Fantasy immortal

[Yasasvi3]

Update 9 posted.... it's on Page no 33

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[Flame Boy]

realised....

Released Hoga Spelling Mistakes par dhyan dijiye

 

[kas1709]

UPDATE 3


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Yash :- ha samjh gaya ( akduu)

Per itne me yashasvi dekhti h uski maa ro rahi h to wo us se puchti h mma aap ro kyu rahe ho?
Itne me Khush teji se mudti h or dod kar dusri taf Jane lagti h tej kadmo se to yashasvi chillati h or khati h...:- mma ruko kha ja rahe ho aap?....
Mma aap kyu ja rahe ho kya aap mujhse pyar nahi karti(or rone lagti h)

Khushi mud kar apni bachi ko gale se laga leti h or khati h :- beta mene tumse kha tha na ki mujhe thode din kuch kaam h ... hamari ispe baat ho chuki h aap kuch dino tak papa ke sath raho fir mma aapko aake waps le jayangi apne sath okk

Yashasvi:- nahi mma aap please meko chhod ke mat jao hum teeno sath mil kar rahange me koi shaitani nahi karungi per please mma aap please mat jao


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Ab aage....



Yash dur se dono maa betiyo ko gale lagte hue dekh raha tha na jane kya chal raha tha uske man me..fir achanak uski nazar uski nazar us diary per jati h jo use Khushi ne di thi abhi kuch time phale yash usi ko khol kar padhne lagta h to uska dimag chakara jata h wo khud se khata h
:- bhot kuch h is ladki ke bare me jaan ne ke liye...kyu kabhi samjh nahi aata meko...na kabhi kisi gurukul me sikhaya na hi is Yash ki school me to inko samjha to samjha jaye kese???...itne sari chije wo bhi sirf is chutku si ladki ke liye had h bhagwan...

Fir Yash un dono ke pass jata h jo abhi bhi gale lagi hui thi...Yash :- dekho aaj achanak se itni raat ko tum yaha aayi Bina bataye mene koi khas intazam bhi nahi kiya tumdono ke liye to please kya tum dono aaj aaj hotel me rah sakti ho please kal me khud tumse contact karungaa yashasvi ke liye..bye bye sweetie pie

Khushi:- ohkey aacha h..
Fir wo dono waha se chali jati h

Or Yash door close kar deta h and sochta h ki wo bache ko to sath le gayi lekin.....kal ye jagah ye Ghar jo ki already lagbhag Khali sa pada h ye bhi bank mujhe se le lega.....kya karu me ab...sochnga padega re baba


Yash ek photo ke hath me leta ha or sochta h .
:- ye photo is ladke ke maa baap ki h jo ki bhot hi aache khase paise Wale or paropkari log the Jo ki car accident me mare gaye unhone sari property apne bhatije chirag ke name kardi per wo apni khud ki sagi aulaad ke liye khuch nahi chhod ke gaye.....kya jhandu aadmi tha ye ladka....
Per ek second iske mmi papa ko thodi pata tha ki ki ye ladka jhandu h ....wo konsa future dekh sakte the?ya unko pta tha ye kisi kaam ka nahi h ... useless admi huhh.....Per aisa ho kese sakta h ki accident se theek phale property chirag ke name hui na ki is Yash ke name(ander jo Yash h wo great Yash h and body Yash gill ki)....kya unki mout me chirag ka hath h?

Ke banda sach me jhandu h kisi kaam ka nahi h sala chalata firta kangali ki dukaan na kuch hota h ...na jata h...faltu sala.....ghar walo ne property nahi di ....bank se karje me dooba h ....ghar bacha nahi ....ab bichari wo nanhi pari ko kha rakhunga??....

Mana ye ladka bank crooupt (diwaliya)ho chuka h
Per ye ek company ka malik bhi h sala kuch Paisa to kahi pe chupa ke rakha hoga emergency ke liye ya apne fayde ke liye ??

Ye soch ke Yash Sara Ghar chaan Marta h sab kuch dhundhne ke baad usko kuch milta h pta h kya??....
Paisa na ..yani Paisana(I know bad joke)...

Thak haar kar wo ek jagah sofe per pani taarif tika ke Beth jata h
Dekhta h usko kuch mila ....ek bracelet..ek invitation Card and 1000 cash....( Ye tha mailk...) ..Yash sochta h itna kuch to us dairy ke hisab se ek din na chale ...

[ Mana the great Yash 2000 saal purana h but jab wo is sari me aaya to itni informations to mil gyi na just like use Khushi ke bare me pta chala]

Yash (man me):- Ye beclate (kangan)to gill pariwar ki bahu ko diya jata h..or me dragon devta ke ladki wali chije ka kya karunga

Ab invitation dekhte h ..

{Dear
Hamre jhaj ki pahalee yaatra ka jashn manaane ke lie emaviteshan, shreemaan. (Yash gill ke papa) aur unake parivaar ko jahaaj par chadhane aur samaaroh dekhane ke lie aamantrit kiya gaya hai.
juaariyon ka raaja - rakka.}


Ise pash ke Yash sochta h jooriyo ki ship ...abhi maaja aayaga na bhidu ab karunga me is baachi ke liye kuch......

Fir Yash so jata h or Khushi and yashasvi hotel me


Fir agle din ...gill house...

Sambhal ke bhan ke l ( laddu) sambhal ke tere baap ka nahi h toot gaya to wasool karunga tere se hi
Or suno Ander se kuch mat chhodna sab kuch le aao jitna kuch h. - ye khane wala bank karamchari tha jo majdooro ko nirdesh de raha tha ...


Yaha apne the great Yash chal pade apna jhola utha ke .. be like hum to feeker h chal padhenge jhola le kar( yaad aaya kiska dailog h).....Yash apne man me bolata h aaj phala din h or ek din me sab kuch waps haasil kar lunga .... akhir me hu kon...

Yash ja hi Raha hota h ki raste me ek budha aata h or usko bolta h :- Abe o launde tum yahi rahte ho na ... Hamka morning walkwa karna h tanki bato aas pass ye gardenwa kha milaga . .sasur ka nati..

Yash (man me) :- are is budde uncle me hamko ye shaitan ka aura kyu feel ho Raha h ...
Tabhi yash :- oh chacha ..dekho baat aisa h na aapke na charo or hamko bad aura feel ho Raha h aap na ihha se chale jaiye warna na hum aapko family sahita uda denge....

Buddha uncle ek dam se chauk jata h ki re boodbak ye kya h kon h?......

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Let's see guy's aage kya hota h kya nahi hota h...maaje ki baat batu aage kya hoga even I don't know me ek update padhti hu and usko hindi me than agla....so mere liye bhi ye ek thriller story h to hum or aap sath sath chal rahe h...shyad hi koi asi writer ho mera jitna cute ya pagal ho(ghamond nahi h please it's a joke for intertanment)lo me bhi aapko kya batane lag gyi ....

Hmm ek suggetion chahiye aap log bole to story ko casual chalne Diya jaye ya thode dailogs jo mene Aaj ass kiye h aise likhaa jaye?? Please apni ray comments me jaroor deve.... dhanywaad....apki yasasvi.... not yashasvi ....
Image's add kru?but us se thoda maaja kharb hoga chalo places ki daal dungi cheaters ki khud imagination me rakho

Nice update....

 

[Yasasvi3]

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Yasasvi3 bhai....
Nice and beautiful update.....

Thanks a lot

Badhiya update madam ji

Yash to diwaliya nikla yashasvi ko kaise palega lagta ha maa bap ko bhi marwa diya gaya property ke liye ya chalo kuchh bhi ho aapki writing style funny ha padhkar maja aa jata ha

Aap aise hi likhte raho to jyada badhiya ha hasi majak masti ke sath chalne diya jaye story ko

Thanks ....but man ki ek baat buri h ki wo apne mood pe depend karta huska prabhav na pade bas

Humne ignore kar di aapki galtiyan warna spelling mistakes thi

To bilkul aap bataiye kha thi spelling mistake chalaga word hi change ho jaye wo bilkul khul ke bato

मरहूम यश साहब की कहानी भी अजीब है । धनाढ्य और रईस मां-बाप का एकलौता औलाद लेकिन जीवनयापन एक दरिद्र की । ऊपर से वसीयत उसके चचेरे भाई चिराग के नाम पर । हंड्रेड पर्सेंट यश के मां-बाप की मृत्यु संदेहास्पद है । और लाजिमी है शक चिराग पर ही जाना है ।
इधर खुशी और उसकी नन्ही बेटी यशस्वी की हालत भी अत्यंत दयनीय दिखाई दे रहा है ।

Dhanywaad itna gahrai se padhne ke liye

क्या यश का यह नया वर्सन खुशी और यशस्वी के जीवन मे खुशियों का सौगात दे पाएगा

Ye to meko bhi nahi pta

और यह जुआरियों के जहाज और उस जहाज पर सफर करने का इनविटेशन कार्ड से क्या मतलब है ?

Ha bilkul....per kab ye nahi pta

कहीं यह जहाज जुआ का अड्डा तो नही ?

Ho bhi sakta h or nahi bhi but soch aachi h

लेकिन ऐसे हाई फाई जुए के लिए यश को इनवाइट किसने और क्यों कर दिया ?

Usko nahi uske papa ko .....thoda or Dhyan dijiye

वैसे यह अपडेट भी बहुत खुबसूरत था ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट यशस्वी मैडम ।

Thank you so much sir for your valuable comment

Mujhe english bhej do maze aa jaayenge and maine bas ek point nikala tha fun ke liye chi chau ko padhne me funny lagta isiliye bola heh bura nahi maan'ne ka behen

Bura or m(mast joke tha ek or sunao)..... English version se bore ho jaoge.....me bhi hindi dub me kafi pareshaniya aati h

Isiliye 2 update rakhe h day ke ager aap log cahho to...

Released Hoga Spelling Mistakes par dhyan dijiye

Thanks for identifying.....apun ko English ka locha h bachpan se socho me Adhikari hu plus dusre desh me or rahti hu

Nice update....

Thank you so much

 

[Dhakad boy]

Nice update

 

[Hell Strom]

The real tharkulla....

Tharkulla jab hota jab " " ye emoji use karta ..... Par meine " " ye use ki thi

 

[dev61901]

Aap sabhi se ek swal h jis ke pakas me jitne jyada log honge unhi ki baat mani jayagi ... chhote chote 2 updates diye jaye ? Ya iske badle ek bada update diya jaye?....bataye jarror......

Bada update diya jaye

 

[Yasasvi3]

UPDATE 4
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Yash (man me) :- are is budde uncle me hamko ye shaitan ka aura kyu feel ho Raha h ...
Tabhi yash :- oh chacha ..dekho baat aisa h na aapke na charo or hamko bad aura feel ho Raha h aap na ihha se chale jaiye warna na hum aapko family sahita uda denge....

Buddha uncle ek dam se chauk jata h ki re boodbak ye kya h kon h?......


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Ab aage. ...

Buddha :- are oh budbak...itni se Umar me me itne bakalo kaise ho sakte ho aisa kuch nahi h jhoot bolte ho tum me ijjatdar aadmi hu...tohar ghar Bala kachu sikhaya h ki nahi ...ki badke Logan ka ijjat karna chahiye...(Soory guys aati nahi h Bihari I want just trying...kisi ko aati h to dailog aache se likh k bata dijiyega replace kar dungi)....

Yash :- are chacha tum to bahute bura maan Gaye chalo aapko hampe biswas nahi hana ...to jaiye hum aapko nahi jante or na aap hamko ... chaiye side dijiye........

Budhha:- are ruko be ham tumko kachu baate batate h....ya shyad do chaar ..

Tabhi aachank ek gadi jiska balance bagad gaya tha aati h or buddhe se takarne wali hoti h ki achanak se apna Yash babu ek hath se gadi ko thoda sa jhathke se side kar deta h or Buddha Bach jata h ....( Phali baat Yash or wo Buddha foothpath per khade the 2nd wo gadi thodi si out of track thi to normal band shyad use hila nahi pata but thoda hi close tha to buddhe ko ajib nahi laga)

Buddha:- fewh ....ae Raja babu dhanbwaad aaj tum hamare ke side na kiye hote(incident inta jaldi hua buddhe ko kuch samjh nahi aaya...so fast h the great Yash) to hamar khopdi hi fat jati... Or hamari khun se eh road kharb ho jata ..Aajkal ke baache bas apne future ko dekhte h unhe fark nahi padta aas pass chal kya Raha h per tumne hammar jaan bachaya thankyou

Yash :- are chacha bhul jao or Dhyan do jawani khatm hone ko h(ye kah kar Yash chala jata h or puche wo Buddha)

Budhha:- ladka aacha h bas jidd buri baat h or akduu bhi h
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SEEN change......apna hero pahuch chuka h invitation wali jagha lootero wale jhaj pe boohot sate couple the ofcourse yaar party h Boot pe log to honge hi ..apna hero boat pe chadh jata h sidhiyon se..


images of different websites

Tabhi jhaj ke pass ek rols Royce aakar rikatu h jisme ek Amir ladka thoda sa aacha dikh raha tha bolta h .....Abe ..Yash ye sala abhi tak nara nahi??..ye usne apne samne bethe secratary ki tarf dekh kar kha ..

Uska secratary:- sir un logo ne kha ki unhone apna kaam kar diya h or banda mar chuka h wo log khud apni aakhon se dekh ke aaye the mene khud nahi dekha ki kya hua ...

Ladka:- kya chutiye log laal rakhe h salo se ek kaam dhang se nahi hota. .....(........kuch or bhi bola)..

Apna Yash babu ghoomte ghoomate pahuch jata h ship ke ander...ab aap log jante h ship badi hoti h to kafi kmare bane hote h ase hi ek kamre ke pass jab Yash gujarta h to wo dekhta h ki ek ladka use ghoore ja raha tha..Yash use ignore karke aage badh raha hota h ki wo ladka Yash ka rasta rokta h or bolta h..

:- Yash paji kaise ho? Sabkuch lut jane ke baad bhi yaha Masti karne aaye ho.....Bhai kisi ne sach kha h ...ga** fate to fate nawabi na ghate

Yash man me ....ye to......

Yash :- to aap h sement ke buisness ke naye youwa netta misteer Himanshu......bade nawab ho aap ...

Himanshu :- nawab....kya bolaa tune abhi... ..



Himashu:- Abe Teri himmat kaise hui meri insult karne ki tera jesa Hara hua aadmi jispe na Ghar gadi bangala ....ha or maa bhi kya h tera pass ?? Tera cahchara bhai chirag aaj resident ban gaya h tera buisness group ka or tu meri behjati kar raha h?sale aukat kya h teri mere samne?? Tera pass bade bade lons ke alwa kuch nahi h fatichar kahi ka ....tu mere se bikh kyu nahi mang leta yaar me na teko apki ciment wali fectory me majdooro wali naikari se dunga ...mahine ka 10 hazar kafi h?aaja ban ja mera nokar ya fir ja Jake bhikh mang sadko pe bikhari kahi ka.....

Yash :- huh....chal ja be sadele.....apun ke tera se baat karke apne time kharaab nahi karna chahata

Or Yash ghoom jata h or himashu or just piche hota h or bolta h

Himanshu:- sale do kaudi ke aadmi tere me ghamnd kis baat ka h be sale baat to ase kar raha h jese Ambani ki secret aulaad h tu .....(or ye bolke wo Yash ke piche per se Marta h )
Per yaha Yash thodi tha yaha tha the great Yash usko usko laat se ghanta fark pade ......to Himanshu khud jab use laat marata ha to laat lagti h per dard use hi hota h or wo thoda sa diwar ke sahare ho jata h tab Yash bolta h...

:- kya hua cemat factory ke mailk ko abhi mailk to Komal ladki jaisa h........kya hua ....... babu ko dard ho raha h? Tumhari bhot bhot kamzor h ... itna mat hilaya(gym me roodh ko) kar bhau

Per yaha himanshu fight wale mood me aake apne hero per mukkaa marre ki or ladne ki kosis karta h mukka marte time Himanshu:- teri maa ki....( Jai)..bhikhari Salle tere ko to me sabka sikhata hu....

Per apna hero uski her ek move ko doch kar leta h than kahata h m...kon kisko sikhata h ye to waqt hi batayaga.......


Itne me entery hoti h ek khass sakssiyat ki....jiske kadmo ki aahat sunke wo dono ruk jate h jaha the wahi ....wo mudke us saks ki or dekhte h...oh no ye to wahi banada h jo rolls Royce me tha......kon tha aakhir ye ......

Or wo sakhs unke billkul pass or samne khada hole bolta h :- ye kya h ... Himanshu...tera dimag me chal kya Raha h....kya soch kya Raha h tu?...

Apna Yash babu (man me):- oh to ye h chirag babu sabke samne aacha banke rahata h aacha vayavhaar karta h ....per asal me ye sabko chumtiya banata h...isko to acting me ocar milna chahiye per .....the balak abhi tumhare samne the geart Yash khade h....tumhra chutki nahi jo do min me...........to tumko khelna pasand h chalo khelte h tumhare sath.....2000 saal baad thode majje karne to bante h...

Per tabhi yash bolta h:- chirag bhai mera chirguuu.....ha ye hi h ...ye dekh tere Bhai ko cheed raha h meri garibi ka majkh uda Raha h mera majkh udata to me sah bhi leta per isne apni gill family ka majkh udaya h.... bhai ye apni family ko gali diya kitna bura baccha h iske mmi ne isko kuch sikhaya bhi nahi....bad menarrrs...

Chirag be like......( Ek sec me bata du ha ye hi h chirag babu....jo rolls Royce me bethe hmmm)..Abe isne kab itni chalaki sikhi......isme kab itna dimag aaya iska to uper ka floore Khali rahata tha ...lagata h koi iske bheje me rahane ko aaya h ...Chalo koi na merko pta h ki kya chahata h ye but iski wajah se me khud ko expose nahi kar sakta dusro ke saamne....me apni asaliyat kabhi kisi ke samne nahi aane dunga..

Chirag:- kyu himanshu tu meri family ko nichha dikhane ki kosis kar raha h.... tujhe pta h tu kya kar raha h?daru waru to nahi pi hana..

Himanshu:- are n......nhi.... nahi sir... bilkul nahi mera kabhi aapki family ko kuch bolne ka intation nahi tha per kya Yash gi ab bhi apki family ka hissa h use to aap log family ka hissa nahi mante the na to fir aaj ye aapki family ka hissa kaise hua?

Chirag:- abeee....teko kisne bola hamari family ki baato ke bich me apni naak ghusane ko???ye hamare aaps ki baat h ......teri himmat bhi kese Hui mere samne bolne ki tera baap tak mera samne nahi bolta or tu uski galti....mera samne bol rahi h?teri himmat kese Hui mera bhai ke bare me ye sab bolne ki teri na sari hekaddi nikalwa dunga chal mafi mang mere bhai se ...

Himanshu ki ek baar ko fat jati h or wo chirag ko dekhta h ki ye kya hua .. kyu hua .....kaise hua...
Per himanshu kadwa ghoont pi ke:- ssss... soory Yash ...

Chirag:- Abe kya sabji wale bajar me sabji bechane ko aaya h....aise bolte h soory? Chal niche ghutno p Beth or properr way me soory bol ..
Himashu (man me):- bhan ke lo...(Lote) Chirag..... teri to sala kutta kamina...

Per itne me Yash apna unke bich aata h or apne cousin ke kandhe per hath rakh ke ...
Yash :- bhai chod de isko Jane de jitna hua kafi h koi joorat nahi h usko ghutno pe bethke mafi mangwana ki me aise hi khush hu
( Per yaha ek chij hue jab Yash ne kandhe pe hath rakha tab usne kandhe ko thoda daba diya jis se uske 12 baj gaye ..)

Chirag:- dekh bhai ne bola karne ka to karne ka ....bas isliye teko Jane de raha hu ..chal ab nikal yaha se or dikhna mat...

Chirag (man me) :- me abhi piche mud nahi sakta usne mera face dekha to samjh jayaga....ek sec Chirag you are best ....huh .. hmmm)...


So guys here is update no 4kya sochte ho aap iske bare me comment karke jarror bataye.. and ha ab se ek hi update aaya 1- 2 din se baki aapke pyar pe depend bhi karta h

 

[111ramjain]

Nice

 

[dhalchandarun]

Update 4 is on air.....chalo padho or bato kaisa h?....plus important baat ab se ek update aayga bada ....1 ya 2 din se...baki aap logo ki demand pe depend karaga...or suggestion dijiye aacha bura jo bhi ho.... please bato dosto

Update bada ....bhale hi aap time lelo.

 

[Yasasvi3]

Update bada ....bhale hi aap time lelo.

Or bada?fir or time lagaga....amm 2.5 k word ka rakhu?kitne ka rakhu?