Fantasy Emperor, Rule out Darkness:

[Had]

note dosto: the update 36th is posted. per kay batana. have a good weekend. cheers.

 

[Dark Rider69]

hy guyz!!!

I'm back.....!!!!!

Actually, apnay uncle ke ghr gaya hua tha iss liye thread pay active ni tha

 

[Dark Rider69]

Ab aatay hain review par:

Update 23 ka review toh DEV bhai de he dain gay or update 24 ka toh unho ne de bhi diya:

Mai zyada kuch nahi kahoon ga but itna ke, Iss baar I'm quite disappointed. Because iss update mai sitara ka narative explain karna bohat zarrori nahi tha, or uss ko explain karnay ke liye Had bhai aap ne apnay words ko zaya he kiya hai. Iss ko itni detail mai explain karnay ki bajaye agar aisa kuch hota ke saad ya halima sitara ko aproach kartay or jab uss se pochtay ke wo yahan kesay, tab wo shortly apni side ki story explain kar sakti thi.. aap ki almost 40% update issi waja se boring ho gaye hai.
mmm hmmmm..
maza nahi aya..

Next yeh ke:
Saad ke paas already martial art skil hai, tho ke abhi wo basic level par hai but iss level par bhi user ko body ke sensitive parts ko menipulate karna or bones ko twist and turn karna aata hai.. Toh phir alag se dasher skil ki kya zarrorat?????

Jab ke dasher ka bhi wahi kaam hai jo basic martial art ka gyaan rakhnay walay insaan ko bhi pata hota hai..
Total wastage of points..


Baki toh Dev bhai ne review de he diya hai toh ab meray kuch kehnay ka toh sawal he payda nahi hota..

Waiting for next one with this hope ke aap next time aisi mistakes se avoide karo gay bro..

 

[Had]

Ab aatay hain review par:

Update 23 ka review toh DEV bhai de he dain gay or update 24 ka toh unho ne de bhi diya:

Mai zyada kuch nahi kahoon ga but itna ke, Iss baar I'm quite disappointed. Because iss update mai sitara ka narative explain karna bohat zarrori nahi tha, or uss ko explain karnay ke liye Had bhai aap ne apnay words ko zaya he kiya hai. Iss ko itni detail mai explain karnay ki bajaye agar aisa kuch hota ke saad ya halima sitara ko aproach kartay or jab uss se pochtay ke wo yahan kesay, tab wo shortly apni side ki story explain kar sakti thi.. aap ki almost 40% update issi waja se boring ho gaye hai.
mmm hmmmm..
maza nahi aya..

Next yeh ke:
Saad ke paas already martial art skil hai, tho ke abhi wo basic level par hai but iss level par bhi user ko body ke sensitive parts ko menipulate karna or bones ko twist and turn karna aata hai.. Toh phir alag se dasher skil ki kya zarrorat?????

Jab ke dasher ka bhi wahi kaam hai jo basic martial art ka gyaan rakhnay walay insaan ko bhi pata hota hai..
Total wastage of points..


Baki toh Dev bhai ne review de he diya hai toh ab meray kuch kehnay ka toh sawal he payda nahi hota..

Waiting for next one with this hope ke aap next time aisi mistakes se avoide karo gay bro..

Baki sab ka b yea he thought hi kya?

 

[Had]

Story to waisy he chalni hi jaisy mainay sochi Baki skill ka agger mainay dala hi uski b koi waja hi.

 

[Shahrukh]

Zabardast update bhai

 

[Kung lee]

Kon he safed pose????---yahin to badshah he

 

[Had]

Kon he safed pose????---yahin to badshah he

Kya bro?

 

[Dark Rider69]

Story to waisy he chalni hi jaisy mainay sochi Baki skill ka agger mainay dala hi uski b koi waja hi.

Bro hum mai se koi bhi aap ko story change karnay ka nahi ke raha, story aisay he rahay g jessay aap ne design ki hai but mai toh iss new skill ka keh raha hu k yeh points ki barbaadi hai or yeh kisi kaam ki nahi hai.

hum aap ke readers hain, humay satisfy karna aap ka dharm hai.
aap ne pehlay he bataya tha k aap koi professional writer nahi ho aap bhi ek reader thay but ab jab aap ek writer banay ho or aap ka piece hum readers ko pasand bhi aa raha hai toh agar koi mistake ho g toh hum disapoint toh hoon gay he na bro..

 

[Had]

Bro hum mai se koi bhi aap ko story change karnay ka nahi ke raha, story aisay he rahay g jessay aap ne design ki hai but mai toh iss new skill ka keh raha hu k yeh points ki barbaadi hai or yeh kisi kaam ki nahi hai.

hum aap ke readers hain, humay satisfy karna aap ka dharm hai.
aap ne pehlay he bataya tha k aap koi professional writer nahi ho aap bhi ek reader thay but ab jab aap ek writer banay ho or aap ka piece hum readers ko pasand bhi aa raha hai toh agar koi mistake ho g toh hum disapoint toh hoon gay he na bro..

dekh layn gay dear.

 

[Dark Rider69]

dekh layn gay dear.

let's see how you make it better