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Me aur Sneha madam, unki gadi me nikale aur school pahuch gaye, School abhi chhutanahi thi. hum gadi me wait karne lage. Wo mera hath pakad kar bethi thi. Aas pas kuchh log bhi khade the jo apne bachchho ko school se lene ke liye aaye hue the. Humne thodi der intejar kia. Thodi der baad school ki ghanti baji aur sab bahar aane lage, me gadi se utara aur thoda aage chalkar khada ho gaya.

Kirti aur uski dost bhi school se nikal kar baate karti hui bahar nikal rahi thi. Unki nazar waha khade Shiv par padi.

Ek ladki : Kirti, dekh waha, kitna hansom ladka khada hai.

Kirti : (Use bhi Shiv handsom hi laga tha par fir bhi apna attitude kikhate hue) Itna bhi khas nahi hai.

Dusari ladki : Kya baat kar rahi hai yar, kitna mast hai, rang to dekh, lagta hai mujse bhi gora hai aur lamba bhi kitna hai.

Kirti : Khambhe jaisa lagta hai. Par wo yaha kyu khada hai, pehle to kabhi nahi dekha.

Pehli Ladki : Kisi ko lene aaya hoga. Thodi der rukte hai, pata chal jayega.

Kirti : Me kisi ke liye nahi rukti, tumhe rukna hai to ruko, me chali.

Wo dono bhi uske sath chali gayi. Me wahi khada Ranjan aur Vina ka intejar kar raha tha. Ladkia jate hue muje ghur rahi thi, kuchh ladkia thodi duri par khadi ho kar muje hi dekh rahi thi. Me Ranjan aur Vina ko dhundh raha tha. Ranjan aur Vina bhi school se nikali. Wo dono apas me baat karte hue chal rahi thi. Do ladkia unse thodi duri par chal rahi thi.

Ek ladki : E, wo ladka to dekh, kitna mast hai.

Dusari : Ha yar mast hai, kon hai?

Pehli : Pata nahi, kabhi dekha nahi pehle.

Ranjan ne bhi wo baat suni aur wo ladkia jis aur dekh rahi thi us aur dekha to use Shiv, khada hua dikha. Uske chehare par muskurahat aa gayi. Usne Vina ka hath pakada aur use khinchti hui Shiv ke pass pahoch gayi.

Shiv : (Unhe dekh kar muskuraya)Kaisa raha school?

Ranjan : Achchha tha.

Shiv : Chalo to fir chalte hai.

Ranjan : Kaha jana hai.

Shiv : Tum chalo to, me batata hu.(Ranjan aur Vina uske sath chalne lagi.)

Ek ladki : Hi, Ranjan, kaisi hai.(Wo baat to Ranjan se kar rahi thi par najar Shiv ki aur thi)

Ranjan : Thik hu.

Wohi ladki : Achchha kal milte hai.(Mene uski aur dekha to wo muskurayi, to me bhi muskuraya)

Ranjan : Ha, milte he.(Ranjan ko ascharya ho raha tha, ki aaj tak to kabhi baat ki nahi aur aaj halchal puchh rahi hai, wo samaj rahi thi kyu, usne muskurakar Shiv ki aur dekha)

Me unhe lekar gadi tak pahucha to muje kisi ke sath aise gadi me dekh kar Ranjan chauki par boli kuchh nahi.Mene un dono ko gadi me bethne ko kaha to

Ranjan : Kiski gadi hai, aur wo kon hai?

Shiv : Sab batata hu, pehle betho to (Pichhe ka darwaja khol kar mene unhe bithaya aur meaage beth gaya. (Gadi me Ac chal raha tha to ander thandak thi. Ranjan aur Vina pehli bar aisi gadi me bethi thi, unko sankoch bhi ho raha tha) Mene un tino ka parichay karwaya.

Shiv: Ye Sneha madam hai, me jis gym me kaam karta hu uski malkin hai, aur ye Ranjan hai aur ye Vina.

Sneha madam : Hello, (Shiv ki aur dekh kar)Bahot pyari ladkia hai.

Dono : Hello madam.(Apni tarif sun kar dono khus hogayi thi)

Fir hum sab uniform lene chale gaye. Mene Sneha madam ko rasta dikhaya, aur ek jagah gadi rukwayi. Sneha madam ne gadi lock ki aur hum charo us dukan ke ander chale gaye. Ye uniform ki special dukan thi, yaha kayi school ke uniform milte the. Kuchh ladkia aur ladke uniform lene aaye hue the. Sneha madam bahot umada kapadome thi to unhe dekh kar waha khada aadmi hume ander le gaya. Humne hamare school ke naam bataye to us hisab se unhone uniform nikale. Undono ke naap ke uniform to mil gaye par mere naap ka uniform nahi mila. Muje silvane ke liye de diya.

Aadmi : Kitni jodi banane hai.

Shiv : Ek jodi.

Sneha madam : Kyu ek jodi, do jodi banwao, pura hafta pehan na hota hai.

Aadmi : Sahi kaha madam ne, do jodi to chahiye hi.(Wo madam ki chaplusi karne ke andaj me bol raha tha)

Shiv : (Me paise bachana chahta tha, mene gina tha, hum tino ke ek ek jodi ke hi 2700 rupey hote the. Aur do jodi ke gine jaye to 5400 hote the, paise to the mere pass kyu ki 5000 Sneha madam ne diye the aur 3000 Bina madam ne diye the, par abhi school ke shose bhi lene the. To paise kaam pad jate) Nahi, ek ek jodi hi dijiye, hum manage kar lenge.

Sneha madam : Nahi Do jodi hi pack kijiye. (ab me kya kehta, Ranjan aur Vina ki wajah se mene jyada bahes nahi ki. Undono ke do do jodi kapade pack kar ke ek plastic bag me de diye, me paise nikalne laga to Sneha madam ne muje roka)Me deti hu.

Shiv : Par madam, me ...

Sneha madam : Mene kaha na, me deti hu.

Unhone hi paise diye. Uske baad humne ek ek jodi shoes bhi leye. Wo hume tino ko anathashram tak chhodne bhi aayi. Vina aur Ranjan thi to wo sirf hum sab ko bye bol kar chali gayi.

Ranjan : Vina tu ja muje Shiv se baat karni hai (Vina aage chali gayi, Muje ghur ke dekhte hue)Kon thi ye?

Shiv : Kon thi matlab, mene tumhara parichay karwaya to tha, wo gym ke malik ki bibi hai matlab malkin hai.

Ranjan : Wo to muje pata hai par wo tum par itni meharban kyu hai?

Shiv : Meharban hai se kya matlab hai tumhara?

Ranjan : Wo tumhe gadi me ghuma rahi hai, paise bhi unhone hi diye, hume chhodne bhi aayi. Mene to aisa kabhi nahi dekha ki koi apne yaha naukari karnewale par itna maherban hota ho.

Shiv : (Waise to uski baat sahi thi, par me kya usko samjata, par samjana to tha hi)Tum to janti ho, kitne hi log hum anatho par daya dikhate hue kuchh na kuchh dete hai, kuchh apne purane kapade de jate hai, kuchh khana lekar aate hai. Tumne dekha to hai ye sab.

Ranjan : Ha dekha hai, par yaha to muje daya jaisa kuchh nahi laga.

Shiv : (Uske shir par thapki marte hue)Tum na apne chhote se dimag ko itna jyada kast mat do. Wo muje janti hai is liye tumhe aisa nahi laga. Aur abb jyada sawal mat karo muje wapas kahi aur bhi jana hai.

Ranjan : Ab kaha jana hai?

Shiv : Hamare gym ki trainer haina juhi madam unke sath jana hai, unke coach ko milne. Aur kuchh?.

Ranjan : (Wo santust to mahi thi par fir bhi apni shakal banate hue)Nahi kuchh nahi.

Hum dono ander gaye, ander hume Latadidi mili.

Latadidi : Tu aa gaya, (Wo gabhrayi hui thi)

Shiv : Kya hua didi, aap gabhrayi hui kyu ho.

Latadidi : Wo Guddu hai na, uski tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai, manager use ambulance me dusare saher le gaya hai.

Shiv : Aise kaise kharab ho gayi, wo to achchha bhala tha. Aur use dusare saher kyu le gaye?

Latadidi : Wo muje pata nahi, par wo keh rahe the ki tabiyat kafi kharab hai, aspatal me bharti karana padega.

Shiv : Par muje ye samaj me nahi aa raha, aise kaise achanak tabiyat kharab ho gayi, wo to bilkul thik tha.

Latadidi : Wo pata nahi, chal tu fresh ho ja, me khana nikalti hu. Mene khana kaya fir thodi der baad me waha se nikal gaya. Me chalte hue Juhi madam ke ghar ki aur ja raha tha, bahar sachmuch bahot jyada dhup thi. Barsat ke pehle waise bhi bahot garmi hoti hai. Me chalte chalte Juhi madam ke ghar pahuch gaya aur bell bajayi. Thodi der baad unhone darwaja khola to me dekhta hi reh gaya.

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Wo ek salwar suit pehne hue thi. Unko aise kapado me, me pehlibar dekh raha tha. Me to unhe dekhta hi reh gaya. Wo khubsurat chehre ki malkin to thi hi, par aaj kuchh saji sawari bhi lag rahi thi, hotho pe lipstic ki hui thi, ankhome kajal laga hua tha. Unhone chudiya bhi pehn rakkhi thi, Ek to wo itni lambi aur upar se aise ada se khadi muskura rahi thi ki wo kisi model ki tarha lag rahi thi. Me unhe upar se niche tak dekh raha tha, me jaise bhul hi gaya tha ki me kaha hu. Muje aise murti bane khada dekh wo mand mand muskurane lagi. Wo ander hi ander bahot khush ho rahi thi. Aur ho bhi kyu na, jis ke liye saji sawari thi, wo hi use dekh aise chaka chaundh ho gaya ho to khushi to honi hi thi. Wo aise hi thodi der khadi rahi par Shiv to jaise kahi aur hi tha.

Juhi madam : Ab dekhliya ho to ander bhi aa jao.(Unki awaj sunte hi me Hadbada gaya aur sharma bhi gaya, apni najare jhukaye me ander dakhil ho gaya aur ja kar sofe par beth gaya, wo bhi thodi duri par usi sofe par beth jgayi, mene notice kia ki unke sharir se bhi ittar ki khusbu aa rahi thi)Khana kha liya?(Unki khanakti awaj me bhi muje ghantiya sunayi de rahi thi, muje sab slow motion me dikh raha tha)(Jab Shiv ne jawab nahi diya to Juhi ne thodi unchi awaj me puchha)Khana kha liya?

Shiv :Jiiiiii...(sambhalte hue)Ji ...ji ha kha liya.

Juhi madam : Aise kyu behave kar rahe ho?

Shiv : Sorry, Wo ..wo darasal aap ko aise dekh kar lag raha hai me kisi aur ko hi dekh raha hu.

Juhi madam : (Muskurate hue)Ham hamesha aise time par milte hai to waise hi dekhoge na. Kyu aise kapdo me achchhi nahi lag rahi.

Shiv : Achchh??? aaap tooo bahot mast diiiikh rahi hai, kisi hiroin ki tarha, .....oh sorry mera matlab hai .... me kehna chahta hu....aap bahot achchhi lag rahi hai.(Mene apni sanse chhodi)

Juhi madam : (Muskurate hue)Thaaank yoooo. Ab bolo kya pioge. Bahar garmi bahot hai thanda juce chalega.

Shiv : Nahi uski koi jarurat nahi. Hume chalna bhi to hai.

Juhi madam : Abhi der hai char baje chalna hai.

Shiv : Char baje? To apne muje abhi itni jaldi kyu bula liya.

Juhi madam : (Meri aur mayusi se dekhte hue)Kyu tumhe achchha nahi laga, ?(Apni nazare jhukaye)Muje laga tumhare sath thoda time bitaungi. Sorry agar tumhe bura laga ho to.

Shiv : Are nahi madam aisi baat nahi hai me to bas aise hi puchh raha tha. Thik hai, Juice pite hai.

Juhi madam : (Khus hote hue uchchalkar khadi hoti hai)Abhi layi. (Wo kitchen me chali gayi.)

Thodi der me wo do glass juice le aayi aur ek muje diya aur dusara wo khud lekar mere pass hi beth gayi. Aur bate karne lagi.

Juhi madam : Ek bat puchhu bura to nahi manoge?

Shiv : Nahi madam, aap jo puchhna hai puchhiye.

Juhi madam : Tum yaha anathalay me kyu ho? Kya tum apne ma bap ke bareme jante ho?

Shiv : (Unki aur dekhte hue, thodi mayusi ke sath)Nahi madam, muje itna hi pata hai jab me chhota tha to kisi bhikhari ke pass tha, waha se ek sajjan muje yaha le aaye the. Us bhikhari se bhi police ne puchhtachh ki thi par kuchh pata nahi chala ki me uske pass kaise aaya. Par aap kyu jan na chahti hai?

Juhi madam : Aisi koi khas baat to nahi bas aise hi puchhliya, tumhe bura laga ho to sorry kehti hu. Par tumhe dekh kar lagta hai ki tum kisi achchhe ghar se rahe honge.

Shiv : Kyu, aisa kyu lagta hai aapko?

Juhi Madam : Tumhari kad aur tumhara rang ye batate hai kyu ki samanya gharo me rehnewale jyadatar dikhne me bhi samanya hi hote hai. Tumhara chehra bhi itna achchha hai aur tumhara rang bhi gora hai ya yu keh sakte hai kuch jyada hi gora hai,matlab tumhare ma-bap bhi aise hi rahe honge. Aisa rang roop jyadatar aish-o-aram se rehnewale logo ka hi hota hai.

Shiv : Jaise ki aap?

Juhi madam: (haste hue)Aisa kyu keh rahe ho?

Shiv : Aap bhi to kitni khubsurat hai aur gori bhi hai.

Juhi madam : (Muskurate hue)Thank you for compliment par baat tumhari ho rahi hai.

Shiv : Meri life me aisa kuchh khas nahi hai, anathalay me palabada, ha mere nasib se ek didi mil gayi jinhone mera bahut khayal rakha to muje koi gila sikwa nahi hai apni life se. Muje kabhi laga hi nahi ki me akela hu ya anath hu.

Juhi madam : Tumhara yahi swabhav tumhe khas banata hai Shiv. Jyadatar log apni kismat ko koste rehte hai jab ki tum aisi paristhitime ho fir bhi achchha hi sochte ho. Bahot achchhi bat hai.

Shiv : Meri chhodo aap apni batao, aap kyu akeli rehti hai?

Juhi madam : Mammy-papa hai aur ek bada bhai aur bhabhi bhi hai jo gav me rehte hai. Muje bachpan se hi kuchh ban na tha, ganv ki mitti ne majboot sharir diya tha to padhayi ke sath sath khelkud me bhi hissa liya. State player bani. sports club me naukari mili. National ke liye try kia tha par kar nahi payi.

Shiv : Kyu nahi kar payi?

Juhi madam : Hai kuchh karan, fir kabhi bataungi.

Shiv : Aapne shadi nahi ki(Aare me ye kya bol gaya) Sorry madam bas muh se nikal gaya.

Juhi madam : Isme sorry ki kya baat hai, Ghar wale to bahot kehte hai par muje abhi apne aap ko sabit karna hai, (Haste hue)Aur tumhare jaisa koi mila bhi to nahi jise me khubsurat lagu.

Shiv : (Jhepte hue)Kya madam aap bhi. Me keh raha hu to aise hi nahi keh raha, aap sachme khubsurat hai, aap ‘ha’ to karo dekho apse shadi karne ke liye line lagjayegi.

Juhi madam :(Jor se hustehue) Achchha line lag jaye gi ha..ha.ha..ha..ha. Par muje bhi to pasand ana chahiye. Kya me aise hi kisise bhi shadi kar lu.

Shiv : Aap has kyu rahi hai me sach bol raha hu aur ye bat bhi sahi he ki apko bhi pasand ana chahiye, aap ko kaisa ladka pasand hai?

Juhi madam :(Sochte hue)Ye to sochnewali baat hai, aaj tak maine kabhi socha hi nahi ki muje kaisa ladka pasand aa shakta hai. Waise tumhe kya lagta hai muje kaise ladke se shadi karni chahiye.

Shiv : (Jhepte hue)Muje kya pata hoga madam, me to abhi chhota hu aur is bareme jyada janta bhi nahi.

Juhi madam : Tum chhote aur me bahot badi ho gayi hu, yahi kehna chahte ho na.

Shiv : Nahi madam, mera wo matlab nahi hai, Me to ye keh raha hu ki me iss bare me jyada nahi janta, par itna to keh shakta hue ki jo aap ko pasand ho, aap ka khayal rakhe aur aap se pyar bhi kare, waise ladke se aap ko shadi karni chahiye.

Juhi madam : Ha sahi kaha tumne par abhi me shadi nahi karna chahti kyu ki agar ek bar shadi ho gayi to fir bachche aur jimmedariya usime fas kar reh jaungi fir me apne carrier ke bare me nahi soch paungi. Chhodo ye sab baate wo to hoga tab hoga abhi ki baat karte hai. Tum jante ho me tumhe mere coach se kyu milana chahti hu?

Shiv : Ye to aap hi bata shakti hai. Muje kaise pata hoga?

Juhi madam : Wo bahot parkhi hai, unhone bahot se kheladio ko taiyar kiya hai. Me tumhare bare me unse salah mashwara karna chahti hu. Aur aage tumhe kaise badhaya jaye ye bhi puchhana chahti hu.Khiladi bahot pehle se taiyariyo me jut jate hai ya yu kahu to bachpan se hi. Tumhari age me to kayi compitions bhi jit chuke hote hai. Under 14, under 16, aur kayi chhote mote compition me bhag le chuke hote hai. Tum ne to abhi tak ek bhi compition me bhag nahi liya hai, Tumhari paristhitiyo ko dekhte hue tumhe kaise aproch kiya jaye, kaise tumhe aage badhaya jaye, yahi janna hai.

Shiv : (Me dekh raha tha ki Juhi madam ko mere bare me kitni parwah hai, mere dil me unke prati maan aur bhi badhgaya)To kab chalna hai madam.

Juhi madam : (Apni ghadi dekhte hue)Aadhe ghante baad nikalte hai.

Muje bhi ab tention hone lagi thi. Coach sir kya kahenge. Kya me race kar pane ke kabil lagunga? Maan me kayi sare sawal the.
 

ketan Chauhan

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Story bohot hi mast hai.
Full of emotions.
Ek ek details hai isme
But surprisingly itni reach nahi mil rahi jitni ye story deserve karti hai.
Acha karta hu ki iss behtarin story ki reach exponentially badhe.
Sharndar kaam hai writing ka gajab writing skills.
Bus ek request hai, kahani ko thoda pace dijiye.
Hero ka jitna jyada struggle ap dikhayegi utne kam log intrested dikhege.
Hero to thoda strong bnaye.
Otherwise all the best
 
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Story bohot hi mast hai.
Full of emotions.
Ek ek details hai isme
But surprisingly itni reach nahi mil rahi jitni ye story deserve karti hai.
Acha karta hu ki iss behtarin story ki reach exponentially badhe.
Sharndar kaam hai writing ka gajab writing skills.
Bus ek request hai, kahani ko thoda pace dijiye.
Hero ka jitna jyada struggle ap dikhayegi utne kam log intrested dikhege.
Hero to thoda strong bnaye.
Otherwise all the best
Aapke sandar sujav ke liye sukriya.
Hero apne anubhav se strong banega. Aur anubhav struggle se hi milta hai.
Kahani lambi hai to aahista se hi aage badhegi,
Jyada comment nahin hai, par roj 4000 se 5000 visit hoti hai. Matlab log padhte hai.
Jinko sirf gali-galoch wali story achchhi lagati hai, wo waisi padhe.
Achche ghar ki aurte kisi karanwas kisi se sex kar leti hai par agar unko randi bulaya jaye aur wo khush ho, I don't think so.

So, mujhe jyada nahi, achche readers chahiye.
To, padhate rahiye...
 
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