Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

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Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[nain11ster]

Update:-16 ​

Surpmarich apni purn gatividhi ko pure jor par laga chuka tha, matr uss chij ki talash me jo Drak Universe se bahar aaya tha...


Idhar Nischal, apni bahan Serin ke sath 100 bacchon ko lekar Aizem ki pashchimi seema se Wishper Planet ke ore nikla tha. Dark Universe ke Dakshni seema se laga yah aakhri planet hone ke karan yahan par insani sabhyta nahi basti thi.


Iss grah par jo bhi tha wo kewal prakritik aur prakriti hi inka srijan karti thi. Aizem ki seema se 4 din ki duri par aur raste me takriban 28 planet gujarte the...


Serin ke sath uski niji surakha viman bhi thik uske pichhe chal rahi thi. Jisme 100 worrier ki team thi. Sath me anya crew aur team member...


3 din ki yatra puri kar'ke dono bhai-bahan Dark Universe ke dakshini seema ke ore badh rahe the… Bacche udham chokdi macha rahe the aur dono (Serin aur Nischal) Medical area me the, jahan Serin leti hui thi aur Nischal screen dekh raha tha…


"Mujhe to lagta hai ye Sabaiyya aur Nova ka kiya dhara hai. Pata hi nahi chal raha dimag ke ander kya gadbadi kar gaye hain"… Nischal screen dekhte huye kahne laga..


Serin apni jagah se uth'kar, wardrobe se kapde nikalti… "Sabaiyya kahan se karega, aur uska doctor Parache bhi kabka maara gaya. Upar se jab hum laute to agli subah hi aham saal ki yaad blank thi"..


Nischal:- Haan to ho sakta hai biti raat hi kaam kar gaye ho.. Jo image footage hai uss se bhi chhed chhad kar diye ho.... Ek baar pata chal jaye ki ye karstani kiski hai, usse to main..


Serin:- Tu faltu ke logon ke bare me sochega to natija kabhi nahi niklega... Upar se Viggo viman kho diya... Wo bhi khone ki chij thi.. Jaal mahal se jyada wahan ka medical advanced tha.. upar se pata na tu prithvi par wahan ki technology ke sath kitna upgrade kiya hoga.. Main to kahti hun tu prithvi par he dekh, wahin chhod aaya hai Viggo viman.


Nischal:- Main sanrakshak niti follow kar raha hun... To sawal hi nahi hota ki jahan meri sacchi chahat hogi, wahan main Viggo viman ko chhod aaun... Taki meri gair maujoodgi me koi meri Sacchi premika ko pareshan kare...


Serin:- Screen me ghusne se kuch nahi milega. 5 mahine ho gaye yahi sab roj-roj karte.. tu kapde pahan…


Nischal:- Haan ab to doctor Sule ka hi bharosa hai...


Serin, samne para ek chaku Nischal ke ore badi teji se fenkte huye.… "Ussi ke chakkar me tu prithvi nahi ja raha hai.… Kab se kah rahi hun, ja wahan Viggo viman na bhi mila to Jivisha se to mil lega... Prithvi vale kisi dusre ke grah nahi jate hain pagal aur ho sakta hai khoyi memory ka raaj wahin ho...


Nischal:- Mujhe bhi pata hai. Lekin Madhya rastra me shanti ke baad tumne bhi kartavya se muh moda aur maine bhi. Laute to yahan Mahavinashi (Uttari Rastra ka shashak) ne Purv, Paschim, Dakhin rastr tak ko yudh ke liye protsahit kar chuka tha.. Mujhe yudh nahi chahiye shanti chahiye…


Serin, gusse me Nischal ke naak par itna tej mukka mari ki naak se khun nikal aaya.…. "Yahan se laut'kar tu jodi banayega. Lobhu ke sath mil'kar mai shanti varta kar lungi aur tu 10 din baad prithvi ke liye niklega"…


Nischal, apna naak saaf karte.… "Lekin Jivisha meri sachi chahat hai"…


Serin:- Tu na kuch-kuch mand buddhi ka ho raha hai… bhola tha, masoom tha, duniyadari ka gyan nahi tha tab bhi tu dimag se itna sust nahi tha…


Nischal:- Ab aisa kyon kah rahi ho..


Serin:- Aur nahi to kya kahun Nischal... Chakr niti... Kisi samuday ka patan ho to usse kayi mishrit jodi bana'kar apne samuday ko sanrakshit karne ki pahli uttardayitv banta hai..


Nischal:- Lekin ye to Dakshat samuday ki niti hai na...


Serin:- Ji to karta hai gala ghont dun... Dakshat samuday ki niti thi isliye Dakshat samuday jivit hai... Aur Viggo vilupt ho gaye...


Nischal:- Sache mohabbat ke viyog me to mai bhi chala jaunga...


Serin:- Aisa kuch nahi hoga... Jivisha ke sath mishrit jodi hai teri pagal… tu Viggo hai wo nahi... Sacha jodi ban'ne ke baad tu chupke se apni purani jodi ko...


Nischal:- Purani jodi ko kya...


Serin:- Wahi jo tu soch raha hai.. Saririk sukh dete rahna..


Nischal:- Nahi ye anaitik hai aur dhoka bhi..


Serin:- To tujhe kya har chij thali me pados kar denge... Achha tu kisi ko bhi dhoka mat de... Main unke sukh suvidha ka intzam kar dungi... Aur bhul mat tujhme bij ek Dakshat ka hai.. Isliye chakr niti apna, jodi bana.. apna samuday sanrakshit kar… Jodi ban'ne se purn shanti prastav mai le aaungi... Aur uske baad tu pritvi ja raha hai...


Nischal:- Wo Sule ne 2 mahine aur maange...


Serin:- Us Sule ko main suli par chadha dungi…. Ab agar tu nahi maana to mai khud prithvi jaungi...


Nischal:- Teri har shart manjoor hai... Lekin shanti varta smapan hone ke baad tu mere sath nahi jayegi...


Serin:- Teri buddhi ka karishma mai dekh chuki hun.. Apni buddhi bhi dekh chuki hun... Aaye badlav ki kahani par gaur karwaun... Humne aaj tak kisi ko marne ke udeshya se koi nirman nahi kiya... Surwat ke 2 mahine me aisa kamal ka nirman tha ki pura Aizem ko gayab kar deta... Wo to Lobhu ne hastchhep kiya, aur aaj kya hai... Hum dono ko hi usne pratibandhit kar diya...
Jaan se maarna tumhara antim nirnay hota tha. Master Nischal aaj kal maar kar lash se baat karte hain... Dekh main tujhe akele pritvi nahi jane de sakti... Tujhse milne jab tere sahar aa rahi thi tab ek ladka tere upar hans diya... Main ussi pal uska gala katne wali thi.... Bacche the sath me isliye khud ko roki... Main to rok bhi leti hun, tera kanjar to rukte-rukte bhi aadha chid chuka hota...



Nischal:- Isliye tune system feeding karke mere dimag me hi donload kar diya hai.… Jab bhi khanjar hath lagaun to kano me record bajta hai... Yaad rakho jaan lene ke baad tum wapas pran nahi dal sakte sharir me... Isliye jaan lene ki sochna bhi mat...


Serin:- Haan to aur kya karun... Ye mere bhi kano me bajta hai jab mai blade ko hath lagati hun... Sach to yah hai, jo bhi ho raha hai, wo bhuli yaad ki kadi hai. Ye sab ussi ka natija hai aur hum yahan bus din kaat rahe hain...


Nischal:- Thik hai tu jaisa chahe waisa hi hoga... Abhi khush na...


Serin chehre par shant bhav laati… "Haan Khush"…


"Pagal kahin ki"…. Kahte huye Nischal ne Serin ki hatheli par ek nayab sikka rakh'kar uske upar hath rakhte.… "Vachanvaddh hota hun ki iss dimagi samsya se niklne tak tunhari hi baten chalegi, aur wo main manuga"…


Muskaan ki lahar Serin ke chehre par thi. Wo Nichal ko chumti hui uske gale lag gayi aur jod se bhinchti hui uske gale ko chumti.… "Pahunch'kar jalsa karenge… Mahavinashi ki Judwaa mubarak ho"…


Nischal, jhatke ke sath alag hote.… "Jodi banane ki baat hui thi, ye to jodiyan hain"…


Serin:- 4 gol matol tere jaise ladke honge... Dono judwaa ke judwaa bacche. Kam mehnat me jyada natije..


Nischal:- Tabhi tune aaj tak kabhi nahi bataya ki jodi kiske sath ban rahi hai.... Kabhi socha hai, jodi yadi tooti to uske dushparinam kitne ghatak honge... Waise bhi Mahavinashi ke bete Avinashvi ko humne hi maara tha...


Serin:- Tujhe yaad hai kya, kab aur kaise mara???


Nischal:- Nahi...


Serin:- To rahne de na uss baat ko... Tu to bus Aizem ke Uttri rajya ki khubsurat sahjadiyon ke sapne dekh aur rajniti mujh par chhod de... Yudhh ke sabse bade karan ko hi mutthi me daboch rahi hun, baki sab to pahle bhi sidhe the, unhe sidha karne me kitna waqt lagega..


Nischal:- Tu aur teri rajniti.... Sapne tu saja, main chala bacchon ke pass...


"Ruk, sath me chalte hain"…


Serin aaj kuch jyada hi khush thi. Mukhya hall me pahunchte hi usne khushkhabri bhi announce kar dee. Sabhi logon ke bich dono baithe huye the. Hansi khusi ka mohol chal raha tha, tabhi suchna sachar pranali par ek anjaana sandesh aaya...


Nischal:- Serin koi humse sampark karne ki kosis kar raha hai...


Serin:- Desert planet se kaun hume sampark kar sakta hai... Kahin koi chhal to nahi...


Nischal:- Swabhavik hai... Ya fir koi fasa bhi to ho sakta hai...


Serin:- Kya kahte ho fir...


Nischal:- Passage jod do dono viman ke... 30 logon ki team ke sath hum Desert Planet utarte hain, baki dusra viman jab tak Wishper ki ore badhega...


Serin ne turant dusre viman se sampark kiya. Wahan se bhi yahi suchna mili ki koi strong signal bhej raha hai, lekin massage decode nahi ho pa raha hai...


Serin ne dono viman ke external passage ko jodne tatha us viman me 30 worrior ko chhod'kar baki sab iss viman me aakar aage ki yatra karenge, aisa hukum de dee...


Kuch hi der me external passage joda ja raha tha. Kaam pura hote hi dono viman ka darwaja kula. Jaise hi dono viman ka mukhya darwaja khula thik ussi waqt ek anjaana viman kafi teji se unke karib se gujra.


Wo jitni teji se gujra uss bhi kahin tej wo 2 missile girate huye gujra. Dono missile itne karib se chhode gaye ki anti-missile jab tak uss missile ho hawa me maar'kar niche girati. Anti-mussile aur missile ki takkar thik bahari deewar se ho gayi.


Pura viman hi chhatigrast ho gaya. 80% viman damage ho chuka tha aur ab kewal aur kewal emergency exit hi rasta bacha tha. Palak jhapakte hi Nischal ne sabhi bachon ko emergency panel me daalkar Desert planet feka. Itni hi der me Nischal ke viman ke sare crew member ek chhote se steel ball me sawar ho chuke the.


Nischal ne turat hi sabko exit kiya. Sabko niche bhej'kar, nichal ne puri suchna pranali ka backup le'kar jaroori sabhi device ke sath, ammunation aur arms ko ek emergency exit panel me dal'kar fekhne ke baad, Nischal bhi ek panel me sawar ho gaya.


Lagbhag 15 minute baad Nischal, niche land kiya. Jaise hi wo land kiya, waise hi sabko dhundhne nikal gaya. Jo bhi milta unhe samet'kar ek jagah karne laga..


Sabhi jab ek jagah huye.… "Apni ginti puri hai"…


Serin:- Nahi, dusre viman ke 12 log emergency panel phans gaye.


Worrier head Remmy.… "Bina kisi dushmani aur bina kisi warning ke hum par humla hua hai Nischal.. humare 12 log mar gaye ya jinda hai pata nahi. 100 next generation ko unhone daraya hai... Aise to unhe nahi jane diya ja sakta hai…


Nischal:- Suchna pranali shuru karo aur locate karo ki hume sandesh kis jagah se mila tha... Jaldi karo isse pahle ki wo laut jaye...


Serin, Nischal ke kande par hath rakh'kar tik'kar khadi hoti.… "Bina humare hathiyar ka maza chakhe wo laut nahi sakte"…


Nischal:- Kyon nahi laut sakte..


Serin:- Wajah samne se dauri chali aa rahi hai...


Nischal jab Serin ke ishare ko dekha, 6 fit ki ek khubsurat aur aakarshak yuvti, maile kuchaile kapdon me unhi ke ore bhagti hui chali aa rahi thi.


Wo un sabke karib pahunch'kar muskurati hui kuch boli.. Har koi ek dusre ka muh ek baar dekha fir uski ore hairani se dekh'kar... "Kaun se planet se ho"…


Iss baar wo ladki thodi si hairani se dekhi. Dono ko ek dusre ki bhasha samjh me nahi aa rahi thi. Wo ladki idhar udhar dekhne lagi. Tabhi uski najar jaise hi suchna pranali ke sabhi device par gayi, wo hathon se rukne ka ishara karti hui turant wo device ke pass pahunchi.


Apne hisab se wo sari tarah ki wiring karti, screen me puri programming ko khol'kar baith gayi. Puri programming ko wo bade dhyan se dekhne ke baad program run karke ander ki jankari, yani ki bhasha ko padhne lagi.


Sablog muk darshak bane huye the... "Off O ye Viggo ki satak gayi hai. Chid'kar iss Alian ko khatam bhi karo na. Hume action dekhna hai aur iss bawre ko shayad romance sujh raha hoga"…


Ek chhoti ladki bolne lage aur sabhi bacche hasne lage.… "Mujhe maar'kar tum kya flash soup banaoge ya mera boneless meat kahoge, jo marna hai..."


"Tum humare system ke sath kya kar rahi thi"… Serin uss ladki ke gale par chaku rakhti...


Ladki:- Tum ajib se bolne walon ki bhasha sikh rahi thi. Waise ye Viggo yahan ka mukhiya hai kya?? Mujhe chidne ka faisla ussi ka hoga, ya tum me se koi bhi sawatantr hai maarne ke liye...


Serin:- Badi tarap hai kya marne ki...


Ladki:- Maar hi dalogi to main girgira kar bhi kya kar lungi. Marna to waise bhi hai..


Serin:- Apni pahchan batao...


Ladki:- Pahchan … Ek bhagi hui ladki jiski pahchan jan'ne ke baad usse koi sharan (shelter) nahi dega.


Nischal:- Bahut baten ho gayi... Ladki tum apni pahchan batao… aur wo viman kiski thi jo Desert planet par utri hai..


Ladki:- Tum sab kitne jigyashu log ho. Arre bhukhi pyasi ek komal hridayni sunder ladki tumhare pass aayi hai. Kuch khane ke liye to do. 3 din se bhukhi hun. Mere kapde gande ho chale, kahin-kahin se to fat bhi gaye hain...


"Ae Aedi, chupchap apna naam bata na.. baat kyon ghuma rahi hai. Aur jaldi bata wo viman kidhar hai, abhi apna hero pahle usse chirega fir tere ku aakar kiss karega"…. Ek chhota ladka bolne laga...


"Ewwww !!! Isske honth to sukhe hai aur mitti bhi lagi hai... Isse kaise Nischal chumega"…. Bhid se ek aur ladka bola..


Nischal:- Serin jarra inko shant karwao… Suno ladki, abhi humare 2 viman ko usne raund (distroy) dala jo shayad tumhe lene aaya tha… Mere 12 log lapata hai, 200 se jyada yahan fase hai aur mera dhairya bilkul toota hua hai..


Ladki:- Tum to jinda ho janashi. Jaan bach gayi hai. Ab meri tarah tum bhi chup chap yahan tab tak raho jab'tak wo chale nahi jate... Warna mera jo hona hai wo to ho'kar rahega, lekin kismat baar-baar sath nahi degi...


Nischal:- Hmmm !!!! Unki detail batao, jo hume maar'kar tumhe le jayenge...


Ladki:- Kyon jid kar rahe ho...


Nischal:- Kyonki raat hote hi yahan ka jo najara hota hai usse dekh'kar to shristi rachayita bhi kaanp jayenge... Dard aur rahashymayi maut se yadi khud ko bachana hai to mujhe detail batao..


Ladki:- Chal fenku, 3 din se yahan hun... Dard aur Rahashymayi maut.. huhhh. Pahle kabhi koi yahan aaya hai kya..


Sab ek sath.… "Nahi"..


Ladki:- Tab jaroor koi gair kanooni wale hain yahan, jisne ye afwah udayi hai...


Serin:- Nischal aur planet ki information na ho, ho hi nahi sakta... Nischal afwah ko maane, ho hi nahi sakta... Nischal ye koi chhalawa lagti hai…


Nischal kuch bhaanpte huye muskurane laga... Aur muskurate huye.…

"Hmmmm, Yahan ke rahashymayi jiv, jisme jyadatar saanp aur yahan ke na dikhne wale suksham jiv jo rahashymayi maut dete hain unpar tumhe yakin nahi. Ya fir ye.… Khair isse chhodte hain afwah maan'kar…

"Fir meri half (half blood, sauteli bahan) jo tumhe chhalawa samjh rahi, par tum mujhe kisi dur grah ki najar aa rahi... "

"Tum Dark Universe ki koi bhagodi ho. Agar mai galat nahi hun, to ye Astak ki koi karibi hai.. kyonki Astak apne kisi bhagodon ko dhundhne Dark universe ke bahar nahi aata."

"Aur agar ye satya hai ki ye Astak ki karibi hai. Iska arth hai ki ye pura planet jahaj se ghir chuka hota. Lekin kamal hai kewal Astak ka 1 viman yahan pahuncha hai. Ye ladki hume suchna bheji.. wahi suchna un viman walon tak bhi pahunchi hogi. Ab main aage..."


Nichal ek chhota sa viram liya hi tha ki wo ladki jor se kahne lagi... "Bus ab aur nahi... Kuch baten mujhe kah lene do.. aur kuch hum aapas me akele me kar lenge"…

 

[Naina]

Mai to waise bhi kaccha hun ji... Ab jhelne ke baat par Chutiyadr sahab ko dhit kah dun ya naram dil samjh me nahi aa raha... baki aapne sirf achha lagaya hai..... Kyonki jitna mai sahunga utna samne wale ko bhi sahna hoga.. apna yahi funda hai... Manjoor ho to... Chal guru ho ja shuru

U r taking about yourself ki jhela deti thi main bhi na, hasin sapne dekhne wale ladki se baat kar raha ... Sab kya aapke jaise jhelate the wahan... Fir to DR sahab ke liye kahe gaye shabd wapas..... madam char din mujhse traning le lijiye kripya karke ki jhelate kaise hain...

Postive ko negative.. aur negative ko aur bhi jyada negative batana jhelana hota hai..

first of all.. main bas story characters ko target karu.. jo us Kajal type ki hai.. na ki writer ko..
ju ne notice na kiya kya.. har revo ke ant mein..Brilliant update with awesome writing skills ..bas sirf aur sirf ye line writer ke liye hai aap bas usipe dhyan dijiye... baaki ke sameekshaye kirdaaro ke liye... uspe dhyan na de

Naah... Dr sahab ka andaz hi kaafi nilara hai... wo readers jalane ke liye sirf aur sirf ek khatarnak shabd ka istemaal karte hai " Dhanyabad" chahe reviews kaise bhi ho.. ya zyada se zyada yeh kah dete hai ki un kirdaaro ki badkismati jo unki story pe as a story characters bane

 

[Naina]

Mai to waise bhi kaccha hun ji... Ab jhelne ke baat par Chutiyadr sahab ko dhit kah dun ya naram dil samjh me nahi aa raha... baki aapne sirf achha lagaya hai..... Kyonki jitna mai sahunga utna samne wale ko bhi sahna hoga.. apna yahi funda hai... Manjoor ho to... Chal guru ho ja shuru

U r taking about yourself ki jhela deti thi main bhi na, hasin sapne dekhne wale ladki se baat kar raha ... Sab kya aapke jaise jhelate the wahan... Fir to DR sahab ke liye kahe gaye shabd wapas..... madam char din mujhse traning le lijiye kripya karke ki jhelate kaise hain...

Postive ko negative.. aur negative ko aur bhi jyada negative batana jhelana hota hai..

Par afsos ki baat yeh hai ki ab dr sahab yahan xf pe nahi aayenge as a Dr sahab.. koi new I'd se aayenge .. unhone apni story pe ye baat bata diya hai

 

[Naina]

Ab wo MoD hai... Aur bade bade writers ke thread par jate hai ㊙

Koun se bade bade writers..

 

[Naina]

Mai to waise bhi kaccha hun ji... Ab jhelne ke baat par Chutiyadr sahab ko dhit kah dun ya naram dil samjh me nahi aa raha... baki aapne sirf achha lagaya hai..... Kyonki jitna mai sahunga utna samne wale ko bhi sahna hoga.. apna yahi funda hai... Manjoor ho to... Chal guru ho ja shuru

U r taking about yourself ki jhela deti thi main bhi na, hasin sapne dekhne wale ladki se baat kar raha ... Sab kya aapke jaise jhelate the wahan... Fir to DR sahab ke liye kahe gaye shabd wapas..... madam char din mujhse traning le lijiye kripya karke ki jhelate kaise hain...

Postive ko negative.. aur negative ko aur bhi jyada negative batana jhelana hota hai..

Aur imli aur apsyu ya Prachi ko bol du to aap dil pe le lete hai...
ab to in tino ke raste pe wo nischal aur Jivisha bhi chalne lage hai.. aur ye bardast ke bahar hai

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..surpmarich us cheej ki khoj me hai jo dark universe ke nikli hai ..
nischal aur serin apne dimaag ki jaanch kar rahi hai ki kaise unki memory delete ho gayi aur kya yaade thi usme ..
ye achanak sandesh milna aur bina chetawani diye hamlaa karna nischal ke vimaan par ....
lagta hai wo ladki hi dark universe se aayi hai jiska pichha ho raha hai ..

aur ye bacche to bahut danger hai koi kehta hai ki nischal kiss karega us ladki ko .

agar wo ladki astak ki khas hai to aisa kya hai uske paas ki sab uska pichha kar rahe hai .

 

[Naina]

 

[nain11ster]

Aur imli aur apsyu ya Prachi ko bol du to aap dil pe le lete hai...
ab to in tino ke raste pe wo nischal aur Jivisha bhi chalne lage hai.. aur ye bardast ke bahar hai

Hey manushya ... Moh moh maya hai... Aap Moh ke jis dwar par khadi hain jahan se main kabka gujar gaya... Koii pareshani ho to guruji se guruvani le lijiyega...

Sadaiv vishmit rahen.. chetna kabhi na laute.. tatha astu

 

[nain11ster]

first of all.. main bas story characters ko target karu.. jo us Kajal type ki hai.. na ki writer ko..
ju ne notice na kiya kya.. har revo ke ant mein..Brilliant update with awesome writing skills ..bas sirf aur sirf ye line writer ke liye hai aap bas usipe dhyan dijiye... baaki ke sameekshaye kirdaaro ke liye... uspe dhyan na de

Naah... Dr sahab ka andaz hi kaafi nilara hai... wo readers jalane ke liye sirf aur sirf ek khatarnak shabd ka istemaal karte hai " Dhanyabad" chahe reviews kaise bhi ho.. ya zyada se zyada yeh kah dete hai ki un kirdaaro ki badkismati jo unki story pe as a story characters bane

I too copy tha...

Dhanywad

 

[Naina]

Update:-16 ​

Surpmarich apni purn gatividhi ko pure jor par laga chuka tha, matr uss chij ki talash me jo Drak Universe se bahar aaya tha...

lagta hai wo chij sambhog shakti bardhak dawayi hogi.. isliye us tharki budhau ne apni purn gatividhi ko jor par laga chuka hai.. wo kya hai na ab is umar mein budhau itne saare ladkiyon se shaadi jo karne wala hai... budha kaafi chaalak hai

Idhar Nischal, apni bahan Serin ke sath 100 bacchon ko lekar Aizem ki pashchimi seema se Wishper Planet ke ore nikla tha. Dark Universe ke Dakshni seema se laga yah aakhri planet hone ke karan yahan par insani sabhyta nahi basti thi.

ab kya bachhe us wishper planet jaake wishper bhi pehnenge.. just kidding
Khair....

Iss grah par jo bhi tha wo kewal prakritik aur prakriti hi inka srijan karti thi. Aizem ki seema se 4 din ki duri par aur raste me takriban 28 planet gujarte the...


Serin ke sath uski niji surakha viman bhi thik uske pichhe chal rahi thi. Jisme 100 worrier ki team thi. Sath me anya crew aur team member...


3 din ki yatra puri kar'ke dono bhai-bahan Dark Universe ke dakshini seema ke ore badh rahe the… Bacche udham chokdi macha rahe the aur dono (Serin aur Nischal) Medical area me the, jahan Serin leti hui thi aur Nischal screen dekh raha tha…


"Mujhe to lagta hai ye Sabaiyya aur Nova ka kiya dhara hai. Pata hi nahi chal raha dimag ke ander kya gadbadi kar gaye hain"… Nischal screen dekhte huye kahne laga..


Serin apni jagah se uth'kar, wardrobe se kapde nikalti… "Sabaiyya kahan se karega, aur uska doctor Parache bhi kabka maara gaya. Upar se jab hum laute to agli subah hi aham saal ki yaad blank thi"..


Nischal:- Haan to ho sakta hai biti raat hi kaam kar gaye ho.. Jo image footage hai uss se bhi chhed chhad kar diye ho.... Ek baar pata chal jaye ki ye karstani kiski hai, usse to main..


Serin:- Tu faltu ke logon ke bare me sochega to natija kabhi nahi niklega... Upar se Viggo viman kho diya... Wo bhi khone ki chij thi.. Jaal mahal se jyada wahan ka medical advanced tha.. upar se pata na tu prithvi par wahan ki technology ke sath kitna upgrade kiya hoga.. Main to kahti hun tu prithvi par he dekh, wahin chhod aaya hai Viggo viman.


Nischal:- Main sanrakshak niti follow kar raha hun... To sawal hi nahi hota ki jahan meri sacchi chahat hogi, wahan main Viggo viman ko chhod aaun... Taki meri gair maujoodgi me koi meri Sacchi premika ko pareshan kare...


Serin:- Screen me ghusne se kuch nahi milega. 5 mahine ho gaye yahi sab roj-roj karte.. tu kapde pahan…


Nischal:- Haan ab to doctor Sule ka hi bharosa hai...


Serin, samne para ek chaku Nischal ke ore badi teji se fenkte huye.… "Ussi ke chakkar me tu prithvi nahi ja raha hai.… Kab se kah rahi hun, ja wahan Viggo viman na bhi mila to Jivisha se to mil lega... Prithvi vale kisi dusre ke grah nahi jate hain pagal aur ho sakta hai khoyi memory ka raaj wahin ho...


Nischal:- Mujhe bhi pata hai. Lekin Madhya rastra me shanti ke baad tumne bhi kartavya se muh moda aur maine bhi. Laute to yahan Mahavinashi (Uttari Rastra ka shashak) ne Purv, Paschim, Dakhin rastr tak ko yudh ke liye protsahit kar chuka tha.. Mujhe yudh nahi chahiye shanti chahiye…


Serin, gusse me Nischal ke naak par itna tej mukka mari ki naak se khun nikal aaya.…. "Yahan se laut'kar tu jodi banayega. Lobhu ke sath mil'kar mai shanti varta kar lungi aur tu 10 din baad prithvi ke liye niklega"…


Nischal, apna naak saaf karte.… "Lekin Jivisha meri sachi chahat hai"…


Serin:- Tu na kuch-kuch mand buddhi ka ho raha hai… bhola tha, masoom tha, duniyadari ka gyan nahi tha tab bhi tu dimag se itna sust nahi tha…


Nischal:- Ab aisa kyon kah rahi ho..


Serin:- Aur nahi to kya kahun Nischal... Chakr niti... Kisi samuday ka patan ho to usse kayi mishrit jodi bana'kar apne samuday ko sanrakshit karne ki pahli uttardayitv banta hai..


Nischal:- Lekin ye to Dakshat samuday ki niti hai na...


Serin:- Ji to karta hai gala ghont dun... Dakshat samuday ki niti thi isliye Dakshat samuday jivit hai... Aur Viggo vilupt ho gaye...


Nischal:- Sache mohabbat ke viyog me to mai bhi chala jaunga...


Serin:- Aisa kuch nahi hoga... Jivisha ke sath mishrit jodi hai teri pagal… tu Viggo hai wo nahi... Sacha jodi ban'ne ke baad tu chupke se apni purani jodi ko...


Nischal:- Purani jodi ko kya...


Serin:- Wahi jo tu soch raha hai.. Saririk sukh dete rahna..


Nischal:- Nahi ye anaitik hai aur dhoka bhi..


Serin:- To tujhe kya har chij thali me pados kar denge... Achha tu kisi ko bhi dhoka mat de... Main unke sukh suvidha ka intzam kar dungi... Aur bhul mat tujhme bij ek Dakshat ka hai.. Isliye chakr niti apna, jodi bana.. apna samuday sanrakshit kar… Jodi ban'ne se purn shanti prastav mai le aaungi... Aur uske baad tu pritvi ja raha hai...


Nischal:- Wo Sule ne 2 mahine aur maange...


Serin:- Us Sule ko main suli par chadha dungi…. Ab agar tu nahi maana to mai khud prithvi jaungi...


Nischal:- Teri har shart manjoor hai... Lekin shanti varta smapan hone ke baad tu mere sath nahi jayegi...


Serin:- Teri buddhi ka karishma mai dekh chuki hun.. Apni buddhi bhi dekh chuki hun... Aaye badlav ki kahani par gaur karwaun... Humne aaj tak kisi ko marne ke udeshya se koi nirman nahi kiya... Surwat ke 2 mahine me aisa kamal ka nirman tha ki pura Aizem ko gayab kar deta... Wo to Lobhu ne hastchhep kiya, aur aaj kya hai... Hum dono ko hi usne pratibandhit kar diya...
Jaan se maarna tumhara antim nirnay hota tha. Master Nischal aaj kal maar kar lash se baat karte hain... Dekh main tujhe akele pritvi nahi jane de sakti... Tujhse milne jab tere sahar aa rahi thi tab ek ladka tere upar hans diya... Main ussi pal uska gala katne wali thi.... Bacche the sath me isliye khud ko roki... Main to rok bhi leti hun, tera kanjar to rukte-rukte bhi aadha chid chuka hota...



Nischal:- Isliye tune system feeding karke mere dimag me hi donload kar diya hai.… Jab bhi khanjar hath lagaun to kano me record bajta hai... Yaad rakho jaan lene ke baad tum wapas pran nahi dal sakte sharir me... Isliye jaan lene ki sochna bhi mat...


Serin:- Haan to aur kya karun... Ye mere bhi kano me bajta hai jab mai blade ko hath lagati hun... Sach to yah hai, jo bhi ho raha hai, wo bhuli yaad ki kadi hai. Ye sab ussi ka natija hai aur hum yahan bus din kaat rahe hain...


Nischal:- Thik hai tu jaisa chahe waisa hi hoga... Abhi khush na...


Serin chehre par shant bhav laati… "Haan Khush"…


"Pagal kahin ki"…. Kahte huye Nischal ne Serin ki hatheli par ek nayab sikka rakh'kar uske upar hath rakhte.… "Vachanvaddh hota hun ki iss dimagi samsya se niklne tak tunhari hi baten chalegi, aur wo main manuga"…


Muskaan ki lahar Serin ke chehre par thi. Wo Nichal ko chumti hui uske gale lag gayi aur jod se bhinchti hui uske gale ko chumti.… "Pahunch'kar jalsa karenge… Mahavinashi ki Judwaa mubarak ho"…


Nischal, jhatke ke sath alag hote.… "Jodi banane ki baat hui thi, ye to jodiyan hain"…


Serin:- 4 gol matol tere jaise ladke honge... Dono judwaa ke judwaa bacche. Kam mehnat me jyada natije..


Nischal:- Tabhi tune aaj tak kabhi nahi bataya ki jodi kiske sath ban rahi hai.... Kabhi socha hai, jodi yadi tooti to uske dushparinam kitne ghatak honge... Waise bhi Mahavinashi ke bete Avinashvi ko humne hi maara tha...


Serin:- Tujhe yaad hai kya, kab aur kaise mara???


Nischal:- Nahi...


Serin:- To rahne de na uss baat ko... Tu to bus Aizem ke Uttri rajya ki khubsurat sahjadiyon ke sapne dekh aur rajniti mujh par chhod de... Yudhh ke sabse bade karan ko hi mutthi me daboch rahi hun, baki sab to pahle bhi sidhe the, unhe sidha karne me kitna waqt lagega..


Nischal:- Tu aur teri rajniti.... Sapne tu saja, main chala bacchon ke pass...


"Ruk, sath me chalte hain"…


Serin aaj kuch jyada hi khush thi. Mukhya hall me pahunchte hi usne khushkhabri bhi announce kar dee. Sabhi logon ke bich dono baithe huye the. Hansi khusi ka mohol chal raha tha, tabhi suchna sachar pranali par ek anjaana sandesh aaya...

Baaki baatein baad mein lekin ek baat par purn roop se sehmat serin se ki nischal Jivisha ko hamesha ke liye bhool jaaye agar kabhi saari baatein yaad bhi aa jaaye to.. Baaki serin jo bol rahi hai un baaton pe koi matlab nahi
aur rahi baat jodi banane ki to nischal sirf aur sirf Hella k sath hi banaye
dono hi had se zyada shaktisali... dono hi apne apne ilake ke sher aur sherni..
dono agar shaadi kar le to koi inke samne tik nahi payenge..
are nischal kab Hella se milne jayega yaar.. dono ki romancit kahani kab suru hogi..

Nischal:- Serin koi humse sampark karne ki kosis kar raha hai...


Serin:- Desert planet se kaun hume sampark kar sakta hai... Kahin koi chhal to nahi...


Nischal:- Swabhavik hai... Ya fir koi fasa bhi to ho sakta hai...


Serin:- Kya kahte ho fir...


Nischal:- Passage jod do dono viman ke... 30 logon ki team ke sath hum Desert Planet utarte hain, baki dusra viman jab tak Wishper ki ore badhega...


Serin ne turant dusre viman se sampark kiya. Wahan se bhi yahi suchna mili ki koi strong signal bhej raha hai, lekin massage decode nahi ho pa raha hai...


Serin ne dono viman ke external passage ko jodne tatha us viman me 30 worrior ko chhod'kar baki sab iss viman me aakar aage ki yatra karenge, aisa hukum de dee...


Kuch hi der me external passage joda ja raha tha. Kaam pura hote hi dono viman ka darwaja kula. Jaise hi dono viman ka mukhya darwaja khula thik ussi waqt ek anjaana viman kafi teji se unke karib se gujra.


Wo jitni teji se gujra uss bhi kahin tej wo 2 missile girate huye gujra. Dono missile itne karib se chhode gaye ki anti-missile jab tak uss missile ho hawa me maar'kar niche girati. Anti-mussile aur missile ki takkar thik bahari deewar se ho gayi.


Pura viman hi chhatigrast ho gaya. 80% viman damage ho chuka tha aur ab kewal aur kewal emergency exit hi rasta bacha tha. Palak jhapakte hi Nischal ne sabhi bachon ko emergency panel me daalkar Desert planet feka. Itni hi der me Nischal ke viman ke sare crew member ek chhote se steel ball me sawar ho chuke the.


Nischal ne turat hi sabko exit kiya. Sabko niche bhej'kar, nichal ne puri suchna pranali ka backup le'kar jaroori sabhi device ke sath, ammunation aur arms ko ek emergency exit panel me dal'kar fekhne ke baad, Nischal bhi ek panel me sawar ho gaya.


Lagbhag 15 minute baad Nischal, niche land kiya. Jaise hi wo land kiya, waise hi sabko dhundhne nikal gaya. Jo bhi milta unhe samet'kar ek jagah karne laga..


Sabhi jab ek jagah huye.… "Apni ginti puri hai"…


Serin:- Nahi, dusre viman ke 12 log emergency panel phans gaye.


Worrier head Remmy.… "Bina kisi dushmani aur bina kisi warning ke hum par humla hua hai Nischal.. humare 12 log mar gaye ya jinda hai pata nahi. 100 next generation ko unhone daraya hai... Aise to unhe nahi jane diya ja sakta hai…


Nischal:- Suchna pranali shuru karo aur locate karo ki hume sandesh kis jagah se mila tha... Jaldi karo isse pahle ki wo laut jaye...


Serin, Nischal ke kande par hath rakh'kar tik'kar khadi hoti.… "Bina humare hathiyar ka maza chakhe wo laut nahi sakte"…

itni majal ki nischal ke viman pe hamla kare... are kya jante nahi kya.. nischal chahe to kide makode bhaanti kisiko bhi masal sakta hai..

Nischal:- Kyon nahi laut sakte..


Serin:- Wajah samne se dauri chali aa rahi hai...


Nischal jab Serin ke ishare ko dekha, 6 fit ki ek khubsurat aur aakarshak yuvti, maile kuchaile kapdon me unhi ke ore bhagti hui chali aa rahi thi.


Wo un sabke karib pahunch'kar muskurati hui kuch boli.. Har koi ek dusre ka muh ek baar dekha fir uski ore hairani se dekh'kar... "Kaun se planet se ho"…


Iss baar wo ladki thodi si hairani se dekhi. Dono ko ek dusre ki bhasha samjh me nahi aa rahi thi. Wo ladki idhar udhar dekhne lagi. Tabhi uski najar jaise hi suchna pranali ke sabhi device par gayi, wo hathon se rukne ka ishara karti hui turant wo device ke pass pahunchi.


Apne hisab se wo sari tarah ki wiring karti, screen me puri programming ko khol'kar baith gayi. Puri programming ko wo bade dhyan se dekhne ke baad program run karke ander ki jankari, yani ki bhasha ko padhne lagi.


Sablog muk darshak bane huye the... "Off O ye Viggo ki satak gayi hai. Chid'kar iss Alian ko khatam bhi karo na. Hume action dekhna hai aur iss bawre ko shayad romance sujh raha hoga"…


Ek chhoti ladki bolne lage aur sabhi bacche hasne lage.… "Mujhe maar'kar tum kya flash soup banaoge ya mera boneless meat kahoge, jo marna hai..."


"Tum humare system ke sath kya kar rahi thi"… Serin uss ladki ke gale par chaku rakhti...


Ladki:- Tum ajib se bolne walon ki bhasha sikh rahi thi. Waise ye Viggo yahan ka mukhiya hai kya?? Mujhe chidne ka faisla ussi ka hoga, ya tum me se koi bhi sawatantr hai maarne ke liye...


Serin:- Badi tarap hai kya marne ki...


Ladki:- Maar hi dalogi to main girgira kar bhi kya kar lungi. Marna to waise bhi hai..


Serin:- Apni pahchan batao...


Ladki:- Pahchan … Ek bhagi hui ladki jiski pahchan jan'ne ke baad usse koi sharan (shelter) nahi dega.


Nischal:- Bahut baten ho gayi... Ladki tum apni pahchan batao… aur wo viman kiski thi jo Desert planet par utri hai..


Ladki:- Tum sab kitne jigyashu log ho. Arre bhukhi pyasi ek komal hridayni sunder ladki tumhare pass aayi hai. Kuch khane ke liye to do. 3 din se bhukhi hun. Mere kapde gande ho chale, kahin-kahin se to fat bhi gaye hain...


"Ae Aedi, chupchap apna naam bata na.. baat kyon ghuma rahi hai. Aur jaldi bata wo viman kidhar hai, abhi apna hero pahle usse chirega fir tere ku aakar kiss karega"…. Ek chhota ladka bolne laga...


"Ewwww !!! Isske honth to sukhe hai aur mitti bhi lagi hai... Isse kaise Nischal chumega"…. Bhid se ek aur ladka bola..


Nischal:- Serin jarra inko shant karwao… Suno ladki, abhi humare 2 viman ko usne raund (distroy) dala jo shayad tumhe lene aaya tha… Mere 12 log lapata hai, 200 se jyada yahan fase hai aur mera dhairya bilkul toota hua hai..


Ladki:- Tum to jinda ho janashi. Jaan bach gayi hai. Ab meri tarah tum bhi chup chap yahan tab tak raho jab'tak wo chale nahi jate... Warna mera jo hona hai wo to ho'kar rahega, lekin kismat baar-baar sath nahi degi...


Nischal:- Hmmm !!!! Unki detail batao, jo hume maar'kar tumhe le jayenge...


Ladki:- Kyon jid kar rahe ho...


Nischal:- Kyonki raat hote hi yahan ka jo najara hota hai usse dekh'kar to shristi rachayita bhi kaanp jayenge... Dard aur rahashymayi maut se yadi khud ko bachana hai to mujhe detail batao..


Ladki:- Chal fenku, 3 din se yahan hun... Dard aur Rahashymayi maut.. huhhh. Pahle kabhi koi yahan aaya hai kya..


Sab ek sath.… "Nahi"..


Ladki:- Tab jaroor koi gair kanooni wale hain yahan, jisne ye afwah udayi hai...


Serin:- Nischal aur planet ki information na ho, ho hi nahi sakta... Nischal afwah ko maane, ho hi nahi sakta... Nischal ye koi chhalawa lagti hai…


Nischal kuch bhaanpte huye muskurane laga... Aur muskurate huye.…

"Hmmmm, Yahan ke rahashymayi jiv, jisme jyadatar saanp aur yahan ke na dikhne wale suksham jiv jo rahashymayi maut dete hain unpar tumhe yakin nahi. Ya fir ye.… Khair isse chhodte hain afwah maan'kar…

"Fir meri half (half blood, sauteli bahan) jo tumhe chhalawa samjh rahi, par tum mujhe kisi dur grah ki najar aa rahi... "

"Tum Dark Universe ki koi bhagodi ho. Agar mai galat nahi hun, to ye Astak ki koi karibi hai.. kyonki Astak apne kisi bhagodon ko dhundhne Dark universe ke bahar nahi aata."

"Aur agar ye satya hai ki ye Astak ki karibi hai. Iska arth hai ki ye pura planet jahaj se ghir chuka hota. Lekin kamal hai kewal Astak ka 1 viman yahan pahuncha hai. Ye ladki hume suchna bheji.. wahi suchna un viman walon tak bhi pahunchi hogi. Ab main aage..."


Nichal ek chhota sa viram liya hi tha ki wo ladki jor se kahne lagi... "Bus ab aur nahi... Kuch baten mujhe kah lene do.. aur kuch hum aapas me akele me kar lenge"…

Kahi yeh ladki Hella to nahi
par woh to final planet thi..
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hmm... shayad kayi update ko baad action suru hone ko hai.. matlab nischal action mein aaya hai... sab ko chid dalo... bhool se bhi baatein na karna bas baatein kare to bas woh dhar dar khanzar
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills nainu ji