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Congrats for 400 Pages
Kya kyu Bhai update ke bare me
Bhut he khubsurat mind-blowing update Diya Bhai,
Just Keep it a bit longer
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friends next update rat ko 10 baje ayega.. thoda sa or type kardu.. shukariya...

 

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Fari ne sona ko kya btaya
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Fari apni 10 number wali mummy se milegi
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for 400 pages

 

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Fantastic update sir
Fari ko sona ka ghr nhi pta pr ravi ko kaise pata chala
Fari ne sona ko kya btaya
Pr yo bi btaya sona kisiko nhi btayegi
Sona ko samose mil gye khaane ko

Ravi or chacha ki family wala scene emotional tha
Sonal ko kya huya
Fari apni 10 number wali mummy se milegi
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thanks sona ji ,

apko update acha laga , es bat ki khushi hai.. shukariya

 

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for 400 pages

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update-95

Abh Agge...

ravi behad tez raftar se sedyian chad , apni behan sonal ke room tak pahunch gya , room ke darvaje ke pas jaker , voh himet jutane laga , sonal ka samna karne ki ,

ravi janta tha , sonal bahut royegi , or use sonal ko shant karna hoga , ravi ne apni shakti se , band darvaje ke ander zak kar dekha , uff uski akhen nam ho gai ,

sonal uski ik badi si tasveer ko apni bahu me bhare so rehi thi , uff kitni pyari or masom lag rehi thi voh , uska gora khubsurat chehra thoda murza sa gya tha , ik lambe intzar ke bad ,

ravi ne apni nam akhen saf ki , or darvaja khatkata diya , ravi apni atmik vidya ka istemal kar ander sonal ko dekh reha tha , usne dekha darvaje ki awaz sun sonal ne dhere dhere akhen kholi , or uski tasveer ko chumne lagi , or phir kuch der bad boli..

"kon hai..." sonal apne lambe baalo me ik rabad band dalti hui boli ,

"beta me tumari maa hu..." ravi suman chachi ki awaz nikal kar bola ,

"han maa , kya bat hai..." sonal phir se bed par girte hue boli ,

"beta , tumara bhai ravi aya hai..." ravi apni nam akhen saf karta hua bola ,

sonal ik dam se uth bethi , uski akhen zar zar behne lagi , uske rone se ravi ka bejuban dil bhi rone laga , sonal ne jaise taise khud ko sambala or bed se uth kar bahar anne lagi , lekin phir voh ruk gai , or bhag kar bed par let rone lagi ,

"sonal , darvaja kholu beta..." ravi phir se chachi ki awaz me bola ,

"maa (rote hue) , unko bol do me , me , ghar par nai hu , muze nai milna unko..." sonal beintha rote hue sisak sisak kar boli ,

ravi ne kuch der intzar kiya or phir apni akhon se ik lal light darvaje ke lock par mari , or darvaje ka lock ik dam se khul gya ,

ravi ne dhere se room ka darvaja khola , or ander ghus , phir se lock kar diya , ravi ne room me as-pas nazar doadai toh uski akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,

uff room ki har dewar par charo traf , uski badi badi tasveere lagi hui thi , shyad yeh tasveere tab ki thi , jab sab picnic manane gye the , pora room uski tasveero se bhara hua tha , ravi ne phir apni behan ko dekha , jo bed par ulti leti hui , rote hue sisak rehi thi ,

ravi nam akhon ke sath , sonal ke sath bed par let gya , sonal ne ik bar ravi ko dekha , jo akhen band kiye leta hua tha , or uski akhon me asnu beh rehe the ,

sonal apna rona bhul , behad herian hui , apne bhai ko dekhti rehi , use vishwas nai ho reha tha , use lag reha tha , yeh ik sapna hai , yeh hakikat nai ho sakti ,

sonal ne apne kampte hath se ravi ko chu kar dekha , or phir usse lipat kar rone lagi , kuch palu bad sonal apne bhai ke chehre ko beintha , behad shidat se chumne lagi , voh pagalu ki trah , har traf se , uske pore chehre ko chumti ja rehi thi ,

"shhh , bus kar pagli , me hu na tumare pas , abh kahi nai jauga..." ravi , sonal ka chehra dono hatho me pakad , behad nam akhon se uski asnu bhegi akhon me dekhte hue bola ,

"bb..bb..bhaiiiii..." sonal haklate hue bus etna hi bola , or phir se rote hue ravi ke seene se lipat gai ,

mohhabat khushnuma jindgi ka raz , yeh dard bhi deti hai or khushi bhi , mohhabat bhagwan ka banaya , sabse ghatak hathiyar , jiske war se khud bhagwan bhi na bach paye , yaha tak bhagwan shiv bhi mata sati ki mriytu ke bad , sadyion tak andhkar me dub gye , apne pyar ko bhul na paye , unki mout par , unki lash ko utha , pore sansar me ghumte rehe ,

kitni peeda sahi hogi , kitna dard saha hoga , kitne gam me tadafe honge , roye honge , chilaye honge , mere bhagwan shiv , ufff unki peeda , unka dard , unki ghor tapasya , kon samaz sakta hai , voh hai ashiq ,

or mata ne ik aise insan ko chuna , jo junglo me rehta tha , bhotu , pretu ke sath , sharir par murda logu ki rakh laga kar , or mata 32 gun sapan , meri maa , dunia me sabse khubsurat , unko pyar hua toh , ik veragi insan se , jo mere bhagwan shiv the ,

unki prem kahani se kuch sikhne ko milta hai , kuch samazne ko milta hai , maf karna , me ik aisi site par , ik aisi story par , apne bhagwan ka nam likh reha hu , par yaha bat , mohhabat ki hai , pyar ki hai ,

unse sikho , ke prem karo , toh na roop dekho , na dhan-dolt , na jat dekho , na rutba , prem ko ham es karur samaz ki janjero me nai band sakte , prem amar hai , azad hai , prem se bhagwan bhi mil jate hain , or insan bhi , dunia me sab kuch mil jata hai , agar man me prem ho ,

ajj hamari sonal ki tapasya pori ho gai , usne din rat mehnat ki , apna vada pora kiya , doctor ban gai , par jab uska premi na aya , toh usne intzar kiya , chahe hazaro pal dard ke the , sekdu ration ko voh royi thi , par abh uska prem uske pas tha , voh apni har peeda , har dard , bhul chuki thi...

kuch wakht beeta , toh sonal shant ho gai , par voh apne bhai se ik pal bhi door na hui , usse lipti rehi , use bar bar chumti rehi ,

"uff meri sonal , meri jaan , abh shant ho jao , dekho me tumare pas hu , abh nai jauga..." ravi , sonal ka matha chumte hue muskra kar bola , toh sonal bhi muskrane lagi ,

"raviii (rote hue) , tum , tum , kaha the , tum , tumne vada kiya tha , me , me doctor ban gai raviii , par tum nai ayee , kyu nai ayee , tum zuthe hoo..." sonal beintha rote hue ravi ke seene par marte hue boli ,

"haasshh , es vada ki koi mafi nai mil sakti , ik bar , me tumse shadi karuga , par me tumse behad naraz hu , tumne , tumne khudkusi karne ki kossih ki , ahhh , bevkuf agar mar jati toh..." ravi ne pyar se sonal ko dantte hue bola ,

"voh , voh , sab meri shadi karva rehe the , mere pas koi or rasta nai tha , agar chod kar chali jati , toh sab mere chariter par unglyian uthate , par mera pyar sacha tha , main , main , hamare pyar par koi dag kaise lagne deti , hamara pyar paviter hai ravi , bahut paviter , es liye mane jehar kha liya..." sonal behad nam akhon se boli ,

"ohhh , meri jaan , etna pyar , par kyu , acha , toh ladke walo ko kya bola chacha ji ne..." ravi , sonal ke gulabi naram hontho ko bar bar chumte hue bola ,

"mere jehar khane ke bad , muze 5 din bad hosh aya , tab choti maa , muz par bahut gussa hui , jab unhonu mere pyar par swal uthaye , toh , toh me khud ko rok na payi , mane sab bata diya , pita ji pehle toh muzse naraz hue , par mera balidan dekh , voh rone lage , phir pita ji ne , ladke walo ko mana kar diya , or kaha ke abhi unki beti , agge or padhna chahti hai , mere sab ghar wale man gye , phir bhi janu tum 1 saal deri se aye , kyu..." sonal pehle nam akhon se boli , or ant me sharmate hue ,

"hmm , toh yeh bat hai , kavita or sital dedi kaha hain..."

"ravi , voh , toh videsh chali gai hain , agle mahine ayegi..." sonal pyar se ravi ke seene par unglyian phirate hue boli ,

"chalo mere sath , muze tumse kisi ko milvana hai , tain ki tume ehsas ho ke me 3 saal deri se kyu aya..." ravi , sonal ke hontho ko chum , use apne sath bahar lata hua bola ,

bahar ghar ke hall me komal , fari , rukmani chachi or suman chachi , charo bethi hui batian kar rehi thi ,

suman chachi or rukmani chachi , ravi or sonal ko ek sath ate dekh behad khush ho gai ,

"dedi dono ki jodi kitni achi lag rehi hai..." suman muskrate hue rukmani se boli ,

"han , kisi ka nazar na lag jaye dono ko..." rukmani chachi haste hue boli ,

"lyo fari ji , apki khuwasih pori ho gai , apki mumma number 10 a rehi hai , hash abh enko bhi mumma bolna sikh lo , lekin item mast hai..." fari apne mathe par hath mar , man hi man sochte hue boli ,

"ehh tonal a dyi , tonal a dyi.." komal khushi me muskrate hue boli , or sonal ke pas ate hi uske gale lag gai ,

"meri komal janu , kaisi ho app..." sonal , komal ka matha chumte hue boli ,

"tein thith tu zizi.." komal tutla kar boli , toh sonal chonk gai , phir use mehsus ho gya , akhir ravi etna late kyu hua tha ,

"ale yeh pyari si bachi kiski hai..." sonal , komal se milne ke bad fari ke pas jaker ghutno ke bal bethte hue boli ,

"apka hi maal hu nayi mumma..." fari man hi man sochte hue muskrati hui boli ,

"teh dhyia ti deti ea , fali..." komal behad khush hote hue boli ,

"haye sonal mumma..." fari , sonal ka gaal chum kar boli , toh sonal buri trah sharma gai ,

"sonal tum betho me chaye lati hu tumare liye..." rukmani chachi etna bol jane lagi , tabhi komal boli ,

"thathi , mude di teni taye galam galam ol totode di thane , daldi taoo..." komal muskrate hue boli ,

phir sab aise hi batian karte rehe , or wakht gujarta gya , phir sabne chaye or pakode khaye , sare pakode komal ne thus liye , dusro ka toh bus nam hi hua ,

sham ka wakht hua , tab ravi ne jane ki ijajat mangi , sonal es bat se behad udas ho gai , phir ravi ne use pyar se samazya ke , agle 7 din bad voh usse sagai karega , jise sun sonal khushi se chehk uthi , yeh bat ravi ne suman chachi ke samne boli , or unko special bola , ke kavita or sital dedi ko vapis bula lo , or agle 7 din bad ki koi bhi date pandit ji se nikalva lo ,

phir ravi ne sonal se uska mobile number liya , or kuch der usse pyar kiya , phir ravi ne sabse vida li , or karib 2 ghante bad sab ghar vapis a gye....


sham ke 4 baje....


"lyo bhi bacha log , ghar a gyaa , ahhuushh..." ravi ubashi lete hue bola ,

"ohh hu , fali ghal a dya , talo taye tete galam galam..." komal gadi se utar ghar ke ander bhagte hue boli ,

"haash , papa mumma kuch jayda bimar nai.." fari thoda udas hoker boli ,

"mera bacha , tumare sath kitna khel rehi voh , or ghabrao mat , komal mumma jalad hi thik ho jayegi , jao khelo uske sath..." ravi muskrate hue fari ke gaal chum kar bola ,

"komal mumma ruko..." fari gadi se utar etna bol ghar ke ander bhag gai...

ravi ne gadi rehan ke ghar park ki , or kuch der rehan , or dr.nelam se batian kar , vapis ghar a gya , dr.nelam behad khush ho gai ravi se milkar...

ravi ke jane ke bad , seema ne kat ko chod baki sabko , komal ki es halat ki asli vajah bata di , tain ki koi use ajeeb na samaze ,

seema ne ik maa hone ke nate , sabko chetavni di , ke komal ik bachi hai , us par koi gussa nai karega , chache voh kitna bhi tang kyu na kare ,

"theema mummu , theema mummu..." komal chilate hue ghar me ghusi , tab seema kitchen me khana banane ki tyari kar rehi thi , voh komal ki awaz sun ik dam se bahar a gai ,

"are meri beti a gai..." seema muskrate hue apni bahe phaila kar boli ,

"mummu..." komal bhag kar seema ke gale lag gaii..

"mummu tein ta dayi , tene (mane) taha totode di taye , thamothe di taye , ol taye di ti galam galam..." komal , seema ka chehra chumte hue behad khushi me boli ,

"meli bachii , abhi or chaye nai peni , me doodu deti hu garam karke , thik hai umma.." seema muskra kar komal ka matha chumte hue boli ,

tab tak fari bhi unke pas a gai ,

"mummu to tilas toodu galam galam kalo , meli fali bi toodu peydi , tein na fali.." komal , fari ki traf dekh muskrate hue boli ,

"meri bachi fari , umma.." seema , fari ko god me utha uska chehra chumte hue boli ,

"mummu , apti to to (do) tetiyan..." komal bhi seema ke gale lagte hue boli ,

"acha tum dono khelo me , tab tak doodh garam karti hu , thik hai..." seema kitchen ke ander jate hue boli ,

"ehh fali tal , lala ol thuteza te path talte , tal tal taldi..." komal , fari ka hath pakad use khichte hue lara or Eliza ke room me le gai ,

kuch wakht bad ravi bhi ghar a gya , ravi ate hi pehle khushi ke pas chala gya , usne darvaja khatkata diya ,

"kon hai..." khushi ander se chila kar boli ,

"me bevkuf , ohh mera matlab ravii..." ravi apna matha peet kar bola ,

kuch hi palu me khushi ne darvaja khola , voh thoda nashe me lag rehi thi , usne adh khuli akhon se ravi ko dekha , or ravi ko ander kar darvaja band kar liya....

vahi dusri traf...

Anu kal se bed par leti hui thi , uski halat abh thik thi , varna ravi ne uski halat buri kar di thi , jo bhi ho , anu ko apna pyar mil gya tha , ajj usne rest karne ka socha tha , usne kal plan kiya tha , ravi se milne ka or use ik acha sa mobile gift karne ka ,

rehman ulla ki mout ki khabar anu ko bhi pata chal gai thi , lekin abhi voh kam par nai ja sakti thi , usne 3 din ki chuti le thi , uske bad hi voh es case par dyan dene wali thi...


vahi dusri traf...

"tum ravi se milne gai thi rekha..." yeh joker tha jo behad gusse me tha ,

"gai thi me ravi se milne , ho gai galti mere se , layega voh mahashakti abh , kiya hai vada usne..." rekha nazarian zuka kar boli ,

"aisa kya vada kiya usne , jo tumari bat man voh us mahashakti ko lane ke liye man gya..."

"nai pata , man gya voh meri bat , janti hu etna bus..." rekha ne fari ki bat chupate hue bola ,

"tum gadari kar rehi ho , ahahaha , joker se gadari , thodi si saza toh milegi tume..." joker ne etna bol , apne hath se bijli ki kirane chodi , jo rekha ke jism par padhte hi , rekha dard se chekhne lagi , par usne yeh nai bataya , ke fari uski beti hai , or yahi bat voh ravi ko batane gai thi ,

joker ne rekha ko bijli ki janjero me jakad diya , rekha ko beintha dard ho reha tha , par apni mamta ki shakti se , usne apna moh na khola , chahe pori rat , voh bijli ke jatke sehti rehi....



to be counited.....

 

[sorbobhuk]

update-95

Abh Agge...

ravi behad tez raftar se sedyian chad , apni behan sonal ke room tak pahunch gya , room ke darvaje ke pas jaker , voh himet jutane laga , sonal ka samna karne ki ,

ravi janta tha , sonal bahut royegi , or use sonal ko shant karna hoga , ravi ne apni shakti se , band darvaje ke ander zak kar dekha , uff uski akhen nam ho gai ,

sonal uski ik badi si tasveer ko apni bahu me bhare so rehi thi , uff kitni pyari or masom lag rehi thi voh , uska gora khubsurat chehra thoda murza sa gya tha , ik lambe intzar ke bad ,

ravi ne apni nam akhen saf ki , or darvaja khatkata diya , ravi apni atmik vidya ka istemal kar ander sonal ko dekh reha tha , usne dekha darvaje ki awaz sun sonal ne dhere dhere akhen kholi , or uski tasveer ko chumne lagi , or phir kuch der bad boli..

"kon hai..." sonal apne lambe baalo me ik rabad band dalti hui boli ,

"beta me tumari maa hu..." ravi suman chachi ki awaz nikal kar bola ,

"han maa , kya bat hai..." sonal phir se bed par girte hue boli ,

"beta , tumara bhai ravi aya hai..." ravi apni nam akhen saf karta hua bola ,

sonal ik dam se uth bethi , uski akhen zar zar behne lagi , uske rone se ravi ka bejuban dil bhi rone laga , sonal ne jaise taise khud ko sambala or bed se uth kar bahar anne lagi , lekin phir voh ruk gai , or bhag kar bed par let rone lagi ,

"sonal , darvaja kholu beta..." ravi phir se chachi ki awaz me bola ,

"maa (rote hue) , unko bol do me , me , ghar par nai hu , muze nai milna unko..." sonal beintha rote hue sisak sisak kar boli ,

ravi ne kuch der intzar kiya or phir apni akhon se ik lal light darvaje ke lock par mari , or darvaje ka lock ik dam se khul gya ,

ravi ne dhere se room ka darvaja khola , or ander ghus , phir se lock kar diya , ravi ne room me as-pas nazar doadai toh uski akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,

uff room ki har dewar par charo traf , uski badi badi tasveere lagi hui thi , shyad yeh tasveere tab ki thi , jab sab picnic manane gye the , pora room uski tasveero se bhara hua tha , ravi ne phir apni behan ko dekha , jo bed par ulti leti hui , rote hue sisak rehi thi ,

ravi nam akhon ke sath , sonal ke sath bed par let gya , sonal ne ik bar ravi ko dekha , jo akhen band kiye leta hua tha , or uski akhon me asnu beh rehe the ,

sonal apna rona bhul , behad herian hui , apne bhai ko dekhti rehi , use vishwas nai ho reha tha , use lag reha tha , yeh ik sapna hai , yeh hakikat nai ho sakti ,

sonal ne apne kampte hath se ravi ko chu kar dekha , or phir usse lipat kar rone lagi , kuch palu bad sonal apne bhai ke chehre ko beintha , behad shidat se chumne lagi , voh pagalu ki trah , har traf se , uske pore chehre ko chumti ja rehi thi ,

"shhh , bus kar pagli , me hu na tumare pas , abh kahi nai jauga..." ravi , sonal ka chehra dono hatho me pakad , behad nam akhon se uski asnu bhegi akhon me dekhte hue bola ,

"bb..bb..bhaiiiii..." sonal haklate hue bus etna hi bola , or phir se rote hue ravi ke seene se lipat gai ,

mohhabat khushnuma jindgi ka raz , yeh dard bhi deti hai or khushi bhi , mohhabat bhagwan ka banaya , sabse ghatak hathiyar , jiske war se khud bhagwan bhi na bach paye , yaha tak bhagwan shiv bhi mata sati ki mriytu ke bad , sadyion tak andhkar me dub gye , apne pyar ko bhul na paye , unki mout par , unki lash ko utha , pore sansar me ghumte rehe ,

kitni peeda sahi hogi , kitna dard saha hoga , kitne gam me tadafe honge , roye honge , chilaye honge , mere bhagwan shiv , ufff unki peeda , unka dard , unki ghor tapasya , kon samaz sakta hai , voh hai ashiq ,

or mata ne ik aise insan ko chuna , jo junglo me rehta tha , bhotu , pretu ke sath , sharir par murda logu ki rakh laga kar , or mata 32 gun sapan , meri maa , dunia me sabse khubsurat , unko pyar hua toh , ik veragi insan se , jo mere bhagwan shiv the ,

unki prem kahani se kuch sikhne ko milta hai , kuch samazne ko milta hai , maf karna , me ik aisi site par , ik aisi story par , apne bhagwan ka nam likh reha hu , par yaha bat , mohhabat ki hai , pyar ki hai ,

unse sikho , ke prem karo , toh na roop dekho , na dhan-dolt , na jat dekho , na rutba , prem ko ham es karur samaz ki janjero me nai band sakte , prem amar hai , azad hai , prem se bhagwan bhi mil jate hain , or insan bhi , dunia me sab kuch mil jata hai , agar man me prem ho ,

ajj hamari sonal ki tapasya pori ho gai , usne din rat mehnat ki , apna vada pora kiya , doctor ban gai , par jab uska premi na aya , toh usne intzar kiya , chahe hazaro pal dard ke the , sekdu ration ko voh royi thi , par abh uska prem uske pas tha , voh apni har peeda , har dard , bhul chuki thi...

kuch wakht beeta , toh sonal shant ho gai , par voh apne bhai se ik pal bhi door na hui , usse lipti rehi , use bar bar chumti rehi ,

"uff meri sonal , meri jaan , abh shant ho jao , dekho me tumare pas hu , abh nai jauga..." ravi , sonal ka matha chumte hue muskra kar bola , toh sonal bhi muskrane lagi ,

"raviii (rote hue) , tum , tum , kaha the , tum , tumne vada kiya tha , me , me doctor ban gai raviii , par tum nai ayee , kyu nai ayee , tum zuthe hoo..." sonal beintha rote hue ravi ke seene par marte hue boli ,

"haasshh , es vada ki koi mafi nai mil sakti , ik bar , me tumse shadi karuga , par me tumse behad naraz hu , tumne , tumne khudkusi karne ki kossih ki , ahhh , bevkuf agar mar jati toh..." ravi ne pyar se sonal ko dantte hue bola ,

"voh , voh , sab meri shadi karva rehe the , mere pas koi or rasta nai tha , agar chod kar chali jati , toh sab mere chariter par unglyian uthate , par mera pyar sacha tha , main , main , hamare pyar par koi dag kaise lagne deti , hamara pyar paviter hai ravi , bahut paviter , es liye mane jehar kha liya..." sonal behad nam akhon se boli ,

"ohhh , meri jaan , etna pyar , par kyu , acha , toh ladke walo ko kya bola chacha ji ne..." ravi , sonal ke gulabi naram hontho ko bar bar chumte hue bola ,

"mere jehar khane ke bad , muze 5 din bad hosh aya , tab choti maa , muz par bahut gussa hui , jab unhonu mere pyar par swal uthaye , toh , toh me khud ko rok na payi , mane sab bata diya , pita ji pehle toh muzse naraz hue , par mera balidan dekh , voh rone lage , phir pita ji ne , ladke walo ko mana kar diya , or kaha ke abhi unki beti , agge or padhna chahti hai , mere sab ghar wale man gye , phir bhi janu tum 1 saal deri se aye , kyu..." sonal pehle nam akhon se boli , or ant me sharmate hue ,

"hmm , toh yeh bat hai , kavita or sital dedi kaha hain..."

"ravi , voh , toh videsh chali gai hain , agle mahine ayegi..." sonal pyar se ravi ke seene par unglyian phirate hue boli ,

"chalo mere sath , muze tumse kisi ko milvana hai , tain ki tume ehsas ho ke me 3 saal deri se kyu aya..." ravi , sonal ke hontho ko chum , use apne sath bahar lata hua bola ,

bahar ghar ke hall me komal , fari , rukmani chachi or suman chachi , charo bethi hui batian kar rehi thi ,

suman chachi or rukmani chachi , ravi or sonal ko ek sath ate dekh behad khush ho gai ,

"dedi dono ki jodi kitni achi lag rehi hai..." suman muskrate hue rukmani se boli ,

"han , kisi ka nazar na lag jaye dono ko..." rukmani chachi haste hue boli ,

"lyo fari ji , apki khuwasih pori ho gai , apki mumma number 10 a rehi hai , hash abh enko bhi mumma bolna sikh lo , lekin item mast hai..." fari apne mathe par hath mar , man hi man sochte hue boli ,

"ehh tonal a dyi , tonal a dyi.." komal khushi me muskrate hue boli , or sonal ke pas ate hi uske gale lag gai ,

"meri komal janu , kaisi ho app..." sonal , komal ka matha chumte hue boli ,

"tein thith tu zizi.." komal tutla kar boli , toh sonal chonk gai , phir use mehsus ho gya , akhir ravi etna late kyu hua tha ,

"ale yeh pyari si bachi kiski hai..." sonal , komal se milne ke bad fari ke pas jaker ghutno ke bal bethte hue boli ,

"apka hi maal hu nayi mumma..." fari man hi man sochte hue muskrati hui boli ,

"teh dhyia ti deti ea , fali..." komal behad khush hote hue boli ,

"haye sonal mumma..." fari , sonal ka gaal chum kar boli , toh sonal buri trah sharma gai ,

"sonal tum betho me chaye lati hu tumare liye..." rukmani chachi etna bol jane lagi , tabhi komal boli ,

"thathi , mude di teni taye galam galam ol totode di thane , daldi taoo..." komal muskrate hue boli ,

phir sab aise hi batian karte rehe , or wakht gujarta gya , phir sabne chaye or pakode khaye , sare pakode komal ne thus liye , dusro ka toh bus nam hi hua ,

sham ka wakht hua , tab ravi ne jane ki ijajat mangi , sonal es bat se behad udas ho gai , phir ravi ne use pyar se samazya ke , agle 7 din bad voh usse sagai karega , jise sun sonal khushi se chehk uthi , yeh bat ravi ne suman chachi ke samne boli , or unko special bola , ke kavita or sital dedi ko vapis bula lo , or agle 7 din bad ki koi bhi date pandit ji se nikalva lo ,

phir ravi ne sonal se uska mobile number liya , or kuch der usse pyar kiya , phir ravi ne sabse vida li , or karib 2 ghante bad sab ghar vapis a gye....


sham ke 4 baje....


"lyo bhi bacha log , ghar a gyaa , ahhuushh..." ravi ubashi lete hue bola ,

"ohh hu , fali ghal a dya , talo taye tete galam galam..." komal gadi se utar ghar ke ander bhagte hue boli ,

"haash , papa mumma kuch jayda bimar nai.." fari thoda udas hoker boli ,

"mera bacha , tumare sath kitna khel rehi voh , or ghabrao mat , komal mumma jalad hi thik ho jayegi , jao khelo uske sath..." ravi muskrate hue fari ke gaal chum kar bola ,

"komal mumma ruko..." fari gadi se utar etna bol ghar ke ander bhag gai...

ravi ne gadi rehan ke ghar park ki , or kuch der rehan , or dr.nelam se batian kar , vapis ghar a gya , dr.nelam behad khush ho gai ravi se milkar...

ravi ke jane ke bad , seema ne kat ko chod baki sabko , komal ki es halat ki asli vajah bata di , tain ki koi use ajeeb na samaze ,

seema ne ik maa hone ke nate , sabko chetavni di , ke komal ik bachi hai , us par koi gussa nai karega , chache voh kitna bhi tang kyu na kare ,

"theema mummu , theema mummu..." komal chilate hue ghar me ghusi , tab seema kitchen me khana banane ki tyari kar rehi thi , voh komal ki awaz sun ik dam se bahar a gai ,

"are meri beti a gai..." seema muskrate hue apni bahe phaila kar boli ,

"mummu..." komal bhag kar seema ke gale lag gaii..

"mummu tein ta dayi , tene (mane) taha totode di taye , thamothe di taye , ol taye di ti galam galam..." komal , seema ka chehra chumte hue behad khushi me boli ,

"meli bachii , abhi or chaye nai peni , me doodu deti hu garam karke , thik hai umma.." seema muskra kar komal ka matha chumte hue boli ,

tab tak fari bhi unke pas a gai ,

"mummu to tilas toodu galam galam kalo , meli fali bi toodu peydi , tein na fali.." komal , fari ki traf dekh muskrate hue boli ,

"meri bachi fari , umma.." seema , fari ko god me utha uska chehra chumte hue boli ,

"mummu , apti to to (do) tetiyan..." komal bhi seema ke gale lagte hue boli ,

"acha tum dono khelo me , tab tak doodh garam karti hu , thik hai..." seema kitchen ke ander jate hue boli ,

"ehh fali tal , lala ol thuteza te path talte , tal tal taldi..." komal , fari ka hath pakad use khichte hue lara or Eliza ke room me le gai ,

kuch wakht bad ravi bhi ghar a gya , ravi ate hi pehle khushi ke pas chala gya , usne darvaja khatkata diya ,

"kon hai..." khushi ander se chila kar boli ,

"me bevkuf , ohh mera matlab ravii..." ravi apna matha peet kar bola ,

kuch hi palu me khushi ne darvaja khola , voh thoda nashe me lag rehi thi , usne adh khuli akhon se ravi ko dekha , or ravi ko ander kar darvaja band kar liya....

vahi dusri traf...

Anu kal se bed par leti hui thi , uski halat abh thik thi , varna ravi ne uski halat buri kar di thi , jo bhi ho , anu ko apna pyar mil gya tha , ajj usne rest karne ka socha tha , usne kal plan kiya tha , ravi se milne ka or use ik acha sa mobile gift karne ka ,

rehman ulla ki mout ki khabar anu ko bhi pata chal gai thi , lekin abhi voh kam par nai ja sakti thi , usne 3 din ki chuti le thi , uske bad hi voh es case par dyan dene wali thi...


vahi dusri traf...

"tum ravi se milne gai thi rekha..." yeh joker tha jo behad gusse me tha ,

"gai thi me ravi se milne , ho gai galti mere se , layega voh mahashakti abh , kiya hai vada usne..." rekha nazarian zuka kar boli ,

"aisa kya vada kiya usne , jo tumari bat man voh us mahashakti ko lane ke liye man gya..."

"nai pata , man gya voh meri bat , janti hu etna bus..." rekha ne fari ki bat chupate hue bola ,

"tum gadari kar rehi ho , ahahaha , joker se gadari , thodi si saza toh milegi tume..." joker ne etna bol , apne hath se bijli ki kirane chodi , jo rekha ke jism par padhte hi , rekha dard se chekhne lagi , par usne yeh nai bataya , ke fari uski beti hai , or yahi bat voh ravi ko batane gai thi ,

joker ne rekha ko bijli ki janjero me jakad diya , rekha ko beintha dard ho reha tha , par apni mamta ki shakti se , usne apna moh na khola , chahe pori rat , voh bijli ke jatke sehti rehi....



to be counited.....

nice update...... ravi or sonal ka milan ho geya hai....or sagai ka bhi date ho geya hai.....khushi or ravi ke bich ab kya hone wala hai dekhte hai......or anu rehman ullah ka case kaise handle karti hai dekhte hai....or rekha kitna dard sehte hai dekhte hai or joker kitna dard deta hai....
..waiting for next update

 

[Rahul]

Badhiya update sonali ko uska pyar mil gaya.fari ko nayi mom mil gayi..seema ne sabko samjha diya kya karna hai ghar me..rekha ko jokar takleef de raha hai