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Koshish karunga....Aapki Batayi huyi story ko padhne ki...Agar mili to....Yo baat tanne thik na kahi chhore......
1 poont....Mai kisi bhi story par uski Buraai karne nahi jata....
Ak reader hone se otna hak to mujhe mil hee jata hai ki mai story ka sahi galat bata Saku...ya phir ise aise dekh sakte hai ki....
Jab ham log appreciation dete hai to galat chij par sawaal uthana bhi hamara hee kaam hai.....
Ap aap log chahe ki ham aapko application hee milta rahe...phir chahe aap kaisa bhi likhe.....to mere khyaal me to aisa bilkul possible nahi....
2 point.....Maanta hu ki aap naye writer ho.....lekin ye naya pan aapke 2 se 9 tak ke updates me hee dekhne ko mila.....
Baaki ke updates.....jaise ki update 11 ke baad ya phir update 10 jisme ki aapne sex dikhaya....unme to kanhi bhi aisa nahi laga ki aap koi naye writer ho....
Balki yanhi laga ki koi achcha writer likh raha hai....
3 point....plot ki baat ki jaye to Aapne kaha ki isi duniya ke ho....manta hu....
Lekin fantasy me abhi bhi itne plot hai jinhe kabhi haath tak nahi lagaya gaya hai....
Agar aap kahe to mai bata sakta hu....aapko kai saare theme to....
And last
Aapne VJ KI story padhi hai.....ARHAAN....RD....DEV....AADIGURU PADHI HAI....ACHCHA HAI....
Lekin mere kahne se ak bar.....SGP ki THE RON.....OR...SHIVAM SERIES .....
AGNI DAS ki AGNIVARSHA SERIES ....
OR RED MOON......OR bhi kai saari hai......inhe bas ak bar padh kar dekhiye....
Fantasy stories ke peak par hai ye...sab....OR inse aapko kaafi madad bhi milegi.....
Thanks....
Burayi ki baat nahi bhaim.mm
Mai to chahta hu Aap kami nikalon..
Warna main galti karta jaunga...
aur ek achha writer kabhi nahi ban paunga
Thanks Bhai..itna support karne ke liye....Khamoyan home bawajood bhi...