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Aaj Maine full story padh li. Story kafi majedar hai . Full to dhamal. Action Kam or love and care or suspense jayda hai ..
Story ka main character Mahi hai Jo 7 feet lamba chora anrejo ke jaise dikhta hai ..Jo isme special hai isse koi v girl ho ya aurat ya old women Bach nhi skti...
Hero ke life Mai kitni princess hai Avi clear nhi hua hai...but SB Mai secial Mina hai ..
Story ka king mahi hai to story ki queen Anita hai ..may be Anita Rati ke samne kuch kamjor padhti hai wo hai wardan ko le KR Jo Avi tk rati nhi mangi ..dekhte hai rati wardan Mai kiy mangti hai ..
Anita kuch khtrank krne ja rhi hai kiy Avi clear nhi hua ..but itna confirm hai Mahi ka kuch nhi hoga na kisi ki Jan legi but bc kuch physco v LGti hai mujhe kavi kavi aisa lgta hai kuch v KR skti hai .
Anita ka motive Jo btati hai (jaise saroo SE mahi ko chini waise rati SE mahi ko legi ) mujhe nhi lgta hai ye motive itna jruri hai iske aar Mai kuch bada plain KR rhi hai.
Special apko Jo point lga jaise jaise chreactor ki entry hoti gai uska flashback btate clegye aap chahte to kuch word Mai flashback dikha skte the kiw ki aap ne chreactor ki entry SE pehle uske bare Mai hint de hi dete the..
Story Mai itna creacter hai Bhai review likhna suru KR do to apki trah Wala ek lamba update on jayega
One word Mai bolunga fabulous mind-blowing extraordinary story aisi story Maine kavi nhi padhi.. Jo review Mai nhi likh paya dhire dhire likh dunga Bhai
Story ka main character Mahi hai Jo 7 feet lamba chora anrejo ke jaise dikhta hai ..Jo isme special hai isse koi v girl ho ya aurat ya old women Bach nhi skti...
Hero ke life Mai kitni princess hai Avi clear nhi hua hai...but SB Mai secial Mina hai ..
Story ka king mahi hai to story ki queen Anita hai ..may be Anita Rati ke samne kuch kamjor padhti hai wo hai wardan ko le KR Jo Avi tk rati nhi mangi ..dekhte hai rati wardan Mai kiy mangti hai ..
Anita kuch khtrank krne ja rhi hai kiy Avi clear nhi hua ..but itna confirm hai Mahi ka kuch nhi hoga na kisi ki Jan legi but bc kuch physco v LGti hai mujhe kavi kavi aisa lgta hai kuch v KR skti hai .
Anita ka motive Jo btati hai (jaise saroo SE mahi ko chini waise rati SE mahi ko legi ) mujhe nhi lgta hai ye motive itna jruri hai iske aar Mai kuch bada plain KR rhi hai.
Special apko Jo point lga jaise jaise chreactor ki entry hoti gai uska flashback btate clegye aap chahte to kuch word Mai flashback dikha skte the kiw ki aap ne chreactor ki entry SE pehle uske bare Mai hint de hi dete the..
Story Mai itna creacter hai Bhai review likhna suru KR do to apki trah Wala ek lamba update on jayega
One word Mai bolunga fabulous mind-blowing extraordinary story aisi story Maine kavi nhi padhi.. Jo review Mai nhi likh paya dhire dhire likh dunga Bhai