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Nevil singh

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Pichhle update me apne padha kajal shubham ko kisi se bacha rhi thi wahi kajal jiss aurat se bachai ussi aurat ne mall me hungama macha diya or manegar ko dhamki bhi diya.

Ab aage.....

Raat ka samay tha kahe to aaj yaha kafi sanata tha ya rahta h. Issi me ek chirti hui awaj aai jo ki kisi bare bandook se chalne ki awaj thi. Ye border tha jalimpur or madhupur gaon ka jaha pahari ke bechho bech parakriti ka anutha najara tha. Ye ek upwan hi tha jo pahario ke god me basa tha.

Billu- jagira bhai malik ne mast maal diya h kya kahne iske maan khus kar diya isne to.
Jagira- ha maal to mast h par jiss kaam ke liye mila h uske liye thik na h.
Billu- kyu bhai tane apne pe bharso nhi h ka.
Jagira- bharose ki baat na h or nishana to abhi bhi paka h urti hui chirya bhi gira du. Baat ye h ki ye maal raat me na chal sake h agar raat me chalaya to phir hum khud mare jayenge.
Billu- savere kaise hoga uu log to raat me ghumne aawenge na.
Jagira- ha awenge to malik kahin h ki abhi kuch khabar nhi h bass hame apna adda chunn lena uske baad malik khud ishara kar dehi.
Billu- chalo to apna dukan fit kar dete h.
Jagira- hmm... Chal parchi kata le.

Subah subah madhupur me.

Mamta- kya hamne thik kiya.
Kajal- kya thik kiya tumhe pata h agar wo dekh leta to kya hota.
Mamta- haa bapu ne bataya tha par hum kab tak bachayenge akhir ek na ek din to pata lagna hi h.
Kajal- syd jiss din pata lage uss din wo chudail ka akhri din hoga.
Mamta- hmmmm..... Par ek baat h hum kusti wale din kaise bachayenge uss din to wo dekh lega.
Kajal- kusti wale din.... wo madam vip room leti h. Usse dhool pasand nhi dekhi nhi kaise bahar dhool urati gari nikali thi jate wakt. Or ek nhi teen teen leke jati h.
Mamta- hmm....

Kajal jab shubham ko khich kar gari me bithai uske baare me baat ho rhi h. Or baat se ye pata chal raha h wo aurat gahra talukat rakhti h shubham se. Wahi aaj jyda kaam nhi tha bass jo kaam tha wo baithe bithaye tha.

Shubham abhi akhare me kasrat kar raha tha ki. Ramakant ji aake shubham ke sarir ko nihatne lage. Chauri chaati pet ekdum shape me panje kisi sher ki bhati wahi kandh ke muscle bata rahe the ye lrka wo dum kham rakhta h jo ramakant ji chahte h.
Ramakant- bhanje aaj se alag tarah ki kasrat kar.
Me- kaisa mama.
Ramakant- ruk batate h.

Ramakant ji apne dhoti ko ek langot ka roop dete hue samet ke akhare me aa gaye. Unka bhi sarir kaam nhi tha aaj bhi unka sarir wahi tha jo jawani me tha bass sarir me kahi kahi dheela tha jo ki iss umar me hona lajmi h. Akhare me do pahlwan the dono upar se nange.

Ramakant- tum mujhe patko.
Me- kya....
Ramakant- jo suna wahi tum mujhe patko.
Me- thik h.
Shubham jaise hi patkane ko gaya khud jameen ki dhul chatne laga. Wo to achambhit tha uske sath hua kya jab tak smjhta uske pari hath ab ramakant ji ke giraft me tha. Shubham chhutne ki bahut koshis kar raha tha magar chhutna to durr sahi se hill nhi pa raha tha. Bhale hi sarir se takatwar tha par ek anubhawi khiladi ke pass jo anubhaw or pantre hote h wo naye naye khiladi me nhi hote. Aant me shubham ko haar mana para.

Ramakant- bhanje maine tumhe pathe diye practice ko par tumhe ho gaya apne aap pe ghamand jo aaj tumhe dhool chatne pe majbur kar diya. Tumhare pass furti h par anubhaw nhi anubhaw ke samne furti kam kaam aati h. Ustad ke bete ko harane ke baad tumhare sarir ke tevar hi badal gaye to ghamand ko kinare rakho or kabhi sar pe matt chadhne dena iss ghamand naam ke sabad ko.

Itna kah ke ramakant ji to chale gaye par shubham ko ek sabak shikha gaye. Or sach me ek alag tarah ki kusti shikha gaye. Har baje takat or furti se nhi anubhaw se jiti jati h.

Idhar ass pass khade log abhi bhi awak the unhe vishwas hi nhi ho raha tha. Aaj unhone ne wo dekha jo kai saal pahle dekha krte the. Samrat ka bhi haal bakiyo ke tarah tha. "Shubham shubham jldi chal dekh kya ho gaya" sohan udhar se daurta hua aaya or shubham ko khufia ghar le gaya.

Me- kya hua batayega.
Sohan- chal to sahi.
Me- jaha kari or lala tha) oo bhenchod ye kya kaise hua ye.
Sohan- iss madharchod ne kiya. (Lala ko latt se pitte hue bola)
Me- shikha shikha kya hua thik ho.
Shikha- hmm..... Wo iss kamine ne aaaaahhhh..... Iss kamine ne iske sath milkar bahut mara.
Me- madharchod lala tujhe to mai aaj chhorunga nhi aaj tera jan kalyan karna hoga or tu sali tere ko to mele ke beech me batata hu.
Sohan- aisa kuch nhi karna ki malik ko dikat aaye malik ne inlogo ko mele me nipatne ko kaha h.

Me- iss madharchod ki kismat achhi h par aaj nhi aaj isko to ek sabak shikhana hoga sath me tujhe bhi kari ruk tu.
Shubham lala or kari ko leke bahar aaya gali me koi nhi tha or bahar road bhi khali tha to wo shidha lala ke gharke bagal wale ghar me gaya or usse andar le jake feka dono ko.

Me- kaki oo sumitra kaki lo tumhara gunehgar aaj ke liye tumhare hawale bass iss marna nhi jinda rakhna or tarpa tarpa ke marna h isse.

Shubham itna kah ke sideme lage khatiye pe jake baith gaya. Abhi sumitra ke ghar me wo khud or uski bahu hi thi. Or kahe to ek beti bhi thi jisse iss lala ne kisi ke sath milkar maar dala tha. Dono saas bahu ke ankho me angre nikal rahe the.

Me- ab dekhte hi rahna h ya phir kutna bhi h. Kya sab bhul gyi kaise teri beti taral tarap ke mari h. Ya bhul gyi jiske chalte ye angan kabhi khila khila rahta tha waha aaj suna para h.
Sumitra- beta hum garib log h. Isse aaj marenge to kal ko ye.....
Me- kal ko ye kuch nhi kar payega kyuki mela ke aant tak isko thikane laga dunga. Ab suru ho jao agar apni beti nanad se pyaarho to.

Shubham nanad kah ke sumitra ki bahu ko bhaook kar diya. Akhir uski yaha ki nayi saheli/bahan thi. Sumitra se pahle uski bahu ne hi chulhe me se jalti lakri nikal ke pitna suru kar di. Lala to jor jorse chillane laga or shubham baitha baitha hass raha tha or sath me uske ankh se bhi anshoo aa gaye the. Aana lajmi tha neelam or pari ke sath iss ghar ki bhi ka hi sath me hassi majak khel kud kiya krti thi.

Issi beech sumitra ki beti gayab ho gyi uske kuch din baad sumitra ne kaha apni beti ko apane bhai ke pass chhor aai h. Or kuch mahine pahle shubham ko jab wo kangan mila jo teeno saheliyo ki pahchan thi to smjh gaya jarur uske sath kuch hua h. Or jab khoj bin hua to lala ka naam aaya. Tabhi shubham lala ko marna chahta tha magar ramakant ji aaen wakt pe shubham se takra gaye or lala bach gaya. Tabhi se shubham firak me tha lala ko tapkane ka par issi beech usse pata chala uske sath or log the jisme se ek to upar ja chuka h. Or ek h jo bare rasuk wala h wo kon h uske baare me lala ne abhi tak nhi bataya.

Me- kaki kaki itna pit ki ye tumhari beti ke dusre katil ka naam bataye. Mere to hath hi bandhe h nhi to ab taak pata kar liya hota.
Sumitra- pit te hue) kya bugara tha meri beti ne aannn... Kya bigara tha kutte kon h wo dusra kon h wo wo dusra haram ka jana kon h.

Lala ko pitai ka bhi asar nhi tha bass roye ja raha tha magar bolne ka naam nhi le raha tha. Tabhi shubham ko gussa aaya or uske taraf badha tabhi "mohan singh h wahi sumitra ki beti ko uthwaya tha mujhe to pata bhi nhi tha" shubham mohan singh ka naam soon ke baukhla gaya par sohan jaise kuch janta tha wo lala or kari ko utha ke jldi se uss ghar me le aaya or shikha ko usse sambhalne bola.

Shikha shubham ko rokne ki bahut koshis ki par shubham uski baat na suni or haweli nikal gaya. Shikha bhi peeche peechhe aai "kajal kajal smbhal apne devar ko dekh ye kaha......" Shikha aage kuch bol pati usse pahle hi shubham uska mooh band kar diya.

Me- sali chup kar nhi to jaan se maar......
Kajal- chatak) kya kar raha h iske sath chhor isse.
Shikha shubham ke giraft se chhut te hi uske taraf bhagi or sari baat suna di ussi ke sath uske ankh me aansoo aa gaye.
Kajal- chhup kar isme teri koi galti nhi ab bhagwan tere pale aise haiwan bandh ho diya to kya kar skte h.
Or tum mele pe dhyan do bapu sab dekh lenge.

Tabhi bahar se neelam daurte hue aai sohan ke sath "uss kutte ko matt chhorna shubham usse jinda jala dena usse jine ka koi hak nhi ree usne meri saheli ko maar diya uummhhhmmmm....." Neelam shubham ke gale lag ke rote hue boli. Shubham ka najar jab sohan se mila to sohan sar hilaya haa me.

Kajal- neelam tum apne kamre me jao ab tu isse matt bol pata h na mohan singh kon h. Usse aise hi nhi kuch kar skte or usne koi ek gti nhi ki h jo usse ek chhoti saja di jaye usse aisi saja milni chahiye jo kabhi wo soch na sake.
Neelam- nhi usse kutte ko jine ka koi hak nhi bhabhi usne.....
Kajal- mujhe pata h par usse maar diya jaye ye bhi koi saja hui uske miye ki saja uske sath dene wale bhugten ge to tum abhi jao.
Neelam- rote hue bahar vhali gyi pari ke pass wahi ab shubham bhi andar jane ko hua to darje ke pass khadi mamta ne usse apne sath khich ke le gyi bathroom "jldi se naha lo kitna pasina nikala h dekho baniyan bhi bheeng gaya" mamta ye kahte hue ek kiss ki hotho pe or uske kapre lene chali gyi.

Kuch deer baad shubham jab kapre pahan ke bahar aaya to mamta usse bed ke ek kinare khana leke baithe dekha "aao khaa lo" shubham chup chap khane laga. Mamta usse beech beech me khud khila rhi thi. "Tumhe pata h hum kon h" mamta ke iss sawal se shubham usse dekhne laga.

Me- bhabhi sab ki najar me or mere liye bibi.
Mamta- hmm... (Maan me) ye mai kya bol gyi.
Me- kya hua kya soch rhi ho meri bibi rani.
Mamta- nhi nhi kuch chalo tum aram karo mai aati hu.
Mamta bahar or kajal ki entry kuch samay baad. Dopahar ho chuki thi kaam bahar ka sohan khud dekh raha tha. Or idhar kajal shubham ke sath soo gyi.

Bhai ye update h chhota to iske liye hame maaf kijiyega. Or deri se update dene ke liye bhi maaf kijiyega. Kal saam tak ek bada update dete h tab tak aap iss mysterious update ko padhiye jisme ek aise dushman ka khulasa hua h jiska intjaar aap kar rhe the.

mast akshro se shushobhit ek aur sunehri update.
 

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Pichhle update me lala ke dawara kiye gaye khulase se shubham ka jo gussa tha wo satve asma pe tha. Or kajal ke dawara gaye sawal jawab me shubham chhup raha or issi karan kajal usse apne sath sulaye rakhi or din ho gaya.

Aab aage.....

Aaj ka din shubham ko bahut fresh lag raha tha. Usse bhi pata nhi tha uske sath hua kya h par andar se usse bahut achha mahsus ho raha tha. Aaj ki hawa bhi usse kuch badli badli mahsus ho rhi thi. Abhi wo shubha uth ke sara kaam sohan ke hathe de ke 2 3 pahlwano ke sath practice suru kar diya tha kyuki agle ek din ke baad mukabla tha.

Saare pahlwan apne anubhaw shajha krte hue apne apne paytre bata rahe the magar usme ek bujurg par tagda pahlwan bbi tha jisne ek accha salah ke sath bahut saare gyan diya. Shubham unki baato ko dhyan se suna par uss bujurg ko bhi pata tha ye lrka jisse wo smjha rahe h wo kiska beta h kyuki ye vaykti koi or nhi ramakant ji ke chacha shri the jo ki akele hi iss duniya me bache the.

Shubham ko aaj sara din pahlwani me hi gyan parapt karne me laga raha phir saam hote hi haweli jake naha ke taiyaar hua or mandir aake sari taiyaari dekhne laga. Mandir ki kayakalap ho chuki thi. Mandir ke samne jo akhara tha jaha kusti ka pardarshan hona tha puja se pahle wahi aaj kucb dukane lag chuki thi. Wahi bahut sare jhule lage the mandir ke ek taraf wahi thahrne ka intjaam panchayat bhawan ke sath mandir ke pass bhi kiya gaya tha.

Shubham sohan or kuch log sare cheezo ko janch parakh kar rhe the par kisi ko pata nhi lagne de rahe the kyuki dono apne chehre pe gamchha laete the. Yah aane ka karan aise unlogo ka kuch or hit ha wo ass pass idhar udhar dekhneme lage the. Kuch aisi cheez jisse wo dekhna chaah rahe the par mil nhi raha tha wo cheez har per ke pass jake dekhe par unhe dikha nhi kyuki kabhi inhe pero pe no. Likha milta tha aaj wo no. Dikha hi nhi to wo log bahara a gaye.

Sohan- lagta h iss baar nhi hoga.
Me- hmm... Par meri smjh me ye nhi aa raha ghora ghass se dosti kar kaise liya.
Sohan- wahi to bili sarkari dahi smjhti nhi usse to rakhwala dikha nhi ki rasta badal di.
Me- kya bola rasta mtlb koi or jugar.
Sohan- hmm... Mujhe bhi yhi lagta h.
Me- hmm... Iss baar satark rahna.

Shubham itna kahke ek kamre me gaya jo ki shubham ke raat bhar ke rahne ka jugar tha. Usse bahut sare kaam ko anjam dene the jiske liye wo ye ghar ko chuna tha. Ye wahi ghar h jo khet ke beecho beech me parta h. Andar jane ke baad kahi call kiya uske baad wapas haweli aa gaya.

Shubham aaj bahar gaya tha tarotaja hoke par aaya ek dam udash hoke jisse mamta ne dekh liya. Andhera ho chuka or gaon me iss wakt tak khana ban chuka hota h to wo ban gaya tha. Mamta khana leke shubham ke pass aai or usse khilate hue puchha bhi parnhi bata pai. Aaj mamta shubham se kuch bolna chaah rhi thi jaise wo kal bolna chhah rhit hi par bol nhi pai. Usse kuch din pae hi pata chala shubham kon h or uska kya lagta h. Pahle itna hi naam pata malum nhi tha uske siway sab malum tha. Aaj mamta ke maan me mamta ke sath ek apna pan ka ahsas uth raha tha.

Mamta bhi bare rasuk wale ghar se talukat rakhti h jo ki yhi char gaon me ek ki bhatiji h. Par baap ke galat adat ke karan usse hira jaisa pati mila. Mamta ko ab koi rokne tomne wala nhit ha kyuki khane ki thali ko side rakh usse apne chuchiyo ki gahrai me bada li. Shubham achanak hue hamle se smjh nhi paya par chehra jab choochope gaya to jeebh se chatne laga. "Badmash bachpan me bbi aisahi krta tha or ab bhi aisa hi kar raha h" mamta maan me ye bol mushkane lagi. Shubham apne kaam me laga tha khana to ho chuka tha wahi bhabhi devar nhi nhi miya bibi ya syd kuch or bhi jo abhi aaya nhi h. Dono nind ke wadiyo me chale gaye. Or neelam jhutha bartan lene aaj to shubham ke hotho pe ek kiss ki mamta ko thora side kar "ab thik h" neelam ye kahte hue thali leke bahar chali gyi wahi uska maan bhi thik nhi tha wo or pari bass gusse se bhari thi magar kajal ke sakhti ke karan dono shant the.

Kajal janti thi agar wo skht nhi hui to wo kaam ho jayega jo ramakant ji or kajal nhi chahte. Akhir ramakant ji bari mehnat se kai teer kaman taiyaar kiye h jo mohan singh ka kacha chitha kholega.

Wahi jinhe supari mila tha unhe walas bula liya gaya tha. Kyuki kal se dc ke adesh pe crpf camping lag raha tha. Par kahte h na latoo ke bhoot batoo se nhi mante wahi hua. Wo log wapas to aa gaye par ek or plan bana liye or ye wala billu or jagira ko bahut pasand aaya. Wahi jagira ne ek deemand rakhi jisse turant pura kiya gaya.

Subah subah madhupur me meeting suru thi kahe to meeting nhi ek 6 larko ka grp tha jo sohan ke jaise the mtlb bharose maand. Sohan se tulna thik nhi par ye log ke baap dada ramakant ji ke bharose maand sathi rah chuke the to shubham unpe bhi bharosa kiya kyuki ye log the padhe likhe engineering wale bande.

Me- tum logo ko apne gadgets se yaha ke logo pe najar rakhna h. Najar hi nhi unke haar movement pe bina kisi ke najar me aaye.
Lrka1- iske liye hame drone lagana hoga or uske liya hame police wagerah.....
Lrka2- abe kya police kar raha h. Humlog mini camera lagate h. Sabhi volunteer ke kapre me or ye baat unhe pata bhi nhi chalegi kyuki ham usse dress denge jisse durr se dekh kar hi pahchana jaye thim h na malik.
Me- hmm... Or ye malik mujhe achha nhi lagta shubham bolo ek to aap sab me se kuche bare ho or kuch ham umar to kya malik walik laga rakhe ho.... Or tum malik kahe par decide khud kar liye kapre wagerah ka.

Lrka2- woo... Baatt aisa h ki mujbe laga....
Me- ghabraoo nhi idea badhiya h par time aaj ka hi h to tum apne kaam jldi karo aaj ka hi time h kal se puja suru.
Lrka2- aap hame black colour ka kapra lake do or mini camera.
Me- achha sara kaam mai karu or tum kya karoge.
Lrka1- iske kahne ka mtlb h pause mang raha h sidhe na bolke aapko dene ko bol raha h.
Me- thik h sohan inke sath chale jana or yhi ke darji se sab ka naapi karwao or ye bhi bol do aaj ke aaj silna h sab ke liye jore me thik h.
Lrka2- waise itni chak chaobandh ka karan.
Me- tumhari bahan ko bachane ke liye.
Lrka2- kya meri koi bahan nhi h.
Me- nhi h to yaha kisi ki to hogi or nhi h to iss gaon ki ya ye chaar gaon me kisi ki.
Lrka2- mtlb....
Me- mtlb ye ki yaha mele me aurte mardo ko phas kar dhandha krti h jo ki professional hoti h or bahars e aai hui hoti h. Sath me yaha ke log jo bhi kamte h yaha chal rahe chakle me gawa dete h.
Lrka3- yaha chakla bhi h. (Bare utsukta se puchha)
Lrka2- ha hai na tere gand me ghuma ke dal le.

Ye soon ke sab hasne lage Wahi wo lrka bhi hasne laga.
Me- or kuch chahiye.
Lrka3- hame ye sab oprete karne ke liye mandir ke ass pass ek kamra chahiye. Or kuch khane pine ka intjaam bhi ho jaye to...
Me- jo bhi h wo pura ho jayega or sohan ye jaha chahe waha inka room bana do. Oe kahne pine ka inka pita ji log ko bol do wo dekh lenge.
Lrka3- kya bapu ko nhi nhi khana ham dekh lenge.
Shubham janta tha khana pina mtlb isliye baap ka naam liya kyuki jaha ye log kaam karenge waha mandir ka parangan h.

Sabhi lrke ja chuke the or idhar akhare me shubham apna paseena baha raha tha. Aaj akhara ek taraf se dhak sa gaya tha kyuki bans or kapreke dawara boundry taiyaar kiya gaya tha or rahne ke liye sabhi jagah ek houshingh colony ke jaisa bamboo ko lagaya ja raha tha. Aaj hi se logo ka aana suru bhi ho gaya tha kuch log aa gaye the. Wahi dukan aaj se lagna tha. Shubham akhare le pasina bahane ke baad haweli nahane gaya.

Haweli me sab khuss the kyuki puja shubham karne wala tha. Par unhe kya pata kuch log kya soch ke baithe h wahi pari ko dukh apni saheli ka tha par usse khushi bhi tha apne pyaar ke sath rista jurne wala tha. Kyuki do din pahle hi ramakant ji or kajal ne sab gaon walo ke samne ye ghosna karke sadi pakki kar di or yhi khabar un tak pahuchi jaha nhi pahuchna chahiye tha.

Agli update puja kaise shubham kiya uske baare me padhiye. Jaisa ki apne padha koi sadyantra kiya h to kuch bara hone wala h.
 

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