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I am starting writing this story again
Hope u support it
Thanks
Hope u support it
Thanks
Thanks brotherAb yay Banda mil K monu sab Sy badla lyny K liyay khatrnaak bnay Ga aur usy sab Sy pahly apni maa ka Randi Pana b dikhay ga
Thanks brother for your suggestion main story ko interesting banane ki kosish karungaBro ager ap apni story ko aur interesting kr Dein to yay Jo monu Ki atma hay aur Jo sath wali atma hay dono Ko hi us Ki body main shift KR do aur is Sy us K pas bhohat C power AA Jain aur wo baba Jo sab krwa raha hay aur dadi aur apni ko Sahi Sy sabk sikhay jis Sy wo baba b kuch na kr pay aur ek bt yay Jo us Ki bhen chacha aur baqi sab Sy maa Ki trah chudna chahti hay ab Sy koi b Kisi Sy chud na sky Ku K AJ Kal Jo b story hit Hoti hay wo ziyada tar isi liyay Hoti Hain K sab hero K agy hi juky aur us K ilawa Kisi aur K pas na ja sky Ku K ziyada ter readers hero Ki jagah khud ko imagine krty Hain baqi Meri advise Thik lagi hoo to kuch Soch skty Hain aur try kry update thori long post krny chahy us K liyay do din readers ko wait krna pry to wo kry gy ager story ziyada interesting ho jay to baqi Bhai ager koi bt achi nhi lagi to mujhy maff krna main b EK writer hoon is liyay ap Ki story parh K Jo mery mind main aya bta Diya baqi ap Ki marzi Bhai
Matlb hero koi aur hay aur family monu Ki hayThanks brother for your suggestion main story ko interesting banane ki kosish karunga
spoiler alert: actually main story Mritjoy ki hai monu sirf supporting character hai. Mrityini aur Mritjoy main bhi connection hai jo aapko age pata chalega