Main teri gall ton inkaar taan ni si kita. Yaar mera jawab dhyan naal padh main keha ohna te vi awanga. Pehla eh part poora ho jawe. Baki es forum te top class writer paye ne. Main koi vadhiya lekhak wali category ch taan aunda ni. Jinni ku samajh aundi e likhi jana. Mafi mangan wali koi gall ni harek nu apni gall rakhan da hak e. Meri taan iko request hai ke harek part te comment karo taki banda kahani nu ose hisab naal dhal lawe.
koi raula ni harjas ji...bas thoda vicharan da matbhed hai. oh veer vi mainu tanhi salah dinda hai je usnu kahani naal pyar hai. par meri apni hi alag shaiali e likhan di. main asli characters nu tadfa dinna te veer chahuda e ke usdi bhain di fuddi ch hune lann chalya jawe. bas ehi hKi Raula pe gya tuhada ??