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mast likh rahe ho maja aa raha hai muje..Bhai ye story pahle maine bhi padhi thi par Maine isme ek twist socha hai jo aage aayega and maine iss kahani ko bas shadi Tak hi same rakha hai suhagraat me maine apne kuch points jode hai and haa ye bilkul copy paste nahi hai agar aap likhne ka tarika dekhoge to bilkul alag hai haa kuch lines jo badi hi shaandaar likhi hai pichle writter ne to unko mai nahi ched Raha hu .
Or haa sabse badi baat jis wajah se maine ye story suru ki wo ye ki iss story me bas submission hi submission dikhaya hai writter ne Jo ki no doubt accha tha par agar isme thoda romance ka tadka bhi hota to maja hi aa jata wo Jaan ne ke liye dekhte rahiye .
Or Bhai ye kahani puri bhi nahi ki writter ne unhone November 2023 me hi kahani ko chod diya and ab wo kahani na jane kaha gayab ho gayi mujhe mil bhi nahi Rahi hai. to tabhi maine socha ki thode se or twist ke saath same kahani ka remake likha Jaye.
Now at the end the point is ki kaya mai galat kar raha hu agar aapko kuch issue hai jo ki original writter ko ho sakte hai to wo mujhe private message kare hum uska samadhan karenge. Par mai aapko bata du ki iss kahani ke original writter se kahani likhne se pahle hi meri baat ho gayi thi ki kaya mai iss kahani ko likh sakta hu kisi or site PE to unhone mujhe haa kah Diya and Maine Jo socha wo to hai hi ki mai iss kahani ko or bhi erotic banau .
And dear readers agar aapko bhi problem hai to mai ye story band kar deta hu baki maine isse apne hisaab se likhne ka socha tha .
And baki aap ka nirnay hai agar aap log bologe tabhi next update aage . Depends upon majority so please message .
Update ready ho gaya hai agar positive environment dikha to Aaj raat ko hi update karunga .
For me this story is more than good n deserve appreciation...Bhai ye story pahle maine bhi padhi thi par Maine isme ek twist socha hai jo aage aayega and maine iss kahani ko bas shadi Tak hi same rakha hai suhagraat me maine apne kuch points jode hai and haa ye bilkul copy paste nahi hai agar aap likhne ka tarika dekhoge to bilkul alag hai haa kuch lines jo badi hi shaandaar likhi hai pichle writter ne to unko mai nahi ched Raha hu .
Or haa sabse badi baat jis wajah se maine ye story suru ki wo ye ki iss story me bas submission hi submission dikhaya hai writter ne Jo ki no doubt accha tha par agar isme thoda romance ka tadka bhi hota to maja hi aa jata wo Jaan ne ke liye dekhte rahiye .
Or Bhai ye kahani puri bhi nahi ki writter ne unhone November 2023 me hi kahani ko chod diya and ab wo kahani na jane kaha gayab ho gayi mujhe mil bhi nahi Rahi hai. to tabhi maine socha ki thode se or twist ke saath same kahani ka remake likha Jaye.
Now at the end the point is ki kaya mai galat kar raha hu agar aapko kuch issue hai jo ki original writter ko ho sakte hai to wo mujhe private message kare hum uska samadhan karenge. Par mai aapko bata du ki iss kahani ke original writter se kahani likhne se pahle hi meri baat ho gayi thi ki kaya mai iss kahani ko likh sakta hu kisi or site PE to unhone mujhe haa kah Diya and Maine Jo socha wo to hai hi ki mai iss kahani ko or bhi erotic banau .
And dear readers agar aapko bhi problem hai to mai ye story band kar deta hu baki maine isse apne hisaab se likhne ka socha tha .
And baki aap ka nirnay hai agar aap log bologe tabhi next update aage . Depends upon majority so please message .
Update ready ho gaya hai agar positive environment dikha to Aaj raat ko hi update karunga .
Brother I come online daily but I am not seeing any progress so I think that people may not like it . So I stopped it sorry for in convince.For me this story is more than good n deserve appreciation...
But for you I have an advice brother... Your past record is very bad... You have started 5 story has not completed any of one... So wheather to focus on comments stuff you have to pay attention on completing your story if readers likes it... expect few negetive comments you should focus on good comments...
Your records is very poor brother... Sorry to say... I couldn't think anything in this comment more then a excuse...
Update was ready on 13th Jan since then you haven't post that... Why... ??? Where are negetive comments after that...
Honestly this story n you just passing an excuse to me and your readers...![]()
Mil gayi story thanksmast likh rahe ho maja aa raha hai muje..
bas indian pics gif use karo
twist laao its good..
bas vo mangalsutra ho permanent red bangels sidnur bhi or ho sake to hot hot kapre like newly married wife pahen kar rahena pare ab maa ko with romance
its good.. am liking it
AND YES THAT ORIGINAL STORY IS STILL GOING ON... LOL
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