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Fantasy Love&Hate(love,thriller,romantic, action)

Ap ka favourite cracter in story??


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UPDATE 4


khana khane ke baad dono chale jaye hai aur kuch dair park me beth jate hai srdiyon ke din the dono sun bath le rahe the


phir Arman waha maditaion me beth jata hai aur Ahmad apni fight technique Karne lag jata hai


AB AAGE


phir wo dono wapis apne cell me chale jate hai jaise he Ahmad roz Arman ko training deta sath me khud bhi karta



dekhte he dekhte 8 saal guzar ge


Zara ap ko bata du in 8 saalo me kia huwa in short


Arman ke ghar walo ke dil me nafrat ke ilawa kuch bhi nahi tha yaha tak ke us ke bhai Behan bhi use bhool bye the


Farah ki shadi ho gyi thi lekin abhi bhi ye dukh tha ke
wo ghar walo ke dil se Arman ke liye nafrat nahi nikal saki

(writer: oye reader goor se parna nikal likha hai daal nahi


reader:oye chal oye tujh se jaise likhne me kabhi galti nahi huwi


writer: ye bhi thhek kaha sorry)

in tha jail


Arman: bhai april ko hum yaha se nikal jaye ge


Ahmad: han yar nikalne ke baad to chala Jana apni family ke pass aur yaad rakhna 11th 12th ke paper he may me tiyari rakhna paper me ache number se pass hona hai bus paper wale din he hum mille ge baad me alag tujhe pata hai there saath ye 8 saal kesay nikal ge pata he nahi chala laga he nahi jail me hon bus aik request hai mujhe bhoolne mat


ye KEH ker Ahmad ki aankhe num hi gayi


Ahmad: tujhe pata hai me hamesa kehta tha mera koi bhai nahi hai tune mujhe sage bhai se bhi zada mana lekin kehte hai na


"4 din ki chandni phir andheri raat hai"


Ahmad: chandni to dekh li ab andheri raat ki baari hai mujh se koi galti huwi ho to maf kar dena


ye KEH kar Ahmad Rone laga


Arman ne pehli baar Ahmad ko rote huwe dekha tha


Arman Ahmad ke ansoo ponchate huwe


Arman: kis ne kaha hum alag ho jaye ge ap to mere bhai baap maa sab kuch ho ap ne sab ki kami pori ki hai pata nahi me yaha kesay rehta lekin ap ne jail ko bhi mere liye jannat bana diya you are best brother in the world


ye KEH ker wo Ahmad ke gale lag gya


Arman: mein ap ko kabhi nahi choru ga ap hamesha mere saath raho ge koi Hume alag nahi ker sakta


aise he dono kafi dair tak gale lage rehte hai


in dono ko aj bohat sakoon mil raha tha gale mil ke aisa nahi tha wo pehle kabhi gale nahi page


lekin aj unhe alag he maza mil raha tha jaise bhooke ko roti mil gayi ho


Ahmad:haste huwe) chal ab zada senty mat ho aur sun


Arman: g boliye


Ahmad: yaha se nikalne ke baad hamare sab ke sab criminal record khatam ho jaye ge paper me baad me result tak me papa ka business join karo ga aur to mere saath partnership me rahe ga aur koi mana wana nahi karna tu ne


Arman: theek hai


aise he wo dono apne future ke baare me sochte hai


in ka is waqt introduction


NAME: ARMAN
AGE:17
EYES: BROWN
TRAINING KI WAJHA SE SIX PACK AIBS BICEPS 38 KI CHATI GREAT LOOK VERY HANDSOME


NAME: AHMAD
AGE: 18
EYES: BLUE
BODY: 8 PACK AIBS BICEPS 38 KI CHATI CUTE FACE

introduction end


aise he aik mahina auar guzar jat hai aj dono bohat khush the q Kay aj kitne dino baad wo bahir ki duniya dekhne wale the


jaise he unho ne bahir kadam rakha tez hawai chalne lagi aik eagle aa ker Ahmad ke kandhe per beth gaya


Ahmad: are betu tu agya jaldi se ghar ja me aa raha hu


wo eagle waha se chala gya


Arman: ye kia tha


Ahmad: ye mera eagle he me ne is KA naam betu rakha hai raftar aur tofan nahi aye abhi tak


tabhi waha per do ghore ate hai aik kala aur aik safaid aur Ahmad ke saamne ruk jate hai dono ko koi lene to aya abhi tha q Kay kisi ko pata he nahi tha


Ahmad: Chal beth ja aj ghore ki sawari karwata hu


Arman bjo khusi khusi beth jata hai aur us ki gardan me banhien dal deta hai
phir wo ghore bhagne lag jate hai wo jangal me enter ker lete hai Aur full speed me bhagge hai


un ki speed bohat zada tez thi wo bhagte bhagte Ahmad ke ghar ke pass wale road per jate hai aur WO sidha Ahmad ke ghar jate hai


Ahmad: aisa ker aj yahi rukte hai kal chale ge tere ghar


Arman: ye kon sa akele ap ka ghar hai hum dono ka hai


(friends arman ke dil me koi lalach nahi hai pehle he bata deta hu aur Ahmad bhi janta tha Arman ko ghar pause se koi farak nahi parta tha )


phir wo dono baage karte huwe darwaze per pohanchate hai aur knock karte hai andar se aik 50 saal ka Buddha admi nikalta hai


aadmi: g kis se milna hai


Ahmad: khan chahca


ye KEH ker Ahmad in ke gale lag jata hai


khan: mera bacha Ahmad agaya tu tujhe nahi pata kitna tarsa hu tujhe dekhne ke liye


khan chahcha ki aankhe bhi num ho jati hai kuch dair baad dono alag hote hai

khan: arman ki taraf ishara ker k) ye kon hai beta


Ahmad: chahcha ye mera chota bhai hai Arman


khan: chonk ker) chota bhai lekin...


Ahmad: khan chacha ye mera SAGA to nahi lekin sago se bhi bar ke hai


khan: aao beta


aur Arman ki taraf banhien khol dete hai Arman bhi un se gale milta hai Arman ko bohat aram mil raha tha kuch dair baad dono alag hote hai


Ahmad: khan chacha mera kamra saf hai kia


khan: beta ap ka pora ghar saf hai is ki roz safai karwata hu main


Ahmad: shukriya khan chacha


khan: chacha bhi kehta hai sorry bhi bolta hai chal tu ja ker araam ker me khana bna deta hu


Arman: me ap ke saath reh sakta aik kamre me


Ahmad: theek hai chacha hum araam karte hai


khan: theek hai beta


phir dono andar chale jate hai raste me Ahmad aik kamre ke saamne ruk jata hai kuch dair dekhne ke baad wo andar chala jata hai andar kadam rakhte he us ki aankho me aansoo aa jate hai aur much se apne ap nikal jata hai


Ahmad: maa,papa


Ahmad bed ke pass jata hai wo aik aik cheez ko bohat dhiyan se dekh raha tha use apna bachpan yad aa gya


phir Ahmad bed per let kar Rone lag jata hai us ke piche arman ne jab Ahmad ki ye halat dekhi to use chup karwane ke liye aage barhane laga


tabhi us ke kandhe per aik hath ata hai Arman piche dekhta hai to khan chacha the aur WO naa me ishara ker rahe the jaise kehna chahte ho


"beta use Rone de mat chup karwao use"
Boht zabardast update tha bhaiagar akhir ma emotional kar diya yar chalo khair ha ab arman ka sath daikhte han kitna bura us ki family karti ha us ka sath phir ahmad un sab ki band bajata ha
 
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Arman ke ghar jaane per gharwaalon ka reaction to pata hai par aarman aur Ahmad ka kya reaction hota hai dekhana hai.
Badhiya update hai.
Bhai sach kaho to me bhi exited hu
 
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Sorry friends thora busy hu aj update nahi de sakta kal update aye gi
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UPDATE 5


Ahmad wahi bed per lait ker Rona shuro kar deta hai


Arman ne jaise he ye dekha wo Ahmad ko chup karwane ke liye aage barha tabhi Arman ke kandhe per aik jat ata hai Arman piche dekhta hai to khan chacha khare the aur naa me ishara ker rahe the jaise kehna chahte ho


" beta mat chup karwa Ahmad ko Rone do"


AB AAGE


khan Arman ko apne saath bahir le ge andar Ahmad rota raha tadapta raha


bahir aa ker


Arman: chacha ap ne mujhe roka q abhi Bhai ko hamare sahare ki zarorat hai


khan: beta us larke 10 saal tak ansoo nikalne se roke hai ye ansoo us per bojh he uter Jane de ye bojh us ke upper se


Arman: num Ankho se) lekin Bhai kesay tarap rahe hai mujh me himmat nahi.hai unhe is halat me dekhne ki


khan: beta ye kuch dair ki tarap he ye he us ki puri zindagi ka chain he agar abhi bhi na rota andar he andar wo ko khatam kar leta


Arman dobara andar ki taraf chal deta hai


khan: kidhar ja rahe ho beta


Arman: Bhai ke pass


khan: lekin.....


Arman: khan ki baat bich me kat ker) bhaiya kehte the khusi ke moke par shamil hone me bhale he reh jao lekin gum ke moke par hamesha shamil hone chahiye


Arman: apna wo nahi hota jo khusiya hamre sath manae bal ke apna wo hota hai jo hamra gum bhi hamre sath manae is waqt unhe aik kandhe ki zarorat hai wo duniya me khud ko akelay samjh rahe hai lekin Hume unhe batana ho ga ke in ke apne bhi hai us duniya me jin ke saath wo apna gum bant sakte hai


Arman: Rone se in ka bojh zaroor halka ho ga lekin un ke andar ki tanhai nahi khatam ho GI Hume wo tanhai khatam karni hai me to ja raha hu ap aana chaho ge


khan: num Ankho se) tu ne sabit kar diya tu sirf kahne ke liye nahi hakikat me us ka Bhai hai bilkul aik jaisi soch hai tum dono ki


Arman bus Halka sa hans deta hai phir wo dono andar jate hai Ahmad ke abhi bhi ansoo nikal rahe the Arman ne ja ker Ahmad ke kandhe per hath rakha


tabhi foran Ahmad Arman ke gale lag ker phot phot ke Rone lag jata hai


Arman Ahmad ka sir sehla raha tha phir Arman bed ke sath kamar jo ker beth jata hai


aur Ahmad ka sir apni goad me rakh deta hai aur us balo me hath pherne lag jata hai jiss se Ahmad ko bepana sakoon hasil hota hai aur WO wahi per soo jata hai Arman bhi niche ho ker Ahmad ke sath gale mil ker soo jata hai
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kuch dair khan dono ka pyar dekh ker khush hota hai


khan: man me) kitna pyar hai dono me sach kahte hai rishta khoon ka nahi ahsaas ka hota hai meri dua hai dono khush rahe


phir khan waha se chala jata hai d
lunch ki tiyari shuro ker deta hai


(INTRO

NAME:ROSHAN KHAN
AGE:50
BODY: FITNEES ME HAI KHUD KO MOTA NAHI HONE DIA ABHI BHI KISI JAWAN LARKE SE LARE USE NANI YAD DILA DE
RELATION: GHAR KA PURANA WAFADAR MULAZIM)

dono Bhai bohat chain ki nind so rahe the phir khan unhe lunch ke liye bulane ata hai phir pehle Ahmad aur phir Arman fresh hote hai kapre to un ke pass the nahi


is liye unho ne wahi puarane kapre pehan liye phir wo lunch ke liye aa jate hai
at lunch table


khan: ab kia Karne ki Sochi hai aage tum dono ne


Ahmad: abhi to 2 din baad exam hai phir us ke baad Arman ke ghar jaye ge phir business dekhe ge


khan: good acha aisa karo aj ap dono shopping per chale jao (phir khan Ahmad ko aik credit card deta hai) ye ap ka card hai


Ahmad: thek hai khan chacha ap ke pass koi bike wagaira hai kia


khan: han garage me park ki hai thori porani hai tumhe to pata hai mujhe chalna zada pasand hai aur main ne Jana bhi kaha hota tha


Ahmad: koi baat nahi khan chacha hum kon se koi mehlo se aye hai hamre liye ye he kafi hai


phir dono garage me jate hai bike ki halat dekhte hai us per mitti Jami huwi thi jaise salo se wo yahan park hai
th


Arman: ab kia kare ye to shayad chale bhi na


Ahmad: chal aa ja mil ke saf karte hai


phir dono bike saf karte hai kuch halki repairing karte hai jiss me un ke kapre gande ho jate hai


phir dono mall ki taraf nikal parte hai wo 8 saal baad bahir ki duniya dekh rahe the dono bohat khush the


phir wo poch pucha ke mall pohanch jate hai phir wo dono mall ke andar jate hai kuch dair ghoomne ke baad wo aik shop ki taraf chal parte


chalte chalte Ahmad galti se aik larki se takra jata hai


chataak


larki Ahmad ke thaper Marti hai


Larki: bloody rascal


Arman aage barhane lagta hai Ahmad use ROK deta hai


larki: larki dekhi nahi aa jate hai tang Karne (phir us ki nazar un ke kapro per jati hai un kapre gande chehre per grease lagi huwi thi aur dono ne glasses pehne huwe the) aukat bhi aise mall me aane ki pata nahi kaha se aa jate hai sale gareeb


ye KEH ker larki aur us ki dost waha se chali jati hai


Arman: Bhai ap ne mujhe roka q dekha nahi us ne kaisa behaved kia


Ahmad: zaroori ye nahi log hamre saath kia karte hai zaroori ye hai hum i
UN ke saath kia karte hai aj us ka din tha aik din mera ho ga ab ye mere upar hai ke me us din ko kesay istmal karte hai


Arman: sahi hai bhayia


Ahmad: lekin yaad rakhna glati aur jurm me bohat difference hai


Arman: OK Bhai


phir dono aage chale jate hai apne liye kapre kharidne 30 ghante baad wo mall se parking me ge waha us larki ko kuch larke tang ker rahe the waha aur bhi log the lekin SB sirf free ka tamasha dekh rahe the


aadmi: kia maal hai Teri to gand marooooooo.....


huwa jab wo aadmi us larki ke baare me comments ker raha tha usi waqt us ki gand per aik laat pari aur ye kissi aur ne nahi Ahmad ne mari


aadmi: b.c mujhe Mara pakro ise Ahmad apne hath piche kr leta hai


Ahmad: me touch bhi nahi karo ga mar le agar mar sakta hai


wo 6 gunde phir aik bhag ker ata hai wo Ahmad ke face per punch marne wala he hota hai


tabhi Ahmad ke piche se aik hath aya us ne us aadmi ka haath pakar liya phir wo hath ko dabane laga jiss se aadmi ki cheeke nikal parti hai


tabhi Arman Ahmad ke piche se nikalta hai


Ahmad: mein ne touch bhi nahi kia.....


phir Arman dosare hath se us ke pet per punch Marta hai wo aadmi kareeb 10 meter door gira us ke muh se khoon nikalne lag gya


tabhi do log aur Ahmad ko Marne ate hai lekin un ki badkismati Arman ne dono ke sir per punch mara jis se kuch dair ke liye in ka sir dard Karne lag jata hai


tabhi Arman ne un dono ke hath tor diye phir 2 log aur ate hai lekin wo Ahmad ko Arman ko Marne ki koshis karte hai


Arman ne dono ke punch block kar ke un ke pet per kick mari aur WO wahi per dhair ho gye


phir wo aadmi jis ne us larki per comments kiye the wo Arman ke pas ata hai


Aadmi: mujhe maf ker do plz mujhe maf ker do


jab wo Arman ke bilkul kareeb aa jata hai to wo aik dum se aik chaku nikal ker Arman per hamla karta hai


lekin Arman us ke chehre per thapar Marta hai thapar itni zor se laga tha us ke ke hat se chaku choot gya aur us ke honto se khoon nikalne lag jata hai


phir Arman us ko jam ke Marta hai jab tak wo adh mara nahi ho gya phir wo dono apni bike le ker nikal jate hai


larki: man me) waise larka(Ahmad) he bara cute phir wo bhi apni car me beth ker chali jati hai








 
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