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Prince Charlee

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Nice update. To Ravi ne locket ki shakti Baby ko de di hai aur khud ab sirf ek Vampire rah gaya hai jab ke us ke dushman us se bohat zayada taqatwar hai.
Komal abhi wapis nahi ana chahti is ka kya reason hai?
Kaal ne mandir ke pujari se milne ke liye kaha hai shayad udar se kuch raaz pata chal jaye.
Komal ne Ravi ko khud hi Rekha ke sath kya huwa hai uska pata lagane ka kaha hai jab ke Rekha maar chuki hai to ab us ka past janne se kya ho ga?
Aur sab se badh kar ab yah kon aya hai Seema ya Suhana bhai phir se kis mod pe aa ke update ka end kiya hai ab to agli update ka shidat se intzar hai.
 

killar_back

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Bhai
Bahut hi shandaar.....
Ek ke baad Ek suspens....
Ek mystery solve hoti hai to dusri create ho jaati hai
Waah bhai....
Aap ki writing skill ki jitni tareef karoo... kam hai
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Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandar lr jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjaar


update-25

ABH AGGE...

Kunal ke admi ravi ko gher kar khade hue the , lekin ravi ki nazar bus kunal par thi , komal ka khubsurat masom chehra , ravi ki akhon ke samne ghum reha tha ,

uski dilkash muskan , uski neli neli akhen , uske gulabi naram honth , or ika ik uska dard me duba chehra dikhai diya , voh beintha ro rehi thi , ravi ka gussa or bhi badh gya ,

ik admi ne ravi ke chehre par punch marna chaha , par ravi ne uska hath raste me hi kalai se pakad liya ,

"ahhhhhhh..." ik tez chekh ke sath ravi ne apne dusre hath ka ulta thapad us admi ke moh par jad diya , thapad padte hi voh admi ik traf gir gya , uska nichla honth fat chuka tha ,

ravi ne dusre admi ke pet me ik latt jad di , voh dard se kahrahta piche ki traf ho gya ,

tab tak ravi ne baki bache do admyion par attack kar diya , ravi ne ik admi ko uske gale se pakad uper utha diya , uske pair hawa me jooll rehe the ,

ravi ne use dono hathion se uthaye hi piche dhakelte hue diwar ke sath mar diya , jaise hi voh admi niche gira , ravi ne uske moh par mukko ki barsat kar di ,

us admi ka chehra , uske gaal , tabadtod padhte mukko se fat chuke the ,

"khaaddaakkkk..." ik tez awaz ayi , jo ik admi bacha tha , usne tute hue table ki ik moti lakadi ravi ki pith par jor se mar di , voh lakadi jo pehle table ko sahara diye hue thi , abhi ravi ki pith se takra tut chuki thi ,

ravi es war se ik traf gir gya , jab us admi ne bachi hui lakadi ka war ravi ke chehre par karna chaha , ravi ne uska hath raste me hi rok liya ,

ravi uska hath pakade hue khada hua , khoon se sana ravi ka chehra , voh behad daravna partit ho reha tha ,

"aannnnnhhh.." ravi ne gusse se chilate hue ik jordar mukka us admi ke moh par jad diya , ravi ka punch uske danto or nak ke bechu bech padha tha ,

"ahhhhhh..." ik dard bhari awaz ke sath voh admi niche gir gya , uske dant or nak ki haddi tut chuki thi ,

do admi abhi bhi bache hue the ,

ravi bhag kar unke pas pahuncha, or unme se ik admi ke pet me bhagte hue jordar ghutna jad diya , jab voh thoda niche zuka , ravi ne ik jordar ghutne ka war uske moh par kar diya , uske moh se khoon ki patli dhar nikal padhi ,

ravi abhi us admi ko mar kar hata hi tha , ke kisi ne use piche se bahu me jakad liya , uski pakad behad tight thi , yeh or koi nai kunal tha ,

"ahhhhhhh saleee annnnhhhh.." kunal gusse se chekhta ravi ki kamar ko apni bahu ne kasta chala reha tha ,

ravi ko behad dard ho reha tha , jab kunal , ravi ko apni bahu me jakadta chala ja reha tha ,

tabhi ravi ne apni kohni ka jabardast war kunal ke chehre par kar diya , lekin kunal ne apni pakad dheli na ki ,

kunal ne ravi ko kamar se jakade uper utha liya , or ghuma kar use diwar ke sath mar diya , ravi ke kande diwar ke sath ja takraye ,

"ahhhhh..." ravi ko thoda dard hua , phir ravi ne apni kohni ke kai war kunal ke moh par kiye ,

kunal ke hontho se khoon behne laga , uski pakad jab dheli hone lagi ,

"ahhhhhhh ..." kunal ne jor se chekhte hue ravi ko kamar use uthaye hi pet ke bal jamen par gira diya ,

kunal , ravi ki pith par dono traf ghutne kar beth , ravi ki gardan , uske saar par mukke jadne laga ,

"sale , mar dunga tuze , teri pori family ko , ahhhhh kisi ko nai choduga..." kunal gusse me chekhta , ravi ko marta gya ,

"aaaasssshhhhh..." ravi ne apne hathion ko jamen par tikaye uper ki traf uth gya , or ik dam se ghum gya , jis karan kunal farsh par gir gya ,

ravi ladkhadate hue khada hua , kunal bhi uth chuka tha , dono ki halat buri thi ,

kunal ne agge badh ravi ke chehre par ik mukka jad diya , ravi ne bhi ik jordar mukka kunal ke chehre par jad diya ,

"aahhhhh..." phir dono gusse me ik dusre ke chehre par mukke jadne lage , pata nai kitne punch dono ne ik dusre ko mare honge ,

dono hafne lage the , dono ke chehre khoon se lathpath ho chuke the or lal rang me nahaye hue the ,

abh ki bar jab kunal ne ravi ke chehre par punch mara , ravi niche zuk gya , "aaaayaaaa..." ravi ne jor se chekhte hue do tin mukke kunal ke pet me jad diye , kunal piche ki traf girta hua , ghutno ke bal beth gya ,

tabhi ravi ladkhadate khade hua , uska badan abh uska sath nai de reha tha , par dil me jo gussa tha , voh use haar nai manne de reha tha ,

" tera akhri wakht a gya haramjade..." ravi ne etna bola or thoda piche hat , tezi se bhagte hue , apne ghutne ka jordar war kunal ke chehre par kar diya ,

kunal dard se kahrahta hua piche ki traf gir gya , ravi bhi apne ghutno par dono hath rakhe zuka hua hafne laga , uska pora badan dard se chur chur ho reha tha ,

abhi ravi sidha khada hi hua tha , ik "khaadakkkkk ..." ki awaz gunj gai , kunal ke ik admi ne ik kanch ki bottle , jisme dawai bhari hui thi , piche se ravi ke sar par fod di ,

ravi ik traf gir gya , us admi ne kunal ko sahara deker khada kiya , or use vaha se lejane laga ,

ravi ne adh khuli akhon se kunal ko jate dekha , toh ravi apni bachi khuchi himet juta khada hua or dard se kahrahta hue unke piche chalne laga ,

"annhhhh anhhhhh.." ravi dard se hafta hua kahrah reha tha , usne dekha , voh admi sedyion se kunal ko niche le ja reha tha ,

abhi un dono ne sedyion par pair hi rakha tha ,

"ahhhhh..." ravi gusse se chekhta hua bhaga , or dono ko piche se dhaka deta , unke sath hi gir gya ,

tino sedyion par girte hi , niche ki traf anne lage , yaha sedyion ka turn padhta tha , us diwar ke sath tino takra gye ,

tino haf rehe the , kunal ka admi jiska saar diwar se takra gya , voh vahi behosh ho gya , abh ravi or kunal hi dard bhari sanse le rehe the ,

"aaammm aaahmmm.." ravi ne dard se hafte hue , apne app ko ghutno ke bal khada kiya , kunal bhi ghutno ke bal betha hua tha ,

ravi ne vaise bethe bethe hi ik jordar mukka kunal ke moh par jad diya ,

"ahhhhnnn etni jaldi nai ummmhhh jane dunga sale .." ravi ne etna bol hafte hue ik or mukka kunal ke gaalo par jad diya ,

kunal ne besudh halat me ravi ko dekha , or use dono hathion se dhaka deker piche gira diya ,

kunal diwar ka sahara leker apni tangu par khada hua , or sedyian utar niche jane laga ,

"kunaalllll.." ravi ne jor se chekhte hue apne kande ka war kunal ke pet me kar diya (spear) , kande ka war or ravi ki speed se , kunal sedyion se udta hua last sedyion par ja gira ,

"ahhhhhhhhhhhh shhhhhh..." kunal ki pith jor se last wali sedyion par ja lagi , ravi ka hath kunal ki pith ke niche tha , ravi ko bhi behad dard hua ,

un dono ko ladte dekh abh vaha kai log jama ho gye the , tab tak baby bhi unke pas pahunch gai thi ,

"raviii , ravii.." baby jor se chekhti hui ravi ke pas pahunch gai , or use sahara deker khada karne lagi , ravi ke hath ki kalai par behad chot ayi thi ,

kunal toh dard se besudh ho chuka tha , tabhi jo do gards khushi ke room ke agge pehra de rehe , voh bhi a gye ,

un dono ne kunal ko apne kandu ka sahra deker khada kiya , or use vaha se lejane lage ,

" ahhhhh.." ravi ne baby ko ik traf dhaka diya or bhag kar piche se un tino par chalang laga di , kunal phir se niche gir gya ,

ravi uske pet par beth uske moh par tabadtod ghuse jadne laga , un dono gards ne ravi ko kandu se pakad piche gira diya ,

ik doctor ne police ko phone kar diya , baby ne use police ko phone lagate sun liya tha ,

ravi ladkhadata khada hua , or un dono gards ko marne laga ,

ik gard ne ravi ko marna chaha , par ravi ne uska hath pakad , apne kande se niche jatak diya , hath ki haddi kalai se tut gai , voh dard se tadafta hua ik traf gir gya ,

abhi ravi us gard ko mar palta hi tha , ik jordar punch ravi ke chehre par a laga ,

tabhi baby ne bhagte hue ik flying kick uske chehre par jad di , or ik karate ka jordar war us gard ki gardan par kar diya ,

"ahhhhh.." tez dard se chekhta voh gard farsh par gir gya , kunal besudh halat me khada hua or apne pairo ko ghaseta hua hospital ke bahar jane laga ,

tab tak baby ne ravi ko phir se sahara deker khada kar liya tha ,

"ravi , ruko , tum bahut jakhmi ho , ruk jao.." baby , ravi ko rokne ki kossih karti boli , kyu ki ravi behad jakhmi tha , uska chehra dono traf se pora chilla hua tha , saar par bhi chote lagi thi , or khoon beh rehe the , dhaya hath bhi kalai se chila hua tha ,

lekin ravi abh bhi kunal ke piche ja reha tha , voh ik toh sharab ke nashe me tha , uper se hafta hua , dhere dhere kunal ke piche ja reha tha ,

baby har nakam kossih kar rehi thi , par ravi bar bar use dhaka deker door kar reha tha ,

hospital se bahar akar ravi ne dekha , kunal gadi me beth chuka tha , or usne gadi start bhi kar li thi ,

"naiii , naiii.." ravi gusse me chekhta hua apne app se bola , or tezi se langdate hue , hafte hue apni gadi ki khidki khol ander beth gya ,

kunal ne gadi hospital se bahar nikal li thi , ravi ne bhi tezi se gadi hospital se bahar nikali or kunal ki gadi ke piche laga di ,

baby ne bhag kar dekha , ravi gadi leker kunal ke piche ja chuka tha ,

baby ne hospital se bahar akar ik taxi li , or ravi or kunal ka picha karne lagi ,

kunal ne shehar se bahar nikalte hi gadi ki speed badha di , voh mirror se ravi ko dekh reha tha , jo uske piche hi a reha tha ,

dono ki gadyian pori speed se agge badh rehi thi , dono ki halat behad buri thi , khoon se lathpath dono ki akhen halki halki band ho rehi thi ,

"ajjj nai bachega tu , meri komal ko rulaya tune..." ravi man hi man gusse me bola , or gadi ki speed or badha di ,

ravi ke piche hi baby a rehi thi , voh bhagwan se dua kar rehi thi , ravi bach jaye , uski akhen nam thi ,

" ahhnnhhhh sala , apna behan ki trah jiddi hai..." kunal gusse me apne app se hi bola , usne bhi gadi ki speed badha di ,

abh dono shehar se kosu door the , pora road khali tha , vansha jungle suru ho chuka tha , kai ghumavdar mode the , lekin dono gadi ki speed kam nai kar rehe the , ik bachna chahta tha , or ik marna chahta tha ,

ika ik ravi ne gadi ki speed full kar di , or kunal ke behad karib pahunch gya , kunal ne apni gadi ko thoda dhema kiya , jaise hi ravi ki gadi uski gadi ke barabar ayi ,

"haha , yeh le.." kunal muskrate hue bola or apni gadi ik dam se ravi ki gadi se bhida di , ravi ki speed kafi thi , uski gadi road se niche utar kache raste me chalne lagi ,

ravi , kunal ki es chal par muskra diya , ravi ne gadi phir se road par chada , kunal ki gadi ko piche se thok diya , kunal apna balance khone laga ,

tabhi kunal ko samne se truck ata dikhai diya , "aja kutte , teri mout a rehi hai.." kunal ne man hi man muskrate hue bola ,

kunal ne gadi ko dhema kar diya , tain ki ravi uske barabar a sake , ika ik jab ravi , kunal ke samne aya , tab ravi ne truck ata dekha , abhi 100 metter ka fasla tha ,

ravi ne apni gadi ki speed full kar di , or kunal ko overtake kar diya , tabhi shannnnnnnhhh ki awaz karta truck unke pas se gujar gya , ravi ke overtake karte hi kunal ne gusse me gadi ke staring par hath mara ,

ravi ne kunal ki gadi se kafi agge jaker handbrake laga gadi road par ghuma di , gadi ke tyer road par ghisate chale gye , abh ravi ki gadi ka moh kunal ki gadi ki traf tha , kunal ne bhi ik dam se break laga di ,

dono ke bech bus 100 metter ka fasla tha , dono bar bar race par pair daba rehe the , gadi ke silencer se nikalta dhuaa , vaha ke mahol ko kala kar reha tha ,

"abh ya tu nai ya me nai , yeh meri jindgi komal ke nam .." ravi ne ika ik race kar gadi kunal ki traf doada di ,

"yeh sab teri kutiya behan ke liye.." kunal ne gusse me bola , or usne bhi gadi ki speed badha di , dono traf se tez raftar thi , shhaayiaannn ki awaz ke sath tez raftar gadyian road par bhikre patto ko uddati hui ik dusre ki traf badh rehi thi ,

jab dono apas me takrane wale the , tabhi kunal ne dar kar , gadi ka staring pora ik traf mod diya , ravi ne aisa kuch nai kiya , ravi ki gadi kunal ki gadi ke pichle hisse par ja lagi , bahut kam takar hui thi ,

ravi ki gadi ik traf kunal ki gadi se lagte hi , road par palat gai , or gol gol ghumti hui , kafi door jaker gir gai , gadi ki halat , kabadkhane me padhi gadi jaisi ho gai thi , gadi tut kar chakna churr ho chuki thi ,

vahi jab kunal ki gadi se ravi ki gadi thodi si takrai toh kunal apna balance kho betha , uski gadi road se niche utarti hui , jungle me pedhu se takrati hui , niche jungle me gir gai , kyu ki road ke ik traf dhalan thi , jungle gehra tha , or phir kuch hi palu bad ik tez dhamake ke sath kunal ki gadi jal kar rakh ho gai ,

ravi bhi buri trah jakhmi ho chuka tha , uski akhen bhi band hoti ja rehi thi , ravi ki gadi se patrol beh reha tha , lekin ravi se hila bhi nai ja reha tha , gadi ke agle hisse me agg lag chuki thi ,

tabhi uski kismat achi thi , baby vaha pahunch gai ,

"raviiiiii..." baby jor se chekhi or bhag kar ravi ke pas pahunch gai , ravi ka pora sharir jagah jagah se chill chuka tha , uski tange , hath sab chill chuke the ,

baby ne ravi ki seat belt nikal use bahar ki traf khich liya , or gadi se kafi door khich kar le gai , tabhi jordar dhamake ke sath ravi ki gadi blast ho gai ,

baby jo ravi ko khich rehi thi , gadi me dhamaka hote hi , road par piche ki traf gir gai , ravi behosh ho chuka tha ,

baby ne us taxi driver ki madad se ravi ko taxi me dala or taxi vapis hospital ki traf doada di , baby ki akhon se asnu beh rehe the ,

ring ne abh tak ravi ko vampire nai banne diya tha , ravi abhi bhi insan tha , or ring shyad ravi ko mout ki nend sulana chahti thi ,

kuch bhi ho , ravi ne komal ka badla le liya tha , usne apne sabse bade dushman ko ajj mout ki nend sula diya tha , lekin uski jindgi abh khatre me thi ,

hospital kafi door tha , or uski sanse abh dhemi dhemi chal rehi thi , kya yeh ravi ka ant tha , yah ring us par meharban ho jati ,

"babu hosh me ayo , ham hospital pahunchne wale hai , pls , hosh me rehna , babu..." baby rote hue ravi ke chehre ko hilati ja rehi thi , par ravi ki akhen band ho chuki thi , khoon bahut beh chuka tha , uski sanso ki door abh tut rehi thi , agar ravi ring ko pehne mar gya toh shyad sach me uski mout ho jati , kya likha tha wakht me , komal ka pyar ya ravi ki mout...

baby ne apna mobile nikala or seema ko phone kar diya , kuch rings gai hongi ke seema ne phone pickup kar liya ,

"hlo , han baby bolo.."

"seema dedi , voh .." phir baby ne ravi or kunal ki ladai ke bare me sab kuch bata diya , seema ki akhon se asnu behne lage , lekin usne himet nai hari , voh baby se boli ,

"baby yeh bat ham dono ke bech rehe , me uski behano ko or dard me nai dekh sakti , badi mushkil se unke chehre par ik muskan loti hai , me nai chahti ke voh phir se tut kar bhikar jaye , yeh bat kisi or ko mat batana , me ati hu hospital me.." seema ne apni akhon se behte asnu saf kiye , or chehre par ik zuthi muskan liye , rema ko markit jane ka bol , hospital ki traf badh gai ,

baby abh kisi dusre hospital me pahunch chuki thi , kyu ki agar voh usi hospital me jati toh police ravi ko pakad leti , jab voh thik ho jata toh , par baby yeh nai chahti thi ,

jaise hi hospital me ravi ka elaaz suru hua , jo doctor ravi ka elaaz karne ayi , voh ravi ko dekh ander tak kamp gai , uski akhon me asnu beh nikale , kon thi voh , jo ravi ko pehle se janti thi , kya rishta tha , uska ravi ke sath ,

baby ne seema ko hospital ka address bata diya , voh icu room ke bahar bethi ro rehi thi , or ander ravi apni mout se jung lad reha tha ,

abhi 15 mint hi hue the , ravi ko icu me dale hue , tabhi ik aurat baby ke pas ayi or boli ,

"m sorry , ham use nai bacha sake..." yeh bol voh doctor rone lagi , baby toh shocked ho gai , na toh voh ro pa rehi thi , or na kuch soch pa rehi thi ,

tabhi seema bhi vaha pahunch gai , voh baby ke pas akar use kandu se pakad jijdote hue use ravi ke bare me puchne lagi , par baby pathar si ho gai thi ,

"baby bolo kya hua ravi ko , bolo na.." seema ne rote hue pucha , jab baby kuch na boli toh seema ne do tin thapad baby ko jad diye ,

baby jor jor se rote hue seema ke gale lag gai , " dedi ravi hame chod kar chala gya..." baby ki akhon se beintha asnu beh rehe the , seema vahi baby ke sath beth gai , uski akhon se asnu beh rehe the ,

ravi ka mar jana , jaise uski jindgi ka ant ho chuka tha , ring jeet chuki thi , or komal ka pyar haar chuka tha ....




to be counited....




 
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Abh Agge...

kaal , ravi or baki sab ko leker apni haweli me pahunch gya , voh behad chinta me tha , jis bat ka use dar tha , abh vahi ho reha tha ,

voh chahta toh tabhi ravi ko rok deta , jab pehli bar voh seema se mila tha , par voh aisa kar na saka , akhir voh ik vampire tha , tab kaise voh ravi ke samne jata , or na hi voh kabhi seema ki sachai ravi ko bata paya ,

sab dard se karah rehe the , par ravi abh bhi baby ka saar apni god me liye betha hua tha , uski akhen nam thi , voh uski jindgi thi , uska pyar , akhir thi toh voh juhi hi , jisne use ik nayi jindgi di thi , or ajj wakht a chuka tha , juhi ko nayi jindgi dene ka , lekin kaise ,

kya use vampire bana diya jata , nai , ravi use en andhero ki jindgi nai dena chahta tha , voh koi or rasta soch reha tha ,

"pita ji , baby ko jinda karne ka koi rasta toh hoga..." ravi ne baby ke mathe ko chum kar bola ,

kaal kuch der ravi ke man ki halat ko mehsus karta reha , phir voh behad shant awaz me bola ,

"jante ho ravi , yeh jung hamari nai , na hi baby ki , na tumari kisi behan ki , yeh jung tumari hai , jo pyar tume pichle janam me na mil saka , tumne apni jaan dedi , tumari premika ne bhi , or tumari dushman kaid ho gai , abh tume ladna hai , suhana se , joker se , sabse , agar tum apni komal ko pana chahte ho , toh tume akhri sans tak ladna hoga..." kaal ne ravi ke karib ate hue bola ,

"pita ji , eska anjam kya hoga , kitne parinam nikale hai es ladai me , kitni bar jeet sakta hu me..." ravi ne ghambir hoker bola ,

"parinam toh lakho nikalte hain , par jeet ik bar hogi , mane kaha tha tumse , abh ring hi tey karegi ke tume komal ka pyar milega ya nai..." kaal ne pichli bat ravi ko yad dilate hue bola ,

"kya me ruhi ka bhai tha , pichle janam me..." ravi ne baby ke baal sehlate hue bola , jo uski god me saar rakhe mari padhi thi ,

"me kuch nai janta , or agar janta bhi hota , toh tume bata na pata , han , etna bata sakta hu , jindgi me kabhi kabhi , kisi ladai ka koi parinam nai nikalta , kai bar ant kuch aisa hota hai , jo hamne kabhi socha na ho..." kaal ne ik paheli se buzate hue bola ,

"ohh , pita ji , muze meri juhi vapis chahyie , me eske bina jee nai pauga , yeh meri jindgi ka eham hissa hai , koi toh rasta hoga..." ravi ne thoda dard me bola ,

"ravi , tum akhen band karo , komal ko yad karo , vahi tume koi rasta dikha sakti hai..."kaal etna bol khamosh ho gya ,

ravi ne akhen band ki , use kuch na dikha , bar bar kossih karne par bhi , uska dyan ik jagah kaindret nai ho reha tha , baby ki halat use kamzor kar rehi thi ,

"nai ho reha , mera dhyan batak reha hai , kya karu..." ravi ne man hi man khud ko khoste hue bola ,

ravi ne phir se kossih ki , par baby ka masom chehra , uski muskan , or phir ika ik , juhi ka chehra , uski akhon ke samne a gya , voh kitni pyari lag rehi thi , muskrate hue , or phir nisha , jo use ulti sidhi batian sikhati thi , tain ki voh juhi ko preshan kar sake ,

nisha ik dost nai thi , voh dosti se kafi uper uth chuki thi , apna sab kuch juhi ko sonp diya , apni dolt , apni jindgi , uff , aisa dost shyad hi kisi ko mila ho kabhi ,

"me juhi ko vapis layuga , jarur layuga..." ravi ne gusse me man hi man bola , or phir se akhen band kar li , es bar uska man vishwas se bhara hua tha , or jab man me vishwas bhara ho , tab dunia ka koi kam kathin nai lagta ,

"komallll , kahaa hoo , plss batt karoo muzseee..." ravi ne akhen band kiye man hi man bola , uske pyar me ik takat thi , uski awaz me ik dard tha , or komal apne bhai ko dard me kaise dekh leti ,

usne pal bhar me yeh mehsus kar liya , vaise bhi voh sab jaan chuki thi , suhana vapis a chuki thi , usne sab dekh or sun liya tha , ik ik bat voh sun chuki thi ,

"komalll , plss batt karoo muzse.." ravi ne thoda dard bhari awaz or nam akhon se bola , toh komal ki atma bhi tadaf uthi ,

"bhyiaaaa .." komal ne apni pori shakti ko ikjut kar , apne bhai se man hi man bat karte hue bola ,

"komalll , meri jaan , komall , voh ring suhana haiii , or rekha dediii ..." ravi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"bhyiaaa , mane sab dekh liya haii , rekha dedi ke sath bahut bura hua haii , yeh apko pata lagana haiii , or voh ring meri behan suhana haiii ..." komal ne bhi dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"komall , tume sab pata haiii , tum bata doo , rekha dedii ke sath kya hua hai..." ravi ne phir se dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"naii bhyiaa , yeh sab apke karan hua haii , apne ghar choda tha , rekha dedi apse pyar karti thiii , apne unke sath sex kiya tha , apko ik bat shyad pata nai..." komal abhi bata hi rehi thi ke ravi ne bech me puch liya ,

"kyaaa pata naiii..."

komal par agg abh apna pora parbhav dal rehi thi , uske badan ke har hisse ko jala kar use dard de rehi thi ,

"aaaaahhh , bhyiaaa , rekha dedi , apse beintha pyar karti thi , unki jindgi me kya hua , yeh apko hi janna haii , or bhyiaaa , seemaaa , ahhhsshhh , unka bhi pata lagaoo..." komal behad dard me siskate hue boli ,

"me pata lagauga seema kaha haii , komal , muze baby ko jinda karna haiii.."

"naii bhyiaa , jo hua use bhul jaoo..."

"komal , kaisi batian kar rehi ho , baby ko bhul jao , jisne muze nayi jindgi di , har kadam par mere sath chali , nai , me etna khudgaraj nai hu , me , me , use jinda karuga , kat , han , uska kya hoga , mar jayegi voh , pls , koi rasta hai , toh bataoo , pls , me baby ke bina nai jee sakta , pls..." ravi ne behad nam akhon se ghambir hoker bola ,

"bhyiaaa , pls rona band karoo , acha , me batati hu , app locket ki shakti se baby ko jinda kar sakte ho , par phir locket ki pori takat khatam ho jayegi , app bus ik aam vampire bankar reh jaugee , app apne dushmano se lad nai pauge..." komal ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"manzor hai muze , apni mout se dar kar , me baby ko marne du , nai , nai , agar meri takder me unke hatho marna likha hai , toh koi muze bacha nai sakta , or agar jeetna likha hai , toh koi mar nai sakta , me baby ko jinda karuga , meri takat ensab ke pyar me hai ..." ravi ne man hi man komal se bola or phir ika ik uska dhyan batak gya , abh komal ki awaz use sunai nai de rehi thi ,

phir ravi ne apne gale se locket utara or baby ko jamen par sidha leta , locket uske seene par rakh diya ,

phir ravi ne akhen band ki or locket ki pori takat jagrit karne laga , dhere dhere uske badan se lal roshni nikalne lagi , voh roshni locket me samane lagi , jab pori shakti locket me sama gai , tab ravi ne akhen khol li ,

"kashh ke meri baby phir se jinda ho jati , kisi bhi kemat par..." ravi ne locket par apna hath rakhte hue bola ,

tabhi locket se tez roshni nikalne lagi , phir ik jordar dhamka hua , pori haweli me safad roshni phail gai , charo traf bus roshni hi roshni thi ,

kuch bhi dikhai nai de reha tha , kaal , kaya , maya or shaya , us tez roshni me udd kar haweli ki dewaro se ja takraye , ravi bhi akhon par hath rakhe , piche ko gir gya ,

kuch der bad , voh roshni baby ke jism me sama gai , ravi dhere dhere akhen masalta hua uth kar beth gya , usne baby ka saar vapis apni god me rakh liya , or uske baalo ko sehlane laga ,

"raviii , yeh tumne kya kar diya , locket ki takat baby ko dedi , use jinda karna etna jaruri nai tha , ham use vampire bana dete..." kaal ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ahhh , yahi ik rasta thaa , ufff , shhh , me baby ko vampire nai banana chahta , voh insan hi rehegi..." ravi ne dard se kahrahte hue bola ,

"lekin yeh bhagwan ke banaye nizmo ke khilaf hai , tumne hamari akhri umeed us locket ko bhi tabah kar diya ..." kaal ne thoda nirash hoker bola ,

"parr , pitaa jii , komal ne hi yeh rasta muze dikhaya tha..."

"par raviii , es locket ke bina tum suhana or joker ka mukabla nai kar pauge , or es locket ke bina komal bhi vapis nai a payegi..." maya ne thoda gusse me bola ,

"par maya , komal , ohhh , matlab komal nai chahti , ke me use vapis leker ayu , par kyu , akhir ik na ik din , komal ko suhana ka samna karna hi hoga..." ravi ne thoda chinta me bola ,

"ravii , abhi wakht nai aya , jab wakht ayega , tume khud ba khud pata chal jayega , yeh ladai behad byank hogi , yeh ladai , burai or sachai ki nai , nafrat or pyar ki hai , suhana ko mara nai ja sakta , use kaise roka ja sakta hai , yeh tume pata karna hai , esi liye komal ne tumare hatho us locket ko nashat karva diya..." kaal ne ravi ko samaza diya ,

"eska matlab , muze mera pichla janam yad karna hoga , lekin kaise , pita jii , koi rasta toh hoga..." ravi ne kuch na samaz pate hue bola ,

"hai ik rasta , komal ki voh kitab , jante ho , har voh rahasmayi cheez , jiska komal istemal karti thi , voh har cheez ruhi ki hai , abh tume yeh pata karna hai , us akhri ladai me , tumne or ruhi ne kaise , suhana ko prazit karke , us ring me kaid kiya tha..." kaal ne ik umeed ki kiran sabke man me jagate hue bola ,

"es bar me apna pyar marne nai dunga , pichli bar , suhana har kar bhi hamse jeet gai , lekin es bar , me or meri komal , ham dono milkar , suhana ko khatam kar denge..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ravii , tume jaladbazi nai karni hai , pehle seema ko dundo , voh kaha hai , uske bad hi tum suhana ke bare me socho , tumare kai swalo ke jawab , seema tak pahunchne par tume mil jayege..." kaal abhi bol hi reha tha ke baby ke badan me thodi halchal hui ,

ravi bhi baby ke khubsurat masom chehre ko niharne laga , pehle baby ke naram hath ki patli unglyian kampne lagi , phir dhere dhere uski sanse chalne lagi ,

"babyyy , meri jaannnn..." ravi ne zuk kar baby ke mathe ko chumte hue bola ,

"ahhhh , sssssiiiiii ..." baby ne dhere dhere dard bhari siskyian lete apni akhen kholi , sabse pehle use ravi ka chehra hi dikhai diya ,

"r...rr...raviiiii..." baby behad dheme se haklate hue boli ,

"han , meri jaan , ummaa , shukar hai , tum thik ho , me behad dar gya tha..." ravi ne baby ke gulabi hontho ko chumte hue bola ,

phir baby dhere dhere uth kar beth gai , uthte hi usne kaal or baki sabko dekha , toh usne darkar apna chehra ravi ke seene me chupa liya ,

"daro mat janu , yeh mera pariwar hai , mere apne , or tumare bhi..." ravi pyar se baby ke baalo ko sehla kar bola ,

baby ne ravi ke seene me chehra chupaye hi thodi si akh khol sabko dekha , voh behad masom or pyari lag rehi thi ,

"raviii , eska khyal rakhna , locket ne ese jinda toh kar diya , par eska asar baby par kya hoga , kuch keh nai sakta , tume baby ko apni nazarion ke samne rakhna hoga..." kaal ne vaise hi bhari awaz me bola , jise sun baby ne ravi ko or bhi kas kar jakad liya ,

"jiii pitaa jii , me baby se bahut pyar karta hu , eski hifzat karuga , har pal , locket ese hamesha khush rakhega , yeh mera vada hai apse..." ravi ne baby ke baalo ko sehlate hue bola , jab ki baby apna chehra uske seene me chupaye hue bethi thi ,

"ravii betaa , tume yad hai , jail se bahar anne ke bad tum ik chote se kasbe me rehte the , vaha ik shiv mandir tha , yaha tum roz subah , sham jate the , vaha us mandir me ik puzari tha , bus , us puzari se ik bar mil lena ..." ." kaal ne tab ki bat batai , jab ravi ghar chod kar chala gya tha , or juhi muder case me jail katne ke bad , vapis ik chote se kasbe me rehta tha , tab voh mandir me us puzari baba se mila tha ,

"han , yad hai , jail katne ke bad me tut chuka tha , tab puzari meri jindgi me aya , usne muze vishwas dilavaya , ke mere apne muze mil jayege , tabhi apne shehar ate hi muze seema mil gai , dhere dhere mera pora pariwar muze mil gya , unko me kaise bhul sakta hu..." ravi ne puzari baba ko yad karte akhen nam kar bola ,

"hmm , tumne sahi kaha , abh tume usi ke pas jana hai , voh bhi jalad se jalad , voh tume yad kar rehe hain , abh jao beta..." kaal ne etna bola toh ravi or baby vaha se gyab hoker baby ke ghar pahunch gye , es bat se anjan ke uske ghar me kya ho reha hai , uski behne kaisi hain....

vahi dusri traf...

rekha abh rema ke behad karib a chuki thi , dono me behad kam fasla tha , rema ke pas hi sofe par baki tino behosh padhi hui thi ,

rema dar se thar thar kampti hui sofe par bethi rehi , ika ik rekha uske or karib ho gai , abh rekha ki vheshi sanse , rema ke moh par padh rehi thi ,

rekha ke moh se nikalte sansu ki mehak , bilkul vaisi thi , jaise koi gala sada murda jeev kahi padha ho ,

rema ki sanse jaise rukne si lagi , kyu ki rekha ke veshi chehra uske behad karib a chuka tha , rema ka pora badan sun padh chuka tha ,

abhi rekha rema ko chune hi ja rehi thi ke ghar ka main door ik dam se khul gya , or seema ghar ke ander a gai ,

rekha ne jaise hi seema ko dekha , voh uski traf badne lagi , rema dar se thar thar kampte rone lagi , kyu ki uski maa ki jaan khatre me a chuki thi....


to be counited...
bhai update to jabardast hai.....lagta hai ravi pujari baba se milne ke baad seema se mil peyegi......or seema se milne ke baad hi sab kuch jan payega....or ravi or baby keche gayab ho geyi bhai.......rema to bilkul galat samaj raha hai....kyu ki joh seema ander aaraha hai woh to seema nhi hai......toh uski jaan keche khatre me ho suckte.....or bhai rema ki power kaab active hogi..........kal ka update or dino se chota lagta hai bhai........waiting for next update
 
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Sona

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Nice update
Mujhe lga komal jldi wapas aayegi pr aaz ka update padhke lg rh abhi bohat time uske wapas aane mein
Baby Ko Ravi Ne bacha liye ab apni behno ko bchaega suhana or rekha se or asli seema ko wapas laayega
 

James Bond

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Nice update. Komal ne ek bar phir Ravi ko khud tak pohanchne se rook diya aur locket ki taqat bhi Baby ko de di ab Ravi kafi kamzoor ho gya hai apne dushmano ke mukable me. Dekhte hai Ravi Komal ki book se apne past ko jan pata hai ya nahi aur yah Ravi ke ghar me kis ne entry mari hai Seema ne ya Suhana ne. Lagta hai ya Suhana ho gi aur Reema aur uski behno ko marne ai ho gi kiun ke Suhana kisi ko bhi Ravi ke pass nahi ane dena chahti baki dekhte hai ke yah kon ai hai.
 
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Lord Prince

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Nice update aur bhai update ka size chota hota ja raha hai.
Ravi apne ghar jane ki bajae baby ke ghar ki chala gya jab ke use pata tha ke Rekha usi ke ghar hai.
Lagta hai abhi Komal ki wapsi me bohat time lagne wala hai.
Aur dusri taraf Reema shayad 2 takatwar dushmano ke bech me phansne wali hai kya Reema khud ko aur apni behno ko bacha pati hai ya nahi.
 
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