Romance Ek Hateli Lovestory ;) (complete)

Adirshi

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Namaskar! XF ke bhaiyo aur ladkiyo, kya haal chal hai sabke hope sab apne apne gharo me hai aur mauj kar rahe hai, kaam ke bagair baahar mat jaya karo be covid khatam nahi hua hai aur aap sab jaante hai meko aap sab ki kitni chinta hai aaplog ko kuch ho gaya to mera reader kam ho jayega yaar, waise majak ki baat nahi hai ye sab log khayal rakhna apna.

sala ye to mudda hi change ho gaya ekdum se, khair to mudda ye hai dosto ki aapka ye dost ek baar fir hajir hai aapki khidmat main ek nayi kahani ke sath, ye koi thriller ya fantasy nahi hai ye aap sab kahani ke prefix se samajh hi jaye honge, utne to aap samajhdaar hai hi :D, wo kya hai na thriller aur fantasy likhkar ab bore ho gaya hu bas wohi khun kharaba isiliye kuch alag likhna hai ab to socha kyu na wahi se shuru kiya jaye jis prefix main apni pehli kahani likhi thi 'Romance' se.....

So here I am Presenting you a Romantic Comedy

Ek Hateli Lovestory 😉

ab ye likhne me main kitna safal hua ye aaplog apne comment main jaroor batana to milte hai kahani ke pehle update ke sath tab tak ke liye ciao :ciao:

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Adirshi

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Adirshi

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कहानी बहुत ही बढ़िया है पर उससे भी बढ़िया आपका ज्ञान और आपका कई भाषाओं पर पकड़ है । मराठी , साऊथ इंडियन लेंग्वेज , हिंदी , इंग्लिश । इतने लेंग्वेज पर पकड़ ! इसी बहाने हम भी कुछ सीख रहे हैं ।
लिखने की कला के बारे में क्या कहूं ! बहुत ही बढ़िया । आप आगे चलकर बहुत ही बेहतरीन राइटर सिद्ध होंगे ।
लेकिन इसका भी एक वसूल है - रीडिंग , रीडिंग , रीडिंग एंड राइटिंग , राइटिंग , राइटिंग ।
जितना पढ़ोगे और जितना लिखोगे , वही आपको एक कामयाब राइटर बनायेगा ।
Sukriya dil se jo aise khushiyo se bhare palo ko update ke roop mein humare samaks pesh kiya aapne :bow:
dosti ki alag hi misaal hai ye kahani 😍..

avinash ,aniket aur komal ki dosti aur pyar ki behatareen kahani ...
aesi story sayed hi ho is forum per jisme sab kuch hai pyar comedy family ka pyar aur sabse achhi lagi avi aur ani ki dosti jo aaj ke time main bilkul nahi dikhti
Darpan ko dekha tune jab-jab kiya shringaar
Ek badnasheb hun me tune dekha na ek baar
Avinash kanitkar
Phir milenge chalte-chalte
कहानी बहुत ही अच्छी थी एकदम शीर्षक के माफिक जरा हटके।। मज़ा आ गया कहानी को पढ़कर।।
बहुत ही जबरदस्त कहानी थी आपकी।
थोड़ा हटके लेकिन एकदम डटके।।
The story was turning according to the need, due to which the story was becoming more interesting..
The story had quite a enthralling twist..
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.

In truth, story was becoming even more interesting with the increasing updates.
Keeping every aspect in mind, you were advancing the story. Along with romance, drama and comedy also have a unique confluence in story .


Keep writing like this and keep us entertained.
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Adirshi sahab :yourock: :yourock:
दोस्ती की मिसाल कायम की उसने । प्यार के मायने सिखाये उसने ।
अद्भुत और बेहतरीन अपडेट के साथ स्टोरी की समाप्ति हुई ।
इस खुबसूरत कहानी के लिए आपको बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आदि भाई ।
 
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