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Thriller BHANU PARTAP SINGH...
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Laude accha accha bol...kisi ko na ho corona
Kya bhai aub to Bharat band hai aur time nhi hai kya update dene ke liye had hoti hai bhai
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Yr koi nhi de rha update it's ok but yr tumko aisa nhi bolna Chahiye Kisi ke barre main and tum isko mjak main le rhe ho na covid-19 ko bhagwan Ka shukria kro tum bche huye ho unse pucho Jo humare liye lge huye hai POLICE , DOCTOR U HAVE ASHAMED person
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Black water
Vasudhaiv Kutumbakam
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Bhai band kar hi de story
Start se hi ye hi haal h
Ek to itna late update dete ho vo bhi chota s
Start se hi ye hi haal h
Ek to itna late update dete ho vo bhi chota s
BHANU PARTAP SINGH...............
Raat ko hum teeno ekhte hue.... Rex ke hath me bandage lgaa dee thi...... ...
Rex......... Waise bhanu kamaal hai........... In matcho me jo bhi teer tumne hawa me chalaye sab nishane me hee laggee .... Koi bhi teer galat nahi lggaa........... Kab seekha tumne yeh sab........
main.......... Yaar sab ek secret hai.........par tum mujhe ek baat btao ........... Aur kitne universe hai...........
rex............. Total 7 universe hai ........... Jiska hume pta nahi hai ......... Jab bhi yaha se koi yaaaa waha ee koi humare yaha universal leauge ko attaa hai toh unse baat krna mana hai........ Hi hello toh kr sakte ho unke planets ke baare me puchna mana hai...........
Main......... Woh kyuu.....
ReX........... Maine apne pita g se pucha tha......par unhe bhi nahi ptaa.......... Par shayad GREYROCK ko pta ho.............
main...... Chalo subh unse hee puch lete hai.......
Fir hum teeno hee apne apne bed par sau gye...........
Jab main sau raha tha tabhi ek hansii mere sapne me gunjne lgiii.........
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH tu hai rakshak......... Aayynga..... Sabka bdla lunga....... Puri kali sena ka bdla lunga........... Hahahahahah jaldi he azad ho jaunga.......... Sab taraf khoraam honga........ Andher fir raaz krega........Hahahahahahaha...... Tere purvaj bhi nahi rok paye the............ Sabka bdla lunga.......... Jee le apni zindgi............
main....... Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...
stark..... Kya hua.......koi bura sapna dekha......
fir maine saarrii baat btaiiii rex aur stark ko....
rex...... Subh hee greyrock se baat krni pdegi.....
Main...... Haaan main khud kar lunga...
Stark...... Okkk... Ab sau jaye hai......... Subh se classes bhi hai.......
fir hum teeno sau gye par meri ankho se neend gayab thi....... Main utha aur aise he chalne lgga....aur chalte chalte bahar ground par aagya .....jaha subh subh.. meditation krte hai....... Main bahi baith gya aur apni aankhe bnd kiii aur dhyaaaan lgane baith gya....... Aur meri indriya jagrit ho gayiii..... Main fir apne lok dhartilok par tha........ Jaha subh ho gayi thi.......
Maa mere room me thiii....meri body ke uper jal chidak rahi thi.......... Maine iss baar unko chunne ka pryaas nahi kiyaa bass unhe dekhta rah aur mehsoos krta raha........ Maa jab mere room se bahar jaa rahi thi tab ek dum se peeche mudker dekha aur wapis apne room me chale gye jaha papa bed tea pee rahe the.....
Maa.......... Aajjjiii..sunte ho....... Aaj mujhe aisa lgga jai main bhanu oo mehsos kr paa rahi hu....... Jab main uske room me gayii jal chidak rahi thi tab aisa lgga jaise woh mere peche peche ghum raha hai......
papa....... Sach..... Main aaj hee gurudev se baat krta....hu..... Kya pta koi subh sanket ho......
maa....... Haaan jaldi kijiye... Aur mujhe batiye..... Tab tak main apne teeno bacho ko bhi jaga deti hu.......
maa fir neil vijay aur aditya ke room me gye....... Unhe uthaya....aur jaldi se ready hone ko bol room se bahar aagyii aur breakfast bnanae chale gae........udher kitchen me dono chachiya pgle se khana bnaa rahi thi........
Badi chachi........ Didi aap rhne do....... Aap hume koi kaam nahi krne dete...... Pls dii.... Aj humme khana bnane do....
Maa...... Choti.....aisi baat nahi hai.......chal aaj tum dono khana bnao.......main dining par hu.....
Idher mera dill bahut khush thaa..... Main samjh gya thaa ....... Tabhi mere ko kisi ne hilaya jissse mera dhyaan bhang ho gyaa........ Mujhe bahut gussaa a raha thaa..... Maine apni aankhe kholliii aur apne hath me ek aag kaa gola tyaar kiya par jab samne dekha toh main shant ho gyaa...... Kyukii samne raylo mam khadii thi jinki bjh se main dhyaaan lagana seekha hu........
raylo....... Its good bhanu ..... Tumne apni saari indriya jagrit kr lii hai......... 1st year ke students ke liye yeh impossible hai..... Par mujhe phle se pta tha tum yeh kr loge.......
main..... Thanku miss..... Yeh bass apki bdolat he huya hai.... Brna main kaha sheekh pata........
raylo....... Oh ....nahi bhanu...... Main toh bass chalna shikhya tha...... Par manjil toh tumne hee paaar kii hai.......
Tabhi sab student aane lggee..... Meditation class bhi shuru huiii.... Main fir dhyaan me baith gya aur apni soch me ek jagh bnai....... Jaha har tarah ke hatyaar the....aur main unse ldne ka abhyaas krne lggaa ...jo bhi maine apni warrior classes me seekha tha......
Meditation class over huuii hum sab uth gye.....aur apne apne room me jaane lggee... Tabhi lara humaare pass aaiii aur uske sath 1 ldki aur thiii.......
lara....... Hi bhanu.....
main..... Hii... Lara.....
lara ne rex kaa hath pakda aur apne magic se usse thyk kr diya tha......
rex....... Thanks....princess.....
Lara....... Bhanu .... Yeh humne apke liye kiya hai....... Brna humme koi shauk nahi hai......kisi ke baare me sochne kaa.....
Stark.......... Sorry princess..... Par kya main kuch bol sakta huu.......
lara............. StArk........ Shayad tum bhul Gaye ho tum kiske samne baat kr rhe ho..... Hum fairyland ki princess hai....... Iss ghushtakhi ke liye hum tumhe saja bhi de sakte hai ..........
main ......... Laara shayad tum bhull chuki ho yeh 1 school hai aur yaha par hum sab barabar hai.......... Aur agar aisi baat hai toh hum KING OFF ALL UNIVERSES hai....... tabhi waha zordaar bijli kadkne lgiiii....aur ek shahi paushaak maine pehni hui thi.....cir par ek taaj tha...... Usme 7 chote chote hole the...... Aur 1 hole me mera healing stone tha............ Maine neeche dekha toh sab apne ghutno par the.....aur sabka hath muthi band krke apne cine par tha........sab teacher bhi bahar aa gya..... Woh bhi same waise hee ho gye jaisa sab baithe hue the........ Maine apni ankhe bnd ki aur man ko shant krne lggaa.... Dhere dher sab normal ho gya..........
main apne purane kapdo me tha..... Sba uth chuke the.....
GREYROCK.........BHANU yeh sab kya tha.......
Main....... Sir bas aise he mjaak mjaak me bol diya aur yeh sab ho gya......
Greyrock......... Bhanu mjaak mjaak me boli gyi cheeje khatarnaak roop le sakti hai......... Aur tumhe healing stone kab millaa........
main....... Sorry sir....... Aur ussi din millaa tha jab main behosh pda milla tha apko........
greyrock......... Theek hai...par bache jaisile jaise tumhari shaktiya badhti jayegiii waise waise uss shaitaan ki shiel kamzor hotii jayegi......
main..... Okk sir ..... Aage se aisa nahi hoga......
Fir teacher log challe gyee... Udher bache MAIN,STARK,REX,LARA& WOH LADKI joh lara ke sath ayii thii....
lara...... Sorryyy bhanu......... Bolo stark kya kehna chahte ho.....
Stark...... Princess....uss din main prince ke piche nahi ayyaa thhaa....... Mujhe queen of fairyland ne bheja thaa apke peeche........
Lara....... Mere peeche par kyuuuu.......
rex...... Uss din tumpar humla hone bala tha... Jo mujhe baad me stark ne bataya.......
Lara....... Par naa toh maa ne himme kuch btaya naa hee apne....
rex......... Maine hee mana kiya tha unhe....... btane ko......
lara.......apne par kyu....
rex.......jab tumhe hum par yakke hee nahi thaa toh uske baad janne kaa kya faida tha..... Tum gusse me aakar naa jannee kya kya bol kar gayi thiiii.... Uss liye.....humne maharani ko mana kr diya tha.........
lara....... Sorryyy prince..... Naa jaane hum murkh ....uss din kya kya apse bol kar chale gye ..... Humme maaf kr dijiye ......
rex...... Maffiii........ Hahahah.... Him toh apse naraaz hee nahi thee..... Humee pta jab apko pta chalega .....taab aap maafi mange ge hee......... Par ab humara woh rishta nahi reh sakta.......
Lara...... Nahi prince aise naa boliye...... hum apke bina nahi reh sakte....... Humme yaa humare dill se hee puchiye......apse ladne ke baad kaise yeh har din har raat rota raha...
sorrry prince.......
Main......... Rex..... Ab naa tadpao... Lara ko.......... Pyaar 1 anmol bastu hai.....yeh har kisi ke nasseb me nahi hota ......... Pyaar shabd.....ek aihsas hai jiske hone matr se hee dill har dabab ko bhulla deta hai ..........
lara...... I LOVE YOU REX.......
Rex....... I LOVE YOU TOO LARA........par ab kabhi bhi puri baat janne binna gussaa nahi krogiii....
Lara........ Humm bachan dete hai......
rex........ Tum jarur humse chote hoge......par baate tum badi badi krte ho............aur tumhari baato se lagta hai tumhe bhi ISHQ hua.........
main........ Haan main tum sab se chota hu pr idhar aakr mera brain aur meri adat sab badh chukii hai...... Aur mere pyaaar kaa naam hai..
SHIKHA.................
Raat ko hum teeno ekhte hue.... Rex ke hath me bandage lgaa dee thi...... ...
Rex......... Waise bhanu kamaal hai........... In matcho me jo bhi teer tumne hawa me chalaye sab nishane me hee laggee .... Koi bhi teer galat nahi lggaa........... Kab seekha tumne yeh sab........
main.......... Yaar sab ek secret hai.........par tum mujhe ek baat btao ........... Aur kitne universe hai...........
rex............. Total 7 universe hai ........... Jiska hume pta nahi hai ......... Jab bhi yaha se koi yaaaa waha ee koi humare yaha universal leauge ko attaa hai toh unse baat krna mana hai........ Hi hello toh kr sakte ho unke planets ke baare me puchna mana hai...........
Main......... Woh kyuu.....
ReX........... Maine apne pita g se pucha tha......par unhe bhi nahi ptaa.......... Par shayad GREYROCK ko pta ho.............
main...... Chalo subh unse hee puch lete hai.......
Fir hum teeno hee apne apne bed par sau gye...........
Jab main sau raha tha tabhi ek hansii mere sapne me gunjne lgiii.........
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH tu hai rakshak......... Aayynga..... Sabka bdla lunga....... Puri kali sena ka bdla lunga........... Hahahahahah jaldi he azad ho jaunga.......... Sab taraf khoraam honga........ Andher fir raaz krega........Hahahahahahaha...... Tere purvaj bhi nahi rok paye the............ Sabka bdla lunga.......... Jee le apni zindgi............
main....... Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...
stark..... Kya hua.......koi bura sapna dekha......
fir maine saarrii baat btaiiii rex aur stark ko....
rex...... Subh hee greyrock se baat krni pdegi.....
Main...... Haaan main khud kar lunga...
Stark...... Okkk... Ab sau jaye hai......... Subh se classes bhi hai.......
fir hum teeno sau gye par meri ankho se neend gayab thi....... Main utha aur aise he chalne lgga....aur chalte chalte bahar ground par aagya .....jaha subh subh.. meditation krte hai....... Main bahi baith gya aur apni aankhe bnd kiii aur dhyaaaan lgane baith gya....... Aur meri indriya jagrit ho gayiii..... Main fir apne lok dhartilok par tha........ Jaha subh ho gayi thi.......
Maa mere room me thiii....meri body ke uper jal chidak rahi thi.......... Maine iss baar unko chunne ka pryaas nahi kiyaa bass unhe dekhta rah aur mehsoos krta raha........ Maa jab mere room se bahar jaa rahi thi tab ek dum se peeche mudker dekha aur wapis apne room me chale gye jaha papa bed tea pee rahe the.....
Maa.......... Aajjjiii..sunte ho....... Aaj mujhe aisa lgga jai main bhanu oo mehsos kr paa rahi hu....... Jab main uske room me gayii jal chidak rahi thi tab aisa lgga jaise woh mere peche peche ghum raha hai......
papa....... Sach..... Main aaj hee gurudev se baat krta....hu..... Kya pta koi subh sanket ho......
maa....... Haaan jaldi kijiye... Aur mujhe batiye..... Tab tak main apne teeno bacho ko bhi jaga deti hu.......
maa fir neil vijay aur aditya ke room me gye....... Unhe uthaya....aur jaldi se ready hone ko bol room se bahar aagyii aur breakfast bnanae chale gae........udher kitchen me dono chachiya pgle se khana bnaa rahi thi........
Badi chachi........ Didi aap rhne do....... Aap hume koi kaam nahi krne dete...... Pls dii.... Aj humme khana bnane do....
Maa...... Choti.....aisi baat nahi hai.......chal aaj tum dono khana bnao.......main dining par hu.....
Idher mera dill bahut khush thaa..... Main samjh gya thaa ....... Tabhi mere ko kisi ne hilaya jissse mera dhyaan bhang ho gyaa........ Mujhe bahut gussaa a raha thaa..... Maine apni aankhe kholliii aur apne hath me ek aag kaa gola tyaar kiya par jab samne dekha toh main shant ho gyaa...... Kyukii samne raylo mam khadii thi jinki bjh se main dhyaaan lagana seekha hu........
raylo....... Its good bhanu ..... Tumne apni saari indriya jagrit kr lii hai......... 1st year ke students ke liye yeh impossible hai..... Par mujhe phle se pta tha tum yeh kr loge.......
main..... Thanku miss..... Yeh bass apki bdolat he huya hai.... Brna main kaha sheekh pata........
raylo....... Oh ....nahi bhanu...... Main toh bass chalna shikhya tha...... Par manjil toh tumne hee paaar kii hai.......
Tabhi sab student aane lggee..... Meditation class bhi shuru huiii.... Main fir dhyaan me baith gya aur apni soch me ek jagh bnai....... Jaha har tarah ke hatyaar the....aur main unse ldne ka abhyaas krne lggaa ...jo bhi maine apni warrior classes me seekha tha......
Meditation class over huuii hum sab uth gye.....aur apne apne room me jaane lggee... Tabhi lara humaare pass aaiii aur uske sath 1 ldki aur thiii.......
lara....... Hi bhanu.....
main..... Hii... Lara.....
lara ne rex kaa hath pakda aur apne magic se usse thyk kr diya tha......
rex....... Thanks....princess.....
Lara....... Bhanu .... Yeh humne apke liye kiya hai....... Brna humme koi shauk nahi hai......kisi ke baare me sochne kaa.....
Stark.......... Sorry princess..... Par kya main kuch bol sakta huu.......
lara............. StArk........ Shayad tum bhul Gaye ho tum kiske samne baat kr rhe ho..... Hum fairyland ki princess hai....... Iss ghushtakhi ke liye hum tumhe saja bhi de sakte hai ..........
main ......... Laara shayad tum bhull chuki ho yeh 1 school hai aur yaha par hum sab barabar hai.......... Aur agar aisi baat hai toh hum KING OFF ALL UNIVERSES hai....... tabhi waha zordaar bijli kadkne lgiiii....aur ek shahi paushaak maine pehni hui thi.....cir par ek taaj tha...... Usme 7 chote chote hole the...... Aur 1 hole me mera healing stone tha............ Maine neeche dekha toh sab apne ghutno par the.....aur sabka hath muthi band krke apne cine par tha........sab teacher bhi bahar aa gya..... Woh bhi same waise hee ho gye jaisa sab baithe hue the........ Maine apni ankhe bnd ki aur man ko shant krne lggaa.... Dhere dher sab normal ho gya..........
main apne purane kapdo me tha..... Sba uth chuke the.....
GREYROCK.........BHANU yeh sab kya tha.......
Main....... Sir bas aise he mjaak mjaak me bol diya aur yeh sab ho gya......
Greyrock......... Bhanu mjaak mjaak me boli gyi cheeje khatarnaak roop le sakti hai......... Aur tumhe healing stone kab millaa........
main....... Sorry sir....... Aur ussi din millaa tha jab main behosh pda milla tha apko........
greyrock......... Theek hai...par bache jaisile jaise tumhari shaktiya badhti jayegiii waise waise uss shaitaan ki shiel kamzor hotii jayegi......
main..... Okk sir ..... Aage se aisa nahi hoga......
Fir teacher log challe gyee... Udher bache MAIN,STARK,REX,LARA& WOH LADKI joh lara ke sath ayii thii....
lara...... Sorryyy bhanu......... Bolo stark kya kehna chahte ho.....
Stark...... Princess....uss din main prince ke piche nahi ayyaa thhaa....... Mujhe queen of fairyland ne bheja thaa apke peeche........
Lara....... Mere peeche par kyuuuu.......
rex...... Uss din tumpar humla hone bala tha... Jo mujhe baad me stark ne bataya.......
Lara....... Par naa toh maa ne himme kuch btaya naa hee apne....
rex......... Maine hee mana kiya tha unhe....... btane ko......
lara.......apne par kyu....
rex.......jab tumhe hum par yakke hee nahi thaa toh uske baad janne kaa kya faida tha..... Tum gusse me aakar naa jannee kya kya bol kar gayi thiiii.... Uss liye.....humne maharani ko mana kr diya tha.........
lara....... Sorryyy prince..... Naa jaane hum murkh ....uss din kya kya apse bol kar chale gye ..... Humme maaf kr dijiye ......
rex...... Maffiii........ Hahahah.... Him toh apse naraaz hee nahi thee..... Humee pta jab apko pta chalega .....taab aap maafi mange ge hee......... Par ab humara woh rishta nahi reh sakta.......
Lara...... Nahi prince aise naa boliye...... hum apke bina nahi reh sakte....... Humme yaa humare dill se hee puchiye......apse ladne ke baad kaise yeh har din har raat rota raha...
sorrry prince.......
Main......... Rex..... Ab naa tadpao... Lara ko.......... Pyaar 1 anmol bastu hai.....yeh har kisi ke nasseb me nahi hota ......... Pyaar shabd.....ek aihsas hai jiske hone matr se hee dill har dabab ko bhulla deta hai ..........
lara...... I LOVE YOU REX.......
Rex....... I LOVE YOU TOO LARA........par ab kabhi bhi puri baat janne binna gussaa nahi krogiii....
Lara........ Humm bachan dete hai......
rex........ Tum jarur humse chote hoge......par baate tum badi badi krte ho............aur tumhari baato se lagta hai tumhe bhi ISHQ hua.........
main........ Haan main tum sab se chota hu pr idhar aakr mera brain aur meri adat sab badh chukii hai...... Aur mere pyaaar kaa naam hai..
SHIKHA.................
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