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dhalchandarun

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Besabari se intezaar rahega next update ka dhalchandarun bhai....
Update 173 has been posted guys!!!

Besabari se intezaar rahega next update ka dhalchandarun bhai....
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai dhalchandarun bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Ye sab theek hai hab 5 shaddi hai to 6 leela ki kyu nahi jab sab ko apna apna haq mil raha hai to leela ka kya dosh and lastly maza to ab aeyga niviedita ke liye arjun ki pratiygya ab dekhna hai mama ya mami ya arjun ki sagi mom kon doshi or arjun saja kise or kaise deta hai ye dekhne wala hoga bhai maza agaya sach me or or kaal ka dar priya se maa kasam its unbeleviable hai

Super fantastic excellent update

Bahut hi lajawab update

Awesome :applause: :applause: Bhaut Hee Jabardast Aur Romanchak Update Diyaa Hee 🔥 🫀 🫦 💗:love3::perfect::superb::balle::claps::ecs::wave:
Keep It Up 👍👌🖐️🤟🙋‍♂️

Nice and superb update.....

Awesome update

Bohat top class update diya hai bhai maza aa gaya.
So finally ek family reunion ho gaya aur sare RAAZ khul kar samne aane lagey hai aur shayad jaldi hi anupama n Arjun bhi apna rishta sahi kar lenge. Ab bacha hai confession, saza and uske baad kaisay Arjun apne grah ka safar tay kar pata hai aur next story ki pusht bhumika ki kaun kaun se character usme jayege.
In me se Kajal Arjun ki patniya Kirti didi to pakke hai plus Kalpana baqi character ko chunna thoda mushkil hoga but jin ka sirf role sex tak hai unko hataya jaa sakta hai next story se.

Yaar next part me thoda arjun ki tang khichwao priya se jaise vo uske sir par beath uske baal noche party ke liye

Are maza aeyga seriousness bahut hogaua hai thoda bachpana jaruri hai or vo priya hi la sakti hai

Super excellent update waiting for next eagerly

nice update

Nice update.....

Shandaar update bro

Brilliant update and great story

Shaandar Update

Nice update.....

Jabardast update

Mind-blowing update

waiting for the next update....

waiting for the next update....

intezaar rahega....

intezaar rahega....

intezaar rahega....

dhalchandarun bhai aaj update aane ka chance hai?
 
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Update 173
✷ Confession(2) ✷

(Previously)

Kalpana: Raveena meri chhoti bahan mujhe maaf karna. Mere sasur ji Manikchand aur bhai Upendra aur Virendra ki wajah se Mahendra ji, Akhil aur baki sabhi ko bahut peeda hua hai.

Suryakant: Isme aapka koi dosh nahi hai Kalpana didi. You are innocent.

Arjun: Ha* mata aap ganga nadi ki tarah pavitra ho isme aapka koi dosh nahi hai.

Jogendra: Kalpana didi meri Anupama ko maaf kar dijiye ki isne aapke dono bete Sagar aur Salman ko jaan se maar diya.

Kalpana: Maine isko bahut pahle hi maaf kar diya hai, Jogendra.

Jogendra: Arjun beta kya tum mujhe doshi samajhte ho ki maine Raveena aur Nivetha ko khud se dur rakha???

Arjun: Mujhe, Rohan aur KAAL ko Upendra ke baare mein pata hai ki wo kya kar sakta tha, isliye aapko jo sahi laga wo aapne kiya, magar….

Jogendra: Magar kya Arjun beta????

Arjun: Magar aap, meri mom, ya phir Krithi didi ki mom teeno mein se jo bhi Nivetha didi ka gunehgar paya jayega usko saza milegi, yahi maine Nivetha didi se pratigya kiya hai.


Story Continues…..)

[[Kajal Home]]

Jogendra: Arjun beta maine apna side sabhi ke samne rakh diya hai, mujhe aur kuchh bhi nahi bolna hai.


“Yadi Nivetha aur tum dono mujhe apna doshi samajhte ho toh tum dono mujhe jo bhi saza doge mujhe khushi khushi swikar hoga.”

Arjun: Samantha bhabhi aap ek top advocate ho, aap batao kya Jogendra mama ne jo kiya hai wo sahi hai ya phir galat???

Samantha: Jogendra ji ne ab tak jo kuchh bhi kiya hai wo sabhi ki suraksha ke liye kiya hai, isliye wo meri nazar mein nirdosh paye jaate hain.

Arjun: Nivetha didi aap ye batao kya Krithi didi ke pitaji Jogendra ji ne jo kiya hai wo aapki nazar mein sahi hai ya phir galat??? Aapka decision hi final hoga, aage koi aur argument nahi kiya jayega.

Nivetha: Krithi ke pitaji nirdosh hain, unhone jo kuchh bhi kiya hai wo samay ki maang thi, isliye main unhe maaf karti hoon.

Arjun: Very good, mamaji aapne jo bhi kiya hai uske liye aapko maaf kiya jaata hai, because you are not found guilty.

Jogendra: Nivetha beti tumhara bahut bahut dhanyawad ki tumne aur Arjun ne mujhe maaf kar diya, mere mann mein varsho se jo guilt tha wo ab dur ho gaya hai.

Gajodhar: Tumne bahut hi sahi decision liya hai Nivetha beti, mujhe tum par garv hai ki main tumhara pita hoon.

Suman: Maalik ne bhale hi tumhe khud se dur rakha tha, magar unhone hamesha tumhara dhyan rakha hai.

“Tum jis school aur college mein padhi ho, maalik ki dono beti Krithi aur Anupama ne bhi wahin se padhai kiya hai, maalik ne kabhi bhi tum teeno mein koi bhed nahi kiya.”

Suryakant: Arjun jaisa ab tak tumhe pata chal chuka hoga. Main aur tumhare mamaji bhale hi tumse dur the, lekin hum dono ki nazar hamesha tum par tha.

Arjun: I know.

Nivetha: Betu! Ab confession ko aage badhana chahiye.

Arjun: Yup! Mom aur mami ab aap dono ki bari hai, kya aap dono taiyar ho apna apna side rakhne ke liye????

Raveena: I am ready to put my side.

Nayanthara: Main bhi taiyar hoon Arjun beta. If we are found guilty, tum dono jo bhi saza doge hum dono sakhi* ko swikar hoga.

Geetanjali: Arjun tumhe jo bhi janna hai wo main, mere husband, Mahendra ji aur Nayanthara hum charo milkar pura karenge. There is no need to drag Raveena in this regard.

Arjun: Okay! I have no objection. Phir mom aur mami ji ne jo kiya hai wo aap sab mere samne rakh sakte hain.

Samantha: Okay! Start the proceedings.

Geetanjali: Theek hai phir sabhi koi dhyan se suniye ye sab kyun aur kaise hua.

All: Nods!


[((Note: Main Flashback story ko writer ke point of view se likh raha hoon, magar wo sabhi points koi na* koi character narrate kar raha hoga, so let's start the flashback story.))]

_________


[FLASHBACK,
SOME YEARS AGO]


{{Raveena Hostel}}

“Hi, I am Geetanjali and you?”

“Hello! I am Raveena.”

Geetanjali: New admission and what about you???

Raveena: Same here! New admission.

Geetanjali: Who was that guy who gave me his telephone number??

Raveena: He is my teacher as well as a very good friend named Upendra.

Geetanjali: Pura ka pura psycho lag raha tha kamina* kahin ka.

(Hahaha!)

Raveena: Kyun usne aisa kya kar diya, kahin usne tumhe I love you toh nahi bol diya jo tum usko gali de rahi ho???

Geetanjali: I love you toh nahi bola, magar usne mujhse ye kaha ki yadi koi ladka ya ladki tumse badtameezi karta hai aur maine usko phone karke nahi bataya toh wo mere sath bahut bura karega.

(Hahaha!)

Geetanjali: Why are you laughing like this????

Raveena: Chill baby! Wo aisa kuchh bhi nahi karne wala hai, he is a very decent guy. Main ladkon aur ladkiyon se dosti karne ke liye hi toh Silver City se itni dur Pearl City aayi hoon.

Geetanjali: Omg! Tum itni dur se yahan aayi ho, kahin tum wahi Raveena toh nahi ho jisne 10th exam mein pure state mein 1st rank laya hai???

Raveena: Yup! I am the same girl.

Geetanjali: Omg! Mujhe believe nahi ho raha hai ki main ek state topper ki roommate aur classmate dono hoon.

Raveena: It's all because of him, jisko tum abhi kuchh der pahle psycho* bol rahi thi. Pata hai usne abhi 12th ka exam diya hai, I am damn sure he is gonna be the state topper very soon in the next couple of days.

“Wo abhi sirf 12th mein hai lekin wo graduation and post graduation ke Physics, Chemistry and Mathematics ke problems ko chutkiyo mein solve kar deta hai.”

Geetanjali: Omg*! He is such a talented guy. You are very very lucky to have him as your teacher and friend.

Raveena: Phir batao usse karogi dosti??? He is very intelligent, tall, rich and handsome. Usme wo sabhi qualities hain jo ek ladki ek ladke mein khojti hai.

Geetanjali: No way!

Raveena: Why baby???

Geetanjali: Because I didn't like his attitude, lekin uske sath ek golu molu ladka tha wo kaun tha???

Raveena: Uska naam Suryakant hai, usme bhi koi kami nahi hai. Suryakant bhaiya mein bhi wo sabhi qualities hai jo ek girl ek boy mein chahti hai.

Geetanjali: I liked his simplicity, attitude and cute face.

Raveena: Kahin tumhe usse pahli hi nazar mein pyar toh nahi ho gaya, baby???

Geetanjali(Blushes): Nothing like that, stop teasing me like this.

Raveena: OMG! Tumhare gaalon ki laali bata rahi hai ki tumhe mere bade bhaiya Suryakant se pahli hi nazar mein sacha wala pyar ho gaya hai, am I right, babe????

Geetanjali(Blushes): Yup! You are right.

Raveena: Oh! How did it happen babe??? Tum toh badi fast nikli, ek hi din mein apne liye new boyfriend khoj liya.

Geetanjali: I don't know, bas pahli hi nazar mein pasand aa gaya wo ladka.

Raveena: Koi baat nahi main usse baat karungi tumhare liye, by the way usne mujhe apne liye ladki khojne ke liye kaha hai.

Geetanjali: No need to do that.

Raveena: Why baby???

Geetanjali: Kyunki main khud unse apne pyar ka izhaar kar lungi.

(Nudges*!)

Raveena ne dhire se Geetanjali ke pet par apna kohni maara.

Raveena: Omg! Tum toh abhi se hi usko husband jaisa treat kar rahi ho, koi baat nahi main tumhe uska phone number de dungi.

Geetanjali(Blushes): Okay! Kya tumhe ab tak koi ladka pasand nahi aaya hai??

Raveena: Abhi tak toh mujhe koi bhi ladka pasand nahi aaya hai.

Geetanjali: Ho sakta hai kal college ke first day tumhe bhi koi ladka pasand aa jaye.

Raveena: Kya pata meri destiny mein kya likha hua hai???

Geetanjali: Okay! Mujhe kal first class ke liye bahut darr* lag raha hai. Suna hai yahan par freshers ke sath bahut ragging hota hai.

Raveena: Hey! Just chill babe, I am here to protect you, don't worry.

Geetanjali: But who will protect you, hahaha???

Raveena: Very funny! I don't need the protection of anybody, I can take care of myself.

Geetanjali: Okay! Will you be my new friend???

Raveena: Of course yes*! I have come here to make new friends, waise bhi tum jaldi hi meri bhabhi banne wali ho.

Geetanjali: Thank you for giving me some courage for tomorrow and making me your new friend.

Raveena: No worries! Ab so jao kal college ka first day hai. I don't want to be late on the first day.

Geetanjali: Good night then.

Raveena: Good night, my sweet bhabhi.

___________


[Next Day, At College Campus]

Geetanjali college ke samay se sirf 5 minutes pahle college ke liye jaana chahti thi.

Magar Raveena ki zidd ki wajah se dono ek ghante pahle hi ready ho gayi thi aur dono dhire dhire chal kar college ki aur badh rahi thi.

Raveena ne white suit, salwar aur matching scarf pahan rakha tha jabki Geetanjali ne pink top aur ek black jeans pahan rakha tha.

Jaise jaise ye dono girls college ki aur badh rahi thi waise waise sabhi ladke dono ki nashili aankhon mein khote ja rahe the.

College ke entrance gate se kuchh duri par hi kuchh girls fresher ladkiyon ka ragging le rahi thi.

“Hey Mahi! Look at those two girls. Wo dono girls sabhi ladkon par bijli gira rahi hain, especially wo jisne pura white white pahan rakha hai aur body ekdum milky lag raha hai.”

"Lagta hai dono fresh maal hain phir bhi unke chehre par darr* ka koi nishan nahi hai, dekho kitna confidence bhara hua hai dono ke chehre par.”

Mahi: Bulao dono ko idhar, jara main bhi toh dekhun ki kitna der unke chehre par ye confidence rahta hai.

“Hey! You two, come here babes.”

“Lo ho gaya satyanash! Jiska darr tha wahi hua, Geetanjali ne dhire se Raveena ke kaan mein kaha.”

"Chill babe! Bina apne chehre par koi darr* liye unki aur chalte raho aur bilkul shant rahna, main sab kuchh handle kar lungi, Raveena whispers in Geetanjali’s ears.”

“Okay! Geetanjali ne dhire se Raveena ke kaan mein kaha."

Dono dhire dhire apne chehre par smile liye unki aur badhne lagi.

Mahi: Hey! What's your name??”

Raveena: Silence*.

Geetanjali: Silence*.

Mahi: Hey! Lagta hai tumhe theek se sunayi nahi deta hai, maine puchha tumhara naam kya hai??

Raveena: Mujhe theek se sunayi nahi deta hai, isliye thoda jor se boliye aap kya bol rahi ho, didi??

“What's your name??? Mahi ne thoda jor se chilla kar kaha.”

Raveena: Silence*.

Geetanjali: Silence*.

Mahi: Maine puchha tumhara naam kya hai, ladki???

Mahi ne itna jor se kaha ki sabhi ladke aur ladkiyon tak ye aawaz pahuch gaya aur sabhi uski aur dekhne lage.

Raveena: Itna jor se kyun bol rahi ho didi, sabhi ke kaan ke parde phadna chahti ho kya, jara dhire boliye warna sab log aapko pagal samjhenge???

“Btw my name is Raveena and she is my friend and sister in law Geetanjali.”

Mahi: Tum mera mazak uda rahi ho tumhe iski bhari saza milegi.

Raveena: Saza! Kaisi saza???

Mahi: Wo 2 ladke aa rahe hain unn dono ko dekh rahi ho jo left mein hai uska naam hai Manav, tumhe uske gaal par kiss….

Mahi ke shabd bich mein hi ruk gaye.

Raveena: Aur jo right mein hai uska naam kya hai????? Maine usse jyada handsome ladka aaj tak nahi dekha hai???

Raveena ne apni badi badi dono aankhon se right side wale ladke ko ghurte huye kaha, wo ladka bhi Raveena ko hi ek tak ghur raha tha.

Mahendra aur Raveena dono kuchh pal ke liye ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho gaye.

Mahi: Uska naam Mahendra hai aur main usse pyar karti hoon, koi bhi ladki mere darr* ki wajah se usko aankh utha kar nahi dekhti hai.

Raveena: Achha! Kya wo ladka bhi aapse pyar karta hai, didi???

Mahi: Nahi lekin jaldi hi wo mere pyar ko accept kar lega wo mujh se bach kar jayega kahan???

Raveena: Achha! Aur yadi usko koi aur ladki pasand aa gaya tab aap kya karogi???

Mahi: Ye ho nahi sakta hai kyunki main uske class mein sabse jyada sundar ladki hoon.

Raveena: Magar uss ladke ko kisi junior ladki se bhi pyar ho sakta hai jo aapse bhi jyada beautiful and intelligent dono ho.

Mahi: Huh - mujhse jyada sundar ladki iss pure college mein koi bhi nahi hai.

Raveena: Kyun hum dono aapse jyada beautiful nahi lag rahi hain kya? Lagta hai jaise mere kaan thoda kamjor hain usi tarah aapki dono aankh thoda sa kamjor hai.

“Isliye college ki chhuti ke baad main aapko ek doctor ke paas le chalungi and don't worry jitne bhi paise kharch honge wo main pay karungi.”

Mahi: How dare you say that???

Raveena: Arey! Arey aap gussa kyun ho rahi hain??? Anger is not injurious to health.

“Maine suna hai ki jyada gussa karne ki wajah se blood pressure high ho jata hai aur kabhi kabhi toh vyakti ko brain Haemorrhage tak ho jata hai jisse aapki jaan bhi ja sakti hai, *smiles*.”

Mahi: Shut up! Ye batao tum aayi kahan se ho jo kab se mujhse bak bak kiye ja rahi ho, aaj tak ye sahas kisi ne nahi kiya????

Raveena: Silence*.

Geetanjali: Silence*.

Mahi(Angrily): Ab bolo bhi, chup kyun ho???

Raveena: Arey! Arey aapne hi toh mujhe chup rahne ke liye kaha hai lagta hai aapko aankh ki bimari ke sath sath bhulne ki bhi bimari hai.

“Koi baat nahi subah breakfast mein aur sone se pahle kaccha badam khaya karo, aapki memory power bilkul meri tarah sharp ho jayegi.”

Mahi: Shut up*!

Raveena: Silence*.

Geetanjali: Silence*.

Ab tak Mahendra aur Manav dono ye scene dur se dekh rahe the, wo dono chal kar ab Raveena aur Mahi ke paas aa gaye.

Manav: Hey! Mahi, tum iss ladki ka ragging nahi le rahi ho, balki ye ladki kab se tumhara ragging liye ja rahi hai aur tumhe kuchh samajh hi nahi aa raha hai.

Mahi: What the f…???

Mahendra: Manav bilkul sahi bol raha hai Mahi, ye ladki kab se tumhara ragging liye ja rahi hai.

Raveena: Hello! Will you be my friend???

Raveena ne Mahendra ki aur apna right hand, shake hand karne ke liye aage badha diya.

Mahendra: Main kisi anjaan ladki se dosti nahi karta hoon, sorry!

Agle hi pal Raveena ne Mahendra ke right gaal par ek kiss kar diya aur dhire se uske kaan mein kaha.

“I LOVE YOU, wo tum hi ho jiska main pichhle 16 years se intezaar kar rahi thi.”

Mahendra jiska dil Raveena ko dekh kar jor jor se dhadak raha tha Raveena ke touch karne se ab aur bhi fast ho gaya.

Geetanjali, Mahi aur baki sabhi Raveena ki daring dekh kar shock rah gaye.

Mahendra: Ye kya badtameezi hai, pagal ladki???

Raveena: Kyun??? Achha nahi laga kya??? Yadi achha nahi laga toh right gaal par bhi ek kiss kar deti hoon.

Mahendra: Shut up! Main apna pahla kiss apni premika ke sath karna chahta tha aur tumne sab bekar kar diya.

Raveena: Ha* toh main hi toh hoon tumhari premika jiska tum ab tak intezaar kar rahe the.

Mahendra: Shut up! Kuchh bhi bolti ja rahi hai.

Raveena: Apne dil ki dhadkan ko chhu kar dekho, kya tumhe wahan par kuchh feel nahi ho raha hai jis tarah se main feel kar rahi hoon tumhare liye?? Tumhe dekhte hi mere dil ne bol diya ki Raveena ye ladka sirf aur sirf tumhare liye bana hai.

Mahendra: Mujhe kuchh feel nahi ho raha hai, tum jao yahan se isse pahle ki tumhe ek thappad pad jaye.

Mahendra ne safed jhuth bol diya.

Raveena: Usse pahle tum ye wada karo ki aaj shaam 4:30 pm ko tum college ke pichhe wale garden mein mujhse milne ke liye aaoge.

Mahendra: I am not coming, isse pahle ki mujhe gussa aa jaye.

Raveena: Yadi tum nahi aaye toh kal college ke bahar tumhe meri laash milegi.

Raveena ne aage Mahendra ko kuchh bolne ka mauka nahi diya aur Geetanjali ke sath apne face par ek smile liye huye college ki aur badh gayi.

___________


[[Evening 4:20 pm]]

Raveena jaise hi college ke pichhe wali garden mein gayi usne dekha ki Mahendra wahan par pahle se ek bench par baitha hua tha.

Mahendra abhi bhi wahi dress mein tha jo usne college mein pahan rakha tha aur uska college bag bhi uske sath hi tha.

Mahendra ko garden mein baitha hua dekh kar Raveena ke chehre par smile aa gayi aur wo tez tez kadmon ke sath Mahendra ki aur badh gayi.

Raveena ko dekh kar Mahendra ke dil ki dhadkan ek baar phir se fast ho gayi.

Raveena: Mujhe pata tha tum jarur aaoge, kyunki tumhe bhi mujhse pyar ho gaya…..

*Slap*

Raveena ke aage ke shabd bich mein hi ruk gaye, uske gaal par Mahendra ka ek tez thappad pada.

Raveena ki aankh se aansu nikalne hi wala tha jab Mahendra ne usko apne gale se laga liya aur uske kaan mein dhire se kaha.

“I LOVE YOU TOO, jiska main ab tak intezaar kar raha tha wo tum hi ho. Mujhe bhi tumse pahli hi nazar mein pyar ho gaya tha, jise dekh kar mere dil ki heartbeat fast ho gayi thi."

Raveena(Grins): I knew it.

Dono hi ek dusre ko gale lagaye huye ek dusre se baat karne lage.

Raveena: Aaj tak kisi ne mujhe thappad nahi maara tha, kisi ne nahi, matlab kisi ne bhi nahi.

Mahendra: Aaj tak kisi ne tumhe I LOVE YOU bhi nahi bola tha.

Raveena(Smiles): Yup! Because our hearts were waiting for each other.

Mahendra: You are very very beautiful.

Raveena: Thank you very much.

Mahendra: Kya tumhare ghar wale hamari shaadi ke liye agree* ho jayenge???

Raveena: Yeah! Maine apne bhai ke liye khud ladki pasand kiya hai.

Mahendra: Okay!

Raveena: Kya tumhare ghar wale iss shaadi ke liye agree* ho jayenge??

Mahendra: Mere ghar par sirf mera ek 6 years ka chhota bhai hai. Chhote bhai ke janam ke 2 years ke baad maa ki maut ho gayi aur abhi kuchh months pahle hi papa ki death ek car accident mein ho gayi.

Raveena: Sorry to hear that.

Mahendra: It's okay! Ab mujhe ghar jaana hoga, mera chhota bhai ghar par mera intezaar kar raha hoga.

Raveena: Mujhe bhi apne sath le chalo. Main bhi tumhare chhote bhai se mil lungi.

Mahendra: Okay! Akhil tumhe dekh kar bahut khush ho jayega.

________


10 Minutes Later

Mahendra Home ✷

Chunki Mahendra ka ghar college se jyada dur nahi tha isliye dono jaldi hi Mahendra ke ghar pahuch gaye.

Jaise hi dono ghar ke andar enter huye Akhil ne Mahendra par ek tikha sa sawal daag diya.

Akhil: Kya hua bhaiya aaj aap college se pure 3 ghante late aaye ho aur ye didi aapke sath kaun hai???

Mahendra: Ye didi nahi hai ye tumhari hone wali bhabhi hai.

Akhil: Achha! Kya aap khana pakana janti ho??

Raveena: Nahi.

Akhil: Phir jaldi se seekh lo.

Raveena: Kyun???

Akhil: Kyunki bhaiya kabhi mujhe jala hua bhojan khilate hain, kabhi namak kam hota aur kabhi jyada, kabhi mirchi kam hoti hai aur kabhi jyada, kabhi masala kam hota hai aur kabhi jyada.

Raveena: Okay! Main apne pyare bete ke liye jaldi hi bhojan pakana seekh lungi.

Akhil: Aapne mujhe beta* kaha??

Raveena: Hmmm! Kya tum mera beta nahi ho??

Akhil: Okay! Phir aaj se aap meri bhabhi maa* ho. Aaj se main aapko bhabhi maa kahunga.

Raveena: Bilkul, tum mujhe bhabhi maa bol sakte ho.

Akhil: Aap dono ne shaadi kar liya aur mujhe bulaya bhi nahi. Main aap dono se bahut jyada naraz hoon, main aap dono se baat nahi karunga, huh*.

Akhil ne apna muh phula liya aur dono ki aur apna peeth karke khada ho gaya.

Raveena: Tumhare bina hum dono ki shaadi kaise ho sakti hai, Akhil????

Akhil: Matlab aap yahan hamare sath nahi rahogi???

Raveena: Kyun?? Kyun nahi rah sakti hoon??? Kya ye mera ghar nahi hai???

Akhil: Of course hai lekin…

Raveena: Koi baat nahi, main jaldi hi tumhare bhaiya se shaadi karke hamesha ke liye iss ghar mein rahne ke liye aaungi, tab tak main tumhare liye bhojan pakana bhi seekh lungi, is it okay??

Akhil: Okay! Bhabhi maa.

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[[19 Months Later]]

Raveena ne apne aur Mahendra ke baare mein sirf Nayanthara ko bataya tha aur ye baat ko sirf apne tak simit rakhne ke liye kaha tha.

Inn 19 months mein bahut kuchh badal chuka tha.

1)) Raveena ka rishta Mahendra aur Akhil ke sath samay ke sath aur bhi strong hota chala gaya.

2) Suryakant aur Geetanjali ka rishta bhi samay ke sath strong hota chala gaya, sath hi sath Mahendra ko Geetanjali ke roop mein ek chhoti bahan mil gaya.

3) Geetanjali ne Raveena ko achhe se bhojan pakana seekha diya tha.

4) Jogendra aur Nayanthara ki ek dusre se shaadi ho gayi thi jabki Upendra aur Raveena ka rishta dono ke pita ne fix kar diya tha.

5) Mahi ke dil mein Raveena ke liye nafrat badhta hi ja raha tha, lekin usne Raveena aur Mahendra ko kabhi bhi iss baat ka bhanak tak nahi lagne diya tha.

6) Mahi ne Raveena aur Geetanjali dono se dosti kar liya tha jisse samay aane par wo Raveena ki peeth par chhura ghop sake.

7) Mahi ko aisa lagta tha ki Raveena ne Mahendra ko usse chhin liya hai, isliye Mahi ne Raveena se badla lene ke liye pura plan bahut pahle hi bana liya tha aur sahi samay ka wait kar rahi thi.

8) College ki tour par Mahi ne Raveena se apna badla lene ke liye ek ladke ko apna weapon banaya.

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[[At The College Garden]]

Manav aur Mahi dono ek bench par baithe huye the.

Manav: Mahi tumne mujhe yahan par kyun bulaya hai???

Mahi: Manav mujhe pata hai ki tum mujhse bahut pyar karte ho.

“Main tumhare pyar ko accept kar lungi, lekin meri ek shart hai jise tumhe pura karna hoga.”

Manav: Main tumhe pane ke liye kuchh bhi kar sakta hoon, bolo mujhe kya karna hoga??? Main tumhare liye kisi ki jaan bhi le sakta hoon.

Mahi: Tumhe kisi ki jaan nahi lena hai balki tumhe sirf ek ladki ka rape karna hai.

Manav(Loudly): Tumhe hosh bhi hai tum kya bol rahi ho???

Mahi: Tum mera sath doge ya nahi, sirf yes* or no* mein apna jawab do??? Yadi tum nahi toh koi aur ladka sahi.

Manav: Okay! Main tumhara sath dunga.

Mahi: Mujhe tumse yahi aasha thi.

Manav: Ab batao kis ladki ka???

Mahi: Raveena ka.

Manav: Lekin tum uski bahut achhi dost ho na* phir tum kyun aisa chahti ho???

Mahi: Nahi hoon main uss kitiya ki dost, jisne mujhse Mahendra ko chhin liya hai.

*Sigh*

Manav ne ek lambi saans liya aur apni aankh band karke kaha.

Manav: Okay! Main tumhara ye kaam kar dunga, lekin iski kya guarantee ki hai ki tum baad mein apni baat se palat nahi jaogi???

Mahi ne Manav ka ek hath pakad kar apni chhati par rakh diya.

Mahi: Now, do you trust me???

Manav: Yeah! Lekin ye tum kaise karogi???

Mahi: Kal new year ke din college ki tour ja rahi hai jisme Raveena bhi aa rahi hai.

Manav: Yeah! Magar Mahendra bhi wahan par hoga, hum uska kya karenge?????

Mahi: Mahendra tour par nahi aayega, kyunki wo apne chhote bhai Akhil ko chhod kar raat mein kahin bhi bahar nahi ruk* sakta hai.

Manav: Phir Raveena bhi nahi aayegi tour par Mahendra ke bina.

Mahi: Raveena chal rahi hai tour par. Maine Geetanjali aur Raveena dono ko agree kar liya hai tour par aane ke liye.

Manav: Raveena kaise razi ho gayi Mahendra ke bina tour par aane ke liye???

Mahi: Iske liye mujhe bahut hi papad* belna pada, Mahendra aur Raveena ke samne. Mahendra se mujhe bahut request karna pada tab usne Raveena ko allow kiya tour par jaane dene ke liye.

Manav: Okay! Kya tumhare paas koi plan hai ki aage kaise karna hai???

Mahi: Yeah! ……..

Mahi ne Manav ko sara plan samjha diya ki aage kya aur kaise karna hai.

Manav: Usne kisi ko bata diya tab kya hoga????

Mahi: Wo kisi ko nahi batayegi itna toh main jaan gayi hoon, wo kisi ko bata kar apni life barbaad nahi karna chahegi.

Manav: Agar usne apni jaan de diya toh bahut hangama hoga aur hum dono phas* sakte hain.

Mahi: Chahe jo bhi ho jaye main usko Mahendra ka kisi bhi haal mein nahi hone dungi.

“Yadi tum mujhe pana chahte ho toh ye risk tumhe lena hi padega, you have no other option to get me.”

Manav: Okay! Apna promise yaad rakhna, yadi tum apni baat se pichhe palat gayi toh main sabko sach bata dunga chahe jo bhi ho jaye.

Mahi: Believe me! Main apni baat se pichhe nahi hatungi.

Manav: Theek hai phir main chalta hoon.

Mahi(Smiles): Okay!

Manav ke jaate hi Mahi ne khud se kaha.

[(Raveena ab tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta hai, tumne mera jo bezati kiya hai uski tumhe aisi saza milegi ki na* tum jee paogi aur na* hi mar paogi.)]

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((Next Day,
At The College Tour))


College se students new year par alag alag jagah ke liye tour par gaye huye the.

Raveena, Mahi, Geetanjali aur Manav ye charo(4) ek group mein gaye huye the, inke sath ek male aur ek female teacher gaya hua tha.

Raveena ka group ek jungle tour par gaya hua tha, samay raat ka 8 baj raha tha.

Ladkiyan aur ladke apne apne group mein party enjoy kar rahe the.

Mahi: Raveena tumhe pata hai yahan ek nadi hai, uss nadi ke baare mein ye bola jata hai ki nadi mein *coin* daal kar koi mannat maangne par wo jarur pura hota hai.

Raveena: Oh! Lekin mujhe kuchh nahi chahiye. Mere paas paisa bahut hai, pyar karne wala family aur boyfriend dono hai.

Mahi(Devil smile): Theek hai main ja rahi hoon apne hone wale pati ki lambi umar ki dua maangne ke liye.

Raveena: Aap itni raat ko akeli jaogi kya???

Mahi: Nope!

Raveena: Phir???

Mahi: Mere sath Geetanjali bhi jayegi, wah bhi apne hone wale husband ke liye lambi umar ki dua maang legi.

Geetanjali: Mahi didi kya sach mein wo nadi itna pavitra hai ki sabhi wish puri ho jati hai???

Mahi: Ha* Geetanjali, lekin sirf ek wish hi pura hota hai jisse kisi ko koi hani na* ho.

Geetanjali: Phir main aapke sath jarur jaungi, Mahi didi.

Mahi: Raveena ab tum bolo kya tumhe jaana hai ya nahi???

Raveena: Okay! Main apne hone wale husband Mahendra ke liye dua maangne ke liye aapke sath jaungi.

Mahi: Good girl! Hume abhi jaana hoga hum 40 Minutes mein wapas laut aayenge.

Raveena: Mahi didi abhi raat ho chuki hai kal subah chalte hain.

Mahi: Nahi Raveena iss nadi ki ek khas baat ye hai ki mannat raat mein hi maangne par pura hota hai.

Raveena: Okay! Phir Manav bhaiya ko apne sath le chalo, koi ladka sath mein rahega toh darr* kam lagega.

Raveena ki baat sun kar Mahi ke face par devil smile aa gayi, usne jaisa socha tha bilkul waisa hi hua.

Mahi: Alright! Manav bhi hamare sath chal raha hai, are you happy now???

Raveena: Yeah! Let's go.

Mahi ne Manav ko apne paas bula liya.

Mahi, Raveena, Geetanjali aur Manav charo(4) chal pade nadi ki aur.

Chalte chalte charo(4) baki sabhi se bahut dur aa chuke the.

Nadi ab sirf 20 meter ki duri par rah gaya tha.

Mahi ne Manav ko aankhon hi aankhon se ishara kiya ki ab sahi samay aa gaya hai action lene ka.

“Okay!”

Manav ne bhi Mahi ko apni aankh se yes* ka ishara kar diya.

Agle hi pal Mahi ne apni jeb se ek nukili chaku nikal kar Geetanjali ke gale mein rakh diya, jabki Manav ne Raveena ka left kalai ko pakad liya.

Mahi: Geetanjali yadi tumne apni jubaan se ek bhi shabd bola ya phir ek kadam bhi hilne ki koshish kiya toh ye chaku tumhari gardan ko kaat degi.

Raveena: Manav bhaiya ye aap kya kar rahe ho, chhodo mera hath???

Mahi: Chup kutiya aaj Manav tera rape karega.

Raveena: Mahi didi ye aap kya bol rahi ho????? Aap mujhe chhoti bahan bolti ho aur Manav mujhe apna chhoti bahan bolta hai.

(Hahaha)

“Kabhi kabhi gadhe ko bhi baap bolna padta hai, iska matlab ye nahi hota hai ki gadha uska baap ho gaya.”

Mahi ne apni baat ko continue rakhte huye aage kaha.

Mahi: Tumne college ke pahle din meri jo bejati kiya aur Mahendra ko mujhse dur kiya hai aaj tumhe uska inaam milne wala hai.

(Hahaha!)

Raveena: Manav mera hath chhodo do warna…..

Manav: Aur nahi chhoda toh kya kar logi???

(Hahaha!)

Raveena: Yadi tumne ek aur badtameezi karne ki koshish kiya toh main tumhe jaan se maar dungi, shayad tumhe pata nahi hai ki main bachpan se hi karate mein skilled hoon.

Mahi: Mujhe pata tha ki tum kuchh aisa hi karogi, isliye maine tumhari saheli ki gardan par chaku rakha hai, ab chup chap apne kapde utaar nahi toh aaj teri saheli ki jaan jayegi, choice is yours. Ab ya toh tum Manav ka sath do ya phir…..

Mahi ne chaku se Geetanjali ki gardan par thoda sa cut laga diya jisse Geetanjali ki gardan se khun nikal aaya.

Mahi: Ya phir apni saheli Geetanjali ki maut ko apni aankhon ke samne dekho.

Raveena: Ruko, ruko, usko kuchh mat karo main apne kapde utaar rahi hoon.

Geetanjali: Nahi Raveena aisa mat karo tumhe meri kasam hai, chahe aaj meri jaan chali jaye lekin aaj tum inn dono ko jaan se maar do.

Geetanjali ne itna hi kaha tha ki Mahi ne uski gardan par ek aur chhota sa cut laga diya jisse Geetanjali ke muh se dard bhari cheekh nikal aaya sath hi thoda sa blood bhi nikal aaya.

Apni saheli Geetanjali ki halat dekh kar Raveena ki aankh se aansu ki ek boond nikal kar niche jameen par gir pada.

Raveena ne apni body se apna dupatta aur jacket dono hata diya.

Manav apni lalach bhari nazron se Raveena ki chhati ki ubhar ko dekhne laga aur abhi jeebh chatne laga.

Manav ki harkat dekh kar Raveena aur Geetanjali dono ki aankhon se aansu ki dhara aur tez ho gaya.

Mahi: Ye huyi na* baat chal ab ek, ek karke apne sabhi kapde nikal de.

Raveena ne apni suit utar diya ab wo Manav ke samne upar se sirf ek bra* mein rah gayi thi jise Manav apni bhukhi nazron se dekhne laga.

Raveena ne apni dono hathon se apni chhati ko dhak liya.

Raveena aur Geetanjali dono ki aankhon se lagatar aansu nikal raha tha.

Raveena ko aisa lagne laga jaisa kisi ne uski aatma ko apavitra kar diya ho.

Mahi: Bahut achhi kutiya, chal ab apni bra bhi utaar de aur dikha apni jism, jisme sirf hawas bhara hua hai, jiske liye tumne pahle hi din college mein sabke samne Mahendra ko chumma liya tha.

Raveena apni bra* kholne hi ja rahi thi tabhi Mahi ke right hand par ek tez kick pada.

Jisse chaku Mahi ke hath se chhut kar niche dur jaake gir pada.

Mahi kuchh react kar pati usse pahle hi samne wale bande ka ek aur powerful kick Mahi ki peeth par pada jisse wo niche jameen par gir padi aur dard si wajah se karah uthi.

Samne ek banda khada tha jisne apni body se apni jacket nikal kar Raveena ki aur uchhal diya jisne Raveena ki chest ko dhak diya.

*Thud*

Manav kuchh react karta usse pahle uske chest par ek jor ki laat padi jisse wo niche jameen par gir pada.

Mahi aur Manav ko kuchh samajh nahi aaya, dono ke plan ko kaise ek bande ne achanak se aake puri tarah se fail kar diya.

Samne wale bande ki aankh gusse se pura laal dikhai de raha tha.

Uski aankh se aansu nikal raha tha aur honth kuchh bolne ke liye hil raha tha, magar khul nahi raha tha.

“Bhaiya!”

Raveena apne bhai ke gale se lag gayi, ab uski aankhon se aansu ki dhara aur bhi tez ho gayi jo uske bhai ke kandhe ko geela karne laga.

[(Wo banda koi aur nahi balki Suryakant tha jo Geetanjali se milne ke liye aaya tha aur raat 10 bajne ka intezaar kar raha tha.)]

[(Jab usne apne pichhe se kuchh duri par light dekha toh wo light ki aur badhne laga aur jab usne apni chhoti bahan aur apni premika ki haalat dekha toh uska ruh kaanp gaya.)]

[(Suryakant dono ke paas sidha na* jaate huye pichhe ki aur se gaya jisse dono ki life khatre mein na* aa jaye.)]

Suryakant ne Raveena ko apni bahon se aazad kiya aur Manav ke peeth par jor ka ek laat maara.

(Ahhhhh!)

Manav ke muh se dard ki ek tez cheekh nikla jo jungle mein vilin ho gaya.

Raveena niche giri huyi chaku utha kar Mahi ko maarne hi wali thi jab uske kaan mein ek aawaz sunayi diya.

Suryakant: Tumhe meri kasam hai chhoti, tum aisa kuchh bhi nahi karogi.

Apne bhai ki baat sun kar Raveena ne chaku ko bich mein hi rok liya aur dur phenk diya.

Suryakant: Ab tum dono sab kuchh sach sach batao tum dono ne aisa kyun kiya, warna main abhi tum dono ko jaan se maar dunga???

Manav aur Mahi ne apne maut ki darr* ki wajah se sab kuchh sach sach bata diya.

Suryakant(Loudly): Okay! Ab tum dono dur ho jao meri aankhon ke samne se. Main tum dono ko maaf karta hoon.

Mahi aur Manav ke jaane ke baad Raveena aur Geetanjali dono Suryakant ke gale se lag gayi aur nikal gayi dono ki aankhon se aansu ki dhara jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.

Raveena: Sniffing…..

Geetanjali: Sniffing…..

Suryakant: Sniffing…..

Suryakant ne dono se kuchh nahi kaha, usne dono ko kuchh der ke liye rone diya.

Suryakant: Okay! Raveena pahle tum apne kapde pahan lo phir hum baat karte hain.

Suryakant ne dono ko apni bahon se aazad kiya aur dono se thoda dur ja karke khada ho gaya.


[[Some Moments Later]]

Raveena: Bhaiya ab aap meri taraf mud sakte hain maine apna kapda pahan liya hai.

Suryakant: Chalo main tum dono ko tumhare group ke paas chhod deta hoon.

Raveena: Okay! Lekin aap yahan par kya kar rahe the????

Suryakant: Wo main tumhe baad mein batata hoon, tum Mahendra naam ke ladke se pyar karti ho ye baat tumne hum sabko ab tak kyun nahi bataya hai????

Raveena: I am sorry, bhaiya. Main ghar jaakar sabko batane hi wali thi jab mujhe pata chala ki papa ne mera rishta Upendra ke sath fix kar diya hai.

Suryakant: Jitna jaldi ho sake tum Upendra ko ye baat bata do, kyunki wo tumse bahut pyar karta hai.

Raveena: Main koi achha sa samay dekh kar Upendra ko ye baat bata dungi.

Suryakant: Okay! Jo bhi karna soch samajh kar faisla lena. Ek aur tumhara pyar hai toh dusri aur tumhara bachpan ka dost.

Raveena: Bhaiya aapne dono ko zinda kyun chhod diya????

Suryakant: Tumhari wajah se.

Raveena: M-meri wajah se kyun??

Suryakant: Kyunki abhi unn dono ke sath kuchh bhi karne ka sahi samay nahi tha, kai students ne unn dono ko tum dono ke sath aate huye dekha hoga.

Geetanjali: Yeah! You are right. And thank you. Mujhe lata tha tum mazak kar rahe ho, lekin tum toh sach mein mere liye itni dur aa gaye, tum pure ke pure pagal ho.

Suryakant: Aur mere isi pagalpan ki wajah se aaj tum dono safe ho.

Raveena: Thank you bhaiya yadi aaj aap nahi aaye hote toh aaj aapki chhoti bahan apavitra ho gayi hoti. Aaj aap meri life mein ek GOD* ban kar aaye ho.

Suryakant: Agli baar se tum dono aisi koi bhi galti mat karna.

Raveena: Nods!

Suryakant ne dono ko group ke paas chhod diya.

Suryakant: Ab tum dono sabhi ke paas jao, main chalta hoon.

Geetanjali: Itni raat ko???

Suryakant: Main tumhe dekhne aaya tha wo kaam pura ho gaya.

Geetanjali: Okay!

Suryakant: Chhoti tum chinta mat karna, kuchh dino ke baad dono ki laash milegi jisne meri bahan ke sath ye paap karne ka koshish kiya hai.

Raveena: I know.

“Shoo.”

Suryakant ne dono ko bye kaha aur apna right hand wave karte huye chala gaya.

Suryakant ne bol toh diya tha ki wo chala gaya hai, kintu usne dono ke andar jaane ke baad tent ke bahar chhip kar dono par raat par nazar rakha ki wo dono safe ho.

Jo Raveena kuchh der pahle apne bhai ke samne shant hone ka dhong kar rahi thi, tent ke andar jaane ke baad uski aankhon se aansu lagatar nikalti chali gayi.

Raveena ke dimaag mein sirf ek hi baat chal raha tha ki aaj wo apne Mahendra ke liye apavitra hone se bach gayi.

Kaise ek ladka aur ladki jo usko ek bahan ki tarah mante the dono ne uske sath itna bada paap karne ka socha.

Kaise dono ne uske bholepan ka fayda uthana chaha.

Raveena ka mind ye bhi sahan nahi kar pa raha tha ki uske bhai ne usko galat awastha mein dekh liya hai.

Uska mind baar baar ye bol raha tha ki ab wo apne bhai ka samna kaise kar payegi.

Geetanjali aur Raveena dono sath mein so* rahi thi, lekin Geetanjali ko ye nahi pata chala ki Raveena raat bhar se ro* rahi thi.

Geetanjali jab subah so* kar uthi aur usne Raveena ka chehra dekha toh uska kaleja jaise kaanp gaya.

Raveena ka pura chehra aansu se bhiga hua tha, chhati ke aas paas jacket bhi pura bhiga hua tha aur sabse badi baat ab bhi Raveena ki aankhon se aansu nikal raha tha.

Geetanjali ko ye samajhte huye der nahi laga ki Raveena raat bhar se ro* rahi thi, jiske karan uski aankh ke aas paas thoda thoda black spot jaisa ho gaya tha.

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[[Back To The College]]

College bus, next day 12 baje dopahar ko college pahuch gaya.

Mahendra subah 9 baje se college ke gate par Raveena ka wait kar raha tha.

Mahendra ne Raveena ko jaise hi bus se niche utarte huye dekha uska dil tadap utha.

Wo jaan gaya ki jo Raveena yahan se gayi hai aur jo Raveena wapas aayi hai wo dono alag hai.

Mahendra ne Raveena ka hath pakda aur wah usko college ke garden mein lekar chala gaya, pichhe pichhe Geetanjali bhi chali gayi.

Mahendra: Raveena kya hua hai tumhe?? Jis chehre par hamesha smile rahti thi wo aaj kahan gayab hai????

Raveena: …….

Mahendra: Raveena kya hua hai batao mujhe, mera dil bahut ghabra raha hai tumhe aise dekh kar???

Raveena: ……..

Mahendra: Chhoti tum batao kya hua hai isko???? Aur tumhari gardan par ye ghav ka nishaan kaisa hai????

Geetanjali: Bhaiya……

Geetanjali jakar Mahendra ke gale se lag gayi aur nikal padi uski bhi aankhon se aansu ki dhara jo ab tak usne sambhal rakha tha.

Geetanjali: Sniffing*…..

Raveena: Sniffing*.......

Geetanjali ne rote huye college tour par jo bhi Raveena aur uske sath hua tha wo sab usne ek, ek karke Mahendra ko bata diya.

Mahendra jaise jaise Mahi aur Manav ki harkat ke baare mein sun raha tha uski aankh se aansu nikalta chala gaya aur badhta chala gaya uska gussa.

Mahendra: Main unn dono ko jaan se maar dunga.

“Tum aisa kuchh bhi nahi karoge, Raveena ko tumhari jarurat hai.”

Mahendra, Geetanjali aur Raveena ne aawaz ki disha mein dekha jahan Suryakant khada tha.

Raveena daud kar apne bade bhai ke seene se lag gayi.

Raveena: Sniff*...., sniff*,... aap.. aap sniff*... wapas nahi gaye???

Suryakant: Kya mujhe pata nahi hai tumhari kya halat ho rahi hogi, tumhari khamoshi mujhe tumhare baare mein sab kuchh bata gayi thi????

Mahendra: Geetanjali kya ye wahi hain, jisne tum dono ko bachaya hai????

Geetanjali: Hmmm!

Mahendra: Thank you bade bhaiya meri aatma ko surakshit rakhne ke liye.

Suryakant: Ye tumhari premika hone se pahle meri chhoti bahan hai, isliye dono ko saza dena bhi mera hi kartavya hai.

Mahendra: Theek hai bade bhaiya, jaisa aap chahte ho waisa hi hoga.

Suryakant: Kya tumhe pata hai Raveena ki shaadi kisi aur se fix ho gayi hai???

Mahendra: Yeah! Mujhe pata hai. Jis tarah se aapne kaha ki unn dono ko saza dene ka pahla hak aapko hai usi tarah se Raveena par pahla hak iske pita aur bhai ka hai, isliye ye jo bhi karegi main iske sath hoon.

“Aapko meri aur aapki bahan ki kasam hai aap iske bhai, pita ya phir kisi aur se kuchh bhi nahi kahenge ki main Raveena se pyar karta hoon.”

Suryakant: Ye kaisa pyar hai tumhara jo tum apni premika ke har decision ko support karte ho?

Mahendra: Main aisa hi hoon bade bhaiya. Mujhe pata hai ek ladki ke liye uska bada bhai aur pita uske liye kya mayne rakhta hai.

Suryakant: Theek hai mere yahan se jaane ke baad apni aur meri premika dono ka khayal rakhna.

Raveena(Sniffing): Bhaiya mat jao mujhe chhod kar, mujhe ab kisi par bharosa nahi hai tumhare alawa, main Upendra se shaadi kar lungi.

“Ahhhh!”

Mahendra ke dil mein aisa peeda hua jaise kisi ne uske dil mein pathhar se prahar kar diya ho.

Mahendra: Geetanjali! Meri chhoti bahan apni saheli ka dhyan rakhna.

“Bade bhaiya Raveena ke sath jo hua hai wo kisi ko bhi mat batana, warna wo usse nazar nahi mila payegi.”

Mahendra ne Geetanjali ko apne gale se aazad kiya aur nikal gaya apne ghar ki aur, usne ek baar bhi pichhe mud kar Raveena ki aur nahi dekha.

Geetanjali: Raveena rok lo usko jaane se, Mahendra bhaiya se jyada pyar tumhe koi nahi kar sakta hai.

Raveena: Sniffing but silent*.

Suryakant: Chhoti Mahendra tumhare liye sabse best choice hai, usko rok lo jaane se.

Raveena: Sniffing* but silent*.

Geetanjali: Aap jaiye main Raveena ko samajhne ki koshish karungi.

Suryakant ne Raveena ko apni bahon se aazad kiya aur nikal gaya apne ghar ki aur.


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That's all for this episode, the update comprises 7.1k words. I hope that you guys will enjoy the update. Stay tuned with me on this journey, we'll meet soon in the next episode till then bye bye and take care of yourself. Confession(3) jaldi hi aayega, next episode Raveena ke flashback ka last episode hoga.
Khoobsurat update to phir next update me sare RAAZ khul jayege aur pata chalega ki kia Nivetha and Arjun Kisi ko doshi mantey hai ya nahi. Badi besabri se next update ka intezar rahega.
 

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Thanks a lot brother.
Khoobsurat update to phir next update me sare RAAZ khul jayege aur pata chalega ki kia Nivetha and Arjun Kisi ko doshi mantey hai ya nahi. Badi besabri se next update ka intezar rahega.
Thanks! Bas thoda sa rah gaya hai next episode mein pata chal jayega.
Bahut hi lajawab update
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Update 2
The Journey
Begins


Meri journey to bahut pahle hi start ho gayi thi lekin main story ko wahan se start kar raha hoon, jab main 19 years ka hua yani jab mere dad ne engineering college mein mera admission karaya to unhone mujhse puchha!

Dad: Kahan rahna chahoge Arjun hostel mein ya uncle and aunty ke paas tumhara decision final hoga??

Arjun: Dad main hostel mein rahna more prefer karunga to dad ne kaha tumhare mom ne tumhari chachi se baat kar li hai ki tum unke yahan hi rahoge.

Dad ne aage bolna jari rakhte huye aage kaha.

Dad: Aur to aur tumhare chacha and chachi bhi yahi chahte hain ki tum unke pass raho kyonki jyadatar tumhari chachi ko ghar par akele hi rahana padta hai.

Main bhi rahne ke liye agree ho gaya kyonki meri chachi nature wise bahut hi jayada achhi hain aur mera unse ek deep connection hai jo aage story me aapko pata chalti rahegi.

Evening mein dad aur main uncle ke ghar pahuche maine doorbell bajayi to kuchh der ke baad Kajal chachi ne ghar ka door khola.

Maine chachi ke pair chune chahe to unhone mujhe gale se laga liya.


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Aur phir mujhse alag hokar papa ke panv chukar blessing liya.

Papa ne unhe sada khush rahne ka ashirwad diya.

Bhale hi papa state ke chief minister the lekin hamesha sabse milansar rahte hain aur to aur mujhe bhi hamesha yahi kaha karte hain ki mere name ka kabhi bhi galat use mat karna.



Waise bhi main unke tarah hi hamesha simple mein hi rahta hoon jayada show off nahi karta hoon.

Kabhi bhi kisi ko pareshan nahi karta hoon aur na hi apne bare mein jayada kisi ko batane ka shauk rakhta hoon.

Jahan tak ho sake main hamesha hi logo ki help kiya karta hoon jab bhi kisi ko meri jarurat ho, phir chahe paristhiti kaisi bhi ho aur kitni bhi mushkil condition hi kyon na ho.

Khair dinner karke dad ghar ke liye nikal gaye ab ghar par main, chachi and uska 4 years ka baby Dhruv hi bache rah gaye.

Hum chachi ke room mein the aur chachi ke room mein serial ka maja lene lage.

Mujhe bhi kuchh kuchh serial dekhna achha lagta hai isliye main bhi unke sath serial dekhne laga.

Khair kuchh der ke baad Akhil chacha duty par se aa gaye.

Maine unke panv chukar blessing liya unhone mujhe hamesha sukhi hone ka ashirwad diya.

Kuchh der ke baad main apne room mein sone ke liya chala gaya kal se mujhe college jana tha, main apni pahli class ke liye bahut hi jayada excited 😊 tha.

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That's it for this episode, well sath jude rahiye story majedar hoti jayegi.
Acha start hai bhai
 

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Update 3
First Class

Recap: In the previous update humne jana ki kaise Arjun ka admission college mein hua aur Arjun apne chachi se bahut dino ke baad mila aur sath hi sath Arjun ke dad Mahendra Agarwal apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye.

Now next>>>


Subah excitement mein jaldi 6 baje hi main sokar uth gaya aur ghar ke bahar jakar running kiya garden mein wapas aaya to chachi aur chacha uth gaye the.
Maine unhe good morning wish kiya dono ne bhi mujhe good morning wish kiya.

Kajal chachi ne kaha jakar naha lo.

Main apne room mein jakar naha liya aur kuchh der room mein hi raha ki chachi ne mujhe breakfast ke liye aawaz di.

Maine jakar sabke sath breakfast kiya.

Akhil chacha apne duty par chale gaye.

Chachi ne kaha jakar ready ho jao college ke liye main bhi ready hone ja rahi hoon.

Hum dono college chale gaye college ghar se lagbhag 20 minutes ke distance par tha car ya bike se.

Chachi apne private room mein chali gayi aur main canteen mein time pass karne laga, kyonki abhi class start hone mein time bacha hua tha.


[Characters Introduction]

1)Kriti: 25 years old beautiful girl teacher in the college(computer teacher).

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2)Sriya: Physics teacher 28 years beautiful lady with perfect body curve.

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[At the classroom]

First lecture mein hi Kajal mam aayi sabhi students Kajal mam ki beauty mein kahin kho gaye.

Mere hi bench pe ek ladka tha wo bhi mam ko ghure ja raha tha aur mujhse kaha bhai kya hot teacher hai na.


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Maine kaha chup kar itni bhi hot nahi hai ab main use kya batata ki jise wo hot bol raha hai meri apni hi chachi hai.

Us ladke ne kaha bhai gussa kyon ho raha hai sahi to bol raha hoon ek dum hot and sexy lag rahi hai kasam se puri janleva hai.

Maine kaha chup kar sale meri chachi hai. Itna bolte hi wo ladka chup ho gaya us ladke ko mano kato to khun nahi, kyonki usne mere hi samne meri hi chachi ko hot bol diya.

Sabse pahle Kajal mam ne apna introduction diya.

Phir bari bari se sabka introduction lene lagi.

Sabne apna apna introduction diya aur sath mein maine aur mere bagal wale ladke ne bhi apna introduction diya aur mujhe pata chala ki us ladke ka naam Rohan hai.

2nd lecture mein Kriti mam aayi aur introduction hi hua aur class period end ho gaya.

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3rd period mein Sriya mam aayi wo bhi sabka introduction lekar chali gayi.


Main canteen mein coffee enjoy kar raha tha ki wo ladka bhi mere pass aa gaya aur mujhse pucha.

Kya tum Arjun Agarwal ho, son of the Mahendra Agarwal?

Maine yes kaha to usne kaha mera name to class mein jaan hi gaye ho.

Main Rohan hoon mere dad tumhare dad ke friend hain unhone hi mujhe tumhare bare mein bataya hai.

Rohan: Will you be my friend?

Rohan: Jaise mere dad tumhare dad ke friend hain.

Arjun: Okay but aage se be careful, next time se no bulgar comments on teachers otherwise you will be punished.

Rohan: Okay my friend as you wish mujhe tumhari shart swikar hai, ab se main koi galat word kisi bhi teacher ke liye use nahi karunga.

Arjun: Okay I'll take a leave kal milta hoon mujhe ghar jana hai Kajal mam mera wait kar rahi hogi.



[At The Home]

Kajal: Kya baat hai Arjun jab se tum aaye ho chup chup ho koi pareshani hai kya?


Arjun: Nahi chachi aisi koi baat nahi hai bas thoda ajib feel kar hoon pata nahi kya.

Kajal: Koi baat nahi aisa hota hai aksar jab hum new place ya environment mein aate hain.

Arjun: Sayad aap thik kah rahi hain aisa hi hai.


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Kajal: Okay tum jao fresh hokar aa jao main hum dono ke liye lunch ready karti hoon.

Arjun: Okay aur main apne room mein chala gaya.


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That's all for this episode stay tuned.
Dheere hero bhi Baki female ke sath sath apni Chachi ki taraf bhi attract ho jayega waise teeno ki mast hai
 

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Update 5
Ecstasy of
Dhruv

Recap: Pichhle update mein humne padha ki kaise Rohan ne Arjun ki Chachi par comment kiya aur kaise Rohan aur Arjun ki dosti huyi ab inki dosti kaisi rahti hai ye to aane wala samay hi batayega.

Now Next: >>>


[AT THE GARDEN]


Main,Kajal chachi and uska 4 years ka beta Dhruv rubber wala football khel rahe the.

Dhruv bahut hi khush tha mere sath khelkar.

Kyonki use ek aur new friend jo mil gaya tha uske sath khelne ke liye.

Uska chehra bata raha tha ki wo bahut bahut khush hai mere sath khelkar.

Kyoki aksar wo akela kabhi kabhi hi apni mom ke sath khela karta tha.

Kajal: Kya baat hai Dhruv aaj tum bahut hi jayada khush lag rahe ho?

Dhruv: Mumma aaj mujhe bhaiya ke rup mein ek aur new 🆕 friend mil gaya hai isliye main itna khush hoon.

Dhruv ne aage bolna jari rakha.

Dhruv: Dad aur aapke alawa ab main hamesha hi bhaiya ke sath khub khelunga aur maje karunga.

Dhruv: Kyon bhaiya aap mere sath doge na apne chhote friend ka?


Arjun: Offcourse chhote bhai hum khub masti karenge.

Arjun ne aage apni baat ko continue rakhte huye kaha.

Arjun: Lekin kabhi badmashi nahi aur na kabhi kisi ko pareshan karenge okay chhote Dhruv.


Dhruv: Okay bhaiya main aapki baat hamesha yaad rakhunga.


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Kajal: Mera pyara Dhruv kitna samjhdar ho gaya hai.

Kajal: Apne bhaiya ka baat itni easily maan gaya meri baat to kabhi nahi manta aur mujhe satata rahta hai.

Dhruv: Wo to hum abhi bhi aapko mil kar kabhi kabhi sataya karenge kyon bhaiya?

Arjun : Bilkul thik kaha tumne chhote bhai.

Arjun: Main hamesha tumhare sath hoon.

Kajal chachi : Okay to ab tum dono milkar mujhe sataya karoge.

Hum dono ek sath bilkul.

Chachi ne hum dono ko apne sine se chipka liya.

Aur kaha bilkul mere bachhe tum dono mere pyare bete ho.

Kajal: Tum dono ka pura right hai mumma ko satane ka.

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That's all for this update.
Chalo acha hai hero chachi ke ghar me ache se settle ho gaya
 
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