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Vipul

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Update - 28

N abbu : beta mere jane ke baad meri beti ka hath thaam lena usse nikah kar lena aur use hamesha khush rakhna nhi to wo kgud ko sambhal nhi payegi. Bohot bholi aur nadan hai meri beti noor.

Aabbb aaagggeee........

Reyansh : ye aao kya keh rahe hai ? Aisa nhi ho skta.
N abbu : kyu nhi ho skta beta kya meri beti sunder nhi ya usme koi kami hai?
Reyansh : aisi baat nhi par mai Noor ke kabil nhi hu. Noor mujhse kai guna better deserve karti hai aur na nhi mai ek acha insan hu.
N abbu : kisne kaha beta ki tum bure ho. Duniya dekhi hai inn akhon ne kisi ko bhi dekh ke bata sakta hu kon achcha hai aur kon bura aur tum to ander se bohot masum aur dare hua bachche ki tarah ho jo sirf pyar ka bhukha hai.

Jab noor ke abbu ne ye bate kahi to Reyansh unse najre churane laga kyuki unki kahi baat kahi na kahi sach thi. Wahi room ke kone me khadi noor bas asoon bahaye ja rhi thi. Ek to apni ammi ko khone ka dard upar se uske abbu ki bhi halat kafi kharab thi..

N abbu : Jawab Do Reyansh Kya tum Noor se Shaadi Karke Meri Aakhri Ichcha Puri Karoge.?


Noor ke Abbu ki Aakhiri ichcha Wali Baat sunke reyansh Soch Mein Pad Gaya Ki Ab vah Kya Karen Kyunki Mana karne ke liye Uske pass koi Badi vajah Nahin thi. Kuchh der bad Reyansh ne jawab Diya.

Reyansh : Agar aapki Yahi Aakhiri ichcha Hai To Main iska man rakhunga. Main nikah Ka Vada To Nahin kar skta per main Noor ko Khush rakhne ke liye Kuchh Bhi karunga.
N abbu : beta uski Khushi to tumhare sath hi hai aur Mujhe Tumse isi jawab ki ummid thi .

phir Noor ke Abbu ne kone me khadi noor ki taraf dekha aur ukhdi hui awaz me lambi sanse lete hue bole.
N abbu : beta noor idhar aao.

Noor ne jaise hi apne abbu ki awaj suni to wo hosh me aayi aur fir apne abbu ke paas aake rotw hue gale lag gayi.
Noor : ( hichkiya lete hue) AAAbbu maat hich.. Mat jaiye naa plzz hichh..
N abbu : ( dard me) nhi beta mai nhi ruk sakta. Agar bach bhi gaya to teri ammi be bina nhi ji paunga.

Phir N abbu ne Reyansh ki aur dekhte hue uska hath pakda aur noor ka hath uske hath me thama diya aur bole.

N abbu : ( atakte hue) aab se Nnoor tumhari jimedari hai bete Reyansh. Bolo nibaoge na meri beti ka sath bolo beta?
Reyansh : ( bina soche) hhhaan Uncle mai rakhunga Noor ka khayal.

Shayad Noor ke abbu reyansh ke muh se ye hi sunne ke liye abhi tak jinda the. Jaise hi Reyansh ne apni baat puri ki Noor ke Abbu apna sharir chod chuke the.

Beeeppp.........................

Iske sath hi reyansh chillaya
Reyansh : (lagbhag rote hue) doctor dekhiye na kya ho gya uncle kuch bol nhi rahe hai dekhina...
Noor : (rote hue ) dekhiye na doctor..... Hich kya ho gya mere abbu ko .

Itna sunte hi turant doctors bhagte hue aaye aur Noor ke abbu ko check kiya .

Doctor : sorry to say but he is no more.

Bass noor ne itna hi suna aur apne abbu se chippak ke rone lagi.
Noor : nhi... Nhi.. Aapp nhi jaa skte... Pehle ammi... Phirr aapp nhii....

Noor apne hosh kho chuki thi. Achanak wo ruki aur reyansh ki taraf mud gyi aur uske ekdam karib hoke boli.
Noor : (siskte hue) reyansh dekho na abbu uth nhi rahe mujhse baat bhi nhi kar rhe. Tum unhe bolo na wo to tumhari baat mante haina bolo na Reyansh.

Reyansh ke akhon me bhi halke aasun the par usne khudko sambhala aur noor ko samjhate hue bola.
Reyansh : (bhari mann se ) Noor ab wo hamare bich nhi rahe samajhne ki koshish karo.
Noor : nhi... Nhi... Sab jhut bolte haii nhi... Nhi....

Ye baat noor ne reyansh ke seene pe mukke marte hue kahi thi. Reyansh ne noor ko jabardasti gale laga liya aur shant karne laga par noor shant hone ki jagah phir se behosh ho gyi.
Reyansh ne noor ko durse ward ke bed pe litaya phir hospital ke reception pe aake sara bill clear kiya aur bodies ko claim kar noor ke ghar pohochane ko keh diya.
Reyansh ko uske ghar se nikle karib 7 ghante bit chuke the Itne me use ella aur ivy ka call aa gya.


-------In Call--------
Ella : kaha ho mr aur ab noor ke parents ki tabiyat kaisi hai.
Ivy : (bich me uchalte hue) aap kitni der me aaoge.
Reyansh : firstly let me speak.
Ella, ivy : hmmm.... ~
Reyansh : they are no more.
Ella, ivy : Who??
Reyansh : Noor ke parents.
Ella, ivy : sad to hear. Bechari noor.... 😢
Reyansh : aur shayad mai kuch din noor ke sath hi rahunga kyuki abhi use ek emotional support ke sakt jarurat hai.
Ella, ivy : hum bhi waha aa jaye hai.
Reyansh : nhi tum wahi raho kyuki Michael jab tak company handover nhi karta tabtak uspar nazar rakho.
Ella, ivy : okkk.... Take care & love you.... ~
Reyansh : bye 👋.

---------Call end----------
call khatam hone ke baad Reyansh us kamre ki aur bad rha tha jaha iss waqt noor thi. Reyansh ander hi ander apni himmat bator raha tha noor ka samna karne ke liye. Wo soch raha tha ki kaise noor ko sambhalega aur use aage badhne ki himmat dega. Iss sab ke sath sath reyansh noor ke abbu se kiye hue wade ke bare me bhi soch raha tha.

Reyansh (mann me) : kya kru noor ko bhi sambhalna hai aur antim sanskar ke baki kaam bhi mujhe hi dekh honge. Uper se noor ke abbu ko nikah ka wada bhi kar chuka hu par mai sach me noor ke layak nhi hu na hi wo pyaar karti hogi. Bhala ek anath se kon hi pyaar karega. Aisa karta hu noor jiske sath bhi shadi karna chahegi uske sath uski shadi karwa dunga isse uske abbu ka wada bhi reh jaye ga kyuki maine kaha tha "noor ki khushi ke liye kuch bhi karunga". Ha ye thik rhega.

Reyansh noor ke kamre me pohoch gaya jaha usne dekha noor bed pe baithi ghutno ke beech apna chehra chupaye ro rahi thi . Ye dekh ke Reyansh ko bohot dukh hua aur wo bed ke pass pohoch gaya aur noor ke kaandhe pe hath rakh dire se bola.
Reyansh : Noor..

Noor ne apna chehra upar karke reyansh ko dekha. Noor ka chehra dekh kar reyansh ka to mano dil hi dehel gaya tha pura chehra aason se bhiga hua tha ye dekh reyansh ne noor ko gale laga liya aur uski peeth sehlane laga. Noor ko bhi shayad isi ki jarurat thi aur wo bhi reyansh ke gale lag kar rote hue shikayat karne lagi.
Noor : dekho na reyansh pehele ammi mujhe chod kar chali gyi , phir abbu chale gye aur shayad ek din tum bhi mujhe chod kar....

Noor kuch aur bol pati usse pehele reyansh ne apni ungli Noor ke hotho pe rakh di.
Reyansh : sshhhh.... Aisa mat bolo noor ab to mujhe tumse bas maut hi juda kar sakti hai aur koi nhi.
Noor : ( reyansh ke muh pe hath rakhte hue ) aisa phir kabhi mat bolna. Mai pehele hi ammi abbu ko kho chuki hu ab timhe nhi kho sakti.
Reyansh : hmm.. Chalo ab ghar chalte hai abhi hume tumhare ammi abbu ko antim wida dena hai.

That's it for today..........


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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Update - 28

N abbu : beta mere jane ke baad meri beti ka hath thaam lena usse nikah kar lena aur use hamesha khush rakhna nhi to wo kgud ko sambhal nhi payegi. Bohot bholi aur nadan hai meri beti noor.

Aabbb aaagggeee........

Reyansh : ye aao kya keh rahe hai ? Aisa nhi ho skta.
N abbu : kyu nhi ho skta beta kya meri beti sunder nhi ya usme koi kami hai?
Reyansh : aisi baat nhi par mai Noor ke kabil nhi hu. Noor mujhse kai guna better deserve karti hai aur na nhi mai ek acha insan hu.
N abbu : kisne kaha beta ki tum bure ho. Duniya dekhi hai inn akhon ne kisi ko bhi dekh ke bata sakta hu kon achcha hai aur kon bura aur tum to ander se bohot masum aur dare hua bachche ki tarah ho jo sirf pyar ka bhukha hai.

Jab noor ke abbu ne ye bate kahi to Reyansh unse najre churane laga kyuki unki kahi baat kahi na kahi sach thi. Wahi room ke kone me khadi noor bas asoon bahaye ja rhi thi. Ek to apni ammi ko khone ka dard upar se uske abbu ki bhi halat kafi kharab thi..

N abbu : Jawab Do Reyansh Kya tum Noor se Shaadi Karke Meri Aakhri Ichcha Puri Karoge.?


Noor ke Abbu ki Aakhiri ichcha Wali Baat sunke reyansh Soch Mein Pad Gaya Ki Ab vah Kya Karen Kyunki Mana karne ke liye Uske pass koi Badi vajah Nahin thi. Kuchh der bad Reyansh ne jawab Diya.

Reyansh : Agar aapki Yahi Aakhiri ichcha Hai To Main iska man rakhunga. Main nikah Ka Vada To Nahin kar skta per main Noor ko Khush rakhne ke liye Kuchh Bhi karunga.
N abbu : beta uski Khushi to tumhare sath hi hai aur Mujhe Tumse isi jawab ki ummid thi .

phir Noor ke Abbu ne kone me khadi noor ki taraf dekha aur ukhdi hui awaz me lambi sanse lete hue bole.
N abbu : beta noor idhar aao.

Noor ne jaise hi apne abbu ki awaj suni to wo hosh me aayi aur fir apne abbu ke paas aake rotw hue gale lag gayi.
Noor : ( hichkiya lete hue) AAAbbu maat hich.. Mat jaiye naa plzz hichh..
N abbu : ( dard me) nhi beta mai nhi ruk sakta. Agar bach bhi gaya to teri ammi be bina nhi ji paunga.

Phir N abbu ne Reyansh ki aur dekhte hue uska hath pakda aur noor ka hath uske hath me thama diya aur bole.

N abbu : ( atakte hue) aab se Nnoor tumhari jimedari hai bete Reyansh. Bolo nibaoge na meri beti ka sath bolo beta?
Reyansh : ( bina soche) hhhaan Uncle mai rakhunga Noor ka khayal.

Shayad Noor ke abbu reyansh ke muh se ye hi sunne ke liye abhi tak jinda the. Jaise hi Reyansh ne apni baat puri ki Noor ke Abbu apna sharir chod chuke the.

Beeeppp.........................

Iske sath hi reyansh chillaya
Reyansh : (lagbhag rote hue) doctor dekhiye na kya ho gya uncle kuch bol nhi rahe hai dekhina...
Noor : (rote hue ) dekhiye na doctor..... Hich kya ho gya mere abbu ko .

Itna sunte hi turant doctors bhagte hue aaye aur Noor ke abbu ko check kiya .

Doctor : sorry to say but he is no more.

Bass noor ne itna hi suna aur apne abbu se chippak ke rone lagi.
Noor : nhi... Nhi.. Aapp nhi jaa skte... Pehle ammi... Phirr aapp nhii....

Noor apne hosh kho chuki thi. Achanak wo ruki aur reyansh ki taraf mud gyi aur uske ekdam karib hoke boli.
Noor : (siskte hue) reyansh dekho na abbu uth nhi rahe mujhse baat bhi nhi kar rhe. Tum unhe bolo na wo to tumhari baat mante haina bolo na Reyansh.

Reyansh ke akhon me bhi halke aasun the par usne khudko sambhala aur noor ko samjhate hue bola.
Reyansh : (bhari mann se ) Noor ab wo hamare bich nhi rahe samajhne ki koshish karo.
Noor : nhi... Nhi... Sab jhut bolte haii nhi... Nhi....

Ye baat noor ne reyansh ke seene pe mukke marte hue kahi thi. Reyansh ne noor ko jabardasti gale laga liya aur shant karne laga par noor shant hone ki jagah phir se behosh ho gyi.
Reyansh ne noor ko durse ward ke bed pe litaya phir hospital ke reception pe aake sara bill clear kiya aur bodies ko claim kar noor ke ghar pohochane ko keh diya.
Reyansh ko uske ghar se nikle karib 7 ghante bit chuke the Itne me use ella aur ivy ka call aa gya.


-------In Call--------
Ella : kaha ho mr aur ab noor ke parents ki tabiyat kaisi hai.
Ivy : (bich me uchalte hue) aap kitni der me aaoge.
Reyansh : firstly let me speak.
Ella, ivy : hmmm.... ~
Reyansh : they are no more.
Ella, ivy : Who??
Reyansh : Noor ke parents.
Ella, ivy : sad to hear. Bechari noor.... 😢
Reyansh : aur shayad mai kuch din noor ke sath hi rahunga kyuki abhi use ek emotional support ke sakt jarurat hai.
Ella, ivy : hum bhi waha aa jaye hai.
Reyansh : nhi tum wahi raho kyuki Michael jab tak company handover nhi karta tabtak uspar nazar rakho.
Ella, ivy : okkk.... Take care & love you.... ~
Reyansh : bye 👋.

---------Call end----------
call khatam hone ke baad Reyansh us kamre ki aur bad rha tha jaha iss waqt noor thi. Reyansh ander hi ander apni himmat bator raha tha noor ka samna karne ke liye. Wo soch raha tha ki kaise noor ko sambhalega aur use aage badhne ki himmat dega. Iss sab ke sath sath reyansh noor ke abbu se kiye hue wade ke bare me bhi soch raha tha.

Reyansh (mann me) : kya kru noor ko bhi sambhalna hai aur antim sanskar ke baki kaam bhi mujhe hi dekh honge. Uper se noor ke abbu ko nikah ka wada bhi kar chuka hu par mai sach me noor ke layak nhi hu na hi wo pyaar karti hogi. Bhala ek anath se kon hi pyaar karega. Aisa karta hu noor jiske sath bhi shadi karna chahegi uske sath uski shadi karwa dunga isse uske abbu ka wada bhi reh jaye ga kyuki maine kaha tha "noor ki khushi ke liye kuch bhi karunga". Ha ye thik rhega.

Reyansh noor ke kamre me pohoch gaya jaha usne dekha noor bed pe baithi ghutno ke beech apna chehra chupaye ro rahi thi . Ye dekh ke Reyansh ko bohot dukh hua aur wo bed ke pass pohoch gaya aur noor ke kaandhe pe hath rakh dire se bola.
Reyansh : Noor..

Noor ne apna chehra upar karke reyansh ko dekha. Noor ka chehra dekh kar reyansh ka to mano dil hi dehel gaya tha pura chehra aason se bhiga hua tha ye dekh reyansh ne noor ko gale laga liya aur uski peeth sehlane laga. Noor ko bhi shayad isi ki jarurat thi aur wo bhi reyansh ke gale lag kar rote hue shikayat karne lagi.
Noor : dekho na reyansh pehele ammi mujhe chod kar chali gyi , phir abbu chale gye aur shayad ek din tum bhi mujhe chod kar....

Noor kuch aur bol pati usse pehele reyansh ne apni ungli Noor ke hotho pe rakh di.
Reyansh : sshhhh.... Aisa mat bolo noor ab to mujhe tumse bas maut hi juda kar sakti hai aur koi nhi.
Noor : ( reyansh ke muh pe hath rakhte hue ) aisa phir kabhi mat bolna. Mai pehele hi ammi abbu ko kho chuki hu ab timhe nhi kho sakti.
Reyansh : hmm.. Chalo ab ghar chalte hai abhi hume tumhare ammi abbu ko antim wida dena hai.

That's it for today..........


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Excellent update 🤠🤠🤠
 

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Update - 29

Reyansh : hmm.. Chalo ab ghar chalte hai abhi hume tumhare ammi abbu ko antim wida dena hai.

Aabbb aaagggeee....

Noor : Reyansh ye mujhse nhi hoga..
Reyansh : tum fikr na karo mai huna...
Noor : hhmmm...

Ye bol noor ne reyansh ki baazu jor se pakad li.
Reyansh : to phir chale .
Ye bol reyansh bed se utha noor bhi uth gyi par jaise hi noor aage kadam badhane wali thi ki uske pair dagmaga gye aur wo girne wali thi lekin ain waqt par reyansh ne noor ko kamar se pakad kar use girne se bachaya aur uae khada kiya aur dat te hue bola.
Reyansh : dekha jada rone se kamjori aa jati hai aur tum ho ki abhi bhi roye ja rhi ho.
Noor : kyaa karu ammi abbu ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai.

Reyansh bhi chup ho gya kyuki wo iss bare me kuch nhi kar skta tha. Noor bhi mayus khadi thi ki reyansh ne noor ko apni bahon me le kar godh me utha liya.


Costurero-Real-Professional-Artisan-Crafter-Deviant-Art
Noor yeh dekh ke chok gyi aur hadbadate hue boli.
Noor : yeh kya kar rahe ho reyansh niche utaro mujhe sab hame hi dekh rahe hai.
Reyansh : nhi utar sakta nhi to phir se gir padogi.

Ye bol reyansh aage bad gaya hospital se bahar nikalne ke liye. Iss douran sare raste noor apna chehra reyansh ke seene me chupayi hui thi. Reyansh ne car ke pass pohochke noor ko niche utara aur driving seat ke baju wali seat pe bitha diya aur nikal pada noor ke ghar ki aur. Raste bhar noor bilkul chup thi. Thodi der me dono noor ke ghar pohoch gye car se bahar aake noor ne ek nazar ghar ko dekha aur sochne lagi.

Noor : (man me) ek din pehele tak kitna khushal hua karta tha hamra ye chota sa aashiyana .kitna masti karti thi mai ammi ke sath .iss jagah abbu ne mijhe chalna sikhaya tha par abb sab badal chuka hai... Ab apno ke naam par sirf Reyansh hai mere paas jise mai kisi kimat par khona nhi chahti.

Noor ye sab soch hi rahi thi ki reyansh ne pgur se use apni god me utha liya aur ghar ke ander aake use bed pe litaya aur sar pe hath firate samjhte hue bola.
Reyansh : Noor ab tum aram karo mai tumhare liye kuch banake lata hu.
Noor : (sapat leheje me) mujhe nhi khana hai.
Reyansh : dekho noor agar tum aise karogi aur khana nhi khaogi to bimar pad jaogi to kya tumhare ammi ko achcha lagega ki unke yaad me unki beti khana nhi kha rhi hai batao.
Noor ne ye sunke ser jhuka liya aur sirf itna boli .
Noor : thik hai.
Reyansh : tum khalo aur aram karlo. Kal subeh tak bodies postmortem ho ke aa jayegi to mai unhen mitti deni ki taiyari karwa leta hu agar tumhare koi rishtedaar hoto bata do mai unhe bula leta hu.

Phir bina kuch bole aur sune reyansh noor ke ghar ke kitchen me khana banane chala gya. Karib aadhe ghante me reyansh garma garam vegetable soup bana ke le aya aur bed pe jake noor ke bagal me baith gaya.
Reyansh : ye lo aur jaldi se ye soup pilo.

Par Noor soup Peene Mein Na nukur kar rahi thi . Jis Karan Reyansh Khud Apne Hath se Noor ko soup pilane Laga. Thodi der Mein Soup khatm Ho Gaya per Noor Kuchh Bol Nahin rahi thi Jaise use Sadma Lag Gaya Ho.
Is Tarah Noor ka Shant Rahana Reyansh ko Achcha Nahin lag raha tha per vah is situation Mein Kuchh Nahin kar sakta Kyunki usko Noor ki Ammi Abbu ko Aakhiri vidai Dene Ki Tarif karni thi aur Baki kam bhi use Hi sambhalna Tha.
Reyansh ko bhi Noor ke ammi Abbu ke Maut Ka Dukh tha lekin wo ye sab baya nhi kar raha tha. Reyansh itna gehra ladka tha ki Usko apne dard ko chipaane me maharat hashil ho chuki thi ...kam umra me jimmedari aane per aur bure halat ke chalte sab samajhdaar ho jaate hai uper se reyansh ko maa baap ka pyaar bhi nasib nhi hua jiske karan wo bachpan se tanha raha hai. Jab chot lagti to Reyansh Ghar per Aakar Rota tha lekin Kisi Ko uski Parvah Nahin thi na koi usko chup karata tha na hi Dilasa deta reyansh bus Rota aur fir Rote Rote gehri Nind mein chal Jata.

Aise hi thodi der Mein Raat Ho Gai reyansh bhi Hospital ki sari formalities nipta ke Noor ke room ki taraf badh gaya per Jab vah room mein pahuncha to Paya Noor bed ki ek Kone mein lete hue subak rahi. Jo Reyansh se na Dekha Gaya aur Reyansh ne Noor ke kareeb Jaakar Uske kandhe par hath rakha . Apne kandhe per Hath ka Ehsas Pakar Jab Noor palti to Dekha Samne Reyansh Khada tha Kuchh der tak Noor ne Reyansh ki Gehri Aankhon Mein Jhanka Jaise Kuchh dhundh rahi ho fir ekadam se Noor Aankhon Se Aansu nikalne Lage Aur vo Reyansh se Chipak gai aur Jor jor se Rone Lagi.

Noor : Reyansh mujhse wada kro tum ammi abbu ki tarah mujhe chod kar nhi jaoge wada karo reyansh.
Reyansh : (noor ke aasoon pochte hue) kya mere wada karne se tum shant ho jao gi ?
Noor : ye mai nhi janti lenkin ab iss duniya me mera tumhare alava hai hi kon.

Ye sunkar Reyansh ko noor ke abbu ko kiya hua wada yaad aa gya ki wo noor ko hamesha khush rakhega aur usne apne chehre par bohot samay baad ek badi pyaari muskan faila di jo noor bhi pehli baar dekh rahi thi. Uhi reyansh ne muskurate hue kaha.

Reyansh : agar tum yahi chahti ho aur isse khush ho to mai wada karta hu ki mai "Reyansh Rajput apni akhri saans tak tumhara sath nhi chodunga".

Noor ye sunker kuch shant hui aur reyansh ki godh me apna ser rakhe let gyi reyansh ne bhi uske bal sehlake sulane ka prayas karne laga kyuki usko pata tha ki iss waqt noor ko emotional support ki jarurat hai.
 

Jaguaar

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Update - 29

Reyansh : hmm.. Chalo ab ghar chalte hai abhi hume tumhare ammi abbu ko antim wida dena hai.

Aabbb aaagggeee....

Noor : Reyansh ye mujhse nhi hoga..
Reyansh : tum fikr na karo mai huna...
Noor : hhmmm...

Ye bol noor ne reyansh ki baazu jor se pakad li.
Reyansh : to phir chale .
Ye bol reyansh bed se utha noor bhi uth gyi par jaise hi noor aage kadam badhane wali thi ki uske pair dagmaga gye aur wo girne wali thi lekin ain waqt par reyansh ne noor ko kamar se pakad kar use girne se bachaya aur uae khada kiya aur dat te hue bola.
Reyansh : dekha jada rone se kamjori aa jati hai aur tum ho ki abhi bhi roye ja rhi ho.
Noor : kyaa karu ammi abbu ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai.

Reyansh bhi chup ho gya kyuki wo iss bare me kuch nhi kar skta tha. Noor bhi mayus khadi thi ki reyansh ne noor ko apni bahon me le kar godh me utha liya.


Costurero-Real-Professional-Artisan-Crafter-Deviant-Art
Noor yeh dekh ke chok gyi aur hadbadate hue boli.
Noor : yeh kya kar rahe ho reyansh niche utaro mujhe sab hame hi dekh rahe hai.
Reyansh : nhi utar sakta nhi to phir se gir padogi.

Ye bol reyansh aage bad gaya hospital se bahar nikalne ke liye. Iss douran sare raste noor apna chehra reyansh ke seene me chupayi hui thi. Reyansh ne car ke pass pohochke noor ko niche utara aur driving seat ke baju wali seat pe bitha diya aur nikal pada noor ke ghar ki aur. Raste bhar noor bilkul chup thi. Thodi der me dono noor ke ghar pohoch gye car se bahar aake noor ne ek nazar ghar ko dekha aur sochne lagi.

Noor : (man me) ek din pehele tak kitna khushal hua karta tha hamra ye chota sa aashiyana .kitna masti karti thi mai ammi ke sath .iss jagah abbu ne mijhe chalna sikhaya tha par abb sab badal chuka hai... Ab apno ke naam par sirf Reyansh hai mere paas jise mai kisi kimat par khona nhi chahti.

Noor ye sab soch hi rahi thi ki reyansh ne pgur se use apni god me utha liya aur ghar ke ander aake use bed pe litaya aur sar pe hath firate samjhte hue bola.
Reyansh : Noor ab tum aram karo mai tumhare liye kuch banake lata hu.
Noor : (sapat leheje me) mujhe nhi khana hai.
Reyansh : dekho noor agar tum aise karogi aur khana nhi khaogi to bimar pad jaogi to kya tumhare ammi ko achcha lagega ki unke yaad me unki beti khana nhi kha rhi hai batao.
Noor ne ye sunke ser jhuka liya aur sirf itna boli .
Noor : thik hai.
Reyansh : tum khalo aur aram karlo. Kal subeh tak bodies postmortem ho ke aa jayegi to mai unhen mitti deni ki taiyari karwa leta hu agar tumhare koi rishtedaar hoto bata do mai unhe bula leta hu.

Phir bina kuch bole aur sune reyansh noor ke ghar ke kitchen me khana banane chala gya. Karib aadhe ghante me reyansh garma garam vegetable soup bana ke le aya aur bed pe jake noor ke bagal me baith gaya.
Reyansh : ye lo aur jaldi se ye soup pilo.

Par Noor soup Peene Mein Na nukur kar rahi thi . Jis Karan Reyansh Khud Apne Hath se Noor ko soup pilane Laga. Thodi der Mein Soup khatm Ho Gaya per Noor Kuchh Bol Nahin rahi thi Jaise use Sadma Lag Gaya Ho.
Is Tarah Noor ka Shant Rahana Reyansh ko Achcha Nahin lag raha tha per vah is situation Mein Kuchh Nahin kar sakta Kyunki usko Noor ki Ammi Abbu ko Aakhiri vidai Dene Ki Tarif karni thi aur Baki kam bhi use Hi sambhalna Tha.
Reyansh ko bhi Noor ke ammi Abbu ke Maut Ka Dukh tha lekin wo ye sab baya nhi kar raha tha. Reyansh itna gehra ladka tha ki Usko apne dard ko chipaane me maharat hashil ho chuki thi ...kam umra me jimmedari aane per aur bure halat ke chalte sab samajhdaar ho jaate hai uper se reyansh ko maa baap ka pyaar bhi nasib nhi hua jiske karan wo bachpan se tanha raha hai. Jab chot lagti to Reyansh Ghar per Aakar Rota tha lekin Kisi Ko uski Parvah Nahin thi na koi usko chup karata tha na hi Dilasa deta reyansh bus Rota aur fir Rote Rote gehri Nind mein chal Jata.

Aise hi thodi der Mein Raat Ho Gai reyansh bhi Hospital ki sari formalities nipta ke Noor ke room ki taraf badh gaya per Jab vah room mein pahuncha to Paya Noor bed ki ek Kone mein lete hue subak rahi. Jo Reyansh se na Dekha Gaya aur Reyansh ne Noor ke kareeb Jaakar Uske kandhe par hath rakha . Apne kandhe per Hath ka Ehsas Pakar Jab Noor palti to Dekha Samne Reyansh Khada tha Kuchh der tak Noor ne Reyansh ki Gehri Aankhon Mein Jhanka Jaise Kuchh dhundh rahi ho fir ekadam se Noor Aankhon Se Aansu nikalne Lage Aur vo Reyansh se Chipak gai aur Jor jor se Rone Lagi.

Noor : Reyansh mujhse wada kro tum ammi abbu ki tarah mujhe chod kar nhi jaoge wada karo reyansh.
Reyansh : (noor ke aasoon pochte hue) kya mere wada karne se tum shant ho jao gi ?
Noor : ye mai nhi janti lenkin ab iss duniya me mera tumhare alava hai hi kon.

Ye sunkar Reyansh ko noor ke abbu ko kiya hua wada yaad aa gya ki wo noor ko hamesha khush rakhega aur usne apne chehre par bohot samay baad ek badi pyaari muskan faila di jo noor bhi pehli baar dekh rahi thi. Uhi reyansh ne muskurate hue kaha.

Reyansh : agar tum yahi chahti ho aur isse khush ho to mai wada karta hu ki mai "Reyansh Rajput apni akhri saans tak tumhara sath nhi chodunga".


Noor ye sunker kuch shant hui aur reyansh ki godh me apna ser rakhe let gyi reyansh ne bhi uske bal sehlake sulane ka prayas karne laga kyuki usko pata tha ki iss waqt noor ko emotional support ki jarurat hai.
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