Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

[Nadan Dill]

Nixe update bhaii maza aya giea par kar ab new update ka intazar ha bhaiii wating new update

 

[RJ02YOGENDRA]

Pyaar bhara & aakho ko nam krne wala update
waiting for next update

 

[Punnu]

Update 10​

Sonal apne room mein aake Swati ko call karti hai aur apne gharwalo se baat karti hai. Thodi der unse baat karne ke baad woh so jaati hai. ​

Idher Swati jab apne room mein akele hoti hai toh woh Yash ka diya hua kagaj dekhti hai toh usme Yash ka number tha. ​

Number dekh kar Swati ke chehre mein ek muskurahat aajati hai. ​

Swati: Yeh toh bade tezz nikle. Sidha apna number pakda diya. Kya karu abhi call karu ya nhiii. Kar hi leti hu. ​

Phir Swati Yash ko call lagati hai. 2 ring hone ke baad call uthta hai. ​

Swati kuch bolti uske pehle hi udher se ladki ki awaaz aati hai. ​

Swati(Mann mein): Yeh ladki kaun hai jo is waqt iske paas hai. Jarur Ishita hogi. ​

Udher se Ishita Hello Hello karti rehti hai. ​

Yash: Kiska call hai Ishu. ​

Ishita: Pata nhi bhai. Koi bol hi nhi raha hai. ​

Yash: Dikhaa mujhe. ​

Phir Ishita phone deke waha se chali jaati hai. ​

Yash: Hello.​

Swati: Hello. ​

Yash: Kaun. ​

Swati: Kisko kisko apna number diya hai jo pehchan bhi nhi paaye.​

Yash Swati ke aise bolne se pehchan jaata hai. ​

Yash: Ooo. Hiiiiii. Sorry phone mein pehli baar awaaz suni na isiliye pehchan nhi paaya. ​

Swati: Thikkk hai. ​

Yash: Pahonch gayi tum. ​

Swati: Haaaaa. ​

Yash: Okkk. ​

Swati: Apna number kisliye diya thaa. ​

Yash: Woh toh aise hi de diya thaa. Bura laga. ​

Swati: Agar bura lagta toh call karti. ​

Yash: Kyaa kar rahi ho.​

Swati: Kuch nhi bas sone jaa rahi hu. Okk Good Night. ​

Yash: Itni jaldi bhi kyaa hai. ​

Swati: Sorry mujhe neend aarahi hai. Byeee. ​

Yash kuch bolta uske pehle hi Swati call cut kardeti hai aur hasne lagti hai. ​

Udher Yash apna thaga sa chehra leke baith jaata hai par phir achanak uske chehre mein muskurahat aajati hai. ​

Woh ek Good Night ka msg kardeta hai. Jiska reply bhi sang sang aajata hai. ​

Agle din Sonal subah jaldi ready hoke nichhe aajati hai.​

Usne ek white suit pehna tha jo uspe bahot hi jyaada achha lag raha tha. ​

Smita: Toh aaj pehla din hai college ka. Achhe se jaana thik hai. Aur koi problem ho toh Ishita Payal ko boldena woh dekh lengi. ​

Sonal: Jiii. ​

Thodi der mein Raj bhi aajata hai. Woh ek nazar Sonal ko dekhta hai phir bolta hai. ​

Raj: Sonal tum ready hona. ​

Sonal: Jii. Aap breakfast karlijiye phir chalte hai. ​

Raj: Okkk. ​

Phir sab breakfast karne lagte hai. Thodi der mein unka breakfast khatam hojaata hai. ​

Ashok: Raj Sonal ko dhyaan se le jaana. ​

Raj: Jiii papa. Chalee. ​

Sonal: Jiii. ​

Phir Raj aur Sonal car mein baithke jaane lagte hai.​

Raj: Apne documents scholorship letter admission letter leliya naa. ​

Sonal: Jiii. Aapse kuch bolna thaa. ​

Raj: Bolo.​

Sonal: Kya mujhe leke mandir chalenge. Aaj first day hai naa toh mandir mein bhagwan ke darshan karlu. ​

Raj: Thikk hai chalo.​

Phir Raj Sonal ko leke ek mandir mein jaata hai. ​

Sonal: Aap nhi chalenge. ​

Raj: Nhii tum ho aao.​

Sonal: Chaliye naa. Mandir mein aake bhagwan ke darshan naa karna bura hota hai. ​

Raj: Thikk hai chalo. ​

Phir dono Mandir mein jaate hai. ​

Sonal darshan karti hai aur Raj bas haath jor leta hai. ​

Raj: Hogyaaa. ​

Sonal: Jiii chaliye. ​

Phir dono Emperial College aajaate hai. College ke bahar hi Ishita aur Payal khadi thi. ​

Ishita aur Payal: Good Morning Raj Bhaiya. Good Morning Sonal di. ​

Raj: Good Morning Ishu Payal. ​

Sonal: Good Morning. ​

Raj: Sonal main chalta hu. Tum dono isko principal office lejao. ​

Sonal: Andar chaliye naa. ​

Raj: Tum jao naa. Koi problem ho toh call karlena. ​

Sonal: Jiii. ​

Phir Raj waha se chala jaata hai apne office aur yaha Sonal College ke bahar khadi rehti hai.​

Ishita: Chale Sonal di. ​

Sonal: Haa chalo. Pehle mujhe principal ke office le chalo. ​

Payal: Chaliyee. ​

Phir teeno principal ke office aate hai. ​

Sonal: May I come in Sir. ​

Principal: Yess. ​

Sonal andar aati hai toh saamne ek 50+ aged aadmi baithi thi. ​

Sonal: Good Morning Sir. I am Sonal Singh from Jaipur. ​

Principal: Oo. The college topper. Tumhare previous college ke principal ka call aaya thaa she is my college friend. Unhone tumhari bahot tareef ki hai. Umeed hai jo performance tumne waha kiya hai woh yaha bhi dikhaogi. ​

Sonal: I will try my best sir. ​

Principal: Good. Toh tumhare paas scholorship letter hai. ​

Sonal: Yes Sir. Phir Sonal apna letter principal ko deti hai toh woh peon ko bulata hai. ​

Principal: Yeh lejao aur inka admission interior designing ke masters wale course mein kardo. ​

Peon: Yes Sir. Peon waha se chala jaata hai. ​

Principal: So Sonal. Tum yaha kisi flat PG ya hostel mein rehti ho. ​

Sonal: No Sir. Actually mere relatives yaha rehte hai so unke saath. Shayad aapne Kapoor Group of Companies ka naam suna hai. ​

Principal: Yes Yes. Toh kya woh tumhare relatives hai. ​

Sonal: Yes Sir. ​

Principal: Great. Main personally toh nhi jaanta par bahot suna hai unke baare mein. Anyways Best of luck for your new journey. ​

Sonal: Thank You sir. Phir Sonal waha se bahar aajati hai jaha pehle se hi Ishita aur Payal baithe hue the. ​

Dono: Hogyaaa. ​

Sonal: Haaaa. Kya mujhe mera class dikha dogi. ​

Payal: Di. Abhi class mein time hai. Chaliye tab tak aapko college ghuma dete hai. Usme aapka class bhi aajayega. ​

Sonal: Okk. ​

Phir Sonal unndono ke saath college ghumti hai jisme unndono ki aur 2 friends bhi join karti hai. ​

Idher Raj jab office jaata hai toh Yash waha pehle se baitha hua thaa. ​

Raj: Tu kaun hai aur yaha kya kar raha hai. Aur Yash kaha hai. ​

Yash: Subah subah nasha kiya hai yaa neend puri nhi hui hai. Tere saamne hi toh baitha hua hu. ​

Raj: Tu Yash nhi hosakta. Kyoki jo time pe yaa time se pehle kahi pe aajaye woh Yash nhi hosakta. Yeh bol hasne lagta hai. ​

Yash: Hasle beta hasle. Par abse roj time pe aaungaa. ​

Raj: Aur itni meharbaani ka karan. ​

Yash: Ab kalko shaadi hogi meri. Agar time pe sab naa kiya toh biwi naraz hojayegi. Isiliye abhi se practice kar raha hu. ​

Raj: Waahh kyaa baat hai. Aur achanak yeh khayal kyo aaya. ​

Yash: Bass ab bhaiya ki sagai hogyi. 1 mahine baad shaadi hai uske baad toh mera hi number hai na. ​

Raj: Ladki kaun hai. ​

Yash: Kya bol raha hai. Kaisi ladki kaunsi ladki. ​

Raj: Wahi ladki jiske pichhe tu yeh sab kar raha hai. Tujhe achhe se jaanta hu. Chal bata. ​

Yash: Hadbada ke. Nhiii bhaiii aisi koi baat nhi hai. Agar koi hogi toh sabse pehle tujhe hi bataunga promiseee. Waisee Workaholic Raj Kapoor aa late kaise. ​

Raj: Wohhh Sonal ko uske college chorne gaya tha usi mein late hogyaa. ​

Yash: Kyaa baat hai. The Raj Kapoor ek driver ki duty kar raha hai. ​

Raj: Koi driver ki duty nhi hai. Woh yaha pe nayi hai. Isiliye dadi ne order diya hai usko college chorne kaa. ​

Yash: Isko ek tarah se driver hi bolte hai. Lage raho. Achhi baat hai. Waise sirf chorne ke liye bola laane ke liye nhi. ​

Raj: Hogyaa teraa. Ab kaam karle thoda. Aur laane ke liye Aarav ke haa bola hai. ​

Yash: Jii driver ji. Chaliye. Yeh bol hasne lagta hai. Raj bhi has deta hai. ​

Yash ko Raj ka yeh change bahot achha lag raha tha woh bahot khush thaa. ​

Bdiya update bhidu...

 

[Naina]

Meera Yash ko dekh rahi thi uska behaviour uske baat karne ka salikha sab notice kar rahi thi.

Yash se mili nazar ke Meera ke hosh ud gaye....
hua aisa ashar ke Meera ke hosh ud gaye
Too old, too young....

 

[Naina]

Update 12​

Idher Jaipur mein Vicky ko pata chala Sonal ki family wapas aagayi hai. Woh dusre din hi waha jaata hai. ​

Vicky: Good Morning aunty. ​

Meera: Aree Vicky aao. Good Morning. Aaj subah subah yaha kaiseee. ​

Vicky: Bas Sonal se milne aagaya. Waise aaplog kahi gaye the kyaa. Main aaya tha toh ghar band thaa. ​

Meera: Haa woh hum mumbai gaye the humare relatives ke yaha function tha. Aur Sonal toh nhi hai. ​

Vicky: Kahi bahar gayi hai. Thik hai main wait karta hu. ​

Meera: Thikk hai phir baitho 2 saal tak. ​

Vicky: Kyaa 2 saal. ​

Meera: Haaa. Kyo tumhe nhi pata. Sonal 2 saal ke liye mumbai chali gayi hai. ​

Vicky ko yeh sunke bahot bada jhatka laga. Usko nhi pata tha aisa bhi hosakta hai. ​

Vicky: Kyaaaa. Kisliyee. ​

Meera: Tum college mein jaate bhi ho yaa nhi aree usko scholorship mila tha aage ki padhai ke liye isiliye woh chali gayi. ​

Vicky: Par mujhe issbaare mein kuch nhi pata aur naahi Sonal ne bataya. ​

Meera: Shayad bhul gayi hogi. ​

Vicky ko yeh sunke bahot gussa aata hai woh sochta hai Sonal aise kaise jaa sakti hai ekbaar bhi mujhe nhi bataya. Kaha main usse shaadi ke sapne dekh raha tha aur kaha woh yaha se chali gayi. Phir woh kuch sochta hai aur waha se nikal jaata hai. Meera ko awaaz dete rehgayi. ​

Meera: Ajeeb ladka hai. Bina kuch bole hi chala gaya. ​

Tabhi pichhe se Samar aata hai. Kyaa baat hai mom kaun bina bole chala gaya. ​

Meera: Aree woh Vicky aaya tha jab usko pata chala Sonal mumbai chali gayi toh bina kuch bole hi chala gaya. ​

Samar: Kyaa aapne usse bata diyaa. ​

Meera: Toh kyaa hogya. Sonal ka dost hai usse pata hona chahiye. Chal jaldi se nashta karle phir college ke liye nikal. Yeh bol Meera waha se chali jaati hai. ​

Idher Samar apne aap se bolne lagta hai. ​

Samar: Aree yaar yeh toh achha nhi hua. Didi ko bolta hu. Phir woh Sonal ko call karta hai. ​

Sonal: Good Morning bhai. ​

Samar: Good Morning didi. ​

Sonal: Kyaa baat hai aaj subah subah meri yaad kaise aagayi. ​

Samar: Didi woh actually aapka aashiq aaya tha toh mummy ne usse bata diya aap mumbai chali gayi. ​

Sonal: Gusse se. Aashiq my foot. Boldiya toh boldiya. Mujhe kyaa. Woh waha jaipur aur main yaha mumbai. ​

Samar: Dekhlo di. ​

Sonal: Koii naa. Aur bata kaisa hai tu. ​

Samar: Main mast hu. Aur ab toh aapka kamre mein mera raj hai. Waise Raj se yaad aaya Raj bhaiya kaise hai. Aapka kuch hua kya unke saath. Yeh bol hasne lagta hai. ​

Sonal: Tu naa mere kamre se durr hi rehna. Main humesha ke liye yaha nhi aayi hu. Agar mere kamre ko kuch bhi hua naa toh tujhe chorungi nhi. Aur Raj ke saath kya hona hai. ​

Samar: Aree bhul gayi. Maine bola tha naa Raj bhaiya aur aapki jodi. ​

Sonal yeh sunn sharma jaati hai. Par phir dikhawa karke bolti hai. Tunaa bahot pitega mere se. Chal phone rakh college ke liye late horaha hai. Apna aur sabka khayal rakhna. ​

Samar: Aap bhi apna khayal rakhna aur I missed my Shinchan. ​

Sonal: Me too my Kazama. ​

Phir call cut hojata hai. ​

Aise hi time guzarta gaya. Raj aur Sonal achhe dost ban gaye the. Raj Sonal ko kabhi kabhi apne office lejaata tha. Waha bhi sab Sonal se impressed hue the. ​

Raj ab dukhi nhi hota tha. Woh hasta tha. Family mein sabke saath baithta tha. Yeh kehna galat nhi hoga yeh sab Sonal ki wajah se hua tha. Sonal ki wajah se dukhi aur gumsum rehne wala Raj badal raha tha. Aur yeh change Nandini Shruti Yash Karan Ishant ko bahot achha lag raha tha. Unhone bhi dekha tha Sonal ke saath Raj khush rehta tha. ​

Sonal ka pyaar ab Raj ke liye aur badh jaata hai. Woh subah utne ke baad sabse pehle Raj ka chehra dekhti hai uske baad hi kuch aur karti hai. ​

Yash aur Swati ki gaadi bhi aage badh chuki thi. Dono call mein ghanto baate karte. Ek dusre ki pasand naa pasand jaante. Dono hi jaante the woh ekdusre se pyaar karte hai par kisi ne ekdusre se bola nhi tha. ​

Aarav ne Nandini se Payal ko leke baat karli thi jisse woh bahot khush hui. Usne bhi Aarav ko boldiya tension free raho Payal humesha ke liye Kapoor House hi aayegi uski choti devrani banke. ​

Samar aur Ishita ke beech baat toh hoti thi par bahot kam sirf social media pe. Ishita ko Samar ke saath aisa karne mein bahot maza aaraha tha. ​

Shruti ki shaadi ke liye Deepak and family wapas mumbai aajate hai jiske liye Yash kuch jyaada hi khush tha. Saath mein Ishita bhi. ​

Yash aaj Raj ke saath uske ghar aaya tha reason tha Swati ko dekhna. ​

Yash aur Swati ki nazar jab ekdusre se milti hai dono bahot khush hote hai. Dono akele time bitana chahte the par family ke beech kuch kar nhi paaye. ​

Dusre din Shruti ki mehendi aur Sangeet tha. ​

Smita: Yash kal mehendi aur Sangeet hai. Toh subah hi tumsab ko yaha aajana hai yaad hai naa. ​

Yash: Jii Aunty yaad hai. Hum teeno subah hi aajayenge. ​

Meera Yash ko dekh rahi thi uska behaviour uske baat karne ka salikha sab notice kar rahi thi. ​

Yash: Thik hai Aunty toh ab main chalta hu. Kal subah milta hu. ​

Smita: Thik hai. ​

Phir Yash sabke pairr chuke waha se nikal jaata hai. ​

Raat ko khaane ke baad Swati aur Sonal ek kamre mein baithe the. ​

Swati: Aur bata Sonal kitna durr pahoncha tera pyaar. ​

Sonal: Sab achha chal raha hai di. Main aur Raj ab achhe dost hai. Hum pehle din se hi saath office aur college jaate hai. Raj kabhi kabhi mujhe apne office bhi le jaate hai. Par abhi tak pata nhi chal raha hai unke dil mein mere liye kya feelings hai. Mujhe toh lagta hai woh bas mujhe ek achha dost hi maante hai. ​

Swati: Tumlog ajnabee se achhe dost banee ho. Toh achhe dost se aage bhi badh jaoge. Himmat mat haro. ​

Sonal: Jiii dii. Waise aapne mere liye koi jiju khoja yaa nhi. Kyoki aapke pehle toh mera kuch nhi hosakta. ​

Swati: Kya Sonal tum bhi. Aisa kuch bhi nhi hai. ​

Sonal: Toh aap sharma kyo rahi hai. ​

Swati: Ab tum aise puchogi toh sharm toh aayegi hi naa. ​

Sonal: Achha. ​

Swati: Achha chal ab so jaa. Main bhi bahot thakki hui hu. Good night. ​

Sonal: Good night di. ​

Phir Swati jaldi se apne room mein bhagg jaati hai. ​

Agle din Subah subah hi Yash Ishant aur Ishita aagaye the. Ab unke parents toh the nhi isiliye Vijay aur Ragini inke parents banke sab kar rahe the. ​

Shruti ko ek jagah baitha ke mehendi lagayi jaati hai. Sonal bhi Shruti ko mehendi laga rahi thi. ​

Thodi der baad Shruti ko mehendi laga dete hai. Phir baaki sab bhi mehendi lagane lagte hai. ​

Sonal mehendi lagwane ke baad ek jagah baithi hui thi. Par uske baal baar baar uske face pe aarahe the jisse woh pareshan ho rahi thi. Tabhi waha Raj aata hai. ​

Sonal: Rajjjj. ​

Raj: Haa Sonal. ​

Sonal: Rajj meri ek help kardenge. Pleaseeee. ​

Raj: Haa bolo. ​

Sonal: Sharma ke. Woh Raj actually mere haatho mein mehendi lagi hai aur mere baal baar baar mere chehre pe aarahe hai aur mujhe bahot pareshani horahi hai toh kya aap mere baal ko thik kardenge. ​

Raj: Yeahh Sureee. ​

Phir Raj Sonal ke bagal mein baithke apne haatho Sonal ke baal ektaraf kardeta hai. Sonal Raj ke aisa karna se sharma rahi thi. ​

Sonal: Thank you Raj. ​

Raj ek smile karke waha se chala jaata hai. Par Sonal ko lagraha tha jaise Raj abhi bhi uske baalon se khel raha hai. ​

Sham ko Sangeet ke liye sab ready hoke nichhe aate hai. ​

Ragini: Nandini Karan Raj Sonal Yash Swati Aarav Payal Ishita Samar aaj tumhari behen ki sangeet hai. Dhamaal machao naacho gaao. ​

Shruti: Haaa Badi mummy. Maine aisa rukha sukha Sangeet aaj tak nhi dekha. Bhabhi kyaa mera sangeet aisa rukha sukha hogaa. ​

Nandini: Aree mere hote hue aisa hosakta hai. Karan chaliye start kijiye. ​

Karan: Ab biwi ka order hai start toh karna padega. Yash Samar chal aaja. ​

Aarav: Bhaiyaa aap bhi chaliye naa. ​

Shruti: Rajj kyaa apni didi ke liye aaj nhi gaaye gaa. ​

Phir Raj gaane lagta hai. Sonal toh bas uski awaaz mein hi kho gayi thi. Usko dhyaan hi nhi raha kab Raj ne apna gaana khatam kardiya. ​

Swati: Sonal tu bhi kuch gaa naa. Tu bhi toh kitna achha gaati hai. ​

Sonal: Nhii dii. Kya aap kuch bhi bol rahi hai. ​

Shruti: Gaao naa Sonal. ​

Sonal: Nhii di. ​

Raj: Gaa bhi do Sonal. Yaha sab apne hai. ​

Ab Raj ka kaha hua jo naa kare woh Sonal nhi. ​

Sonal bhi gaane lagti hai. Raj bhi usko gaate hue dekhta hai. Thodi der mein Sonal ka gaana bhi hojaata hai. ​

Phir Karan Nandini Aarav Samar Yash Ishita Payal yehlog dance karte hai. Shruti aur Ishant ko bhi join karwaya gaya. ​

Phir ceremony khatam hoti hai saare mehmaan apne apne ghar chale jaate hai. Ishant Yash aur Ishita ko wahi rok liya jaata hai. ​

Yash ke waha rukne se Swati khush thi. ​

Thodi der baad sab dinner karke apne apne kamre mein chale jaate hai. Yash Raj ke kamre mein chala jaata hai toh Ishant ko alag kamra diya jaata hai Aarav ke kamre mein hai Samar hota hai. ​

Agle din haldi aur shaadi thi. Subah sab jaldi uth ke apne apne kaamo mein lag jaate hai. ​

Sabse pehle Ishant ko haldi lagayi jaati hai phir wahi haldi Shruti ko lagayi jaati hai. Phir dono ko nehlaya jaata hai. ​

Dekhte dekhte shaadi ka time hojaata hai. ​

Sab log taiyaar hoke bahar garden mein aajate hai jaha shaadi ka mandap tha. ​

Pandit mantra padh raha tha Ishant Mandap mein baitha tha. Smita Ashok Vijay Ragini Savitri Karan Raj Aarav Samar Yash sab wahi khade the. Ladkiyan Shruti ke saath thi usko taiyaar kar rahi thi. ​

Thodi der baad ladkiyan Shruti ko leke aate hai. Ishant toh Shruti ko dekhta hi reh jaata hai. Uski nazar hi nhi hat rahi thi. ​

Yash: Dheere se. Bhaiyaa aisa kya dekh rahe ho. Aaj se woh aapki hi hai. ​

Ishant Yash ki baat se jhepp jaata hai. Shruti ne ek golden red colour ka shaadi ka joda pehna tha. Jo uske gore rang pe bahott jyaada suit kar raha tha. Chehre pe achhe se makeup kiya hua tha. Uski shaadi mein usse jyaada khubsoorat aur koi nhi lag raha tha. ​

Ladkiyan Shruti ko laake Ishant ke bagal mein baitha deti hai. Phir sab apni apni jagah jaake khade hojaate hai. ​

Nandini jaake Karan ke bagal mein khadi hojaati hai. Swati bhi Yash ke bagal mein khadi hojaati hai. Samar aur Ishita eksaath khade rehte hai. Aur humari Sonal woh toh Raj ke bagal mein hi khadi hoti hai.​

Sonal jab Raj ke bagal mein khadi hoti hai toh Raj usko dekhta hai. Uski nazar uspe hi thi. Blue colour ka lehenga pehna tha uspe makeup jo uske gore rang pe chaar chand laga raha tha. ​

Sonal: Aise kyaa dekh rahe hai. ​

Raj: Bahot achhi dikh rahi ho. ​

Sonal: Sharmake. Thanks. Aap bhi achhe dikh rahe hai. ​

Raj: Shukriya. ​

Phir shaadi ki rashm start hoti hai. Smita aur Ashok Shruti ka kanyadaan karte hai. Kanyadaan karte waqt Smita ki aankho mein aansu aajate hai. Phir fhere hote hai. Phir Ishant Shruti ko mangalsootra aur Sindoor pehanata hai. ​

Phir yeh khade hoke sabka aashirwaad lete hai. ​

Dekhte dekhte bidai ka waqt aajata hai. Shruti apni dono maa aur dadi ke gale lagke khub roti hai. Smita aur Ragini ki aankho mein bhi aansu the woh bhi ro rhe hai. Unko aise rote dekh baaki sabki aankho mein bhi aansu the. ​

Phir Shruti Ashok aur Vijay ke gale lagke roti hai. ​

Phir apni bhabhi bhaiya aur apne sabhi bhai ke gale lagke roti hai. ​

Raj: Apna khayal rakhiyega di. ​

Shruti: Tu bhi apna khayal rakhna. Aur dukhi mat honaa. Tu samaj raha hai naa. ​

Raj apni gardan haa mein hilata hai. ​

Phir Shruti Sonal Swati Samar se milti hai. ​

Shruti: Sonal Thank youu. Tumhari wajah se mera bhai hasta hai akelepan se durr rehta hai. ​

Sonal Shruti ke gale lag jaati hai. ​

Phir Shruti Ashok aur Vijay ke paas aati hai. ​

Shruti: Papa Bade papa chalti hu. Kuch galti hui ho toh maaf kardijiyegaa. ​

Dono wapas usse gale laga lete hai. ​

Shruti: Aarav. ​

Aarav: Jii didi. ​

Shruti: Sabka khayal rakhna aur apna bhi. ​

Aarav: Aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyegaa. ​

Phir Shruti Ishant ke saath gaadi mein baithke apne ghar chali jaati hai. Yash aur Ishita bhi unke piche dusri gaadi mein chale jaate hai. ​

Phir sab ghar ke andar aate hai. Kisi ka khaane ka mann nhi tha. Par Meera Swati aur Sonal ne sabko thoda bahot khila diya. ​

Phir sab apne apne kamre mein sone chale gayee. ​

Par Raj terrace pe aagaya tha. Thodi der baad Sonal bhi terrace pe jaati hai. ​

Sonal: Neend nhi aarahi hai kyaa. ​

Raj: Bas di ki yaad aarahi hai. Tum yaha kaise. Tumhe neend nhi aarahi hai. ​

Sonal: Nhii. Aur aap chinta mat kijiye woh bahot khush hai. ​

Raj: Pata hai. Jab aapko aapka pyaar milta hai toh aapse khushkismat koi nhi hota. ​

Sonal: Sahi kaha. Aur sabko sabka pyaar milna hi chahiye. ​

Raj: Sabko sabka pyaar nhi milta Sonal. Kuch logo ki kahani adhuri hi reh jaati hai. ​

Sonal: Main samjhi nhi. Kiski kahani adhuri reh gayi. ​

Raj: Aah kuch nhi. Choro chalo sone. Good night. ​

Yeh bol Raj waha se apne room mein aajata hai. Par Sonal wahi khadi rehti hai aur Raj ki kahi hui baat ko sochne lagti hai. ​

Sonal: Yeh Raj ne aisa kyo kaha. Aur jis serious tone mein kaha tha usse yeh toh pata hai yeh sach thaa. Naaki koi kahawat thi. Aise hi kuch der sochne ke baad Sonal apne room mein chali jaati hai. ​

Chalo finally shaadi ho gayi.. shruti gayi ishant ke sath nayi jindagi ki suruwat karne...
Par point of attraction to Meera aur uski teekhi nazar hi rahi.. yash k aise ghur rahi thi ki jaise mauka mile to nigal hi le ushe

Raj: Bas di ki yaad aarahi hai. Tum yaha kaise. Tumhe neend nhi aarahi hai.

Sonal: Nhii. Aur aap chinta mat kijiye woh bahot khush hai.

Raj: Pata hai. Jab aapko aapka pyaar milta hai toh aapse khushkismat koi nhi hota.

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Ye Raj kis liye dukhi hai? didi sasural chali gayi isliye ya phir uski didi ko apna pyar mil gaya par Raj ko nahi, isliye

ye Raj to jalkuda nikla apni hi didi ko leke jalan..
Smita tune kahe tapka diya Raj ki ex gf kajal ko.. dekh ab tera ladla kaise jale apni hi didi par

Khair... Mujhe kya

Btw shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Sauravb]

First update is heart touching and 2nd is bit loving and emotional

 

[Naina]

एक ऐसे कहानी जहां कई लव स्टोरी बनती दिख रही है । पता नहीं इनमें कितनी लवस्टोरी अपने अंजाम तक पहुंच पायेगी और कितनी असफल हो जायेगी । पर जो भी हो पढ़ कर बहुत अच्छा लग रहा है ।
सोनल और राज
स्वाति और यश
पायल और आरव
तीन लव स्टोरी पैरेलल चल रही है ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत और फेमिली सागा स्टोरी है । बिल्कुल ताराचंद बड़जात्या की राज श्री प्रोडक्शन मूवी की तरह । लेकिन सबसे बड़ी ड्रा बैक ऐसे कहानियों को हिंग्लिश में लिखना हो जाता है । देवनागरी लिपि में जो भाव उभर कर आते हैं वो हिंग्लिश में लिखे गए ऐसे कहानियों में नहीं आते हैं ।
जैसे -
यश और स्वाति का कन्वर्सेशन हिंग्लिश के चलते सही भाव प्रदर्शित नहीं कर सका ।
ऐसे कहानियों में यदि कोई बड़ा इवेंट होता है जैसे कोई इंगेजमेंट , शादी , त्यौहार या कोई फंक्शन वहां रीडर्स पुरी तन्मयता से पढ़ना चाहते हैं ।
श्रुति और इशांत की सगाई एक बेहतरीन अपडेट हो सकता था । भले ही इस पर पांच दस अपडेट्स और भी अधिक लिखा जाए !

स्टोरी की बात करें तो राज को सोनल के अन्दर उसकी भूतपूर्व प्रेमिका के गुण नजर आ रहे हैं । कुल्फी खाने का अंदाज हूबहू उसके प्रेमिका जैसा था ।
सोनल तो आलरेडी उस पर अपना दिल हार बैठी है ।

तीन तीन खुबसूरत लड़कियां एक साथ एक ही कालेज ' एंमपेरियल कालेज ' में दाखिला ली है । शायद कालेज आगे चलकर बहुत सारी महत्वपूर्ण घटनाओं का साक्षी बनने वाला है ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत कहानी है । मेरी सिर्फ एक ही गुजारिश है कि एक अपडेट में सिर्फ एक युगल पर फोकस करें । और यदि उसके लिए कुछ और भी किरदारों की भी जरूरत हो तो भी कोई बात नही लेकिन फोकस प्रमुख किरदारों पर करें ।

वैसे तो आप खुद तजुर्बेकार है । आप की मैच्योरिटी एवं सहनशीलता को देखा है मैंने । इसे मेरी एक छोटी फरमाइश समझिएगा ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट डेविल भाई ।

Jagmag Jagmag Revo

 

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Update 12​

Idher Jaipur mein Vicky ko pata chala Sonal ki family wapas aagayi hai. Woh dusre din hi waha jaata hai. ​

Vicky: Good Morning aunty. ​

Meera: Aree Vicky aao. Good Morning. Aaj subah subah yaha kaiseee. ​

Vicky: Bas Sonal se milne aagaya. Waise aaplog kahi gaye the kyaa. Main aaya tha toh ghar band thaa. ​

Meera: Haa woh hum mumbai gaye the humare relatives ke yaha function tha. Aur Sonal toh nhi hai. ​

Vicky: Kahi bahar gayi hai. Thik hai main wait karta hu. ​

Meera: Thikk hai phir baitho 2 saal tak. ​

Vicky: Kyaa 2 saal. ​

Meera: Haaa. Kyo tumhe nhi pata. Sonal 2 saal ke liye mumbai chali gayi hai. ​

Vicky ko yeh sunke bahot bada jhatka laga. Usko nhi pata tha aisa bhi hosakta hai. ​

Vicky: Kyaaaa. Kisliyee. ​

Meera: Tum college mein jaate bhi ho yaa nhi aree usko scholorship mila tha aage ki padhai ke liye isiliye woh chali gayi. ​

Vicky: Par mujhe issbaare mein kuch nhi pata aur naahi Sonal ne bataya. ​

Meera: Shayad bhul gayi hogi. ​

Vicky ko yeh sunke bahot gussa aata hai woh sochta hai Sonal aise kaise jaa sakti hai ekbaar bhi mujhe nhi bataya. Kaha main usse shaadi ke sapne dekh raha tha aur kaha woh yaha se chali gayi. Phir woh kuch sochta hai aur waha se nikal jaata hai. Meera ko awaaz dete rehgayi. ​

Meera: Ajeeb ladka hai. Bina kuch bole hi chala gaya. ​

Tabhi pichhe se Samar aata hai. Kyaa baat hai mom kaun bina bole chala gaya. ​

Meera: Aree woh Vicky aaya tha jab usko pata chala Sonal mumbai chali gayi toh bina kuch bole hi chala gaya. ​

Samar: Kyaa aapne usse bata diyaa. ​

Meera: Toh kyaa hogya. Sonal ka dost hai usse pata hona chahiye. Chal jaldi se nashta karle phir college ke liye nikal. Yeh bol Meera waha se chali jaati hai. ​

Idher Samar apne aap se bolne lagta hai. ​

Samar: Aree yaar yeh toh achha nhi hua. Didi ko bolta hu. Phir woh Sonal ko call karta hai. ​

Sonal: Good Morning bhai. ​

Samar: Good Morning didi. ​

Sonal: Kyaa baat hai aaj subah subah meri yaad kaise aagayi. ​

Samar: Didi woh actually aapka aashiq aaya tha toh mummy ne usse bata diya aap mumbai chali gayi. ​

Sonal: Gusse se. Aashiq my foot. Boldiya toh boldiya. Mujhe kyaa. Woh waha jaipur aur main yaha mumbai. ​

Samar: Dekhlo di. ​

Sonal: Koii naa. Aur bata kaisa hai tu. ​

Samar: Main mast hu. Aur ab toh aapka kamre mein mera raj hai. Waise Raj se yaad aaya Raj bhaiya kaise hai. Aapka kuch hua kya unke saath. Yeh bol hasne lagta hai. ​

Sonal: Tu naa mere kamre se durr hi rehna. Main humesha ke liye yaha nhi aayi hu. Agar mere kamre ko kuch bhi hua naa toh tujhe chorungi nhi. Aur Raj ke saath kya hona hai. ​

Samar: Aree bhul gayi. Maine bola tha naa Raj bhaiya aur aapki jodi. ​

Sonal yeh sunn sharma jaati hai. Par phir dikhawa karke bolti hai. Tunaa bahot pitega mere se. Chal phone rakh college ke liye late horaha hai. Apna aur sabka khayal rakhna. ​

Samar: Aap bhi apna khayal rakhna aur I missed my Shinchan. ​

Sonal: Me too my Kazama. ​

Phir call cut hojata hai. ​

Aise hi time guzarta gaya. Raj aur Sonal achhe dost ban gaye the. Raj Sonal ko kabhi kabhi apne office lejaata tha. Waha bhi sab Sonal se impressed hue the. ​

Raj ab dukhi nhi hota tha. Woh hasta tha. Family mein sabke saath baithta tha. Yeh kehna galat nhi hoga yeh sab Sonal ki wajah se hua tha. Sonal ki wajah se dukhi aur gumsum rehne wala Raj badal raha tha. Aur yeh change Nandini Shruti Yash Karan Ishant ko bahot achha lag raha tha. Unhone bhi dekha tha Sonal ke saath Raj khush rehta tha. ​

Sonal ka pyaar ab Raj ke liye aur badh jaata hai. Woh subah utne ke baad sabse pehle Raj ka chehra dekhti hai uske baad hi kuch aur karti hai. ​

Yash aur Swati ki gaadi bhi aage badh chuki thi. Dono call mein ghanto baate karte. Ek dusre ki pasand naa pasand jaante. Dono hi jaante the woh ekdusre se pyaar karte hai par kisi ne ekdusre se bola nhi tha. ​

Aarav ne Nandini se Payal ko leke baat karli thi jisse woh bahot khush hui. Usne bhi Aarav ko boldiya tension free raho Payal humesha ke liye Kapoor House hi aayegi uski choti devrani banke. ​

Samar aur Ishita ke beech baat toh hoti thi par bahot kam sirf social media pe. Ishita ko Samar ke saath aisa karne mein bahot maza aaraha tha. ​

Shruti ki shaadi ke liye Deepak and family wapas mumbai aajate hai jiske liye Yash kuch jyaada hi khush tha. Saath mein Ishita bhi. ​

Yash aaj Raj ke saath uske ghar aaya tha reason tha Swati ko dekhna. ​

Yash aur Swati ki nazar jab ekdusre se milti hai dono bahot khush hote hai. Dono akele time bitana chahte the par family ke beech kuch kar nhi paaye. ​

Dusre din Shruti ki mehendi aur Sangeet tha. ​

Smita: Yash kal mehendi aur Sangeet hai. Toh subah hi tumsab ko yaha aajana hai yaad hai naa. ​

Yash: Jii Aunty yaad hai. Hum teeno subah hi aajayenge. ​

Meera Yash ko dekh rahi thi uska behaviour uske baat karne ka salikha sab notice kar rahi thi. ​

Yash: Thik hai Aunty toh ab main chalta hu. Kal subah milta hu. ​

Smita: Thik hai. ​

Phir Yash sabke pairr chuke waha se nikal jaata hai. ​

Raat ko khaane ke baad Swati aur Sonal ek kamre mein baithe the. ​

Swati: Aur bata Sonal kitna durr pahoncha tera pyaar. ​

Sonal: Sab achha chal raha hai di. Main aur Raj ab achhe dost hai. Hum pehle din se hi saath office aur college jaate hai. Raj kabhi kabhi mujhe apne office bhi le jaate hai. Par abhi tak pata nhi chal raha hai unke dil mein mere liye kya feelings hai. Mujhe toh lagta hai woh bas mujhe ek achha dost hi maante hai. ​

Swati: Tumlog ajnabee se achhe dost banee ho. Toh achhe dost se aage bhi badh jaoge. Himmat mat haro. ​

Sonal: Jiii dii. Waise aapne mere liye koi jiju khoja yaa nhi. Kyoki aapke pehle toh mera kuch nhi hosakta. ​

Swati: Kya Sonal tum bhi. Aisa kuch bhi nhi hai. ​

Sonal: Toh aap sharma kyo rahi hai. ​

Swati: Ab tum aise puchogi toh sharm toh aayegi hi naa. ​

Sonal: Achha. ​

Swati: Achha chal ab so jaa. Main bhi bahot thakki hui hu. Good night. ​

Sonal: Good night di. ​

Phir Swati jaldi se apne room mein bhagg jaati hai. ​

Agle din Subah subah hi Yash Ishant aur Ishita aagaye the. Ab unke parents toh the nhi isiliye Vijay aur Ragini inke parents banke sab kar rahe the. ​

Shruti ko ek jagah baitha ke mehendi lagayi jaati hai. Sonal bhi Shruti ko mehendi laga rahi thi. ​

Thodi der baad Shruti ko mehendi laga dete hai. Phir baaki sab bhi mehendi lagane lagte hai. ​

Sonal mehendi lagwane ke baad ek jagah baithi hui thi. Par uske baal baar baar uske face pe aarahe the jisse woh pareshan ho rahi thi. Tabhi waha Raj aata hai. ​

Sonal: Rajjjj. ​

Raj: Haa Sonal. ​

Sonal: Rajj meri ek help kardenge. Pleaseeee. ​

Raj: Haa bolo. ​

Sonal: Sharma ke. Woh Raj actually mere haatho mein mehendi lagi hai aur mere baal baar baar mere chehre pe aarahe hai aur mujhe bahot pareshani horahi hai toh kya aap mere baal ko thik kardenge. ​

Raj: Yeahh Sureee. ​

Phir Raj Sonal ke bagal mein baithke apne haatho Sonal ke baal ektaraf kardeta hai. Sonal Raj ke aisa karna se sharma rahi thi. ​

Sonal: Thank you Raj. ​

Raj ek smile karke waha se chala jaata hai. Par Sonal ko lagraha tha jaise Raj abhi bhi uske baalon se khel raha hai. ​

Sham ko Sangeet ke liye sab ready hoke nichhe aate hai. ​

Ragini: Nandini Karan Raj Sonal Yash Swati Aarav Payal Ishita Samar aaj tumhari behen ki sangeet hai. Dhamaal machao naacho gaao. ​

Shruti: Haaa Badi mummy. Maine aisa rukha sukha Sangeet aaj tak nhi dekha. Bhabhi kyaa mera sangeet aisa rukha sukha hogaa. ​

Nandini: Aree mere hote hue aisa hosakta hai. Karan chaliye start kijiye. ​

Karan: Ab biwi ka order hai start toh karna padega. Yash Samar chal aaja. ​

Aarav: Bhaiyaa aap bhi chaliye naa. ​

Shruti: Rajj kyaa apni didi ke liye aaj nhi gaaye gaa. ​

Phir Raj gaane lagta hai. Sonal toh bas uski awaaz mein hi kho gayi thi. Usko dhyaan hi nhi raha kab Raj ne apna gaana khatam kardiya. ​

Swati: Sonal tu bhi kuch gaa naa. Tu bhi toh kitna achha gaati hai. ​

Sonal: Nhii dii. Kya aap kuch bhi bol rahi hai. ​

Shruti: Gaao naa Sonal. ​

Sonal: Nhii di. ​

Raj: Gaa bhi do Sonal. Yaha sab apne hai. ​

Ab Raj ka kaha hua jo naa kare woh Sonal nhi. ​

Sonal bhi gaane lagti hai. Raj bhi usko gaate hue dekhta hai. Thodi der mein Sonal ka gaana bhi hojaata hai. ​

Phir Karan Nandini Aarav Samar Yash Ishita Payal yehlog dance karte hai. Shruti aur Ishant ko bhi join karwaya gaya. ​

Phir ceremony khatam hoti hai saare mehmaan apne apne ghar chale jaate hai. Ishant Yash aur Ishita ko wahi rok liya jaata hai. ​

Yash ke waha rukne se Swati khush thi. ​

Thodi der baad sab dinner karke apne apne kamre mein chale jaate hai. Yash Raj ke kamre mein chala jaata hai toh Ishant ko alag kamra diya jaata hai Aarav ke kamre mein hai Samar hota hai. ​

Agle din haldi aur shaadi thi. Subah sab jaldi uth ke apne apne kaamo mein lag jaate hai. ​

Sabse pehle Ishant ko haldi lagayi jaati hai phir wahi haldi Shruti ko lagayi jaati hai. Phir dono ko nehlaya jaata hai. ​

Dekhte dekhte shaadi ka time hojaata hai. ​

Sab log taiyaar hoke bahar garden mein aajate hai jaha shaadi ka mandap tha. ​

Pandit mantra padh raha tha Ishant Mandap mein baitha tha. Smita Ashok Vijay Ragini Savitri Karan Raj Aarav Samar Yash sab wahi khade the. Ladkiyan Shruti ke saath thi usko taiyaar kar rahi thi. ​

Thodi der baad ladkiyan Shruti ko leke aate hai. Ishant toh Shruti ko dekhta hi reh jaata hai. Uski nazar hi nhi hat rahi thi. ​

Yash: Dheere se. Bhaiyaa aisa kya dekh rahe ho. Aaj se woh aapki hi hai. ​

Ishant Yash ki baat se jhepp jaata hai. Shruti ne ek golden red colour ka shaadi ka joda pehna tha. Jo uske gore rang pe bahott jyaada suit kar raha tha. Chehre pe achhe se makeup kiya hua tha. Uski shaadi mein usse jyaada khubsoorat aur koi nhi lag raha tha. ​

Ladkiyan Shruti ko laake Ishant ke bagal mein baitha deti hai. Phir sab apni apni jagah jaake khade hojaate hai. ​

Nandini jaake Karan ke bagal mein khadi hojaati hai. Swati bhi Yash ke bagal mein khadi hojaati hai. Samar aur Ishita eksaath khade rehte hai. Aur humari Sonal woh toh Raj ke bagal mein hi khadi hoti hai.​

Sonal jab Raj ke bagal mein khadi hoti hai toh Raj usko dekhta hai. Uski nazar uspe hi thi. Blue colour ka lehenga pehna tha uspe makeup jo uske gore rang pe chaar chand laga raha tha. ​

Sonal: Aise kyaa dekh rahe hai. ​

Raj: Bahot achhi dikh rahi ho. ​

Sonal: Sharmake. Thanks. Aap bhi achhe dikh rahe hai. ​

Raj: Shukriya. ​

Phir shaadi ki rashm start hoti hai. Smita aur Ashok Shruti ka kanyadaan karte hai. Kanyadaan karte waqt Smita ki aankho mein aansu aajate hai. Phir fhere hote hai. Phir Ishant Shruti ko mangalsootra aur Sindoor pehanata hai. ​

Phir yeh khade hoke sabka aashirwaad lete hai. ​

Dekhte dekhte bidai ka waqt aajata hai. Shruti apni dono maa aur dadi ke gale lagke khub roti hai. Smita aur Ragini ki aankho mein bhi aansu the woh bhi ro rhe hai. Unko aise rote dekh baaki sabki aankho mein bhi aansu the. ​

Phir Shruti Ashok aur Vijay ke gale lagke roti hai. ​

Phir apni bhabhi bhaiya aur apne sabhi bhai ke gale lagke roti hai. ​

Raj: Apna khayal rakhiyega di. ​

Shruti: Tu bhi apna khayal rakhna. Aur dukhi mat honaa. Tu samaj raha hai naa. ​

Raj apni gardan haa mein hilata hai. ​

Phir Shruti Sonal Swati Samar se milti hai. ​

Shruti: Sonal Thank youu. Tumhari wajah se mera bhai hasta hai akelepan se durr rehta hai. ​

Sonal Shruti ke gale lag jaati hai. ​

Phir Shruti Ashok aur Vijay ke paas aati hai. ​

Shruti: Papa Bade papa chalti hu. Kuch galti hui ho toh maaf kardijiyegaa. ​

Dono wapas usse gale laga lete hai. ​

Shruti: Aarav. ​

Aarav: Jii didi. ​

Shruti: Sabka khayal rakhna aur apna bhi. ​

Aarav: Aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyegaa. ​

Phir Shruti Ishant ke saath gaadi mein baithke apne ghar chali jaati hai. Yash aur Ishita bhi unke piche dusri gaadi mein chale jaate hai. ​

Phir sab ghar ke andar aate hai. Kisi ka khaane ka mann nhi tha. Par Meera Swati aur Sonal ne sabko thoda bahot khila diya. ​

Phir sab apne apne kamre mein sone chale gayee. ​

Par Raj terrace pe aagaya tha. Thodi der baad Sonal bhi terrace pe jaati hai. ​

Sonal: Neend nhi aarahi hai kyaa. ​

Raj: Bas di ki yaad aarahi hai. Tum yaha kaise. Tumhe neend nhi aarahi hai. ​

Sonal: Nhii. Aur aap chinta mat kijiye woh bahot khush hai. ​

Raj: Pata hai. Jab aapko aapka pyaar milta hai toh aapse khushkismat koi nhi hota. ​

Sonal: Sahi kaha. Aur sabko sabka pyaar milna hi chahiye. ​

Raj: Sabko sabka pyaar nhi milta Sonal. Kuch logo ki kahani adhuri hi reh jaati hai. ​

Sonal: Main samjhi nhi. Kiski kahani adhuri reh gayi. ​

Raj: Aah kuch nhi. Choro chalo sone. Good night. ​

Yeh bol Raj waha se apne room mein aajata hai. Par Sonal wahi khadi rehti hai aur Raj ki kahi hui baat ko sochne lagti hai. ​

Sonal: Yeh Raj ne aisa kyo kaha. Aur jis serious tone mein kaha tha usse yeh toh pata hai yeh sach thaa. Naaki koi kahawat thi. Aise hi kuch der sochne ke baad Sonal apne room mein chali jaati hai. ​

Nice and superb update...

 

[Jaguaar]

Nice and beautiful update...

Thank you

 

[Jaguaar]

Lovely update

Thank you