Romance Ek Bhool(Completed)

[lone_hunterr]

Sir I like the way you include our suggestions in your story. Isse story ko ek alag sa personal touch milta h readers ko.
Even though it's a completed story you have included emojis in it by editing that was awesome
Now parts of story are somewhat fitting together with story line of present.

Sameer ke sath kuch hua tha 2 saal pahle...
Shayad koi pyar mein dokha??

Will wait for more updates as mystery has started being revealed....
Congratulations for 50 awesome updates

 

[Naina]

Sameer ne muh nochne wali masoom shruti k dil hi tod diya. .. ek hi toh dil hain.
. Brilliant update champ ji.... Great going...

 

[kamdev99008]

champ bhai bahut badhiya chal raha hai....................

ab lagta hai ki dil tootne ke baad shruti poori tarah se sameer ke dost dushman aur sameer sab ke khilaf sazishon ka jaal bunne par utar ayegi......kyonki wo shuru se hi kuchh jyada hi aggressive aur possesive lagi mujhe..............

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Sir I like the way you include our suggestions in your story. Isse story ko ek alag sa personal touch milta h readers ko.
Even though it's a completed story you have included emojis in it by editing that was awesome
Now parts of story are somewhat fitting together with story line of present.

Sameer ke sath kuch hua tha 2 saal pahle...
Shayad koi pyar mein dokha??

Will wait for more updates as mystery has started being revealed....
Congratulations for 50 awesome updates

Thanks Lone Hunterr bhai for your support and review...As a writer, I must respect reader's opinion and think about the important suggestions...Also a positive criticism too ...What happened to Sameer 2 years ago will be revealed in next update...Keep supporting bro.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Sameer ne muh nochne wali masoom shruti k dil hi tod diya. .. ek hi toh dil hain.
. Brilliant update champ ji.... Great going...

Thanks Naina ji for your support and review...Wo dil to tootega jarur lekin abhi nahi ...Keep supporting.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

champ bhai bahut badhiya chal raha hai....................

ab lagta hai ki dil tootne ke baad shruti poori tarah se sameer ke dost dushman aur sameer sab ke khilaf sazishon ka jaal bunne par utar ayegi......kyonki wo shuru se hi kuchh jyada hi aggressive aur possesive lagi mujhe..............

Thanks Kamdev bhai for your support and review...Abb Shruti ka saajish suru hone hi wala hai...Iss saajish ka asar kis kis par padega ye bhi jald pata chal jaayega...Keep supporting bhai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 51​

Kuch pal ke liye ek khaamoshi chhaa gaya tha...Dono ko apna dard mehsoos ho raha tha...Koi kuch bolne ke mood me nahi tha...Shruti bas Sameer ko dekh rahi thi aur uske chehra dekh aisa lag raha tha ki kabhi bhi wo roo sakti hai...Sameer bhi niche dekh kar fir se ateet ke baare me sochne laga.

Shruti Sameer ko kisi haal me khona nahi chaahti thi...Pehle hi usko ek jhatka laga tha jab Sameer ne uske pyaar ke prastaav ko inkaar kar diya tha...Shruti ko Sameer ki aawaj se Sameer ki baatein ek dam sach lag raha tha...Usse itna to pata chal gaya tha ki jo bhi karna hai abhi karna hoga warna bahut der ho jaayega.

Iss khaamoshi ko todte hue usne ladkhadaate jubaan se Sameer se puchha.

Shruti:- Kyu? Kyu mujhse pyaar nahi karte ho aur pyar se itna bhaagte ho?

Sameer:- Hai ek vajah.

Sameer ne ek dard ke saath kaha....

Shruti:- Kahi tum kisi aur se pyaar to nahi karte?

Darte hur Shruti ne puccha ki Sameer kahi ha na keh de.

Sameer:- Nahi...Mai kisi se paar nahi karta aur naa hi kabhi karunga.

Sameer ki har ek lafz se uska dard ka pata chal raha tha.

Sameer ne jab ye kaha tab Shruti ki dard ki jagah gusse ne le liya.

Pehli baar Sameer se gusse ke saath boli.

Shruti:- Tum itna insensitive kaise ho sakte ho Sameer? Tum insaan ho ya nahi...Agar insaan ho to tumhaare paas dil kyu nahi hai...Kehte ho ki kisi se pyaar nahi karte aur naa hi kabhi karoge...Kyu? Kya kabhi tumhe mere pyaar ka ehsaas nahi hua...Itne time se mai tumhaare picche deewani ki tarah pyar ka ehsaas dilati rahi...Tumhaare picche paagalo ki tarah ghumti rahi...Lekin tumne kabhi iss baat ka parwah kiya hi nahi...Kabhi mujhse pyar kiya hi nahi aur naa hi kabhi mujhe apne pyaar ke kaabil socha...Aakhir kyu Sameer? Kyu tum mujhse pyar nahi karte? Kya kami hai mujh me? Aur tum kyu pyar se itna bhagte ho?

Shruti ki aawaj me gussa aur dard dono tha...Usse Sameer ki inkaar ki vajah samajh me nahi aa raha tha...Upar se Sameer ki chuppi usse aur tadpa raha tha.

Lekin iss baar Sameer chup nahi reh paaya...Shruti ki iss tarah se baar baar pucchne se usne bhi abb sach bataane ka faisla kar hi liya.

Sameer:- Sunna chaahti ho...Kyu mai pyaar se dur bhagta hu? To suno...Mai bhi ek insaan hu...Mai koi insensitive insaan nahi hu aur mere paas bhi dil hai.

Lekin darta hu iss dil se...Kahi dhokha na de de mujhe hi...Kahi kisi se pyaar na ho jaaye...Ye umar hi kuch aisa hai ki har kisi ko pyaar ho hi jaata hai...Na chaahte hue bhi opposite sex ki taraf attract ho hi jaate hai.

Lekin abhi tak maine khud ko rok rakha hai...Bas tum hi wo ladki ho jisse mai apna dost manta hu aur baat karta hu...Tumhaare siwaa koi ladki mera dost bhi nahi hai aur naa hi banana chaahta hu.

Dekha hai maine saccha pyaar karne wale ka kya haal hota hai...Jo galti unki hoti nahi hai unhe wo sazaa bhi milta hai...Pyaar karna gunaah hai kya...Agar hai to mai ye gunah nahi karna chaahta hu...Agar nahi hai to kyu mere dost Mahesh ko bina koi galti ki saza mila.

Usko wo sazaa mila jo saccha pyar karne wale ko akshar milta hai...Saccha pyar ki koi keemat nahi aaj ki jamaane me...Dekha tha maine kitna toot kar usne ek ladki se pyar kiya tha...Ekdam saccha aur niswarth pyaar...Wo uss ladki ke liye kuch bhi karne se picche nahi hat ta tha...Apna pyar ke khushi hi uske liye sab kuch tha...Wo ladki bhi aisa behave karti thi jisse lagta tha ki wo bhi Mahesh se pyar karti hai...Lekin wo sirf apne faaida ke liye Mahesh ka istemaal karti thi...Bewafa to wo thi hi lekin saath me chaalbaaz aur makkar ladki thi.

Jab Mahesh ko pata chala ki wo ladki Mahesh se pyar nahi karti hai to kitna toot gaya tha wo...Pyar insaan ko puri tarah se badal deta hai...Bigde hue insaan ko sudhar sakta hai to acche insaan ko paagal aur kamjor bana deta hai...Andar se puri tarah se tod deta hai...Aisi haalat bana deta hai ki wo naa khus hone par bhi khus dikhne ka naatak karna padta hai.

Ye sab maine Mahesh ke saath hota dekha hai...Rajesh aur maine jaise taise usko sambhaal liya...Uss din se ek baat pata chal gaya ki aaj ke duniya me saccha pyar shaayad hi kahi ho...Ye hamaara career banaane ka time hai...Aur hume aise time ka istemaal bewafawo ke liye waste nahi karna chaahiye.

Ye pyar aakhir hai kya...Kya hum iske bina jee nahi sakte? Agar pyaar nahi hua to hum mar jaayenge kya? Kya ye rule hai ki college me padhte vakt hame compulsory pyar karna chaahiye?

Sameer ne gusse se Shruti se puccha...Shruti Sameer ka achanak itna gussa dekh dar gayi aur kuch bol nahi aayi...Bas sir ko naa me hilaa diya.

Sameer:- To issi vajah se maine soch liya ki kabhi pyar nahi karunga...Jo galti Mahesh ne kiya hai usse mai nahi dohraaunga...Maine Mahesh ki galti se sabak liya aur khud ko pyar karne se rok liya...Yaa ye keh lo ki mera pyar par se vishwaas utth gaya hai...Pyaar se jitna sukoon milta hai usse jyada dard bewafayi aur bicchdan me milta hai.

Pyar ek meetha jehar hai jiska swaad accha lagta hai lekin pata nahi chalta kab ye hamaare hi jindagi ke liye haanikaarak ban jaaye.

Pyaar se jitna dur raho utna hi bhala hai.


Sameer ne apne dil ki bhadaas gusse me nikaal diya aur Shruti ko samjha diya ki kyu wo pyar nahi karna chaahta...Aur pyaar ke baare me wo kya sochta hai.


Shruti ko bhi pata chal gaya ki Sameer pyar se dur kyu bhaagta hai aur kyu wo Shruti ko accept nahi kar raha hai.

Kahi na kahi Sameer ki baat aur soch bhi sahi tha...Sameer ne jo mehsoos kiya tha wo sab keh diya...Sameer ne pyar ke baare me itna hi jaana tha...Yaa yu keh lijiye usne ek sikka ki bas ek hi side ko dekha tha aur dusre side ko nahi...Bas usse pyar ki negative points ka hi pata tha...Positives se wo abhi bhi anjaan tha aur jaan bhi nahi paayega jab tak usse khud pyar na ho jaaye.

Shruti ko abb samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki Sameer ko kaise manaye...Usko manaana to abb aur mushkil ho gaya tha...Sameer to pyar par vishwash bhi nahi karna chaahta tha.

Shruti:- Trust me Sameer...Mujhe nahi pata uss ladki ne Mahesh ko kyu dhokha diya...Lekin mai tumhe kabhi dhokha nahi dungi...Mai tumse bahut pyaar karti hu...Aur mera pyar saccha hai...Please mere pyaar ko mat thukraao...Jee nahi paaungi tumhaare bina.

Shruti ne laghbhag gidgidaate hue kaha...Sameer abb bahut uncomfortable feel kar raha tha.

Sameer:- Maine kab kaha ki tum mujhe dhokha dogi....Lekin Shruti please mera baat bhi samajhne ki koshish karo...Mai iss pyaar ke lafde me padna nahi chahta.

Sameer ko bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kaise Shruti ko samjhaye.

Sameer aur Shruti ki bich ek baar fir se khaamoshi chhaa jaati hai aur dono bas ek dusre ke bolne ka intejaar kar rahe the aur ye bhi chaah rahe the ki wo dono ek dusre ki baat samajh jaaye.

Kuch pal aise hi sochne ke baad Shruti ke dimaag me ek idea aaya aur usne kaha.

Shruti:- Tum shaadi to karoge na?

Sameer:- Haan karunga...Lekin tum abb ye kya puch rahi ho?

Shruti:- Love ya arranged marriage?

Abb Shruti ki har ek lafz ke saath confidence badh raha tha ki wo Sameer ko apna bana kar hi rahegi.

Sameer:- Kisi se love nahi karunga to definitely arranged marriage.

Sameer ne bhi confusion ke saath jawaab diya...Wo ye soch kar confuse ho raha tha ki aakhir Shruti ye sab kyu pucch rahi hai.

Shruti:- To fir mujh se hi arrange marriage karlo.

Shruti ne ek muskaan aur chehre me chamak ke saath ye baat kaha...Usse yakin tha ki abb Sameer bach nahi paayega.

Sameer:- What? Ye kya keh rahi ho tum?

Sameer aage kuch bol paata...Uski baato ko bich me kaat kar Shruti ne kaha.

Shruti:- Iska matlab mai tumhe acchi nahi lagti aur mujhse piccha chhudana chaahte ho?

Sameer:- Nahi aisi baat nahi hai.

Shruti:- To kya baat hai? Tum kisi na kisi se shaadi to karoge hi...To kya problem hai tum mujhse shaadi kar loge to...Mera love bhi success ho jaayega aur tumhe koi problem bhi nahi hoga...Tumhe pyar me padne ki jaruri bhi nahi padegi...Mai tumse pyar kar lungi...Sab kuch thik ho jaayega aur sab khus.

Shruti ne vijay muskaan ke saath kaha...Sameer abhi bhi confused tha.

Sameer:- Lekin tum meri dost ho to mai kaise tumse shaadi...

Sameer ne bas itna hi kaha tha ki Shruti uski baat ko bich me kaat kar gusse se boli

Shruti:- Love stories ki suruwat dosti se hi hota hai...Aur ye pyaar baad me shaadi me badal jaata hai...Abb chup...Abb kuch mat kehna tum...Final ho gaya ki tum mujhse hi shaadi karoge...Tumhaare liye arranged aur mere liye love marriage.

Shruti ne apna faisla suna diya...Sameer ko bhi pata chal gaya tha ki abb wo Shruti se jeet nahi paayega...Ek din usse shaadi to karna hi hai to Shruti se kyu nahi? Shruti ki iss chaturai par wo muskuraye bina reh nahi paaya.

Sameer ko muskurate dekh Shruti ne Sameer ki taraf se haa samajh liya aur Sameer ko gale laga kar fir se keh diya "I Love You"...Lekin iss baar feeling ke saath .

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 52​

Issi tarah dhire dhire din bitne laga...College me Shruti Sameer ke saath aur Priya Karan ke saath time bitaane lage.

Rajesh aur Divya bhi kabhi kabhi baat kar lete the...Rajesh Divya ko lekar confused tha ki uske dil me Divya ke liye kya feelings hai...Kya Divya uska sirf dost hai yaa fir wo Divya se pyar karne laga hai wo issi confusion me tha...Usse Divya ke feelings ke baare me bhi pata nahi tha...Usne khud ko thoda time dene ka socha ye jaane ke liye ki wo Divya ke baare me kya sochta hai...Aur Divya uske baare me kya sochti hai...Lekin usse kya pata tha ki aane waale vakt me kuch aisa hone waala hai usse sambhalna to dur ki baat hai samajh me hi nahi aayega kaisi musibat hai ye.

College me to sabhi ko pata chal hi gaya tha Sameer aur Shruti ke baare me...Aise hi ek din Shruti ki parents Sameer ke ghar aaye Shruti aur Sameer ka rishta lekar...Sameer ke parents ko bhi koi problem nahi tha ye jaan kar ki dono ek dusre se pyar karte hai...Sameer ne bhi kuch nahi kaha...Usne socha ki gharwaale aur Shruti dono khus hai to usse bhi koi aitraaz nahi hona chaahiye...Sabki khushi me hi uska khushi hai...Unn dono ki engagement aur shaadi ki date unki studies ke baad me rakhne ka socha sabhi ne...Jo abb kuch hi months baad hone wala tha..

Shruti ke liye ye sab koi vardan se kam nahi tha...Usse har khushi mil raha tha jo usne socha tha yaa kismat se maanga tha...Shruti bhi ek mauka nahi chhodti thi Sameer ke aur kareeb aane ki...Jaha bhi jaati Library, Canteen, park ya class room Sameer ko apne paas hi le jaati thi...Sameer ko ye sab bilkul accha nahi lagta tha lekin fir bhi wo chup hi rehta tha...Kuch nahi bolta tha...Bas jo Shruti usse bolti thi wohi karta tha aur Shruti ka saath deta tha.

Shruti Sameer ko apne pyaar ki ehsaas dilane ki bahut koshish karti thi lekin pata nahi kyu Sameer ko bilkul accha nahi lagta tha Shruti ke pyar karne ka tarika...Sameer ko abb Shruti ka koi bhi harkat accha nahi lagta tha...Andar hi andar wo Shruti aur uski behavior se chhidh raha tha...Wo Shruti se dur jaa bhi nahi sakta tha...Jab bhi jaane ka sochta usse Shruti ka dosti aur uske saath bitaaye hue dosti ke pal yaad aa jaata tha...Abb to waise bhi bahut der ho gaya tha inn dono ke rishte jud jaane se.

Abb Sameer bas khud me hi ghutne laga tha...Shruti ne uski azaadi bhi cheen liya tha...Har baar apna pyar ka ehsaas dilaati thi jo Sameer ko bilkul pasand nahi tha...Abb Sameer bas ek hi dua kar raha tha ki kisi din Shruti badal jaaye aur apna pyar chhod Sameer ke baare me bhi soche, usse samjhe...Sameer ne Shruti ko samjhaane ki koshish bhi bahut kiya tha lekin Shruti baar baar iss baat ko taal deti thi aur Sameer par apna hukum chalati thi...Shruti ko bhi Sameer ka dard aur ghutan nahi dikh raha tha...Wo to bas issi baat se khus thi ki uska pyaar usse mil gaya hai aur abb intejaar tha to Sameer se return me pyar paane ka...Bas wo intejaar karti thi ki Sameer bhi usse pyar kare.

Sameer ko agar koi pyar aur dosti me kisi ek cheej ko chunne ka kehta to Sameer jarur dosti ko chunta...Lekin usse nahi pata tha ki dosti me bhi usse itna ghutna pad sakta hai...Usne abb apni life ko kismat aur apno par chhod diya ek aasha ke saath ki jald hi sab kuch thik ho jaayega.

Issi tarah aur din bitne laga...Abb exams aane me bas 1 months hi baaki tha...Priya aur Karan apne life me khus the...Shruti bhi apni life me bahut khus thi lekin Sameer pehle se jyada frustrated rehne laga tha...Na kisi se kuch bolta na kisi se apni feelings share karta.

Rajesh bhi apni hi soch me vyast tha aur usne soch hi liya ki wo Divya se pyar karta hai...Abb wo Divya ki feelings jaana chaahta tha.

Rajesh ki iss tarah khud me hi busy ho jaane se Sameer aur akela pad gaya...Abb wo bas apna study aur na chahte hue bhi Shruti ki bakbak me time spend karta tha...Bas abhi ke liye ek study hi tha jo uska saccha dost tha...Raat me wo tension se dur hone ke liye padhayi par dhyan deta jisse usko thoda bahut sukoon mil jaata tha.

A Day In College


Aaj bhi Shruti akele canteen me baith kar lunch kar rahi thi...Saath hi apne shadi ke sapna dekh muskuraa rahi thi...Wo khud ke khayalon me itna khoyi thi ki usse pata hi nahi chala ki aas paas kya ho raha hai.

Tabhi uske paas aa kar Neha baith gayi aur boli.

Neha:- Abhi se shaadi ki sapne dekh rahi hai.

Neha ne muskuraate hue kaha aur Shruti bhi hosh me aa gayi.

Shruti:- Please tu jaa abhi yaha se...Abhi kuch der ke liye disturb mat kar.

Aise achanak Neha ka disturb Shruti ko accha nahi laga aur usne chhidhte hue Neha se kaha.

Nrha:- Itna natak kyu kar rahi hai...Sidha bol na..."Neha tu chali jaa aur mujhe Sameer ki khayalon me khone de...Disturb mat kar"

Neha ne fir se muskuraa kar kaha...Iss baar Shruti Neha ko bas gusse se ghurti rahi aur kuch nahi boli.

Neha:- Waise bhi mai tujhe disturb karne nahi aayi hu...Tere hi kaam ke liye aayi hu aur iss me tera hi faaidaa hai.

Neha ne iss baar apne chehre ke bhaaw ko badal diya aur issi se pata chal raha tha ki wo kuch serious baat karne wali hai...Abb Shruti usko gusse ki jagah chaunk kar dekhne lagi lekin boli kuch nahi...Bas aankho se ishaare me puccha ki "Kya baat hai?"

Neha:- Tujhe Sameer ka milne se itna khushi hai ki tu ye bhi bhul gayi ki tera koi dushman bhi hai jisse tujhe badla lena hai...Bhul gayi kya Priya aur uski dosto ko...Aur Rajesh ko bhi bhul gayi jo baar baar Sameer aur tere bich me aa jaata tha.

Neha ne iss tarah se kaha jaise iss kaam se sabse jyada faaida usse hi hone wala hai.

Shruti:- Nahi...Nahi bhula hai maine...Sabse badla lungi...Lekin abhi nahi...Pehle exam aur shaadi khatm ho jaaye uske baad sochungi unka kya karna hai...Kisi ko nahi chhodungi...Mere ego ko hurt kiya hai unhone aur meri beizzati bhi...Nahi bhul sakti mai uss beizzati ko...Aaj bhi yaad karte hue mera khoon khaul utthta hai...Bas shadi ho jaane de uske baad sochungi kya karna hai aur kisi ko nahi chhodungi.

Shruti ne behadd nafrat aur gusse se kaha.

Neha:- Tujhe sochne ki jarurat nahi hai...Humne ek accha sa plan soch liya hai...Bas plan par kaam karna baaki hai.

Neha ne confidence ke saath kaha to Shruti hairaani se Neha ko dekhne lagi aur boli.

Shruti:- Kya? Tune plan bhi bana liya...Nahi koi jarurat nahi hai tujhe plan karne ka...Tera plan kisi kaam ka nahi hota...Aur tujhe itni jaldi kya hai...Kahi isme tera to koi faaidaa nahi?

Shruti ki aawaj se pata chal raha tha ki wo kitna hairaan hai Neha ki baat se.

Neha:- Tu meri dost hai iss liye tera help kar rahi hu...Agar tu nahi chahti meri madad to thik hai mai jaa rahi hu...Lekin itna kahungi ki ek baar meri baat sunle...Tera hi faaidaa hai isme.

Neha ne jaise taise khud ko sambhala aur kaha...Usse dar bhi tha ki kahi Shruti ko ye na pata chal jaaye ki isme uska hi faaidaa hai aur wo bhi bahut bada faaidaa...Shruti ka help bhi wo apne plan ko anjaam dene ke liye le rahi thi.

Shruti:- Kaun sa plan?

Shruti ne bhi utsukta ke saath puccha kyuki usse laga ki ek baar sun lene me kya buraai hai.

Neha:- Yaha nahi...College chhuti hone ke baad tujhe mai apne dosto ke paas le chalungi aur plan ke baare me bataaungi.

Shruti ko samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki aisa kya plan hai jo Neha usko yaha bataana nahi chaahti thi aur apne dosto ke saath kisi aur jagah par batane wali hai...Usse lag raha tha ki koi na koi gadbad jarur hai...Par usne soch liya ki wo baat jaankar hi rahegi.

College khatam hone ke baad Neha Shruti ko apne ghar me le gayi aur baithne ko kaha...Shruti baith kar soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi room me do ladka aaye jisse dekh Shruti buri tarah se chaunk gayi aur hairaani se boli.

Shruti:- Ramesh aur Pratap tum dono.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Friends aaj 2 updates post kiya hai...Padh kar apna reviews jarur dijiye.

 

[lone_hunterr]

Entry of 2 old enemies...
Neha ne kaha ki HUM ne plan bana liya. So may be this is a plan of Neha, Ramesh and Pratap or Principal is also included???

All characters of Plan are here except for Priya's mom and dad...

Unable to understand interest of Neha between this groups. Love for Sameer may be? Or revenge from Sameer for her father's insult?

Waiting for more....
It's getting interesting