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Thriller Kahani

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Shivay chauhan

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Sabhi log treat ki taiyari me lage hue the ab ye bahut hada shahar toh tha nahi jaha bade aur acche hotels ho pahadiyon ke beech is chhote se kasbe me chaye ki hi dukan mushkil se milti thi toh tay ye hua ki sabhi log garage ke bahar hi kuch khas tareeqe se party karenge toh garage ke bahar hi do tables laga di jati hai rohan rahul aur ko bazar se saman lena ka kaam diya gya nisha aur nidhi khana banane ki taiyari karne lagi shiva khud tandoor laga raha tha magar ye sabke liye hairani ka karan tha ki shiva kyu is treat me kaam kar raha hai kahi kuch aur baat toh nahi magar shiva ko isse koi frk nahi pada wo apna kaam karta raha aur jab tandoor lag gya toh garage ke andar se hote huye a0ne us chhote se kamre me chala gya rohan rahul aur chhote bazar se saman le aye the sabhi kafi khush the aur khud hi bima kahe sab kuch kar rahe the nisha ke chahre pe bhi ek alag hi chamak thi rohan aur rahul ko bhi is baat ka pata chal gya tha ki treat kyu di ja rahi pahle toh wo bhi bahut hairan the ki nisha jaise pyar kaise kar sakti hai magar phir unhe bhi yakeen ho gya toh wo log bhi nisha ki madad karne ke liye taiyar ho gye subah 12 baje sabhi log lage hue aur ab 4 baj gye the magar log kuch thak bhi gye magar khushi is baat ki thi unki mahant rang lai jab khana ban gya toh chhote ko bheja gya shiva ko bulane ke liye chhote us kamre ke gate ke bahar se hi awaz deta haI.

Chhote – guru khana taiyar hai .

Kah kar wo wapas chala aata hai use akela dekh kar nisha nidhi se kahti hai

Nisha – ye shiva kyu nahi aaya

Nidhi – are aa jayega .

Nisha – agar nahi aya toh .

Nidhi – think positive.

Dono bate kar hi rahi ki shiva hath me double bullet wishky ki botal leke bahar aata hai aur seedhe khane ki table Ke paas pahuch jata hai rohan rahul aur chhote bhi waha pahuch jate hai table pe khana pahle se hi laga hua tha aur 6 buraiyan bhi padi hui thi nidhi badi chalanki se shiva ke bagal wali kursi pe nisha ko baithane ka pls banaya magar nisha mana kar diya usne kaha .

Nisha – nahi mai shiva ke samne baithungi taki use theek nazar bhar ke dekh saku na jane phir kab milna hoga .

Toh ab sabhi log baith gaye the khana parosa gya sabhi bade maze se khaya magar shiva ke khane dhang hi kuch alag tha shiva khane ke saath saath sarab bhi pee raha tha koi agar dekhe toh theek se kah nahi payega ki shiva sharab pee raha hai ya khana kha raha poore waqt nisha shiva ko dekhti rahti hai jab sabhi log khana kha chuke toh chhote bolta hai .

Chhote – aaj toh maza aa gya itna accha khana toh maine aaj tak nahi khaya .

Rohan – han yar chhote baat toh sahi hai kya milaya tha aaj nidhi .

Nidhi – aaj khana maine nahi balki nisha ne banaya hai .

Rahul – are wah nisha you have a great cooking sense .

Nisha kuch muskurate hue kuch sharmate hue kahti hai .

Nisha – jiske liye itni mahnat ki wo toh kuch bol hi nahi raha .

Nisha ne shararti laheje me shiva ki taraf dekhte hue kaha toh shiva ne uski taraf ghoor ke dekha ghoor ke dekhne ka matlb ye nahi ki wakai me ghoorta uska dekhne ka tareeka tha toh normally hi magar aisa dikha ki ghoora ho.

Shiva kuch nahi kahta aur waha se jane lagta hai shiva ko jata dekh nidhi nisha ko ishara karti hai nisha shiva ki taraf chali jati hai shiva abhi garage ke gate tak hi pahucha tha ki nisha ne shiva ko peeche se awaz di shiva wahi pe ruk jata hai aur peeche mud ke dekhta hai toh nisha muskurati hui uski taraf dekh rahi thi aaj nisha ka husn dekhte hi ban raha tha lal rang ka chudidar suit halke gulabi rang ki lipstick mathe pe chhoti hi bindi khule kamar tak aaate baal gora rang aur sabse jyada katil thi uski muskan aisa lag raha tha ki kisi phool ki pattiyan dheere dheer khulne ki koshish kar rahi ho agar koi devta bhi aaj nisha ko dekh leta toh shayad swarg ki apsaraon ko bhool jata magar shiva ke chahre ki sakhti aur veeran ankhe is haseen drashya ko dekh kar bhi viran ki viran hi thi wo nisha ko dekhta magar kuch kahta nahi toh kuch der baad nisha khud hi bol padti .

Nisha – mujhe aapse kuch kahana hai .

Uska dil aaj bahut joron se dhadak raha sanse toh jaise yu bah rahi thi jaise koi pratiyogita ho un me nisha hi janti hai ki usne kaise khud samet rakha tha jawab toh bahut pahle hi ho chuki thi aur use is baat ka ehsas bhi tha magar aaj usse apni jawani ka bhoojh sambhala nahi ja raha tha uska toh dil kar raha tha ki shiva ki majboot baho ke apna sara bojh dal de magar abhi isme kuch der baki thi uske hisab se .

Shiva – han bolo .

Shiva ne apane chit parichit rookhe aur sakht laheje me kaha

Nisha – wo …. Wo ….mai wo.

Shiva – ye wo mai wo kya laga rakha hai iske aage kuch nahi bolna .

Nisha apne man sochti hai .

Nisha – kahna toh bahut kuch hai magar kahu kaise .

Ye sabse badi mushkil hai jab bhi baat pyar ke izhar pe aati hai toh hazaron alfaz hote hue bhi humare paas shabd nahi hote hai .

Nisha – mujhe apse kahna tha ki .

Nisha itna hi kah pati ki tabhi…………




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Ng_TheViper

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Tabi goliya chal gai.. rahim n jisko bheja tha wo aagya hoga ya police wale dhamak pade Honge..

Eagerly waiting for next..
Post it soon..
 

Shivay chauhan

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Tabhi ek goli nisha ke kan ke paas se hoti hui shiva ke baye baju ko ragdte hue deewaar me ghus gai goli awaz sunke mahaul me afratafri mach gai shiva ne sabhi logo ko garage ke andar kiya aur garage ka gate band kar diya sabhi log dare hue the khauf ne sabhi ko jakad rakha tha bas ek shiva hi tha jo bikul samanya tha shiva ne darwaze ki ot leke jhank ke dekha toh use dikhai diya uski use dekh kar uski ankhe phail gai samne kali apne 20 adamiyon ke saath andhadhundh firing kar raha tha aur lagatar age bhad raha shiva ke dimag me sirf ek sawal tha “kaise” magar abhi is sawal ka jawab milna mumkin nahi tha usne jald hi apni hairani pe kabu paya aur darwaze se sati hui kuch hi doori pe bani almari ki taraf chal pada bahar se lagatar goliyan chali rahi darwaza toh jaise chhalni jo gya tha shiva us almari ka darwaza kholta hai toh sabhi hairan rah jate hai us almari ek lmg 2 pistol aur ek chhura rakha hua tha shiva wo dono aur chhura apni kamar me laga leta hai aur lmg load kar ke gate ki taraf bhadta hai Ek gahri sans leta hai .

Wahi dusri taraf kali apne admi se kahta hai .

Kali – teri information sahi toh hai na.

Admi – han boss bilkul .

Kali – toh shiva humle ka jawab kyu nahi de raha .

Admi – shayad wo dar gya ho .

Kali – ho hi nahi sakta agar mai shiva ko janta hu toh abhi tak toh wo kam se kam 6 7 ko toh kar hi chuka tha.

Dono log bate kar hi rage the ki achanak garage ka gate khulta hai khulta hai goliyon ke karan ho chahiye dhire ki wajah se kisi ko kuch saaf nahi dikh raha tha ek admi apni position se thoda hat ke dekhne ki koshish karta hai toh achanak ek goli seedhe uske sir me lagti hai kali aur uske admi phir se apni apni position le lete hai shiva andhadhundh firing karta hua aage bhad raha tha dekhte hi dekhte usne 5 logo ko mar diya tha kali ke paas jo admi tha wo usse kahta hai .

Admi – boss lo jawab dene laga 5 mar diya ab khush .

Kali – ab kaza ayega .

Kali bhi firing karne lagta hai shiva ko toh jaise apni jan ki koi fikar hi nahi thi aisa lag raha tha ki wo toh bas ek soch leke garage se bahar nikla ho sabko mar do shiva ki goliyan khatam ho chuki thi wo apni lmg phek deta hai pistol nikal kar firing karne lagta hai ab sirf 4 admi hi bache the wo log shiva pe firing karne lagte hai toh shiva ek deewar ki ot leke phir se apni pistol load karta gai aur dubara firing shuru kar deta hai ab sirf kali hi bacha tha wo ke samne aake apni ak56 se us pe fire karta hai magar uski goliyan khatam ho gai thi ab wo shiva ki taraf dekhta hai shiva apni pistol zameen pe gira deta hai ye dekh kar kali muskura deta hai dono log ek dusre ki taraf bhadte hai amne samne aake Ek dusre pe mukko se war karne lagte hai shiva kali ke har war se bach ke uske chahre pe aur pasliyon pe war karta kali ka shiva ke samne tik pana mushkil ho raha tha Aisa nahi tha ki wo kamjor tha magar shiva ki yuddh kaushal ke aage kali ki taqat uska saath nahi de paa rahi thi uske chahre pe kai jagah se khoon nikal raha tha ab toh use bhi lagne laga tha ki aaj shayad wo zinda nahi bachega magar phir bhi wo shiva pe apni bachi khuchi taqat ikattha kar ke war karta hai magar shiva jhuk jata hai aur uske pet me ek ghoonsa de marta hai jisse wo kuch Doori pe girta hai magar ye kya jahan wo gira tha wahi pe ek ak47 padi hui thi wo use uthata hai aur shiva pe lagatar 3 fire kar deta goli shiva ke kandhe, pet aur chhati pe lagti ye sab itni jaldi hua tha ki shiva sambhalne ka mauka hi nahi paya aur wo zakhmi ho gya wo apne ghutno ke bal zameen pe baith jata hai uska sar neeche tha kali uski taraf aata hai aur 1 feet ki doori pe khada ho kar usse kahta hai .

Kali – shiva aaj tera khel khatm tune kabhi socha bhi nahi hoga ki tu mere hatho marega mujhe zinda chhod kar tune bahut badi galti kar di ab marne ke liye taiyar ho ja .

Shiva apna sar utha ke uski taraf dekhta shiva ki ankhon na toh maut ka khauf tha aur nahi zakhmo ka dard balki ek ajeeb si chamak thi jaise use kuch hasil hone wala jiski use kafi arse talash thi uske muh se khoon nikal raha tha magar phir bhi wo muskura kar kali se kahta hai .

Shiva – mujhe marne ki na tujhme taqat hai aur na hi kabiliyat.

Uski baat sunke kali gusse se aag babula ho jata hai aur shiva pe ak47 tan ke jaise hi fire karne wala hota hai waise hi shiva apni bachi khuchi taqat ikattha kar ke uthta hai aur chhura uski chhati ke paar kar deta hai ye sab itni jaldi hua ki kisi kuch samjh me hi nahi aya kali hairani se shiva ki ankhon me dekhta jaise use yakeen hi na ho raha ho shiva wo chhura uski chhati se nikalta hai aur phir wahi gad deta hai wo kisi kaye hue ped ki taraf zameen pe gir jata hai shiva peeche mudta hai kuch kadam chalane ke baad wo zameen pe gir jata hai aur band hoti hui ankhon se nisha aur bakiyon ko apni taraf aate hue dekhta dheere dheere uski ankhe band ho jati hai .


Kya yahi hai shiva ant kya wakai me shiva ab kabhi nahi uthega kya hoga kya likha hai shiva ke naseeb me janne ke liye saath bane rahiye
 
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