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Dhanyawad jiSupper fantastic update janab
Dhanyawad jiSupper fantastic update janab
Thanku jiGood luck
Thanku very much deargood beginning of next part
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wow suspense hai story me
बहुत ही शानदार और लाजवाब कहानी आपकी कहानी का पढ़ने का अलग ही आनंद था
Bahut jabardast update bahut sare bache ho Gaye hero ke aur sab ke pita naam ya kaha rehna hai jaise rehna sab Anjali ne set kar diya but teeno gayab kaise kar diya ab Harday hi pata laga sakta hai
Jabardast superb mast Lajawab update intzaar rahega next part ka
Wow,,,what a fantastic story!
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Bahot wadiya update tha Riya ji please next part be jaldi post karna
A complete review
What a fantastic story it was.
This story had everything from suspense to action to love, romance and sex.
Jyadatar kahani action suspense aur sex ko sath lekar chalti hai, lekin aakhir ke kuch updates me puri tarah se apne plot par focus karti hai, Jo ki ek bahut achi baat thi.
Anjali ne sab kuch sahi se manage kar diya, almost sare raaj khul gye ant me Anjali ki maa aur Nana ki death aur Kamal kon tha uska bhi yani vo budhiya jisse Tushar mila tha vo kamal aur soniya ki maa thi jise usme hospital me rkha tha.
Lekin ant me ek alag hi mystry ban gyi ki naa sirf Tushar balki Ruchi aur apka teeno 18 saal se gayab hai. Jo koi agli kahani ki buniyaad hai.
Kahani ka hero yahi set ho chuka hai aur I think heroines bhi, ab dekhte hai ki vo kon tha jisne Tushar aur Ruchi aur alka ko gayab kiya.
All the best for the upcoming already hit story
You've improved a lot during this story which I can see by comparing initial updates with the last updates.
I hope next part will more better than this.
Kudos to you riya singh
wow nice story ending dikhaya aapne riya g
agle story ka plot isme hi bana diya
bahot badiya
summary of this update ki 20 saal paar ho gaya hai
sabhi ek saath reh rahe milkar
sabhi bache bade ho gaye hai aur main plot ki tushar ruchi aur alka gayab hai 18 saal se
matlab agla part isse lekar hoga ki kya hua tha farm house par 18 saal pehle aur ab kaha hai wo teeno
kaise harday unhe dundega aur wapas layega
great maza aaygea
aapki writing ke liye kya hi bolu bas likhte rahiye hum support karte rahenge
best of luck for next part
Kammal ki ending kari hai yrrr maza aa gaya abbb toh next part ka intezaar karna bahut mushkil lag raha hai....dekhta agle part main kaun gaddar niklega kisi na sahi kaha hai "Ghar Ka Bhedi Lanka Dhaye"
Jabardast kathanak ka dhamakedar samapan 11 MAA or 11 bachche samne hain or 2 MAA or 2 bachche sath me in sabhi bachchon ka BAAP gayab hain agle part ka besabri se intjar hai waiting for next part
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Superb story![]()
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Wow khtarnak story riya ji
Ummid hai nxt part bhi aisa hi hogaa
Super super super
Congratulations pahla part pura hone par
Agla part bhi dhamakedar hoga intezar rhega aapke agle part ka ya koi dusri lajawab story ka![]()
Amazing story. Suspense is still on...
Supper fantastic update janab
Good luck
Bahut bahut dhanyawad jigood beginning of next part
Best of luck for new story...hope woh bhi issi story k tarah damakedar hogiBahut bahut dhanyawad ji
Is kahani ke agale part se phele ek new story aa rhi h jiska phela part kal aayega
Bahut bahut dhanyawad mass jiCongratulations Riya on successful completion of this sexy story. Look forward to the next part as well. Thanks.
riya singh
Dhanyawad jiMind blowing story
Thanku so much dearBest of luck for new story...hope woh bhi issi story k tarah damakedar hogi