Bhai very nice story....
But ek baat bolunga ya toh story Hinglish mai likho ya english mai.....
Dono mix karke mat likho....
Dono mix karke likhne se story ka mja kharab horha hai.....
Abhi mai update 4 part 4 padh rha tha toh dono mix karke likhe ho Hinglish padhke jitna mja aarha hai English mix hone par poora mja kirkira ho ja rha hai....
But abtak jitna padha hu usme mja aaya hai....