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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread

Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread



Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

The Immortal

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).


"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

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Garmagaram Savita

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Update #01
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Hello, aasa karti hu.. aap sab kusal Mangal honge

Main Savita, aaj ek kahani ki Suruwat karne ja rah hu.. aur aasa karti hu aap sabhi mera sath denge

Kahani main kon kon hai aur kiya hone wala hai ye hum sath main dhire dhire janenge.. main pehle se kisi bhi character ko introduce nahi kar rahi hu

Toh chaliye mitro... Suru karte hai.. ek kamuk yatra ko


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Main daak bangle k bahar hari hari ghass pe chal rahi thi, mere ek hath main chai ka ek pyala tha..

main aaj pehli bar ek gaon ki khubsurati main khoyi hui thi.. aaj tak maine bus kitabo or main filmo main hi aise gaon dekhe thay...

par main kiya janti thi ki meri kismat main bhi ek din aisa hi khubsurat gaon likha hoga

main es samay gaon se bilkul alag ek khubsurat daak bangle pe thi.. jaha se gaon acha khasa dur tha..

Daak bangle k charo taraf bade bade paid thay.. aisa lag raha tha jaise main kisi swarg main ghum rahi thi

Aur main us Swarg ki koi... Apsara

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main chai ka anand letu hui mantramugdh si charo taraf ki hariyali main khoyi hui thi...

Jism pe kapdon k naam pe sirf ek bra aur penty hi thi.. wo bhi itni kasi hui aur choti ki... Wo mere jism ko chupa kam aur dikha jada rahi thi

Aaj se pehle agar koi mujhse ye kehta ki .... Savita tumhe apne angvastro ko pehen k ek band kamre main rehna hai.. toh sayad main wo bhi mana kar deti

Aur aaj main sirf ek kasi hui Bra penty main ek ajnabi gaon main charo taraf paido se ghire ek daak bangle k bahar vichran kar rahi hu

Sach main Jeevan ka kabhi koi barosa nahi hota

Ye khubsurat bra penty ki jodi mujhe mere pati dev ne laake k di thi... Jo aaj main yaha dhoolpur gaon main pehen k hariyali ka anand le rahi thi

Tabhi achanak 2 hath meri kamar se aake chipak se jaate hai... Main thoda chauk k piche dekhti hu .... toh mere adharon pe muskan ki laalima bikhar si jaati hai

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"kiya hua memsaab... aap chauk q gayi... ye main hu... aapki chuimui...."

Savita- haaa.. baba janti hu.. tu yu achanak aayi ki main.. dar gayi.. ki kon aa gaya ???

Chuimui- are memsaab... batayaa toh tha na aapko.. ki yaha daak bangle ki taraf jaldi koi nahi aata.. waise bhi ye chota sa bangla Charo taraf se bade bade paido se chipa hua hai... toh aapko ye bhi pehnne ki jarurat nahi...

Aur esse pehle main uski baat ko mazak samajh paati usne sach main apni baat ko sach bana diya

Chuimui ne achanak se meri penty ko pakad k uske sath hi niche baith gayi.. jisse main niche se puri tarah ab nivasta thi...

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meri baalon se bhari hui khubsurat aur komal yoni ab us hariyali k vatavaran main apni chata bikherne lagi thi

Kehne ko toh charo taraf hare bhare paid aur badi badi gani jhadiyon aur jameen pe bichi hui hari hari ghass ki khubsurati alag hi thi...

Par asal hariyali toh meri yoni pe uge kaale kaale baalon se thi... Jiski hariyali k aage har hariyali feeki lag rahi thi

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"Pagal ye... Tu..... Kiya kar rahi hai... Chor ...ufffff...... Ahhhhhhhhhhh....."

Mere kuch bhi karne se pehle hi chuimui mere aage ki taraf aa gayi aur usne meri baalon se bhari hui khubsurat yoni pe apne laal gulab se hontho ko rakh diya

"Ahhhhhh.....esssssss........ Chuimui....."

Meri tarap abhi suru hi hui thi ki chuimui ne apne moti jaise daaton se meri yoni pe halke se kaat liya

"Ahhhhhhhh...... kutiya.....kiya kar rahi hai......ahhhh.........uffffff"

Main chuimui ko mana toh kar rahi thi.. par harkate bilkul ulat thi meri

Qki main apne ek hath se chuimui k sar ko pakad k apni yoni pe puri taqat se daba rahi thi

Chuimui ne phir se wahi sararat ki.. usne ek bar phir se meri yoni pe apne moti jaise daat gada diya

"Ahhhh......esssssssssss...... Chuimui...."

Meri kamukta se bhari ahhhh... Aur siskari sunke Chuimui khadi ho gayi...

Ab wo aur main uski aankhon main aakhein daal k ek dusre ko aise dekh rahe thay.. maano ek dusre se sawal puch rahe ho

"Mere andar aag lagi hui hai..... Bhuja dogi kiya ???"


Par es bar pehal meri taraf se hui.. maine aage bad k apne honthon ko chuimui k hontho se mila diya

Chuimui ne bhi mere gulab se hontho ko chusna suru kar diya...

"Ummmmmm...... Ummmmmmmm..... Ummmmm..... Srrrppp.... Ummmmmm"

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Main bhi kaha Piche rehne wali thi.... Maine bhi apna ek hath chuimui k sar k piche le jake uske honthon ko ache se chusna suru kar diya

"Ummmmmmm...... Ummmm...... Srrrrppppp.... Ummmmm........"

Maano ab hum dono main hi koi hod si lag rahi ho... Ki kon aaj dusre k hontho ka ras chus payega

Tabhi chuimui ne ek bar phir se apni sararat dikha hi di

Usne apna ek hath niche ki taraf le jake meri baalon se bhari hui yoni k faako pe rakh diya...

Uski es harkat se mere pure tan badan main ek umang si machal uthi

Par tabhi toh es kamukta ki Umang se bus ek hichki hi thi.. qki asli madhoshi toh ab suru honi thi

Chuimui ne apne bich wali ungli gapak se meri yoni k andar tak ghusa di.. jisse mere munh se ek dabi dabi chikh nikal padi

"Ahhhhhhhhh..... Kutiya.. kahi ..... Ki"

Chuimui ne bhi mere honthon se apne aap ko alag karte hue meri aankhon main dekhte hue kaha

"Kutiya... Toh aap banogi... Memsaab... Wo bhi pure gaon ki......"

Ye kehte hue usne ek bar phir se apni ungli ko meri yoni se thoda bahar nikala aur wapas se andar ghusa diya... Jisse main ek bar phir se

Aahhhhhhhhh......maaaaaa.......

Karke machal uthi... Par main bhi savita hu... yu itni jaldi haar kaise maan sakti hu

Main ek kadam aage bada diya.. jisse apni meri bra main kaid mast mast doodh se bhari hui thaliyan Chuimui k mote mote thano se jake chipak gayi aur... Mere yu aage badne ki wajah se uski ungli jo pehle se hi meri yoni main ghusi hui thi... Aur andar tak ghusti chali gayi

"Aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......maaaaaaaa"


Mujhe dard toh hua... Par jo anand mila... Uske aage aise 1000 dard seh sakti hu

Main- ahhhhhh... Main Savita hu.... Yu hi koi bhi mujhe apni.... Kutiya... nahi bana sakta....ahhhhhhhhhhh

Main apni baat kehti hui niche se apni kamar ko chuimui ki ungli pe dabati ja rahi thi... Jisse uski ungli meri yoni ki gehri ko ache se chirti hui aage bad rahi thi

Chuimui- ye gaon hai Memsaab.... Yaha mard kab kise apni kutiya... bana le... ye koi nahi janta.....uffff

Chuimui ne apni baat kehte hue meri yoni se apni ungli bahar nikal li aur puri tarah ras main dubi hui apni ungli ko mere honthon pe aise firane lagi maano lipstick laga rahi ho...

Aaj se pahle maine aisi ghinauni harkat k bare main soch bhi nahi sakti thi .. par aaj ye ho raha tha mere sath

Tabhi chuimui ne... Apna ek hath meri kamar pe rakh k use aage sarkate hue.. meri ek nitamb yani meri gand pe rakh diya... aur kaske muthi main pakad k masal diya

"Ahhhhhhh....maaaaa.... Kutiya.... Kiya kar rahi hai..... Aahhhhhhh"

Chuimui ne koi jawab dene ki jarurat hi nahi samjhi... qki use toh sararat karni thi

Usne meri hi yoni ki chasni main dubi hui apni ungli ko mere munh main sarka diya.. aur main kamukta ki aag main itni jal rahi thi.. main ungli ko chusna suru kar diya

Main aisi koi harkat aaj pehli bar kar rahi thi.... par mujhe ghin aane ki jagah ek ajib sa sukun mil raha tha in sab main

Thodi dair baad apni hi yoni ki chasni ko ache se chusne k baad chuimui ne apni ungli ko mere munh se bahar nikal liya aur meri aankhon main dekhne lagi

Maano keh rahi ho

"Kutiya... toh tum ban k rahogi.... Memsaab"

Chuimui ne piyar se mere gale main apni bahon ka haar dalte hue kaha...

"Memsaab... Dil toh kar raha hai ki... Aapko yahi ghass pe patak k itna maslu ki.. aapki chut pani baha baha k sukh jaye... par kiya karu.. mujhe ghar bhi jana hai .. puri raat aapke sath yahi ruki hui.. thi.. ghar pe baapu akele honge... Unhe bhi dekhna hai...."

Main- main konsa aaj hi wapas ja rahi hu... ab toh kaafi din yahi gaon main rehne wali hu ... main bhi toh dekhu ki.. tu meri yoni ka kitna ras nikal sakti hai...

Chuimui- memsaab... Ye yoni .. yoni kehna band kar do... Ye gaon hai... Chut... Lund... Loda ... Aur bhoshda hota hai

Main hasti hui

"Tu bahut gandi hai... Kamini kahi.. ki... Chal ab ja.. warna tere bapu tujhe dhundte yahi aa jayenge..."

Phir hum dono hi ghar k andar chal pade... Par hume ye nahi pata tha ki koi hume paido k piche se chup k dekh raha tha

Hamare andar jane k baad... Wo waha aaya jaha thodi dair pehle main aur Chuimui kamukta k sagar main khoye hue thay

Usne niche pe padi meri penty ko uthaya.. jo main wahi bhul gayi thi

Usne meri penty ko apni naak k pass le jake ek lambi saans li

"Ahhhhhhhhhh........ Kiya khushbu hai....wwwwaaahhhh........ Jab kapde se aisi khushbu aa rahi hai... toh asal main eski chut main kitni khushbu hogi... Ufffff... Jaldi hi main eski chut ki khushbu lunga... aur eski chut bhi....."

Phir us aadmi se wo penty utha k apne pass rakh li aur wapas waha se nikal pada

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So, mitro... Aasa karti hu.. ye pehla update aap sabhi ko pasand aaya hoga..

Waise main janti hu... Aapko abhi kuch khas samajh toh nahi aaya hoga.. par koi nahi... Agle update main kaafi kuch sulajh jayega


Main aapki Savita... Jaldi hi agle update k sath aapke samaksh prastut hongi

-Aapki Garmagaram Savita





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Rohini42

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Mai esi tarah ki story pasand karti hu story ki topic aisi ho ki reader ko pata n chale ki aage story me kya hoga jab tak puri story n padh le mast story likhi h
 
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