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Meri pahli story hai bhai ye..... Adhuri to nahi chhodunga......
Good update.Ghar Ki AagModel Town ki woh raat ab dhalne ko thi, magar haveli ki fazaon mein ek aisi bhari-pan aa chuki thi jo saans lena mushkil kar rahi thi. Naseem, corridor ki deewar se tiki, Hira ki aankhon mein dekh rahi thi. Hira ke mobile se aane wali sargoshiyan uske apne hi jism ki gawahi de rahi thin.
Episode 15: Deewaron Ke Kaan aur Jism Ki Aag.
Scene 1: Maa, Beti aur Ek Khamosh Samjhauta
Naseem ka saans phool raha tha. Usne chaha ke Hira se mobile chheen le, magar uske jism mein itni himmat nahi thi. Hira ne mobile screen band ki aur apni maa ke bilkul qareeb aayi. Usne Naseem ke bikhre hue baal saleeqe se kaan ke peeche kiye.
"Ammi... aap itni ghabra kyun rahi hain?" Hira ne badi narm awaaz mein poocha. "Main koi dushman thodi hoon. Main ne toh bas woh suna jo is ghar ki khamoshi mein barson se dafan tha."
Naseem ne larzte hathon se Hira ka baazu pakda. "Hira... beta... yeh... yeh sab mita do. Main tabaah ho jaungi."
Hira ne ek gehri muskurahat di. Uska lehza bilkul bhi dhamki-amez nahi tha, balki usme ek ajeeb si hamdardi aur tajassus (curiosity) thi. "Ammi, mita dungi. Magar mujhe bas yeh batayein... kya Hamza me waqayi itna zyada maza hai? Maine aapki siskariyon mein jo sukoon suna, woh maine pehle kabhi nahi mehsoos kiya."
Naseem ka chehra sharam se surkh ho gaya. Usey samajh nahi aa raha tha ke apni beti ko kya kahe. Ek maa ke liye uske bete ke saath ki gayi hawas ka zikr uski apni beti se karna, ek aisi nafsiyati jung thi jisme woh haarti jaa rahi thi.
Scene 2: Hall ka Tufaan aur Rashid ka Khauf
Neeche hall mein Rashid Sahab abhi bhi Siddiqui Sahab ke samne sar pakde bethe thay. Unki izzat, unka fakhr, sab mitti mein mil raha tha.
"Siddiqui... agar yeh khabar bahar nikal gayi toh main munh dikhane ke qabil nahi rahunga," Rashid Sahab ki awaaz bhari thi. "Saima aur Usman... mere bache... kaise kar sakte hain?"
Siddiqui Sahab ne unka shana thap-thapaya. "Rashid, abhi sirf afwahein hain. Tumhe foran Hyderabad nikalna chahiye. Bilal ka kuch pata nahi, kahin woh gusse mein kuch galat na kar bethe."
Naseem dabe paon neeche utri. Usey ab apne gunah se zyada apne bacho ki fikar ho rahi thi, magar uske jism mein abhi bhi woh garmahat baaki thi jo Hamza ne chodi thi. Woh Rashid Sahab ke paas aayi.
"Aap... aap Hyderabad jayenge?" Naseem ne pucha.
Rashid Sahab ne sar uthaya. Unki aankhon mein thakkan aur darr tha. "Haan Naseem. Humein aaj hi nikalna hoga. Bilal ka phone band ja raha hai. Mujhe darr hai ke woh Saima ya Usman ko nuksan na pahoncha de."
Scene 3: Kitchen ki Tapish aur Hira ka War
Naseem kitchen mein dopahar ka khana taiyar kar rahi thi. Paseene ki boondein uske gore maathe se fisal kar uski lawn ki qameez ke gale mein jazb ho rahi thin. Uska dil-o-dimagh salan pakane mein bilkul bhi nahi tha. Uska jism abhi bhi Hamza ki raat wali be-reham chudai ki thakkan se choor tha. Uska 52 saal ka bhara hua badan, jo barson se Rashid sahib ki berukhi ka shikar tha, ab ek ajeeb si jalan aur lutf ke beech jhul raha tha. Jab bhi woh chalti, uski choot mein Hamza ke mote aur sakht lund ki ragad ka ehsas taza ho jata. Magar is jismani sukoon ke oopar Hira ki blackmailing ka saaya mandla raha tha.
Tabhi Hira dabe paon kitchen mein dakhil hui. Usne darwaza halka sa band kiya aur Naseem ke bilkul peeche khadi ho gayi.
"Ammi... salan jal raha hai, bilkul waise hi jaise aap raat ko Hamza ke saath jal rahi thin," Hira ne sargoshi ki. Uski awaaz mein zeher ghula hua tha.
Naseem buri tarah chauunk gayi. Usne palat kar dekha, Hira ke chehre par wahi makhsoos shaitani muskurahat thi. "Hira... tu... tu kya keh rahi hai? Maine kaha na woh earring wahan gir gayi hogi."
Hira ne aage badh kar Naseem ke kaan ke paas apna chehra kiya. "Ammi, mujhse jhoot mat boliye. Maine sirf earring nahi dekhi... maine aap dono ki siskariyan bhi suni hain. Kitni besharm hain aap? Apne hi jawaan bete ko apni choot par sawar kar liya?"
Naseem ka chehra sharam se laal ho gaya. "Hira, khuda ke liye chup kar ja... koi sun lega."
"Koi nahi sunega Ammi. Abbu apne kamre mein Hyderabad ki deal ke silsile mein phone par masroof hain. Ayesha upar apne kamre mein parhai kar rahi hai. Woh bechari toh abhi tak is ghar ki asliyat se be-khabar hai," Hira ne Naseem ke shane par haath rakha aur usey zor se dabaya. "Lekin main khamosh tabhi rahoongi jab mujhe mera hissa milega."
"Hissa? Kaisa hissa?" Naseem ne ghabra kar poocha.
"Hamza... mujhe pata hai woh aapka deewana ho chukea hai. Mujhe bhi uska saath chahiye. Aur aap... aap mujhe us tak pahonchne ka rasta dengi. Agar aapne rukaawat dali, toh yeh earring, aur recording aur jo kuch maine dekha hai, woh sab Abbu ke samne hoga," Hira ne dhamki di aur kitchen se bahar nikal gayi.
Scene 4: Hamza Ka Kamra aur Yaad-e-Maazi
Hamza apne bistar par leta hua tha. Uska jism thaka hua tha, magar dimaag mein ek ajeeb si halchal thi. Uski aankhen chhat par lage pankhe ko dekh rahi thin jo halki si awaaz ke saath ghum raha tha. Kamre mein abhi bhi Naseem Ammi ki mehak baaki thi—wahi sandal aur chameli ka milap jo unke jism se phoot-ta tha.
Hamza ne karvat li toh takiye ke neeche se uski maa ke baal ka ek toot-ta hua guchha mila. Usne usey dekha aur uske jism mein ek lahar si daud gayi. Kal raat jo kuch hua—apni hi maa ke saath woh jismani talluq—woh ek khwab lag raha tha. Ek aisa khwab jisne usey ek pal mein bacha se mard bana diya tha. Magar is mardangi ke saath ek bhari bojh bhi tha. "Kya main ne sahi kiya?" usne khud se sawal kiya. Magar uske jism ki yaadain, uski maa ki woh siskariyan aur woh garam saansein, uske har sawal ka jawab thin.
Usey darr tha ke jab Ammi wapas aayengi, toh kya woh unki aankhon mein dekh payega? Kya unka "Maa-Bete" wala lihaaz waisa hi rahega ya ab har baar jab woh usey "Hamza" keh kar pukarengi, unki awaaz mein wahi purani mamta hogi ya phir kal raat wali hawas?
*Hira Api ka Waar aur Psychological Jung*
Tabhi darwaza khula aur Hira dabe paon andar dakhil hui. Hira ki umr zyada nahi thi, magar uski aankhon mein ek aisi shaitaniat thi jo is ghar ke har raaz ko bhanp leti thi. Usne darwaza andar se band kiya aur Hamza ke bed ke paas aakar khadi ho gayi.
"So gaye kya Hamza?" Hira ne bade narm lehje mein pucha, magar uske lehje mein ek ajeeb si lachak thi.
Hamza hadbada kar uth baitha. "Ji Api, bas let gaya tha. Aap yahan is waqt?"
Hira bed par baith gayi. Usne ek barik si lawn ki qameez pehni hui thi jiske gale se uske gore kandhe saaf dikh rahe thay. "Ammi aur Abbu shayad Hyderabad jaane wale hain. Mujhe lagta hai tumhe bahoth khali-pan mehsoos hoga."
Hamza ne nazrein churayin. "Aap kya keh rahi hain Api?"
Hira ne apna mobile nikala aur vahi recording play ki jo usne kal raat Hamza ke darwaze ke bahar se ki thi. Ammi(Naseem) ki dabi hui cheekhein aur Hamza ki bhari hui saansein kamre mein goonjne lagin. Hamza ka chehra safed pad gaya. Uska dil itni zor se dhadakne laga ke usey laga ke woh abhi phat jayega.
"Hira Api... yeh... yeh aapne..." Hamza ki awaaz nikalna mushkil ho gayi.
Hira ne recording band ki aur muskurayi. "Daro mat Hamza. Main ne kaha na, main koi dushman nahi hoon. Magar tumne toh kamaal hi kar diya. Ammi ko... matlab main soch bhi nahi sakti thi ke tum itne himmat wale ho."
Hira ne apna hath Hamza ke ghutne par rakha. "Hamza, mujhe gussa nahi aa raha. Balki mujhe toh tum par ta'ajjub ho raha hai. Is ghar mein sab upar se parsa bante hain, magar andar se sab pyase hain. Saima Api aur Usman Bhai Hyderabad mein jo kar rahe hain, woh bhi toh yahi hai na? Phir hum kyun peechhe rahein?"
Hamza ne hairat se apni bahen ko dekha. Hira ki aankhon mein koi malamat (blame) nahi thi. Usne mehsoos kiya ke Hira us par gussa hone ke bajay us ki "sharik-e-jurm" banna chahti hai.
"Aap... aap kya chahti hain Hira Api?" Hamza ne sargoshi ki.
Hira thoda aur qareeb aayi. Uske jism ki garmahat Hamza ko mehsoos ho rahi thi. "Main bas yeh chahti hoon ke is ghar mein ab parde khatam ho jayein. Hamza, tu sab se chhota hai, magar tu ab hamari zaroorat ban gaya hai. Ammi ko shayad Hyderabad jaana padhey... magar main toh yahan hoon na? Kya tujhe nahi lagta ke mujhe bhi wohi sukoon chahiye jo tune Ammi ko diya?"
Hamza ke andar ek jung shuru ho gayi. Ek taraf Hira uski bahen thi, jise woh "Api" kehta tha, aur dusri taraf woh ek kamsin ladki thi jo usey dawat de rahi thi. Ek yeh darr ke "koi dekh lega" aur yeh "lazzat" ke "yeh meri bahen hai", in dono jazbaaton ne Hamza ke dimaag ko sunn kar diya.
"Hira Api... hum yeh nahi kar sakte. Abbu maar dalenge," Hamza ne kamzor si koshish ki.
"Abbu aur Ammi yahan nahi honge Hamza, kuch hi der mein wo Hyderabad ke liye nikalne wale hain. Aur Ayesha Baji apne kamre mein band hain. Aaj se, is ghar mein koi kisi ka bhai ya bahen nahi, sirf jism hain. Magar haan, duniya ke liye hum wahi rahenge jo hum hain. Tu mujhe Api hi kahega, aur main tujhe Hamza hi pukarungi. Magar in band kamron mein..." Hira ne baat adhuri chhodi aur Hamza ke gaal par ek halka sa bosa (kiss) dekar bahar nikal gayi.
Scene 5: Ayesha ki Masoomiyat aur Rashid ka Iztirab
Idhar hall mein Ayesha apni kitabein lekar bethi thi. Woh is ghar ki sab se sukoon wali shakhsiyat lag rahi thi. Uske liye rishte abhi bhi wahi purane aur muqaddas thay. Woh apni parhai mein itni masroof thi ke usey ehsas hi nahi tha ke uski maa aur bhai-bahen kis daldal mein dhas chuke hain.
Rashid sahib hall mein tehel rahe thay. Unke haath mein mobile tha. Woh Hyderabad mein maujood Saima aur Usman ki karkardagi se pareshan thay.
"Haan Bilal... tum wahan pahonch gaye? Deal ka kya hua?" Rashid sahib ne phone par poocha.
Bilal ki awaaz dusri taraf se thodi ajeeb thi. "Ji Abbu, main pahonch gaya hoon. Deal toh chal rahi hai, magar... Saima aur Usman thode ajeeb behave kar rahe hain. Woh aksar Hotel ya phir kabhi kisi farmhouse mein akele paye jate hain. Unka behaviour bhi mujhe ajeeb lagta hai mujhe un par nazar rakhni hogi." Uski awaaz me shak aur tajassus bhara pada thha.
Rashid sahib ke matthe par bal pad gaye. "Tum fikar mat karo Bilal, woh dono bache hain. Tum deal par focus karo. Hyderabad ki yeh zameen hamare liye bahut zaroori hai."
Rashid sahib ne phone rakha aur thandi saans bhari. Ayesha ne unki taraf dekh kar muskuraya. "Abbu, aap zyada stress na lein. Saima Api aur Usman bhai sab sanbhal lenge."
Rashid sahib ne Ayesha ke sar par haath rakha. "Kash sab tumhari tarah samajhdar aur paak-saaf hote beta." Unhe kya maloom tha ke unke peeche unki biwi aur beta ek dusre ke jismo ki aag bujha rahe hain.
*Episode 15 khatam*