Romance Ek Bhool(Completed)

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 46​

Priya:- Bahut hua Sameer...Bahut bol liya tumne aur bahut sunn liya humne...Tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko? Tumhe lagta hai ki tum hi acche ho aur baaki ke sab bure...Aur attitude to aise dikhaate ho ki jaise ki tum koi celebrity ho.

Tumhe kya laga hum kuch nahi bolte to ham gunge behre hai ya darpok hai...Pehle hamaari galti thi ye baat ka hame ehsaas tha iss liye kuch nahi kehte the...Abb apni galti maanna hume aata hai aur sudharna bhi aata hai...Tum hi kehte the na ki ham tumhaare raashte me na aaye...Bahut pehle hatt gaye the tumhaare raaste se aur apni hi duniya me vyast the...(Shruti ki taraf dekh kar) Lekin ye baat iss chudail ko manjur nahi tha...Pucch lo isse kyu hame aakar pareshaan karti thi...Har baar warning deti thi...Isse lag raha tha ki ham isse dar jaayenge...Lekin chudail ko ye pata nahi tha ki iske bhaunkne se hame koi fark nahi padta...(Shruti se) Kyu chudail? Abb to tujhe samajh me aa gaya hai na...Hamse dur rehne me hi teri bhalayi hai.


Shruti ke aise baar baar chudail bolne se Sameer ka gussa aur badh raha tha to koi students ko hassi aa raha tha jo Sameer ke gusse ko aur bhadka raha tha...Jab Sameer ko bardasht nahi hua tab daant chabhaate hue usne kaha.

Sameer:- Shruti ko baar baar chudail kehna band karo...Please kya ye maamla ham akele me suljhaa sakte hai? Aise sabke samne tamasha banane se tumhe kya milega? Aapas me baat karke saari problems khatm karte hai.

Sameer ne to Priya ko samjhate hue kaha lekin uska aawaj se pata chal raha tha ki wo kitne gusse me hai...Bas kisi tarah apne gussa par kabu kiya tha.

Priya:- Kya baat hai Mr. Sameer Sharma? Jab baat khud ki izzat par aaya to aise munh chippa kar bhaag rahe hai...Hamaare baare me to kabhi nahi socha...Sabke saamne jab hamaara majaak udaate thhe ya hamaari galti ko sabke saamne dikhaate thhe tab to bahut maja aata tha aapko lekin aaj kya hua?

Aur rahi baat iss chudail ko chudail na kehne ki to ye possible nahi hai Mr...Mere paas abhi time nahi hai ki Shruti ke kartut ke baare me kuch kahu...Tumhara hi dost hai aaram se pucch lena.

Bas itna kahunga ki tum aur tumhaari iss chudail dost hamaare raaste me kabhi nahi aana...Mai ek baat keh deti hu ki aaj se mujhe tumse koi lena dena nahi hai aur tumhe bhi humse kuch lena dena nahi hona chahiye...Tum apni raaste aur ham apne raaste...Abhi to iss chudail ka gaal laal kiya hai agar agli baar fir se dimaag kharab karegi to kuch keh nahi sakti...Aur tab aa kar ye mat pucchna ki maine aisa kyu kiya.

Priya aaj itne dino ki nafrat aur gussa nikaal rahi thi...Uski har lafz uska Sameer se beinteha nafrat ka gawahi de raha tha.

Sameer bhi sab kuch gusse ki ghunt pee kar sun raha tha...Sabhi ke saamne aise majaak ban jaane se wo bahut hi uncomfortable feel kar raha tha...Gussa to bahut aa raha tha lekin kuch bol nahi paa raha tha...Bolta bhi kya jab galti Shruti ka hi tha...Usse ye to pata nahi tha ki Shruti ka galti kya hai lekin Shruti ka jhuka hua chehra dekh itna to samajh gaya ki Shruti ne jarur kuch kiya hai aur issi vajah se Priya itna ucchal rahi hai...Wo abb bas itna chaahta tha ki jaldi se ye tamasha khatam ho jaaye.

Priya:- Sameer jaante ho mai sochti thi ki kahi tumse nafrat karke maine koi galti to nahi kiya...Lagta tha ki tum jaise bhi ho utna bure bhi nahi ho...Aur hamaari ye nafrat misunderstanding se suru hua...Lekin mai galat nahi thi...Accha kiya jo mai tumse nafrat karti hu...Tum to dosti me itna andhe ho gaye ho ki tumhe sahi aur galat ka andaaza hi nahi hai...Aur to aur apne dost ki galti chupaane ke liye mujhse hi bahas kar rahe ho...Tum se ek din parking me bhi baat karna chaaha tha iss chudail ke baare me...Lekin tumne mana kar diya aur iske hi tarafdaari karke mujhe bhej diya...Ussi baat se iss chudail ka itna himmat badh gaya aur aaj iski abhi jo haalat hai iski vajah ye khud hai.

Ek salah deti hu ki dosti karna hai to kisi aur se karna...Iss chiludail se nahi...Kabhi ye tumhaara saath nahi dene wali...Itna to jarur keh sakti hu ki pith piche chura bhaunkne se bhi nahi chukti hai ye chudail.

Pata nahi kis cheej ka ghamand hai isse...Aur kya saabit karne aayi thi ye mere paas...Mujhe mera aukaat samjhaa rahi thi...Maanti hu tum log jitna rich family se belong nahi karti...Gaaw me ek middle class family me pali badi hu...Sab kuch thik thak hai aur ham apne life se satisfied hai...Paiso se har kuch nahi hota khusi to santust rehne se milti hai...Mere sapne tum jaise laalchi log jitna bada nahi hai lekin mai apni life me khus hu.

Aur ye chudail apne aap ko samajhti kya hai? Bhikhaari jaise bartaaw kar rahi thi mere saath...Pata nahi kyu mere picche padi hai...Kabhi chhain nahi milta isse...Bas dusre ke picche pade raho aur jeena mushkil kar do...Iske alawa isse aata hi aur kya hai.

Tum logo se aur baat karke mai apna mood aur kharab karna nahi chaahti...Pata nahi meri baat tum logo ki samajh me aaya bhi ya nahi...Lekin mai itna keh deti hu ki aaj se humaara raasta alag aur mujhe tum aur iss chudail ki dakhal andaazi nahi chaahiye...Ham log shaanti se rehna chaahte hai...Live and Let Live.

Itna keh kar Priya Divya ka haath pakad kar waapas apne room me le jaati hai...Usne apna kaam kar diya tha aur aaj wo andar se bahut halka mehsoos kar rahi thi...Bahut din se Sameer se sidhe baat karne ka jo bojh tha wo aaj khatam ho gaya...Sameer ko aaj usne chup kara diya tha aur saath hi uska attitude ko bhi.

Abb hall me sirf teachers, students, Sameer , Rajesh aur Shruti hi bache the...Sabhi students ko ek mudda mil gaya tha jis par discuss karke wo sab apna time pass kare...Kisi ke liye ye show shocking tha to kisi ke liye free ka comedy...Koi iss maamle par baat karke has rahe the to koi apne apne room me jaane lage.

Teachers ko bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kaise react kare...Itna to unhe bhi pata chal gaya tha ki galti Shruti ka hai...Baat bahas se jyada nahi badha to unhone bhi koi dakhal nahi diya...Unhe hi apne pareshaani suljhane diya.

Dhire dhire sabhi chale gaya apne room me aur baaki reh gaye Sameer, Rajesh aur Shruti.

Rajesh ne bhi iss vakt kuch naa bolna hi thik samjha aur wo bhi apne room me chala gaya.

Shruti apne sir jhukaaye aaj ka saara ghatna ke baare me soch rahi thi...Kya socha tha usne aur kya ho gaya...Kaha wo apne birthday ka wait kar rahi thi Priya ko beizzat karne ka lekin ulta Priya ne hi usko sabke saamne beizzat kar diya...Aur Sameer ko bhi bahut kuch keh diya...Abhi to wo soch rahi thi ki Sameer ko kya jawaab de...Sab kuch usne Sameer se chuppa kar kiya tha...Lekin iss bich usse Priya par bahut gussa aa raha tha...Abb usne thaan liya ki ek din acche se wo Priya se badla legi aur aaj hui ghatna ko kabhi nahi bhulegi jab tak wo apna badla pura na kar le.

Uske paas me hi khada Sameer ka bhi waisa hi haal tha...Nafrat aur khud ka beizzati se uski aankhe gusse se laal ho gaya tha...Sabhi ke saamne apna aur Shruti ka beizzati ko wo seh nahi paa raha tha...Aaj jo bhi hua uss ghatna ne Sameer ke dil me Priya ke liye jo nafrat tha usse aur badha diya.

Kuch der gusse se jameen me dekhne ke baad Sameer ne apna chehra upar uthaya aur gusse se Shruti ki taraf dekh kar kaha.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 47​

Sameer:- Kya jarurat tha ye sab karne ki?

Sameer ne apna gussa ko dabaana chaaha lekin dabaa nahi paaya...Sameer ka gussa Shruti ke liye koi shock se kam nahi tha...Pehli baar Sameer Shruti par gussa hua tha...Shruti kuch bol nahi paayi...Bas apni najar niche jhuka kar hi khadi rahi.

Sameer:- Kyu kiya tumne Shruti ye sab aur ye sab karne ki jarurat bhi kya tha? Aaj galti humaara tha aur mujhe bhi chup rehna pada...Aaj pehli baar koi mujhe aisa beizzat karta raha aur mai chaah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paaya...Kya jarurat tha Shruti tumhe bekaar me unn logo ki maamle me dakhal dene ki...Kaash tumne ye sab nahi kiya hota aur naahi unn logo ki himmat itna badhta.

Iss baar Sameer ki aawaj me gussa ke saath ek dard bhi tha...Pehli baar usne beizzati mehsoos kiya tha aur wo bhi sabhi ke saamne.

Sameer ne bas itna hi kaha tha ki Shruti se bhi abb raha nahi gaya...Usne apna sir uthaa kar Sameer ke niraash chehre ko dekha...Shruti ke aankho me aansu ki jagah gussa tha...Lekin Sameer ki haalat dekh jaldi se usne apne chehre ke bhaaw badal kar dukhi hone ka naatak karte hue kaha.

Shruti:- Sorry Sameer.

Isse jyada Shruti ko samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole.

Sameer bhi gusse me sir ghuma leta hai...Wo to Shruti par bhi gussa tha lekin Shruti ko kuch keh nahi paa raha tha.

Shruti:-Please Sameer aise naaraj mat hoo...Sorry mai apni galti ke liye maafi maangti hu.

Sameer:- Abb sorry se kya faidaa...Unn logo ne apna kaam kar diya...Hame sab ki najar me giraa diya...Mujhe to samajh me nahi aa raha ki maine aisa kya kar diya jo usne mujhe itna sab kuch suna diya...Abb sorry bolne se beetaa hua vakt waapas to nahi aayega...Aaj mai unse haar gaya jinse mai kabhi haarna nahi chaahta tha...Aaj unn logo ne hara diya mujhe sabke saamne.

Isse aage Sameer nahi bol paaya...Apni beizzati par wo aur bol nahi paaya...Shruti ko bhi abb pata chala ki Sameer kitna jyaada naaraj hai.

Shruti:- Mujhe nahi pata tha ki baat itna bigad sakta hai...Agar mujhe pata hota ki ye sab hota to mai kabhi aisa nahi karti...Maine to socha ki ye bahut accha mauka hai unhe aur beizzat karne ka lekin.

Sameer:- Mai iss baare me kuch baat nahi karna chaahta...Mera mood abhi bahut kharaab hai aur aise me mera saara gussa tum par nikal sakta hai...Mai abhi jaa raha hu apne room me...Lekin jaane se pehle itna jarur kahunga ki aage se unki maamle me kabhi dakhal mat dena...Mai abb unki galti ka intejaar kar raha hu...Ek baar galti kar de Priya tab usko jindagi bhar ka dard dunga...Bas ek mauka mil jaaye...Nahi chhodunga usse...Aur apna badla lekar hi rahunga.

Mai tumse ye to nahi pucchumga ki tumne kya kiya tha unke saath jis vajah se wo sab itna kuch bol rahi thi...Lekin ye jarur kahunga ki aage se aisa kuch mat karna please.

Gusse me ye sab kehne ke baad Sameer ek pal waha nahi ruka aur sidhe apne room me chala gaya.

Aaj jo bhi hua usse Priya ke liye Sameer ka nafrat aur badh gaya tha...Kuch din pehle jo gussa shaant tha aaj wo fir se bhadak gaya tha.

Shruti ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare...Usko apni galti ka ehsaas bilkul bhi nahi tha...Usse bas Priya par gussa aa raha tha aur badla lene ki chaahat bhi...Aaj ki baat se Shruti ko itna to jarur pata chal gaya ki Sameer ke saamne kuch nahi karna hai...Jo bhi karna hai Sameer ke peeth picche...Usne aaj Sameer ki najaro me Priya ke liye jo nafrat tha usse mehsoos kar liya tha...Abb usko Sameer ko bina bataaye Sameer ki nafrat ka istemaal karna tha aur ek plan banana tha jisse saanp bhi mar jaaye aur laathi bhi na toote.

In roof​

Chath par Priya akeli baithi thi aur raat ke maahaul ka majaa le rahi thi...Bahut dino ke baad ek chhain mila tha usse...Aaj se pehle aur Sameer se milne ke baad har ek pal ko ghut kar jeeya tha usne...Sameer ka aise sabke saamne beizzat kar dene se bahut pareshaan ho gayi thi...Aaj mauka milaa usse aur usne apna saara hisaab barabar kar liya...Wo chhath ke ek kone me baith kar khusi ke saath niche ki taraf dekh rahi thi ki picche se usko kisi ke aane ki aahat hua.

Picche jo bhi aa raha tha wo aaj har haal me apne kaam ko anjaam dene waala tha...Yahi sahi mauka tha uske liye...Bahut kar liya tha intejaar aur aaj mila wo mauka usko.

 

[lone_hunterr]

It should be Karan. Usko chance mil hi gaya h aab and it's a very perfect time Priya is also most vulnerable right now.

Only this time the updates were some sort of predictable. Jo last line priya ne kahi thi kal ke updates mein uske baad to ye hi sab expected tha. Bas Sameer ka bilkul chup rahna expected nhi tha laga tha kuch to bolega par aab to vo sidha kaand karega....
Lekin agar itna detail mein fight likhi h to shayad iska kuch role hoga aage jake..

Writing and details bhut shandaar tha but thoda predictive bhi laga mujhe.

Waiting for more....

 

[kamdev99008]

bahut badhiya champ bhai......................bahut jabardast update ................. bahut jabardast details priya ki kahi hui baaton ki..... marvelous
priya ne jo shruti ki ijjat utar di.......... wo sahi bhi hua ......... itne se hi sameer ka sahi galat ka andaja ho jana chahiye tha
lekin sameer ki ankhon par rashmi se dosti ka rda jo pada tha........ balki usse bhi jyada priya se dushmani ka

ab yahi bhool sameer ki use itni badi bhool karne par majboor kar degi jisse sameer aur priya hi nahi shruti ki bhi jindgi badal jayegi

pahle karan ne priya ko marne ke liye chhod diya tha khai me tab sameer ne bachaya..........
ab kya fir se karan hi priya ko chhat se girane aa raha hai ya............shruti................... vaise mujhe to neha lag rahi hai

bas intzar hai kahani ke jaldi present me ane ka
lekin usse pehle sameer ki bhool aur majboori priya se shadi karne ki..........

 

[Champ_AK_81]

It should be Karan. Usko chance mil hi gaya h aab and it's a very perfect time Priya is also most vulnerable right now.

Only this time the updates were some sort of predictable. Jo last line priya ne kahi thi kal ke updates mein uske baad to ye hi sab expected tha. Bas Sameer ka bilkul chup rahna expected nhi tha laga tha kuch to bolega par aab to vo sidha kaand karega....
Lekin agar itna detail mein fight likhi h to shayad iska kuch role hoga aage jake..

Writing and details bhut shandaar tha but thoda predictive bhi laga mujhe.

Waiting for more....

Thanks Lone Hunterr bhai for your support and review...Abb jaake aapko story predictable laga ye mere liye garv ki baat hai......Yeh mera 2nd attempt tha story likhne ka aur abb tak story unpredictable likh saka ye jaan kar bahut accha laga...Haan ye fight ki vajah se aage bahut kuch hone wala hai...Aise hi saath bane rahiye.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

bahut badhiya champ bhai......................bahut jabardast update ................. bahut jabardast details priya ki kahi hui baaton ki..... marvelous
priya ne jo shruti ki ijjat utar di.......... wo sahi bhi hua ......... itne se hi sameer ka sahi galat ka andaja ho jana chahiye tha
lekin sameer ki ankhon par rashmi se dosti ka rda jo pada tha........ balki usse bhi jyada priya se dushmani ka

ab yahi bhool sameer ki use itni badi bhool karne par majboor kar degi jisse sameer aur priya hi nahi shruti ki bhi jindgi badal jayegi

pahle karan ne priya ko marne ke liye chhod diya tha khai me tab sameer ne bachaya..........
ab kya fir se karan hi priya ko chhat se girane aa raha hai ya............shruti................... vaise mujhe to neha lag rahi hai

bas intzar hai kahani ke jaldi present me ane ka
lekin usse pehle sameer ki bhool aur majboori priya se shadi karne ki..........

Thanks Kamdev bhai for your support and review...Iss baar Sameer ka gussa kaafi jyada hai...Bas ek mauka ka intejaar me hai...Ye toh aage pata chal hi jaayega...Abb story Sameer ki bhool ki taraf badh hi raha hai...Jald pata chal jaayega ...Aise hi saath bane rahiye bhai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 48​

Jaise hi Priya ko kisi ki aahat mehsoos hua wo turant picche mud gayi...Andhera me wo pehchaan nahi paa rahi thi ki picche wala shaks kaun hai aur kyu aaya hai...Bas andhera me wo itna hi dekh paayi ki wo shakhs ladka hai.

Priya ke chehre par dar aur hairaani ke mile jule bhaaw tha...Wo soch rahi thi ki itni raat ko chhat par kaun aaya hai aur kis liye...Usne himmat karke puccha.

Priya:- Kaun ho tum?

Ghabraahat me Priya ke munh se bas itna hi nikla...Isse aage kya bole Priya ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha.

Priya ke bolne ke kuch der baad hi wo ladka bola.

Ladka:- Mai hu Karan.

Karan ne jab ye bataya tab Priya ne raahat ke saans liya.

Priya bas Karan ko dekh rahi thi...Wo kuch nahi bol rahi thi...Priya ko chup dekh Karan ne kaha.

Karan:- Tum itna ghabrayi hui kyu ho...Sab kuch thik hai na???

Priya :- Haan.

Priya ne bas itna hi reply diya.

Karan:- To fir itna dari hui kyu ho?

Priya:- Ghabra gayi thi tumhe dekh kar.

Priya ne ek lambi saans le kar kaha...Karan Priya ki baat par hairaan ho gaya.

Karan:- Mujhe dekh kar ghabra gayi...Lekin kyu?

Karan ne ye kehne ke baad sawaliya najro se Priya ko dekha.

Priya:- Andhera me acche se nahi dikh raha tha ki kaun hai...Achanak se saamne aane par tumhe pehchaan nahi paayi...Iss liye kisi aur ko samajh kar ghabra gayi thi.

Karan:- Lekin ghabrane ki jarurat kya hai agar meri jagah koi aur hota to.

Priya:- Itni raat ko koi achanak se mere picche koi ladka aye to Ghabraahat to hogi hi...Pata nahi kis intention se aaya ho...Mujhe laga kahi Sameer to nahi hai jo mujhe nukshaan pahuchane aaya ho apna beizzati bardaast nahi kar paane ki vajah se.

Karan:- Majaa aa gaya aaj to...Bahut acche se Sameer ki band baja diya tumne...Bahut time se wait kar raha tha iss pal ke liye...Jo mai nahi kar paaya wo tumne karke dikhaya...I am so happy today...Abb dekhna wo hume apna munh bhi nahi dikhayega panga lena to dur ki baat hai.

Karan ki aawaj se hi pata chal raha tha ki wo kitna khus hai...Bahut dino ke baad itna khus ho raha tha warna Sameer ne to jeena mushkil kar diya tha uska.

Priya:- Please yaar aaj to uski baat kar ke mood kharaab mat karo...Bahut dino ke baad khus hu mai...Aur uske baare me baat karna nahi chaahti...Lets live this moment.

Iske baad Priya aur Karan ke bich ek khaamoshi chaa jaati hai...Bich bich me dono ek dusre ki taraf dekh lete the aur mushkura dete the...Karan ki najar me to ek confusion tha...Usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare...Lekin Priya ki najar me Karan ke liye pyaar.

Priya:- Tum yaha kyu aaye ho iss vakt?

Khaamoshi ko chirte hue Priya ne Karan se pucha.

Karan:- Mmai to aise hi ayaa ttha.

Karan ne haklate hue kaha...Usse ummeed nahi tha ki achanak se Priya ye sawaal pucch dega.

Priya:- Sach keh rahe ho?

Priya ne muskuraate hue Karan ki aankh me aankh daal kar puccha...Usse pata tha ki Karan jhuth bol raha hai aur wo acche se jaanti thi ki Karan kyu aaya hai.

Karan ne ha me sir hilaa diya.

Priya:- Tumhe kya lagta hai tum itni aasani se mujh se jhuth bol doge aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chalega...Sach sach bataao...Aur abb koi jhuth mat bolna.

Priya ne muskuraate hue warning diya.

Karan ko samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya sach me usko sach bolna chaahiye...Agar usne sach bol diya aur Priya naraaj ho gayi to.

Karan:- Wo mai...wo mai...

Isse aage Karan kuch bol nahi paa raha tha...Aaj Priya ko propose karne me usko dar lag raha tha...Bhale hi usne ek chaal chala tha Sameer ke ghadi churaa kar lekin usse ye pata nahi chala tha ki Priya uske baare me kya sochti hai...Kahi mana naa kar de...Iss dar se Karan kuch bol nahi paa raha tha.

Priya:- Kya wo mai wo mai kar rahe ho? Jo bhi kehna hai khul kar kaho.

Iss baar Priya ne serious hone ka acting kiya...Isse Karan aur dar gaya...Ek najar Priya ki aankho me dekha Karan ne...Lekin agle pal hi najar hata liya dar ke kaaran.

Karan:- Kkuch nnahi.

Priya ko abb apne hi harkat par gussa aa raha tha...Accha khaasa Karan usse propose karne jaa raha tha lekin uski acting se Karan dar gaya aur himmat nahi kar paaya.

Priya:- Arre bataao na yaar...Kya kehna chaahte ho aur aise dare hue kyu lag rahe ho?

Iss baar Priya ne thoda dheemi aawaj me kaha...Karan ne iss baar himmat karke bol hi diya.

Karan:- Actually Priya I Llove yyouu.

Karan ne bol to diya...Lekin uska dar abhi bhi waisa hi tha...Priya kya jawaab degi ye soch kar wo aur ghabra raha tha...Life me first time wo itna ghabra raha tha...Priya ko aise chup dekh bahut himmat karke Karan ne apna sar uthaya aur Priya ke chehre ke bhaaw padhne laga...Priya ki chehre ka gussa dekh wo bahut dar gaya aur usse samajh me aa gaya ki Priya usse pyaar nahi karti.

Priya:- Himmat kaise hui tumhaari mujhe propose karne ki?

Priya ka bas itna hi kehna tha ki Karan ka chehra ekdam se latak gaya aur wo niraash hokar picche mood kar waapas jaane laga.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 49​

Karan wapas niche jaane hi wala tha ki Priya daud kar aage badhi aur Karan ke kandhe ko pakad kar waapas apne taraf pakad kar ghuma diya aur Karan ko ghurne lagi.

Karan bhi kuch pal chup raha...Kuch der baad himmat karke usne Priya ke chehre ko dekha aur kaha.

Karan:- Sorry...Agar tumhe buraa laga ho to.

Karan ki aawaj se pata chal raha tha ki wo kitna hopeless ho gaya hai.

Karan ki ye baat Priya ko accha nahi laga...Abb usse mehsoos hua ki Karan ko aur tadpaana thik nahi hoga.

Usne abb aur der nahi kiya...Jaldi se Karan ko gale laga liya aur kaha.

Priya:- I love you too Karan.

Priya ne thoda khushi aur thoda sharmaate hue kaha...Uski aawaj se lag raha tha ki aaj maano usse duniya bhar ki khushi mil gaya hai.

Priya bas Karan ke gale se lipti hi rahi...Karan ko ek pal ke liye to kuch samajh me nahi aaya...Lekin jab dusre pal usse samajh me aaya to uska nirash chehra par fir se muskaan laut aaya...Ek pal me wo bhi bahut khus ho gaya aur khushi ke mare usne bhi Priya ko apne baaho me bhar liya.

Dono aaj bahut khus the...Kuch dino se ye dono bas issi pal ka intejaar kar rahe the...Pahla pyaar me proposal accept hone ka majaa hi kuch aur hai...Kuch pal dono yunhi ek dusre ke gale me lipte rahe aur iss pal ko jeete rahe...Dono bas ek dusre ka saath mehsoos kar rahe the...Kareeb 15 minutes baad wo dono alag hue.

Alag hone ke baad Karan muskuraate hue Priya ke chehra dekhne laga jo sharm ke saath apni najar Karan se chura rahi thi.

Karan ko Priya ka ye adaah bahut pasand aaya...Iss khaamoshi ko chirte hue wo pyaar se bola.

Karan:- Kya baat hai? Kuch der pehle to aise ghur rahi thi jaise khaa jaaogi...Lekin abb...Abb to ek najar bhi nahi dekh rahi ho.

Karan ki baat par Priya ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kahe...Wo sharmaate hue bas najar churaa rahi thi.

Karan:- Please abb to kuch bolo...Kab se maraa jaa raha hu tumhari pyari baatein sunne ke liye...Lekin tum to kuch bol hi nahi rahi ho.

Lekin Priya fir bhi kuch nahi bolti.

Karan:- Lagta hai maun vrat rakh liya hai abb.

Karan ne dhire se badbadaate hue kaha lekin Priya ne sunn liya...Abb Priya ne ek najar upar uthaa kar Karan ko ghuraa aur agle hi pal muskuraate hue najar jhuka liya.

Karan:- Chhodo ye sab baatein...Ye bataao ki tum mujhse pyaar karti thi to siddhe siddhe jawab kyu nahi diya...Aise ghur rahi thi jaise khaa hi jaaogi...Pata hai kitna dar gaya tha mai.

Karan ne shikayat karte hue kaha....

Priya Karan ki iss baat par thoda muskurati hai aur kehti hai.

Priya:- Badla le rahi thi.

Karan:- Badla...Kaisa badla?

Karan ne hairaani ke saath puccha.

Priya:- Badla nahi leti to kya karti...Pata hai kitna tadpaya hai tumne mujhe...Kab se wait kar rahi thi tum mujhe propose karoge...Lekin tum to bahut darpok ho...Koi itna late karta hai kya...Bas issi vajah se naraj ho gayi thi aur socha tumhe tadpane ka.

Priya ne ulta Karan se shikayat kiya...Karan uski baat sunn muskuraate hue bola.

Karan:- Pyaar ka maamla hai pagli...Jitna aashaan sochte hai propose karna utna aashaan hota nahi...Kahi saamne waale ne proposal reject kar diya to kya hoga bas ye dar satata rehta hai...Pyaar me ek haa jindagi bhar ki khushiyan deta hai to ek naa jindagi bhar ke gum.

Priya:- Tumhe to mai bahut daring samajhti thi jab tumne mujhe khayi me girne se bachaaya...Lekin tum to darpok nikle.

Priya ne muskuraate hue kaha.

Karan:- Kisi bhi aadmi ke paas chahe kitna bhi taakat aur himmat kyu na ho pyaar ke maamle me wo bhigi billi ban jaata hai...Pyaar insaan ko kya nahi karwaata...Pyaar paane ke chakkar me insaan khud ko puri tarah se badal deta hai.

Pyar ke liye taakat aur dare kaam nahi aata...Bas dil aur character kaam aata hai aur saamne waala aapke aur aapke character ke baare me kya sochta hai ye jaruri hai...Aur mai yahi nahi jaan paa raha tha ki tum mere baare me kya sochti ho...Aur dar lag raha tha ki kahi tum mera proposal reject hi na kar do.

Priya:- Are bas bas...Thoda sa majaak kya kar diya tum to ekdam se serious hokar safaayi dene lage.

Iske baad kuch pal ke liye fir se khaamoshi chaa jaata hai...Dono ek dusre ki aankho me dekh ek dusre ke pyaar ko mehsoos kar rahe the...Bahut sukoon mil raha tha dono ko...Shaayad jindagi ki sabse jyada khushi ka palo me se ek tha abhi ka vakt dono ke liye.

Kuch der ki khaamoshi ko todte hue Priya ne kaha.

Priya:- Karan ek baat bataao.

Karan:- Puccho.

Priya:- Tum mujhse kab se pyaar karte ho.

Karan:- Jab se tumhe pehli baar dekha...Ek alag sa feeling mere dil me aaya jab tumhe dekha tab...Shaayad love at first sight keh sakte hai...Uss time to mujhe ye bas attraction hi laga...Lekin jab dhire dhire tumhaare saath vakt bitaane laga tab jaa kar ehsaas hua ki mai tumse pyar karne laga hu...Bas kehne ki himmat nahi kar paa raha tha...Aaj jaise taise himmat karke bol diya.

Aur tum mujhse kab se pyar karti ho?

Karan ne jo mehsoos kiya tha wo keh diya lekin sach to ye tha ki aaj bhi Priya ki taraf bas wo attracted hi tha.

Priya:- Agar sach kahu to mujhe tumse love at first sight nahi hua tha...Tumhe sirf apna dost maanti thi.

Lekin dhire dhire tumhaara saath accha lagne laga...Jab tum Sameer aur Shruti ke saath ladkar mera saath dete the to mujhe bahut accha lagta tha....Tab jaakar shaayad mujhe bhi tumse pyaar hone laga tha...Bas tum aur Divya hi mere wo dost ho jinhone mujhe mushibat me saath diya tha.

Jab tumne uss din apna jaan me khel kar mujhe bachaya to laga shaayad hi koi mujhe itna saath dega jitna tum dete ho...Har pal mere khushi ke baare me sochte ho aur mere liye kuch bhi karte ho....Tab jaa kar mujhe bhi ehsaas hua ki mai bhi tumse pyaar karti hu.

Mujhe kabhi kabhi lagta tha ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho...Lekin mai sure nahi thi...Jab mujhe ehsaas hua ki mai tumse pyar karti hu tab sochti thi ki kaash ye sach ho ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karte ho...Aur aaj mera ye wish bhi sach hua.

I love you Karan...I love you so much.

Itna keh kar Priya Karan ke gale lag gayi...Issi tarah se dono kuch der tak pyar bhari baatein karte rahe...Aur jab raat ke 2:00am baj gaye aur unhe neend laga tab dono niche chale gaye sone ke liye.

Issi tarah suruwat hua Karan aur Priya ka pyar ya fir Karan aur Priya ka attraction ka.

1 Year Later​

Aise hi dhire dhire vakt bitne laga...Inn baato ko beete 1 saal se jyada ho gaya...Sameer, Priya aur unki dost abhi just 4th semester me pahunche the...3rd Semester ka result aana baaki tha...1st aur 2nd Semester Sameer ne top kiya tha...Rajesh, Divya aur Priya bhi acche students the aur unka result bhi bahut accha aaya lekin toppers ki list me unka naam nahi tha...Karan aur Shruti jaise taise paas ho gaye...Padhne ki jagah dusro ke khilaaf saajish rachne lagenge to yahi hoga na.

Sameer ko dekh kar koi keh nahi sakta tha ki ye top karega...Lekin Rajesh ko chhod koi ye baat nahi jaanta tha ki Sameer jo kaam karta hai dil laga kar karta hai pure dedication ke saath...Intelligent to wo pehle se hi tha aur padhne me koi kanjoosi bhi nahi karta tha...Ek alag routine tha uske padhne ka....Sameer har ek cheej ko time par karta tha aur apne routine ko hamesha follow karta tha.

Ye to hua inke studies ki baat...Abb inke aapas me relations ke baare me bhi bata deta hu.

Iss 1 saal me Priya aur Karan ka pyaar pehle se thoda aur majboot ho gaya tha...Aur inke baare me college me sabhi ko pata chal gaya tha...Lekin kisi ne jyada interest nahi liya iss pyaar par Shruti ko chhod...Priya aur Divya ki dosti pehle jaisa hi tha aur Karan aur Divya ke bich dosti bhi bilkul waise hi tha...Koi sudhar nahi aaya...Bas kaam ke vakt hi baat karte the.

Dusri taraf Sameer aur Rajesh ka dosti pehle ki tarah hi accha tha lekin kabhi kabhi Sameer ko Rajesh ka Divya ke saath badhta karibiyan dekh gussa aata tha...Lekin kuch kehta nahi tha...Sameer aur Shruti ki dosti pehle se bahut accha ho gaya tha...Sameer ke liye ye sirf dosti tha lekin Shruti ke liye pyar...Wo Sameer ko apne dil ki haal bataana to chaahti thi lekin abhi tak nahi bataya...Shruti ka Sameer chhod kisi ke saath relation accha nahi hua tha...Sabhi ko apna dushman maanti thi.

Sameer aur Priya ki nafrat me bhi koi sudhar nahi aaya tha...Bhale hi wo dono ek dusre se baat karna band kar chuke the lekin ye nafrat abhi tak khatm nahi hua tha...Sameer Priya ki bas ek galti ka intejaar kar raha tha apna hisaab barabar karne ka...Jo shaayad Shruti ki meharbani se bahut jaldi sambhav hone waala tha.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 50​

During Lunch Break


Sameer ka aaj mood thoda off tha iss liye wo canteen me nahi gaya...Shruti aur Rajesh ne bahut koshish kiya canteen tak le jaane ka lekin Sameer nahi maana...Sameer ke jidd ke saamne Rajesh aur Shruti ko jhukna hi pada.

Dono chale gaye canteen me aur akele akele baith kar lunch karne lage...Rajesh aaj kuch jaldi hi apna lunch complete karke class me chala gaya.

Shruti kuch pareshaan najar aa rahi thi...Chehra dekh aisa lag raha tha ki wo kuch soch rahi hai...Iss soch ke chakkar me wo thik se khaa bhi nahi paa rahi thi...Tabhi uske paas Neha aa kar baith jaati hai.

Neha:- Kiski yaad sata rahi hai madam?

Neha ki iss majaak se Shruti ka dhyan toota...Wo Neha ko bas ghurti rahi.

Neha:- Sorry Madam...Aapko aapki aashiq ke baare me sochne aur dhyan hatane ke liye maafi chaahti hu...Par kya karu...Ye college hai madam...Yaha aap aise react karengi to sabko pata chal jaayega ki aapko pyaar ho gaya hai...Please apne feelings ko thoda control me rakhiye nahi to pura college ko aapki love story ke baare me pata chal jaayega.

Neha ne muskuraate hue fir se kaha.

Shruti:- Ye kya bakwas kar rahi hai tu...Mujhe kyu kisi se pyar hoga aur kaun hai mera aashiq?


Shruti ne dikhana chaha ki usko Neha ki baat se kitna gussa aaya hai...Koi sun na le iss vajah se dhire aur gusse ke saath usne kaha.

Neha:- Calm down dear...Mere saamne tera ye naatak nahi chalega...Jitna bhi ye jhutha gussa kyu na dikha de tu mujh par koi asar nahi padne wala...Waise bhi sacchai chupane se chhupta nahi...Dekha hai maine aaj kal teri behavior ko...Teri har harkat se pata chalta hai ki tu Sameer se pyar karti hai...Bas acche se jataa nahi paati hai...Are yaar pyaar karti hai to Sameer ko bhi iss baat ka ehsas dilaa ki tu usse pyaar karti hai...Kab tak aise hi chup baithegi.

Shruti Neha ki iss baat par kuch nahi kehti hai...Wo fir se Neha ko ghurne lagti hai...Lekin iss baar naa to wo gussa thi aur naa hi khus...Bas Neha ko dekhe jaa rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ki kya jawaab de Neha ke iss baat ko.

Neha:- Abb ye mat kehna ki mai fir se jhuth bol rahi hu aur tujhe Sameer se pyar nahi hai.

Iss baar Neha ne majaak nahi kiya.

Shruti:- Nahi sach keh rahi hai tu...Mai Sameer se pyar karti hu...Bahut pyar karti hu...Kitni baar ehsaas dilaaya maine Sameer ko...Pura paagal hai wo...Kabhi samajhta hi nahi hai mujhe aur mere pyaar ko...Mere ishaare ko majaak me le leta hai...Sidha propose nahi kar paa rahi hu mai lekin usko bhi to samajhna chaahiye naa.

Jab bhi pyaar ke baare me baat karti hu to pata nahi kyu topic hi badal deta hai...Kabhi pyaar ko seriously leta hi nahi...Pata nahi mai kya karu kuch samajh me nahi aata...Wo Rajesh bhi hamesha Sameer ki pucch ki tarah piche hi pada rehta hai...Kabhi mauka mil nahi paata Sameer ko khul kar apni baat kehne ka...Jab bhi mauka milta hai Sameer baat ko majaak bana kar taal deta hai.

Sochti hu ki wo bahut jald mera baat samajh jayega aur mujhe hi propose karega lekin 1 saal ho gaya naa hi wo mujhe samajh paaya aur naa hi mere pyaar ko.

Itna keh kar Shruti chup ho gayi...Uski aawaj me ek bebasi tha...Bahut koshish kiya tha usne Sameer ko apne pyaar ka ehsaas dilaane ko...Lekin abhi tak kaamyab nahi ho paayi thi...Aur kaamyaab ho paayegi iss baat par khud par vishwaas bhi nahi tha usse.

Kuch pal chup baith kar aur kuch sochne ke baad Neha ne thoda gambhir ho kar kaha.

Neha:- Abb to ek hi raasta bacha hai.

Shruti:- Kaun sa raasta?

Shruti ki aawaj me koi utshuktaa nahi tha...Usse pehle hi pata tha ki Neha ki sabhi ideas bakwas hota hai...Fir bhi usne socha ki ek baar sunne me kya jaata hai.

Neha:- Sidha Sameer ko propose hi kar daal...Aaj aar ya paar kar de baat ko...Kab tak aise hi ghut ti rahegi? Mai jaanti hu Sameer ko bhi ehsas hai tere pyaar ko aur shaayad koi vajah hoga jis vajah se wo tujhe accept nahi kar paa raha hai...Aaj baat karke jaan le kya baat hai.

Agar usse sach me tujhse pyaar nahi hota to kisi bahaane se tujhse alag ho gaya hota lekin usne aisa nahi kiya...Meri baat maan aur sidha propose kar daal Sameer ko...Aage kya hoga usse baad me dekhenge.

Itna keh kar Neha chup ho gayi aur Shruti ki taraf dekhne lagi...Shruti ko bhi Neha ki baat thik laga...Kuch der sochne ke baad usne kaha.

Shruti:- Thik hai...Bahut jald propose kar dungi.

Neha:- Abb aur der mat kar...Aaj hi propose kar de...Warna aisa na ho ki koi aur hi Sameer ko pataa le...Kahi mai hi usse na pataa lu.

Neha ne aakhiri ki do line hanste hue kaha...Abb wo maaaul ko fir se halka banana chaahti thi...Shruti ko bhi pata tha ki Neha majaak kar rahi hai.

Shruti:- Tu karegi Sameer ko propose? Hahaha ....Bahut comedy karti hai yaar tu? Tere pyar ko accept karna to dur ki baat hai wo teri taraf dekhega bhi nahi...Hahaha...Agar Sameer ne mujhe tere saath dekh liya to kahi wo mujhe hi na reject kar de...Bahut manhus hai tu...Mujhse dur hi raha kar.

Agar kisi aur ne Sameer ko pataane ki koshish kiya to uska mai munh noch lungi.

Issi tarah majaak me lunch break khatam ho jaata hai...Shruti aur Neha apne apne class me jaati hai.

Class ki taraf jaate jaate Shruti ne tay kar liya ki aaj har haal me wo Sameer ko propose karegi...Class me bhi Shruti ka dhyaan padhai me naa ho kar Sameer par hi rehta hai...Wo aaj kaise Sameer ko propose karegi bas issi baare me soch rahi thi.

In parking


Khair jald hi ye vakt bhi aa gaya...College khatam hone ke baad Sameer aur Rajesh parking se apne ghar ki taraf jaane hi waale the ki picche se daud kar Shruti aati hai aur chilla kar kehti hai.

Shruti:- Sameer ruko...Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.

Shruti ne itna jor se chillaya tha ki Sameer ka naa sunne ka sawaal hi nahi tha.

Sameer:- Ha Shruti kaho...Kya baat hai?

Shruti ke paas aane ke baad Sameer ne kaha.

Shruti:- Yaha nahi...Private baat hai aur bahut jaruri hai.

Shruti ki baat sunne ke baad Sameer ne socha kia aakhir kya private baat ho sakta hai...Usko kuch kuch andaaza to ho gaya tha lekin wo bas yahi dua kar raha tha ki jo wo soch raha hai wo naa ho...Wo Rajesh ko akele jaane ka keh deta hai aur Shruti ke picche picche chala jaata hai.

Shruti Sameer ko ek akele jagah me le jaati hai aur bina dare, bina sharmaye himmat karke bol deti hai.

Shruti:- Sameer I Love you.

Sameer jo nahi chahta tha aakhir wohi hua...Shruti ki baat sunne ke baad Sameer 2 saal picche hue ek ghatna ko yaad karne laga...Sameer uss ghatna ke baad pyaar se bhaagne ka bahut koshish kar raha thaekin aaj Shruti ne fir se usse do raaho par laa khada kiya.

Uss ghatna me jo bhi hua tha uske baad Sameer ke paas pyar karne ki taakat nahi tha...Pyaar se vishwaas utth gaya tha uska...Uss ghatna ko yaad karte hue uski aankho se do bund aansu apne aap gaalo par gir gaya aur himmat karke usne jawaab diya.

Sameer:- No Shruti...I Dont Love You...And I cant love anyone.

Sameer ki aawaj me ek dard tha jisse sun kar Shruti ke dil toot gaya...Kitna yakin ke saath usne Sameer ko propose kiya tha ye soch kar ki Sameer uska pyar accept kar hi lega...Lekin Sameer ne uske dil ka tukda tukda kar diya...Bahut chot pahuncha Shruti ko...Kuch pal yunhi wo chup rahi...Lekin wo abhi bhi haar maane waali nahi thi.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

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