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Chapter 3 - Qaatil

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Word Count: 3510
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Subah ke kareeb 5 baje, jab suraj bhi dharti ke anchal me chupa hua tha. Tabb Sakshi uthkar apni Exercise kar rahi thi, kareeb 1 ghante ki kadi exercise ke baad Sakshi Fresh hokar Breakfast kar rahi thi, use apne kaam par jane ke liye kafi waqt tha, lekin use bilkul bhi chain nahi mil raha tha. Akhir kar Sakshi ne apna Laptop open kar hi diya or Qaatil ke bare me aage ki chaan bin karne me lagg gayi.

Sakshi (mann me): is Qaatil ne jin logo ko mara he, un sab par koi na koi Criminal Records darj he.... Mujhe lagta he iski dushmani kisi Gangster se hogi.....

Kafi der takk Sakshi ko koi bhi khas jankari hasil nahi ho payi, lekin tabhi Sakshi ko kuch sujhta he.

Sakshi (mann me): wait.... 2 din pehle Police ko raste par Gold Biscuits ke Boxes mile the... Or ye kaam koi chota Criminal to kabhi nahi kar sakta... Shayad iske piche bhi is Qaatil ka haath ho?

Ab Sakshi ka dhyan ghadi par chala gaya, usne paya ke use ab nikalna chahiye. Sakshi apne Laptop ke saath apne kaam par nikal gayi. Kuch der baad wo CBI Office pahoch gayi. Anant ko ane me kuch waqt tha. Isliye wo Anant ka intezar karne lagi, tabhi waha Sana agayi.

Sana: Good Morning Sakshi....
Sakshi: Good Morning Ma'am....
Sana: C'mon Sakshi, mene tumse kaha na mujhe ye Ma'am or sab sunn me ki adat nahi he... just call me Sana....
Sakshi: lekin....
Sana: what lekin, ulta is Mission me tum in charge ho, to hume hi aapko Ma'am kehna padega....
Sakshi: nahi nahi..... Aisa Bilkul nahi he.... Aap yaha apni kabiliyat se ayi ho, itne salo ki mehnat kar ke aapne ye mukam hasil kiya he. Or me.... Mujhe pata he Anant Sir ki Psychology, unhone kuch soch samajh kar hi mujhe CBI me shamil karwaya he... Warna CBI Officer bann na koi mamuli chiz nahi he....
Sana: Bilkul galat Sakshi.... Anant sir ne tumhe tumhari kabiliyat ke chalte CBI Officer banaya he. Wo jante he ke Aksh ko pane ke liye tum apna sabkuch daav par laga sakti ho, or uske chalte CBI ko bhi ek Qaatil ko pakadna asaan hoga.... To ye matt sochna ke tum yaha bass kisi karan warsh ayi ho. Tum yaha maksad lekar ayi ho... Or wo maksad CBI ke liye bhi fayde mand he, or yahi wajah he ke tum aaj yaha ho....
Wo aage akar Sakshi ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehti he.
Sana: chalo ab me chalti hu, kuch zaruri kaam he... And yaad rakhna ayinda mujhe Ma'am matt bulana. Koi budhiya nahi hu me.....
Sakshi: Okay....
Fir Sana apne kaam ke liye nikal gayi, waha kuch der baad Anant bhi agaya tha. Sakshi sabse pehle ja kar Anant se milti he.

Sakshi: sir mujhe abhi On Field jakar Qaatil ke bare me jankari jutani hogi....
Anant: On Field? Jaha se Qaatil ki CCTV footage mili he, waha par or koi CCTV camera nahi he... Or wo rasta bhi Middle City me he to waha ja kar tum.....
Sakshi: no sir.... Darasal mujhe doubt he ke jo 2 din pehle Police ne Gold Biscuits baramad kiye he, waha se hume Qaatil se juda koi clue mil sakta he.
Anant: Okay Sakshi, Go Ahead....
Sakshi: Okay....
Anant: or ha Sakshi, apne saath Sana ko le jana.
Sakshi: sir Sana apne kaam me busy he, or me akeli jakar bass kuch jankari jutane ki koshish kar lungi...
Anant: thik he.... Go Ahead

Anant ki hami milte hi Sakshi waha se apni gadi lekar Us Police Station ke paas chali jati he, jaha Police ne un sare Gold Biscuits ko baramad kiya tha. Sakshi apni car park kar ke Police Station ke andar agayi, lekin yaha mahol kuch alag hi tha, Police wale kaam chhod kar baki sab kar rahe the. Koi Table par per dalkar aram kar raha tha, to koi apas me galiya de dekar baate kiye ja rahe the. Yaha ka mahol Police Station se zyada ek taporiyo ka adda sa lagg raha tha. Khair, Sakshi aage akar ek Police Inspector ke samne khadi ho gayi. Jo itmenan se apne Mobile me gum tha.

Sakshi: Excuse Me..... Mujhe SHO (Police Station In charge) se milna he.....
Police: wo to abtak aye nahi.....
Wo apna Mobile chalate hue jawab deta he.
Sakshi: kabtak ayenge wo?
Police: unki marzi he.... Jab chahe tabb ayenge.
Uske jawab se Sakshi ko bahot Gussa ajata he.
Sakshi: Call Him Now.....
Wo kafi Sakht lehze me kehti he, lekin ispar wo Inspector Ubal jata he.
Police: tum ho kon jo yaha akar mujhe order de rahi ho? Kaha na SHO sahab abtak nahi aye....
Wo gusse me khade hokar Sakshi se kehta he. Jispar Sakshi apna CBI ki ID nikal kar use dikha deti he. Ab ja kar us Inspector ke taav badal gayi. Wo ID dekh kar bilkul chup ho gaya. Or waha mojud baki sab Police walo ko bhi ishara kar diya.
Police: I'm Sorry wo....
Sakshi: jaldi se SHO ko call kar ke yaha bula lijiye....
Wo Inspector ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
Police: ji abhi karta hu.....
Or fir us Inspector ne SHO ko call laga kar bata diya ke CBI ki Officer yaha kuch kaam se ayi he.

Kareeb 20 minutes ke intezar ke baad akhir kar SHO dauda dauda Police Station me pahoch gaya.

SHO: I'm Really Sorry aapko wait karwane ke liye.... darasal me......
Sakshi: Already bahot waqt kharab ho gaya he.... Kaam ki baat kare?
Wo SHO ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
SHO: ha... Kahiye....
Sakshi: mujhe us jagah le chaliye jaha aapko wo Gold Biscuits ke Boxes mile the.... Or us case ko ab CBI apne under le rahi he, to please sari Formalities complete kar dijiyega....
SHO: Okay.....
Fir SHO Sakshi ko lekar waha chala gaya jaha wo Good Boxes Aksh ne daale the. Sakshi yaha waha nazar dalkar kisi saboot ko dhund ne me lagi thi, lekin ye sara ilaka ek khali jagah me shamil tha, jis wajah se yaha koi bhi saboot mil pana mushkil tha. Lekin tabhi Sakshi ki nazar dur bani ek under construction Building par chali gayi.
Sakshi: aapne koi saboot dhund ne ki koshish nahi ki?
SHO: yaha kese koi saboot mil pata? Yaha to koi CCTV bhi nahi laga he.... Humne to Police Station ke CCTV check kiye, lekin usme to koi bhi nishan nahi mila....
Sakshi: aapne us Construction Site par puchtach ki?
SHO: waha...... N..... Nahi.....
Sakshi: iska Matlab ya to aap apna kaam laparwahi se kar rahe he, ya aap ke upar bhi is Maal ko hadap lene wale insan ka dabav he... Jisme kuch hissa aapko bhi milega... Me sahi keh rahi hu na?
Uski baat sunkar SHO ke tote udd gaye, kyu ke SHO or uske upari adhikari milkar is maal ko hadapna chahte the. Isliye unhone abtak is case me koi chan bin nahi ki thi.
SHO: na.... Nahi.... Aisi... Aisi baat nahi he wo....
Sakshi: aapki halat dekh kar mujhe mera jawab mil gaya..... Khair.... Ab aapke upari adhikariyo se keh dijiye ke is baar haram ki kamayi ghar nahi apayegi.....
Uski baat sunkar SHO Sharminda sa apna sar jhuka kar khada ho gaya.

Sakshi ne SHO ko wapis Police Station bhej diya is Case ki legal formalities puri karne ke liye. Or khud us Construction Site par chali jati he. Waha par sab log apne kaam me lage the, Sakshi akar Security Guard ke samne khadi ho gayi.

Sakshi: Ji me CBI se ayi hu, aapse kuch baat karni thi....
CBI ka naam sunkar Guard thoda ghabra gaya.
Guard: madam, hum kuch nahi kiye..... Hum to yaha bass Naukri karte he....
Sakshi: nahi... Nahi.... Aap dariye matt. Me kisi or Case ke silsile me sirf aapse kuch jankari jutane ke liye ayi hu..
Guard: thik he ji.....
Sakshi: aapke kaam ka waqt kya he?
Guard: madam wo to har 3 din baad badalta rehta he, 3 din hum Raat ki shift karte or baki 3 din subah ki....
Sakshi: aapko pata he kuch din pehle kuch duri par us Police Station ke paas kayi Sone Ke Buscits mile the....
Guard: ji pata he.....
Sakshi: kya us raat aap yahi the?
Guard: ha ji yahi tha....
Sakshi: to aapne us raat kisi ko yaha dekha tha? Koi anjan insan ya gadi?
Uski baat se Guard apne dimag par zor dalkar sochne lagta he.
Guard: ji ha.... Raat ke 12-1 baje ke kareeb ek Truck or ek Jeep si gadi humne dekhi thi.....
Uske jawab se Sakshi ko ek ummid mil gayi.
Sakshi: kya? Aap please mujhe us bare me thoda vistar se batayenge?
Guard: madam vistar se kese bataye? Hum yahi apni jagah khade the, wo 2 gadiya tez Raftar se ayi or aage chali gayi. Ab hume ye aam baat lagi isliye humne uspar dhyan nahi diya ke wo aage kaha gayi or sab.....
Sakshi: accha koi baat nahi.... Aapka bahot bahot shukriya.....
Fit Sakshi us raste par chal padi jaha se Guard ne un do Gadiyo ko ata dekha tha. Kuch der takk us raste par jane ke baad waha rasta 3 hisso me butt jata he. Sakshi apni gadi se utar kar sochne lagi ke ab aage kya karna chahiye. Tabhi use kuch sujhta he. Sakshi car me beth gayi, or apna Laptop open kar ke us Area ki Satellite Images ko dekhne lagi. Usne paya ke yaha ek rasta aisi jagah jata he, jaha zyada abadi nahi thi. Isliye Sakshi usi Area ko apna nishana bana leti he.

Control Room se us jagah ki sari jankari ko hasil kar ke Sakshi us jagah ki chan bin karne nikal gayi. Sakshi bass yaha waha kisi saboot ki talash me thi. Dopeher ka waqt ho gaya tha, lekin Sakshi ko na to bhik ki chinta thi, na hi thakan ki. abhi abhi Control Room se mili jankari ke nusar Sakshi ko ek Abounded jagah par doubt ho gaya. Sakshi ne bina der kiye apni Gadi us taraf mod li. Kuch der baad Sakshi usi Factory ke paas agayi jaha Aksh ne apne kaam ko ajnam diya tha. Sakshi ne dur se hi dekha ke Factory ki halat kafi buri he, lekin tabhi Sakshi ki nazar waha khade ek aadmi par ja giri, lekin uske haath me Gun dekh kar Sakshi ko pakka yakeen ho gaya ke yaha zarur kuch gadbad he. Sakshi apni car dur chhod kar savdhani se Factory ke paas jane lagi. Usne paya ke kuch log waha pehredari karne me lage hue he, Sakshi ne sabse pehle Sana ko call kar ke Force ke saath yaha bula liya. Tabtak Sakshi Factory ke piche jane ka sochti he. Factory ki halat kuch thik nahi thi, isliye Sakshi ko piche jate hi tuti jagah se Factory ke andar ka nazara dikhne laga. Andar jagah jagah Goliyo ke nishan se Sakshi samajh gayi ke wo Gold Biscuits ki tasakri yahi se ho rahi thi.

Ab yaha Sakshi andar ka nazara jhak rahi thi, or tabhi ek aadmi Factory ka round marne nikal gaya, wo aadmi haath me Gun liye gana gun guna raha tha, jese hi wo Sakshi ke nazdeek ane laga, Sakshi ne uski awaz sunn li, or apni Gun Load kar ke waha Kone par agayi. Ab wo aadmi aage badhe ja raha tha, or Sakshi kone me khade hokar uska intezar kar rahi thi, Sakshi ne apni Gun rakh di, or jese hi wo Aadmi Sakshi ke samne aya, Sakshi ne furti se apna ek haath uske muh par rakh diya or dusra haath se us aadmi ke gun wale haath ko pakad kar use niche gira diya. Niche girte hi uske haath se Gun bhi niche gir gayi, lekin Sakshi ne uska muh dabaye rakha, or dusre haath se uske chehre par 2-3 mukke jadd diye. Wo aadmi zor se Sakshi ko apne upar se dhakka de deta he, Sakshi piche akar gir gayi, us aadmi ne apne aju baju dekha lekin use apni Gun nahi dikhayi di isliye wo aadmi Sakshi par jhapat pada, usne Sakshi ke baal pakad kar use Factory ki diwar se de mara, or Sakshi ko diwar se hi ghasit te hue muh ke bal gira diya. Sakshi ke chehre par is waqt kafi chot agayi thi, or ab uske chehre par khun agaya. Usne firse Sakshi ke balo ko pakad kar use utha liya, lekin is baar Sakshi ne apni kohni zor se us aadmi le muh par maar di, wo aadmi ladkhadate hue niche gir gaya, wo ab apne sathiyo ko awaz lagane hi laga tha ke Sakshi ne piche se uska gala chock kar diya.

Sakshi: bilkul awaz matt karna..... Warna....
Or ye kehkar usne zyada takat lagate hue uska gala chock kar diya. Wo aadmi saas lene ke liye tadap raha tha. Sakshi ne waha padi lakdi us aadmi ke muh me thus di, jis se uske muh se khun nikalne laga, Sakshi ne ye uska awaz band karne ke liye kiya tha. Wo aadmi dard se tadapta hua niche gir gaya. Sakshi ne jaldi se apne Fill Sleeve shirt ki Ek taraf ki Sleeve ko faad kar alag kar diya, or us aadmi ke muh se lakdi nikal kar uska muh bandh diya. Wo aadmi ab bhi Sakshi ke kabu me nahi tha, isliye Sakshi uske dono hatho ko bari bari zor se mod deti he. Ab usne apne paas rakha ek chota sa chaku nikal kar us aadmi ke pero ke piche ki nase hi kaat di, jis se wo aadmi kahi bhag na paye. Lekin ab is aadmi ko yaha aye kafi der ho gayi thi, isliye 2 or log is taraf ane lage, un dono ki awaz sunkar ab Sakshi ko Gun ka sahara lena hi pada. Usne bina waqt barbad kiye un dono admiyo ke samne akar unpar Goli chala di, or is me un dono admiyo ko apne aap ko bachane ka koi moka nahi mila. Lekin ab Goli ki awaz se baki sare aadmi bhi tayar ho chuke the. Sakshi apni jagah par hi bani rahi, lekin jab usne jana ke yaha ek saath 3-4 log arahe he to use bhi darr lagne lag. Lekin tabhi waha Sana 20 Officers ki force lekar agayi thi, usne Sakshi ko call kiya lekin jab wo koi jawab nahi deti to Sana samajh gayi ke situation kharab he. wo 3-4 logo ne jab Gate par ye dekha to wo Sakshi ki taraf badhne ki bajaye Gate ki taraf Fire karne lage. Sakshi ko ye baat pata nahi thi, lekin dusri taraf se bhi goliya chalne ki awaz se wo samajh gayi ke Sana yaha agyi he. Isliye Sakshi waha se nikal kar un 4 logo ko dher kar deti he. Sana ne waha se Sakshi ko dekh liya, or use wahi rukne ka ishara kar ke baki Officers ko Sakshi ki location bata di, jis se wo log Sakshi ki taraf Fire na kare. Waha Sana & Force ne morcha sambhal liya, lekin Sakshi ne dekha ke jis Aadmi ko usne waha zinda chhoda he, wo ab behosh sa hone laga tha. Isliye wo us aadmi ko uthakar piche se ghumkar hi Force ki Gadiyo ke paas chali ati he. Jaha ek Ambulance bhi mojud thi, waha mojud Doctor us aadmi ko sambhal leta he. Or tabtak Sana & Force ne sare Admiyo ko maar giraya.

Sana: Sakshi, tumhare chehre par ye khun... Tum thik hona?
Sakshi: ha me... Me... Thik hi....
Neel: or ye aadmi.....
Sakshi: darasal hume ek aadmi kuch bhi kar ke zinda chahiye hi tha.... To mene ise....
Sana: Good Sakshi.... You did a good job....
Wo Sakshi ke kandho par haath rakhte hue kehti he. Or fir wo sab lasho ko baramad kar ke waha se nikal jate he.


Waha Rana ko iski khabar takk nahi thi, use to tabb malum pada jab ek aadmi bhagte hue uske paas ata he or News Channel laga kar use dikha deta he.

TV: Surat ke ek ilake me band padi Illegal Factory ko aaj CBI dwara Seal kar diya gaya he. Kaha ja raha he ke Factory me mojud gundo ko bhi CBI ne maar giraya. Aage ki khabar......

Ye sunkar Rana to jese aag babula ho gaya. Lekin ab wo kuch kar bhi to nahi sakta tha, siwaye sharab pikar apni haar ka dukh manane ke. Lekin dusri taraf Aksh ko bhi is news ke bare me pata chal gaya.


Waha Sakshi ki chot bhi saaf kar di gayi thi, is waqt Sakshi CBI Office ke Medical department me aram kar rahi thi. Tabhi waha Anant ajata he.

Anant: how are you feeling now?
Sakshi: Sir.... Ji me bilkul thik hu....
Anant: You Know What Sakshi.... Tumhara pradarshan dekh kar me ye samajh gaya ke mene koi galat decision nahi liya he.... Very Good Sakshi.
Sakshi: Thanks Sir..... wo aadmi thik he na jise humne pakda tha?
Anant: tum uski chinta matt karo, aise nahi marne denge use... or ab apna khayal rakho na ki apne kaam ka....
Sakshi: me Aksh ko firse sahi salamat dekhna chahti hu.... Bahot galatiya ki he mene, jinhe sudharna chahti hu.... or shayad yahi tarika un galatiyo ko sudharne ka.
Wo apni Num aakho ke saath kehti he. Ab Anant use kese batata ke kahi na kahi Anant bhi use dhoka de raha he. Jo soch kar Anant ke chehre par bhi chinta cha jati he.


Waha Abdul is waqt Aksh ke saath waha mojud tha. Or sab milkar bethkar aaj hue hadse ke bare me baat kar rahe the.

Abdul: ye sab Sakshi ka kaam he Aksh....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh heran reh gaya.
Abdul: Police Station se khabri ne bataya ke CBI se ek ladki ayi thi is case ko study karne... Or wo Sakshi thi.
Ye sab sunkar Aksh ko bahot Gussa araha tha.
Abdul: Aksh me yaha Rana ko Sakshi ke khilaf jane se rok raha hu, or waha Sakshi apni hi musibat ko badhaye ja rahi he.....
Aksh: me janta hu mujhe kya karna he......
Wo ek gehri saas lekar kehta he.


Waha din bhar Anant ne Sakshi se ghar jane ke liye kaha, lekin Sakshi nahi mani. Sakshi ko bass us aadmi se baat karni thi, uske muh se sach ugalwa na tha, lekin wo nahi janti thi ke ye aadmi Rana ka he. Or Rana ka koi aadmi uske bare me kuch nahi bolta. Abtak uski halat thik nahi thi, isliye Sakshi us se aaj nahi baat kar payi.

Raat ko 8 baje Sakshi ghar pahoch gayi lekin jese hi wo apne kamre me ati, to use Bed par ek Pemdrive padi dikhayi di. Sakshi ne jaldi se Pendrive ko apne Laptop par chala diya. Usme ek Audio Recording thi. Or uska Title Tha Qaatil.

"Tujhe iski kimat chukani padegi..... Teri jankari ke liye bata du, ke tera Bhai mere paas hi he. Lekin zyada waqt takk nahi..... Jese tere pariwar ko upar pahocha diya, waise hi...... Us din to bach gaya wo, lekin itna yaad rakhna ke Mere khilaf jane ki koshish ki to......."

Sakshi ye sab sunkar sadme me ja chuki thi. Darasal ye sab Aksh ka hi kaam tha, usne apni Recorded Audio ko thoda change kar diya, jis se Sakshi uski awaz na pehchan paye. Or usne hi yaha akar wo Pendrive rakh di. Sakshi sabse pehle ghar ke bahar lage CCTV ke footage dekhti he. Jisme wahi kale kapde pehne or kale kapde se apna chehra chupaye koi insan ghar me dakhil hua tha. Lekin Sakshi ko firse uske sar ke piche gardan par ek bada ghav dikhayi diya. Jis se use yakeen ho gaya ke yahi Qaatil he.

Sakshi: kya karu? City ke sare CCTV Footage dekh kar bhi koi fayda nahi hoga.... Kyu ke aage ja kar ye aisi jagah chala jayega jaha dur dur takk CCTV nahi he.... Lekin Aksh..... Mera Aksh khatre me he.... Use kis tarah bachau? Deva.... Please mere Aksh ko sahi salamat rakhna. Please......

Aksh me khayal ne Sakshi ko rula diya. Use ab darr lagne laga ke kahi wo Qaatil Aksh ko maar na de. Kyu ke ab Sakshi ke paas jine ka or koi bhi sahara nahi tha. Lekin ab wo thande dimag se kaam lene ki aochti he. Or jaldi se Anant ko is sari ghatna ke bare me bata deti he. Anant to kuch samajh hi nahi paya ke akhir Aksh ye sab kya kar raha he. Lekin andar hi andar Anant ka plan successful raha, kyu me use Sakshi ko yahi yakeen karwana tha ke Aksh Qaatil ke paas he. Or Aksh ne ye sab kya soch kar kiya ye to aage lata chal hi jayega


agar update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. agla update jald hi ayega till then stay tuned and keep smiling

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Sab lage pade hain.
Sakshi full form me dikhi is baar lekin shayad aksh dwara kiya gaya banawti call use kuchh der rok le.
Aapne behtreen scene create kiya yaara.
Bahut achhe.
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....

 

[Naag Pasha]

Chapter 3 - Qaatil

Update 9 (Final Update)

Mega Update​

Word Count: 7160
Estimated Reading Time: 00:35:00




Kaam se thak haar kar Sakshi ghar pe aram se bethi hui thi, usne kuch der desh duniya ki khabre dekhne ki soch li, or News Channel on kar diya. Kuch news ke baad TV par ek news flash hone lagi ke Bharat ka ek rocket launch jo ke ek Observatory Satellite dharti ke bahar le jane wala tha, uska failure ho gaya he. Lekin pata nahi kyu ye Satellite shabd Sakshi ke dimag ko hit kar gaya. Kuch der takk sochne ke baad Sakshi ke chehre par bahot hi zyada khushi cha gayi. Sakshi ne sabse pehle kal subah Banglore jane ki Air Tickets book kar li, jaha desh ki space agency located thi.


Dusri taraf Shahid lagadar Abdul ko contact karne ki koshish me tha, lekin uska phone switch off tha.

Shahid: Aksh, Mamu ka call nahi lagg raha he abtak.....
Aksh: shayad Rana ke diye kaam me busy ho.....
Shahid: lekin me kal raat se unhe call kar raha hu, tabse unka phone band hi he..... Kahi kuch....
Aksh: Nahi..... Aisa kuch nahi hua hoga.... Kya tum kisi ko jante ho Rana ki Gang se, jise Abdul ki khabar ho?
Shahid: nahi Aksh.... Yahi to dikkat he. Aisa koi rasta nahi he, jis se hum Mamu ka pata laga paye....
Aksh: humare paas ab intezar karne ke ilawa or koi chara nahi he.....
Shahid: shayad tum thik keh rahe ho.....

Or fir waha sab apne apne kamo me lagg gaye, Aksh ne jakar diwar pe lage us calendar par aaj ki tarikh ko cross kar diya. Or bass aakho me gussa liye waha khada raha.


Waha CBI Headquarter me Anant or Sana apas me baate kar rahe the.

Sana: btw sir aaj Sakshi dikhayi nahi di.....
Anant: ha uska call aya tha, wo kuch kaam se ja rahi thi to wo 2 din nahi ayegi....
Sana: ohh... Thik he...
Anant: or Sakshi par dhyan rakhna, use ab kuch waqt takk Aksh se dur rakhna hoga.... Usdin Aksh ki aakho me jo mene dekha, us se saaf zahir hota he ke wo apna badla pura karne ke liye kisi bhi hadd takk gir sakta he, kisi bhi hadd takk....
Sana: to sir kya hum Aksh ko.....
Anant: nahi, Aksh ko chhodna nahi he.... Is baar puri tayari ke saath Aksh ko pakadna he, or use uske kiye ki saza deni he..... Or uski saza sirf ek hi ho sakti he.... Faasi.....
Sana: lekin mujhe Sakshi ki fikar ho rahi he.... Jab use is baat ka pata chalega ke Aksh ko uske kiye ki saza milegi hi milegi tabb.....
Anant: us se hume koi lena dena nahi hoga.... Agar Sakshi sacchayi jaan ne ke baad bhi Aksh ko saza dilwane ke khilaf hogi, to majburan hume uspar bhi karwahi karni hogi.... Or ha Sana, mere hisab se Aksh ki Court me 2 baar peshi hogi, pehli peshi me shayad Aksh ko saza ki sunwahi nahi ho... Lekin dusri peshi me Aksh ko fasi dene ke order mil jayenge.... Tabtak hume Sakshi ko yahi samjhana hoga ke hum Aksh ko bachane ke liye hi ye sab kar rahe he....
Sana: Okay Sir... Me samajh gayi.....

Fir Sana apne kaam me lagg jati he, or yaha Anant bass kuch soch me doob jata he.


Waha Sakshi Bharat Ki Space Agency me pahoch gayi thi. Darasal Sakshi ne Qaatil takk pahochne ka ek behtarin idea dhund nikala tha. Usne Earth ki Observatory Satellite ki help se us jagah ki 3D image lene ki sochi thi jaha use lagg raha tha ke Qaatil chupa hua he. Darasal ye Satellite kisi bhi jagah ko scan kar ke waha ki surface ko 3D me show kar sakti thi, Darasal jis jagah par Sakshi ko doubt tha, wo jagah pedo or jhadiyo se bhari hui thi, or use normal Satellite Images se parakh pana namumkin tha. Or ye Satellite aise hi jagao ko 3D Image me pedi ko hatakar show karti thi. Sakshi ke kehne par waha mojud scientist ne us area ko scan kar diya, or kuch der baad Safelite ne us jagah ko scan kat liya tha. Sakshi ne us area ki 3D image Pendrive me le li or waha se firse Surat ane ke liye nikal gayi.

Darasal us jagah ki 3D image bhi kafi badi thi, ab Sakshi ko us puri jagah ko bariki se dekhna tha, jisme uska kafi samay lagne wala tha. Ghar akar Sakshi bina der kiye us image ko examine karne me lagg gayi, use to ab na hi bhuk ki fikar thi na hi pyas ki, uska to ab ek hi maksad tha, or wo tha Qaatil ko dhund na. Ye kaam karte hue Sakshi ko ab raat ho gayi thi, Sakshi ab kafi thakk chuki thi. Sakshi ne 3D image ka kuch hissa bariki se dekh liya tha, lekin waha use kuch hasil nahi hua, ab baki bacha kaam use kal karna tha. Isliye wo jakar so jati he.


Dusre din ka suraj bhi Nikal aya tha, lekin Aksh or Shahid ko Abdul ka koi ata pata nahi tha.

Shahid: mujhe lagta he zarur kuch gadbad he..... Warna mamu is tarah bina humare touch me itne waqt takk nahi reh sakte....
Aksh: thik kaha tumne.... I think hume bahar ja kar Abdul ke bare me pata karna hoga....
Shahid: me bhi wahi soch raha tha....
Aksh: sabko bata do tayar rehne ke liye.....
Fir Shahid baki logo ko jakar bata deta he, or kuch der baad sablog tayar ho chuke the. Halaki unhe nahi pata tha wo Abdul ko kaha or kese dhund payenge.

Khair, sablog bilkul tayar the, lekin Aksh ki halat kuch thik si nahi lagg rahi thi, uske chehre par kafi thakan thi, jo Shahid ne dekh liya tha.

Shahid: Aksh, kya hua? Tum thik ho na?
Aksh: ha.... Kuch nahi, bass.... Bass.... Nahi me thik hu, chalo nikalte he....
Shahid: Aksh tumhari tabiyat kuch thik nahi lagg rahi....
Aksh: aisi baat nahi he.... Bass thodi kamzori lagg rahi he...
Shahid: ek kaam karo, tum yahi raho... Humlog jakar Mamu ke bare me pata karte he...
Aksh: nahi me.....
Karl: Aksh.... Tumhe bukhar he....
Wo Aksh ke mathe par haath rakh kar kehta he.
Karl: tumhe aram karna chahiye.... Aram karne se bukhar chala jayega, agar tum bahar aye to bukhar zyada badh jayega....
Shahid: ha Aksh, tum yahi raho hum jate he....
Fir Aksh bhi wahi reh jata he, kyu ke use bhi kuch thik feel nahi ho raha tha. Shahid baki sabke saath Abdul ki khoj me nikal chuka tha. Ab dekhna ye he ke uske haath kuch lagg bhi pata he ya nahi.

Waha Sakshi Subah se Qaatil ki talash me lagi thi, lekin abtak use kuch bhi haath nahi laga, subah se sham ho chali thi, ab Sakshi kaam rokne hi wali hoti he ke uski nazar ek object par padti he, jo ki natural bilkul nahi lagg raha tha. Jab Sakshi ne us object par zoom kiya to wo bilkul ek ghar ki shape thi, jo dekh kar Sakshi ko yakeen nahi ho pa raha tha. Sakshi ise confirm karne ke liye Live Satellite Map dekhne lagi, jabb usne bilkul usi jagah ka Map dekha to use wah ek ghar mojud agaya. Sakshi ne Qaatil ke call ki Radio Frequencies ko lekar kuch calculation kar li, or use pata chala ke wo call bilkul usi jagah se tha. Ab Sakshi bahot zyada khush ho gayi.

Sakshi: Got It...... Akhir kar is Qaatil ka pata lagg hi gaya. Lekin..... Lekin ab aage? Is baar to Me to CBI ki help bhi nahi le sakti.... Nahi, mere Aksh ko bachane ke liye mujhe kisi ki bhi zarurat nahi he.... Bass ek baar me Aksh ko sahi salamat dekh lu, fir us Qaatil ko zinda nahi chhodungi..... aaj hi is Qaatil ka khel khatam kar dungi.....

Sakshi kafi gusse me apne aap se kehti he. Lekin ab wo is sacchayi ko jaan ne wali thi ke jis se wo itni nafrat kar rahi he, wo or koi nahi balki Aksh hi he.

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Rana: ab aage ka kaam tumhare haath me he.....
Yaha Rana kisi ladki ke saath bethkar baate kar raha hota he.
Ladki: aap chinta na kare.... Sakshi ab meri dost hogi.... Lekin aap to in logo ko battar maut dena chahte the, or ab ye.....
Rana: kisi ko tadpana bhi kisi battar maut se kam nahi he.... Or ye to me ek teer do nishane wali kahawat ko azma raha hu....
Ladki: Matlab? Me kuch samjhi nahi....
Rana: is me na samajhne wali konsi baat he? Sakshi ko tadapta dekh uska bhai, Aksh bhi tadpega.... Or ek din aisa ajayega ke ye dono mujhse bhag naho payenge.... Uske baad un dono ko usi ped ke paas le jakar tukde tukde kar dunga.... Tukde tukde......
Ye sab kehte waqt Rana ki aakho me khoon sawar tha.
Ladki: me samajh gayi.... Ab aap sab mujhpar chhod dijiye.... Me ye kaam bakhubi karungi....
Rana: isi liye to tumhe chuna he mene Kriti......

To jo ladki Rana ke saath mojud thi, wo or koi nahi balki Rishi ki Girlfriend, Kriti thi. Ab Rana Kriti se konsa kaam karwana chahta tha, akhir uske dimag me kya chal raha tha, ye to bass wahi jane.


Khair, aise hi har kisi ka samay nikal raha tha, raat ke 10 baje hue the, Sakshi bass baar baar apni karvate badal rahi thi, use itni bechaini aaj se pehle kabhi nahi hui thi.

Sakshi: kya karu? Us Qaatil ko kese pakdu? Kyu ke uske saath uske kuch sathi bhi he... Or me akele.... Kya me Sana se baat karu? Nahi, wo bhi Anant sir ki permission ke bagair kuch nahi karne degi..... Ab jo bhi ho, Aksh aaj jis halat me he, uski zimmedar sirf me hu, or ab use is halat se bahar lane ki zimmedari bhi meri hi he.... Me aise waqt Barbad nahi kar sakti... Jo hoga dekha jayega..... Agar waha se zinda lotungi to Aksh ko apne saath lekar hi, warna meri jaan bhi chali jaye to mujhe koi gumm nahi he....

Or bass apne mann me Aksh ko wapis lane ka irada bana kar Sakshi waha jane ki tayari karne lagg jati he. Usne apni Handgun ke saath saath ek Automated Riffle bhi car me rakh li. Jese hi wo car ko start kar ke ghar ke bahar nikli, mosam ne is tarah se apna rup badla ke jese bass kisi bhi waqt wo dharti ko nasht kar de. Barish ki bunde aaj aam taur se kuch zyada hi tez thi, bijliya bhi har kuch Seconds me kadak rahi thi. Or aise mosam ke bawajud Sakshi tezi se gadi chala rahi thi, kuch der baad Sakshi us Jungle takk pahoch gayi. Usne ek baar socha ke andar dakhil hone se pehle wo ek baar CBI ko khabar kar de, kahi Sakshi ko firse zinda laut ane ka moka mile ya nahi, lekin CBI ko at least is jagah ki jankari ho, jis se wo Qaatil ko pakad sake. Sakshi sidhe Sana ko call kar deti he.

Sana: hi Sakshi....
Sakshi: hi....
Sana: kaha ho tum? Chutti khatam hui ya nahi tumhari?
Sakshi: ha.... Chutti to khatam ho gayi, or ab apne kaam par bhi lagg gayi me.
Wo kafi gambhir swaro me kehti he. Jo sunkar Sana kuch samajh nahi pati.
Sana: kya Matlab? Me kuch samjhi nahi.....
Sakshi: mene Qaatil ka pata dhund nikala he.....
Sana: what? Sakshi tum kya.....
Sakshi: thik suna.... Or me is waqt Qaatil ka khel khatam karne usi ki jagah ayi hu....
Uski baat sunkar Sana ke hosh hi udd gaye.
Sana: Sakshi.... Tumne... Tumne Sir se baat ki thi?
Sakshi: agar karti to wo mujhe permission nahi dete..... Or ye call bhi mene is wajah se kiya he kyu ke me nahi janti ke me zinda bach kar laut paungi ya nahi, isliye me chahti hu ke agar me yaha nahi bach payi to aap sab us Qaatil ko apne hatho se matt jane dena.
Sana: lekin Sakshi.......
Wo is se aage kuch kehti, ke tabhi Sakshi ne call cut kar diya. Or mobile silent kar ke apne raste chal padi. Sana ne Sakshi ko call karna bekar samjha, or jaldi se is sab ki khabar Anant ko dena chahi.

Anant: kya? Sana ye sab..... Sakshi ka waha jana khatre se khali nahi he.... Mene Aksh ki aakho me jo gussa dekha he...... Wo kuch bhi kar sakta he..... Or sabse badi baat, agar Sakshi or Aksh amne samne ajate he, to Aksh humare haath kabhi nahi ayega.... Tum jaldi se Sakshi ka mobile track karo or waha pahocho, me bhi Force lekar waha ajata hu....
Sana: okay sir.....

Fir wo sab Sakshi ki location ko track karte hue jane lagte he, darasal CBI me kaam kar rahe Officers ke mobile ko GPS dwara track kiya jata tha, jis se unhe kabhi koi dikkat face na karni pade. Waha Sana bhi puri tayari me nikal chuki thi, or wahi Anant bhi puri Force lekar nikal chuka tha.

Wahi dusri taraf is waqt Shahid ko Abdul ki jankari mil chuki thi, wo sabse pehle Aksh ko is bare me agah karna chahta tha, is liye wo Aksh ko call kar deta he.

Aksh: ha Shahid.... Kuch pata chala?
Shahid: bahot badi gadbad he Aksh.... Bahot badi gadbad.....
Wo darte hue Aksh se kehta he. Uski awaz se Aksh samajh gaya ke baat gambhir he.
Aksh: kya hua Shahid? Tum saaf saaf kaho baat kya he?
Shahid: Aksh bahot hi mushkil se mene Mamu ke saath hi kaam kar rahe ek aadmi ka contact dhund nikala, or kisi tarah us se Mamu ke bare me pucha.. or usne kaha ke Mamu Rana ke kisi zaruri kaam se Bhopal gaye he.....
Aksh: kya? Bhopal..... Or itne waqt se Abdul ka phone bhi band he, iska Matlab Rana ko sabkuch pata chal gaya he...
Shahid: mujhe bhi yahi lagg raha he.... Me sabke saath abhi Bhopal ke liye nikal raha hu, shayad hum waha Mamu ko dhund paye....
Aksh: Thik he.... Me bhi tum sabke saath chalta hu....
Shahid: tumhe ane ki zarurat nahi he.... Waise bhi tumhari tabiyat.....
Aksh: me ab thik hu, or ab baat kar ke waqt Barbad matt karo....
Shahid: okay.... Me ajata hu tumhe lene ke liye....
Aksh: thik he.....
Fir wo call kaat dete he. Shahid car tezi se dauda deta he. Ab use yaha ane me kuch hi waqt lagne wala tha, waha Aksh bilkul tayar tha.

Thodi der intezar karne ke baad Aksh ko bahar Headlights ki roshni dikhayi deti he, ab itne bure mosam me use kuch saaf saaf nahi dikh pa raha tha ke wo gadi kiski he. Aksh andar akar apna chehra kapde se bandh ne lagta he, waha bahar Sakshi ne gadi band kar di or Gun haath me liye car se utar kar Ghar ke paas jane lagi, usne paya ke darwaza khula hi he, Sakshi bahot alert thi usne Gun ko kass kar pakad liya or andar ate hi use samne Qaatil dusri taraf muh kare khada dikhayi diya. Darasal Aksh apni Gun or saath kuch magazine le raha tha. Use dekh kar Sakshi ko gussa ane laga, usne aage akar Qaatil par Gun point kar li. Ab is waqt ghar me andhera hua tha, bass diwar ke paas ek light jal rahi thi.

Sakshi: kaha bhagne ki tayari kar rahe the?

Sakshi ki awaz apne kano me padte hi Aksh ke hosh udd gaye.

Sakshi: aaj is khel ka antt tay tha.... Aise kese bhag jate yaha se? Apne haath upar karo or is taraf palat jao.....
Wo kuch dur se hi apni Gun ko Aksh ke sar par Point karte hue kehti he. Aksh ne apni haath dhire dhire upar karne shuru kiye, or dhire dhire Sakshi ki taraf mudne laga, lekin tabhi Aksh ne furti se apni Gun nikal kar Sakshi par point karna chahi, lekin us se pehle hi Sakshi ne Aksh ke haath me Goli chala di, jis se Aksh ke haath se Gun dur ja kar gir gayi, or wo apne haath ko jakad kar wahi khada raha.
Sakshi: agli baar Goli sidha sar me chalegi.....

Sakshi: Kya laga tha tujhe? Mere Aai Baba ko maar kar mere Aksh ko mujhse chinn kar zyada din bach paoge?
Wo kafi bhavuk hokar aage ate hue kehti he.
Sakshi: tujhe tere kiye ki saza milegi, zarur milegi, lekin us se pehle mujhe mere sawal ka jawab chahiye.... Kyu mara mere Aai Baba ko? Kya kiya tha unhone? Or Aksh.... Aksh ko.....
Ab apne pariwar ka zikr hote hi Sakshi apne aap ko sambhal nahi pati or rone lagti he. Lekin ispar Aksh paas pade sofe par jakar beth jata he, or waha pade kapde se apna zakhmi haath bandh deta he. Uske is bartav se Sakshi ka gussa uski Charam sima ko chu raha tha, Sakshi gusse me aage ane lagi, jese hi wo Aksh ke paas pahochi, Aksh ne furti se uska wo haath jisme Gun thi, kass kar pakad liya or Sakshi ko sofe par gira kar khud uspar agya or Sakshi ki hi Gun Sakshi ke mathe par point kar di, lekin is waqt Aksh ke haath bahot kanp rahe the.
Sakshi: kya hua? Shoot me..... Agar maut ka darr hota, to yaha ane ka kabhi sochti bhi nahi.....
Or itna kehkar Sakshi ne Gun ko mazbuti se pakad liya or apna sarr Aksh ke chehre par de mara, jis se Aksh piche ho gaya. Itne me Sakshi uth khadi ho gayi, Aksh chahte hue bhi Sakshi se ladd nahi sakta tha, lekin fir bhi wo aage akar Sakshi par humla bol deta he, lekin Sakshi jhuk kar uske humle se bach gayi, or piche se Aksh ka haath mod kar use zor se zameen par gira diya. Aksh apne khule left haath se uthne ki koshish kar raha tha, lekin aaj Sakshi ke sar pe khun chada hua tha, usne der kiye bina Aksh ke left kandhe par Gun rakh kar fire kar di. Ab Aksh ki aakho se asu nikal aye the, wo puri tarah koshish kar raha tha ke apne muh se koi awaz na nikale. Ab Sakshi ka Aksh par pura control tha. Sakshi waise hi Aksh ki pith par ghutna rakh kar uska right haath todne ki firak me thi.

Sakshi: bol..... Aksh kaha he? Kaha he Aksh bata mujhe warna aaj zinda nahi chhodungi tujhe.....
Wo kisi sher ki tarah gurrate hue Aksh ka haath or zyada Modkar kehti he. Aksh bass apni awaz dabaye Sakshi ki pakad se chutne ke liye chatpata raha tha. Sakshi ko koi jawab nahi mil raha tha, isliye Sakshi Gun chhod kar Knife nikal leti he or ek ghav Aksh ki pith par kar deti he.
Sakshi: bata mujhe Aksh kaha he..... Bata.......
Wo zor zor se chillakar jawab mang rahi thi. Ab uska gussa or zyada badh raha tha. Sakshi ne is baar knife ko sidha Aksh ki pith me gaadh diya, or use zor se ghumane lagi, ab Aksh se saha nahi gaya or wo bhi dard me chillane laga. Sakshi ke kano me ye awaz ate hi uske sharir se mano puri takat hi chali gayi. Wo jaldi se Aksh ko chhod kar khadi ho gayi, Aksh ab bhi dard me karha raha tha, Sakshi ne aage akar apne kanpte hue haatho se uske chehre par se kapda hata diya. Or tabhi asman me zordar bijli kadak uthi, jis se Sakshi ne Aksh ka chehra saas saaf dekh liya. Aksh ka chehra dekh kar Sakshi ko apni aakho par yakeen nahi ho raha tha. Aksh himmat kar ke apne ghutno par ane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin wo dard jese Aksh ki jaan liye ja raha tha. or ab Sakshi use dekh kar apne asu rok nahi paati or Aksh ko sahara dete hue niche beth kar use sambhal leti he. Usne Aksh ko pakad kar sofe ke sahare zameen par hi bitha diya.

Sakshi: A...... Aksh...... Tu..... Aksh..... Ye.... Ye sab......
Wo Aksh ko dekh kar ab kuch bolne ki stithi me nahi thi. Usne sabse pehle Aksh ki pith se chaku nikal liya, jis se Aksh ki ek dard bhari chikh nikal gayi.
Sakshi: k... kuch nahi..... Kuch nahi hoga Aksh.... Me.... Me hu na yaha..... kuch nahi hoga tujhe.......
Wo Aksh ka chehra apne haatho me thamkar kehti he, or kas kar uska sir apne sine se lag kar fut fut ke rone lagti he. Pata nahi kyu lekin Sakshi ke sine se apna sar lagte hi Aksh ka dard to jese gayab hi ho chuka tha, is waqt Aksh ek aise ghere me tha, jaha koi uska bal bhi baka nahi kar sakta tha. Aksh bass lambi lambi saase liye jaa raha tha. Sakshi to Aksh ko jese apne aap me sama lena chahti thi. Wo bar bar Aksh ke sar pe haath fer rahi thi, or bass kisi bacche ki tarah roye ja rahi thi. Ab usne Aksh ko apne sine se hata kar uska chehra apne haatho me tham liya. Aksh ki aakhe is waqt band thi, lekin uske chehre par aise bhav the jese kisi bhatke hua insan milo ki duri paar kar ke ek ped ki chav me sukoon mehsus kar raha tha.

Sakshi: Aksh...... Aksh hum ek dusre ko humesha se jante hai.... mene.... mene tujhe Hasta hua dekha hai, khush dekha hai, Tujhe Rota dekha Hai, Akela dekha hai…. Lekin…. Lekin ye sab……ye sab kya hai Aksh?

Wo rote hue Aksh ka chehra apne haatho me thamkar us se puchti he.

Lekin Aksh bina Sakshi se nazre milaye koi jawab nahi deta.

Sakshi: chup kyu ho mujhe jawab do Aksh….. warna…. Warna..

Ye kehte hue Sakshi niche padi Gun ko utha leti he or apne mathe par point kar deti hai. Usne trigger par apni ungli hi rakhi thi ke Aksh apni dayi taraf ki diwar ko dekhne laga, jis diwar par light lagi thi, or usi diwar par wo calendar or kuch tasveere lagi thi. Sakshi uski nazro ka picha karte hue us diwar ko dekhti he lekin jese hi Sakshi ki nazar us diwar par gayi to uske hosh ud gaye. Uski wajah thi ke diwar pe bahot se logo ki tasveer lagi hui thi lekin center me Aksh, Sakshi, Santosh or Radha ki tasveer thi. Santosh, Radha or bahot si tasveero par red marker se cross bana hua tha.

Sakshi sawalo se bhari apni nazre Aksh par tika deti he. Aksh dhire dhire apne pero par khada ho raha tha. Wo akar us tasveero ke samne ruk gaya, Aksh uske piche khadi sacchayi jaan ne ke liye Aksh ke bolne ka intezar kar rahi thi.

Aksh: u.... Us raat.... Us raat.........



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Aaj raat dinner par Mansi ke parents Aksh ke pariwar se milne wale the. Mansi ne tabb se Aksh ka saath nahi chhoda, jabse Sakshi yaha se gayi he. Wo har waqt Aksh ke saath thi. Sham ke waqt Aksh rooftop par akela udas betha hua tha. Mansi niche Aksh ke Aai Baba ke saath hasi mazak karne me lagi thi, Radha or Santosh to Mansi lo itna pasand karne lage the ke jo zakhm Sakshi ne unhe diye the, wo bhi bhul chuke the. Mansi me kafi der takk Aksh ko dekha nahi, isliye wo Aksh ko dekhne uske kamre me chali gayi, lekin Aksh waha nahi tha. Isliye Mansi Rooftop par chali gayi, waha Aksh num aakho ke saath Sakshi ki yaado me duba tha. Mansi aage akar use piche se Hug kar leti he. Mansi ka ehsas hote hi Aksh apne asu chupane lagta he.

Mansi: kyu mujhse apne aasu chupa rahe ho Aksh? Mujhe nahi bataoge baat kya he?
Wo bade pyaar se Aksh ke Samne khade hokar uske haath thamte hue kehti he.
Aksh: S.... Sakshi.... Sakshi aaj yaha hoti to..... Me.....
Iske aage Aksh kuch bol nahi pata, or uski aakhe apne asuo ko rok nahi pati. Mansi ko Aksh ka rona bahot dard deta tha. Wo Aksh ko apne sine se laga kar uska sar sehlane lagti he.
Mansi: You Know what Aksh..... Ab kal se hi Sakshi bhi tumhare saath hogi.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh nasamjhi ki halat me use dekhne lagta he.
Mansi: Aksh, kal hum Sakshi se milne jayenge..... Na hi tum Sakshi ke bina jee sakte ho, or na hi Sakshi tumhare bina..... Tumhara bhala isi me he ke tum dono ek ho jao.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh shock ho gaya.
Aksh: ye.... Ye.... Kya keh rahi ho Mansi.... Ye sab......
Mansi: ha Aksh.... Mujhe maaf karna lekin mene tumse ek baat chupayi rakhi thi....
Aksh: konsi baat?
Mansi: Sakshi jab yaha se ja rahi thi, tabb usme mujhse koi promise nahi kiya tha ke wo sabkuch bhula kar wapis ayegi.... Infact usne to kaha tha ke uske dil me tumhare liye ye jo pyaar he, wo marte dum takk zinda rahega..... Lekin mene tumse jhut isliye kaha ke mujhe laga tum waqt ke chalte shayad..... Lekin me galat thi, Aksh hum dono kal Sakshi ke paas jayenge....
Ye sab sunkar Aksh ki sochne samajhne ki takat hi chali gayi thi. Ek taraf to wo pehle se hi Sakshi ki baat maan ne ke liye tayar tha. Lekin ab baat kafi aage badh chuki thi. Yaha aaj uske or Mansi ke parents milne wale the, ek naya rishta aaj judne ja raha tha. Aksh Sakshi ko pana chahta tha, lekin uske chalte wo Mansi ki Acchayi ka fayda nahi uthana chahta tha. Aksh ek gehri saas lekar Mansi ka chehra apne haatho me tham kar uski Aakho me akhe dalkar dekhne lagta he.

Aksh: Mansi, sach kahu to mujhe Sakshi mere saath har waqt chahiye.... Or me uske liye duniya ki sari sahi galat ki definition bhul sakta hu..... Aaj tumne ye baat keh kar dikha diya ke tumhara dil kitna bada he.... Or me apne fayde ke liye tumhara dil nahi tod sakta..... Dekho Mansi, me..... Me puri koshish kar raha hu Sakshi ko bhulne li, lekin me.....
Mansi: tum nahi kar paoge......
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
Mansi: tum nahi kar paoge Aksh.... Sakshi tumhare is sharir ka hissa bann chuki he.... Or sharir ka mamuli hissa bhi agar hum alag kar de, to us sharir ko kabhi pura sharir nahi keh sakte.... Or Sakshi ko to tumhari saase he.... Sakshi ka tumse dur hona Matlab tumhari sase chin lena..... Aksh aisa matt socho ke ye sab kar ke me koi bahot bada kaam kar rahi ho, Sakshi or tum ek dusre ke liye hi bane ho.....
Aksh: lekin.....
Mansi: lekin kya Aksh? Kaho ke tum Sakshi se pyaar nahi karte...... Nahi keh sakte na?
Aksh: Mansi, try to understand me ye nahi.....
Mansi: kyu nahi kar sakte? Batao kyu?
Aksh: Mansi me tumse pyaar karta hu..... Agar Sakshi mere liye zindagi he to tum Duniya ho.....
Mansi: Zindagi ke bina ye duniya kis kaam ki Aksh?
Uski baat ka jawab Aksh ke paas nahi tha, wo bass Mansi ki taraf pith kar ke khada ho gaya. Mansi ne Aksh ko piche se hi hug kar liya.
Mansi: Aksh, sach kahu to me bhi tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakti..... Me chahti hu ke tum mujhe Sakshi or tumhare bich pyaar ke ek chote se hisse me shamil kar lo... Me usme khush rahungi.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh hakka bakka reh gaya, usne piche mudkar Mansi ke haath apne hatho me tham liye.
Aksh: Mansi tumhe andaza bhi he tum kya keh rahi ho?
Mansi: ha Aksh.... Me samajh rahi hu ke me kya keh rahi hu....
Ab Aksh ke dimag me kaam karna bilkul band kar diya tha. Use kuch samajh nahi araha tha ke agar wo kare to kare kya.

Mansi: Aksh.... Sach kahu to me tumse alag nahi ho sakti, or na hi hona chahti hu. Kyu ke saccha pyaar kya hota he ye mene dekh liya he. Me Sakshi se tum dono ke pyaar ke bich ek choti si jagah ke liye bhik mang lungi....
Aksh: ye nahi ho sakta Mansi.... Nahi ho sakta.... Ye duniya kya kahegi.....
Mansi: mujhe duniya se koi Matlab nahi he..... Or ye duniya hoti kon he humari baato ke bich dakhal andazi karne wali?
Aksh: lekin......
Mansi: bass..... Ab tum kuch nahi kahoge..... Kal hum dono saath milkar Sakshi ke paas jayenge. Dekhna, Sakshi mujhe apni sautan ke roop me zarur apnayegi.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh andar hi andar khush ho raha tha, lekin ab bhi use ye sab galat lagg raha tha.
Mansi: ab zyada socho matt..... Or ha, tumhe Sakshi or me wo chalenge na?
Aksh: wo kya?
Mansi: Lesbian.....
Wo mazak mazak meAksh ke kano me kafi dhimi awaz me kehti he. Jo sunkar Aksh ke chehre par hasi agayi, or usne Mansi ke sar me halke se maar kar use apne se kass liya. Or Mansi bhi yahi chahti thi ke kash Aksh ek baar muskura de.

Khair, sham se raat dinner ka waqt ho gaya tha. Mansi ke parents bhi waha achuke the. Kafi der takk wo log apas me baate kar rahe the. Lekin is bich ghar ke bahar Rana apne bahot se logo ke saath pahoch gaya. Wo sab ghar ke andar dakhil ho gaye. Itne sare logo ko dekh kar koi kuch samajh nahi paya. Lekin Aman ki nazar Rana par gayi, or wo turant use pehchan gaya. Rana aage akar in sab ke saath sofe par beth gaya. Uske sare Admiyo ne charo taraf se Aksh or Mansi ke pariwar ko gher liya tha.

Rana: are kya hua? Betho..... Kya baate chal rahi thi chalne do.....
Santosh: Aksh ye kon......
Rana: are ye kesi baate kar rahe ho aap..... Apke khandan se bahot purane sambhand he humare.... Aap bhale hume nahi jante, lekin aapke pitaji.... Oho ho.... Mahapurush Joshi Kaka, unki wajah se hi to me aaj ye hu jo aap sab dekh rahe he......
Wo uthkar Santosh ke samne khade hote hue kehta he.
Santosh: me kuch samjha nahi......
Rana: abhi samjhata hu.....
Wo Santosh ko collar se pakad kar uske mathe par gun point karte hue kehta he. Ye dekh kar Aksh aage ane laga ke tabhi Rana ke admiyo ne sab logo ko daboch liya.
Aksh: Baba ko chhod do.... Warna......
Wo bahot hi gusse me Rana ke admiyo ki pakad se chutne ki koshish karte hue kehta he.
Rana: warna? Warna kya? Bol na warna kya
Or itna kehkar wo ek Goli Santosh ki kamar me chala deta he. Santosh chillate hue wahi gir gaya. Aksh or baki sab use dekh chillane lagg gaye. Rana aage akar Mansi ke samne khada ho gaya, Mansi use dekh kar kafi darr gayi.
Rana: pehchana? Nahi pehchana? Are ye to galat baat he na Aman..... Bacchi ko apne Chacha ke bare me nahi bataya tumne?
Ye sunkar Mansi ke hosh udd gaye.
Rana: ha beta.... Aman mere Mama Ji ka beta he... To mera bhai hua na.... Or tumhara chacha....
Wo Mansi ke chehre par haath ferte hue kehta he. Lekin tabhi Mansi uske muh par thuk deti he. Jis se Rana ka gussa satve asman par chala gaya. Usne Mansi ko balo se pakad kar khich liya or bich me agaya.
Aman: Deep..... Mansi.... Mansi ko chhod do..... Please.....
Wo Rana ke samne gid gida kar keh raha tha. Lekin uski baat sunkar Rana hasne lagta he.
Rana: hahaha...... Deep..... Bhul gaya tha ke mera naam Deep bhi he.... Khair, purani baat nikali he to bata hi deta hu.... Tumhare Baap ke kiye ki hi saza mil rahi he tum logo ko......
Itna keh kar wo ek Chaku Mansi ke pet me dhasa deta he. Ye dekh kar Aman or Kiran to zor zor se rone lage or Rana se Mansi ki Jaan ki bhik mang rahe the. Rana Mansi ko Aksh ke bilkul samne le ata he, Aksh bass roye ja raha tha.
Aksh: please chhod do use..... Please......
Rana: are tum ro kyu rahe ho? Mari nahi abtak tumhari chamiya....
Ye kehkar wo firse Mansi ke pet me chaku daal deta he. Mansi dhire dhire apni aakhe band kar rahi thi, or Aksh use zor zor se pukar raha tha. Rana ne Mansi ko wahi par gira diya or ja kar dard me pade Santosh ko Aksh ke samne le aya.
Aksh: please.... Baba ko chhod do.... Please....
Wo rote hue Rana se Santosh ki bhik mang raha tha.
Rana: chalo thik he.... Chhod deta hu.... Ye lo, chhod diya
Wo Santosh ke gale par chaku ferte hue kehta he, or use bhi Mansi ke paas hi gira deta he. Is waqt Mansi or Santosh tadap rahe the. Ye dekh kar Aksh or Radha pagal se ho gaye. Lekin ab Rana ja kar Radha ko balo se pakad ke Aksh ke samne le aya. Or bina der kiya Radha ke bhi gale par chaku fer kar use wahi fek diya. Usne apne admiyo se Aksh ko chhodne ka ishara kar diya. Aksh un admiyo ki pakad se chutt te hi Radha, Santosh or Mansi ke paas akar unko zinda rakhne ki nakam koshish karne laga. Rana muskurate hue Aman or Kiran ke paas agaya, Kiran to apni beti ko dekh kar behosh ho gayi thi. Rana ne gusse me Aman ko dekhte hue uske bhi pet me 3-4 baar chaku ghused diya. Aman bhi tadapta hua zameen par gir gaya. Waha Aksh ne Mansi or Santosh ko kho diya tha. Wo Radha ka chehra apne haatho me thamkar ro raha tha ke tabhi Radha apni akhri saas lekar is duniya se chali jati he, Ab to Aksh jese bikhar gaya. Wo Radha ke sine me sar rakh kar rone lagta he. Tabtak Rana ne behosh padi Kiran ko bhi maut ke ghat utar diya. Ab waha Aksh bacha tha. Rana Aksh ke piche akar niche Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakh kar Beth jata he.
Rana: itna kyu ro rahe ho Aksh? Tumhe bhi inke saath bhagwaan ke paas bhejne wala hu me..... Or fir kuch waqt baad tum apni pyari behen Sakshi se bhi mil paoge....
Uske muh se Sakshi ki baat sunkar Aksh ne Rana par dhava bol diya. Or uske upar chadd kar uska gala daboch liya. Rana ke aadmi aage arahe the ke tabhi Rana ne sabko rok diya, or khud Aksh ka gala pakad kar khada ho gaya. Usne gusse me Aksh ko gale se pakad kar hawa me utha diya. Aksh uske haath me chatpata raha tha ke tabhi waha Armed Force akar goliya barsana shuru kar deti he. Ye dekh kar Rana ne Aksh ko chhod diya, or baki admiyo ne Rana ko gher kar bacha liya or khud armed force par Goliya barsane lage, Rana apne admiyo ke piche se hi waha se bhag nikalta he. Kuch der takk goli bari chalne ke baad Rana ke sare admi dharashayi ho chuke the.

Darasal Armed Force ko yaha Abhinav or Anant laya tha, use kisi ne call kar ke is bare me bata diya tha. Batane wala shaks or koi nahi, balki Abdul tha. Waha Aksh ek bejan lash bann kar zameen par gira hua tha. Abhinav or Anant sabse pehle Rana ko dhund ne ke liye ghar me talash karne chale gaye. Or isi waqt Aksh ki nazar Aman par padd gayi thi, or tabhi usne waha ja kar Aman se kuch akhri bate ki thi.


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Jese jese Aksh ye sab Sakshi ko bata raha tha, waise waise Sakshi ki aakho se asu or zyada tezi se beh rahe the. Aksh aage kuch or bolne wala tha ke tabhi waha Goliya chalne lagti he. Darasal jab Shahid Aksh ko lene araha tha, to usme samne se bahot sari Special Forces ki gadiya jungle ke andar jate dekhi. Usne Aksh ko khabar karni chahi thi, lekin Tabtak Aksh ka mobile Sakshi ke saath bhidant me tut chuka tha. Shahid ne gadi ko dusri taraf se andar chala diya. Or ghar ke piche pahoch kar samne se ati Special Forces par humla karne laga. Jawab me samne se bhi goliya chalne lagi. Ye awaz sunkar Sakshi apni Gun uthakar darwaze ke paas ane lagi ke tabhi ek Goli akar Sakshi ko lagg gayi. Ye dekh kar Aksh ki to mano jaan hi nikal gayi.
Aksh: Sakshi........

Wo daud te hue akar Sakshi ko sambhal leta he, lekin Tabtak Sakshi ki aakhe band ho chuki thi, ab ye Forces ghar ke andar takk achuki thi, Anant ne Aksh ko dekhte hi uspar dhava bol diya, or use ulta gira kar hatkadi pehna di. Sana ne Sakshi ko utha kar Ambulance me se rawana kar diya. Wahi bahar Shahid or baki sab is khel me haar gaye or sab goliya kha kar maut ke ghat utar gaye.

Anant ne apne Officers se pure ghar ki talashi lene ke liye keh diya. Or khud Aksh ko collar se pakad kar Sofe par bitha diya or khud uske samne beth gaya.

Anant: to..... Aksh.... AKA Qaatil. Kese ho?
Wo Aksh ke nazdeek akar use uksate hue kehta he. Aksh bass gusse se use ghure ja raha tha. Tabhi Officers andar se bahot sara cash or Guns lekar agaye.
Anant: ohhh.... Kya baat he Aksh, itni Tarakki? Khair ab asman chukar ho gaya ho to zameen par akar mitti ka swad bhi chakk lo.....
Or ye kehkar wo Aksh ko pakd kar ghasit te hue bahar le jakar gadi me daal deta he. Or khud usi gadi me bethkar use Hospital le jata he. Kyu ke Aksh ko bhi bahot sare ghav mile the.

Hospital me akar Aksh ki marham patti ho chuki thi, Anant ne use apni car me bitha diya, or use Jail me le jane ke liye rawana ho gaya.

Anant: Aksh agar tum mujhpar humla or Neel ko marne ki galati nahi karte to shayad me kuch or waqt ke liye tumhe azad rehne deta.... Shayad tumhara badla pura hone takk? Lekin ab nahi, bass 2 sunwahi or tumhe tumhare kiye ki saza mil jayegi... Fasi....
Aksh: aise kayaro ki maut nahi marunga..... Or mene kaha tha ke mere raste me matt ana, warna.....
Anant: Shut Up..... Is waqt tum mere kabze me ho, firse bahar jane ki socho bhi matt..... or ye khali dhamkiya dena band karo. Tumhara waqt khatam ho gaya he....
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he.
Aksh: marne se pehle meri kisi se akhri mulaqat karwa sakte ho?
Anant: huhhh.... Chalo kaho, kis se milna chahoge?
Aksh: Sakshi se..... Abhi, isi waqt.....
Uski baat sunkar Anant kuch sochkar gadi Sakshi jaha thi us Hospital me le jata he. Waha Sakshi ki condition kafi critical thi. Anant kuch Police ke saath Aksh ko lekar andar agaya jaha Sana khadi thi.

Anant: kya hua Sana? Sakshi.....
Sana: sir Sakshi is waqt Koma me he.....
Ye sunkar Aksh ke dil ko bahot zyada takleef hoti he.
Anant: Doctor ne kya kaha?
Sana: agar Sakshi kuch der me koi halchal nahi karti to we could Lose Her.....
Ye sunte hi Aksh dil jese dhadana hi bhul gaya.
Aksh: mujhe.... Mujhe Sakshi se milna he.....
Fir Anant kuch soch kar use andar jane ki permission de deta he. Samne bed par Sakshi oxygen mask me leti thi. Waha mojud heart sensing machine normal tarike se beep ho rahi thi. Lekin jese jese Aksh uske nazdeek ja raha tha, machine ke beep hone ki speed badhte ja rahi thi. Aksh akar aakh ke bilkul paas khada ho jata he or bass Sakshi ke chehre ko ek takk dekhne lagta he.

"agar tum sunn rahi ho, to ye jaan lo.... Us din jab me duniya ki sari sahi galat ki dharna bhul kar tumhare paas akar gid gida te hue jo mene tumhara haath manga tha.. Ab nahi chahiye..... Shukriya mujhe Naa kehne ke liye..... Shukriya, mujhe mujhse milane ke liye..... Tum, jisne meri shaksiyat chinn li.... Ek bacche se uski masumiyat chinn li, agar sunn rahe ho, to ye jaan lo, wo Ishq ka bich jo tumne boya tha is dil ne Nafrat me tabdil kar liya he.... Apne sabse bade darr se mene khudko azad kar liya he.... Tum.... Jo ab mera sabkuch ho, mera akhri ruhani rishta ho, agar sunn rahe ho, to ye jaan lo ke sare darr mita kar bhi, sirf ek tumhe Khone ka darr he.... Ye aakhe sirf tumhare liye bharr ati he, lekin aaj wada karta hu, kabhi bhi kamzor nahi padhunga. Tumhare liye ek aasu or nahi bahaunga.... Kyu ke....."

Jab Aksh ye sab keh raha hota he, tabb Sakshi se judi wo machine ke beep hone ki raftar tez hone lagi thi, or Sakshi zor zor se saase lene lagi. Ye Dekh kar Doctor daud kar andar ajata he, or Anant ko kehkar Aksh ko bahar le jane ke liye bolta he. Anant Aksh ko lekar waha se nikal aya or Aksh ko le ja kar sidha Jail me daal diya.

Pata nahi kyu lekin ab Aksh se or saha nahi ja raha tha, or itne waqt se apni bhavnao ko dabaye rakha Aksh wahi par rone lagta he.

Wahi Hospital me Sakshi koma se bhar achuki thi, Aksh ne apna kaam kar diya tha. Lekin Sakshi ko Doctors ne injection de kar sula diya tha.

Sana: sir... Aapne jesa socha tha, waisa kuch nahi hua.... Ab....
Anant: koi baat nahi.... Is waqt Rana se zyada khatra hume Aksh se hi he.... Bass ab Court jald se jald Aksh ko saza suna de....
Sana: lekin sir Sakshi.....
Anant: pehli sunwahi takk Sakshi ko bass yahi ehsas dilana hoga ke ye sab hum Aksh ko begunah sabit karne ke liye hi kar rahe he.... Or me janta hu Sakshi se kya kehna he.....
Wo ek gehri soch me jakar us se kehta he.

Waha Shahid or baki sabki lashe bhi unke pariwar walo ko sop di gayi thi. Sabne Aksh ka har kadam par saath diya tha, lekin aaj shayad kismat kuch or chahti thi.

Kismat kya chahti thi? Akhir sahi kon he galat kon he? Anant kabtak Sakshi se sacchayi chupa payega. Or jab Sacchayi samne ayegi tabb Sakshi ka kya haal hoga? Aise hi kayi sare sawalo se bhara aaj, ane wale kal ka intezar kar raha tha.

To is tarah antt hota he is kahani ke tisre adhyay, "Qaatil" ka, ab is kahani ka agla adhyay "Frozen Romance" kahani ko kaha le jata he ye dekhna dilchasp hoga. Tabtak bane rahiye.

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Chapter 4 - Frozen Romance

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Raat ke kareeb 3 baje suddenly Sakshi kafi zor zor se saase lene lagi, waha is waqt Sana bhi mojud thi, usne sabse pehle Doctor ko waha bula liya. Doctor ne akar use ek injection de diya, jis se Sakshi bilkul shant ho gayi.

Sana: Doctor.... Is everything Alright?
Doctor: Don't worry.... Ghabrane wali koi baat nahi he.... Sakshi is recovering i think Dopeher takk hum use behoshi se bahar le ayenge.
Sana: okay, thanks.....
Fir Doctor waha se chala gaya. Sana bhi kafi der ae yaha bethi thi, isliye uski bhi wahi par aakh lagg gayi.

Dusri taraf Anant ne to jese Aksh ko fasi dilwane ki thaan thi, wo Court me pesh karne ke liye chote se chota saboot bhi nahi chhod raha tha. Sare saboot usne ikhatta kar ke Aksh ka bachna jese namumkin sa kar diya tha.

Lekin yaha Mosam kafi thanda ho chuka tha or is wajah se Aksh dard me karhate hue apni karvate badal raha tha. Jailer ne use kuch dawai de di jis se Aksh kuch der baad gehri nind me chala gaya.

Dopeher ka waqt ho chala tha, Anant khane ki ek plate lekar Aksh ke Cell me ajata he. Lekin is waqt Aksh so raha tha, Anant ne plate ko ek taraf rakh diya or aage akar zor se Aksh ki kamar me laat maar di, jis se Aksh ek jhatke me jagg gaya or apni kamar pakad kar karhane laga.

Anant: maaf karna.... Zyada zor se laga kya?
Wo niche jhuka kar dhimi awaz me Aksh se kehta he. Aksh use bahot hi gusse me ghur raha tha.
Anant: kya dekh rahe ho? Marna chahte ho mujhe? Jis tarah se tumne Abhinav Sir ko mara tha?
Wo gusse me Aksh ki collar pakad kar kehta he. Ispar Aksh ne Anant ke muh par thuk diya or hasne laga. Lekin ab Anant ka gussa satve asman par chala gaya tha, usne Aksh ko collar se hi pakad kar utha liya or zor se samne ki diwar par de Mara. Pehle se hi itni chot lagne ki wajah se ab Aksh se utha nahi ja raha tha. Anant ne aage akar use pakad kar utha liya or uska sir piche se pakad kar diwar se daba diya.

Anant: bata do Aksh.... Kyu mara Abhinav sir ko tumne? Pehle jab jail me the to kisi police walo ko nahi bataya tumne, isliye is baar me khud puch raha hu.... Bata domm..
Wo Aksh ka sir piche se pakad kar uska chehra diwar se ragadte hue kehta he. Lekin in sabke bawajud muh se ek shabd nahi nikal raha tha. Ab Anant ne Aksh ka chehra apni taraf kiya or use mukka marne ke liye badha hi tha ke tabhi Aksh ne uski mutthi apne haath se rok li.
Aksh: wo... Wo to nahi bache..... ab Tum bhi nahi bachoge..... Jo karna he kar lo....
Uski baat sunkar Anant ne Aksh ko zor se pakad kar niche zameen par patak diya, or Aksh ki chot par jo patti bandhi thi use nikal kar garam Daal ki katori uspar daal thi. Jis se Aksh dard se tadapte hue chillane lagg gaya. Anant niche jhuk kar Aksh ke baal pakad kar uska chehra upar utha deta he.
Anant: acche sapne dekh lete ho.... Lekin Court me agli 2 peshi me hi tumhara khel khatam hone wala he.... Fasi ke liye tayar rehna.....
Itna kehkar wo Cell se bahar agaya.

Anant: acche se marham patti karo iski, itni asani se marne matt dena use.....
Wo bahar akar Jailer se kehta he or waha se chala jata he.

Dusri taraf Sakshi ab hosh me agayi thi, lekin uska dard ab bhi kam nahi hua tha. Kyu ke goli uske chest or pet ke bich ke hisse me lagi thi, goli ek inch bhi yaha waha ho jati to aaj Sakshi zinda na hoti. Sana wahi par sambhal rahi thi, Sakshi hosh me ate hi apne aap ko Hospital bed par pakar heran reh jati he.

Sakshi: me..... Me yaha.... Me to.... Aksh.... Aksh kaha he? Me... Me Aksh se mili thi.... Kaha he Aksh?
Wo Sana ko apne samne dekh kar puche ja rahi thi.
Sana: Sakshi.... Relax, Aksh thik he.... Or tumhe kal Goli lagi thi, isliye tum yaha.....
Sakshi: mujhe meri parwah nahi he..... Aksh kaha he mujhe bass ye jaan na he....
Wo Sana ki baat bich me kaat kar chillate hue kehti he.
Sana: Sakshi wo.... Aksh.... Aksh Jail me he.....
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi ke to hosh hi udd jate he.
Sakshi: ye... Ye aap kya.... Kya keh rahi ho? Aksh... Aksh Jail me kyu?
Sana: don't worry Sakshi, Aksh ko bass kuch Legal Formalities ke chalte Jail me rakha gaya he....
Sakshi: nahi..... Use Jail me nahi rakha ja sakta..... Me.... Mujhe Anant sir se baat karni he.....
Wo utne ki koshish karte hue apni Saline nikalte hue kehti he, ye dekh kar Sana ne use rokna chaha, lekin ab Sakshi kafi Voilent hone lagi. Sana ne Sakshi ko kass kar pakad liya lekin Sakshi ne ek zor ka dhakka dekar Sana ko piche gira diya. Sakshi ne apne haath se Saline ki tip ek hi jhatke me nikal fek di, lekin tabhi Doctors or Nurse daud te hue waha agaye or unhone milkar Sakshi ko pakad liya or use nind ka injection de diya, jis se wo kabu me agayi. Sana ne turant Anant ko call laga kar ye sab bata diya or use yaha bula liya.

Kuch der baad Anant waha achuka tha, or sham ke waqt Sakshi ki aakhe khulne lagi, usne apne samne Anant ko dekh kar uspar sawalo ki bochar kar di.

Anant: Sakshi.... Please tum shant ho jao.....
Sakshi: kese shant ho jau sir? Ye sab.... Ye sab akhir ho kya raha he? Jise me apne pariwar or Aksh ka Qaatil samajh rahi thi wo to khud Aksh hi he..... Or ab Aksh ko Jail me..... Ye sab kyu?
Anant: Sakshi meri bhi samajh me kuch nahi araha, jise hum Qaatil samajh rahe the, wo khud Aksh he..... Agar ye mujhe pehle se pata hota to.....
Sakshi: to fir Aksh ko Jail me kyu daal diya aapne?
Wo Anant ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
Anant: Sakshi hume Aksh ko uski bhalayi ke liye hi Jail me dala he.... Kya tum bhul gayi jab Aksh Jail se bhag nikla tha tabb Court me Aksh ke khilaf Shoot At Sight ke order jari kar diye the? Agar is baar bhi hum Aksh ko hirasat me na lete to Court firse uske khilaf ye Shoot At Sight ke order jari kar deti, or is baar me bhi Court ke khilaf nahi ja pata.....
Ab Anant ki baat sunkar Sakshi bilkul shant ho gayi.
Sakshi: lekin.... Lekin Aksh Gunehgar nahi he....
Anant: me janta hu Sakshi, Aksh ne mujhe bataya Rana ke bare me.....
Sakshi: to fir aap ye sabit kar ke Aksh ko begunah ghoshit kyu nahi karte?
Anant: hum wahi kar rahe he Sakshi..... agli 2 hearings me hum Aksh ko begunah sabit kar denge.... Uske baad tum Aksh ke saath pehle ki tarah hi apni zindagi guzar sakogi.....
Wo Sakshi ke kandhe par Haath rakh kar use jhuti tasalli dete hue kehta he. Lekin ab Sakshi kese jaan leti ke Anant ki tasalli bilkul jhuti he. Fir bhi Sakshi uski tasalli se khush ho gayi, or ye sunkar uske chehre par duniya bhar ki khushi cha gayi. Or wo bass mann hi mann Aksh ke saath apni aage ki zindagi guzarne ke sapne bunn ne lagg gayi. Sakshi ne Aksh se milne ki zidd to ki thi, lekin Doctor ne use is waqt kahi bhi jane se saaf saaf mana kar diya tha.

Khair, ye din to jese tese nikal chuka tha. Lekin gazab ki baat ye thi ke yaha har kisi ki kahani kisi na kisi tarah ek dusre se judi hui thi. Or har koi is kahani ko apne apne tarike se likhna chah raha tha, lekin Shayad ye sab bhul rahe the ke in sabse upar bhi puri duniya par nazar rakhe koi he, jisne is kahani ka antt bhi tay kar rakha tha.


Berehaal, subah ki thand ne Aksh ke chotil badan ka ek ek hissa dard se chakna chur kar rakha tha. Aksh apni kismat ko samajh hi nahi pa raha tha ke ye sab akhir kyu ho raha he. Lekin jabtak Aksh ye sab sochta, waha par Anant garam chay ki pyali lekar agaya.

Anant: are wahh.... Tum to jaage hue ho. Mujhe laga firse kal ki tarah jagana hoga tumhe....
Wo Aksh ke samne akar uski taraf chay badhate hue kehta he. Lekin Aksh bass use gusse me dekh raha tha.
Anant: are bhai le bhi lo..... Thand me bada sukoon deti he ye chay....
Uski baat par Aksh apna muh fer leta he. Lekin tabhi Anant me wo garam chay Aksh ke chehre par fek di. Aksh chillate hue waha se uthkar samne rakhe pani ke utensil se apne chehre par pani marne laga.
Anant: ohh.... Mujhe maaf kar dena, wo thand bahot hena, to haah kanp rahe the mere us chakkar me chay gir gayi.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh bahot gussa ho gaya, usne palat kar Anant ka collar pakad kar use diwar se daba diya.
Aksh: kya chahte ho? Ha, bolo akhir chahte kya ho?
Wo gusse me Anant ka gala dabate hue kehta he. Lekin Anant apne haath se Aksh ka haath pakad kar use apne gale hatane lagta he.
Anant: jaan na chahta hu..... Abhinav Sir ko kyu mara?
Wo apni collar thik karte hue Aksh se puchta he.
Aksh: mann kiya isliye maar diya.....
Wo Anant ke chehre ke bilkul nazdeek jakar kafi dhimi awaz me kehta he.
Anant: aise kese Aksh? Jis raat tumne apna sabkuch kho diya tha, tabb Abhinav Sir hi the jinhone tumhe apne saath apne ghar me rakha, or jab tum me apne pariwar ke sadasyo ki chita ko aag lagane ki himmat nahi thi, tabb unhone hi us kaam ko apna farz samjha.... Beta kaha tha na unhone tumhe? Tumhare badle ko pura karne ka wada kiya tha na unhone? Fir? Bhul gaye sabkuch? Bhul gaye sabkuch?
Wo bahot hi gusse me Aksh ka gala pakad kar chillate hue kehta he.
Aksh: paristhitiya humesha ek jesi nahi rehti.....
Anant: thik kaha...... Paristhitiya humesha ek jesi nahi rehti.... Ab tayar rehna apne kiye ki saza pane ke liye....
Wo Aksh ko dhakka dete hue kehta he, or waha se bahar chala jata he.


Wahi dusri taraf Sakshi ko ab kuch rahat mehsus ho rahi thi, lekin ab bhi use bed se utarne ki ijazat nahi thi. Isi tarah kuch din nikal jate he, waha Anant har roz Aksh se ye jaan ne ki koshish karta ke usne akhir ye sab kyu kiya, lekin Aksh apna muh kholne ke liye katayi tayar nahi tha.



Kuch dino baad Sakshi ab chal fir sakti thi, usne sabse pehle Anant se Aksh se milne ki request ki. Kafi sari minnate karne baad Anant ne kuch soch kar Sakshi ko Aksh se milne ki permission de di. Sham ke waqt Sakshi Jail me dhakhil ho chuki thi. Wo jese hi Aksh ke Cell ke paas pahochi, to darwaze ke chote se hisse se usne andar dekha ke Aksh ek taraf muh kar ke soya hua he. Jailer ne darwaza khol diya, or Sakshi andar agayi, jab wo Aksh ke nazdeek ayi to usne Aksh ka badan sirf chot se bhara hua paya. Jo dekh kar Sakshi ka dil tut raha tha, or ab uski aakho se aasu behne lage. Sakshi akar Aksh ke sar ke paas beth gayi, usne apne kanpte hue haath aage badha kar Aksh ke sar me fer diya Jis se ki Aksh ki saase Fulne lagi, Sakshi ne dhire se Aksh ka sar apni godd me rakh diya, or tabhi Aksh ki dhadkane tez chalne lagi, uski aakho se apne aap asu behne lage, jese itne waqt se sukoon ki talash me bhatakte insan ko wo sukoon mil hi gaya ho. Sakshi ab bhi Aksh ke sar me haath fer rahi thi, or tabhi Aksh ne uska haath pakad liya or use apne Haatho me kasne laga. Lekin tabhi uski aakh khul gayi, or jab use ehsas hua ke Sakshi waha sach me mojud he, wo jhat se uthkar khada ho gaya. Sakshi bhi uthkar uske paas jane lagi, lekin Aksh apne kadam piche ki or badhane laga.

Sakshi: k..... K.... Kya hua Aksh.....
Aksh: dur ho mujhse.....
Wo kafi zor se chillakar kar kehta he, jis se Sakshi bhi ek pal ke liye darr gayi.
Aksh: mere..... Mere nazdeek ane ki koshish matt karna.... Jab bhi tu.... Jab bhi tu mere nazdeek ayi he, me harta aya hu..... Is baar.... Is baar apna badla kiye bina me harna nahi chahta.
Wo gusse me Sakshi ki taraf ungli dikhate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: ye.... Ye kya keh raha he Aksh tu? Me.....
Aksh: sahi keh raha hu me..... Behtar yahi hoga ke mujhe mere haal par chhod do..... Me jiyu maru lekin.....
Sakshi: Aksh..... ye Kya bakwas kar raha he tu?
Wo gusse me Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
Sakshi: kyu aise kar raha he Aksh tu? Itne waqt se tujhe dhund ne ke liye dar dar bhatak rahi thi me.... Or ab jab tu mujhe mil gaya to.....
Aksh: jise tu dhund rahi he wo kabka marr gaya.... Marr gaya wo us hi din jis din usne apni aakho ke samne apna pariwar ujadta dekha....
Wo gusse me Sakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Aksh... Jo tune khoya he wo mene bhi to khoya hena?
Wo rote hue Aksh se kehti he, lekin ye sunkar Aksh uske nazdeek ajata he.
Aksh: jo mene khoya, wo tune nahi khoya..... Mene sirf apne Aai Baba nahi khoye.... Mene us insan ko bhi khoya jise me is duniya me sabse badhkar chahta tha, jiske ek pal bhi dur hone se pagal ho jata tha, jiske liye puri duniya uske kadmo me lakar rakhne ke khwab dekhta tha. Jaan ma chahti ho kon he wo insan? Meri behen ko khoya he mene.....
Wo apni num aakho se Sakshi ke chehre ke nazdeek akar kafi dhimi awaz me kehta he. Ab is baat ka koi jawab Sakshi ke paas nahi tha. Wo kuch kehna chahti thi, lekin tabhi Aksh piche hatt gaya.
Sakshi: Aksh.... A.... Aisi baat nahi he.... Hum firse waise hi......
Wo rote hue Aksh se keh rahi hoti he lekin tabhi Aksh uski baat bich me kaat deta he.
Aksh: nahi reh sakte...... Agar tu firse pehle ki tarah zindagi guzarne ke khwab dekh rahi he to.... To tujhe nind se uthkar asal zindagi me ana hoga.....
Wo Sakshi ki aakho me aakhe dalkar kehta he.
Sakshi: kyu nahi ho sakta Aksh? Tune kitne sare sapne saja kar rakhe the, humesha kehta tha na ke meri success bahot dur he, to chalna.... Us success ko hasil kar le na.....
Aksh: bhad me gayi success..... Bhad me gaya sapno ka wo mukammal jahan..... Ab nahi chahiye kuch bhi, na daulat ki wasna or na hi shohrat ka tamasha.....
Wo gusse me apna haath diwar par marte hue chillakar kehta he.
Sakshi: Aksh teri manzil tera mukam ye nahi he.....
Aksh: mera sharir or rooh.... Koi manzil ya mukam takk pahochne ke liye bane hi nahi he.... me to wo insan hu, jo sangharsh ke safar me jina chahta he....
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi bilkul heran reh gayi, use samajh hi nahi araha tha ke wo akhir kahe to kahe kya. Jese hi wo kuch kehne ke liye aage badhi, tabhi Cell ke bahar se Anant ne Cell ka darwaza knock kar diya. Is waqt Aksh Sakshi ki taraf pith kar ke khada tha. Sakshi tabhi yaad aya ke Aksh ke pith par uske dwara kiye gaye vaar he. Isliye Sakshi ne aage badhkar Aksh ka kamiz thoda niche kar ke uski chot par kiss kar diya.
Sakshi: ab zyada dard nahi hoga.....
Wo apni num aakho se kehkar waha se chali jati he. Uske jate hi Aksh Zameen par bethe bikhar kar rone lagta he.

Waha Sakshi khud akeli ghar jane ke liye nikal gayi thi.

Sakshi (mann me): koi baat nahi Aksh.... Dekhna, jald hi me tujhe firse wahi purana Aksh bana dungi.... Teri nass nass se waqif hu me.... Itna bada ho gaya he, lekin Tujhe ab bhi tere dil or dimag ke bich faisla karna nahi ata.... Koi baat nahi, me hu na. Jese pehle tujhe sahi rasta dikhati thi, waise hi ab bhi dikhaungi....

Sakshi gadi chalate hue apne dil se baate kiye ja rahi thi, ke tabhi uski nazar kone me andhere ke bich bethi hui ek ladki par padd gayi. Sakshi ne turant gadi rok li, or us ladki ke piche akar khadi ho gayi.

Sakshi: excuse me.... Are you okay?
Wo piche se us ladki ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehti he. Jese hi wo ladki ne apna chehra piche fera, to Sakshi ne ne paya ke uska pura chehra asuo se bhara hua he. Jo dekh kar Sakshi bahot darr gayi, wo akar us ladki ke bagal me beth gayi.
Sakshi: agar tumhe koi pareshani he to..... You can share with me.....
Wo us ladki ka haath apne hatho me thamkar kehti he, lekin tabhi wo ladki rone lagti he. Sakshi use sahara dekar chup karane lagti he. Kuch der baad wo ladki chup ho gayi thi.
Sakshi: please tum be jhijak mujhe batao kya baat he? Shayad me tumhari help kar saku.....
Ladki: nahi kar paogi.... Koi madat nahi kar paogi....
Sakshi: tum aisa kyu keh rahi ho? At least mujhe apne rone ki wajah to bata sakti ho?
Ladki: me.... Mene... Mene apne Maa Baap kho diye.....
Wo Sakshi ke gale lagte hue kehti he or rona shuru kar deti he. Lekin ye sunkar Sakshi bilkul heran reh jati he.
Sakshi: please tum rona band karo, or mujhe puri baat batao.....
Wo us ladki ko shant kara kar puchti he.
Ladki: kuch din pehle.... Mere... Mere Maa Baap ek car accident me marr gaye.... Or ab... Ab mera is duniya me koi nahi he... Kiske sahare jiyu me?
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi ko kafi dhuk hota he, kyu ke apne Maa Baap ko khone ka dard Sakshi bhi samajh sakti thi.
Sakshi: tum janti ho, mene bhi apne Aai Baba, Matlab mere Maa Baap ko khoya he.... Tumne to shayad akhri baar unko dekha hoga, unki Arthi dekhi hogi.... Mene to.... Mene to itne waqt se unhe dekha bhi nahi tha, or na hi me unka antim Sanskar kar payi.... Me janti hu Maa Baap khone la dard, lekin zindagi me jine ke liye koi na koi wajah zarur mil jati he... Aaj bhale hi me andar se tut chuki hu, lekin ek wajah he jo mujhe abtak zinda rakhe hue he.....
Wo kafi bhavuk hokar apni num aakho se kehti he. Ab dono ki paristhitiya ek jesi hone se wo ek dusre ka dukh samajh pa rahe the, kuch der baad us ladki ne bhi rona band lar diya.
Sakshi: waise tumhara naam kya he?
Ladki: mera naam Ashna he....
Sakshi: nice name... Me Sakshi....
Wo apna haath aage badhate hue kehti he. Ashna bhi muskurate hue us se haath mila leti he.

Fir Sakshi use apni gadi me bithakar uske ghar chhod deti he. Raste me dono ne apne numbers bhi exchange kar liye. Jese hi Ashna car se utri, or Sakshi aage chali gayi, usne muskurate hue kisi ko call laga diya.

Rana: bolo Kriti.... Kaam ho gaya?


To Be Continued......


To Dosto ye tha Chapter 4 ka pehla Update, Hope aapko pasand ayega. Or me janta hu itna late Update dene se bahot se logo ka interest is story me nahi raha, lekin asal zindagi ko bhi to chalana he na? Khair, agla Update 2-3 din ke andar hi ajayega, kyu ke itne dino se bhag daud kar ke thakk chuka hu or ab kuch dino ki chutti li he. To jald hi Update post kar dunga.


agar update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. agla update jald hi ayega till then stay tuned and keep smiling

 

[Qaatil]

1st Update of chapter 4 posted, Give A Like And Don't Forget To Post Your Precious Feedback ❤

Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.

sahi kaha bhai.

Thank you bhai...ye story bahat hi jyda achchha hai...waiting your next update...

Bhaiya mn apki khani ka silent reader hoon apki dosri khani b parhi boht achi thi full of emotions pr apki ic khani k start mn Jo seen dikhya gya osy soch k dr b lagta hy k ghoom phir k khani mn wo moor too aana hi hy ici liay kamoshi sy khani Read kr rha tha pr aaj socha itni achi khani ki tareef nh karna boht zyadti hogi

Pr kuch swal heen

Mansi k bhai ko marny k baad dosri larki ka zikar aaya too wo larki khee Sakshi too nhi q k mansi too pehly sy onki nazro mn thi oor osy dhondny ki baat samjh nhi aatiap ki khani ki hr update ka besabri sy intyzar rehta hy

Sunday tak sabhi reviews clear

badhiya update bhai ji

KYA BAAT KYA BAAT

Qatil sir ur story is best this story is one of my favourite stories i love it & i eagerly waiting for your new update

Waiting bhai log..

Baught badhia update h bhai

Waiting

Wo ishq hai tumse mera favorite story hai aur hamesha favorite hi rahega...aur mujhe lagta hao ye story bhi bahat hi achchha hai

Ye storie main ne bookmark me save ki thi parhne ke liye jab ye shuru huwi thi lekin phir yaad he nahi raha aj bookmarks khole to saamne ye storie aa gayi sach me kabile tareef storie hai parhte parhte main ne socha ke iss ko pehle kiu nahi parha lekin ab lag raha hai is ko abhi parh ker galti ker di ab intezar he jan le ga iss ke ek update parhne ke baad dusra update kholne me jitna time lag raha tha wo waqt he mujhe zehar lag raha tha Ab to samjho intezar ho ga he nahi Main itna acha review de nahi sakta jitne ki ye storie haqdar hai bus ye kahu ga speechless har kirdar bohat ache tareeke se paish kia hai ap ne har feeling ubhar ke saamne ayi hai ek ek scene dil ko chune wala tha bohat arse baad aisi storie parhne ko mili hai sab updates parh liye hai iss liye hai ye ek naya reader jur gaya hai ab ap ke saath jaldi jaldi update do waiting for next update

Waiting Qaatil sir

Ok bhai

Nice update

Waiting

Mast update hai

Nice introduction.......

Jhakaasssss

Super

Next update Qaatil sir aap kab de rho ho

Awesome update

lajwaab update bro

Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.

But please continue as per your story.

I am enjoying it. Thanks

Next part

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.

Super update

Ye turning update h

Keep posting

Very good starting and nice script

Full paisa wasool performance.

Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Atulniya Update sirji





Most beautiful scene of this Update ❤

N

Nice start bro

Super se bhi uper update

shandar update

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Lajawab update

Nice

Superb Starting bro keep it up

Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya

Awesome update

Super

Bahut badhiya update bhai

Good name of story.

Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.

Superb update bhai......

Fantastic update..bhai

nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..

aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..

ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai .

Bdiya update bhai ji



Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta



Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do



Age apki marzi

Nice update..

Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again. Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring. Send that teacher to me, I teach him. If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

Shandar Dumdar UpdateAksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.

Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....

Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???

dekthe aage kya hota.....

Waiting for next.....

Shandar Bhai

Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai ❤

Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai ❤

For completed 25k views on your story thread.....

hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad

Waiting For Next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.

Bahut khoob superb

Waiting bro

Intazar rahega bhai

Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?

Waiting

Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,

tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.

Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,

Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.



Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.

jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.



Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.

vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.

Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.

Love you dear brother

Waiting for the next update.

Superb update bro

Fabulous update bro

Good story

Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h

Waiting bro

नमस्कार सर जी।

कहानी का पहला भाग आज पढ़ा।



कहानी की शुरुआत देखकर लगता है कि आकाश और साक्षी के माता पिता राधा और संतोष की किसी ने हत्या कर दी है।



अच्छा साक्षी और आकाश के जन्म में बस एक मिनट का अंतर है और दोनों बड़े शरारती है।

पूरा घर सिर पर उठा रखा है दोनों ने।



लेकिन दोनों भाई बहन में बहुत प्यार भी है।।



कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है।

बहुत जल्द पूरी कहानी पढूंगी।

behatrin story bro....................



mene aapki 1st story read ki thi....kafi acchi story thi



but iss story ka to level hi alag h 1st story se kafi improvement kiya h aapne............



hero k emotions uski feelings or life ke sangharsh ke sath sath uski apne sapne ko pura krne ki lalak ko kafi acche se describe kiya h aapne............



sat hi villen ki darindgi or samaj m jahar gholte drugs k bare m kafi acche se likha h .................



whi ek successful businessman ke roop m aman ko bhut acche se prastut kiya h jisme uska ground se juda hona bhi dikhaya h .......



sath hi apni 1st deal pura nhi hone jo ese ldke ne mna kiya tha jiska ye startup tha usse hone wali becheni or life k prati uski najariya ko bdlne wale pal bhi kafi khubsurat the.......................



overall outstanding story till continued update................



next update ka intzar rahega bro.....................

Bhai next update kab ayega?

Waiting for the update qaatil bhaai please post the next update soon.....

Waiting

Zabardast update bht hi kamal ki story writing. Mansi or Sakshi twins hain or dono aksh ki sisters hain agr ye twist hay to bhai bht bara dhamaka honay wala hay, eagerly waiting for next update bhai keep up the fantabolous work

Baught hi shaandaar update h

❤

Umda

Romance is oozing in this story.

Waiting

the story maker

Nice story keep it bhai

Waiting for update....

Bhai thoda fast update do na...waiting nahi ho raha...bahat hi interesting story hai bhai

Qaatil sir apke 25-30 minutes pure ho gye ab to update de do abhi tak ankhe bhi nhi nichi ja rhi jaldi kro bhai

Bahut shandar update. Mere paas shabd kam pad gaye he tarif k liye. Bhale hi aapne thoda fast story dikhayi par har patra k sath barabar nyay kiya. Emotions love trejady ka bhandar tha. Bhai aapne ek punch line sakshi k dwara di he ki har khubsurat kahani to adhuri hi rahti he par me bhai aapse request karta hu ki aapki itani khubsurat rachna ko adhuri mat chhod dena. Nice update brother. Vese next update kab aayega.

 

[Qaatil]

Thank You So Much Dosto Aap sabke Comments ke liye.
Update Posted Check Out And Keep Supporting ​

Excellent update

Nice update bro

Nice and beautiful update...

Super Fantastic update Qaatil bhai...

Fantastic update