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Awesome update bhai( KALYUG... Part 9 )
( RECAP... 14 year's... )
14 year's Later...
Location... Basti...
( RECAP... )
Chalo Jaan lete hain in 14 saalon mai kya hua... Sabse pehle baat karte hai Yashoda ki...
YASHODA...
Yashoda basti mai kuch hi dino mai ghull mill gayi... Basti ke logo ko jab uske baare me pata chala toh sab ne uska dil kholkar swagat kiya... Jo peeth peeche buraiyan karti thi ab band ho chuki thi.. sab use ijjat se pesh aate the isme kuch had tak Vimala ka bhi haath tha Usne Yashoda ko basti mai ghull mill hone mai kaafi madat ki...
Yashoda padhi likhi nurse thi woh kaam karna chahti thi magar Tony use kahikaam nahi karne deta har baar jaha bhi kaam karne ki koshish karti dusre din use noukri se nikaal diya jata... yeh baat woh bhi samjh Rahi thi aisa kyun ho Raha hai... Magar woh na usko kuch keh paati na aisa karne se rok paati... Dono ke beech Rista kya hai dono nahi samjh paaye the...
Tony uski jindagi mai bhagwan bankar hi aaya tha jab sab logo ne uski madat karne se mana kar diya tab Uski zindagi mai aakar usne jo shahra diya... Dono ke beech jayada time khamoshi rehti thi... Kuch time mai hi Yashoda ne ghar ko aache se sambhal liya tha ghar ka raashan paani sab cheez mai Tony ne madat ki uski ab khana ghar Yashoda hi bana liya karti thi...
Din mai Kanta aur Vimala bhi aa jaya karti saath mai Kanta ki beti jiska naam Sweety rakha tha woh din bhar Nandu ke saath khelti raat mai bhi usi ke saath khelte khelte so jaati... Yashoda ek beti aur paa kar khush thi... Dheere dheere Nandu bada hua School jaane laga Yashoda din bar bour ho jaati toh ghar mai chota sa dawa khana bhi khol liya jaha woh aksar choti moti khansi bhukar ki dawai aur patti kar diya karti thi... Iss par Tony ne bhut mana kiya magar Yashoda ki zidd ke aage usne bhi haar maan li... Ab Yashoda ki yahi dincharya thi din bhar Nandu aur Sweety ki shararatain aur clinic ke saath Kanta aur Vimala ke saath paakar woh basti mai jam gayi thi...
Dhere dhere woh apni purani zindigi bhool gayi thi... Jaha woh maa papa ke saath raha karti thi... Maa ke jaane ke baad aaj bhi woh pita ji ka intezar karti usne unhe dhoonde ki koshish ki Tony ki madat se magar woh nahi mile... Yashoda bhi wanha jana chahti apne ghar ek baar bas pita ji se milne magar har baar Tony mana kar deta woh jayada kuch keh bhi nahi paati... Yaad mai aksar uski aankhein nam ho jaati magar Nandu usko rota dekh khud rone lagta isliye Yashoda uske saamne ro bhi nahi paati thi...
Aaj woh yaha iss seher mai sahi salamat hai tou ek wajah pitaji bhi the jinhone himmat dikhatehue use waha se door bhej diya bina kisi baat ki parwaah kiye... Chup chup kar dil mai abhi bhi apne pita se milne ki ek umeed thi ek aakhri baat dekhne ki unhe...
TONY...
Wanhi Tony ki baat Karen... Tony ki zindagi Yashoda ke aane se poori tarah se badal gayi thi... Kha woh bematlab mai jhagda karta tha marpeet karta tha... Ab sab kuch chod woh kaam par jata hai paise kamata hai jisse ghar kharch chal sake... Usne apne upar Yashoda aur Nandu ki zimmedari le li thi... Ab kehna mushkil hai ki woh pitaji ke kiye waade ki wajah se aisa karraha hai yaa uske man mai kuch hai yeh Tony hi janta hai... kher Tony bhi shaam ka khana uske haath ka khata aur wanhi bahar khatiya par let jata...
Kaafi log uske aisa karne se khush the toh kuch pareshan bhi the... Jo use yashoda aur uske beech kya hai puchte rehte jisse Tony chidd jaya karta tha qki woh bhi nahi samjh paa raha tha uski itni parwaah q kar raha hai... kuch saal aise hi chala jab log baar usse puchte toh woh pareshan ho gaya tha jawaab de de kar uski yeh pareshani ek din chote Nandu ne door kar di use baba keh kar...
Tony uske muhh se baba sun foole nahi sama paa raha tha usne logo ka muh chupp kar diya... Yeh Mera beta hai Tony ka beta... Ab tak Tony jo thoda asmanjas mai rehta tha ab ghar phunchte hi khush ho jata jab Nandu baba baba keh kar uske aage peeche ghumta... Rista Use Nandu ne bata Diya tha logo ka muh bhi chup ho gya...
Khud ko poori tarah se badal liya tha usne but kuch aadatain nahi badal paati jaise Uska aur Parul ka Rishta... Usne khud ko kaafi samay tak Rok kar rakha mgar tha toh ek mard hi Parul ke aage jayada time na tik paya... Uski aur Parul ki ek beti bhi thi jo Nandu se ek saal hi choti thi... Aaj bhi Parul ke paas jata hai ab beti hai toh pita ke naate kuch farz toh banta hai uska samay dene ka magar usne ABHI TAK Parul se shaadi nahi ki... Parul ne bhut baar kaha magar Tony mana kar deta... Basti mai sabko Parul aur Tony ke baare mai pata chala kaafi logo ne peeth peeche baatain ki magar koi samne se Tony ko kuch na keh saki... Yashoda ko jab yeh baat pta chali toh usne koi pratikriya nahi di... Tony uski nazar mai bhagwan tha woh bhala usko kaise galat thera deti... Jisne use nayi zindagi rehne ko ghar pyaar krne waala pariwar diya woh kaise kuch galat kar sakta hai...
VIMALA...
Baat kare Vimala ki toh woh sabhi cheezon se kaafi khush thi... Tony jiski umeed nahi thi woh sudher raha tha... Haan maanti thi kami hai usme magar har kisi ke ander ek na ek Kami rehti hi hai... Yeh soch usne usse jayada danta nahi... Yashoda ke aane se ek beti bhi mill gayi thi use yashoda use maa kehkar bulati thi... Aur uski khushi ko dugna Nandu ne DADI.. bolkar kar diya tha...
Nazim bhi thoda bhut sudhar gya tha ab ghar par jhagda nahi karta tha... Time se ghar aa jata khana khata do baache din bhar shararatain karte use ab zindagi se kuch aur nahi chahiye tha... Bas ek fikar usethi Yashoda ki usne shaadi nahi ki thi na Tony ne... Woh dono se bol bol kar thak gayi thi Yashoda har baar use mana kar deti... Tony ki use jayada fikar nahi thi Qki uske paas Parul thi magar Yashoda... Yashoda uski ek na sunti aur kasam de kar chup Kara deti...
KANTA...
Uski zindagi mai Yashoda se jayada Nandu ne balaav laya... Woh use Yashoda ke saath maa ka pyaar deti apna dhoodh pilaya 4 saal tak Nandu ne uska dhoodh peena nahi chhoda... Woh apne beti se jayada Nandu ko pyaar karne lagi thi woh tha hi itna pyaara... Usne hi Kanta ki zindagi mai aakar ek bete ki kami ko poora kar diya tha... Nazim se use koi lagwaav nahi tha na jaane kitne saal ho gae the use sharirik shambandh banaye usko kami khalti thi lekin woh Baachon ke pyaar ke aage sab bhool jati...
Magar kabhi kabhi Nandu jab 4 saal ka tha dhoodh Peete waqt woh dusre haath uski chuchi daba deta... Jisse Kanta garam ho jati aur dhoodh pilate waqt kabhi kabhi sthalgit ho jati thi... Use baad mai apni harkat par Sharm aati kaise maa hai woh beteke chune se aisa chii kaise ho sakta hai... Magar jab kabhi Nandu use kehta bhookh lagi maa duddu chahiye toh woh usemana nahi kar paati thi... Beti Sweety bhi Nandu ko dekh maa se dhoodh mangi toh Kanta apna dusra chucha nikaal use pila deti thi... Dono din bhar saath khelte saath rehte saath hi so jaate...
Beti ke hone par se hi aaj kal maa ko chinta bani rehti hai magar jab Sweety ko Nandu ka saath paakar uski chinta kaafi had tak kam ho gayi thi... Use ab pta tha ki sweety ka dhyan Nandu aache se rakh lega usko pareshan honeki jarurat nahi thi... Sweety jaise jaise badi hui usme badlaab aane shuru hue toh Kanta use Nandu se door sone ko kehti magar iss baat Sweety maa se jhagda kar leti aur Nandu ke saath hi soti thi... Usne bhi thak haar kar dono ko kuch kehna sahi nahi samjha... socha bade ho jayenge apne aap samjh aa jayegi...
NAZIM...
Uske baare mai kya hi kahe... Yashoda ke aane se uski zindagi jaise tabaah ho gayi thi... kaha woh pehle din bhar shraab Peeta nayi nayi ladkiyon ko chodta... Nahi maanti toh Tony ke naam se unke saath zabardasti karta tha... Ab achanak Tony ke sudhar jaane se uski zindagi khtam si ho gayi thi... Daaru peena kam raat ko jab Kanta par apna gussa nikalne jaata toh woh bhi use dhakke maar kar Bahar kar deti thi... Aur kehti agar mujhse zabardasti karne ki koshish ki toh yashoda se keh dungi woh Tony se keh kar tumhari haddi pasli ek kar dega...
Tony ka naam sun uski gaand fatt jaati thi... Sath me Yashoda par kaafi gussa bhi aata tha ek woh uske saath kuch kar nahi sakta tha qki harwaqt Tony uski hifazat karta tha raat mai ghar ke bahar sota tha... Yashoda ko pehle baar dekh uske Mann mai jo uske zism ko dekh hawas bhar gayi abhi tak dabaya hua tha intzaar tha use bas sahi mauke ka... Jab woh apni hasrat Yashoda ke zism ko nooch kar poori kare aur saath mai uski zindagi jo jhand ho rakhi hai uska badla bhi le sake... Dekhte hai intzaar kab tak chalta hai abhi tak use mauka nahi mila...
NANDU...
Ab chalte hai meri dekhte hai mai kya kar raha hoon....
Woh jaane se pehle mai aapko apne baare mai bata dena chahta hoon... mera naam Nandkishor hai pyaar se sab Nandu bulate hai... Meri teen Maa aur do behne hai... Are are confuse ho gye na teen kaise toh chaliye bata deta hoon... Meri ek Maa jisne janam diya use mai kabhi dekh nahi paya kaisi thi magar itna keh sakta hun meri Yashoda maa se kam nahi hongi... Jo pyaar usne mila mai apne aap ko bhut khudkismat samjhta hoon...
Dusri meri Maa Kanta mujhe bhut pyaar karti hai dono maa ke pyaar ko kon jayada kon kam yeh toh bhagwan bhi nahi jaan sakta hai... mai toh khush hoon jab kabhi khelne ke chakkar mai daant padti toh yeh maa humesha mera bachaav mai aa Yashoda maa ko bhi daant deti... he he he...
Kher teesri aur aakhiri maa Parul unko mai aai kehta hun jab bhi baba ke saath basti mai ghumta yaa unke ghar jaata toh woh mujhe bhut laad pyaar karti... Ab yeh pyaar mujhe hai yaa baba ke saamne dikhawa yeh mai keh nahi sakta woh mujhe pyaar deti mai unhe aai hi bulata...
Do behan Sweety aur Dimple urf ( Dimpi ) Jo behne kehne par badak jaati hai sweety ka toh chlata hai woh bachpan se mereko maarti thi jab use didi kehta bhut der tak gussa rehti jab tak use mana nahi leta khana nahi khati thi... Magar Dimple uska kuch samjh nahi aata tha Sweety ko dekh uski tarah banne ki kosish karti har waqt yaa usse aage... kabhi gaal par pappi leleti kabhi kuch harkat jisse Sweety chidd jaati ab woh aisa Sweety ko dikhane karti yaa kuch aur baat thi yeh aaj tak mujhe nahi pta...
Aakhiri baat jo mujhe nahi pata magar mere baare mai dusre log kehte hai ki meri kahi baatain sach ho jaati hai... Jaise ki Dadi kaam se bahar gayi thi mujhe laddu khane ka man hua toh maine bola aayi laddo khana hai itne mai dadi ander aayi aur unke hathon mai laddo dekh sab chonk gye jo woh mere liye layi thi...
Aise hi bhut si baatain jo mai gaur nahi karta qki mujhe iss cheezon se fark nahi padta... Mai apni masti mai Magan rehta... Aisa nahi tha ki har kahi baat sach jo jati yaa mere paas super power thi balki kabhi kabhi achanak muh se kuch nikal jata jo mere man mai chal raha hota woh sach ho jata tha...
( Kehte hai na din mai kahi ek baat sach ho jati qki jeev par maa saraswati viraj karti hai iss case ko bhi aisa samjh lijiye... Hazam aasani se ho jayega )
Location Government HR school...
Afternoon... Time... 2:30 PM...
Chalte hai meri taraf...Mai bachkar bhag raha tha Sweety mujhe pakadne ke liye peeche bhaag rahi thi qki school mai uski doston ke saamne maine use didi keh diya tha... Toh chaliye dekhte hai aage kya hota hai... Kahani ko mere nazariye se...
Mai... hhhhhh Sweety sorry... hhhh sweety maaf kar de... Hhhhhh ab aur nahi bhaga jaa raha...
Sweety... Hhhh Nandu ke baache tu haath aa ja ek baar mere... Hhhh aaj tujhe nahi chodne waali hhhh ruk Naa...
Mai... hhhhh Pagal hai kyaa... mai nahi ruk raha mujhe pta hai tu mujhe maregi... Hhhhhh
Sweety... hhhh Aacha nahi marungi please ruk jaa dekh mere pair dukhne lage hai... Hhhh ab aur nahi bhaag sakti... Nandu ruk jaa...
Mai... hhhh Mai nahi rukne waala aai ke paas hi jaker rukunga... hhhh unse sikayat karunga teri tu roj mujhe maarti hai... Hhhhhh Terese aachi Dipmi hai mujhe kitna pyaar karti hai...
Sweety... Aahhh ruk jaa Nandu...
Sweety ki aag sun Mai peeche palat kar dekhta hun toh Sweety pessene se lat path mere peeche bhaag rahi thi tabhi mere muh se aachanak nikal jata hai... Sweety sambhal ke...
Aur dhadammmm karke sweety gir padti hai mai bhaagte hue uske paas jata hoon... Usko uthta hun woh mere baal pakad leti hai...
Mai... Aaahhh kya kar rahi hai chod mere baal sweety choddd aaahhh lag rahi hai...
Sweety... Nahi chodungi kya keh raha tha mujhse aachi Dimpi hai woh chudail ki barabri tune mujhse ki... Kya samjhata hai apne aapko... Aaj teri khair nahi...
Mai... Aahhh chod de sweety sorry ab se nahi bolunga promise chod na...
Sweety... Nahi chodungi aaj dekhti hun kon bacahta hai himmat kaise hui Teri dimpi ko merese aacha kehne ki... Aachi tarah se jaanti hun uss kamini ko woh mujhe har waqt chidati rehti hai... Aur tu usko aacha keh raha Aaj teri khair nahi...
Mai... Aacha maaf kar de please lag rahi hai sweety dekh kapde gande ho gaye maa gussa karegi unhe batana padega kya hua... Mai toh bol dunga jo tune kiya jisper badi maa mujhe bacha lengi fir soch le tera kya haal hoga...
Sweety... Mujhe dhamki deta hai ruk tujhe batati hun... Aaj nahi sunne waali kisi ki jo chaahe keh de tu aai se maar kha lungi aur kya...
Mai... Aacha theek hai mere maa sorry promise aaj se tujhe Dimpi se barabri nahi krunga woh chudail waise bhi mujhe pasand nhi harwaqt chipki rehti hai tu toh jaanti hai... Chal khadi ho saare kapde kharab ho gye...
Sweety... Haan toh maine kaha tha kya Tujhse jhagda karne ke liye... Tujhe pta hai na mai kitna pyaar karti tujhse tu har waqt Dimpi kar mujhe pareshan karta hai... Dekh mujhe chot lag gayi khoon bhi aa raha hai...
Mai... ( Pareshan hote hue ) haan yeh toh dikkat ho gayi ek kaam kar uth tu Ghar chalte hai maa ko bol denge gir gayi tu jis chakkar mai kapde kharab ho gaye... Teri patti bhi ho jayegi daant se bhi Bach jayenge...
Sweety... Aaahhhh nahi uth paa rahi Nandu madat kar na...
Mai... ( Use sahara dekar khada karte hue ) kitna khaati hai tu ufff chal jaldi kar ab...
Sweety... Kya kaha tune...
Mai... Kuch nahi woh bass chal na... Maa gussa karengi waise hi kaafi late ho gaya jaldi chalte hai...
Jaha mai Sweety ko lekar ghar jaa raha tha wanhi ghar par kuch aur hi chal raha tha...
Location Basti... Yashoda House'...
Afternoon... Same Time...
Vimala... Beti kitne saal ho gaye mai tujhe bol bolkar thak gayi abhi bhi waqt hai shaadi kar le... mai samjhti hun mai bhi aurat hun kuch jarurat hoti hai sarir ki usko kab tak aise bardast karegi... Aakhir kya dikkat hai...
Yashoda... Maa aap samjhti kyun nahi hai mai aise hi theek hun... Nandu ke saath khush hoon mujhe ab kisi cheez ki chaah nahi hai pyaar krne ke liye didi hai aap hai ek beti bhi hai ab mujhe kuch nahi chahiye...
Vimala... Magar beti...
Yashoda... Please maa... Kuch mat kahiye maanti hun aapki baat ek had tak sahi hai magar maine yeh zindagi khud ke liye chun Li ab mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...
Vimala baat sun dukhi ho jaati hai toh Yashoda uske hath par hath rakh kehti hai...
Yashoda... Maan lo agar kal ko maine shaadi kar li toh mujhe aapko chod kar jana padega Naa jaane woh kaisa hoga kya mai jaise hoon waisa apnayega mujhe... Meri shaadi ko lekar pitaji ne bhi kaafi sapne saza rakhe the ab unke na rehte mai shaadi ka soch bhi nahi sakhti...
Vimala... ( Kuch sochte hue ) Ek baat bAtayegi sach sach... Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...
Yashoda... Isme kya hai maa woh bhut aache hai woh mere liye bhagwan hai unki wajah se aaj jo kuch bhi mai hoon yaha aapke beech...
Vimala... Are waise nahi Pati ke roop mai Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...
Yashoda uski baat sun khamosh ho jati hai...
Vimala... Dekh mai yeh nahi keh rahi ki woh bhut aacha hai... Har kisi mai Kami rehti hai magar shayad kahi na kahi woh bhi tumhe pasand karta isliye ab tak usne bhi shaadi nahi ki... Tu kya kehti hai iss baare mai...
Yashoda... Mai kya kahun mai mere dil mai aisa kuch nahi unke liye... Haan maanti hun woh bhut aache hai bhut izzat karti hun unki magar shaadi samjh nahi aata maa pta nahi kyun...
Vimala... Agar tere pita ji ko Tony pasand hota toh tu kya kehti...
Yashoda... Pitaji ki pasand par mai kaise mana kar sakti hoon maa woh jo karte mere aache ke liye hi karte... Lekin woh baad ki baat hai maa abhi yaha nahi toh aap yeh baatain na karen Baachon ke aane ka bhi samay ho gaya hai... Abhi tak aaye kyun nahi mai dekh kar aati hoon...
Yashoda abhi uthne ko hoti hai tabhi use Nandu ki awaaz sunayi deti hai...
Mai.. Baba Maa kaha hai... Dekho Sweety ke chot lag gayi aap unhe bula do... Tab tak mai ise clinic mai le jata hoon...
Yashoda bahar aakar dekhti hai Toh Tony use nazar aata hai jo ek baar use aakhon mai dekh bahar nikal jata hai... Dono ke beech yeh khamoshi ek aam baat thi jayada kaam hone par hi woh baat Kiya karte the magar aaj yeh khamoshi Yashoda ko kuch alag lag rahi thi saath hi Tony ke haav bhaav kher... Woh sab cheez ko darkinaar kar clinic ki taraf chal padti hai...
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isliye yeh decision liya ki usko continue nahi karunga... ab reader's ki demand thi story ki toh socha kuch new likha Jaye thoda hatke bas isliye yeh story start Kiya hun...
Kabhi mood fresh karne ka mauka mila toh woh bhi continue kar lunga filhaal toh muskill hai...
As always fucking awesome but still thoda doubt he mujhe par vo doubt puch bhi liya to you won't answer bcuz wahi story me bhi kiya......hero ka bola or chize hona( KALYUG... Part 9 )
( RECAP... 14 year's... )
14 year's Later...
Location... Basti...
( RECAP... )
Chalo Jaan lete hain in 14 saalon mai kya hua... Sabse pehle baat karte hai Yashoda ki...
YASHODA...
Yashoda basti mai kuch hi dino mai ghull mill gayi... Basti ke logo ko jab uske baare me pata chala toh sab ne uska dil kholkar swagat kiya... Jo peeth peeche buraiyan karti thi ab band ho chuki thi.. sab use ijjat se pesh aate the isme kuch had tak Vimala ka bhi haath tha Usne Yashoda ko basti mai ghull mill hone mai kaafi madat ki...
Yashoda padhi likhi nurse thi woh kaam karna chahti thi magar Tony use kahikaam nahi karne deta har baar jaha bhi kaam karne ki koshish karti dusre din use noukri se nikaal diya jata... yeh baat woh bhi samjh Rahi thi aisa kyun ho Raha hai... Magar woh na usko kuch keh paati na aisa karne se rok paati... Dono ke beech Rista kya hai dono nahi samjh paaye the...
Tony uski jindagi mai bhagwan bankar hi aaya tha jab sab logo ne uski madat karne se mana kar diya tab Uski zindagi mai aakar usne jo shahra diya... Dono ke beech jayada time khamoshi rehti thi... Kuch time mai hi Yashoda ne ghar ko aache se sambhal liya tha ghar ka raashan paani sab cheez mai Tony ne madat ki uski ab khana ghar Yashoda hi bana liya karti thi...
Din mai Kanta aur Vimala bhi aa jaya karti saath mai Kanta ki beti jiska naam Sweety rakha tha woh din bhar Nandu ke saath khelti raat mai bhi usi ke saath khelte khelte so jaati... Yashoda ek beti aur paa kar khush thi... Dheere dheere Nandu bada hua School jaane laga Yashoda din bar bour ho jaati toh ghar mai chota sa dawa khana bhi khol liya jaha woh aksar choti moti khansi bhukar ki dawai aur patti kar diya karti thi... Iss par Tony ne bhut mana kiya magar Yashoda ki zidd ke aage usne bhi haar maan li... Ab Yashoda ki yahi dincharya thi din bhar Nandu aur Sweety ki shararatain aur clinic ke saath Kanta aur Vimala ke saath paakar woh basti mai jam gayi thi...
Dhere dhere woh apni purani zindigi bhool gayi thi... Jaha woh maa papa ke saath raha karti thi... Maa ke jaane ke baad aaj bhi woh pita ji ka intezar karti usne unhe dhoonde ki koshish ki Tony ki madat se magar woh nahi mile... Yashoda bhi wanha jana chahti apne ghar ek baar bas pita ji se milne magar har baar Tony mana kar deta woh jayada kuch keh bhi nahi paati... Yaad mai aksar uski aankhein nam ho jaati magar Nandu usko rota dekh khud rone lagta isliye Yashoda uske saamne ro bhi nahi paati thi...
Aaj woh yaha iss seher mai sahi salamat hai tou ek wajah pitaji bhi the jinhone himmat dikhatehue use waha se door bhej diya bina kisi baat ki parwaah kiye... Chup chup kar dil mai abhi bhi apne pita se milne ki ek umeed thi ek aakhri baat dekhne ki unhe...
TONY...
Wanhi Tony ki baat Karen... Tony ki zindagi Yashoda ke aane se poori tarah se badal gayi thi... Kha woh bematlab mai jhagda karta tha marpeet karta tha... Ab sab kuch chod woh kaam par jata hai paise kamata hai jisse ghar kharch chal sake... Usne apne upar Yashoda aur Nandu ki zimmedari le li thi... Ab kehna mushkil hai ki woh pitaji ke kiye waade ki wajah se aisa karraha hai yaa uske man mai kuch hai yeh Tony hi janta hai... kher Tony bhi shaam ka khana uske haath ka khata aur wanhi bahar khatiya par let jata...
Kaafi log uske aisa karne se khush the toh kuch pareshan bhi the... Jo use yashoda aur uske beech kya hai puchte rehte jisse Tony chidd jaya karta tha qki woh bhi nahi samjh paa raha tha uski itni parwaah q kar raha hai... kuch saal aise hi chala jab log baar usse puchte toh woh pareshan ho gaya tha jawaab de de kar uski yeh pareshani ek din chote Nandu ne door kar di use baba keh kar...
Tony uske muhh se baba sun foole nahi sama paa raha tha usne logo ka muh chupp kar diya... Yeh Mera beta hai Tony ka beta... Ab tak Tony jo thoda asmanjas mai rehta tha ab ghar phunchte hi khush ho jata jab Nandu baba baba keh kar uske aage peeche ghumta... Rista Use Nandu ne bata Diya tha logo ka muh bhi chup ho gya...
Khud ko poori tarah se badal liya tha usne but kuch aadatain nahi badal paati jaise Uska aur Parul ka Rishta... Usne khud ko kaafi samay tak Rok kar rakha mgar tha toh ek mard hi Parul ke aage jayada time na tik paya... Uski aur Parul ki ek beti bhi thi jo Nandu se ek saal hi choti thi... Aaj bhi Parul ke paas jata hai ab beti hai toh pita ke naate kuch farz toh banta hai uska samay dene ka magar usne ABHI TAK Parul se shaadi nahi ki... Parul ne bhut baar kaha magar Tony mana kar deta... Basti mai sabko Parul aur Tony ke baare mai pata chala kaafi logo ne peeth peeche baatain ki magar koi samne se Tony ko kuch na keh saki... Yashoda ko jab yeh baat pta chali toh usne koi pratikriya nahi di... Tony uski nazar mai bhagwan tha woh bhala usko kaise galat thera deti... Jisne use nayi zindagi rehne ko ghar pyaar krne waala pariwar diya woh kaise kuch galat kar sakta hai...
VIMALA...
Baat kare Vimala ki toh woh sabhi cheezon se kaafi khush thi... Tony jiski umeed nahi thi woh sudher raha tha... Haan maanti thi kami hai usme magar har kisi ke ander ek na ek Kami rehti hi hai... Yeh soch usne usse jayada danta nahi... Yashoda ke aane se ek beti bhi mill gayi thi use yashoda use maa kehkar bulati thi... Aur uski khushi ko dugna Nandu ne DADI.. bolkar kar diya tha...
Nazim bhi thoda bhut sudhar gya tha ab ghar par jhagda nahi karta tha... Time se ghar aa jata khana khata do baache din bhar shararatain karte use ab zindagi se kuch aur nahi chahiye tha... Bas ek fikar usethi Yashoda ki usne shaadi nahi ki thi na Tony ne... Woh dono se bol bol kar thak gayi thi Yashoda har baar use mana kar deti... Tony ki use jayada fikar nahi thi Qki uske paas Parul thi magar Yashoda... Yashoda uski ek na sunti aur kasam de kar chup Kara deti...
KANTA...
Uski zindagi mai Yashoda se jayada Nandu ne balaav laya... Woh use Yashoda ke saath maa ka pyaar deti apna dhoodh pilaya 4 saal tak Nandu ne uska dhoodh peena nahi chhoda... Woh apne beti se jayada Nandu ko pyaar karne lagi thi woh tha hi itna pyaara... Usne hi Kanta ki zindagi mai aakar ek bete ki kami ko poora kar diya tha... Nazim se use koi lagwaav nahi tha na jaane kitne saal ho gae the use sharirik shambandh banaye usko kami khalti thi lekin woh Baachon ke pyaar ke aage sab bhool jati...
Magar kabhi kabhi Nandu jab 4 saal ka tha dhoodh Peete waqt woh dusre haath uski chuchi daba deta... Jisse Kanta garam ho jati aur dhoodh pilate waqt kabhi kabhi sthalgit ho jati thi... Use baad mai apni harkat par Sharm aati kaise maa hai woh beteke chune se aisa chii kaise ho sakta hai... Magar jab kabhi Nandu use kehta bhookh lagi maa duddu chahiye toh woh usemana nahi kar paati thi... Beti Sweety bhi Nandu ko dekh maa se dhoodh mangi toh Kanta apna dusra chucha nikaal use pila deti thi... Dono din bhar saath khelte saath rehte saath hi so jaate...
Beti ke hone par se hi aaj kal maa ko chinta bani rehti hai magar jab Sweety ko Nandu ka saath paakar uski chinta kaafi had tak kam ho gayi thi... Use ab pta tha ki sweety ka dhyan Nandu aache se rakh lega usko pareshan honeki jarurat nahi thi... Sweety jaise jaise badi hui usme badlaab aane shuru hue toh Kanta use Nandu se door sone ko kehti magar iss baat Sweety maa se jhagda kar leti aur Nandu ke saath hi soti thi... Usne bhi thak haar kar dono ko kuch kehna sahi nahi samjha... socha bade ho jayenge apne aap samjh aa jayegi...
NAZIM...
Uske baare mai kya hi kahe... Yashoda ke aane se uski zindagi jaise tabaah ho gayi thi... kaha woh pehle din bhar shraab Peeta nayi nayi ladkiyon ko chodta... Nahi maanti toh Tony ke naam se unke saath zabardasti karta tha... Ab achanak Tony ke sudhar jaane se uski zindagi khtam si ho gayi thi... Daaru peena kam raat ko jab Kanta par apna gussa nikalne jaata toh woh bhi use dhakke maar kar Bahar kar deti thi... Aur kehti agar mujhse zabardasti karne ki koshish ki toh yashoda se keh dungi woh Tony se keh kar tumhari haddi pasli ek kar dega...
Tony ka naam sun uski gaand fatt jaati thi... Sath me Yashoda par kaafi gussa bhi aata tha ek woh uske saath kuch kar nahi sakta tha qki harwaqt Tony uski hifazat karta tha raat mai ghar ke bahar sota tha... Yashoda ko pehle baar dekh uske Mann mai jo uske zism ko dekh hawas bhar gayi abhi tak dabaya hua tha intzaar tha use bas sahi mauke ka... Jab woh apni hasrat Yashoda ke zism ko nooch kar poori kare aur saath mai uski zindagi jo jhand ho rakhi hai uska badla bhi le sake... Dekhte hai intzaar kab tak chalta hai abhi tak use mauka nahi mila...
NANDU...
Ab chalte hai meri dekhte hai mai kya kar raha hoon....
Woh jaane se pehle mai aapko apne baare mai bata dena chahta hoon... mera naam Nandkishor hai pyaar se sab Nandu bulate hai... Meri teen Maa aur do behne hai... Are are confuse ho gye na teen kaise toh chaliye bata deta hoon... Meri ek Maa jisne janam diya use mai kabhi dekh nahi paya kaisi thi magar itna keh sakta hun meri Yashoda maa se kam nahi hongi... Jo pyaar usne mila mai apne aap ko bhut khudkismat samjhta hoon...
Dusri meri Maa Kanta mujhe bhut pyaar karti hai dono maa ke pyaar ko kon jayada kon kam yeh toh bhagwan bhi nahi jaan sakta hai... mai toh khush hoon jab kabhi khelne ke chakkar mai daant padti toh yeh maa humesha mera bachaav mai aa Yashoda maa ko bhi daant deti... he he he...
Kher teesri aur aakhiri maa Parul unko mai aai kehta hun jab bhi baba ke saath basti mai ghumta yaa unke ghar jaata toh woh mujhe bhut laad pyaar karti... Ab yeh pyaar mujhe hai yaa baba ke saamne dikhawa yeh mai keh nahi sakta woh mujhe pyaar deti mai unhe aai hi bulata...
Do behan Sweety aur Dimple urf ( Dimpi ) Jo behne kehne par badak jaati hai sweety ka toh chlata hai woh bachpan se mereko maarti thi jab use didi kehta bhut der tak gussa rehti jab tak use mana nahi leta khana nahi khati thi... Magar Dimple uska kuch samjh nahi aata tha Sweety ko dekh uski tarah banne ki kosish karti har waqt yaa usse aage... kabhi gaal par pappi leleti kabhi kuch harkat jisse Sweety chidd jaati ab woh aisa Sweety ko dikhane karti yaa kuch aur baat thi yeh aaj tak mujhe nahi pta...
Aakhiri baat jo mujhe nahi pata magar mere baare mai dusre log kehte hai ki meri kahi baatain sach ho jaati hai... Jaise ki Dadi kaam se bahar gayi thi mujhe laddu khane ka man hua toh maine bola aayi laddo khana hai itne mai dadi ander aayi aur unke hathon mai laddo dekh sab chonk gye jo woh mere liye layi thi...
Aise hi bhut si baatain jo mai gaur nahi karta qki mujhe iss cheezon se fark nahi padta... Mai apni masti mai Magan rehta... Aisa nahi tha ki har kahi baat sach jo jati yaa mere paas super power thi balki kabhi kabhi achanak muh se kuch nikal jata jo mere man mai chal raha hota woh sach ho jata tha...
( Kehte hai na din mai kahi ek baat sach ho jati qki jeev par maa saraswati viraj karti hai iss case ko bhi aisa samjh lijiye... Hazam aasani se ho jayega )
Location Government HR school...
Afternoon... Time... 2:30 PM...
Chalte hai meri taraf...Mai bachkar bhag raha tha Sweety mujhe pakadne ke liye peeche bhaag rahi thi qki school mai uski doston ke saamne maine use didi keh diya tha... Toh chaliye dekhte hai aage kya hota hai... Kahani ko mere nazariye se...
Mai... hhhhhh Sweety sorry... hhhh sweety maaf kar de... Hhhhhh ab aur nahi bhaga jaa raha...
Sweety... Hhhh Nandu ke baache tu haath aa ja ek baar mere... Hhhh aaj tujhe nahi chodne waali hhhh ruk Naa...
Mai... hhhhh Pagal hai kyaa... mai nahi ruk raha mujhe pta hai tu mujhe maregi... Hhhhhh
Sweety... hhhh Aacha nahi marungi please ruk jaa dekh mere pair dukhne lage hai... Hhhh ab aur nahi bhaag sakti... Nandu ruk jaa...
Mai... hhhh Mai nahi rukne waala aai ke paas hi jaker rukunga... hhhh unse sikayat karunga teri tu roj mujhe maarti hai... Hhhhhh Terese aachi Dipmi hai mujhe kitna pyaar karti hai...
Sweety... Aahhh ruk jaa Nandu...
Sweety ki aag sun Mai peeche palat kar dekhta hun toh Sweety pessene se lat path mere peeche bhaag rahi thi tabhi mere muh se aachanak nikal jata hai... Sweety sambhal ke...
Aur dhadammmm karke sweety gir padti hai mai bhaagte hue uske paas jata hoon... Usko uthta hun woh mere baal pakad leti hai...
Mai... Aaahhh kya kar rahi hai chod mere baal sweety choddd aaahhh lag rahi hai...
Sweety... Nahi chodungi kya keh raha tha mujhse aachi Dimpi hai woh chudail ki barabri tune mujhse ki... Kya samjhata hai apne aapko... Aaj teri khair nahi...
Mai... Aahhh chod de sweety sorry ab se nahi bolunga promise chod na...
Sweety... Nahi chodungi aaj dekhti hun kon bacahta hai himmat kaise hui Teri dimpi ko merese aacha kehne ki... Aachi tarah se jaanti hun uss kamini ko woh mujhe har waqt chidati rehti hai... Aur tu usko aacha keh raha Aaj teri khair nahi...
Mai... Aacha maaf kar de please lag rahi hai sweety dekh kapde gande ho gaye maa gussa karegi unhe batana padega kya hua... Mai toh bol dunga jo tune kiya jisper badi maa mujhe bacha lengi fir soch le tera kya haal hoga...
Sweety... Mujhe dhamki deta hai ruk tujhe batati hun... Aaj nahi sunne waali kisi ki jo chaahe keh de tu aai se maar kha lungi aur kya...
Mai... Aacha theek hai mere maa sorry promise aaj se tujhe Dimpi se barabri nahi krunga woh chudail waise bhi mujhe pasand nhi harwaqt chipki rehti hai tu toh jaanti hai... Chal khadi ho saare kapde kharab ho gye...
Sweety... Haan toh maine kaha tha kya Tujhse jhagda karne ke liye... Tujhe pta hai na mai kitna pyaar karti tujhse tu har waqt Dimpi kar mujhe pareshan karta hai... Dekh mujhe chot lag gayi khoon bhi aa raha hai...
Mai... ( Pareshan hote hue ) haan yeh toh dikkat ho gayi ek kaam kar uth tu Ghar chalte hai maa ko bol denge gir gayi tu jis chakkar mai kapde kharab ho gaye... Teri patti bhi ho jayegi daant se bhi Bach jayenge...
Sweety... Aaahhhh nahi uth paa rahi Nandu madat kar na...
Mai... ( Use sahara dekar khada karte hue ) kitna khaati hai tu ufff chal jaldi kar ab...
Sweety... Kya kaha tune...
Mai... Kuch nahi woh bass chal na... Maa gussa karengi waise hi kaafi late ho gaya jaldi chalte hai...
Jaha mai Sweety ko lekar ghar jaa raha tha wanhi ghar par kuch aur hi chal raha tha...
Location Basti... Yashoda House'...
Afternoon... Same Time...
Vimala... Beti kitne saal ho gaye mai tujhe bol bolkar thak gayi abhi bhi waqt hai shaadi kar le... mai samjhti hun mai bhi aurat hun kuch jarurat hoti hai sarir ki usko kab tak aise bardast karegi... Aakhir kya dikkat hai...
Yashoda... Maa aap samjhti kyun nahi hai mai aise hi theek hun... Nandu ke saath khush hoon mujhe ab kisi cheez ki chaah nahi hai pyaar krne ke liye didi hai aap hai ek beti bhi hai ab mujhe kuch nahi chahiye...
Vimala... Magar beti...
Yashoda... Please maa... Kuch mat kahiye maanti hun aapki baat ek had tak sahi hai magar maine yeh zindagi khud ke liye chun Li ab mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...
Vimala baat sun dukhi ho jaati hai toh Yashoda uske hath par hath rakh kehti hai...
Yashoda... Maan lo agar kal ko maine shaadi kar li toh mujhe aapko chod kar jana padega Naa jaane woh kaisa hoga kya mai jaise hoon waisa apnayega mujhe... Meri shaadi ko lekar pitaji ne bhi kaafi sapne saza rakhe the ab unke na rehte mai shaadi ka soch bhi nahi sakhti...
Vimala... ( Kuch sochte hue ) Ek baat bAtayegi sach sach... Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...
Yashoda... Isme kya hai maa woh bhut aache hai woh mere liye bhagwan hai unki wajah se aaj jo kuch bhi mai hoon yaha aapke beech...
Vimala... Are waise nahi Pati ke roop mai Tony tujhe kaisa lagta hai...
Yashoda uski baat sun khamosh ho jati hai...
Vimala... Dekh mai yeh nahi keh rahi ki woh bhut aacha hai... Har kisi mai Kami rehti hai magar shayad kahi na kahi woh bhi tumhe pasand karta isliye ab tak usne bhi shaadi nahi ki... Tu kya kehti hai iss baare mai...
Yashoda... Mai kya kahun mai mere dil mai aisa kuch nahi unke liye... Haan maanti hun woh bhut aache hai bhut izzat karti hun unki magar shaadi samjh nahi aata maa pta nahi kyun...
Vimala... Agar tere pita ji ko Tony pasand hota toh tu kya kehti...
Yashoda... Pitaji ki pasand par mai kaise mana kar sakti hoon maa woh jo karte mere aache ke liye hi karte... Lekin woh baad ki baat hai maa abhi yaha nahi toh aap yeh baatain na karen Baachon ke aane ka bhi samay ho gaya hai... Abhi tak aaye kyun nahi mai dekh kar aati hoon...
Yashoda abhi uthne ko hoti hai tabhi use Nandu ki awaaz sunayi deti hai...
Mai.. Baba Maa kaha hai... Dekho Sweety ke chot lag gayi aap unhe bula do... Tab tak mai ise clinic mai le jata hoon...
Yashoda bahar aakar dekhti hai Toh Tony use nazar aata hai jo ek baar use aakhon mai dekh bahar nikal jata hai... Dono ke beech yeh khamoshi ek aam baat thi jayada kaam hone par hi woh baat Kiya karte the magar aaj yeh khamoshi Yashoda ko kuch alag lag rahi thi saath hi Tony ke haav bhaav kher... Woh sab cheez ko darkinaar kar clinic ki taraf chal padti hai...
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