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Fantasy Hayaan - Ek Insaan Ya Shaitaan

Hayaan-Insaan Ya shaitan Story kaisi hai..?

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Hayaan said:
Hii Friends !!
Thank you very Much,
Mujhe yaqin nahi tha ki mai jara sa bhi likh paunga...
Lekin aap sabhi ke Reviews dekh kar lag raha hai......ki mai thoda bahut to likh sakta hu,
Jo aap sabhi ko Pasand aaye....Aur Pasand aa bhi Raha hai...

Thanks A Lot to encourage me..

Next Update Kuchh der Baad...
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Abb...takk..
Anjan shahar, naya ghar, naye log...
Safar me thake hone ke karan nind aa gayi aur hum so gaye.....

Update No. - 15 (Long Update )

Abb...Aage..
Subah meri Aankh Meera ke jagane se khuli,
Meera aaj bilkul fresh dikh rahi thi,


Maine Meera ko pakad ke apni tarf kheench liye aur Bahon mein bharke uske Galon ko choom liya,
""Chhodo na kya karte ho dusre ke ghar mein hai Koi aa gaya to"" Meera chhudate huye boli,

Kabeer - Aaj tum bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho, G.M. kiss to lene do,

Aaj kitne dino Baad mujhe bahut achhi nind aayi pure ek mahine ho gaye the thik se soye huye..har pal bs Maut ki Aahat sunayi pafti thi...

Meera - Baaki Sab baad mein Pahle utho, Pahle fresh ho jao,
Didi aur Jiju Nashte pe intezar kar rahe hai...

Mai utha aur bathroom mein ghus gaya...Meera ja chuki thi..

Mai bhi Fresh hokar Haal mein pahunch gaya,

Kabeer - Hii everyone Good Morning !!

Vijay - 35yr (Govt. Employee)


Vijay uthkar kabeer se hath milaya aur gale mila
""kaise ho mere bhai !! Meera ne Sab bataya, sunke bahut dukh hua..""

Aise hi baton-Baton mein Nashta khatm ho gaya,
aur hum Sabhi hall me Sofe pe baith gaye,

Rashmi - Aaj maine aur Vijay ne chhutti kar rakhi hai,
Aaj tum logo ko Apna shahr dikhayenge,

Vijay - Dekho Kabeer, Pahle Shahr dekh lo, Yaha ka Rahan Sahan samajh lo,
Fir usi Hisaab se kaam ke bare mei Planning karna...

Kabeer - Jaisa aap log thik samjhe,

Fir Hum-Sabhi shahar ghoomne chal pade...

Market, Garden, Restorent, aise hi kayi jagah ghoomte-ghoomte Shaam ho gayi aur Hum ghar ki taraf wapas chal diye...

Kaafi khubsurat aur ghani Aabadi wala Shahar hai,

Chahal-Pahal bahut thi, Deshi-Videshi sabhi ghoomte najar aa rahe the..



Mai ek chiz gaur ki Hotel aur Restorent ki sankhya Kaafi jyada thi..
Lekin kuchh gine chune ko chhodkar kuchh Jyada Khaas nahi dikh rahe the...



Ghar pahunchkar Sab fresh huye aur Hall me aakar baith gaye...

Vijay - to kaisa laga Shahar...??
Meera - Bahut badhiya..maza aa gaya ghoomne mein

Kabeer - Bahut khubsurat aur kaafi chahal pahal hai Yaha..

Rashmi - Ab khubsurat hai to bheed hogi hi, Har jagah ke log ghoomne jo aate hai...

Meera - Kabeer kya tumne kuchh note kiya iss shahr mein..

Vijaya - Kyu kya hua..??

Kabeer - Kuchh nahi Jija ji !! Baat ye hai ki Mai aur Meera apne Ganv me Tour-Guide karte the the...Bas usi ke bare mein bol rahi...
Fir maine aur Meera ne Ganv mein kya-kya kiya Sab bata diya...

Rashmi - What a surprise....Tum dono to kamaal ke ho,

Vijay - Hmm ye Baat hai, to ab tak tum dono ne Kitne paise Jama kiye,

Meera - 20 lac cash aur 16 Lac Jwellry(Kabeer ki Maa + Meera +Rachna )

Kabeer - Kyyaaa ???

Vijay - wow itni punji mein to tum logon ki Sari problem khatm ho jayegi...

Kabeer - Meera, tumne to mujhse 16 lac cash aur 10 ki jwellry batayi thi,..

Meera - Dekho ji ye aurate ki batein hai inpe na hi pado to achha hai,

Rashmi - Sahi boli chhoti...good

Vijay - Yaha 4 ghar chhodke aage do bangle khali hai,
abhi bike nahi hai
ek 6.5 lac ka aur Dusra 9.5 lac ka...

mere hisab se 6.5 wala best rahega...aur baki Paise ka bussiness start karo..

Kabeer - Hmm thik aap mujhe aur Meera ko Broker se milva dena...
Baaki hum dekh lenge..

Aur Sab dinner karke apne-apne Room chal diye...

Mai aur Meera upar chhat mein tahalne chale gaye....

Maine Meera ko apni bahon mein bharte huye kaha...
to Jaan kya soncha hai kya karna hai...??

Meera - Mere khayal se Hame apne purane kaam ko aage badhana chahiye Jismein hum expert hai,

Kabeer - Main bhi yahi sonch raha, Lekin Ab hume khud ki ek travel agency kholenge..

Hmm thik hai sisakte huye,,
Mat karo na, dusre k ghar mein hai Aisa na ho ki bardasht karna muskil ho jaye"" Meera boli...



Hua ye ki Kabeer Meera ko Bahon mei bhare huye apni ungliyon ki uski kamar mein fer raha tha,

aur apne hontho se meera ki Surahi Gardan par kiss karke garam-garam saanse chhod raha tha,

Jiska asar ye hua ki Meera ki Siskiyan nikalne lagi,,

Meera ne khud ko chhudaya aur Niche chalne ko kahne lagi...

Hum niche aa gaye aur apne-apne bistar mein let gaye,
Mai Meera ki oor muh karke let gaya,
ek dusre ki aankhon mei khote chale gaye
Nind kab aa gayi pata na chala.....

Aaj subah meri Jaldi aankh khul gayi,
mai fresh hokar Jub bahar aaya to Maaji Room se ja chuki thi....

Lekin Meera Ab bhi So rahi thi, mai dhire se Darwaje ko lock kiya aur Meera ke baju mein aakar leta gaya,



Meera ko apni Bahon mein bhar liya, dhire uske galon mein kiss kiya, Lekin fir bhi Meera ne itni kam Aahat mein bhi Aankhein khol di....

Meera - Good morning Jaan, mere gaal mein Kiss kar di...

Kabeer - Paglu aise thode na G.M. wish kiya jata hai....

Meera - No no, mujhe jaane do, Nahi mujhe nahi Janna....

Bhala Ab mai kaha chhodne wala tha...maine jhat se Apne Honth Meera ke Lips Par rakh diye....
Meera bhi sath dene lagi,
Tabhi darwaje par knock hua...hum dono Hadbadakar alag huye Meera smile dete huye Bathroom bhag gayi...

Maine Jakar Darwaja khola, Bahar Rashmi didi khadi thi, maine G.M. wish kiya...

Rashmi - Gm Kabeer, niche aa jao,
Nashta lag chuka hai....Meera ko bhi le aana sath mein...

Mai aur Meera Nashte ki table mein baith gaye Sabko wish kiya aur nashta karne lage...

Vijay - Maine Broker se baat kar li hai...wo 10 bje tak aayega...tum donon sath mein chake jana,
Aur sare arrangement check kar lena tabhi done karna..

Kabeer - Hmm ok ! Mujhe Yaha ke travel agency ki list aur details chahiye Kaha milegi Jijia ji !

Vijay - Shaam ko mai lete aaunga,
Hum chalte hai sham ko milte hai, Agar bahar se kuchh kam ho to bahar Badri bhaiya rahte hai unhin se help le lena...Bye bye

Vijay aur Rashmi didi office ke liye nikal gaye,
Meera Kapde dhulne chal di aur Maa ji puja-path mein Lag gayi...

Mai bhi free baitha tha..
Maine soncha lao thoda Badri Bhaiya se mil liya jaye....Sayad koi Kaam ki Jankari mil jaye...
Badri - 42 yr (Suspend constable )

Apne Garden mein kisi fone mwin baat kar rahe the tahalte huye....

Namaste Badri bhaiya Mai Kabeer Yaha Naya hu !!
Badri - Kaha ke rahne wale ho..?

Mai - Maana ganv se, aur hamari baatein shuru ho gayi..

""Yahin bagal wale ghar ko leni ki sonch Raha hu,
Aap batao kaisa rahega...

Badri - Jagah to achhi hai dono,
Yahan ka Mahaul bhi achha hai na Shor saraba na koi bheed- bhadakka....

waise kaun sa bangla le rahe ho chhota wala ya bada....

Mai - Chhota wala,
Jija ji kah rahe Chhota le lo, Baki ka bussiness kar lena....

Badri - thik hi to kah rahe, waise ganv mein kya karte the...??

Mai - Mai aur meri Patni Tour-Guide karte the,
Badri - To Yaha bhi isi ka bussiness chalu kar lo waise bhi kami hai Yahan aur Public jyada bani rahti hai...

Meri mano to Bada wala bangla lo Jaha Gadiyan khadi kar sako aur Travel bussiness start karo...khoob chalega...mai likh ke kah sakta hu...
Mai iss shar ki nas - nas ko janta hu..

Mai - Dhanyawad !! Mera aur meri Patni ka bhi yahi manna hai,

Itne mein bahar ek gadi usmein se ek sakhs aaya aur Mere bare mein poochhne laga...

Chaliye Mai hi kabeer hu,
Badri Bhaiya chalo aap bhi dekh lo..kaisa kya intezam karna padega...uss hisab se,

Mai Meera aur Badri teeno uss Broker ke sath Chal diye.....

Dono Banglo ko achhe se dekhne ke baad, Maine paise ki baat ki....

Chhota wala 1/2 bighen ki jameen me,

Aur Bada wala 2.5 bighe Appr.2000acres mein,

Broker - Dekho Sahab ji...2.5 bigha ki Jameen aur Ye bangla Dono ka mailakar 9.5 Lac hota hai Jisme 25k mera Commision bhi add hai, Sau ki seedhi baat hai...

Badri - Lekin Jo pahle dekh kar gaye unhe to 9.40 ki baat Tay huyi thi,
Broker - Thik hai thoda upar niche hota rahta hai....

Kabeer - Ye lijiye I.D card Meera Naam se ghar ke kagaz banva dijiye....9.25 Lac bilkul fix, aur Payment Cash dunga,
Lekin Jo bhi Furniture Rakha ab wo hatna nahi Chahiye Jo mere Kaam ka nahi hoga mai Khud de dunga...

Broker - But Sir 9.25 lac sahi rate nahi hai...

Meera - Humne apna Rate bata diya,
Aap ye id rakho... Kal Subah Id de Jana Ya fir Ghar ke Kagaz....Paise hand to hand mil jayenge...

Broker - thik hai Mam !! mai jaakar baat karta hu, Site ke malik se...

Broker Chala Gaya aur Hm bhi ghar wapas aa gaye....

Meera - Apne Naam se Document kyu nahi banva rahe Aap..

Kabeer - Ab tumhi to mera Sab kuchh ho,

aisee hi Pyaar bhari batein karte rahe,. Maine Meera ko Badri bhaiya ke beech huyi baat ko bhi bataya...

Meera - Yani hamara bussiness plan bilkul sahi hai....

Meera - Jija ji to, Govt. Job hai,
But Rashmi didi Kaam ke silsile mein pareshan rahti hai, wo bhi kuchh khud apne bal par karna chahti hai...
Kyu na hum unhein bhi Apna bussiness partner banakar Bade Paimane mein Travel bus. start karein...

Mai - Thik hai Shaam ko baat kar lena maan gayi to hamare liye aur bhi achha hai....

Agli Subah Broker Kagaz lekar aa gaya, mujhe yakin tha ki maan jayega....Hame Bangle ki Key di aur Paise liye aur nikal gaya apne Raste..

Mai Meera aur Maa ji ne milkar Bangle ki Saafayi-Dhulayi ki,

Paint ki jarurat nahi padi pahle se tha, Furniture bhi mastt tha...
Pure ghar ko dhulkar ekdam new kar diya....



Mai aur Meera Market Gaye aur dono ke liye 1-1 mobile le liya, ek computer, ghar aur office work ke kuchh jaruri saman,
Pure 1 lac ki shopping + Tools ki Hum dono ne milke ek din mein...

Sara Saaman gadi mein Laadkar new ghar le gaye aur set kar diya,
set karne ke baad Rashmi didi ke ghar chale gaye..

At Dinner time -
Meera - Didi to kya soncha aapne iss bare mein ??
Kabeer ne list ke sabhi agency se baat kar li hai, Jo jija ne di thi...

Vijay - to Kabeer kya tay hua ?? Sab se,

Kabeer - 10 % commission par maan gaye,
Ab jitne bhi Tourist aayenge Deharadoon sabko ek din ke liye Hamari Agency ke sath tour par Jana hoga..
Agar tourist ko Pasand aaya to wo hamare sath Continue kar sakte hai... warna wapas usi agency ke paas...

Rashmi Di - Agar na pasand aaya to fir Hamara Loss nahi hoga...uper se 10 % bhi gaya....

Meera - Yaqin karo didi,
Pahla tour to Jane do..fir dekhna kya hota hai.....

Vijay - Ab itna yaqin hai to tum log continue karo,
waise bhi mai itna to samajh gaya hu...tum ne sirf 1 din ka 10℅ yunhi dene ki baat na kahi hogi...

Rashmi di - Kab se start karna hai....??

Meera - Kal hum log naye ghar mein puja karayenge aur tabhi Bussiness ka udghatan bhi hoga....

Vijaya - Okay guys !
Pooja aur innoguration dono Sham ko rakhna mai half day karke aa jaunga...

Baton - Baton mein khana bhi ho gaya aur Planning bhi.........


Aaj ke liye Bas itna hi..

Comment aur Review ka Rakhna dhyan....Aap Sabka Hayaan..!!
 
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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update ..kabeer or Mira ki Love life parwan Chad rhi hai.
Kabir Ghar kharib liy apna toursit guide Bala kam continue KR RHA hai.
Mujhe lgta hai badri ka aage v story role aayega
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