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Fantasy Devatva - Ek Sangharsh Gatha

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Ab tak aapne dekha k kaise Analasur ne Kaamran k sqath vishwasghat kiya . Uski patni k saath durvyavhaar kiya , kaamran k putra Bhanu ki bhi nirmamta k saath asuro dwara hatya ki gayi jisse dekhkar Kaamran apne hosh kho baitha yane k behosh ho gaya

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Murchit Pade Kamran ko Analasur ne karagrah Mein Band Karva Diya . uss Samay main ( Virupaksh ) karagrah ka mukhya prabhari tha Sare karagrah Mere adhin the .

Jis Samay Yahan Mahal Mein yah sab ho raha tha uss Samay Main Apne Bhavan Mein Tha Mujhe Apne vishwaspatra guptchar dwara Raja Kamran ke Parivar ke sath Hui ghatna gyat Hui aur sath hi yah bhi gyat hua ke Kamran ko karagruh Mein Dal Diya gaya hai .

Suchna prapt hote hi main daudta hua Mahal Mein pahuncha vahan pahunchkar Mujhe Pata Chala k Maharani Shalaka ki bhi Badi nirdayta purvak Hatya ho gai hai .

Apne Raja ke karagrah mein band hone ke Karan aur Raja Ke Putra tatha Rani ki pida dayak mrutyu Ke Karan main Bada Dukhi hua .

Mujhe atyant Krodh Bhi Aaya parantu main Analasur Jaise shaktishali asur ka Samna karne mein sarvtha asamarth tha . Mujhe ab Chinta thi Keval Rajkumari Amrita ki Jo Ek abodh Balika thi , Jiska abhi Koi pata nahin tha asur bhi use hi dhundh rahe the Aisi avastha Mein Mera Pratham Kartavya tha yadi Rajkumari jivit hai to usse Khoj kar sarvpratham surakshit Sthan Tak pahunchana aur uske pakshat Apne Raja Ko Mukt karne ki Yojana banana .

Jab Main karagrah pahuncha to Dekha ki Sara karagruh asuron ke Adhikar mein ho gaya tha Aur karagruh Ke Sainik Unka Har Aadesh ka Palan karne ke liye badhya the jinhone bhi Unka virodh Kiya Ve Sab Mare Gaye .

Mujhe vahan Dekh Kar unn asuron Ne Mujhe gher liya , Mujhe vahan Vivek se kam Lena tha Bal se nahin isliye maine unn asuron Ke Samne Apne Hath Jod Liye aur kaha ki main to Keval karagrah ka ek Adhikari hun Mera Kartavya Raja ke har aagya ka Palan karna hai Ab Yahan Ke Raja Analasur hai isliye main unhen Apna Swami swikar karta hun .

Asur Sainik Mujhe pakad kar Analasur ke pass Lekar Gaye Maine usse Pranam Kiya aur uske Samne natmastak hokar unhen Apna Swami swikar Kiya .

Meri Baton per Vishwas Karke usne mujhe apna pad Wapas De Diya ab main fir karagrah Mein Gaya vahan main asuron ki najron Se Bachkar Raja Kamran Se Mila .

Kamran ko ab tak Hosh a gaya tha Apne Jawan bete ki Apne Aankhon Ke Samne Dardnaak Maut aur apni Patni ki durdasha se Aahat Raja kaid khane Mein dahade maar-maar Kar Ro Raha Tha Mujhe Dekhkar vah mujhe pukarne laga .

Maine Ishare se unhen Shant Kar Diya fir uchit Samay Dekhkar Unse Maine Rajkumari Amrita ke bare mein poochha .

Parantu unhen Keval Itna Hi gyat Tha ki rajkumari aapani Man ke sang Apne kaksh Mein thi Uske paschat kya hua vah kahan Gai unhen Kuchh Nahin Pata Tha .

Kamran Ne Mere Aage Hath jodkar gidgidate hue rajkumari Amrita ko dhundh kar bachane ke liye Prathna ki .

Vidhi ka bhi lekh Ajeeb hai Jo Kamran kabhi bhi Jivan Mein Kisi ke aage Jhuka nahin tha , apni mahtvakanshaon ko purn karne ke liye Ahankar Mein Chur Jisne Aaneko Paap kiye the vah Aaj Mujh jaise se ek Chhote Se Sipahi ke aage apni Kanya ke pranon ki ko bachane ke liye Hath jode Khada tha .

Asuron Ko sandeh Na Ho Jaaye is Karan main vahan Se shighra Hi Nikal Gaya

Ardh ratri ka Prahar tha asuron Ne Mahal mein bhishan utpat machaya hua tha Mahal ki dasiyon Ki chikh Pukar Charon or Gunj rahi thi yah sab dekh aur sunkar Mujhe Bada Krodh a raha tha parantu main vivash tha .

Mujh mein itna samthya nahin tha ki main unn asuron Ka Samna kar Sakun isiliye Ab Mujhe keval apne Lakshya Rajkumari Amrita per Dhyan kendrit karna tha .

Main Apni Maya Ka prayog karte hue asur Roop dharan kar Maharani ke kaksh mein Pravesh Kiya uss kaksh ka pratyek saman Tuta futa tha aisa lag raha tha ki Yahan Kuchh dhundha gaya ho iss sabse Mujhe Itna To samajh mein aa gaya tha ki asur bhi Rajkumar Amrita ko dhundh rahe hain tabhi Mujhe kaksh ke bahar se Kuchh patrachapon ki awaaz Sunai Di .

Meri Maya asuro ko Adhik der tak bhramit nahin kar sakti thi isliye maine vahan Se shighra Hi nikalne ka nishchay Kiya .

Adhikari hone ke Karan Mujhe vahan ke sampurn Gupt dwaron ka gyan tha asuron ke kaksh mein aane se purv hi Mujhe vahan se nikalna tha .

Uss kaksh Mein sthit Gupt Dwar Ko kholkar Maine usmein Pravesh Kiya aur purvavat usse vaise hi band kar diya , Gupt Dwar Mein Pravesh karne ke baad niche ki or sidhiyan utarte hue Jab Main vahan pahuncha to Dekha Rajkumari Amrita vahan Bhumi per murchit avastha mein Padhi hui thi .

Rajkumari Amrita ko dekhkar sarvapratham unka naadi parkshan kiya , woh bilkul swastha thi kewal kissi dawai k prayog se gahri neend mein thi unka sahi salamat dekhkar maine ishwar ko dhanywad kiya , meri khoj puri ho gayi thi.
Ho sakta hai Rani ne asuron ko dekh liya Ho aur kuchh anhoni ki aashanka Ke Karan unhone Yahan Rajkumari Amrita ko Chhupa Diya Ho .


Maine Rajkumari Amrita ko apni Godi Mein uthaya aur Gupt raston se Hote Hue Mahal ke bahar a Gaya ratri ka Andhera Mera Sahayak hua .

Pura Nagar Ab asuron Ke Adhikar Mein Tha isliye main Nagar se bahar Apne Kuchh sahayakon ko Lekar Amrita ko Lekar Nikal Gaya nikat hi Van Mein Ek Gufa Mein Rajkumari Amrita ko rakhkar Apne Kuchh sahyogiyo Ko Maine vahan Chhoda Aur Kuchh sahayakon ko Apne vishwaspatra aur Parivar Jan aur asuron dwara pidit yakshon ko Yahan ektrit karne ka Karya saunpa aur uss Sthan ko Yaksh Maya Se surakshit Karke Wapas Mahal pahuncha .

Ab Mujhe Raja Kamran ko bhi karagruh se chhudana tha Mahal pahunchkar main wapas karagrah Mein pahuncha vahan Dekha ki karagrah mein bandhiyon ko asur Gor yatraen de rahe the aur prasann ho rahe the .

Ratri ka chautha Prahar shuru ho gaya tha Aur Subah Hone se pahle Mujhe Kissi bhi Prakar yahan se nikalna tha .

Maine unn asuron ke liye Apne Sevak se kahkar Madira mangvaee aur Chupke Se usmein Vish Mila Diya

Vish mile hue Madira ko karagrah Mein sthit asuron ko Pilaya aur Thodi Si der Mein uss Vish Ne Apna Karya karna Shuru Kiya ek-ek Karke unn Sabhi asuron ki mrutyu Hone Lagi .

isase pahle ki bahar Aur Kisi Ko Pata Chalta Maine karagrah se sabhi bandhion ko aur Raja Kamran ko Mukt Kiya aur Gupt Raste Se Bahar nikalkar Ussi Sthan per pahuncha Jahan Maine Rajkumari Amrita ko Rakha tha .

Apni Putri Ko jivit Dekhkar Kamran baar-baar mujhe dhanyvad de raha tha .

Wah van Nagar ke nikat tha Subah bhi ho gai thi Suraj Apna Prakash Charo Aur bikher raha tha parantu Ham Sabke Jivan Mein To Ghor andhkar Chha Gaya Tha Hamara Sab Kuchh samapt ho gaya tha .

Raja Kamran ke karagrah se nikalne ka aur mere Vishwasghat ka ab tak To AnalaSur Ko Pata Chal chuka hoga usne Kamran ko dhundhne ke liye Apne asuron Ko Charon or faila Diye Honge yadi Ham unke Hath Lage To Hamara Bachana asambhav hoga .

isliye Hamen vahan se shighra se shighra nikalna tha ab tak Hamare parivarjan Sahayak aur Sabhi vahan ektrit ho gaye the jinki sankhya lagbhag hajar Hogi .

Ab aur Adhik Samay Tak itne sare Logon ke sath Ham Yahan Nahin ruk Sakte the parantu prashn tha ki ab Ham unn Sab asuron Se Bachkar Kahan jaen .

Ab Keval ek hi Jagah Hamare liye Shesh bachi thi Jahan Ham Apne Pran bacha kar Chhup Sakte the aur vah Jagah Thi Kuber ji ki Alkapuri vahan asur Pravesh nahin kar sakte The Isliye Ham Himalaya ke barfili raston se Hote hue Maharaj ki Kuber Nagari Alkapuri pahunche .

Kamran Ko Dekhkar Maharaj Kuber pahle to bade krodhit hue parantu Unka Hriday Bada Vishal hai isliye Bhagwan Bholenath unhen Apna Mitra Kahate Hain .

Kamran Ne Rote Hue unke Charan pakad liye aur baar-baar kshma yachna Karne Laga Maharaj Kuber Ko Jab asuron dwara Kiya Gaya Vishwas Ghat aur nrishansta ke bare mein aur sath hi Sath Kamran ke Parivar Ke Sath Jo Hua uska Pata Chala to unhone Kamran ko kshma Kar Diya Kyunki vah Apne kiye Gaye Karmon ka dand Bhagat chuka tha .

Vardan Ke Karan Devta Abhi Analasur ka Samna karne mein Saksham Nahin the . Apne yakshon ke sath asuron dwara ki Gai barbrata Ke Karan Maharaj Kuber ko bhishan Krodh Aaya parantu vah abhi sidhe-sidhe Analasur ka Kuchh Nahin bigaad Sakte the isliye unhone is bare mein Bhagwan Bholenath se paraamarsh Lena uchit Samjha .

Sari Baton Se avgat Hone Ke pakshat unhone Kaha ke yakshon Ke Sath Jo Kuchh Bhi is Samay ho raha hai vah sab unke Karmon ka hi dand hai Samay Aane per sabhi ko Apne Karmon ka bhogna hi padta hai .

Fir Kuchh sochte Hue Bhagwan Bholenath Ne Yahan iss kshetra meini ek Nagari basane Ka paraamarsh Diya Kyunki Prithvi ka yah bhukhand unhone Aise suraksha kavach se surakshit kar rakha hai Jahan Unki ichcha Ke Bina koi bhi Pravesh nahin kar sakta

Uske pakshat Mahadev ki hi Kripa Se Kamran aur ham Sabhi yakshon Ne Milkar Yahan Ek Nagari Basai Jiska Naam Humne Yakshpur Rakha

Aapane Mujhse Jo Kuchh Bhi poochha Tha vah Sab main vistarpurvak kah diya hai Itna kah kar Virupaaksh chup ho gaya .

Gajendra - Mitra Tumhare kathan ke anusar Analasur ki Shakti aur kurta ke bare mein gyat hua aur sath hi Sath Kamran ke bare mein sunkar gyat hua k lobh manushya ke Patan ka Karan Hota Hai , lobh Mein padhakar Kamran Ne dusht Se mitrata Ki aur anekon Paap Karm kiye

Unhen Pappo ka Karma dand bhugtna Pada parantu abhi bhi mere man mein ek prashn uth raha hai Mitra Tumne Kamran ke Jivan ki Raksha ki Rajkumari ko dhundhkar aur uske Pran bachayen Sath hi Sath yah Nagar basane mein bhi Tumhara bada yogdan hai .

Yadi Tum Sabko Kuber ji ke pass Na Le Jaate Hai To yah Nagar Bhi Nahin bachta Tumhare itne Upkar Ke pakshat Bhi Tumhen Keval Nagar Dwarka pahri Banakar Rakh Diya Hai Lagta Hai Raja Kamran Ne Itna Kuchh bhugatne Ke pakshat Bhi Sudhar Nahin Aaya .

Virupaksh - Mitra Shuru-Shuru mein to Raja Kamran Mera bada maan karte the vah mujhe apna Chhota bhai mante the aur Mujhe Yahan Ke mahamantri ka pad bhi unke dwara Diya gaya tha .

parantu jaisa-jaisa Nagar basata Gaya Raja Ko chapluson Ne gher liya unhone Apne fayde ke liye mere viruddh Raja ke Kan bharane Shuru kar Diye .

Ab Raja ka Vyavhaar Mere Prati badalne Laga tha main bhi sab samajhne Laga tha . Rajgaddi pane ke pakshat Raja Kamran ko fir Ahankar Ne grasit kar liya tha .

Raja Ke chatukar Mujhe Raja ke sameep nahin dekhna Chahte the isiliye Mujhe Nagar ke Rakshak ke roop Mein bhej diya Jise Maine Apna Kartavya samajhkar swikar kar liya aur iska Mujhe Koi Khed Nahin Hai .

dwara Rakshak Hi Sahi Main Apne Nagar ke Kuchh To Kam aa raha hun bus issi Bhav se main prasann hun

Baton hi Baton Mein sari ratri beet chuki thi suryoday ki lalima Aakash Mein Chhai hui thi

Gajendra - tum bahut acche ho Mitra , Dekho Baton hi Baton Mein sari ratri beet gai ab Hamen Nagar Mein Chalna chahie main bhi Tumhare Raja Kamran se milane ke liye Bada Hi utsuk hun .

Virupaksh parantu Mitra Tumhara Raja ke sammukh Jana uchit Nahin Hai Kamran ka koi pata nahin kab kya kar de Main Tumhari Suraksha ko Khatre Mein Nahin dalna Chahta .

Gajendra - Mitra kya abhi bhi Tum samajhte Ho ki Tumhara Raja Kamran Mera Kuchh bigaad sakta hai . Tum nishchint Raho Samay aa gaya hai ke Kamran ke Ahankar ka naash ho jaaye anyatha Kamran ka hi Nash ho jaega vyarth Ki Chinta ko Chhodo aur chalo Jara main bhi to Dekhu Tumne yah Nagar kis Prakar basaya hai .

Virupaksh bhi Gajendra ke samarthya ko Jaan gaya tha tab tak Baki Sainik bhi Hosh a gaya tha Gajendra ne apni Prakriti ki Urja ka prayog karte hue sabhi sainikon ko Swasth kar diya tha Apne sainikon Ko purvvatDekh Kar Virupaksh Bada prasann Hua , unn sainikon ko Seema per tainat Karke Virupaksh Gajendra ko Lekar usse pathrile Raste Se hota hua Nagar ki or chal Pada .

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Ab tak aapne dekha k kaise Analasur ne Kaamran k sqath vishwasghat kiya . Uski patni k saath durvyavhaar kiya , kaamran k putra Bhanu ki bhi nirmamta k saath asuro dwara hatya ki gayi jisse dekhkar Kaamran apne hosh kho baitha yane k behosh ho gaya

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Murchit Pade Kamran ko Analasur ne karagrah Mein Band Karva Diya . uss Samay main ( Virupaksh ) karagrah ka mukhya prabhari tha Sare karagrah Mere adhin the .

Jis Samay Yahan Mahal Mein yah sab ho raha tha uss Samay Main Apne Bhavan Mein Tha Mujhe Apne vishwaspatra guptchar dwara Raja Kamran ke Parivar ke sath Hui ghatna gyat Hui aur sath hi yah bhi gyat hua ke Kamran ko karagruh Mein Dal Diya gaya hai .

Suchna prapt hote hi main daudta hua Mahal Mein pahuncha vahan pahunchkar Mujhe Pata Chala k Maharani Shalaka ki bhi Badi nirdayta purvak Hatya ho gai hai .

Apne Raja ke karagrah mein band hone ke Karan aur Raja Ke Putra tatha Rani ki pida dayak mrutyu Ke Karan main Bada Dukhi hua .

Mujhe atyant Krodh Bhi Aaya parantu main Analasur Jaise shaktishali asur ka Samna karne mein sarvtha asamarth tha . Mujhe ab Chinta thi Keval Rajkumari Amrita ki Jo Ek abodh Balika thi , Jiska abhi Koi pata nahin tha asur bhi use hi dhundh rahe the Aisi avastha Mein Mera Pratham Kartavya tha yadi Rajkumari jivit hai to usse Khoj kar sarvpratham surakshit Sthan Tak pahunchana aur uske pakshat Apne Raja Ko Mukt karne ki Yojana banana .

Jab Main karagrah pahuncha to Dekha ki Sara karagruh asuron ke Adhikar mein ho gaya tha Aur karagruh Ke Sainik Unka Har Aadesh ka Palan karne ke liye badhya the jinhone bhi Unka virodh Kiya Ve Sab Mare Gaye .

Mujhe vahan Dekh Kar unn asuron Ne Mujhe gher liya , Mujhe vahan Vivek se kam Lena tha Bal se nahin isliye maine unn asuron Ke Samne Apne Hath Jod Liye aur kaha ki main to Keval karagrah ka ek Adhikari hun Mera Kartavya Raja ke har aagya ka Palan karna hai Ab Yahan Ke Raja Analasur hai isliye main unhen Apna Swami swikar karta hun .

Asur Sainik Mujhe pakad kar Analasur ke pass Lekar Gaye Maine usse Pranam Kiya aur uske Samne natmastak hokar unhen Apna Swami swikar Kiya .

Meri Baton per Vishwas Karke usne mujhe apna pad Wapas De Diya ab main fir karagrah Mein Gaya vahan main asuron ki najron Se Bachkar Raja Kamran Se Mila .

Kamran ko ab tak Hosh a gaya tha Apne Jawan bete ki Apne Aankhon Ke Samne Dardnaak Maut aur apni Patni ki durdasha se Aahat Raja kaid khane Mein dahade maar-maar Kar Ro Raha Tha Mujhe Dekhkar vah mujhe pukarne laga .

Maine Ishare se unhen Shant Kar Diya fir uchit Samay Dekhkar Unse Maine Rajkumari Amrita ke bare mein poochha .

Parantu unhen Keval Itna Hi gyat Tha ki rajkumari aapani Man ke sang Apne kaksh Mein thi Uske paschat kya hua vah kahan Gai unhen Kuchh Nahin Pata Tha .

Kamran Ne Mere Aage Hath jodkar gidgidate hue rajkumari Amrita ko dhundh kar bachane ke liye Prathna ki .

Vidhi ka bhi lekh Ajeeb hai Jo Kamran kabhi bhi Jivan Mein Kisi ke aage Jhuka nahin tha , apni mahtvakanshaon ko purn karne ke liye Ahankar Mein Chur Jisne Aaneko Paap kiye the vah Aaj Mujh jaise se ek Chhote Se Sipahi ke aage apni Kanya ke pranon ki ko bachane ke liye Hath jode Khada tha .

Asuron Ko sandeh Na Ho Jaaye is Karan main vahan Se shighra Hi Nikal Gaya

Ardh ratri ka Prahar tha asuron Ne Mahal mein bhishan utpat machaya hua tha Mahal ki dasiyon Ki chikh Pukar Charon or Gunj rahi thi yah sab dekh aur sunkar Mujhe Bada Krodh a raha tha parantu main vivash tha .

Mujh mein itna samthya nahin tha ki main unn asuron Ka Samna kar Sakun isiliye Ab Mujhe keval apne Lakshya Rajkumari Amrita per Dhyan kendrit karna tha .

Main Apni Maya Ka prayog karte hue asur Roop dharan kar Maharani ke kaksh mein Pravesh Kiya uss kaksh ka pratyek saman Tuta futa tha aisa lag raha tha ki Yahan Kuchh dhundha gaya ho iss sabse Mujhe Itna To samajh mein aa gaya tha ki asur bhi Rajkumar Amrita ko dhundh rahe hain tabhi Mujhe kaksh ke bahar se Kuchh patrachapon ki awaaz Sunai Di .

Meri Maya asuro ko Adhik der tak bhramit nahin kar sakti thi isliye maine vahan Se shighra Hi nikalne ka nishchay Kiya .

Adhikari hone ke Karan Mujhe vahan ke sampurn Gupt dwaron ka gyan tha asuron ke kaksh mein aane se purv hi Mujhe vahan se nikalna tha .

Uss kaksh Mein sthit Gupt Dwar Ko kholkar Maine usmein Pravesh Kiya aur purvavat usse vaise hi band kar diya , Gupt Dwar Mein Pravesh karne ke baad niche ki or sidhiyan utarte hue Jab Main vahan pahuncha to Dekha Rajkumari Amrita vahan Bhumi per murchit avastha mein Padhi hui thi .

Rajkumari Amrita ko dekhkar sarvapratham unka naadi parkshan kiya , woh bilkul swastha thi kewal kissi dawai k prayog se gahri neend mein thi unka sahi salamat dekhkar maine ishwar ko dhanywad kiya , meri khoj puri ho gayi thi.
Ho sakta hai Rani ne asuron ko dekh liya Ho aur kuchh anhoni ki aashanka Ke Karan unhone Yahan Rajkumari Amrita ko Chhupa Diya Ho .


Maine Rajkumari Amrita ko apni Godi Mein uthaya aur Gupt raston se Hote Hue Mahal ke bahar a Gaya ratri ka Andhera Mera Sahayak hua .

Pura Nagar Ab asuron Ke Adhikar Mein Tha isliye main Nagar se bahar Apne Kuchh sahayakon ko Lekar Amrita ko Lekar Nikal Gaya nikat hi Van Mein Ek Gufa Mein Rajkumari Amrita ko rakhkar Apne Kuchh sahyogiyo Ko Maine vahan Chhoda Aur Kuchh sahayakon ko Apne vishwaspatra aur Parivar Jan aur asuron dwara pidit yakshon ko Yahan ektrit karne ka Karya saunpa aur uss Sthan ko Yaksh Maya Se surakshit Karke Wapas Mahal pahuncha .

Ab Mujhe Raja Kamran ko bhi karagruh se chhudana tha Mahal pahunchkar main wapas karagrah Mein pahuncha vahan Dekha ki karagrah mein bandhiyon ko asur Gor yatraen de rahe the aur prasann ho rahe the .

Ratri ka chautha Prahar shuru ho gaya tha Aur Subah Hone se pahle Mujhe Kissi bhi Prakar yahan se nikalna tha .

Maine unn asuron ke liye Apne Sevak se kahkar Madira mangvaee aur Chupke Se usmein Vish Mila Diya

Vish mile hue Madira ko karagrah Mein sthit asuron ko Pilaya aur Thodi Si der Mein uss Vish Ne Apna Karya karna Shuru Kiya ek-ek Karke unn Sabhi asuron ki mrutyu Hone Lagi .

isase pahle ki bahar Aur Kisi Ko Pata Chalta Maine karagrah se sabhi bandhion ko aur Raja Kamran ko Mukt Kiya aur Gupt Raste Se Bahar nikalkar Ussi Sthan per pahuncha Jahan Maine Rajkumari Amrita ko Rakha tha .

Apni Putri Ko jivit Dekhkar Kamran baar-baar mujhe dhanyvad de raha tha .

Wah van Nagar ke nikat tha Subah bhi ho gai thi Suraj Apna Prakash Charo Aur bikher raha tha parantu Ham Sabke Jivan Mein To Ghor andhkar Chha Gaya Tha Hamara Sab Kuchh samapt ho gaya tha .

Raja Kamran ke karagrah se nikalne ka aur mere Vishwasghat ka ab tak To AnalaSur Ko Pata Chal chuka hoga usne Kamran ko dhundhne ke liye Apne asuron Ko Charon or faila Diye Honge yadi Ham unke Hath Lage To Hamara Bachana asambhav hoga .

isliye Hamen vahan se shighra se shighra nikalna tha ab tak Hamare parivarjan Sahayak aur Sabhi vahan ektrit ho gaye the jinki sankhya lagbhag hajar Hogi .

Ab aur Adhik Samay Tak itne sare Logon ke sath Ham Yahan Nahin ruk Sakte the parantu prashn tha ki ab Ham unn Sab asuron Se Bachkar Kahan jaen .

Ab Keval ek hi Jagah Hamare liye Shesh bachi thi Jahan Ham Apne Pran bacha kar Chhup Sakte the aur vah Jagah Thi Kuber ji ki Alkapuri vahan asur Pravesh nahin kar sakte The Isliye Ham Himalaya ke barfili raston se Hote hue Maharaj ki Kuber Nagari Alkapuri pahunche .

Kamran Ko Dekhkar Maharaj Kuber pahle to bade krodhit hue parantu Unka Hriday Bada Vishal hai isliye Bhagwan Bholenath unhen Apna Mitra Kahate Hain .

Kamran Ne Rote Hue unke Charan pakad liye aur baar-baar kshma yachna Karne Laga Maharaj Kuber Ko Jab asuron dwara Kiya Gaya Vishwas Ghat aur nrishansta ke bare mein aur sath hi Sath Kamran ke Parivar Ke Sath Jo Hua uska Pata Chala to unhone Kamran ko kshma Kar Diya Kyunki vah Apne kiye Gaye Karmon ka dand Bhagat chuka tha .

Vardan Ke Karan Devta Abhi Analasur ka Samna karne mein Saksham Nahin the . Apne yakshon ke sath asuron dwara ki Gai barbrata Ke Karan Maharaj Kuber ko bhishan Krodh Aaya parantu vah abhi sidhe-sidhe Analasur ka Kuchh Nahin bigaad Sakte the isliye unhone is bare mein Bhagwan Bholenath se paraamarsh Lena uchit Samjha .

Sari Baton Se avgat Hone Ke pakshat unhone Kaha ke yakshon Ke Sath Jo Kuchh Bhi is Samay ho raha hai vah sab unke Karmon ka hi dand hai Samay Aane per sabhi ko Apne Karmon ka bhogna hi padta hai .

Fir Kuchh sochte Hue Bhagwan Bholenath Ne Yahan iss kshetra meini ek Nagari basane Ka paraamarsh Diya Kyunki Prithvi ka yah bhukhand unhone Aise suraksha kavach se surakshit kar rakha hai Jahan Unki ichcha Ke Bina koi bhi Pravesh nahin kar sakta

Uske pakshat Mahadev ki hi Kripa Se Kamran aur ham Sabhi yakshon Ne Milkar Yahan Ek Nagari Basai Jiska Naam Humne Yakshpur Rakha

Aapane Mujhse Jo Kuchh Bhi poochha Tha vah Sab main vistarpurvak kah diya hai Itna kah kar Virupaaksh chup ho gaya .

Gajendra - Mitra Tumhare kathan ke anusar Analasur ki Shakti aur kurta ke bare mein gyat hua aur sath hi Sath Kamran ke bare mein sunkar gyat hua k lobh manushya ke Patan ka Karan Hota Hai , lobh Mein padhakar Kamran Ne dusht Se mitrata Ki aur anekon Paap Karm kiye

Unhen Pappo ka Karma dand bhugtna Pada parantu abhi bhi mere man mein ek prashn uth raha hai Mitra Tumne Kamran ke Jivan ki Raksha ki Rajkumari ko dhundhkar aur uske Pran bachayen Sath hi Sath yah Nagar basane mein bhi Tumhara bada yogdan hai .

Yadi Tum Sabko Kuber ji ke pass Na Le Jaate Hai To yah Nagar Bhi Nahin bachta Tumhare itne Upkar Ke pakshat Bhi Tumhen Keval Nagar Dwarka pahri Banakar Rakh Diya Hai Lagta Hai Raja Kamran Ne Itna Kuchh bhugatne Ke pakshat Bhi Sudhar Nahin Aaya .

Virupaksh - Mitra Shuru-Shuru mein to Raja Kamran Mera bada maan karte the vah mujhe apna Chhota bhai mante the aur Mujhe Yahan Ke mahamantri ka pad bhi unke dwara Diya gaya tha .

parantu jaisa-jaisa Nagar basata Gaya Raja Ko chapluson Ne gher liya unhone Apne fayde ke liye mere viruddh Raja ke Kan bharane Shuru kar Diye .

Ab Raja ka Vyavhaar Mere Prati badalne Laga tha main bhi sab samajhne Laga tha . Rajgaddi pane ke pakshat Raja Kamran ko fir Ahankar Ne grasit kar liya tha .

Raja Ke chatukar Mujhe Raja ke sameep nahin dekhna Chahte the isiliye Mujhe Nagar ke Rakshak ke roop Mein bhej diya Jise Maine Apna Kartavya samajhkar swikar kar liya aur iska Mujhe Koi Khed Nahin Hai .

dwara Rakshak Hi Sahi Main Apne Nagar ke Kuchh To Kam aa raha hun bus issi Bhav se main prasann hun

Baton hi Baton Mein sari ratri beet chuki thi suryoday ki lalima Aakash Mein Chhai hui thi

Gajendra - tum bahut acche ho Mitra , Dekho Baton hi Baton Mein sari ratri beet gai ab Hamen Nagar Mein Chalna chahie main bhi Tumhare Raja Kamran se milane ke liye Bada Hi utsuk hun .

Virupaksh parantu Mitra Tumhara Raja ke sammukh Jana uchit Nahin Hai Kamran ka koi pata nahin kab kya kar de Main Tumhari Suraksha ko Khatre Mein Nahin dalna Chahta .

Gajendra - Mitra kya abhi bhi Tum samajhte Ho ki Tumhara Raja Kamran Mera Kuchh bigaad sakta hai . Tum nishchint Raho Samay aa gaya hai ke Kamran ke Ahankar ka naash ho jaaye anyatha Kamran ka hi Nash ho jaega vyarth Ki Chinta ko Chhodo aur chalo Jara main bhi to Dekhu Tumne yah Nagar kis Prakar basaya hai .

Virupaksh bhi Gajendra ke samarthya ko Jaan gaya tha tab tak Baki Sainik bhi Hosh a gaya tha Gajendra ne apni Prakriti ki Urja ka prayog karte hue sabhi sainikon ko Swasth kar diya tha Apne sainikon Ko purvvatDekh Kar Virupaksh Bada prasann Hua , unn sainikon ko Seema per tainat Karke Virupaksh Gajendra ko Lekar usse pathrile Raste Se hota hua Nagar ki or chal Pada .

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Virupaksh bhi Gajendra ke samarthya ko Jaan gaya tha tab tak Baki Sainik bhi Hosh a gaya tha Gajendra ne apni Prakriti ki Urja ka prayog karte hue sabhi sainikon ko Swasth kar diya tha Apne sainikon Ko purvavat Dekh Kar virupaksh Bada prasann Hua . Unn sainikon ko Seema per tainat Karke virupaksh Gajendra ko Lekar usse pathrile Raste Se hota hua Nagar ki or chal Pada

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Virupaksh aur Gajendra donon yakshpur ke Raste per Chalte hue Aage Badhe . Chalte-Chalte Gajendra ne apne bare mein Virupaksh Ko Sab Kuchh Bata Diya . Analasur ke Vadh Ke Liye Hi Gajendra ki utpati Hui Hai yah sunkar virupaksh atyadhik prasann hua aur sath hi Sath Gajendra ke Mitra banne per Garv ki bhi Anubhuti Hui .

Nagar abhi nikat Hi Tha Nagar ka Vishal mukhya Pravesh Dwar dikhna bhi shuru ho gaya tha . Dwar tak pahunchne ke Raste ke donon Taraf bade hi Sundar Udyan sugandhit Pushp aur falon se susajjit the , Jo bade hi manoram lag rahe the aur sath hi udyanon ke ant Mein parvaton ki shrinkhala .

Prakriti Ki God Mein sthit V Kshetra atyant sundar pratit ho raha tha Chalte Chalte donon Nagar ke Mukhya Dwar Tak pahunche .

Mukhya Dwar ki Raksha kar rahe Prahari aur sainikon ne virupaksh ke sath Jab Gajendra Ko Dekha to unke netron Mein Anek prashn ubhar Aaye khaskar vahan ka mukhya Prahari Shanku Jo dikhne Mein atyant Hi dhurt Najar a raha tha .

Vah Dwar ke Madhya Khada hokar Virupaksh aur Gajendra ko ghurne laga usse Dekhkar Virupaksh samajh gaya Ki vah Sab kya soch rahe hain isliye unke poochhne se pahle hi

Virupaksh - kya baat hai Shanku is Prakar Dwar ke Madhya Khade hokar Hamara Marg avrodh karne ka kya Karan hai .

Shanku - kshma Kijiye Virupaksh ji , Main To Keval Apna Karya kar raha hun aapke sath yah Jo yuvak Dikhai de raha hai vah kaun hai Kyunki inhen pahle Humne kabhi bhi is Nagar Mein Nahin Dekha isiliye pahle Inka Parichay dijiye tatpachat unhen bhitar le jaaiye .

Virupaksh - Inka Parichay dene ki kya avashyakta hai Tumhen Itna Samajh Jana chahie ki yadi yah Mere Sath Hai to avashya hi mere Koi Khas Honge . yah Mere Mitra Hai Inka Itna Parichay Hi paryapt Hai Tumhare Liye ab hat Jao Mere Samne se aur Hamen Jaane Do .

Prahari - kshma Karen Shriman Ji yah dikhne mein to Koi manushya lagta hai to Fir isase aapki mitrata Kaisi Hui . Yaksh aur Manav Kabhi Mitra Nahin ho sakte Jarur aap Kuchh Chhupa Rahe Ho aap Shayad Bhul rahe ho Ki Kisi bhi Bahari vyakti ko is Nagar Mein Pravesh karne se purv Maharaj ki anumati leni avashyak hai .

Virupaksh - apni Maryada Mein Raho Shanku ! mat Bhulo ki tum Keval Ek Prahari Ho Aur Main Tumhara Adhikari . Mujhe kya karna hai aur kya Nahin iski Shiksha Tumse Lene Ki avashyakta Nahin Hai . Maharaj Se Kya Kahana Hai vah hum dekh Lenge ab chupchap Dwar kholo .

Vah Prahari tha Shanku Jo iss Samay ke mahamantri Satpal ka Khas Sevak tha Jiske bare Mein Aage Kahani Mein Pata chalega

Shanku Ne anmane dhang se dwarpalon ko Dwar kholne ka Aadesh Diya Dwar khulate hi donon Nagar ke bhitar Pravesh Kar Gaye .

Gajendra Ne Dekha ki vah Nagar Bada Hi Bhavya aur Sundar tha pratyek Bhavan Sundar Kalakriti dwara banae gaye the .

Yah Pratham bar tha ki Gajendra Koi Nagar dekh raha tha isiliye vah Bade Gaur Se Nagar ki sanrachna aur vahan ke margon ko dekhne Laga .

Pratah kal ka samay tha Nagar mein bahut Chahal pahal thi , jo bhi Raste Mein Milta vah virupaksh ko pranam Karke Jata . jisse Pata Chalta hai ki Bhale hi shadyantrakariyon dwara virupaksh ka pad chala gaya ho parantu vahan ki Praja ke Hriday mein uska Bada aadar aur man Samman tha .

Nagar se Hote Hue Virupaksh Ek Bhavan ke aage Ruka aur ek gehri shwas chhodate Hue Bade Prem se uss Bhavan ko Dekhte Hue Pravesh Dwar ki or Aage badh gaya Bhavan ke Pravesh Dwar ki or badhate Hue Jab usne Piche ki or Dekha to Gajendra ko Vahi Khada Paya .

Virupaksh - kya baat hai Mitra ruk Kyon Gaye aao bhitar aao .

Gajendra - Aap To Hamen Raja se milvane le jaane wale the . Hamen to Raj Bhavan Jana tha na fir Ham Yahan Kyon Aaye Hain Dekhne Mein To yah Koi Raj Bhavan pratit Nahin Hota Hai .

Virupaksh - Sahi Kaha Mitra Raj Bhavan bhi chalenge aur Raja se bhent bhi ho hi jayegi parantu pahle snan Nitya Karm Aadi aur kuch bhojan karne ke pakshat .
yah Bhavan Mera Hai ab Nagar ke bhitar aa hi Gaya Hun to Socha Ki chalo Parivar se bhi mil Lun aur sath hi Apne Mitra ka Apne Parivar se Parichay bhi kara Dun , To Chale andar Mitra .

Gajendra - Theek hai Mitra Jaise aap uchit samjho chalo bhitar Chalte Hain mujhe bhi utsukta hai apne Mitra ke Parivar Se milane Ki .

tatpachat donon Ne ghar mein Pravesh Kiya Ghar Ke bhitar Pravesh karte hi Samne se ek Badi Si gend Sidhe Virupaksh Ke Sar Se takraai . Samne do bacche the Ek Balak Jiski Umra lagbhag 12 varsh ki thi aur ek Kanya Jiski Umra lagbhag 10 varsh ki Kanya ke barabar thi . Jo Shayad vahan Gend se khel rahe the aur khelte hi khelte Hue Gend virupaksh ke sir per Ja Lagi Jab unhone Gend ki Disha Mein Dekha toh

Virupaksh ko Dekhte hi Shor machate Hue daudkar
Pita Shri ! Pita Shri ! Kahate Hue Aakar lipat Gaye Virupaksh ne bhi unn donon ko uthakar Apne Godi Mein Le Liya bacchon ki awaaz sunkar bhitar se ek Stri bhi Kuchh badbad Aate Hue Bahar ki or aayi yah thi virupaksh ki patni Chanchla .

Virupaksh ko Godi Mein bacchon ko uthae hue dekh kar vah Boli -------

Chanchala - ab Samay prapt hua hai aapko itne Dinon ke pakshat , abhi bhi ghar Kyon Aaye Ho Hamari To Kuchh Padi hi nahin hai aapko bus aapka Raja aur aapka kam jao Apne Raja ke pass hi Raho Tumhen to bus Apne Raja Ki hi padi hai Hamari bhi Kuchh Chinta hai ki Ham Yahan Kaise Rah rahe hain .

Virupaksh - are are are Bhagwan Shant ho jao . Priya pahle dekh to Lo Ki sath mein koi Aur Bhi Aaya Hai Hamesha Ki Tarah ghar mein Pravesh karte hi tum Shuru Ho gayi .
( fir baccho ko niche utarkar Chanchala ke Gal ko Hath Lagate hue ) vaise Meri Rani Krodh Mein Tumhari sundarta Aur Bhi Adhik badh Jaati Hai

Chanchla ne Jab Dwar per Gajendra ko unhin ki taraf muskurate hue dekha to sharm ki Maare Mukh niche ki or kar liya .

Chanchla - Hato Ji , aapko kuch Kuchh sharm bhi hai Ya nahi , Samne bacche Hain aur aap bhi kisi ko Sath lae Ho Sabke Samne is Prakar vyavhar karte hue wob kya sochenge .

Virupaksh - Lajja kis baat ki Lajja apni Patni ko Prem karne main kaisi sharam , aao meri bahon mein Bade Dinon bad Dekha Hai Tumhen Itna kah kar Virupaksh ne apne Hath Aage Badha Diye yah dekh kar chanchla sir Jhuka Kar Rasoi Mein Bhag gai aur yah dekh kar Virupaksh jor se tahake lagakar hansne Laga .

Gajendra Dwar per Khada hua pati Patni ke nokjhonk Ko Dekhkar Muskura raha tha .

Virupaksh - Aao Mitra bhitar aao , vahan Kyon khade ho . Ye llo inse Milo yah Hai Mera Putra Shubham aur Kanya Shamli aur vah jo bhitar gai hai vah Hai Meri Pyari Ardhangini Chanchala Jo Apne Naam Ke Anurup hi Badi Chanchal hai .

Gajendra vah to main dekh hi chuka hun Mitra ki Chanchal kaun hai vaise bacche Bade Pyare Hain Tumhare .

Virupaksh - bacchon yah Tumhare Kaka Shri hai Pranam karo inhen
Virupaksh ke Kahane per donon bacchon Ne Gajendra ko pranam Kiya unn donon bacchon ke sir per Hath rakhkar unko Gajendra Ne Aashirwad Diya ab donon bhitar Aakar baithak Mein baith Gaye .
Abhi donon Baithe Hue hi the ki bhitar se Chanchala gud aur Jal Lekar aayi .

Jal dete Waqt Virupaksh ko prachnvachak Drishti Se Dekhne Lagi , Mano Kuchh poochh rahi ho Uske Hriday Ki Baat ko jante bhi virupaksh bola

Virupaksh - Priye yah hai mere Mitra Gajendra Aaj Hi Meri inse mitrata Hui Hai .

Chanchla - aapke Mitra kya Vastav mein aapko mitrata karna bhi Aata Hai kitne varshon Se Maine pahli bar hai ki aapka koi Mitra Dekha vaise inhen pahle to Yahan Kabhi Nahin Dekha .


Chanchla Ki Baat sunkar Gajendra Ne Chanchala ko pranam Kiya .

Gajendra Pranam - Bhabhi Shri , main Gajendra Aaj hi inse mitrata Hui Hai aur aapane Mujhe ab tak isliye Nahin Dekha Kyunki main aapke Nagar ka Nahin hun , main pahli baar yaha hun aur Dekho aapke Nagar Mein aate hi Mujhe Pahli baar virupaksh Jaisa Mitra aur aapki Jaisi bhabhi man Mili .

Gajendra ke Mukh Se bhabhi Shri sunkar chanchla Badi prasann Hui Kyunki yah pahli bar tha ki kisi ke Munh se usne is Prakar ka sambandh jodkar sambodhan Suna Tha Kyunki Parivar ke naam per Virupaksh ka koi aur nahin tha aur na hi koi Mitra tha .

Kuchh der aise hi halki-fulki baten Chalne Lagi , haas parihas chala Virupaksh Ne Gajendra ki Atithi kaksh Mein vyavastha Kar Di .
Nitya Karm snan Aadi ke pakshat Gajendra Dhyan Mein Baitha , Gajendra ke man mein Kai prashn the , Jinka Uttar wah Dhyan Mein dhundhne ka prayatn kar raha tha . Dhyan aagya Chakra Mein pahunchte hi Ek Divya Prakash ke Madhya usse Sab Kuchh spasht spasht Dikhai dene Laga ke usse Niyati Ne is Jagah per Kyon Bheja Hai Kuchh Chehre Dikhai Diye aur kuchh ghatnayen Dikhai Di ab usse Apne prashnon ke Uttar prapt ho gaye the .

Dhyan Purna karne per Ek lambi gehri Swas chhodate hue Dhyan Mein Dekhe Hue drishyon Ko punah Ek Bar Smaran karte hue Gajendra Atithi kaksh se baithak ki or chal Pada Jahan Virupaksh Apne bacchon per Sneh Luta raha tha .

Virupaksh ko Apne bacchon ke sath khelte Hue Dekhkar Gajendra Vahi baithak mein Ek Aasan per baith Gaya . Gajendra Ko Aaya Hua Dekhkar Virupaksh ne apne bacchon ko Unki Mata ke pass bhej diya aur Gajendra ke pass Aakar baith Gaya , donon Mein vahan ke Rajya vyavastha ke bare mein Charcha Hone Lagi .

Tab tak bhojan bhi ban chuka tha to donon Ne sath mein bhojan Kiya Gajendra pahli baar pake Hue pakvan Kha Raha Tha jo ki usse bade hi swadisht Lage bhojan ke pakshat .

Gajendra - vaise to Mitra Mera Koi Parivar Nahin Hai , Tumhara yah Chhota Sa Parivar Dekhkar mujhe bahut Achcha Laga aur Yahan Ke bhojan ki to baat hi kya . Pet bhar gaya parantu mann nahi bhara .
( fir chanchla ki or Dekhte hue ) Bhabhi Shri ke Hathon Mein To Jadu Hai Jadu , yah to sakshat Man annpurna Ka hi roop hai , Tum sach mein bade bhagyashali ho , Jo Meri Bhabhi Shri Jaisi Patni Mili .

Chanchala - Kya devar ji aap bhi , vyarth mein meri prashansa kar rahe ho .
Aapane Mujhe bhabhi Kaha to is Naate aap mere devar hue aap bilkul bhi Chinta mat karo aapko Mujhse bhi acchi atri Uttam suyogya Patni prapt Ho iske liye main Ishwar se Prathna karungi .

thodi der Aisi hi Hansi thitholi hoti Rahi Uske pakshat

Gajendra - Mitra Ab To Hamara Bal Bhog bhi ho gaya hai ab Hamen Raj Bhavan Ki or Chalna chahie .

Virupaksh - Pratiksha karo Mitra ! Rajmahal se abhi Bulava Aata hi hoga .

Gajendra - main Tumhara aashay Nahin Samjha Mitra Tumne Raja Tak kab Sandesh bhijwaya Mujhe To Aisa Dikhai Nahin .

Virupaksh - Mujhe Sandesh bhijwane ki koi avashyakta nahin Mitra . Dwar per vah Prahari Yad hai Shanku , vah Raja ke Priya mahamantri Satpal ka Chamcha hai Uske dwara Hamare Aane ki khabar mahamantri Tak pahunch Gai Hogi aur Mirch Masala lagakar mahamantri se Raja Tak mujhe lagta hai k aaj bahut Kuchh hone wala hai parantu Ab Mujhe Kisi Ka bhay Nahin Mere Sath tum Jo Ho .

Donon abhi baat kar hi rahe the ke Gajendra ko Aisa aabhas hua baithak Ki khidki ke bahar koi hai isliye usne virupaksh ki or Ishara Kiya aur Chupke se uthkar darvaja se hota hua bahar nikal Aaya .

Virupaaksh bhi Piche Piche Dwar Tak pahuncha to Gajendra Ne usse Vahi Ishare se rok Diya aur Bahar Chala Gaya thodi der ke bad Gajendra ne gardan pakad kar Kisi Ko ghasitate Hue bhitar Pravesh Kiya Aur Virupaksh Ke Samne Dharti per Patak Diya .

Virupaksh - arre Mitra yah to vahi hai , yah Tumhen kahan Mila .

Gajendra - Badi Der Se Mujhe lag raha tha Hamari baten Koi Sun Raha Hai , Jab Mera Dhyan Khidki ki or Gaya to iski Ek Jhalak Dikhai Di tab main sab Kuchh samajh gaya aur yah ab tumhare Samne Hain .

Virupaksh aur Gajendra donon usse pakadkar Atithi kaksh Mein Le Gaye aur uske Hath pair bandhkar uski acche se Seva Satkar Kiya Kuchh baten poochhi Kuchh Uttar prapt kiye

Chanchala bhi sari baten sunkar aur Dekh Kar Badi Awaak thi jaise-jaise baten khulne Lagi chanchla ke chehre ke Bhav badalne Lage .

Abhi vahan yah sab ho hi raha tha ki darvaje ke bahar se kisi ke pukarne ki awaaz Aane Lagi .

Virupaksh - Lo aagaya Sandesha Raja ka , Ab Tak Main Akela tha isliye Sare shadyantra ko jante Hue bhi main Unka Samna nahin kar Paya . Parantu ab Aap Mere Sath Ho Ab To Hamare hath aapke hi Karan unke Sare shadyantra ko janne Wala Bhi lag gaya hai bahut Sare shadyantron Se Parda uthne ka samay a gaya hai .

Gajendra - Tum Chinta mat karo Mitra avashya aisa hi hoga bus Tum Dekhte jao Chahe Kuchh Bhi Ho Jaaye Jab Tak Main Na kahun tab tak Shant Rahana .

tatpachat Gajendra ne apni sari Yojana Virupaksh Ko Bata Di aur Virupaksh ki patni chanchla ko sari baten Samjha Di k usse kya karna hai aur kisse Sampark karna hai sab Kuchh Bata Diya

Uske bad Gajendra ko sath mein Liye Virupaksh Apne Bhavan se bahar Aaya Bahar Aakar Dekha ki Mahal ka Hi Ek Adhikari Kuchh sainikon ke sath vahan Khada tha .

Adhikari - kshma Kijiye virupaaksh Ji parantu Main Raja ke Aadesh ke adhin hun aapane Raja ke Prati Apradh Kiya Hai Ussi ke Karan Raja ne Aadesh Diya kya aapko aur aapke sath Aane wali is aagantuk ko Darbar Mein Laya Jaaye .

Virupaksh - kshma mangne ki koi avashyakta nahin vaise bhi Ham Raj Bhavan hi ja rahe the Chaliye .

Virupaksh Ki Itna Kahane per sainikon Ne Virupaksh aur Gajendra ko gher liya , Jaise unhen Bandi Banakar Le Jaya ja raha hun Jise Dekhkar Virupaksh ko Krodh Aaya parantu Gajendra Ne usse Apne netron ke Ishare se Shant Rahane ko kaha .

Adhikari Aage Aage aur Piche Piche sainikon ke ghere mein kaid Virupaksh aur Gajendra Raj Bhavan Ki or chal Pade

Yahan Rajmahal Ke bhitar Raja Kamran ka Bhavya Darbar laga hua tha donon aur Raja ke Adhikari Gan Baithe hue the aur Madhya Mein unche Swarna sinhasan per Raja Kamran Baitha hua tha Raja Ji ke sinhasan ke nikat hi Thode niche do aur sinhasan the Ek per virajman tha mahamantri Satpal aur dusre per virajman tha Senapati kank yah donon hi mahakapati dhurt aur ek number ke chaplus the Nagar mein chal rahe Sabhi shadyantron Ka Yahi donon Mul the .

vahan Virupaksh aur Gajendra ke bare mein hi Charcha ho rahi thi .

Raja Kamran - Mahamantri is bare mein Aapka kya vichar hai .

Mahamantri - Maharaj mujhe lagta hai ki Virupaksh aapke niyantran se bahar ja raha hai vah apne aap ko shreshth samajhne laga hai tabhi aapki anumati Ke Bina Ek Anjan vyakti ko Nagar Ke bhitar Le Aaya yadi is per bhi Kuchh Nahin Kiya Gaya Tum Nagar ke Baki log bhi Aisa karna Shuru kar denge is Prakar to hamare Nagar ki Suraksha hi Sankat Mein Pad Jayegi .

Raja Kamran - Baat To Tumhari theek hai mahamantri hamen bhi Kuchh Aisa Hi lag raha hai pad Se hatane Ke pakshat Bhi lagta hai Virupaksh ki Akal thikane Nahin aayi . Ab Tak Uske kiye Gaye Upkar Ke Karan main usse kshma Karta aaya hun parantu ab lagta hai ki koi Kathor nirnay Lena Hi Padega .

Parantu Jahan Tak Main virupaksh ko Jaanta hun uska is Nagar se bahar koi bhi Mitra Nahin Hai FIR Jise vah Mitra Bata Kar Hamare Nagar Mein Laya Hai vah kaun ho sakta hai Kyon Senapati ji aapko kya lagta hai

Senapati Kank - Maharaj aapka Kahana uchit hai parantu kshma Kijiye Maharaj Koi Kathor nirnay Lene se purv Hamen yah Dhyan Rakhna hoga kyu ki Virupaksh koi sadharan yaksha nahi uske picche bahut se sahyako ka haath hai .

abhi Yahan yah baten ho hi rahi thi ki dwarpal Ne Aakar Virupaksh aur Gajendra Ke Aane Ki Suchna Di

Dwarpal - Maharaj ki Jay Ho ! Maharaj aapke Aadesh ke anusar Adhikari ji Virupaksh aur uss aagantuk ko Apne Sath Lekar Aaye Hain .

Kamran - jao unhen shighra hi mere sammukh prastut karo .

Kamran ke Kahane per dwarpal vahan se Raja ko pranam kar Chala Gaya .

Uske Jaate hi vah Adhikari Virupaksh aur Gajendra ko Lekar Raja ke Sanmukh prastut hua .

Abhi ke liye itna hi ---------
Agla update jald hi ----------

Sabhi pathakon se nivedan hai ki is Kahani per Apne pratikriya avashya den

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Swasth Rahe ------- Prasann Rahe

Aapka mitra -- Abhinav๐Ÿ”ฅ
 

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Virupaksh bhi Gajendra ke samarthya ko Jaan gaya tha tab tak Baki Sainik bhi Hosh a gaya tha Gajendra ne apni Prakriti ki Urja ka prayog karte hue sabhi sainikon ko Swasth kar diya tha Apne sainikon Ko purvavat Dekh Kar virupaksh Bada prasann Hua . Unn sainikon ko Seema per tainat Karke virupaksh Gajendra ko Lekar usse pathrile Raste Se hota hua Nagar ki or chal Pada

Ab aage ------


Virupaksh aur Gajendra donon yakshpur ke Raste per Chalte hue Aage Badhe . Chalte-Chalte Gajendra ne apne bare mein Virupaksh Ko Sab Kuchh Bata Diya . Analasur ke Vadh Ke Liye Hi Gajendra ki utpati Hui Hai yah sunkar virupaksh atyadhik prasann hua aur sath hi Sath Gajendra ke Mitra banne per Garv ki bhi Anubhuti Hui .

Nagar abhi nikat Hi Tha Nagar ka Vishal mukhya Pravesh Dwar dikhna bhi shuru ho gaya tha . Dwar tak pahunchne ke Raste ke donon Taraf bade hi Sundar Udyan sugandhit Pushp aur falon se susajjit the , Jo bade hi manoram lag rahe the aur sath hi udyanon ke ant Mein parvaton ki shrinkhala .

Prakriti Ki God Mein sthit V Kshetra atyant sundar pratit ho raha tha Chalte Chalte donon Nagar ke Mukhya Dwar Tak pahunche .

Mukhya Dwar ki Raksha kar rahe Prahari aur sainikon ne virupaksh ke sath Jab Gajendra Ko Dekha to unke netron Mein Anek prashn ubhar Aaye khaskar vahan ka mukhya Prahari Shanku Jo dikhne Mein atyant Hi dhurt Najar a raha tha .

Vah Dwar ke Madhya Khada hokar Virupaksh aur Gajendra ko ghurne laga usse Dekhkar Virupaksh samajh gaya Ki vah Sab kya soch rahe hain isliye unke poochhne se pahle hi

Virupaksh - kya baat hai Shanku is Prakar Dwar ke Madhya Khade hokar Hamara Marg avrodh karne ka kya Karan hai .

Shanku - kshma Kijiye Virupaksh ji , Main To Keval Apna Karya kar raha hun aapke sath yah Jo yuvak Dikhai de raha hai vah kaun hai Kyunki inhen pahle Humne kabhi bhi is Nagar Mein Nahin Dekha isiliye pahle Inka Parichay dijiye tatpachat unhen bhitar le jaaiye .

Virupaksh - Inka Parichay dene ki kya avashyakta hai Tumhen Itna Samajh Jana chahie ki yadi yah Mere Sath Hai to avashya hi mere Koi Khas Honge . yah Mere Mitra Hai Inka Itna Parichay Hi paryapt Hai Tumhare Liye ab hat Jao Mere Samne se aur Hamen Jaane Do .

Prahari - kshma Karen Shriman Ji yah dikhne mein to Koi manushya lagta hai to Fir isase aapki mitrata Kaisi Hui . Yaksh aur Manav Kabhi Mitra Nahin ho sakte Jarur aap Kuchh Chhupa Rahe Ho aap Shayad Bhul rahe ho Ki Kisi bhi Bahari vyakti ko is Nagar Mein Pravesh karne se purv Maharaj ki anumati leni avashyak hai .

Virupaksh - apni Maryada Mein Raho Shanku ! mat Bhulo ki tum Keval Ek Prahari Ho Aur Main Tumhara Adhikari . Mujhe kya karna hai aur kya Nahin iski Shiksha Tumse Lene Ki avashyakta Nahin Hai . Maharaj Se Kya Kahana Hai vah hum dekh Lenge ab chupchap Dwar kholo .

Vah Prahari tha Shanku Jo iss Samay ke mahamantri Satpal ka Khas Sevak tha Jiske bare Mein Aage Kahani Mein Pata chalega

Shanku Ne anmane dhang se dwarpalon ko Dwar kholne ka Aadesh Diya Dwar khulate hi donon Nagar ke bhitar Pravesh Kar Gaye .

Gajendra Ne Dekha ki vah Nagar Bada Hi Bhavya aur Sundar tha pratyek Bhavan Sundar Kalakriti dwara banae gaye the .

Yah Pratham bar tha ki Gajendra Koi Nagar dekh raha tha isiliye vah Bade Gaur Se Nagar ki sanrachna aur vahan ke margon ko dekhne Laga .

Pratah kal ka samay tha Nagar mein bahut Chahal pahal thi , jo bhi Raste Mein Milta vah virupaksh ko pranam Karke Jata . jisse Pata Chalta hai ki Bhale hi shadyantrakariyon dwara virupaksh ka pad chala gaya ho parantu vahan ki Praja ke Hriday mein uska Bada aadar aur man Samman tha .

Nagar se Hote Hue Virupaksh Ek Bhavan ke aage Ruka aur ek gehri shwas chhodate Hue Bade Prem se uss Bhavan ko Dekhte Hue Pravesh Dwar ki or Aage badh gaya Bhavan ke Pravesh Dwar ki or badhate Hue Jab usne Piche ki or Dekha to Gajendra ko Vahi Khada Paya .

Virupaksh - kya baat hai Mitra ruk Kyon Gaye aao bhitar aao .

Gajendra - Aap To Hamen Raja se milvane le jaane wale the . Hamen to Raj Bhavan Jana tha na fir Ham Yahan Kyon Aaye Hain Dekhne Mein To yah Koi Raj Bhavan pratit Nahin Hota Hai .

Virupaksh - Sahi Kaha Mitra Raj Bhavan bhi chalenge aur Raja se bhent bhi ho hi jayegi parantu pahle snan Nitya Karm Aadi aur kuch bhojan karne ke pakshat .
yah Bhavan Mera Hai ab Nagar ke bhitar aa hi Gaya Hun to Socha Ki chalo Parivar se bhi mil Lun aur sath hi Apne Mitra ka Apne Parivar se Parichay bhi kara Dun , To Chale andar Mitra .


Gajendra - Theek hai Mitra Jaise aap uchit samjho chalo bhitar Chalte Hain mujhe bhi utsukta hai apne Mitra ke Parivar Se milane Ki .

tatpachat donon Ne ghar mein Pravesh Kiya Ghar Ke bhitar Pravesh karte hi Samne se ek Badi Si gend Sidhe Virupaksh Ke Sar Se takraai . Samne do bacche the Ek Balak Jiski Umra lagbhag 12 varsh ki thi aur ek Kanya Jiski Umra lagbhag 10 varsh ki Kanya ke barabar thi . Jo Shayad vahan Gend se khel rahe the aur khelte hi khelte Hue Gend virupaksh ke sir per Ja Lagi Jab unhone Gend ki Disha Mein Dekha toh

Virupaksh ko Dekhte hi Shor machate Hue daudkar
Pita Shri ! Pita Shri ! Kahate Hue Aakar lipat Gaye Virupaksh ne bhi unn donon ko uthakar Apne Godi Mein Le Liya bacchon ki awaaz sunkar bhitar se ek Stri bhi Kuchh badbad Aate Hue Bahar ki or aayi yah thi virupaksh ki patni Chanchla .

Virupaksh ko Godi Mein bacchon ko uthae hue dekh kar vah Boli -------

Chanchala - ab Samay prapt hua hai aapko itne Dinon ke pakshat , abhi bhi ghar Kyon Aaye Ho Hamari To Kuchh Padi hi nahin hai aapko bus aapka Raja aur aapka kam jao Apne Raja ke pass hi Raho Tumhen to bus Apne Raja Ki hi padi hai Hamari bhi Kuchh Chinta hai ki Ham Yahan Kaise Rah rahe hain .

Virupaksh - are are are Bhagwan Shant ho jao . Priya pahle dekh to Lo Ki sath mein koi Aur Bhi Aaya Hai Hamesha Ki Tarah ghar mein Pravesh karte hi tum Shuru Ho gayi .
( fir baccho ko niche utarkar Chanchala ke Gal ko Hath Lagate hue ) vaise Meri Rani Krodh Mein Tumhari sundarta Aur Bhi Adhik badh Jaati Hai


Chanchla ne Jab Dwar per Gajendra ko unhin ki taraf muskurate hue dekha to sharm ki Maare Mukh niche ki or kar liya .

Chanchla - Hato Ji , aapko kuch Kuchh sharm bhi hai Ya nahi , Samne bacche Hain aur aap bhi kisi ko Sath lae Ho Sabke Samne is Prakar vyavhar karte hue wob kya sochenge .

Virupaksh - Lajja kis baat ki Lajja apni Patni ko Prem karne main kaisi sharam , aao meri bahon mein Bade Dinon bad Dekha Hai Tumhen Itna kah kar Virupaksh ne apne Hath Aage Badha Diye yah dekh kar chanchla sir Jhuka Kar Rasoi Mein Bhag gai aur yah dekh kar Virupaksh jor se tahake lagakar hansne Laga .

Gajendra Dwar per Khada hua pati Patni ke nokjhonk Ko Dekhkar Muskura raha tha .

Virupaksh - Aao Mitra bhitar aao , vahan Kyon khade ho . Ye llo inse Milo yah Hai Mera Putra Shubham aur Kanya Shamli aur vah jo bhitar gai hai vah Hai Meri Pyari Ardhangini Chanchala Jo Apne Naam Ke Anurup hi Badi Chanchal hai .

Gajendra vah to main dekh hi chuka hun Mitra ki Chanchal kaun hai vaise bacche Bade Pyare Hain Tumhare .

Virupaksh - bacchon yah Tumhare Kaka Shri hai Pranam karo inhen
Virupaksh ke Kahane per donon bacchon Ne Gajendra ko pranam Kiya unn donon bacchon ke sir per Hath rakhkar unko Gajendra Ne Aashirwad Diya ab donon bhitar Aakar baithak Mein baith Gaye .
Abhi donon Baithe Hue hi the ki bhitar se Chanchala gud aur Jal Lekar aayi .

Jal dete Waqt Virupaksh ko prachnvachak Drishti Se Dekhne Lagi , Mano Kuchh poochh rahi ho Uske Hriday Ki Baat ko jante bhi virupaksh bola

Virupaksh - Priye yah hai mere Mitra Gajendra Aaj Hi Meri inse mitrata Hui Hai .

Chanchla - aapke Mitra kya Vastav mein aapko mitrata karna bhi Aata Hai kitne varshon Se Maine pahli bar hai ki aapka koi Mitra Dekha vaise inhen pahle to Yahan Kabhi Nahin Dekha .


Chanchla Ki Baat sunkar Gajendra Ne Chanchala ko pranam Kiya .

Gajendra Pranam - Bhabhi Shri , main Gajendra Aaj hi inse mitrata Hui Hai aur aapane Mujhe ab tak isliye Nahin Dekha Kyunki main aapke Nagar ka Nahin hun , main pahli baar yaha hun aur Dekho aapke Nagar Mein aate hi Mujhe Pahli baar virupaksh Jaisa Mitra aur aapki Jaisi bhabhi man Mili .

Gajendra ke Mukh Se bhabhi Shri sunkar chanchla Badi prasann Hui Kyunki yah pahli bar tha ki kisi ke Munh se usne is Prakar ka sambandh jodkar sambodhan Suna Tha Kyunki Parivar ke naam per Virupaksh ka koi aur nahin tha aur na hi koi Mitra tha .

Kuchh der aise hi halki-fulki baten Chalne Lagi , haas parihas chala Virupaksh Ne Gajendra ki Atithi kaksh Mein vyavastha Kar Di .
Nitya Karm snan Aadi ke pakshat Gajendra Dhyan Mein Baitha , Gajendra ke man mein Kai prashn the , Jinka Uttar wah Dhyan Mein dhundhne ka prayatn kar raha tha . Dhyan aagya Chakra Mein pahunchte hi Ek Divya Prakash ke Madhya usse Sab Kuchh spasht spasht Dikhai dene Laga ke usse Niyati Ne is Jagah per Kyon Bheja Hai Kuchh Chehre Dikhai Diye aur kuchh ghatnayen Dikhai Di ab usse Apne prashnon ke Uttar prapt ho gaye the .


Dhyan Purna karne per Ek lambi gehri Swas chhodate hue Dhyan Mein Dekhe Hue drishyon Ko punah Ek Bar Smaran karte hue Gajendra Atithi kaksh se baithak ki or chal Pada Jahan Virupaksh Apne bacchon per Sneh Luta raha tha .

Virupaksh ko Apne bacchon ke sath khelte Hue Dekhkar Gajendra Vahi baithak mein Ek Aasan per baith Gaya . Gajendra Ko Aaya Hua Dekhkar Virupaksh ne apne bacchon ko Unki Mata ke pass bhej diya aur Gajendra ke pass Aakar baith Gaya , donon Mein vahan ke Rajya vyavastha ke bare mein Charcha Hone Lagi .

Tab tak bhojan bhi ban chuka tha to donon Ne sath mein bhojan Kiya Gajendra pahli baar pake Hue pakvan Kha Raha Tha jo ki usse bade hi swadisht Lage bhojan ke pakshat .

Gajendra - vaise to Mitra Mera Koi Parivar Nahin Hai , Tumhara yah Chhota Sa Parivar Dekhkar mujhe bahut Achcha Laga aur Yahan Ke bhojan ki to baat hi kya . Pet bhar gaya parantu mann nahi bhara .
( fir chanchla ki or Dekhte hue ) Bhabhi Shri ke Hathon Mein To Jadu Hai Jadu , yah to sakshat Man annpurna Ka hi roop hai , Tum sach mein bade bhagyashali ho , Jo Meri Bhabhi Shri Jaisi Patni Mili .


Chanchala - Kya devar ji aap bhi , vyarth mein meri prashansa kar rahe ho .
Aapane Mujhe bhabhi Kaha to is Naate aap mere devar hue aap bilkul bhi Chinta mat karo aapko Mujhse bhi acchi atri Uttam suyogya Patni prapt Ho iske liye main Ishwar se Prathna karungi .

thodi der Aisi hi Hansi thitholi hoti Rahi Uske pakshat

Gajendra - Mitra Ab To Hamara Bal Bhog bhi ho gaya hai ab Hamen Raj Bhavan Ki or Chalna chahie .

Virupaksh - Pratiksha karo Mitra ! Rajmahal se abhi Bulava Aata hi hoga .

Gajendra - main Tumhara aashay Nahin Samjha Mitra Tumne Raja Tak kab Sandesh bhijwaya Mujhe To Aisa Dikhai Nahin .

Virupaksh - Mujhe Sandesh bhijwane ki koi avashyakta nahin Mitra . Dwar per vah Prahari Yad hai Shanku , vah Raja ke Priya mahamantri Satpal ka Chamcha hai Uske dwara Hamare Aane ki khabar mahamantri Tak pahunch Gai Hogi aur Mirch Masala lagakar mahamantri se Raja Tak mujhe lagta hai k aaj bahut Kuchh hone wala hai parantu Ab Mujhe Kisi Ka bhay Nahin Mere Sath tum Jo Ho .

Donon abhi baat kar hi rahe the ke Gajendra ko Aisa aabhas hua baithak Ki khidki ke bahar koi hai isliye usne virupaksh ki or Ishara Kiya aur Chupke se uthkar darvaja se hota hua bahar nikal Aaya .

Virupaaksh bhi Piche Piche Dwar Tak pahuncha to Gajendra Ne usse Vahi Ishare se rok Diya aur Bahar Chala Gaya thodi der ke bad Gajendra ne gardan pakad kar Kisi Ko ghasitate Hue bhitar Pravesh Kiya Aur Virupaksh Ke Samne Dharti per Patak Diya .

Virupaksh - arre Mitra yah to vahi hai , yah Tumhen kahan Mila .

Gajendra - Badi Der Se Mujhe lag raha tha Hamari baten Koi Sun Raha Hai , Jab Mera Dhyan Khidki ki or Gaya to iski Ek Jhalak Dikhai Di tab main sab Kuchh samajh gaya aur yah ab tumhare Samne Hain .

Virupaksh aur Gajendra donon usse pakadkar Atithi kaksh Mein Le Gaye aur uske Hath pair bandhkar uski acche se Seva Satkar Kiya Kuchh baten poochhi Kuchh Uttar prapt kiye

Chanchala bhi sari baten sunkar aur Dekh Kar Badi Awaak thi jaise-jaise baten khulne Lagi chanchla ke chehre ke Bhav badalne Lage .

Abhi vahan yah sab ho hi raha tha ki darvaje ke bahar se kisi ke pukarne ki awaaz Aane Lagi .

Virupaksh - Lo aagaya Sandesha Raja ka , Ab Tak Main Akela tha isliye Sare shadyantra ko jante Hue bhi main Unka Samna nahin kar Paya . Parantu ab Aap Mere Sath Ho Ab To Hamare hath aapke hi Karan unke Sare shadyantra ko janne Wala Bhi lag gaya hai bahut Sare shadyantron Se Parda uthne ka samay a gaya hai .

Gajendra - Tum Chinta mat karo Mitra avashya aisa hi hoga bus Tum Dekhte jao Chahe Kuchh Bhi Ho Jaaye Jab Tak Main Na kahun tab tak Shant Rahana .

tatpachat Gajendra ne apni sari Yojana Virupaksh Ko Bata Di aur Virupaksh ki patni chanchla ko sari baten Samjha Di k usse kya karna hai aur kisse Sampark karna hai sab Kuchh Bata Diya

Uske bad Gajendra ko sath mein Liye Virupaksh Apne Bhavan se bahar Aaya Bahar Aakar Dekha ki Mahal ka Hi Ek Adhikari Kuchh sainikon ke sath vahan Khada tha .

Adhikari - kshma Kijiye virupaaksh Ji parantu Main Raja ke Aadesh ke adhin hun aapane Raja ke Prati Apradh Kiya Hai Ussi ke Karan Raja ne Aadesh Diya kya aapko aur aapke sath Aane wali is aagantuk ko Darbar Mein Laya Jaaye .

Virupaksh - kshma mangne ki koi avashyakta nahin vaise bhi Ham Raj Bhavan hi ja rahe the Chaliye .

Virupaksh Ki Itna Kahane per sainikon Ne Virupaksh aur Gajendra ko gher liya , Jaise unhen Bandi Banakar Le Jaya ja raha hun Jise Dekhkar Virupaksh ko Krodh Aaya parantu Gajendra Ne usse Apne netron ke Ishare se Shant Rahane ko kaha .

Adhikari Aage Aage aur Piche Piche sainikon ke ghere mein kaid Virupaksh aur Gajendra Raj Bhavan Ki or chal Pade

Yahan Rajmahal Ke bhitar Raja Kamran ka Bhavya Darbar laga hua tha donon aur Raja ke Adhikari Gan Baithe hue the aur Madhya Mein unche Swarna sinhasan per Raja Kamran Baitha hua tha Raja Ji ke sinhasan ke nikat hi Thode niche do aur sinhasan the Ek per virajman tha mahamantri Satpal aur dusre per virajman tha Senapati kank yah donon hi mahakapati dhurt aur ek number ke chaplus the Nagar mein chal rahe Sabhi shadyantron Ka Yahi donon Mul the .

vahan Virupaksh aur Gajendra ke bare mein hi Charcha ho rahi thi .

Raja Kamran - Mahamantri is bare mein Aapka kya vichar hai .

Mahamantri - Maharaj mujhe lagta hai ki Virupaksh aapke niyantran se bahar ja raha hai vah apne aap ko shreshth samajhne laga hai tabhi aapki anumati Ke Bina Ek Anjan vyakti ko Nagar Ke bhitar Le Aaya yadi is per bhi Kuchh Nahin Kiya Gaya Tum Nagar ke Baki log bhi Aisa karna Shuru kar denge is Prakar to hamare Nagar ki Suraksha hi Sankat Mein Pad Jayegi .

Raja Kamran - Baat To Tumhari theek hai mahamantri hamen bhi Kuchh Aisa Hi lag raha hai pad Se hatane Ke pakshat Bhi lagta hai Virupaksh ki Akal thikane Nahin aayi . Ab Tak Uske kiye Gaye Upkar Ke Karan main usse kshma Karta aaya hun parantu ab lagta hai ki koi Kathor nirnay Lena Hi Padega .

Parantu Jahan Tak Main virupaksh ko Jaanta hun uska is Nagar se bahar koi bhi Mitra Nahin Hai FIR Jise vah Mitra Bata Kar Hamare Nagar Mein Laya Hai vah kaun ho sakta hai Kyon Senapati ji aapko kya lagta hai

Senapati Kank - Maharaj aapka Kahana uchit hai parantu kshma Kijiye Maharaj Koi Kathor nirnay Lene se purv Hamen yah Dhyan Rakhna hoga kyu ki Virupaksh koi sadharan yaksha nahi uske picche bahut se sahyako ka haath hai .

abhi Yahan yah baten ho hi rahi thi ki dwarpal Ne Aakar Virupaksh aur Gajendra Ke Aane Ki Suchna Di

Dwarpal - Maharaj ki Jay Ho ! Maharaj aapke Aadesh ke anusar Adhikari ji Virupaksh aur uss aagantuk ko Apne Sath Lekar Aaye Hain .

Kamran - jao unhen shighra hi mere sammukh prastut karo .

Kamran ke Kahane per dwarpal vahan se Raja ko pranam kar Chala Gaya .

Uske Jaate hi vah Adhikari Virupaksh aur Gajendra ko Lekar Raja ke Sanmukh prastut hua .

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Ab tak aapne dekha k kaise Analasur ne Kaamran k sqath vishwasghat kiya . Uski patni k saath durvyavhaar kiya , kaamran k putra Bhanu ki bhi nirmamta k saath asuro dwara hatya ki gayi jisse dekhkar Kaamran apne hosh kho baitha yane k behosh ho gaya

Ab aage ------


Murchit Pade Kamran ko Analasur ne karagrah Mein Band Karva Diya . uss Samay main ( Virupaksh ) karagrah ka mukhya prabhari tha Sare karagrah Mere adhin the .

Jis Samay Yahan Mahal Mein yah sab ho raha tha uss Samay Main Apne Bhavan Mein Tha Mujhe Apne vishwaspatra guptchar dwara Raja Kamran ke Parivar ke sath Hui ghatna gyat Hui aur sath hi yah bhi gyat hua ke Kamran ko karagruh Mein Dal Diya gaya hai .

Suchna prapt hote hi main daudta hua Mahal Mein pahuncha vahan pahunchkar Mujhe Pata Chala k Maharani Shalaka ki bhi Badi nirdayta purvak Hatya ho gai hai .

Apne Raja ke karagrah mein band hone ke Karan aur Raja Ke Putra tatha Rani ki pida dayak mrutyu Ke Karan main Bada Dukhi hua .

Mujhe atyant Krodh Bhi Aaya parantu main Analasur Jaise shaktishali asur ka Samna karne mein sarvtha asamarth tha . Mujhe ab Chinta thi Keval Rajkumari Amrita ki Jo Ek abodh Balika thi , Jiska abhi Koi pata nahin tha asur bhi use hi dhundh rahe the Aisi avastha Mein Mera Pratham Kartavya tha yadi Rajkumari jivit hai to usse Khoj kar sarvpratham surakshit Sthan Tak pahunchana aur uske pakshat Apne Raja Ko Mukt karne ki Yojana banana .

Jab Main karagrah pahuncha to Dekha ki Sara karagruh asuron ke Adhikar mein ho gaya tha Aur karagruh Ke Sainik Unka Har Aadesh ka Palan karne ke liye badhya the jinhone bhi Unka virodh Kiya Ve Sab Mare Gaye .

Mujhe vahan Dekh Kar unn asuron Ne Mujhe gher liya , Mujhe vahan Vivek se kam Lena tha Bal se nahin isliye maine unn asuron Ke Samne Apne Hath Jod Liye aur kaha ki main to Keval karagrah ka ek Adhikari hun Mera Kartavya Raja ke har aagya ka Palan karna hai Ab Yahan Ke Raja Analasur hai isliye main unhen Apna Swami swikar karta hun .

Asur Sainik Mujhe pakad kar Analasur ke pass Lekar Gaye Maine usse Pranam Kiya aur uske Samne natmastak hokar unhen Apna Swami swikar Kiya .

Meri Baton per Vishwas Karke usne mujhe apna pad Wapas De Diya ab main fir karagrah Mein Gaya vahan main asuron ki najron Se Bachkar Raja Kamran Se Mila .

Kamran ko ab tak Hosh a gaya tha Apne Jawan bete ki Apne Aankhon Ke Samne Dardnaak Maut aur apni Patni ki durdasha se Aahat Raja kaid khane Mein dahade maar-maar Kar Ro Raha Tha Mujhe Dekhkar vah mujhe pukarne laga .

Maine Ishare se unhen Shant Kar Diya fir uchit Samay Dekhkar Unse Maine Rajkumari Amrita ke bare mein poochha .

Parantu unhen Keval Itna Hi gyat Tha ki rajkumari aapani Man ke sang Apne kaksh Mein thi Uske paschat kya hua vah kahan Gai unhen Kuchh Nahin Pata Tha .

Kamran Ne Mere Aage Hath jodkar gidgidate hue rajkumari Amrita ko dhundh kar bachane ke liye Prathna ki .

Vidhi ka bhi lekh Ajeeb hai Jo Kamran kabhi bhi Jivan Mein Kisi ke aage Jhuka nahin tha , apni mahtvakanshaon ko purn karne ke liye Ahankar Mein Chur Jisne Aaneko Paap kiye the vah Aaj Mujh jaise se ek Chhote Se Sipahi ke aage apni Kanya ke pranon ki ko bachane ke liye Hath jode Khada tha .

Asuron Ko sandeh Na Ho Jaaye is Karan main vahan Se shighra Hi Nikal Gaya

Ardh ratri ka Prahar tha asuron Ne Mahal mein bhishan utpat machaya hua tha Mahal ki dasiyon Ki chikh Pukar Charon or Gunj rahi thi yah sab dekh aur sunkar Mujhe Bada Krodh a raha tha parantu main vivash tha .

Mujh mein itna samthya nahin tha ki main unn asuron Ka Samna kar Sakun isiliye Ab Mujhe keval apne Lakshya Rajkumari Amrita per Dhyan kendrit karna tha .

Main Apni Maya Ka prayog karte hue asur Roop dharan kar Maharani ke kaksh mein Pravesh Kiya uss kaksh ka pratyek saman Tuta futa tha aisa lag raha tha ki Yahan Kuchh dhundha gaya ho iss sabse Mujhe Itna To samajh mein aa gaya tha ki asur bhi Rajkumar Amrita ko dhundh rahe hain tabhi Mujhe kaksh ke bahar se Kuchh patrachapon ki awaaz Sunai Di .

Meri Maya asuro ko Adhik der tak bhramit nahin kar sakti thi isliye maine vahan Se shighra Hi nikalne ka nishchay Kiya .

Adhikari hone ke Karan Mujhe vahan ke sampurn Gupt dwaron ka gyan tha asuron ke kaksh mein aane se purv hi Mujhe vahan se nikalna tha .

Uss kaksh Mein sthit Gupt Dwar Ko kholkar Maine usmein Pravesh Kiya aur purvavat usse vaise hi band kar diya , Gupt Dwar Mein Pravesh karne ke baad niche ki or sidhiyan utarte hue Jab Main vahan pahuncha to Dekha Rajkumari Amrita vahan Bhumi per murchit avastha mein Padhi hui thi .

Rajkumari Amrita ko dekhkar sarvapratham unka naadi parkshan kiya , woh bilkul swastha thi kewal kissi dawai k prayog se gahri neend mein thi unka sahi salamat dekhkar maine ishwar ko dhanywad kiya , meri khoj puri ho gayi thi.
Ho sakta hai Rani ne asuron ko dekh liya Ho aur kuchh anhoni ki aashanka Ke Karan unhone Yahan Rajkumari Amrita ko Chhupa Diya Ho .

Maine Rajkumari Amrita ko apni Godi Mein uthaya aur Gupt raston se Hote Hue Mahal ke bahar a Gaya ratri ka Andhera Mera Sahayak hua .

Pura Nagar Ab asuron Ke Adhikar Mein Tha isliye main Nagar se bahar Apne Kuchh sahayakon ko Lekar Amrita ko Lekar Nikal Gaya nikat hi Van Mein Ek Gufa Mein Rajkumari Amrita ko rakhkar Apne Kuchh sahyogiyo Ko Maine vahan Chhoda Aur Kuchh sahayakon ko Apne vishwaspatra aur Parivar Jan aur asuron dwara pidit yakshon ko Yahan ektrit karne ka Karya saunpa aur uss Sthan ko Yaksh Maya Se surakshit Karke Wapas Mahal pahuncha .

Ab Mujhe Raja Kamran ko bhi karagruh se chhudana tha Mahal pahunchkar main wapas karagrah Mein pahuncha vahan Dekha ki karagrah mein bandhiyon ko asur Gor yatraen de rahe the aur prasann ho rahe the .

Ratri ka chautha Prahar shuru ho gaya tha Aur Subah Hone se pahle Mujhe Kissi bhi Prakar yahan se nikalna tha .

Maine unn asuron ke liye Apne Sevak se kahkar Madira mangvaee aur Chupke Se usmein Vish Mila Diya

Vish mile hue Madira ko karagrah Mein sthit asuron ko Pilaya aur Thodi Si der Mein uss Vish Ne Apna Karya karna Shuru Kiya ek-ek Karke unn Sabhi asuron ki mrutyu Hone Lagi .

isase pahle ki bahar Aur Kisi Ko Pata Chalta Maine karagrah se sabhi bandhion ko aur Raja Kamran ko Mukt Kiya aur Gupt Raste Se Bahar nikalkar Ussi Sthan per pahuncha Jahan Maine Rajkumari Amrita ko Rakha tha .

Apni Putri Ko jivit Dekhkar Kamran baar-baar mujhe dhanyvad de raha tha .

Wah van Nagar ke nikat tha Subah bhi ho gai thi Suraj Apna Prakash Charo Aur bikher raha tha parantu Ham Sabke Jivan Mein To Ghor andhkar Chha Gaya Tha Hamara Sab Kuchh samapt ho gaya tha .

Raja Kamran ke karagrah se nikalne ka aur mere Vishwasghat ka ab tak To AnalaSur Ko Pata Chal chuka hoga usne Kamran ko dhundhne ke liye Apne asuron Ko Charon or faila Diye Honge yadi Ham unke Hath Lage To Hamara Bachana asambhav hoga .

isliye Hamen vahan se shighra se shighra nikalna tha ab tak Hamare parivarjan Sahayak aur Sabhi vahan ektrit ho gaye the jinki sankhya lagbhag hajar Hogi .

Ab aur Adhik Samay Tak itne sare Logon ke sath Ham Yahan Nahin ruk Sakte the parantu prashn tha ki ab Ham unn Sab asuron Se Bachkar Kahan jaen .

Ab Keval ek hi Jagah Hamare liye Shesh bachi thi Jahan Ham Apne Pran bacha kar Chhup Sakte the aur vah Jagah Thi Kuber ji ki Alkapuri vahan asur Pravesh nahin kar sakte The Isliye Ham Himalaya ke barfili raston se Hote hue Maharaj ki Kuber Nagari Alkapuri pahunche .

Kamran Ko Dekhkar Maharaj Kuber pahle to bade krodhit hue parantu Unka Hriday Bada Vishal hai isliye Bhagwan Bholenath unhen Apna Mitra Kahate Hain .

Kamran Ne Rote Hue unke Charan pakad liye aur baar-baar kshma yachna Karne Laga Maharaj Kuber Ko Jab asuron dwara Kiya Gaya Vishwas Ghat aur nrishansta ke bare mein aur sath hi Sath Kamran ke Parivar Ke Sath Jo Hua uska Pata Chala to unhone Kamran ko kshma Kar Diya Kyunki vah Apne kiye Gaye Karmon ka dand Bhagat chuka tha .

Vardan Ke Karan Devta Abhi Analasur ka Samna karne mein Saksham Nahin the . Apne yakshon ke sath asuron dwara ki Gai barbrata Ke Karan Maharaj Kuber ko bhishan Krodh Aaya parantu vah abhi sidhe-sidhe Analasur ka Kuchh Nahin bigaad Sakte the isliye unhone is bare mein Bhagwan Bholenath se paraamarsh Lena uchit Samjha .

Sari Baton Se avgat Hone Ke pakshat unhone Kaha ke yakshon Ke Sath Jo Kuchh Bhi is Samay ho raha hai vah sab unke Karmon ka hi dand hai Samay Aane per sabhi ko Apne Karmon ka bhogna hi padta hai .

Fir Kuchh sochte Hue Bhagwan Bholenath Ne Yahan iss kshetra meini ek Nagari basane Ka paraamarsh Diya Kyunki Prithvi ka yah bhukhand unhone Aise suraksha kavach se surakshit kar rakha hai Jahan Unki ichcha Ke Bina koi bhi Pravesh nahin kar sakta

Uske pakshat Mahadev ki hi Kripa Se Kamran aur ham Sabhi yakshon Ne Milkar Yahan Ek Nagari Basai Jiska Naam Humne Yakshpur Rakha

Aapane Mujhse Jo Kuchh Bhi poochha Tha vah Sab main vistarpurvak kah diya hai Itna kah kar Virupaaksh chup ho gaya .

Gajendra - Mitra Tumhare kathan ke anusar Analasur ki Shakti aur kurta ke bare mein gyat hua aur sath hi Sath Kamran ke bare mein sunkar gyat hua k lobh manushya ke Patan ka Karan Hota Hai , lobh Mein padhakar Kamran Ne dusht Se mitrata Ki aur anekon Paap Karm kiye

Unhen Pappo ka Karma dand bhugtna Pada parantu abhi bhi mere man mein ek prashn uth raha hai Mitra Tumne Kamran ke Jivan ki Raksha ki Rajkumari ko dhundhkar aur uske Pran bachayen Sath hi Sath yah Nagar basane mein bhi Tumhara bada yogdan hai .

Yadi Tum Sabko Kuber ji ke pass Na Le Jaate Hai To yah Nagar Bhi Nahin bachta Tumhare itne Upkar Ke pakshat Bhi Tumhen Keval Nagar Dwarka pahri Banakar Rakh Diya Hai Lagta Hai Raja Kamran Ne Itna Kuchh bhugatne Ke pakshat Bhi Sudhar Nahin Aaya .

Virupaksh - Mitra Shuru-Shuru mein to Raja Kamran Mera bada maan karte the vah mujhe apna Chhota bhai mante the aur Mujhe Yahan Ke mahamantri ka pad bhi unke dwara Diya gaya tha .

parantu jaisa-jaisa Nagar basata Gaya Raja Ko chapluson Ne gher liya unhone Apne fayde ke liye mere viruddh Raja ke Kan bharane Shuru kar Diye .

Ab Raja ka Vyavhaar Mere Prati badalne Laga tha main bhi sab samajhne Laga tha . Rajgaddi pane ke pakshat Raja Kamran ko fir Ahankar Ne grasit kar liya tha .

Raja Ke chatukar Mujhe Raja ke sameep nahin dekhna Chahte the isiliye Mujhe Nagar ke Rakshak ke roop Mein bhej diya Jise Maine Apna Kartavya samajhkar swikar kar liya aur iska Mujhe Koi Khed Nahin Hai .

dwara Rakshak Hi Sahi Main Apne Nagar ke Kuchh To Kam aa raha hun bus issi Bhav se main prasann hun

Baton hi Baton Mein sari ratri beet chuki thi suryoday ki lalima Aakash Mein Chhai hui thi

Gajendra - tum bahut acche ho Mitra , Dekho Baton hi Baton Mein sari ratri beet gai ab Hamen Nagar Mein Chalna chahie main bhi Tumhare Raja Kamran se milane ke liye Bada Hi utsuk hun .

Virupaksh parantu Mitra Tumhara Raja ke sammukh Jana uchit Nahin Hai Kamran ka koi pata nahin kab kya kar de Main Tumhari Suraksha ko Khatre Mein Nahin dalna Chahta .

Gajendra - Mitra kya abhi bhi Tum samajhte Ho ki Tumhara Raja Kamran Mera Kuchh bigaad sakta hai . Tum nishchint Raho Samay aa gaya hai ke Kamran ke Ahankar ka naash ho jaaye anyatha Kamran ka hi Nash ho jaega vyarth Ki Chinta ko Chhodo aur chalo Jara main bhi to Dekhu Tumne yah Nagar kis Prakar basaya hai .

Virupaksh bhi Gajendra ke samarthya ko Jaan gaya tha tab tak Baki Sainik bhi Hosh a gaya tha Gajendra ne apni Prakriti ki Urja ka prayog karte hue sabhi sainikon ko Swasth kar diya tha Apne sainikon Ko purvvatDekh Kar Virupaksh Bada prasann Hua , unn sainikon ko Seema per tainat Karke Virupaksh Gajendra ko Lekar usse pathrile Raste Se hota hua Nagar ki or chal Pada .

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