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Karan aur Zoya ka kya hua? Shayad Par 2 me Karan aur Zoya ke karnamon ki jankari mile. Romanchak aur Rochak kahani ki Samapti.
 
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Karan aur Zoya ka kya hua? Shayad Par 2 me Karan aur Zoya ke karnamon ki jankari mile. Romanchak aur Rochak kahani ki Samapti.
bohut bohut shukriya URC4ME bhai🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️...... karan aur zoya baare to next part me hi sab saamne aaye ga bhai.. next part ko aapke liye aur bhi special banane ki koshish karunga bhai🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
 

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karan teen saal ka hua to wo 6-7 saal ka dikhne laga tha. uski uthaan badi zabardast thi. use kapdo se bohut uljhan hoti thi.. hamesha hi wo underwear me rehta tha.. humen dekhte hue wo apni ankhon ki kashish ko control me rakhta tha..

uske andar kya kuch tha, kitni abilities thi.. wo kya kya kar sakta tha, sab nahi jaante the....... wo itna zaheen tha k abhi se hi wo kisi scientist se kamm nahi tha.. zaheen hona to uske aage aam si baat thi

pawan papa ke paas jitna bhi knowlenge tha wo sab wo hasil kar chuka tha.. paani me saans wo le sakta tha.. uska zayada tar samay samandar me hi guzarta tha. paani se to use jaise ishq tha

suba ghar se nikalta to shaam ko hi wapis aata.. aksar to raat let aata tha wo.. samandar me door bohut door wo nikal jaya karta tha.. anju baba ne keh dia tha k wo use samandar me kabhi koi khatra nahi hoga.. ulta samandar me rehte hue uski power aur bhi badh jaya karegi.. zameen par rehte wo jitna powerfull hoga.. samandar me rehte uski power bohut badh jaya karegi

aur tha bhi aise hi main aur renu kabhi kabhi uske sath samandar me nikal jaya karte the.. uski power ko check kiya to aam lohe ki salakh jo mai mushkil se tedhi kar sakta tha. itni si umar me hi wo use mom ki tarha se mod dia karta tha


dusri afat jo karan se 1 saal chhoti thi.. meri beti renu se jo paida hui.. uska naam zoya rakha gaya tha.. wo bhi same karan ke jaisi thi.. par uski nature me badlaao the

wo bhi zehreele paani me hi paida hui thi.. karan se kamm nahi thi par karan se badhkar bhi nahi thi.. karan ki baat hi kuch aur thi



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raw me jaane ke baad humne sabse AK ke boss ko khatam kiya tha, uski qiad me reh rahe scientists ko azad karwaya tha, unhe unki families se bhi milwa dia tha.. wo ro pade the apni families se milke.. saalon se wo door the apni family se

uske baad humne jo mission kiya wo mission tha renu ke chacha ko marne wala mission

renu ke maa baap ko maar kar renu ko bhi wo maar dena chahta tha, par renu wahan se jaan bacha kar nikal bhagi thi.... wo lalchi pariwar tha

par ek maamle me wo sahi bhi nikla tha. renu ne khud se apne chacha ko mara tha, daulat ki to hamare paas koi kami nahi reh gai thi to renu ne sari daulat unhi ke paas hi rehne di thi.. akhir ko usne us ghar me uske ghar ke bachho ke sath apna pachpan guzara tha..
kaise unhe sadak par dekh sakti thi

ek chacha k liye sabko to nahi mara ja sakta tha.. sabko nahi rulaya ja sakta tha.. renu ki chachi ne chacha ko maarne k baad renu se maafi maangi thi aur waja bhi batai thi k kyun uske chacha ne apne bhai ko maara tha.. aur waja jaan kar to hum sab shocked hi ho gaye the..

sabse zayada jhatka to renu ko laga tha.. wo jo samjh rahi thi k ye uska pariwar hai to ye sahi nahi tha..

renu darasal laila maa ke bhai ki gumshuda bachhi thi.. renu ke chacha ka bhai aur bhabhi jo renu ke mata pita bhi bane the.. renu ko paal poss kar bada kiya tha

shadi k kai saal baad tak unhe koi aulad nahi huii thi to desh ke alag alag mandiron me puja karwane, dua karwane jaya karte the

hamare pariwar par surinder ne, avinash ne jo hamla karwaya tha, usi hamla me renu bhi mere pariwar se juda ho gai thi.. to in dono beaulad jode ke hath lag gayi thi

dono ne renu ko bhagwan ki den samjh liya.. aur kuch din wahi reh kar socha k renu ko uske pariwar ke hawale kar dia jaaye.. par aisa nahi kar sake the wo..

jaisi ladai hui thi bohut kuch darham barham ho gaya tha.. renu ko wo fir apne sath lekar chale gaye the..tab se hi renu unki beti bankar rehne lagi thi.

sari property renu ke naam bachpan me hi wo karne ki karwayi karne lage the.. jis waja se renu ke chacha ne ye sab kiya tha..

renu ke mata pita ko maar kar renu ko bhi jaan se maar dena chahte the, par renu wahan se nikal bhagi thi



jab sab island pohnche aur renu ki haqeeqat sabko bataayi gayi to sab ko firse ek jhatka laga tha..

laila maa ke dil me jo ek dard tha wo bhi khatam ho gaya tha.. renu ka saga koi nahi tha, lekin ek bua aur do bhai use mile to renu ko bhi apni zindagi ka sab adhura pura hota hua nazar aane laga.. laila maa, renu, rahul aur deepak ka milan bohut rikkat amez tha..

renu us din bohut roi thi.. itna k ro ro kar renu ne record bana diye the.. laila maa ne to renu ko kai din tak khud se juda hi nahi kiya tha.. aisa hi haal rahul bhaiya aur deepak ka bhi tha

renu sabke liye, laila maa aur rahul deepak k liye pehle se hi khaas thi.. par sab haqeeqat ke khul jaane par, ye jaan kar k wo unka apna hi khun hai, renu unke liye aisi ho gayi.. jaisi wo unke jism se judi hui ho

renu ke liye pyar kai guna aur bhi badh gaya tha..


desh me jahan bhi bura log humen dikhte the, hum uhne maar diya karte the.. desh me ek baar to bhunchal hi aa gaya tha.. desh k liye bohut se nasoor humne khatam kar diye the

lekin bura logon ko aise achhe kaam hazam hi kahan hua karte han.. policeticain hi to bure log hote han.. unho ne hungama macha dia to majburan humen khud ko limit me rakhna pada


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maya bhi abb nazuk nahi rahi thi.. maya sher ki patni thi, sher ke bachhon ko janam de chuki thi.. to khud kaise na fir wo sherni banti

maya bhi badal gai thi.. maya bhi sherni ban chuki thi



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karan sabko payara tha, karan bhi sabse bohut zayada pyar karta tha.. kisi se koi fark nahi karta tha.. sobu se, sandhu ji se uski khaas uthak baithak thi

lekin jo pyaar karan ko apni behen zoya se tha, aur jo pyaar zoya ko karan se tha. uski koi hadd nahi thi. zoya abhi chhoti thi.. lekin karan ke sath aksar wo uski activities me shamil raha karti thi

karan ki tarha se zoya bhi samandar ki baasi ban chuki thi.. paani uske aise tha jaise samandar ke paani me rehne wali samandari makhloq k liye

karan kahi door samandar me nikal jata aur late aata to zoya uske peeche bhi nikal jaya karti thi.. kabhi kabhi dono ek sath bhi nikal jaya karte the.. paani me dono ki speed ek aam motorboat se kam nahi thi.. koi insan dono ka mukabla nahi kar sakta tha..

khud ko bewazan karne ki salahiyat dono me paidaishi hi thi.. dono samandar ke paani par khade ho jaya karte the.. dono paani ke upar daud bhi liya karte the. mera liye aisa karna asaan nahi tha.. par dono is kaam me master ho chuke the

sandhu ji ko bhi do naye khilone mile to uski zindagi me bhi bahar si aa gayi thi

mere dusre bachhe meri behno ke bachhe, AK ka beta ye sab milkar khub dhamal macha karte the......... AK ke bete ki baat to maine ki hi nahi ... AK ka beta usme apne baap ke jaisi qualities aa chuki thee.. wo abhi se hi bohut strong skin ka malik ban raha tha..



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aditya kaise bhi karke wahan se nikal bhaga tha.. jald hi usay apne pariwar ke marne ka pata chal gaya tha.. bohut dard hua tha usay, bhagte hue, us khufiya raaste me aage badhte hue wo dil hi dil kasam bhi khaa raha tha k apne pariwar ke dushmano ko kabhi maaf nahi karega.. jaise uska pariwar khatam hua hai, vaise hi wo apne dushman ke pure pariwar ko bhi neest o nabood kardega...

aditya jab khfiya raste par pohncha tha to wahi ruk kar apne pariwar ka intezar karne laga tha. lekin fir disha ne us raste ko blast kar dia tha to aditya dsure raste ki or badh gaya tha.. wo rasta lift wala rasta tha..

jab sare pariwar wale lift se neeche aa rahe the.. to lift ki light se hi usaya andaza ho gaya tha k abb sab neeche aa rahe han.. wo sab ke neeche aane ka intezar karne laga tha.. lekin lift ek dhamake se phat gayi thi.. jahan wo apne pariwar walun ka wait kar raha tha, lift ke blast hone se apne pariwar walun ke tukde apne charon or bikhre dekh kar wo khud bhi marne wala ho gaya tha... lekin fir badle ki aag ne usay jald hosh me bhi la khada kar dia tha..

aditya kasam khaa kar wahan se nikal liya tha.. apne pariwar ke dushmano ko wo kabhi maaf nahi karega.. sab ko maar dega..


wahan se farar k liye bohut se option the.. aditya 19 saal ka tha.. helicopter, plance, underwater motor boat bhi wo chala leta tha.. uske liye island se nikal bhaagna mushkil kaam nahi tha..

kuch dino baad wo MDO headquarter ja pohncha tha...

ab usay wahan pohnche hue 4 saal beet chuke the.. manila aur danile ne uasy bharpur support aur pyar diya tha.. dono bhai behen milkar khud ko aur bhi strong banane k liye sargaram the.. wo bhi jan gaye the k jitni speed se dunya ke rang badal rahe han, unko bhi usi hisab se banna hoga.. kitna jaldi unke dushmano ne, surinder ke dushmano ne sab khatam kar ke rakh dia tha.

jitna paisa unke paas tha. usi ko kaam me laate hue abb ki baar aur types ke scientist ko kidnap karne ka kam shuru kr diya gaya tha...

guzre 4 saalon me bohut kuch wo karne me bhi kamyab ho paa rahe the.. manila, danila aur aditya teeno bhi khud par experiment karwa kar powerful ban rahe the.. par baat zayada khaas nahi ho paa rahi thi..

lekin wo himmat nahi haarna chahte the.. unki himat badhane me raja and sisters ne hi mamad ki thi.. aditya ki will power ne madad ki thi... aditya ke andar ki badla ki aag ne madad ki thi

raja and party india aur aas paas jo MDO ke bases the, wo sabhi tabah kar diye gaye the. raja and team kitni powerfull hai, isi ko saamne rakhte hue wo khud ko bhi strong bana rahe the..

4 saal beet chuke the.. to india ke halat bhi badal gaye the.. hukumat ki baag daur kisi aur ke hath me aayi to MDO ko firse apna control india aur aas paas k mulkon me banane ka moka mil gaya... paise ki koi kami nahi thi..

teeno ne milkar mashwara kiya aur politicians kharidne shuru kar diye.. MDO firse india me strong banne lagi

ek din aditya ne apne dushmano ko, sabhi ko ek sath maarne ki baat kardi.. to manila aur danila ne bhi india netaon ke sath milkar apne vichar unke saamne rakh diye.. manila aur danila bhi jaante the k unke dushman unse kahi badhkar han to dushman ka khatam ho jaana hi sahi hai.. khatam na bhi ho sake to use itni chot de di jaaye k wo asr uthane layak hi na rahe.. ek mesile dwara fir pure island ko hi nasht kar dene ki planning par thappa lag gaya..



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jab main renu ke sath mumbai me dakhil hua tha to desh me election hue kuch hi din hue the..

ab chunkeh ke 4 saal beet chuke the.. to desh me hukumat bhi badal chuki thi.. naye hathon me desh ki baagh dor aa gai thi.. sabke mind ek jaise nahi hua karte.. koi achha to koi bura. koi bohut achha to koi bohut bura

army kabhi bhi political maamlo me nahi uljha karti.. army ko bass desh ki suraksha karni hoti hai.. na k desh ke andar ke maamlat se koi gharz

dar darpa desh ke liye army kuch bhi kar jaya karti thi.. lekin politicians baat ko aur rang dene me mahir hote hann

hamare maamle me pichhhli hukumat ne humen support kiya tha.. hamare kaam ko saraha bhi tha.. par abki baar wo election haar gai thi

achhi hukumat kar rahe the naa. to bure logon ko kaise ye baat hazam ho sakti thi.. sab ek dusre se mil gaye aur desh par khud ki hukumat bana li

raw chief ko bhi tang kiya jaane laga.. hamare hue bohut se kaand me bohut sa nuksan bhi hua tha.. jo k sahi baat thi.. badle me humne desh ki gandgi bhi to saaf ki thi.. abb koshish karte rehne se bhi aksar aukat koi mistake ho jaya karti thi

aisa to kisi ke sath bhi ho jaya ha.. dushman bhi to khud ko safe rakhne k liye bohut se masoomo ko bandi bana leti hai

aise hi kuch maamlon me kuch masoom maare gaye the. aisi hi incidents ko issues bana kar raw chief ko resign karne par majbur kar dia gaya

fir unka khud ka ek banda chief ban baitha.... uske sath hamari to ban nahi sakti thi.. to majburan humen bhi raw se resign karna pada.. humen raw ki zarurat thi, par achhe logon ke sath

dusra humen to bass desh ki seva se gharz thi.. wo hum kaise bhi kar sakte the.. bohut se andaz hum akhtiyar kar sakte the..

lekin fir ek aisi baat hui k sab kuch hi chopat ho kar reh gaya.........

bure logon ke bure dost hua karte han..... paisa jahan se bhi mile sab jhuk jhuk kar salam karte han...........

humne jo MDO jo desh se ukhad phenka tha.. wo firse manzare aam par aane lagi........

island hamari milkiyat nahi tha.. desh ki seva ke chalte humen mila tha.. to desh ke bure netaon ne milkar ek plan banaya aur humen pure island samet tabah kar dene ka plan banaya jaane laga..

raw ke sabqa chief aur army chief ne humen warning de di keh jald se jald island chhhod diya jaaye. warna mesile se pure island ko hi nasht kiya jaane wala hai


ye baat sabke liye bohut hi khatarnaak thi.. halat aise bhi badlen socha nahi tha.. hamare sath sath desh me reh rahe hamare sabhi reletives bhi is tarha se to khatre me aa gaye the..

sabko fori taur par kahi surakshit hone ka bol kr hum sabb island khali karne lage

din ke 11 baje ka time tha.. aur deri ki koi gunjayes nahi thi... is island se 700 km door ek aur island tha.. jo half kilometer par phela hua tha.. emergency k liye humne pehle se hi uske neeche ek basement bana rakha tha.. wanra to sobu ne aur bhi kai island hamare liye kharid rakhe the.. in 4 saalon me bhi humne bohut sa paisa kamaya tha.. bohtu se thikane bhi banaye the. kabhi halat badal bhi sakte han. aisa sab bhi mind me rakha hua tha..

hum jaante the k desh seva karna achhi baat hai.. par desh ki seva ke chalte bohut kuch khona bhi pad sakta hai.. aur aaj wahi ho raha tha..

mujhe sab ki tension hone lagi thi.. desh ke mukhtlif shehron me reh rahe apne azizon ki tension hone lagi thi.. kahi kisi ke sath kuch galat na ho jaaye

karan bhi nikla hua tha pata nahi wo kab lautta.. lekin jab bhi lautta island ko nasht dekh kar uski halat kya hogi.. kaise wo khud par kaabu rakh sakega

zoya jiski jaan karan ke andar thi.. uske dusre bhai behen kaise karan ki judai bardastht kar sakte the

meri didiyan bohut imotional ho rahi thee.. desh ki seva ke badle aisa phal .. didiyon ko bohut dukh ho raha tha..

lekin baat dukh ki thi.. afsos ki nahi thi.. desh seva karke dukh kise hoga bhala

sab ready hokar nikalne lage to renu cheekh padi

renu:- zooooooooooooyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

renu paglon ki tarha se zoya ko dekhne lagi.. lekin zoya kahi nahi dikhi

raja;- kahi wo karan ke peeche to chali gayi.. kahi wo sab halat jaan kar karan k liye to nahi nikal padi...

renu:- raajjjjaaaa mere bachhe..... renu ke dil ki halat kharab hone lagi thi.. halat to sabki hi kharab hone lagi thi..

sabke sab bohut pareshan ho gaye the.. par itno ko bachane k liye humne forna hi nikalna bhi tha.. renu bohut strong thi.. par koi maa to jitni bhi strong ho jaaye, apne jigar ke tukdon k liye wo mom sa dil rakhti ha


hum sab ships me baithe wahan se nikal liye.. karan aur zoya ka kahi koi pata nahi tha


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Before Some Days

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zameen bohut badi banayi hai banane wale ne.. dunya jitni bhi tarakki karle. kudrat ke sare raaz wo nahi jaan sakti

alag alag palnet baare research jaari hai saalon se.. kabhi thami aur na hi kabhi tham paayegi..

hamari zameen banane wale ne aisi banayi hai k koi bhi chah kar ise puri tarha se dsicover nahi kar saka.. earth ke aise kai hisse han jinke baare me mukhtlif qayas kiye jate han, wahan falaan cheez hai, zameen ka wo khitta aisa hai, vaisa hai.. door samandaro ke beech jahan koi nahi ja paya, kaiyon ne jaane ki koshish ki, par kabhi laut nahi paya.. wahan k baare me satellite view ke zariye tabsare kiye gaye.. har kisi ne apni apni raye ka izhaar kiya

lekin haqeeqat to ye han k koi bhi samandar ke baare me.. samandari raston se hat kar samandron ke bare me sahi gyann nahi de paya..



neele samandaro me jahan tak ja paana mumkin nahi hai.. wahin ek island aisa bhi hai, jise agar satellite se dekha jaaye to wo island dikhai nahi padta..

island 300 km tak phela hua tha. wahan kai kabile abad the.. wo island aur us island ke charon aur 1000 kilometer ka area dhund ki lapet me tha... aisa satellite se dekhne par lagta tha..

bohut se scientist ne wahan ke bare me sab jaanne ki koshish bhi ki thi.. lekin wahan jaa kar koi laut nahi paya to wahan ke baare me koi report kisi ke paas nahi thi....

wahan ki zameen sabz rang ke patton se lipti hui thi.. wahan ki aab o hawa kuch aisi thi k wahan jo dhoop padti thi to uska rang bhi usi zameen k hisab se ho jaya karta tha..

matlab k dhoop bhi wahan ki sabz rang ki thi, suraj bhi sabz hi dikhayi deta tha. dhoop me tezi nahi thi.. garmi ka koi chakkar nahi tha aur na hi sardi ka koi chakkar

mausam ek dum mohtdil tha.. wahan ke renge wale wahi paaye jaane wale bade bade patton se apne jism ke khaas angon ko chhupaa liya karte the..


samandar ke kinare basa ek kabila.. us kabile me reh raha ek premi joda.... is island par basne wale sabhi insan samandar ke baasi bhi the.. wo samandar me saans le sakte the... samandar me senkdon km/h ki raftar se ter bhi sakte the..

wo premi joda samandar me hi bani hui ek gufa me baitha hua tha..

"kya tum mere liye tashtash hasil nahi kar sakte joel"

joel:- zeno tumhare liye to main asmaan se taare bhi tod sakta hon.. par

zeno;- par mere liye tashtash hasil nahi kar sakte.. zeno ki ankhen nam hone lagi thee

joel bebasi se zeno ko dekhne laga

zeno:- main samjh gayi joel tum mujhe kabhi bhi hasil karna nahi chahte

joel:- tum jaanti ho na zeno wahan jaana kitna riski ho sakta hai

zeno:- mere liye bhi ye risk nahi le sakte

joel:- risk le to lun zeno, par yakeen bhi to nahi hai naa keh mujhe tashtash mil hi jaayega

zeno:- par muhje pura pura yakeen hai joel tashtash tumhe zuru milega

joel:- theek hai zeno main tumhara yakeen nahi tootne dunga

zeno:- par yaad rahe use galti se bhi nange hathon se mat chhuu lena tum jaante ho na, tashtash me kitni power hoti hai.. tumahre sath kuch bhi ho sakta hai

joel:- jaanta hon meri jaan tum pareshan na ho, bas roshni wale se dua karna k mujhe rashtash mil jaaye ta keh main tumhe hamesha k liye paa sakun

zeno:- ye zaruri bhi hai joel.. warna ek sardarzadi ko tum kaise hasil kar sokoge

dono fir ek dusre me samane lage.. dono khub ek dusre ko kiss karne lage, dono ek dusre ko choomne lage...


kuch der ke baad joel aur zeno ek dusre se alag hue

zeno:- joel mere liye apna khayal rakhna

joel:- tum bhi mere liye apna khayal rakhna.. mujhe kuch din lag jaayenge lautne me to mere ghar walun ko kuch mat batana, bas itna keh dena k main samandar me kuch din rehna chahta hon.. zeno ne joel ko tasalli kara di..


joel fir wahan se nikal pada.. joel ki manzil dusri dunya ke samandar the.. tashtash use wahi se hasil karna tha.. joel se pehle bhi kaiyon ne aisi koshish ki thi lekin kisi ko tashtash nahi mil saka tha

tashtash ek sohenre rang ka chhota tha patthar tha.. jo india aur srilanka ke samdandar ke kahi paya jata tha...

aisa is kabile walun ki hazaron saal purani kitabo me likha hua tha.. par kabhi kisi ko mila nahi tha.. jisko wo patthar mil jaya karta tha.. wo is dunya ka sabse powerfull insan bhi ban jata tha... use foran hi kabile ka, pure island ka sardar bana dia jata

par pehle kabhi koi aisa kar nahi paya tha



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karan aaj zayada door nahi gaya tha...... island se 40 km door rehte hue wo samandar ki gehrayi me utra hua tha.. ek khanjar wo hamesha apne sath rakha karta tha.. kuch samandari jeev use pareshan karte the toh unhe khatam karne k liye..

ek bohut bada dhakama hua aur samandar ke paani me hulchal si mach uthi... karan foran hi paani se upar aaya aur paani ki satah par khade hokar charon aur dekhne laga..

door use aag aur dhuen ka ehsas hua to pehle to wo bada heran hua k kaisa ajeeb dhuan, aur kaisi ajeeb aag hai ye

par jab usne ghaur se dekha to use laga k ye to island hai jahan sab uske apne han.. karan for bijli ki si speed se wapis paani me gaya aur bijli ki speed se island ki or badhne laga..

jald hi wo island se kuch faasle par tha.. karan ek baar firse paani ki satah par khada tha.. uske saamne pura island aag me jal raha tha....... karan cheekhne chillane laga

wo samjha k uska pariwar uske sare apne khatam ho gaye han.... karan jabse paida hua tha kabhi roya nahi tha, par aaj uski ankhon se zehreela paani nikalne laga tha.. karan ko bohut dard hone laga tha..

wo charon aur ghoom fir kar island ko dekhne laga.. kahi aag kamm ho to wo island me ghuse aur kisi apne ko bachane ki koshish kare.. agar wo zinda hai to


lekin usay kahi se andar jaane ka rasta nazar nahi aaya........ karan ke andar ka dard aur bhi badhne laga.... wo sahil ke paas bhi nahi pohnch paa raha tha.. aag thi hi itni bhayankar .. door se hi aag ki lapten jism ko jalane lagti theee...

uske andar ka insan bhi badalne laga tha.. uske hisab se uske sare apne ab nahi rahe the.. aur wo samjh bhi sakta tha k aisa kisne kiya hoga.. uske sochne samjhne ki salahiyat aam isnano se kahi badhkar thi..

karan lautne laga to usne pehle jo ek baat nahi sochi thi wo uski smajh me aa gayi.. use koi bhi bada ship samandar me nahi dikha tha.. ye baat jaante hi karan ko kuch rahat bhi mil gayi aur wo samjh gaya k sab kahan gaye honge


karan samandar me utar wo bohut geyrayi me tha.. ye rasta uske liye naya tha.. jis raste se wo guzar raha tha us samandar reh se ke raste se wo pehle kabhi nahi guzra tha.. karan ko samandar ki kisi makhlooq se darr nahi lagta tha.. aksar to wo samanadar ke pahadon me bane hue ghaaron me bhi utar jaya karta tha.

aaj bhi usay ek gufa dikhi to wo uske andar ja ghusa.... jaise hi wo kuch aage badha to usay ke jaja se sonehre rang ki roshni si mehsus hui.. aisi roshniyan karan pehle bhi kai baar dekh chuka tha.. samandar pura hi to heere motiyon se bhara hua hai.. aksar hi wo kuch na kuch samandar se nikal kar le jata tha aur sabko gift de dia karta tha..

lekin aaj ki sonehri rishni ne usay kuch heran kar dia tha.. aisi roshni usne pehle kabhi nahi dekhi thi

wo bechain hua to jald se aage badh kar us sonehri roshni tak ja pohnchaa.. karan wahi khada hokar us chamak rahi cheekh ko dekhne laga.. wo mitti me daba hua ek sonehra patthar tha. mitti me daba hua tha fir bhi uski roshni bohut zayada thi.. karan jhuka aur us patthar ko utha liya...

nahi jaanta tha karan kuch bhi us patthar ke baare me............ karan ne tashtash patthar ko nange hathon hi chhuu liya tha.........

karan ko aisa jhatka laga k uski bhayankar cheekh nikal gayi.... tashtash patthar uski hatheli ke sath hi chipak sa gaya tha..

karan ki hatheli se tashtash ke chipakte hi kai rangon ki roshni aas paas phelne lagi.. samandar ki lehron me firse hulchal si machne lagi.. roshni itni badhi k samandar ki lehron ko cheerti hui upar jaane lagi.. fir wo paani se bahar bhi nikal gayi..

karan ko koi hosh nahi raha tha.. karan musalsal cheekhe ja raha tha.. usay itna hi hosh nahi raha tha k wo patthar ko apne hath se alag karde.. aur khud ko safe bana le


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hum sab ships par sawar hokar apni manzil ki aur badh rahe the.. karna beta aur zoya beti humme nahi the.. jaane wo dono kahan the'
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renu, maa aur bhi kuch abb rone lagi thee.. karan aur zoya bohut kuch hote hue bhi abhi bachhe the.. dono abhi bhi renu ka doodh pi rahe the. ek maa kaise apne bachhon ko khud ko door hote hue dekh sakti thi


"wo dekho zooooyyaaaaaaaaaa" ship me baithe huon me se koi cheekha to sab usi disha me dekhne lage, jidhar baki sab dekh rahe the.

kuch faasle par zoya ship ke barabar ter rahi thi

renu:- zooyaa aa jaao mere paas meri jaann

zoya:- mom main bhai ko lekar hi aaongi..... aap sab kahan jaa rahe han

raja:- zoya beti hum sab ...... island par ja rahe han

zoya;- uske baad aap sab kahan jaayenge???

zoya ko maine bata dia k yahan se fir hum kahan jaayenge.... zoya bachi hokar bhi bachhi nahi thi.. karan mera baap tha to ye nanhi si jaan meri maa thi

zoya fir paani ki lehron par daudti hui aayi aur ek jump me hi ship par aa kar sabke gaal par ek ek kiss kardi

sab usay aisa karte dekh kar bohut khush ho gaye the....

zoya:- main bhai ko lekar aaongi mom, dad.. fir sab ko dekhti hui boli.. aur jald hi hum firse ek sath honge

zoya ne firse ek jump lagaya aur paani me ja pohnchi.. ke baar mud kar sabko ta ta karke hath hilaya.. fir samandar ki gehraiyo me utarti chali gayi

raja:- dekha renu hamare bachhe hum se kahi badh kar han.

renu;- jaanti hon raja .. par ek maa kaise ye samjh sakti hai

maine renu ko apnu bahun me bhar liya




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joel bhi kai din ke safar ke baad usi jaga ja pohncha tha jahan karan tha.. wo tashtash ko dhundne ki koshish me tha.. aas paas ka bohut sa ilaka usne chhaan mara tha, par usay tashtash nahi mila tha..

joel ke patthar par baith kar aram karne laga.. aur sochne laga k wahan wo dhunde tashtash ko.....

kuch der guzri thi k samandar ki gehrayi me jaise bhunchal sa aa gaya.. joel jis patthar par baitha tha, wo patthar bhi larzne laga tha.. joel utha aur charon aur dekhne laga.. fir to wo dekh kar heran hi reh gaya tha.. itni tez roshni, itne rangon ki roshni

wo jaan gaya k ye sab tashtash ke karan hi ho raha hai.. apr wo ye soch kar bhi heran reh gaya tha k itni roshni to tab hi hua karti thi, jab koi usay nange hathun se chhuu liya karta tha

to kya wo patthar kisi aur ne hasil kar liya hai.. ye baat joel ke mann me aayi to bijli ki si speed se usi disha me aage badha jahan karan maujud tha

kareeb pohncha to usay ek bachhe ke cheekhne ki awazen bhi suaaayi dene lagi thi.. joel gufa me ghusa . samne dekha to ek bachhe ko cheekhte hue, bachhe ki hatheli se chipak rahe tashtash patthar ko dekh kar wo hairat me gumm ho gaya tha..

lekin fir jaldi se wo bahar aaya, ek seep utha kar wo wapis aaya aur seep ko khol kar hath lagaye bina us patthar ko karan ki hatheli se alag karke ke us seep me band kar dia

jaise hi tashtash karan ke hath se alag hua to karan neeche gir pada

joel:- ohhhh roshni wale tu hi bata mujhe ye bachha kaun hai, hamare kabile ka nahi nahi, lekin iske andar sari khasiyaten hamare jaisi han.. tashtash ne ise halak bhi nahi kiya.. jis patthar par hamara haq hai, usay isne chhuu bhi liya hai, aur mara bhi nahi. ae roshni wale mujhe koi rasta dikhao, mujhe bataao main kya karun

joel wahi baith kar pray karne laga.. apne bhagwan ko yaad karne laga....

fir kuch der baad usne ek samandri bail se seep ko apni kamar par kass ke baandh liya, aur karan ko utha kar apne sath apne kabile lejaane laga..



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"aaahhhh ye kya tha"

hum sab ship me baithe hue the aur zoya ko humse door hue 2 minutes hi guzre the k humen apne peeche 20-25 km door samandar me rishni si dikhi, sab usi disha me dekhne lage the.
roshni hone se pehle samandar ki lehron me bhi hulchal hui thi.. lekin zayada nahi

sab hairat se us roshni ko dekh rahe the.. samandar ke andar se roshn nikal kar kuch upar tak ja kar phelne lagi thi, lekin fir kuch hi der me wo sari roshni khatam bhi ho gayi thi


"tashtash"

anju baba badbadye the

"tashtash"?????????????

sabke mohn se nikla tha ye lafz

anju baba:- haan tashtash........... apne buzargon se suna tha aisa ek patthar hai jise chhuuu lene se aise rang bikharne lagte han.. aisi roshni hone lagti hai.. samandar ki lehren bhi tashtash ki power ko sehn nahi kar paati aur bhayankar hulchal machane lagti han.... zarur kisi ne tashtash ko chhuu liya hoga

renu;- mera karan, meri zoya

tab sab ka hi dhayan karan aur zoya par gaya

raja:- zoya toa bhi hamare paas se gayi hai, zarur karan hoga

anju baba:- bhagwan hamare karan ki raksha kare

kk-kyaaaaaaaaaaaa mm-matlab?????

sab ke sab anju baba ki baat sunkar dehl se gaye the

anju baba:- wo patthar kaisa hai, uski power to tum sab ne bhi jaan li hogi.. samandar ki lehron ka shor, fir wo kai rangon ki roshni.. agar to karan beta ne hi usi patthar ko chhua hai to kuch na kuch to zarur hua hoga uske sath

renu aur dusre sab rone lage the.. anju baba bhi gehri soch me pad gaye the.. jitna wo jaante the, utna wo bol chuke the..






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PART 1 END .................... PART 2 WILL BE WRITTEN LATER... WITH ANOTHER THREAD
Ek khubsurat kahani ka ant ho gaya. Asad bhai ko story jaldi khatm karne ki supari di gayi he. Itani pyari story k kal 4 updates ek sath de kar itani speed badhayi ki aaj aakhir me kahani ka the End ho hi gaya. In 4 updates ko details k sath likhte to 40 update bante aur kahani thoda lamba chalti par bhai ne to supari le rakhi he. Ab isko isliye jaldi se niptaya he taki Asad bhai ke dimag me koi aur story ka fitur chalu ho gaya he. Tawayafzada k liye aapne ise jaldi The end kar diya. Yah meri bahut pasandida story me se ek thi ab me kya karunga Bhai. Aapne to Manorama aur Rudra ka chapter bhi band kar rakha he. Bahut jaldi Aru aarti nandani wala chapter bhi the end ki aur pahucha diya he. But nice End of this story brother. Congratulations and thanks for such a nice and marvellous story.
 
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Ek khubsurat kahani ka ant ho gaya. Asad bhai ko story jaldi khatm karne ki supari di gayi he. Itani pyari story k kal 4 updates ek sath de kar itani speed badhayi ki aaj aakhir me kahani ka the End ho hi gaya. In 4 updates ko details k sath likhte to 40 update bante aur kahani thoda lamba chalti par bhai ne to supari le rakhi he. Ab isko isliye jaldi se niptaya he taki Asad bhai ke dimag me koi aur story ka fitur chalu ho gaya he. Tawayafzada k liye aapne ise jaldi The end kar diya. Yah meri bahut pasandida story me se ek thi ab me kya karunga Bhai. Aapne to Manorama aur Rudra ka chapter bhi band kar rakha he. Bahut jaldi Aru aarti nandani wala chapter bhi the end ki aur pahucha diya he. But nice End of this story brother. Congratulations and thanks for such a nice and marvellous story.
bohut bohut shukriya Battu bhai🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️

kya karun kabhi likhne ki koshish nahi ki thi. abb jab likhna shuru kiya to aur stories ke plot banne band hi nahi ho rahe han.. ek shuru karta hon to dusri tayyar hone lagti hai... dusri likhta hon to teeesri

abb se main apni routine ko badalne wala hon bhai.. ab ek time me ek hi story ko run kiya jaayega.. aur usay khaas andaz me likha jaayega.. laa-waris ke next part ka plot bana to wo mujhe bohut zabardast laga.. to maine next part k liye special time nikalne ka soch liya tha..

another story ka plot bane to fir ruka nahi jaata .. jab tak use likh na lo.. lawaris ke first part me jo zaruri tha wo maine dikha dia.. ab next ke liye bohut kuch sochna hai mujhe to fori nahi likh sakta.. to mood bhi waqt ke sath badalta rehta hai..

abb mera mann ek special kisam ki love story aur imotional diljale type story likhne ka hone laga to maine kuch speed pakad li.. jald hi kuch rang zindagi ke aise bhi . ko khatam karke TAWAIFZADA ko shuru kiya jaayega.. isi ki baat kar raha tha main k aapke liye ek SHAHKAAR hai agle mahine.....

to usay shahkaar ki tayyari shruu kar di hai main.. jald hi free hokar ek nayi form me naye thread ke sath milte han..... tab tak k liye

kuch rang zindgi ke aise bhi .... me kuch time spend karte han...... apna khayal rakhna bhai❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👋👋👋👋👋
 

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karan teen saal ka hua to wo 6-7 saal ka dikhne laga tha. uski uthaan badi zabardast thi. use kapdo se bohut uljhan hoti thi.. hamesha hi wo underwear me rehta tha.. humen dekhte hue wo apni ankhon ki kashish ko control me rakhta tha..

uske andar kya kuch tha, kitni abilities thi.. wo kya kya kar sakta tha, sab nahi jaante the....... wo itna zaheen tha k abhi se hi wo kisi scientist se kamm nahi tha.. zaheen hona to uske aage aam si baat thi

pawan papa ke paas jitna bhi knowlenge tha wo sab wo hasil kar chuka tha.. paani me saans wo le sakta tha.. uska zayada tar samay samandar me hi guzarta tha. paani se to use jaise ishq tha

suba ghar se nikalta to shaam ko hi wapis aata.. aksar to raat let aata tha wo.. samandar me door bohut door wo nikal jaya karta tha.. anju baba ne keh dia tha k wo use samandar me kabhi koi khatra nahi hoga.. ulta samandar me rehte hue uski power aur bhi badh jaya karegi.. zameen par rehte wo jitna powerfull hoga.. samandar me rehte uski power bohut badh jaya karegi

aur tha bhi aise hi main aur renu kabhi kabhi uske sath samandar me nikal jaya karte the.. uski power ko check kiya to aam lohe ki salakh jo mai mushkil se tedhi kar sakta tha. itni si umar me hi wo use mom ki tarha se mod dia karta tha


dusri afat jo karan se 1 saal chhoti thi.. meri beti renu se jo paida hui.. uska naam zoya rakha gaya tha.. wo bhi same karan ke jaisi thi.. par uski nature me badlaao the

wo bhi zehreele paani me hi paida hui thi.. karan se kamm nahi thi par karan se badhkar bhi nahi thi.. karan ki baat hi kuch aur thi



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raw me jaane ke baad humne sabse AK ke boss ko khatam kiya tha, uski qiad me reh rahe scientists ko azad karwaya tha, unhe unki families se bhi milwa dia tha.. wo ro pade the apni families se milke.. saalon se wo door the apni family se

uske baad humne jo mission kiya wo mission tha renu ke chacha ko marne wala mission

renu ke maa baap ko maar kar renu ko bhi wo maar dena chahta tha, par renu wahan se jaan bacha kar nikal bhagi thi.... wo lalchi pariwar tha

par ek maamle me wo sahi bhi nikla tha. renu ne khud se apne chacha ko mara tha, daulat ki to hamare paas koi kami nahi reh gai thi to renu ne sari daulat unhi ke paas hi rehne di thi.. akhir ko usne us ghar me uske ghar ke bachho ke sath apna pachpan guzara tha..
kaise unhe sadak par dekh sakti thi

ek chacha k liye sabko to nahi mara ja sakta tha.. sabko nahi rulaya ja sakta tha.. renu ki chachi ne chacha ko maarne k baad renu se maafi maangi thi aur waja bhi batai thi k kyun uske chacha ne apne bhai ko maara tha.. aur waja jaan kar to hum sab shocked hi ho gaye the..

sabse zayada jhatka to renu ko laga tha.. wo jo samjh rahi thi k ye uska pariwar hai to ye sahi nahi tha..

renu darasal laila maa ke bhai ki gumshuda bachhi thi.. renu ke chacha ka bhai aur bhabhi jo renu ke mata pita bhi bane the.. renu ko paal poss kar bada kiya tha

shadi k kai saal baad tak unhe koi aulad nahi huii thi to desh ke alag alag mandiron me puja karwane, dua karwane jaya karte the

hamare pariwar par surinder ne, avinash ne jo hamla karwaya tha, usi hamla me renu bhi mere pariwar se juda ho gai thi.. to in dono beaulad jode ke hath lag gayi thi

dono ne renu ko bhagwan ki den samjh liya.. aur kuch din wahi reh kar socha k renu ko uske pariwar ke hawale kar dia jaaye.. par aisa nahi kar sake the wo..

jaisi ladai hui thi bohut kuch darham barham ho gaya tha.. renu ko wo fir apne sath lekar chale gaye the..tab se hi renu unki beti bankar rehne lagi thi.

sari property renu ke naam bachpan me hi wo karne ki karwayi karne lage the.. jis waja se renu ke chacha ne ye sab kiya tha..

renu ke mata pita ko maar kar renu ko bhi jaan se maar dena chahte the, par renu wahan se nikal bhagi thi



jab sab island pohnche aur renu ki haqeeqat sabko bataayi gayi to sab ko firse ek jhatka laga tha..

laila maa ke dil me jo ek dard tha wo bhi khatam ho gaya tha.. renu ka saga koi nahi tha, lekin ek bua aur do bhai use mile to renu ko bhi apni zindagi ka sab adhura pura hota hua nazar aane laga.. laila maa, renu, rahul aur deepak ka milan bohut rikkat amez tha..

renu us din bohut roi thi.. itna k ro ro kar renu ne record bana diye the.. laila maa ne to renu ko kai din tak khud se juda hi nahi kiya tha.. aisa hi haal rahul bhaiya aur deepak ka bhi tha

renu sabke liye, laila maa aur rahul deepak k liye pehle se hi khaas thi.. par sab haqeeqat ke khul jaane par, ye jaan kar k wo unka apna hi khun hai, renu unke liye aisi ho gayi.. jaisi wo unke jism se judi hui ho

renu ke liye pyar kai guna aur bhi badh gaya tha..


desh me jahan bhi bura log humen dikhte the, hum uhne maar diya karte the.. desh me ek baar to bhunchal hi aa gaya tha.. desh k liye bohut se nasoor humne khatam kar diye the

lekin bura logon ko aise achhe kaam hazam hi kahan hua karte han.. policeticain hi to bure log hote han.. unho ne hungama macha dia to majburan humen khud ko limit me rakhna pada


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maya bhi abb nazuk nahi rahi thi.. maya sher ki patni thi, sher ke bachhon ko janam de chuki thi.. to khud kaise na fir wo sherni banti

maya bhi badal gai thi.. maya bhi sherni ban chuki thi



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karan sabko payara tha, karan bhi sabse bohut zayada pyar karta tha.. kisi se koi fark nahi karta tha.. sobu se, sandhu ji se uski khaas uthak baithak thi

lekin jo pyaar karan ko apni behen zoya se tha, aur jo pyaar zoya ko karan se tha. uski koi hadd nahi thi. zoya abhi chhoti thi.. lekin karan ke sath aksar wo uski activities me shamil raha karti thi

karan ki tarha se zoya bhi samandar ki baasi ban chuki thi.. paani uske aise tha jaise samandar ke paani me rehne wali samandari makhloq k liye

karan kahi door samandar me nikal jata aur late aata to zoya uske peeche bhi nikal jaya karti thi.. kabhi kabhi dono ek sath bhi nikal jaya karte the.. paani me dono ki speed ek aam motorboat se kam nahi thi.. koi insan dono ka mukabla nahi kar sakta tha..

khud ko bewazan karne ki salahiyat dono me paidaishi hi thi.. dono samandar ke paani par khade ho jaya karte the.. dono paani ke upar daud bhi liya karte the. mera liye aisa karna asaan nahi tha.. par dono is kaam me master ho chuke the

sandhu ji ko bhi do naye khilone mile to uski zindagi me bhi bahar si aa gayi thi

mere dusre bachhe meri behno ke bachhe, AK ka beta ye sab milkar khub dhamal macha karte the......... AK ke bete ki baat to maine ki hi nahi ... AK ka beta usme apne baap ke jaisi qualities aa chuki thee.. wo abhi se hi bohut strong skin ka malik ban raha tha..



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aditya kaise bhi karke wahan se nikal bhaga tha.. jald hi usay apne pariwar ke marne ka pata chal gaya tha.. bohut dard hua tha usay, bhagte hue, us khufiya raaste me aage badhte hue wo dil hi dil kasam bhi khaa raha tha k apne pariwar ke dushmano ko kabhi maaf nahi karega.. jaise uska pariwar khatam hua hai, vaise hi wo apne dushman ke pure pariwar ko bhi neest o nabood kardega...

aditya jab khfiya raste par pohncha tha to wahi ruk kar apne pariwar ka intezar karne laga tha. lekin fir disha ne us raste ko blast kar dia tha to aditya dsure raste ki or badh gaya tha.. wo rasta lift wala rasta tha..

jab sare pariwar wale lift se neeche aa rahe the.. to lift ki light se hi usaya andaza ho gaya tha k abb sab neeche aa rahe han.. wo sab ke neeche aane ka intezar karne laga tha.. lekin lift ek dhamake se phat gayi thi.. jahan wo apne pariwar walun ka wait kar raha tha, lift ke blast hone se apne pariwar walun ke tukde apne charon or bikhre dekh kar wo khud bhi marne wala ho gaya tha... lekin fir badle ki aag ne usay jald hosh me bhi la khada kar dia tha..

aditya kasam khaa kar wahan se nikal liya tha.. apne pariwar ke dushmano ko wo kabhi maaf nahi karega.. sab ko maar dega..


wahan se farar k liye bohut se option the.. aditya 19 saal ka tha.. helicopter, plance, underwater motor boat bhi wo chala leta tha.. uske liye island se nikal bhaagna mushkil kaam nahi tha..

kuch dino baad wo MDO headquarter ja pohncha tha...

ab usay wahan pohnche hue 4 saal beet chuke the.. manila aur danile ne uasy bharpur support aur pyar diya tha.. dono bhai behen milkar khud ko aur bhi strong banane k liye sargaram the.. wo bhi jan gaye the k jitni speed se dunya ke rang badal rahe han, unko bhi usi hisab se banna hoga.. kitna jaldi unke dushmano ne, surinder ke dushmano ne sab khatam kar ke rakh dia tha.

jitna paisa unke paas tha. usi ko kaam me laate hue abb ki baar aur types ke scientist ko kidnap karne ka kam shuru kr diya gaya tha...

guzre 4 saalon me bohut kuch wo karne me bhi kamyab ho paa rahe the.. manila, danila aur aditya teeno bhi khud par experiment karwa kar powerful ban rahe the.. par baat zayada khaas nahi ho paa rahi thi..

lekin wo himmat nahi haarna chahte the.. unki himat badhane me raja and sisters ne hi mamad ki thi.. aditya ki will power ne madad ki thi... aditya ke andar ki badla ki aag ne madad ki thi

raja and party india aur aas paas jo MDO ke bases the, wo sabhi tabah kar diye gaye the. raja and team kitni powerfull hai, isi ko saamne rakhte hue wo khud ko bhi strong bana rahe the..

4 saal beet chuke the.. to india ke halat bhi badal gaye the.. hukumat ki baag daur kisi aur ke hath me aayi to MDO ko firse apna control india aur aas paas k mulkon me banane ka moka mil gaya... paise ki koi kami nahi thi..

teeno ne milkar mashwara kiya aur politicians kharidne shuru kar diye.. MDO firse india me strong banne lagi

ek din aditya ne apne dushmano ko, sabhi ko ek sath maarne ki baat kardi.. to manila aur danila ne bhi india netaon ke sath milkar apne vichar unke saamne rakh diye.. manila aur danila bhi jaante the k unke dushman unse kahi badhkar han to dushman ka khatam ho jaana hi sahi hai.. khatam na bhi ho sake to use itni chot de di jaaye k wo asr uthane layak hi na rahe.. ek mesile dwara fir pure island ko hi nasht kar dene ki planning par thappa lag gaya..



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jab main renu ke sath mumbai me dakhil hua tha to desh me election hue kuch hi din hue the..

ab chunkeh ke 4 saal beet chuke the.. to desh me hukumat bhi badal chuki thi.. naye hathon me desh ki baagh dor aa gai thi.. sabke mind ek jaise nahi hua karte.. koi achha to koi bura. koi bohut achha to koi bohut bura

army kabhi bhi political maamlo me nahi uljha karti.. army ko bass desh ki suraksha karni hoti hai.. na k desh ke andar ke maamlat se koi gharz

dar darpa desh ke liye army kuch bhi kar jaya karti thi.. lekin politicians baat ko aur rang dene me mahir hote hann

hamare maamle me pichhhli hukumat ne humen support kiya tha.. hamare kaam ko saraha bhi tha.. par abki baar wo election haar gai thi

achhi hukumat kar rahe the naa. to bure logon ko kaise ye baat hazam ho sakti thi.. sab ek dusre se mil gaye aur desh par khud ki hukumat bana li

raw chief ko bhi tang kiya jaane laga.. hamare hue bohut se kaand me bohut sa nuksan bhi hua tha.. jo k sahi baat thi.. badle me humne desh ki gandgi bhi to saaf ki thi.. abb koshish karte rehne se bhi aksar aukat koi mistake ho jaya karti thi

aisa to kisi ke sath bhi ho jaya ha.. dushman bhi to khud ko safe rakhne k liye bohut se masoomo ko bandi bana leti hai

aise hi kuch maamlon me kuch masoom maare gaye the. aisi hi incidents ko issues bana kar raw chief ko resign karne par majbur kar dia gaya

fir unka khud ka ek banda chief ban baitha.... uske sath hamari to ban nahi sakti thi.. to majburan humen bhi raw se resign karna pada.. humen raw ki zarurat thi, par achhe logon ke sath

dusra humen to bass desh ki seva se gharz thi.. wo hum kaise bhi kar sakte the.. bohut se andaz hum akhtiyar kar sakte the..

lekin fir ek aisi baat hui k sab kuch hi chopat ho kar reh gaya.........

bure logon ke bure dost hua karte han..... paisa jahan se bhi mile sab jhuk jhuk kar salam karte han...........

humne jo MDO jo desh se ukhad phenka tha.. wo firse manzare aam par aane lagi........

island hamari milkiyat nahi tha.. desh ki seva ke chalte humen mila tha.. to desh ke bure netaon ne milkar ek plan banaya aur humen pure island samet tabah kar dene ka plan banaya jaane laga..

raw ke sabqa chief aur army chief ne humen warning de di keh jald se jald island chhhod diya jaaye. warna mesile se pure island ko hi nasht kiya jaane wala hai


ye baat sabke liye bohut hi khatarnaak thi.. halat aise bhi badlen socha nahi tha.. hamare sath sath desh me reh rahe hamare sabhi reletives bhi is tarha se to khatre me aa gaye the..

sabko fori taur par kahi surakshit hone ka bol kr hum sabb island khali karne lage

din ke 11 baje ka time tha.. aur deri ki koi gunjayes nahi thi... is island se 700 km door ek aur island tha.. jo half kilometer par phela hua tha.. emergency k liye humne pehle se hi uske neeche ek basement bana rakha tha.. wanra to sobu ne aur bhi kai island hamare liye kharid rakhe the.. in 4 saalon me bhi humne bohut sa paisa kamaya tha.. bohtu se thikane bhi banaye the. kabhi halat badal bhi sakte han. aisa sab bhi mind me rakha hua tha..

hum jaante the k desh seva karna achhi baat hai.. par desh ki seva ke chalte bohut kuch khona bhi pad sakta hai.. aur aaj wahi ho raha tha..

mujhe sab ki tension hone lagi thi.. desh ke mukhtlif shehron me reh rahe apne azizon ki tension hone lagi thi.. kahi kisi ke sath kuch galat na ho jaaye

karan bhi nikla hua tha pata nahi wo kab lautta.. lekin jab bhi lautta island ko nasht dekh kar uski halat kya hogi.. kaise wo khud par kaabu rakh sakega

zoya jiski jaan karan ke andar thi.. uske dusre bhai behen kaise karan ki judai bardastht kar sakte the

meri didiyan bohut imotional ho rahi thee.. desh ki seva ke badle aisa phal .. didiyon ko bohut dukh ho raha tha..

lekin baat dukh ki thi.. afsos ki nahi thi.. desh seva karke dukh kise hoga bhala

sab ready hokar nikalne lage to renu cheekh padi

renu:- zooooooooooooyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

renu paglon ki tarha se zoya ko dekhne lagi.. lekin zoya kahi nahi dikhi

raja;- kahi wo karan ke peeche to chali gayi.. kahi wo sab halat jaan kar karan k liye to nahi nikal padi...

renu:- raajjjjaaaa mere bachhe..... renu ke dil ki halat kharab hone lagi thi.. halat to sabki hi kharab hone lagi thi..

sabke sab bohut pareshan ho gaye the.. par itno ko bachane k liye humne forna hi nikalna bhi tha.. renu bohut strong thi.. par koi maa to jitni bhi strong ho jaaye, apne jigar ke tukdon k liye wo mom sa dil rakhti ha


hum sab ships me baithe wahan se nikal liye.. karan aur zoya ka kahi koi pata nahi tha


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Before Some Days

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zameen bohut badi banayi hai banane wale ne.. dunya jitni bhi tarakki karle. kudrat ke sare raaz wo nahi jaan sakti

alag alag palnet baare research jaari hai saalon se.. kabhi thami aur na hi kabhi tham paayegi..

hamari zameen banane wale ne aisi banayi hai k koi bhi chah kar ise puri tarha se dsicover nahi kar saka.. earth ke aise kai hisse han jinke baare me mukhtlif qayas kiye jate han, wahan falaan cheez hai, zameen ka wo khitta aisa hai, vaisa hai.. door samandaro ke beech jahan koi nahi ja paya, kaiyon ne jaane ki koshish ki, par kabhi laut nahi paya.. wahan k baare me satellite view ke zariye tabsare kiye gaye.. har kisi ne apni apni raye ka izhaar kiya

lekin haqeeqat to ye han k koi bhi samandar ke baare me.. samandari raston se hat kar samandron ke bare me sahi gyann nahi de paya..



neele samandaro me jahan tak ja paana mumkin nahi hai.. wahin ek island aisa bhi hai, jise agar satellite se dekha jaaye to wo island dikhai nahi padta..

island 300 km tak phela hua tha. wahan kai kabile abad the.. wo island aur us island ke charon aur 1000 kilometer ka area dhund ki lapet me tha... aisa satellite se dekhne par lagta tha..

bohut se scientist ne wahan ke bare me sab jaanne ki koshish bhi ki thi.. lekin wahan jaa kar koi laut nahi paya to wahan ke baare me koi report kisi ke paas nahi thi....

wahan ki zameen sabz rang ke patton se lipti hui thi.. wahan ki aab o hawa kuch aisi thi k wahan jo dhoop padti thi to uska rang bhi usi zameen k hisab se ho jaya karta tha..

matlab k dhoop bhi wahan ki sabz rang ki thi, suraj bhi sabz hi dikhayi deta tha. dhoop me tezi nahi thi.. garmi ka koi chakkar nahi tha aur na hi sardi ka koi chakkar

mausam ek dum mohtdil tha.. wahan ke renge wale wahi paaye jaane wale bade bade patton se apne jism ke khaas angon ko chhupaa liya karte the..


samandar ke kinare basa ek kabila.. us kabile me reh raha ek premi joda.... is island par basne wale sabhi insan samandar ke baasi bhi the.. wo samandar me saans le sakte the... samandar me senkdon km/h ki raftar se ter bhi sakte the..

wo premi joda samandar me hi bani hui ek gufa me baitha hua tha..

"kya tum mere liye tashtash hasil nahi kar sakte joel"

joel:- zeno tumhare liye to main asmaan se taare bhi tod sakta hon.. par

zeno;- par mere liye tashtash hasil nahi kar sakte.. zeno ki ankhen nam hone lagi thee

joel bebasi se zeno ko dekhne laga

zeno:- main samjh gayi joel tum mujhe kabhi bhi hasil karna nahi chahte

joel:- tum jaanti ho na zeno wahan jaana kitna riski ho sakta hai

zeno:- mere liye bhi ye risk nahi le sakte

joel:- risk le to lun zeno, par yakeen bhi to nahi hai naa keh mujhe tashtash mil hi jaayega

zeno:- par muhje pura pura yakeen hai joel tashtash tumhe zuru milega

joel:- theek hai zeno main tumhara yakeen nahi tootne dunga

zeno:- par yaad rahe use galti se bhi nange hathon se mat chhuu lena tum jaante ho na, tashtash me kitni power hoti hai.. tumahre sath kuch bhi ho sakta hai

joel:- jaanta hon meri jaan tum pareshan na ho, bas roshni wale se dua karna k mujhe rashtash mil jaaye ta keh main tumhe hamesha k liye paa sakun

zeno:- ye zaruri bhi hai joel.. warna ek sardarzadi ko tum kaise hasil kar sokoge

dono fir ek dusre me samane lage.. dono khub ek dusre ko kiss karne lage, dono ek dusre ko choomne lage...


kuch der ke baad joel aur zeno ek dusre se alag hue

zeno:- joel mere liye apna khayal rakhna

joel:- tum bhi mere liye apna khayal rakhna.. mujhe kuch din lag jaayenge lautne me to mere ghar walun ko kuch mat batana, bas itna keh dena k main samandar me kuch din rehna chahta hon.. zeno ne joel ko tasalli kara di..


joel fir wahan se nikal pada.. joel ki manzil dusri dunya ke samandar the.. tashtash use wahi se hasil karna tha.. joel se pehle bhi kaiyon ne aisi koshish ki thi lekin kisi ko tashtash nahi mil saka tha

tashtash ek sohenre rang ka chhota tha patthar tha.. jo india aur srilanka ke samdandar ke kahi paya jata tha...

aisa is kabile walun ki hazaron saal purani kitabo me likha hua tha.. par kabhi kisi ko mila nahi tha.. jisko wo patthar mil jaya karta tha.. wo is dunya ka sabse powerfull insan bhi ban jata tha... use foran hi kabile ka, pure island ka sardar bana dia jata

par pehle kabhi koi aisa kar nahi paya tha



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karan aaj zayada door nahi gaya tha...... island se 40 km door rehte hue wo samandar ki gehrayi me utra hua tha.. ek khanjar wo hamesha apne sath rakha karta tha.. kuch samandari jeev use pareshan karte the toh unhe khatam karne k liye..

ek bohut bada dhakama hua aur samandar ke paani me hulchal si mach uthi... karan foran hi paani se upar aaya aur paani ki satah par khade hokar charon aur dekhne laga..

door use aag aur dhuen ka ehsas hua to pehle to wo bada heran hua k kaisa ajeeb dhuan, aur kaisi ajeeb aag hai ye

par jab usne ghaur se dekha to use laga k ye to island hai jahan sab uske apne han.. karan for bijli ki si speed se wapis paani me gaya aur bijli ki speed se island ki or badhne laga..

jald hi wo island se kuch faasle par tha.. karan ek baar firse paani ki satah par khada tha.. uske saamne pura island aag me jal raha tha....... karan cheekhne chillane laga

wo samjha k uska pariwar uske sare apne khatam ho gaye han.... karan jabse paida hua tha kabhi roya nahi tha, par aaj uski ankhon se zehreela paani nikalne laga tha.. karan ko bohut dard hone laga tha..

wo charon aur ghoom fir kar island ko dekhne laga.. kahi aag kamm ho to wo island me ghuse aur kisi apne ko bachane ki koshish kare.. agar wo zinda hai to


lekin usay kahi se andar jaane ka rasta nazar nahi aaya........ karan ke andar ka dard aur bhi badhne laga.... wo sahil ke paas bhi nahi pohnch paa raha tha.. aag thi hi itni bhayankar .. door se hi aag ki lapten jism ko jalane lagti theee...

uske andar ka insan bhi badalne laga tha.. uske hisab se uske sare apne ab nahi rahe the.. aur wo samjh bhi sakta tha k aisa kisne kiya hoga.. uske sochne samjhne ki salahiyat aam isnano se kahi badhkar thi..

karan lautne laga to usne pehle jo ek baat nahi sochi thi wo uski smajh me aa gayi.. use koi bhi bada ship samandar me nahi dikha tha.. ye baat jaante hi karan ko kuch rahat bhi mil gayi aur wo samjh gaya k sab kahan gaye honge


karan samandar me utar wo bohut geyrayi me tha.. ye rasta uske liye naya tha.. jis raste se wo guzar raha tha us samandar reh se ke raste se wo pehle kabhi nahi guzra tha.. karan ko samandar ki kisi makhlooq se darr nahi lagta tha.. aksar to wo samanadar ke pahadon me bane hue ghaaron me bhi utar jaya karta tha.

aaj bhi usay ek gufa dikhi to wo uske andar ja ghusa.... jaise hi wo kuch aage badha to usay ke jaja se sonehre rang ki roshni si mehsus hui.. aisi roshniyan karan pehle bhi kai baar dekh chuka tha.. samandar pura hi to heere motiyon se bhara hua hai.. aksar hi wo kuch na kuch samandar se nikal kar le jata tha aur sabko gift de dia karta tha..

lekin aaj ki sonehri rishni ne usay kuch heran kar dia tha.. aisi roshni usne pehle kabhi nahi dekhi thi

wo bechain hua to jald se aage badh kar us sonehri roshni tak ja pohnchaa.. karan wahi khada hokar us chamak rahi cheekh ko dekhne laga.. wo mitti me daba hua ek sonehra patthar tha. mitti me daba hua tha fir bhi uski roshni bohut zayada thi.. karan jhuka aur us patthar ko utha liya...

nahi jaanta tha karan kuch bhi us patthar ke baare me............ karan ne tashtash patthar ko nange hathon hi chhuu liya tha.........

karan ko aisa jhatka laga k uski bhayankar cheekh nikal gayi.... tashtash patthar uski hatheli ke sath hi chipak sa gaya tha..

karan ki hatheli se tashtash ke chipakte hi kai rangon ki roshni aas paas phelne lagi.. samandar ki lehron me firse hulchal si machne lagi.. roshni itni badhi k samandar ki lehron ko cheerti hui upar jaane lagi.. fir wo paani se bahar bhi nikal gayi..

karan ko koi hosh nahi raha tha.. karan musalsal cheekhe ja raha tha.. usay itna hi hosh nahi raha tha k wo patthar ko apne hath se alag karde.. aur khud ko safe bana le


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hum sab ships par sawar hokar apni manzil ki aur badh rahe the.. karna beta aur zoya beti humme nahi the.. jaane wo dono kahan the'
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renu, maa aur bhi kuch abb rone lagi thee.. karan aur zoya bohut kuch hote hue bhi abhi bachhe the.. dono abhi bhi renu ka doodh pi rahe the. ek maa kaise apne bachhon ko khud ko door hote hue dekh sakti thi


"wo dekho zooooyyaaaaaaaaaa" ship me baithe huon me se koi cheekha to sab usi disha me dekhne lage, jidhar baki sab dekh rahe the.

kuch faasle par zoya ship ke barabar ter rahi thi

renu:- zooyaa aa jaao mere paas meri jaann

zoya:- mom main bhai ko lekar hi aaongi..... aap sab kahan jaa rahe han

raja:- zoya beti hum sab ...... island par ja rahe han

zoya;- uske baad aap sab kahan jaayenge???

zoya ko maine bata dia k yahan se fir hum kahan jaayenge.... zoya bachi hokar bhi bachhi nahi thi.. karan mera baap tha to ye nanhi si jaan meri maa thi

zoya fir paani ki lehron par daudti hui aayi aur ek jump me hi ship par aa kar sabke gaal par ek ek kiss kardi

sab usay aisa karte dekh kar bohut khush ho gaye the....

zoya:- main bhai ko lekar aaongi mom, dad.. fir sab ko dekhti hui boli.. aur jald hi hum firse ek sath honge

zoya ne firse ek jump lagaya aur paani me ja pohnchi.. ke baar mud kar sabko ta ta karke hath hilaya.. fir samandar ki gehraiyo me utarti chali gayi

raja:- dekha renu hamare bachhe hum se kahi badh kar han.

renu;- jaanti hon raja .. par ek maa kaise ye samjh sakti hai

maine renu ko apnu bahun me bhar liya




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joel bhi kai din ke safar ke baad usi jaga ja pohncha tha jahan karan tha.. wo tashtash ko dhundne ki koshish me tha.. aas paas ka bohut sa ilaka usne chhaan mara tha, par usay tashtash nahi mila tha..

joel ke patthar par baith kar aram karne laga.. aur sochne laga k wahan wo dhunde tashtash ko.....

kuch der guzri thi k samandar ki gehrayi me jaise bhunchal sa aa gaya.. joel jis patthar par baitha tha, wo patthar bhi larzne laga tha.. joel utha aur charon aur dekhne laga.. fir to wo dekh kar heran hi reh gaya tha.. itni tez roshni, itne rangon ki roshni

wo jaan gaya k ye sab tashtash ke karan hi ho raha hai.. apr wo ye soch kar bhi heran reh gaya tha k itni roshni to tab hi hua karti thi, jab koi usay nange hathun se chhuu liya karta tha

to kya wo patthar kisi aur ne hasil kar liya hai.. ye baat joel ke mann me aayi to bijli ki si speed se usi disha me aage badha jahan karan maujud tha

kareeb pohncha to usay ek bachhe ke cheekhne ki awazen bhi suaaayi dene lagi thi.. joel gufa me ghusa . samne dekha to ek bachhe ko cheekhte hue, bachhe ki hatheli se chipak rahe tashtash patthar ko dekh kar wo hairat me gumm ho gaya tha..

lekin fir jaldi se wo bahar aaya, ek seep utha kar wo wapis aaya aur seep ko khol kar hath lagaye bina us patthar ko karan ki hatheli se alag karke ke us seep me band kar dia

jaise hi tashtash karan ke hath se alag hua to karan neeche gir pada

joel:- ohhhh roshni wale tu hi bata mujhe ye bachha kaun hai, hamare kabile ka nahi nahi, lekin iske andar sari khasiyaten hamare jaisi han.. tashtash ne ise halak bhi nahi kiya.. jis patthar par hamara haq hai, usay isne chhuu bhi liya hai, aur mara bhi nahi. ae roshni wale mujhe koi rasta dikhao, mujhe bataao main kya karun

joel wahi baith kar pray karne laga.. apne bhagwan ko yaad karne laga....

fir kuch der baad usne ek samandri bail se seep ko apni kamar par kass ke baandh liya, aur karan ko utha kar apne sath apne kabile lejaane laga..



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"aaahhhh ye kya tha"

hum sab ship me baithe hue the aur zoya ko humse door hue 2 minutes hi guzre the k humen apne peeche 20-25 km door samandar me rishni si dikhi, sab usi disha me dekhne lage the.
roshni hone se pehle samandar ki lehron me bhi hulchal hui thi.. lekin zayada nahi

sab hairat se us roshni ko dekh rahe the.. samandar ke andar se roshn nikal kar kuch upar tak ja kar phelne lagi thi, lekin fir kuch hi der me wo sari roshni khatam bhi ho gayi thi


"tashtash"

anju baba badbadye the

"tashtash"?????????????

sabke mohn se nikla tha ye lafz

anju baba:- haan tashtash........... apne buzargon se suna tha aisa ek patthar hai jise chhuuu lene se aise rang bikharne lagte han.. aisi roshni hone lagti hai.. samandar ki lehren bhi tashtash ki power ko sehn nahi kar paati aur bhayankar hulchal machane lagti han.... zarur kisi ne tashtash ko chhuu liya hoga

renu;- mera karan, meri zoya

tab sab ka hi dhayan karan aur zoya par gaya

raja:- zoya toa bhi hamare paas se gayi hai, zarur karan hoga

anju baba:- bhagwan hamare karan ki raksha kare

kk-kyaaaaaaaaaaaa mm-matlab?????

sab ke sab anju baba ki baat sunkar dehl se gaye the

anju baba:- wo patthar kaisa hai, uski power to tum sab ne bhi jaan li hogi.. samandar ki lehron ka shor, fir wo kai rangon ki roshni.. agar to karan beta ne hi usi patthar ko chhua hai to kuch na kuch to zarur hua hoga uske sath

renu aur dusre sab rone lage the.. anju baba bhi gehri soch me pad gaye the.. jitna wo jaante the, utna wo bol chuke the..






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