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Chapter 1 - The Early Life

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Word Count: 3304
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Kehte he na ke jab akho me bade sapne hote he to nind kahi dur bhaag jati he, jab dil me kuch karne ka jasba ho to har ek pal katna muskil sa ho jata he, kuch aisa hi Aksh ka haal tha. Jagti raate mushkil se kat te din, ye sab Aksh ko andar hi andar ek behtar insan banane ki koshish me the, isi tarah din nikalte ja rahe the, Aksh har roz Karim ke Garage par jata, waha mann laga kar apna kaam karta, Karim ki logo se baat karne ki style ko bade gaur se dekhta.

Aise hi kuch mahine beet gaye the, ab bari thi college admissions ki, Sakshi ne science stream me admission liya tha, Lekin Aksh Commerce lena chahta tha lekin Santosh or Radha ne use Science stream choon ne ko kaha, wo dono chahte the ke Aksh aage ja kar engineering ki padhai kare, Sakshi ke samjhane par Aksh maan gaya dono ko admission ek hi college, ek hi class me hua tha. Wahi Neha bhi Science me dono ke saath hi thi, lekin Soham ne Commerce stream chuni thi.

Kuch waqt aise hi guzar jata he, 4-5 dino baad sabke College start hone wake the. Ek din Aksh raat ko kareeb 8 baje Garage se ghar ata he, wo aaj kafi thak chuka tha, jese hi wo ghar ke andar aya to Santosh samne hi betha hua tha, Aksh sidha apne kamre me jane ke liye aage badhta he ke Santosh use rok leta he, tabhi waha Sakshi bhi ajati he.

Santosh: Aksh sunn... Kal hum sab 2-3 din ke liye tumhare Mama ke ghar ja rahe he, apna saman pack kar lena...
Aksh: Baba mujhe nahi jana kahi....
Wo rukhe swar me Santosh se kehta he, uske jawab se Santosh thoda gussa ho jata he. lekin Sakshi samajh jati he ke ab mahol bigadne wala he.
Santosh: Kyu nahi jana?
Aksh: bass mujhe nahi jana....
Santosh: Aksh dekh apni mann mani karna band kar de me bata raha hu....
Wo gusse me Aksh ko ungli dikhate hue kehta he.
Aksh: mann mani? Konsi mann mani karne di aapne mujhe? Are yaha tak ke padhai bhi apni marzi se karne ka moka nahi diya mujhe aapne... Or keh rahe he ke mann mani mat kar.... Mann mani to aap log kar rahe ho mujhpar.
Wo thodi unchi awaaz me Frustrate hokar kehta he, uski awaz se Radha bhi bahar ajati he, Santosh uski baat se kafi gussa ho gaya tha, wo Aksh ko thappad marne ke liye aage badha hi tha ke Sakshi or Radha bich me akar use rok lete he.
Radha: aap shant ho jayiye na....
Santosh: kese shant ho jau? Dekha nahi kese baat kar raha he ye ladka.... Are tere acche ke liye kehta hu me...
Aksh: aap jo kehte he wo acche ke liye, or jo me kehta hu wo mann mani? Huhhh....
Wo Santosh ki akho me dekhte hue kehta he, or waha se apne kamre me chala jata he.
Radha: aap chaliye... Andar...
Santosh: are kya chaliye..... Dushman nahi hu me uska...
Radha: ha aap baadme shanti se baat kar lena us se.... Abhi chaliye andar...
Or wo Santosh ko apne kamre me le jati he.

Ab Sakshi jaldi se Aksh ke kamre me jati he jaha Aksh kafi gusse me betha hua tha. Sakshi andar akar uske paas beth jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh tu na bewajah behes karta rehta he sabse...
Sakshi: Baba ne bas yahi kaha na ke hume Mama ke yaha jana he, to fir mana karne ki kya zarurat thi tujhe?
Ispar Aksh sirf Sakshi ko udasi se dekhne lagta he.
Sakshi: ab kya dekh raha he aise?
Aksh: tu bhi palat gayi na....
Sakshi: kya matlab?
Aksh: kya kaha tha tune mujhe? Humesha mera saath degi? Or ab...
Sakshi: ek minute... Ha Mene kaha tha ke me humesha tera saath dungi lekin galat baato me kabhi nahi....
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
Aksh: accha matlab me hi galat hu? Sabko bas me hi galat lagta hu....
Is baat ko kehte waqt Aksh ke akho me Aansu ajate he, jise dekh kar Sakshi puri tarah sehem si jati he.
Sakshi: A....Aksh... Tu..... tu ro kyu raha he?
Wo Aksh ka chehra apne haatho me thamkar uske Aansu saaf karte hue puchti he
Aksh: to kya karu? Koi nahi samajhta mujhe.... Koi nahi.... bas jo wo chahte he waisa hi mujhe karne ko bola jata he... Kya kabhi Aai Baba ne ye jaan ne ki koshish bhi ki he ke me kya chahta hu? Kabhi unhone mujhe pucha ke mujhe aage ja kar kya karna he? Kabhi mere dil ki baat jaan ne ki koshish ki dono ne? Nahi na.... Jo wo kehte aye he bas wahi kar raha hu na me? Kya mujhme koi feeling nahi he? Humesha apni haar baat apne dil tak hi rakhta hu na me, kis se share karu?
Wo rote hue Sakshi se kehta he, use rota dekh Sakshi ki bhi aakhe num ho jati he.
Sakshi: Aksh Aai Baba tera accha hi chahte he na... Lekin unki soch alag he, jesa tu sochta he waisa wo log nahi samajhte... Lekin Aai Baba bhi to apni jagah sahi he na...
Wo Aksh ke behte Aansu saaf karte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: or tujhe kon kehta he apni baate mujhse share na kiya kar? Me to dil se chahti hu ke tu apni sari baate mujhse share kiya kar... Lekin ye tu he.. jo bada introvert bana firta he..
Wo Halke se Aksh ke sar me thapki marte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: Or ek baat humesha yaad rakhna Aksh... Me kabhi tere khilaf nahi khadi ho sakti... Kabhi nahi....
Wo Aksh ke haath thamkar uski Aakho me dekh kar kehti he. Jis se Aksh ko kafi sukoon milta he.
Sakshi: chal ab ye rona band kar... Or khana kha le...
Wo Aksh ki num aakhe pochte hue kehti he.
Aksh: mujhe bhook nahi he...
Sakshi: Lekin....
Aksh: mene keh diya na mujhe bhook nahi he...
Sakshi: thik he.... Or ha me Aai Baba ko bol deti hu ke me bhi kal Mama ke ghar nahi arahi...
Aksh: kuch bolne ki zarurat nahi he... Araha hu me kal...
Sakshi: Aksh tujhe samajhna na sachme mushkil he..

Or Fir wo Aksh ke kamre se bahar ajati he.
kuch der me khane ka waqt ho jata he.
Santosh: ab use khana bhi nahi khana kya?
Wo Aksh ko waha na dekh kar puchta he.
Radha: me abhi bulati hu use...
Wo Aksh ke kamre ki taraf badhte hue kehti he
Sakshi: Aai... Mene pucha tha use.. wo mana kar raha he, Tum please abhi kuch mat kaho us se.. baad me kha lega wo....
Wo Radha ko bich me rokte hue kehti he, fir Radha bhi yahi thik samajhti he or khana parosne ke liye ajati he, lekin Sakshi use bethne ko kehti he.
Sakshi: Aai, tum beth jao... Me parosti hu aapko...
Radha: kyu tujhe nahi khana?
Sakhsi: n..nahi Aai me badme kha lungi...
Radha: are Lekin...
Sakshi: Aai tum beth jao...
Wo Radha ki baat kaat te hue kehti he, fir Santosh or Radha ko khana parosti he, khane ke baad Radha or Sakshi sara kaam nipta dete he, kuch der TV dekhne ke baad Santosh or Radha apne kamre me chale jate he, tab Sakshi uthkar Kitchen me ajati he or ek thali me khana paros kar Aksh ke kamre me chali jati he.

Waha Aksh bed par lete hue koi Book padhne ki koshish kar raha tha lekin aaj uska kisi bhi chiz me mann nahi lagg raha tha, tabhi Sakshi andar ajati he, use dekh kar Aksh uthkar beth jata he.

Sakshi: chal ab bahot padh liya tune, khana khale jaldi se. ..
Wo bed par Aksh ke bagal me beth te hue kehti he.
Aksh: mujhe bhuk nahi lagi...
Wo bina Sakshi ko dekhe hi jawab deta he. Tab Sakshi khane ki plate ko side me rakh kar Aksh ke hath par apna haath rakh deti he.
Sakshi: to kabtak bhuka rehna he tujhe? Aisi situations to life me ati rahengi... To Kya humesha ke liye khana chhod dega?
Aksh: aisi baat nahi he... Wo bass mera mann nahi kar raha...
Sakshi: mann to tera padhai karne ka bhi nahi tha.... Chal ab jaldi se kha le...
Wo plate apne haath me le kar ek niwala Aksh ki taraf badhate hue kehti he. Ab Aksh bhi phre din kaam kar ke thaka hua, bhuka tha, to usne bhi Sakshi ke haath se niwala kha liya.
Aksh: tune khaya?
Sakshi: me badme kha lungi...
Wo plate me dekh usme se roti todte hue kehti he. Tabb Aksh uske haath se Plate le leta he, or ek niwala bana kar Sakshi ke samne karta he, Sakshi muskurate hue uske haath se niwala kha leti he. Fir dono hi milkar khana kha lete he, kuch der tak bate karne ke baad Sakshi apne kamre akar so jati he. Dusre din sab log milkar apne Mama ke ghar chale jate he, waha do din rehkar wo log wapis apne ghar ajate he.

Aaj inke College ka first Day tha, Sakshi or Aksh college jane ke liye bilkul tayar the, Santosh or Radha se ijazat le kar dono ghar se bahar nikal jate he, Soham or Neha unhe adhe raste me mil jate he or ye charo milkar apni nayi Zindagi jine ke liye chal padte he, kuch der me wo sab unke college ke samne pahoch gaye the, college ki chehel pehel, waha ka mahol dekh kar Sakshi, Neha or Soham ke chehre par muskurahat ajati he lekin Aksh ke reaction kuch khas nahi the.

Neha: wow.... Kitna accha lagg raha he na.. mujhe to puri raat nind nahi ayi pata he...
Soham: sahi kaha... Or ab raat ko jagne ki adat daal hu de tu..
Sakshi: wo kyu?
Soham: are... Ab security Guard ki naukri karne ke liye raag ko jagna bhi to ana chahiye na.... Lekin Neha.. tu bahot acchi Security Guard banegi...
Wo Neha ke khande par haath rakh kar kehta he uski baat se Sakshi hasne lagti he lekin Neha ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he.
Neha: kutte.... Tu na... Ruk... Rukja...
Or Wo Soham marne ke liye uske piche dod padti he.
Dono ko dekh kar Sakshi kafi has rahi thi lekin Aksh bas college ki taraf dekh raha tha.
Sakshi: kya hua Aksh?
Aksh: kuch bhi to nahi...
Sakshi: to chal ab andar....
Or wo dono college gate ke andar chal padte he. Andar akar charo ek saath ruk jate he, Soham Commerce me tha or uski Building dusri taraf thi to wo tino ko bye bol kar apni class me chala jata he, yaha tino bhi apni class me ajate he, class me sari ladkiya ek taraf bethi hui thi, or sare ladke ek taraf... Sakshi or Neha first bench par hi beth gaye lekin Aksh ja kar second last bechn par beth jata he.

Kuch hi der me unka class teacher waha ajata he, sab students use Good Morning wish karte he or apni jagah par beth jate he.

Teacher: to Student.... Welcome to your class, and I'm your class teacher.
Wo apni books table par rakhte hue kehta he.
Teacher: to dekho... Me waise koi sakht teacher nahi hu, lekin jab baat padhai ki ati he to.....
Wo apne haath apas me masalte hue kehta he, uski baat sare students samajh jate he. Fir sab students apna introduction dete he, yaha par Sakshi class topper thi, jis se teacher khush ho jata he. Ab bari ladko ke introduction ki thi, bari bari sablog apna introduction dete he ab Bari Aksh ki thi, Aksh apni jagah par hi uthkar khada ho jata he.
Teacher: to... Kya naam he tumhara?
Aksh: Aksh... Aksh Joshi....
Teacher: ohh... Matlab to ye tumhara Bhai he?
Wo Sakshi ki taraf dekhte hue puchta he. Sakshi bhi muskurate hue use Haa me jawab de deti he.
Teacher: kya baat he... Meri class me to 2 topper agaye... To kitne percentage mile tumhe Aksh?
Aksh: sir... 38%
Uska jawab sun kar Teacher ki hasi chutt jati he.
Teacher: kitne? 38%.. hahaha... Kyu Sakshi.. tumne isko thik se padhaya nahi kya? Hahaha..
Wo haste hue Sakshi se puchta he, lekin is se Sakshi ko bahot zyada gussa ajata he.
Sakshi: to kya ho gaya agar use kam percentage mile he to?
Wo rukhe swar me apni jagah par uthkar puchti he.
Teacher: are ab chhodo bhi... Is baar shayad... I mean pakka koi ek Fail hone wala he.
Wo Aksh ki taraf dekhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: matlab kisi student ke marks kam hote he to wo padhai me accha nahi hota?
Teacher: agar padhai me accha hota to marks itne kam na hote na...
Sakshi: waise ek Acche Teacher kabhi apne Students me koi bhed bhaav nahi karte.. balki unka hausla badha kar un students par zyada dhyan dete he..
Wo Teacher ko tana marte hue kehti he.
Teacher: accha? To tumhara matlab ye he ki me accha Teacher nahi hu?
Sakshi: ab......
Aksh: sir aap chinta mat kijiye... Aapke class ka results 100% ayega...
Wo Sakshi ki baat puri hone se pehle hi bol padta he.
Teacher: accha? Or wo kese?
Aksh: aapko kal pata chal jayega sir...
Teacher: dekhte he... To chalo class shuru karte he..
Fir wo apni class shuru kar deta he. Sakshi ka mood thoda kharab ho chuka tha, aise hi ek ke baad ek period hote gaye.

Lunch break me Aksh ko Sakshi se baat karni thi, lekin Sakshi apne class ki topper thi to uski ek hi din me kafi sari saheliya bann gayi thi, or wo sab milkar canteen me bethe hue the, tabb Aksh Soham ke paas janeka sochta he or adhe raste me hi use Soham bhi mil jata he, dono Canteen me ek taraf bethe hue the, break khatam hone ke baad sablog firse apni apni class me agaye.

Dopeher ke waqt College ki chutti ho jati he, Sakshi or Neha ke saath 2 ladkiya or thi jo unke ghar ke raste me hi rehti thi, to wo bhi unke saath hi chal padti he, Soham or Aksh unke piche piche hi baate karte chal rahe the. Kuch duri par Neha or Soham apne raste chale jate he or Sakshi, Aksh or ek ladki saath chal dete he.

Jab Sakshi or Aksh ghar pahoche to dekha ke Santosh or Radha unka hi intezar kar rahe the, or wo dono hi kafi naraz se lagg rahe the.

Sakshi: kya hua?
Wo dono ka gambhir chehra dekh kar puchti he.
Santosh: kya zarurat thi Teacher ke saath behes karne ki?
Wo sakht lehze me puchta he, darasal Us Teacher ne apni class khatam karte hi dono ke Parents ko call kar ke aaj ki baat bata di thi.
Radha: Sakshi tujhse aisi ummid bilkul nahi karte hum...
Sakshi: kya galat keh diya mene? Wo acche teacher nahi he to nahi he... Agar hote to Aksh se is tarah baat nahi karte wo.... Or agar unho ne firse Aksh se aisi baat ki to me bhi unse isi tarah se baat karungi...
Wo bahot hi gusse me kehti he or bina kisi ki baat sune apne kamre me chali jati he.
Santosh: bass yahi baki tha... Iski hawa lagg gayi Sakshi ko bhi....
Wo Aksh ki taraf ungli karte hue Radha se kehta he. Aksh bhi waha se nikal jate he or Sakshi ke kamre me ajata he, jaha Sakshi bahot gusse me apna muh fulaye bethi thi. Aksh aage akar uske bagal me beth jata he.

Aksh: yaar kya Sakshi tu bhi... Gussa mujhe ana chahiye tha jo kuch aaj hua us se.. lekin tu kyu itna ubal rahi he?
Sakshi: dekh Aksh mujhe is bare me koi baat nahi karni he...
Aksh: are yaar jane bhi de na ab... Kal se koi gadbad nahi hogi..
Sakshi: tu kya keh raha tha Sir se ke kal pata chal jayega? Kya soch raha he tu?
Wo sawalo se bhari nazro se Aksh ko dekhte hue puchti he.
Aksh: are wahi batane ke liye tujhse baat karna chahta tha lekin koi mauka hi nahi mila... Khair.. to me kal apni Division change kar dunga or dusri class me chala jaunga jis se....
Sakshi: kya kaha? Aise thappad laga dungi tujhe samjha?
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue thappad marne ka ishara karte hue kehti he.
Aksh: are yaar.. meri baat to sunn...
Sakshi: kuch nahi sunn na mujhe... Or tu koi class change nahi karne wala....
Wo Aksh ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he.
Aksh: ab meri baat sunn... Dekh Sakshi mujhe padhai nahi karni thi lekin mene teri baat maan kar padhai karne ka faisla kiya, mujhe science me admission nahi lena tha lekin tabb bhi mene teri baat maani, ab tujhe meri baat maan ni padegi...
Sakshi: lekin.....
Aksh: ab tere paas do option he.. ek to me class change kar du... Ya me padhai chhod du?
Wo Sakshi ki baat ko kaat te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: aisa kuch nahi hone wala... Tu padhai bhi karta rahega or class bhi change nahi karega... Bass..
Or wo uthkar washroom ki taraf jane lagti he. Lekin Aksh use piche se rok deta he.
Aksh: Sakshi tu janti he agar me Zidd karne laga to kisi ki nahi sunta... To ab choice teri he....
Sakshi: thik he.. jo tujhe karna he kar...
Wo kafi gusse me kehti he.
Aksh: yaar Sakshi is me itna gussa karne jesi kya baat he... Me bass dusri class me hi to ja raha hu na... or wo bhi isliye ke pata nahi kal ko meri or Sir ki kaha suni ho gayi to... Mujhe ek to gussa jaldi ajata he, or pata nahi gusse me me unko kya keh du...
Wo aage akar Sakshi ke haath apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Sakshi: lekin ye kya baat hui Aksh...
Wo royi si shakal bana kar puchti he.
Aksh: please Sakshi... Maan bhi ja ab.... Mene teri tini baate mani, or tu meri ek baat bhi nahi maan rahi he..
Ab Sakshi kafi majbur ho gayi thi, kyu ke wo janti thi ke Aksh kitna ziddi he.
Sakshi: thik he...
Uski haami milte hi Aksh khush ho jata he, or fir wo bhi apne kamre me akar change kar ke khane ke liye beth jata he.

Khana khate hi wo nikal jata he Karim ke Garage par. Waha ja kar roz ki tarah Aksh mann laga kar kaam karne lagta he. Ab Aksh kafi hadd Tak gadiyo ka kaam sikh chuka tha. Pure din kaam karne ke baad raat ko 7 baje Karim use ghar jane ko kehta he, apna mann maar kar Aksh apne ghar ajata he or fresh ho kar book padhna shuru kar deta he thodi der baad Radha use khane ke liye bulati he or sab log milkar khana kha lete he or badme apne apne kamre me ja kar so jate he.


Or is tarah aaj ka din nikal jata he, Update ki Shuruwat me humne dekha ke Aksh or uske parents ke bich tanav kese banta rehta he. Jaha Aksh puri tarah se tuta hua dikhayi de raha tha, lekin use sawarne ka kaam Sakshi ne bakubhi kiya.

Wahi College ke pehle din hi Teacher or Aksh ki kaha suni ho gayi thi, or ab Aksh ne class change karne ka bhi decision le liya tha. Ab dekhna interesting hoga ke aage kya hota he.


Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

 

[Qaatil]

For staring new story thread...

Congratulations for new story..bhai

Congratulations bro waiting for update
For new story

Congratulations for new story Qaatil bro

Jabardast introduction.bhai❤

For Starting New Story Thread

...for new story ...

Nice intro waiting for update

Bhai comments bharpoor milega...tum agla update post karo

Welcome back Qaatil bhai.........

Introduction padke hi aisa lagta hai story bahut hi faadu hone wali hai......

Update ka intezar mein.....

Fantasy me story dali h

Koi magic vagic aisi h kya story bhai

Congratulations for new thread

Fir thik h
Kyuki magic wali story apne matlab ki nhi

Nice introduction..

Sabse pehle new story ke liye apko bdhai aur apka shukriya hume ek aur khani dene ke liye



Gajab intro to bdiya rha
Is bar matlab story me teen character h lead role, triangle
Aksh, sakshi, mansi


Dar ke rehti h, aise kya badlaav aa gye aksh me interesting

Waiting for first update

Qaatil bta to dety laga di hy shuru atory

nice update

Kya hi baat bhai isme love triangle dikh raha he, or love triangle me to dard milna hi he dekhte he ab ye dard kise milta he, waiting for 1st Update.

nice intro

Bahut khub Qaatil Bhai, the intro ekdum dhasu he, mumbai se Surat ye kya soch rahe ho bhai? Eagerly waiting for updates

for the new story. I am sure this will much better than earlier story.

Congratulations for new thread Bhai & waiting for first update.

Congratulations bro for new story

Intro is fantastic

Keep writing we always with you

Ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai aapka.
Ye kahani apne anjaam tak pahunche iske liye anant shubhkamnaye....

Baat introduction ki....
Aapne hero ka naam sabse hatkar rakha h अक्ष waah or jo do main character h unke nam bhi lajawab h साक्षी और मानसी .
Anoothe naam.
Behtareen raha introduction.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Congratulations bro

Congratulations Qaatil bro for new story, ab ayega maza bhai ki new story Updates ka besabri se intzar rahega.

This time I liked your writing better than before. This story is about brother and sister. I liked the way you introduced us to the characters in the story. Now I eagerly await the first update of the story.
Thank You...

Bohot achha update bhai Waiting for next update ♥

lovely update

first update shandaar hai lekin aapne update ke suruaat me hi sad ending ki jalak dikhai hai ab kya kahun samjh na aa raha

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Update ki shuruaat badi hi khatarnaak tarike se hui.
or fir bachpan se.
Aksh or sakshi ki badmashiyon ko aapne bahut hi sundar tarike se dikhaya h .
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah

"
Ghayal Kar Ke Mujhe Usne Poochha,
Karoge Kya Phir Mohabbat Mujhse,
Lahoo-Lahoo Tha Dil Mera Magar
Honthon Ne Kaha Beintha-Beintha....
"
Lazavab Shurvath....Congratulation for the story

Bang on nice start, Characters Introduction well narrated, roles wisely chosen, jo kami (Narration ki) apke pehle story me thi, wo apne is story bahuth bakubi cover up kiya hai umeed hai aage bhi aise hi updates ayenge. Aur story ke pehle update se hi apna hero lime light me aachuka hai is ki waja uska character hai. Dekthe yeh story kya rang dikhati hai.....
Aur ek baath, ek chota sa suggestion personally i hate tragedy stories, movies etc., aur agar aap is story ko tragedic bannane ka soch rahe ho tho please meri request hai ki is story ko tragedy mat bannana.
Jab bhi mein kio stories ya fir koi movies dekhtha hun tho mein us story ke character ko apne aap se jod detha hun pata nahi yeh meri buri addat hai ya fir kuch aur but mein aise karne se apne aap ko rokh nahi saktha aur is ka natiza yeh hota hai ki jab koi tragedy scene ya fir story ko dektha ya fir padtha hun tho mujhe bahuth zada dard hota hai isliye mein aap se sirf request kar saktha hun kyun ki aapne is story pe bahuth mehanat kar ke likha hai aur changes shayad is story ki destiny badal sakthi jo shayad is story ke liye accha na ho so.
aur keep it up.....
Wating for the update

are Qaatil Bhai aapne to qatl kar diya
mind-blowing Start, yaar apne na middle class family ki ek baat bahut hi acche dhang se dikhayi he, ke ek middle class parents apne baccho ke liye koi taj mehel to nahi banwa sakte lekin unki choti si icchao ko pure dil se pura karte he jese yaha par Santosh ne apne baccho keliye jo gola banane ke liye Syrups laye.... Ye dikhata he the beauty of a Middle class Parents ❤
aise hi likhte rehna bhai, waiting for next Update

Nice update bro...

Just superb

Awesome update

Aise Update dete rehna bro Story bich me mat chhod dena bas

Aaj start Kiya h read Kar ke review deta hu

Gajab update bhai ji, pyara update tha
aksh ke rone ne to emotional kar diya

Middle class family ki life,pareshani,tangi bdiya tarike se describe ki h apne

Update jaldi khtm ho gya


Bache kya jane ab is bare me , agle mahine bol diya lekin aksh ko aaj hi chaiye

Lekin isiliye to unhe bache kehte h


Yha se hi aksh business man banne ka sochega


Jo ye conversation h na aksh aur sakshi ki, bas kya khu mujhe bhut jyada pyari lagti h
Meri story padne ki ye khas vjah h
Aise updates padkar jo sakoon milta h, pucho mat

Eagerly waiting for next update

Bhut shandar update biradar. Story track par aa rhi ha

Fabulous start
Keep posting

Childhood is very good and sweet, I miss my childhood while reading the story, we have no worries, playing and having fun all day long. From now on, Aksh and Sakshi are supporting each other, will have more fun later. I have also eaten a lot of ice balls during my school time and still eat occasionally. I liked the thinking of Aksh and some things are understood at the right time.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

Yaar Qaatil bhai kya hi likh rahe ho aap
Aapki writing pehle se zyada imrove hui he, keep it up bhai

Or aaj ke Update ki baat kare to kamal update tha, dono ka kisi ladke ko milkar marna
Sakshi ka itni buri halat me bhi gole ke liye pyaar ❤
Or wahi Aksh ke saaf dil par is pesa jesi khichad ki bunde lagg jana, ye bahut galat hua, dekhte he ab age kya hoga, eagerly waiting bhai.

Pyaara Update maza aya padhkar, or jo dono ne milkar us ladke ko mara bahut sahi kiya sare moments bahut hi pyare the, or ab aksh ke andar ye sawal agaya he, pata nahi kya hota he aagey waiting for next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aksh or sakshi ka milkar apne se bade ladke ko pitna or ghar me ma ki dant sunkar bachpan ke din yaad aa gye.
Aap itna kamal ka update likhte ho ki main khud se jod leta hoon use.
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Lovely update ek bahuth hi masumiyat see bara update or ek bahuth gheri baat bi pata chalti hai is update se ki maa baap ka pyaar tyag, samarpan, ki tulna kisi bhi cheez se nahi ho sakthi.. Aur kya is mamsum see ladke k man mein umad rahe swalon ka jawab melega ya nahi dekthe hai aage kya hot hai
Good waiting for next

Nice update bro

waiting for next update

Bahut hi pyara or masumiyat bhara Update

Awesome update

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

Achcha update hai koi baat hoti hai jo life me sab badal deti hai yahan paise ki baat aa gayi matlab bachpan gaya inka dekhte kya hota

Very good starting and nice script
Full paisa wasool performance.
Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Behad hi shandar Update

N
Nice start bro

I think base of the story ends here.

Now it will be interesting to see what happens next....

Good one Qaatil bhai......

Super se bhi uper update

Awesome update

Beautiful Update bhai ❤ pyar se bhara hua Update tha, ab us admi ne kahi baat ka bhi asar hoga Aksh par, dekhte he kya hoga age, eagerly waiting for next update.

nice aur lovely update ..
sakshi ko doll set maangne se mana karta hai aksh aur uske paise se raksha bandhan ke din uske liye wo doll set kharidta hai ..tohfa dene ke liye aksh ne apne cycle ke paise kharch kar diye aur jab ye baat sakshi ko pata chali to wo naraj ho gayi aur aksh ko thappad bhi maara ...

par isse dono ke bich kitna pyar hai ye dikhta hai .

ab car ko dekhkar usko kharidne ki sochna aur un do aadmi ki baate yaa taana aksh ke dimaag me fit ho gayi hai ..
par paise kamane ke liye padhai jaruri hai ye usko koi batayega ? uski problem to kisiko pata hi nahi ..

Suoerb just supers

Nice and superb update..

shandar update

There is a lot of fun in the circus, I have also gone, Aksh refuses Sakshi to take toys, meas he has taken the money thing seriously but it is very important to study because that is why he will move forward, here Aksh is making a mistake. You are trying to explain the importance of money in the story. Well according to me Aksh should concentrate on studies from now on and after being successful everything is his own. get angry and persuade, This will always go on.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

Lovely update..bhai❤

Bdiya update bhai ji



Last me to update kya likha tha yaar bas shabd nhi h

Nice update...

Abtak ka sabse beautiful Update bhai, kya likha he. Aksh ka apne bachaye peso se sakshi ke liye gift lena, sakahi ka sacchayi pata chalne par rona.. ye sab dil ko chu gaya bhai. Ab inki bachpan ki bate miss karenge.. but koi ni, story ko ab track par lana he very exited to see what will be the results do.... Eagerly Waiting bhai.

Waiting

Ek dam shandar or jandar update
Sorry for the late coments Qaatil bro

Bohot sahi update bhai lahe rho

Waiting.....

Pyara update bhai ji, shayad ab story thodi intense hoti jayegi future Updates ka besabri se intezar he... ❤

Superb Starting bro keep it up

Bhai ap ki nai story besabri se intjar tha jo ab poora hua.
bahut badhiya updates hai bhai is story ke bhi bilkul dil ko choo lene wale

Guys Update 7 Posted, Check Out

 

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Nice update..

 

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Chapter 1 - The Early Life

Update 7

Mega Update​

Word Count: 3304
Estimated Reading Time: 00:15:00


Kehte he na ke jab akho me bade sapne hote he to nind kahi dur bhaag jati he, jab dil me kuch karne ka jasba ho to har ek pal katna muskil sa ho jata he, kuch aisa hi Aksh ka haal tha. Jagti raate mushkil se kat te din, ye sab Aksh ko andar hi andar ek behtar insan banane ki koshish me the, isi tarah din nikalte ja rahe the, Aksh har roz Karim ke Garage par jata, waha mann laga kar apna kaam karta, Karim ki logo se baat karne ki style ko bade gaur se dekhta.

Aise hi kuch mahine beet gaye the, ab bari thi college admissions ki, Sakshi ne science stream me admission liya tha, Lekin Aksh Commerce lena chahta tha lekin Santosh or Radha ne use Science stream choon ne ko kaha, wo dono chahte the ke Aksh aage ja kar engineering ki padhai kare, Sakshi ke samjhane par Aksh maan gaya dono ko admission ek hi college, ek hi class me hua tha. Wahi Neha bhi Science me dono ke saath hi thi, lekin Soham ne Commerce stream chuni thi.

Kuch waqt aise hi guzar jata he, 4-5 dino baad sabke College start hone wake the. Ek din Aksh raat ko kareeb 8 baje Garage se ghar ata he, wo aaj kafi thak chuka tha, jese hi wo ghar ke andar aya to Santosh samne hi betha hua tha, Aksh sidha apne kamre me jane ke liye aage badhta he ke Santosh use rok leta he, tabhi waha Sakshi bhi ajati he.

Santosh: Aksh sunn... Kal hum sab 2-3 din ke liye tumhare Mama ke ghar ja rahe he, apna saman pack kar lena...
Aksh: Baba mujhe nahi jana kahi....
Wo rukhe swar me Santosh se kehta he, uske jawab se Santosh thoda gussa ho jata he. lekin Sakshi samajh jati he ke ab mahol bigadne wala he.
Santosh: Kyu nahi jana?
Aksh: bass mujhe nahi jana....
Santosh: Aksh dekh apni mann mani karna band kar de me bata raha hu....
Wo gusse me Aksh ko ungli dikhate hue kehta he.
Aksh: mann mani? Konsi mann mani karne di aapne mujhe? Are yaha tak ke padhai bhi apni marzi se karne ka moka nahi diya mujhe aapne... Or keh rahe he ke mann mani mat kar.... Mann mani to aap log kar rahe ho mujhpar.
Wo thodi unchi awaaz me Frustrate hokar kehta he, uski awaz se Radha bhi bahar ajati he, Santosh uski baat se kafi gussa ho gaya tha, wo Aksh ko thappad marne ke liye aage badha hi tha ke Sakshi or Radha bich me akar use rok lete he.
Radha: aap shant ho jayiye na....
Santosh: kese shant ho jau? Dekha nahi kese baat kar raha he ye ladka.... Are tere acche ke liye kehta hu me...
Aksh: aap jo kehte he wo acche ke liye, or jo me kehta hu wo mann mani? Huhhh....
Wo Santosh ki akho me dekhte hue kehta he, or waha se apne kamre me chala jata he.
Radha: aap chaliye... Andar...
Santosh: are kya chaliye..... Dushman nahi hu me uska...
Radha: ha aap baadme shanti se baat kar lena us se.... Abhi chaliye andar...
Or wo Santosh ko apne kamre me le jati he.

Ab Sakshi jaldi se Aksh ke kamre me jati he jaha Aksh kafi gusse me betha hua tha. Sakshi andar akar uske paas beth jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh tu na bewajah behes karta rehta he sabse...
Sakshi: Baba ne bas yahi kaha na ke hume Mama ke yaha jana he, to fir mana karne ki kya zarurat thi tujhe?
Ispar Aksh sirf Sakshi ko udasi se dekhne lagta he.
Sakshi: ab kya dekh raha he aise?
Aksh: tu bhi palat gayi na....
Sakshi: kya matlab?
Aksh: kya kaha tha tune mujhe? Humesha mera saath degi? Or ab...
Sakshi: ek minute... Ha Mene kaha tha ke me humesha tera saath dungi lekin galat baato me kabhi nahi....
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
Aksh: accha matlab me hi galat hu? Sabko bas me hi galat lagta hu....
Is baat ko kehte waqt Aksh ke akho me Aansu ajate he, jise dekh kar Sakshi puri tarah sehem si jati he.
Sakshi: A....Aksh... Tu..... tu ro kyu raha he?
Wo Aksh ka chehra apne haatho me thamkar uske Aansu saaf karte hue puchti he
Aksh: to kya karu? Koi nahi samajhta mujhe.... Koi nahi.... bas jo wo chahte he waisa hi mujhe karne ko bola jata he... Kya kabhi Aai Baba ne ye jaan ne ki koshish bhi ki he ke me kya chahta hu? Kabhi unhone mujhe pucha ke mujhe aage ja kar kya karna he? Kabhi mere dil ki baat jaan ne ki koshish ki dono ne? Nahi na.... Jo wo kehte aye he bas wahi kar raha hu na me? Kya mujhme koi feeling nahi he? Humesha apni haar baat apne dil tak hi rakhta hu na me, kis se share karu?
Wo rote hue Sakshi se kehta he, use rota dekh Sakshi ki bhi aakhe num ho jati he.
Sakshi: Aksh Aai Baba tera accha hi chahte he na... Lekin unki soch alag he, jesa tu sochta he waisa wo log nahi samajhte... Lekin Aai Baba bhi to apni jagah sahi he na...
Wo Aksh ke behte Aansu saaf karte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: or tujhe kon kehta he apni baate mujhse share na kiya kar? Me to dil se chahti hu ke tu apni sari baate mujhse share kiya kar... Lekin ye tu he.. jo bada introvert bana firta he..
Wo Halke se Aksh ke sar me thapki marte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: Or ek baat humesha yaad rakhna Aksh... Me kabhi tere khilaf nahi khadi ho sakti... Kabhi nahi....
Wo Aksh ke haath thamkar uski Aakho me dekh kar kehti he. Jis se Aksh ko kafi sukoon milta he.
Sakshi: chal ab ye rona band kar... Or khana kha le...
Wo Aksh ki num aakhe pochte hue kehti he.
Aksh: mujhe bhook nahi he...
Sakshi: Lekin....
Aksh: mene keh diya na mujhe bhook nahi he...
Sakshi: thik he.... Or ha me Aai Baba ko bol deti hu ke me bhi kal Mama ke ghar nahi arahi...
Aksh: kuch bolne ki zarurat nahi he... Araha hu me kal...
Sakshi: Aksh tujhe samajhna na sachme mushkil he..

Or Fir wo Aksh ke kamre se bahar ajati he.
kuch der me khane ka waqt ho jata he.
Santosh: ab use khana bhi nahi khana kya?
Wo Aksh ko waha na dekh kar puchta he.
Radha: me abhi bulati hu use...
Wo Aksh ke kamre ki taraf badhte hue kehti he
Sakshi: Aai... Mene pucha tha use.. wo mana kar raha he, Tum please abhi kuch mat kaho us se.. baad me kha lega wo....
Wo Radha ko bich me rokte hue kehti he, fir Radha bhi yahi thik samajhti he or khana parosne ke liye ajati he, lekin Sakshi use bethne ko kehti he.
Sakshi: Aai, tum beth jao... Me parosti hu aapko...
Radha: kyu tujhe nahi khana?
Sakhsi: n..nahi Aai me badme kha lungi...
Radha: are Lekin...
Sakshi: Aai tum beth jao...
Wo Radha ki baat kaat te hue kehti he, fir Santosh or Radha ko khana parosti he, khane ke baad Radha or Sakshi sara kaam nipta dete he, kuch der TV dekhne ke baad Santosh or Radha apne kamre me chale jate he, tab Sakshi uthkar Kitchen me ajati he or ek thali me khana paros kar Aksh ke kamre me chali jati he.

Waha Aksh bed par lete hue koi Book padhne ki koshish kar raha tha lekin aaj uska kisi bhi chiz me mann nahi lagg raha tha, tabhi Sakshi andar ajati he, use dekh kar Aksh uthkar beth jata he.

Sakshi: chal ab bahot padh liya tune, khana khale jaldi se. ..
Wo bed par Aksh ke bagal me beth te hue kehti he.
Aksh: mujhe bhuk nahi lagi...
Wo bina Sakshi ko dekhe hi jawab deta he. Tab Sakshi khane ki plate ko side me rakh kar Aksh ke hath par apna haath rakh deti he.
Sakshi: to kabtak bhuka rehna he tujhe? Aisi situations to life me ati rahengi... To Kya humesha ke liye khana chhod dega?
Aksh: aisi baat nahi he... Wo bass mera mann nahi kar raha...
Sakshi: mann to tera padhai karne ka bhi nahi tha.... Chal ab jaldi se kha le...
Wo plate apne haath me le kar ek niwala Aksh ki taraf badhate hue kehti he. Ab Aksh bhi phre din kaam kar ke thaka hua, bhuka tha, to usne bhi Sakshi ke haath se niwala kha liya.
Aksh: tune khaya?
Sakshi: me badme kha lungi...
Wo plate me dekh usme se roti todte hue kehti he. Tabb Aksh uske haath se Plate le leta he, or ek niwala bana kar Sakshi ke samne karta he, Sakshi muskurate hue uske haath se niwala kha leti he. Fir dono hi milkar khana kha lete he, kuch der tak bate karne ke baad Sakshi apne kamre akar so jati he. Dusre din sab log milkar apne Mama ke ghar chale jate he, waha do din rehkar wo log wapis apne ghar ajate he.

Aaj inke College ka first Day tha, Sakshi or Aksh college jane ke liye bilkul tayar the, Santosh or Radha se ijazat le kar dono ghar se bahar nikal jate he, Soham or Neha unhe adhe raste me mil jate he or ye charo milkar apni nayi Zindagi jine ke liye chal padte he, kuch der me wo sab unke college ke samne pahoch gaye the, college ki chehel pehel, waha ka mahol dekh kar Sakshi, Neha or Soham ke chehre par muskurahat ajati he lekin Aksh ke reaction kuch khas nahi the.

Neha: wow.... Kitna accha lagg raha he na.. mujhe to puri raat nind nahi ayi pata he...
Soham: sahi kaha... Or ab raat ko jagne ki adat daal hu de tu..
Sakshi: wo kyu?
Soham: are... Ab security Guard ki naukri karne ke liye raag ko jagna bhi to ana chahiye na.... Lekin Neha.. tu bahot acchi Security Guard banegi...
Wo Neha ke khande par haath rakh kar kehta he uski baat se Sakshi hasne lagti he lekin Neha ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he.
Neha: kutte.... Tu na... Ruk... Rukja...
Or Wo Soham marne ke liye uske piche dod padti he.
Dono ko dekh kar Sakshi kafi has rahi thi lekin Aksh bas college ki taraf dekh raha tha.
Sakshi: kya hua Aksh?
Aksh: kuch bhi to nahi...
Sakshi: to chal ab andar....
Or wo dono college gate ke andar chal padte he. Andar akar charo ek saath ruk jate he, Soham Commerce me tha or uski Building dusri taraf thi to wo tino ko bye bol kar apni class me chala jata he, yaha tino bhi apni class me ajate he, class me sari ladkiya ek taraf bethi hui thi, or sare ladke ek taraf... Sakshi or Neha first bench par hi beth gaye lekin Aksh ja kar second last bechn par beth jata he.

Kuch hi der me unka class teacher waha ajata he, sab students use Good Morning wish karte he or apni jagah par beth jate he.

Teacher: to Student.... Welcome to your class, and I'm your class teacher.
Wo apni books table par rakhte hue kehta he.
Teacher: to dekho... Me waise koi sakht teacher nahi hu, lekin jab baat padhai ki ati he to.....
Wo apne haath apas me masalte hue kehta he, uski baat sare students samajh jate he. Fir sab students apna introduction dete he, yaha par Sakshi class topper thi, jis se teacher khush ho jata he. Ab bari ladko ke introduction ki thi, bari bari sablog apna introduction dete he ab Bari Aksh ki thi, Aksh apni jagah par hi uthkar khada ho jata he.
Teacher: to... Kya naam he tumhara?
Aksh: Aksh... Aksh Joshi....
Teacher: ohh... Matlab to ye tumhara Bhai he?
Wo Sakshi ki taraf dekhte hue puchta he. Sakshi bhi muskurate hue use Haa me jawab de deti he.
Teacher: kya baat he... Meri class me to 2 topper agaye... To kitne percentage mile tumhe Aksh?
Aksh: sir... 38%
Uska jawab sun kar Teacher ki hasi chutt jati he.
Teacher: kitne? 38%.. hahaha... Kyu Sakshi.. tumne isko thik se padhaya nahi kya? Hahaha..
Wo haste hue Sakshi se puchta he, lekin is se Sakshi ko bahot zyada gussa ajata he.
Sakshi: to kya ho gaya agar use kam percentage mile he to?
Wo rukhe swar me apni jagah par uthkar puchti he.
Teacher: are ab chhodo bhi... Is baar shayad... I mean pakka koi ek Fail hone wala he.
Wo Aksh ki taraf dekhte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: matlab kisi student ke marks kam hote he to wo padhai me accha nahi hota?
Teacher: agar padhai me accha hota to marks itne kam na hote na...
Sakshi: waise ek Acche Teacher kabhi apne Students me koi bhed bhaav nahi karte.. balki unka hausla badha kar un students par zyada dhyan dete he..
Wo Teacher ko tana marte hue kehti he.
Teacher: accha? To tumhara matlab ye he ki me accha Teacher nahi hu?
Sakshi: ab......
Aksh: sir aap chinta mat kijiye... Aapke class ka results 100% ayega...
Wo Sakshi ki baat puri hone se pehle hi bol padta he.
Teacher: accha? Or wo kese?
Aksh: aapko kal pata chal jayega sir...
Teacher: dekhte he... To chalo class shuru karte he..
Fir wo apni class shuru kar deta he. Sakshi ka mood thoda kharab ho chuka tha, aise hi ek ke baad ek period hote gaye.

Lunch break me Aksh ko Sakshi se baat karni thi, lekin Sakshi apne class ki topper thi to uski ek hi din me kafi sari saheliya bann gayi thi, or wo sab milkar canteen me bethe hue the, tabb Aksh Soham ke paas janeka sochta he or adhe raste me hi use Soham bhi mil jata he, dono Canteen me ek taraf bethe hue the, break khatam hone ke baad sablog firse apni apni class me agaye.

Dopeher ke waqt College ki chutti ho jati he, Sakshi or Neha ke saath 2 ladkiya or thi jo unke ghar ke raste me hi rehti thi, to wo bhi unke saath hi chal padti he, Soham or Aksh unke piche piche hi baate karte chal rahe the. Kuch duri par Neha or Soham apne raste chale jate he or Sakshi, Aksh or ek ladki saath chal dete he.

Jab Sakshi or Aksh ghar pahoche to dekha ke Santosh or Radha unka hi intezar kar rahe the, or wo dono hi kafi naraz se lagg rahe the.

Sakshi: kya hua?
Wo dono ka gambhir chehra dekh kar puchti he.
Santosh: kya zarurat thi Teacher ke saath behes karne ki?
Wo sakht lehze me puchta he, darasal Us Teacher ne apni class khatam karte hi dono ke Parents ko call kar ke aaj ki baat bata di thi.
Radha: Sakshi tujhse aisi ummid bilkul nahi karte hum...
Sakshi: kya galat keh diya mene? Wo acche teacher nahi he to nahi he... Agar hote to Aksh se is tarah baat nahi karte wo.... Or agar unho ne firse Aksh se aisi baat ki to me bhi unse isi tarah se baat karungi...
Wo bahot hi gusse me kehti he or bina kisi ki baat sune apne kamre me chali jati he.
Santosh: bass yahi baki tha... Iski hawa lagg gayi Sakshi ko bhi....
Wo Aksh ki taraf ungli karte hue Radha se kehta he. Aksh bhi waha se nikal jate he or Sakshi ke kamre me ajata he, jaha Sakshi bahot gusse me apna muh fulaye bethi thi. Aksh aage akar uske bagal me beth jata he.

Aksh: yaar kya Sakshi tu bhi... Gussa mujhe ana chahiye tha jo kuch aaj hua us se.. lekin tu kyu itna ubal rahi he?
Sakshi: dekh Aksh mujhe is bare me koi baat nahi karni he...
Aksh: are yaar jane bhi de na ab... Kal se koi gadbad nahi hogi..
Sakshi: tu kya keh raha tha Sir se ke kal pata chal jayega? Kya soch raha he tu?
Wo sawalo se bhari nazro se Aksh ko dekhte hue puchti he.
Aksh: are wahi batane ke liye tujhse baat karna chahta tha lekin koi mauka hi nahi mila... Khair.. to me kal apni Division change kar dunga or dusri class me chala jaunga jis se....
Sakshi: kya kaha? Aise thappad laga dungi tujhe samjha?
Wo Aksh ki baat bich me kaat te hue thappad marne ka ishara karte hue kehti he.
Aksh: are yaar.. meri baat to sunn...
Sakshi: kuch nahi sunn na mujhe... Or tu koi class change nahi karne wala....
Wo Aksh ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he.
Aksh: ab meri baat sunn... Dekh Sakshi mujhe padhai nahi karni thi lekin mene teri baat maan kar padhai karne ka faisla kiya, mujhe science me admission nahi lena tha lekin tabb bhi mene teri baat maani, ab tujhe meri baat maan ni padegi...
Sakshi: lekin.....
Aksh: ab tere paas do option he.. ek to me class change kar du... Ya me padhai chhod du?
Wo Sakshi ki baat ko kaat te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: aisa kuch nahi hone wala... Tu padhai bhi karta rahega or class bhi change nahi karega... Bass..
Or wo uthkar washroom ki taraf jane lagti he. Lekin Aksh use piche se rok deta he.
Aksh: Sakshi tu janti he agar me Zidd karne laga to kisi ki nahi sunta... To ab choice teri he....
Sakshi: thik he.. jo tujhe karna he kar...
Wo kafi gusse me kehti he.
Aksh: yaar Sakshi is me itna gussa karne jesi kya baat he... Me bass dusri class me hi to ja raha hu na... or wo bhi isliye ke pata nahi kal ko meri or Sir ki kaha suni ho gayi to... Mujhe ek to gussa jaldi ajata he, or pata nahi gusse me me unko kya keh du...
Wo aage akar Sakshi ke haath apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Sakshi: lekin ye kya baat hui Aksh...
Wo royi si shakal bana kar puchti he.
Aksh: please Sakshi... Maan bhi ja ab.... Mene teri tini baate mani, or tu meri ek baat bhi nahi maan rahi he..
Ab Sakshi kafi majbur ho gayi thi, kyu ke wo janti thi ke Aksh kitna ziddi he.
Sakshi: thik he...
Uski haami milte hi Aksh khush ho jata he, or fir wo bhi apne kamre me akar change kar ke khane ke liye beth jata he.

Khana khate hi wo nikal jata he Karim ke Garage par. Waha ja kar roz ki tarah Aksh mann laga kar kaam karne lagta he. Ab Aksh kafi hadd Tak gadiyo ka kaam sikh chuka tha. Pure din kaam karne ke baad raat ko 7 baje Karim use ghar jane ko kehta he, apna mann maar kar Aksh apne ghar ajata he or fresh ho kar book padhna shuru kar deta he thodi der baad Radha use khane ke liye bulati he or sab log milkar khana kha lete he or badme apne apne kamre me ja kar so jate he.


Or is tarah aaj ka din nikal jata he, Update ki Shuruwat me humne dekha ke Aksh or uske parents ke bich tanav kese banta rehta he. Jaha Aksh puri tarah se tuta hua dikhayi de raha tha, lekin use sawarne ka kaam Sakshi ne bakubhi kiya.

Wahi College ke pehle din hi Teacher or Aksh ki kaha suni ho gayi thi, or ab Aksh ne class change karne ka bhi decision le liya tha. Ab dekhna interesting hoga ke aage kya hota he.


Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

 

[Rashu17]

Wah qaatil bhai kya update tha, lajawab. Shuruwat emotional rahi, Aksh ka rona Sakshi ka use hosla dena, wow. Sakshi ne jab teacher ko latada to mujhe bahut khushi hui, sahi kaha wo accha teacher nahi he. Eagerly Waiting For next Update

 

[Jfun007]

Nice update bro

 

[Qaatil]

Waiting Bhai for your review ❤❤

Nice update..

Wah qaatil bhai kya update tha, lajawab. Shuruwat emotional rahi, Aksh ka rona Sakshi ka use hosla dena, wow. Sakshi ne jab teacher ko latada to mujhe bahut khushi hui, sahi kaha wo accha teacher nahi he. Eagerly Waiting For next Update

Nice update bro

Thank You So Much Dosto ❤❤
Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤

 

[Alok]

Superb update bhai......