par ab gussa saaf saaf dekha ja raha tha aur lucifer ki muskaan us gusse ko koe had tak badha rahi thi lekin kya lucifer ko es baat se koe fark pad raha tha? Nahi… vo to chahta hi yehi tha ki unka gussa bade aur kuch aisa kare jo unhe nahi karna chahiye

Mata- tum na kal mujhe samjh paye the aur na aaj samjh paye ho. Manusay ke liye jo jaruri hai vo to ho kar rahega aur use koe nahi rok sakta tum bhi nahi. Aur jab tum hi nahi rok paoge to kya tum jiski jaan ho vo rok payegi? Ye satya asatya ki, din aur raat ki, baarish aur doop ki ladae hai lucifer aur esme ujale ko jitna hi hai.
Tumhra ego tumhe kuch nahi dila payega

Mata- main tumhe aakhiri option de rahi hu agar tumhe manana hai to acha hai nahi to fir hoga vohi jo main chahunga

Mata- main tumhe tumhre khoon ke sath rahne ki izzat de sakti hu. Tum apni jindagi jee sakte ho jaise chaho vaise, tumhri sari premika tumhre pass hogi, TUM KHUSH HOGE tumhri muskaan nakli nahi hogi, eda aur tum ek ho paoge. Ek naye dunia de rahi hu main tumhe agar tum meri baat mante ho to……

Lucifer- ma..mamain
Lucifer ke sabad apne aap uske muh ke ander sama gaye kuch bolta hi nahi gaya us se. Jindagi me jo use chahiye tha vo uske samne uski plate me parosa ja raha tha bas use etna karna tha ki aage badh kar plate uthaye aur khana suru kare lekin

Lucifer- HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA
Ek baar to chhoka diya tha aapne mujhe. Fir ek dam se eda ka khayal aaya. Aapka vachan koe nahi tod sakta aap bhi nahi aur sayad aap bhul rahi ho ki aapne eda ko vachan diya tha ki vo to meri nahi ho paye lekin uska ek ansh mera jarur hoga.

“Yaad aaya kya aapko? To ab vo kaise meri ho jayegi? Humare prem ko hawas me badlna chahti ho aap? Nahi aisa nahi hoga. Main jeetna jeeya khul kar jeeya aur jitna jiunga khul kar jiunga. Meri premikaye lucifer ke bina nahi jee paye to kya fayda aise premikao ka? Vo yahi rahegi aur aap unhe har roj dekhoge aur sochoge ki kitni badi galti ki hai aapne lekin usme koe sudhar nahi kiya jayega aur rahi baat lucifer ke khoon ki to vo lucifer ka khoon hoga, dunia ko uske kadamo me jhukna hi padega yehi niyati hai aur dunia uske kadmo me jhukegi. Use lucifer ki jarurat nahi hogi kyuki lucifer to humesha uske pass hi hoga”

Mata- waqt sahi rah dikhaye tumhe

Lucifer- aap aise beech me nahi jaa sakti mata. Ek yodha ne aapko chunoti di hai aur ab ye aapka farz hai us chhunoti ko sivkaar karne ka

Mata- yudh ka koe karan hona chahiye jo jaha nahi hai. Aur jab koe karan hoga tab tumhe mujhse agrah karne ki avsakta nahi padegi main khud be khud tumhre samne aa jaungi tab tak ke liye apna khayal rakhna

Etna bol kar mata vaha se gayab ho jati hai

Lucifer bhi samjh chuka tha ki ab kuch nahi ho sakta esliye vo apne kapde jhadte hue utha aur vaha se chal diya

Hell ke pass pahuch kar usne guruji ka ahvaan kiya lekin vo aaye nahi. Eda ne bola tha ki vapas tabhi aana jab guruji sath ho esliye pehle socha vapas dharti par chala jata hu fir socha guruji ko bula leta hu ek baar eda bhi mil legi fir jab guruji ka koe jawab nahi aaya to ye soch kar hell ki taraf badh gaya ki problem to sari khatam kar hi di ab kya fark padta hai guruji sath ho ya na ho

Hell ke gate par hi eda tahlati najar aa gaye sayad jab se lucifer gaya tha tab se vo vahi ghum rahi thi

“Luciferrrr” lucifer par najar padhte hi vo lucifer ki taraf bhagi aur bilkul uske pass aakar

Eda-guruji kaha hai? Kya tumne unhe dood liya? Ya vo mile hi nahi? Vo tumhre sath kyu nahi hai? Kuch bolte kyu nahi ho? Batao mujhe kya hua vaha par?

Lucifer- jannat agar kisi ko milni chahiye to vo tum ho

Lucifer ne jis tarah se bola aur jis tarah se vo eda ko dekh kar tha ek second me eda ka chehra sarm se laal ho gaya lekin jaldi hi usne apne aapko normal bhi kar liya

Eda- guruja kaha hai lucifer? Aur ye tumhre sareer par etni chhot kaise aa gaye?
Galti se hi eda ke hath lucifer ke sareer par pahuch gaye aur jaha jaha use chhot lagi thi vaha vaha vo touch karke use dekhne lagi

Lucifer khud ko hi piche hatna pada kyuki eda ka to sara dhayan uski chhot par tha lekin lucifer uske chehre ki masumiyat me khone lag gaya tha

Jaise hi vo piche hua eda ne uske chehre ki taraf dekha aur uske haav bhaav se vo turant samjh gaye ki abhi usne kya kiya hai aur khud ek kadam piche ho gaye

Lucifer- guruji theek hai. Unhe thoda ekaant chahiye tha esliye vo yaha nahi aa paye

Eda- hmm
Vo abhi bhi apni harkat ke bare me soch rahi thi aur najar milana muskil ho raha tha esliye niche dekhte hue hi boli

Lucifer- main chalta hu. Kafi late ho gaye hai
Lucifer muda aur vaha se chal diya

Eda- waitt
Bahut dheere se najar utha kar vo boli aur lucifer ke pair vahi jam gaye muda to eda uski aankhon me hi dekh rahi thi

Eda- ye chhot kaise aaye tumhe?

Lucifer- apno ne bahut kuch diya hai mujhe un sabke samne ye to kuch bhi nahi hai
Aur lucifer vaha se ud gaya

Eda bas khadi khadi sochti rah gaye ki aisi konsi takaat aa gaye jo lucifer ko etni chhot pahucha sake? Aur guruji vapas kyu nahi aaye? Vo kaha gaye hai?
Tamaam sawal uske dimag me ghum rahe the lekin jawab kisi ka nahi tha uske pass****

Lucifer- shadi ki tayari ho gaye?
Lucifer ek dam se inaaya ke samne aa gaya jiski vajah se vo thodi ghabra gaye

Inaaya- tumhe kya matlab hai?
Dusro ko apne kaam me fasa do aur fir khud gayab ho jao yehi to aata hai tumhe

Lucifer- somebody is angry today. Breakfast me viagra khaya tha kya?

Ashmita- shut up and fuck off

Lucifer- tum dono lesbian partner to nahi ban gaye ho? Mera patta to nahi kaat diya hai tumne?

Inaaya- kaash meri pasand vaisi hoti to aaj tum mere palle na bandhe hote

Lucifer- nakli khilono se kaam chalana padta fir tum dono ko. Mujhe pujna chahiye tum dono ko jo maine tumhri berang dunia me etne alag alag tarah ke rang bhare hai

Ashmita- tu jab bhi bolta hai hugta hi hai lucifer

Lucifer- aur maje ki baat ye hai ki jab bhi main hugta hu tu khane ke vaha humehsa mojud hoti hai…..AHHHH aaj hi maar daalegi kya? Waqt hai abhi

Ashmita- tu mujhe marne ki baat mat kara kar mujhe acha nahi lagta

Inaaya- tu bhi kaha eski baat leke bath gaye chal hume bahut kaam hai eske chakkar me sab late ho jayega

Lucifer- kaha hai mera londa? Dulha humara?

Inaaya- vo allow nahi hai yaha par shadi se pehle

Lucifer- aise kaise allow nahi hai? Lucifer ka sabse pyaara tatta hai vo aur jaha lucifer hoga vaha uska tatta bhi hoga

Inaaya- tum bhi niklo fir. Hume tumhri bhi abhi jarurat nahi hai jab jarurat padegi bula lenge tumhe
Aur lucifer ko dhakke maar kar inaaya bahar bhaga deti hai

Inaaya- ab tujhe kya hua? Aisa sada chehra kyu bana rakha hai?

Ashmita- ye kutta kuch bhi bol deta hai. Mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta jab ye marne ki baat karta hai

Inaaya- are vo to kuch bhi bol deta hai uski baaton ko etna seriously kyu le rahi hai?

Ashmita- pata nahi mujhe ye baat bahut serious lagti hai uski

Inaaya- jada na socha kar uski baaton ka. Uska kaam hi hai ulti sulti baatein banana

Ashmita- inaaya….

Inaaya- ashhuuu….

Ashmita- mujhe lagta hai lucifer ka end phase aa gaya hai. Vo bahut jaldi hume chhod kar chala jayega. I can feel it

Inaaya- i know. Esliye jitna time hai use khul kar jee lo future ke baare me abhi etna stress le logi to future me kya karogi? Now lets go tu bhi lucifer ki taraf faltu ki baaton me mera dimag kharab karne lag rahi hai

Ashmita ek fake hasi ke sath inaaya ke sath ho li…..
Wonderful update bhai

Sachme jo dil or dimag ka khel racha he aap ne wo kabile tarif he.

Is kahani ka har ek update me jese Jan fukahe aap ne wo kabile tarif he.

Lucifer ki jindegi Lucifer ki thi lekin apna sa ehsaas karaya he aap ne wo kabile tarif he.

Or kiya hi kahu tarif ki koi sima hehi he, bas sukriya aap ka itna achha kahani likhne ke liye.

Please keep writing

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