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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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Bohot hi mazedar update he bhai
I enjoyed so much is specially wo scene jaha Lucifer ne Madhuri mam ko pani me dhaka diya 😆.
Man to unka bhi tha bas pahal nahi kar pa rahi thi aur vo lucifer ne kar di
Jea bhai yea dark lord ki gand kis material se banaya he aap ne jo itni bar fat ne ke bad v fat ta he 😆.
Aaj jada
Aaj jada ache se fategi

Jea bhai Lucifer aap ni sari girlfriend ke sath intimate ho chuka he sibaye Ashmita ko chhor ke right! mera sawal yea he ke kiya lucifer jo kam ki bat kar raha tha kiya yea wohi kam he?
Ashmita uski girlfriend thode hi hai
Aur kaam ka to lucifer hi jane
Wonderful update bhai

please keep writing

Waiting for next update
Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting
 
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UPDATE-250


Dark lord- to ye thi aapki chaal ha? Mujhe time loop me fasa kar ghuma do aur apni dunia ko bacha lo? Lekin aap ek baat bhul rahe ho guruji

Guruji- aur vo kya hai?

Dark lord- main dark lord ban chuka hu, kaali shaktiya mere ander vaas hi nahi karti vo mere ander se janam leti hai esliye time loop bhi mujhe jada der tak nahi rok sakti

Guruji- aisa hai to kadam badhao apne aur apne aapko sacha sabit karo

Dark lord- sabdo ke her fer se koe fayda nahi hone wala. Main apke time loop ko tood sakta hu lekin todunga nahi. Aapko bhi to pata hona chahiye ki ab dark lord kya ban chuka hai, vo ab aapko bina chuhe hi hara sakta hai

Dark lord apni jagah se thoda piche hue aur aankhen band karke mantra padhne lage

Ek jhatke me pura mahool hi change ho gaya, asmaan me bilkul kaale badaal aa gaye, pure jungle upside down hone laga, aur bahut tej tej hawaye chalne lagi

Guruji ko apne pairo ko ek jagah rakhne me hi muskil feel hone lagi, apni talwar ko jamin me gaad kar vo uske sahare khade rakhne ki kosis karne lage

Jo unhone time loop ka ghera banya tha vo bhi totne laga aur dark lord dharti se thoda upar hawa me apni shaktiyo ko jodne laga

Guruji ne bhi situation ki najakat ko samjha aur hawao ke bahaav ko vapas dark lord ki taraf modne ka prayataran karne lage

Jisme vo kamyaab nahi ho pa rahe the kyuki yaha achai nahi thi, jo yaha mojud tha vo sab kaala hi tha jispar guruji chah kar bhi kuch kar nahi paa rahe the

Dheere dheere guruji ke samne wali jamin ukhadne lagi aur vaha ek bahut bada gadha ban gaya.

Es se pehle ki guruji usne samate vo bhi hawao me udne lage aur full speed me talwar ko dark lord ki taraf karte hue uski taraf badhne lage

His tarah thodi der pehle dark lord guruji ke pass ruk gaye the theek vaise hi guruji bhi uske pass ruk gaye bas fark etna tha ki dark lord apni marji se ruka tha vahi guruji ko kaali shaktiya rook rahi thi

Ek bahut bada kaala bavandar dark lord ke charo taraf fail gaya jisne guruji ko uske pass aane se rok diya tha

Bahut tej garmi aur hava se guruji ke kapde fatne lag gaye aur unhe majburi me apni jagah chhodni padi aur vo dark lord se piche hat gaye

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA” ek khaufnaak hasi pure jungle me failne lagi jo badhti hi ja rahi thi kyuki ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek dark lord ke clown bante chale gaye

Ab beech me guruji khade the aur unke charo taraf sirf dark lord hi dikh rahe the upar se mosasm aisa ho gaya tha ki sab kuch ujhaad dega

Charo taraf se ek sath guruji par hamla hone laga aur guruji bahut aasani se sabko maat dene lage

Lekin ye kya? Unpar to kuch asar hi nahi ho raha tha. Guruji ek ko marta to uski jagah dusra janam le leta dusre ko marta to tisra janam le leta

Bahut jaldi hi guruji samjh gaye gaye ki vo apne bharam se lad rahe hai aur vaha koe nahi hai. Ek kadam piche hote hue apni ungli ko halka sa talwar se kata aur khoon ki boond par ek mantra padha aur pure jungle me roshini fail gaye

Etne tej roshini hue ki sare ke sare clown gayab ho gaye aur dark lord jo aankhen band karke apna mayajal bicha raha tha uska bhi dhyan toot gaya aur sidha jamin par aakar geera

Dark lord- ahh ye aapke khoon ki mahak mujhe pagal bana rahi hai. Esko rok lijiye guruji kahi aisa na ho ki aapke sareer ki ek ek boond main pee jao aur apke sareer me sirf paani hi bach jaye

Katch katch katch karke aawaz aane lagi aur guruji ki talwar se andha dhun roshini nikalne lagi jo bahut teji se dark lord ke upar barasne lagi

Vo kali shaktiyo ka maalik roshini se kaise lad sakta tha? Khud hi aankhen khol kar vo roshini dekh bhi nahi pa raha tha unse bachna to bahut door ki baat thi

Usne ek hath upar karke guruji ka gala pakadne ki kosis ki door se hi lekin guruji se usko bhi kaat diya aur ab dheere dheere uski taraf badhne bhi lag gaya tha

Dark lord ne himmat juta kar apni pith dikha di guruji ko aur piche mud kar demons knife chalaye alag alag dishao me jo aakhiri me lage sidhe guruji ko hi

Guruji dark lord par etne jada focused the ki unhe dekha hi nahi ki usne kya kiya hai

Jaise hi demons knife guruji ko lage unka dhayan bhatka aur dark lord ne mokke ka fayda utha kar apne aapko gayab kar liya

Guruji ko pata tha dark lord ek kapti insaan hai aur vo etni jaldi madaan chhod kar to bilkul bhi nahi bhagega esliye hi guruji ne charo taraf roshini faila di

Eske do karan the ek to ye ki dark lord nahi aa payega dusra karaan tha es illusion se bahar nikalna

Apni angelic power ka use guruji kaali shaktiyo ko dabane ke liye kar rahe the aur unki ye chal kamyaab bhi ho rahi thi

Kyuki junge ka ek sira unhe dikhae dene lag gaya jise deke kar ek baar fir guruji ka dhayan bhatak gaya. Vo khud vaha se bina kisi nirnay nikale nahi jana chahte the

Agar vo aise hi yaha se chale gaye aur baad me dark lord ne kisi public place par hamla kar diya to bahut musibaat ho sakti thi

Es se pehle guruji koe mantra padhte unke samne rakshaho ki fauz dikhae dene lagi jo ek powerful gharane ke rakshah the lekin unse ladna guruji ke liye koe badi baat nahi thi

Aur es baar sayam rakhte hue ek baar me hi guruji ne sabko jala kar raakh kar diya

Apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karte hue unhe aag jalaye aur ek line bana di. Jo jo us line ko cross karte aag me sama jate

Abhi sare rakshah us aag ki bheet chade lekin fir vo aag apne aap hi shant ho gaye. Guruji ko gyaan ho gaya tha ki dark lord abhi bhi vahi hai bas dikhae nahi de raha

Esliye antaratma se guruji ne dark lord ko doond nikala aur use bahar nikalne par vivas kar diya

Ek baar fir dono aapne samne the lekin halaat change ho chuki thi

Dark lord ke samne aate hi usne guruji par betahasa hamle karne suru kar diye jiska jawab guruji de nahi paye aur vo gayal hone lage

Pehle se hi demon knife ki vajah se uske sareer par chhot aa gaye thi aur ab dark lord ki kaali shaktiya unke sareer ke sath khilvaad karne lagi

Dark lord jo thodi der pehle apna aadha bhi use nahi kar raha tha ab puri takaat ke sath guruji ke samne aa chuka tha

Guruji koe hamla karne ke liye tayar hote us se pehle hi dark lord ke war unke sareer par lag jate aur unka dhayan bhang ho jata

Unke aas pass kaale saaye mandarane lage aur unhe ghutan feel hone lagi

Dark lord- meri hasi mazak ko aapne meri kamjori samjh liya tha guruji?
Main etni shaktiya leke aaya hu ki aapko, aapke heaven ko, aapke supreme ko aur aapke lucifer ko akela hara sakta hu. Trailer to aapne dekh hi liya hoga aap apna hathiyaar tak nahi utha pa rahe mere samne

Guruji jinki halaat ab kuch theek nahi lag rahi thi vo bas kisi tarah apne pairo par khade hue the abhi tak lekin unhe dekh kar lag raha tha ki agar aisa hi chalta raha to vo jada der khade nahi rah payenge


“Hey parampitama mujhe maaf karna”

Apne man me unhone apne bhagwano se maafi mangi
Kyu?
Sayad ab vo aisa kuch karne wale the jo unhe nahi karna chahiye tha ya fir aisa jis se puri ki puri story hi change ho sakti thi

Dark lord- koe nahi aayega aaj aapki madad ke liye
Aaj aapko marna hi padeeggggggggg…..

Guruji ke chehre aur aankhon ke badalte kaale rang ko dekhte hue dark lord ke sabad uske muh ke ander hi rah gaye. Chehre par pehli baar sikan dikhaye dene lagi uske aur ek boond pasine ki unke mathe se tapak gaye

Dark lord- na….naahhhnahi ye nahi ho sakta
Jabaan ne bhi uske sath bagawat kar di thi

Kyuki samne ab heaven ka rakhwala nahi khada tha sakshaat ek yamraaj dikhae de raha tha

Guruji ke pure sareer ka rang bilkul kaala pad gaya tha aur aankhon ke pass vohi kaala jala hua rang aa chuka tha jo dark magic use karne par aata hai

Guruji- tune pucha tha na kya plan bana rakha hai maine tujhe harane ka?
Guruji ki aawaz jaise gunjane lagi pure jungle me jo dark lord ke bhi rongte khade kar dene ke liye kaafi thi

Guruji- main tujhe tere hi tarike se haraunga aur sirf haraunga hi nahi balki tujhe aaj main mukti bhi dunga
Aaj aisa koe shraap ya aashirwad tere koe kaam nahi aa payega. Aaj mere kahar se tujhe samav supreme bhi nahi bacha payega

Guruji ke ek ek sabad dark lord ki halat patli kar dene ke bahut jada the vahi jo rakshah dark lord ne bulaye the vo to kab ke madaan chhod kar bhaag chuke the

Unke samne unka kaal jo khada tha maut ban kar aur aisa hi kuch haal dark lord ka bhi tha. Usko to apni aankhon par yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha

Kaise guruji jo achai ka prateek mane jate the, jinhone royal blood ko acha galat sikhaya tha, humesha jindagi ke favour me rahte the vo aaj khud kaali shaktiya liye khade the

Guruji(tej aur bhaari aawaz me) ab konsi chaal chalega? Kya tujhe lagta hai ki teri koe bhi chaal mujh par kamyaab ho payegi?

Kya tu mujhe hara sakta hai? Harana to chhod kya tu mujhse bach kar nikal sakta hai yaha se? Aisa lag to nahi raha ki tere praan ab kisi layak bache hai esliye unhe tumse chhina hi behtar hoga

Dark lord ke chehre par dar saaf jhalak raha tha. Vo khud black magic ka bahut bada gyaata tha aur guruji ko dekh kar hi vo samjh chuka tha ki kis had tak kaala jaadu unke ragoo me bah raha hai aur aise halaat me vo bilkul bhi guruji se ladna nahi chahta tha

Halanki ye bhi sach hi tha ki guruji aur dark lord ki shaktiya ek dusre se bilkul bhi kam nahi thi fir bhi dark lord dar raha tha

Kyu?

Kyuki guruji ke sath achai bhi thi aur jab achae aur burai ek sath ek jagah judti hai to fir sirf aur sirf vinaas hi hota hai jo agar abhi yudh hua to usme ek atuhasik vinaash dekhne ko milega

Dark lord- chhod raha hu aapke praan. Jao aur mere ahsaanmand rahna jitni bhi jindagi jeeye utne me
Apne ander ka dar chhupate hue dark lord bola

“HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA” shataani hasi jo thodi der pehle dark lord ki gunj rahi thi vo ab guruji ke muh se nikalne lagi

Aur dark lord ko hava me utha liya guruji ne vo kab uske pass pahucha kab uska gala pakda aur kab hava me utha liya kisi ko pata tak nahi chala

Dark lord ghutan se chatpatane laga aur vaha se gayab hone ki kosis karne laga lekin guruji ne jo mayajal racha us se vo bach kar nikal nahi paa raha tha

“No resurrection this time” bolte hue guruji dark lord ke gale ko todne hi wale the ki ek roshini fail gaye. Etne tej safeed roshini thi ki na to dark lord ki aankh khul paye aur na guruji ki

Aur kab guruji ko hosh aaya to unhone khud ko us jungle se bahut door paya. Vo jamin par pade hue the aur kisi ke pair unke samne khade the….
 
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