Adultery KALYUG ( Antt Hi Aarambh Hai ) { Incest , Fantasy , Romance , Thriller }

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Toh yashoda abhi kuchh samay ke liye surakshit hai lekin nazim dalle ke haav bhaav se lag raha hai ki ye kuchh karne wala hai ho sakta hai ki ye Tony ko fasa de aur baad me koi game khele , dekhte hain ki kya hota hai.
Update toh abhi tak imotional hi chal rahe hain.
Behtreen update tha , agle update ka intezar rahega.

Thanks Bhai

 

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10 Likes Reh gaye hai kar do yr Doston... Update On Time hai...

Shaam ko 9 bje...

 

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Thanks Bhai.. ...

Baat kare pichli kahani ki toh usko likhte waqt xossip par bhut saari story padh rakhi thi maine jisse inspired hokar maine bhi story likhne ka thaan liya...


Woh kehte hai na uss time ek meta chal raha tha story likhne ka jisme sabka concept lagbhag same hi tha jo aaj bhi bhut chal raha hai...

Hero ek aur heroine 4,5 nahi toh patni 5,6... Heroine kise banaye yeh bhi nahi sochna padta hero ki behen hai toh... Ab hero khubsurat hai toh uski behn bhi uske jaise hi hogi... Agar usse Kam khubsurat hui toh heroine ko judwa bana do ab toh reader's ko move justify ho jayega...

Well hhhhhh... Isliye woh story complete nahi ki maine thoda break liya toh har dusri story wohi chal rahi thi fir ek kehte hai na intrest bhi nahi aa raha use likhne ka...

Yeh jo story hai mai full koshish kar raha hoon ki aap sab ko ek naya concept dun iss sab se door isliye aapko writing improvement dikh rahi hogi... Qki jab mujhe hi pasand nahi aayegi toh mai jabarjasti readers ke expectations khud ko push nahi kar sakta tha...

And again thanks aapka...
Journey mai bane rheyega aage kahani bhut romanchak aur action pack hogi...


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That's the kind of same reason I left my story incomplete.

Forum par har dusri story ka yahi concept hai ek hero aur kai heroine. Ab isme koi burai nahi hai, yahi chiz readers ko pasand aati hai, Harem genre ki stories.
But problem hai ki kahani ka writing style bhi sabka same hi hota hai events tak match hote hai.

Bahut hi kam stories hai jo Harem genre ki hote hue bhi alag lagti hai.
Jaise ek werewolf bhai ki Badshah story.

Mene bhi story likhi, bahut try kiya ki complete karu, but khud hi bore hokar chhod di.

Aage agar kabhi koi acha sa plot mind me bana to phir likhunga.

Till then all the best for your story.

 

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That's the kind of same reason I left my story incomplete.

Forum par har dusri story ka yahi concept hai ek hero aur kai heroine. Ab isme koi burai nahi hai, yahi chiz readers ko pasand aati hai, Harem genre ki stories.
But problem hai ki kahani ka writing style bhi sabka same hi hota hai events tak match hote hai.

Bahut hi kam stories hai jo Harem genre ki hote hue bhi alag lagti hai.
Jaise ek werewolf bhai ki Badshah story.

Mene bhi story likhi, bahut try kiya ki complete karu, but khud hi bore hokar chhod di.

Aage agar kabhi koi acha sa plot mind me bana to phir likhunga.

Till then all the best for your story.

Thanks Bhai ...

Also waiting for your new story....
You write we will support you...

 

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( KALYUG... Part 7 )



( KARMA... Jaisi Karni Waisi Bharni... )





Night... Time... 9 : 32 PM...





Aadmi... Haan janeman aa gaya bass... Haan band kar di phunch hi raha hoon... Aaj dekh chinaal kaise teri leta hoon... Haan haan le li hai goli tu bhi kapde utar kar nangi hoja aaj bhut man raha teri peeche se lunga... Pyar se lunga na janeman kuch nahi hoga tujhe... Haan theek hai bas aa raha hun... Haan mera toh abhi se khada ho gaya tu phone rakh mai aata hun.. haan chal bye...



Aadmi phone par baat kar raha tha... Tabhi woh dukan se bhar aata aur shutter girane lagta hai ki uske Peeth par ek laat padti hai jisse woh aage gir jata hai uska muh shutter ko lagta hai... woh dard se karahte hue mudkar dekhta hai tabhi do aadmi kahe dikhayi dete hai...



....haath kaise lgaya madarchod........




Continue....




Aadmi... Aaahhhh hhhh konnn ho tum... Mujhe kyun maar rahe ho...




Saaya 1... Suna hai Aurton par bhut hath chalte hai tere... Bas wohi dekhne aaya tha...




Thuuddd...




....chala ab hath mai bhi toh dekhon kaise tere hath chalte hai...



Thudddd...




...chala kya hua gareebon se nafrat hai tujhe woh aache nahi lagte...




Thuddd...




...agar koi paise waali mahila hoti toh uske saath bhi yehi karta...




Thudddd...




....bol madarchod.... Haath kaise lagaya tune use....




Aadmi.... Aahhh choddd doo mujhe... Mujhse galti ho gayi mai haath jodta hun... Dard ho raha hai mujhe Jane do tumhe jo chahiye le lo... Mere biwi baache hai bhagwan ke liye rehm karo...




Thudddd....




...madarchod uss waqt tujhe apne biwi bacche ki yaad nahi aayi jab use Marta hua chod gaya tha...




Thudddd....




...bhosdike yeh bhi yaad nahi raha ki uske saath koi tha...



Thudddd...




...aaj tujhe aisa sabak milega ki sapne Mai bhi kabhi kisi ke sath aisa nahi....




Uska hath pakad marod deta hai...




Aaadmi... Aaahhhh maaf kar do... Bhaiya galti ho gayi mujhe chod... Aaahhhh maa bhut darddd ho raha hai...




Thudddd...



...aise kaise abhi tera ek hath baaki hai ise bhi thikane laga dun fir tujhe chod dunga...




Woh aage kuch karta usse pehle police ki siren ki awaaz sunayi deti jisse sun dono chup ho jate hai... Aadmi bhi apne bachaav ke liye awaaz lagaane lgata hai woh muh kholta uske phele saya 1 uska muhh band kar deta hai....




Saya 2... bhosdike chal yaha se mamu aa gye hathhe lag gaye inke dono ki gand laal kar denge pehchan bhi nahi payenge bander ki kon hai teri kon si... Chal iss chakke ko baad mai dekh lenge abhi yaha se nikalte hai...




Saya 1 ko bhi uski baat theek lagti magar jaate jaate woh ek baar fir...




Thudddd....



...tujhe pta hai woh ab se meri zimmedari hai... Toh kan khol kar sun le woh jab bhi mile pairon me gir kar maafi maang lena aur aaj ke baad agar kabhi aise kuch sunne mai aaya toh aaj chod raha aage tere game bajane mai mujhe koi pareshani nahi hogi... ( Gaal thapthapate hue ) samjh gaya na meri baat ab Tera muh chod raha hun agar chillaya toh wapas Tera gala daba dunga...



Aaadmi jor jor se saans lene lagta hai kaafi der se uski saans ruki hui thi... Saaya 1 usko usi haal mai chod Jane lagta hai fir pta nahi kya hua wapas laut kar aata hai...




Thudddd...



...harami sala... Sochna bhi mat...




Night Time... 11:15 PM...



Location... Basti...




Vimala... Bahuuu ghar ka dhyan rakhna mai jara basti mai dekh kar aati hoon... Dono karamjale kaha gye... Roz ka ho gaya hai kuch dino se Tony kam se kam ghar pe tha lekin aaj fir gayab hai... Pta nahi kab sudhrega yeh uske saath reh Nazim usse bhi aage nikal gaya hai roz basti se koi na koi shikayat aati rehti hai... Itna mara hai fir bhi nahi sudhrega... Kutte ke saath saath dum bhi tedi ho gayi hai...



Kanta... maaji aapko jaane ki koi jarurat nahi hai aapko waise bhi subh jaldi nikalna hota hai... Kahi nahi gaye honge dono awara jab bhookh lagegi toh ghar aa jayenge... Aur Inka toh aaj kal roz ka ho gya hai roz pee kar aate hai... Aap inki fikr mat karo jab unka man hoga aa jayenge...



Itna keh Kanta chup ho jati hai... Waise aacha hi tha Nazim ghar mai nahi hai... Usko ab Nazim se koi pyaar nahi tha aaye din basti mai kisi na kisi se chedkhaani karta rehta tha... Aur use pta bhi tha ki Nazim ke bahar bhi kisi se jismani sambadh hai... Dono me is baat ko lekar kaafi behes bhi hui thi aur fir Nazim ne haath utha kar use shaant kar diya tab se dono ke beech sharirik shambandh nahi hai... Fir bhi jab Nazim pee kar aata hai toh roz kanta par haath utha deta hai... Kanta ko bhi ab uske hona na hone se koi fark nahi padta woh bas apni baachi ke sahare jee rahi thi...



Gareeb ghar ki ladki ko bachpan se shikhaya jata hai sasural hi uska ghar hai... Shaadi ke baad woh doli mai jaati hai aur aarthi par hi ghar chod sakti hai... Nazim na sahi pyaar karne waali saas aur ek baachi ke sahare woh apna jeevan gujar degi aisa usne soch liya tha... Haan ek bete ki chahat usko thi jo uska Sahara ban jata magar woh poora nahi ho sakta tha... Isliye jab Yashoda ke bacche ko doodh pilaya toh uski bete ki chahat jaag chuki thi... Woh usko khoob Sara pyaar degi aisa soch liya tha usne apna Sahara banayegi...



Vimala bhi soch mai gum thi use laga Tony kam se kam sudhar raha hai Yashoda ke jariye... Aur Tony ke saath Nazim bhi sudhar jayega magar aaj fir dono ghar se bahar the...




Wanhi Yashoda chup chap dono ki baatain sun rahi thi aur apne bacche ke sath khel rahi thi... Ab tak woh itna toh samjh gayi thi ki dono bigad gaye hai aache kaam nahi krte... Isliye dono unse pareshan hai... tabhi baccha kilkaari maarta hai jor se jisse teeno ka dhyan uspe jaata hai... Teeno ek saath jab use dekhti hai toh chinta ki jagah chehre par muskaan aa jati hai... Qki baacha bhi hass raha hota hai aur ajeeb sa muhh bana kuch kehne ki koshish karta hai...



Yashoda... Ale le mera Raja beta...




( Aur bacche ko khilane lagti hai teeno... )




Vimala... ( Baache ke maathe par ek kiss kar deti hai jisse ek baar baacha kilkari maar har deta hai aur teeno ka dil dekh kar bhut khush ho raha tha ) beti... Waise munne ka naam kya hai...



Yashoda... Ji woh... haan... Natkhat Nandkishor... ( Aur ek tak bacche ko dekhne lagti hai jaise puchna chahti use naam pasand aaya ya nahi )




Kanta... Yeh kaisa naam hai... Aisa naam thodi hota hai...


Yashoda... kyun Didi aacha nahi hai kya.. iski maa ne ise yehi kaha tha dekho yeh bhi hass raha hai naam sunkar... hai na Natkhat Nandkishor...




Kanta... Are Tera upari maala Khali hai kya... woh use naam se bula nahi rahi thi... Balki dulaar rahi thi...




Yashoda... Nahi didi iska naam Natakhat Nandkishor hi rahega... Kitne pyaar se iski maa ne naam rakha tha... Aur fir Munna bhi dekho kaise khush raha hai... Nahi nahi mai iska naam nahi badlungi...




Kanta... Tu sahi mai buddu hai pta nahi kaise padhayi kar nurse ban gayi...




Vimala... Are chup Karo tum dono... Kyun jhagad rahe ho...




Kanta... Dekho na maaji yeh sun nahi Rahi hai bacche ka aisa naam hota hai kya...




Yashoda... Lekin didi...



Vimala... Aacha aacha ruko tumhe iske naam se problem hai tumhe bhi naam nahi badalna... Toh aisa karte hai iska naam Nandkishor rakhte hai Natkhat toh iska swabhaav hai theek hai isse koi dikkat nahi hone chahiye tumhe... aur tum pyaar se Nandu bula lena tumko bhi aacha lagega...



Yashoda... Ji theek hai jaisa aap kahe...



Kanta... Haan Maaji yeh theek hai Nandu... Warna pta nahi sablog isko naam ko lekar chidate... isko toh akal hi nahi hai... ( Bacche ko Yashoda ke haath se lekar ) hai na Nandu... Ale le.. baccha bhookh lagi hai aaja mai duddu pilati hun...



( Aur Kanta bacche ko lekar dusre room mai chali jaati hai jise jaate Yashoda aur Vimala dekh muskurate hai... Tabhi Yashoda kehti hai )




Yashoda... Maaji aap mere liye kitna kar rahi hai mai kaise iss janam mai aapka ehsaan chukaungi... Mera koi nahi hai bass pitaji woh bhi pta nahi kab aayenge itne din Mai aap par bhojh nahi Banna chahti mai kal hi yaha se chali jaungi....




Tony... Aur kaha jaogi btao jara kise jaanti ho iss seher mai... Tere chacha chachi unke pass jinhone itna kuch kaha tumhare baare mai jise sunne se aacha mar jana chahiye... Yaa apne seher waapas jana chahti ho jaha tumhare papa toh rahenge magar tumhara kuch pta nahi... Khud ke nahi kam se kam bacche ke baare mai socho... Tumhe kuch ho gaya toh tumhare baad uska kya hoga socha hai... Tum kaise palogi use... kaise maa banogi uski kya khilaogi use bheekh maang kar jaise uss din maang Rahi thi... Sharam nahi aati tumhe aise maa banogi...




( Tony ghar aata hai toh dono ki baat cheet sunta hai pehle muskaan rehti hai chehre par wanhi baad mai Yashoda ke jaane ki baat sun gusse mai use sunane lagta hai... Vimala , Nazim hairan Tony ko dekh rahe the Aaj Tak khud usne kisi ki parvaah nahi ki thi aur Yashoda ki liye pta nahi kyun kar raha hai... Vimala khush thi wanhi Nazim hairan tha... Yashoda bhi sir jhuka kar sab sunti rehti hai aakhir ki baat sun uske aansun behne lagte hai magar woh sir utha Tony ko dekhne ki himmat nahi juta pati Kanta bhi shor sun bahar aa jati hai... )




Tony... Yeh teri maa nahi hai ( Vimala ko point karte hue ) toh kiss hak se ise maaji bolti ho... ( Kanta ko dikhate hue ) yeh teri bahan nahi hai toh kyun Didi Didi karti firti ho... Hum koi nahi hai tere hann tere bas pitaji hai aao chalo tumhe unke paas chodd kar aata hoon... Kanta do isko iska baccha koi jarurat nahi hai doodh pilane ki tum Mamta lutao baad Yeh kahegi tum iske bacche par ehsaan kar rahi ho... Aur aai tumhe bhi zaroorat nhi h iska khayal rakhne ki yeh bhojh samjhe khudko... Isko iske seher chod kar aata hoon wanha iske pitaji iska khayal rakhenge hum toh koi hai nahi iske... Iske saath hi meri zimmedari bhi khatam ho jayegi iske saath hi...




Tony ki baatein sunne ke baad har kisi ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya tha... Vimala , Kanta statue ban gye the wanhi Yashoda ki zor se rulayi phut padti hai woh apne seher nahi jaa sakti thi yaha bhi kisi ko nahi jaanti thi... Aise mai baache ka kaise khayal rakhegi kaise ek aachi maa ban payegi... Kaise uski parvarish karegi... Use iss baat par bhi Rona aa raha tha ki sabne use galat samjh liya woh aisa nahi kehna chahti thi magar ab use apne kahe par afsos ho raha tha...




Tony... Kya hua ab ro kar kise dikha rahi ho... Ehsaan kar rahe na tujhpar uth abhi chal tujhe ghar chod kar aata hoon...



Vimala... Bas kar Tony chodd use woh kahi nahi jayegi.... Maine keh diya na... Yeh Mera ghar hai jab tak uska man hoga woh yaha rahegi...




Tony... Nahi aai jaane do ise yeh humare pyaar ko ehsaan keh rahi hai...



Vimala... Are ho gayi galti usse chod woh kahi nahi jayegi...





Yashoda... ( Subukte hue ) Nahii... Maaji.. maii.. yaha nahiii... Reh sakti...




Tony... Dekha aai maine kha tha na hum ispar ehsaan kar rahe hai... Isko yaha nahi rehna...




Vimala... Yashoda beti Tu yeh kya keh rahi hai...




Yashoda... Woo maaji woo...


Tony... Tum chalo bahar aai tujhe meri kasam tu beech mai mat aa...




Tony Kanta ke haath se baache ko le Yashoda ko ghar se bahar ke aata hai... Jaha Kanta aur Vimala usko samjha Rahi hoti hai magar Tony kisi ki nahi sunta... Tony Yashoda ko bhar le jaane lagta hai Yashoda apne ghar nahi jana chahti thi rone lagti hai aur ant mai Tony ke pair pakad leti hai...




Yashoda... Please mai apne ghar nahi jana chahti... wanha mere saath munne ko bhi...



Tony... Toh akhir kya chahti ho tum batao... Yha bhi nahi rehna ghar bhi nahi jana...


Yashoda kuch nahi kehti bas pair pakad roti rehti hai... Vimala Kanta bhi Tony ko samjhate hai magat Tony kasam de kar dono ko chup kar deta hai... Aur Yashoda ko uthane lgata hai lekin woh pair nahi chodti... Tony zor laga kar Yashoda ko uthata hai... Yashoda Tony ki aankhon mai dekh use hath jod ghar chodne ke liye mana karti hai...




Tony... Aacha theek hai tumhe yaha nahi rehna aur ghar bhi nahi jana hai na...



Yashoda haan mai sir hilati hai...



Tony... Toh fir tumhe meri har baat manni padegi warna mai ek nahi sununga aur tumhe ghar chod kar hi aunga...




Yashoda kuch nhi kehti aur Tony uska hath pakad khenchte hue ghar ki taraf le aata hai... Aur hath chod Jeb mai se chabi nikalta hai aur ghar ka tala kholta hai aur chabi wapas Yashoda ke haath mai rakh deta hai... Aur use ander le aata hai... Yashoda hairaan thi waanhi peeche peeche baaki sab bhi...




Yashoda... Yeh kiska Ghar hai...



Tony... Mera... Aur bakwas nahi ab se tum yaha rahogi jab tumhare baba aaye chali Jana unke saath magar tab tak tumhaari zimmedari mere haath mai hai... aur mai kuch nahi sununga...




Yashoda... Magar mai kaise... Tum...



Tony... darne ki koi baat nahi hai mai yaha nahi rehta din bhar bahar rehta hoon aur raat aai ke ghar sota hoon... tum din bhar aai ke ghar reh lena raat mai yaha aa jana... Aur koi pareshani hai kya tumhe...




Yashoda... Ji lekin...




Tony... Maine kaha na tumse... Tum yahi rahogi warna abhi tumhe tumhare ghar chod kar aata hun...




Yashoda uske baad kuch nahi kehti chup ho jati hai... Vimala Kanta aur Nazim kabhi Tony toh kabhi Yashoda ko dekh rahe the... Aakhir dono ke Mann mai kya chal raha hai Yashoda kyun wanha nahi rehna chahti thi... Aur Tony ka bartaav toh sabse jayada hairan krne waala tha pehle toh jo bhi kuch usne bola fir baad mai kitne saalo baad usne ghar me kadam rakha tha... Warna dilwali ki safayi ke liye bhi usne Vimala ko mana kar diya tha... Aur aaj Yashoda ko ghar mai le aaya hai... Aur chabi use de di ghar ki...




Tony ko ghar bhut pyaara uske maa papa ki yaadein thi ghar me ek khusboo jise woh nahi jaane dena chahta tha isliye ghar ko band kar rakha tha lekin aaj aisa kyun... yahi sawal sabko tha lekin kisi ki himmat nahi thi puchne ki Tony Yashoda ko chod ghar se bahar nikal jata hai... Peeche peeche Nazim bhi... Ab ghar mai Yashoda Vimala Kanta the Tabhi Kanta bhi bacche ko Vimala ko pakda ghar chali jaati hai qki ghar uski beti akeli thi...




Vimala aur Yashoda kaafi der tak khamosh jo kuch bhi hua sochne lagte hai... Aur baad mai Vimala Yashoda ki madat ghar mai samaan rakhne aur thodi bhut saaf safai kar sone ke liye jagah bana deti hai... Baaki sab kal karne ka bol ghar se nikal jaati hai...




Iss sab mai kaafi samay gujar jata hai... Vimala bahar aake dekhti hai toh ghar ke dware ek khatiya lagi hoti hai jispe Tony aankhein band kar leta hua hota hai... Vimala ke aankhon se aansun ki ek bund gir jaati hai jise woh jaldi se ponch Tony ke paas jaate hai aur uske sir par hath fir deti hai...




Tony bhi aankhein khol apni aai ko dekhta hai fir dubara aankhein band kar leta hai... Yeh sab Yashoda bhi gate par khadi ho dekhti hai... Aur gate lga kar ander chal deti hai...




Raat gehri hoti hai dheere dheere sab so jate hai Do logo ki aankhon mai neend nahi thi... ( Any guesses )




( Koshish kar raha hoon regularly update dene ki hopefully aapko pasand aayega... Likes kar dena.. 25 likes nahi ho rahe )



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Mind-blowing update

Nice update Bhai

Yashoda ke dukh abhi khtam hote nazar nahi aa rahe, bahut sangharsh hai uske jivan me. Nazim ki bhi galat Nazar me vo aa gyi hai ab pta nahi vo kya karega.

Abhi jab tak hero bada nahi ho jata tab tak jyada kuch kehna possible nahi hai, filhal to kahani yashoda ke sangharsh par hi focus kar rahi hai.

Jab hero bada hoga to pta chalega asali plot kahani ka, vo kon hai uski asal maa kon thi aur uss hospital me aisi halat me kyu thi, vo sirf lachar thi yaa kisi badi sajish ka shikar. Abhi tak kahani kind off emotional tone me jaa rahi hai, lekin yakinan aage action, thrill suspense bhi dekhne ko milega.

Aapki pichli kahani bhi padhi thi kal 30 update tak, and I would say you improved a lot.

Uss kahani aur iss kahani ke writing level me bahut difference hai. Vo bhi achi kahani thi, khair adhuri thi to sabhi update padhne jaruri nahi laga. But aapne iss kahani me kamal kar diya hai, font se leke writing style sabhi badhiya hai.

Ab to bas hero ke bade hone ka intezar hai.
Excellent Story with excellent writing skills,

Keep writing keep updating

Eagerly waiting for next update

Nice update

Nice update

Bahut achha
Beautiful

Yashoda ki dukh bhari kahani se dil dehal gaya. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

Nice update

Awesome update

Toh yashoda abhi kuchh samay ke liye surakshit hai lekin nazim dalle ke haav bhaav se lag raha hai ki ye kuchh karne wala hai ho sakta hai ki ye Tony ko fasa de aur baad me koi game khele , dekhte hain ki kya hota hai.
Update toh abhi tak imotional hi chal rahe hain.
Behtreen update tha , agle update ka intezar rahega.

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