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Romance Ek Hateli Lovestory ;) (complete)

Adirshi

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Soo lovely update.
ऐसा लग रहा है जैसे " कुछ कुछ होता है " मूवी देख रहा हूं ।
जिस तरह से श्रावणी को अनिकेत ने प्रोपोज किया , वो आउटस्टैंडिंग था । उसके शब्द सच में लाजवाब थे ।
:thank_you:
अनिकेत ने इन शब्दों का प्रयोग रिहर्सल के तौर पे कोमल के साथ किया था । ये शब्द वहां भी लिखी जानी चाहिए थी । क्योंकि इन्हीं शब्दों ने तो कोमल के आंखों में आसूं ला दिए थे । वो ये सब बोलता और कोमल भावनाओं में बहती तो और ज्यादा सेंटिमेंटल दृश्य होता ।
ho sakta hai par filhaal komal ki bhavnaye puri taraf baahar nahi aane wali thi uske liye kuch aur socha hai
इसमें कोई भी दो राय नहीं है कि कोमल भी अनिकेत को पसंद करती है । और वो अनिकेत के लिए एक अच्छी पत्नी भी साबित होगी , इसमें भी कोई संदेह नहीं है ।
लेकिन लगता है उसके लिए मंजिल अभी कोसों दूर है । अनिकेत और श्रावणी के विवाह के पश्चात उसकी लाइफ काफी गमगीन होने वाली है । जितनी बिंदास और चंचलता भरी जिंदगी जी रही है वो अब उसके लिए सिर्फ एक यादें ही बनकर रहने वाली है ।
shadi :?: sanju bhai shadi me samay hai abhi, abhi to kahani me aur bhi rang aana baki hai sath bane rahiye
लगता है हंसी मजाक के बाद दर्द और विरह वेदना की शुरुआत होने वाली है ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत कहानी है आदि भाई । सारे अपडेट्स बेहतरीन थे । आउटस्टैंडिंग ।
Bahut bahut shukriya sanju bhai :thanks:
 

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Ye to sala pura gadbad ho gaya...ye perpose ka style , fantasy sari komal ki hai wo chahati thi ki Anni mujhe aise hi perpose kare ...wo na sahi kisi aur ko Anni ne perpose kiya lekin komal shravani me hi khud ko dekhakar khus ho liya...
komal ne to kabhi nahi kaha ke ani use aise propose kare ha halanki ye keh sakte ho ke uske hisab se ye jaldi ho gaya par komal jaanti thi ke ye hoga hi
Bahut bahut shukriya bhai :thanks:
 

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Update 20



Aniket ke apna dil nikal ke shravni ke saamne rakh diya tha aur shravni ko samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke ye sab sapna hai ya hakikat , itne sab mahol me shravni chakra gayi thi, uski aankhon me khushi ke aansu the aur aniket aakho me asha liye uski taraf dekh raha tha, shravni ke man me bhavnao ka aveg kuch is kadar umad raha tha ke uske muh se shabd hi nahi nikal rahe the

Aur ab sabko is baat ki tension hone lagi thi ki shravni kuch bol kyu nahi rahi hai aur achanak shravni apni jagah se uthi aur apni dono baho ka haar banate huye usne aniket ko gale laga liya… shravni ke is taraf gale lagne se aniket bhi thoda chauk gaya tha aur idhar avi ne apni do ungliya muh me daalte huye siti bajayi aur pure canteen me jallosh shuru ho gaya, full dhamaal aur akhir kyu na ho aniket ka proposal shravni ke accept jo kar liya tha, sabne milkar canteen ko sar par utha liya tha, sabhi log khushi me nach rahe the aur aaj to aniket aur shravni ke khushi kea age aasman bhi chhota pad gaya tha…

Kuch samay baad ye masti ka mahol thoda kam hua par abh bhi aniket ke shravni ka hath nahi chhoda tha jise dekh ke akhir me avinash bola

Avinash- o bhai, ab to hath chhod se bechari ka, ab to usne ha bhi keh diya hai, chinta mat kar kahi bhag ke nahi jane wali wo ab…

Avinash ki baat sunkar shravni se pat se aniket ki pakad se apna hath chhudaya par aniket wapis uska hath pakadte huye bola

Aniket-tere baap ka kya jata be aala motha shahana gyan dene wala

Itne me komal boli

Komal-aaila principal!!

Principal ka naam sunte hi dono ne pat se hath chhod diya aur aniket ne dheere se piche mud ke dekha to waha koi nahi tha….aur idhar avinash aur komal daat nikal ke jor jor se has rahe the…aura b unke sath shravni bhi hasne lagi aur boli…

Shravni-komal main aapka kin shabdo me dhanyawaad karu samajh nahi aa raha… aaj aapki wajah se ye jo anmol pal mujhe mile hai wo main jindagi bhar nahi bhulungi.. aapka ye ehsan hai mujhpar mujhe aniket se milane ke liye, main kaise chukaungi ise

Shravni ki baat sunkar apne shirt ki sleevs upper karte huye komal boli

Komal-ekdum easy hai, tumko bas teen chize karni padengi jya kuch nahi

Shravni-manjur!

Komal-arey didi sun to lo pehle :redface: to pehla kaam ye ki tum mujhe ye aap aap karke nahi bulaogi, tumko ab job hi ye inhe unhe aap tum karne ka hai uske liye tumhare paas ek banda hai usko karne ka 😌

Shravni-manjur, aage

Fir komal apni jagah par se uthi aur canteen malak ko bola, bola ka jahir kiya

Komal-kaka, canteen me jitne bhi log hai sabko aaj meri taraf se ek ek petis aur ek cutting chai do, behno aur unke bhailogo enjoy!

Fir koml niche baithte huye boli

Komal-ha to dusra kaam ye ke is sab ka bill tum bharogi :D

Komal ki baat sunkar shravni ghabra gayi par fir aniket ne use aankho se don’t worry ka ishara kiya ki wo sambhal lega, komal ne aage bola

Komal-ab teesra aur sabse important kaam bata rahi hu….

Fir komal ne ek bada pause liya…. Shravni ka dil jor se dhadak raha tha , wo man hi man me soch rahi thi k ye mahamaya ab kya mangegi, aur komal uske chehre par ke ye expressions dekh rahi thi aur fir komal boli

Komal-chill baby doll tu to aise tension me aa gayi jaise main anya ko maang lungi, chill baby main usse kuch bada mangne wali hi

Ab shravni aur jyada tension me

Komal-to aaj tu mujhe anya ko sakshi maan kar ye vachan de kit u aage aane wali jindagi me kabhi bhi kahi bhi ek chhoti sib hi kavita nahi sunayegi, bol manjur…

Pehle pehle to sabki hawa tight ho gayi thi ye sochkar ke komal kya mangegi par fir uski baat sunkar has hasne lage aur shravni ne uski ye baat bhi maan li..aur aniket haste huye bola

Aniket-ek number ki nautanki hai tu kammo..

Komal-ha na tere se kam hi hai..

Fir avinash ne ekdum se pucha

Avinash-komal, wo paper to pehle ekdum kora tha fir candle par pakadne ke baad akshar kaise dikhne lage uspe? Ye kaisa jadu tha?

Waise to ye sawal sabhi ke dimag me tha aur komal khulasa karte huye boli

Komal-wo ek badhiya trick hai tumlog bhi kar sakte ho, kya karna hai batati hu, ek kanda lene ka (pyaz) uska ras nikalne ka aur fir us ras se kisi bhi paper par likhne ka fir jaise hi tum wo paper candle par sahi se pakdoge jisme pyaz ke ras se likha hai to wo likha hua bhag jalne lagega aur jo likha hai dikhne lagta hai, bas itni si trick hai 😌

Jispar avinash komal ko shabasi dete huye bola

Avinash- kya gazab kamal ladki hai be, kaha kaha se lati ho aise idea, komal tu na ek dukan khol le, hamare yaha alag alag taraf se propose karke milega, dukan ke saamne line lag jayengi bata raha hu…

Teeno dost dil khol kar has rahe the, unhe dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ke kuch samay pehle inke dimag par bhari tension tha. Shravni jab jane lagi to aniket use chhodne gaya aur unke jate hi avinash ne achanak apna hath komal ke samne shake hand ke liye aage kiya

Avinash-hello, main avinash…

Komal-meko pata hai, dmag ghum gaya hai kyat era? Aise kyu baat kar raha hai jaise ham pehli baar mile hai…

Fir avinash gambhir hote huye bola…

Avinash-sach hi to hai, aajtak to ham sirf mil hi rahe the, asli komal ki pehchan to mujhe aaj huyi hai…

Komal ekdum sambhal ke baith gay aur boli

Komal-kuch bhi kya bol raha hai avya, ye kya badbada raha hai.

Avinash-sabne aaj khush hua aniket dekha, sihri huyi shravni dekhi par maine aaj dekhi komal, ekdum uske naam jaisi, swach manasvi, sacchi komal, maine tumhari aankho ka wo aansu dekha tha aur bahut kuch bol gayi woe k bund..

Komal-please avi iske aage ek shabd bhi mat bolna..

Avinash-par kyu?

Komal-kyuki main keh rahi hu isliye, tumhe hamari dosti ki kasam, tumhe aniket ki dosti ki kasam, aaj mujhe ek vachan de ki aage jindagi me kabhi bhi ye baat apne hotho pe nahi layega aur agar aisa hua to kasam hai mujhe aniket ki wo din mere jindagi ka aakhri din hoga

Avinash-vachan to main de dunga par ek baar sirf itna bata, aakhir kyu?

Komal-kabhi pyaar kiya hai?

Avinash-nahi..

Komal-to karo fir samjhoge

Itna bol ke komal waha se nikal gayi aur jate jate ek dharam sankat avinash ke liye chhod gayi, ek taraf apne baalmirta ka pyaar aur dusri taraf komal jisme mohabbat hote huye bhi haste haste uski khushi ke piye apne prem ka gala ghot diya, avinash aasman ki taraf dekhte huye bola

Avinash-parmeshwar, ab job hi kar sakte ho tum hi kar sakte ho, bas itna karna ki mujhe kabhi kisi ke pyaar me na girana…..



To Be Continued…
 

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Aniket ke apna dil nikal ke shravni ke saamne rakh diya tha aur shravni ko samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke ye sab sapna hai ya hakikat , itne sab mahol me shravni chakra gayi thi, uski aankhon me khushi ke aansu the aur aniket aakho me asha liye uski taraf dekh raha tha, shravni ke man me bhavnao ka aveg kuch is kadar umad raha tha ke uske muh se shabd hi nahi nikal rahe the

Aur ab sabko is baat ki tension hone lagi thi ki shravni kuch bol kyu nahi rahi hai aur achanak shravni apni jagah se uthi aur apni dono baho ka haar banate huye usne aniket ko gale laga liya… shravni ke is taraf gale lagne se aniket bhi thoda chauk gaya tha aur idhar avi ne apni do ungliya muh me daalte huye siti bajayi aur pure canteen me jallosh shuru ho gaya, full dhamaal aur akhir kyu na ho aniket ka proposal shravni ke accept jo kar liya tha, sabne milkar canteen ko sar par utha liya tha, sabhi log khushi me nach rahe the aur aaj to aniket aur shravni ke khushi kea age aasman bhi chhota pad gaya tha…

Kuch samay baad ye masti ka mahol thoda kam hua par abh bhi aniket ke shravni ka hath nahi chhoda tha jise dekh ke akhir me avinash bola

Avinash- o bhai, ab to hath chhod se bechari ka, ab to usne ha bhi keh diya hai, chinta mat kar kahi bhag ke nahi jane wali wo ab…

Avinash ki baat sunkar shravni se pat se aniket ki pakad se apna hath chhudaya par aniket wapis uska hath pakadte huye bola

Aniket-tere baap ka kya jata be aala motha shahana gyan dene wala

Itne me komal boli

Komal-aaila principal!!

Principal ka naam sunte hi dono ne pat se hath chhod diya aur aniket ne dheere se piche mud ke dekha to waha koi nahi tha….aur idhar avinash aur komal daat nikal ke jor jor se has rahe the…aura b unke sath shravni bhi hasne lagi aur boli…

Shravni-komal main aapka kin shabdo me dhanyawaad karu samajh nahi aa raha… aaj aapki wajah se ye jo anmol pal mujhe mile hai wo main jindagi bhar nahi bhulungi.. aapka ye ehsan hai mujhpar mujhe aniket se milane ke liye, main kaise chukaungi ise

Shravni ki baat sunkar apne shirt ki sleevs upper karte huye komal boli

Komal-ekdum easy hai, tumko bas teen chize karni padengi jya kuch nahi

Shravni-manjur!

Komal-arey didi sun to lo pehle :redface: to pehla kaam ye ki tum mujhe ye aap aap karke nahi bulaogi, tumko ab job hi ye inhe unhe aap tum karne ka hai uske liye tumhare paas ek banda hai usko karne ka 😌

Shravni-manjur, aage

Fir komal apni jagah par se uthi aur canteen malak ko bola, bola ka jahir kiya

Komal-kaka, canteen me jitne bhi log hai sabko aaj meri taraf se ek ek petis aur ek cutting chai do, behno aur unke bhailogo enjoy!

Fir koml niche baithte huye boli

Komal-ha to dusra kaam ye ke is sab ka bill tum bharogi :D

Komal ki baat sunkar shravni ghabra gayi par fir aniket ne use aankho se don’t worry ka ishara kiya ki wo sambhal lega, komal ne aage bola

Komal-ab teesra aur sabse important kaam bata rahi hu….

Fir komal ne ek bada pause liya…. Shravni ka dil jor se dhadak raha tha , wo man hi man me soch rahi thi k ye mahamaya ab kya mangegi, aur komal uske chehre par ke ye expressions dekh rahi thi aur fir komal boli

Komal-chill baby doll tu to aise tension me aa gayi jaise main anya ko maang lungi, chill baby main usse kuch bada mangne wali hi

Ab shravni aur jyada tension me

Komal-to aaj tu mujhe anya ko sakshi maan kar ye vachan de kit u aage aane wali jindagi me kabhi bhi kahi bhi ek chhoti sib hi kavita nahi sunayegi, bol manjur…

Pehle pehle to sabki hawa tight ho gayi thi ye sochkar ke komal kya mangegi par fir uski baat sunkar has hasne lage aur shravni ne uski ye baat bhi maan li..aur aniket haste huye bola

Aniket-ek number ki nautanki hai tu kammo..

Komal-ha na tere se kam hi hai..

Fir avinash ne ekdum se pucha

Avinash-komal, wo paper to pehle ekdum kora tha fir candle par pakadne ke baad akshar kaise dikhne lage uspe? Ye kaisa jadu tha?

Waise to ye sawal sabhi ke dimag me tha aur komal khulasa karte huye boli

Komal-wo ek badhiya trick hai tumlog bhi kar sakte ho, kya karna hai batati hu, ek kanda lene ka (pyaz) uska ras nikalne ka aur fir us ras se kisi bhi paper par likhne ka fir jaise hi tum wo paper candle par sahi se pakdoge jisme pyaz ke ras se likha hai to wo likha hua bhag jalne lagega aur jo likha hai dikhne lagta hai, bas itni si trick hai 😌

Jispar avinash komal ko shabasi dete huye bola

Avinash- kya gazab kamal ladki hai be, kaha kaha se lati ho aise idea, komal tu na ek dukan khol le, hamare yaha alag alag taraf se propose karke milega, dukan ke saamne line lag jayengi bata raha hu…

Teeno dost dil khol kar has rahe the, unhe dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ke kuch samay pehle inke dimag par bhari tension tha. Shravni jab jane lagi to aniket use chhodne gaya aur unke jate hi avinash ne achanak apna hath komal ke samne shake hand ke liye aage kiya

Avinash-hello, main avinash…

Komal-meko pata hai, dmag ghum gaya hai kyat era? Aise kyu baat kar raha hai jaise ham pehli baar mile hai…

Fir avinash gambhir hote huye bola…

Avinash-sach hi to hai, aajtak to ham sirf mil hi rahe the, asli komal ki pehchan to mujhe aaj huyi hai…

Komal ekdum sambhal ke baith gay aur boli

Komal-kuch bhi kya bol raha hai avya, ye kya badbada raha hai.

Avinash-sabne aaj khush hua aniket dekha, sihri huyi shravni dekhi par maine aaj dekhi komal, ekdum uske naam jaisi, swach manasvi, sacchi komal, maine tumhari aankho ka wo aansu dekha tha aur bahut kuch bol gayi woe k bund..

Komal-please avi iske aage ek shabd bhi mat bolna..

Avinash-par kyu?

Komal-kyuki main keh rahi hu isliye, tumhe hamari dosti ki kasam, tumhe aniket ki dosti ki kasam, aaj mujhe ek vachan de ki aage jindagi me kabhi bhi ye baat apne hotho pe nahi layega aur agar aisa hua to kasam hai mujhe aniket ki wo din mere jindagi ka aakhri din hoga

Avinash-vachan to main de dunga par ek baar sirf itna bata, aakhir kyu?

Komal-kabhi pyaar kiya hai?

Avinash-nahi..

Komal-to karo fir samjhoge

Itna bol ke komal waha se nikal gayi aur jate jate ek dharam sankat avinash ke liye chhod gayi, ek taraf apne baalmirta ka pyaar aur dusri taraf komal jisme mohabbat hote huye bhi haste haste uski khushi ke piye apne prem ka gala ghot diya, avinash aasman ki taraf dekhte huye bola

Avinash-parmeshwar, ab job hi kar sakte ho tum hi kar sakte ho, bas itna karna ki mujhe kabhi kisi ke pyaar me na girana…..




To Be Continued…
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