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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Eda- kya soch rahi ho?
Pichle kuch dino se dekh rahi hu tum pareshan najar aa rahi ho?

Mazikeen- mujhe lagta hai mera ant najdeek aa raha hai

Eda- kya bewakufi bhari baatein kar rahi ho? Tum nahi mar sakti

Mazikeen- main kya lucifer hu jo nahi mar sakti?

Eda- mar to lucifer bhi sakta hai lekin kya vo marega?

Mazikeen- main lucifer bhi nahi hu na

Eda- kya dikh raha hai tumhe?

Mazikeen- tabhai
Eda- kaisi tabhai?

Mazikeen- mujhe aisa feel ho raha hai jaise sab khatam hone wala hai, tinke ke dheer ki tarah sab ujhad jayega

Eda- aur kyu feel ho raha hai tumhe aisa?
Mazikeen- hum apni maut ko pehle hi mahsus kar lete hai. Mere sath bhi aisa hi ho raha hai

Eda- ye sab faltu baatein hai. Main hu na yaha kuch nahi hone dungi tumhe

Mazikeen- main lucifer ke samne marna chahti thi. Yaad bhi nahi kitne sadiya humne ek sath es hell me bitaye hai aur ab jab mera aakhiri waqt aaya hai tab vo yaha nahi hai

Eda- tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Lucifer chahe aaj yaha nahi ho lekin humare dil me to hai na. Kahi door thodi gaya hai vo

Mazikeen- bahut door nikal gaya vo
Mere akhiri waqt me mujhe akele hi marna padega. Main ek demon hu mujhme soul nahi hai. Ek baar khatam hue to sab khatam ho jayega aur main akele nahi marna chahti

Mazikeen- kya jab main maru tab aap mere pass rah sakti ho?
Jab tak mera sareer nast na ho jaye mujhe akele mat chhodna

Eda- tum kyu aisi bhahki bhahki baat kar rahi ho?
Lucifer ke baad dunia ki sabse powerful main hi hu aur mere hote tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Main kuch hone nahi dungi

Mazikeen- vo aa raha hai. Main feel kar pa rahi hu usse uski darkness ko. Vo aa raha hai

Eda- kon aa raha hai?
Mazikeen- dark lord aa raha hai. Hum sab ant ke bahut najdeek pahuch chuke hai agar ab lucifer vapas nahi lota to kuch nahi bachega sab khatam ho jayega

Eda- Supreme ne sab kuch soch rakha hoga. Koe chhij unki najro se bachi thodi hai

Mazikeen- aapko to pata hi hoga humare yaha ek life cycle chalti hai. Bhagwan paida hote hai fir unme se rakshah bante hai fir rakshah aur bhagwan mil kar insaan banate hai jo apni hade langte chale jate hai aur jab burai apni charam par pahuchti hai to pure sansaar ka khatma kiya jata hai aur dobara se bhawan janam lete hai?
Pata hai na aapko?

Eda- pata hai aur ye bhi pata hai ki abhi aisa kuch hone me arbo kharbo saal Baki hai. Kalyug ka pehla padaav hi chal raha hai abhi to

Mazikeen- mujhe lag raha hai ye padaav khatam ho gaya aur naye ki neev bahut jaldi rakhi jane wali hai

Eda- tum bevaj etna soch rahi ho. Hume humare kaam par dhayan dena chahiye

Mazikeen- hume hell ke darwaje band kar dene chahiye. Kuch dino ke liye na koe andar aa sake aur na bahar ja sake

Eda- aisa kyu?

Mazikeen- agar koe vaha se aane ki kosis karega to band darwaja hume kuch waqt aur de dega

Eda- hell me koe nahi aayega. Agar koe kahi jayega to vo heaven me jayega na?

Mazikeen- usse meri jarurat hai ek powerful demon ki aur aap ye mat bhulo ki yaha kitni dark souls hai aur usse ense hi shaktiya milti hai

Eda- yaha par ek angel bhi hai jo yaha ka sara andhera khud door kar sakti hai. Etni roshini to hai us me

Mazikeen- main bas aapko sahlaa de sakti hu baki ye hell aapka hai jaisa aap bologi vaisa hi hoga

Eda- theek hai theek hai gate band kar do aur kuch?

Mazikeen- hume aur support ki jarurat padegi. Yaha par aap ho aur main hu baki jitne guards hai vo uske samne kisi kaam ke nahi hai

Eda- hume aur support to nahi milegi kahi se bhi nahi milegi

Mazikeen- kosis karni padegi. Aap kisi se baat kar sakte ho kya?
Eda- baat?? Hmm??
Raaj se kar sakti hu lekin mujhe nahi lagta us se baat karna sahi hoga

Mazikeen- raaj acha hai lekin kafi nahi hai
Eda- to tum hi batao kis se baat karni hai?

Mazikeen- guruji se
Eda- hahaha
Guruji se?
Kaise?
Aur vo kyu baat manege meri jabki humari aakhiri mulakaat kuch jada achi nahi gaye

Mazikeen- guruji ne kabhi bhi achai ka sath nahi chhoda
Eda- nahi chhoda hoga lekin vo mera sath kabhi nahi denge esliye ye idea bilkul kharab hai

Mazikeen- Supreme?
Eda- unhe sab pata hoga agar vo madad karna chahte hai to hume unse baat karne ki jaurat hi nahi padeg

Mazikeen- Mata?
Eda- huh?****

Anisha- kya soch rahe ho?
Lucifer- tumhre aankhon me jo nasha hai main us nashe me doob jana chahta hu

Jaise hi anisha ne ye suna vo sarma gaye. Vaise to anisha bahut kam hi sarmati thi lekin achanak lucifer ke aise bolne se uska chehra laal tamatar jaisa pad gaya

Anisha- kuch bhi blash karte hue boli

Lucifer- haye mar jaunga main tumhri es ada par
Anisha- shut up
Ek second me hi uska chehra gusse me badal gaya

Lucifer- kar do mujhe shut up apne en hontho ka jaam pila kar

Anisha- kuch jada romantic nahi ho rahe ho tum aaj?

Lucifer- acha nahi lag raha tumhe?
Anisha- aadaat nahi hai etne jada pyaar ki mujhe

Lucifer- to adaat daal do
Anisha- acha daal lu adaat?
Fir tumhre uska kya hoga ki mere jane ka waqt aa gaya hai, mera ant najdeek dikh raha hai bla bla

Lucifer- kaha jaunga main tumse door?
Kisi na kisi roop me tumse Juda hi rahunga humesha

Anisha- physically to nahi honge na
Lucifer- sab samjh raha hu main. Raat ko meri yaadein tumhe sone nahi degi esliye pareshan ho tum

Anisha- mere se aisi baat mat kiya karo. Jitne din ka sath hai mujhe usme jindagi jee lene do

Lucifer- main kaha rok raha hu?
Anisha- kal ashmita ma'am ne kuch kaha mere se

Lucifer- ashmita didi bole to jada acha nahi rahe?
Anisha- unhone mujhse kisi ko dundne ka bola

Lucifer- arjun ka bola hoga aur kiska bolegi vo
Anisha- hmm

Lucifer- tumne kya kaha?
Anisha- I will try

Lucifer- to kiya try tumne?
Anisha- nahi

Lucifer- kyu?
Anisha- tumse puchna chahti thi pehle

Lucifer- kya?
Anisha- ki dundna hai ya nahi?

Lucifer- doond lo. Kar lene do usse bhi try
Anisha- theek hai
Es baar muskil nahi hogi

Lucifer- ye kaise pata tumhe?
Anisha- pehle chehra nahi pata tha es baar pata hai

Lucifer- ek baat batau?
Anisha- hmm

Lucifer- marega vo
Anisha- kya??

Lucifer- arjun.. marega vo aur koe nahi rok sakta aisa hone ko
Anisha- kyu?

Lucifer- vo ek trap me fasa hua hai aur vaha se nikalne ka ek hi matlab hai uska marna
Anisha- tum rok sakte ho

Lucifer- main hi aazad karunga usse
Anisha- ashmita aur ma'am dono ko pasand nahi aayega ye

Lucifer- nahi aaye to nahi aaye lekin yehi aakhiri rasta hai
Anisha- raste tumne aur dekhe hi nahi bas ek jo humesha available rahta hai usse par dhayan de rahe ho

Lucifer- bahut kuch dekh liya maine.
Kisi ne uski jaan bachai aur badle me dusro ki jaan lena sikhaya fir mera koe dusman mila aur mera aur madhuri ma'am ka rishta dekhte hue usse mere piche laga diya jisme ek raat ke liye vo kamyaab bhi raha lekin main baar baar usse nahi chhod sakta

Anisha- kyuki aapko dar hai kahi vo mujhe nuksaan na pahucha de
Lucifer- lucifer kabhi kisi se nahi darta

Anisha- lekin kisi ke liye to dar sakta hai na
Lucifer- baatein ghumana to koe tumse sikhe

Anisha- maine bhi to tumse hi sikha hai
Lucifer- kuch jada nahi sikh gaye tum?

Anisha- kya karu dimag hi etna hai
Lucifer- achi baat hai

Anisha- ek baat puchu?
Lucifer- pehle main puchi to tum kaha piche rahne wali ho?
Pucho pucho

Anisha- do you love ashmita?
Lucifer- ek baar pehle bhi puch chuki ho tum ye?

Anisha- ek baar aur puch rahi hu
Lucifer- didi kah kar bolo usse to bataunga

Anisha- do you love ashmita didi
Lucifer- I love her like devil loved hell
Like lucifer loved eda
Jab meri kahaniya sunai jayegi tab ashmita ka naam sabse pehle liya jayega inaaya se bhi pehle
Ek aisa pyaar jisko na sabdo me likha ja sakta hai na bataya ja sakta hai
Jo aaj tak kisi ne kisi ke sath nahi kiya hoga
Vaise prem Katha hoga lucifer aur ashmita ki...
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Anika- tumne baat ki bhabhi se?
Lucifer- maine mana kiya tha na tumhe mere najdeek aane se?
Jab waqt lagega main baat kar lunga

Anika- waqt hai tumhre pass?
Lucifer- etna to hai ki baat kar lu

Anika- kya solution ka waqt bachega?
Lucifer- tumhe apni problem ki meri jaan se jada fikar hai?

Anika- ha hai
Tum mar jaoge aur kahani khatam ho jayegi. Main mar jaunga tab bhi mere piche mere apne ghoot ghoot kar jeeyenge

Lucifer- you don't know me sweetheart

Anika- mujhe ye bata do kab baat karoge? Main uske baad hi aaungi

Lucifer- tum apni problems mujh par laad rahi ho
Anika- tumne hi kaha tha you will help me

Lucifer- ha but not like this. Mere apne bhi kuch kaam hai aur tum baar baar mere raste me nahi aa sakti

Anika- I'm sorry. Main sayad bhawano me jada bah gaye thi

Lucifer- to control rakho apni bhawano par. Main tumhra kaam kar dunga lekin eska ye matlab nahi ki tum har din aakar mere kaam me tang adao

Anika- I'm sorry. Main dhayan rakhungi
Aur Anika ye bol kar vaha se chali jati hai sayad lucifer ke bol se usse aaj takleef hue thi

Lekin ye bhi sach tha ki vo lucifer ko kuch jada hi push kar rahi thi. Jab bhi us se milti tabhi uske muh par sirf ek hi sawal hota tha kab?

Na hie na hello sirf apne matlab ki baat kare aur fir vaha se chali jaye aur esliye hi aaj lucifer frustrated dikha

Vo vaise hi madhuri ma'am ke pass nahi jana chah raha tha upar se Anika baar baar usse force kar rahi thi

Teen din ho gaye the Madhuri ne usse bulaya. Uske ghar jana to door lucifer apne ghar tak nahi gaya tha ki kahi un dono ki dobara mulakat na ho jaye

Kabhi inaaya ke ghar so raha tha raat me to kabhi anisha ke aur aaj raat ashmita ke yaha jane ka plan tha

Raat ho chuki thi aur lucifer apne manjil yani ashmita ke ghar pahuch chuka tha

Gate knock kiya to ashmita ki jagah tara ne gate khola

Sayad abhi abhi office se aakar shower se nikali thi vo

Bheege baal bheega badal us atmosphere me aag laga raha tha

Lucifer kuch nahi bola sidhe tara ko apni gaud me utha liya aur agle hi pal tara ne apne honth uske hontho se jod diye

Dono bade pyaar se ek dusre ko chhumne lage aur lucifer usse bahoo me utha kar chumte hue uske kamre me le jane lagta hai

Tara bhi lucifer me bilkul sama si gaye thi jaise agar usne usse chhoda to vo vapas bhag jaye

Room me pahuchte hi tara ke kapde aur lucifer ke kapde hava me udne lage aur dono ek dusre ke pyaar me gote lagane lage

Kafi der tak dono ke ghamasan macha aur fir ek dusre ke upar hi gir pade

Tara lambi lambi saase lekar apne aap ko control karne me lag gaye vahi lucifer Tara ke chehre par aaye muskaan ko dekhne laga

Abhi Tara kuch bolne hi wali thi ki kharaachhh se uske room ka gate open hua

Fucckkkkkkkk lucifer ke muh se nikla aur vapas vohi ho gaya jo last time hua tha ashmita kisi kaam se Tara ke room me aa gaye thi aur samne ka najara dekh kar turant gate jor se band karke vapas bhaag gaye

Tara- nooottttt agaiiinnnnn
Tara bura sa muh banate hue thodi jor se boli

Lucifer- etna bhi kya man tha tumhra jo gate band karna hi bhul gaye?
Lucifer ko to mokka mil gaya tha Tara ko chhedne ka aur aisa mokka vo kaise gava sakta tha?

Tara- youuuu usse ek mukka marte hue
Sab tumhri galti hai. Last time bhi tumhri vajah se hua aur es time bhi tumhri vajah se. Mujhe pata nahi kya ho jata hai tumhe dekhte hi main khud ko rok nahi pati lekin tum to samjh sakte ho na? Gate band nahi kar sakte the tum?
Tara lucifer par bharasne lagi

Lucifer- waw bhai waw kya jamana aa gaya hai. Khud se control nahi ho raha aur tane mujhe sunane ko mil rahe hai
Ye kaisa insaaf hai?

Tara- ab main ashu se baat nahi karne wali. Tum jake dekho
Lucifer- sari galti tumhri ashu ki hi hai vo kaise bina knock kiye tumhre room me aa gaye?
Last time ke baad to usse samjhana chahiye tha na?

Tara- es ghar me koe mard nahi rahta. Hum dono behane hi rahte hai
Lucifer- main nahi hu kya?
Vaise mujhe kya lagta hai pata hai?

Tara- kya?
Lucifer- ashu abhi khud ke aur tumhre compare kar rahi hogi ki kiske jada bade hai?

Lucifer- ahhh
Ek mukka pada uske pet par

Lucifer- nahi yakeen to jake dekh le
Tara- apne kapde pahan le. Pata nahi kitne baar mujhe sarmadgi mahsus karaoge tum

Lucifer- tumhri ghaati me se mera dhood ris raha hai

Jaise hi Tara ko lucifer ke baaton ka matlab samjh me aaya sarm se uska chehra laal padhne laga aur bedsheets se khud ko dhakne lagi

Lucifer- ashu ne bhi yehi dekha hoga. Pata nahi mere character ke bare me kya soch rahi hogi vo?

Tara- lucifer please kapde pahan lo
Lucifer- nahi. Man nahi bhara

Tara- please lucifer. Chhedo nahi please
Lucifer- tum pahna do vaise bhi aaj tumne mujhe bahut thaka diya

Tara- nahi manoge na tum?
Lucifer- main to mana pada hu. Tum pahna do Main pahan kar ashu se baat karne chala jaunga

Tara- pakka?
Lucifer- pakka promise

Tara chaddar lapete hi khadi hoti hai aur kisi tarah lucifer ko kapde pahnane lagti hai

Uska lund dekh kar Tara ka man vapas lalcha jata hai lekin abhi vo kisi tarah se apne aap ko control karti hai aur fir dhakke maar maar ke lucifer ko apne kamre se bahar nikal deti hai fir kamre ko bhi lock kar leti hai

Jab lucifer kamre me tha tab to lock nahi kiya lekin ab jab lucifer ko bahar bejh diya to kamre ko lock karna bhi yaad aa gaya

Ajeeb ladki hai na Tara?

Lucifer yaha vaha bhatakta hua ashmita ke room ki taraf chal deta

Beech me hi bar padhta tha vaha se ek branded bottle sath me utha leta hai aur bina knock kiye room me ghus jata hai

Lekin room me koe nahi tha vahi bathroom me pani girne ki aawaz aa rahi thi jiska sidha matlab tha Ashmita naha rahi thi

Lucifer- akele man nahi lag raha ho to bata dena main join kar lunga
Uske bed par girte hue jor se chhilaya

Ashmita- gate khula hai himmat hai to aaja
Ashmita bhi bathroom se hi chhilaye

Lucifer ko bahut ache se idea tha ki kuch aisa hi response aane wala hai ashmita ki taraf se esliye vo bilkul bhi nahi shock hua balki bottle khol kar do peg banane laga

Kuch hi der me pani girne ki aawaz band ho gaye aur ashmita ek light nighty pahan ka bahar aaye

Kya hi gazab ki khubsurati thi usme agar gusse ko side me rakh diya jaye to ashmita ke samne tikne wala koe bhi nahi tha

Apne aapko pura dhaka rakhti thi vo esliye uski khubsurati jada dikh nahi pati thi ya yu kahe ki vo kisi ko dikhana hi nahi chahti thi

Ashmita- kis baat ki party hai aaj?
Do saraab ke glass dekh kar boli

Lucifer- hum dono ko party karne ke liye vajah ki jarurat hai kya?
Ashmita- baat to sahi hai tumhri par pehle mujhe ye bata tu gate band karke ye sab kaam nahi kar sakta kya?
Kutte kitne baar dekhna padega mujhe ye sab ha?
Thoda gusse me bolti hai

Lucifer- jab tak tu gate knock karna nahi sikh jati tab tak tujhe aise hi dekhna padega
Ashmita- matlab tu nahi sudrega?

Lucifer- lucifer ko sudhaar de aisa koe paida hi nahi hua
Ashmita- lekin lucifer ko maar de aise main paida hue hu

Lucifer- daru pee na tu kyu apne husan ke jaal fek rahi hai mere upar?

Ashmita- agar mere husan ke jaal me tu fas gaya to ye humari dosti ki haar hogi

Lucifer- esme dosti kaha se beech me aa gaye?
Ashmita- dosti hi to khadi hai hum dono ke beech me

Lucifer- agar dosti na hoti beech me to kya karti tu?
Ashmita- vo mujhe nahi pata

Lucifer- le daru pee sab pata chal jayega
Dono ne apna apna peg uthaya aur ek baar me hi bottoms up maar gaye

Lucifer- that's like my girl
Ashmita- anisha ko bola hai maine arjun ko dundne ka

Lucifer- okay??
Ashmita- socha tujhe bata du

Lucifer- lekin mujhe to pata tha
Ashmita- mujh se to nahi pata chala na?

Lucifer- fair enough
Ashmita- mujhe ek baar last try karne de agar vo nahi samjha to main beech me nahi aaungi

Lucifer- eska matlab samjh rahi hai na tu?
Ashmita- bahut ache se

Lucifer- theek hai fir karle try
Ashmita- tu ma'am se milne kyu nahi gaya?

Lucifer- tujhe kaise pata chal gaya?
Ashmita- phone aaya tha mere pass

Lucifer- kiska?
Ashmita- ma'am ka hi aaaya tha bol rahi thi tu unka phone nahi utha raha aur flat bhi nahi aa raha. Unko laga mere sath hai tu

Lucifer- tere sath hi to hu
Ashmita- kya hua tum dono me?
Kya us din wali baat hai?

Lucifer- main soch raha hu agar main ab piche nahi hata to anarth ho jayega
Ashmita- kaisa anarth?

Lucifer- pehle ma'am apne aap ko sambhal leti thi lekin ab lag raha hai ki vo khud se jhujh rahi hai aur main agar unke pass gaya to sayad vo jada der tak mujhse door na rah paye

Ashmita- to de kyu nahi deta unke hisse ki khushi unhe?

Lucifer- matlab janti hai es baat ka?
Mere sath unka kya bhavisay hai?

Ashmita- tere sath inaaya,anisha Tara didi payal en sab ka bhi kya bhavisay hai?

Lucifer- tu samjh nahi rahi hai
Ashmita- nahi tu nahi samjh raha hai
Tu bolta rahta hai na ki jane ka time aa gaya to tu to chala jayega fir hum sab ka kya hoga?
Socha hai kabhi?

Lucifer- fir us list me ek aur naam kyu add karu?
Ashmita- tu jitna delay karega utni hi kam khushiya unko mil payegi
Ek ek din important ho gaya hai ab lucifer

Lucifer- vo vapas se khud ko jod nahi payega ashu
Ashmita- she is too strong lucifer
Unko mat tadpa

Lucifer- sex hi sab kuch nahi hota hai
Ashmita- ye tu bol raha hai?
Hawas ke pujari?
Ha?

Lucifer- ma'am ke liye bol raha hu
Ashmita- ye sarafat ka nakaab mere samne to mat hi dikha samjha
Ma'am tujhe chahti hai aur tu unhe chahta hai fir ye duriya kyu?
Jitne din hai unhe ache se khushi se kyu nahi jeene de leta?

Lucifer- main kaha rok raha hu yaar lekin jo vo maang rahi hai vo main unhe nahi de sakta
Ashmita- kyu nahi de sakta?
Aisa kya ho gaya hai jo tu sadu Santo wali baatein karne lag gaya

Lucifer- chhod chhad gaya hai tujhe
Faltu me mera dimag bhi kharab kar rahi hai
Ashmita- jab kyu jawab na ho to saraab ka bahana bana le lekin ye yaad rakh tu lucifer vo to fir bhi apne aap ko kaabu me rakh legi lekin tu nahi rakh payega dhayan rakhna es baat ko....
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"Kaha leke ja rahe ho mujhe" madhuri bahut der se kuch na kuch puch rahi thi lucifer se lekin vo ha hmm me hi jawab de raha tha

Madhuri- bataoge kuch?
Kya hua hai?
Sab theek hai na?

Lucifer- sab theek hai

Madhuri- to kaha ja rahe hai hum?
Kuch bata bhi nahi rahe ho?
Lucifer- ghar ja rahe hai

Madhuri- tumhre ghar?
Tumhe pata chal gaya?
Waw. I'm so happy for you

Lucifer- aapke ghar
Madhuri- mere ghar?
What does that mean?
Hum mere ghar se hi to aaye hai

Lucifer- aapke husband ke ghar. Shadi ke baad to vohi hota hai na ghar?

Madhuri- hota hai lekin ab nahi hai vo mera ghar. Main us aadmi se koe rishta nahi rakhna chahti. Ab jo hai vo mera ghar hai jaha mere bache hai

Lucifer- aapki maa to hai vaha. Kya aapko unki koe fikar nahi?
Madhuri- agar unhone kabhi mujhe beti mana hota to jarur hoti fikar aur unko dekhne ke liye unka beta bhi to hai

Lucifer- I killed you husband

Badhaaamm ek dhamaka kiya lucifer ne Madhuri ke upar aur vo aankhen faade lucifer ko dekhne lagi

Lucifer- and I'm not sorry. Mujhe us time jo theek laga maine kar diye. Kafi time ho gaya lekin aapko batane ki kabhi himmat hi nahi hue. Laga pata nahi kya sochogi aap mere bare me. Pehle meri image etni kharab ho rakhi hai ye janane ke baad to aapko firse vohi lagne lag jayega ki all I want is sex

Madhuri- silence

Lucifer- main bas etna kahna chahta hu ki jo kuch bhi aapke sath hua usme aapki maa ka koe dosh nahi tha. Shekhar ne aisa kuch kar rakha tha jiski vajah se vo uske against kabhi ja hi nahi sakti thi. Aap baad me aaye ho esliye aapko ye nahi pata ki ek time me vo kitni jindadil aurat thi. Shekhar ne usse apne kabje me le liya tha jiski vajah se unhone vo sab kiya aapke sath.

Madhuri- silence

Lucifer- mujhe ek ye last kaam karne dijiye uske baad main kabhi aapke raste me nahi aaunga. Aapki jindagi me jo kaale badal chahe hue the vo sare hat jayenge aur unke sath hi main bhi hat jaunga. Main aapki sulah karane vaha nahi leke ja raha hu. Vo aapka decision hoga aapko kya karna hai main bas kaale badal ko hata kar vaha dooph lana chah raha hu aur....

Madhuri- why you killed him?

Bahut der baad Madhuri ke muh se kuch nikla jiska jawab sayad tha ya nahi tha lucifer ke pass pata nahi lekin vo jawab de nahi paya

Madhuri- tumne galti kar di lucifer bahut badi galti kar di. Etni aasan saja de di tumne usko. That man fucked my whole life. Ye pehli baar tha jab Madhuri ke muh se gaali nikali thi
Jisse lucifer tak shocked ho gaya tha

Madhuri- main usse uske karmo ka fal bhugatate dekhna chahti thi. Jab uski aankhon ke samne uski beti uska beta uski pati khushaal jeevan jee rahe hote aur vo door kahi akela apne kiye par ro raha hota. Main vo sab dekhna chahti thi lucifer...vo sab dekhna chahti thi

Lucifer- aap to pyaar ki taraf rahi ho humesha. Aap kaise ye baat kar sakti ho? Ye sab mujh par suit karta hai Ma'am aap par nahi. Aap bahut pure ho nafarat ko apne ander palne mat dena ma'am kabhi mat palne dena

Madhuri- ye nafarat nahi hai. Us insaan ne mere sath jo kiya vo sayad main bhul jau lekin jo usne mere bacho ke sath kiya hai vo main jindagi me kabhi nahi bhul sakti aur uske liye jo saja usse mile vo kam hai

Lucifer- vo maut ki bheekh mangta mara hai

Madhuri- maine nahi dekha vo sab. Mere liye ye sab ek kahani jaisa rah gaya hai

Lucifer- ma'am main aapke aisa kabhi dikhata bhi nahi. Galat hua hai aapke sath bahut galat hua hai lekin uske bavjud aapne kabhi burai ka sath nahi diya. Aap achai ka ek example ho aur main us example ko galat nahi hone de sakta tha

Madhuri- tumhe koe hak nahi hai es chhin ka lucifer. Koe hak nahi hai
Aur aaj main kisi ke emotions me bah kar nahi bol rahi hu. Shekhar mera doshi tha mere bacho ka doshi tha aur usse saja dena ka hak mujhe aur mere bacho ko tha keval mujhe aur mere bacho ka

Lucifer- agar aapko lagta hai maine galat kiya hai to mujhe saja do main sari saja bhugatne ke liye tayar hu

Madhuri- main tumhe chah kar bhi saja nahi de sakti

Lucifer- kyu nahi de sakti? Aap bilkul de sakti ho

Madhuri- silence

Lucifer- batao mujhe kyu saja nahi de sakti aap mujhe? Ha? Kyu nahi de sakti?

Madhuri- KYUKI PYAAR KARNE LAGI HU MAIN TUMSE
Bahut jor se chhikhate hue madhuri boli aur uske baad car me ek dam shanti fail gaye

Lucifer ko to koe jawab suja hi nahi vo bas aankh faade Madhuri ko dekhne laga

Uska muh khula to hua tha lekin bol nahi nikal pa rahe the vahi madhuri ki aankhon se aashuo ki ladi jarne lagi thi

Mahino se apne ander apne jajbaat ko dabba kar rakhe hue thi aur usne jaise faisla kar liya tha ki vo kabhi bhi lucifer ke samne es baat ka khulasa nahi karegi

Vo janti thi lucifer aur uske beech kitna faasla hai aur kaise vo lucifer se ye bol sakti thi?
Kya jawab deti jab uske bache bade hokar us se puchte to?
Kya jawab deti vo khud se hi ki kya majburi pad gaye thi ki usse lucifer jaise ladke se pyaar ho gaya?
Kaise vo jamane ka samna karti?

Lekin aaj dil aur dimag ki ladae me jajbaato ne jung jeet li thi

Madhuri- mujhe nahi pata ye kaise hua kyu hua lekin ye ho gaya. Mujhe pata hai ye bahut galat hai. Mere teen bache hai aur vidhwa bhi ho gaye hu main ab magar main tumhre bare me sochne se khud ko rok nahi pa rahi hu. Bahut samjhaya khud ko, bahut kosis ki manane ki hakikat se ruburu hone ki lekin kisi se kuch fayda nahi hua. Ye dil bahut nasamjh hota hai jaha hum esse jane se rokte hai ye vahi chala jata hai.

Madhuri- I'm sorry maine tumhre jeevan me ek aur samsaya la kar khadi kar di lekin mera viswas karna main kabhi tumhre raste me nahi aaunga. Tumhra jo bhi fasla hoga mujhe vo aankhen band karke manjur hoga. Tumse kisi bhi tarah ki koe sikayat nahi hai mujhe balki main us khuda ki aabhari hu jisne meri jindagi me tumhe bejha. Jo kuch tumne mere aur meri family ke liye kiya hai utna to mere apno ne bhi nahi kiya tha kabhi mere liye. I'm sorry lucifer main khud ko rok nahi paye. I'm so sorry.

Kuch der vaha shanti chah gaye aur ye shanti ka matlab pata nahi Madhuri ne kya lagaya ki uske aankhon se do aur bunde nikal gaye

Lucifer- aap arjun ki sari baaton ko sach karne ja rahi hai Ma'am.
Ek shanti ke baad lucifer bola

Madhuri lucifer ki aankhon me dekhte hue- arjun mera khoon nahi hai lekin sage se badh kar pyaar kiya hai maine usse aur humesha karti rahungi lekin vo yaha galat tha. Usse nahi pata main kis kis situation se gujari hu aur kaise dunia ka samna kiya hai. Lekin tumne sab dekha hai aur mujhe har waqt hosla diya hai. Main jada kuch nahi bolungi bas etna kahna chahungi ki arjun chahe ye rishta apnaye ya na apnaye ye uski marji hogi main us par kuch thop nahi sakti aur na thopna chahti hu. Usne bhi to mujhe apne bare me kuch nahi bataya? Main to fir bhi sab kuch uske samne rakh rahi hu?
Mujhe pata hai mere liye tum kya ho aur etna kafi hai mere liye

Madhuri apni baat khatam karke ruk gaye aur lucifer ko dekhne lagi lekin lucifer ki taraf se koe jawab aaya nahi

Pata nahi vo kya soch raha tha, kyu soch raha tha lekin koe jawab diya nahi gaya us se

Madhuri lucifer ko aise shant dekh kar bahut bechain ho gaye lekin vo to sab kuch bata hi chuki thi ab bolne ko to kuch raha hi nahi tha

Vo aage bole bhi to kya hi bole?

Apne hi nakhono ko dusre nakhono se kharochne lagi nervousness ki vajah se aur chehra to apne aap jhuk gaya tha

Lucifer ye sab dekh raha tha lekin kya bole ye uski samjh me nahi aa raha tha

Madhuri- kuch to bolo
Bahut mahnat karke sirf etna hi bol paye Madhuri

Lucifer- hum pahuch gaye....
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Somiya- ab kya karne aae hai yaha par? Kha gaye na mere bete ko aur kar diya mujhse mere pote potiyo ko door?
Shekhar ki maa gusse me madhuri ko dekhtehi badhak gaye lekin madhuri apne savbhaav ke anusaar bilkul shant rahi. Sab kuch chhup chhap sunti rahi jaise usse aadaat ho rakhi ho ye sab sunane ki

Somiya- bolti kyu mahi ab? Bata mera beta kaha hai? Kya kiya tumne mere bete ke sath? Jinda bhi hai ya mar gaya?

Madhuri- aap kaisi ho maa?
Badi muskil se etna hi bol paye vo

Somiya- jada nataak karne ki jarurat nahi hai. Sab samjhti hu main lekin main pehle hi bata du mere pass tumhe dene ko kuch bhi nahi hai badi muskil se do time ka khana naseeb ho raha hai mujhe

Madhuri- aapke pass vo hai jisse pane ke liye main puri jindagi tadapi hu….. aapka pyaar

Somiya- mat kar mere samne ye nataak. Kyu aae hai yaha vo bata aur nikal ja mere ghar se

Madhuri- aapko aapke pote potiyo ke pass le jane aae hu

Somiya- mera ab es dunia me koe nahi raha hai jo tha sab bahut pehle khatam ho chuka hai. Ab kuch nahi bacha

Madhuri- bahut kuch bacha hai maa. Aap ho main hu aapke pote potiya hai aur kya chahiye hume maa?

Somiya- mujhe mera beta chahiye. De sakti hai to de de mujhe. Aankhen taras gaye hai usse dekhne ko
Pata nahi kis halaat me hoga

Lucifer- aapko pata hai na aapne aur aapke bete me kya kya kiya hai maam ke sath?

Somiya- tu kon hai aur humare beech me bolne ka hak kisne diya tumhe?


Lucifer- main vahi hu jisne aap se aapke dukho ko chhina hai aur ab sari khushiya lotane aaya hu

Somiya- madhuri kya chal raha hai tumhra es ladke ke sath? Kya eski vajah se hi tumne mere bete ko mujhse chheena? Kya rishta hai tera eske sath?

Madhuri- esne mujhe meri jindagi lotae hai jiski vajah se aaj main thodi bahut khush rah pati hu aur rahi rishte ki baat to aap es rishto ko kuch bhi naam de sakti ho main kuch nahi kahungi aapse

Somiya- to tu eske sath muh kaala kar rahi hai? Naye naye ladke pasand aa rahe hai tujhe? Shekhar sahi hi kahta tha tere bare me

Madhuri- aap mujhse kuch bhi bol sakti ho maa lekin uska naam mere samne nahi lo usne hum sab ki jindagi nark bana di thi

Somiya- tere chhote chhote bache hai tujhe bilkul sarm nahi aaye etne kam umar ke ladke ke sath muh kaala karne me?

Madhuri- maine koe galat kaam nahi kiya hai maa. Bhagwan shakshi hai agar maine kabhi kuch galat kiya ho to

Somiya- tu chali ja yaha se aur chhod de mujhe mere haal par
Madhuri- main aapko lene aae hu maa

Somiya- mat bol mujhe maa. Tune ye hak kho diya hai

Madhuri- aapke pote potiyo ko aapki jarurat hai. Mujhe chahe kuch bhi bol lijiye aap lekin aaj main aapko leke hi jaungi

Somiya- mat khulva mera muh. Jab se tu es ghar me aae tab se humare din kharab hone suru ho gaye the. Tune shekhar ko kabhi pyaar nahi diya jo diya uski vajah se vo aaj aisa hai

Madhuri- meri kaha galti thi maa? Ha batao kaha galti thi meri? Jab main es ghar me aae mujhe maar ke sivay kya mila? Kya aapne nahi dekha shekhar kaise maarta tha mujhe? Kaise mere sareer ko nochta tha? Kya mere sareer ke jhakham aapko dikhe nahi? Vo aise jhakam hai jo bhar besak sakte hai lekin uske nisaan jindagi bhar mere sath rahenge.

Madhuri- aapke samne usne mere hatho ko nahi jalaya tha? Cigarette se mere pet par nisaan nahi banaye the? Mujhe nangi karke pure ghar me marte hue nahi ghumaya tha? Kya kuch nahi kiya usne mere sath? Aap batao meri galti kya thi? Kya kabhi maine aapse ya shekhar se uchi awaz me baat ki thi? Kya kabhi kuch galat bola tha maine aapko? Kya kabhi aisa din aaya tha jab etne maar sahne ke baad bhi koe kaam aapko adhura mila?

Madhuri- maa maine humesha es ghar ko apna ghar apna dharm maan kar jo mujhse ban pada usse kahi jada es ghar ke liye kiya. Usne to jab mere pet me ek nanhi jaan thi tab bhi janwaro ki tarah rondha tha mujhe lekin kya maine kabhi ahh tak kari?
Ek baar ka bata do jab maine aapse ya us se koe sikayat kari ho?
Ab aap batao meri galti kaha thi aur kya thi?

Etna bol kar madhuri shant ho gaye. Uski aankhen halki chalkane lag gaye thi aur aawaz bhari ho gaye. Ab usme etni himmat nahi bachi ki vo aage kuch bol pati

Madhuri ki baatein sun kar somiya ek dam shant ho gaye kyuki etna to usse bhi pata tha ki jo jo madhuri ne kaha vo ek dam sach tha usme koe dorae nahi tha
Shekhar ne eske sath atyachaar par atyachaar hi kiye the aur madhuri ne kabhi kisi se koe sikayat nahi ki. Vo sab kuch shanti se sahti rahi aur apna dharm nibhati rahi

Ek baat ye bhi sach thi ki somiya ne na kabhi shekhar ko rokne ki kosis ki aur na kabhi madhuri se pyaar se baat ki. Bahut baar to vo khud samil thi shekhar ke kaamo me

Bahut baar somiya ki vajah se hi madhuri par julm hue lekin madhuri ne fir bhi kabhi kuch nahi kaha

Aur aaj somiya jo usne kiya uski saja bhugat rahi thi aur blame madhuri ko kar rahi thi

Somiya- tum yaha se chali jao madhuri. Mujhe mere haal par chhod kar. Na main tumse nafart kar paungi aur na main kabhi tumse pyaar kar paye. Mujhe aise hi rahne do

Madhuri- vapas ja kar kya bolungi apne bacho ko? Jab vo puchenge ki aap to dadi ko lene gaye the vo kaha hai? To kya jawab de paungi unhe main? Vo to aapki rah dekh rahe hai subah se
Madhuri ne safed juth bola. Usko to khud nahi pata tha ki lucifer usse kaha leke ja raha hai to vo apne bacho ko kya hi batati

Somiya- shekhar kaha hai?

Madhuri- mujhe nahi pata. Jab se mujhe rahul mila uske baad se maine usse dekha tak nahi

Somiya- main tumse kuch nahi kahungi please agar tum us se mili ho ya tumhe pata hai vo kaha hai to mujhe bata do

Madhuri- main nahi mili maa us se aur main kyu milungi us se ye bhi to sochiye aap? Kya kuch to nahi kiya usne mere sath

Somiya- hmm

Lucifer- bhukh lag rahi hai
Somiya- mere pass jada kuch nahi hai khane ko. Ek minute ruko
Aur somiya ander chali jati hai

Madhuri- kya chal raha hai tumhre dimag me?

Lucifer- mere dimag me to aapne bahut kuch chalva diya hai lekin abhi main kuch aur soch raha hu

Madhuri apni najre niche karte hue “kya”

Lucifer- aapki najre kabhi nahi jhukni chahiye maam. Aap ghamand ho mera aur ye ghamand humesha ucha rahna chahiye

Ek ajeeb sa bhaav liye madhuri lucifer ko dekhne lagi

Lucifer- aap sach me enko ghar le jana chahte ho?

Madhuri- tumne hi to kaha tha ki she already suffered enough aur enme enki jada galti bhi nahi thi

Lucifer- kaha to tha

Madhuri- to ha main enhe le jana chahti hu unhe ghar

Lucifer- do teen kaam karne padenge aapko

Madhuri- kya kaam?

Lucifer- ek to koe havan karao ghar par kisi ache gyaani se fir ganga me dobki maar kar aao aur uske jal ko apne ghar ke har kone me chhidko

Madhuri- ye saaaa….
Lucifer- just do it apni ungliya madhuri ke hontho par lagate hue bola

Lucifer ka saparsh jaise hi hua madhuri ko uske sareer me ek current sa dood gaya sath me pairo ne uska sath chhodna suru kar diya. Ek second me hi usse aisa feel hone laga jaise abhi geer jayegi vo

Somiya- mere pass yehi hai khane ko
Ek plate me sukhi rotiya aur chatni leke aaye thi somiya lekin samne ka najara dekh kar uske pair vahi ki vahi jam vahe

Jaise hi madhuri ne somiya ki aawaz suni vo bhi hosh me aa gaye aur lucifer se thoda piche ho gaye

Lucifer- jab koe pyaar se khilata hai na to ye sukhi rotiya bhi jannat sa swaad chakha deti hai

Ek hath se plate lete hue bola lekin somiya ki aankhon ke samne to abhi bhi madhuri ka lucifer ke chhune se madhosh hona hi ghum raha tha

Lucifer- es ghar ka bhi kuch karna padega. Sabse jada problem to es ghar ki vajah se hi hai
Khate hue bola

Madhuri- kya matlab?
Lucifer- vastu ke hisaab se ye ghar theek nahi hai.

Madhuri- tum kab se en sab chijo me manane lag gaye?
Lucifer- abhi just kuch minutes pehle

Somiya- main apna ghar nahi chhodungi

Lucifer- ghar vo hota hai jaha aapka parivaar aapke sath rahta ho.

Somiya- kya tum us ghar me rahte ho?

Lucifer- vo jarur ek ghar hai lekin mera nahi hai. Sadiyo pehle apne ghar se nikala ja chuka hu main. Ab to ek banjara hu jo yaha se vaha bhatakta rahta hai

Somiya- kya rishta hai tumhra meri bahu ke sath?

Lucifer- maam hai meri. Zindagi ke bahut sare pahlu jeena sikhaya hai unhone mujhe

Madhuri- lucifer tumhri aankhen….
Somiya- ye ek dam se laal kaise ho gaye etni?
Tum theek to ho?

Lucifer- kuch hai yaha jo nahi chahta main yaha ruku esliye unhe kha raha hu

Madhuri- kya matlab? Tum theek to ho na?

Lucifer- theek hu main. Aap enko leke jao apne ghar. Main bacha hua kaam khatam karke aata hu

Madhuri- nahi mujhe tumhri tabayet theek nahi lag rahi. Main nahi jaungi tumhe akela chhod kar

Somiya- madhuri sahi kah rahi hai sayad food poisoning ho gaya hai. Ye rotiya do din purani thi

Lucifer- maam maine aapko promise kiya hua hai na ki aapki jindagi khushiyo se bhar dunga?
Kiya hai na? Bas ye aakhiri kaam uske baad aapko kabhi koe problem nahi aayegi. Aap jaye yaha se main raat ko aaunga aapse milne

Somiya- ye ladka pagal ho gaya hai. Eska sareer dekho kitna jal raha hai
Galti se somiya ka hath lucifer ke peeth par touch ho gaya tha esliye usse mahsus karte hue boli

Lucifer- anika ko leke jao sath me. Main bas aapke piche piche aa raha hu
Somiya- anika?
Madhuri- anika?

Tabhi bahar se anika aakar teeno ke samne khadi ho gaye. Usko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise abhi ro degi aur aisa feel bhi kyu na ho apno ki aisi halaat jo dekh rahi thi vo

Anika- sab kuch baad me bataungi pehle chalo yaha se
Madhuri aur somiya kuch bolne ko hue thi lekin anika ne unhe bolne se pehle hi rok diya aur jabardasti unhe lagbhag khechte hue bahar le aae*****


Eda- kya ho gaya? Ek dam se kaha kho gaye tum?
Mazikeen- lucifer bula rahe hai

Eda- what??? Usse tum yaad kab aaye?
Mazikeen- unke unconscious mind me sab yaad rahta hai. Ek baar pehle bhi bulaya tha unhone mujhe

Eda- pehle? Kab? Kyu?
Mujhe kyu nahi bataya tumne?

Mazikeen- aapke yaha aane se pehle ki baat hai kuch souls bhag gaye the hell se aur earth pahuch gaye tab lucifer ne pakad kar unhe vapas bejha tha

Eda- esliye tumhe bulaya tha usne?
Mazikeen- hmm

Eda- to ab kyu bula raha hai vo? Koe musibaat to nahi aa gaye uske upar?

Mazikeen- kaisi baat kar rahe ho? Musibaat vo bhi lucifer par? Aur musibaat se bachne ke liye vo mujhe bulayenge? Agar aisa hota to aapko na bulate?

Eda- main yaad jo nahi hu usko. Sayad main to uske unconscious mind me bhi nahi hu

Mazikeen- eda lucifer ke har mind me hai. Aisa kabhi ho hi nahi payega jab lucifer eda ko bhul jaye. He loves you so so much ki aapko bulana unke liye impossible hai

Eda- theek hai tum jao aur jo usse chahiye provide karke jaldi vapas aap. Bhulo nahi abhi kya condition chal rahi hai aur tumhra bahar akela ghumna bilkul safe nahi hai

Mazikeen- mujhe pata hai aur main jaldi hi vapas aa jaungi…..
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Lucifer somiya ke ghar me full form me khada tha matlab apne devil wale form me. Hath me roti ka ek tukda bacha hua tha jisse abhi khane ja raha tha vo

Aise aag nikal rahi thi uske sareer se ki normal insaan to uske pass khade hone se ji jal kar mar jaye

Vo to achi baat thi ki somiya ke ghar koe galti se bhi nahi aata tha nahi to aaj ek do nipat hi jane the lucifer ko aise dekh kar

Aakhiri nivaala apne muh me dala lucifer ne aur apne ander ki chhij ko ek jagah ekkatrit karne laga tabhi

“ luciferr” gate se ek jani pahchani aawaz aae jo mazikeen ki hi thi

Usne nahi socha tha ki vo lucifer ko es andaaz me dekhegi aur bolte hi apne ghutno ke bal sar niche karke bath gaye

Lucifer- MAZIKEEN…. Meri mazikeen aakhen taras jati hai meri tumhe dekhne ko. Kon kah sakta hai demon etna pyaara bhi ho sakta hai?

Mazikeen- main aapki kaise madad kar sakti hu?
Sar jhuka kar hi boli

Lucifer- apni jagah se khadi ho jao mazikeen. Mujhe tumhra jhuka hua chehra pasand nahi hai. Dekho apni maalik ki aankhon me aur batao mujhe

Mazikeen samjh gaye thi ki samne baat karne wala kon hai aur esliye hi uske mathe par paseene ki kuch bunde aa gaye thi

Thoda darte hue vo khadi hue aur lucifer ki taraf dekhne lagi

Lucifer- kaha hai vo?
Bas etna hi bola tha lucifer ne lekin mazikeen ki halaat kharab karne ke liye ye kafi tha

Mazikeen- mujhe nahi pata maalik. Main kosis kar rahi hu usse dundne ki lekin kamyabi nahi mili hai abhi tak

Lucifer- matlab fail ho rahi ho tum? Kya eska yehi matlab nikalu main ki fail ho rahi ho tum?

Mazikeen- maaf kar dijiye maalik. Agli baar aapko niraash nahi karungi main.

Lucifer- kaisi hai meri eda? Hell pasand to aa raha hai na usse? Aur meri yaad? Aa rahi hai ya nahi?

Mazikeen- jee malik

Lucifer- hahahahahahahahahahahaha
Mazikeen ooo mazikeen etna dar gaye kya mujhse?
Tumhe to pata hona chahiye lucifer ko devil control nahi karta lucifer khud devil hai
Hahahahhahahahaha

Mazikeen bechari dari sahmi lucifer ko aise haste hue aankhen faade dekh rahi thi

Lucifer- daro mat mazak kar raha tha main to tumhre sath aur lucifer dheere dheere normal hone laga

Tab jake mazikeen ko saas aaye

Mazikeen- aapne mujhe kyu bulaya? Vaha bahut khatra hai abhi

Lucifer- kuch dark souls thi yaha jinhone mere apno ki jindagi nark bana rakhi thi. Maine socha tumhe bula kar hell bejh deta hu

Mazikeen- lekin?

Lucifer- lekin ab soch raha hu mere pass hi rahe to jada acha hai. Vo kya hai na kaali shaktiyo se pyaar hone laga hai mujhe

Mazikeen- aapne kaha aapke apno ki jindagi nark bana rakhi hai. Aapke apne?

Lucifer- nahi ho sakte kya mere apne? Pyaar batne to aaya hu main yaha

Mazikeen- main bahut khush hu aapko aise muskurate dekh kar

Lucifer- aana hai earth par? Rahna hai mere sath?

Mazikeen- ye mera shobhagya hoga maalik

Lucifer- theek to. Main pehle dark lord ko maar du fir tumhe vaha se aazad karunga

Mazikeen- sadiya bita di maine aapke sath. Thoda bahut to samjhne lag gaye hu ab aapko

Lucifer bas muskura diya

Mazikeen- aap mukt ho jana chahte ho aur mujhse mera hell meri yaadein cheen kar?
Aap nahi ho vaha lekin aapki yaade to hai

Lucifer- kuch nahi rakha vaha. Maine aur tumne apna sab kuch diya us jagah ko badle me hume mila kya?
Kuch mila kya humko? Nahi na? To fir vaha rah kar kya fayda?

Mazikeen- agar dena hi hai to vo chhij de do jiske baad main marne ke bhi aapke sath rah saku

Lucifer- tumhe pata hai main vo nahi de sakta. In fact koe nahi de sakta

Mazikeen- supreme de sakte hai agar aap mango to

Lucifer- mazikeen hum dono ka sareer jab tak jinda hai hum jinda hai. Tumhre pass soul hai nahi aur main de nahi sakta tumhe aur meri soul bahut pehle mar chuki hai. Es jahanum me rahne ka vaise bhi koe matlab nahi hai

Mazikeen- jaisi aapki ichacha maalik

Lucifer- kya dikh raha hai tumhe?

Mazikeen- main aapse kuch kahna chahti hu

Lucifer- manch khali pada hai. Bolo jo bolna hai koe nahi rokega lucifer ke raaj me tumhe

Mazikeen- mujhe nahi pata mere sath aage kya hone wala hai aur kab hone wala hai lekin us se pehle main kuch baatein batana chahti hu aapko.

“ aap ek angel the aur koe chhote motte nahi dunia ke sabse powerful angel fir aapke sath jo bhi hua uske bare me to kuch bolne ka matlab hi nahi hai lekin fir aap hell me aa gaye. Main to pehle se hi vaha thi. Hum peedi dar peedi hell ki raksha karte aaye aur un sadiyo me na jane kitne hell lord dekhe humne. Aapse pehle bhi ek tha jisko main janti thi aur anek the jiske bare me maine suna tha. Vo sab hume chusne me lage rahte the, kabhi hume respect to door ki baat hai apne aas pass bathne tak ka mokka nahi diya.”

“Aisa hi chalta aaya tha aur esko hi apni kismat maan kar hum apna farz nibhate aa rahe the. Socha nahi tha kabhi ki aap jaise bhi hell me aayenge. Jab aap suru me aaye to aisa lag raha tha jaise aapme aur unme koe fark hi nahi hai balki aap to unse bhi badhtar ho”

“Lekin dheere dheere aapko jana aur fir pata chala ki aap kya chhij ho. Aapne hume jo respect jo izzat di uski main sada aabhari rahungi. Aapne to sath batha kar ek thali me khana tak khila liya tha mujhe. Aur bhi bahut sari chhije ki aapne jiski maine to kabhi kalpana bhi nahi ki thi.”

“Aapke sath bitaye gaye har ek pal mere jindagi ke haseen pal rahe aur mujhe khushi hai ki main aapse mil paye. Eske baad pata nahi kabhi humara milan vapas ho paye ya na ho paye lekin main aapse etna kahna chahti hu ki aap dunia ke sabse hell lord ho aur sath me ek behatrin insaan bhi.”

“Main aapki khushiyo ki kamna karte hue apne baat khatam karti hu aur umeed karti hu ki aapko bhi jaldi se moksh mil paye.”

Etna bol kar mazikeen shant ho gaye. Aankhen halki bhar aaye thi uski aur ab lucifer se najar milana muskil ho gaya tha uske liye

Kuch der tak vaha shanti rahi fir

Lucifer- kya hone wala hai abhi? And don’t you dare ki mujhse juth bolo.

Mazikeen- hum apne aakhir din ko pehle se hi mahsus karne lag jate hai. Jaise aap karne lag gaye ho aur jaise main kar rahi hu

Lucifer- KUCH NAHI HOGA TUMHE. MAIN KUCH HONE NAHI DUNGA.
ek dahaad ke sath bola lucifer

Mazikeen- mujhe bhi hak hai ab mukti ka. Jitna waqt gujara aapke sath aur aapke bina vo sab khusburat raha ab mujhe bhi jane dijiye maalik

Lucifer- tum meri demon ho aur hell lord ke marji ke bina tum na to saas le sakti ho aur na saas chhod sakti ho. Kis se dar hai tumhe? Dark lord se? Tumhre vapas pahuchne se pehle mar jayega vo

Mazikeen- nahi maalik nahi. Aap nahi ja sakte abhi vaha. Bilkul nahi ja sakte. Main aapse vada karti hu ek din kisi na kisi roop me atma ke sath aapke samne vapas aaungi. Tab tak ke liye mujhe aazadi de do. Maine kabhi aapse kuch nahi manga aaj maang rahi hu
Please…..

Lucifer- hell ki demon sirf mazikeen hogi aur koe nahi
Mazikeen- leki….

Lucifer- lekin vekin kuch nahi. Ye hell lord ka order hai aur ab tum ja sakti ho tumhre maalik ke vapas aane ka samay aa gaya hai….
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*DHAM* *DHAM* *DHAM* *DHAM*

Pure hell me dham dham dham ki aawaze gunj rahi thi aur ye aawaz ander se to bilkul nahi aa rahi thi. Kadiyo ke sath sath guards ki bhi fat ke hath me aa chuki thi.

Kyuki jadarar guards to eda ko theek tarike se jante bhi nahi the aur janane wale dono lucifer aur mazikeen hell me mojud nahi the

Bahar jis kadar halla ho raha tha us se hi andaza lagaya ja sakta tha ki koe bhari vipada bahar un sab ka intezaar kar rahi hai

Vahi ander eda ek protective shield bana rahi thi kadiyo ke liye aur guards ko motivate karne ki kosis kar rahi thi halanki usko es baat ka pura andaja tha ki ye guards bahar jo bhi hai unke samne jara bhi nahi tik payenge lekin eda ke pass aur koe option to tha nahi na hi usse ye lag raha tha ki bahar se kisi tarah ki madad uske pass aayegi

Esliye jitna uske pass tha us se hi ladne ki tayari me lag chuki thi vo aur sath hi pray kar rahi thi ki mazikeen vaha na paye. Kahi na kahi eda ko mazikeen ki kahi baaton se thoda dar lag raha tha uske liye esliye hi vo soch rahi thi agar vo yaha na aaye to jada acha hai aur vaise bhi jab tak vo lucifer ke sath hai tab tak safe hai

Ek bahut powerful shield bana li thi eda ne aur ab apne hathiyaro ko leke apni chhoti si sena ke sath sabse aage aakar khadi ho gaye

Vaise usse mazikeen ki gate band karne ki advice ka kafi fayda hua tha. Agar aaj gate open hota jaisa humesha hell ka rahta hai to usse bilkul waqt nahi milta aur pata nahi kitna khoon abhi tak bah chuka tha

Gate band hone ki hi vajah se vo khud bilkul tayar ho chuki thi sath me usne kadiyo ko bhi protect kar diya tha

Ab to intezaar tha gate tootne ka aur khoon se holi khelne ka jo bas hone ko aaya tha kyuki gate ki halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi aur ab to aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi bhi waqt vo toot kar bikhar sakta hai

Eda- get ready dosto. It will be a hell of blood bath
Ek jordaar aawaz ke sath eda ne sabko aagah kar diya tha aur uske bolne matar se vaha ke guards pump ho chuke the

“Tadaaaaaakkkkkk” ek jordaar aawaz ke sath hell ke gate ke chithade udd chuke the aur vaha se ajeeb gareeb rakshasho ki ek fauz ander ki taraf bhagti aaye

Eda jo sabse aage khadi thi vo bilkul tayar ho chuki thi, uska bhaala aur talwar tej chamakne lagi aur vo unki taraf puri speed se bhagi

Eda ki speed etni jada thi ki nangi aankhon se usse dekhne lagbhag na mumkeen sa lag raha tha. Jo bhi beech me aa raha tha un sabko katate hue vo aage badh rahi thi

Usne socha tha ki enka jo bhi maalik hai usko jitna jaldi ho sake maar do taki bina leader ke ye fauz apahiz ho jaye aur uska kaam aasan ho jaye

Lekin aisa hua nahi kyuki laashe bichate hue eda last me pahuch gaye thi lekin usse vaha koe dikha nahi

Charo taraf apni pani najar ghumae usne aur jab koe najar nahi aaya to vapas un rakshasho par toot padi

Baki ke guards to bahut low level ke the vaha par jinhone sayad koe ladae ladi bhi nahi ho kyuki lucifer ke time to aisa hua nahi tha aur kiski himmat hogi jo lucifer ke rahte vaha attack karta esliye unko to bahut problem ho rahi thi sayad me etni si der me kafi log ghayal bhi ho chuke the

Eda vapas mudi aur lone fighter ki tarah bheed se takra gaye. Jaha jaha uske hathiyaar ghum rahe the vaha vaha khoon ki dharaye bahna suru kar rahi thi

Aisa lag hi nahi raha tha ki vo lad rahi hai balki aisa prateet ho raha tha ki vo masti kar rahi hai apne hathiyaro ke sath aur uske chakkar me log apni jaan gava rahe hai

Kuch hi minutes lage the eda ko vaha ka area saaf karne me lekin jaise hi vo sab khatam karke shant hue pehle se bhi jada bheed vapas hell me ghusne lagi

Eda- ohh lucifer tum aaj ka haseen din miss kar rahe ho. It will be a lot of fun today
Apne man me badbadte hue eda vapas tayar ho gaye

Lekin es baar ke rakshah pehle walo ki tulna me jada bhayankar dikh rahe the vaise to eda ko unse kuch problem nahi honi thi lekin vo etna to samjh hi gaye thi ki level aise hi badhta jayega aur jab tak main banda samne aaega eda ke sath ladne wala koe jinda nahi bachega

Us waqt sirf eda hogi aur samne puri fauz

Abhi to vaise bhi eda kuch nahi kar sakti thi sivay ladne ke aur jitna ho sake apne logo ko bachane ke esliye hi vo samne se lad rahi thi taki jada se jada dusman ko vo khud hi maar de

Aur abhi tak uske protected cover tak bhi koe nahi pahuch paya tha

Sare khayalo ko ek jhatka de kar eda ne kuch mantra pade aur uski talwar se aag nikalne lagi aur vo kuch hi seconds me etni bhayank ho gaye ki samne aane wala har dusman usme jalne laga

Hell ko to vaise bhi jalne ki aadaat ho rakhi thi to aise me uski jagah ko to jada fark nahi pada lekin dusmano ki chhikhane chhilane se vo etna to samjh me aa gaya tha ki uski gand ache se jal chuki hai

Eda- aao aur samna karo eda ka. Aaj main dekhti hu ki kon hai vo jisme eda ke gusse ko sahne ki himmat hai
Eda bahut jor se gurrai. Etni tej ki vaha opposition ki halaat sirf uski lalkaar sun kar buri ho gaye to uske sathiyo ka manobal badhne laga

Ab samne uske top tier ke demons aa chuke the jo ye darsha rahe the ki enke baad hi asli banda samne aayega

Vo aag ko chhirte hue aise aage badh gaye jaise samne jalne wali aag nahi pani hai jisko vo kaatate hue aage badh rahe hai.

Eda- you all gonna die a painful death
Aur khadi ho gaye jung ke maidaan me akeli

Vo sare bhi samjh gaye the ki hume pehle es se hi nipata hai esliye charo taraf se gher liya eda ko aur ek sath uspar hamla kar diya

Eda fast to bahut thi lekin etni sari jagah se uspar hamla ho raha tha ki vo thoda defence mode me chali gaye aur sabke attack ko block karne lagi

Un par aag ka bhi asar nahi ho raha tha aur agar eda jada der defence karti rahi to ye unko hi fayda tha esliye apni divya shakti se usne apne sareer se chhote chhote chhaku nikalna suru kiya jinme ek alag hi tarah ki chamak thi aur vo samne lad rahe rakhsaho me ghusne lage

Halanki es se unhe jada chhot nahi aa rahi thi lekin vo pehle ke mukabale thoda slow jarur hone lag gaye the

Jiska fayda agle hi pal eda ne utha liya aur chaar sar unke dhad se ek jhatke me kaat diye eda ne fir air block karke ek bahut tej bavandar uthaya jisme un sab ke pair apni jagah se dagmagane lag gaye

Etni tej tufaan laya eda ne ki samne khade dusmano ke hathiyaar hava me hi lahrane lag gaye aur eda unke sareer ko ukhadne lag gaye

Beech se alag ho gaye sare kuch hi seconds me aur unke khoon se eda ka pura sareer naha liya

Abhi vo kuch aur karti us se pehle hi ek bahut jordar kick padi uski chhati par vo eda udte hue kuch foot door jake giri

Samne dekha to 5-6 giants khade hue the jo eda ke sareer se lagbhag lagbhag 5 guna jada bade the

Sayad lucifer ke actual size ke aas pass ke giants the vo Unme se teen se eda ko gheer liya aur baki 3 eda ke side se hote hue guards ki taraf badhne lage

Khatre ki ghanti jaise hi baji eda ke dimag me raftaar se vo apne pairo par khadi ho gaye aur ek bahut tej waar kiya usne ek giant par lekin natija kuch feel tak nahi hua unko

Talwar uske sareer ko katne me kamyaab nahi ho paye aur us giant ne eda ko vaha hava me uchaal kar door fek diya

Eda man me find their weakness eda find there weakness. Ye sala us ek point se hi marenge aur mujhe vohi dundna hai
Hava me udte hue apne man me eda ne khud se kaha

Es baar vo jamin par giri nahi balki balance bana kar apne pairo par khadi ho gaye

Aur unke sareer ko scan karne lagi jaise kamjor point dundne ki kosis kar rahi ho jisme usse jada time laga nahi. Guruji bahut ache guru the unhone har tarah ki musibaat se ladne ke tarike sikhaye the eda aur lucifer ko aur unhi me se ek tha apne enemy ki kamjori ko dundna aur sateek jagah hamla karna

Jaise hi eda ko pata chala ki unke pair hi sabse kamjor hai to uske hatho se ek bahut bada bhaala apne aap nikalne lag gaye

Ek hath me talwar aur dusre me bhala liye jaise lucifer ladta tha bilkul uski parchai ki tarah hi vo aage badhi

Vo joint eda ko dekh bhi nahi paye ki kab vo apni jagah se hili aur kab usne ek gaint ke pair me apna pura bhaala ghusa diya

“Ahhhhhhhh” ek bahut bhayankar chhikh nikali uske muh se lekin vo sambhal pata us se pehle hi uske face par ek flying kick mari eda ne jis se uska balance bigda aur fir dusre pair me talwar ghusa daali

DHADAAAAAAM jaise aawaz aaye aur laga mano dharti hil gaye ho uske girne se

Baki do jo eda ko ghere khade the uske sath hi unko to kuch karne ka waqt hi nahi mila. Es se pehle ki vo kuch react karte tab tak to unka ek sath jamin me dhas chuka tha

Lekin ab baki ke dono bahut satarak ho gaye the sath me eda ko apne piche apne guards ki chhikhane ki aawaze bhi aane lag gaye thi

Jiska sidha sidha matlab tha ki uske pass waqt bilkul bhi nahi hai esliye hi bina samay gavaye vo baki dono se bheed gaye lekin ab tak vo dono kafi chhokane ho chuke the aur eda ko apne pairo tak pahuchne nahi de rahe the

Jaise hi jhuk kar eda ek ke pair par attack karne lagi vaise hi ek bahut bhayankar gadda type ke hathiyaar se dusre ne eda par hamla kiya aur ek baar fir eda hava ki shar par nikal gaye

Es baar usse dard ka ahsaas jarur ho gaya tha jiski vajah se uska gussa ab out of control hota ja raha tha jo vaha par kisi ke liye bhi acha sanket nahi tha

Apne kapde jhadte hue eda shanti se khadi hue lekin uske chehre par jo sunya bhaav the vo kafi darvane lagne lag gaye the

Kuch seconds ke liye usne apni aankhen band ki aur jab kholi to aisa laga jaise pure nark ko apne ander sama legi vo aur etni tej speed se bhagi ki logo ko sirf vo do joint jamin ke 10 feet ander ghuste najar aaye eda ne kya kiya vo to kisi ko dikhae hi nahi diya

Hell me ek coffin ban chuka tha jisme do giants sama chuke the aur ye najara dekh kar jo giants piche guards ko faadne me lage hue the vo ek dam se ruk gaye aur eda ko aankh faade dekhne lage

Vo ussi speed me un dono ke pass bhi pahuch chuki thi aur jo haal baki dono ka hua kuch vaisa hi enke sath bhi hua

Eda- AUR BACHA HAI KYA KOE? AAJ SABKO FAAD KAR RAKH DUNGI MAIN. TUMNE MERE LUCIFER KI TERRITORY KI TARAF AANKH UTHAE HAI KASAM MERE US PYAAR KI AGAR AAJ ULTE PAIR BHAGNE PAR MAJBUR NA KAR DU TUMHE KYUKI MARNA TO TUMHE LUCIFER KE HATHO HI HAI DARK LORD
eda bahut khatarnaak tarike se chhilaye

“Hahahahaha manana padega tumhe eda, manana padega. Main to ye dekhna chahta tha ki tum kitni badal gaye ho sayad narm to nahi pad gaye lekin khushi hue ye jaan kar ki eda ke hath aaj bhi utne hi majbut hai jitne kal hua karte the. Tumhe jeene ka ek mokka dene ki ichacha ho rahi hai give me mazikeen and i will give you your life back nahi to tayar ho jao apni aankhon se apne lucifer ke ghar ko tabhah hote dekhne ke liye”
Kisi anjaan shaksh ki aawaz pure hell me gunjane lagi sabko pata tha ki ye anjaan shaksh kon hai aur yaha kya karne aaya hai esliye eda ko chhod kar baki sab kapne lag gaye the

Eda- we will see kon kya kya kar sakta hai. Apne pyaar ke liye to main dunia ko aag laga du tum to fir bhi ek shataan ho….
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“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” ek tej chhikh ke sath eda hell ke diwar par jake giri. Naak se halka halka khoon bahna suru ho gaya tha aur sareer me aisa feel ho chuka tha usse ki ek do haddiyo ne sath chhod diya hai

Lekin abhi to suruvaat hi hue thi aur etni jaldi haar manane wali to eda bhi nahi thi. Lucifer ke baad agar koe us holly throne ke kabil tha to vo eda hi thi aur sath me eda lucifer ka pyaar bhi. To fir vo kaise maan leti ki lucifer ka pyaar ne kisi ke samne haar maan li?

Aur haar bhi us se jiski vajah se achai ka vinash ho sakta tha? Eda na to haar manane wali thi aur na harne wali thi. Pehle baar to uske samne koe takkar ka admi khada tha aur ek yodha ke liye es se badh kar aur kya ho sakta tha?

Apne guruji, apne maa papa, lucifer sab ko proud feel karane ka es se acha mokka to eda to kabhi nahi mil sakta tha aur yehi sochte hue apne kapde jhadte hue vo khadi hue. Naak se abhi bhi khoon ki kuch boonde nikal rahi thi jiske ek baar me hi apne hatho se saaf kar liya tha usne aur fir

Eda- aaj jab tak hum dono me se ek bhi mar nahi jata yaha ke log hurt nahi hone chahiye. Agar himmat hai to accept this. Apne sath kitne bhi logo ko le aao main ladungi sab se lekin mere zinda rahne tak hell ke kisi bhi sadash ko kuch nahi hona chahiye

Dark lord- manane padega eda tumhe kya jajba hai tum me lekin maine suna tha ki tum to mere bade bhai se muhobbat karti thi to fir aisa kaise ho gaya ki usne kabhi kisi ki jaan ki parvaah nahi ki aur tum kar rahi ho? Kya apne aakhiri din me kuch achai karke jana chahti ho? Lekin tum bhi kya yaad rakhogi… vada karta hu jab tak tum mere samne ghutne nahi tek deti tab tak yaha par koe nahi marega… are bhai mere bhai ki muhoobat ho tum etna to kar hi sakta hu main apne bhai ke liye
Ek shatani muskaan liye dark lord bola

Dark lord lucifer ka sabse chhota bhai. Use bachpan se hi apne angel hone par bahut gussa aata tha, na to usne kabhi koe angels wala kaam kiya aur na kabhi us raste par chala. Humesha hi kali shaktiyo ke bare janane ki ichacha rakhta tha aur kisi na kisi tarah dark magic ka istemal bhi kar leta tha. Jab sab guruji ke pass gyaan lene jate the us se pehle hi esse heaven ke kisi kone me bejh diya gaya tha ye soch kar ki jab waqt aur halaat ki maar padegi tab apne aap samjh me aajayega

Lekin aisa kuch bhi hua nahi kyuki jo thodi bahut dark knowledge thi ese us se hi esne vaha survive kiya aur us se hi apne aapko shaktishali banata raha. Supreme aur mata se ek bahut badi galti ho gaye thi ki unhone eski taraf dhayan hi nahi diya aur essi chhij ka esne fayda utha liya

Koe rokne tokne wala nahi tha, koe ye bhi dekhne wala nahi tha ki ye jinda hai ya mar gaya, agar jinda hai to kaise jee raha hai agar mar gaya to jalaya bhi gaya hai ya chheel kave kha gaye. Ek tarah se dunia ke liye to ye mar hi gaya tha aur sach kaha jaye to ander se bhi mara hi hua tha

Eska ek hi makshad raha jeevan me ki kisi bhi tarah dark magic ko sabse upar laya jaye aur pure dunia par raaj kar sake

Do baar lucifer se hara ye aur lucifer ne dusri baar pata nahi kya soch kar esko jinda chhod diya tha tab se lekar aaj tak ye pehli baar open me aaya hai. Bas yaha vaha se eske baare me udti udti khabre aati rahti thi

Koe bolta tha ye angels ko maar kar apni shaktiya badhata hai to koe bolta tha ab ye demons se bhi shakti badha sakta hai. Tarah tarah ki afvaye thi eske bare me lekin sachai kisi ko nahi pata tha

Aaj ye aaya to mazikeen ke liye tha kyuki vo demons me sabse powerful thi aur usko marne ke baad esko jabardast fayda hone wala tha lekin yaha mazikeen to mili nahi, mil gaye eda

Eda ko es waqt nuksaan pahuchana sahi nahi tha dark lord ki calculation ke hisab se kyuki eske mutabit abhi lucifer se ladne ka samay nahi aaya hai. Do char aur kaam karne the esko lucifer ke samne jane se aur agar eda ko kuch hua to pagal ser ki tarah lucifer eske piche pad jayega fir esko bachana kisi ke bash ki baat nahi rahti

Ye baat dark lord bhi samjhta tha ki abhi agar vo lucifer se bheeda to besak lucifer use maar na paye lekin vo lucifer se jeet bhi nahi payega. Abhi aur jada shaktishali hone tha use fir vo eda lucifer dono ko ek sath bhi sayad jhel leta

Yehi ek matar reason tha ki usne eda ki baat maan li thi kyuki use etna to andaja tha ki mazikeen hell chhod kar kahi nahi jati aur agar vo kahi gaye hai to bahut jaldi vapas bhi aane wali hogi. Tab tak eda ko uljhaye rakho fir apna kaam karke nikal jayega

Lekin sayad use ye nahi pata tha ki mazikeen kya position rakhti hai lucifer ke life me jiska andaja usse bahut jaldi hone bhi wala tha lekin tab tak bahut der ho chuki hogi

Dark lord ne apna hathoda utha liya jo lagbhag 10 foot jitna tha aur use jamin par marne laga. Pure nark me dham dham ki aawaze gunjane lagi. Aur vaha khade sab log darshak ban kar aane wale pal ka intezaar karne lage

Eda ke bhi hathiyaar uske hatho ke chamkane lage aur dono vapas aamne samne ho liye

Dark lord ki height bahut jada thi esliye eda ko fast movement karte hue hi ladna sahi laga jiska counter karne se pehle hi eda ka attack pura ho jaye aur yehi sochte hue usne khub speed me attack kiya jiske bade aaraam se rok liya tha dark lord ne aur fir se ek kick padi eda par aur vo door jake giri

Dark lord- disappoint kar rahi ho tum mujhe. Impress me girl. Show me why lucifer loved you.

Eda apne aap ki bejjati to ek baar ke liye fir bhi sahan kar sakti thi lekin lucifer ki? Nahi kabhi nahi aur aisa hi abhi hua aankhon me angare liye vo etni tej dark lord ke pass pahuchi ki use bhi vo sirf apni jagah se hilti aur apne pass pahuchte hi dikhae di

Aur dham dham dham dham dham dham dham dham dham dham dham dham dham ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek vaar karti chali gaye

Dark lord ko majburi me defence me aana pada kyuki eda ki speed ko vo match kar nahi sakta tha aur agar bachav nahi karta to eda abhi sara khel khatam kar deti

Do minute me hi dark lord ka kavach tod diya tha eda ne aur vo abhi bhi nahi ruk rahi thi aur use rokne ka ek hi tarika dikh raha tha vo tha chhal yani ki dhokhe se

Apni kali shaktiyo ka istemaal karke dark lord apni jagah se gayab ho gaya aur jaise hi pehla vaar khali gaya eda ki hahakaar gunj uthi nark me

Aisa lagne lag gaya tha ki samne khadi eda eda hai hi nahi balki lucifer hai. Jo apne devil roop me aa chuka hai

Dark lord eda ke samne se gayab hua aur just uske piche aakar uske hatho par attack kiya

Jaise hi hammer eda ke hatho par laga uski ek chhikh gunj uthi lekin jamin par girne se khud ko rok liya aur turant piche mud gaye

Solo se jada laal ho chuki thi eda ki aankhen es waqt jiski vajah se dark lord bhi ek second ke liye saham gaya aur uska confidence dagmagane laga

Lekin fir sambhal bhi gaya aur jaise hi dusra war karne laga eda ka punch pada uske pet par aur abhi jo eda hava me udti fir rahi thi uski jagah dark lord hava me ud gaya

Eda- I’m going to kill you today aur jamin par gire dark lord par laate barsane lagi
Vo firse gayab hua aur apni jagah badal li

Dark lord- maine socha tha aaj tujhe hurt nahi karunga lekin tumne meri dariyadili ka galat fayda utha liya. Ab aisi maut marunga tumhe ki pura dev lok tumhri halaat dekh kar kaap uthega
Behad gusse me dark lord garjaya. Vo eda se es tarah pitne ki vajah se bhokhla gaya tha aur ab sahi galat ya eda ke marne se kya anjaam hoga sab bhul gaya. Ab usse sirf pratishod dikhne laga tha jo sirf eda ki maut se hi kam hoga

Uske sareer se kaale ghane badalo jaisa kuch nikalne laga jiski vajah se vaha dekhna lagbhag namumkeen sa ho gaya tha. Eda bhi us andhere me lipti ja rahi thi aur usse thodi ghutan mahsus hone lag gaye thi

Eda etna to samjh gaye thi ki bahut uchh koti ka kala jadu hai ye jisse todna behad muskil tha

Eda us kaale saaye me lipti ja rahi thi aur vo eda ko apni pakad me jakad raha tha. Uske pair aur hath apne aap failne lag gaye aur bahut kosis ke baad bhi vo us se nikal nahi paye

Yehi haal baki sab ka tha hell me mano andhera chhah gaya tha aur koe kuch bhi nahi dekh pa raha tha

“TO THE ALMIGHTY SHOW ME SOME LIGHT, A PATH TO FIGHT THIS DARKNESS” apni aankhen band karke eda ne apne bhagwan ko pukara aur pukarate hi eda ke angels wings bahar aane suru ho gaye. Suraj se bhi kahi adhik chamak thi unhme aur vo chamak us andhere ko katne lagi

Eda ka chehra bhi bilkul badal gaya tha. Abhi kuch der pehle jaha vo gusse me laal peeli ho rakhi thi ab uske chehre par ek alag hi chamak dikh rahi thi. Mano koe apsara ho vo jo ki vo thi hi

Aur agle hi chan eda ka sareer us andhere se chut gaya tha. Jaise hi uske hath aazad hua usne apne wings ki help se udaan bhari aur dark lord ke upar chhalang laga di jo ki khud eda ke divay roop se samohit sa ho gaya tha

Jaise hi us par eda ki kick padi andhere ke sath sath vo khud door jake gira aur andhera vapas usme sama gaya

Eda ne usse vapas khade hone ka koe mokka nahi diya aur ab to uske wings bhi aa gaye the jiski vajah se vo pehle se kae guna jada tej ho chuki thi

Uske hath pair aur wings sab ek sath dark lord par attack kar rahe the aur uski naak se pehli baar kuch kaali khoon ki bunde nikal ke aaye thi

Dark lord ne man me kisi ko pukara aur agli hi chhan kavish out of no where prakat hua aur eda ke piche se angel knife se war kar diya

Eda eske liye tyaar nahi thi aur uske right hand se khoon bahane laga. Eda ka dhayan bhatak chuka tha aur esi chhij ka fayda uthate hue kavish aur dark lord ne ek sath eda par chadae kar di

Usse to yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ki kavish eske sath mila hua hai aur jab tak vo en sab se ubhar pati tab tak uski halaat kharab ho chuki thi

Dark lord- mujhe do ye
Angel knife ki taraf hath badhate hue kavish se bola aur usne bhi bina kisi deri ke knife dark lord ke hatho ke thama diya

Vo eda ke pet me us knife ko gusane hi wala tha ki ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek demons knife ne uske hatho ko bheed diya aur angel knife uski pakad se niche gir gaya

Mud ke dekha to apna demons roop liye mazikeen khadi thi jisse dekh kar dard me bhi dark lord ke hontho par muskaan tair gaye vahi eda ko pehli baar chhinta satane lagi

Mazikeen ko dekhte hi kavish uski taraf lapka lekin agle hi pal etne demons knife uske sareer me ghus chuke the ki vo sayad gin bhi na paye aur vahi kisi ped ki tarah jakda hua khada ka khada rah gaya

Dark lord ko ek percent bhi fark nahi pada kavish ki halaat dekh kar aur vo eda se mud kar mazikeen ki taraf ho liya

Dark lord- tumhra hi to intezaar tha mujhe. Afsos thodi der kar di nahi to tumhre maalik ki premika ki aisi halaat nahi hoti
Ek shatani muskan liya mazikeen se bola

Lekin mazikeen ne koe react nahi kiya aur seeng se bane apne weapons ki pakad apne hatho se majbut kar di

Dark lord ne ye dekha to uski muskurahat aur gehri ho gaye aur usne mazikeen ki taraf aag ke gole barsane suru kar diya jise badi aasani se bach rahi thi mazikeen aur sath me unki direction badal kar vapas dark lord ki taraf bejhne me bhi kamyaab ho rahi thi

Abhi tak dono me se kisi ko koe nuksaan nahi pahucha tha lekin jab apne prime powers ka istemaal suru kiya usne to mazikeen ke pair ladkhadane lage

Un dono ke pass hi kala jadu tha aur dark lord to us kale jadu me maharat haseel kar chuka tha to mazikeen kaise hi uska samna kar pati?


Dono ki shaktiya ek dusre se takrae aur mazikeen kamjor padne lagi. Kisi tarah vo apna ground stand kiye hue the lekin vo jada der khud ko rok nahi sakti thi

Aur hua bhi vaisa hi mazikeen ki shaktiyo ko katate hue dark lord ne ek war kiya aur vo door jake giri. Ek hi vaar me uski halaat kharab ho gaye thi

Es se pehle ki vo uth kar dobara khadi ho pati hammer ka jabardast war pada uske upar aur vo ek feet jamin me ghus gaye

Dark lord vahi rukne wala to tha nahi dusra war karne ke liye jaise hi usne apna hammer uthaya vo udte hue door jake gira

Ye eda thi jisne piche se utha kar dark lord ko hell ke dusre kone me uchaal diya tha

Eda- you must go from here. Main sambhal lungi use. Please jao yaha se
Mazikeen jiski halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi, sareer me jagah jagah se khoon nikal raha tha aur lag nahi raha tha ki ab vo uth bhi sakti hai

Mazikeen- ye hell lucifer aur mera hai. Main ese chhod kar nahi ja sakti. Main apni aakhiri saas yahi lungi

Eda aage kuch bolti us se pehle hi dark lord vapas aa chuka tha. Eda ne jaldi se mazikeen ko apne security parameter ke ander feka aur fir dark lord ki taraf mud gaye

Dark lord- don’t force me eda. Mujhe jo chahiye vo to main leke hi rahunga. Tumhre liye acha hoga ki mere raste se hat jao nahi to main jo nahi karna chahta abhi vo ho jayega
Thodi der pehle tak jaha dark lord kisi bhi chhij ko seriously nahi le raha tha abhi ek dam serious way me bola

Eda- lucifer ka pyaar hu main. Etni kamjor to nahi hungi ki mere apno ko koe ara gaira nuksaan pahucha sake
Aur apne shaktiyo se hava me udne lagi

“Tum abhi tak angel eda se lad rahe the. Ab hell lord eda ka samna karke dikhao” ye bolte hue uske safeed wings kaale padne suru ho gaye aur dark lord ke chehre par vapas se chinta ke saye mandrane lage

Ye hell ki hi shaktiya thi jise eda ab use karne lagi thi kyuki hell ki shaktiya hell lord hi use kar sakta tha aur ye bahut powerful hoti thi lekin us se bhi jada kaali

Dark lord ne jaise hi eda ke kaale hote wings dekhe vo turant gayab ho gaya aur uske peeth piche war karne laga lekin jaha thode time pehle vo kamyaab ho raha tha ab muh ki kha raha tha

Eda uske har war ka muh tod jawab de rahi thi jiski vajah se vo bhokhla gaya tha aur ab usne vo karna suru kar diya jisko na karne ka sabse pehle vada kiya tha usne

Hell ke guards aur souls ko marne lag gaya. Kyuki ab vo eda ka dhayan bhatkana chahta tha kyuki jeetna ye ladae lambi hoti jayegi utna hi uski shaktiya explore hogi jo aane wale waqt ke liye bilkul acha nahi tha

Kuch der tak to eda ki banaye hue shield kaam aaye lekin fir vo bhi totne lagi aur vaha afra tafri mach gaye
Vapas logo ke chhikhane chhilane ki aawaze gunj gaye pure hell me


Agla attack hota us se pehle hi eda apni shield ke samne khud ko shield bana kar khadi ho gaye aur ek lava jaisi energy nikalne lagi uske talwar se jo bahut teji se dark lord ki taraf badh rahi thi vahi dark lord ne bhi usko todne ke liye ussi prakaar ki energy prakaat ki aur dono aapas me bheed gaye

Dono ka aapas me takrana bahut khatarnaak saabit hua kyuki hell ab en dono ke ladne se bhikhare lag gaya tha aur ab to jaise melt hi hone laga

Logo ki halaat buri ho chuki thi vo to dark lord ko dekhte hi sakte me aa gaye the ab en dono ka virat yuddh dekh kar dua karne lag gaye the ki koe unhe bacha le, koe bacha le hell ko aaj

Lekin aisa hone nahi wala tha kyuki hell ko bachane wala to aaj alag hi kaand karne busy ho chuka tha vo to jaise bhul gaya tha ki mazikeen ne us se kya kaha tha aur use mazikeen ko bachane jana tha

Vahi mazikeen abhi tak jameen par padi padi sab dekh rahi thi aur use ye sab rokne ka sirf aur sirf ek rasta dikh raha tha

Apna balidaan vo bhi eda ke hatho se kyuki agar dark lord ke hatho agar maari gaye to soul to uske pass pehle se bhi nahi hai shaktiya bhi dark lord se jud jayegi aur agar eda ke hatho maari gaye to dark lord ki indirectly haar hi hogi us se

Vo yaha sirf aur sirf mazikeen ko mar kar uski shaktiya lene hi to aaya tha agar vohi use na mile to fir uski haar hi mani jayegi ye

Yehi sab sochte sochte apni sari shaktiya istemaal karke mazikeen vapas apne pairo par khadi ho gaye thi aur dark lord wali side badhne lagi

Directly to eda us par hamla karegi nahi to use dark lord par hone wala sabse khatarnaak attack ko apne upar lena tha jis se vo bach na paye yehi sab sochte hue vo dark lord ko piche se marne lagi

Ab scene ye tha bich me dark lord tha samne eda aur uske piche mazikeen

Aage piche dono se us par attack hona suru ho chuka tha aur vo bhi bakhubi apne aap ko bacha raha tha sath me counter attack bhi kar raha tha

Mazikeen- EDA ATTACK TO KILL
bahut jor se chhilaye vo chhilaye
Eda- what else I’m doing?
Dusri taraf se eda chhilaye

Dark lord- ohh girls you can’t kill me but i can kill you both

Mazikeen- try angel knife
Apne aas pass ke logo ko garmi se marte dekh mazikeen boli. Hell ka tapmaan apne sadiyo ka record tod chuka tha aur ab vaha ke log tadap tadap kar mar rahe the. Sirf hell ke hi nahi aas pass me jo rahte the unka bhi yehi haal tha aur ab mazikeen ne apna aakhiri daav khelna suru kar diya tha

Eda ki taraf se angel knife barsane lage aur mazikeen ki taraf se demon knife aur en dono ke bich fas gaya dark lord

Kyuki sayad ye knife use maar na paye lekin seriously injured jarur kar sakte the

Esliye un baraste knife ke bich se gayab hua aur just mazikeen ke piche pahuch gaya aur

“GHAAPPPPPP” eda ka ek knife sidhe mazikeen ke sareer se aar paar ho gaya

“NAHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII”
Teen logo ki alag alag jagah se same chhikhe uthi

Sabse pehle eda ki fir uske just baad dark lord ki aur tisre earth par lucifer ki jisne sun kar madhuri bahut buri tarah se dar gaye thi…..
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“NAHHHHHHIIIII” bahut jor se chhilaya lucifer aur uski hi vajah se madhuri bahut buri tarah dar gaye

Madhuri- lucifer kya hua tumhe? Theek ho tum? Kya hua lucifer? Meri taraf dekho? Lucifer???
Madhuri baar baar lucifer se puch rahi thi lekin vo to bot bana khada rah gaya. Aankhon me gusse ke sath glaani ke bhaav aa chuke the aur sareer aag ki bhaati jalne lag gaya tha

Madhuri ye dekh kar to aur jada dar gaye aur fir lucifer ka chehra sahlate hue us se puchne lagi
“ Kuch to bolo lucifer. Kya hua tumhe? Lucifer please mujhe kuch to batao”.
Khud ki halaat par uska bilkul dhayaan nahi raha jo ek dam nangi lucifer ke aage piche ghumte hue use samjhane ki kosis kar rahi thi

Lekin aaj vo lucifer ke sath ek bahut sunhara pal beeta chuki thi aur ab us sunhare pal ki kimaat chukane ki bari thi. Madhuri ki jindagi me bhi khushiya kitni hi der rah sakti thi? Kam kharab kismat thodi thi uski

“Ahhhh” jaise hi usne vapas lucifer ko chhua tap chuka uske sareer se uska hath halka sa jal gaya aur ek ahh nikali uske muh se

Madhuri- lucife……
Lucifer ka pura naam bhi nahi le paye vo. Uske sabad uske muh me hi jam kar rah gaye kyuki madhuri ne vo dekh liya tha jo use nahi dekhna chahiye tha. THE FUCKING DEVIL

Lucifer apne asli roop me aa chuka tha aur madhuri ki saase upar ki upar aur niche ki niche rah gaye thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise use abhi heart attack aa jayega aur aaye bhi kyu na koe bhi agar lucifer ko uske asli roop me dekh lega to gand to fategi hi

Aur yaha to madhuri thi jo behad muhobat karne lagi thi lucifer aur ab achanak se aisa raaj khulna uski sehat ke liye bilkul bhi acha nahi tha aur vo behosh hokar gir padi

Lucifer behosh nahi hua lekin hosh me vo bhi nahi tha vahi madhuri jamin par gir chuki thi. Thodi der pehle hue milan ki vajah se uska sareer laal ho chuka tha lekin abhi just usne jo dekha uski vajah se peela padna suru ho gaya tha

Devil ne use uthaya kapde pahanaya aur bed par lita kar vaha se chala gaya

*** kuch ghante pehle***

Mazikeen ke jane ke baad lucifer kuch der tak to sochta raha ki aage kya kiya jaye kyuki uske pass jo hell se aane jane ka tarika tha vo sirf ek baar ka hi tha jise usne hell se yaha aane par use kar liya tha

Ab uske pass aur kuch nahi bacha tha jis se vo vapas hell ya heaven ja sake lekin etha to vo samjh gaya tha ki ab vapas jana bahut important ho gaya hai to sawal vohi tha kaise?

Usne apne wings kaat liye the jis se vo ja sakta tha aur kuch time pehle vo vapas bhi aane suru ho gaye the lekin usne dobara se use kaat liya tha

Ab ya to vo intezaar kare ki uske wings vapas aaye ya fir koe dusra rasta dundne hell me jane ka. Sabse badi baat thi ki uske pass waqt ki bahut kami thi aur esliye usne dusre raste try karne ki hi sochi

Vaise bhi use help karne wale bahut the jaise ki eda ya fir eda. Kaun hi tha jo uski help karta sivay eda ke?
Abhi tak jo vo soch raha tha ki bahut sare log help kar denge lekin ab jab naam count karne laga to eda ke alava aur koe naam dimag me aaya hi nahi

Fir socha thoda bahar jata hu akele me shanti se sochunga ki ab kya aur kaise karna hai esliye apna flat lock kiya aur bahar aa gaya

Madhuri ke ghar ki taraf ek najar daali lekin fir dhayan hatate hue vaha se nikal gaya

Ek do ghante ki travelling ki usne aur fir aakhir apne favourite jagah par pahuch gaya. Vohi nadi vohi jharna aur vohi khubsurat shaam

Bahut shanti rahti thi es jagah par aur lucifer ke liye es se achi jagah aur kya hi ho sakti thi apne thoughts ko sahi direction me point karne ke liye

Abhi vo vapas khayalo ki dunia me jata hi ki use apne piche kisi ke khade hone ka ahsaas hua aur ye ahsaas jana pahchana sa laga use

Mudne ki jarurat hi nahi thi use ye janane ki liye ki kon uske piche khada hai, bas uske ahsaas se hi sab jaan leta tha lucifer

Lucifer- aap yaha kya kar rahi ho?
Bina mude hi lucifer bola

Madhuri- tumhra picha karte hue aa gaye

Lucifer- may i ask why?
Madhuri- yes you can

Lucifer- okay. Why are you following me?

Madhuri- aajkal bahut muskil ho gaya hai tumhe dundna. Esliye follow karke hi pakadna padta hai. Pata nahi konsi dunia me rahte ho tum

Lucifer- mujhe usi dunia me rahne do. Ye dunia mere liye sahi nahi hai. Aapko bhi ab sab mil gaya hai don’t ruin everything. Please mere liye to bilkul nahi

Madhuri- I’m not ruining anything. Aur ha sab to mil gaya hai but tum to nahi mil rahe na?

Lucifer- jis din meri sachai pata chalegi us din behosh hokar gir jaogi aap. Main vaha se hu jaha par aap jaiso ke liye koe jagah nahi hai

Madhuri- hogi kisi kone me thodi si jagah. Us se hi kaam chala lungi main. Vaise bhi kabhi kabhi tumhe suggestions ki jarurat padti hai uske liye bhi to koe hona chahiye na?

Lucifer- ma’am please don’t force me. Aap us raste par ja rahi hai jaha se vapas sambhav nahi. Vo ek one way road hai aur aisa one way jaha se kabhi manjil par nahi pahucha ja sakta

Madhuri- raste ko to jee sakte hai na?

Lucifer- chahte kya ho aap? Meri badnaam image ko aur badnaam karna chahte ho kya?

Madhuri- pyaar karne lagi hu tumse aur mujhe us badnaam image se koe fark nahi padta. Mere liye to tum hi mere bhagwan ho

Lucifer- mat kijiye aisa mere sath. Main khud ko rok nahi paunga

Madhuri- to kisne kaha hai roko khud ko? Mat roko na lucifer ho jane do jo takdeer me likha hai
Lucifer ke kaan me bahut dheeme se bola madhuri ne aur uske aisa karne se lucifer apna control khone laga

Bahut muskil hota tha uska madhuri ke samne apne control me rahna. Pehle to vo ye soch kar samjha leta tha ki madhuri ki uske liye koe feeling nahi hai esliye jane do lekin ab jab madhuri samne se ye sab bol rahi ho to vo khud ko kab tak roke rakhega?
Aur jab uske patience ka jawala fatega to bahut sare log usme jhulas jayenge

Madhuri lucifer ke samne aa chuki thi aur etni kareeb thi ki bas anhoni hone hi wali thi lekin us se pehle lucifer ne ek akhiri prayaas karne ki kosis ki

Lucifer- maam ek baar aur soooooommmuhhh lucifer ke sabd aise mold hue ki soch ka muhhhhaaaa ho gaya kyuki madhuri ke honth mil chuke the lucifer ke hontho se. Sabse alag baat ye thi ki abhi tak lucifer ne koe response nahi diya tha

Response to kya hi dega madhuri ne bhi aisa pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha. Bas dono ke honth hi jude hue the react dono me se koe nahi kar raha tha

Ek gulaabi sareer pahne hue the madhuri aur khud to gulabi thi hi vo. Aise havao me apni mahak chhod rahi thi ki kya hi bataye. Aur ab jab havao ke liye bhi rasta band ho gaya tha tab lucifer ko vo dheemi dheemi mahak feel hone lagi aur vo pagal sa hone laga tha

Apne aap uske hath madhuri ki kamar tak pahuch chuke the aur uske hontho ne halka hilna dulna suru kar diya tha

Madhuri ke sath aisa kabhi hua nahi. Vo to humesha rondi gaye thi shekar ke dawara. Jaise vo chahta tha vaise hi madhuri ko karna padta tha. Ye kiss, pyaar, muhobbat kab hi naseeb hua tha use

Na to kabhi aise feelings se gujari aur na hi kabhi aise feelings to apne ander panapne diya. Humesha hi ek ghar me kaid rahi vo aur jaisa bhi tha vaisa hi use apna naseeb maan kar accept bhi kiya

Lekin fir vo ghar se bhagi. Apne bachi ke liye jeene lagi uske baad lucifer mila to khud ke liye bhi thoda waqt nikalne lagi. Aur jane anjane me lucifer se dil laga bathi

Yaha uski galti bhi nahi hai. Jis aurat ko jindagi me kabhi pyaar mila hi nahi, mila to sirf dard peeda aur jab uske jindagi me lucifer jaisa koe aa jaye aur vaise react kare jaise lucifer madhuri ke samne karta hai to fir samne wala kaise nahi padega uske pyaar me?

Lucifer ne movement karni start ki aur madhuri ne lucifer ko copy karna. Jaise jaise lucifer ke honth upar niche khul rahe the bilkul vaise hi madhuri karne ki kosis kar rahi thi

Uske sareer me to lucifer ke pehle touch se hi rongte khade ho gaye the ab to vo puri pagal hue ja rahi thi

Lucifer ka bhi control khatam ho chuka tha aur ab vo bahut dheere dheere se madhuri ki kamar sahalane laga tha. Man to bahut kar raha tha uska hath ko thoda niche le jane ka lekin vo leja nahi pa raha tha

Pata nahi kaise lekin madhuri ne uske dil ki baat padh li thi aur apne hatho ko thoda piche karke lucifer ke hatho ko pakad kar apni gand par rakh diya

Ek srihan dood gaye thi madhuri ke pure sareer me vahi lucifer ab asli roop me aana suru ho chuka tha matlab wild roop me

Kyuko passionate kissing ab wild kissing me badal chuki thi aur vo thoda jor se madhuri ki gand masalne lag gaya tha. Madhuri lucifer ke sirf etna karne se hi buri tarah jhaadi thi aur aise jhaadi ki uske pairo ne uska sath chhod diya tha

Ab vo puri tarah lucifer ki bahoo me jhul rahi thi aur lucifer hontho ko chhod uske galle ko chhumne chhatne laga vahi madhuri ke hath lucifer ke sar par firne lage

Madhuri ki puri neck chhat chhat kar gilli kar di lucifer ne. Kabhi vo chehra chumta to kabhi honth to kabhi neck. Madhuri to puri madhosh hone lagi thi

Aur use madhosh karne ke liye asmaan bilkul shaant pad gaya. Kaale badal chhah gaye aur agle hi pal baarish aani start ho gaye

Baarish ki vajah se madhuri ki sareer uske badan se chipak gaye aur uske figure ko dikha dikha kar lucifer ko rijhane lagi

Ye baarish ne en dono ki aag ko bujaya nahi balki aur bhadka diya tha. Ek second ke liye dono ki najre apas me mili aur fir turant vapas honth mil gaye

Ek hath se lucifer ne madhuri ki saree ka pallu niche gira diya jiski vajah se ab use madhuri ki boobs ke bich ki daraar saaf dikhne lagi. Vo jaise bol rahi ho ki aao aur kha jao mujhe. Lucifer ne bhi baat maani aur ek khatarnaak tarike se jaha tak vo ghaati ja rahi thi vaha par jeeb feri. Madhuri to lucifer ki es harkat se hi dobara jhadne ke kareeb pahuch gaye thi

Uska sareer halka halka kapne lag gaya tha aur apne hatho se vo lucifer ka muh apne chhucho par dabane lag gaye thi. Lekin lucifer to aaj use ache tarah se tadpana chahta tha esliye ruk ruk kar bas use tease kar raha tha

Kabhi blouse ke upar se hi nipple ko muh me bhar leta to kabhi pet wali side ko chumne lagta

Madhuri uff ahhh hmm karte hue bas siskiya leti rah jati. Vo na khud ko rok pa rahi thi na lucifer ke aage badhne ka intezaar kar pa rahi thi

Jitna vo kosis karti ki lucifer thoda aur niche jaye aur apna asli kaam suru kare lucifer utna hi use tease karna suru kar deta. Lucifer ko bahut ache se janane lag gaye thi madhuri esliye use idea ho gaya tha ki lucifer use bas pareshan kar raha hai esliye ab usne sab kuch lucifer par hi chhod diya ki ab ye jaise bhi kare vaise hi theek

Lucifer uske boobs ko chumte chhatate piche hath lejakar maam ke blouse ki door kholne laga aur aage se ab halka halka dabane bhi suru kar diya tha

Ek dam perfect round shape me the madhuri ke boobs aur kahi se bhi latak nahi rahe the. Kya hi figure chhupa kar rakhti thi vo apni saree ke ander

Jab blouse sareer se alag hua aur black bra lucifer ko dikhane lagi to niche uske lund ne fukaar marni suru kar di vahi sarm aur maje me madhuri ki aankhen band ho gaye

Lucifer se bhi raha nahi gaya aur usne turant bra nikal kar un mahkhano ko muh me bhar liya
Sissssiiiiisss ek bahut lambi siski nikali madhuri ke muh se jo lagatar badhti ja rahi thi upar se baarish use aur pagal kar rahi thi

Lucifer ne jeeb ke sath sath daato ka bhi bakhubi istemaal jari rakha aur vo madhuri ke nipples ko khuredne laga

Mitha mitha dard madhuri ke pure sareer me fail gaya aur vo lucifer ke sar ko aur jor se apne chhucho par dabane lagi

Vahi lucifer ne dohri maar ki madhuri par ek hath niche le jakar peticote ke upar se hi madhuri ki chut ko daboch liya

Bas etna hi baki rah gaya tha aur madhuri bahut buri tarah jhadne lagi

Apna pura jor laga kar usne lucifer ko upar kecha aur uske hontho ko pagalo ki tarah chumne lagi

Dheere dheere vo shaant hone lagi lekin saase abhi bhi ukhadi hue hi thi uski lekin ab rukne ka waqt to bilkul nahi tha

Ukhadi saase pyaasi najar se vo lucifer ki shirt nikalne lagi aur uske nange sareer ko chumne lagi

Badi jaldi thi use niche tak jane ki aur esliye hi ek adbhut speed ka namoona pes kiya usne. Kuch hi seconds bhi upar ka pura portion ko apne hontho se chhak chuki thi aur lucifer ki naabhi tak pahuch gaye

Ek hath se uske pant ka hook khulne lagi aur muh se vaha ke area ko chumne lagi

Madhuri ne shekhar se bachne ke liye bahut sari chhijhe sikh li thi. Vo humesha yehi chahti thi ki shekhar jaldi se jaldi shant ho jaye esliye har baar koe na koe naye trick apnati aur kae baar kamyaab bhi ho jati thi

Lekin abhi vo lucifer ko jaldi shant to bilkul nahi hone dena chahti thi balki thodi der pehle jo use tease kar raha tha uska badla jarur lena chahti thi

Esliye pant kab nikli aur kab underwear ke upar se hi usne lucifer ke lund par daat chala diye lucifer ko pata bhi nahi chala

Jab daat lage tab use ahsaas hua ki vo madhuri ke jaal me aisa fas gaya ki use andaja hi nahi hua kab vo niche tak pahuch gaye thi

Bahut pyaar se vo madhuri ke baalo ko sahla raha tha aur madhuri uske lund ko

Aur jab topa uske garam muh me gaya tab ek pal ke liye lucifer ko aisa feel hua ki vo abhi ke abhi jhad jayega uska sareer etna akad gaya tha ki kya hi bataya jaye

Usne abhi tak jitni bhi ladkiyo ke sath sex kiya tha sab first timer thi aur unko kisi bhi chhij ka koe experience nahi tha lekin yaha madhuri thi

Jab muh me lene ke baad uski jeeb ne kamal dikhana suru kiya to lucifer ke pair kamjor padne lag gaye the

Aisa maja use jindagi me kabhi feel nahi hua tha jaisa madhuri ke muh ne kuch seconds me dila diya

Bahut aaram se lekin kamaal tarike se lucifer ke lund ko chus rahi thi madhuri aur lucifer se ab control karna muskil hota ja raha tha

Vo baar baar madhuri ko khada karne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin madhuri maan hi nahi rahi thi. Pura badla lena ki jo thaan li thi usne

Lucifer ne bhi haar maan li aur jamin par let gaya aur madhuri ko apna kaam karte dekhne laga

Kya pyaari aurat thi madhuri. Es waqt bhi ek masoomiyat uske chehre par tair rahi thi es se pehle ki lucifer us masoomiyat me khota usne madhuri ke pair pakde aur use ek jhatke me pura ghuma diya

Vo to ghumi hi sath me lucifer ka lund uske muh me pura ghum gaya

Madhuri kuch react karti us se pehle hi uski chut lucifer ke muh par lag chuki thi aur jaise hi ye ahsaas hua madhuri ko vo vapas jhadne lagi aur bahut wild tarike se lucifer ke lund ko chusne lagi

Dono 69 me ek dusre leen ho chuke the aur ab unka sawagat baarish ke sath sath ollo ne bhi karna suru kar diya tha

Ek sala baarish kam thi unki aag badhkane me ki ab olle bhi girne suru ho gaye

Jaise hi madhuri ke sareer par olle ki maar padne lagi uska aanand doguna ho gaya aur ab use khud aur intezaar nahi hua aur lucifer ke upar chad gaye

Uski aankhon me dekhte hue ek hath se uska lund pakda aur apni chut par set karke bahut pyaar se uske upar bathne lagi

Ahhhh dono ke muh se ek sath siski nikali aur fir vo siski dab gaye kyuki madhuri ne apne honth mila diye the lucifer ke honth se aur fir ek jhatke ke sath apni gand niche ki aur pura ka pura lund kisi piston ki tarah uski chut me sama gaya

Dono ke sareer me hi bijli girne lagi aur anand ke samundar me gote marne lage

Niche se lucifer halka halka dhake maar raha tha upar se madhuri apni gand hila rahi thi

Kitne mahino se dono ne es milan ka intezaar kiya tha. Lucifer to starting se hi yehi chahta tha halanki baad me uski soch badli thi lekin jab se madhuri ko lucifer ke liye aisi feelings aane lagi thi vo har pal ye moment soch kar pehle sarmati fir excited hoti fir guilty feel karne lagti

Ab baarish ke sath sath en dono ko raftaar bhi bahut tej ho gaye thi aur madhuri thodi upar hokar lucifer ko dekhne lagi

Dono ki aankhen ek dusre se hi mili hue thi jaise ek dusre ke ander jhaak rahi ho. Ek pal ke liye bhi dono me se kisi ne apni najare nahi feri

Sayad vo dono yehi chahte the ki kabhi bhi unki najar ek dusre ke liye niche nahi ho

Kareeb aadhe ghante se lucifer madhuri ko chhodte raha aur fir uski chut me hi pura ka pura khaali ho gaya

Es waqt ek alag hi tej dikh raha tha madhuri ke chehre par. Satisfaction, pyaar, respect sab kuch saaf saaf dekha ja sakta tha madhuri ke chehre par es waqt

Jisme guilt ka koe namo nisaan nahi tha

5 minutes tak dono ek dusre ki bahoo me vahi jamin par pade rahe fir
Lucifer- ek room hai pass me vaha chalo. Bimar pad jaoge nahi to yaha par maam.
Lucifer bola aur ek bahut pyaari muskaan ke sath madhuri ne ha me uski baat ka samarthan kiya….
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Agle din jab madhuri ki aankh khuli to vo apne bed par khud ko dekh par chhok gaye. Dheere dheere use kal jo hua vo yaad aata gaya aur uska chehra sarm se laal padne laga ki ek dam se bahut serious ho gaya uska chehra

Sareer me halki kampan chhad gaye aur lucifer ka devil wala roop uski aankhon ke samne tair gaya.

“Meri dunia me aap jaiso ke liye koe jagah nahi hai maam”

“Mera asli chehra jis din dekh liya us din dar se behosh ho jaogi maam”

“Majbur mat karo mujhe maam, main vaisa nahi hu jaisa aap mere bare me sochte ho”

Alag alag time me lucifer ke muh se nikle the ye sentence jo abhi uske kaano me gunj rahe the. Dar se puri safeed pad chuki thi madhuri aur temperature bhi kafi jada lag raha tha

Abhi vo apni soch me ghum thi ki uske room ka gate khula aur somiya ander aa gaye

Somiya- ab kaisi hai tumhri tabeyat?
Jaisi hi somiya ki aawaz suni madhuri apne khawabo ki dunia se bahar aae aur uski taraf sawal bhari najaro se dekhne lagi

Somiya- are subah kitni buri tarah bhukhar me kaap rahi thi tu. Vo to acha hua mujhe terr badbadane ki aawaz sun gaye aur main yaha aa gaye. Jab tabeyat kharab ho to batana chahiye na?
Halki dhaat ke sath somiya boli

Madhuri- sorry maa

Somiya- kya karu main tere es sorry ka? Aur kab aaye tu raat ko? Aisi to nahi thi madhuri tum kabhi bhi. Etni bewakoff kaise ho sakti ho?

Madhuri- sorr…

Somiya- chhup rah bilkul
Madhuri ki baat katate hue boli

Somiya- bacho ko maine school bejh diya hai aur tumhre liye khichadi bana di hai. Jaldi se fresh ho lo fir breakfast karke medicines le lena aur aaj mujhe tum bistar se bahar nahi dikhani chahiye. Total rest lena hai aaj. Pata nahi ye ladki aise kaise rah leti thi. Khud ka jara bhi dhayan nahi hai. Insaan ko khud ke liye bhi jeena hota hai par yaha to khud ki koe parvaah hi nahi hai
Somiya aise hi man me kuch kuch badbadte hue room se bahar chali gaye

Aur madhuri ke chehre par ek bahut pyaari smile aa gaye. Sayad aaj pehli baar somiya ne us par koe hak jamaya hai. Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo apne nadaan bachi ko daat rahi thi aur siksha bhi de rahi thi vo bhi ek sath

Ye muskaan jada der nahi rahi kyuki fir se lucifer ka khayal aa gaya uske dimag me aur fir se uske sareer me ek current sa dood gaya******


Lucifer- mere samne aao. Main kahta hu mere samne aao aaj. Agar aaj aap mere samne nahi aaye to kasam mujhe mere pyaar ki main es puri dunia ko nast kar dunga aur koe mujhe rok nahi payega

Lucifer- main lucifer the first born of the one and only ultimate god aaj es shristi ke rachna karne wale ko aahaan deta hu. Aao aur mera samna karo

Kisi jungle ke ekaant me lucifer aasaam ko dekhte hue jor jor se chhila raha tha. Uski aankhon me gussa nafarat revenge sab kuch saaf saaf dikh raha tha. Etna saaf ki logo ki rooh tak kaap jaye sirf usse ek baar najar milane se

Lucifer- aap jante ho lucifer ke kiye hue vaade ki kimat. Agar aaj mere hatho ne hathiyaar utha liye to es bhramaand me aisa koe nahi hoga jo mujhe rok payega. Chaaro taraf sirf aur sirf khoon bahega. Etna khoon baha dunga aaj main ki es dharti ki sari pyaas bujh jayegi lekin khoon bahna band nahi hoga

Ek baar fir lucifer gusse me dahaada lekin samne se koe response nahi aaya

Lucifer- theek hai fir yehi theek
Etna bol kar lucifer ne apne hath faila diya aur ek safeed roshini uske hatho ke charo taraf banane lagi jo uske hathiyaar prakaat hone se pehle humesha banti thi

Lekin aaj vo roshini pehle ke mukable bahut jada adheek thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo kisi se lad rahi ho ya koe us se lad raha ho aur bahar aane se rook raha ho

Vahi bahar se lucifer apni puri jaan laga raha tha aur ander se koe usse rokne ke liye apni sari shaktiya istemaal kar raha tha

Agar ye aisa hi chalta rahta to sirf es kheecha taani me ye jungle pura tabaah ho jata lekin tabhi

Ek divya roshini lucifer ke samne failne lagi. Vo roshini etni tej thi ki suraj bhi uske samne feeka dikhaye de

Suraj se kae hazar guna usne tej tha aur etna ucha kad tha ki lucifer ki to baat hi chhodo pura jungle uske samne bona dikhaye deta lag raha tha

Lucifer- pranaam mata
Lucifer apna sar jhuka kar unke pair chhuta hai

Mata- vijaye bhav

Lucifer- aapko nahi bulaya tha maine mata. Unko bulaya tha unhe bejhiye jawab chahiye mujhe

Mata- tumne shristi ke rachna karne wale ko bulaya tha esliye main aa gaye

Lucifer- vo fir se khel khel rahe hai mere sath? Ab aur nahi mata. Agar main khelne par aagya to kisi ke liye acha nahi hoga

Mata- main janti hu aur koe khel nahi khela ja raha tumhre sath. Tum aaj jo sawal karoge sab ke jawab milege tumhe. Pucho kya puchna hai tumhe

Lucifer- kyu kiya aap dono ne mere sath aisa? Aapko apne hi bete ki jindagi tabhaah karte hur bilkul bhi afsos nahi hua?

Mata- lucifer tum humare first born ho aur tumhe ek dayitva diya gaya hai jo tumhe har haal me pura karna hai. Es shrishti ki sabse khubsurat rachna ho tum

Lucifer- khubsurat? Kis angel se khubsurat rachna lag raha hu main?

Mata- tumhra dharm sthapna me bahut ahaam role hone wala hai. Jab yaha par adharm badega ek lucifer paida hoga aur uska naash karega. Vohi tumhe karna hai

Lucifer- main hi adharm hu mata. Jitna gyaan mujhe dharm ka mila hai us se bahut ache samjh gaya hu main ki mera aur dharm ka door door tak koe rishta nahi hai

Mata- ye sab hi tumhe alag banati hai. Jab waqt aaega tab tum hi sabse bade gyaani ban kar nikloge aur konse adharm ki baat kar rahe ho tum? Maine to tumhe kabhi nahi dekha adharm karte hue

Lucifer- kitni hi masoom jane gaye hai meri vajah se. Kitne jindagiya tabhah hue hai, kitne hi parivaar ke liye main kaal bana hu. Kya vo sab adharm nahi tha?

Mata- jeevan mrityu ka cycle tha vo aur tumne use pura kiya hai. Tumhre hatho aaj tak kisi nirdoosh ki jaan nahi gaye. Jo khatam hue unki jeevan cycle khatam ho gaye thi. Tumne to bas shristhi ka balance banane me madad ki hai

Lucifer- to jab dark lord logo ko maar raha hai to main use kaise shrithi ke balance se nahi jood sakte? Uske hatho jo mara unki bhi to jeevan cycle khatam ho gaye hogi na

Mata- hum andhere me humesha to nahi rah sakte na. Roshini ki jarurat to hume padti hi hai na. To dark lord ek andhera hai aur tum us andhere ko kaatne wali roshini

Lucifer- main to hell lord hu na. Andhera to mere ander basta hai fir usme aur mujhme fark kya hai?
Usne bhi khub jaane le hai aur maine bhi. Aap maan kyu nahi leti ki galtiya hue hai aapse. Aap ne hume bana to diya lekin eske anjaam ke bare me nahi socha

Mata- maine sab socha hai lucifer. Manti hu tumhri najro me main doshi hu lekin ek din tum samjh jaoge ki maine aisa kyu kiya. Us din tumhe pata chalega ki eski kitni jarurat thi

Lucifer- kitne din bache hai mere marne ke?

Mata- tum amar ho. Tumhe koe nahi maar sakta.

Lucifer- aap fir mujhe baaton ke jaal me fasa rahi ho. Main marunga ye baat aapko bhi pata hai aur mujhe bhi aur aapko ye bhi pata hai mujhe kon marega

Mata- fir bhi tum amar rahoge

Lucifer- khel rahe ho na aap firse khel mere sath?
Aur kya kya bacha kar rakha hai aapne mere liye?

Mata- mujhe pata hai tum naraaj ho, gusse me ho aur mazikeen ke jane ke baad theek se soch nahi paa rahe ho lekin lucifer ye sab dunia ki bhalae ke liye hi ho raha hai. Maine ye dunia, ye manush bahut pyaar se banaye the lekin vo ab apni hadde paar karne lag gaye hai. Kalyug aa chuka hai aur eska khatam hona bahut jaruri hai

Lucifer- aapne insaan banaye aur aapne hi unke karam likhe fir aap unhe kaise blame kar sakti ho? Unhone to vohi kiya hai jo aap unse karvana chahti thi. En sab me unki galtiya kya hai? Mujhe to koe nahi dikh rahi aapko dikh rahi hai to batao mujhe

Mata- jaisa ki maine bataya ki achai aur burai ka balance hona bahut jaruri hai lekin ab burai apni charm par pahuch gaye hai. Ache to manush hi nahi bache esliye unka naash hona jaruri hai

Lucifer- main bhi vohi puch raha hu ki kyu nahi bache ache? Kya aapne soch samjh kar nahi likha unke bare me ya fir aapse galti hue hai?

Mata- tum mujhse kya sunana chahte ho? Ye ki main galat hu?

Lucifer- main sach sunana chahta hu.

Mata- to vohi sahi. Maine tumhe banaya tha ye soch kar ki ek bahut powerful insaan jab galat raste par chala jata hai to uska anjaam kaisa hoga. Chahe vo angel hi kyu na ho lekin fir jab use pyaar milta hai to vo kaise badalta. Tumhra janam pyaar ka sahi arth samjhane ke liye hua hai. Aur abhi tum bologe ki dark lord bhi to aisa hi hai to uska jawab bhi sun lo usne apna rasta apne aap chuna hai. Esme mera koe hath nahi hai

Lucifer- jab jawab nahi pata ho to bol do ki ye to usne khud kiya hai, maine to khula chhod diya tha use. Aapki marji ke bina ek patta tak hilta nahi hai aur yaha dark lord mere hell me aakar meri mazikeen ko maar kar chala gaya aur aap dekhte rah gaye?

Mata- eda ke hatho maari gaye hai mazikeen. Agar dark lord mazikeen ko maar deta to aaj meri jagah vo khada hota yaha par aur baatein nahi yudh ho raha hota abhi

Lucifer- yudhh to abhi bhi hoga mata aur aisa yudhh hoga ki swarg lok se dev lok tak sab us manjar ko dekh kar kaap uthenge. Bahut sadiya beet gaye unhone lucifer ka rodar roop dekha nahi hai.

Mata- vinaash hoga janti hu main aur bahut jada hoga lekin ye jaruri hai ek naye dunia ki neev rakhne ke liye ye yudh bahut jaruri hai. Es se hi dharti par achae ki dobara se sthapana hogi

Lucifer- fir kisi lucifer bana kar vapas laoge? Kyuki ye lucifer to khatam hone wala hi hai

Mata- lucifer amar hai vo kabhi khatam nahi hoga

Lucifer- i want mazikeen back. Mujhe vo vapas chahiye
Mata- ye main nahi de sakti

Lucifer- main aapko yudh ke liye ahvaan de sakta hu aur aap fir usko taal nahi paoge. Jitne sapne dekhe the aapne sab ke sab dhare ke dhare rah jayenge

Mata- tum aisa nahi kar sakte

Lucifer- bilkul kar sakta hu main. Kal raat ko hi maine maam ke sath vo sab karke apni soul maari hai ab main kuch bhi kar sakta hu

Mata- aise yudh ki maang nahi karte jisme aapka harna tay ho

Lucifer- baat haar jeet ki ho hi nahi rahi. Baat ho rahi hai vinaash ki aur hum dono ke yudh me vo vinaash hoga jiski aapne kalpana bhi nahi ki hogi esliye mujhe mazikeen vapas de dijiye nahi to yudh ke liye tayar ho jaye


Mata- tumhe pata hai main chah kar bhi ye nahi kar sakti lucifer. Mazikeen ke pass soul nahi thi use ab kaise bhi vapas nahi laya ja sakta

Lucifer- main lucifer… the first born of the one and only ultimate god… challenges yo…

Mata- vahi ruk jao lucifer. Vahi ruk jao. Tum aisa nahi kar sakte. Ye dunia nast ho jayegi tumhri es jid ke chalte. Main majbur hu jo chala gaya use vapas nahi laya ja sakta. Mujhse kuch aur maang lo main tumhe de dungi lekin ye nahi.

Lucifer- aur kuch mujhe chahiye hi nahi. I challenge you…. Aur lucifer ke honth ek dusre se chipak gaye. Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi chumbak ne usko chipka diya ho. Ek sabad tak nikalna namumkeen ho gaya uske hontho se

Jaise hi lucifer ko apni halaat ka gyaan hua gusse me uska chehra laal padne laga aur devil bahar aane ki kosis karne laga

Lekin vo bhi bahar nahi aa pa raha tha. Ab jab samne shristhi ki nirmata khadi ho to uske samne kiski hi himmat hogi bahar aane ka. Vo bina kuch bole agar lucifer ko band sakti hai to vo kya nahi kar sakti

Mata- tum pehle bhi jiddi thi aur aaj bhi jiddi ho. Main tumhe mazikeen to nahi de sakti lekin aaj etne saalo baad tumne mujhe bulaya hai to bina kuch diye bina vapas nahi jaungi. Main tumhe tumhre wings vapas deti hu. Aaj ke baad tum na enhe apne sareer se hata paoge aur na enhe tumhri hifazat karne se rok paoge. Sath me eski vajah se tum HELL me vapas bhi ja paoge agar tumhe vaha kisi se milna ho to….


Hell me es waqt ek ajeeb kism ki shanti faili hue thi. Charo taraf bheed to puri khadi thi sayad pura hell hi vaha mojud tha lekin kisi ke muh se ek sabd tak nahi nikal raha tha

Un sab ke beech me ek behad khubsurat sej sajaya gaya tha jaha par mazikeen leti hue thi aur us se kuch door eda khadi hue thi

Sabki aankhon me aashu the aur ho bhi kyu nahi mazikeen ne etne barso tak un sabki hifazat jo kari thi aur aaj uski hi vajah se vaha khade sab eda ko chhod kar jinda the. Ek eda hi thi jo dark lord ke kahar se bach sakti thi baki sab ko to vo seconds me masal deta

Mazikeen ka antim vidae dene ke liye vaha sab khade the aur eda ke hatho me aag thi jiska matlab vohi es bhaar ko uthane wali thi

Bhaari kadmo se vo mazikeen ke pass ja rahi thi. Ander se to vo khud bahut toot chuki thi lekin sabke samne kaise show karti vo? Agar vo khud hi kamjor pad jayegi to fir baki sab ka kya hoga?

Jaise hi uske hath aage badhe agni dene ko vaise hi ek aawaz “RUKKKKOOOOOO” uske kaano me gunj gaye aur uske hath pair vahi tham gaye…
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Abhi jaha sab nam aankhon se khade mazikeen ke mart sareer ko dekh rahe the vo sab ghutno par bath chuke the. Najre jamin me dhas chuki thi. Kisi ki etni himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki samne khade lucifer ko ek baar najar fer kar bhi dekh le

Dar se sabka bura haal ho chuka tha. Aaj saalo baad hell lord vapas jo aaya tha aur vo aise waqt par jab uski sabse khaas sathi apne aakhiri paalo ke liye uska intezaar kar rahi thi

Aas pass ke logo par to lucifer ne bilkul dhayaan nahi diya lekin uski najar ataak gaye jab samne eda aaye

Eda uska bachpan ka pyaar aur agar sahi sabdo me bola jaye to lucifer ka pehle pyaar. Aaj bhi uski aankhon me vo masumiyat thi jo bachpan me hua karti thi. Aaj bhi uski aakhen aisi thi jo pure bharmaand ko apne ander dooba sakti thi. Tej thoda kam jarur ho gaya tha chehre se lekin vo keval mazikeen ke maut ke dukh me hua hai kal tak to tej bhi vahi tha jo humesha rahta tha

Lucifer ko yu achanaak vaha dekh kar bakiyo ki tarah eda bhi dar gaye thi. Vo bas dikha nahi paa rahi thi lekin lucifer ki aankhon me vo jo dekh rahi thi us se uski roop tak kaap ja rahi thi

Jab lucifer se uski aankhen mili to dukh aur atmaglaani se apne aap palke jhuk gaye uski

Dono me se kisi ne kuch nahi bola lekin unki khaamoshi hi hazaro sabad kah gaye. Lucifer ne hath aage badaya aur eda ne bina koe prasaan kiye misaal uske hatho me thama di

Lucifer aage bad gaya aur mazikeen ke pass pahuch gaya. Jo humesha lucifer se najar milane se bachti thi aaj bhi uski najre jhuki hue hi thi. Bas fark etna tha pehle vo lucifer ke aage khadi hokar uske sari musibaton ko apne upar le liya karti thi lekin aaj vo lucifer ke samne leti hue thi aur kuch nahi kar sakti thi

“Mujhe tumhri kasam mazikeen use etni dardnaak maut dunga ki dev lok se asur lok sab kaap uthenge aur fir tumhe vapas launga. Aisi koe chhij nahi jise lucifer na tod sake tab tak tum aaram karo. Bahut seva ki hai tumne meri.” Etna bol kar lucifer ne uske sareer ko aag ke havale kar diya

Vahi khada khada jab tak mazikeen ka sareer puri tarah raakh me badal nahi gaya vo use dekhta raha. Vaha us aag me sole dhadak rahe the aur yaha lucifer ke seene me

Bas fark etna tha ki aag jaldi shaant ho gaye lekin lucifer ke ander jo chal raha tha vo bas badhta hi ja raha tha

Lucifer- kavish kaha hai?
Jab mazikeen leen ho gaye tab lucifer pehli baar eda se bola aur jo bola use sun kar eda ek baar fir dar gaye

Reason tha uska kavish ke bare me puchna kyuki kavish ne chahe kuch bhi kiya ho lekin vo tha to ek angel hi aur ek angel ko dand dene ka hak sirf supreme ko hota hai

Agar lucifer uske pass pahucha to maut se baddhtar halaat kar dega vo kavish ki jiski vajah se lucifer firse musibaat me pad sakta tha

Lekin mazikeen ki maut etni bhaari ho chuki thi eda par ki usne es bare me dobara socha bhi nahi aur lucifer ko rasta dikhane lagi

Lucifer- open that gate. Lucifer khada hai yaha par jisne vo gate langha samjho mar gaya
Hell ka gate jo dark lord ne tod diya tha use dekhte hue lucifer bola kyuki kuch kabil karigaro ne use theek kar diya tha aur vapas band karne ja rahe the lekin lucifer ka aadesh sunte hi unke kadam tham gaye aur turant gate khol bhi diya gaya

Eda ne ek baar mud kar lucifer ki taraf dekha fir gate ki taraf aur fir apna sar hilate hue aage bad gaye

Ek kamre me kavish bandha hua pada tha aur sareer par jagah jagah jhakhamo ke nisaan the. Jab use yaha bandha gaya tha tab vo behosh tha lekin ab use hosh aa chuka tha aur hosh me aate hi usne sabse pehla chehra jo dekha vo tha lucifer ka

Pant me mootne jaisi halaat ho gaye thi uski. Usne kabhi nahi socha tha ki dark lord use yaha akela chhod jayega aur agar chhod bhi gaya to use lucifer ka samna karna padega

Dar se thar thar kaapne lag gaya tha kavish aur hell ki garmi se uske mathe par pasine aane suru ho gaye the

Vo bolna chahta tha lekin sabd uske muh se nikal nahi rahe the. Aisa lag raha tha jaise lucifer ko dekhte hi uski jabaan ne uska sath chhod diya hai aur soul abhi bas chhodne wali hi hai

Eda ne kabhi kisi ko torcher nahi kiya tha aur na vo kabhi karna chahti thi. Use aisi koe bhi chhij pasand nahi thi lekin aaj vo vahi khadi rahi. Uske pair ek second ke liye bhi nahi dagmagaye ye jante hue bhi ki abhi kavish ke sath kya hone wala hai

Vo kavish ko bhi vaise hi tadapte hue dekhna chahti thi jaise mazikeen tadapte hue mari thi.

Lucifer ka hath aage badha aur bandha hua kavish apne aapko piche karne ke liye hath pair chalane laga lekin vo kamyaab hota bhi to kaise hota?

Kyuki jo hath aage badha tha vo hath lucifer ka nahi devil ka tha. Aur devil ke hatho ke nakule nakhoon kavish ke sareer me ghusne lage aur dard se vo tadapne laga

Jis jis jagah chot lagne par koe mar nahi sakta us us jagah par lucifer ke nakhoon sareer ke aar paar ho chuke the aur kavish ki chhikhe pure hell me gunjane lagi

“Bhai aaa..ahhh bbhbh…bhaai maaf kardo” badi muskil se vo etna hi bol paya aur fir chhikhne chhilane lag gaya

“Main sab bata dunga bhai mujhe eda ke havale kar do” apni sari himmat jutta kar vo bola

Lekin lucifer se en sab chhij se koe matlab hi nahi tha. Vo to kavish ke chehre par jo dard mandra raha tha use dekh kar apna dard kam karne ki kosis kar raha tha

Kavish ke pure sareer ko chhalni kar diya tha lucifer ne aur vo lagbhag admara ho gaya tha

Tabhi vo kavish ke piche aaya aur firse apna devil hath uski pith par rakh kar kuch mantra padne laga

“Nahhhhhiiiiiiiii” jaise hi use samjh aaya ki abhi kya hone wala hai kavish bahut jor se chhilaya aur jitni bhi usme jaan bachi thi vo sari ikkhata karke bachne ka prayaash karne laga

Lekin aaj devil aur lucifer ek sath ho chuke the aaj to use supreme bhi nahi bacha sakta tha aur

Ek behatreen aawaz se kavish ke wings khul gaye aur kavish ke aankhon se aashu bahne suru ho gaye the

Eda- nahi lucifer. Tum aisa nahi kar sakte eske parinaam bahut bure honge

Lekin lucifer ne jaise eda ki baaton ko suna hi nahi aur uska dusra hath bhi devil wala nikal aaya aur

“AHHHHHHAHHHHHHAHHHHAHHHHAHHHH” ek dil dhala dene wali chhikh nikali kavish ke muh se aur behosh ho gaya

Uske wings lucifer ke hatho me aa gaye the jo khoon se lath path ho chuke the. Lucifer ne usko jamin par feka aur lighter se aag laga di use

Eda ki to saase hi atak gaye the samne ka najara dekh kar. Lucifer ne ek angel ki wings ukhaad feki thi aur ye swarg lok me bahut bada paap mana jata tha. Lekin ab lucifer ko anjaam ki koe chinta nahi thi. Uske sath aur kya hi bura ho sakta tha?

Jo chhije lucifer ne sahi thi uske samne aage agar kuch hota bhi to vo mamuli hi lagta.

Eda- tum es se sare raaj jaan sakte the aur ye bata bhi deta lekin tumne aisa kyu kiya?

Lucifer- raaj janane ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi hai. I will tear him into pieces and thats final. Mujhe kisi se kuch bhi janane ki jarurat nahi hai

Eda- mazikeen ki maut meri knife se hue hai
Kuch seconds ka pause leke eda ne lucifer ko vo bata diya jiske bare me lucifer pehle se hi janta tha

Lucifer- hathiyaar se jada mujhe use chalne ki vajah se jada dilchaspi hai aur vajah mera bhai hai. Vo abhi kisi bill me chhup kar batha hoga aur matam mana raha hoga. Jis din vo bill se bahar aaya vo din uske liye aakhiri din hoga.

Etna bol kar lucifer kamre se bahar aa gaya aur uske piche piche eda bhi

Eda- ab kaha ja rahe ho tum?
Lucifer- jaha se aaya hu. Esko bahar fek dena ilaaz karke. Ye marna nahi chahiye bas tadapta rahna chahiye kayamat tak

Eda- lucifer???

Lucifer- ab meri yaha koe jagah nahi hai. Ye tumhra hell hai sambhalo esko. Kabhi jarurat pade to aawaz de dena main pass me hi hu tumhre
Aur lucifer ke wings bahar aa gaye jo eda ko bata rahe the ki vo jane wala hai

Pata nahi usko kya hua vo bhagi aur lucifer ke piche se galle lag gaye

Lucifer kuch nahi bola eda kuch nahi boli bas dono shanti se aise hi khade rahe

Eda ko bhi saalo baad aaj thoda sakoon mahsus hua tha lekin lucifer ne jada der rahne nahi diya aur vaha se ud gaya

Nam aankhon se ek baar aasmaan ki taraf dekha eda ne aur fir hell ke ander chali gaye….


Somiya- ab kaisi tabeyat hai tumhri?
Ek hath me coffee mug liye somiya madhuri ke room me pahuchi

Madhuri- ab theek hai maa
Somiya- kuch pareshan lag rahi ho?

Madhuri- huh? Nahi. Aisa to kuch bhi nahi hai bas thodi thakaan feel ho rahi hai

Somiya- pati to tera hai nahi ab to thakaan kiski vajah se ho rahi hai? Somiya ne thoda ghoor kar us se pucha to apne aap hi madhuri ki aankhen jhuk gaye

Somiya- agar aaram karna hai to aaram karle nahi to bahar aaja. Ye bacho ne tumhre bare…..
“Mummmy mummmyyy kya ho gaya aapko?” Somiya apni baat khatam karti us se pehle hi alia bhagte hue uski gaud me chad gaye

Madhuri- meri bachi. School se kab aaye? Uske baal sahlate hue puchti hai
Alia- mujhe to bahut time ho gaya. Dadi ne aaj hume bahut tasty sandwiches bana kar khilae. Main aapke liye la rahi thi lekin dadi ne mana kar diya bola aapki tabeyat theek nahi hai. Kya ho gaya aapko?
Ek saas me hi pure din ki baat bol gaye jis se madhuri ke chehre par muskaan tair gaye

Madhuri- bas thodi thakaan. Dadi ko jada pareshan to nahi kiya aapne?
Alia- yessss bahut kiya aur bahut karungi. Meri dadi vapas aaye hai ab main unse pura badla lungi

Alia ki baat par somiya ke chehre par bhi ek bahut badi smile naach gaye aur vo bhi pyaar se alia ke gaal sahlane lag gaye

Madhuri- tumhre bhaiya aur didi kaha hai?
Alia- vo homework kar rahe hai

Madhuri- tum kyu nahi kar rahi?
Alia- main school me hi sab khatam kar aaye thi. Ab to main aur dadi khelenge. Hai na dadi?

Somiya- bilkul my princess. Hum bahut khelnge ab mumma ko aaram karne do vo THAKI hue hai
Ek taana kaste hue somiya alia ko leke vaha se chali gaye aur madhuri jo pichle dino hua uske bare me sochne lag gaye

Ab glaani ke bhaav kuch jada hi aane lage the use aur ye soch kar to aur bhi bura lagta tha ki uske chhote chhote bache hai fir bhi usne aisa kaam kiya

Halaanki lucifer ke chehre ka dar ab lagbhag khatam ho gaya tha lekin regret ne ab dar ki jagah le li thi

Tabhi vo sochti ki jo hua acha hi hua hai kyuki usne apne pyaar ke sath vo sab kiya hai fir sochti hai ki ye to ek tarfa pyaar hai. Jo bhi hua bahut galat hua aur agar jab uske bache bade ho jayenge aur unhe pata chalenga to vo kya sochenge apni maa ke bare me?

Bahut sare khayaal uske dimag me chal rahe the lekin en sab me ek aur baat ye thi ki madhuri bilkul relaxed lag rahi thi. Soch to vo bahut sari chhije rahi thi aur khub chhije uske dimag me ghum rahi thi lekin vo fir bhi bilkul bhi stressed nahi thi.

Aisa lag raha tha jaise lucifer ne us raat uska sara stress nichood liya ho. Jaise hi ye khayal uske dimag me aaya ek baar fir sarm se uska chehra laal gulabi ho gaya

Tabhi uski najar side me rakhe apne phone par gaye aur uske hath apne aap phone ki taraf badhne lage

Lock screen jaise hi on hue upar hi use dikh gaya ki lucifer ka koe message aaya hua tha

Dhadhkate dil se usne message khola aur

“So ab pata chal hi gaya aapko mere bare me. Now what? Pyaar bacha hai kuch ya fir dar ne jagah le li hai. Maine kaha tha aapse door raho mujhse lekin aap maani nahi. Ho gaye na ab aapko mujhse nafraat? Pehle aapko dekha tha tab ek baar me hi aapki sundarta me kho gaya fir aapke charitar ka kayal ho gaya. Uske baad thaan liya tha chahe kuch bhi ho jaye aapke aur aapke parivaar ko dunia bhar ki khushi lakar dunga lekin aapse barabar ki duria bhi banata rahunga. Lekin aisa ho nahi paya. Aapme ek kisam ki chhumbak hai jo mujhe apne aap hi aapke taraf khechne lagti hai. Bahut rokta tha main aur bahut rokta hu lekin jab aap mere samne aati to meri sari mahnat ek second me kharab ho jati hai. Aapki saadgi, aapki masumiyaat, aapka paak dil sab mujhe apne aap hi aapki aur akarshit kar deta hai. Kyu ho aap etni achi? Kyu? Kya aapko mere ander lakh buraiya nahi dikhi? Fir aapne unhe najarandaaj kyu kiya? Kyu mujhe pyaar ka rasta dikhaya? Mere liye to vohi acha hota agar aap mujhe starting me hi apne se door fek deti. Ab dekho kya kar diya maine, kar diya na aapka charitar kharaab. Esme aapki koe galti nahi hai ma’am, sab kuch meri hi vajah se hua hai main hi ye chahta tha aur maine hi eske liye aapko majbur bhi kiya aur etna kar diya ki jab aakhiri waqt par main piche hatna chaha to aap nahi hat paye. May be you will hate me now but its okay aadaat hai mujhe. Sayad ab main aapke samne na aau, mujh me himmat nahi hai aapka samna karne ki esliye mujhe maaf kar dena. Alia aur bacho ko mera pyaar dena. Bolna maamu unhe behad muhobaat karte hai.
Alvida
Lucifer
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