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thanks..!!Bhai aap bahut badhiya likh rahe ho aur story sahi tareeke se aage chal rahi hai. Aapko jo sahi lagta hai story ke liye aap wo kijiye. Readers ka to kaam hai suggestions dena, agar kisi ki suggestion aapko achhi lage to aap uska use kar sakte hain warna waise bhi story ko aap bahut hi achhe se likh rahen hain.
bhai aap sahi keh rahe han. aur mere hisaab se har kisi ko apne suggestion dene ka pura pura haq bhi hai.. story to mai apne hisab se hi le kar chalonga. lekin aap sabb ka bhi mujhe ehsaas hai, kisi ko story me maza kamm nahi hona chahiye.. isliye meri koshish hoti hai k aap sabb ke liye achcha likhon..
vaise ho sakta tha ki shuru mein vijju hota, lekin uspe load padta dekh Shweta use behno ki taraf modti aur uske liye Ranjit kafi rehta, beech beech mein Shweta aur Vijay bhi ek dusre ke saath ho lete, lekin writer ko kuch aur hi manjoor hai to rehne do