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Ghar Ki Aag
Episode 16: Khamosh Saaye aur Jism ki Thartharahat (Dusra Hissa)
Scene 5: Bilal ki Bechaini aur Hamza ka Zabt

Usi waqt hall mein rakha hua landline phone baj utha. Dono buri tarah chauunk gaye. Hamza ne foran Hira ko chhoda aur Hira ne jaldi se apni qameez ke parde barabar kiye.
"Kaun ho sakta hai?" Hamza ne ghabrayi hui awaaz mein pucha.
"Pata nahi... tum ja kar dekho, main yahan theek karti hoon," Hira ne hanpte hue kaha.
Hamza hall mein aaya aur phone uthaya.
Dusri taraf se Bilal ki saansein tez thin, jaise wo kisi gehri aziyat (pain) se guzar raha ho.
"Hamza? Rashid Abbu pahonch gaye?" Bilal ne pucha.
"Nahi Bilal Bhai, wo toh abhi raste mein honge. Kya hua? Sab theek hai?" Hamza ne apne jazbaat ko kabu mein karte hue pucha.
"Kuch theek nahi hai Hamza! Saima aur Usman... maine unhe aaj phir se ek saath dekha hai. Woh dono farmhouse ke band kamre mein thay. Maine darwaza khatkhataya toh unho ne khola hi nahi. Jab khola toh unke kapde bikhre hue thay.
"Bilal Bhai, aap hosla rakhein. Abbu aur Ammi abhi taxi mein hain, bas kuch hi ghanton mein Hyderabad pahonch jayenge," Hamza ne apni awaaz ko sambhalte hue kaha, halaanke uski apni saansein abhi tak kitchen ki us tapish se bhari hui thin.
"Hamza... main mazeed intezar nahi kar sakta," Bilal ki awaaz shikasta (broken) thi. "Yahan ka mahool hi mera dam ghutne ke liye kaafi hai. Saima aur Usman ki aankhon mein ab mere liye koi lihaaz nahi raha. Maine unhe ek saath dekh kar jab sawal kiya, toh unke chehron par sharam ke bajay ek ajeeb si dheet-pan thi. Mera dil kar raha hai ke sab chhod kar Lahore laot aaon."
Hamza ne Hira ki taraf dekha jo kitchen ke darwaze par khari apne bikhre baalon ko sanwar rahi thi. "Nahi Bilal Bhai, aap aisa mat karein. Agar aap is waqt wahan se nikal aaye toh Abbu akele sab kaise sambhalenge? Aap thoda waqt aur ruk jayein. Ammi ke pahonchte hi sab thanda ho jayega. Wo Saima Api ko samjha lengi."
Hamza ne jab "Ammi" ka naam liya, toh uske jism mein ek jhurjhuri si daur gayi. Usey yaad aaya ke uski wahi "samajhdar" Ammi kal raat uske neeche tadap rahi thin.
"Theek hai Hamza... main sirf Rashid Abbu ki wajah se ruka hoon. Magar mera sabr ab jawab de raha hai," Bilal ne thandi saans bhari aur phone rakh diya.

Scene 6: Ayesha ka Inkishaf aur Karwi Baatein
Hamza ne phone rakha hi tha ke corridor mein qadmon ki awaaz suni. Dono ne palat kar dekha toh Ayesha Baji khari thin. Unka chehra gusse aur nafrat se surkh tha. Unhon ne dupatta sar se hata kar kandhe par dala hua tha aur unki aankhein seedha Hamza aur Hira ke bikhre hue huliye par thin.
"Sharam... kya is lafz ka koi wajood bacha hai is ghar mein?" Ayesha ki awaaz kaanp rahi thi, magar usmein ek ajeeb si sakhti thi.
Hira ne apni qameez ka gala darust karte hue dheet-pan se kaha, "Ayesha Baji, aap kya keh rahi hain? Hum toh bas..."
"Bas kya? Kitchen mein jo tum dono nanga-naach kar rahe thay, kya wo maine nahi dekha?" Ayesha aage barhi aur Hira ke bilkul samne khari ho gayi. "Wahan Hyderabad mein ghar ki izzat nilam ho rahi hai, aur yahan tum dono ne besharmi ki saari hadein par kar di hain. Hamza! Tumhe toh main sab se masoom samajhti thi, magar tum toh is ghar ke sab se bade gunahgar nikle."


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Hamza ne sar jhuka liya. "Baji... wo... hum se ghalti ho gayi."
"Ghalti?" Ayesha ne qehqaha lagaya, magar usmein dard tha. "Ghalti ek baar hoti hai Hamza. Kal raat jab tum Ammi ke kamre mein thay, kya wo bhi ghalti thi? Maine sab dekha hai. Main khamosh thi kyunki mujhe laga ke shayad ye bura khwab hai, magar aaj jo kitchen mein hua... usne sabit kar diya ke is ghar ki deewaron mein hawas bhar chuki hai."

Scene 7: Dhamki aur Hira ki Safai
Ayesha ne dono ki taraf dekh kar ungli uthayi. "Main ye sab mazeed bardaasht nahi kar sakti. Is ghar ka sukoon, iski hansi-khushi sab raakh ho rahi hai. Main abhi Ammi ko phone karungi aur unhe bataungi ke yahan kya gul khilaye ja rahe hain. Aur Abbu... unhe pata chal gaya toh wo tum dono ko zinda nahi chhodenge."
Hamza ke chehre par khauf chha gaya, magar Hira ke tevar badal gaye. Usne Ayesha ki dhamki se darne ke bajay ek gehri saans li aur Ayesha ke qareeb aayi.
"Ayesha Baji... aap kis-kis ka gunah ginwayengi?" Hira ne narm magar kaat-dar lehze mein pucha. "Ammi ka? Mera? Hamza ka? Ya phir Saima Api aur Usman Bhai ka?"


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"Hira, apni zabaan ko lagaam do!" Ayesha cheekhi.
"Kyun Baji? Sach sun-na itna mushkil hai?" Hira ne Ayesha ke shane par hath rakha, jise Ayesha ne jhatak diya. "Aap humein khari-khoti suna rahi hain, magar kya aapne kabhi apne andar ki us aurat ko dekha hai jo is ghar ki tanhayi mein jalti hai? Aap jo ye 'parsa' ban kar ghoom rahi hain, kya aapka dil nahi chahta ke koi aapko bhi waise hi pakde jaise Hamza ne mujhe pakda?"
Ayesha ki aankhon mein ek pal ke liye ghabrahat aayi, magar usne khud ko sambhala. "Bakwas mat karo Hira!"
"Ye bakwas nahi hai Baji, ye is ghar ki haqiqat hai," Hira ne Hamza ki taraf ishara kiya. "Ammi ko dekhein, unhon ne apni zindagi Abbu ki berukhi mein guzaar di. Aaj agar unhe apne bete ke jism mein sukoon mila hai, toh kya wo gunahgar hain? Saima Api ko dekhein, Bilal Bhai se unhe wo tapish nahi mili jo Usman Bhai ne di. Hum sab sirf apni zaroorat poori kar rahe hain. Agar aap ne Ammi ya Abbu ko bataya, toh yaad rakhein... ye ghar bikhar jayega. Izzat toh jayegi hi, magar hum sab ek dusre ke dushman ban jayenge."
Ayesha khamosh ho gayi. Uska saans tez ho gaya tha. Hira ki baatein uske dimaag mein hathore ki tarah lag rahi thin.
"Ayesha Baji," Hamza ne dheere se kaha, "Hum aapko dukh nahi dena chahte. Magar please... humein is waqt mat bikhrein. Ghar pahle hi mushkil mein hai."
Ayesha ne nafrat se Hamza ki taraf dekha. "Tum sab ne mil kar mujhe akela aur pareshan kar diya hai. Magar yaad rakhna... ye aag sab ko jalayegi."
Ayesha tezi se upar apne kamre ki taraf bhagi aur darwaza zor se band kar diya. Hall mein ab sirf Hamza aur Hira reh gaye thay.

Scene 8: Hyderabad ki Entry aur Siyah Raat
Udhar Hyderabad mein, taxi ek purane farmhouse ke samne ruki. Rashid sahib aur Naseem niche utre. Farmhouse ki battiyan maddham thin.
Naseem ka dil dharak raha tha. Usne apne dupatte ko sahi kiya. Uske dimaag mein abhi bhi Lahore ke wo manazir thay, magar samne jo aag lagne wali thi, wo shayad isse bhi bhayanak thi.
Rashid sahib ne farmhouse ka darwaza dhakkela. Andar se Bilal nikla, uska huliya bigra hua tha.
"Abbu... aap aa gaye," Bilal ne thaki hui awaaz mein kaha.
"Kahan hain wo dono?" Rashid sahib ne garaj kar pucha.
Bilal ne ek band kamre ki taraf ishara kiya. "Andar hain. Subah se darwaza nahi khola."
Rashid sahib kamre ki taraf barhe, magar Naseem ne unka hath pakad liya. "Rashid... hosla rakhein. Baat bigar sakti hai."
"Baat toh kab ki bigar chuki hai Naseem!" Rashid ne darwaza zor se khatkhataya. "Usman! Saima! Bahar niklo!"
Andar se thodi der tak koi awaaz nahi aayi. Phir dheere se darwaza khula. Usman bahar nikla, uska shirt ke button khule thay aur wo paseene mein sharabor tha. Uske peeche Saima khari thi, uski aankhein rone ki wajah se suji hui thin, magar unmein sharam se zyada ek ajeeb si baghaawat (rebellion) thi.


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Naseem ne jab apni beti aur bete ko is haal mein dekha, toh usey apne aur Hamza ke wo lamhat yaad aa gaye. Usne nazrein chura lein. Usey mehsoos hua ke wo inhein saza dene ka haq kho chuki hai.

Episode Kahtam


Cliffhanger: Rashid sahib ka gussa ab kis had tak jayega? Kya Naseem apne bacho ka saath degi ya apne gunah ke khauf mein khamosh rahegi? Aur Lahore mein, Ayesha ki khamoshi kya kisi bade tufaan ka pesh-khima (prelude) hai?
Ye rashid sahab ki koi engagement nahi?
 
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Ghar Ki Aag
Episode 16: Khamosh Saaye aur Jism ki Thartharahat (Dusra Hissa)
Scene 5: Bilal ki Bechaini aur Hamza ka Zabt

Usi waqt hall mein rakha hua landline phone baj utha. Dono buri tarah chauunk gaye. Hamza ne foran Hira ko chhoda aur Hira ne jaldi se apni qameez ke parde barabar kiye.
"Kaun ho sakta hai?" Hamza ne ghabrayi hui awaaz mein pucha.
"Pata nahi... tum ja kar dekho, main yahan theek karti hoon," Hira ne hanpte hue kaha.
Hamza hall mein aaya aur phone uthaya.
Dusri taraf se Bilal ki saansein tez thin, jaise wo kisi gehri aziyat (pain) se guzar raha ho.
"Hamza? Rashid Abbu pahonch gaye?" Bilal ne pucha.
"Nahi Bilal Bhai, wo toh abhi raste mein honge. Kya hua? Sab theek hai?" Hamza ne apne jazbaat ko kabu mein karte hue pucha.
"Kuch theek nahi hai Hamza! Saima aur Usman... maine unhe aaj phir se ek saath dekha hai. Woh dono farmhouse ke band kamre mein thay. Maine darwaza khatkhataya toh unho ne khola hi nahi. Jab khola toh unke kapde bikhre hue thay.
"Bilal Bhai, aap hosla rakhein. Abbu aur Ammi abhi taxi mein hain, bas kuch hi ghanton mein Hyderabad pahonch jayenge," Hamza ne apni awaaz ko sambhalte hue kaha, halaanke uski apni saansein abhi tak kitchen ki us tapish se bhari hui thin.
"Hamza... main mazeed intezar nahi kar sakta," Bilal ki awaaz shikasta (broken) thi. "Yahan ka mahool hi mera dam ghutne ke liye kaafi hai. Saima aur Usman ki aankhon mein ab mere liye koi lihaaz nahi raha. Maine unhe ek saath dekh kar jab sawal kiya, toh unke chehron par sharam ke bajay ek ajeeb si dheet-pan thi. Mera dil kar raha hai ke sab chhod kar Lahore laot aaon."
Hamza ne Hira ki taraf dekha jo kitchen ke darwaze par khari apne bikhre baalon ko sanwar rahi thi. "Nahi Bilal Bhai, aap aisa mat karein. Agar aap is waqt wahan se nikal aaye toh Abbu akele sab kaise sambhalenge? Aap thoda waqt aur ruk jayein. Ammi ke pahonchte hi sab thanda ho jayega. Wo Saima Api ko samjha lengi."
Hamza ne jab "Ammi" ka naam liya, toh uske jism mein ek jhurjhuri si daur gayi. Usey yaad aaya ke uski wahi "samajhdar" Ammi kal raat uske neeche tadap rahi thin.
"Theek hai Hamza... main sirf Rashid Abbu ki wajah se ruka hoon. Magar mera sabr ab jawab de raha hai," Bilal ne thandi saans bhari aur phone rakh diya.

Scene 6: Ayesha ka Inkishaf aur Karwi Baatein
Hamza ne phone rakha hi tha ke corridor mein qadmon ki awaaz suni. Dono ne palat kar dekha toh Ayesha Baji khari thin. Unka chehra gusse aur nafrat se surkh tha. Unhon ne dupatta sar se hata kar kandhe par dala hua tha aur unki aankhein seedha Hamza aur Hira ke bikhre hue huliye par thin.
"Sharam... kya is lafz ka koi wajood bacha hai is ghar mein?" Ayesha ki awaaz kaanp rahi thi, magar usmein ek ajeeb si sakhti thi.
Hira ne apni qameez ka gala darust karte hue dheet-pan se kaha, "Ayesha Baji, aap kya keh rahi hain? Hum toh bas..."
"Bas kya? Kitchen mein jo tum dono nanga-naach kar rahe thay, kya wo maine nahi dekha?" Ayesha aage barhi aur Hira ke bilkul samne khari ho gayi. "Wahan Hyderabad mein ghar ki izzat nilam ho rahi hai, aur yahan tum dono ne besharmi ki saari hadein par kar di hain. Hamza! Tumhe toh main sab se masoom samajhti thi, magar tum toh is ghar ke sab se bade gunahgar nikle."


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Hamza ne sar jhuka liya. "Baji... wo... hum se ghalti ho gayi."
"Ghalti?" Ayesha ne qehqaha lagaya, magar usmein dard tha. "Ghalti ek baar hoti hai Hamza. Kal raat jab tum Ammi ke kamre mein thay, kya wo bhi ghalti thi? Maine sab dekha hai. Main khamosh thi kyunki mujhe laga ke shayad ye bura khwab hai, magar aaj jo kitchen mein hua... usne sabit kar diya ke is ghar ki deewaron mein hawas bhar chuki hai."

Scene 7: Dhamki aur Hira ki Safai
Ayesha ne dono ki taraf dekh kar ungli uthayi. "Main ye sab mazeed bardaasht nahi kar sakti. Is ghar ka sukoon, iski hansi-khushi sab raakh ho rahi hai. Main abhi Ammi ko phone karungi aur unhe bataungi ke yahan kya gul khilaye ja rahe hain. Aur Abbu... unhe pata chal gaya toh wo tum dono ko zinda nahi chhodenge."
Hamza ke chehre par khauf chha gaya, magar Hira ke tevar badal gaye. Usne Ayesha ki dhamki se darne ke bajay ek gehri saans li aur Ayesha ke qareeb aayi.
"Ayesha Baji... aap kis-kis ka gunah ginwayengi?" Hira ne narm magar kaat-dar lehze mein pucha. "Ammi ka? Mera? Hamza ka? Ya phir Saima Api aur Usman Bhai ka?"


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"Hira, apni zabaan ko lagaam do!" Ayesha cheekhi.
"Kyun Baji? Sach sun-na itna mushkil hai?" Hira ne Ayesha ke shane par hath rakha, jise Ayesha ne jhatak diya. "Aap humein khari-khoti suna rahi hain, magar kya aapne kabhi apne andar ki us aurat ko dekha hai jo is ghar ki tanhayi mein jalti hai? Aap jo ye 'parsa' ban kar ghoom rahi hain, kya aapka dil nahi chahta ke koi aapko bhi waise hi pakde jaise Hamza ne mujhe pakda?"
Ayesha ki aankhon mein ek pal ke liye ghabrahat aayi, magar usne khud ko sambhala. "Bakwas mat karo Hira!"
"Ye bakwas nahi hai Baji, ye is ghar ki haqiqat hai," Hira ne Hamza ki taraf ishara kiya. "Ammi ko dekhein, unhon ne apni zindagi Abbu ki berukhi mein guzaar di. Aaj agar unhe apne bete ke jism mein sukoon mila hai, toh kya wo gunahgar hain? Saima Api ko dekhein, Bilal Bhai se unhe wo tapish nahi mili jo Usman Bhai ne di. Hum sab sirf apni zaroorat poori kar rahe hain. Agar aap ne Ammi ya Abbu ko bataya, toh yaad rakhein... ye ghar bikhar jayega. Izzat toh jayegi hi, magar hum sab ek dusre ke dushman ban jayenge."
Ayesha khamosh ho gayi. Uska saans tez ho gaya tha. Hira ki baatein uske dimaag mein hathore ki tarah lag rahi thin.
"Ayesha Baji," Hamza ne dheere se kaha, "Hum aapko dukh nahi dena chahte. Magar please... humein is waqt mat bikhrein. Ghar pahle hi mushkil mein hai."
Ayesha ne nafrat se Hamza ki taraf dekha. "Tum sab ne mil kar mujhe akela aur pareshan kar diya hai. Magar yaad rakhna... ye aag sab ko jalayegi."
Ayesha tezi se upar apne kamre ki taraf bhagi aur darwaza zor se band kar diya. Hall mein ab sirf Hamza aur Hira reh gaye thay.

Scene 8: Hyderabad ki Entry aur Siyah Raat
Udhar Hyderabad mein, taxi ek purane farmhouse ke samne ruki. Rashid sahib aur Naseem niche utre. Farmhouse ki battiyan maddham thin.
Naseem ka dil dharak raha tha. Usne apne dupatte ko sahi kiya. Uske dimaag mein abhi bhi Lahore ke wo manazir thay, magar samne jo aag lagne wali thi, wo shayad isse bhi bhayanak thi.
Rashid sahib ne farmhouse ka darwaza dhakkela. Andar se Bilal nikla, uska huliya bigra hua tha.
"Abbu... aap aa gaye," Bilal ne thaki hui awaaz mein kaha.
"Kahan hain wo dono?" Rashid sahib ne garaj kar pucha.
Bilal ne ek band kamre ki taraf ishara kiya. "Andar hain. Subah se darwaza nahi khola."
Rashid sahib kamre ki taraf barhe, magar Naseem ne unka hath pakad liya. "Rashid... hosla rakhein. Baat bigar sakti hai."
"Baat toh kab ki bigar chuki hai Naseem!" Rashid ne darwaza zor se khatkhataya. "Usman! Saima! Bahar niklo!"
Andar se thodi der tak koi awaaz nahi aayi. Phir dheere se darwaza khula. Usman bahar nikla, uska shirt ke button khule thay aur wo paseene mein sharabor tha. Uske peeche Saima khari thi, uski aankhein rone ki wajah se suji hui thin, magar unmein sharam se zyada ek ajeeb si baghaawat (rebellion) thi.


file-0000000043e871fab272b4c32aa897ad
Naseem ne jab apni beti aur bete ko is haal mein dekha, toh usey apne aur Hamza ke wo lamhat yaad aa gaye. Usne nazrein chura lein. Usey mehsoos hua ke wo inhein saza dene ka haq kho chuki hai.

Episode Kahtam


Cliffhanger: Rashid sahib ka gussa ab kis had tak jayega? Kya Naseem apne bacho ka saath degi ya apne gunah ke khauf mein khamosh rahegi? Aur Lahore mein, Ayesha ki khamoshi kya kisi bade tufaan ka pesh-khima (prelude) hai?
Fantastic update bro -- kia zabrdast tension create ki ha.
 
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