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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Nischal ... jiske bare me abhi dono pariwar yahi jante the ki Nischal aur Jivisha ne bhag kar shadi ki .... ab lo ji ek aur nayi baat ek dum se samne aa gayi.... Nandni aur Nischal ek dusre se pyar karte hain...... Shocked ho kar sab khadey ho gaye....


"Kya.... Kya.... Kya"...... Aschrya me dube sab ke bhaw aur charo ore se bas ek he awaz aa rahi thi...... Nandni ne sab ko apna hath dikhate huye kahne lagi..... "Ek min ruk jao aap sab... issse pahle ki aap sab koi drama shuru karo"..


Nandni ne itna he kaha tha ki Durga devi bich me kud gayi.... chillati hui wo jor se kahne lagi..... "Mar dalungi tujhe... aage jo kuch boli to.... Kya kahna chahti hai, isse pahle ki hum sab koi drama shuru karen usse pahle yahi batana hai na tum bhi iss ladkey ko chahti ho".


Nandni ke papa..... Nandni humare lad pyar ka tum galat fayda utha rahi ho. Jab tumhari shadi pahle se tay ho gayi hai, fir tum ek shadi shuda ladkey ke sath kaise aisa soch bhi sakti ho...


Durga devi.... Upar se wo gunga bahra bhi hai....


Jivisha ki maa Priya.... Kya ye gunga aur bahra bhi hai. Mere to nasib he fute hain.... aakhir tumne iss ladkey me kya dekh liya Jivisha....


Himanshu.... Wahi jo Nandni ne dekha hoga.... Ye aaj kal ki ladkiyan... Kya ho gaya hai tum dono ko....


Nandni..... Enough haan.... tab se aap sab kuch bhi bole ja rahe ho....


Pata nahi Nandni ki baat sun kar Durga devi ko kya hote ja raha tha. Aisa laga jaise uss par bhut sawar ho, wo to kuch sun'na he nahi chahti thi.... Nandni ki baat par ek baar fir Durga devi chillayi.....


Nischal..... Tanik sabhya logon ki tarah pesh aaeye, aur mamle ko shanti se suljhaeye....


Nischal bol bhi sakta hai.... Ek baar fir un sab ke chehre par hairani thi, jo ye samjhte the ki Nischal gunga hai... Hairani bhari aakhen... aur sab ghur rahe the Nischal ko.....


Tabhi Ansh bola..... Achha thik hai main ja raha hun... tum khush rahna Nandni....


Nandni..... Dr agar abhi tum bhage to main tumhara opration kar dungi.... chup-chap idhar khadey raho aur meri baton ka jabaw do.....


Ansh ruk gaya aur Nandni ki ore dekhne laga.... Nandni pure gusse me chillati hui puchhi.... "Jahil kahin ke tumhe kaise pata ki main iss se pyar karti hun"


Ansh.... Tum he to kah rahi thi iss ladke ko, "ki tumhe pyar ka matlab nahi pata"... to isne bhi to kaha ki tum isse pyar ka matlab samjhao to ye samjh jayega... aur tum raji ho gayi....


Nandni gusse me bilbilayi Ansh ka collor pakrti kahne lagi..... "Aadhi baat sun kar koi bhi natija nikaloge... teri to... chalo hospital main tumhara opration wahin karungi... baki ke public dhyan se sun le, mera aur Nischal ke bich kuch bhi pyar mohabbat jaisa nahi hai.... ab agar yadi dobara kisi ne iss bare me kuch kaha to main batati hun"...


Priya..... Thik hai samjh gayi tumhari baat, par iss pagal ka main kya karun... bhag kar shadi kar li.. hume bhi to bata sakti thi... upar se kaise-kaise isne jhut bole...


Nandni.... Uncle aap sab bhi over react kar rahe ho.... Dekho jarra Nischal ko ek dum perfect hai Jivisha ke liye....


Himanshu.... Jivisha hum kya itne gair the ki tum ne shadi se bhagna sahi samjha, par hume ek baar bhi kuch batayi nahi... hum kya 80's ke maa-baap hain...


Sare tamase ki jar Jivisha... jo ab tak bilkul shant chup-chap, iss chidiyaghar type wale mahol ko ander he ander enjoy kar rahi thi, apne papa ke baat par bol pari...


"Papa meri Nandu se baat hui thi.... aap sab chahte the ki main shadi karun, idhar main aur Nandu chahti thi apna Mca complete karna... Mamla yahin fasa tha aur tab maine Nandni se baat ki"....


Jivisha ke muh se apna naam sun kar Nandni ke kaan khadey ho gaye.... ajib si hansi thi... chehre par sikan aur hoton par mukaan..... "Jivisha.. tu chal side me.. mujhe bhi to bata jarra apni kya baat hui".....


Itna bolte-bolte Nandni, Jivisha ke karib aayi aur kano me fus-fusyi.... "Kamini apne problem se nikalne ke liye mujhe mat fasa"....


Durga devi... Nandni tum kya khusar-fusar kar rahi hai... bolne de usse...


Jivisha.... Kuch nahi aunty... Nandni thodi dari hui hai, kyonki hum dono ki ek jaisi haalat hai....


Nandni ke aakhon me aashu nahi the, baki aane wali musibat ko bhapte huye wo ander se thunak rahi thi... aur usse bara man kar raha tha ki wo abhi Jivisha ka gala daba de...


Priya.... Puri baat batao....


Jivisha.... Puri baat ye hai ki Nandni bhi aage padhna chahti thi aur main bhi... Nandni ne bhi ladka pasand kar rakha tha aur maine bhi... Nandni ko bhi abhi shadi nahi karni thi aur mujhe bhi... Par aap sab ne koi rasta nahi chhora.... maine Nandni se baat ki... sara mamla usse bataya.... pahle to boli ki main ghar me sab sach-sach bata dun ....


Himanshu.... Haan sahi he to kah rahi thi... tumne bataya kyon nahi...


Jivisha.... Kyonki aap ko bata deti ki main kisi aur se pyar karti hun to aap tab bhi meri shadi karwate bhale wo ladka Nischal he kyon na hota... isliye Nandni ne finally suggest kiya bhag jao...


Nandni bari si aakhen kiye Jivisha ko dekhne lagi... aur pichhe se ek baar fir Durga devi ke chillane ki awaz aa gayi....


Priya.... Shant ho jaeye Durga ji.... Nandni ka ye naam le rahi hai.... Nandni ne kuch na bhi kaha hota to bhi ye bhagti he. Main iski maa hun aur isse achhe se janti hun.... (fir Jivisha se kahne lagi) Achha, Nandni ne tumhe kaha bhag jao aur tum bhag gayi... par tumhe to shadi se inkaar tha na, fir isse shadi kyon ki ...


Jivisha..... Kya bataun maa... Shadi na karna tha isliye bhagi, par kismat... Nischal lagbhag kud he gaya tha train ke samne, yadi maine haan nahi kaha hota.....


Durga devi.... Tabhi main kahun ye bhag kar sidha yahan kyon aa gayi.... Main aap sab se manfi chahti hun, ki mere bachi ki wajah se ye sab hua...



Priya.... Nandni ne kya kiya wo mujhe pata nahi par aap bilkul na chinta karem Durga ji, kyonki meri jo nautanki beti hai uss ki baton par hume kabhi yakin nahi hota. Waise bhi ye to bache hain nadaniyan karte rahte hain, par ek baat main aap ko bhi kahna chahungi.... jaisa meri beti ne kiya waisa aap ki beti na kare.... inn se puch lijiye aur inhe padhne dijiye... kabhi socha na tha padhne ke liye itna hungama hoga....


Thode dukh ke he sath he sahi par sab ne aakhirkar Nischal aur Jivisha ka rista swikar kar he liya. Durga devi ki jid par Jivisha ki puri family ek din ki mehmaan nawaji ko swikaar kar liya....


Nandni ke kandhe par banduk chala kar Jivisha khud to bach gayi par usse fasa diya. Aur fasaya bhi kaisa.... fir se padhai.... Jab se Jivisha ne ye bomb phoda tha, Nandni uss se akele me milne ke liye betab thi.... Par Jivisha hamesa kisi na kisi ke pichhe chhipi he rahi.....


Bahut mauke talase Nandni ne, par Jivisha hath na aayi.... agle din Jivisha ko le kar uski family wapas Pune rawana ho gayi..... raste bhar Nischal ko Jivisha ki family ke tarah-tarah ke sawalon ko jhelna para....


Bechare ki haalat.... kya jabaw de unke sawalon ka... aur sawal bhi aise ki Nischal unka kya jabaw deta.... Uss ki chuppi, aur dher sara bak-bak Jivisha ka.... Kisi tarah se jabaw bana kar aakhirkar ghar walon ko santust kar he diya Jivisha ne...


Finally sab ghar pahunch chuke the.... Sab log ghar me pahunche.... Nischal sab se pichhe khada tha..... tabhi chahkti hui ek awaz hall me gunji.... "Wowww, Jivisha ne shadi kar liya... Kahan hai mere jiju"...


Sab log side hat gaye aur sab se pichhe Nichal khara tha..... Nischal ki najar jab uss ladki par gayi... wo bas ek tak dekhta he rah gaya.... Wo usse dekhne pura kho sa gaya... waise wo ladki thi he aisi .... jaise har jawan dilon ki dharkan ho... jo bhi ladka usse dekhe bas deewana ho jaye.....


Idhar... Apini aur Josefer..


Dono khoji aur janwar ke wapas laut kar aane ke baad Apini aur Josefer aapas me charcha karte huye..


Josefer.... Apini, Malkia ki shakti humare soch se bhi pare hain .... par ek baat jo samajh me nahi aayi.... Aakhir wo ladka kaun tha jo itni tej daur raha tha.... Uspar humla karne ke liye viman ko 8km dur rokna para aur itni duri hone ke bawjoood bus pal bhar ka samay mila humle ke liye.


Apini.... Koi idea nahi, par hume bahut safai ke sath sari baton ka pata lagana hoga.... aur sath me Malkia par najar bhi deni hogi, unke bare me bina jane, unke karib jana khatarnak hai....


Josefer.... Main uske ghar me uska pet ban kar ghusne ki kosis karta hun, aur sari baton ka pata lagata hun...


Apini.... Haan ye sahi rahega.... Aur main to ye kahta hun... yadi ho sake to uss ladkey ko wahin mar dena....


Josefer.... Chinta mat karo, main ek-ek kar ke Malkia ke pure pariwar ko he tod dunga. Taki jab wo tanha ho jaye fir hum hi unke eklaute sahara ho.
 

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Pune.. Jivisha Ka Ghar…


Sab log side hat gaye aur sab se pichhe Nichal khara tha..... Nischal ki najar jab uss ladki par gayi... wo bas ek tak dekhta he rah gaya.... Wo usse dekhne pura kho sa gaya... waise wo ladki thi he aisi .... jaise har jawan dilon ki dharkan ho... jo bhi ladka usse dekhe bas deewana ho jaye.....


Najren kewal Nischal ki he nahi balki ek najar aur thi jo lagatar uss ladki ko ghure ja rahi thi, aur wo thi uski bahan Jivisha ki najar..... Bare chacha ki beti, jo Aurangabad me rahti hai.... Naam Kasak Singh Rajput....


Jivisha, Kasak ko dekh kar do baar apni aakhen mizi.... "Sach me Kasak he hai"....


Tabtak Kasak, Nischal ke pass pahunch chuki thi, aur apna hath aage badha kar kahne lagi.... "Hello, jiju... hello"


Nischal jaise apne dhyan se jaga ho..... wo bhi hath milate huye "hello" kahne laga....


Kasak.... By the way aap kahan khoye the jiju....


Nischal.... Bas aap ko dekh raha tha, aap ka chehra dekh kar dang rah gaya... mere kisi apne se bahut he milti-julti hai...


Kasak..... Ishhh, Jiju line mar rahe ho kya... aisi lines pahle bhi sun chuki hun...


Nischal.... Ha ha ha... ab itna akarshit karne wala surat payi hain, compliments to milegi he na.


Kasak.... Kya baat hai jiju, aap to kafi fast nikle....


Nischal.... Main to fast hun, par tumhari bahan itni slow kaise ho gayi.... dekho kaise tumhe he ghure ja rahi hai.. Dono ke bich kahin koi chemistry to nahi....


Kasak.... Hehe, Jiju... rahne do aap ko iss chemistry ko samjhne ke liye flashback me jana hoga...


Nischal.... Itne logon ke bich flashback me jana sahi hoga kya....


Kasak..... Oh to aap ko flashback dekhna hai. Sidha bolon na flashback dekhna hai, dusron ki chinta kyon karte ho.... Aap bas flashback dekho... baki public ko pause mode par kar dete hain....


Flashback start.....


Aurangabad ka ek gawn.... Gawn me bara sa ghar.... Ghar me Ram aur Shyam jaise do bhai.... Sudhanshu aur Himanshu....


Nischal..... Wait, wait.... bahut pichhe se flashback ho gaya... thoda fast forward kar ke main scene par lao na.....


Kasak.... Ok ... aap flashback par concentrate karo.... maine forward kar diya hai....


Flashback resume....


Vidhyapith ka college.... College me 2 bahne... Kasak aur Jivisha.... Kasak aur Jivisha dono ne Bca me sath admission liya.... Kasak yani Jivisha ki humdum.. humrahi uski sathi....


Jivisha to iss bholi duniya se anjaan thi... Godmata ki tarah usse har kadam par duniya se ru-baru karwane wali Kasak... Papa ki cigarette chori kar ke pina sikhane wali Kasak.... papa ke kamre se wishkey gayab kar ke pina sikhane wali Kasak ... har situation ko kaise handel karna hai sikhane wali Kasak....


Nischal.... To kya usse lesbian bhi Kasak ne he banaya.....


Kasak.... Jiju, public pause mode par hai, lekin bahri nahi... gharwalon ke pass aisi baten na karo, baki aap ki sali hun... yadi aap ko adult baten nahi aati to aap ko bhi main ustad bana dungi... filhaal abhi flashback par concentrate kijiye....


Nischa.... Haa dono bahan ke pyar ko to samjh gaya, ab aage kya hua...


Kasak.... Aage khud he dekho..... "Barshat ki ek raat thi.... bijli joron se kadak rahi thi"...


Nischa..... Ab kya horror scene dal rahi ho....


Kasak.... Nahi re jiju... abhi ladai ka scene hai na to mahol ko thrilling bana rahi hun.....


"Wahh... ye to pagalpan me Jivisha ki maa lagti hai"..... "Haan haan mahol suit kar raha hai Kasak ji aage bataeye na"....


Kasak..... Haan jiju suno... par iss baar bich me mat tokna... pura flashback end karne dena...


"Haan to barsaat ki wo raat thi, aasman me bijli ki tej gar-garahat ho rahi thi.... hum dono bahne daru, chakhna aur murge ke sath baith kar dono DDLJ enjoy kar rahi thi.... SRk sir and kajol... wooo hooo"


"Movie khatam hone ke baad Kasak ek pak uthati puchhne lagi..... "Jisa humare life me ddlj ki story jaisa kuch hua na to tu preeti ka role karna"


Jivisha.... Main kyon preeti ka role karungi.... bhagwan ne mujhe simran ke role ke liye he banaya hai... tu ban ja preeti .....


"Bas behosi ke aalam me dono bahno me SRk ko le kar pahli baar toofani jhagra hua... aur pahli baar hum dono bahne ek dusre ki dushman bani.... dono jab khadi thi to bich me sepration wala bijli bhi kadka tha"......


"Gusse me dono bahne alag hui thi. Kasak yani guru ji Jivisha ki... isliye guru hone ke nate Kasak apni mahanta ki ore ek kadam aage badhati, Jivisha ko samjhane subah-subah pahunchi.... aur jab wo pahunnchi to".....


Nischal, jo khoya tha story me..... "Pause kahe le liya aage batao na"...


Kasak.... Jiju aap to aas-pass dhyan bhi nahi dete, public pause mode se active mode par chali aayi hai.....


Tabhi un dono ke pass Jivisha pahunchi aur Nischal ko dekhte huye, Kasak se kahne lagi.... "Tum ne to bhism pratigya liya tha ki tum yahan nahi aaogi... kya hua apni baat par kayam na rah saki".....


Kasak bhi Nischal ki ore dekhti hui kahne lagi...... "Bhagodey ab mujhe moral sikhayenge.... my life is all about family... aur main eklouti sali ka farz nibhane, apne aatmsamman ko tak par rakh kar yahan jiju ke liye aayi hun"......


Jivisha..... Ye kyon nahi kahti ki yahan muft ki dawat urrane aayi ho....


Kasak jor se chillati.... Chhote papa... chhoti maa dekho aap ki ladli kya kah rahi hai, main aap ke yahan muft ki dawat uarrane aayi hun....


Nischal, pure hall me dekhne laga.... pura pariwar jaise Kasak ki baton ko suna he na ho, sab apne-apne kamo me lage huye rah gaye... Kasak ek baar aur jor se chillayi ... lekin iss baar bhi kisi ne kuch respond nahi kiya....


Kasak... Sorry jiju... aap ka aur mera sath yahin tak ka tha, ab main ja rahi hun....


Tabhi Ravi apna kaam karte huye he kahne laga..... "Kasak emotion me bah kar ghar se jane ka faisla mat karna, warna bade papa bhi tujhe ghar me ghusne nahi denge... bhul gayi kya kah kar yahan aayi ho"...


Kasak.... Koi baat nahi bhaiya.... jab yahan koi apna he nahi to yahan bhi rah kar kya karungi... main platform par rah kar he padhai kar lungi.... chal urr ja re panchhi, ki ab ye ghar hua begana... yahan koi to mera apna ho... ek jiju hain unhone bhi muh mor liya apne eklauti sali se...


Nischa.... Arre kaisi baten kar rahi hain aap... aur koi begana nahi yahan... please aap apne jiju ke khatir ruk jao...


Kasak... uchhalti hui.... "Sirf jiju ne mujhe roka hai isliye ruk rahi hun... warna main ye baat kabhi nahi bhulungi ki sab ne mujhe ignore kiya tha"....


Jivisha... Haan to ruki kahe hai... apne sath apne jiju ko bhi platform par he rakh lena... sequrity bhi mil jayegi. Isse bhi leti ja....


Kasak.... Chup kar tu... mera ego mat badka... warna sine me dafan raaj ko ugal dungi...


Jivisha..... Maine bhi abhi tak bahut kuch chhipa rakha hai, bahar aa gaya to kahin ki nahi rahegi...


Nischal.... Haan to ek-ek kar ke bolna shuru karo ... main bhi to tum dono ka raaj jaan lun....


Shoking expression ... aur sare ghar wale pichhe mur gaye.... Avinash dur se he chillaya...."Maa jiju ko yahan ki sari rsahme samjha di kya".... Pichhe se Ravi bhi kahne laga.... "Nischal ji, chalo yahan se, main aap ko pure pariwar se introduce karwata hun"....


"Kamal hai, abhi to ye log apne-apne kaam me lage huye the... aisa kya ho gaya jo apna kaam chhor kar idhar itna concentrate karne lage"......


Nischal ko kya pata tha ki usne kya puch liya hai... aur kyon ye log itna react kar rahe hain....


Aizem Planet .... Nischal ka grah .....


Sabaiya ki puri team jo Nischal ko dhundhne gayi thi, wo wapas Aizem grah par laut aayi.... Raat ke waqt Serin ke sath Sabaiya ki meeting....


Serin.... Pura pata bata diya tha, fir bhi sab ko wapas bula liya....


Sabaiya..... Devices kisne activate kiya tha...


Serin.... Maine...


Sabaiya.... Kisne kaha tha uss device ko band kar pana kisi ke vash me nahi....


Serin... Maine...


Sabaiya..... Aur kal wo device kisne band kiya....


Serin.... Ho gaya kabhi-kabhi log muskil bhara kaam bhi sikh jate hain... lekin tumhare pass to uska pata tha na ... device band hua to kya ho gaya tum to uske piche ja sakte the... usse apne rsate se hata sakte the...


Sabaiya..... "Nischal ko koi nahi janta... Koi soch bhi nahi sakta uske bare me ki wo kya kar sakta hai aur kya nahi..... tum logon ne to bas itna he jana hai ki aizem grah ka chota sahzada bas aise he ghumta firta hai jise yahan hone wale ghatnao se koi lena dena nahi"...


"Lekin sabhi logon ke pass kewal adhuri jankari hai... wo mera bhai hai aur main usse bachpan se dekhta aa raha hun.... tumhe kya lagta hai 6 jahaj aur 36 log Nischal ko wahan se khatam kar ke aayenge.... aisa sochna bhi bharam aur bhul hai tumhari" .....


"Jab tum ne kaha ki wo kamjor hai to maine apne sabse satir katilon ka team bana kar bheja tha, lekin Nischal ne wo device band kar ke sabit kar diya.... brahmand me wo kahin bhi rahe kamjor nahi.


"Tum janti bhi ho, west sima se ladai chal rahi thi. Samne west sima ki ek puri tukri, aur Nischal akela. Jab west sima ki wo khunkhar tukri nahi tiki to aage tum soch sakti ho.... uss ke guts, uska caliber, uski planning, kabhi koi nahi samjh sakta. Usse marne ke liye kisi sena ki tukri nahi balki uss ke dimag ko maat dene wala koi chahiye".....


Serin.... Aur sayad aisa koi ho bhi nahi....


Sabaiya.... Galat .... Nischal ke liye ulti ginti shuru ho gayi hai... tum bas uss se contact banaye rakho... jald he tumhe sab kuch pata chal jayega....
 
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Nischal ... jiske bare me abhi dono pariwar yahi jante the ki Nischal aur Jivisha ne bhag kar shadi ki .... ab lo ji ek aur nayi baat ek dum se samne aa gayi.... Nandni aur Nischal ek dusre se pyar karte hain...... Shocked ho kar sab khadey ho gaye....


"Kya.... Kya.... Kya"...... Aschrya me dube sab ke bhaw aur charo ore se bas ek he awaz aa rahi thi...... Nandni ne sab ko apna hath dikhate huye kahne lagi..... "Ek min ruk jao aap sab... issse pahle ki aap sab koi drama shuru karo"..


Nandni ne itna he kaha tha ki Durga devi bich me kud gayi.... chillati hui wo jor se kahne lagi..... "Mar dalungi tujhe... aage jo kuch boli to.... Kya kahna chahti hai, isse pahle ki hum sab koi drama shuru karen usse pahle yahi batana hai na tum bhi iss ladkey ko chahti ho".


Nandni ke papa..... Nandni humare lad pyar ka tum galat fayda utha rahi ho. Jab tumhari shadi pahle se tay ho gayi hai, fir tum ek shadi shuda ladkey ke sath kaise aisa soch bhi sakti ho...


Durga devi.... Upar se wo gunga bahra bhi hai....


Jivisha ki maa Priya.... Kya ye gunga aur bahra bhi hai. Mere to nasib he fute hain.... aakhir tumne iss ladkey me kya dekh liya Jivisha....


Himanshu.... Wahi jo Nandni ne dekha hoga.... Ye aaj kal ki ladkiyan... Kya ho gaya hai tum dono ko....


Nandni..... Enough haan.... tab se aap sab kuch bhi bole ja rahe ho....


Pata nahi Nandni ki baat sun kar Durga devi ko kya hote ja raha tha. Aisa laga jaise uss par bhut sawar ho, wo to kuch sun'na he nahi chahti thi.... Nandni ki baat par ek baar fir Durga devi chillayi.....


Nischal..... Tanik sabhya logon ki tarah pesh aaeye, aur mamle ko shanti se suljhaeye....


Nischal bol bhi sakta hai.... Ek baar fir un sab ke chehre par hairani thi, jo ye samjhte the ki Nischal gunga hai... Hairani bhari aakhen... aur sab ghur rahe the Nischal ko.....


Tabhi Ansh bola..... Achha thik hai main ja raha hun... tum khush rahna Nandni....


Nandni..... Dr agar abhi tum bhage to main tumhara opration kar dungi.... chup-chap idhar khadey raho aur meri baton ka jabaw do.....


Ansh ruk gaya aur Nandni ki ore dekhne laga.... Nandni pure gusse me chillati hui puchhi.... "Jahil kahin ke tumhe kaise pata ki main iss se pyar karti hun"


Ansh.... Tum he to kah rahi thi iss ladke ko, "ki tumhe pyar ka matlab nahi pata"... to isne bhi to kaha ki tum isse pyar ka matlab samjhao to ye samjh jayega... aur tum raji ho gayi....


Nandni gusse me bilbilayi Ansh ka collor pakrti kahne lagi..... "Aadhi baat sun kar koi bhi natija nikaloge... teri to... chalo hospital main tumhara opration wahin karungi... baki ke public dhyan se sun le, mera aur Nischal ke bich kuch bhi pyar mohabbat jaisa nahi hai.... ab agar yadi dobara kisi ne iss bare me kuch kaha to main batati hun"...


Priya..... Thik hai samjh gayi tumhari baat, par iss pagal ka main kya karun... bhag kar shadi kar li.. hume bhi to bata sakti thi... upar se kaise-kaise isne jhut bole...


Nandni.... Uncle aap sab bhi over react kar rahe ho.... Dekho jarra Nischal ko ek dum perfect hai Jivisha ke liye....


Himanshu.... Jivisha hum kya itne gair the ki tum ne shadi se bhagna sahi samjha, par hume ek baar bhi kuch batayi nahi... hum kya 80's ke maa-baap hain...


Sare tamase ki jar Jivisha... jo ab tak bilkul shant chup-chap, iss chidiyaghar type wale mahol ko ander he ander enjoy kar rahi thi, apne papa ke baat par bol pari...


"Papa meri Nandu se baat hui thi.... aap sab chahte the ki main shadi karun, idhar main aur Nandu chahti thi apna Mca complete karna... Mamla yahin fasa tha aur tab maine Nandni se baat ki"....


Jivisha ke muh se apna naam sun kar Nandni ke kaan khadey ho gaye.... ajib si hansi thi... chehre par sikan aur hoton par mukaan..... "Jivisha.. tu chal side me.. mujhe bhi to bata jarra apni kya baat hui".....


Itna bolte-bolte Nandni, Jivisha ke karib aayi aur kano me fus-fusyi.... "Kamini apne problem se nikalne ke liye mujhe mat fasa"....


Durga devi... Nandni tum kya khusar-fusar kar rahi hai... bolne de usse...


Jivisha.... Kuch nahi aunty... Nandni thodi dari hui hai, kyonki hum dono ki ek jaisi haalat hai....


Nandni ke aakhon me aashu nahi the, baki aane wali musibat ko bhapte huye wo ander se thunak rahi thi... aur usse bara man kar raha tha ki wo abhi Jivisha ka gala daba de...


Priya.... Puri baat batao....


Jivisha.... Puri baat ye hai ki Nandni bhi aage padhna chahti thi aur main bhi... Nandni ne bhi ladka pasand kar rakha tha aur maine bhi... Nandni ko bhi abhi shadi nahi karni thi aur mujhe bhi... Par aap sab ne koi rasta nahi chhora.... maine Nandni se baat ki... sara mamla usse bataya.... pahle to boli ki main ghar me sab sach-sach bata dun ....


Himanshu.... Haan sahi he to kah rahi thi... tumne bataya kyon nahi...


Jivisha.... Kyonki aap ko bata deti ki main kisi aur se pyar karti hun to aap tab bhi meri shadi karwate bhale wo ladka Nischal he kyon na hota... isliye Nandni ne finally suggest kiya bhag jao...


Nandni bari si aakhen kiye Jivisha ko dekhne lagi... aur pichhe se ek baar fir Durga devi ke chillane ki awaz aa gayi....


Priya.... Shant ho jaeye Durga ji.... Nandni ka ye naam le rahi hai.... Nandni ne kuch na bhi kaha hota to bhi ye bhagti he. Main iski maa hun aur isse achhe se janti hun.... (fir Jivisha se kahne lagi) Achha, Nandni ne tumhe kaha bhag jao aur tum bhag gayi... par tumhe to shadi se inkaar tha na, fir isse shadi kyon ki ...


Jivisha..... Kya bataun maa... Shadi na karna tha isliye bhagi, par kismat... Nischal lagbhag kud he gaya tha train ke samne, yadi maine haan nahi kaha hota.....


Durga devi.... Tabhi main kahun ye bhag kar sidha yahan kyon aa gayi.... Main aap sab se manfi chahti hun, ki mere bachi ki wajah se ye sab hua...



Priya.... Nandni ne kya kiya wo mujhe pata nahi par aap bilkul na chinta karem Durga ji, kyonki meri jo nautanki beti hai uss ki baton par hume kabhi yakin nahi hota. Waise bhi ye to bache hain nadaniyan karte rahte hain, par ek baat main aap ko bhi kahna chahungi.... jaisa meri beti ne kiya waisa aap ki beti na kare.... inn se puch lijiye aur inhe padhne dijiye... kabhi socha na tha padhne ke liye itna hungama hoga....


Thode dukh ke he sath he sahi par sab ne aakhirkar Nischal aur Jivisha ka rista swikar kar he liya. Durga devi ki jid par Jivisha ki puri family ek din ki mehmaan nawaji ko swikaar kar liya....


Nandni ke kandhe par banduk chala kar Jivisha khud to bach gayi par usse fasa diya. Aur fasaya bhi kaisa.... fir se padhai.... Jab se Jivisha ne ye bomb phoda tha, Nandni uss se akele me milne ke liye betab thi.... Par Jivisha hamesa kisi na kisi ke pichhe chhipi he rahi.....


Bahut mauke talase Nandni ne, par Jivisha hath na aayi.... agle din Jivisha ko le kar uski family wapas Pune rawana ho gayi..... raste bhar Nischal ko Jivisha ki family ke tarah-tarah ke sawalon ko jhelna para....


Bechare ki haalat.... kya jabaw de unke sawalon ka... aur sawal bhi aise ki Nischal unka kya jabaw deta.... Uss ki chuppi, aur dher sara bak-bak Jivisha ka.... Kisi tarah se jabaw bana kar aakhirkar ghar walon ko santust kar he diya Jivisha ne...


Finally sab ghar pahunch chuke the.... Sab log ghar me pahunche.... Nischal sab se pichhe khada tha..... tabhi chahkti hui ek awaz hall me gunji.... "Wowww, Jivisha ne shadi kar liya... Kahan hai mere jiju"...


Sab log side hat gaye aur sab se pichhe Nichal khara tha..... Nischal ki najar jab uss ladki par gayi... wo bas ek tak dekhta he rah gaya.... Wo usse dekhne pura kho sa gaya... waise wo ladki thi he aisi .... jaise har jawan dilon ki dharkan ho... jo bhi ladka usse dekhe bas deewana ho jaye.....


Idhar... Apini aur Josefer..


Dono khoji aur janwar ke wapas laut kar aane ke baad Apini aur Josefer aapas me charcha karte huye..


Josefer.... Apini, Malkia ki shakti humare soch se bhi pare hain .... par ek baat jo samajh me nahi aayi.... Aakhir wo ladka kaun tha jo itni tej daur raha tha.... Uspar humla karne ke liye viman ko 8km dur rokna para aur itni duri hone ke bawjoood bus pal bhar ka samay mila humle ke liye.


Apini.... Koi idea nahi, par hume bahut safai ke sath sari baton ka pata lagana hoga.... aur sath me Malkia par najar bhi deni hogi, unke bare me bina jane, unke karib jana khatarnak hai....


Josefer.... Main uske ghar me uska pet ban kar ghusne ki kosis karta hun, aur sari baton ka pata lagata hun...


Apini.... Haan ye sahi rahega.... Aur main to ye kahta hun... yadi ho sake to uss ladkey ko wahin mar dena....


Josefer.... Chinta mat karo, main ek-ek kar ke Malkia ke pure pariwar ko he tod dunga. Taki jab wo tanha ho jaye fir hum hi unke eklaute sahara ho.
ek taraf nischal ke muh se shabd kya nikle sab ke sab hairan padesaan... upor se nandu pe hi shaq karne lage sabhi... woh toh achha hua ki nandu ne samay rahte baat ko sambhal li.. warna jaane drama lober family wale jane kya se kya soch lete....

sab baatein clear toh huyi par abhi adhuri... aur sabse badi baat jivu ne nandu k kandhe pe bandhuk rakhke chalayi... wah kya chaal chali ain mauke par.. I like it.... superb :D
bechari bholi bhali masoom si nandu :verysad:

hmm.... so yeh alien logis khatarnak planning ko anjaam dene ko hai.. is apni ki kya aukat ki nischal chu bhi sake.. marenge sab ke sab marange..
Bahot badi galti kar rahe hai yeh log
Khair let's see what happens next
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mahadev31

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maja aa gaya ... jivisha ka past jaanne ki baat karte hi sab saavdhan ho gaye matlab kuch to bahut bada raaj hai uske past me ??.. aur kasak aur jivisha ka flashback bhi majedaar tha ??..
aisa laga nishchal ko paka rahi hai kasak ....
 

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josepher to jivisha ke liye uske poore pariwar ko maarna chahta hai aur 1st target nishchal hi hai ...
aur uske apne log bhi use maarna chahte hai ,serin bhi dhokhebaaj hai ,,,,, dekhte hai nishchal kaise bachata hai sabko ?....
 

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Pune.. Jivisha Ka Ghar…


Sab log side hat gaye aur sab se pichhe Nichal khara tha..... Nischal ki najar jab uss ladki par gayi... wo bas ek tak dekhta he rah gaya.... Wo usse dekhne pura kho sa gaya... waise wo ladki thi he aisi .... jaise har jawan dilon ki dharkan ho... jo bhi ladka usse dekhe bas deewana ho jaye.....


Najren kewal Nischal ki he nahi balki ek najar aur thi jo lagatar uss ladki ko ghure ja rahi thi, aur wo thi uski bahan Jivisha ki najar..... Bare chacha ki beti, jo Aurangabad me rahti hai.... Naam Kasak Singh Rajput....


Jivisha, Kasak ko dekh kar do baar apni aakhen mizi.... "Sach me Kasak he hai"....


Tabtak Kasak, Nischal ke pass pahunch chuki thi, aur apna hath aage badha kar kahne lagi.... "Hello, jiju... hello"


Nischal jaise apne dhyan se jaga ho..... wo bhi hath milate huye "hello" kahne laga....


Kasak.... By the way aap kahan khoye the jiju....


Nischal.... Bas aap ko dekh raha tha, aap ka chehra dekh kar dang rah gaya... mere kisi apne se bahut he milti-julti hai...


Kasak..... Ishhh, Jiju line mar rahe ho kya... aisi lines pahle bhi sun chuki hun...


Nischal.... Ha ha ha... ab itna akarshit karne wala surat payi hain, compliments to milegi he na.


Kasak.... Kya baat hai jiju, aap to kafi fast nikle....


Nischal.... Main to fast hun, par tumhari bahan itni slow kaise ho gayi.... dekho kaise tumhe he ghure ja rahi hai.. Dono ke bich kahin koi chemistry to nahi....


Kasak.... Hehe, Jiju... rahne do aap ko iss chemistry ko samjhne ke liye flashback me jana hoga...


Nischal.... Itne logon ke bich flashback me jana sahi hoga kya....


Kasak..... Oh to aap ko flashback dekhna hai. Sidha bolon na flashback dekhna hai, dusron ki chinta kyon karte ho.... Aap bas flashback dekho... baki public ko pause mode par kar dete hain....


Flashback start.....


Aurangabad ka ek gawn.... Gawn me bara sa ghar.... Ghar me Ram aur Shyam jaise do bhai.... Sudhanshu aur Himanshu....


Nischal..... Wait, wait.... bahut pichhe se flashback ho gaya... thoda fast forward kar ke main scene par lao na.....


Kasak.... Ok ... aap flashback par concentrate karo.... maine forward kar diya hai....


Flashback resume....


Vidhyapith ka college.... College me 2 bahne... Kasak aur Jivisha.... Kasak aur Jivisha dono ne Bca me sath admission liya.... Kasak yani Jivisha ki humdum.. humrahi uski sathi....


Jivisha to iss bholi duniya se anjaan thi... Godmata ki tarah usse har kadam par duniya se ru-baru karwane wali Kasak... Papa ki cigarette chori kar ke pina sikhane wali Kasak.... papa ke kamre se wishkey gayab kar ke pina sikhane wali Kasak ... har situation ko kaise handel karna hai sikhane wali Kasak....


Nischal.... To kya usse lesbian bhi Kasak ne he banaya.....


Kasak.... Jiju, public pause mode par hai, lekin bahri nahi... gharwalon ke pass aisi baten na karo, baki aap ki sali hun... yadi aap ko adult baten nahi aati to aap ko bhi main ustad bana dungi... filhaal abhi flashback par concentrate kijiye....


Nischa.... Haa dono bahan ke pyar ko to samjh gaya, ab aage kya hua...


Kasak.... Aage khud he dekho..... "Barshat ki ek raat thi.... bijli joron se kadak rahi thi"...


Nischa..... Ab kya horror scene dal rahi ho....


Kasak.... Nahi re jiju... abhi ladai ka scene hai na to mahol ko thrilling bana rahi hun.....


"Wahh... ye to pagalpan me Jivisha ki maa lagti hai"..... "Haan haan mahol suit kar raha hai Kasak ji aage bataeye na"....


Kasak..... Haan jiju suno... par iss baar bich me mat tokna... pura flashback end karne dena...


"Haan to barsaat ki wo raat thi, aasman me bijli ki tej gar-garahat ho rahi thi.... hum dono bahne daru, chakhna aur murge ke sath baith kar dono DDLJ enjoy kar rahi thi.... SRk sir and kajol... wooo hooo"


"Movie khatam hone ke baad Kasak ek pak uthati puchhne lagi..... "Jisa humare life me ddlj ki story jaisa kuch hua na to tu preeti ka role karna"


Jivisha.... Main kyon preeti ka role karungi.... bhagwan ne mujhe simran ke role ke liye he banaya hai... tu ban ja preeti .....


"Bas behosi ke aalam me dono bahno me SRk ko le kar pahli baar toofani jhagra hua... aur pahli baar hum dono bahne ek dusre ki dushman bani.... dono jab khadi thi to bich me sepration wala bijli bhi kadka tha"......


"Gusse me dono bahne alag hui thi. Kasak yani guru ji Jivisha ki... isliye guru hone ke nate Kasak apni mahanta ki ore ek kadam aage badhati, Jivisha ko samjhane subah-subah pahunchi.... aur jab wo pahunnchi to".....


Nischal, jo khoya tha story me..... "Pause kahe le liya aage batao na"...


Kasak.... Jiju aap to aas-pass dhyan bhi nahi dete, public pause mode se active mode par chali aayi hai.....


Tabhi un dono ke pass Jivisha pahunchi aur Nischal ko dekhte huye, Kasak se kahne lagi.... "Tum ne to bhism pratigya liya tha ki tum yahan nahi aaogi... kya hua apni baat par kayam na rah saki".....


Kasak bhi Nischal ki ore dekhti hui kahne lagi...... "Bhagodey ab mujhe moral sikhayenge.... my life is all about family... aur main eklouti sali ka farz nibhane, apne aatmsamman ko tak par rakh kar yahan jiju ke liye aayi hun"......


Jivisha..... Ye kyon nahi kahti ki yahan muft ki dawat urrane aayi ho....


Kasak jor se chillati.... Chhote papa... chhoti maa dekho aap ki ladli kya kah rahi hai, main aap ke yahan muft ki dawat uarrane aayi hun....


Nischal, pure hall me dekhne laga.... pura pariwar jaise Kasak ki baton ko suna he na ho, sab apne-apne kamo me lage huye rah gaye... Kasak ek baar aur jor se chillayi ... lekin iss baar bhi kisi ne kuch respond nahi kiya....


Kasak... Sorry jiju... aap ka aur mera sath yahin tak ka tha, ab main ja rahi hun....


Tabhi Ravi apna kaam karte huye he kahne laga..... "Kasak emotion me bah kar ghar se jane ka faisla mat karna, warna bade papa bhi tujhe ghar me ghusne nahi denge... bhul gayi kya kah kar yahan aayi ho"...


Kasak.... Koi baat nahi bhaiya.... jab yahan koi apna he nahi to yahan bhi rah kar kya karungi... main platform par rah kar he padhai kar lungi.... chal urr ja re panchhi, ki ab ye ghar hua begana... yahan koi to mera apna ho... ek jiju hain unhone bhi muh mor liya apne eklauti sali se...


Nischa.... Arre kaisi baten kar rahi hain aap... aur koi begana nahi yahan... please aap apne jiju ke khatir ruk jao...


Kasak... uchhalti hui.... "Sirf jiju ne mujhe roka hai isliye ruk rahi hun... warna main ye baat kabhi nahi bhulungi ki sab ne mujhe ignore kiya tha"....


Jivisha... Haan to ruki kahe hai... apne sath apne jiju ko bhi platform par he rakh lena... sequrity bhi mil jayegi. Isse bhi leti ja....


Kasak.... Chup kar tu... mera ego mat badka... warna sine me dafan raaj ko ugal dungi...


Jivisha..... Maine bhi abhi tak bahut kuch chhipa rakha hai, bahar aa gaya to kahin ki nahi rahegi...


Nischal.... Haan to ek-ek kar ke bolna shuru karo ... main bhi to tum dono ka raaj jaan lun....


Shoking expression ... aur sare ghar wale pichhe mur gaye.... Avinash dur se he chillaya...."Maa jiju ko yahan ki sari rsahme samjha di kya".... Pichhe se Ravi bhi kahne laga.... "Nischal ji, chalo yahan se, main aap ko pure pariwar se introduce karwata hun"....


"Kamal hai, abhi to ye log apne-apne kaam me lage huye the... aisa kya ho gaya jo apna kaam chhor kar idhar itna concentrate karne lage"......


Nischal ko kya pata tha ki usne kya puch liya hai... aur kyon ye log itna react kar rahe hain....


Aizem Planet .... Nischal ka grah .....


Sabaiya ki puri team jo Nischal ko dhundhne gayi thi, wo wapas Aizem grah par laut aayi.... Raat ke waqt Serin ke sath Sabaiya ki meeting....


Serin.... Pura pata bata diya tha, fir bhi sab ko wapas bula liya....


Sabaiya..... Devices kisne activate kiya tha...


Serin.... Maine...


Sabaiya.... Kisne kaha tha uss device ko band kar pana kisi ke vash me nahi....


Serin... Maine...


Sabaiya..... Aur kal wo device kisne band kiya....


Serin.... Ho gaya kabhi-kabhi log muskil bhara kaam bhi sikh jate hain... lekin tumhare pass to uska pata tha na ... device band hua to kya ho gaya tum to uske piche ja sakte the... usse apne rsate se hata sakte the...


Sabaiya..... "Nischal ko koi nahi janta... Koi soch bhi nahi sakta uske bare me ki wo kya kar sakta hai aur kya nahi..... tum logon ne to bas itna he jana hai ki aizem grah ka chota sahzada bas aise he ghumta firta hai jise yahan hone wale ghatnao se koi lena dena nahi"...


"Lekin sabhi logon ke pass kewal adhuri jankari hai... wo mera bhai hai aur main usse bachpan se dekhta aa raha hun.... tumhe kya lagta hai 6 jahaj aur 36 log Nischal ko wahan se khatam kar ke aayenge.... aisa sochna bhi bharam aur bhul hai tumhari" .....


"Jab tum ne kaha ki wo kamjor hai to maine apne sabse satir katilon ka team bana kar bheja tha, lekin Nischal ne wo device band kar ke sabit kar diya.... brahmand me wo kahin bhi rahe kamjor nahi.


"Tum janti bhi ho, west sima se ladai chal rahi thi. Samne west sima ki ek puri tukri, aur Nischal akela. Jab west sima ki wo khunkhar tukri nahi tiki to aage tum soch sakti ho.... uss ke guts, uska caliber, uski planning, kabhi koi nahi samjh sakta. Usse marne ke liye kisi sena ki tukri nahi balki uss ke dimag ko maat dene wala koi chahiye".....


Serin.... Aur sayad aisa koi ho bhi nahi....


Sabaiya.... Galat .... Nischal ke liye ulti ginti shuru ho gayi hai... tum bas uss se contact banaye rakho... jald he tumhe sab kuch pata chal jayega....
Finally kasak ne entry le hi li.. btw saare fasad ki jad yahin hai kahani ki suruwat se ant tak... iski bewaakufiyo ki wajah se... are :cmouth:
Lo ek aur drama.. yeh kasak sach mein ek drama queen hi hai.. kaise mod de de ke flashback suna rahi hai... yaar jivu bahot badki huyi hai ispar shayad ek jordaar jhagda ho..
Shoking expression ... aur sare ghar wale pichhe mur gaye.... Avinash dur se he chillaya...."Maa jiju ko yahan ki sari rsahme samjha di kya".... Pichhe se Ravi bhi kahne laga.... "Nischal ji, chalo yahan se, main aap ko pure pariwar se introduce karwata hun"....
ab kya hua... kahin koi galti toh nahin kar baithta nischal...
Hmm... Nischal ka bhai thik hi kah raha hai.. nischal The great One hai.. baki sab chai kam pani hai... dhundhte rah jaoge par milega nahi, jab tak woh na chahe...
Khair let's see what happens next
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