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UPDATE 12 (A) , UPDATE 12 (B) - MAHAPRALAY - 1(Qayamat Ka Janam)


Yeh sirf lafz nahi, yeh 'Qayamat' ke pehla dahaad hai.Yeh kahani nahi, yeh 'Mahapralay' ka janm hai.Andhera ab jaag chuka hai. Khamoshi ab toot chuka hai.


Is naye adhyaay ko sirf padhna mat... iske thandak ko apne haddiyon mein mehsoos karna. Har sargoshi ke peeche chhupe toofan ko suno. Har zakhm ke peeche ke aag ko dekho.

Agar iss 'Qayamat' ke goonj tumhare rooh tak pahunche hai, toh apne Like aur Follow se isse 'Mahapralay' ki aag mein badal do.

Yeh update shaayad thoda lamba ho gaya, par 'Mahapralay' ka janm itna aasan nahi hota. Jo tumne dekha, woh toh bas pehli chingari tha.

YEH TOH BAS TRAILER THA.

Asli 'Mahapralay' toh ab shuru hoga. Agle update mein woh tabahi machega jiska tumne sirf naam suna hai.Intezaar karo...


Qayamat... ab azaad ho chuka hai.
 
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UPDATE 11 (B)

BARF KE SAAYE (WARZONE)


PART 4: Jab Khel Khooni Ho Jaye

BONFIRE NIGHT - JALTI AAG, SULAGTE RAAZ

Haadse ne trip ka masoomiyat ko cheer kar rakh diya tha, trip ka mahaul badal gaya tha. Us raat resort ke bahar jalta bonfire ka aag garmahat kam, ek ajeeb sa bechaini zyada de raha tha. Aag ke chatakti laptein students ke chehron par ajeeb-o-gareeb saaye bana raha tha. Kuch log gaa-baja kar mahaul ko halka karne ke nakaam koshish kar rahe the, lekin unke gaano mein bhi ek dar ka goonj tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise aas paas ka ghana, kaala jungle unhe ghoor raha ho, unke har sargoshi sun raha ho.

Arjun, jo din bhar se Ravi ke hero banne par sulag raha tha ,ek shaatir shikaari ke tarah, apne mauke ka intezaar kar raha tha. Arjun ne is mauke ka poora fayda uthaya.


Usne Sia ko aag ke paas akele khade dekha aur apne doston ko ishaara karke uske paas chala gaya. Rishi aur Virat ne usey ek smirk ke saath 'all the best' ka ishaara kiya, jabki Sameer bechaini se idhar-udhar dekh raha tha.

Arjun ne Sia ke paas jaakar apni awaaz mein jitni ho sake utni fikr bharte hue kaha.


Arjun: "Sardi badh gaya hai. Din mein jo hua, uske baad tumhe apna extra dhyaan rakhna chahiye."
Uska awaaz mein fikr ka mitha zahar ghula hua tha, par uska aankhein Sia ke chehre par dar talaash raha tha.

Sia ne kuch jawab nahi diya, bas aag ki lapton ko dekhti rahi.

Tabhi, resort ka buzurg pahaadi chowkidar, Deenu Kaka, jo apni khukri hamesha kamar mein lagaye rakhta tha, aag ke paas aaya. Unhone ek nazar sab par daale aur unke aankhein Ravi, YuKi, aur Aarav par aakar thehar gaya. Unke jhurriyon bhari awaaz mein sadiyon ka anubhav tha.


Deenu Kaka: "Yeh pahaad jitne sundar dikhte hain, utne hain nahi, bachchon. Jab raat gehra hota hai aur hawa mein barf ka mehak aata hai, tab 'Barf ke Saaye' utarte hain."

Ek student hass pada. "Kya Kaka, aap bhi dara rahe ho."

Deenu Kaka ki aankhein uss student ko dekh kar sakht ho gaya. "Yeh kahaani nahi, chetavni hai. Woh saaye... woh shikaar karte hain. Na khoon ka nishaan chhodte hain, na haddiyon ka suraag. Jise le jaate hain, woh bas hawa mein gaayab ho jaata hai. Hamesha ke liye."

Sabke hasne ki awaaz gale mein hi atak gaye. Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav ne ek dusre ko dekha. Unhe pata tha, yeh sirf ek lok-katha nahi tha. Yeh ek code tha, ek sandesh tha.

Sia uss anjaan si tension se ghabrakar wahan se hatne lagi. Andhere mein, uska haath anjaane mein Ravi ke ussi haath se takra gaya jo din mein zakhmi hua tha.

Ek jhatka.

Ek current.

Ravi ke dard se see karne ki bajaye saansein ruk gaya. Sia ne foran apna haath pichhe kheench liya. Ek pal ke liye, un dono ki nigahein mile. Uss ek pal mein unhone lafzon se nahi, rooh se baat kiye. Ek an-kaha vaada, ek ehsaas ke is khatre mein woh akele nahi hain.

Lekin woh nahi jaante the ke unke har harkat, har saans, record ho raha tha.

Bahut door, ek ped ke aad mein, andhere se bhi zyada kaala ek saaya baitha tha. Ek high-tech night-vision camera ke lens un dono par zoom kiye hue tha. Lens ke peeche baitha aankhon mein koi bhavna nahi tha, sirf aadesh ka intezaar tha.


KRAK!

Jungle ke andhere se achanak ek moti tehni tootne ka awaaz aaya. Awaaz itna tez tha jaise kisi ne jaan-boojh kar use toda ho.

Sabhi students darr kar ek-dum shaant ho gaye. Bonfire ka aag ke alawa har taraf maut jaisa sannata tha. Sabka aankhein uss andhere ki taraf dekh raha tha jahan se awaaz aaya tha.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri ka handle kas ke pakad liya.

Aur uss andhere mein baithe shakhs ne apne satellite phone par ek encrypted message type kiya:


"Ravi kamzor hai. Uska ek kamzori hai. Tasdeek ho gaya. Mansoobe ke agle hisse ki ijaazat di jaaye."


Masti ka waqt khatm ho chuka tha. Asli khel ab shuru hone wala tha.




Raakh Hoti Aag, Sulagti Nafrat

KRAK!

Jungle se aayi uss awaaz ne bonfire ke aas paas jami hawa ko sheeshe ki tarah tod diya. Sabhi students darr se ek dusre se sat gaye. Unki saari masti, saare gaane, ek pal mein hawa ho gaye.


Principal Malhotra: "Shaant raho! Stay calm, everyone! Koi jaanwar hoga."

Ms. Meera: "Sab log resort ke andar chalo! Now! Make a line!"

Lekin Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav jaante the. Yeh kisi jaanwar ki awaaz nahi tha. Yeh ek sochi-samjhi harkat tha. Ek signal. Ek ailaan.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri aadhi bahar nikaal liye the, unke tajurbekaar aankhein andhere ko aise cheed raha tha, jaise woh saayon ke aar-paar dekh sakta ho.

Students ke beech afra-tafri mach gaya. Sab jaldi se jaldi resort ki garmahat mein laut jaana chahte the. Isi bhagdad mein, Sia ne Ravi ko dekha. Woh apni jagah se hila tak nahi tha. Uski nigahein uss andhere par tik tha, jaise woh uss shakhs ko dekh sakta ho jo wahan chhupa baitha tha. Ravi ke chehre par dar nahi, ek sard ghussa tha. Aisa ghussa jo shikaar ko shikaari bana deta hai.

Ms. Meera ne sabko andar lobby mein ikattha kiya.


Ms. Meera: "Okay, everyone, apne apne room partners ke saath check karo. Make sure everyone is here."

Ek-ek karke sabne "Yes, ma'am" kehna shuru kiya.

Bonfire ki aakhri laptein bhi bujh chuka tha. Jalti lakdiyon ki mehak ab hawa mein faile dhuen aur anjaane khatre ki sargoshiyon mein badal gaya tha. Students thake-haare apne kamron mein laut gaye the, is baat se bekhabar ki unke beech chupe shikaari ab apne agle vaar ki taiyaari kar rahe the.



Arjun ke kamre mein...

Kamra andhere mein dooba hua tha. Sirf laptop ki neeli roshni Arjun ke chehre par kathor parchhaiyan bana raha tha.

Whiskey ka adha bhara glass mez par apne naseeb ka intezaar kar raha tha, bilkul waise hi jaise Arjun ki shatranj ke mohre uske agle hukum ka karte the.


Click... Click... Click.

Mouse ka har click ek ijaafa tha uss aag mein jo Arjun ke seene mein sulag raha tha. Telephoto lens se kheencha gaya darjanon tasveeron ka silsila ruk gaya, ek file mein qaid theen, lekin Arjun ka cursor baar-baar ek hi tasveer par aakar ruk jaata.

Ek frame par. Sirf ek.


Woh tasveer nahi, ek lamha tha. Ek pal, jab Sia ka haath anjaane mein Ravi ke haath se chhua tha. Unke ungliyon ka mehez ek lams (sparsh)... lekin unke chehron par likha kashish aur bechaini ek poori dastaan bayaan kar raha tha. Arjun uss tasveer ko zoom karke dekh raha tha. Woh Sia ke chehre par aayi pal bhar ki sharam, aur Ravi ki aankhon mein uss ek pal ke liye thehar gayi duniya ko saaf padh sakta tha.

Yeh sirf ek masoomi si chuhan nahi tha. Yeh Arjun ke banaye hue khel mein ek baghawat tha. Ek aag tha jo uska saltanat mein lag raha tha. Sia uska shatranj ka Wazir thi—khubsoorat, khatarnaak, aur sirf uske ishaaron par chalne waali. Aur ek Wazir ka kisi maamuli pyaade ke taraf dekhna bhi... badshaah ki tauheen hota hai.

Uska ungliyan keyboard par kas gaya. Chehre par ek sard muskaan phail gaya. Usne phone uthaya, number dial kiya. Uski awaaz sheeshe ke tarah saaf aur thandi tha.


ARJUN: "Khanna, waqt aa gaya hai. Plan B. Abhi."

Doosri taraf se sirf ek itminaan bhari awaaz aaya,
"Hukum kijiye, Sir."

ARJUN:
"Activate it , "Monastery ka program kal subah ka hai. Main chahta hoon resort ka woh pura wing andhere mein doob jaaye jahan Ravi Mishra apni neend poori kar raha hai. Ek 'power trip' lagna chahiye .Aisa andhera ki woh apni parchhayi se bhi darr jaaye. Aur sabse zaroori... communications. Blackout. Koi Wi-Fi nahi, koi mobile network nahi. Main chahta hoon Kal subah jab suraj nikle, toh yeh resort duniya ke liye ek black hole ban jaana chahiye."


KHANNA : "Ho jaayega, Sir. Suraj ugne se pehle, woh apni hi parchhai se bhi baat nahi kar payega."

Arjun ne call kaat diya.

Uske nigahein wapas uss tasveer par lauta. Usne Ravi ke chehre par cursor rakha, jaise nishaana laga raha ho.


ARJUN (khud se): "Khelne ka bohot shauk hai na tumhein, Ravi Mishra? Chalo, ek naya khel khelte hain. Ek aisa khel jismein roshni nahi hoga... aawaaz nahi hoga... aur tumhara kamzori hi tumhara gala ghontega."

Ek aakhri, aatish-fishaan nazar se tasveer ko dekh kar usne 'Delete' ka button daba diya.

Screen par likha aaya:
File Permanently Deleted.

Jaise Ravi Mishra ka wajood.

[LOCATION: SIA’S RESORT ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein maddham roshni tha, lekin Sia ko aaine mein apna aks nahi, apni uljhi hui rooh nazar aa rahi thi. Aaine ke uss paar khadi ladki ek anjaan shakhs lag rahi thi, jiski aankhon mein farz ki thakaan aur dil ki baghawat saaf dikh rahi thi.

Ek taraf Dada Sahab ka mission tha—ek maqsad jiske liye usne apni zindagi daanv par laga di thi. Doosri taraf Alisha ke zehar mein bujhe hue shabd kaan mein goonj rahe the, ek aisi chetavni jo anjaam ka aaina dikha rahi thi.

Aur in dono chattanon ke beech... Ravi ke haath ka woh ehsaas.

Ek second se bhi chhota lamha, lekin jaise waqt uss ek pal mein qaid ho gaya tha. Uski hatheli par abhi bhi uss chuhan ki jhanjhanahat thi. Uska dimaag cheekh raha tha ki yeh ek galti hai, ek kamzori jo usse uske maqsad se bhatka degi, jo usse barbaad kar degi. Par dil... woh dimaag ki ek bhi daleel sunne ko taiyaar nahi tha.

Usne aaine par apni ungliyan pheri, jaise apne hi aks ko samajhane ki koshish kar rahi ho.


SIA (fufusate hue):
"Kaash yeh trip... bas ek trip hota"

Uski awaaz kamre ki khaamoshi mein ek raaz ki tarah ghul gayi. Ek aisa raaz, jo shayad uski sabse badi taqat banne wala tha... ya uski tabahi ka kaaran.

PART 5: SHIKARI HUA SHIKAR

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein ek kafan jaisi khamoshi tha, lekin Ravi ke andar ek toofan chal raha tha. Yeh alag-thalag kamra aaraam ke liye nahi, ek qaid-khane ki tarah lag raha tha. Bonfire ki aag bujh chuka tha, par uska peeth par chubhta hua woh nigahein... usse ab bhi mehsoos ho rahe theen. Uska instinct, jo saalon ki training se faulad ban chuka tha, chilla raha tha—"Tum akele nahi ho."

Usne lights band kar diya. Andhera uski aankhon ke liye ek parda nahi, ek hathiyaar tha.

Usne kamre ko dekhna nahi, usse 'padhna' shuru kiya. Har kona, har saaya, har cheez jo apni jagah par nahi tha. Uska nigahein ek professional ki tarah scan karti hui... ceiling par lage smoke detector par jaakar theher gaya. Uska design ajeeb tha, standard model se alag. Aur tabhi usne woh dekha... ek behad baareek, lagbhag adrishya laal roshni, jo ek dil ke tarah... ek second ke hazaarwein hisse ke liye dhadka.


Arjun ka jaal.

Ravi ke chehre par muskaan nahi aayi. Uski aankhon mein ek aisi thandak utar aayi jo Manali ki barf ko bhi sharma de.

"Toh khel shuru ho chuka hai, Arjun Rathore."

Usne camera todne jaisa bachkani galti nahi kiya. Nahi. Usne khelne ka faisla kiya. Par ab, niyam uske honge.


Woh bed par gaya aur kambal ko aise odha, jaise ek thaka hua insaan gehri neend mein doob jaata hai. Usne apni saanson ki raftaar ko dheema kiya, apne jism ko bilkul shaant chhod diya. Woh intezaar kar raha tha, uss shikari ke sustane ka, jo usse ek aasaan shikaar samajh raha tha.

Das minute... pandrah minute... Bees minute.

Aur phir, jaise bijli kadakta hai...

Ek jhatke ke saath, Ravi ka wing mein har roshni, har awaaz, har electronic saans band ho gaya. Generator ka backup bhi aane se pehle hi mar gaya. Yeh ek 'power trip' nahi tha; yeh ek 'power execution' tha. Ek surgical strike, jiska nishana sirf ek tha.

Lekin is andhere mein, jahan ek aam insaan ki aankhein bebasi se phail jaati, Ravi ki aankhein... unhone jeena shuru kiya.

Uska shareer ekdum shaant ho gaya, saansein itna dheema ki jaise ruk hi gaya ho. Usne bistar se utarkar zameen par pair rakha, bina kisi awaaz ke. Uske kaan ab uska aankhein ban chuke the. Woh hawa mein aate badlaav, temperature mein girta har degree, aur door corridor mein bichha carpet par padne wale har anjaane bojh ko mehsoos kar sakta tha.

Uska dimaag ek supercomputer ke tarah kaam kar raha tha.


RAVI (Inner Monologue): "Blackout. Sirf meri wing mein. Communications dead. Yeh Arjun ka kaam hai. Woh mujhe alag-thalag karna chahta hai. Par woh ek galti kar raha hai. Andhera mera dushman nahi... mera ghar hai. Is andhere mein, main shikaar nahi, shikaari hoon."

Usne apne zakhmi haath ki mutthi bheenche. Dard ki ek tez lehar utha, par uss dard ne usse sulaya nahi, jaga diya. Usse yaad dilaya ki khatra kitna asli hai.

Tabhi... aawaz aaya.

Ek halka sa 'click' ka awaaz. Uske kamre ke darwaze ke lock se. Koi bahar se electronic key card override karne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Ravi ek saaye ki tarah pichhe hata aur deewar se sat kar khada ho gaya, theek darwaze ke paas, jahan se andar aane wala usey pehli nazar mein dekh na sake. Usne paas rakhe bhaari table lamp ko haath mein utha liya. Yeh koi high-tech hathiyaar nahi tha, par andhere mein, sahi waqt par, yeh maut ka doosra naam ban sakta tha.

Darwaza bina awaaz kiye khula.

Ek kaala saaya, sir se paanv tak kaale tactical gear mein, kamre mein daakhil hua. Uske haath mein ek chhota, suppressed pistol tha, jiske aage night-vision scope laga tha. Woh professional tha.

Par usne ek galti kar dala. Usne Ravi ko bistar par dhoondha.

Aur Ravi bistar par nahi tha.

Jaise hi woh saaya aage badha, andhera zinda ho gaya. Ravi uske peeche se ek toofan ki tarah ubhra. Uska zakhmi haath ek lohe ke panje ki tarah saaye ki pistol wali kalai par pada. Isse pehle ki woh trigger daba paata, Ravi ne uski kalai ko ek wehshi angle par mod diya.


KRRACK!

Haddi aur cartilage ke tootne ki ek geeli, dil-dehlaane wali awaaz andhere mein goonj gayi. Saaye ke munh se ek dabi hui cheekh nikli, par Ravi ne usse mauka nahi diya. Usne ussi toote haath se use apni taraf kheencha aur apna ghutna uski pasliyon mein de maara. Doosri KRAK ki awaaz aayi.

Saaya professional tha. Dard ke bawajood, usne apne doosre haath se ek combat knife nikaala aur Ravi ke pet ki taraf vaar kiya.

Par Ravi wahan tha hi nahi. Woh hawa ki tarah pichhe hata, saaye ka santulan bigadne diya, aur phir aage badhkar, uske knife wale haath ki kohni par ek brutal 'elbow-lock' laga diya. Teesra
CRACK!

Saaye ke dono haath ab bekaar the. Isse pehle ki woh cheekh paata, Ravi ne uske baalon ko pakda aur uska sir deewar par de maara.

THUMP!

Saaya behosh hokar zameen par dher ho gaya.

Ravi ne uske chehre se naqaab hataya. Ek anjaan chehra. Ek kiraye ka qaatil. Par Ravi ka dhyaan uske kaan mein lage communication device par gaya. Usne use nikaal kar apne kaan mein lagaya. Doosri taraf se Arjun ki bechain awaaz aa raha tha.


ARJUN (O.S. via earpiece): "Hunter? Kya hua? Report! Status!"

Ravi ne kuch nahi kaha. Usne device ko zameen par rakha aur apne military boot se, dheere se, poora wazan daal kar use kuchal diya.


CRUNCH

Yeh khel ka pehla mohra tha jo shatranj se bahar ho chuka tha.



[LOCATION: ARJUN’S ROOM]

CRUNCH.

Earpiece se aaya aakhri awaaz Arjun ke kaano mein zehar ke tarah utar gayi. Uske chehre par gusse aur hairat ka toofan umad aaya.

ARJUN (gurrate hue): "Impossible! Usne HUNTER ko... andhere mein... bina hathiyaar ke?"

Usne apni whiskey ka glass ek jhatke mein khaali kar diya. Uska plan, uska perfect plan, pehli hi chaal mein dhwast ho chuka tha. Usne Ravi ko kamzor samjha tha. Yeh uski sabse badi bhool thi.

Usne Mr. Khana ko call kiya, jo bahar corridor mein pehra de raha tha.unke pass Virat , Rishi aur Sameer bhi khade the.


ARJUN: "Plan B fail ho gaya hai! HUNTER neeche hai. Ab Plan C. 'Saayon' ko aage badhne ka ishaara do. Unse kaho, shikaar ab hoshiyaar ho chuka hai. Aur Virat..."

VIRAT : "Ji, Arjun bhai."

ARJUN: "Agar Sia apne kamre se bahar nikle... usey rokna mat. Bas us par nazar rakhna. Woh Ravi ke taraf hi jaayegi. Aur jab kamzori khud shikaari ke paas jaaye... toh khel aur bhi mazedaar ho jaata hai."

Usne call kaat diya aur monitor par aayi ek live feed ko dekhne laga. Ek hidden camera Sia ke kamre ke theek bahar laga tha. Woh intezaar kar raha tha. Apne Wazir ko, pyaade ki taraf badhte hue dekhne ka.




[LOCATION: SIA'S ROOM / CORRIDOR]

Sia apne kamre mein bechaini se tehel rahi thi. Ravi ki wing mein andhera hote hi uska dil kisi anhoni ke aashanka se doob gaya tha. Uska dimaag usey Dada Sahab ka mission yaad dila raha tha, par uska dil... woh Ravi ke naam ki zidd kar raha tha.

"Main uske maamle mein nahi pad sakti. Yeh mission ke liye khatra hai," usne khud se kaha.

Par agle hi pal, usne darwaza khola. Uska dil jeet chuka tha.

Corridor mein maut jaisa sannata tha. Woh dabe paanv aage badhi. Har kadam uske farz par ek chot jaisa tha. Jab woh Ravi ke wing ke paas pahunchi, toh usne andhere mein khade ek saaye ko dekha. Virat.

Virat ne use dekha, par Arjun ke hukum ke mutaabik, usne Sia ko roka nahi. Bas ek ajeeb, sard muskaan di, jaise keh raha ho,
"Jao, apni maut ki taraf."

Sia usse nazarandaaz karke aage badh gayi. Ravi ka darwaza halka sa khula tha. Usne darte-darte andar jhaanka.

Andar ka manzar dekh kar uski saansein gale mein hi atak gayi.

Ravi zameen par baitha tha, behosh HUNTER ke paas. Kamre mein sirf chaand ka halka roshni aa raha tha. Us roshni mein, Ravi ka chehra kisi insaan ka nahi, ek... yoddha ka lag raha tha. Uska aankhon mein ghussa nahi, ek thanda, hisaabi focus tha.


SIA (dheere se): "Ravi...?"

Ravi ne palat kar use dekha. Uski aankhon mein ek pal ke liye narmi aaya.


RAVI: "Tumhein yahan nahi aana chahiye tha, Sia. Yeh jagah ab mehfooz nahi hai."

SIA: "Main bas... main chinta kar rahi thi."

Isse pehle ki Ravi kuch kehta, uske kaan khade ho gaye. Usne Sia ko ishare se chup rehne ko kaha.

Bahar... corridor mein... kadmon ki awaaz aa rahi tha.

Par yeh ek insaan ke kadmon ki awaaz nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise koi cheez... barf par reng rahi ho. Koi awaaz nahi, koi khusar-pusar nahi. Bas ek ehsaas. Ek thanda, maut jaisa ehsaas jo darwaze ke neeche se sarak kar andar aa raha tha.

Deenu Kaka ki awaaz Ravi ke dimaag mein goonja.
'Barf ke Saaye'.


RAVI (sargoshi mein): "Bistar ke neeche chhup jao. Aur jab tak main na kahun, bahar mat nikalna. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye."

Uska awaaz mein ek aisa authority tha jise Sia mana nahi kar saka. Woh foran bistar ke neeche chhup gayi.

Ravi ne Hunter ke behosh shareer ko ek taraf kheencha aur darwaze ke peeche phir se apni position le liya.

Darwaza dheere-dheere, ek ajeeb si crakkk ke saath khula.

Iss baar, ek nahi... teen saaye andar daakhil hue. Unhone kaale nahi, balki barf jaise safed, camouflage gear pehne the. Unke chehre par ajeeb se thermal goggles the aur unke haath mein khukri jaise, aage se mude hue, ghatak khanjar the.

Woh hawa ki tarah shaant the. Unka har move ek socha-samjha, train kiya hua qadam tha.

Pehle saaye ne kamre ko scan kiya. Doosra Hunter ke shareer ke paas gaya. Aur teesra... teesra theek uss bistar ke paas jaakar khada ho gaya jiske neeche Sia apni saansein roke chhipi hui thi.

Khel ab one-on-one nahi raha tha.

Yeh teen-on-one tha. Aur Ravi jaanta tha... yeh Arjun ke mamooli gunde nahi the.

Yeh professional qaatil the.
'Barf ke Saaye'.

Jangal ka asli shikaar... ab shuru ho chuka tha.




YAADON KE PEHREDAAR

[LOCATION: GADEN BAUDH MATH – ANDRUNI KAKSH]

Jabke resort ke uss kamre mein saansein ruka hua tha, pahaadon ki goad mein basa Gaden Baudh Math ka roohani khamoshi bhi uss ek kamre mein aakar thehar jaata tha. Yeh math ka sabse gupt, sabse andhera hissa tha. Hawa mein chandan, kapoor aur sadiyon purani prarthnaon ki mehek ek saath ghula hua tha. Deewaron par bane thangka paintings andhere mein saans lete hue mehsoos ho rahe the.

Beech mein baithe Lama Tashi ke aankhein band tha, par unka astitva uss kamre ki har cheez par haavi tha. Unke saamne, zameen par ghutno ke bal, Kitsune (YuKi) ka sir jhuka hua tha.

Lama Tashi ki bhaari awaaz pattharon se takraaya, jaise koi gufa goonj utha ho.



LAMA TASHI: "Aasmaan se toota hua taara... apni roshni zaroor kho chuka hai, Kitsune. Lekin girte waqt woh Qayamat ki garmi apne andar samet laaya hai. Tumhara zimmedaari sirf uske zakhmi jism ka nahi, uska bikhra hua rooh ka hifazat karna hai. Woh ab ek aisa daulat hai jiski koi keemat nahi, aur jise lootne ke liye Shaitan khud zameen par utar aaya hai."


KITSUNE: (Awaaz mein bebasi) :"Uss garmi ko woh khud mehsoos nahi kar paa raha, Lama. Uski aankhon mein ek aisa khaamoshi hai... jismein sirf aakhri tabahi ka shor hai. Apni pehchaan ki ek chingari tak nahi. Agar usse zara bhi yaad hota, toh woh meri aankhon mein chhipa fikr aur Aarav ke chehre par ubalte laave ko ek pal mein pehchaan leta."

Tabhi andhere se ek fauladi awaaz ne Kitsune ke shabdon ko cheer diya.

"Khaamoshi kamzori nahi, gehraayi ka nishaani hota hai, Lama. Aur samandar ki gehraayi mein hi toofan saans lete hain."

Phoenix (Aarav) andhere se nikal kar uss roshni mein aaya jo ek ghee ke diye se phail raha tha. Uska aankhein ek shikari baaz ki tarah aage dekh raha tha, jaise woh deewaron ke paar bhi dekh sakta ho.


PHOENIX (AARAV): "Woh sab kuch bhoola nahi hai. Uska yaadon par bas jakhmon ka zang lag gaya hai. Chehre dhundhle ho gaye hain, par unn chehron se mile dard ka ehsaas aaj bhi taza hai. Woh aag... woh cheekhein... uske zehen mein nahi, uski rooh mein qaid hain. Ek Shezaada jiska takht uska yaadein tha, aur woh takht ab cheen liya gaya hai."

LAMA TASHI: (Dheere se apni aankhein kholte hain. Unke nazron mein gyaan nahi, ek aisa chetavni tha jo waqt ko rok de.)
"Aur yahi baat usse is duniya ka sabse khatarnaak hathiyaar banata hai! Uska dimaag ab ek band darwaza nahi... woh Pralay ka taaboot hai. Ek aisi taqat jise dushman apni jeet samajhta hai, aur jise humein is duniya ke antt se pehle kaabu mein rakhna hai. Agar woh taaboot khul gaya... toh yeh duniya uss Shezaade ka kahani nahi, uska tabahi ka kissa sunega."


KITSUNE: (Uthkar, awaaz mein ek nayi zimmedaari ke saath)
"Toh humara maqsad kya hai, Lama?"


LAMA TASHI: "Tum dono uske saaye nahi... uski yaadon ke pehredaar banoge. Tumhare jung sirf dushman se nahi, uske ateet se bhi hai. Tumhein usse bachana bhi hai... aur waqt aane par, is duniya ko uss se bachana bhi hai. Jaao! Kyunki waqt ka ret nahi, zindagiyan phisal raha hain. Aur dushman ne apni pehli chaal chal diya hai."




USOOLON KI QEEMAT

[LOCATION: RESORT – STAFF QUARTERS – RAAT]

Resort ke chamak-damak ke peeche ek aur duniya tha. Geeli deewaron, seelan ki mehek aur saste disinfectant ki gandh waala. Yeh staff quarters ka pichla hissa tha, jahan andhera bhi zyada thaka hua aur gehra lagta tha.

Yahin par, parchhaiyon ko apna saathi banaye, Vikrant aage badh raha tha. Woh Aryan ke sabse puraane aur wafadaar aadmiyon mein se tha. Uski ragon mein khoon ke saath Aryan bhai ka ek usool daudta tha—"Begunahon par haath nahi uthana." Aur Arjun ke Manali aane ke baad se hi, usse yeh usool toot-ta hua mehsoos ho raha tha.

Usne Arjun ke Security Head ko ek band pade store room mein ghuste dekha. Ek aisi jagah jahan kisi ko nahi jaana chahiye tha. Vikrant deewar se sat kar aage badha, uske saans lene ki awaaz bhi usse dhokha de sakti thi. Usne darwaze ke daraar se andar jhaanka, aur jo dekha, usse uska rooh tak kaanp gayi.

Andar do log the. Security Head... aur ek anjaan saaya.

Woh saaya roshni mein aaya. Lamba, patla jism. Lambe baal jo uske chehre par a rahe the. Gaal par ek purane zakhm ka nishaan, jaise kisi janwar ne panja maara ho. Par sabse darawni cheez uska aankhein theen—bilkul khaali, jaise unke peeche koi insaan nahi, sirf maut ka intezaar tha.



(NAYE KIRDAAR KI ENTRY – KAI)

Woh ek professional mercenary tha. Ek bhoot, jise Arjun ne khaas iss kaam ke liye kiraye par liya tha. Kai usoolon par nahi, keemat par kaam karta tha.


SECURITY HEAD: (Awaaz mein ek ajeeb sa ghabrahat) "Target confirm hai. Ladki, Jaanvi. Kal Monastery mein... kaam saaf hona chahiye."

Kai ne jawaab nahi diya, bas gardan halki sa hilaaya. Jab woh bola, toh uska awaaz sookhe patton par rengte saanp jaisa tha.



KAI: "Kaam ho jaayega. Par Rathore Junior ko yaad dila dena, iss kaam ki keemat sirf paisa nahi hai... uska khamoshi bhi hai. Kissa khatam hone ke baad, main kabhi tha hi nahi."


Vikrant ka dimaag sunn ho gaya. Dhokha. Arjun ne apne hi bhai ko dhokha diya tha. Yeh sabaq sikhaane ki nahi, ek begunah ko mitaane ki saazish tha. Usne bina awaaz kiye wahan se hatna chaha, par uska kismat ne saath chhod diya. Uska pair neeche pade kaanch ke ek toote hue tukde par pad gaya.



KRRNNCH!

Awaaz mamuli tha, par uss khamoshi mein ek dhamake jaisa laga.

Ek palak jhapk mein Kai insaan se hathiyaar ban gaya. Woh aisi tezi se palta jaise hawa ne rukh badla ho. Uska khaali aankhein seedha daraar ke uss paar Vikrant ki dehshat-zada aankhon se takraaya.

Sochne ka waqt nahi tha. Vikrant bhaaga.

Par Kai shikaar tha, aur Vikrant shikaari. Woh ek saaye ke tarah uske peeche lapka, uske kadmon ki awaaz tak nahi aa raha tha. Vikrant ne jaan bachane ke liye daudte hue paas pada ek zang laga lohe ka rod uthaya aur palat kar poori taqat se vaar kiya.


Kai ne ek hairaan kar dene waala furti se uss rod ko hawa mein hi pakad liya. Uska kalai tak nahi hila.

Ek jhatke mein usne rod Vikrant ke haath se cheen liya. Isse pehle ki Vikrant apna galti samajh paata, Kai ne wahi rod ghuma kar uske ghutne par de maara.


CRACK!

Haddi ke tootne ki wehshi awaaz uss tang corridor mein goonj gaya.

Vikrant ki cheekh uske gale mein hi ghut gaya jab woh zameen par gira. Kai uske upar shikaari ke tarah jhuka. Uska aankhon mein na gussa tha, na nafrat. Sirf ek peshewar khamoshi.



KAI: "Galat waqt... galat jagah."

Usne rod uthaaya aur Vikrant ke doosre haath ke kalai par maar diya. Ek aur dardnaak cheekh. Phir usne rod Vikrant ke gardan par rakha aur dheere se dabav badhaya, bas itna ki saans rukne lage.



KAI (sargoshi mein, jaise koi raaz bata raha ho): "Apne Aryan bhai ko paigaam dena... Arjun Rathore ke khel mein usoolon ke jagah nahi... sirf nateeje hote hain."


Yeh keh kar usne rod hata liya aur Vikrant ko toote jism aur toote himmat ke saath wahin tadapta hua chhod diya. Woh andhere mein aise ghul gaya jaise kabhi tha hi nahi.


Yeh sirf ek warning nahi tha. Yeh ek elaan-e-jung tha. Ek khooni elaan... ki Manali mein ab Aryan ke nahi, Arjun Rathore ke niyam chalenge.





QAYAMAT KA NAACH

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein teen saaye the, aur ek shikaar. Kam se kam, woh yahi soch rahe the.

Bistar ke neeche, Sia ka dil uske seene mein ek qaid parinde ki tarah phadphada raha tha. Upar khade saaye ke boot uski aankhon se bas kuch inch door the. Usne apni cheekh ko gale mein hi ghont diya.

Jaise hi teesre saaye ne bistar ko khanjar se uthane ke liye haath badhaya, andhera zinda ho gaya.

Ravi ek toofan ke tarah nahi, Qayamat ke tarah utha. Usne paas rakha bhaari table lamp uthaya, lekin phenka nahi. Usne use ek pendulum ki tarah ghumakar pehle saaye ke thermal goggles par de maara.


CRASH!

Kaanch aur high-tech plastic ke tukde saaye ki aankhon mein ghus gaye. Uski cheekh nikli, par sirf ek pal ke liye. Isse pehle ki uska cheekh poori hota, Ravi uske saamne tha. Usne saaye ke khanjar wale haath ko pakda, uske kohni ko apne ghutne par rakha aur doosre haath se uska kalai ko neeche ki taraf mod diya.

SNAP!

Kohni ke joint ke ulti disha mein tootne ki ek geeli, wehshi awaaz aayi. Par Ravi wahin nahi ruka. Usne qaatil ke hi toote hue haath se khanjar cheena aur uski gardan ke aar-paar utaar diya.

Ek saans... aur pehla saaya zameen par tha. Zinda nahi.

Doosre do saaye, apne saathi ke achanak khatm ho jaane se chaunke, par woh professional the. Unhone Ravi par ek saath hamla kiya. Unke khanjar hawa ko cheerte hue maut ka sangeet gaa rahe the.

Lekin Ravi unse lad nahi raha tha. Woh naach raha tha. Maut ka ek aisa naach jise Sia apni zindagi mein kabhi nahi bhool paayegi.

Woh ek khanjar ke neeche se jhuka, doosre ko apni baazu se deflect kiya, jisse uske haath par ek gehra ghaav laga. Par uske chehre par dard ka nishaan tak nahi tha. Usne doosre qaatil ke hamle ki taaqat ka istemaal karte hue use apni taraf kheencha aur use teesre qaatil ke saamne ek insaani dhaal ki tarah kar diya.

Teesre qaatil ka khanjar apne hi saathi ke seene mein utar gaya.

Uska aankhein dehshat se phail gaya. Par Ravi ne use sambhalne ka ek pal bhi nahi diya. Usne zakhmi qaatil ko ek taraf dhakela aur aakhri bache hue saaye ke taraf badha. Usne zameen par pade Hunter ke pistol ko pair se uchhalkar hawa mein pakda.

Par goli nahi chalaya.

Woh qaatil ke itne kareeb pahunch chuka tha ki pistol ka barrel uske maathe par lage thermal goggle se takra raha tha.


RAVI (uska awaaz andhere se bhi zyada thanda aur khaali tha): "Usse kaho... usne kutte bheje hain... ek sher ke shikaar ke liye."

Aur phir usne trigger nahi, pistol ke pichle hisse (slide) se qaatil ke naak par poori taaqat se vaar kiya.


KRRR-UNCH!

Naak ka haddi toot kar uske dimaag mein ghus gayi. Woh bina koi awaaz kiye, ek murde ki tarah pichhe gir gaya.

Teen professional qaatil. Tees second se bhi kam.

Kamre mein ab sirf Ravi ke tez saanson ke awaaz tha. Aur khoon ka bhaari, lohe jaisa mehek.

Ravi dheere se utha. Uske haath se khoon tapak kar zameen par safed barf par lahu ka pehli boondon ki kahani likh raha tha. Woh dheere-dheere chalta hua kamre ke beech mein aaya. Usne neeche pade jismon ko nahi dekha.

Usne upar dekha.

Seedha uss smoke detector mein lage camera ke lens mein. Arjun ke aankhon mein.

Uske chehre par na ghussa tha, na jeet. Sirf ek aisa khaamoshi jo hazaar cheekhon se zyada darawni tha. Usne apna khoon se sana haath uthaya aur usse apna aankhon ke saamne laaya. Phir, behad dheere se, usne apniaek ungli se apne hi gale par ek lakeer kheencha.

Ek vaada. Ek paigaam. Ek maut ka farmaan.

Arjun Rathore ne ek pyaada samjha tha. Uss raat, usse pata chala ki shatranj ke uss paar... ek Qayamat baitha hai , ek doosra Badshah.

Aur uss Badshah ke chehre par ek an-kaha paigaam saaf likha tha...


"Welcome to my warzone."



RAAKH BHI NAHI MILEGA

Par khel abhi khatm nahi hua tha.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia kaanpte hue yeh sab dekh rahi thi. Uski aankhon mein ab sirf darr nahi, ek aisi hairat thi jise samajhna namumkin tha.

Ravi ne camera ke taraf se nazar hataya aur kamre ko dekha. Ek aam insaan is manzar ko dekh kar cheekh padta ya behosh ho jaata. Chaar lashein. Khoon se sane farsh aur deewar.

Par Ravi... usne ek lambi, thandi saans liya, jaise usne abhi-abhi ek halka sa exercise khatm kiya ho. Uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha. Jaise yeh uske liye roz ka kaam ho.

Woh bina kisi jaldbaazi ke, behad methodical tareeke se kaam par lag gaya.

Usne sabse pehle bed se saari chaadarein utaara. Bistar ke neeche se Sia ne dekha ki usne ek-ek karke chaaron lashon ko un chaadaron mein lapetna shuru kiya. Uske movements ek surgeon ki tarah sateek the. Koi awaaz nahi, koi ghabrahat nahi.

Phir, usne un bhaari gathriyon ko, ek-ek karke, balcony ki taraf kheench kar le jaana shuru kiya. Sia ko laga ki woh shayad unhein neeche phenk dega. Par Ravi ne aisa nahi kiya. Resort ke uss wing ke theek peeche ek ghana, andhera jungle tha, jahan ek gehri khaai tha. Ravi ne ek-ek gathri ko balcony ki railing par rakha aur bina kisi awaaz ke, neeche uss andhere mein dhakel diya jahan se unka suraag milna namumkin tha.

Char insaan... jaise kabhi the hi nahi.

Iske baad woh wapas kamre mein aaya. Sia ne socha ab woh thak kar rukega. Par woh ruka nahi. Usne bathroom se paani ka baalti aur kuch saaf karne wale kapde liye aur zameen par ghutno ke bal baith gaya.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia usse ek bhoot ki tarah kaam karte hue dekh rahi thi. Woh farsh se khoon ka har ek daag, deewar par lage har ek cheente ko aise saaf kar raha tha, jaise koi crime scene cleaner ho. Usne toote hue lamp ke tukde, qaatilon ke gire hue hathiyaar, har cheez ko ikattha kiya aur ek bag mein bhar liya.

Pandrah minute ke andar, woh kamra waisa hi tha jaisa pehle tha. Bas hawa mein khoon aur disinfectant ka halka sa mehek baaki tha. Jaise kuch hua hi nahi tha. Jaise Qayamat aaya, apna kaam kiya, aur bina koi nishaan chhode chala gaya.

Ab Ravi palta. Woh seedha bistar ke paas aaya aur neeche jhuka.

Andhere mein, Sia ko sirf uski do aankhein dikhayi de rahi theen, jo chaand ki roshni mein ajeeb tarah se chamak rahi theen. Un aankhon mein ab woh Ravi nahi tha jise woh school mein jaanti thi.

Ravi ne apna khoon se saaf kiya hua, par ab bhi zakhmi haath uski taraf badhaya.

Uska awaaz ek sargoshi se zyada nahi tha, par Sia ke liye woh ek dhamaka tha. Ek aisa sawaal jo is trip ki, aur shayad uski zindagi ki, disha badalne wala tha.


"Iss khel mein masoomiyat ki keemat maut hota hai, Sia. Main tumhein bacha sakta hoon, par tumhari masoomiyat nahi. Tayyar ho?"

Uska awaaz ab bhi hawa mein tair raha tha jab usne Sia ko dekhe bina aage kaha, jaise woh aane wale kal se baat kar raha ho.

"Kyunki yeh raat toh bas ek trailer tha... asli film toh kal subah Monastery mein shuru hoga."




"Ab batao, Sia... Darr lag raha hai... ya maza aa raha hai?"
 
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BARF KE SAAYE (WARZONE)


PART 4: Jab Khel Khooni Ho Jaye

BONFIRE NIGHT - JALTI AAG, SULAGTE RAAZ

Haadse ne trip ka masoomiyat ko cheer kar rakh diya tha, trip ka mahaul badal gaya tha. Us raat resort ke bahar jalta bonfire ka aag garmahat kam, ek ajeeb sa bechaini zyada de raha tha. Aag ke chatakti laptein students ke chehron par ajeeb-o-gareeb saaye bana raha tha. Kuch log gaa-baja kar mahaul ko halka karne ke nakaam koshish kar rahe the, lekin unke gaano mein bhi ek dar ka goonj tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise aas paas ka ghana, kaala jungle unhe ghoor raha ho, unke har sargoshi sun raha ho.

Arjun, jo din bhar se Ravi ke hero banne par sulag raha tha ,ek shaatir shikaari ke tarah, apne mauke ka intezaar kar raha tha. Arjun ne is mauke ka poora fayda uthaya.


Usne Sia ko aag ke paas akele khade dekha aur apne doston ko ishaara karke uske paas chala gaya. Rishi aur Virat ne usey ek smirk ke saath 'all the best' ka ishaara kiya, jabki Sameer bechaini se idhar-udhar dekh raha tha.

Arjun ne Sia ke paas jaakar apni awaaz mein jitni ho sake utni fikr bharte hue kaha.


Arjun: "Sardi badh gaya hai. Din mein jo hua, uske baad tumhe apna extra dhyaan rakhna chahiye."
Uska awaaz mein fikr ka mitha zahar ghula hua tha, par uska aankhein Sia ke chehre par dar talaash raha tha.

Sia ne kuch jawab nahi diya, bas aag ki lapton ko dekhti rahi.

Tabhi, resort ka buzurg pahaadi chowkidar, Deenu Kaka, jo apni khukri hamesha kamar mein lagaye rakhta tha, aag ke paas aaya. Unhone ek nazar sab par daale aur unke aankhein Ravi, YuKi, aur Aarav par aakar thehar gaya. Unke jhurriyon bhari awaaz mein sadiyon ka anubhav tha.


Deenu Kaka: "Yeh pahaad jitne sundar dikhte hain, utne hain nahi, bachchon. Jab raat gehra hota hai aur hawa mein barf ka mehak aata hai, tab 'Barf ke Saaye' utarte hain."

Ek student hass pada. "Kya Kaka, aap bhi dara rahe ho."

Deenu Kaka ki aankhein uss student ko dekh kar sakht ho gaya. "Yeh kahaani nahi, chetavni hai. Woh saaye... woh shikaar karte hain. Na khoon ka nishaan chhodte hain, na haddiyon ka suraag. Jise le jaate hain, woh bas hawa mein gaayab ho jaata hai. Hamesha ke liye."

Sabke hasne ki awaaz gale mein hi atak gaye. Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav ne ek dusre ko dekha. Unhe pata tha, yeh sirf ek lok-katha nahi tha. Yeh ek code tha, ek sandesh tha.

Sia uss anjaan si tension se ghabrakar wahan se hatne lagi. Andhere mein, uska haath anjaane mein Ravi ke ussi haath se takra gaya jo din mein zakhmi hua tha.

Ek jhatka.

Ek current.

Ravi ke dard se see karne ki bajaye saansein ruk gaya. Sia ne foran apna haath pichhe kheench liya. Ek pal ke liye, un dono ki nigahein mile. Uss ek pal mein unhone lafzon se nahi, rooh se baat kiye. Ek an-kaha vaada, ek ehsaas ke is khatre mein woh akele nahi hain.

Lekin woh nahi jaante the ke unke har harkat, har saans, record ho raha tha.

Bahut door, ek ped ke aad mein, andhere se bhi zyada kaala ek saaya baitha tha. Ek high-tech night-vision camera ke lens un dono par zoom kiye hue tha. Lens ke peeche baitha aankhon mein koi bhavna nahi tha, sirf aadesh ka intezaar tha.


KRAK!

Jungle ke andhere se achanak ek moti tehni tootne ka awaaz aaya. Awaaz itna tez tha jaise kisi ne jaan-boojh kar use toda ho.

Sabhi students darr kar ek-dum shaant ho gaye. Bonfire ka aag ke alawa har taraf maut jaisa sannata tha. Sabka aankhein uss andhere ki taraf dekh raha tha jahan se awaaz aaya tha.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri ka handle kas ke pakad liya.

Aur uss andhere mein baithe shakhs ne apne satellite phone par ek encrypted message type kiya:


"Ravi kamzor hai. Uska ek kamzori hai. Tasdeek ho gaya. Mansoobe ke agle hisse ki ijaazat di jaaye."


Masti ka waqt khatm ho chuka tha. Asli khel ab shuru hone wala tha.




Raakh Hoti Aag, Sulagti Nafrat

KRAK!

Jungle se aayi uss awaaz ne bonfire ke aas paas jami hawa ko sheeshe ki tarah tod diya. Sabhi students darr se ek dusre se sat gaye. Unki saari masti, saare gaane, ek pal mein hawa ho gaye.


Principal Malhotra: "Shaant raho! Stay calm, everyone! Koi jaanwar hoga."

Ms. Meera: "Sab log resort ke andar chalo! Now! Make a line!"

Lekin Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav jaante the. Yeh kisi jaanwar ki awaaz nahi tha. Yeh ek sochi-samjhi harkat tha. Ek signal. Ek ailaan.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri aadhi bahar nikaal liye the, unke tajurbekaar aankhein andhere ko aise cheed raha tha, jaise woh saayon ke aar-paar dekh sakta ho.

Students ke beech afra-tafri mach gaya. Sab jaldi se jaldi resort ki garmahat mein laut jaana chahte the. Isi bhagdad mein, Sia ne Ravi ko dekha. Woh apni jagah se hila tak nahi tha. Uski nigahein uss andhere par tik tha, jaise woh uss shakhs ko dekh sakta ho jo wahan chhupa baitha tha. Ravi ke chehre par dar nahi, ek sard ghussa tha. Aisa ghussa jo shikaar ko shikaari bana deta hai.

Ms. Meera ne sabko andar lobby mein ikattha kiya.


Ms. Meera: "Okay, everyone, apne apne room partners ke saath check karo. Make sure everyone is here."

Ek-ek karke sabne "Yes, ma'am" kehna shuru kiya.

Bonfire ki aakhri laptein bhi bujh chuka tha. Jalti lakdiyon ki mehak ab hawa mein faile dhuen aur anjaane khatre ki sargoshiyon mein badal gaya tha. Students thake-haare apne kamron mein laut gaye the, is baat se bekhabar ki unke beech chupe shikaari ab apne agle vaar ki taiyaari kar rahe the.



Arjun ke kamre mein...

Kamra andhere mein dooba hua tha. Sirf laptop ki neeli roshni Arjun ke chehre par kathor parchhaiyan bana raha tha.

Whiskey ka adha bhara glass mez par apne naseeb ka intezaar kar raha tha, bilkul waise hi jaise Arjun ki shatranj ke mohre uske agle hukum ka karte the.


Click... Click... Click.

Mouse ka har click ek ijaafa tha uss aag mein jo Arjun ke seene mein sulag raha tha. Telephoto lens se kheencha gaya darjanon tasveeron ka silsila ruk gaya, ek file mein qaid theen, lekin Arjun ka cursor baar-baar ek hi tasveer par aakar ruk jaata.

Ek frame par. Sirf ek.


Woh tasveer nahi, ek lamha tha. Ek pal, jab Sia ka haath anjaane mein Ravi ke haath se chhua tha. Unke ungliyon ka mehez ek lams (sparsh)... lekin unke chehron par likha kashish aur bechaini ek poori dastaan bayaan kar raha tha. Arjun uss tasveer ko zoom karke dekh raha tha. Woh Sia ke chehre par aayi pal bhar ki sharam, aur Ravi ki aankhon mein uss ek pal ke liye thehar gayi duniya ko saaf padh sakta tha.

Yeh sirf ek masoomi si chuhan nahi tha. Yeh Arjun ke banaye hue khel mein ek baghawat tha. Ek aag tha jo uska saltanat mein lag raha tha. Sia uska shatranj ka Wazir thi—khubsoorat, khatarnaak, aur sirf uske ishaaron par chalne waali. Aur ek Wazir ka kisi maamuli pyaade ke taraf dekhna bhi... badshaah ki tauheen hota hai.

Uska ungliyan keyboard par kas gaya. Chehre par ek sard muskaan phail gaya. Usne phone uthaya, number dial kiya. Uski awaaz sheeshe ke tarah saaf aur thandi tha.


ARJUN: "Khanna, waqt aa gaya hai. Plan B. Abhi."

Doosri taraf se sirf ek itminaan bhari awaaz aaya,
"Hukum kijiye, Sir."

ARJUN:
"Activate it , "Monastery ka program kal subah ka hai. Main chahta hoon resort ka woh pura wing andhere mein doob jaaye jahan Ravi Mishra apni neend poori kar raha hai. Ek 'power trip' lagna chahiye .Aisa andhera ki woh apni parchhayi se bhi darr jaaye. Aur sabse zaroori... communications. Blackout. Koi Wi-Fi nahi, koi mobile network nahi. Main chahta hoon Kal subah jab suraj nikle, toh yeh resort duniya ke liye ek black hole ban jaana chahiye."


KHANNA : "Ho jaayega, Sir. Suraj ugne se pehle, woh apni hi parchhai se bhi baat nahi kar payega."

Arjun ne call kaat diya.

Uske nigahein wapas uss tasveer par lauta. Usne Ravi ke chehre par cursor rakha, jaise nishaana laga raha ho.


ARJUN (khud se): "Khelne ka bohot shauk hai na tumhein, Ravi Mishra? Chalo, ek naya khel khelte hain. Ek aisa khel jismein roshni nahi hoga... aawaaz nahi hoga... aur tumhara kamzori hi tumhara gala ghontega."

Ek aakhri, aatish-fishaan nazar se tasveer ko dekh kar usne 'Delete' ka button daba diya.

Screen par likha aaya:
File Permanently Deleted.

Jaise Ravi Mishra ka wajood.

[LOCATION: SIA’S RESORT ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein maddham roshni tha, lekin Sia ko aaine mein apna aks nahi, apni uljhi hui rooh nazar aa rahi thi. Aaine ke uss paar khadi ladki ek anjaan shakhs lag rahi thi, jiski aankhon mein farz ki thakaan aur dil ki baghawat saaf dikh rahi thi.

Ek taraf Dada Sahab ka mission tha—ek maqsad jiske liye usne apni zindagi daanv par laga di thi. Doosri taraf Alisha ke zehar mein bujhe hue shabd kaan mein goonj rahe the, ek aisi chetavni jo anjaam ka aaina dikha rahi thi.

Aur in dono chattanon ke beech... Ravi ke haath ka woh ehsaas.

Ek second se bhi chhota lamha, lekin jaise waqt uss ek pal mein qaid ho gaya tha. Uski hatheli par abhi bhi uss chuhan ki jhanjhanahat thi. Uska dimaag cheekh raha tha ki yeh ek galti hai, ek kamzori jo usse uske maqsad se bhatka degi, jo usse barbaad kar degi. Par dil... woh dimaag ki ek bhi daleel sunne ko taiyaar nahi tha.

Usne aaine par apni ungliyan pheri, jaise apne hi aks ko samajhane ki koshish kar rahi ho.


SIA (fufusate hue):
"Kaash yeh trip... bas ek trip hota"

Uski awaaz kamre ki khaamoshi mein ek raaz ki tarah ghul gayi. Ek aisa raaz, jo shayad uski sabse badi taqat banne wala tha... ya uski tabahi ka kaaran.

PART 5: SHIKARI HUA SHIKAR

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein ek kafan jaisi khamoshi tha, lekin Ravi ke andar ek toofan chal raha tha. Yeh alag-thalag kamra aaraam ke liye nahi, ek qaid-khane ki tarah lag raha tha. Bonfire ki aag bujh chuka tha, par uska peeth par chubhta hua woh nigahein... usse ab bhi mehsoos ho rahe theen. Uska instinct, jo saalon ki training se faulad ban chuka tha, chilla raha tha—"Tum akele nahi ho."

Usne lights band kar diya. Andhera uski aankhon ke liye ek parda nahi, ek hathiyaar tha.

Usne kamre ko dekhna nahi, usse 'padhna' shuru kiya. Har kona, har saaya, har cheez jo apni jagah par nahi tha. Uska nigahein ek professional ki tarah scan karti hui... ceiling par lage smoke detector par jaakar theher gaya. Uska design ajeeb tha, standard model se alag. Aur tabhi usne woh dekha... ek behad baareek, lagbhag adrishya laal roshni, jo ek dil ke tarah... ek second ke hazaarwein hisse ke liye dhadka.


Arjun ka jaal.

Ravi ke chehre par muskaan nahi aayi. Uski aankhon mein ek aisi thandak utar aayi jo Manali ki barf ko bhi sharma de.

"Toh khel shuru ho chuka hai, Arjun Rathore."

Usne camera todne jaisa bachkani galti nahi kiya. Nahi. Usne khelne ka faisla kiya. Par ab, niyam uske honge.


Woh bed par gaya aur kambal ko aise odha, jaise ek thaka hua insaan gehri neend mein doob jaata hai. Usne apni saanson ki raftaar ko dheema kiya, apne jism ko bilkul shaant chhod diya. Woh intezaar kar raha tha, uss shikari ke sustane ka, jo usse ek aasaan shikaar samajh raha tha.

Das minute... pandrah minute... Bees minute.

Aur phir, jaise bijli kadakta hai...

Ek jhatke ke saath, Ravi ka wing mein har roshni, har awaaz, har electronic saans band ho gaya. Generator ka backup bhi aane se pehle hi mar gaya. Yeh ek 'power trip' nahi tha; yeh ek 'power execution' tha. Ek surgical strike, jiska nishana sirf ek tha.

Lekin is andhere mein, jahan ek aam insaan ki aankhein bebasi se phail jaati, Ravi ki aankhein... unhone jeena shuru kiya.

Uska shareer ekdum shaant ho gaya, saansein itna dheema ki jaise ruk hi gaya ho. Usne bistar se utarkar zameen par pair rakha, bina kisi awaaz ke. Uske kaan ab uska aankhein ban chuke the. Woh hawa mein aate badlaav, temperature mein girta har degree, aur door corridor mein bichha carpet par padne wale har anjaane bojh ko mehsoos kar sakta tha.

Uska dimaag ek supercomputer ke tarah kaam kar raha tha.


RAVI (Inner Monologue): "Blackout. Sirf meri wing mein. Communications dead. Yeh Arjun ka kaam hai. Woh mujhe alag-thalag karna chahta hai. Par woh ek galti kar raha hai. Andhera mera dushman nahi... mera ghar hai. Is andhere mein, main shikaar nahi, shikaari hoon."

Usne apne zakhmi haath ki mutthi bheenche. Dard ki ek tez lehar utha, par uss dard ne usse sulaya nahi, jaga diya. Usse yaad dilaya ki khatra kitna asli hai.

Tabhi... aawaz aaya.

Ek halka sa 'click' ka awaaz. Uske kamre ke darwaze ke lock se. Koi bahar se electronic key card override karne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Ravi ek saaye ki tarah pichhe hata aur deewar se sat kar khada ho gaya, theek darwaze ke paas, jahan se andar aane wala usey pehli nazar mein dekh na sake. Usne paas rakhe bhaari table lamp ko haath mein utha liya. Yeh koi high-tech hathiyaar nahi tha, par andhere mein, sahi waqt par, yeh maut ka doosra naam ban sakta tha.

Darwaza bina awaaz kiye khula.

Ek kaala saaya, sir se paanv tak kaale tactical gear mein, kamre mein daakhil hua. Uske haath mein ek chhota, suppressed pistol tha, jiske aage night-vision scope laga tha. Woh professional tha.

Par usne ek galti kar dala. Usne Ravi ko bistar par dhoondha.

Aur Ravi bistar par nahi tha.

Jaise hi woh saaya aage badha, andhera zinda ho gaya. Ravi uske peeche se ek toofan ki tarah ubhra. Uska zakhmi haath ek lohe ke panje ki tarah saaye ki pistol wali kalai par pada. Isse pehle ki woh trigger daba paata, Ravi ne uski kalai ko ek wehshi angle par mod diya.


KRRACK!

Haddi aur cartilage ke tootne ki ek geeli, dil-dehlaane wali awaaz andhere mein goonj gayi. Saaye ke munh se ek dabi hui cheekh nikli, par Ravi ne usse mauka nahi diya. Usne ussi toote haath se use apni taraf kheencha aur apna ghutna uski pasliyon mein de maara. Doosri KRAK ki awaaz aayi.

Saaya professional tha. Dard ke bawajood, usne apne doosre haath se ek combat knife nikaala aur Ravi ke pet ki taraf vaar kiya.

Par Ravi wahan tha hi nahi. Woh hawa ki tarah pichhe hata, saaye ka santulan bigadne diya, aur phir aage badhkar, uske knife wale haath ki kohni par ek brutal 'elbow-lock' laga diya. Teesra
CRACK!

Saaye ke dono haath ab bekaar the. Isse pehle ki woh cheekh paata, Ravi ne uske baalon ko pakda aur uska sir deewar par de maara.

THUMP!

Saaya behosh hokar zameen par dher ho gaya.

Ravi ne uske chehre se naqaab hataya. Ek anjaan chehra. Ek kiraye ka qaatil. Par Ravi ka dhyaan uske kaan mein lage communication device par gaya. Usne use nikaal kar apne kaan mein lagaya. Doosri taraf se Arjun ki bechain awaaz aa raha tha.


ARJUN (O.S. via earpiece): "Hunter? Kya hua? Report! Status!"

Ravi ne kuch nahi kaha. Usne device ko zameen par rakha aur apne military boot se, dheere se, poora wazan daal kar use kuchal diya.


CRUNCH

Yeh khel ka pehla mohra tha jo shatranj se bahar ho chuka tha.



[LOCATION: ARJUN’S ROOM]

CRUNCH.

Earpiece se aaya aakhri awaaz Arjun ke kaano mein zehar ke tarah utar gayi. Uske chehre par gusse aur hairat ka toofan umad aaya.

ARJUN (gurrate hue): "Impossible! Usne HUNTER ko... andhere mein... bina hathiyaar ke?"

Usne apni whiskey ka glass ek jhatke mein khaali kar diya. Uska plan, uska perfect plan, pehli hi chaal mein dhwast ho chuka tha. Usne Ravi ko kamzor samjha tha. Yeh uski sabse badi bhool thi.

Usne Mr. Khana ko call kiya, jo bahar corridor mein pehra de raha tha.unke pass Virat , Rishi aur Sameer bhi khade the.


ARJUN: "Plan B fail ho gaya hai! HUNTER neeche hai. Ab Plan C. 'Saayon' ko aage badhne ka ishaara do. Unse kaho, shikaar ab hoshiyaar ho chuka hai. Aur Virat..."

VIRAT : "Ji, Arjun bhai."

ARJUN: "Agar Sia apne kamre se bahar nikle... usey rokna mat. Bas us par nazar rakhna. Woh Ravi ke taraf hi jaayegi. Aur jab kamzori khud shikaari ke paas jaaye... toh khel aur bhi mazedaar ho jaata hai."

Usne call kaat diya aur monitor par aayi ek live feed ko dekhne laga. Ek hidden camera Sia ke kamre ke theek bahar laga tha. Woh intezaar kar raha tha. Apne Wazir ko, pyaade ki taraf badhte hue dekhne ka.




[LOCATION: SIA'S ROOM / CORRIDOR]

Sia apne kamre mein bechaini se tehel rahi thi. Ravi ki wing mein andhera hote hi uska dil kisi anhoni ke aashanka se doob gaya tha. Uska dimaag usey Dada Sahab ka mission yaad dila raha tha, par uska dil... woh Ravi ke naam ki zidd kar raha tha.

"Main uske maamle mein nahi pad sakti. Yeh mission ke liye khatra hai," usne khud se kaha.

Par agle hi pal, usne darwaza khola. Uska dil jeet chuka tha.

Corridor mein maut jaisa sannata tha. Woh dabe paanv aage badhi. Har kadam uske farz par ek chot jaisa tha. Jab woh Ravi ke wing ke paas pahunchi, toh usne andhere mein khade ek saaye ko dekha. Virat.

Virat ne use dekha, par Arjun ke hukum ke mutaabik, usne Sia ko roka nahi. Bas ek ajeeb, sard muskaan di, jaise keh raha ho,
"Jao, apni maut ki taraf."

Sia usse nazarandaaz karke aage badh gayi. Ravi ka darwaza halka sa khula tha. Usne darte-darte andar jhaanka.

Andar ka manzar dekh kar uski saansein gale mein hi atak gayi.

Ravi zameen par baitha tha, behosh HUNTER ke paas. Kamre mein sirf chaand ka halka roshni aa raha tha. Us roshni mein, Ravi ka chehra kisi insaan ka nahi, ek... yoddha ka lag raha tha. Uska aankhon mein ghussa nahi, ek thanda, hisaabi focus tha.


SIA (dheere se): "Ravi...?"

Ravi ne palat kar use dekha. Uski aankhon mein ek pal ke liye narmi aaya.


RAVI: "Tumhein yahan nahi aana chahiye tha, Sia. Yeh jagah ab mehfooz nahi hai."

SIA: "Main bas... main chinta kar rahi thi."

Isse pehle ki Ravi kuch kehta, uske kaan khade ho gaye. Usne Sia ko ishare se chup rehne ko kaha.

Bahar... corridor mein... kadmon ki awaaz aa rahi tha.

Par yeh ek insaan ke kadmon ki awaaz nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise koi cheez... barf par reng rahi ho. Koi awaaz nahi, koi khusar-pusar nahi. Bas ek ehsaas. Ek thanda, maut jaisa ehsaas jo darwaze ke neeche se sarak kar andar aa raha tha.

Deenu Kaka ki awaaz Ravi ke dimaag mein goonja.
'Barf ke Saaye'.


RAVI (sargoshi mein): "Bistar ke neeche chhup jao. Aur jab tak main na kahun, bahar mat nikalna. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye."

Uska awaaz mein ek aisa authority tha jise Sia mana nahi kar saka. Woh foran bistar ke neeche chhup gayi.

Ravi ne Hunter ke behosh shareer ko ek taraf kheencha aur darwaze ke peeche phir se apni position le liya.

Darwaza dheere-dheere, ek ajeeb si crakkk ke saath khula.

Iss baar, ek nahi... teen saaye andar daakhil hue. Unhone kaale nahi, balki barf jaise safed, camouflage gear pehne the. Unke chehre par ajeeb se thermal goggles the aur unke haath mein khukri jaise, aage se mude hue, ghatak khanjar the.

Woh hawa ki tarah shaant the. Unka har move ek socha-samjha, train kiya hua qadam tha.

Pehle saaye ne kamre ko scan kiya. Doosra Hunter ke shareer ke paas gaya. Aur teesra... teesra theek uss bistar ke paas jaakar khada ho gaya jiske neeche Sia apni saansein roke chhipi hui thi.

Khel ab one-on-one nahi raha tha.

Yeh teen-on-one tha. Aur Ravi jaanta tha... yeh Arjun ke mamooli gunde nahi the.

Yeh professional qaatil the.
'Barf ke Saaye'.

Jangal ka asli shikaar... ab shuru ho chuka tha.




YAADON KE PEHREDAAR

[LOCATION: GADEN BAUDH MATH – ANDRUNI KAKSH]

Jabke resort ke uss kamre mein saansein ruka hua tha, pahaadon ki goad mein basa Gaden Baudh Math ka roohani khamoshi bhi uss ek kamre mein aakar thehar jaata tha. Yeh math ka sabse gupt, sabse andhera hissa tha. Hawa mein chandan, kapoor aur sadiyon purani prarthnaon ki mehek ek saath ghula hua tha. Deewaron par bane thangka paintings andhere mein saans lete hue mehsoos ho rahe the.

Beech mein baithe Lama Tashi ke aankhein band tha, par unka astitva uss kamre ki har cheez par haavi tha. Unke saamne, zameen par ghutno ke bal, Kitsune (YuKi) ka sir jhuka hua tha.

Lama Tashi ki bhaari awaaz pattharon se takraaya, jaise koi gufa goonj utha ho.



LAMA TASHI: "Aasmaan se toota hua taara... apni roshni zaroor kho chuka hai, Kitsune. Lekin girte waqt woh Qayamat ki garmi apne andar samet laaya hai. Tumhara zimmedaari sirf uske zakhmi jism ka nahi, uska bikhra hua rooh ka hifazat karna hai. Woh ab ek aisa daulat hai jiski koi keemat nahi, aur jise lootne ke liye Shaitan khud zameen par utar aaya hai."


KITSUNE: (Awaaz mein bebasi) :"Uss garmi ko woh khud mehsoos nahi kar paa raha, Lama. Uski aankhon mein ek aisa khaamoshi hai... jismein sirf aakhri tabahi ka shor hai. Apni pehchaan ki ek chingari tak nahi. Agar usse zara bhi yaad hota, toh woh meri aankhon mein chhipa fikr aur Aarav ke chehre par ubalte laave ko ek pal mein pehchaan leta."

Tabhi andhere se ek fauladi awaaz ne Kitsune ke shabdon ko cheer diya.

"Khaamoshi kamzori nahi, gehraayi ka nishaani hota hai, Lama. Aur samandar ki gehraayi mein hi toofan saans lete hain."

Phoenix (Aarav) andhere se nikal kar uss roshni mein aaya jo ek ghee ke diye se phail raha tha. Uska aankhein ek shikari baaz ki tarah aage dekh raha tha, jaise woh deewaron ke paar bhi dekh sakta ho.


PHOENIX (AARAV): "Woh sab kuch bhoola nahi hai. Uska yaadon par bas jakhmon ka zang lag gaya hai. Chehre dhundhle ho gaye hain, par unn chehron se mile dard ka ehsaas aaj bhi taza hai. Woh aag... woh cheekhein... uske zehen mein nahi, uski rooh mein qaid hain. Ek Shezaada jiska takht uska yaadein tha, aur woh takht ab cheen liya gaya hai."

LAMA TASHI: (Dheere se apni aankhein kholte hain. Unke nazron mein gyaan nahi, ek aisa chetavni tha jo waqt ko rok de.)
"Aur yahi baat usse is duniya ka sabse khatarnaak hathiyaar banata hai! Uska dimaag ab ek band darwaza nahi... woh Pralay ka taaboot hai. Ek aisi taqat jise dushman apni jeet samajhta hai, aur jise humein is duniya ke antt se pehle kaabu mein rakhna hai. Agar woh taaboot khul gaya... toh yeh duniya uss Shezaade ka kahani nahi, uska tabahi ka kissa sunega."


KITSUNE: (Uthkar, awaaz mein ek nayi zimmedaari ke saath)
"Toh humara maqsad kya hai, Lama?"


LAMA TASHI: "Tum dono uske saaye nahi... uski yaadon ke pehredaar banoge. Tumhare jung sirf dushman se nahi, uske ateet se bhi hai. Tumhein usse bachana bhi hai... aur waqt aane par, is duniya ko uss se bachana bhi hai. Jaao! Kyunki waqt ka ret nahi, zindagiyan phisal raha hain. Aur dushman ne apni pehli chaal chal diya hai."




USOOLON KI QEEMAT

[LOCATION: RESORT – STAFF QUARTERS – RAAT]

Resort ke chamak-damak ke peeche ek aur duniya tha. Geeli deewaron, seelan ki mehek aur saste disinfectant ki gandh waala. Yeh staff quarters ka pichla hissa tha, jahan andhera bhi zyada thaka hua aur gehra lagta tha.

Yahin par, parchhaiyon ko apna saathi banaye, Vikrant aage badh raha tha. Woh Aryan ke sabse puraane aur wafadaar aadmiyon mein se tha. Uski ragon mein khoon ke saath Aryan bhai ka ek usool daudta tha—"Begunahon par haath nahi uthana." Aur Arjun ke Manali aane ke baad se hi, usse yeh usool toot-ta hua mehsoos ho raha tha.

Usne Arjun ke Security Head ko ek band pade store room mein ghuste dekha. Ek aisi jagah jahan kisi ko nahi jaana chahiye tha. Vikrant deewar se sat kar aage badha, uske saans lene ki awaaz bhi usse dhokha de sakti thi. Usne darwaze ke daraar se andar jhaanka, aur jo dekha, usse uska rooh tak kaanp gayi.

Andar do log the. Security Head... aur ek anjaan saaya.

Woh saaya roshni mein aaya. Lamba, patla jism. Lambe baal jo uske chehre par a rahe the. Gaal par ek purane zakhm ka nishaan, jaise kisi janwar ne panja maara ho. Par sabse darawni cheez uska aankhein theen—bilkul khaali, jaise unke peeche koi insaan nahi, sirf maut ka intezaar tha.



(NAYE KIRDAAR KI ENTRY – KAI)

Woh ek professional mercenary tha. Ek bhoot, jise Arjun ne khaas iss kaam ke liye kiraye par liya tha. Kai usoolon par nahi, keemat par kaam karta tha.


SECURITY HEAD: (Awaaz mein ek ajeeb sa ghabrahat) "Target confirm hai. Ladki, Jaanvi. Kal Monastery mein... kaam saaf hona chahiye."

Kai ne jawaab nahi diya, bas gardan halki sa hilaaya. Jab woh bola, toh uska awaaz sookhe patton par rengte saanp jaisa tha.



KAI: "Kaam ho jaayega. Par Rathore Junior ko yaad dila dena, iss kaam ki keemat sirf paisa nahi hai... uska khamoshi bhi hai. Kissa khatam hone ke baad, main kabhi tha hi nahi."


Vikrant ka dimaag sunn ho gaya. Dhokha. Arjun ne apne hi bhai ko dhokha diya tha. Yeh sabaq sikhaane ki nahi, ek begunah ko mitaane ki saazish tha. Usne bina awaaz kiye wahan se hatna chaha, par uska kismat ne saath chhod diya. Uska pair neeche pade kaanch ke ek toote hue tukde par pad gaya.



KRRNNCH!

Awaaz mamuli tha, par uss khamoshi mein ek dhamake jaisa laga.

Ek palak jhapk mein Kai insaan se hathiyaar ban gaya. Woh aisi tezi se palta jaise hawa ne rukh badla ho. Uska khaali aankhein seedha daraar ke uss paar Vikrant ki dehshat-zada aankhon se takraaya.

Sochne ka waqt nahi tha. Vikrant bhaaga.

Par Kai shikaar tha, aur Vikrant shikaari. Woh ek saaye ke tarah uske peeche lapka, uske kadmon ki awaaz tak nahi aa raha tha. Vikrant ne jaan bachane ke liye daudte hue paas pada ek zang laga lohe ka rod uthaya aur palat kar poori taqat se vaar kiya.


Kai ne ek hairaan kar dene waala furti se uss rod ko hawa mein hi pakad liya. Uska kalai tak nahi hila.

Ek jhatke mein usne rod Vikrant ke haath se cheen liya. Isse pehle ki Vikrant apna galti samajh paata, Kai ne wahi rod ghuma kar uske ghutne par de maara.


CRACK!

Haddi ke tootne ki wehshi awaaz uss tang corridor mein goonj gaya.

Vikrant ki cheekh uske gale mein hi ghut gaya jab woh zameen par gira. Kai uske upar shikaari ke tarah jhuka. Uska aankhon mein na gussa tha, na nafrat. Sirf ek peshewar khamoshi.



KAI: "Galat waqt... galat jagah."

Usne rod uthaaya aur Vikrant ke doosre haath ke kalai par maar diya. Ek aur dardnaak cheekh. Phir usne rod Vikrant ke gardan par rakha aur dheere se dabav badhaya, bas itna ki saans rukne lage.



KAI (sargoshi mein, jaise koi raaz bata raha ho): "Apne Aryan bhai ko paigaam dena... Arjun Rathore ke khel mein usoolon ke jagah nahi... sirf nateeje hote hain."


Yeh keh kar usne rod hata liya aur Vikrant ko toote jism aur toote himmat ke saath wahin tadapta hua chhod diya. Woh andhere mein aise ghul gaya jaise kabhi tha hi nahi.


Yeh sirf ek warning nahi tha. Yeh ek elaan-e-jung tha. Ek khooni elaan... ki Manali mein ab Aryan ke nahi, Arjun Rathore ke niyam chalenge.





QAYAMAT KA NAACH

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein teen saaye the, aur ek shikaar. Kam se kam, woh yahi soch rahe the.

Bistar ke neeche, Sia ka dil uske seene mein ek qaid parinde ki tarah phadphada raha tha. Upar khade saaye ke boot uski aankhon se bas kuch inch door the. Usne apni cheekh ko gale mein hi ghont diya.

Jaise hi teesre saaye ne bistar ko khanjar se uthane ke liye haath badhaya, andhera zinda ho gaya.

Ravi ek toofan ke tarah nahi, Qayamat ke tarah utha. Usne paas rakha bhaari table lamp uthaya, lekin phenka nahi. Usne use ek pendulum ki tarah ghumakar pehle saaye ke thermal goggles par de maara.


CRASH!

Kaanch aur high-tech plastic ke tukde saaye ki aankhon mein ghus gaye. Uski cheekh nikli, par sirf ek pal ke liye. Isse pehle ki uska cheekh poori hota, Ravi uske saamne tha. Usne saaye ke khanjar wale haath ko pakda, uske kohni ko apne ghutne par rakha aur doosre haath se uska kalai ko neeche ki taraf mod diya.

SNAP!

Kohni ke joint ke ulti disha mein tootne ki ek geeli, wehshi awaaz aayi. Par Ravi wahin nahi ruka. Usne qaatil ke hi toote hue haath se khanjar cheena aur uski gardan ke aar-paar utaar diya.

Ek saans... aur pehla saaya zameen par tha. Zinda nahi.

Doosre do saaye, apne saathi ke achanak khatm ho jaane se chaunke, par woh professional the. Unhone Ravi par ek saath hamla kiya. Unke khanjar hawa ko cheerte hue maut ka sangeet gaa rahe the.

Lekin Ravi unse lad nahi raha tha. Woh naach raha tha. Maut ka ek aisa naach jise Sia apni zindagi mein kabhi nahi bhool paayegi.

Woh ek khanjar ke neeche se jhuka, doosre ko apni baazu se deflect kiya, jisse uske haath par ek gehra ghaav laga. Par uske chehre par dard ka nishaan tak nahi tha. Usne doosre qaatil ke hamle ki taaqat ka istemaal karte hue use apni taraf kheencha aur use teesre qaatil ke saamne ek insaani dhaal ki tarah kar diya.

Teesre qaatil ka khanjar apne hi saathi ke seene mein utar gaya.

Uska aankhein dehshat se phail gaya. Par Ravi ne use sambhalne ka ek pal bhi nahi diya. Usne zakhmi qaatil ko ek taraf dhakela aur aakhri bache hue saaye ke taraf badha. Usne zameen par pade Hunter ke pistol ko pair se uchhalkar hawa mein pakda.

Par goli nahi chalaya.

Woh qaatil ke itne kareeb pahunch chuka tha ki pistol ka barrel uske maathe par lage thermal goggle se takra raha tha.


RAVI (uska awaaz andhere se bhi zyada thanda aur khaali tha): "Usse kaho... usne kutte bheje hain... ek sher ke shikaar ke liye."

Aur phir usne trigger nahi, pistol ke pichle hisse (slide) se qaatil ke naak par poori taaqat se vaar kiya.


KRRR-UNCH!

Naak ka haddi toot kar uske dimaag mein ghus gayi. Woh bina koi awaaz kiye, ek murde ki tarah pichhe gir gaya.

Teen professional qaatil. Tees second se bhi kam.

Kamre mein ab sirf Ravi ke tez saanson ke awaaz tha. Aur khoon ka bhaari, lohe jaisa mehek.

Ravi dheere se utha. Uske haath se khoon tapak kar zameen par safed barf par lahu ka pehli boondon ki kahani likh raha tha. Woh dheere-dheere chalta hua kamre ke beech mein aaya. Usne neeche pade jismon ko nahi dekha.

Usne upar dekha.

Seedha uss smoke detector mein lage camera ke lens mein. Arjun ke aankhon mein.

Uske chehre par na ghussa tha, na jeet. Sirf ek aisa khaamoshi jo hazaar cheekhon se zyada darawni tha. Usne apna khoon se sana haath uthaya aur usse apna aankhon ke saamne laaya. Phir, behad dheere se, usne apniaek ungli se apne hi gale par ek lakeer kheencha.

Ek vaada. Ek paigaam. Ek maut ka farmaan.

Arjun Rathore ne ek pyaada samjha tha. Uss raat, usse pata chala ki shatranj ke uss paar... ek Qayamat baitha hai , ek doosra Badshah.

Aur uss Badshah ke chehre par ek an-kaha paigaam saaf likha tha...


"Welcome to my warzone."



RAAKH BHI NAHI MILEGA

Par khel abhi khatm nahi hua tha.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia kaanpte hue yeh sab dekh rahi thi. Uski aankhon mein ab sirf darr nahi, ek aisi hairat thi jise samajhna namumkin tha.

Ravi ne camera ke taraf se nazar hataya aur kamre ko dekha. Ek aam insaan is manzar ko dekh kar cheekh padta ya behosh ho jaata. Chaar lashein. Khoon se sane farsh aur deewar.

Par Ravi... usne ek lambi, thandi saans liya, jaise usne abhi-abhi ek halka sa exercise khatm kiya ho. Uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha. Jaise yeh uske liye roz ka kaam ho.

Woh bina kisi jaldbaazi ke, behad methodical tareeke se kaam par lag gaya.

Usne sabse pehle bed se saari chaadarein utaara. Bistar ke neeche se Sia ne dekha ki usne ek-ek karke chaaron lashon ko un chaadaron mein lapetna shuru kiya. Uske movements ek surgeon ki tarah sateek the. Koi awaaz nahi, koi ghabrahat nahi.

Phir, usne un bhaari gathriyon ko, ek-ek karke, balcony ki taraf kheench kar le jaana shuru kiya. Sia ko laga ki woh shayad unhein neeche phenk dega. Par Ravi ne aisa nahi kiya. Resort ke uss wing ke theek peeche ek ghana, andhera jungle tha, jahan ek gehri khaai tha. Ravi ne ek-ek gathri ko balcony ki railing par rakha aur bina kisi awaaz ke, neeche uss andhere mein dhakel diya jahan se unka suraag milna namumkin tha.

Char insaan... jaise kabhi the hi nahi.

Iske baad woh wapas kamre mein aaya. Sia ne socha ab woh thak kar rukega. Par woh ruka nahi. Usne bathroom se paani ka baalti aur kuch saaf karne wale kapde liye aur zameen par ghutno ke bal baith gaya.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia usse ek bhoot ki tarah kaam karte hue dekh rahi thi. Woh farsh se khoon ka har ek daag, deewar par lage har ek cheente ko aise saaf kar raha tha, jaise koi crime scene cleaner ho. Usne toote hue lamp ke tukde, qaatilon ke gire hue hathiyaar, har cheez ko ikattha kiya aur ek bag mein bhar liya.

Pandrah minute ke andar, woh kamra waisa hi tha jaisa pehle tha. Bas hawa mein khoon aur disinfectant ka halka sa mehek baaki tha. Jaise kuch hua hi nahi tha. Jaise Qayamat aaya, apna kaam kiya, aur bina koi nishaan chhode chala gaya.

Ab Ravi palta. Woh seedha bistar ke paas aaya aur neeche jhuka.

Andhere mein, Sia ko sirf uski do aankhein dikhayi de rahi theen, jo chaand ki roshni mein ajeeb tarah se chamak rahi theen. Un aankhon mein ab woh Ravi nahi tha jise woh school mein jaanti thi.

Ravi ne apna khoon se saaf kiya hua, par ab bhi zakhmi haath uski taraf badhaya.

Uska awaaz ek sargoshi se zyada nahi tha, par Sia ke liye woh ek dhamaka tha. Ek aisa sawaal jo is trip ki, aur shayad uski zindagi ki, disha badalne wala tha.


"Iss khel mein masoomiyat ki keemat maut hota hai, Sia. Main tumhein bacha sakta hoon, par tumhari masoomiyat nahi. Tayyar ho?"

Uska awaaz ab bhi hawa mein tair raha tha jab usne Sia ko dekhe bina aage kaha, jaise woh aane wale kal se baat kar raha ho.

"Kyunki yeh raat toh bas ek trailer tha... asli film toh kal subah Monastery mein shuru hoga."




"Ab batao, Sia... Darr lag raha hai... ya maza aa raha hai?"
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UPDATE 11 (B)

BARF KE SAAYE (WARZONE)


PART 4: Jab Khel Khooni Ho Jaye

BONFIRE NIGHT - JALTI AAG, SULAGTE RAAZ

Haadse ne trip ka masoomiyat ko cheer kar rakh diya tha, trip ka mahaul badal gaya tha. Us raat resort ke bahar jalta bonfire ka aag garmahat kam, ek ajeeb sa bechaini zyada de raha tha. Aag ke chatakti laptein students ke chehron par ajeeb-o-gareeb saaye bana raha tha. Kuch log gaa-baja kar mahaul ko halka karne ke nakaam koshish kar rahe the, lekin unke gaano mein bhi ek dar ka goonj tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise aas paas ka ghana, kaala jungle unhe ghoor raha ho, unke har sargoshi sun raha ho.

Arjun, jo din bhar se Ravi ke hero banne par sulag raha tha ,ek shaatir shikaari ke tarah, apne mauke ka intezaar kar raha tha. Arjun ne is mauke ka poora fayda uthaya.


Usne Sia ko aag ke paas akele khade dekha aur apne doston ko ishaara karke uske paas chala gaya. Rishi aur Virat ne usey ek smirk ke saath 'all the best' ka ishaara kiya, jabki Sameer bechaini se idhar-udhar dekh raha tha.

Arjun ne Sia ke paas jaakar apni awaaz mein jitni ho sake utni fikr bharte hue kaha.


Arjun: "Sardi badh gaya hai. Din mein jo hua, uske baad tumhe apna extra dhyaan rakhna chahiye."
Uska awaaz mein fikr ka mitha zahar ghula hua tha, par uska aankhein Sia ke chehre par dar talaash raha tha.

Sia ne kuch jawab nahi diya, bas aag ki lapton ko dekhti rahi.

Tabhi, resort ka buzurg pahaadi chowkidar, Deenu Kaka, jo apni khukri hamesha kamar mein lagaye rakhta tha, aag ke paas aaya. Unhone ek nazar sab par daale aur unke aankhein Ravi, YuKi, aur Aarav par aakar thehar gaya. Unke jhurriyon bhari awaaz mein sadiyon ka anubhav tha.


Deenu Kaka: "Yeh pahaad jitne sundar dikhte hain, utne hain nahi, bachchon. Jab raat gehra hota hai aur hawa mein barf ka mehak aata hai, tab 'Barf ke Saaye' utarte hain."

Ek student hass pada. "Kya Kaka, aap bhi dara rahe ho."

Deenu Kaka ki aankhein uss student ko dekh kar sakht ho gaya. "Yeh kahaani nahi, chetavni hai. Woh saaye... woh shikaar karte hain. Na khoon ka nishaan chhodte hain, na haddiyon ka suraag. Jise le jaate hain, woh bas hawa mein gaayab ho jaata hai. Hamesha ke liye."

Sabke hasne ki awaaz gale mein hi atak gaye. Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav ne ek dusre ko dekha. Unhe pata tha, yeh sirf ek lok-katha nahi tha. Yeh ek code tha, ek sandesh tha.

Sia uss anjaan si tension se ghabrakar wahan se hatne lagi. Andhere mein, uska haath anjaane mein Ravi ke ussi haath se takra gaya jo din mein zakhmi hua tha.

Ek jhatka.

Ek current.

Ravi ke dard se see karne ki bajaye saansein ruk gaya. Sia ne foran apna haath pichhe kheench liya. Ek pal ke liye, un dono ki nigahein mile. Uss ek pal mein unhone lafzon se nahi, rooh se baat kiye. Ek an-kaha vaada, ek ehsaas ke is khatre mein woh akele nahi hain.

Lekin woh nahi jaante the ke unke har harkat, har saans, record ho raha tha.

Bahut door, ek ped ke aad mein, andhere se bhi zyada kaala ek saaya baitha tha. Ek high-tech night-vision camera ke lens un dono par zoom kiye hue tha. Lens ke peeche baitha aankhon mein koi bhavna nahi tha, sirf aadesh ka intezaar tha.


KRAK!

Jungle ke andhere se achanak ek moti tehni tootne ka awaaz aaya. Awaaz itna tez tha jaise kisi ne jaan-boojh kar use toda ho.

Sabhi students darr kar ek-dum shaant ho gaye. Bonfire ka aag ke alawa har taraf maut jaisa sannata tha. Sabka aankhein uss andhere ki taraf dekh raha tha jahan se awaaz aaya tha.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri ka handle kas ke pakad liya.

Aur uss andhere mein baithe shakhs ne apne satellite phone par ek encrypted message type kiya:


"Ravi kamzor hai. Uska ek kamzori hai. Tasdeek ho gaya. Mansoobe ke agle hisse ki ijaazat di jaaye."


Masti ka waqt khatm ho chuka tha. Asli khel ab shuru hone wala tha.




Raakh Hoti Aag, Sulagti Nafrat

KRAK!

Jungle se aayi uss awaaz ne bonfire ke aas paas jami hawa ko sheeshe ki tarah tod diya. Sabhi students darr se ek dusre se sat gaye. Unki saari masti, saare gaane, ek pal mein hawa ho gaye.


Principal Malhotra: "Shaant raho! Stay calm, everyone! Koi jaanwar hoga."

Ms. Meera: "Sab log resort ke andar chalo! Now! Make a line!"

Lekin Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav jaante the. Yeh kisi jaanwar ki awaaz nahi tha. Yeh ek sochi-samjhi harkat tha. Ek signal. Ek ailaan.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri aadhi bahar nikaal liye the, unke tajurbekaar aankhein andhere ko aise cheed raha tha, jaise woh saayon ke aar-paar dekh sakta ho.

Students ke beech afra-tafri mach gaya. Sab jaldi se jaldi resort ki garmahat mein laut jaana chahte the. Isi bhagdad mein, Sia ne Ravi ko dekha. Woh apni jagah se hila tak nahi tha. Uski nigahein uss andhere par tik tha, jaise woh uss shakhs ko dekh sakta ho jo wahan chhupa baitha tha. Ravi ke chehre par dar nahi, ek sard ghussa tha. Aisa ghussa jo shikaar ko shikaari bana deta hai.

Ms. Meera ne sabko andar lobby mein ikattha kiya.


Ms. Meera: "Okay, everyone, apne apne room partners ke saath check karo. Make sure everyone is here."

Ek-ek karke sabne "Yes, ma'am" kehna shuru kiya.

Bonfire ki aakhri laptein bhi bujh chuka tha. Jalti lakdiyon ki mehak ab hawa mein faile dhuen aur anjaane khatre ki sargoshiyon mein badal gaya tha. Students thake-haare apne kamron mein laut gaye the, is baat se bekhabar ki unke beech chupe shikaari ab apne agle vaar ki taiyaari kar rahe the.



Arjun ke kamre mein...

Kamra andhere mein dooba hua tha. Sirf laptop ki neeli roshni Arjun ke chehre par kathor parchhaiyan bana raha tha.

Whiskey ka adha bhara glass mez par apne naseeb ka intezaar kar raha tha, bilkul waise hi jaise Arjun ki shatranj ke mohre uske agle hukum ka karte the.


Click... Click... Click.

Mouse ka har click ek ijaafa tha uss aag mein jo Arjun ke seene mein sulag raha tha. Telephoto lens se kheencha gaya darjanon tasveeron ka silsila ruk gaya, ek file mein qaid theen, lekin Arjun ka cursor baar-baar ek hi tasveer par aakar ruk jaata.

Ek frame par. Sirf ek.


Woh tasveer nahi, ek lamha tha. Ek pal, jab Sia ka haath anjaane mein Ravi ke haath se chhua tha. Unke ungliyon ka mehez ek lams (sparsh)... lekin unke chehron par likha kashish aur bechaini ek poori dastaan bayaan kar raha tha. Arjun uss tasveer ko zoom karke dekh raha tha. Woh Sia ke chehre par aayi pal bhar ki sharam, aur Ravi ki aankhon mein uss ek pal ke liye thehar gayi duniya ko saaf padh sakta tha.

Yeh sirf ek masoomi si chuhan nahi tha. Yeh Arjun ke banaye hue khel mein ek baghawat tha. Ek aag tha jo uska saltanat mein lag raha tha. Sia uska shatranj ka Wazir thi—khubsoorat, khatarnaak, aur sirf uske ishaaron par chalne waali. Aur ek Wazir ka kisi maamuli pyaade ke taraf dekhna bhi... badshaah ki tauheen hota hai.

Uska ungliyan keyboard par kas gaya. Chehre par ek sard muskaan phail gaya. Usne phone uthaya, number dial kiya. Uski awaaz sheeshe ke tarah saaf aur thandi tha.


ARJUN: "Khanna, waqt aa gaya hai. Plan B. Abhi."

Doosri taraf se sirf ek itminaan bhari awaaz aaya,
"Hukum kijiye, Sir."

ARJUN:
"Activate it , "Monastery ka program kal subah ka hai. Main chahta hoon resort ka woh pura wing andhere mein doob jaaye jahan Ravi Mishra apni neend poori kar raha hai. Ek 'power trip' lagna chahiye .Aisa andhera ki woh apni parchhayi se bhi darr jaaye. Aur sabse zaroori... communications. Blackout. Koi Wi-Fi nahi, koi mobile network nahi. Main chahta hoon Kal subah jab suraj nikle, toh yeh resort duniya ke liye ek black hole ban jaana chahiye."


KHANNA : "Ho jaayega, Sir. Suraj ugne se pehle, woh apni hi parchhai se bhi baat nahi kar payega."

Arjun ne call kaat diya.

Uske nigahein wapas uss tasveer par lauta. Usne Ravi ke chehre par cursor rakha, jaise nishaana laga raha ho.


ARJUN (khud se): "Khelne ka bohot shauk hai na tumhein, Ravi Mishra? Chalo, ek naya khel khelte hain. Ek aisa khel jismein roshni nahi hoga... aawaaz nahi hoga... aur tumhara kamzori hi tumhara gala ghontega."

Ek aakhri, aatish-fishaan nazar se tasveer ko dekh kar usne 'Delete' ka button daba diya.

Screen par likha aaya:
File Permanently Deleted.

Jaise Ravi Mishra ka wajood.

[LOCATION: SIA’S RESORT ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein maddham roshni tha, lekin Sia ko aaine mein apna aks nahi, apni uljhi hui rooh nazar aa rahi thi. Aaine ke uss paar khadi ladki ek anjaan shakhs lag rahi thi, jiski aankhon mein farz ki thakaan aur dil ki baghawat saaf dikh rahi thi.

Ek taraf Dada Sahab ka mission tha—ek maqsad jiske liye usne apni zindagi daanv par laga di thi. Doosri taraf Alisha ke zehar mein bujhe hue shabd kaan mein goonj rahe the, ek aisi chetavni jo anjaam ka aaina dikha rahi thi.

Aur in dono chattanon ke beech... Ravi ke haath ka woh ehsaas.

Ek second se bhi chhota lamha, lekin jaise waqt uss ek pal mein qaid ho gaya tha. Uski hatheli par abhi bhi uss chuhan ki jhanjhanahat thi. Uska dimaag cheekh raha tha ki yeh ek galti hai, ek kamzori jo usse uske maqsad se bhatka degi, jo usse barbaad kar degi. Par dil... woh dimaag ki ek bhi daleel sunne ko taiyaar nahi tha.

Usne aaine par apni ungliyan pheri, jaise apne hi aks ko samajhane ki koshish kar rahi ho.


SIA (fufusate hue):
"Kaash yeh trip... bas ek trip hota"

Uski awaaz kamre ki khaamoshi mein ek raaz ki tarah ghul gayi. Ek aisa raaz, jo shayad uski sabse badi taqat banne wala tha... ya uski tabahi ka kaaran.

PART 5: SHIKARI HUA SHIKAR

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein ek kafan jaisi khamoshi tha, lekin Ravi ke andar ek toofan chal raha tha. Yeh alag-thalag kamra aaraam ke liye nahi, ek qaid-khane ki tarah lag raha tha. Bonfire ki aag bujh chuka tha, par uska peeth par chubhta hua woh nigahein... usse ab bhi mehsoos ho rahe theen. Uska instinct, jo saalon ki training se faulad ban chuka tha, chilla raha tha—"Tum akele nahi ho."

Usne lights band kar diya. Andhera uski aankhon ke liye ek parda nahi, ek hathiyaar tha.

Usne kamre ko dekhna nahi, usse 'padhna' shuru kiya. Har kona, har saaya, har cheez jo apni jagah par nahi tha. Uska nigahein ek professional ki tarah scan karti hui... ceiling par lage smoke detector par jaakar theher gaya. Uska design ajeeb tha, standard model se alag. Aur tabhi usne woh dekha... ek behad baareek, lagbhag adrishya laal roshni, jo ek dil ke tarah... ek second ke hazaarwein hisse ke liye dhadka.


Arjun ka jaal.

Ravi ke chehre par muskaan nahi aayi. Uski aankhon mein ek aisi thandak utar aayi jo Manali ki barf ko bhi sharma de.

"Toh khel shuru ho chuka hai, Arjun Rathore."

Usne camera todne jaisa bachkani galti nahi kiya. Nahi. Usne khelne ka faisla kiya. Par ab, niyam uske honge.


Woh bed par gaya aur kambal ko aise odha, jaise ek thaka hua insaan gehri neend mein doob jaata hai. Usne apni saanson ki raftaar ko dheema kiya, apne jism ko bilkul shaant chhod diya. Woh intezaar kar raha tha, uss shikari ke sustane ka, jo usse ek aasaan shikaar samajh raha tha.

Das minute... pandrah minute... Bees minute.

Aur phir, jaise bijli kadakta hai...

Ek jhatke ke saath, Ravi ka wing mein har roshni, har awaaz, har electronic saans band ho gaya. Generator ka backup bhi aane se pehle hi mar gaya. Yeh ek 'power trip' nahi tha; yeh ek 'power execution' tha. Ek surgical strike, jiska nishana sirf ek tha.

Lekin is andhere mein, jahan ek aam insaan ki aankhein bebasi se phail jaati, Ravi ki aankhein... unhone jeena shuru kiya.

Uska shareer ekdum shaant ho gaya, saansein itna dheema ki jaise ruk hi gaya ho. Usne bistar se utarkar zameen par pair rakha, bina kisi awaaz ke. Uske kaan ab uska aankhein ban chuke the. Woh hawa mein aate badlaav, temperature mein girta har degree, aur door corridor mein bichha carpet par padne wale har anjaane bojh ko mehsoos kar sakta tha.

Uska dimaag ek supercomputer ke tarah kaam kar raha tha.


RAVI (Inner Monologue): "Blackout. Sirf meri wing mein. Communications dead. Yeh Arjun ka kaam hai. Woh mujhe alag-thalag karna chahta hai. Par woh ek galti kar raha hai. Andhera mera dushman nahi... mera ghar hai. Is andhere mein, main shikaar nahi, shikaari hoon."

Usne apne zakhmi haath ki mutthi bheenche. Dard ki ek tez lehar utha, par uss dard ne usse sulaya nahi, jaga diya. Usse yaad dilaya ki khatra kitna asli hai.

Tabhi... aawaz aaya.

Ek halka sa 'click' ka awaaz. Uske kamre ke darwaze ke lock se. Koi bahar se electronic key card override karne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Ravi ek saaye ki tarah pichhe hata aur deewar se sat kar khada ho gaya, theek darwaze ke paas, jahan se andar aane wala usey pehli nazar mein dekh na sake. Usne paas rakhe bhaari table lamp ko haath mein utha liya. Yeh koi high-tech hathiyaar nahi tha, par andhere mein, sahi waqt par, yeh maut ka doosra naam ban sakta tha.

Darwaza bina awaaz kiye khula.

Ek kaala saaya, sir se paanv tak kaale tactical gear mein, kamre mein daakhil hua. Uske haath mein ek chhota, suppressed pistol tha, jiske aage night-vision scope laga tha. Woh professional tha.

Par usne ek galti kar dala. Usne Ravi ko bistar par dhoondha.

Aur Ravi bistar par nahi tha.

Jaise hi woh saaya aage badha, andhera zinda ho gaya. Ravi uske peeche se ek toofan ki tarah ubhra. Uska zakhmi haath ek lohe ke panje ki tarah saaye ki pistol wali kalai par pada. Isse pehle ki woh trigger daba paata, Ravi ne uski kalai ko ek wehshi angle par mod diya.


KRRACK!

Haddi aur cartilage ke tootne ki ek geeli, dil-dehlaane wali awaaz andhere mein goonj gayi. Saaye ke munh se ek dabi hui cheekh nikli, par Ravi ne usse mauka nahi diya. Usne ussi toote haath se use apni taraf kheencha aur apna ghutna uski pasliyon mein de maara. Doosri KRAK ki awaaz aayi.

Saaya professional tha. Dard ke bawajood, usne apne doosre haath se ek combat knife nikaala aur Ravi ke pet ki taraf vaar kiya.

Par Ravi wahan tha hi nahi. Woh hawa ki tarah pichhe hata, saaye ka santulan bigadne diya, aur phir aage badhkar, uske knife wale haath ki kohni par ek brutal 'elbow-lock' laga diya. Teesra
CRACK!

Saaye ke dono haath ab bekaar the. Isse pehle ki woh cheekh paata, Ravi ne uske baalon ko pakda aur uska sir deewar par de maara.

THUMP!

Saaya behosh hokar zameen par dher ho gaya.

Ravi ne uske chehre se naqaab hataya. Ek anjaan chehra. Ek kiraye ka qaatil. Par Ravi ka dhyaan uske kaan mein lage communication device par gaya. Usne use nikaal kar apne kaan mein lagaya. Doosri taraf se Arjun ki bechain awaaz aa raha tha.


ARJUN (O.S. via earpiece): "Hunter? Kya hua? Report! Status!"

Ravi ne kuch nahi kaha. Usne device ko zameen par rakha aur apne military boot se, dheere se, poora wazan daal kar use kuchal diya.


CRUNCH

Yeh khel ka pehla mohra tha jo shatranj se bahar ho chuka tha.



[LOCATION: ARJUN’S ROOM]

CRUNCH.

Earpiece se aaya aakhri awaaz Arjun ke kaano mein zehar ke tarah utar gayi. Uske chehre par gusse aur hairat ka toofan umad aaya.

ARJUN (gurrate hue): "Impossible! Usne HUNTER ko... andhere mein... bina hathiyaar ke?"

Usne apni whiskey ka glass ek jhatke mein khaali kar diya. Uska plan, uska perfect plan, pehli hi chaal mein dhwast ho chuka tha. Usne Ravi ko kamzor samjha tha. Yeh uski sabse badi bhool thi.

Usne Mr. Khana ko call kiya, jo bahar corridor mein pehra de raha tha.unke pass Virat , Rishi aur Sameer bhi khade the.


ARJUN: "Plan B fail ho gaya hai! HUNTER neeche hai. Ab Plan C. 'Saayon' ko aage badhne ka ishaara do. Unse kaho, shikaar ab hoshiyaar ho chuka hai. Aur Virat..."

VIRAT : "Ji, Arjun bhai."

ARJUN: "Agar Sia apne kamre se bahar nikle... usey rokna mat. Bas us par nazar rakhna. Woh Ravi ke taraf hi jaayegi. Aur jab kamzori khud shikaari ke paas jaaye... toh khel aur bhi mazedaar ho jaata hai."

Usne call kaat diya aur monitor par aayi ek live feed ko dekhne laga. Ek hidden camera Sia ke kamre ke theek bahar laga tha. Woh intezaar kar raha tha. Apne Wazir ko, pyaade ki taraf badhte hue dekhne ka.




[LOCATION: SIA'S ROOM / CORRIDOR]

Sia apne kamre mein bechaini se tehel rahi thi. Ravi ki wing mein andhera hote hi uska dil kisi anhoni ke aashanka se doob gaya tha. Uska dimaag usey Dada Sahab ka mission yaad dila raha tha, par uska dil... woh Ravi ke naam ki zidd kar raha tha.

"Main uske maamle mein nahi pad sakti. Yeh mission ke liye khatra hai," usne khud se kaha.

Par agle hi pal, usne darwaza khola. Uska dil jeet chuka tha.

Corridor mein maut jaisa sannata tha. Woh dabe paanv aage badhi. Har kadam uske farz par ek chot jaisa tha. Jab woh Ravi ke wing ke paas pahunchi, toh usne andhere mein khade ek saaye ko dekha. Virat.

Virat ne use dekha, par Arjun ke hukum ke mutaabik, usne Sia ko roka nahi. Bas ek ajeeb, sard muskaan di, jaise keh raha ho,
"Jao, apni maut ki taraf."

Sia usse nazarandaaz karke aage badh gayi. Ravi ka darwaza halka sa khula tha. Usne darte-darte andar jhaanka.

Andar ka manzar dekh kar uski saansein gale mein hi atak gayi.

Ravi zameen par baitha tha, behosh HUNTER ke paas. Kamre mein sirf chaand ka halka roshni aa raha tha. Us roshni mein, Ravi ka chehra kisi insaan ka nahi, ek... yoddha ka lag raha tha. Uska aankhon mein ghussa nahi, ek thanda, hisaabi focus tha.


SIA (dheere se): "Ravi...?"

Ravi ne palat kar use dekha. Uski aankhon mein ek pal ke liye narmi aaya.


RAVI: "Tumhein yahan nahi aana chahiye tha, Sia. Yeh jagah ab mehfooz nahi hai."

SIA: "Main bas... main chinta kar rahi thi."

Isse pehle ki Ravi kuch kehta, uske kaan khade ho gaye. Usne Sia ko ishare se chup rehne ko kaha.

Bahar... corridor mein... kadmon ki awaaz aa rahi tha.

Par yeh ek insaan ke kadmon ki awaaz nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise koi cheez... barf par reng rahi ho. Koi awaaz nahi, koi khusar-pusar nahi. Bas ek ehsaas. Ek thanda, maut jaisa ehsaas jo darwaze ke neeche se sarak kar andar aa raha tha.

Deenu Kaka ki awaaz Ravi ke dimaag mein goonja.
'Barf ke Saaye'.


RAVI (sargoshi mein): "Bistar ke neeche chhup jao. Aur jab tak main na kahun, bahar mat nikalna. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye."

Uska awaaz mein ek aisa authority tha jise Sia mana nahi kar saka. Woh foran bistar ke neeche chhup gayi.

Ravi ne Hunter ke behosh shareer ko ek taraf kheencha aur darwaze ke peeche phir se apni position le liya.

Darwaza dheere-dheere, ek ajeeb si crakkk ke saath khula.

Iss baar, ek nahi... teen saaye andar daakhil hue. Unhone kaale nahi, balki barf jaise safed, camouflage gear pehne the. Unke chehre par ajeeb se thermal goggles the aur unke haath mein khukri jaise, aage se mude hue, ghatak khanjar the.

Woh hawa ki tarah shaant the. Unka har move ek socha-samjha, train kiya hua qadam tha.

Pehle saaye ne kamre ko scan kiya. Doosra Hunter ke shareer ke paas gaya. Aur teesra... teesra theek uss bistar ke paas jaakar khada ho gaya jiske neeche Sia apni saansein roke chhipi hui thi.

Khel ab one-on-one nahi raha tha.

Yeh teen-on-one tha. Aur Ravi jaanta tha... yeh Arjun ke mamooli gunde nahi the.

Yeh professional qaatil the.
'Barf ke Saaye'.

Jangal ka asli shikaar... ab shuru ho chuka tha.




YAADON KE PEHREDAAR

[LOCATION: GADEN BAUDH MATH – ANDRUNI KAKSH]

Jabke resort ke uss kamre mein saansein ruka hua tha, pahaadon ki goad mein basa Gaden Baudh Math ka roohani khamoshi bhi uss ek kamre mein aakar thehar jaata tha. Yeh math ka sabse gupt, sabse andhera hissa tha. Hawa mein chandan, kapoor aur sadiyon purani prarthnaon ki mehek ek saath ghula hua tha. Deewaron par bane thangka paintings andhere mein saans lete hue mehsoos ho rahe the.

Beech mein baithe Lama Tashi ke aankhein band tha, par unka astitva uss kamre ki har cheez par haavi tha. Unke saamne, zameen par ghutno ke bal, Kitsune (YuKi) ka sir jhuka hua tha.

Lama Tashi ki bhaari awaaz pattharon se takraaya, jaise koi gufa goonj utha ho.



LAMA TASHI: "Aasmaan se toota hua taara... apni roshni zaroor kho chuka hai, Kitsune. Lekin girte waqt woh Qayamat ki garmi apne andar samet laaya hai. Tumhara zimmedaari sirf uske zakhmi jism ka nahi, uska bikhra hua rooh ka hifazat karna hai. Woh ab ek aisa daulat hai jiski koi keemat nahi, aur jise lootne ke liye Shaitan khud zameen par utar aaya hai."


KITSUNE: (Awaaz mein bebasi) :"Uss garmi ko woh khud mehsoos nahi kar paa raha, Lama. Uski aankhon mein ek aisa khaamoshi hai... jismein sirf aakhri tabahi ka shor hai. Apni pehchaan ki ek chingari tak nahi. Agar usse zara bhi yaad hota, toh woh meri aankhon mein chhipa fikr aur Aarav ke chehre par ubalte laave ko ek pal mein pehchaan leta."

Tabhi andhere se ek fauladi awaaz ne Kitsune ke shabdon ko cheer diya.

"Khaamoshi kamzori nahi, gehraayi ka nishaani hota hai, Lama. Aur samandar ki gehraayi mein hi toofan saans lete hain."

Phoenix (Aarav) andhere se nikal kar uss roshni mein aaya jo ek ghee ke diye se phail raha tha. Uska aankhein ek shikari baaz ki tarah aage dekh raha tha, jaise woh deewaron ke paar bhi dekh sakta ho.


PHOENIX (AARAV): "Woh sab kuch bhoola nahi hai. Uska yaadon par bas jakhmon ka zang lag gaya hai. Chehre dhundhle ho gaye hain, par unn chehron se mile dard ka ehsaas aaj bhi taza hai. Woh aag... woh cheekhein... uske zehen mein nahi, uski rooh mein qaid hain. Ek Shezaada jiska takht uska yaadein tha, aur woh takht ab cheen liya gaya hai."

LAMA TASHI: (Dheere se apni aankhein kholte hain. Unke nazron mein gyaan nahi, ek aisa chetavni tha jo waqt ko rok de.)
"Aur yahi baat usse is duniya ka sabse khatarnaak hathiyaar banata hai! Uska dimaag ab ek band darwaza nahi... woh Pralay ka taaboot hai. Ek aisi taqat jise dushman apni jeet samajhta hai, aur jise humein is duniya ke antt se pehle kaabu mein rakhna hai. Agar woh taaboot khul gaya... toh yeh duniya uss Shezaade ka kahani nahi, uska tabahi ka kissa sunega."


KITSUNE: (Uthkar, awaaz mein ek nayi zimmedaari ke saath)
"Toh humara maqsad kya hai, Lama?"


LAMA TASHI: "Tum dono uske saaye nahi... uski yaadon ke pehredaar banoge. Tumhare jung sirf dushman se nahi, uske ateet se bhi hai. Tumhein usse bachana bhi hai... aur waqt aane par, is duniya ko uss se bachana bhi hai. Jaao! Kyunki waqt ka ret nahi, zindagiyan phisal raha hain. Aur dushman ne apni pehli chaal chal diya hai."




USOOLON KI QEEMAT

[LOCATION: RESORT – STAFF QUARTERS – RAAT]

Resort ke chamak-damak ke peeche ek aur duniya tha. Geeli deewaron, seelan ki mehek aur saste disinfectant ki gandh waala. Yeh staff quarters ka pichla hissa tha, jahan andhera bhi zyada thaka hua aur gehra lagta tha.

Yahin par, parchhaiyon ko apna saathi banaye, Vikrant aage badh raha tha. Woh Aryan ke sabse puraane aur wafadaar aadmiyon mein se tha. Uski ragon mein khoon ke saath Aryan bhai ka ek usool daudta tha—"Begunahon par haath nahi uthana." Aur Arjun ke Manali aane ke baad se hi, usse yeh usool toot-ta hua mehsoos ho raha tha.

Usne Arjun ke Security Head ko ek band pade store room mein ghuste dekha. Ek aisi jagah jahan kisi ko nahi jaana chahiye tha. Vikrant deewar se sat kar aage badha, uske saans lene ki awaaz bhi usse dhokha de sakti thi. Usne darwaze ke daraar se andar jhaanka, aur jo dekha, usse uska rooh tak kaanp gayi.

Andar do log the. Security Head... aur ek anjaan saaya.

Woh saaya roshni mein aaya. Lamba, patla jism. Lambe baal jo uske chehre par a rahe the. Gaal par ek purane zakhm ka nishaan, jaise kisi janwar ne panja maara ho. Par sabse darawni cheez uska aankhein theen—bilkul khaali, jaise unke peeche koi insaan nahi, sirf maut ka intezaar tha.



(NAYE KIRDAAR KI ENTRY – KAI)

Woh ek professional mercenary tha. Ek bhoot, jise Arjun ne khaas iss kaam ke liye kiraye par liya tha. Kai usoolon par nahi, keemat par kaam karta tha.


SECURITY HEAD: (Awaaz mein ek ajeeb sa ghabrahat) "Target confirm hai. Ladki, Jaanvi. Kal Monastery mein... kaam saaf hona chahiye."

Kai ne jawaab nahi diya, bas gardan halki sa hilaaya. Jab woh bola, toh uska awaaz sookhe patton par rengte saanp jaisa tha.



KAI: "Kaam ho jaayega. Par Rathore Junior ko yaad dila dena, iss kaam ki keemat sirf paisa nahi hai... uska khamoshi bhi hai. Kissa khatam hone ke baad, main kabhi tha hi nahi."


Vikrant ka dimaag sunn ho gaya. Dhokha. Arjun ne apne hi bhai ko dhokha diya tha. Yeh sabaq sikhaane ki nahi, ek begunah ko mitaane ki saazish tha. Usne bina awaaz kiye wahan se hatna chaha, par uska kismat ne saath chhod diya. Uska pair neeche pade kaanch ke ek toote hue tukde par pad gaya.



KRRNNCH!

Awaaz mamuli tha, par uss khamoshi mein ek dhamake jaisa laga.

Ek palak jhapk mein Kai insaan se hathiyaar ban gaya. Woh aisi tezi se palta jaise hawa ne rukh badla ho. Uska khaali aankhein seedha daraar ke uss paar Vikrant ki dehshat-zada aankhon se takraaya.

Sochne ka waqt nahi tha. Vikrant bhaaga.

Par Kai shikaar tha, aur Vikrant shikaari. Woh ek saaye ke tarah uske peeche lapka, uske kadmon ki awaaz tak nahi aa raha tha. Vikrant ne jaan bachane ke liye daudte hue paas pada ek zang laga lohe ka rod uthaya aur palat kar poori taqat se vaar kiya.


Kai ne ek hairaan kar dene waala furti se uss rod ko hawa mein hi pakad liya. Uska kalai tak nahi hila.

Ek jhatke mein usne rod Vikrant ke haath se cheen liya. Isse pehle ki Vikrant apna galti samajh paata, Kai ne wahi rod ghuma kar uske ghutne par de maara.


CRACK!

Haddi ke tootne ki wehshi awaaz uss tang corridor mein goonj gaya.

Vikrant ki cheekh uske gale mein hi ghut gaya jab woh zameen par gira. Kai uske upar shikaari ke tarah jhuka. Uska aankhon mein na gussa tha, na nafrat. Sirf ek peshewar khamoshi.



KAI: "Galat waqt... galat jagah."

Usne rod uthaaya aur Vikrant ke doosre haath ke kalai par maar diya. Ek aur dardnaak cheekh. Phir usne rod Vikrant ke gardan par rakha aur dheere se dabav badhaya, bas itna ki saans rukne lage.



KAI (sargoshi mein, jaise koi raaz bata raha ho): "Apne Aryan bhai ko paigaam dena... Arjun Rathore ke khel mein usoolon ke jagah nahi... sirf nateeje hote hain."


Yeh keh kar usne rod hata liya aur Vikrant ko toote jism aur toote himmat ke saath wahin tadapta hua chhod diya. Woh andhere mein aise ghul gaya jaise kabhi tha hi nahi.


Yeh sirf ek warning nahi tha. Yeh ek elaan-e-jung tha. Ek khooni elaan... ki Manali mein ab Aryan ke nahi, Arjun Rathore ke niyam chalenge.





QAYAMAT KA NAACH

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein teen saaye the, aur ek shikaar. Kam se kam, woh yahi soch rahe the.

Bistar ke neeche, Sia ka dil uske seene mein ek qaid parinde ki tarah phadphada raha tha. Upar khade saaye ke boot uski aankhon se bas kuch inch door the. Usne apni cheekh ko gale mein hi ghont diya.

Jaise hi teesre saaye ne bistar ko khanjar se uthane ke liye haath badhaya, andhera zinda ho gaya.

Ravi ek toofan ke tarah nahi, Qayamat ke tarah utha. Usne paas rakha bhaari table lamp uthaya, lekin phenka nahi. Usne use ek pendulum ki tarah ghumakar pehle saaye ke thermal goggles par de maara.


CRASH!

Kaanch aur high-tech plastic ke tukde saaye ki aankhon mein ghus gaye. Uski cheekh nikli, par sirf ek pal ke liye. Isse pehle ki uska cheekh poori hota, Ravi uske saamne tha. Usne saaye ke khanjar wale haath ko pakda, uske kohni ko apne ghutne par rakha aur doosre haath se uska kalai ko neeche ki taraf mod diya.

SNAP!

Kohni ke joint ke ulti disha mein tootne ki ek geeli, wehshi awaaz aayi. Par Ravi wahin nahi ruka. Usne qaatil ke hi toote hue haath se khanjar cheena aur uski gardan ke aar-paar utaar diya.

Ek saans... aur pehla saaya zameen par tha. Zinda nahi.

Doosre do saaye, apne saathi ke achanak khatm ho jaane se chaunke, par woh professional the. Unhone Ravi par ek saath hamla kiya. Unke khanjar hawa ko cheerte hue maut ka sangeet gaa rahe the.

Lekin Ravi unse lad nahi raha tha. Woh naach raha tha. Maut ka ek aisa naach jise Sia apni zindagi mein kabhi nahi bhool paayegi.

Woh ek khanjar ke neeche se jhuka, doosre ko apni baazu se deflect kiya, jisse uske haath par ek gehra ghaav laga. Par uske chehre par dard ka nishaan tak nahi tha. Usne doosre qaatil ke hamle ki taaqat ka istemaal karte hue use apni taraf kheencha aur use teesre qaatil ke saamne ek insaani dhaal ki tarah kar diya.

Teesre qaatil ka khanjar apne hi saathi ke seene mein utar gaya.

Uska aankhein dehshat se phail gaya. Par Ravi ne use sambhalne ka ek pal bhi nahi diya. Usne zakhmi qaatil ko ek taraf dhakela aur aakhri bache hue saaye ke taraf badha. Usne zameen par pade Hunter ke pistol ko pair se uchhalkar hawa mein pakda.

Par goli nahi chalaya.

Woh qaatil ke itne kareeb pahunch chuka tha ki pistol ka barrel uske maathe par lage thermal goggle se takra raha tha.


RAVI (uska awaaz andhere se bhi zyada thanda aur khaali tha): "Usse kaho... usne kutte bheje hain... ek sher ke shikaar ke liye."

Aur phir usne trigger nahi, pistol ke pichle hisse (slide) se qaatil ke naak par poori taaqat se vaar kiya.


KRRR-UNCH!

Naak ka haddi toot kar uske dimaag mein ghus gayi. Woh bina koi awaaz kiye, ek murde ki tarah pichhe gir gaya.

Teen professional qaatil. Tees second se bhi kam.

Kamre mein ab sirf Ravi ke tez saanson ke awaaz tha. Aur khoon ka bhaari, lohe jaisa mehek.

Ravi dheere se utha. Uske haath se khoon tapak kar zameen par safed barf par lahu ka pehli boondon ki kahani likh raha tha. Woh dheere-dheere chalta hua kamre ke beech mein aaya. Usne neeche pade jismon ko nahi dekha.

Usne upar dekha.

Seedha uss smoke detector mein lage camera ke lens mein. Arjun ke aankhon mein.

Uske chehre par na ghussa tha, na jeet. Sirf ek aisa khaamoshi jo hazaar cheekhon se zyada darawni tha. Usne apna khoon se sana haath uthaya aur usse apna aankhon ke saamne laaya. Phir, behad dheere se, usne apniaek ungli se apne hi gale par ek lakeer kheencha.

Ek vaada. Ek paigaam. Ek maut ka farmaan.

Arjun Rathore ne ek pyaada samjha tha. Uss raat, usse pata chala ki shatranj ke uss paar... ek Qayamat baitha hai , ek doosra Badshah.

Aur uss Badshah ke chehre par ek an-kaha paigaam saaf likha tha...


"Welcome to my warzone."



RAAKH BHI NAHI MILEGA

Par khel abhi khatm nahi hua tha.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia kaanpte hue yeh sab dekh rahi thi. Uski aankhon mein ab sirf darr nahi, ek aisi hairat thi jise samajhna namumkin tha.

Ravi ne camera ke taraf se nazar hataya aur kamre ko dekha. Ek aam insaan is manzar ko dekh kar cheekh padta ya behosh ho jaata. Chaar lashein. Khoon se sane farsh aur deewar.

Par Ravi... usne ek lambi, thandi saans liya, jaise usne abhi-abhi ek halka sa exercise khatm kiya ho. Uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha. Jaise yeh uske liye roz ka kaam ho.

Woh bina kisi jaldbaazi ke, behad methodical tareeke se kaam par lag gaya.

Usne sabse pehle bed se saari chaadarein utaara. Bistar ke neeche se Sia ne dekha ki usne ek-ek karke chaaron lashon ko un chaadaron mein lapetna shuru kiya. Uske movements ek surgeon ki tarah sateek the. Koi awaaz nahi, koi ghabrahat nahi.

Phir, usne un bhaari gathriyon ko, ek-ek karke, balcony ki taraf kheench kar le jaana shuru kiya. Sia ko laga ki woh shayad unhein neeche phenk dega. Par Ravi ne aisa nahi kiya. Resort ke uss wing ke theek peeche ek ghana, andhera jungle tha, jahan ek gehri khaai tha. Ravi ne ek-ek gathri ko balcony ki railing par rakha aur bina kisi awaaz ke, neeche uss andhere mein dhakel diya jahan se unka suraag milna namumkin tha.

Char insaan... jaise kabhi the hi nahi.

Iske baad woh wapas kamre mein aaya. Sia ne socha ab woh thak kar rukega. Par woh ruka nahi. Usne bathroom se paani ka baalti aur kuch saaf karne wale kapde liye aur zameen par ghutno ke bal baith gaya.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia usse ek bhoot ki tarah kaam karte hue dekh rahi thi. Woh farsh se khoon ka har ek daag, deewar par lage har ek cheente ko aise saaf kar raha tha, jaise koi crime scene cleaner ho. Usne toote hue lamp ke tukde, qaatilon ke gire hue hathiyaar, har cheez ko ikattha kiya aur ek bag mein bhar liya.

Pandrah minute ke andar, woh kamra waisa hi tha jaisa pehle tha. Bas hawa mein khoon aur disinfectant ka halka sa mehek baaki tha. Jaise kuch hua hi nahi tha. Jaise Qayamat aaya, apna kaam kiya, aur bina koi nishaan chhode chala gaya.

Ab Ravi palta. Woh seedha bistar ke paas aaya aur neeche jhuka.

Andhere mein, Sia ko sirf uski do aankhein dikhayi de rahi theen, jo chaand ki roshni mein ajeeb tarah se chamak rahi theen. Un aankhon mein ab woh Ravi nahi tha jise woh school mein jaanti thi.

Ravi ne apna khoon se saaf kiya hua, par ab bhi zakhmi haath uski taraf badhaya.

Uska awaaz ek sargoshi se zyada nahi tha, par Sia ke liye woh ek dhamaka tha. Ek aisa sawaal jo is trip ki, aur shayad uski zindagi ki, disha badalne wala tha.


"Iss khel mein masoomiyat ki keemat maut hota hai, Sia. Main tumhein bacha sakta hoon, par tumhari masoomiyat nahi. Tayyar ho?"

Uska awaaz ab bhi hawa mein tair raha tha jab usne Sia ko dekhe bina aage kaha, jaise woh aane wale kal se baat kar raha ho.

"Kyunki yeh raat toh bas ek trailer tha... asli film toh kal subah Monastery mein shuru hoga."




"Ab batao, Sia... Darr lag raha hai... ya maza aa raha hai?"
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UPDATE 11 (B)

BARF KE SAAYE (WARZONE)


PART 4: Jab Khel Khooni Ho Jaye

BONFIRE NIGHT - JALTI AAG, SULAGTE RAAZ

Haadse ne trip ka masoomiyat ko cheer kar rakh diya tha, trip ka mahaul badal gaya tha. Us raat resort ke bahar jalta bonfire ka aag garmahat kam, ek ajeeb sa bechaini zyada de raha tha. Aag ke chatakti laptein students ke chehron par ajeeb-o-gareeb saaye bana raha tha. Kuch log gaa-baja kar mahaul ko halka karne ke nakaam koshish kar rahe the, lekin unke gaano mein bhi ek dar ka goonj tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise aas paas ka ghana, kaala jungle unhe ghoor raha ho, unke har sargoshi sun raha ho.

Arjun, jo din bhar se Ravi ke hero banne par sulag raha tha ,ek shaatir shikaari ke tarah, apne mauke ka intezaar kar raha tha. Arjun ne is mauke ka poora fayda uthaya.


Usne Sia ko aag ke paas akele khade dekha aur apne doston ko ishaara karke uske paas chala gaya. Rishi aur Virat ne usey ek smirk ke saath 'all the best' ka ishaara kiya, jabki Sameer bechaini se idhar-udhar dekh raha tha.

Arjun ne Sia ke paas jaakar apni awaaz mein jitni ho sake utni fikr bharte hue kaha.


Arjun: "Sardi badh gaya hai. Din mein jo hua, uske baad tumhe apna extra dhyaan rakhna chahiye."
Uska awaaz mein fikr ka mitha zahar ghula hua tha, par uska aankhein Sia ke chehre par dar talaash raha tha.

Sia ne kuch jawab nahi diya, bas aag ki lapton ko dekhti rahi.

Tabhi, resort ka buzurg pahaadi chowkidar, Deenu Kaka, jo apni khukri hamesha kamar mein lagaye rakhta tha, aag ke paas aaya. Unhone ek nazar sab par daale aur unke aankhein Ravi, YuKi, aur Aarav par aakar thehar gaya. Unke jhurriyon bhari awaaz mein sadiyon ka anubhav tha.


Deenu Kaka: "Yeh pahaad jitne sundar dikhte hain, utne hain nahi, bachchon. Jab raat gehra hota hai aur hawa mein barf ka mehak aata hai, tab 'Barf ke Saaye' utarte hain."

Ek student hass pada. "Kya Kaka, aap bhi dara rahe ho."

Deenu Kaka ki aankhein uss student ko dekh kar sakht ho gaya. "Yeh kahaani nahi, chetavni hai. Woh saaye... woh shikaar karte hain. Na khoon ka nishaan chhodte hain, na haddiyon ka suraag. Jise le jaate hain, woh bas hawa mein gaayab ho jaata hai. Hamesha ke liye."

Sabke hasne ki awaaz gale mein hi atak gaye. Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav ne ek dusre ko dekha. Unhe pata tha, yeh sirf ek lok-katha nahi tha. Yeh ek code tha, ek sandesh tha.

Sia uss anjaan si tension se ghabrakar wahan se hatne lagi. Andhere mein, uska haath anjaane mein Ravi ke ussi haath se takra gaya jo din mein zakhmi hua tha.

Ek jhatka.

Ek current.

Ravi ke dard se see karne ki bajaye saansein ruk gaya. Sia ne foran apna haath pichhe kheench liya. Ek pal ke liye, un dono ki nigahein mile. Uss ek pal mein unhone lafzon se nahi, rooh se baat kiye. Ek an-kaha vaada, ek ehsaas ke is khatre mein woh akele nahi hain.

Lekin woh nahi jaante the ke unke har harkat, har saans, record ho raha tha.

Bahut door, ek ped ke aad mein, andhere se bhi zyada kaala ek saaya baitha tha. Ek high-tech night-vision camera ke lens un dono par zoom kiye hue tha. Lens ke peeche baitha aankhon mein koi bhavna nahi tha, sirf aadesh ka intezaar tha.


KRAK!

Jungle ke andhere se achanak ek moti tehni tootne ka awaaz aaya. Awaaz itna tez tha jaise kisi ne jaan-boojh kar use toda ho.

Sabhi students darr kar ek-dum shaant ho gaye. Bonfire ka aag ke alawa har taraf maut jaisa sannata tha. Sabka aankhein uss andhere ki taraf dekh raha tha jahan se awaaz aaya tha.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri ka handle kas ke pakad liya.

Aur uss andhere mein baithe shakhs ne apne satellite phone par ek encrypted message type kiya:


"Ravi kamzor hai. Uska ek kamzori hai. Tasdeek ho gaya. Mansoobe ke agle hisse ki ijaazat di jaaye."


Masti ka waqt khatm ho chuka tha. Asli khel ab shuru hone wala tha.




Raakh Hoti Aag, Sulagti Nafrat

KRAK!

Jungle se aayi uss awaaz ne bonfire ke aas paas jami hawa ko sheeshe ki tarah tod diya. Sabhi students darr se ek dusre se sat gaye. Unki saari masti, saare gaane, ek pal mein hawa ho gaye.


Principal Malhotra: "Shaant raho! Stay calm, everyone! Koi jaanwar hoga."

Ms. Meera: "Sab log resort ke andar chalo! Now! Make a line!"

Lekin Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav jaante the. Yeh kisi jaanwar ki awaaz nahi tha. Yeh ek sochi-samjhi harkat tha. Ek signal. Ek ailaan.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri aadhi bahar nikaal liye the, unke tajurbekaar aankhein andhere ko aise cheed raha tha, jaise woh saayon ke aar-paar dekh sakta ho.

Students ke beech afra-tafri mach gaya. Sab jaldi se jaldi resort ki garmahat mein laut jaana chahte the. Isi bhagdad mein, Sia ne Ravi ko dekha. Woh apni jagah se hila tak nahi tha. Uski nigahein uss andhere par tik tha, jaise woh uss shakhs ko dekh sakta ho jo wahan chhupa baitha tha. Ravi ke chehre par dar nahi, ek sard ghussa tha. Aisa ghussa jo shikaar ko shikaari bana deta hai.

Ms. Meera ne sabko andar lobby mein ikattha kiya.


Ms. Meera: "Okay, everyone, apne apne room partners ke saath check karo. Make sure everyone is here."

Ek-ek karke sabne "Yes, ma'am" kehna shuru kiya.

Bonfire ki aakhri laptein bhi bujh chuka tha. Jalti lakdiyon ki mehak ab hawa mein faile dhuen aur anjaane khatre ki sargoshiyon mein badal gaya tha. Students thake-haare apne kamron mein laut gaye the, is baat se bekhabar ki unke beech chupe shikaari ab apne agle vaar ki taiyaari kar rahe the.



Arjun ke kamre mein...

Kamra andhere mein dooba hua tha. Sirf laptop ki neeli roshni Arjun ke chehre par kathor parchhaiyan bana raha tha.

Whiskey ka adha bhara glass mez par apne naseeb ka intezaar kar raha tha, bilkul waise hi jaise Arjun ki shatranj ke mohre uske agle hukum ka karte the.


Click... Click... Click.

Mouse ka har click ek ijaafa tha uss aag mein jo Arjun ke seene mein sulag raha tha. Telephoto lens se kheencha gaya darjanon tasveeron ka silsila ruk gaya, ek file mein qaid theen, lekin Arjun ka cursor baar-baar ek hi tasveer par aakar ruk jaata.

Ek frame par. Sirf ek.


Woh tasveer nahi, ek lamha tha. Ek pal, jab Sia ka haath anjaane mein Ravi ke haath se chhua tha. Unke ungliyon ka mehez ek lams (sparsh)... lekin unke chehron par likha kashish aur bechaini ek poori dastaan bayaan kar raha tha. Arjun uss tasveer ko zoom karke dekh raha tha. Woh Sia ke chehre par aayi pal bhar ki sharam, aur Ravi ki aankhon mein uss ek pal ke liye thehar gayi duniya ko saaf padh sakta tha.

Yeh sirf ek masoomi si chuhan nahi tha. Yeh Arjun ke banaye hue khel mein ek baghawat tha. Ek aag tha jo uska saltanat mein lag raha tha. Sia uska shatranj ka Wazir thi—khubsoorat, khatarnaak, aur sirf uske ishaaron par chalne waali. Aur ek Wazir ka kisi maamuli pyaade ke taraf dekhna bhi... badshaah ki tauheen hota hai.

Uska ungliyan keyboard par kas gaya. Chehre par ek sard muskaan phail gaya. Usne phone uthaya, number dial kiya. Uski awaaz sheeshe ke tarah saaf aur thandi tha.


ARJUN: "Khanna, waqt aa gaya hai. Plan B. Abhi."

Doosri taraf se sirf ek itminaan bhari awaaz aaya,
"Hukum kijiye, Sir."

ARJUN:
"Activate it , "Monastery ka program kal subah ka hai. Main chahta hoon resort ka woh pura wing andhere mein doob jaaye jahan Ravi Mishra apni neend poori kar raha hai. Ek 'power trip' lagna chahiye .Aisa andhera ki woh apni parchhayi se bhi darr jaaye. Aur sabse zaroori... communications. Blackout. Koi Wi-Fi nahi, koi mobile network nahi. Main chahta hoon Kal subah jab suraj nikle, toh yeh resort duniya ke liye ek black hole ban jaana chahiye."


KHANNA : "Ho jaayega, Sir. Suraj ugne se pehle, woh apni hi parchhai se bhi baat nahi kar payega."

Arjun ne call kaat diya.

Uske nigahein wapas uss tasveer par lauta. Usne Ravi ke chehre par cursor rakha, jaise nishaana laga raha ho.


ARJUN (khud se): "Khelne ka bohot shauk hai na tumhein, Ravi Mishra? Chalo, ek naya khel khelte hain. Ek aisa khel jismein roshni nahi hoga... aawaaz nahi hoga... aur tumhara kamzori hi tumhara gala ghontega."

Ek aakhri, aatish-fishaan nazar se tasveer ko dekh kar usne 'Delete' ka button daba diya.

Screen par likha aaya:
File Permanently Deleted.

Jaise Ravi Mishra ka wajood.

[LOCATION: SIA’S RESORT ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein maddham roshni tha, lekin Sia ko aaine mein apna aks nahi, apni uljhi hui rooh nazar aa rahi thi. Aaine ke uss paar khadi ladki ek anjaan shakhs lag rahi thi, jiski aankhon mein farz ki thakaan aur dil ki baghawat saaf dikh rahi thi.

Ek taraf Dada Sahab ka mission tha—ek maqsad jiske liye usne apni zindagi daanv par laga di thi. Doosri taraf Alisha ke zehar mein bujhe hue shabd kaan mein goonj rahe the, ek aisi chetavni jo anjaam ka aaina dikha rahi thi.

Aur in dono chattanon ke beech... Ravi ke haath ka woh ehsaas.

Ek second se bhi chhota lamha, lekin jaise waqt uss ek pal mein qaid ho gaya tha. Uski hatheli par abhi bhi uss chuhan ki jhanjhanahat thi. Uska dimaag cheekh raha tha ki yeh ek galti hai, ek kamzori jo usse uske maqsad se bhatka degi, jo usse barbaad kar degi. Par dil... woh dimaag ki ek bhi daleel sunne ko taiyaar nahi tha.

Usne aaine par apni ungliyan pheri, jaise apne hi aks ko samajhane ki koshish kar rahi ho.


SIA (fufusate hue):
"Kaash yeh trip... bas ek trip hota"

Uski awaaz kamre ki khaamoshi mein ek raaz ki tarah ghul gayi. Ek aisa raaz, jo shayad uski sabse badi taqat banne wala tha... ya uski tabahi ka kaaran.

PART 5: SHIKARI HUA SHIKAR

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein ek kafan jaisi khamoshi tha, lekin Ravi ke andar ek toofan chal raha tha. Yeh alag-thalag kamra aaraam ke liye nahi, ek qaid-khane ki tarah lag raha tha. Bonfire ki aag bujh chuka tha, par uska peeth par chubhta hua woh nigahein... usse ab bhi mehsoos ho rahe theen. Uska instinct, jo saalon ki training se faulad ban chuka tha, chilla raha tha—"Tum akele nahi ho."

Usne lights band kar diya. Andhera uski aankhon ke liye ek parda nahi, ek hathiyaar tha.

Usne kamre ko dekhna nahi, usse 'padhna' shuru kiya. Har kona, har saaya, har cheez jo apni jagah par nahi tha. Uska nigahein ek professional ki tarah scan karti hui... ceiling par lage smoke detector par jaakar theher gaya. Uska design ajeeb tha, standard model se alag. Aur tabhi usne woh dekha... ek behad baareek, lagbhag adrishya laal roshni, jo ek dil ke tarah... ek second ke hazaarwein hisse ke liye dhadka.


Arjun ka jaal.

Ravi ke chehre par muskaan nahi aayi. Uski aankhon mein ek aisi thandak utar aayi jo Manali ki barf ko bhi sharma de.

"Toh khel shuru ho chuka hai, Arjun Rathore."

Usne camera todne jaisa bachkani galti nahi kiya. Nahi. Usne khelne ka faisla kiya. Par ab, niyam uske honge.


Woh bed par gaya aur kambal ko aise odha, jaise ek thaka hua insaan gehri neend mein doob jaata hai. Usne apni saanson ki raftaar ko dheema kiya, apne jism ko bilkul shaant chhod diya. Woh intezaar kar raha tha, uss shikari ke sustane ka, jo usse ek aasaan shikaar samajh raha tha.

Das minute... pandrah minute... Bees minute.

Aur phir, jaise bijli kadakta hai...

Ek jhatke ke saath, Ravi ka wing mein har roshni, har awaaz, har electronic saans band ho gaya. Generator ka backup bhi aane se pehle hi mar gaya. Yeh ek 'power trip' nahi tha; yeh ek 'power execution' tha. Ek surgical strike, jiska nishana sirf ek tha.

Lekin is andhere mein, jahan ek aam insaan ki aankhein bebasi se phail jaati, Ravi ki aankhein... unhone jeena shuru kiya.

Uska shareer ekdum shaant ho gaya, saansein itna dheema ki jaise ruk hi gaya ho. Usne bistar se utarkar zameen par pair rakha, bina kisi awaaz ke. Uske kaan ab uska aankhein ban chuke the. Woh hawa mein aate badlaav, temperature mein girta har degree, aur door corridor mein bichha carpet par padne wale har anjaane bojh ko mehsoos kar sakta tha.

Uska dimaag ek supercomputer ke tarah kaam kar raha tha.


RAVI (Inner Monologue): "Blackout. Sirf meri wing mein. Communications dead. Yeh Arjun ka kaam hai. Woh mujhe alag-thalag karna chahta hai. Par woh ek galti kar raha hai. Andhera mera dushman nahi... mera ghar hai. Is andhere mein, main shikaar nahi, shikaari hoon."

Usne apne zakhmi haath ki mutthi bheenche. Dard ki ek tez lehar utha, par uss dard ne usse sulaya nahi, jaga diya. Usse yaad dilaya ki khatra kitna asli hai.

Tabhi... aawaz aaya.

Ek halka sa 'click' ka awaaz. Uske kamre ke darwaze ke lock se. Koi bahar se electronic key card override karne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Ravi ek saaye ki tarah pichhe hata aur deewar se sat kar khada ho gaya, theek darwaze ke paas, jahan se andar aane wala usey pehli nazar mein dekh na sake. Usne paas rakhe bhaari table lamp ko haath mein utha liya. Yeh koi high-tech hathiyaar nahi tha, par andhere mein, sahi waqt par, yeh maut ka doosra naam ban sakta tha.

Darwaza bina awaaz kiye khula.

Ek kaala saaya, sir se paanv tak kaale tactical gear mein, kamre mein daakhil hua. Uske haath mein ek chhota, suppressed pistol tha, jiske aage night-vision scope laga tha. Woh professional tha.

Par usne ek galti kar dala. Usne Ravi ko bistar par dhoondha.

Aur Ravi bistar par nahi tha.

Jaise hi woh saaya aage badha, andhera zinda ho gaya. Ravi uske peeche se ek toofan ki tarah ubhra. Uska zakhmi haath ek lohe ke panje ki tarah saaye ki pistol wali kalai par pada. Isse pehle ki woh trigger daba paata, Ravi ne uski kalai ko ek wehshi angle par mod diya.


KRRACK!

Haddi aur cartilage ke tootne ki ek geeli, dil-dehlaane wali awaaz andhere mein goonj gayi. Saaye ke munh se ek dabi hui cheekh nikli, par Ravi ne usse mauka nahi diya. Usne ussi toote haath se use apni taraf kheencha aur apna ghutna uski pasliyon mein de maara. Doosri KRAK ki awaaz aayi.

Saaya professional tha. Dard ke bawajood, usne apne doosre haath se ek combat knife nikaala aur Ravi ke pet ki taraf vaar kiya.

Par Ravi wahan tha hi nahi. Woh hawa ki tarah pichhe hata, saaye ka santulan bigadne diya, aur phir aage badhkar, uske knife wale haath ki kohni par ek brutal 'elbow-lock' laga diya. Teesra
CRACK!

Saaye ke dono haath ab bekaar the. Isse pehle ki woh cheekh paata, Ravi ne uske baalon ko pakda aur uska sir deewar par de maara.

THUMP!

Saaya behosh hokar zameen par dher ho gaya.

Ravi ne uske chehre se naqaab hataya. Ek anjaan chehra. Ek kiraye ka qaatil. Par Ravi ka dhyaan uske kaan mein lage communication device par gaya. Usne use nikaal kar apne kaan mein lagaya. Doosri taraf se Arjun ki bechain awaaz aa raha tha.


ARJUN (O.S. via earpiece): "Hunter? Kya hua? Report! Status!"

Ravi ne kuch nahi kaha. Usne device ko zameen par rakha aur apne military boot se, dheere se, poora wazan daal kar use kuchal diya.


CRUNCH

Yeh khel ka pehla mohra tha jo shatranj se bahar ho chuka tha.



[LOCATION: ARJUN’S ROOM]

CRUNCH.

Earpiece se aaya aakhri awaaz Arjun ke kaano mein zehar ke tarah utar gayi. Uske chehre par gusse aur hairat ka toofan umad aaya.

ARJUN (gurrate hue): "Impossible! Usne HUNTER ko... andhere mein... bina hathiyaar ke?"

Usne apni whiskey ka glass ek jhatke mein khaali kar diya. Uska plan, uska perfect plan, pehli hi chaal mein dhwast ho chuka tha. Usne Ravi ko kamzor samjha tha. Yeh uski sabse badi bhool thi.

Usne Mr. Khana ko call kiya, jo bahar corridor mein pehra de raha tha.unke pass Virat , Rishi aur Sameer bhi khade the.


ARJUN: "Plan B fail ho gaya hai! HUNTER neeche hai. Ab Plan C. 'Saayon' ko aage badhne ka ishaara do. Unse kaho, shikaar ab hoshiyaar ho chuka hai. Aur Virat..."

VIRAT : "Ji, Arjun bhai."

ARJUN: "Agar Sia apne kamre se bahar nikle... usey rokna mat. Bas us par nazar rakhna. Woh Ravi ke taraf hi jaayegi. Aur jab kamzori khud shikaari ke paas jaaye... toh khel aur bhi mazedaar ho jaata hai."

Usne call kaat diya aur monitor par aayi ek live feed ko dekhne laga. Ek hidden camera Sia ke kamre ke theek bahar laga tha. Woh intezaar kar raha tha. Apne Wazir ko, pyaade ki taraf badhte hue dekhne ka.




[LOCATION: SIA'S ROOM / CORRIDOR]

Sia apne kamre mein bechaini se tehel rahi thi. Ravi ki wing mein andhera hote hi uska dil kisi anhoni ke aashanka se doob gaya tha. Uska dimaag usey Dada Sahab ka mission yaad dila raha tha, par uska dil... woh Ravi ke naam ki zidd kar raha tha.

"Main uske maamle mein nahi pad sakti. Yeh mission ke liye khatra hai," usne khud se kaha.

Par agle hi pal, usne darwaza khola. Uska dil jeet chuka tha.

Corridor mein maut jaisa sannata tha. Woh dabe paanv aage badhi. Har kadam uske farz par ek chot jaisa tha. Jab woh Ravi ke wing ke paas pahunchi, toh usne andhere mein khade ek saaye ko dekha. Virat.

Virat ne use dekha, par Arjun ke hukum ke mutaabik, usne Sia ko roka nahi. Bas ek ajeeb, sard muskaan di, jaise keh raha ho,
"Jao, apni maut ki taraf."

Sia usse nazarandaaz karke aage badh gayi. Ravi ka darwaza halka sa khula tha. Usne darte-darte andar jhaanka.

Andar ka manzar dekh kar uski saansein gale mein hi atak gayi.

Ravi zameen par baitha tha, behosh HUNTER ke paas. Kamre mein sirf chaand ka halka roshni aa raha tha. Us roshni mein, Ravi ka chehra kisi insaan ka nahi, ek... yoddha ka lag raha tha. Uska aankhon mein ghussa nahi, ek thanda, hisaabi focus tha.


SIA (dheere se): "Ravi...?"

Ravi ne palat kar use dekha. Uski aankhon mein ek pal ke liye narmi aaya.


RAVI: "Tumhein yahan nahi aana chahiye tha, Sia. Yeh jagah ab mehfooz nahi hai."

SIA: "Main bas... main chinta kar rahi thi."

Isse pehle ki Ravi kuch kehta, uske kaan khade ho gaye. Usne Sia ko ishare se chup rehne ko kaha.

Bahar... corridor mein... kadmon ki awaaz aa rahi tha.

Par yeh ek insaan ke kadmon ki awaaz nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise koi cheez... barf par reng rahi ho. Koi awaaz nahi, koi khusar-pusar nahi. Bas ek ehsaas. Ek thanda, maut jaisa ehsaas jo darwaze ke neeche se sarak kar andar aa raha tha.

Deenu Kaka ki awaaz Ravi ke dimaag mein goonja.
'Barf ke Saaye'.


RAVI (sargoshi mein): "Bistar ke neeche chhup jao. Aur jab tak main na kahun, bahar mat nikalna. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye."

Uska awaaz mein ek aisa authority tha jise Sia mana nahi kar saka. Woh foran bistar ke neeche chhup gayi.

Ravi ne Hunter ke behosh shareer ko ek taraf kheencha aur darwaze ke peeche phir se apni position le liya.

Darwaza dheere-dheere, ek ajeeb si crakkk ke saath khula.

Iss baar, ek nahi... teen saaye andar daakhil hue. Unhone kaale nahi, balki barf jaise safed, camouflage gear pehne the. Unke chehre par ajeeb se thermal goggles the aur unke haath mein khukri jaise, aage se mude hue, ghatak khanjar the.

Woh hawa ki tarah shaant the. Unka har move ek socha-samjha, train kiya hua qadam tha.

Pehle saaye ne kamre ko scan kiya. Doosra Hunter ke shareer ke paas gaya. Aur teesra... teesra theek uss bistar ke paas jaakar khada ho gaya jiske neeche Sia apni saansein roke chhipi hui thi.

Khel ab one-on-one nahi raha tha.

Yeh teen-on-one tha. Aur Ravi jaanta tha... yeh Arjun ke mamooli gunde nahi the.

Yeh professional qaatil the.
'Barf ke Saaye'.

Jangal ka asli shikaar... ab shuru ho chuka tha.




YAADON KE PEHREDAAR

[LOCATION: GADEN BAUDH MATH – ANDRUNI KAKSH]

Jabke resort ke uss kamre mein saansein ruka hua tha, pahaadon ki goad mein basa Gaden Baudh Math ka roohani khamoshi bhi uss ek kamre mein aakar thehar jaata tha. Yeh math ka sabse gupt, sabse andhera hissa tha. Hawa mein chandan, kapoor aur sadiyon purani prarthnaon ki mehek ek saath ghula hua tha. Deewaron par bane thangka paintings andhere mein saans lete hue mehsoos ho rahe the.

Beech mein baithe Lama Tashi ke aankhein band tha, par unka astitva uss kamre ki har cheez par haavi tha. Unke saamne, zameen par ghutno ke bal, Kitsune (YuKi) ka sir jhuka hua tha.

Lama Tashi ki bhaari awaaz pattharon se takraaya, jaise koi gufa goonj utha ho.



LAMA TASHI: "Aasmaan se toota hua taara... apni roshni zaroor kho chuka hai, Kitsune. Lekin girte waqt woh Qayamat ki garmi apne andar samet laaya hai. Tumhara zimmedaari sirf uske zakhmi jism ka nahi, uska bikhra hua rooh ka hifazat karna hai. Woh ab ek aisa daulat hai jiski koi keemat nahi, aur jise lootne ke liye Shaitan khud zameen par utar aaya hai."


KITSUNE: (Awaaz mein bebasi) :"Uss garmi ko woh khud mehsoos nahi kar paa raha, Lama. Uski aankhon mein ek aisa khaamoshi hai... jismein sirf aakhri tabahi ka shor hai. Apni pehchaan ki ek chingari tak nahi. Agar usse zara bhi yaad hota, toh woh meri aankhon mein chhipa fikr aur Aarav ke chehre par ubalte laave ko ek pal mein pehchaan leta."

Tabhi andhere se ek fauladi awaaz ne Kitsune ke shabdon ko cheer diya.

"Khaamoshi kamzori nahi, gehraayi ka nishaani hota hai, Lama. Aur samandar ki gehraayi mein hi toofan saans lete hain."

Phoenix (Aarav) andhere se nikal kar uss roshni mein aaya jo ek ghee ke diye se phail raha tha. Uska aankhein ek shikari baaz ki tarah aage dekh raha tha, jaise woh deewaron ke paar bhi dekh sakta ho.


PHOENIX (AARAV): "Woh sab kuch bhoola nahi hai. Uska yaadon par bas jakhmon ka zang lag gaya hai. Chehre dhundhle ho gaye hain, par unn chehron se mile dard ka ehsaas aaj bhi taza hai. Woh aag... woh cheekhein... uske zehen mein nahi, uski rooh mein qaid hain. Ek Shezaada jiska takht uska yaadein tha, aur woh takht ab cheen liya gaya hai."

LAMA TASHI: (Dheere se apni aankhein kholte hain. Unke nazron mein gyaan nahi, ek aisa chetavni tha jo waqt ko rok de.)
"Aur yahi baat usse is duniya ka sabse khatarnaak hathiyaar banata hai! Uska dimaag ab ek band darwaza nahi... woh Pralay ka taaboot hai. Ek aisi taqat jise dushman apni jeet samajhta hai, aur jise humein is duniya ke antt se pehle kaabu mein rakhna hai. Agar woh taaboot khul gaya... toh yeh duniya uss Shezaade ka kahani nahi, uska tabahi ka kissa sunega."


KITSUNE: (Uthkar, awaaz mein ek nayi zimmedaari ke saath)
"Toh humara maqsad kya hai, Lama?"


LAMA TASHI: "Tum dono uske saaye nahi... uski yaadon ke pehredaar banoge. Tumhare jung sirf dushman se nahi, uske ateet se bhi hai. Tumhein usse bachana bhi hai... aur waqt aane par, is duniya ko uss se bachana bhi hai. Jaao! Kyunki waqt ka ret nahi, zindagiyan phisal raha hain. Aur dushman ne apni pehli chaal chal diya hai."




USOOLON KI QEEMAT

[LOCATION: RESORT – STAFF QUARTERS – RAAT]

Resort ke chamak-damak ke peeche ek aur duniya tha. Geeli deewaron, seelan ki mehek aur saste disinfectant ki gandh waala. Yeh staff quarters ka pichla hissa tha, jahan andhera bhi zyada thaka hua aur gehra lagta tha.

Yahin par, parchhaiyon ko apna saathi banaye, Vikrant aage badh raha tha. Woh Aryan ke sabse puraane aur wafadaar aadmiyon mein se tha. Uski ragon mein khoon ke saath Aryan bhai ka ek usool daudta tha—"Begunahon par haath nahi uthana." Aur Arjun ke Manali aane ke baad se hi, usse yeh usool toot-ta hua mehsoos ho raha tha.

Usne Arjun ke Security Head ko ek band pade store room mein ghuste dekha. Ek aisi jagah jahan kisi ko nahi jaana chahiye tha. Vikrant deewar se sat kar aage badha, uske saans lene ki awaaz bhi usse dhokha de sakti thi. Usne darwaze ke daraar se andar jhaanka, aur jo dekha, usse uska rooh tak kaanp gayi.

Andar do log the. Security Head... aur ek anjaan saaya.

Woh saaya roshni mein aaya. Lamba, patla jism. Lambe baal jo uske chehre par a rahe the. Gaal par ek purane zakhm ka nishaan, jaise kisi janwar ne panja maara ho. Par sabse darawni cheez uska aankhein theen—bilkul khaali, jaise unke peeche koi insaan nahi, sirf maut ka intezaar tha.



(NAYE KIRDAAR KI ENTRY – KAI)

Woh ek professional mercenary tha. Ek bhoot, jise Arjun ne khaas iss kaam ke liye kiraye par liya tha. Kai usoolon par nahi, keemat par kaam karta tha.


SECURITY HEAD: (Awaaz mein ek ajeeb sa ghabrahat) "Target confirm hai. Ladki, Jaanvi. Kal Monastery mein... kaam saaf hona chahiye."

Kai ne jawaab nahi diya, bas gardan halki sa hilaaya. Jab woh bola, toh uska awaaz sookhe patton par rengte saanp jaisa tha.



KAI: "Kaam ho jaayega. Par Rathore Junior ko yaad dila dena, iss kaam ki keemat sirf paisa nahi hai... uska khamoshi bhi hai. Kissa khatam hone ke baad, main kabhi tha hi nahi."


Vikrant ka dimaag sunn ho gaya. Dhokha. Arjun ne apne hi bhai ko dhokha diya tha. Yeh sabaq sikhaane ki nahi, ek begunah ko mitaane ki saazish tha. Usne bina awaaz kiye wahan se hatna chaha, par uska kismat ne saath chhod diya. Uska pair neeche pade kaanch ke ek toote hue tukde par pad gaya.



KRRNNCH!

Awaaz mamuli tha, par uss khamoshi mein ek dhamake jaisa laga.

Ek palak jhapk mein Kai insaan se hathiyaar ban gaya. Woh aisi tezi se palta jaise hawa ne rukh badla ho. Uska khaali aankhein seedha daraar ke uss paar Vikrant ki dehshat-zada aankhon se takraaya.

Sochne ka waqt nahi tha. Vikrant bhaaga.

Par Kai shikaar tha, aur Vikrant shikaari. Woh ek saaye ke tarah uske peeche lapka, uske kadmon ki awaaz tak nahi aa raha tha. Vikrant ne jaan bachane ke liye daudte hue paas pada ek zang laga lohe ka rod uthaya aur palat kar poori taqat se vaar kiya.


Kai ne ek hairaan kar dene waala furti se uss rod ko hawa mein hi pakad liya. Uska kalai tak nahi hila.

Ek jhatke mein usne rod Vikrant ke haath se cheen liya. Isse pehle ki Vikrant apna galti samajh paata, Kai ne wahi rod ghuma kar uske ghutne par de maara.


CRACK!

Haddi ke tootne ki wehshi awaaz uss tang corridor mein goonj gaya.

Vikrant ki cheekh uske gale mein hi ghut gaya jab woh zameen par gira. Kai uske upar shikaari ke tarah jhuka. Uska aankhon mein na gussa tha, na nafrat. Sirf ek peshewar khamoshi.



KAI: "Galat waqt... galat jagah."

Usne rod uthaaya aur Vikrant ke doosre haath ke kalai par maar diya. Ek aur dardnaak cheekh. Phir usne rod Vikrant ke gardan par rakha aur dheere se dabav badhaya, bas itna ki saans rukne lage.



KAI (sargoshi mein, jaise koi raaz bata raha ho): "Apne Aryan bhai ko paigaam dena... Arjun Rathore ke khel mein usoolon ke jagah nahi... sirf nateeje hote hain."


Yeh keh kar usne rod hata liya aur Vikrant ko toote jism aur toote himmat ke saath wahin tadapta hua chhod diya. Woh andhere mein aise ghul gaya jaise kabhi tha hi nahi.


Yeh sirf ek warning nahi tha. Yeh ek elaan-e-jung tha. Ek khooni elaan... ki Manali mein ab Aryan ke nahi, Arjun Rathore ke niyam chalenge.





QAYAMAT KA NAACH

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein teen saaye the, aur ek shikaar. Kam se kam, woh yahi soch rahe the.

Bistar ke neeche, Sia ka dil uske seene mein ek qaid parinde ki tarah phadphada raha tha. Upar khade saaye ke boot uski aankhon se bas kuch inch door the. Usne apni cheekh ko gale mein hi ghont diya.

Jaise hi teesre saaye ne bistar ko khanjar se uthane ke liye haath badhaya, andhera zinda ho gaya.

Ravi ek toofan ke tarah nahi, Qayamat ke tarah utha. Usne paas rakha bhaari table lamp uthaya, lekin phenka nahi. Usne use ek pendulum ki tarah ghumakar pehle saaye ke thermal goggles par de maara.


CRASH!

Kaanch aur high-tech plastic ke tukde saaye ki aankhon mein ghus gaye. Uski cheekh nikli, par sirf ek pal ke liye. Isse pehle ki uska cheekh poori hota, Ravi uske saamne tha. Usne saaye ke khanjar wale haath ko pakda, uske kohni ko apne ghutne par rakha aur doosre haath se uska kalai ko neeche ki taraf mod diya.

SNAP!

Kohni ke joint ke ulti disha mein tootne ki ek geeli, wehshi awaaz aayi. Par Ravi wahin nahi ruka. Usne qaatil ke hi toote hue haath se khanjar cheena aur uski gardan ke aar-paar utaar diya.

Ek saans... aur pehla saaya zameen par tha. Zinda nahi.

Doosre do saaye, apne saathi ke achanak khatm ho jaane se chaunke, par woh professional the. Unhone Ravi par ek saath hamla kiya. Unke khanjar hawa ko cheerte hue maut ka sangeet gaa rahe the.

Lekin Ravi unse lad nahi raha tha. Woh naach raha tha. Maut ka ek aisa naach jise Sia apni zindagi mein kabhi nahi bhool paayegi.

Woh ek khanjar ke neeche se jhuka, doosre ko apni baazu se deflect kiya, jisse uske haath par ek gehra ghaav laga. Par uske chehre par dard ka nishaan tak nahi tha. Usne doosre qaatil ke hamle ki taaqat ka istemaal karte hue use apni taraf kheencha aur use teesre qaatil ke saamne ek insaani dhaal ki tarah kar diya.

Teesre qaatil ka khanjar apne hi saathi ke seene mein utar gaya.

Uska aankhein dehshat se phail gaya. Par Ravi ne use sambhalne ka ek pal bhi nahi diya. Usne zakhmi qaatil ko ek taraf dhakela aur aakhri bache hue saaye ke taraf badha. Usne zameen par pade Hunter ke pistol ko pair se uchhalkar hawa mein pakda.

Par goli nahi chalaya.

Woh qaatil ke itne kareeb pahunch chuka tha ki pistol ka barrel uske maathe par lage thermal goggle se takra raha tha.


RAVI (uska awaaz andhere se bhi zyada thanda aur khaali tha): "Usse kaho... usne kutte bheje hain... ek sher ke shikaar ke liye."

Aur phir usne trigger nahi, pistol ke pichle hisse (slide) se qaatil ke naak par poori taaqat se vaar kiya.


KRRR-UNCH!

Naak ka haddi toot kar uske dimaag mein ghus gayi. Woh bina koi awaaz kiye, ek murde ki tarah pichhe gir gaya.

Teen professional qaatil. Tees second se bhi kam.

Kamre mein ab sirf Ravi ke tez saanson ke awaaz tha. Aur khoon ka bhaari, lohe jaisa mehek.

Ravi dheere se utha. Uske haath se khoon tapak kar zameen par safed barf par lahu ka pehli boondon ki kahani likh raha tha. Woh dheere-dheere chalta hua kamre ke beech mein aaya. Usne neeche pade jismon ko nahi dekha.

Usne upar dekha.

Seedha uss smoke detector mein lage camera ke lens mein. Arjun ke aankhon mein.

Uske chehre par na ghussa tha, na jeet. Sirf ek aisa khaamoshi jo hazaar cheekhon se zyada darawni tha. Usne apna khoon se sana haath uthaya aur usse apna aankhon ke saamne laaya. Phir, behad dheere se, usne apniaek ungli se apne hi gale par ek lakeer kheencha.

Ek vaada. Ek paigaam. Ek maut ka farmaan.

Arjun Rathore ne ek pyaada samjha tha. Uss raat, usse pata chala ki shatranj ke uss paar... ek Qayamat baitha hai , ek doosra Badshah.

Aur uss Badshah ke chehre par ek an-kaha paigaam saaf likha tha...


"Welcome to my warzone."



RAAKH BHI NAHI MILEGA

Par khel abhi khatm nahi hua tha.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia kaanpte hue yeh sab dekh rahi thi. Uski aankhon mein ab sirf darr nahi, ek aisi hairat thi jise samajhna namumkin tha.

Ravi ne camera ke taraf se nazar hataya aur kamre ko dekha. Ek aam insaan is manzar ko dekh kar cheekh padta ya behosh ho jaata. Chaar lashein. Khoon se sane farsh aur deewar.

Par Ravi... usne ek lambi, thandi saans liya, jaise usne abhi-abhi ek halka sa exercise khatm kiya ho. Uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha. Jaise yeh uske liye roz ka kaam ho.

Woh bina kisi jaldbaazi ke, behad methodical tareeke se kaam par lag gaya.

Usne sabse pehle bed se saari chaadarein utaara. Bistar ke neeche se Sia ne dekha ki usne ek-ek karke chaaron lashon ko un chaadaron mein lapetna shuru kiya. Uske movements ek surgeon ki tarah sateek the. Koi awaaz nahi, koi ghabrahat nahi.

Phir, usne un bhaari gathriyon ko, ek-ek karke, balcony ki taraf kheench kar le jaana shuru kiya. Sia ko laga ki woh shayad unhein neeche phenk dega. Par Ravi ne aisa nahi kiya. Resort ke uss wing ke theek peeche ek ghana, andhera jungle tha, jahan ek gehri khaai tha. Ravi ne ek-ek gathri ko balcony ki railing par rakha aur bina kisi awaaz ke, neeche uss andhere mein dhakel diya jahan se unka suraag milna namumkin tha.

Char insaan... jaise kabhi the hi nahi.

Iske baad woh wapas kamre mein aaya. Sia ne socha ab woh thak kar rukega. Par woh ruka nahi. Usne bathroom se paani ka baalti aur kuch saaf karne wale kapde liye aur zameen par ghutno ke bal baith gaya.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia usse ek bhoot ki tarah kaam karte hue dekh rahi thi. Woh farsh se khoon ka har ek daag, deewar par lage har ek cheente ko aise saaf kar raha tha, jaise koi crime scene cleaner ho. Usne toote hue lamp ke tukde, qaatilon ke gire hue hathiyaar, har cheez ko ikattha kiya aur ek bag mein bhar liya.

Pandrah minute ke andar, woh kamra waisa hi tha jaisa pehle tha. Bas hawa mein khoon aur disinfectant ka halka sa mehek baaki tha. Jaise kuch hua hi nahi tha. Jaise Qayamat aaya, apna kaam kiya, aur bina koi nishaan chhode chala gaya.

Ab Ravi palta. Woh seedha bistar ke paas aaya aur neeche jhuka.

Andhere mein, Sia ko sirf uski do aankhein dikhayi de rahi theen, jo chaand ki roshni mein ajeeb tarah se chamak rahi theen. Un aankhon mein ab woh Ravi nahi tha jise woh school mein jaanti thi.

Ravi ne apna khoon se saaf kiya hua, par ab bhi zakhmi haath uski taraf badhaya.

Uska awaaz ek sargoshi se zyada nahi tha, par Sia ke liye woh ek dhamaka tha. Ek aisa sawaal jo is trip ki, aur shayad uski zindagi ki, disha badalne wala tha.


"Iss khel mein masoomiyat ki keemat maut hota hai, Sia. Main tumhein bacha sakta hoon, par tumhari masoomiyat nahi. Tayyar ho?"

Uska awaaz ab bhi hawa mein tair raha tha jab usne Sia ko dekhe bina aage kaha, jaise woh aane wale kal se baat kar raha ho.

"Kyunki yeh raat toh bas ek trailer tha... asli film toh kal subah Monastery mein shuru hoga."




"Ab batao, Sia... Darr lag raha hai... ya maza aa raha hai?"
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UPDATE 11 (A)


BARF PAR LAHU KA MAUSAM


PART 1: Raat Ka Safar

EXT. DELHI HIGHER SECONDARY SCHOOL – MIDNIGHT

Raat ke theek 12 baj rahe the. Dilli ki sardi apni poori nafrat ke saath hawa mein zeher ghol raha tha. Delhi Higher Secondary School ka vishaal campus, jo din mein hazaron students ke shor se zinda rehta tha, ab ek qabristan ki tarah andhere aur khamoshi ke chaadar odhe soya hua tha. Par aaj iss khamoshi mein sukoon nahi, ek ajeeb sa dahashat tha. Jaise toofan se pehle ki woh bhaari shaanti, jab hawa bhi saans lene se darta hai. Aisa lag raha tha jaise Dilli ne apna saans rok li ho, kisi anhoni ka intezaar kar rahi ho.

Campus ke main gate ke paas, do chamchamati, kaali Volvo bus kisi shikaari jaanwar ki tarah shaant khada tha. Unka powerful LED headlights ne andhere ko cheer kar ek dhundhli si roshni ka surang bana diya tha, jo seedhe anjaane bhavishya ki taraf jaata tha. Engine ka garmi se uthta dhuaan un headlights ki roshni mein aise ghul raha tha, jaise kisi dusri duniya ka darwaza khul gaya ho.


Manali trip — kaagazon par yeh ek picnic tha.

Lekin is khel ke asli khiladi jaante the… yeh sirf ek trip nahi, ek imtihaan tha. Ek aisi jung ka ailaan, jiska maidan ab Dilli ke concrete jungle se badalkar Manali ke barfeele pahaad banne wale the.


Dheere-dheere, students hostels kE roshni se nikal kar us andhere mein ikattha hone lage. Unke chehron par neend se zyada Manali jaane ka utsah tha. Hawa mein sardi ke saath-saath excitement aur sargoshiyan ghula hua tha.


"Suna hai wahan snowfall hone wala hai!" "Yaar, bonfire night ke liye gaane select kar liye?"

Par is masoom bheed mein kuch chehre aise the jinke liye yeh safar picnic nahi, shatranj ki ek khooni baazi ka agla maidan tha.


Ravi Mishra apna backpack kandhe par taange bus se kuch dur, andhere mein ek saaye ki tarah khada tha. Uska shareer bilkul shaant tha, ek patthar ka murti ke tarah, jise sardi ya hawa se koi fark nahi padta. Lekin uska aankhein… woh ek alag hi kahani keh raha tha. Un aankhon ke samandar mein ek toofan qaid tha. Aisa toofan jo purani ladaiyon, khoye hue logon, aur adhoore badlon ki yaadon ki laashon se bana tha. Uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha, par uski aankhein cheekh raha tha—jaise kisi purana jang ke zakhm ab bhi uske andar sulag rahe ho, har saans ke saath uska aatma ko jala rahe ho.

Tabhi Kabir uske paas aaya, hamesha ki tarah chewing gum chabate hue. Uske chehre par ek laaparwah muskaan tha, par woh bhi jaanta tha ki Ravi ke aas-paas ka hawa hamesha bhaari rehta hai.


Kabir: “Bhai, itna serious kyun lag raha hai? Manali ja rahe hain, warzone nahi.”

Amit ne apne chashme ko theek karte hue dheere se kaha,


"Technically, Kabir, har situation ek potential warzone hai. Bas 'activation energy' ka fark hota hai. Aur yahan… potential energy hadh se zyada hai."

Ravi ne apni nazar us andhere gate se nahi hataya. Bina Kabir ke taraf dekhe, uske honth hile. Uska aawaz itna thanda tha jaise barf ke neeche daba hua sadiyon purana talwar ho.


Ravi (bina dekhe): “Warzone wahi hota hai jahan dushman muskurata hai.”

Kabir aur Amit dono chup ho gaya. Ravi ka tone thanda tha — par har lafz mein ek aisi dhaar tha jo seedha rooh ko cheerta tha.


Theek usi pal, peeche se Sia aayi. Usne ek stylish si jacket pehni thi, baal loosely bandhe hue the, aur kuch latein hawa mein uske khoobsurat chehre par aa raha tha. Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb sa sannaata thi, ek aisi gehraai jismein pyaar aur khatra dono ek saath rehte the. Usne Ravi ki taraf dekha, par kuch bola nahi. Dono ke beech ek purani kahani ki khamoshi thi, jaise lafzon ke beech abhi bhi ek “adhura vaada” qaid ho.

Uski aankhon mein ek aisi kashmakash thi jaise uska dil aur dimaag do alag-alag safar par nikalne wale ho. Use apne Dada Sahab ke alfaaz yaad aa rahe the, '
Arjun Rathore ke har qadam par nazar rakhna, Sia. Woh hamari saltanat ke liye khatra hai. Uske liye tumhein kuch bhi karna pade... karo. Apne dil ko is khel se door rakhna.' Par yeh dil hi tha jo baar-baar uske dimaag ke khilaaf bagawat kar raha tha.

Alisha, hamesha ki tarah, ek kone mein akeli khadi thi. Uske haath mein phone tha, aur uski nigahein ek baaz ki tarah sab par thi, par uska aakhri nishana Ravi hi tha. Uske chehre par ek halki si muskaan thi, jaise use is khel ka anjaam pehle se pata ho.



Naye Khiladi: YuKi, Aarav (Phoenix), aur The Trio (Zayn, Adira, Maya), sab alag-alag khade the. Woh is bheed ka hissa hokar bhi nahi the. Unke khamoshi unke wajood ko aur bhi rahasyamayi bana raha tha. YuKi, ek ped ke neeche andhere mein khada tha, uska chehra dikhayi nahi de raha tha. Aarav, bus ke doosre taraf, ek saaye ki tarah khada tha, uski nigahein sirf Ravi ki peeth par tika tha. The Trio aapas mein khusar-pusar kar rahe the, unke aankhein har kisi ko scan kar raha tha.


Aur phir thi Riya. Woh ladki jise Ravi ne gundo se bachaya tha. Woh aaj alag hi himmat ke saath aayi thi. Uski aankhein sirf Ravi ko dhoondh rahi thi. Woh dheere se uske group ke paas aayi.



Riya (thodi hichkichate hue): "Hi Kabir... Sab theek?" Usne pucha Kabir se, par uski nazrein Ravi par thi.


Ravi ne uski taraf nahi dekha, par usne Riya ki presence ko mehsoos kar liya tha. Uske andar ek ajeeb si bechaini hua. Yeh ladki uski duniya ka hissa nahi tha, aur woh nahi chahta tha ki uska parchhayi bhi ispar pade.



BHAIYON MEIN DARAR


Bus ke paas, andhere mein, do saaye alag khade the. Arjun aur Aryan Rathore. Rathore Brothers. Power unke naam se nahi, unke aura se jhalakta tha. Aisa lagta tha jaise power khud unke saath chalta hai, unke har kadam ko follow karta hai. Unke saath Arjun ke vafadaar dost, Virat, Rishi aur Sameer, khade the. Hawa mein unke beech ka tanav saaf mehsoos ho raha tha.

Arjun: “Aaj se game shuru hota hai, bhai.”

Aryan: “Game nahi… pariksha. Bas yaad rakh — Rathore kabhi peeth pe vaar nahi karte.”

Arjun ke chehre par ek aisa muskaan aaya jismein confidence se zyada ghamand tha. “Tabhi toh har baar haar jaate hain.”

Yeh line hawa mein teer ki tarah Aryan ko laga. Usne gusse se Arjun ko dekha.


Arjun: "Aryan, Manali mein humein thoda 'shaant' rehna hoga. Wahan main sab sambhal lunga."


Aryan (Apne bhai ko ghoorte hue):
"Shaant? Sambhal loge? Arjun, humein uss ladki, Jaanvi, se khatra hai. Main jaanta hoon Dad ne kya kaha hai. Par yaad rakhna, hum Rathore hain, qaatil nahi."


VIRAT ne beech mein tokne ka koshish kiya, "Par Aryan bhai, agar woh muh kholegi toh..."



Aryan (Uska baat kaat-te hue, awaaz mein ek thandi warning tha):

"Toh hum uska muh band karwa denge! Uske parivaar ko 'samjhayenge', use darayenge, dhamkayenge... zaroorat pada toh uski zindagi nark bana denge. Par uski saansein nahi chheenenge. Jaan se maarna... yeh hamare usoolon ke khilaaf hai. Rathore dushman ko todte hain, par begunahon ka khoon nahi bahate. Samjhe tum, Arjun?"

Arjun ne apne bhai ke aankhon mein ek aisa aag dekha jise woh jaanta tha. Aryan ek bully tha, par uska apna ek code tha.



Arjun (Ek jhoothi muskaan ke saath): "Relax, bhai. Aisa kuch nahi hoga. Main bas... 'baat' karunga."

Par uske dimaag mein ek alag hi toofan chal raha tha.

'Tumhare usool is jung mein kaam nahi aayenge, Aryan. Jab saltanat khatre mein ho, toh har paap... punya ban jaata hai.'



BUS KE ANDAR KI MASTI AUR TENSION

Ek zordaar gurrahat ke saath bus ka engine zinda hua, jaise ek shikaari ne lambi neend ke baad angdaai liya ho. Ms. Meera Kapoor aur Principal Malhotra ne kuch zaroori instructions diye, par unke aawaz students ke josh aur sargoshiyon mein dab kar reh gaya. Unke chehre par bas ek formality tha; asli khel ke niyam toh koi aur likh raha tha.


Safar shuru hua.

Buses dheere-dheere aage badha, aur unke taaqatwar headlights ne school ke peeche chhoot’te andhere ko cheer diya. Delha ka lambi, sooni sadkein ab peeche chhoot raha tha. Yeh sadkein nahi tha, yeh ek purani zindagi tha jise har pahiya peeche dhakel raha tha.

Raat ka andhera, Dilli ke shor ko peeche chhodta hua do luxurious Volvo buses, aane wale toofan ka khamoshi mein lipta, Manali ke taraf badh raha tha. Andar, air conditioner ka halka 'hmmm' ki awaaz mein kayi anjaane toofan saansein le rahe the. Yeh school trip nahi, ek chalta-phirta 'war council' tha, jahan har shakhs apne zehen mein jung ka taiyaari kar raha tha.

Jald hi, mahaul do hisson mein bant gaya.

Ek taraf, jashn ka mahaul tha. Kabir se, jaisa ki ummeed tha, bus ko sar par utha liya. Antakshari shuru ho chuka tha. Music full volume par tha, jokes sunaye jaa rahe the, mobile phones ki flashlights mein Instagram stories ban raha tha. Har taraf hasi, gaane aur befikri ka shor tha.

Doosri taraf, khamosh nigaahon ka ek anjaana khel chal raha tha. Jahaan lafz nahi, saansein takra raha tha. Jahaan har chehra ek naqaab tha aur har muskaan ek saazish. In kuch seats par, hawa zeher ki tarah bhaari tha.

Pichli seaton ke andhere kone mein, Ravi khidki ke paas akela baitha tha. Usne earphones laga rakhe the, par uska playlist mein koi gaana nahi chal raha tha. Sirf silence. Ek aisa khamoshi jismein woh apne andar uthte toofano ki aawazein sun sakta tha. Khidki se bahar andhere ko ghoorte hue, uske chehre par aati-jaati street lights ki roshni uske andar chal rahe vichaaron ka aks pesh kar raha tha. Yeh ek ajeeb sa shaanti tha jo bahar ke shor se zyada bechain karne wala tha.


"Kuch safar awaaz ke saath nahi, khamoshi ke saath likhe jaate hain. Ye unhi mein se ek tha."

RAVI (Inner Monologue): "Yeh sadak Manali nahi, mere ateet ke taraf jaa raha hai. Har mod ek naya raaz kholega, aur har manzil par ek nayi maut khada hoga. Arjun ne shikaar ke liye jaal bichhaya hai, par woh yeh nahi jaanta... ki is jaal mein ab itne shikaari aa chuke hain ki jaal khud hi shikaar ban jaayega."

Sia usse do seats aage baithi thi. Usne apne baal khol diye the. Khidki ke sheeshe par uske aks ke theek peeche, Ravi ka aks dikh raha tha. Dono ek dusre ko dekh nahi rahe the, par andhere sheeshe mein unke chehre ek dusre se takra rahe the. Ek anjaan si aankh-micholi chal raha tha. Beech mein puri duniya so raha tha, aur un dono ke dil jaag rahe the.


SIA (Inner Monologue): "Ek taraf mera farz... doosri taraf tumhara yeh anjaana wajood. Dada Sahab ne mujhe Wazir banaya hai, par mera dil har baar tumhare liye pyada banne ko taiyaar ho jaata hai. Kaash main tumhari aankhon ka sannaata padh paati, Ravi. Kaash..."


Amit thoda dur chupchap baitha Ravi ko observe kar raha tha.

Kabir, jo sabko nachaane ki koshish kar raha tha, aakhirkaar Amit ke paas aaya.

Kabir ne Amit se pucha,


KABIR : "Bhai, tu kyun chup hai? Kuch bol."

Amit, jo ek nazar gaane-gaate hue students ko aur phir shaant baithe Ravi ko dekh raha tha, ne apna chashma theek karte hue kaha,


AMIT : "Main bas thermodynamics observe kar raha hoon. Is bus ke do alag-alag system hain. Ek taraf, high entropy—total chaos, energy har direction mein release ho raha hai. Aur doosri taraf, yahan humare paas... entropy almost zero hai. Saari energy ek single point (Ravi) par concentrate ho raha hai. Jab do aise system takraate hain, Kabir, toh result hamesha explosive hota hai."

Kabir ne Amit ke sar par halka sa maara.


KABIR : "Oye Newton! Class mat le, gaana ga!"

Yeh keh kar Kabir wapas masti mein lag gaya, par Amit ka baat hawa mein ek anjaani si chetavni ka tarah tairta reh gaya.


Isi Mahol mein, Riya ne himmat karke Ravi ke bagal wali khaali seat le li. Ravi ne koi reaction nahi diya, bas khidki se bahar dekhta raha. Sia, jo aage baithi thi, ne aaine mein yeh dekha aur uska dil doob gaya. Use Riya se jalan nahi, Ravi ke is bartav se takleef ho rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi Ravi aisa kyun kar raha tha - woh Riya ko apne khatarnaak saaye se door rakhna chahta tha.


Riya (dheere se): "Thank you... uss raat ke liye."

Ravi (bilkul shaant awaaz mein, bina aankhein khole): "Bhool jao."

Yeh keh kar woh phir se khamosh ho gaya.


Do lafz. Par in do lafzon mein ek poori deewar tha. Riya ke chehre par beizzati nahi, ek ajeeb si hairat thi. Use ehsaas ho gaya tha ki yeh shakhs shukriya ya ehsaan jaise lafzon se bahut aage nikal chuka hai.


Kabir, jo yeh sab dekh raha tha, Riya ko chhedne se khud ko rok nahi paaya. Usne gaana shuru kar diya:



Kabir (Gaana gaate hue): "Mere saamne wali khidki mein... ek 'Silent Killer' rehta hai..."


Riya sharma gayi aur Ravi ne pehla baar palat kar Kabir ko ek warning bhari nazar se dekha. Aisa nazar jiska matlab tha, 'band kar, ya main karwa dunga.' Kabir foran chup ho gaya.

Par is chalta-phirta jung mein sirf yahi khiladi nahi the. Aur phir... naye khiladi. Har saaya apne andar ek raaz dabaye baitha tha.


  • YuKi, sabse aage ki single seat par, aankhein band kiye baitha tha. Par woh so nahi raha tha. Woh apne ateet ka jalta hua Haveli ki lapton ko, uss raakh ki mehak ko mehsoos kar raha tha. Har saans ke saath uske andar inteqaam ka aag aur tez ho raha tha.

  • Aarav (Phoenix), aakhri seat ke doosre kone mein, ek saaye ki tarah baitha tha. Uska wajood itna shaant tha ki uska presence mehsoos karna bhi mushkil tha. Uska nigahein Ravi ke peeth par ek pehredaar ke tarah tika tha, jaise woh uski hifazat nahi, uski har saans ka hisaab rakh raha ho.

  • The Trio (Zayn, Adira, Maya), beech mein, aam students ki tarah hansi-mazaak kar rahe the, par unke aankhein... unki aankhein scanner thi. Woh har chehre ko, har harkat ko, har sargoshi ko record kar raha tha. Woh bheed ka hissa the, par bheed unka shikaar tha.

  • Alisha, theek Arjun ke peeche, apne phone par kuch type kar rahi thi. Uske honthon par ek aisi muskaan thi jaise use aane wale khel ka anjaam pehle se pata ho. Woh pyada nahi, woh Wazir thi, bas uska Raja koi aur tha.

Alisha, jo sab dekh rahi thi, ne mehsoos kar liya ki Sia toot rahi hai. Yahi sahi mauka tha. Woh dheere se Sia ke paas aayi. Tabhi ek haath Sia ke kandhe par pada. Usne chaunk kar dekha—Alisha thi.

Alisha ke chehre par ek shaitani muskaan thi. “Tu itna lost kyun hai? Usko dekh rahi thi na?” usne dheere se Sia ke kaan mein kaha.

Sia ka chehra ekdum se defensive ho gaya. “Main… main kuch nahi kar rahi thi.”

Alisha ki muskaan aur gehri ho gayi, jaise woh Sia ke dil ke aar-paar dekh sakti ho. “Dekh le. Abhi dekh sakti hai. Baad mein shayad mauka na mile.”

Phir woh Sia ke kaan ke aur kareeb aayi.


Alisha (sargoshi mein): "Dil aur dimaag ki ladai mein hamesha wohi jeetta hai jiske paas khone ke liye kuch na ho. Tumhare paas toh bahut kuch hai, Sia. Apna dil sambhal kar rakhna."

Us aakhri line mein ek chetavni thi. Ek aisi warning jiska matlab sirf Alisha jaanti thi, aur shayad jiska anjaam Sia ko Manali mein dekhne ko milne wala tha.




Dusri bus mein mahaul bilkul alag tha.

Yahan koi shor nahi tha. Sirf professionalism aur saazish ki khamoshi tha. Arjun Rathore apni seat par baitha tha, jaise koi king apne modern takht par baitha ho. Uske saath Virat, Rishi, aur Sameer baithe the, uski war council. Uske saamne uska state-of-the-art laptop khula tha. Screen par Manali Monastery Area ka ek 3D map tha, jismein kuch jaghein red zones se mark kiye hue the.

Ek file khula tha. Naam tha—
"Project Snowfall."

Uske chehre par ek shaatir khiladi ka muskaan tha.

ARJUN (Inner Monologue): "Jaanvi... tum meri saltanat ka aakhri kamzori ho. Tumhein mitana zaroori hai. Aur Ravi... tum uss kamzori tak pahunchne ke raaste ka woh patthar ho jise todna nahi, reza-reza karna zaroori hai. Manali mein main do shikaar karunga. Ek apne wajood ke liye... doosra apne ghamand ke liye."

Uske paas baitha RISHI, jo uska private security team ka hissa tha, ne dheere se pucha, “Arjun, Ravi Mishra ki movement track karna hai kya?”

Arjun ne screen se nazar nahi hataya. “Karna nahi… record karna hai. Uska har kadam ek clue hai. Woh kaise saans leta hai, kidhar dekhta hai, kisse baat karta hai... har cheez. Mujhe sab pata chal jaayega. Bas ek baar woh pahadon tak pahunch jaaye.”

Usne enter press kiya. Laptop ki screen par ek naya window khula—ek live feed. Ek hidden camera blink kar raha tha, jo Ravi waale bus ke andar, theek uske seat ke upar laga hua tha. Arjun, Ravi ko live dekh sakta tha, ek shikaari ke tarah jo apne shikaar ko dur se dekhta hai.

Raat gehra hota gaya. Hasi-mazaak kam ho gaya aur zyadatar students so gaye. Par is soyi hui bus mein, kayi aankhein jaag rahe the. Har khiladi apne agle move ka intezaar kar rahe the.

Tabhi bus ek anjaan, sunsaan dhaabe par ruka. Principal Malhotra ne 15 minute ka break announce kiya.

Jung ka maidan ab bus se utarkar zameen par aane wala tha.




Andhere Ka Pehla Samna

Raat ke 2:45 baje, bus ek purane se dhaba par ruka. ‘Shyam Bhojnalaya’. Jagah sunsaan thi. Highway ke kinaare is dhaba par sirf unki do buses hi khada tha. Jaise hi darwaze khule, pahadon se aata hua thanda, tez hawa ne sabka swagat kiya.

Sab students neeche utar kar chai aur Maggi lene lage. Mahaul mein thodi thakaan aur thodi sardi ghul gayi thi.

Ravi bus se utar kar ek kone mein shaanti se khada ho gaya, haath mein kaanch ka ek glass tha jismein garam chai ka dhuaan uth raha tha. Woh bas us andhere highway ko dekh raha tha jo aage jaakar pahadon mein kho jaata tha.

Tabhi ek ladka uske paas se guzra. Lambe kad ka, patla sa, Japanese-style hoodie pehne hue. Dono ke kandhe halke se takraye. Woh YuKi tha. Ek aisa naam jise school mein kam log jaante the, par jo jaante the, woh usse dur rehte the.

YuKi ne Ravi ke taraf dekha, uski aankhein bilkul thandi thi, jaise unmein koi emotion hi na ho. "Dekhte hain… barf par kaun kitna tikta hai," usne aahista se, lekin saaf aawaz mein kaha.

Ravi ne shaanti se chai ka ek ghoont bhara. Usne YuKi ki taraf dekha bhi nahi, uska nazar ab bhi highway par tha. "Aur barf par girne ke baad… kaun uthta hai," usne utne hi shaant lehje mein jawab diya.

Yeh an-kahe jung ka pehla dastak tha.


Ek pal ke liye wahan sannata chha gaya. Hawa bhi ruk gaya. Yeh do log nahi the, yeh do predators the, jo ek dusre ke ilaaqe ko mark kar rahe the. Ek silent declaration of war ho chuka tha.

Thodi duri par, Aarav, jise log 'Phoenix' ke naam se jaante the, ek andhere kone mein khada dono ko observe kar raha tha.

Sia washroom se laut rahi thi. Usne saamne Ravi aur YuKi ko dekha. Woh unke beech ki tension ko hawa mein mehsoos kar sakti thi. Par tabhi uske peeche, andhere mein, ek saaya hila. Camera ka flash ek pal ke liye chamka aur gayab ho gaya.

Sia tezi se palti. "Kaun hai?"

Par wahan koi nahi tha.


Safar phir shuru hua. Bus ke andar ab zyada log so chuke the.

Ravi ne apna aankhein band kar liya. Par neend usse koso dur tha. Jaise hi usne aankhein band kiya, uske dimaag mein tasveeron ka ek toofan aa gaya.


Khoobsurat safed barf, jo achanak laal ho jaata hai… Monastery ki ghantiyon ki aawaz, jo dheere-dheere cheekhon mein badal jaata hai… Ek ladka ghutno tak barf mein dooba hua, bebas… aur ek awaaz, ek aisi awaaz jo uske kaano mein sadiyon se goonj raha tha:

“Shehzaade… apne raaste pe wapas aao.”

Ravi ka shareer jhatke se kaanp utha. Usne aankhein khola, saansein tez chal raha tha, maathe par paseena tha. Usne seat ke paas dekha. Koi nahi tha.

Par uski seat ke theek bagal mein, ek chhota sa, fold kiya hua note pada tha. Usne kaanpte haathon se use uthaya aur khola. Sirf char shabd likhe the:


“Welcome back, SHEHZAADE.”

Ravi ka aankhon mein dar nahi tha. Dar uski dictionary mein tha hi nahi. Uska aankhon mein ghussa tha. Ek aisa aag jo sab kuch jala sakta tha. Usne lighter nikala, note ko aag lagaya, aur use jalte hue dekhta raha jab tak woh raakh na ban gaya.



Part 2: Pahaadon Mein Pehli Subah

Subah ke 6:30 baje.

Bus ne ek tez mod liya. Aur saamne jo manzar tha, usne sabka neend uda diya. Himalaya ki barf se dhaki chotiyan. Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi safed rang ke devta ne apne daant dikhaye ho. Suraj ki pehli kirnein us barf par aise chamak raha tha, jaise kisi ne lahu ke upar safedi ka chaadar daal diya ho.

Mahaul mein ek ajeeb sa khamoshi chha gayi. Sab us khoobsurati ko dekh kar dang the.

Sia ne dheere se fufusa kar kaha, “Kitna khoobsurat lag raha hai…”

Uski aawaz Ravi ke kaano tak pahuncha. Usne bhi bahar dekha aur apne mann mein kaha, "Khoobsurat cheezein hamesha sabse zyada khatarnaak hota hain."

Bus ruka.

Welcome to The Grand Himalayan Resort.




THE GRAND HIMALAYAN RESORT – MANALI

Manali, Barf se dhaki chotiyan, jinpar subah ke pehla suraj ka kirnein sone ke tarah chamak raha tha. Hawa mein ek aisi taazgi tha jo sheher ke zeher ko dho de. Par "The Grand Himalayan Resort" ke andar ki hawa mein saazish ghula hua tha. Resort sheher se door, ek alag-thalag pahaadi par bana tha—ek aalishan qaid-khaana.

Lobby ek purane qile jaisa tha. Lakdi ka architecture, deewaron par Buddhist murals, aur har kone mein, har angle par, ek surveillance camera.




NAYE KIRDAAR KI ENTRY

Check-in ke waqt, students ka swagat resort ke manager ne kiya. Ek 40-45 saal ka, behad chust aur professional dikhne wala aadmi, jiske chehre par ek aisa muskaan tha jo ankhon tak nahi pahunchta tha.

Mr. Khanna (Hotel Manager): "Welcome to The Grand Himalayan, students. Main, Mr. Khanna, aapka host hoon. Ummeed hai aapka stay 'yaadgaar' rahega."

Usne 'yaadgaar' lafz par kuch zyada hi zor diya. Arjun ne usse haath milaya aur uski hatheli mein ek chota sa note daba diya. Khanna ne bina bhaav badle note le liya. Woh Arjun ka aadmi tha.

Kamron ke chaabiyan baanta gaya. Khanna ne "coincidence" ka naatak karte hue, Sia aur uski room-mates ka kamra theek Arjun ke kamre ke saamne rakha. Aur Ravi ka kamra... resort ke sabse aakhri, alag-thalag wing mein, jahan se aane-jaane walon par aasaani se nazar rakha jaa sake.

Jaise hi Ravi apne kamre ke taraf badha, lobby ke ek andhere kone se ek bhaari, damdaar awaaz aaya.



"Waqt par aaye ho, bachche. Pahaad tumhara hi intezaar kar raha tha."

Ravi palta. Ek 60-65 saal ka aadmi, jiske chehre par waqt ne gehri lakeerein khod diya tha, par aankhon mein ek aisi shakti tha jo pahaadon ko bhi hila de, uske saamne khada tha. Usne paramparik Tibetan choga pehna tha.


NAYE KIRDAAR KI ENTRY - LAMA TASHI

Lama Tashi (Monastery ke Head Monk): "Main Lama Tashi hoon. Paas ke Gaden Monastery se. Suna hai school ke bachche aaye hain, toh bas aashirwaad dene chala aaya."

Unke nazrein Ravi par aakar theher gaya. Un nazron mein ek ajeeb sa pehchaan tha.

Lama Tashi (Ravi ki aankhon mein dekha):“Tumhara aankhon mein dard nahi, yaadein chhupa hain,” unhone apni shaant aawaz mein kahe. “Aur yaadein… sabse tez zeher hota hain.”


Ravi : “Main zeher peene nahi aaya hoon, uska ilaaj dhoondhne aaya hoon.”

Lama Tashi muskuraye, ek aisi muskaan jismein kayi raaz dafan the. “Toh yaad rakhna… barf kabhi safed nahi hota. Bas khoon us par dikhai nahi deta.”

Yeh keh kar woh dheere se aage badh gaye. Par jaate-jaate, unhone ek aisi baat kahe jisne Ravi ke pairon tale zameen khiska dala.


Lama Tashi (sargoshi mein, sirf Ravi ko sunayi de): "Har toofan ka ek maqsad hota hai, Shehzaade. Bas apni disha mat bhatakna."

Ravi wahin pathar ka bhut bana khada raha. Shehzaade. Yeh buzurg... yeh kaun the?



ALAG-ALAG KHEL, ALAG-ALAG KHILADI

Kamron mein settle hone ke baad, har group apne agle kadam ke taiyaari mein lag gaye.


  • Arjun's War Council: Arjun ne apne doston (Virat, Rishi aur Sameer) ko bulaya. "Plan A: Main Sia ko monastery le jaaunga. Plan B: Tum log resort ke aas-paas ke CCTV aur communication lines par nazar rakhoge. Kisi ko resort se bahar bina meri ijaazat ke call nahi jaana chahiye."

  • Sia's Mission: Sia ne akele mein Dada Sahab ko report kiya. "Dada Sahab, main Arjun ke kareeb hoon. Monastery ka plan ban chuka hai. "

  • Alisha & The Handler: Alisha ne apne secure phone se The Handler ko call kiya. "Sab yahan hain. Ravi ajeeb tarah se shaant hai. Jaise use sab pata ho." The Handler ne jawab diya, "Use shaant hi rehne do. Jab shikaar ko khatre ka ehsaas na ho, tabhi shikaari ka vaar sateek hota hai. Apna kaam karo."

  • The Observers: YuKi, Aarav aur The Trio... sab apne-apne kamron mein the. Par unki aankhein aur kaan, resort ke har kone mein the.


PART 3: Masti, Mohabbat Aur Maut Ki Dastak

Adventure, Games Aur Uljhi Nigahein

Dopehar tak, thakaan utar chuka tha aur Dopehar ka thandi hawa mein suraj ka garmahat ghul chuka tha.Mahaul mein excitement tha. Principal Malhotra aur Ms. Meera (games teacher) sabhi students ko resort ke pichhwaade mein ek bade se khule ground mein le aaye. Principal Malhotra aur games teacher, Ms. Meera, ke chehron par ek alag hi chamak tha

Yahan 'adventure training' ka intezaam tha. Barf ki safed chadar par zipline ke chaandi jaise taar khinche hue the aur rock climbing ki unchi deewar ek chunauti ki tarah khada tha.


Arjun ke liye yeh ek stage tha aur Sia uska audience. Har game mein uska furti aur taqat ek socha-samjha performance tha. Rock climbing ka deewar par woh aise chadh raha tha, jaise uske liye yeh roz ka kaam ho. Upar pahunch kar usne neeche abhi bhi chadh rahi Sia ki taraf dekha, uska aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak tha.


Arjun: "Need a hand, Sia? Upar ka nazara behtar hai."

Sia, jiske haath aur pair patharon par aasaani se apni jagah bana rahe the, ne ek pal ke liye upar dekha. Uske chehre par paseene ki boondon ke beech ek muskurahat thi. Usne Arjun ke badhe hue haath ko nazarandaaz kiya aur aakhri hold pakad kar khud upar chadh gayi.


Sia: "Thanks, Arjun. Par mujhe apni manzil tak khud pahunchna pasand hai."

Arjun ke muskurate chehre ke peeche ek pal ke liye gusse ki lehar daud gaya. Uska haath hawa mein hi reh gaya, aur usne zorr se apni mutthi band kar liya.

Wahin in sab se dur, ek chinar ke ped ke chaanv mein Ravi khamosh khada tha, uska nigahein dur barfeele pahadon par tika tha. Kabir aur Amit use khel ke maidan ke taraf kheenchne ka nakaam koshish kar rahe the.


Kabir: "Chal na, bhai! Yeh adventure hai, jail nahi jo tu aise kone mein khada hai."

Amit ne apne chashme ko naak par theek karte hue aas paas ke mahaul ka jaayza liya.


Amit: "Har adventure ki ek 'probability of failure' hota hai, Kabir. Aur jahan failure ka chance 1% se zyada ho, wahan Ravi nahi jaata. Yeh uska usool hai."

Tabhi unke paas Ms. Meera ke kadmon ki awaaz aayi. Unki awaaz mein ek shikshak ki sakhti aur ek dost ki narmi tha.


Ms. Meera: "Ravi, tum participate kyun nahi kar rahe? Yahan sirf jeetne ke liye nahi, khud ko aazmane ke liye aana hai. Come on, try something!"

Ravi ne bina kuch kahe 'na' mein sar hila diya. Par Ms. Meera ki zidd aur Kabir ke zabardasti dhakke ke aage uska khamoshi haar gaya. Woh bemann se archery station ki taraf chal pada.

Station par Arjun pehle se hi apne doston aur kuch juniors ko apne nishanebaazi ke kartab dikha raha tha. Uske dost, Virat aur Rishi, uske har shot par hooting kar rahe the. Ravi ko wahan dekh kar Arjun ne tanziya muskaan diya.


Arjun: "Oh, look who's here! Class ka topper ab teer chalayega." Usne apne doston ki taraf dekhkar aankh maara. "Dekhna, teer kahin pichhe hi na chala jaaye."

Virat haste hue bola, "Ya hum mein se kisi ko na lag jaaye. Bach ke rehna, guys!"

Ravi ne uski baat ansuna kar diya. Jaise hi usne command par dhanush aur teer uthaya, Amit uske bilkul paas aa gaya aur uske kaan mein sargoshi ka, jaise koi secret code de raha ho.


Amit: "Hawa ka raftaar 5 knots, west to east. Target 70 meter dur hai. Hawa ke pressure se teer dayein taraf jaayega. Apne aim ko 2 degree right aur 1 degree upar compensate karna. Trajectory set hai."

Ravi ne sirf halka sa sar hilaya. Ek lambi saans liya. Aur phir kuch aisa hua jiska kisi ne kalpana nahi kiya tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar liya. Ek pal ke liye, uske aas paas ka saara shor, Arjun ka mazaak, Kabir ka josh, sab kuch... sab kuch khaamosh ho gaya. Aisa laga jaise woh duniya se nahi, khud ke andar kisi gehri taqat se jud raha ho. Uske haath sthir the, saansein ruka hua.

Aur phir, bina nishana dekhe, bina aankhein khole, usne teer chhod diya.


THWACK!

Ek saaf, sateek aur dil dehlane wali awaaz.

Hawa mein ek lakeer si khinchi aur agle hi pal teer seedha target ke bullseye ke beechon-beech gada hua tha.

Wahan ekdum sannata chha gaya. Hawa bhi jaise ek pal ke liye ruk gaya tha. Arjun ke haath mein pakda dhanush dheela pad gaya. Kabir ka munh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Par is bheed mein ek shaks aisa tha jiske liye yeh hairat nahi, khauf tha. Arjun ke group ke thoda peeche khada Sameer toh thar thar kaanpne lagta hai. Uska chehra safed pad chuka tha aur aankhein dahshat se phaili hui thi. Woh Ravi ko nahi, uske haathon mein thame dhanush aur target par lage uss teer ko aise dekh raha tha jaise usne maut dekh li ho.

Par sabse zyada asar Sia par hua. Uski aankhein hairat se phaili hui thi. Usne Ravi mein ek sharmila, chup rehne wala student nahi dekha. Usne us band aankhon ke peeche ek aisa discipline, ek aisa control dekha jo saalon ki sadhna ke baad hi haasil hota hai. Yeh kisi khiladi ka nahi, kisi yoddha ka focus tha.

Isse pehle ki koi uss hairat se bahar nikalta, Ravi ne dhanush neeche rakha aur bina kisi ki taraf dekhe, chupchap wahan se chal pada, jaise usne koi maamuli sa kaam kiya ho.

Par Sia ki nazrein uska peeth par tiki reh gayi. Arjun ki jeet, rock climbing ka adventure, sab kuch uske dimaag se dhundhla chuka tha. Ab sirf ek hi sawaal tha, jo toofan ki tarah uske andar uth raha tha.


"Yeh... yeh kaun ho tum, Ravi?"


Trekking, Waterfall Aur Ek Kaatil Haadsa

Agle din ki subah pichli shaam se zyada thandi aur khamosh tha. Sabhi students ko ek khoobsurat, anjaan waterfall ke trekking ke liye le jaaya gaya. Ek sthaaniya, anubhavi tourist guide, jiska naam Tenzing tha, group ko lead kar raha tha. Raasta pathreela aur fisalan bhara tha, par pahaadon ka post-card jaisa khoobsurati ne sabka thakaan chhupa rakha tha.

"Yeh raasta thoda mushkil hai, bachhon, lekin manzil dekh kar saari thakaan bhool jaaoge," Tenzing ne apni laathi se aage ishaara karte hue kaha.

Ms. Meera aur ek dusre senior teacher, Mr. Sharma, students ko line mein rakhne ki koshish kar rahe the. Mahaul mein pichle din ka masti abhi bhi baaki tha. Students photos lene mein, ek-dusre par barf ke gole fekne mein lag gaye. Arjun apne doston, Virat, Sameer aur Rishi ke saath, sabse aage aage chal raha tha, jaise yeh trek usi ne organize kiya ho.

Ravi, hamesha ki tarah, group se kuch kadam pichhe chal raha tha. Uska aankhein nazaare nahi, balki un nazaron mein chhupe khatre dekh raha tha. Uska nigahein ek soldier ke tarah aage ke raaste ke angles, pattharon ke size, aur chhipne ki jagahon ko scan kar raha tha. Use ehsaas ho raha tha ki pedon par chidiyon ki chahchahat achanak band ho gaya hai. Hawa mein ek ajeeb sa stillness tha jo pahaadon mein aam nahi tha.

Kabir aur Amit uske saath the.


Kabir: "Kya soch raha hai, bhai? Aisa lag raha hai jaise picnic par nahi, border par duty de raha hai."

Ravi (dheemi awaaz mein): "Border par dushman saamne se vaar karta hai, Kabir. Asli khatra woh hota hai jo dost ban kar peeth pichhe chalta hai."

Aakhirkaar, woh apni manzil par pahunche. Ek vishaal, semi-frozen waterfall, jiska paani neeche girte hue barf mein tabdeel ho raha tha. Suraj ki roshni un barfeele crystals se takra kar hazaaron rainbows bana raha tha. Yeh jagah kisi jannat ka darwaza lag raha tha.

Lekin jannat ke us darwaze tak pahunchne ke liye, maut ki ek puliya paar karna tha. Do pahaadon ke beech latka ek purana, kamzor lakdi ka suspension bridge, jo tez hawa mein dheere-dheere jhul raha tha. Niche... 1000 ft gehri, pathreeli khaai.

Tenzing ne sabko roka. "Dhyaan se! Ek baar mein paanch logon se zyada nahi! Aur koi uchhal-kood nahi!"

Senior student, Aryan, ne has kar kaha, "Come on, Tenzing ji, thoda adventure toh banta hai!" aur usne jaan-boojh kar bridge par pehla kadam rakhte hue use halka sa hilaya.

"Aryan, behave yourself!" Mr. Sharma ka sakht awaaz goonja.


Ravi, Aarav aur YuKi pehle hi bridge paar kar chuke the. Ravi ka nigahein bridge par chalte har student ke kadam par tha.

Jab Sia lagbhag beech mein pahunchi, tabhi ek kaan phaad dene waala, dil dehlane waala awaaz aaya.


KARRRRRACK!

Dhaage ki tarah, bridge ko thaamne waali ek moti rassi ek jhatke mein toot gaya. Amit, jo hamesha ki tarah har cheez ka analysis kar raha tha, rassi ke toote hue sire ko dekhte hi deewano ki tarah chillaya.

Amit: "YEH TOOTI NAHI HAI! ISSE KATA GAYA HAI! Rassi ke sire dekho... jale hue hain! Yeh High-temperature friction se! jalaya gaya hai... Thermite residue! YEH SABOTAGE HAI!" Physics of materials ko is tarah se violate nahi kiya ja sakta, Kabir!"


Riya: "BRIDGE TOOT GAYA!"Riya cheekhi.


Ek cheekh ke saath pura bridge 90 degree ke angle par ek taraf jhuk gaya. Ek pal mein, sab kuch bikhar gaya. Students ek dusre par girne lage. Isi dhakka-mukki mein Sia ka santulan bigda, uska pair fisla aur woh hawa mein chillaati hui neeche gir gayi. Par girte-girte, maut se ladte hue, usne apni ungliyon se bridge ki neeche latakti ek rassi ko pakad liya.

Woh hawa mein latak rahi thi. Upar toota hua bridge, neeche sirf aur sirf maut.

Doosri taraf khade Ravi ki aankhon mein ek aisi dehshat aur ghussa umda jo aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha tha.


Ravi: “SIA—!”

Uski cheekh pahaadon se takra kar wapas aayi, jaise khud pahaad bhi ro pade ho.

Usne ek pal, ek saans ka hissa bhi nahi socha. Na safety gear, na instructors ki warnings. Uske dimaag mein sirf Sia ka latakta hua chehra tha. Ek zakhmi sher ki furti se woh dauda aur bina kisi hichkichahat ke, usne us gehri khaai ke taraf chhalang maar diya.

Hawa mein udte hue, usne ek faulaadi haath se Sia ki kalai pakda aur dusre haath se pahaad se bahar nikli ek nukili, barfeeli chattan ki ledge ko.


KRAK!

Uske haath ka haddiyan tootne ke kagaar par aa gaya. Uska nasen khinch gaye, muscles phatne ko ho gaye. Chattan ke kinaare se patthar aur barf toot kar neeche khaai mein girne lage, jaise uska pakad ko kamzor kar rahe ho. Uska pura shareer hawa mein tha, sirf ek haath ke sahare, aur us par Sia ka bhi bojh tha.

Sia ro rahi thi, uski pakad kamzor pad rahi thi.


Sia: "Ravi... chhod do... mera haath chhod do! Dono maare jayenge! Please!"

Ravi ne apne daant itni zorr se bheenche ki jabde mein dard uth gaya. Uski aankhon mein ek aisi zidd, ek aisi aag thi jo maut ko bhi jala de.


Ravi (gurrate hue): “KHAA-MOSH!

“Main kisi ko girne nahi deta,” woh gurraya. “Na khud ko, na apno ko.”


Usne apni saari taaqat, apni har saans ka qatra ikattha kiya aur ek aakhri, zabardast jhatka diya. Apne shareer ko ek pendulum ki tarah jhulakar, woh aur Sia hawa mein udte hue surakshit zameen par ja gire.

Ek pal ke liye sabki saansein tham gaya, phir rahat ki saans liye. Sia abhi tak kaanp rahi thi, uski aankhein Ravi ke chehre par tiki thi, jismein ab dard saaf dikh raha tha. Ravi utha aur apne haathon ko jhaada.

Tabhi Sia ki nazar uske haath par padi. Chattan ko pakadne ke kaaran uske haath ki hatheli buri tarah chhil gaya tha aur gehre zakhm se khoon tapak raha tha. Safed, paak barf par gir kar woh laal boondein aise lag raha tha, jaise kisi ne saazish ke kaagaz par khoon se dastakhat kar diye ho.

Masti ke safed canvas par... yeh khoon ka pehla nishaan tha.


“Barf par lahu ka pehla nishaan.”


Arjun wahin khada sab kuch dekhta reh gaya. Uske saath khade uske doston ke chehre par bhi hawaiyaan ud raha tha.

"Bhai, yeh... yeh toh plan ka hissa nahi tha," Virat ne kaanpte hue kaha. "Woh mar sakti thi."


Uske chehre par ab darr nahi, balki jalan, nafrat aur apne hi kaayarta par gusse ka toofan umad raha tha. Uska plan Sia ko darane ka tha, taki woh use bacha kar hero ban sake. Ravi ne na sirf uska plan, balki sabke saamne uska ghamand bhi tod diya tha. Uska nigahein Ravi ke zakhmi haath par tika tha, aur uske andar ka gussa us lahu se bhi zyada laal ho raha tha.

Masti aur masoomiyat ka khel ab khatm ho chuka tha. Maut ka shatranj bichh chuka tha, aur pehla mohra... Ravi ban chuka tha.






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UPDATE 11 (B)

BARF KE SAAYE (WARZONE)


PART 4: Jab Khel Khooni Ho Jaye

BONFIRE NIGHT - JALTI AAG, SULAGTE RAAZ

Haadse ne trip ka masoomiyat ko cheer kar rakh diya tha, trip ka mahaul badal gaya tha. Us raat resort ke bahar jalta bonfire ka aag garmahat kam, ek ajeeb sa bechaini zyada de raha tha. Aag ke chatakti laptein students ke chehron par ajeeb-o-gareeb saaye bana raha tha. Kuch log gaa-baja kar mahaul ko halka karne ke nakaam koshish kar rahe the, lekin unke gaano mein bhi ek dar ka goonj tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise aas paas ka ghana, kaala jungle unhe ghoor raha ho, unke har sargoshi sun raha ho.

Arjun, jo din bhar se Ravi ke hero banne par sulag raha tha ,ek shaatir shikaari ke tarah, apne mauke ka intezaar kar raha tha. Arjun ne is mauke ka poora fayda uthaya.


Usne Sia ko aag ke paas akele khade dekha aur apne doston ko ishaara karke uske paas chala gaya. Rishi aur Virat ne usey ek smirk ke saath 'all the best' ka ishaara kiya, jabki Sameer bechaini se idhar-udhar dekh raha tha.

Arjun ne Sia ke paas jaakar apni awaaz mein jitni ho sake utni fikr bharte hue kaha.


Arjun: "Sardi badh gaya hai. Din mein jo hua, uske baad tumhe apna extra dhyaan rakhna chahiye."
Uska awaaz mein fikr ka mitha zahar ghula hua tha, par uska aankhein Sia ke chehre par dar talaash raha tha.

Sia ne kuch jawab nahi diya, bas aag ki lapton ko dekhti rahi.

Tabhi, resort ka buzurg pahaadi chowkidar, Deenu Kaka, jo apni khukri hamesha kamar mein lagaye rakhta tha, aag ke paas aaya. Unhone ek nazar sab par daale aur unke aankhein Ravi, YuKi, aur Aarav par aakar thehar gaya. Unke jhurriyon bhari awaaz mein sadiyon ka anubhav tha.


Deenu Kaka: "Yeh pahaad jitne sundar dikhte hain, utne hain nahi, bachchon. Jab raat gehra hota hai aur hawa mein barf ka mehak aata hai, tab 'Barf ke Saaye' utarte hain."

Ek student hass pada. "Kya Kaka, aap bhi dara rahe ho."

Deenu Kaka ki aankhein uss student ko dekh kar sakht ho gaya. "Yeh kahaani nahi, chetavni hai. Woh saaye... woh shikaar karte hain. Na khoon ka nishaan chhodte hain, na haddiyon ka suraag. Jise le jaate hain, woh bas hawa mein gaayab ho jaata hai. Hamesha ke liye."

Sabke hasne ki awaaz gale mein hi atak gaye. Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav ne ek dusre ko dekha. Unhe pata tha, yeh sirf ek lok-katha nahi tha. Yeh ek code tha, ek sandesh tha.

Sia uss anjaan si tension se ghabrakar wahan se hatne lagi. Andhere mein, uska haath anjaane mein Ravi ke ussi haath se takra gaya jo din mein zakhmi hua tha.

Ek jhatka.

Ek current.

Ravi ke dard se see karne ki bajaye saansein ruk gaya. Sia ne foran apna haath pichhe kheench liya. Ek pal ke liye, un dono ki nigahein mile. Uss ek pal mein unhone lafzon se nahi, rooh se baat kiye. Ek an-kaha vaada, ek ehsaas ke is khatre mein woh akele nahi hain.

Lekin woh nahi jaante the ke unke har harkat, har saans, record ho raha tha.

Bahut door, ek ped ke aad mein, andhere se bhi zyada kaala ek saaya baitha tha. Ek high-tech night-vision camera ke lens un dono par zoom kiye hue tha. Lens ke peeche baitha aankhon mein koi bhavna nahi tha, sirf aadesh ka intezaar tha.


KRAK!

Jungle ke andhere se achanak ek moti tehni tootne ka awaaz aaya. Awaaz itna tez tha jaise kisi ne jaan-boojh kar use toda ho.

Sabhi students darr kar ek-dum shaant ho gaye. Bonfire ka aag ke alawa har taraf maut jaisa sannata tha. Sabka aankhein uss andhere ki taraf dekh raha tha jahan se awaaz aaya tha.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri ka handle kas ke pakad liya.

Aur uss andhere mein baithe shakhs ne apne satellite phone par ek encrypted message type kiya:


"Ravi kamzor hai. Uska ek kamzori hai. Tasdeek ho gaya. Mansoobe ke agle hisse ki ijaazat di jaaye."


Masti ka waqt khatm ho chuka tha. Asli khel ab shuru hone wala tha.




Raakh Hoti Aag, Sulagti Nafrat

KRAK!

Jungle se aayi uss awaaz ne bonfire ke aas paas jami hawa ko sheeshe ki tarah tod diya. Sabhi students darr se ek dusre se sat gaye. Unki saari masti, saare gaane, ek pal mein hawa ho gaye.


Principal Malhotra: "Shaant raho! Stay calm, everyone! Koi jaanwar hoga."

Ms. Meera: "Sab log resort ke andar chalo! Now! Make a line!"

Lekin Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav jaante the. Yeh kisi jaanwar ki awaaz nahi tha. Yeh ek sochi-samjhi harkat tha. Ek signal. Ek ailaan.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri aadhi bahar nikaal liye the, unke tajurbekaar aankhein andhere ko aise cheed raha tha, jaise woh saayon ke aar-paar dekh sakta ho.

Students ke beech afra-tafri mach gaya. Sab jaldi se jaldi resort ki garmahat mein laut jaana chahte the. Isi bhagdad mein, Sia ne Ravi ko dekha. Woh apni jagah se hila tak nahi tha. Uski nigahein uss andhere par tik tha, jaise woh uss shakhs ko dekh sakta ho jo wahan chhupa baitha tha. Ravi ke chehre par dar nahi, ek sard ghussa tha. Aisa ghussa jo shikaar ko shikaari bana deta hai.

Ms. Meera ne sabko andar lobby mein ikattha kiya.


Ms. Meera: "Okay, everyone, apne apne room partners ke saath check karo. Make sure everyone is here."

Ek-ek karke sabne "Yes, ma'am" kehna shuru kiya.

Bonfire ki aakhri laptein bhi bujh chuka tha. Jalti lakdiyon ki mehak ab hawa mein faile dhuen aur anjaane khatre ki sargoshiyon mein badal gaya tha. Students thake-haare apne kamron mein laut gaye the, is baat se bekhabar ki unke beech chupe shikaari ab apne agle vaar ki taiyaari kar rahe the.



Arjun ke kamre mein...

Kamra andhere mein dooba hua tha. Sirf laptop ki neeli roshni Arjun ke chehre par kathor parchhaiyan bana raha tha.

Whiskey ka adha bhara glass mez par apne naseeb ka intezaar kar raha tha, bilkul waise hi jaise Arjun ki shatranj ke mohre uske agle hukum ka karte the.


Click... Click... Click.

Mouse ka har click ek ijaafa tha uss aag mein jo Arjun ke seene mein sulag raha tha. Telephoto lens se kheencha gaya darjanon tasveeron ka silsila ruk gaya, ek file mein qaid theen, lekin Arjun ka cursor baar-baar ek hi tasveer par aakar ruk jaata.

Ek frame par. Sirf ek.


Woh tasveer nahi, ek lamha tha. Ek pal, jab Sia ka haath anjaane mein Ravi ke haath se chhua tha. Unke ungliyon ka mehez ek lams (sparsh)... lekin unke chehron par likha kashish aur bechaini ek poori dastaan bayaan kar raha tha. Arjun uss tasveer ko zoom karke dekh raha tha. Woh Sia ke chehre par aayi pal bhar ki sharam, aur Ravi ki aankhon mein uss ek pal ke liye thehar gayi duniya ko saaf padh sakta tha.

Yeh sirf ek masoomi si chuhan nahi tha. Yeh Arjun ke banaye hue khel mein ek baghawat tha. Ek aag tha jo uska saltanat mein lag raha tha. Sia uska shatranj ka Wazir thi—khubsoorat, khatarnaak, aur sirf uske ishaaron par chalne waali. Aur ek Wazir ka kisi maamuli pyaade ke taraf dekhna bhi... badshaah ki tauheen hota hai.

Uska ungliyan keyboard par kas gaya. Chehre par ek sard muskaan phail gaya. Usne phone uthaya, number dial kiya. Uski awaaz sheeshe ke tarah saaf aur thandi tha.


ARJUN: "Khanna, waqt aa gaya hai. Plan B. Abhi."

Doosri taraf se sirf ek itminaan bhari awaaz aaya,
"Hukum kijiye, Sir."

ARJUN:
"Activate it , "Monastery ka program kal subah ka hai. Main chahta hoon resort ka woh pura wing andhere mein doob jaaye jahan Ravi Mishra apni neend poori kar raha hai. Ek 'power trip' lagna chahiye .Aisa andhera ki woh apni parchhayi se bhi darr jaaye. Aur sabse zaroori... communications. Blackout. Koi Wi-Fi nahi, koi mobile network nahi. Main chahta hoon Kal subah jab suraj nikle, toh yeh resort duniya ke liye ek black hole ban jaana chahiye."


KHANNA : "Ho jaayega, Sir. Suraj ugne se pehle, woh apni hi parchhai se bhi baat nahi kar payega."

Arjun ne call kaat diya.

Uske nigahein wapas uss tasveer par lauta. Usne Ravi ke chehre par cursor rakha, jaise nishaana laga raha ho.


ARJUN (khud se): "Khelne ka bohot shauk hai na tumhein, Ravi Mishra? Chalo, ek naya khel khelte hain. Ek aisa khel jismein roshni nahi hoga... aawaaz nahi hoga... aur tumhara kamzori hi tumhara gala ghontega."

Ek aakhri, aatish-fishaan nazar se tasveer ko dekh kar usne 'Delete' ka button daba diya.

Screen par likha aaya:
File Permanently Deleted.

Jaise Ravi Mishra ka wajood.

[LOCATION: SIA’S RESORT ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein maddham roshni tha, lekin Sia ko aaine mein apna aks nahi, apni uljhi hui rooh nazar aa rahi thi. Aaine ke uss paar khadi ladki ek anjaan shakhs lag rahi thi, jiski aankhon mein farz ki thakaan aur dil ki baghawat saaf dikh rahi thi.

Ek taraf Dada Sahab ka mission tha—ek maqsad jiske liye usne apni zindagi daanv par laga di thi. Doosri taraf Alisha ke zehar mein bujhe hue shabd kaan mein goonj rahe the, ek aisi chetavni jo anjaam ka aaina dikha rahi thi.

Aur in dono chattanon ke beech... Ravi ke haath ka woh ehsaas.

Ek second se bhi chhota lamha, lekin jaise waqt uss ek pal mein qaid ho gaya tha. Uski hatheli par abhi bhi uss chuhan ki jhanjhanahat thi. Uska dimaag cheekh raha tha ki yeh ek galti hai, ek kamzori jo usse uske maqsad se bhatka degi, jo usse barbaad kar degi. Par dil... woh dimaag ki ek bhi daleel sunne ko taiyaar nahi tha.

Usne aaine par apni ungliyan pheri, jaise apne hi aks ko samajhane ki koshish kar rahi ho.


SIA (fufusate hue):
"Kaash yeh trip... bas ek trip hota"

Uski awaaz kamre ki khaamoshi mein ek raaz ki tarah ghul gayi. Ek aisa raaz, jo shayad uski sabse badi taqat banne wala tha... ya uski tabahi ka kaaran.

PART 5: SHIKARI HUA SHIKAR

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein ek kafan jaisi khamoshi tha, lekin Ravi ke andar ek toofan chal raha tha. Yeh alag-thalag kamra aaraam ke liye nahi, ek qaid-khane ki tarah lag raha tha. Bonfire ki aag bujh chuka tha, par uska peeth par chubhta hua woh nigahein... usse ab bhi mehsoos ho rahe theen. Uska instinct, jo saalon ki training se faulad ban chuka tha, chilla raha tha—"Tum akele nahi ho."

Usne lights band kar diya. Andhera uski aankhon ke liye ek parda nahi, ek hathiyaar tha.

Usne kamre ko dekhna nahi, usse 'padhna' shuru kiya. Har kona, har saaya, har cheez jo apni jagah par nahi tha. Uska nigahein ek professional ki tarah scan karti hui... ceiling par lage smoke detector par jaakar theher gaya. Uska design ajeeb tha, standard model se alag. Aur tabhi usne woh dekha... ek behad baareek, lagbhag adrishya laal roshni, jo ek dil ke tarah... ek second ke hazaarwein hisse ke liye dhadka.


Arjun ka jaal.

Ravi ke chehre par muskaan nahi aayi. Uski aankhon mein ek aisi thandak utar aayi jo Manali ki barf ko bhi sharma de.

"Toh khel shuru ho chuka hai, Arjun Rathore."

Usne camera todne jaisa bachkani galti nahi kiya. Nahi. Usne khelne ka faisla kiya. Par ab, niyam uske honge.


Woh bed par gaya aur kambal ko aise odha, jaise ek thaka hua insaan gehri neend mein doob jaata hai. Usne apni saanson ki raftaar ko dheema kiya, apne jism ko bilkul shaant chhod diya. Woh intezaar kar raha tha, uss shikari ke sustane ka, jo usse ek aasaan shikaar samajh raha tha.

Das minute... pandrah minute... Bees minute.

Aur phir, jaise bijli kadakta hai...

Ek jhatke ke saath, Ravi ka wing mein har roshni, har awaaz, har electronic saans band ho gaya. Generator ka backup bhi aane se pehle hi mar gaya. Yeh ek 'power trip' nahi tha; yeh ek 'power execution' tha. Ek surgical strike, jiska nishana sirf ek tha.

Lekin is andhere mein, jahan ek aam insaan ki aankhein bebasi se phail jaati, Ravi ki aankhein... unhone jeena shuru kiya.

Uska shareer ekdum shaant ho gaya, saansein itna dheema ki jaise ruk hi gaya ho. Usne bistar se utarkar zameen par pair rakha, bina kisi awaaz ke. Uske kaan ab uska aankhein ban chuke the. Woh hawa mein aate badlaav, temperature mein girta har degree, aur door corridor mein bichha carpet par padne wale har anjaane bojh ko mehsoos kar sakta tha.

Uska dimaag ek supercomputer ke tarah kaam kar raha tha.


RAVI (Inner Monologue): "Blackout. Sirf meri wing mein. Communications dead. Yeh Arjun ka kaam hai. Woh mujhe alag-thalag karna chahta hai. Par woh ek galti kar raha hai. Andhera mera dushman nahi... mera ghar hai. Is andhere mein, main shikaar nahi, shikaari hoon."

Usne apne zakhmi haath ki mutthi bheenche. Dard ki ek tez lehar utha, par uss dard ne usse sulaya nahi, jaga diya. Usse yaad dilaya ki khatra kitna asli hai.

Tabhi... aawaz aaya.

Ek halka sa 'click' ka awaaz. Uske kamre ke darwaze ke lock se. Koi bahar se electronic key card override karne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Ravi ek saaye ki tarah pichhe hata aur deewar se sat kar khada ho gaya, theek darwaze ke paas, jahan se andar aane wala usey pehli nazar mein dekh na sake. Usne paas rakhe bhaari table lamp ko haath mein utha liya. Yeh koi high-tech hathiyaar nahi tha, par andhere mein, sahi waqt par, yeh maut ka doosra naam ban sakta tha.

Darwaza bina awaaz kiye khula.

Ek kaala saaya, sir se paanv tak kaale tactical gear mein, kamre mein daakhil hua. Uske haath mein ek chhota, suppressed pistol tha, jiske aage night-vision scope laga tha. Woh professional tha.

Par usne ek galti kar dala. Usne Ravi ko bistar par dhoondha.

Aur Ravi bistar par nahi tha.

Jaise hi woh saaya aage badha, andhera zinda ho gaya. Ravi uske peeche se ek toofan ki tarah ubhra. Uska zakhmi haath ek lohe ke panje ki tarah saaye ki pistol wali kalai par pada. Isse pehle ki woh trigger daba paata, Ravi ne uski kalai ko ek wehshi angle par mod diya.


KRRACK!

Haddi aur cartilage ke tootne ki ek geeli, dil-dehlaane wali awaaz andhere mein goonj gayi. Saaye ke munh se ek dabi hui cheekh nikli, par Ravi ne usse mauka nahi diya. Usne ussi toote haath se use apni taraf kheencha aur apna ghutna uski pasliyon mein de maara. Doosri KRAK ki awaaz aayi.

Saaya professional tha. Dard ke bawajood, usne apne doosre haath se ek combat knife nikaala aur Ravi ke pet ki taraf vaar kiya.

Par Ravi wahan tha hi nahi. Woh hawa ki tarah pichhe hata, saaye ka santulan bigadne diya, aur phir aage badhkar, uske knife wale haath ki kohni par ek brutal 'elbow-lock' laga diya. Teesra
CRACK!

Saaye ke dono haath ab bekaar the. Isse pehle ki woh cheekh paata, Ravi ne uske baalon ko pakda aur uska sir deewar par de maara.

THUMP!

Saaya behosh hokar zameen par dher ho gaya.

Ravi ne uske chehre se naqaab hataya. Ek anjaan chehra. Ek kiraye ka qaatil. Par Ravi ka dhyaan uske kaan mein lage communication device par gaya. Usne use nikaal kar apne kaan mein lagaya. Doosri taraf se Arjun ki bechain awaaz aa raha tha.


ARJUN (O.S. via earpiece): "Hunter? Kya hua? Report! Status!"

Ravi ne kuch nahi kaha. Usne device ko zameen par rakha aur apne military boot se, dheere se, poora wazan daal kar use kuchal diya.


CRUNCH

Yeh khel ka pehla mohra tha jo shatranj se bahar ho chuka tha.



[LOCATION: ARJUN’S ROOM]

CRUNCH.

Earpiece se aaya aakhri awaaz Arjun ke kaano mein zehar ke tarah utar gayi. Uske chehre par gusse aur hairat ka toofan umad aaya.

ARJUN (gurrate hue): "Impossible! Usne HUNTER ko... andhere mein... bina hathiyaar ke?"

Usne apni whiskey ka glass ek jhatke mein khaali kar diya. Uska plan, uska perfect plan, pehli hi chaal mein dhwast ho chuka tha. Usne Ravi ko kamzor samjha tha. Yeh uski sabse badi bhool thi.

Usne Mr. Khana ko call kiya, jo bahar corridor mein pehra de raha tha.unke pass Virat , Rishi aur Sameer bhi khade the.


ARJUN: "Plan B fail ho gaya hai! HUNTER neeche hai. Ab Plan C. 'Saayon' ko aage badhne ka ishaara do. Unse kaho, shikaar ab hoshiyaar ho chuka hai. Aur Virat..."

VIRAT : "Ji, Arjun bhai."

ARJUN: "Agar Sia apne kamre se bahar nikle... usey rokna mat. Bas us par nazar rakhna. Woh Ravi ke taraf hi jaayegi. Aur jab kamzori khud shikaari ke paas jaaye... toh khel aur bhi mazedaar ho jaata hai."

Usne call kaat diya aur monitor par aayi ek live feed ko dekhne laga. Ek hidden camera Sia ke kamre ke theek bahar laga tha. Woh intezaar kar raha tha. Apne Wazir ko, pyaade ki taraf badhte hue dekhne ka.




[LOCATION: SIA'S ROOM / CORRIDOR]

Sia apne kamre mein bechaini se tehel rahi thi. Ravi ki wing mein andhera hote hi uska dil kisi anhoni ke aashanka se doob gaya tha. Uska dimaag usey Dada Sahab ka mission yaad dila raha tha, par uska dil... woh Ravi ke naam ki zidd kar raha tha.

"Main uske maamle mein nahi pad sakti. Yeh mission ke liye khatra hai," usne khud se kaha.

Par agle hi pal, usne darwaza khola. Uska dil jeet chuka tha.

Corridor mein maut jaisa sannata tha. Woh dabe paanv aage badhi. Har kadam uske farz par ek chot jaisa tha. Jab woh Ravi ke wing ke paas pahunchi, toh usne andhere mein khade ek saaye ko dekha. Virat.

Virat ne use dekha, par Arjun ke hukum ke mutaabik, usne Sia ko roka nahi. Bas ek ajeeb, sard muskaan di, jaise keh raha ho,
"Jao, apni maut ki taraf."

Sia usse nazarandaaz karke aage badh gayi. Ravi ka darwaza halka sa khula tha. Usne darte-darte andar jhaanka.

Andar ka manzar dekh kar uski saansein gale mein hi atak gayi.

Ravi zameen par baitha tha, behosh HUNTER ke paas. Kamre mein sirf chaand ka halka roshni aa raha tha. Us roshni mein, Ravi ka chehra kisi insaan ka nahi, ek... yoddha ka lag raha tha. Uska aankhon mein ghussa nahi, ek thanda, hisaabi focus tha.


SIA (dheere se): "Ravi...?"

Ravi ne palat kar use dekha. Uski aankhon mein ek pal ke liye narmi aaya.


RAVI: "Tumhein yahan nahi aana chahiye tha, Sia. Yeh jagah ab mehfooz nahi hai."

SIA: "Main bas... main chinta kar rahi thi."

Isse pehle ki Ravi kuch kehta, uske kaan khade ho gaye. Usne Sia ko ishare se chup rehne ko kaha.

Bahar... corridor mein... kadmon ki awaaz aa rahi tha.

Par yeh ek insaan ke kadmon ki awaaz nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise koi cheez... barf par reng rahi ho. Koi awaaz nahi, koi khusar-pusar nahi. Bas ek ehsaas. Ek thanda, maut jaisa ehsaas jo darwaze ke neeche se sarak kar andar aa raha tha.

Deenu Kaka ki awaaz Ravi ke dimaag mein goonja.
'Barf ke Saaye'.


RAVI (sargoshi mein): "Bistar ke neeche chhup jao. Aur jab tak main na kahun, bahar mat nikalna. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye."

Uska awaaz mein ek aisa authority tha jise Sia mana nahi kar saka. Woh foran bistar ke neeche chhup gayi.

Ravi ne Hunter ke behosh shareer ko ek taraf kheencha aur darwaze ke peeche phir se apni position le liya.

Darwaza dheere-dheere, ek ajeeb si crakkk ke saath khula.

Iss baar, ek nahi... teen saaye andar daakhil hue. Unhone kaale nahi, balki barf jaise safed, camouflage gear pehne the. Unke chehre par ajeeb se thermal goggles the aur unke haath mein khukri jaise, aage se mude hue, ghatak khanjar the.

Woh hawa ki tarah shaant the. Unka har move ek socha-samjha, train kiya hua qadam tha.

Pehle saaye ne kamre ko scan kiya. Doosra Hunter ke shareer ke paas gaya. Aur teesra... teesra theek uss bistar ke paas jaakar khada ho gaya jiske neeche Sia apni saansein roke chhipi hui thi.

Khel ab one-on-one nahi raha tha.

Yeh teen-on-one tha. Aur Ravi jaanta tha... yeh Arjun ke mamooli gunde nahi the.

Yeh professional qaatil the.
'Barf ke Saaye'.

Jangal ka asli shikaar... ab shuru ho chuka tha.




YAADON KE PEHREDAAR

[LOCATION: GADEN BAUDH MATH – ANDRUNI KAKSH]

Jabke resort ke uss kamre mein saansein ruka hua tha, pahaadon ki goad mein basa Gaden Baudh Math ka roohani khamoshi bhi uss ek kamre mein aakar thehar jaata tha. Yeh math ka sabse gupt, sabse andhera hissa tha. Hawa mein chandan, kapoor aur sadiyon purani prarthnaon ki mehek ek saath ghula hua tha. Deewaron par bane thangka paintings andhere mein saans lete hue mehsoos ho rahe the.

Beech mein baithe Lama Tashi ke aankhein band tha, par unka astitva uss kamre ki har cheez par haavi tha. Unke saamne, zameen par ghutno ke bal, Kitsune (YuKi) ka sir jhuka hua tha.

Lama Tashi ki bhaari awaaz pattharon se takraaya, jaise koi gufa goonj utha ho.



LAMA TASHI: "Aasmaan se toota hua taara... apni roshni zaroor kho chuka hai, Kitsune. Lekin girte waqt woh Qayamat ki garmi apne andar samet laaya hai. Tumhara zimmedaari sirf uske zakhmi jism ka nahi, uska bikhra hua rooh ka hifazat karna hai. Woh ab ek aisa daulat hai jiski koi keemat nahi, aur jise lootne ke liye Shaitan khud zameen par utar aaya hai."


KITSUNE: (Awaaz mein bebasi) :"Uss garmi ko woh khud mehsoos nahi kar paa raha, Lama. Uski aankhon mein ek aisa khaamoshi hai... jismein sirf aakhri tabahi ka shor hai. Apni pehchaan ki ek chingari tak nahi. Agar usse zara bhi yaad hota, toh woh meri aankhon mein chhipa fikr aur Aarav ke chehre par ubalte laave ko ek pal mein pehchaan leta."

Tabhi andhere se ek fauladi awaaz ne Kitsune ke shabdon ko cheer diya.

"Khaamoshi kamzori nahi, gehraayi ka nishaani hota hai, Lama. Aur samandar ki gehraayi mein hi toofan saans lete hain."

Phoenix (Aarav) andhere se nikal kar uss roshni mein aaya jo ek ghee ke diye se phail raha tha. Uska aankhein ek shikari baaz ki tarah aage dekh raha tha, jaise woh deewaron ke paar bhi dekh sakta ho.


PHOENIX (AARAV): "Woh sab kuch bhoola nahi hai. Uska yaadon par bas jakhmon ka zang lag gaya hai. Chehre dhundhle ho gaye hain, par unn chehron se mile dard ka ehsaas aaj bhi taza hai. Woh aag... woh cheekhein... uske zehen mein nahi, uski rooh mein qaid hain. Ek Shezaada jiska takht uska yaadein tha, aur woh takht ab cheen liya gaya hai."

LAMA TASHI: (Dheere se apni aankhein kholte hain. Unke nazron mein gyaan nahi, ek aisa chetavni tha jo waqt ko rok de.)
"Aur yahi baat usse is duniya ka sabse khatarnaak hathiyaar banata hai! Uska dimaag ab ek band darwaza nahi... woh Pralay ka taaboot hai. Ek aisi taqat jise dushman apni jeet samajhta hai, aur jise humein is duniya ke antt se pehle kaabu mein rakhna hai. Agar woh taaboot khul gaya... toh yeh duniya uss Shezaade ka kahani nahi, uska tabahi ka kissa sunega."


KITSUNE: (Uthkar, awaaz mein ek nayi zimmedaari ke saath)
"Toh humara maqsad kya hai, Lama?"


LAMA TASHI: "Tum dono uske saaye nahi... uski yaadon ke pehredaar banoge. Tumhare jung sirf dushman se nahi, uske ateet se bhi hai. Tumhein usse bachana bhi hai... aur waqt aane par, is duniya ko uss se bachana bhi hai. Jaao! Kyunki waqt ka ret nahi, zindagiyan phisal raha hain. Aur dushman ne apni pehli chaal chal diya hai."




USOOLON KI QEEMAT

[LOCATION: RESORT – STAFF QUARTERS – RAAT]

Resort ke chamak-damak ke peeche ek aur duniya tha. Geeli deewaron, seelan ki mehek aur saste disinfectant ki gandh waala. Yeh staff quarters ka pichla hissa tha, jahan andhera bhi zyada thaka hua aur gehra lagta tha.

Yahin par, parchhaiyon ko apna saathi banaye, Vikrant aage badh raha tha. Woh Aryan ke sabse puraane aur wafadaar aadmiyon mein se tha. Uski ragon mein khoon ke saath Aryan bhai ka ek usool daudta tha—"Begunahon par haath nahi uthana." Aur Arjun ke Manali aane ke baad se hi, usse yeh usool toot-ta hua mehsoos ho raha tha.

Usne Arjun ke Security Head ko ek band pade store room mein ghuste dekha. Ek aisi jagah jahan kisi ko nahi jaana chahiye tha. Vikrant deewar se sat kar aage badha, uske saans lene ki awaaz bhi usse dhokha de sakti thi. Usne darwaze ke daraar se andar jhaanka, aur jo dekha, usse uska rooh tak kaanp gayi.

Andar do log the. Security Head... aur ek anjaan saaya.

Woh saaya roshni mein aaya. Lamba, patla jism. Lambe baal jo uske chehre par a rahe the. Gaal par ek purane zakhm ka nishaan, jaise kisi janwar ne panja maara ho. Par sabse darawni cheez uska aankhein theen—bilkul khaali, jaise unke peeche koi insaan nahi, sirf maut ka intezaar tha.



(NAYE KIRDAAR KI ENTRY – KAI)

Woh ek professional mercenary tha. Ek bhoot, jise Arjun ne khaas iss kaam ke liye kiraye par liya tha. Kai usoolon par nahi, keemat par kaam karta tha.


SECURITY HEAD: (Awaaz mein ek ajeeb sa ghabrahat) "Target confirm hai. Ladki, Jaanvi. Kal Monastery mein... kaam saaf hona chahiye."

Kai ne jawaab nahi diya, bas gardan halki sa hilaaya. Jab woh bola, toh uska awaaz sookhe patton par rengte saanp jaisa tha.



KAI: "Kaam ho jaayega. Par Rathore Junior ko yaad dila dena, iss kaam ki keemat sirf paisa nahi hai... uska khamoshi bhi hai. Kissa khatam hone ke baad, main kabhi tha hi nahi."


Vikrant ka dimaag sunn ho gaya. Dhokha. Arjun ne apne hi bhai ko dhokha diya tha. Yeh sabaq sikhaane ki nahi, ek begunah ko mitaane ki saazish tha. Usne bina awaaz kiye wahan se hatna chaha, par uska kismat ne saath chhod diya. Uska pair neeche pade kaanch ke ek toote hue tukde par pad gaya.



KRRNNCH!

Awaaz mamuli tha, par uss khamoshi mein ek dhamake jaisa laga.

Ek palak jhapk mein Kai insaan se hathiyaar ban gaya. Woh aisi tezi se palta jaise hawa ne rukh badla ho. Uska khaali aankhein seedha daraar ke uss paar Vikrant ki dehshat-zada aankhon se takraaya.

Sochne ka waqt nahi tha. Vikrant bhaaga.

Par Kai shikaar tha, aur Vikrant shikaari. Woh ek saaye ke tarah uske peeche lapka, uske kadmon ki awaaz tak nahi aa raha tha. Vikrant ne jaan bachane ke liye daudte hue paas pada ek zang laga lohe ka rod uthaya aur palat kar poori taqat se vaar kiya.


Kai ne ek hairaan kar dene waala furti se uss rod ko hawa mein hi pakad liya. Uska kalai tak nahi hila.

Ek jhatke mein usne rod Vikrant ke haath se cheen liya. Isse pehle ki Vikrant apna galti samajh paata, Kai ne wahi rod ghuma kar uske ghutne par de maara.


CRACK!

Haddi ke tootne ki wehshi awaaz uss tang corridor mein goonj gaya.

Vikrant ki cheekh uske gale mein hi ghut gaya jab woh zameen par gira. Kai uske upar shikaari ke tarah jhuka. Uska aankhon mein na gussa tha, na nafrat. Sirf ek peshewar khamoshi.



KAI: "Galat waqt... galat jagah."

Usne rod uthaaya aur Vikrant ke doosre haath ke kalai par maar diya. Ek aur dardnaak cheekh. Phir usne rod Vikrant ke gardan par rakha aur dheere se dabav badhaya, bas itna ki saans rukne lage.



KAI (sargoshi mein, jaise koi raaz bata raha ho): "Apne Aryan bhai ko paigaam dena... Arjun Rathore ke khel mein usoolon ke jagah nahi... sirf nateeje hote hain."


Yeh keh kar usne rod hata liya aur Vikrant ko toote jism aur toote himmat ke saath wahin tadapta hua chhod diya. Woh andhere mein aise ghul gaya jaise kabhi tha hi nahi.


Yeh sirf ek warning nahi tha. Yeh ek elaan-e-jung tha. Ek khooni elaan... ki Manali mein ab Aryan ke nahi, Arjun Rathore ke niyam chalenge.





QAYAMAT KA NAACH

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein teen saaye the, aur ek shikaar. Kam se kam, woh yahi soch rahe the.

Bistar ke neeche, Sia ka dil uske seene mein ek qaid parinde ki tarah phadphada raha tha. Upar khade saaye ke boot uski aankhon se bas kuch inch door the. Usne apni cheekh ko gale mein hi ghont diya.

Jaise hi teesre saaye ne bistar ko khanjar se uthane ke liye haath badhaya, andhera zinda ho gaya.

Ravi ek toofan ke tarah nahi, Qayamat ke tarah utha. Usne paas rakha bhaari table lamp uthaya, lekin phenka nahi. Usne use ek pendulum ki tarah ghumakar pehle saaye ke thermal goggles par de maara.


CRASH!

Kaanch aur high-tech plastic ke tukde saaye ki aankhon mein ghus gaye. Uski cheekh nikli, par sirf ek pal ke liye. Isse pehle ki uska cheekh poori hota, Ravi uske saamne tha. Usne saaye ke khanjar wale haath ko pakda, uske kohni ko apne ghutne par rakha aur doosre haath se uska kalai ko neeche ki taraf mod diya.

SNAP!

Kohni ke joint ke ulti disha mein tootne ki ek geeli, wehshi awaaz aayi. Par Ravi wahin nahi ruka. Usne qaatil ke hi toote hue haath se khanjar cheena aur uski gardan ke aar-paar utaar diya.

Ek saans... aur pehla saaya zameen par tha. Zinda nahi.

Doosre do saaye, apne saathi ke achanak khatm ho jaane se chaunke, par woh professional the. Unhone Ravi par ek saath hamla kiya. Unke khanjar hawa ko cheerte hue maut ka sangeet gaa rahe the.

Lekin Ravi unse lad nahi raha tha. Woh naach raha tha. Maut ka ek aisa naach jise Sia apni zindagi mein kabhi nahi bhool paayegi.

Woh ek khanjar ke neeche se jhuka, doosre ko apni baazu se deflect kiya, jisse uske haath par ek gehra ghaav laga. Par uske chehre par dard ka nishaan tak nahi tha. Usne doosre qaatil ke hamle ki taaqat ka istemaal karte hue use apni taraf kheencha aur use teesre qaatil ke saamne ek insaani dhaal ki tarah kar diya.

Teesre qaatil ka khanjar apne hi saathi ke seene mein utar gaya.

Uska aankhein dehshat se phail gaya. Par Ravi ne use sambhalne ka ek pal bhi nahi diya. Usne zakhmi qaatil ko ek taraf dhakela aur aakhri bache hue saaye ke taraf badha. Usne zameen par pade Hunter ke pistol ko pair se uchhalkar hawa mein pakda.

Par goli nahi chalaya.

Woh qaatil ke itne kareeb pahunch chuka tha ki pistol ka barrel uske maathe par lage thermal goggle se takra raha tha.


RAVI (uska awaaz andhere se bhi zyada thanda aur khaali tha): "Usse kaho... usne kutte bheje hain... ek sher ke shikaar ke liye."

Aur phir usne trigger nahi, pistol ke pichle hisse (slide) se qaatil ke naak par poori taaqat se vaar kiya.


KRRR-UNCH!

Naak ka haddi toot kar uske dimaag mein ghus gayi. Woh bina koi awaaz kiye, ek murde ki tarah pichhe gir gaya.

Teen professional qaatil. Tees second se bhi kam.

Kamre mein ab sirf Ravi ke tez saanson ke awaaz tha. Aur khoon ka bhaari, lohe jaisa mehek.

Ravi dheere se utha. Uske haath se khoon tapak kar zameen par safed barf par lahu ka pehli boondon ki kahani likh raha tha. Woh dheere-dheere chalta hua kamre ke beech mein aaya. Usne neeche pade jismon ko nahi dekha.

Usne upar dekha.

Seedha uss smoke detector mein lage camera ke lens mein. Arjun ke aankhon mein.

Uske chehre par na ghussa tha, na jeet. Sirf ek aisa khaamoshi jo hazaar cheekhon se zyada darawni tha. Usne apna khoon se sana haath uthaya aur usse apna aankhon ke saamne laaya. Phir, behad dheere se, usne apniaek ungli se apne hi gale par ek lakeer kheencha.

Ek vaada. Ek paigaam. Ek maut ka farmaan.

Arjun Rathore ne ek pyaada samjha tha. Uss raat, usse pata chala ki shatranj ke uss paar... ek Qayamat baitha hai , ek doosra Badshah.

Aur uss Badshah ke chehre par ek an-kaha paigaam saaf likha tha...


"Welcome to my warzone."



RAAKH BHI NAHI MILEGA

Par khel abhi khatm nahi hua tha.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia kaanpte hue yeh sab dekh rahi thi. Uski aankhon mein ab sirf darr nahi, ek aisi hairat thi jise samajhna namumkin tha.

Ravi ne camera ke taraf se nazar hataya aur kamre ko dekha. Ek aam insaan is manzar ko dekh kar cheekh padta ya behosh ho jaata. Chaar lashein. Khoon se sane farsh aur deewar.

Par Ravi... usne ek lambi, thandi saans liya, jaise usne abhi-abhi ek halka sa exercise khatm kiya ho. Uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha. Jaise yeh uske liye roz ka kaam ho.

Woh bina kisi jaldbaazi ke, behad methodical tareeke se kaam par lag gaya.

Usne sabse pehle bed se saari chaadarein utaara. Bistar ke neeche se Sia ne dekha ki usne ek-ek karke chaaron lashon ko un chaadaron mein lapetna shuru kiya. Uske movements ek surgeon ki tarah sateek the. Koi awaaz nahi, koi ghabrahat nahi.

Phir, usne un bhaari gathriyon ko, ek-ek karke, balcony ki taraf kheench kar le jaana shuru kiya. Sia ko laga ki woh shayad unhein neeche phenk dega. Par Ravi ne aisa nahi kiya. Resort ke uss wing ke theek peeche ek ghana, andhera jungle tha, jahan ek gehri khaai tha. Ravi ne ek-ek gathri ko balcony ki railing par rakha aur bina kisi awaaz ke, neeche uss andhere mein dhakel diya jahan se unka suraag milna namumkin tha.

Char insaan... jaise kabhi the hi nahi.

Iske baad woh wapas kamre mein aaya. Sia ne socha ab woh thak kar rukega. Par woh ruka nahi. Usne bathroom se paani ka baalti aur kuch saaf karne wale kapde liye aur zameen par ghutno ke bal baith gaya.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia usse ek bhoot ki tarah kaam karte hue dekh rahi thi. Woh farsh se khoon ka har ek daag, deewar par lage har ek cheente ko aise saaf kar raha tha, jaise koi crime scene cleaner ho. Usne toote hue lamp ke tukde, qaatilon ke gire hue hathiyaar, har cheez ko ikattha kiya aur ek bag mein bhar liya.

Pandrah minute ke andar, woh kamra waisa hi tha jaisa pehle tha. Bas hawa mein khoon aur disinfectant ka halka sa mehek baaki tha. Jaise kuch hua hi nahi tha. Jaise Qayamat aaya, apna kaam kiya, aur bina koi nishaan chhode chala gaya.

Ab Ravi palta. Woh seedha bistar ke paas aaya aur neeche jhuka.

Andhere mein, Sia ko sirf uski do aankhein dikhayi de rahi theen, jo chaand ki roshni mein ajeeb tarah se chamak rahi theen. Un aankhon mein ab woh Ravi nahi tha jise woh school mein jaanti thi.

Ravi ne apna khoon se saaf kiya hua, par ab bhi zakhmi haath uski taraf badhaya.

Uska awaaz ek sargoshi se zyada nahi tha, par Sia ke liye woh ek dhamaka tha. Ek aisa sawaal jo is trip ki, aur shayad uski zindagi ki, disha badalne wala tha.


"Iss khel mein masoomiyat ki keemat maut hota hai, Sia. Main tumhein bacha sakta hoon, par tumhari masoomiyat nahi. Tayyar ho?"

Uska awaaz ab bhi hawa mein tair raha tha jab usne Sia ko dekhe bina aage kaha, jaise woh aane wale kal se baat kar raha ho.

"Kyunki yeh raat toh bas ek trailer tha... asli film toh kal subah Monastery mein shuru hoga."




"Ab batao, Sia... Darr lag raha hai... ya maza aa raha hai?"
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UPDATE 11 (B)

BARF KE SAAYE (WARZONE)


PART 4: Jab Khel Khooni Ho Jaye

BONFIRE NIGHT - JALTI AAG, SULAGTE RAAZ

Haadse ne trip ka masoomiyat ko cheer kar rakh diya tha, trip ka mahaul badal gaya tha. Us raat resort ke bahar jalta bonfire ka aag garmahat kam, ek ajeeb sa bechaini zyada de raha tha. Aag ke chatakti laptein students ke chehron par ajeeb-o-gareeb saaye bana raha tha. Kuch log gaa-baja kar mahaul ko halka karne ke nakaam koshish kar rahe the, lekin unke gaano mein bhi ek dar ka goonj tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise aas paas ka ghana, kaala jungle unhe ghoor raha ho, unke har sargoshi sun raha ho.

Arjun, jo din bhar se Ravi ke hero banne par sulag raha tha ,ek shaatir shikaari ke tarah, apne mauke ka intezaar kar raha tha. Arjun ne is mauke ka poora fayda uthaya.


Usne Sia ko aag ke paas akele khade dekha aur apne doston ko ishaara karke uske paas chala gaya. Rishi aur Virat ne usey ek smirk ke saath 'all the best' ka ishaara kiya, jabki Sameer bechaini se idhar-udhar dekh raha tha.

Arjun ne Sia ke paas jaakar apni awaaz mein jitni ho sake utni fikr bharte hue kaha.


Arjun: "Sardi badh gaya hai. Din mein jo hua, uske baad tumhe apna extra dhyaan rakhna chahiye."
Uska awaaz mein fikr ka mitha zahar ghula hua tha, par uska aankhein Sia ke chehre par dar talaash raha tha.

Sia ne kuch jawab nahi diya, bas aag ki lapton ko dekhti rahi.

Tabhi, resort ka buzurg pahaadi chowkidar, Deenu Kaka, jo apni khukri hamesha kamar mein lagaye rakhta tha, aag ke paas aaya. Unhone ek nazar sab par daale aur unke aankhein Ravi, YuKi, aur Aarav par aakar thehar gaya. Unke jhurriyon bhari awaaz mein sadiyon ka anubhav tha.


Deenu Kaka: "Yeh pahaad jitne sundar dikhte hain, utne hain nahi, bachchon. Jab raat gehra hota hai aur hawa mein barf ka mehak aata hai, tab 'Barf ke Saaye' utarte hain."

Ek student hass pada. "Kya Kaka, aap bhi dara rahe ho."

Deenu Kaka ki aankhein uss student ko dekh kar sakht ho gaya. "Yeh kahaani nahi, chetavni hai. Woh saaye... woh shikaar karte hain. Na khoon ka nishaan chhodte hain, na haddiyon ka suraag. Jise le jaate hain, woh bas hawa mein gaayab ho jaata hai. Hamesha ke liye."

Sabke hasne ki awaaz gale mein hi atak gaye. Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav ne ek dusre ko dekha. Unhe pata tha, yeh sirf ek lok-katha nahi tha. Yeh ek code tha, ek sandesh tha.

Sia uss anjaan si tension se ghabrakar wahan se hatne lagi. Andhere mein, uska haath anjaane mein Ravi ke ussi haath se takra gaya jo din mein zakhmi hua tha.

Ek jhatka.

Ek current.

Ravi ke dard se see karne ki bajaye saansein ruk gaya. Sia ne foran apna haath pichhe kheench liya. Ek pal ke liye, un dono ki nigahein mile. Uss ek pal mein unhone lafzon se nahi, rooh se baat kiye. Ek an-kaha vaada, ek ehsaas ke is khatre mein woh akele nahi hain.

Lekin woh nahi jaante the ke unke har harkat, har saans, record ho raha tha.

Bahut door, ek ped ke aad mein, andhere se bhi zyada kaala ek saaya baitha tha. Ek high-tech night-vision camera ke lens un dono par zoom kiye hue tha. Lens ke peeche baitha aankhon mein koi bhavna nahi tha, sirf aadesh ka intezaar tha.


KRAK!

Jungle ke andhere se achanak ek moti tehni tootne ka awaaz aaya. Awaaz itna tez tha jaise kisi ne jaan-boojh kar use toda ho.

Sabhi students darr kar ek-dum shaant ho gaye. Bonfire ka aag ke alawa har taraf maut jaisa sannata tha. Sabka aankhein uss andhere ki taraf dekh raha tha jahan se awaaz aaya tha.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri ka handle kas ke pakad liya.

Aur uss andhere mein baithe shakhs ne apne satellite phone par ek encrypted message type kiya:


"Ravi kamzor hai. Uska ek kamzori hai. Tasdeek ho gaya. Mansoobe ke agle hisse ki ijaazat di jaaye."


Masti ka waqt khatm ho chuka tha. Asli khel ab shuru hone wala tha.




Raakh Hoti Aag, Sulagti Nafrat

KRAK!

Jungle se aayi uss awaaz ne bonfire ke aas paas jami hawa ko sheeshe ki tarah tod diya. Sabhi students darr se ek dusre se sat gaye. Unki saari masti, saare gaane, ek pal mein hawa ho gaye.


Principal Malhotra: "Shaant raho! Stay calm, everyone! Koi jaanwar hoga."

Ms. Meera: "Sab log resort ke andar chalo! Now! Make a line!"

Lekin Ravi, YuKi aur Aarav jaante the. Yeh kisi jaanwar ki awaaz nahi tha. Yeh ek sochi-samjhi harkat tha. Ek signal. Ek ailaan.

Deenu Kaka ne apni khukri aadhi bahar nikaal liye the, unke tajurbekaar aankhein andhere ko aise cheed raha tha, jaise woh saayon ke aar-paar dekh sakta ho.

Students ke beech afra-tafri mach gaya. Sab jaldi se jaldi resort ki garmahat mein laut jaana chahte the. Isi bhagdad mein, Sia ne Ravi ko dekha. Woh apni jagah se hila tak nahi tha. Uski nigahein uss andhere par tik tha, jaise woh uss shakhs ko dekh sakta ho jo wahan chhupa baitha tha. Ravi ke chehre par dar nahi, ek sard ghussa tha. Aisa ghussa jo shikaar ko shikaari bana deta hai.

Ms. Meera ne sabko andar lobby mein ikattha kiya.


Ms. Meera: "Okay, everyone, apne apne room partners ke saath check karo. Make sure everyone is here."

Ek-ek karke sabne "Yes, ma'am" kehna shuru kiya.

Bonfire ki aakhri laptein bhi bujh chuka tha. Jalti lakdiyon ki mehak ab hawa mein faile dhuen aur anjaane khatre ki sargoshiyon mein badal gaya tha. Students thake-haare apne kamron mein laut gaye the, is baat se bekhabar ki unke beech chupe shikaari ab apne agle vaar ki taiyaari kar rahe the.



Arjun ke kamre mein...

Kamra andhere mein dooba hua tha. Sirf laptop ki neeli roshni Arjun ke chehre par kathor parchhaiyan bana raha tha.

Whiskey ka adha bhara glass mez par apne naseeb ka intezaar kar raha tha, bilkul waise hi jaise Arjun ki shatranj ke mohre uske agle hukum ka karte the.


Click... Click... Click.

Mouse ka har click ek ijaafa tha uss aag mein jo Arjun ke seene mein sulag raha tha. Telephoto lens se kheencha gaya darjanon tasveeron ka silsila ruk gaya, ek file mein qaid theen, lekin Arjun ka cursor baar-baar ek hi tasveer par aakar ruk jaata.

Ek frame par. Sirf ek.


Woh tasveer nahi, ek lamha tha. Ek pal, jab Sia ka haath anjaane mein Ravi ke haath se chhua tha. Unke ungliyon ka mehez ek lams (sparsh)... lekin unke chehron par likha kashish aur bechaini ek poori dastaan bayaan kar raha tha. Arjun uss tasveer ko zoom karke dekh raha tha. Woh Sia ke chehre par aayi pal bhar ki sharam, aur Ravi ki aankhon mein uss ek pal ke liye thehar gayi duniya ko saaf padh sakta tha.

Yeh sirf ek masoomi si chuhan nahi tha. Yeh Arjun ke banaye hue khel mein ek baghawat tha. Ek aag tha jo uska saltanat mein lag raha tha. Sia uska shatranj ka Wazir thi—khubsoorat, khatarnaak, aur sirf uske ishaaron par chalne waali. Aur ek Wazir ka kisi maamuli pyaade ke taraf dekhna bhi... badshaah ki tauheen hota hai.

Uska ungliyan keyboard par kas gaya. Chehre par ek sard muskaan phail gaya. Usne phone uthaya, number dial kiya. Uski awaaz sheeshe ke tarah saaf aur thandi tha.


ARJUN: "Khanna, waqt aa gaya hai. Plan B. Abhi."

Doosri taraf se sirf ek itminaan bhari awaaz aaya,
"Hukum kijiye, Sir."

ARJUN:
"Activate it , "Monastery ka program kal subah ka hai. Main chahta hoon resort ka woh pura wing andhere mein doob jaaye jahan Ravi Mishra apni neend poori kar raha hai. Ek 'power trip' lagna chahiye .Aisa andhera ki woh apni parchhayi se bhi darr jaaye. Aur sabse zaroori... communications. Blackout. Koi Wi-Fi nahi, koi mobile network nahi. Main chahta hoon Kal subah jab suraj nikle, toh yeh resort duniya ke liye ek black hole ban jaana chahiye."


KHANNA : "Ho jaayega, Sir. Suraj ugne se pehle, woh apni hi parchhai se bhi baat nahi kar payega."

Arjun ne call kaat diya.

Uske nigahein wapas uss tasveer par lauta. Usne Ravi ke chehre par cursor rakha, jaise nishaana laga raha ho.


ARJUN (khud se): "Khelne ka bohot shauk hai na tumhein, Ravi Mishra? Chalo, ek naya khel khelte hain. Ek aisa khel jismein roshni nahi hoga... aawaaz nahi hoga... aur tumhara kamzori hi tumhara gala ghontega."

Ek aakhri, aatish-fishaan nazar se tasveer ko dekh kar usne 'Delete' ka button daba diya.

Screen par likha aaya:
File Permanently Deleted.

Jaise Ravi Mishra ka wajood.

[LOCATION: SIA’S RESORT ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein maddham roshni tha, lekin Sia ko aaine mein apna aks nahi, apni uljhi hui rooh nazar aa rahi thi. Aaine ke uss paar khadi ladki ek anjaan shakhs lag rahi thi, jiski aankhon mein farz ki thakaan aur dil ki baghawat saaf dikh rahi thi.

Ek taraf Dada Sahab ka mission tha—ek maqsad jiske liye usne apni zindagi daanv par laga di thi. Doosri taraf Alisha ke zehar mein bujhe hue shabd kaan mein goonj rahe the, ek aisi chetavni jo anjaam ka aaina dikha rahi thi.

Aur in dono chattanon ke beech... Ravi ke haath ka woh ehsaas.

Ek second se bhi chhota lamha, lekin jaise waqt uss ek pal mein qaid ho gaya tha. Uski hatheli par abhi bhi uss chuhan ki jhanjhanahat thi. Uska dimaag cheekh raha tha ki yeh ek galti hai, ek kamzori jo usse uske maqsad se bhatka degi, jo usse barbaad kar degi. Par dil... woh dimaag ki ek bhi daleel sunne ko taiyaar nahi tha.

Usne aaine par apni ungliyan pheri, jaise apne hi aks ko samajhane ki koshish kar rahi ho.


SIA (fufusate hue):
"Kaash yeh trip... bas ek trip hota"

Uski awaaz kamre ki khaamoshi mein ek raaz ki tarah ghul gayi. Ek aisa raaz, jo shayad uski sabse badi taqat banne wala tha... ya uski tabahi ka kaaran.

PART 5: SHIKARI HUA SHIKAR

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein ek kafan jaisi khamoshi tha, lekin Ravi ke andar ek toofan chal raha tha. Yeh alag-thalag kamra aaraam ke liye nahi, ek qaid-khane ki tarah lag raha tha. Bonfire ki aag bujh chuka tha, par uska peeth par chubhta hua woh nigahein... usse ab bhi mehsoos ho rahe theen. Uska instinct, jo saalon ki training se faulad ban chuka tha, chilla raha tha—"Tum akele nahi ho."

Usne lights band kar diya. Andhera uski aankhon ke liye ek parda nahi, ek hathiyaar tha.

Usne kamre ko dekhna nahi, usse 'padhna' shuru kiya. Har kona, har saaya, har cheez jo apni jagah par nahi tha. Uska nigahein ek professional ki tarah scan karti hui... ceiling par lage smoke detector par jaakar theher gaya. Uska design ajeeb tha, standard model se alag. Aur tabhi usne woh dekha... ek behad baareek, lagbhag adrishya laal roshni, jo ek dil ke tarah... ek second ke hazaarwein hisse ke liye dhadka.


Arjun ka jaal.

Ravi ke chehre par muskaan nahi aayi. Uski aankhon mein ek aisi thandak utar aayi jo Manali ki barf ko bhi sharma de.

"Toh khel shuru ho chuka hai, Arjun Rathore."

Usne camera todne jaisa bachkani galti nahi kiya. Nahi. Usne khelne ka faisla kiya. Par ab, niyam uske honge.


Woh bed par gaya aur kambal ko aise odha, jaise ek thaka hua insaan gehri neend mein doob jaata hai. Usne apni saanson ki raftaar ko dheema kiya, apne jism ko bilkul shaant chhod diya. Woh intezaar kar raha tha, uss shikari ke sustane ka, jo usse ek aasaan shikaar samajh raha tha.

Das minute... pandrah minute... Bees minute.

Aur phir, jaise bijli kadakta hai...

Ek jhatke ke saath, Ravi ka wing mein har roshni, har awaaz, har electronic saans band ho gaya. Generator ka backup bhi aane se pehle hi mar gaya. Yeh ek 'power trip' nahi tha; yeh ek 'power execution' tha. Ek surgical strike, jiska nishana sirf ek tha.

Lekin is andhere mein, jahan ek aam insaan ki aankhein bebasi se phail jaati, Ravi ki aankhein... unhone jeena shuru kiya.

Uska shareer ekdum shaant ho gaya, saansein itna dheema ki jaise ruk hi gaya ho. Usne bistar se utarkar zameen par pair rakha, bina kisi awaaz ke. Uske kaan ab uska aankhein ban chuke the. Woh hawa mein aate badlaav, temperature mein girta har degree, aur door corridor mein bichha carpet par padne wale har anjaane bojh ko mehsoos kar sakta tha.

Uska dimaag ek supercomputer ke tarah kaam kar raha tha.


RAVI (Inner Monologue): "Blackout. Sirf meri wing mein. Communications dead. Yeh Arjun ka kaam hai. Woh mujhe alag-thalag karna chahta hai. Par woh ek galti kar raha hai. Andhera mera dushman nahi... mera ghar hai. Is andhere mein, main shikaar nahi, shikaari hoon."

Usne apne zakhmi haath ki mutthi bheenche. Dard ki ek tez lehar utha, par uss dard ne usse sulaya nahi, jaga diya. Usse yaad dilaya ki khatra kitna asli hai.

Tabhi... aawaz aaya.

Ek halka sa 'click' ka awaaz. Uske kamre ke darwaze ke lock se. Koi bahar se electronic key card override karne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Ravi ek saaye ki tarah pichhe hata aur deewar se sat kar khada ho gaya, theek darwaze ke paas, jahan se andar aane wala usey pehli nazar mein dekh na sake. Usne paas rakhe bhaari table lamp ko haath mein utha liya. Yeh koi high-tech hathiyaar nahi tha, par andhere mein, sahi waqt par, yeh maut ka doosra naam ban sakta tha.

Darwaza bina awaaz kiye khula.

Ek kaala saaya, sir se paanv tak kaale tactical gear mein, kamre mein daakhil hua. Uske haath mein ek chhota, suppressed pistol tha, jiske aage night-vision scope laga tha. Woh professional tha.

Par usne ek galti kar dala. Usne Ravi ko bistar par dhoondha.

Aur Ravi bistar par nahi tha.

Jaise hi woh saaya aage badha, andhera zinda ho gaya. Ravi uske peeche se ek toofan ki tarah ubhra. Uska zakhmi haath ek lohe ke panje ki tarah saaye ki pistol wali kalai par pada. Isse pehle ki woh trigger daba paata, Ravi ne uski kalai ko ek wehshi angle par mod diya.


KRRACK!

Haddi aur cartilage ke tootne ki ek geeli, dil-dehlaane wali awaaz andhere mein goonj gayi. Saaye ke munh se ek dabi hui cheekh nikli, par Ravi ne usse mauka nahi diya. Usne ussi toote haath se use apni taraf kheencha aur apna ghutna uski pasliyon mein de maara. Doosri KRAK ki awaaz aayi.

Saaya professional tha. Dard ke bawajood, usne apne doosre haath se ek combat knife nikaala aur Ravi ke pet ki taraf vaar kiya.

Par Ravi wahan tha hi nahi. Woh hawa ki tarah pichhe hata, saaye ka santulan bigadne diya, aur phir aage badhkar, uske knife wale haath ki kohni par ek brutal 'elbow-lock' laga diya. Teesra
CRACK!

Saaye ke dono haath ab bekaar the. Isse pehle ki woh cheekh paata, Ravi ne uske baalon ko pakda aur uska sir deewar par de maara.

THUMP!

Saaya behosh hokar zameen par dher ho gaya.

Ravi ne uske chehre se naqaab hataya. Ek anjaan chehra. Ek kiraye ka qaatil. Par Ravi ka dhyaan uske kaan mein lage communication device par gaya. Usne use nikaal kar apne kaan mein lagaya. Doosri taraf se Arjun ki bechain awaaz aa raha tha.


ARJUN (O.S. via earpiece): "Hunter? Kya hua? Report! Status!"

Ravi ne kuch nahi kaha. Usne device ko zameen par rakha aur apne military boot se, dheere se, poora wazan daal kar use kuchal diya.


CRUNCH

Yeh khel ka pehla mohra tha jo shatranj se bahar ho chuka tha.



[LOCATION: ARJUN’S ROOM]

CRUNCH.

Earpiece se aaya aakhri awaaz Arjun ke kaano mein zehar ke tarah utar gayi. Uske chehre par gusse aur hairat ka toofan umad aaya.

ARJUN (gurrate hue): "Impossible! Usne HUNTER ko... andhere mein... bina hathiyaar ke?"

Usne apni whiskey ka glass ek jhatke mein khaali kar diya. Uska plan, uska perfect plan, pehli hi chaal mein dhwast ho chuka tha. Usne Ravi ko kamzor samjha tha. Yeh uski sabse badi bhool thi.

Usne Mr. Khana ko call kiya, jo bahar corridor mein pehra de raha tha.unke pass Virat , Rishi aur Sameer bhi khade the.


ARJUN: "Plan B fail ho gaya hai! HUNTER neeche hai. Ab Plan C. 'Saayon' ko aage badhne ka ishaara do. Unse kaho, shikaar ab hoshiyaar ho chuka hai. Aur Virat..."

VIRAT : "Ji, Arjun bhai."

ARJUN: "Agar Sia apne kamre se bahar nikle... usey rokna mat. Bas us par nazar rakhna. Woh Ravi ke taraf hi jaayegi. Aur jab kamzori khud shikaari ke paas jaaye... toh khel aur bhi mazedaar ho jaata hai."

Usne call kaat diya aur monitor par aayi ek live feed ko dekhne laga. Ek hidden camera Sia ke kamre ke theek bahar laga tha. Woh intezaar kar raha tha. Apne Wazir ko, pyaade ki taraf badhte hue dekhne ka.




[LOCATION: SIA'S ROOM / CORRIDOR]

Sia apne kamre mein bechaini se tehel rahi thi. Ravi ki wing mein andhera hote hi uska dil kisi anhoni ke aashanka se doob gaya tha. Uska dimaag usey Dada Sahab ka mission yaad dila raha tha, par uska dil... woh Ravi ke naam ki zidd kar raha tha.

"Main uske maamle mein nahi pad sakti. Yeh mission ke liye khatra hai," usne khud se kaha.

Par agle hi pal, usne darwaza khola. Uska dil jeet chuka tha.

Corridor mein maut jaisa sannata tha. Woh dabe paanv aage badhi. Har kadam uske farz par ek chot jaisa tha. Jab woh Ravi ke wing ke paas pahunchi, toh usne andhere mein khade ek saaye ko dekha. Virat.

Virat ne use dekha, par Arjun ke hukum ke mutaabik, usne Sia ko roka nahi. Bas ek ajeeb, sard muskaan di, jaise keh raha ho,
"Jao, apni maut ki taraf."

Sia usse nazarandaaz karke aage badh gayi. Ravi ka darwaza halka sa khula tha. Usne darte-darte andar jhaanka.

Andar ka manzar dekh kar uski saansein gale mein hi atak gayi.

Ravi zameen par baitha tha, behosh HUNTER ke paas. Kamre mein sirf chaand ka halka roshni aa raha tha. Us roshni mein, Ravi ka chehra kisi insaan ka nahi, ek... yoddha ka lag raha tha. Uska aankhon mein ghussa nahi, ek thanda, hisaabi focus tha.


SIA (dheere se): "Ravi...?"

Ravi ne palat kar use dekha. Uski aankhon mein ek pal ke liye narmi aaya.


RAVI: "Tumhein yahan nahi aana chahiye tha, Sia. Yeh jagah ab mehfooz nahi hai."

SIA: "Main bas... main chinta kar rahi thi."

Isse pehle ki Ravi kuch kehta, uske kaan khade ho gaye. Usne Sia ko ishare se chup rehne ko kaha.

Bahar... corridor mein... kadmon ki awaaz aa rahi tha.

Par yeh ek insaan ke kadmon ki awaaz nahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise koi cheez... barf par reng rahi ho. Koi awaaz nahi, koi khusar-pusar nahi. Bas ek ehsaas. Ek thanda, maut jaisa ehsaas jo darwaze ke neeche se sarak kar andar aa raha tha.

Deenu Kaka ki awaaz Ravi ke dimaag mein goonja.
'Barf ke Saaye'.


RAVI (sargoshi mein): "Bistar ke neeche chhup jao. Aur jab tak main na kahun, bahar mat nikalna. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye."

Uska awaaz mein ek aisa authority tha jise Sia mana nahi kar saka. Woh foran bistar ke neeche chhup gayi.

Ravi ne Hunter ke behosh shareer ko ek taraf kheencha aur darwaze ke peeche phir se apni position le liya.

Darwaza dheere-dheere, ek ajeeb si crakkk ke saath khula.

Iss baar, ek nahi... teen saaye andar daakhil hue. Unhone kaale nahi, balki barf jaise safed, camouflage gear pehne the. Unke chehre par ajeeb se thermal goggles the aur unke haath mein khukri jaise, aage se mude hue, ghatak khanjar the.

Woh hawa ki tarah shaant the. Unka har move ek socha-samjha, train kiya hua qadam tha.

Pehle saaye ne kamre ko scan kiya. Doosra Hunter ke shareer ke paas gaya. Aur teesra... teesra theek uss bistar ke paas jaakar khada ho gaya jiske neeche Sia apni saansein roke chhipi hui thi.

Khel ab one-on-one nahi raha tha.

Yeh teen-on-one tha. Aur Ravi jaanta tha... yeh Arjun ke mamooli gunde nahi the.

Yeh professional qaatil the.
'Barf ke Saaye'.

Jangal ka asli shikaar... ab shuru ho chuka tha.




YAADON KE PEHREDAAR

[LOCATION: GADEN BAUDH MATH – ANDRUNI KAKSH]

Jabke resort ke uss kamre mein saansein ruka hua tha, pahaadon ki goad mein basa Gaden Baudh Math ka roohani khamoshi bhi uss ek kamre mein aakar thehar jaata tha. Yeh math ka sabse gupt, sabse andhera hissa tha. Hawa mein chandan, kapoor aur sadiyon purani prarthnaon ki mehek ek saath ghula hua tha. Deewaron par bane thangka paintings andhere mein saans lete hue mehsoos ho rahe the.

Beech mein baithe Lama Tashi ke aankhein band tha, par unka astitva uss kamre ki har cheez par haavi tha. Unke saamne, zameen par ghutno ke bal, Kitsune (YuKi) ka sir jhuka hua tha.

Lama Tashi ki bhaari awaaz pattharon se takraaya, jaise koi gufa goonj utha ho.



LAMA TASHI: "Aasmaan se toota hua taara... apni roshni zaroor kho chuka hai, Kitsune. Lekin girte waqt woh Qayamat ki garmi apne andar samet laaya hai. Tumhara zimmedaari sirf uske zakhmi jism ka nahi, uska bikhra hua rooh ka hifazat karna hai. Woh ab ek aisa daulat hai jiski koi keemat nahi, aur jise lootne ke liye Shaitan khud zameen par utar aaya hai."


KITSUNE: (Awaaz mein bebasi) :"Uss garmi ko woh khud mehsoos nahi kar paa raha, Lama. Uski aankhon mein ek aisa khaamoshi hai... jismein sirf aakhri tabahi ka shor hai. Apni pehchaan ki ek chingari tak nahi. Agar usse zara bhi yaad hota, toh woh meri aankhon mein chhipa fikr aur Aarav ke chehre par ubalte laave ko ek pal mein pehchaan leta."

Tabhi andhere se ek fauladi awaaz ne Kitsune ke shabdon ko cheer diya.

"Khaamoshi kamzori nahi, gehraayi ka nishaani hota hai, Lama. Aur samandar ki gehraayi mein hi toofan saans lete hain."

Phoenix (Aarav) andhere se nikal kar uss roshni mein aaya jo ek ghee ke diye se phail raha tha. Uska aankhein ek shikari baaz ki tarah aage dekh raha tha, jaise woh deewaron ke paar bhi dekh sakta ho.


PHOENIX (AARAV): "Woh sab kuch bhoola nahi hai. Uska yaadon par bas jakhmon ka zang lag gaya hai. Chehre dhundhle ho gaye hain, par unn chehron se mile dard ka ehsaas aaj bhi taza hai. Woh aag... woh cheekhein... uske zehen mein nahi, uski rooh mein qaid hain. Ek Shezaada jiska takht uska yaadein tha, aur woh takht ab cheen liya gaya hai."

LAMA TASHI: (Dheere se apni aankhein kholte hain. Unke nazron mein gyaan nahi, ek aisa chetavni tha jo waqt ko rok de.)
"Aur yahi baat usse is duniya ka sabse khatarnaak hathiyaar banata hai! Uska dimaag ab ek band darwaza nahi... woh Pralay ka taaboot hai. Ek aisi taqat jise dushman apni jeet samajhta hai, aur jise humein is duniya ke antt se pehle kaabu mein rakhna hai. Agar woh taaboot khul gaya... toh yeh duniya uss Shezaade ka kahani nahi, uska tabahi ka kissa sunega."


KITSUNE: (Uthkar, awaaz mein ek nayi zimmedaari ke saath)
"Toh humara maqsad kya hai, Lama?"


LAMA TASHI: "Tum dono uske saaye nahi... uski yaadon ke pehredaar banoge. Tumhare jung sirf dushman se nahi, uske ateet se bhi hai. Tumhein usse bachana bhi hai... aur waqt aane par, is duniya ko uss se bachana bhi hai. Jaao! Kyunki waqt ka ret nahi, zindagiyan phisal raha hain. Aur dushman ne apni pehli chaal chal diya hai."




USOOLON KI QEEMAT

[LOCATION: RESORT – STAFF QUARTERS – RAAT]

Resort ke chamak-damak ke peeche ek aur duniya tha. Geeli deewaron, seelan ki mehek aur saste disinfectant ki gandh waala. Yeh staff quarters ka pichla hissa tha, jahan andhera bhi zyada thaka hua aur gehra lagta tha.

Yahin par, parchhaiyon ko apna saathi banaye, Vikrant aage badh raha tha. Woh Aryan ke sabse puraane aur wafadaar aadmiyon mein se tha. Uski ragon mein khoon ke saath Aryan bhai ka ek usool daudta tha—"Begunahon par haath nahi uthana." Aur Arjun ke Manali aane ke baad se hi, usse yeh usool toot-ta hua mehsoos ho raha tha.

Usne Arjun ke Security Head ko ek band pade store room mein ghuste dekha. Ek aisi jagah jahan kisi ko nahi jaana chahiye tha. Vikrant deewar se sat kar aage badha, uske saans lene ki awaaz bhi usse dhokha de sakti thi. Usne darwaze ke daraar se andar jhaanka, aur jo dekha, usse uska rooh tak kaanp gayi.

Andar do log the. Security Head... aur ek anjaan saaya.

Woh saaya roshni mein aaya. Lamba, patla jism. Lambe baal jo uske chehre par a rahe the. Gaal par ek purane zakhm ka nishaan, jaise kisi janwar ne panja maara ho. Par sabse darawni cheez uska aankhein theen—bilkul khaali, jaise unke peeche koi insaan nahi, sirf maut ka intezaar tha.



(NAYE KIRDAAR KI ENTRY – KAI)

Woh ek professional mercenary tha. Ek bhoot, jise Arjun ne khaas iss kaam ke liye kiraye par liya tha. Kai usoolon par nahi, keemat par kaam karta tha.


SECURITY HEAD: (Awaaz mein ek ajeeb sa ghabrahat) "Target confirm hai. Ladki, Jaanvi. Kal Monastery mein... kaam saaf hona chahiye."

Kai ne jawaab nahi diya, bas gardan halki sa hilaaya. Jab woh bola, toh uska awaaz sookhe patton par rengte saanp jaisa tha.



KAI: "Kaam ho jaayega. Par Rathore Junior ko yaad dila dena, iss kaam ki keemat sirf paisa nahi hai... uska khamoshi bhi hai. Kissa khatam hone ke baad, main kabhi tha hi nahi."


Vikrant ka dimaag sunn ho gaya. Dhokha. Arjun ne apne hi bhai ko dhokha diya tha. Yeh sabaq sikhaane ki nahi, ek begunah ko mitaane ki saazish tha. Usne bina awaaz kiye wahan se hatna chaha, par uska kismat ne saath chhod diya. Uska pair neeche pade kaanch ke ek toote hue tukde par pad gaya.



KRRNNCH!

Awaaz mamuli tha, par uss khamoshi mein ek dhamake jaisa laga.

Ek palak jhapk mein Kai insaan se hathiyaar ban gaya. Woh aisi tezi se palta jaise hawa ne rukh badla ho. Uska khaali aankhein seedha daraar ke uss paar Vikrant ki dehshat-zada aankhon se takraaya.

Sochne ka waqt nahi tha. Vikrant bhaaga.

Par Kai shikaar tha, aur Vikrant shikaari. Woh ek saaye ke tarah uske peeche lapka, uske kadmon ki awaaz tak nahi aa raha tha. Vikrant ne jaan bachane ke liye daudte hue paas pada ek zang laga lohe ka rod uthaya aur palat kar poori taqat se vaar kiya.


Kai ne ek hairaan kar dene waala furti se uss rod ko hawa mein hi pakad liya. Uska kalai tak nahi hila.

Ek jhatke mein usne rod Vikrant ke haath se cheen liya. Isse pehle ki Vikrant apna galti samajh paata, Kai ne wahi rod ghuma kar uske ghutne par de maara.


CRACK!

Haddi ke tootne ki wehshi awaaz uss tang corridor mein goonj gaya.

Vikrant ki cheekh uske gale mein hi ghut gaya jab woh zameen par gira. Kai uske upar shikaari ke tarah jhuka. Uska aankhon mein na gussa tha, na nafrat. Sirf ek peshewar khamoshi.



KAI: "Galat waqt... galat jagah."

Usne rod uthaaya aur Vikrant ke doosre haath ke kalai par maar diya. Ek aur dardnaak cheekh. Phir usne rod Vikrant ke gardan par rakha aur dheere se dabav badhaya, bas itna ki saans rukne lage.



KAI (sargoshi mein, jaise koi raaz bata raha ho): "Apne Aryan bhai ko paigaam dena... Arjun Rathore ke khel mein usoolon ke jagah nahi... sirf nateeje hote hain."


Yeh keh kar usne rod hata liya aur Vikrant ko toote jism aur toote himmat ke saath wahin tadapta hua chhod diya. Woh andhere mein aise ghul gaya jaise kabhi tha hi nahi.


Yeh sirf ek warning nahi tha. Yeh ek elaan-e-jung tha. Ek khooni elaan... ki Manali mein ab Aryan ke nahi, Arjun Rathore ke niyam chalenge.





QAYAMAT KA NAACH

[LOCATION: RAVI’S ISOLATED ROOM – RAAT]

Kamre mein teen saaye the, aur ek shikaar. Kam se kam, woh yahi soch rahe the.

Bistar ke neeche, Sia ka dil uske seene mein ek qaid parinde ki tarah phadphada raha tha. Upar khade saaye ke boot uski aankhon se bas kuch inch door the. Usne apni cheekh ko gale mein hi ghont diya.

Jaise hi teesre saaye ne bistar ko khanjar se uthane ke liye haath badhaya, andhera zinda ho gaya.

Ravi ek toofan ke tarah nahi, Qayamat ke tarah utha. Usne paas rakha bhaari table lamp uthaya, lekin phenka nahi. Usne use ek pendulum ki tarah ghumakar pehle saaye ke thermal goggles par de maara.


CRASH!

Kaanch aur high-tech plastic ke tukde saaye ki aankhon mein ghus gaye. Uski cheekh nikli, par sirf ek pal ke liye. Isse pehle ki uska cheekh poori hota, Ravi uske saamne tha. Usne saaye ke khanjar wale haath ko pakda, uske kohni ko apne ghutne par rakha aur doosre haath se uska kalai ko neeche ki taraf mod diya.

SNAP!

Kohni ke joint ke ulti disha mein tootne ki ek geeli, wehshi awaaz aayi. Par Ravi wahin nahi ruka. Usne qaatil ke hi toote hue haath se khanjar cheena aur uski gardan ke aar-paar utaar diya.

Ek saans... aur pehla saaya zameen par tha. Zinda nahi.

Doosre do saaye, apne saathi ke achanak khatm ho jaane se chaunke, par woh professional the. Unhone Ravi par ek saath hamla kiya. Unke khanjar hawa ko cheerte hue maut ka sangeet gaa rahe the.

Lekin Ravi unse lad nahi raha tha. Woh naach raha tha. Maut ka ek aisa naach jise Sia apni zindagi mein kabhi nahi bhool paayegi.

Woh ek khanjar ke neeche se jhuka, doosre ko apni baazu se deflect kiya, jisse uske haath par ek gehra ghaav laga. Par uske chehre par dard ka nishaan tak nahi tha. Usne doosre qaatil ke hamle ki taaqat ka istemaal karte hue use apni taraf kheencha aur use teesre qaatil ke saamne ek insaani dhaal ki tarah kar diya.

Teesre qaatil ka khanjar apne hi saathi ke seene mein utar gaya.

Uska aankhein dehshat se phail gaya. Par Ravi ne use sambhalne ka ek pal bhi nahi diya. Usne zakhmi qaatil ko ek taraf dhakela aur aakhri bache hue saaye ke taraf badha. Usne zameen par pade Hunter ke pistol ko pair se uchhalkar hawa mein pakda.

Par goli nahi chalaya.

Woh qaatil ke itne kareeb pahunch chuka tha ki pistol ka barrel uske maathe par lage thermal goggle se takra raha tha.


RAVI (uska awaaz andhere se bhi zyada thanda aur khaali tha): "Usse kaho... usne kutte bheje hain... ek sher ke shikaar ke liye."

Aur phir usne trigger nahi, pistol ke pichle hisse (slide) se qaatil ke naak par poori taaqat se vaar kiya.


KRRR-UNCH!

Naak ka haddi toot kar uske dimaag mein ghus gayi. Woh bina koi awaaz kiye, ek murde ki tarah pichhe gir gaya.

Teen professional qaatil. Tees second se bhi kam.

Kamre mein ab sirf Ravi ke tez saanson ke awaaz tha. Aur khoon ka bhaari, lohe jaisa mehek.

Ravi dheere se utha. Uske haath se khoon tapak kar zameen par safed barf par lahu ka pehli boondon ki kahani likh raha tha. Woh dheere-dheere chalta hua kamre ke beech mein aaya. Usne neeche pade jismon ko nahi dekha.

Usne upar dekha.

Seedha uss smoke detector mein lage camera ke lens mein. Arjun ke aankhon mein.

Uske chehre par na ghussa tha, na jeet. Sirf ek aisa khaamoshi jo hazaar cheekhon se zyada darawni tha. Usne apna khoon se sana haath uthaya aur usse apna aankhon ke saamne laaya. Phir, behad dheere se, usne apniaek ungli se apne hi gale par ek lakeer kheencha.

Ek vaada. Ek paigaam. Ek maut ka farmaan.

Arjun Rathore ne ek pyaada samjha tha. Uss raat, usse pata chala ki shatranj ke uss paar... ek Qayamat baitha hai , ek doosra Badshah.

Aur uss Badshah ke chehre par ek an-kaha paigaam saaf likha tha...


"Welcome to my warzone."



RAAKH BHI NAHI MILEGA

Par khel abhi khatm nahi hua tha.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia kaanpte hue yeh sab dekh rahi thi. Uski aankhon mein ab sirf darr nahi, ek aisi hairat thi jise samajhna namumkin tha.

Ravi ne camera ke taraf se nazar hataya aur kamre ko dekha. Ek aam insaan is manzar ko dekh kar cheekh padta ya behosh ho jaata. Chaar lashein. Khoon se sane farsh aur deewar.

Par Ravi... usne ek lambi, thandi saans liya, jaise usne abhi-abhi ek halka sa exercise khatm kiya ho. Uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi tha. Jaise yeh uske liye roz ka kaam ho.

Woh bina kisi jaldbaazi ke, behad methodical tareeke se kaam par lag gaya.

Usne sabse pehle bed se saari chaadarein utaara. Bistar ke neeche se Sia ne dekha ki usne ek-ek karke chaaron lashon ko un chaadaron mein lapetna shuru kiya. Uske movements ek surgeon ki tarah sateek the. Koi awaaz nahi, koi ghabrahat nahi.

Phir, usne un bhaari gathriyon ko, ek-ek karke, balcony ki taraf kheench kar le jaana shuru kiya. Sia ko laga ki woh shayad unhein neeche phenk dega. Par Ravi ne aisa nahi kiya. Resort ke uss wing ke theek peeche ek ghana, andhera jungle tha, jahan ek gehri khaai tha. Ravi ne ek-ek gathri ko balcony ki railing par rakha aur bina kisi awaaz ke, neeche uss andhere mein dhakel diya jahan se unka suraag milna namumkin tha.

Char insaan... jaise kabhi the hi nahi.

Iske baad woh wapas kamre mein aaya. Sia ne socha ab woh thak kar rukega. Par woh ruka nahi. Usne bathroom se paani ka baalti aur kuch saaf karne wale kapde liye aur zameen par ghutno ke bal baith gaya.

Bistar ke neeche se Sia usse ek bhoot ki tarah kaam karte hue dekh rahi thi. Woh farsh se khoon ka har ek daag, deewar par lage har ek cheente ko aise saaf kar raha tha, jaise koi crime scene cleaner ho. Usne toote hue lamp ke tukde, qaatilon ke gire hue hathiyaar, har cheez ko ikattha kiya aur ek bag mein bhar liya.

Pandrah minute ke andar, woh kamra waisa hi tha jaisa pehle tha. Bas hawa mein khoon aur disinfectant ka halka sa mehek baaki tha. Jaise kuch hua hi nahi tha. Jaise Qayamat aaya, apna kaam kiya, aur bina koi nishaan chhode chala gaya.

Ab Ravi palta. Woh seedha bistar ke paas aaya aur neeche jhuka.

Andhere mein, Sia ko sirf uski do aankhein dikhayi de rahi theen, jo chaand ki roshni mein ajeeb tarah se chamak rahi theen. Un aankhon mein ab woh Ravi nahi tha jise woh school mein jaanti thi.

Ravi ne apna khoon se saaf kiya hua, par ab bhi zakhmi haath uski taraf badhaya.

Uska awaaz ek sargoshi se zyada nahi tha, par Sia ke liye woh ek dhamaka tha. Ek aisa sawaal jo is trip ki, aur shayad uski zindagi ki, disha badalne wala tha.


"Iss khel mein masoomiyat ki keemat maut hota hai, Sia. Main tumhein bacha sakta hoon, par tumhari masoomiyat nahi. Tayyar ho?"

Uska awaaz ab bhi hawa mein tair raha tha jab usne Sia ko dekhe bina aage kaha, jaise woh aane wale kal se baat kar raha ho.

"Kyunki yeh raat toh bas ek trailer tha... asli film toh kal subah Monastery mein shuru hoga."




"Ab batao, Sia... Darr lag raha hai... ya maza aa raha hai?"
Superb update and nice story
 
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