Adultery Freinds Forever (ek daastaan) - (COMPLETED)

[Polakh555]

Ab apki dushmani kisi era gega nathu khera tapan se hain to kiya aap us tapan ko story me dhundh rahe ho ye to galt hai bhai apka dusman vastavaik duniya ka hai lekin aap is waqt kalpanik duniya me ho to vaastavik jivan ki ghatnaon ko bhul kar kalpanik duniya ke tapan ka maja lo aur ek bat apko tapan naam se nafrat hai to iska matlab ye thodi na hota hai. Apke nafrat ki vajah se lekhak mahoday apne kirdar ko najar andaj kar de.

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[Polakh555]

Nice update Bhai

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[Polakh555]

Awesome update Bhai

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[Polakh555]

Ye bhai kisi ko mat suno ...…....., Mujhe lagta he sun sun ke baldav kar ke update de rahe ho ........... Apni karo bhai apni ..........






Update suprb he

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[Polakh555]

Fun bhai ho sakta hai aapko meri bat bura lage lekin ek bat kahunga writer abhi naya hai agar apko unki galti pakad me aa rahi hai to is tarike se na batakar dusri bhi tarika hai. Aur ek baat new writer ko bahut si chijo ko dhyan me rakhkar chlna hota ho dusri bat writer khud kahani ke rachyta hai to unko behtar pata hoga ki unko age kiya karna chahiye to mai bas aapke is bat se naraj hu ki agar apko galti dhundhe me itna maja aa raha hai to mai apsse vinto karta hu aap ek kahani likhna kyu nehi suru kar dete tab aap samajh jayenge ki kitna kuch karna padta hai

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[Polakh555]

polak bhai mere hissab se ye update thoda lamba ya bada hona chahiye tha yaa fir isko 1 ya 2 part me likhna chahiye tha jisse sabki confusion door ho

or bhai aap story jaldi kyu katam karna chahte ho update late doge tho bi chalega lakin jo aapne story ke baare me socha haina wo sab likho bhai koi jaldbaaji nahi hai


rahi aaj ki update ki baat yaha per jishu ki dard hi dikha muje tho wo tapan se nafrat nahi karta bas naraaz hai apni yaar se wo dikha

or mms bejne ki baat tho bhai tapana taniya ke paas kounsa mms beja or shital or baaki dostonko kounsa mms beja iske baare me kuch bataya nahi wo sub bi important hote hai jisse pata chale ki kounsi mms se unko aaghat jyada pahunchti hai

or jishu ka shetan ko samjane ke jaane se pehle kuch baat chit होती ya confess karti taniya ho ya tapan jo bi itna sab hone ke baad waha per chupane ko kuch nahi bachta taniya keh sakti thi sharir ki majburi ki vajase aisa hua kyunki jishu ki papa ab utna nahi karte or tapan ke saath maza ata hai jaise sher ke mooh khoon lag gaya ho

ye sab batane ke baad tapan ka taniya se maafi mangta or apne dost jishu se bi chahe maafi ke kabil kyun na ho per maafi maangta tho sakte the ye scene kuch or hi hoti

kyunki ab yaha tapan taniya se maafi mangne ka matlub hai wapas se wo रिश्ता jo anjaane me ban gaya tha wo khatam hojaati jisse apko yaha per incest dalne me aasani hothi wo kaise ye apke uper hai

bas bhai yaha judge nahi kar raha raay de raha hu


8/10 ye rating hai aaj ki update ki



agar writer ke sath kisi bi rrader ko pasand na aaya tho maafi chahta hu

Haa dost ise mega update kehna nehi chiye tha …....... Iske pehle aage update me pata chalte jayenge ........

 

[Polakh555]

Bahut se Logo ki yahi sabse badi kami hoti hai ki koi bat pasand na aaye to Story likhne ka bolne lagte hai,

Aapko kya lagta hai ki sabke pas itna samay hota hai ki wo Story hi likhta rahe ?

Kya Maine Writer ko Gali di ya koi Ganda Shabd bola kya ?

Nahi, to phir Aapko kis bat ki pareshani ho rahi hai ?

is Update ke pahle ke Mere Comment ko bhi dekhe,
Acche Update ko Accha aur Bekar Update ko Bekar bhi kahna chahiye,
isse writer ko pata chale ki usne kaha kya Galti ki,
Jisse aage waisi Galti na kare.

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[Polakh555]

Nice update …ab tapan or baki sb ko pata chla k jb koi apna dhokha dsi to kese lgta hai or bhai ek suggestion hai agr possible ho to update mai kuch spelling mistake hoti hai or kai jga seen bhi muhje lga thode or bade ho skte the jaise jo tapan kai khillaf plan banea or sex seen jo tapan or tania kai beech baad mai hua usko dikha dete thoda big krke full details kai sath …baki bura mt maan na stry ese bhi achi hai

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[Polakh555]

Ek gajab najara aur dard ka ahsas kara diyaa is update ne. Galati ki batt karu to mujhe kahii se kahi tak koyi galti naazzar nehi aaya.

Jushu ke saath bhale hi galat hua ho lekin vo ek samjhdar ladka hai use samjhna chaiye tha ki vo kiya karne ja raha hai. Use takat to mila lekinn vo is vardan me itnaa andha ho gaya use sahi galat me fhark hi nehi dhika. Taniya aur tapn ke bich jo bhi hua tha vo sab achanak aur paristithi anukul hua tha. Ha unse galti itna huaa ki bad me bhi dono rukne ke jagah aage badte rahe lekinn sabse badi galti jishu ne kiya. Usne jo bhi kiya badla lene ke liye aur dhoke se kiya. Usne shital ka mms baanya bass isliye ki tapn ko ahsas kara sake ki usne galat kiya. Lekin usne jo kiya vo kiya tha usne ek bholi bhali nari ko dhoka dekr apne jal me fhasaya jo ki sara sar galat tha. Ant me use apne gallti ka ahsas bhi hua lekin jo gallti usne jan bujh kaar kiya use vo kabhi bhi nehi sudhar sakta.

Khair jo bhi ho use ant me galti ka ahsas ho gaya sirf use hi nehi taniya aur tapn ko bhi apne galti ka ahsaas ho gayaa ki unse bahut badi galti ho gaya. Ek ne bete ke saat chhal kiya to dusre ne apone dost ke saath jisse vo apna bhai aapna sab kuch manta tha yah sab kahte waqt jisu ke andar ka dard jalak raha tha. Vo kar bhi kiya sakta tha badle kii aag me jishu itna julash gaya use kuch aur dikhai hi nehi diya. Uske bich gile sikve mataye ja raha tha usi aqt hua ek akasmt ghatana jisme taniya pass gayi jise bachne tapan gya kyayki tapan ke alava shayad najdik koyi aur nehi tha. To tapn gaya aur gayal ho gaya.

Bas writer sahab tapan ko kuch nehi hona chahiye use bacha lena kyuki tap mera sabse pasandida kirdar hai. Kyu ki usnne jo bhi kiya tha ek mahila ki jann bachanne ke liya kiya tha.

Dil se khushi hui ki aapne har point ko smajha ......... Thank you dost

 

[Polakh555]

Apne dard milta hai tabhi doosre ka dard samajh aata hai. Kahin na kahun jishu jitna galat tha utna hi sahi bhi tha. Tapan ne jo kiya wo jaan boojh kar kiya aur baad mein Taaniya ne bhi saath diya magar Sheetal ki to koi galti nahi thi aur wo bechari bina baat phans gayi is badle ki mahabharat mein. Emotional update

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