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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,213 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 188 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,458

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Update - 156 ~ Rapture

Ab tak...

Prachi : Arre!?? Arre par-!! Ohh God!!! Ch-Chef... I mean Sir ko call karna padega.

Idhar uske iss tarah jaate hi Prachi ne ghabrahat me Veer ko saari ghatna ke baare me jataya jise sunn Veer khud pareshan ho utha.

Aur yaha Sonali araam se tehelte hue sadko par jaati jaa rahi thi. Mann me ek hi sawaal tha.

'Kya woh aayega!?'


Ab aage...

'Damn it! Damn it! Damn it!!!!!'

*Vrooom*

Veer ko ek kheej uthi. Thoda gussa aur thodi chinta me woh apni bike sadak par bhagaaye jaa raha tha.

'Ye ladki-!!!'

[Such care for that little lamb huh?]

Pari ki ek sultry awaaz uske mann me goonji.

'Stop!!! Abhi tumse baat karne ka time nahi hai mere paas.'

[Ahh! You broke my heart~ Am I not good enough? Kya tumhe pichli Pari itni pasand aa gayi ki tumhe meri qadar nahi?]

'Her personality was the best.'

[Oh my! It hurts, you know! Such rude behaviour! Why don't you submit to me?? Ek baar kaho! I love you Mommy! Please help me! Tumhare qadmo me poori duniya biccha dungi.]

'Heh~'

[You don't trust me? Agar yakeen nahi toh aazma ke dekh lo. I can tell you everything you need to know!]

'Everthing?'

[Yes! EVERYTHING!! Including-]

'Including?'

[My secret as well!!!]

Pari ke shabd sunte hi Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Kya woh sach keh rahi thi? Kya woh apna raaz bata sakti thi use?

'I don't believe it.'

[Yakeen nahi ho raha? Then call me 'Mommy'. Fir dekho, kaise yakeen karwati hu. You just have to submit yourself to me dear ♡ ~]

'Shut up!'

[Hmph~ Sooner or later you'll be mine~ ♡]

'Dekh lenge kaun baazi maarta hai.'

[I haven't lost a single time in my lifetime. You think you can beat me?]

'Yes! Fair and square!'

[Then, I'll wait! Fufufu~ It's getting more interesting. I'll drag you down to the world of ecstasy and pleasure that you'll never be able to escape from my clutches.]

'Haan haan! Sure! Filhaal ke liye, mujhe mera full status dikhao.'

Pari ne iss baar bina Veer ki baat kaate hi full status show kar diya. Woh ab ekdum maun ho chuki thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki sher apne shikaar par jhapatne ke liye kuch derr shaant baitha hua tha.

*Ding*

Veer ke saamne status ki pehli window jhalak uthi.


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Do nayi skills ab uske arsenal me thi. Aquatic Breathing jo use Crimson ko maarne par mili thi.

Aur dusri, Tracer. Jo usne Sonali aur Kaushik ke liye khareedi thi.

Prachi ne jab use bataya tha ki Kaushik theek ladka nahi hai. Toh bhala Veer aisi baat ko nazar-andaaz kaise kar sakta tha?

Skill 2000 points ki thi. Aur uska kaam tha~

*Ding*

[Skill : Tracer
Description : Allows the user to mark any object and then trace it. As long as the object is within the city's boundaries. Host will be able to trace it.
Note : Non-upgradable. Works only on non living things.]

Ye kaam tha Tracer ka. Nirjeev cheezo ko Veer trace kar sakta tha jab tak woh sheher ki boundaries me ho.

Uss din jaate jaate, Veer ne Tracer Food Truck par laga diya tha. Yahi kaaran tha jo woh Sonali ko bachane sahi samay par pohuch saka tha.

'Legendary Skill none huh!?'

[Seer Vision tum kho chuke ho. One time use skill thi.]

'Yeah! I know!'

[Tracer ab kaam nahi karega. That little lamb ran by herself~]

'Yeah!'

[But there's a hack you know fufu~]

'Huh?'

[Just mark the tracer on her clothes or any accessories. That way, you can trace a living being. Thank me later for this hack~ ♡]

Ek adhbhut tarqeeb. Tracer sirf nirjeev cheezon ko hi trace kar paata tha. Toh kya jeevit logo ke pehne gaye kapde nirjeev nahi the? Bilkul the. Aise me Tracer ko insaano ko trace karne ke liye bhi upyog kiya jaa sakta tha. Pari ne use ye ek chota sa par kamaal ka hack bataya tha.

Kya waqai ye Pari sab jaanti thi? System ka raaz bhi?

Veer ne inn vichaaro ko mann se nikaala aur apni status window pe dhyaan diya. Woh jab dusri window pe aaya toh usne dekha ki ab uske Legendary Cards me aur 2 cards shaamil ho chuke the.


philmontgomery-co

Probability Manipulation aur Limb Substitution. Dono Crimson ke Brahamastra the. Usne apne points par nazar daali jo 7192 bache hue the.

Ye kaafi the filhaal kisi bhi emergency se nipatne ke liye. 2000 points usne Tracer par laga diye the. Warna ye 9192 hote. Toh wahi Fame Points bhi acche khaase 3000 ho rakhe the.

Jis cheez ne Veer ko achambhav me daala woh thi favourability list.

'What the-!?'

Usko sabse bada jhatka laga dusra naam padh ke.

Sonali ki favourability 125??? Ye itni kaise badh gayi?? Aur wo bhi aise samay? Woh toh uss se berukhi se pesh aa raha tha. Fir ye itni kaise pahuch gayi?

Aur ye question mark aage kya darshana chaah raha tha? Kaera ke me bhi aisa hi tha. Yaha tak ki Tej aur Suhana ke me bhi.

'What the hell is going on?'

[Fufufu~]

Pari uske upar pyaar se hasi. Jaise woh sab kuch jaanti thi ki inn sab ke peeche kaaran kya tha. Magar woh bataane waalo me se nahi thi. Jab tak Veer use 'Mommy' pukaar ke uske prati khud ko samarpit nahi kar deta tab tak toh bilkul bhi nahi.

Ek aah bharte hue Veer ne sadak par dhyaan diya. Inke jawab woh baad me dhoondh sakta tha. Kintu, filhaal-

Sonali ko dhoondhna zyada zaroori tha.

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Wahi idhar Sonali, deen duniya ki jhanjhato se pare apne aap me mast magan sadak par chalti jaa rahi thi.

Neeche pade kankado ko laat se idhar udhar tatol kinhi vichaaro me ghum thi.

'K-Kahi mein zyada dur toh nahi aa gayi na? Woh mujhe dhoondh toh lega na?'

'Saari galti uski hai. Hmph~ N-Nahi!! M-Meri hi galti hai saari. Mein uss chhuchundar Kaushik ko samajh nahi paayi aur-'

'Agar woh uss raat waha nahi aata toh-!! Mein to apna sab kuch gawa chuki hoti. Haan! Ab ye maharaj muh toh fulayenge hi. Pehli baar itni badi meri galti jo haath lag gayi hai. Kya karu-!?'

Bina kisi disha ka chayan kiye woh bas yuhi chalti jaa rahi thi, jab achanak se uske bagal se ek bike aake khadi hui aur ek horn baji.

Horn ki awaaz sunte hi Sonali samajh gayi thi ki ye kaun tha.

Veer!!

Jo bina koi chehre par bhaav liye use ghoor raha tha.

Veer : Baitho peeche!

Usne rukhe swar me kaha. Magar, Sonali use ansuna kar aage badh gayi. Aise dikhaya jaise woh use jaanti hi nahi thi.

Veer ke maathe ki nass ek baar punah phatne ko hui. Gaadi ko halka sa aage badhaate hue woh uske firse bagal se aaya aur dobaara bola,

Veer : Tumne suna nahi? Baitho peeche!

Sonali kuch shan use dekhi. Andar se toh woh bhi lapak ke baithna chaahti thi uske peeche. Par, Veer ki berukhi ke chalte uska bhi maatha thanka hua tha. Isliye ek look deke woh fir aage badh gayi.

Veer (frowns) : Y-You-!!!

Veer ne gaadi wahi stand par lagaayi aur Sonali ke paas jaake uske haath ko kass ke pakad ke use ghuma diya.

Sonali : Ahhn!!??

Veer : Tumhari samajh me nahi aa raha?

Sonali : Kya kar rahe ho ye? Pagal ho kya?

Veer : Mene tumse kaha ki baitho peeche toh tumhari samajh me nahi aaya kya? Saamne se do baar keh raha hu fir bhi bewakoof ki tarah ansuna kar aage jaate jaa rahi ho?

Sonali : Bewakoof kise kaha? Tum ho bewakoof!! Ek number ke nalayak!!! Nahi karni mujhe tumse koi baat! Jao yaha se! Hmph! Kyu aa rahe ho mere peeche peeche?

Veer (frowns) : Sonali! Iss se pehle ki mein apna aapa kho du. Chup chaap seedhe tareeqe se chal do. Okay?

Iss baar Veer ke chehre par gambheerta dekh Sonali thoda andar se darr gayi. Magar, aaj toh woh thaan ke hi nikli thi ki kaise bhi kar ke dono ke beech paida hue inn shikwo ko dur karke hi rahegi.

Sonali : Nahi jaungi! Mera jaha mann karega mein wahi jaungi! Tumse matlab?

Veer : T-Tum-!!! Suman ko batau?

Sonali : Haan haan kyu nahi!

Apni maa ka naam direct uske muh se sunn pata nahi kyu, par Sonali ka bheja aur garam ho gaya. Woh Veer ko ungli dikhaate hue boli,

Sonali (uchi awaaz me) : Meri maa ka naam leke mujhe mat darana samajh gaye? Mein bol rahi hu na mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni matlab nahi karni. Akela chhodh do mujhe.

Aur usne Veer ke changul se apna haath zabardasti chhudha ke palat ke waha se nikalne ki koshish ki,

Kintu, itne me hi waha aas paas ki bheed jama ho chuki thi. Ladki ki tezz awaaz sunn waha se guzar raha harr aadmi Veer ko achanak hi gher liya.

"Kyu bey? Kya chal raha hai haan?"

"Ladki chhed raha hai?"

"Saale itni aukaat aa gayi ab ki raaste chalte ladki ko public me chhedega?"

Veer : N-Nahi! Suniye! Baat darasal-

"Aao bhai log. Bataaye isko zara."

"Dum toh dekho! Raaste chalte din-dahaade. Koi darr hi nahi matlab."

Veer : Shit-!!!

Apne qadmo ko peeche lete hue Veer deewar se jaa bhida. Logo ne use gher liya tha. Ye log uski nazro me cheeti samaan the. Parantu, Veer apni taqat inn aam insaano ke khilaaf istemal karne ke liye nahi rakhe hue tha.

Sonali ne jab shor gul suna, toh woh palat ke dekhi. Tab tak Veer bheed me kahi ghum ho chuka tha. Shor sharaabe se use pata laga ki uski oonchi awaaz me baat karne se kitna bada bakheda khada ho gaya tha.

'Ahhhnnn! Y-Ye mene kya kar diya?'

Ghabraate hue woh turant hi bheed me ghusi. Jab usne dekha ki ek aadmi Veer ki collor pakde uss par bas haath uthaane hi jaa raha hai toh woh zorr se chillaa uthi,

"Rukoooooo!!!!!"

Uski awaaz sunn tamaam janta ki nigaahein uss par tik gayi. Woh bheed ke ghere se hote hue hadbadi me andar ghusi.

Sonali : Nahhhhiiiiiii!!!!

Aas paas ke log sawaliya nazro se use ghoorne lage. Woh Veer ke paas aayi aur apne dono haatho ko felaate hue use chhek ke khadi ho gayi.

Sonali : Y-Ye mere saath hai! K-Koi anjaan nahi!

"Madam pakka na? Ye aapke saath hai?"

Sonal (nods) : J-Jii!

Uska jawab sunte hi public aur bhadak gayi. Saala jise woh anjaan samajh rahe the woh toh pehchaan ka hi nikla.

"Kya madam! Pehle batana chahiye na. Khud hi awaaz lagati ho aur fir khud hi kehti ho ki pehchaan ka hai."

"Aur nahi toh kya-! Khamakha time waste karwa diya."

"Arre ye sab ladayi jhagde band kamre me kiya karo na. Ye beech sadak hi mili thi kya?"

"Chalo bhai log!"

Ek ek kar...! Harr aadmi waha se unn dono ko bas ghoor ke jaane laga. Aur, bechari Sonali bas sarr jhukaye maafi maangti rahi. Sharm, naraazgi, atpata-pann sab ek saath mehsoos kar paa rahi thi woh.

Veer ka gussa bhi saatve aasmaan par jaa chuka tha. Bina Sonali ko koi jawab diye woh palta aur mud ke jaane laga.

Iss bewakoof ladki ke liye yaha tak aaya tha woh? Ye ladki toh yaha maze se tehelne me lagi hui thi. Jab aapki madad ki koi parvah na kare, toh behtar hai ki uski madad hi na ki jaaye.

Yahi kuch soch, Veer gusse me palat ke wapas apni bike ki orr jaane laga. Jise dekh Sonali ghabra gayi. Ye sab usne plan nahi kiya tha. Fir aisa kyu ho gaya? Kyu harr baar uski karni ulti pad jaati thi?

Sonali : R-Rukooo!!!

Woh bhaagte hue Veer ke paas aayi aur uski baah pakadte hue zidd karne lagi,

Sonali : Thehro!!! S-Suno-! Meri baat suno-!!! M-Mujhe maaf kar do na!! Ye sab jaan boojh ke nahi kiya mene. O-Oye! Tum sunn rahe ho na?

Veer ka mann toh kar raha tha ki kisi pe abhi apne haath saaf kar le. Kintu, ek gehri saans chhodhte hue woh bola,

Veer : Kya hai? Chhodh toh diya hai tumhe ab akele. Jao jaha jaana hai. Karo apne mann ki. Nahi rokunga tumhe. Nahi tokunga. Ghar me koi kuch nahi bolega. Aana araam se. Jab tumhara mann kare.

Na jaane kyu, par Sonali ko ye baatein aur kasht pahucha gayi. Pehle kam se kam Veer uski chinta kar raha tha aur isliye use dhoondhne aaya. Magar ab-

Ab toh dheere dheere jaise woh bhi tang aa chuka tha. Woh toh chaah hi rahi thi ki Veer uski parvaah kare. Lekin-

Sonali (sarr jhuka ke) : Ch-Chalo!

Veer : Huh??

Sonali (shirt pakadte hue) : Mene kaha ch-chalo!!!

Veer : Kyu ab mann nahi hai ghoomne ka?

Veer ki daant sunn usne naa me sarr hila diya. Woh shaanti se bike par baith gayi. Veer ne bhi bina kuch kahe apni bike uthayi aur woh Sonali ko leke waha se chal diya.

Woh dono abhi thodi hi dur aaye the ki Sonali ne uski shirt punah kheechte hue uss se kuch kehna chaaha.

Veer : ???

Sonali : W-Woh-! Waha chalo na!

Veer : Kaha?

Sonali : Woh hotel hai na! Waha chalo!

Veer : Kyu? Kya hua?

Sonali : M-Mujhe pait me dard ho raha hai bohut zyada!!

Veer : Huhh?? Toh doctor ke paas le chalta hu. Hotel me kyu jaana hai?

Sonali : N-Nahi!! Mujhe bas laitna hai thodi derr. P-Please!! Ah!! Dard badh raha hai!

Veer (frowns) : Abhi 5 minute pehle tak toh tum bilkul theek thi!?

Sonali : Ahn!!! Dard ho raha hai khoob.

Veer : Doctor ke yaha chalte hai.

Sonali : N-Nahiii!!! Aisa mujhe hote rehta hai. Doctor ne dawayi batayi hai mujhe. Ch-Chalo na!!!

Veer (frowns) : Kahi tum firse koi natak toh nahi kar rahi!?

Sonali : Nahi naaaa!!! Pagal!! Jaldi chalo!!

Veer ne uski baat sunn gaadi seedhe hotel ki taraf mod di. Ek room kuch derr ke liye usne book karwaya aur woh Sonali ko leke upar apne room me aa gaya.

Sonali ne use dawayi ka naam bhi bata diya tha. Abhi woh jaa hi raha tha dawayi lene jab usne dekha ki Sonali ekdum nishchint hoke room me matak rahi hai. Na hi koi dard na koi kasht badhiya maze se woh bistar par baithi hui thi.

Matlab ye jhooth tha? Kya uske saath firse ek baar chhal kiya gaya?

Jawab tha haan!

Sonali : Arre waha khade khade ab muh kya taaq rahe ho? Idhar aao! Kitna narm bistar hai.

Veer ke chehre se agle hi pal saare bhaav gayab ho gaye.

Veer : Toh tumne jhooth bola? Tumhare pait me koi dard nahi?

Sonali : Haan toh!? Kitne paagal ho tum! Hahahaha! Arre buddhu aise achanak se mujhe kabhi koi pait dard hua hai kya?

Veer : Aur ye food truck se achanak bhaag ke jaana bhi-!?

Sonali : Haan! Hahahahahaha! Sab nakli tha. Mein bhala kyu bhaag ke jaane lagi. Tumhari tarah pagal thodi hu hehe!

Veer ki mutthi achanak hi ye sunn kass uthi. Sonali ka koi maqsad nahi tha Veer ko thes pahuchaane ka. Woh toh bas mood ko light karne ki apni taraf se ek koshish kar rahi thi. Magar, shayad woh nahi jaanti thi ki uski ye harqate Veer ko kitna gussa dila chuki thi.

Usne badi mushqil se khud ke gusse ko niyantrit kiya. Aur jab woh palat ke jaane ke liye hua tab Sonali ek baar fir uski taraf daud ke aayi aur use pakad li,

Sonali : O-Oye kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Haath chhodho!

Sonali : Nahi chhodhungi! Hehe! Pehle jawaab do!!

Veer : Mene kaha haath chhodho!!!

Sonali : Haha! Kaha na...! Nahi chhodhungi!

Veer : Sonaaaaaaliiiii!!!

*Bam*

Veer ne agle hi shan apna haath uski pakad se itni zorr se chhinaya ki Sonali ko ek dhakka lag gaya. Force itna zyada tha ki bechari Sonali peeche jaa ke deewar se jaa takrayi.

"Ahhhhnnn!!!"

Sarr uska deewar se thoda sa bhida aur woh apne ghutno par gir padi. Veer apni khud ki harqat se hairan aankhein faade apne haath ko ghoorne laga.

Ye pehli baar tha! Jab usne kisi apne par na chaahte hue bhi apni shaktiyo ka istemal kiya tha. Woh koi aam ladka nahi tha. Uska zara sa dhakka dena hi tez raftaar ki kisi gaadi se bhidne jaisa tha.

Uska haath kaanp raha tha. Ye kaise ho gaya uss se? Toh wahi Sonali peeche haath lagaaye apna sarr sehlaate hue use dekhi. Aur turant hi-

Uski aankhon me aasu panap uthe. Gaalo se rekhaaye kheechte hue mote mote aasu zameen par girne lage.

Veer : I-

Woh uthi aur sisak sisak ke rone lagi.

Sonali : T-Tum *sniff*

Veer chaahta tha uske paas jaaye. Magar, Sonali ki pichli harqato ne jaise uske kadam rok liye. Woh na hi kamre se jaa paa raha tha aur na hi Sonali ki orr badh paa raha tha.

Sonali : T-Tum bohut bure ho- *sniff* *sniff* bohut bure!!

Ek peeda Veer ke andar uthi. Khud ko doshi maan woh ek gehre chintan me chala gaya. Ye kya kar diya usne? Apne hi parivar ke sadasya ke upar apni shaktiyo ka istemal??? Kya ho raha tha use?

Sonali : Kyu ho tum aise-!?? *sniff*

Veer : ???

Sonali : Kyu karte ho mere saath aisa? *sniff* Uss din ki bh-bhool ka aise badla loge? *sniff*

Veer : N-Nahi! Mein-

Sonali : *sniff* K-Kitni baar baat karna chaah rahi thi mein tumse. *sniff* Par tum the ki- *sniff* *hic* Dekhe tak nahi mujhe. Mujhse dur bhaagte rahe. *sniff*

Veer : ...

Sonali : Maza aata hai tumhe ye karne me? *hic* Haan? Bolo???? *sniff*

Veer : N-Nahi aisa nahi-

Sonali (cheekhte hue) : Toh fir baat kyu nahi karte ho mujhse!!!!!????

Veer : Huh!!?

Sonali (screams) : Kyu nahi kar rahe the mujhse baat??? *sniff* Mein- Mein kitna koshish karti rahi. *hic* Par tum har baar muh ferr ke mujhe nazar-andaaz karke nikal jaate!! *sniff* Kyuuuuu??? Mujhse gussa ho isliye???

Veer : ...!!!

Sonali : Toh suno!!! *sniff* Sorrryyyyy!!!!

Aur woh aur zorr zorr se rone lagi!!

Sonali : Sorrryyyyy!!! *sniff* Sorrryyyy!!! Sorrryyyy!! Mujhe maaf kar do!!! *hic* Par mujhse baatein karo!! *sniff* Mujhse ye tumhari berukhi nahi sahi jaati!!!

Veer : !!!!

Sonali : N-Nahi toh mein marr jaungi!!! *sniff*

Sonali ke shabd sunn, Veer ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi.

Veer : Wh-What!?

Sonali : *sniff* Mein marr jaungi!!! *sniff* Mujhse nahi sehen hota ye sab-! *hic* W-Wese hi meri ab tak ki zindagi bekar rahi hai. *sniff* Yaha aane ke baad khushiyaan shuru hui. Magar, ab tum baat nahi kar rahe. Firse gaav ki ghutan mehsoos hone lagi mujhe- *sniff*

Veer : ??

Sonali : Jab aise ghut ghut ke hi jeena hai-! *sniff* Toh behtar hai ki mein marr jau. *sniff* Tumhe bhi mujhse chidh nahi hogi!!!

Veer akasmat aage badha. Ye pagli ye sab soch rahi thi? Aisa soch bhi kaise sakti thi woh.

Par fir use ye dhyaan aaya. Sonali ka ab tak ka jeevan waqai me bekar hi toh tha. Mumbai me aane ke baad se hi toh usne sahi se jeena shuru kiya tha. Aur aise me uske saath iss tarah pesh aana. Ye kaha ki samajhdari thi?

Woh uss se umr me choti thi. Dekha jaaye toh uska poora bachpan hi rough tha. Dhang ka baap nahi aur na hi koi accha bhai ya behan. Na jaane baap aur bhai milke kitna pratadit karte honge nashe me use.

Veer ka haath apne aap hi uske sarr par gaya. Sparsh mehsoos karte hi Sonali ne sarr utha ke dekha. Veer muskura raha tha. Use dekhte hi-

Woh achanak hi uske seene se kass ke chipak gayi.

Veer : Huh???

Pakad itni mazboot thi ki Veer ko apni kamar pe kasaav acche se mehsoos ho raha tha. Woh uske seene me muh chhipaaye sisakti rahi bas.

Veer ne apna haath uski peeth par rakha aur haule se sehlaya.

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe maaf kar do! Pata nahi kya hua ki-

Sonali : Nahiiiii!! *sniff* T-Tumhari galti nahi hai! *sniff* Saari meri galti hai. Mein uss harami Kaushik ki baato me aa gayi thi. Aur tumhare baare me socha tak nahi. *sniff* M-Mein janti hu tum kyu naraaz the mujhse. Aur hona bhi chahiye- lekin-

Veer : ???

Sonali : Lekin fir baat bhi toh karni chahiye. *sniff* Tum...! Tum baat nahi kar rahe the toh aisa lag raha tha jaise-! Mene kuch apna bohut keemti kho diya hai. *sniff* A-Aaj ke baad mein aisa kabhi nahi karungi!

Veer : Ohh!

Sonali : A-Aur waada karo! Ki tum bhi aisa kabhi nahi karoge mere saath. *sniff* Mujhse firse kabhi aise mat roothna. *sniff* Warna mein sach me apni jaan de dungi!

Veer : Pagal ho kya? Itni si baat pe koi jaan deta hai kya bhala?

Sonali : Hmm! Mein de sakti hu!

Veer : Ahinda se aisi baat ki toh bohut kutogi!! Samajh gayi?

Sonali bas muskurayi aur kuch shan tak Veer ke seene se lipti rahi. Uske baad woh apni pakad thodi dheeli kar sarr upar kar use dekhi.

Ahista ahista woh uske chehre ki orr aage badhne lagi. Dil zorro se uska dhadak raha tha. Veer ke qareeb hone se aaj use itna accha kyu mehsoos ho raha tha? Woh nahi janti thi.

Uske hontho ko dekh Veer ki saansein bhi tez ho chali. Raseele hontho ka apni orr aagman paate hue Veer ne khud ko samarpit kar diya.

Aur, unn raseele gulabi hontho ko usne apne hontho ki giraft me bhar liya.

"Mmmmm~"

Zindagi ka apna pehla chumban mehsoos kar, Sonali ka poora jism kaanp utha. Woh moan karte hue Veer ki baaho me mombatti ki tarah pighalne lagi.

"Mmmmmm~"

Dono kuch lamho ke baad alag hue. Unki nigaahein aapas me bhidi hui thi. Sonali jaanti thi ki inn beetein dino use bas ek nazar Veer ki hi talaash thi.

Woh bina kuch kahe do qadam peeche ko hui. Dhadkane shaant hone ka naam nahi le rahi thi. Kya yahi woh waqt tha?

Apne top ko pakad usne dheere dheere use upar karna shuru kiya, baalo ko bikherte hue top uske gale se fauran hi utar gaya.

Aur, Veer ki aankhon ke saamne ek behad hi khubsoorat nazara tha. Sonali ke gaal sharm se laal hone lage the. Kintu, woh peeche nahi hati.

Bas, Veer par se nazre ferr woh apne bagal me dekhne lagi. Jaise apne husn ka deedar karwana chaah rahi thi. Behad khawaisho ko aaj poora karne ka samay aa chuka tha.

Kaale rang ki bra, uski gori doodhiya twacha pe atyant hi jach rahi thi. Unn haath bhar bade aamo ke beech me khichi lakeer, jo bra ke baahar se jhaak rahi thi, woh Veer ko aur bhi zyada uttejit kar rahi thi.

Veer : *gulps*

Sonali, bina Veer se nazre milaaye uske paas aayi aur ek baar punah uske seene se lag gayi.

Iss baar Veer ka haath seedhe uski peeth par gaya. Bra ka strap feel kar, Veer ke ustaad ne bhi salami dena shuru kar diya tha.

Veer : S-Sonali!?

Woh uski baaho me hi maujood thi. Aur bud-budaate hue boli,

Sonali : Itni zorr se koi dhakka deta hai kya? Gumma pad gaya sarr pe.

Veer : Gumma?

Sonali : Gumma maane sarr par soojan aa gayi mere. Dard kar raha hai ab! Itna bhi nahi pata? Buddhu!!

Veer : O-Ohhh! Sorry!

Usne apna haath Sonali ke sarr par ferr jayza lena chaaha,

Sonali (blushes) : I-Itni bhi nahi lagi hai. Theek ho jayega.

Veer : Doctor ke yaha toh nahi chalna?

Sonali (blushes) : N-Nahi buddhu!

Uski shirt ko apni mutthi me bheenche Sonali behad zyada sharma rahi thi.

Veer ne uske mukhde ko pakad punah upar kiya. Kya unn aankhon me wahi mansha thi jo uski aankhon me thi. Veer ko uski aankhein dekhte hi pata lag gaya.

Aur ek baar fir-

"Mmmm~"

Dono ke honth aapas me jud gaye. Hontho ki kushti me jab zubaan shaamil hui, toh Sonali ka poora badan sihar ke reh gaya.

Yeh adhbhut ehsaas! Kya aisa hota tha ek dusre ko choomna? Aaj woh jaan gayi thi.

Peeche jaate hue woh dono hi bistar par gir gaye. Veer Sonali ke upar tha aur chumban abhi bhi jaari tha.

Veer ke haath bhi samay ke saath behekne shuru ho gaye. Sonali ke stano ko pakadte hi usne zorr se uske ek doodh ko nichod diya, jiske chalte woh bechari uske muh me hi moan karke reh gayi.

Veer ka haath bra ke andar gaya aur use halke haath se Sonali ke doodh ko dabaya~

"Nnnnn~"

Aur fir seedhe bra upar karte hue uske nipple ko tatolne laga.

"Ahhnnnn~"

Dher saari chooma chaati ke baad Veer ne saans durust karte hue use dekha aur pucha,

Veer : Kya tum-!?

Sonali : Haan! Aage kuch mat kaho-!!

Usne Veer ki baah pakdi aur use apni orr kheench liya. Veer jawab samajh chuka tha.

Halke haatho se Sonali ne Veer ke kapde utaare. Ye pehli baar tha jab wo kisi mard ke kapde utaar rahi thi. Uski fit and fine body ko dekhte hi uske dil ki dhadkane tez ho chuki thi.

Par jab baari underwear utaarne ki aayi toh woh sehmi hui ek jagah par jamm gayi.

Veer : Kya hua? Darr lag gaya?

Sonali (blushes) : A-Aisi baat nahi hai. T-Tum mera mazaak mat udao samjhe na?

Veer (smiles) : Bas itne me hi ghabra gayi?

Sonali (blushes) : Maar dungi, samjhe na!?

Uski hayaa ko dekh Veer ne uska mazak udana band kar diya. Kaapte hue haatho se Sonali ne jab uski underwear neeche ki toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Sonali : Y-Ye-!?

Veer (smiles) : Yahi hai jo hai!

Veer ki baat sunn woh jaise kinhi vichaaro me pad gayi.

'Y-Ye-! Ye kya hai??? Ye andar kaise jayega?'

Fir use apni Maa ka khayal aaya. Uski maa, Suman. Akhir woh bhi toh Veer ke saath sahreerik sambandh rakhti thi. Iska matlab-!!!

Uski Maa iss vishaal hathiyar ko apne andar lene me saksham thi?

Veer : Agar darr lag raha hai toh-

Sonali : N-Nahi!!! K-Kuch darr warr nahi lag raha. *blushes* Samjhe?

Aur usne kehte hue underwear poora neeche kheench diya.

Veer poora nagn awastha me tha. Sonali ki bra jo abhi bhi uske seene par maujood thi, use Veer ne strap kholke turant hi jism se alag kar diya.

Kaali panty ko apne haatho me thaam woh dheere dheere use neeche sarkaane laga. Sonali toh bas Veer ko ghoose maarne ki icchaa jataa rahi thi.

Kya ye ladka ek baar me uske kapde nahi utaar sakta tha? Dheere dheere, ahista ahista unhe utaarte hue use chhidhana zaroori tha kya?

Veer ne uski taango ko jab khola toh use kuwari choot ka adhbhut nazara mila. Choot par beshaq baal bhi maujood the.

Sonali ek aam ladki thi aur use khud ko groom karna itna nahi aata tha. Ya yu kahe ki woh inn cheezon pe zyada dhyaan hi nahi deti thi.

Aur de bhi kyu bhala? Use kaha pata tha ki aaj woh Veer ke sang sex karne waali hai. Veer ne kuch shan dekha aur fir bola,

Veer (smiles) : Tumhe Ragini Bhabhi se classes leni chahiye.

Sonali : Huh? K-Kis cheez ki?

Veer (smiles) : Apne gupt-ang ko saaf suthra kaise rakha jaaye... uski!!

Veer ne jaise hi ye kaha. Sonali ke gaalo ka paara itni tezi se chadha ki uske perr ek jhatke me aapas me band ho gaye aur usne apna sharm se bhara chehra apne dono haatho se chhipa liya.

Sonali (blushes) : Nahiiii!!!!!!

Veer hasa!

Sonali (blushes) : T-Tum-! Tum kitne gande ho yaar!!

Uske haatho ko chehre se hata ke Veer ne jab firse use chooma toh Sonali ki saari sharm dheere dheere khatm hone lagi.

Badan ko lagataar choomte hue, jagah jagah pyaar ke nishaan chhodhte hue jab Veer neeche aaya toh uski choot ko pehle haule se usne sehlaya.

"Nnnggghh~"

Jis se Sonali bed par hi jhatka kha ke reh gayi. Aur Veer ne jab ekdum se apna muh uski choot par lagaya toh woh toh jaise uss duniya se hi uth gayi.

Uski kamar poora arch bana ke bed ke upar ho chali. Kya tha yeh sab? Yeh ehsaas! Kahi use Veer se pyaar toh nahi ho gaya tha? Shayad haan!

Woh iss prem roopi samundar me giri toh giri magar itni gehrayi me jaake giri, ki iska abhaas use abhi khud bhi nahi tha.

Veer ka uski parvah karna. Yahi toh chaah rahi thi woh itne dino se. Yahi toh use sukh pahuchata tha.

Dheere dheere ye chaahat ki lat use lagne lagi thi.

Shayad aaj raat yahi beetne waali thi uski...!

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Mumbai...
Kaera's house...
Evening ~ 7:34 PM

Karan apne gale se tie ko dheeli karte hue apne kamre me aaya.

Ek meeting se woh abhi chhoot ke aaya tha aur ab uski ek aur meeting kuch hi derr me scheduled rakhi hui thi.

Usne AC set kar, TV on kiya aur apne kapde change karne laga.

Pehle uske mann me ek quick bath lene ka idea aaya. Magar, usne woh khayal fauran hi mann se nikaal diya. Deri jo ho jaati aisa karne se. Abhi woh nayi shirt daalne hi wala tha jab achanak hi uske kamre ke khule hue darwaze par ek khat-khat hui,

"May I come in Sir?"

Usne sarr utha ke dekha toh paaya ki, uske ghar ki ekmaatr khubsoorat Russian maid khadi hui thi.

Karan : Julia???

Julia muskurayi aur bina Karan ki permission liye hi kamre ke andar chali aayi.

Julia : Done with the meeting?

Karan : Y-Yeah! That went well! Time for this next one-!

Julia : Sir, don't need to worry.

Karan : Huh?

Julia (smiles) : Young Miss has already dealt with it. You don't have to go.

Karan : Wh-What!!!??

Woh taajub me Julia ko dekha. Kya abhi abhi Julia ne jo kaha, woh sach tha? Kaera ne agli meeting already sort kar di thi? Iska matlab ab use kahi jaane ki zaroorat nahi thi?

Usne ek raahat ki saans li.

Karan (sighs) : Ahhhh! That's a relief!

Tabhi, TV par Veer ki khabar jhalki. Uske France me kiye gaye karnaame. Khabar purani ho chuki thi par abhi bhi kuch channels par barkaraar thi.

Karan : Tch! This guy-! Aise hote hai dost Julia. Itna bada kaand kar ke aaye hai janaab par abhi tak ek call nahi aaya hai. Aur ye log mujhe apna dost kehte hai. Hmph-!

Woh apni shikaayte rakh raha tha. Julia bas muskurayi aur uske kamre se nikal Kaera ke room ki orr chal di jaha Kaera khidki se khadi baahar ki orr dekh shaant khadi hui thi.

Julia : Karan Sir is back home, Miss!

Kaera : Hmm!

Julia : Are you perhaps thinking of young master Veer!?

Kaera (glances) : Huh!!?? Why do you think so?

Julia (smiles) : Call it my intuition. Am I right?

Kaera : Th-That's not it!

Julia : You love him. Don't you-!?

Kaera : N-Noooo-!!!

Uska jawab aaya. Par awaaz me woh aakramakta nahi thi. Awaaz ladkhadayi hui si thi.

Julia : I'm sure that you have feelings for him. Then, why don't you approach him? Young Master Veer is indeed not from a haughty rich family, he's tall and handsome, loyal and protective for you. He doesn't flaunt his money, he loves kids and pets, isn't he a kind hearted gentleman? Basically, he passes all your standards.

Kaera : ...

Julia : Then? Why don't you give any sign to him? Wouldn't it be late if someone else hogs him for themselves?

Kaera : S-Stop!!! *sniff*

Julia : Huhhh!!?

Jab Kaera ki sisakne ki awaaz Julia ke kaano me padi toh woh hairat me reh gayi. Woh ye jaanti thi ki uski Miss Kaera ab pehle jaisi nahi thi. Ya yu kahe ki ekdum hi pehle jaise ho gayi hai. Jo emotions ko feel kar sakti hai.

Aur isliye aaj woh itni baatein keh rahi thi. Woh nahi chaahti thi ki Veer ko koi aur ladki leke jaaye aur uski Miss Kaera haath par haath dhari baithi reh jaaye.

Magar-!

Kaera ki sisakne ki awaaz ne jaise use achambhav me daal diya.

Woh ro rahi thi? Magar kyu-!? Iska jawab Julia ne nahi jaanana chaaha. Jo sabse pehla kaam tha uske liye iss waqt woh tha maafi maangna.

Julia (kowtows) : I-I'm sorry Young Miss! I spoke too much. I shouldn't have-! I-!! I was just curious why young Miss wasn't approaching young master Veer?

Kaera : That's because- *sniff*

Julia : !!????

Aur Kaera fir achanak hi khidki se uski orr palti. Julia ne jab uska chehra dekha toh bechari ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Itne aasu usne aaj tak apni Miss Kaera ke chehre par nahi dekhe the.

Uske hontho par ek majboori waali muskaan feli aur
woh ahista se boli,

Kaera : ...because I want him to claim me!!!

Julia : Ahhn!!!

Aur Julia ka badan woh sunte hi hairat ke maare sihar utha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update late hai. I know. Aur aap bhi jaante ho ki kyu late hai. Veer aur Sonali ka scene abhi khatam nahi hua hai toh ye mat sochna use beech se hi kaat diya gaya hai. Agle update me unke beech kya hua woh sab dikhaya jayega. Agla update ek mega update bhi hoga aur sirf sex based nahi hoga. Kuch unn characters ko bhi dekhenge hum jo story me kaafi time se nazar nahi aaye hai. Anyways, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai guys. 150. And, btw ye update 5.6k words ka hai.

Dhanyavaad. ✨
 
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Ok, dear bro. Take Ur time & give us update. Aur thodi der intezaar karlenge😵

Bahut khoob, bhai. Aakhirkaar Sonali Ko Veer ne bacha Liya Kaushik se, acchi baat hai. Aur, ab jaakar Sonali Ko pata chala Veer kya cheez hai aur pachthaane lagi Apne kartooton par, chalo Abhi toh uski akal tikhaane par aayi, der aaye durust aaye. Mast update that Bhai, dhanyavad ☺️☺️☺️

it was fucking great

tej ne koi alag fal ya anaj paida kar liya kya jise vo dikhana chahti hai

baki update mai veer ki kahani do charactters ke sath hi age badhi baki characters ka vohi simple haal tha

Jabardast update bhai 👏

bahut achcha kiya veer ne usko bacha liya waise bhi usko anubhav nai hai duniyadari ka aur agar uske sath galat ho jata fir usko sari duniya se nafrat ho jati waise ab veer ko usko maaf kar dena chahiye

Super update

Super update bhai maza aa gaya keep rocking and thankyou for such a nice story

Finally Veer had save Sonali ... Great to see you after a long time , update was fabulous as usual .... 💞

Marvellous awesome

fantastic update bro

Superb update....
Sonali deserve this ...

Fantastic Mazedaar fabulous update sir😍😍😍😍😍.

Badi chant hai ye Sonali to

Nice update bro

Awesome update bhai💥💥

Bro shandar lajab mast update bro

Excellent update. Bacchi ki kya jaan hi le loge... Aur ye Pari madam kyon itni shant baithi hain. Use kuch to samjhayein.
Ek baat aur, ye Veer kaise Sonali ko bachane theek location per pahunch gaya...
Expecting a long and lustful night between Sonali and our hero. Uske baad business hi business, pehle Tej and Shyam ji, uske baad interaction with Kaera and Sonia. Arre haan.... wo Kaera ka task abhi bhi limbo me pada hua hai. Uska suspense bhi khatam hona chahiye...
Aur haan, Purvi mausi ki class bhi to aane wali hai... Mauza hi mauza...

Superb update 😍

Waiting for next update

ek nibba mere piche pada hai bolat rula raha meko wo :cry2:

Super duper fantabulous update Werewolf bhai

hai kauno sasur ab mese bol raha ki vj4u mere karan likhna chhod diya hai jabki ye story hi maine request par request karke suru karai thi aur lagataar unko mana raha hun mai ki aage likhen wo

Nice update

Waah... The sudden change in Pari's behaviour was a masterpiece, and so is the way Veer silenced her with just one word... 'Shhhh!'.

Sonali dobara nikal gai.
Veer kiya dobara jaye ga.
New chef ana tha hotel k liye?
Coupen b diye gaye thy logon ko
casa bella hotel ka kiya hoga?
Kaera Sonia and Ava dobara milain gi ya nae?
Veer aur Kaera ki mulaqat kab hogi?
Pari ki new personality aggressive hai jab k veer ab shant hai aisa kyun?

 Intezaar khatam
Super fantastic mind-blowing jabardast update

Suhana ki wapsi kab hogi

Louis ka b wait rahy ga
and zoey ka b

Fantastic update bhai ji

life me bahut problem unki upar se shadi bhi hui hai ab sabki apni life nai mil raha time unko filhaal to kya kare wo ab reader iljaam lagaye ki staaf ke karan wo na likhte aur meko staaf maam kar suna raha mai bol raha staaf na hun lekin fir bhi ab aap hi batao kya addicted inna bura hai ki wo sabko rokega likhne se pareshan karega jabki writers ki mehnat se forum chal raha ab wo kisi ki story na likh sakta bhai admin ka kaam site chalti rahe bas aage kisi ki zindagi me dakal dene ka adhikar kisi ko na hai inna baat na samjhte hain log

Super super update bhai

Nice update

Zabardast tha... pr adhura tha..koi nhi .....thanks for the lovely update...

Nice update

Mast update hy bhai. Ke~p it up and plz plz update jaldi jaldi post kiya krain. Bohat late updates aati haim ab

update to hamisa hi badiya rheta hai ye wali bhi mast hai
Lakin site bekar ho gai hai like hota hi nhi (opps something wrong)

Lajawab update

great update... keep it up 👍

Awesome Update Bhai....!!!

the dark knight head GIF

Mind blowing update bhai

awesome bro

story ek naya more lenay wli hye

क्या ही कहने

सोनाली उफ्फ

आख़िर उसको भी हक़ है रूठने का, लेकिन हीरो भी अपना ईगो वाला है।

कमबख्त इश्क जब होता कुछ ऐसा ही होता है

Nice update

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Sonali ko bacha liya veer ne. Or Sonali ko bhi ab akkal aa gayi hai.

Nice update Bhai.

Werewolf bhai update padha Maine sach kahun to rat main kafi wait krne ke bad nhi mila to so gya late se jga or update padha
Update acha tha Bhai
Sonali ko charitraheen hone se bacha liya veer ne mujhe lga tha koi notification milega but yahan to prachi ne call kr Diya tha
Next update main sayad sonali veer ko khudko shoup den

वीर ने कौशिक को सस्ते मे छोड़ दिया , इसका मै स्वागत करता हूं। इसका कारण था कि सोनाली का चरित्रहरण न होना। अगर कौशिक ने सोनाली की इज्ज़त लूट लिया होता तो मै ' परी ' के सलाह पर अमल करता , कौशिक के लिंग को जड़ से ही काट दिया होता।
कौशिक ने अवश्य बड़ी गलती की थी लेकिन संयोगवश उसकी गलती एक बड़े अपराध के स्तर तक न पहुंच पाई । इस कार्य के लिए उसे दंडित करना जरूरी था लेकिन वह दण्ड उसके जान के कीमत पर नही होना चाहिए था।

सोनाली के प्रति वीर के रूखे व्यवहार का कारण मुझे समझ नही आया। सोनाली जवान लड़की है , उसके कुछ अरमान भी है , वो भी किसी हैंडसम लड़के के आकर्षण का केंद्र बनना चाहती है । ऐसे मे कौशिक की लच्छेदार और मीठी मीठी बातों से वो भ्रमित हो गई तो इसमे उसका क्या कसूर ! यह किसी के भी साथ हो सकता है । होना यह चाहिए था कि सोनाली को उसके कृत्य के लिए अच्छी तरह से फटकार लगाई जाए और फिर उसे सही गलत का फर्क समझाया जाए । अपने बच्चों के साथ तो ऐसा ही किया जाता है।

अगर यही हरकत तेजल ने की होती , तब भी क्या वीर का रवैया तेजल के प्रति ऐसा ही होता ! अपने परिवार के साथ बेरूखी नही दिखाई जाती। उनके साथ प्यार किया जाता है तो उन्हे डांटा - फटकारा भी जाता है।

जहां तक मुझे लगता है सोनाली के मन मे वीर के लिए किसी भी तरह की गलत फीलिंग्स नही है । यह जानते हुए भी कि वीर का अवैध संबंध उसके मां और भाभी से है । अगर उसे यह सब गलत लगता तो वो खुलकर इसका विरोध करती , या वीर से वह कभी बातें ही न करती , या वो घर छोड़कर कहीं भाग जाती । क्योंकि हमने अक्सर देखा है कि उसके दिल मे जो कुछ होता है वही उसके जुबान पर भी होता है।
शायद कहीं न कहीं उसके मन मे यह भावना है कि वीर द्वारा वह प्रेम मेरे नसीब मे क्यों नही है जो उसकी मां और भाभी को हासिल है ।

निधि मैम के बारे मे आपने कहा था वोल्फी भाई कि उन्होने वीर को इसलिए तमाचे जड़ दिए क्योंकि वीर ने उसके होंठो को चुम लिया था। लेकिन मुझे लगता है उन्होने ऐसा इसलिए किया था क्योंकि वीर ने अचानक से उनके स्तन को अपने दोनो हाथो से दबोच लिया था।
लड़कियां उन लड़कों से सख्त नफरत करती है जो उनके स्तनों को बेहयाई दृष्टि से देखता है। ट्रेन - बस जर्नी या किसी और कारण से उनका स्तन या कोई और प्राइवेट पार्ट मर्दों से घर्षण खा जाए , वो बिल्कुल ही अलग चीज होती है। लेकिन डायरेक्ट कोई उनके उरोजों को स्पर्श कर दे , यह उन्हे गंवारा नही । अगर यह सब उनका आशिक करता है तब वह अवश्य अलग बात हो जाती है।

अपडेट हमेशा की तरह बेहतरीन और जबरदस्त था वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग।

Bhai Aaj kafi free lag rhe ho
To update bhi likhna suru krdo 😅

Awesome story Bhai nice update


Nice update

Nic update

Ah! Hate converted in to love and might see some intimate scenes in next episode... Fu! Fu! Fu!

Nice update


Kafi acha update tha maja aa gaya read krke. To yaha jais ki sbne socha tha veer ne sonali ko bach to liya. Lakin veer ko iske liye koi mission kyu nahi Mila ? Mana kaam koi muskil nahi tha lkin fir bhi ek task to tha hi ? Aur location ke liye sayad ye keh skte hai ki veer ne GPS k use Kiya ho. Jo sonali ke watch ya kisi chij me phle se fit kiy ho usne. Lakin fir bhi mission to miln chiye.
Yaha veer ka naraj hon bhi bnt hai aur sonali ka wo sub sochn bhi bikul bnt hai. Aur last me usen jo kiya hi uske liye bhi usko kuch nhi keh skte ab jiske paas jitn dimak hog wo utn hi use karega na. Lkin mujhe yaha dought hai ki sonali fir se kisi musibat me fas jayegi. Khair dekhte hai aage ky hota hai ? Aur ye sonali veer ke sath kab illu illu karti hai ?

Shandar update brother ...
Sonali aur Veer ke bich ke mansik dwand k bare mein kya hi Kaha Jaaye ...
Yah to Tay tha ki agar Sonali ke sath Kuchh ऊंच-नीच hoti hai To Veer Ko Pata Chal Jana Tha as usual system ki vajah se..
But Sonali Ne Jis tarike se Veer se baat ki thi vah Veer ko nagvar Gujari..... Shayad Isliye Hi Veer abhi Sonali Se Kisi bhi Tarah ka vartalap nahin kar raha hai na hi Aisa Koi mauka de raha hai Sonali ko....
Dekhte hain ab inke bich Ka Rishta kya naya Mod leta hai...

Sonali ko ehsaas huwa lekin bahot dair ho chuki h Veer itni asani se maan ne wala nahi
Koshisk ki achche se dhulayi honi chahiye thi lakin jinta Mila itna kaafi tha uske liye
Ab Sonali kidher nikal gayi kia fir se koyi miseebat mol lene wali h
Dekhte h aage kia hota h or Tej ki mehnat bhi dekhte kia tarah ki kia or saath m Purvi masi kon rasan paani leker Veer per chadhayi kerti h
Behtareen shaandar update bhai

Romanchak update bhai 💗💗

Wonderful update Bhai ☺️😊

Superb update 👌


Update bhaut khubsurat hain

Good update. To be honest, last arc was very strong in action. Yeh filler updates zaroori hai. I’m sure the writer has something big planned for us!
Waiting

Superb awesome update brother to gud luvd it plz do cont asap take care

Finally update after a long wait😀

You always do the unpredictable. Sabne socha tha ki ab sonali ke rescue ka mission veer ko milega aur kaushik ka to marna pakka hai. But aisa nahi hua, prachi ke through veer ko sonali ke bare me pta lga aur kaushik to kya hi kahe.

That's the most impressive thing about you ki jo bhi likhte to sabki expectations aur prediction ko galat sabit kar deta hai hamesha. Aur story ko lekar suspense bna rehta hai.

Sonali Sonali Sonali.....
Ab use apni galti ka ahsas ho rha hai. Halaki main sonali ko jyada galat nahi samjhta. Use bahar ki duniya ki jyada samajh nahi hai. Veer jab gaon aaya aur uski maa ko bachaya, uske baad vo veer ke liye dil me ache bhav rakh sakti thi, lekin jab koi ladki dekh le ki uski maa apne se aadhi umra ke ladke ke sath sex kar rahi hai aur use apna malik bol rahi hai to achi batein bhi najarandaz ho jati hai. In sab ke chakkaro me usne ye nahi dekha ki veer hi hai jiski vajah se ab tak vo aur uski maa safe hai.
Jiska ahsas ab use ho rha hai. Dusri baat ki veer hamesha se sonali ki pahuch se kahi aage ki cheez rha hai, ek taraf vo jo apne gaon se bahar bhi mushkil se nikli hai to dusri taraf veer jiska to world tour ka package kat ta hi rehta hai time time pe.
Isliye veer ko shayad uss najariye se dekhne ka moka hi nahi mila aur jo time sath bhi bitaya unhone to ladne me gava diya.
Puri sacchai to use pta hi nhi veer ke bare me.

Veer ko bhi hurt hua tha jab sonali ne use ignore karke chutiye kaushik ki baat mani to attitude to dikhana banta hai.😠

Dekhte hai sonali kaise use manati hai.


I started to watch anime from past few months. Isliye ab mujhe lagta hai ki ye story ek tarah se anime style writing ko lekar chalti hai. Jaisa ki aapne bhi kaha tha ki story japanese novel se concept leti hai. Jaise anime me main character ke sath sath baki character ki bhi apni backstory hoti hai, jisse hum harr character se connected feel karte hai. Like slogan ho yaa aatish yaa crimson in sab ne bhi past me bahut kuch jhela tha, we feel for them however they all are villains. Aisa hi anime villains ke sath hota hai. Aur bhi kai vajah hai jiski vajah se mujhe aisa lgta hai.

I can't imagine ki agar iss story par anime bane to kitna maja aayega😀😀

thanks for writing a story like this.

Eagerly waiting for next update.....try to give asap. Otherwise hum wait kar hi lenge😀😀😀 Werewolf

Excellent update

Waiting for the next update

Lajawab update Bhai

कहानी का विश्लेषण करना बहुत ही कठीन है, तथापि आपने जो प्रस्तुतिकरण किया था और जो भूमिका बनाई है आपने इस कहानी का... हृदय प्रफुल्लित हो गया है भाई मेरे... बस इसी प्रकार हम पाठकों को मनोरंजित करते रहिए... महाकाल की कृपा बनी रहे.... वैसे इस कहानी में शारीरिक सुख का व्याख्यान कम है लेकिन कहानी बहुत सुंदर है....

Suberb update bro.....

*kon kon chuda bhi tak veer se*

Ding 🤕🤕🤕 kaushik ki aacha sabak sikhaya 🧟🧟🧟 sonali ke liye bura lag raha hai but nice jald hi wo bhi veer ke niche hogi like slave

Aaj story sif ek per hi tiki rahi sonali per magar Aaj usay pata chal Gaya hai ki har taraf ghum phir ke veer hi hai uske pass. Magar abhi slave wala samarpan nahi aaya hai shayad isi liye veer usko avoid kar raha hai ab yah bewaqufi wali harkat zaroor veer ke ghussey ko bhar layegi.

Bhai bhut hi shaandar update tha mujhe laga tha veer kaushik ko nipta dega but usne warning dekr chod diya ab agle update ka intezar h


Bro update bht kmal ka tha maza a gya but next update jaldi dena last ki trha late mt krna

Zabardast update 👍👍👍

Fantastic update



Nice update

Nice update

Superb zabardast update 😊😍

Aage ab intjar hai

Waiting for the next update

Were wolf bhai is update ke bad bechain ho gya hun jaldi bhai romantic love kiss wala seen bhe dekhao nidhi ka ehsaas delao veer ke pyar ka juhi kb mamu se papa pa aye ge

Werewolf Bhai Sonali is a slave and slave should serve the master

Ek baar aur aise hi comment kr raha hu ,lekin kuch to karna padega Varna aap ko bura lagega .
Bas dekhna chahunga ki sabse pyar me girva to ho yaa phir sirf ek se baakiyo se sirf sex.

Werewolf bhai new update ki writing start Hui ya nhi kab tak ka expectation rakh skte hai Sunday ya Monday

Mst update bro waiting to see how will sonali react when she get to know about her family's Moto
Waiting for next update

आप बहुत अच्छा लिखते हैं 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Finally, I am back in forum after some hectic weeks of life. I admit that I had read all the updates one or two days later when they were released but I wasn't able to give a reply but today I would love to give my thoughts on the story updates from 150.


Veer always goes with the unexpected plans 😇. He planted the diary as a gift from kaera's mom. This move would have helped veer to get both mental as well as emotional consciousness from kaera when reading the diary and finally, after that, the queen is really back. The exciting part is what will be her perspective towards Sonia,Suhana etc and how would she react when she will someday introspect her life.

A question Is there anything missing in concept of favourability?

Tej is getting more tez. She wants to know everything about veer, who is an enigma in himself and that's why bhavna told her beta go slow 😂🦥.
Arohi is just amazing. Everybody is in tension due to media but she knew what to do and how to do it. She just pops out with a surprise in this story in evey new update showing her unknown behavioural traits in bits and pieces.

Questions were asked yet many questions were ignored that saved veer 😂 from tez and arohi.

Nidhi is a strong point to break and then expose her to the feelings and due to Veer's excitement,she as a teacher taught veer with a slap 😂 that slow and steady wins the race 😂.

Now business and boss , veer is slowly creating a boss image. They are all going to face the real boss who is just composed of everything and the rest is up to you what u want to extract from him.

Sonali and her stupidity had reached the optimum level and so the consequences were faced by her later on and now veer's ignorance is making it more brutal .


Now the best change 😉 Pari a new personality. Oh my god she is just a whole new version and what a flip from a active minded pari to a seductive minded pari (Wordplay)😂. I think the personality change of system always favours veer , crimson arc - sharp pari, now this cool family and self time -a seductive one .

Strange
🖐🏼🌀🧛🏻‍♂️

Mera 2sra account bhi open nahi ho raha ... Pata nahi kyun Aisa ho Raha hai...

Ye 3sra account registered Kiya hai... Hope update read karne k baad hamesha review milta rahega ...😁

Kya baat h 🤣🤣👏👏

If anyone remember updates no. in which Veer went to Delhi with Suhana and met kaera. Pls let me know Werewolf

Wolf broo jb veer ko koi mission nhi mila tha to usko sonali ki location kese pta chali ?

Bhai kab tak story ka update aye ga

Awesome as always

waiting waiting waiting

Bhai me aapki story par pahli bar comment kar rha hu to sorry and
Apki story ke pure update me 4 baar padh chuka hu !
Aaj Tak ki sabse favourite story h
Ab to mere ko aapki story Puri yaad ho gyi h 😂😂
Kya hi writing skills h aapki
And or to kya hi khu yaar aapki tarif me sabad hi nhi mil rahe
Thanks for story
And waiting for update.........

Bhae men hiroin kon he story me

Superbb Updatee

Mujhe laga tha Veer ko koi mission milega. Phir laga ke Kaushik itna koi khaash nhi jiske liye System ek mission dede.

Bhala ho prachi ka jisne sahi time pe Veer ko call karke Sonali ke baare mein bata diya aur woh sahi time pe waha aagaya.

Idher Sonali ab phir se Veer se baat karne ke liye mauke dhundh rahi hai par Veer thehra stud launda itni aasani se kaise maanega.

Ab dekhte hai Sonali ka yeh plan kamyaab hota hai yaa phir se uske liye musibat le aata hai.


🔅
इतना अजीब शख़्स हूँ कि मेरे साथ रहकर
बिगड़े हुए सुधर गए सुधरे हुए बिगड़ गए...

हाँ... बस एक बात अच्छी रही.... जो ये कथा चलती रही...
"मलाल" दिल मे कहीं.. रहेगा ही... की साथ क्यों न चल सका...
जिंदगी की मोह से कभी, साला ये मन... क्यों नही मचल सका...

जाने कहाँ पे था मै... भैंचो याद भी तो न रहा...
शायद... पैरिस, लास वेगास, और क्रिमसन पे था मै पड़ा...

चलो... अच्छा ही है... एकबार मे इतने सारे अंश पढ़ने को मिलेंगे...
बाकी...
कहानी के इस अपार सफलता पर ढेरों सुभकामनाएँ वोल्फी Werewolf भाई...

नई नई जॉब लगी, इस वजह से समय नही निकाल पा रहा...
लेकिन, आपकी इस रचना की एक सुनहरी कल्पना मेरी मश्तिस्क मे ऐसे बन चुकी है की... वो मुझे हमेशा कहानी के भविष्य की दृश्य बनाने पर मजबूर कर दिया करती है...
अब इतने समय मे मेरे दिमाग मे जाने क्या क्या दृश्य बना दिये... देखते है... कौन कौन सा दृश्य मेल खाता है।

✳️✳धन्यवाद✳✳️

Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai


Waiting for the next update

Thik hai Bhai.. Waiting

waiting for next update bro


kara do to maja aaa jaayegga, actually sabse jyada maja aayega usme

herione to wohi hai

waiting waiting waiting

Werewolf bro is their any chance of update today

Waiting for next
bussiness and fame ka wait hai

Nice story

divya wala sex scene sabse best tha


Wait for next update bhai

Kya Aaj aaega update

Aagle update ka intejaar hai Werewolf bhai


Waiting for next update

Waiting...

I've been reading this amazing story from past few days.... Brother you are really awesome.... Each and every update was mind blowing.. I can't describe how much I like this story... Brother you have extraordinary writing skill just keep it up.. And try to give us amazing updates in future also..... Waiting desperately for next update bro...


Waiting for the next update

3000 points + 2000 fame points Yeh Paris me fame mila tha

Bhumika ki compititer thi wah ab tak story main missing hai. Jo bakery ke oder ka scence huva tha .
Wah kab story main entry hogi.
Kya narang our us laddy ka koi scene hai kya kuki ab business ark chalra ha hai.

Mast update h bhai...🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Hamesha ki tarah lajavaab

Waiting bro

Kab update aaye ga Werewolf bro

Jordaar, Dhamakedaar, Lajwaab, Bejod update bhai....

Werewolf 🐺 🐺 🐺 🐺 🐺 🐺 🐺 🐺
तो आज की शाम सोनाली के नाम रहीं, हर एक किरदार को पूरे जतन से सहेजते हो.. अतिशयोक्ति नहीं है परंतु घटनाओं का उल्लेख मजेदार ढंग से प्रस्तुत किया है... अति उत्तम 💗😍😍💗

Waiting bro

Waiting for the next update

Eagerly waiting for update bro

Bhai pichly update ko uolode howy aj pory 7 din ho gye hai plsss ab next update b dey do or intzar nhi hota apny chahny waly readers ko bhai etna wait tu na krwao or update dey do ab

BEHAD KHUBSURAT LAJAWAAB MARVELOUS EXCELLENT MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Update please


Waiting....... 😐


Bhai updates?


Update ki umeed hai kya sirji

Waiting bro

Bro update kb tk ay ga plz week ma km sy km 2 update to bnty ha bro 1 Monday ka dusra Saturday ka...

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖 update 156


Mujhe jaroor batana

Nice update bhai ❤️

to Kaushik ne apni asliyat dikha hi dii jo k hona hi tha...
bss Sonali hi is baat se anjaan thi wrna Veer ki to chodo Prachi ko bhi andaaza tha uski mentality ka...
issi liye to usne Veer ko sab bataya tha or phir jab der rata tak Sonali nhi ayii to ussi ne Veer ko aagaah kiya tha...

or Veer pohonch gaya sahi time sahi place pr or jis kaam k liye aaya tha woh kiya or khamoshi se Sonali ko le kr ghr aa gaya ....

usne koi baat nhi ki Sonali se, woh bhi kitne hi din tak or Sonali koshish hi krti reh gyii baat krne kii.

Tej Veer ko kisaanon ka kaam dikhaana chaahti hai, ab dekhte hain k kaam kya huwa hai or kitna ....?

Sonali ne ek new trick use ki hai sab bikher kr bhaag gyii woh bhi Prachi k samne, jis se Prachi Veer ko call kr k bataye or huwa bhi aisa hi...
ab to bss yehi umeed lagaye sadkon pr ghoom rhi hai k Veer aa jaye...

ab aapne bataya hai k Sonia bhi jald dikhne waali hai to sabko bss isii chiz k intezaar rhe ga or phir Kaira ka...

Jab ye story start huyi thi to update weekly aa jaya krte the but ab pta nahi aisa kya ho gya h ki update 10 din me aa rhe h is hisab se mahine me 3 update hi milenge.

Bhai Story Achhi hai lekin aap update nahi doge to readers ka interest kam ho jayega... Pls Updates regularly diya kariye..

Sait open hone me bahot dikkat aati he

Update de do bhaiii😌

Eid aa gi pr humara or apka update nhi Aya ... Bro plz update da do yr plz... :updating::updating::updating::updating::updating:

Kal sham tak hi aaiga yhi hota hai harbar

waiting for update...........

Vai har bar update ki time hi apko koi na koi problem ho jata ha but kya kare ap ki life ki problems ham kya jane

Bhai log ye bhi to socho agar ye story band ho Gaya to... Writer bhai story chod Diya to tab karte rahna aise reply...

Bhai wait Karo de hi rahe hai update... Jab bhi time milega ... Jo kuch mil Raha hai usme khus raho ... Aisa nahi ho ki kuch mile hi na...

Free hi main to story read karne ko mil Raha hai... To jab aye tab read kar lena

Abhi update ka thoda problem chal Raha hai... To kya hua mere Bhai log zindegi hamesha same same nahi hota... For example - RIVER me kabhi same same Pani nahi bahta... Kabhi kam to kabhi jyada hota hai...


Ye time writer bhai busy honge to update late ho Raha hai... Kya hua Bhai abhi aise hi chala lete hain kuch din baad fir se pahele ke tarah update aa jayenge...

Writer bhai aap apne hisab se update de sakte hain... Apna life bhi to enjoy karna hai... Aise nahi ki ghar se office aur office se ghar fir update likhna suru... Kabhi kabhi enjoy bhi kar liya Karo aur time mile to likh Lena...

Bhai next update

Bhai... Writer's ki bhi apni personal life hoti...use kabhi kuch kaam aa sakta ...kuch pareshani ho sakti...bimaar ho saktaa...wo bhi insaan hai... writer agar koi date bata bhi deta hai aur update nahi deta hai..toh iska yah matlab nahi ki aap use writer ko dosh Dena shuru kar do..wah toh apni Marzi se app ke liye likh raha.. use kya jarurat hai ki wo aapko update ke date bataye ya update de ...aapne use kaam pe thode rakha hai...wo har waqt sirf story pe hi dhyan de... Werewolf Bhai...aap jab Puri tarah se free ho jao.... uske baad hi update ...par dhyan dena ...yah to Aisa chalta rahta..aaj update de bhi doge toh kal phir update magane lagege...

I hope everything will be fine and nothing terrible happens. Take your time and resolve your problems if there are any. After that give us a mega update :hinthint2:

Issue time ka nahin hai..issue credibility ka hai.. everyone understands the time n effort in good story writing. Most of writers don't have even half the writing skills, imagination or language control like Werewolf Bhai.
Maine to kitni baar request Kiya tha ki when not sure, don't commit to time of next update. Is better than never adhering to any commitment made w.r.t every update.Pahle week mein do updates aate rehte..fir week mein ek..ab 10+ din mein ek update aa rahe hain. Just leads to lowered interest of readers. Writer ka to.interest kam ho hi gaya hai.
So Bhai log..just chill and wait. Am sure is weekend Tak you shall have a dhamakedar update. Cheerios.

Bro everything is fine??..even if your updates get late sometimes..but it doesn't take that long, I have become silent reader for sometimes so i don't comments on ur updates had to do it today, take care of yourself... and reply soon

Take care of your health.... Get well soon...

What happened bhai is everything fine??

Plz Update Dear

Waiting for next update

Get Well Soon Brother

Warewolf bhai take care of yourself. Get wel soon after all Health is wealth. Take a good rest with timely Medicines and after that you can continue your story. But before everything get wel soon

Take care bhai..
Get well soon

Bhai old monk garam Pani me maar lo thik ho jayega ok

Get well soon

Hello Rashmi ji

Get well soon bhai

Waiting..

Koi na buddy hota hai jab theek ho jao tab update de dena health se badhkar stpry thodi hai

Wese bro itna to bata hi sakte ho kahase ho tum Wese aaj raat se hi humare jamnagar mai bhi continues baris ho rahi hai or barish bhi aise ki rook hi nahi rahi hai barish bhi bahut tej agar 2 min bahar khade raho na to bhigade aisi ho rahi hai

Yaha ke adpas ke gaao main to jese khusiyo ki lahar doud gayi hai sab ke khet main fasal ugni shurur ho gayi hai aaj meri chutti hai to aaj nikla hu barish main ghumne bhai kasam se kya hi view hai shar ka or highway ke aaspads ke kheto ka jese maza aagya dekh ke hehe sorry ha firse thoda flow hogya kyu ki ilove barish ka mousam

Get well soon wolfi buddy

Jaldi se changa ho jao bhai.... Ye cold to dam tod deti h....

get well soon bro⚘⚘⚘

Eagerly waiting for update bro

Get well soon bro

Get well soon bhai

Waiting for next update

Ummid hai apki tabiyat jald hi sahi ho or ham pathako ko or bhi behtarin updates padhne ka saubhagya mile


Asha karte hai aap jaldi thik ho baki story to aage badh ti hi rahegi bas aap swasth rahiye....

Get well soon!

Nice update

Take care brother. Health is wealth, wish you a speedy health recovery.

Bhai kiya ho gaya? Waiting for beautiful updates.

Get Well soon bro....
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Bhai ye story itni niche chli gyi thi....mujhe lga khi delete to nhi kr diya na story ko.....,😀😀😄😄

Bhaiii ab to de do update agr poora ho gya ho to ab aur wait ni ho rha

Update Please

Bhai aur kitna let lage ga updated ane me please bata do bahut din wait kar leye


Bus Bhai Jaldi Se Theek Ho Jaao ,Humko Patah Hai Apka Update Humesha Aata Hai .
Bohut Log Toh Story Chhod Ke Bhaag Jaate HaiN
Site Incomplete Story's Se Bhara Pada Hai..
Get Well Soon ❤️❤️❤️

Good to hear that you're doing good and recovering. We are with you and hopefully that next update will come soon dear Werewolf.

Umeed hai apki sehat abi behter hogai hogi.dua go hai k apki sehat hamrsha tar o taza rahe

werewolf bhai...writer ke saamne kitni chunautiyan hoti hain..ye koi chutiya nahi samajh sakta...main bhi kahani likhta hoon..kahani likhne ke alawa aur bhi bahot kaam hote hain...aap bimaar hain magar kuch logon ko bimaari nazar nahi aati..isiko bolte hai swarthi aadmi..jo sirf apne swarth ke liye kahani padhne aate hain..writer bimaar hai usko kya taqleef hai isse unko koi matlab nahi hota....

Bhai story ke update ke liye to wait kar lenge par apne health ka update bhi timely dete rehna

Waiting eagerly warewolf bhai

Yes bro i am also understand me bhi job and studies ke sath stories likh raha hu har din kitni chunnautiya hoti hai us wajah se kabhi kabar delay ho jata hai aur ek acha update dene ke liye dimag man aur tan sabhi fresh hona jaroori hai jo har waqt possible nahi hai

Eagerly waiting for update sir

Waiting next

Thik hai bhai koi baat nhii
Aap aram se likho

Thanks bro 🙏

Thanks bro

Thank you Bhai congratulations on full recovery

Wellness is more important than post,
Please post after complete recovery.

Congrats on becoming well dear bro 👍. Your health is foremost than update. Tnq for intimating abt upcoming update 🙏. T.C. bye dear bro 🕺

Bahi khushi hoi yeh jan ker kay ab ap tabihat fit and fat hay aur dua hay app hamaysha fit and fat rahain

Phir to aaj rat xforum par taaka jhanki karta rahunga :peep:

Besabar ho ke baithe hai update ke intejar me.

Bhai or kitna late night hoga yaar update de do ab to

late night means 3 4 bje bro
Update 156 has been posted. ✨
 

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Update - 156 ~ Rapture

Ab tak...

Prachi : Arre!?? Arre par-!! Ohh God!!! Ch-Chef... I mean Sir ko call karna padega.

Idhar uske iss tarah jaate hi Prachi ne ghabrahat me Veer ko saari ghatna ke baare me jataya jise sunn Veer khud pareshan ho utha.

Aur yaha Sonali araam se tehelte hue sadko par jaati jaa rahi thi. Mann me ek hi sawaal tha.

'Kya woh aayega!?'


Ab aage...

'Damn it! Damn it! Damn it!!!!!'

*Vrooom*

Veer ko ek kheej uthi. Thoda gussa aur thodi chinta me woh apni bike sadak par bhagaaye jaa raha tha.

'Ye ladki-!!!'

[Such care for that little lamb huh?]

Pari ki ek sultry awaaz uske mann me goonji.

'Stop!!! Abhi tumse baat karne ka time nahi hai mere paas.'

[Ahh! You broke my heart~ Am I not good enough? Kya tumhe pichli Pari itni pasand aa gayi ki tumhe meri qadar nahi?]

'Her personality was the best.'

[Oh my! It hurts, you know! Such rude behaviour! Why don't you submit to me?? Ek baar kaho! I love you Mommy! Please help me! Tumhare qadmo me poori duniya biccha dungi.]

'Heh~'

[You don't trust me? Agar yakeen nahi toh aazma ke dekh lo. I can tell you everything you need to know!]

'Everthing?'

[Yes! EVERYTHING!! Including-]

'Including?'

[My secret as well!!!]

Pari ke shabd sunte hi Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Kya woh sach keh rahi thi? Kya woh apna raaz bata sakti thi use?

'I don't believe it.'

[Yakeen nahi ho raha? Then call me 'Mommy'. Fir dekho, kaise yakeen karwati hu. You just have to submit yourself to me dear ♡ ~]

'Shut up!'

[Hmph~ Sooner or later you'll be mine~ ♡]

'Dekh lenge kaun baazi maarta hai.'

[I haven't lost a single time in my lifetime. You think you can beat me?]

'Yes! Fair and square!'

[Then, I'll wait! Fufufu~ It's getting more interesting. I'll drag you down to the world of ecstasy and pleasure that you'll never be able to escape from my clutches.]

'Haan haan! Sure! Filhaal ke liye, mujhe mera full status dikhao.'

Pari ne iss baar bina Veer ki baat kaate hi full status show kar diya. Woh ab ekdum maun ho chuki thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki sher apne shikaar par jhapatne ke liye kuch derr shaant baitha hua tha.

*Ding*

Veer ke saamne status ki pehli window jhalak uthi.


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Do nayi skills ab uske arsenal me thi. Aquatic Breathing jo use Crimson ko maarne par mili thi.

Aur dusri, Tracer. Jo usne Sonali aur Kaushik ke liye khareedi thi.

Prachi ne jab use bataya tha ki Kaushik theek ladka nahi hai. Toh bhala Veer aisi baat ko nazar-andaaz kaise kar sakta tha?

Skill 2000 points ki thi. Aur uska kaam tha~

*Ding*

[Skill : Tracer
Description : Allows the user to mark any object and then trace it. As long as the object is within the city's boundaries. Host will be able to trace it.
Note : Non-upgradable. Works only on non living things.]

Ye kaam tha Tracer ka. Nirjeev cheezo ko Veer trace kar sakta tha jab tak woh sheher ki boundaries me ho.

Uss din jaate jaate, Veer ne Tracer Food Truck par laga diya tha. Yahi kaaran tha jo woh Sonali ko bachane sahi samay par pohuch saka tha.

'Legendary Skill none huh!?'

[Seer Vision tum kho chuke ho. One time use skill thi.]

'Yeah! I know!'

[Tracer ab kaam nahi karega. That little lamb ran by herself~]

'Yeah!'

[But there's a hack you know fufu~]

'Huh?'

[Just mark the tracer on her clothes or any accessories. That way, you can trace a living being. Thank me later for this hack~ ♡]

Ek adhbhut tarqeeb. Tracer sirf nirjeev cheezon ko hi trace kar paata tha. Toh kya jeevit logo ke pehne gaye kapde nirjeev nahi the? Bilkul the. Aise me Tracer ko insaano ko trace karne ke liye bhi upyog kiya jaa sakta tha. Pari ne use ye ek chota sa par kamaal ka hack bataya tha.

Kya waqai ye Pari sab jaanti thi? System ka raaz bhi?

Veer ne inn vichaaro ko mann se nikaala aur apni status window pe dhyaan diya. Woh jab dusri window pe aaya toh usne dekha ki ab uske Legendary Cards me aur 2 cards shaamil ho chuke the.


philmontgomery-co

Probability Manipulation aur Limb Substitution. Dono Crimson ke Brahamastra the. Usne apne points par nazar daali jo 7192 bache hue the.

Ye kaafi the filhaal kisi bhi emergency se nipatne ke liye. 2000 points usne Tracer par laga diye the. Warna ye 9192 hote. Toh wahi Fame Points bhi acche khaase 3000 ho rakhe the.

Jis cheez ne Veer ko achambhav me daala woh thi favourability list.

'What the-!?'

Usko sabse bada jhatka laga dusra naam padh ke.

Sonali ki favourability 125??? Ye itni kaise badh gayi?? Aur wo bhi aise samay? Woh toh uss se berukhi se pesh aa raha tha. Fir ye itni kaise pahuch gayi?

Aur ye question mark aage kya darshana chaah raha tha? Kaera ke me bhi aisa hi tha. Yaha tak ki Tej aur Suhana ke me bhi.

'What the hell is going on?'

[Fufufu~]

Pari uske upar pyaar se hasi. Jaise woh sab kuch jaanti thi ki inn sab ke peeche kaaran kya tha. Magar woh bataane waalo me se nahi thi. Jab tak Veer use 'Mommy' pukaar ke uske prati khud ko samarpit nahi kar deta tab tak toh bilkul bhi nahi.

Ek aah bharte hue Veer ne sadak par dhyaan diya. Inke jawab woh baad me dhoondh sakta tha. Kintu, filhaal-

Sonali ko dhoondhna zyada zaroori tha.

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Wahi idhar Sonali, deen duniya ki jhanjhato se pare apne aap me mast magan sadak par chalti jaa rahi thi.

Neeche pade kankado ko laat se idhar udhar tatol kinhi vichaaro me ghum thi.

'K-Kahi mein zyada dur toh nahi aa gayi na? Woh mujhe dhoondh toh lega na?'

'Saari galti uski hai. Hmph~ N-Nahi!! M-Meri hi galti hai saari. Mein uss chhuchundar Kaushik ko samajh nahi paayi aur-'

'Agar woh uss raat waha nahi aata toh-!! Mein to apna sab kuch gawa chuki hoti. Haan! Ab ye maharaj muh toh fulayenge hi. Pehli baar itni badi meri galti jo haath lag gayi hai. Kya karu-!?'

Bina kisi disha ka chayan kiye woh bas yuhi chalti jaa rahi thi, jab achanak se uske bagal se ek bike aake khadi hui aur ek horn baji.

Horn ki awaaz sunte hi Sonali samajh gayi thi ki ye kaun tha.

Veer!!

Jo bina koi chehre par bhaav liye use ghoor raha tha.

Veer : Baitho peeche!

Usne rukhe swar me kaha. Magar, Sonali use ansuna kar aage badh gayi. Aise dikhaya jaise woh use jaanti hi nahi thi.

Veer ke maathe ki nass ek baar punah phatne ko hui. Gaadi ko halka sa aage badhaate hue woh uske firse bagal se aaya aur dobaara bola,

Veer : Tumne suna nahi? Baitho peeche!

Sonali kuch shan use dekhi. Andar se toh woh bhi lapak ke baithna chaahti thi uske peeche. Par, Veer ki berukhi ke chalte uska bhi maatha thanka hua tha. Isliye ek look deke woh fir aage badh gayi.

Veer (frowns) : Y-You-!!!

Veer ne gaadi wahi stand par lagaayi aur Sonali ke paas jaake uske haath ko kass ke pakad ke use ghuma diya.

Sonali : Ahhn!!??

Veer : Tumhari samajh me nahi aa raha?

Sonali : Kya kar rahe ho ye? Pagal ho kya?

Veer : Mene tumse kaha ki baitho peeche toh tumhari samajh me nahi aaya kya? Saamne se do baar keh raha hu fir bhi bewakoof ki tarah ansuna kar aage jaate jaa rahi ho?

Sonali : Bewakoof kise kaha? Tum ho bewakoof!! Ek number ke nalayak!!! Nahi karni mujhe tumse koi baat! Jao yaha se! Hmph! Kyu aa rahe ho mere peeche peeche?

Veer (frowns) : Sonali! Iss se pehle ki mein apna aapa kho du. Chup chaap seedhe tareeqe se chal do. Okay?

Iss baar Veer ke chehre par gambheerta dekh Sonali thoda andar se darr gayi. Magar, aaj toh woh thaan ke hi nikli thi ki kaise bhi kar ke dono ke beech paida hue inn shikwo ko dur karke hi rahegi.

Sonali : Nahi jaungi! Mera jaha mann karega mein wahi jaungi! Tumse matlab?

Veer : T-Tum-!!! Suman ko batau?

Sonali : Haan haan kyu nahi!

Apni maa ka naam direct uske muh se sunn pata nahi kyu, par Sonali ka bheja aur garam ho gaya. Woh Veer ko ungli dikhaate hue boli,

Sonali (uchi awaaz me) : Meri maa ka naam leke mujhe mat darana samajh gaye? Mein bol rahi hu na mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni matlab nahi karni. Akela chhodh do mujhe.

Aur usne Veer ke changul se apna haath zabardasti chhudha ke palat ke waha se nikalne ki koshish ki,

Kintu, itne me hi waha aas paas ki bheed jama ho chuki thi. Ladki ki tezz awaaz sunn waha se guzar raha harr aadmi Veer ko achanak hi gher liya.

"Kyu bey? Kya chal raha hai haan?"

"Ladki chhed raha hai?"

"Saale itni aukaat aa gayi ab ki raaste chalte ladki ko public me chhedega?"

Veer : N-Nahi! Suniye! Baat darasal-

"Aao bhai log. Bataaye isko zara."

"Dum toh dekho! Raaste chalte din-dahaade. Koi darr hi nahi matlab."

Veer : Shit-!!!

Apne qadmo ko peeche lete hue Veer deewar se jaa bhida. Logo ne use gher liya tha. Ye log uski nazro me cheeti samaan the. Parantu, Veer apni taqat inn aam insaano ke khilaaf istemal karne ke liye nahi rakhe hue tha.

Sonali ne jab shor gul suna, toh woh palat ke dekhi. Tab tak Veer bheed me kahi ghum ho chuka tha. Shor sharaabe se use pata laga ki uski oonchi awaaz me baat karne se kitna bada bakheda khada ho gaya tha.

'Ahhhnnn! Y-Ye mene kya kar diya?'

Ghabraate hue woh turant hi bheed me ghusi. Jab usne dekha ki ek aadmi Veer ki collor pakde uss par bas haath uthaane hi jaa raha hai toh woh zorr se chillaa uthi,

"Rukoooooo!!!!!"

Uski awaaz sunn tamaam janta ki nigaahein uss par tik gayi. Woh bheed ke ghere se hote hue hadbadi me andar ghusi.

Sonali : Nahhhhiiiiiii!!!!

Aas paas ke log sawaliya nazro se use ghoorne lage. Woh Veer ke paas aayi aur apne dono haatho ko felaate hue use chhek ke khadi ho gayi.

Sonali : Y-Ye mere saath hai! K-Koi anjaan nahi!

"Madam pakka na? Ye aapke saath hai?"

Sonal (nods) : J-Jii!

Uska jawab sunte hi public aur bhadak gayi. Saala jise woh anjaan samajh rahe the woh toh pehchaan ka hi nikla.

"Kya madam! Pehle batana chahiye na. Khud hi awaaz lagati ho aur fir khud hi kehti ho ki pehchaan ka hai."

"Aur nahi toh kya-! Khamakha time waste karwa diya."

"Arre ye sab ladayi jhagde band kamre me kiya karo na. Ye beech sadak hi mili thi kya?"

"Chalo bhai log!"

Ek ek kar...! Harr aadmi waha se unn dono ko bas ghoor ke jaane laga. Aur, bechari Sonali bas sarr jhukaye maafi maangti rahi. Sharm, naraazgi, atpata-pann sab ek saath mehsoos kar paa rahi thi woh.

Veer ka gussa bhi saatve aasmaan par jaa chuka tha. Bina Sonali ko koi jawab diye woh palta aur mud ke jaane laga.

Iss bewakoof ladki ke liye yaha tak aaya tha woh? Ye ladki toh yaha maze se tehelne me lagi hui thi. Jab aapki madad ki koi parvah na kare, toh behtar hai ki uski madad hi na ki jaaye.

Yahi kuch soch, Veer gusse me palat ke wapas apni bike ki orr jaane laga. Jise dekh Sonali ghabra gayi. Ye sab usne plan nahi kiya tha. Fir aisa kyu ho gaya? Kyu harr baar uski karni ulti pad jaati thi?

Sonali : R-Rukooo!!!

Woh bhaagte hue Veer ke paas aayi aur uski baah pakadte hue zidd karne lagi,

Sonali : Thehro!!! S-Suno-! Meri baat suno-!!! M-Mujhe maaf kar do na!! Ye sab jaan boojh ke nahi kiya mene. O-Oye! Tum sunn rahe ho na?

Veer ka mann toh kar raha tha ki kisi pe abhi apne haath saaf kar le. Kintu, ek gehri saans chhodhte hue woh bola,

Veer : Kya hai? Chhodh toh diya hai tumhe ab akele. Jao jaha jaana hai. Karo apne mann ki. Nahi rokunga tumhe. Nahi tokunga. Ghar me koi kuch nahi bolega. Aana araam se. Jab tumhara mann kare.

Na jaane kyu, par Sonali ko ye baatein aur kasht pahucha gayi. Pehle kam se kam Veer uski chinta kar raha tha aur isliye use dhoondhne aaya. Magar ab-

Ab toh dheere dheere jaise woh bhi tang aa chuka tha. Woh toh chaah hi rahi thi ki Veer uski parvaah kare. Lekin-

Sonali (sarr jhuka ke) : Ch-Chalo!

Veer : Huh??

Sonali (shirt pakadte hue) : Mene kaha ch-chalo!!!

Veer : Kyu ab mann nahi hai ghoomne ka?

Veer ki daant sunn usne naa me sarr hila diya. Woh shaanti se bike par baith gayi. Veer ne bhi bina kuch kahe apni bike uthayi aur woh Sonali ko leke waha se chal diya.

Woh dono abhi thodi hi dur aaye the ki Sonali ne uski shirt punah kheechte hue uss se kuch kehna chaaha.

Veer : ???

Sonali : W-Woh-! Waha chalo na!

Veer : Kaha?

Sonali : Woh hotel hai na! Waha chalo!

Veer : Kyu? Kya hua?

Sonali : M-Mujhe pait me dard ho raha hai bohut zyada!!

Veer : Huhh?? Toh doctor ke paas le chalta hu. Hotel me kyu jaana hai?

Sonali : N-Nahi!! Mujhe bas laitna hai thodi derr. P-Please!! Ah!! Dard badh raha hai!

Veer (frowns) : Abhi 5 minute pehle tak toh tum bilkul theek thi!?

Sonali : Ahn!!! Dard ho raha hai khoob.

Veer : Doctor ke yaha chalte hai.

Sonali : N-Nahiii!!! Aisa mujhe hote rehta hai. Doctor ne dawayi batayi hai mujhe. Ch-Chalo na!!!

Veer (frowns) : Kahi tum firse koi natak toh nahi kar rahi!?

Sonali : Nahi naaaa!!! Pagal!! Jaldi chalo!!

Veer ne uski baat sunn gaadi seedhe hotel ki taraf mod di. Ek room kuch derr ke liye usne book karwaya aur woh Sonali ko leke upar apne room me aa gaya.

Sonali ne use dawayi ka naam bhi bata diya tha. Abhi woh jaa hi raha tha dawayi lene jab usne dekha ki Sonali ekdum nishchint hoke room me matak rahi hai. Na hi koi dard na koi kasht badhiya maze se woh bistar par baithi hui thi.

Matlab ye jhooth tha? Kya uske saath firse ek baar chhal kiya gaya?

Jawab tha haan!

Sonali : Arre waha khade khade ab muh kya taaq rahe ho? Idhar aao! Kitna narm bistar hai.

Veer ke chehre se agle hi pal saare bhaav gayab ho gaye.

Veer : Toh tumne jhooth bola? Tumhare pait me koi dard nahi?

Sonali : Haan toh!? Kitne paagal ho tum! Hahahaha! Arre buddhu aise achanak se mujhe kabhi koi pait dard hua hai kya?

Veer : Aur ye food truck se achanak bhaag ke jaana bhi-!?

Sonali : Haan! Hahahahahaha! Sab nakli tha. Mein bhala kyu bhaag ke jaane lagi. Tumhari tarah pagal thodi hu hehe!

Veer ki mutthi achanak hi ye sunn kass uthi. Sonali ka koi maqsad nahi tha Veer ko thes pahuchaane ka. Woh toh bas mood ko light karne ki apni taraf se ek koshish kar rahi thi. Magar, shayad woh nahi jaanti thi ki uski ye harqate Veer ko kitna gussa dila chuki thi.

Usne badi mushqil se khud ke gusse ko niyantrit kiya. Aur jab woh palat ke jaane ke liye hua tab Sonali ek baar fir uski taraf daud ke aayi aur use pakad li,

Sonali : O-Oye kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Haath chhodho!

Sonali : Nahi chhodhungi! Hehe! Pehle jawaab do!!

Veer : Mene kaha haath chhodho!!!

Sonali : Haha! Kaha na...! Nahi chhodhungi!

Veer : Sonaaaaaaliiiii!!!

*Bam*

Veer ne agle hi shan apna haath uski pakad se itni zorr se chhinaya ki Sonali ko ek dhakka lag gaya. Force itna zyada tha ki bechari Sonali peeche jaa ke deewar se jaa takrayi.

"Ahhhhnnn!!!"

Sarr uska deewar se thoda sa bhida aur woh apne ghutno par gir padi. Veer apni khud ki harqat se hairan aankhein faade apne haath ko ghoorne laga.

Ye pehli baar tha! Jab usne kisi apne par na chaahte hue bhi apni shaktiyo ka istemal kiya tha. Woh koi aam ladka nahi tha. Uska zara sa dhakka dena hi tez raftaar ki kisi gaadi se bhidne jaisa tha.

Uska haath kaanp raha tha. Ye kaise ho gaya uss se? Toh wahi Sonali peeche haath lagaaye apna sarr sehlaate hue use dekhi. Aur turant hi-

Uski aankhon me aasu panap uthe. Gaalo se rekhaaye kheechte hue mote mote aasu zameen par girne lage.

Veer : I-

Woh uthi aur sisak sisak ke rone lagi.

Sonali : T-Tum *sniff*

Veer chaahta tha uske paas jaaye. Magar, Sonali ki pichli harqato ne jaise uske kadam rok liye. Woh na hi kamre se jaa paa raha tha aur na hi Sonali ki orr badh paa raha tha.

Sonali : T-Tum bohut bure ho- *sniff* *sniff* bohut bure!!

Ek peeda Veer ke andar uthi. Khud ko doshi maan woh ek gehre chintan me chala gaya. Ye kya kar diya usne? Apne hi parivar ke sadasya ke upar apni shaktiyo ka istemal??? Kya ho raha tha use?

Sonali : Kyu ho tum aise-!?? *sniff*

Veer : ???

Sonali : Kyu karte ho mere saath aisa? *sniff* Uss din ki bh-bhool ka aise badla loge? *sniff*

Veer : N-Nahi! Mein-

Sonali : *sniff* K-Kitni baar baat karna chaah rahi thi mein tumse. *sniff* Par tum the ki- *sniff* *hic* Dekhe tak nahi mujhe. Mujhse dur bhaagte rahe. *sniff*

Veer : ...

Sonali : Maza aata hai tumhe ye karne me? *hic* Haan? Bolo???? *sniff*

Veer : N-Nahi aisa nahi-

Sonali (cheekhte hue) : Toh fir baat kyu nahi karte ho mujhse!!!!!????

Veer : Huh!!?

Sonali (screams) : Kyu nahi kar rahe the mujhse baat??? *sniff* Mein- Mein kitna koshish karti rahi. *hic* Par tum har baar muh ferr ke mujhe nazar-andaaz karke nikal jaate!! *sniff* Kyuuuuu??? Mujhse gussa ho isliye???

Veer : ...!!!

Sonali : Toh suno!!! *sniff* Sorrryyyyy!!!!

Aur woh aur zorr zorr se rone lagi!!

Sonali : Sorrryyyyy!!! *sniff* Sorrryyyy!!! Sorrryyyy!! Mujhe maaf kar do!!! *hic* Par mujhse baatein karo!! *sniff* Mujhse ye tumhari berukhi nahi sahi jaati!!!

Veer : !!!!

Sonali : N-Nahi toh mein marr jaungi!!! *sniff*

Sonali ke shabd sunn, Veer ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi.

Veer : Wh-What!?

Sonali : *sniff* Mein marr jaungi!!! *sniff* Mujhse nahi sehen hota ye sab-! *hic* W-Wese hi meri ab tak ki zindagi bekar rahi hai. *sniff* Yaha aane ke baad khushiyaan shuru hui. Magar, ab tum baat nahi kar rahe. Firse gaav ki ghutan mehsoos hone lagi mujhe- *sniff*

Veer : ??

Sonali : Jab aise ghut ghut ke hi jeena hai-! *sniff* Toh behtar hai ki mein marr jau. *sniff* Tumhe bhi mujhse chidh nahi hogi!!!

Veer akasmat aage badha. Ye pagli ye sab soch rahi thi? Aisa soch bhi kaise sakti thi woh.

Par fir use ye dhyaan aaya. Sonali ka ab tak ka jeevan waqai me bekar hi toh tha. Mumbai me aane ke baad se hi toh usne sahi se jeena shuru kiya tha. Aur aise me uske saath iss tarah pesh aana. Ye kaha ki samajhdari thi?

Woh uss se umr me choti thi. Dekha jaaye toh uska poora bachpan hi rough tha. Dhang ka baap nahi aur na hi koi accha bhai ya behan. Na jaane baap aur bhai milke kitna pratadit karte honge nashe me use.

Veer ka haath apne aap hi uske sarr par gaya. Sparsh mehsoos karte hi Sonali ne sarr utha ke dekha. Veer muskura raha tha. Use dekhte hi-

Woh achanak hi uske seene se kass ke chipak gayi.

Veer : Huh???

Pakad itni mazboot thi ki Veer ko apni kamar pe kasaav acche se mehsoos ho raha tha. Woh uske seene me muh chhipaaye sisakti rahi bas.

Veer ne apna haath uski peeth par rakha aur haule se sehlaya.

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe maaf kar do! Pata nahi kya hua ki-

Sonali : Nahiiiii!! *sniff* T-Tumhari galti nahi hai! *sniff* Saari meri galti hai. Mein uss harami Kaushik ki baato me aa gayi thi. Aur tumhare baare me socha tak nahi. *sniff* M-Mein janti hu tum kyu naraaz the mujhse. Aur hona bhi chahiye- lekin-

Veer : ???

Sonali : Lekin fir baat bhi toh karni chahiye. *sniff* Tum...! Tum baat nahi kar rahe the toh aisa lag raha tha jaise-! Mene kuch apna bohut keemti kho diya hai. *sniff* A-Aaj ke baad mein aisa kabhi nahi karungi!

Veer : Ohh!

Sonali : A-Aur waada karo! Ki tum bhi aisa kabhi nahi karoge mere saath. *sniff* Mujhse firse kabhi aise mat roothna. *sniff* Warna mein sach me apni jaan de dungi!

Veer : Pagal ho kya? Itni si baat pe koi jaan deta hai kya bhala?

Sonali : Hmm! Mein de sakti hu!

Veer : Ahinda se aisi baat ki toh bohut kutogi!! Samajh gayi?

Sonali bas muskurayi aur kuch shan tak Veer ke seene se lipti rahi. Uske baad woh apni pakad thodi dheeli kar sarr upar kar use dekhi.

Ahista ahista woh uske chehre ki orr aage badhne lagi. Dil zorro se uska dhadak raha tha. Veer ke qareeb hone se aaj use itna accha kyu mehsoos ho raha tha? Woh nahi janti thi.

Uske hontho ko dekh Veer ki saansein bhi tez ho chali. Raseele hontho ka apni orr aagman paate hue Veer ne khud ko samarpit kar diya.

Aur, unn raseele gulabi hontho ko usne apne hontho ki giraft me bhar liya.

"Mmmmm~"

Zindagi ka apna pehla chumban mehsoos kar, Sonali ka poora jism kaanp utha. Woh moan karte hue Veer ki baaho me mombatti ki tarah pighalne lagi.

"Mmmmmm~"

Dono kuch lamho ke baad alag hue. Unki nigaahein aapas me bhidi hui thi. Sonali jaanti thi ki inn beetein dino use bas ek nazar Veer ki hi talaash thi.

Woh bina kuch kahe do qadam peeche ko hui. Dhadkane shaant hone ka naam nahi le rahi thi. Kya yahi woh waqt tha?

Apne top ko pakad usne dheere dheere use upar karna shuru kiya, baalo ko bikherte hue top uske gale se fauran hi utar gaya.

Aur, Veer ki aankhon ke saamne ek behad hi khubsoorat nazara tha. Sonali ke gaal sharm se laal hone lage the. Kintu, woh peeche nahi hati.

Bas, Veer par se nazre ferr woh apne bagal me dekhne lagi. Jaise apne husn ka deedar karwana chaah rahi thi. Behad khawaisho ko aaj poora karne ka samay aa chuka tha.

Kaale rang ki bra, uski gori doodhiya twacha pe atyant hi jach rahi thi. Unn haath bhar bade aamo ke beech me khichi lakeer, jo bra ke baahar se jhaak rahi thi, woh Veer ko aur bhi zyada uttejit kar rahi thi.

Veer : *gulps*

Sonali, bina Veer se nazre milaaye uske paas aayi aur ek baar punah uske seene se lag gayi.

Iss baar Veer ka haath seedhe uski peeth par gaya. Bra ka strap feel kar, Veer ke ustaad ne bhi salami dena shuru kar diya tha.

Veer : S-Sonali!?

Woh uski baaho me hi maujood thi. Aur bud-budaate hue boli,

Sonali : Itni zorr se koi dhakka deta hai kya? Gumma pad gaya sarr pe.

Veer : Gumma?

Sonali : Gumma maane sarr par soojan aa gayi mere. Dard kar raha hai ab! Itna bhi nahi pata? Buddhu!!

Veer : O-Ohhh! Sorry!

Usne apna haath Sonali ke sarr par ferr jayza lena chaaha,

Sonali (blushes) : I-Itni bhi nahi lagi hai. Theek ho jayega.

Veer : Doctor ke yaha toh nahi chalna?

Sonali (blushes) : N-Nahi buddhu!

Uski shirt ko apni mutthi me bheenche Sonali behad zyada sharma rahi thi.

Veer ne uske mukhde ko pakad punah upar kiya. Kya unn aankhon me wahi mansha thi jo uski aankhon me thi. Veer ko uski aankhein dekhte hi pata lag gaya.

Aur ek baar fir-

"Mmmm~"

Dono ke honth aapas me jud gaye. Hontho ki kushti me jab zubaan shaamil hui, toh Sonali ka poora badan sihar ke reh gaya.

Yeh adhbhut ehsaas! Kya aisa hota tha ek dusre ko choomna? Aaj woh jaan gayi thi.

Peeche jaate hue woh dono hi bistar par gir gaye. Veer Sonali ke upar tha aur chumban abhi bhi jaari tha.

Veer ke haath bhi samay ke saath behekne shuru ho gaye. Sonali ke stano ko pakadte hi usne zorr se uske ek doodh ko nichod diya, jiske chalte woh bechari uske muh me hi moan karke reh gayi.

Veer ka haath bra ke andar gaya aur use halke haath se Sonali ke doodh ko dabaya~

"Nnnnn~"

Aur fir seedhe bra upar karte hue uske nipple ko tatolne laga.

"Ahhnnnn~"

Dher saari chooma chaati ke baad Veer ne saans durust karte hue use dekha aur pucha,

Veer : Kya tum-!?

Sonali : Haan! Aage kuch mat kaho-!!

Usne Veer ki baah pakdi aur use apni orr kheench liya. Veer jawab samajh chuka tha.

Halke haatho se Sonali ne Veer ke kapde utaare. Ye pehli baar tha jab wo kisi mard ke kapde utaar rahi thi. Uski fit and fine body ko dekhte hi uske dil ki dhadkane tez ho chuki thi.

Par jab baari underwear utaarne ki aayi toh woh sehmi hui ek jagah par jamm gayi.

Veer : Kya hua? Darr lag gaya?

Sonali (blushes) : A-Aisi baat nahi hai. T-Tum mera mazaak mat udao samjhe na?

Veer (smiles) : Bas itne me hi ghabra gayi?

Sonali (blushes) : Maar dungi, samjhe na!?

Uski hayaa ko dekh Veer ne uska mazak udana band kar diya. Kaapte hue haatho se Sonali ne jab uski underwear neeche ki toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Sonali : Y-Ye-!?

Veer (smiles) : Yahi hai jo hai!

Veer ki baat sunn woh jaise kinhi vichaaro me pad gayi.

'Y-Ye-! Ye kya hai??? Ye andar kaise jayega?'

Fir use apni Maa ka khayal aaya. Uski maa, Suman. Akhir woh bhi toh Veer ke saath sahreerik sambandh rakhti thi. Iska matlab-!!!

Uski Maa iss vishaal hathiyar ko apne andar lene me saksham thi?

Veer : Agar darr lag raha hai toh-

Sonali : N-Nahi!!! K-Kuch darr warr nahi lag raha. *blushes* Samjhe?

Aur usne kehte hue underwear poora neeche kheench diya.

Veer poora nagn awastha me tha. Sonali ki bra jo abhi bhi uske seene par maujood thi, use Veer ne strap kholke turant hi jism se alag kar diya.

Kaali panty ko apne haatho me thaam woh dheere dheere use neeche sarkaane laga. Sonali toh bas Veer ko ghoose maarne ki icchaa jataa rahi thi.

Kya ye ladka ek baar me uske kapde nahi utaar sakta tha? Dheere dheere, ahista ahista unhe utaarte hue use chhidhana zaroori tha kya?

Veer ne uski taango ko jab khola toh use kuwari choot ka adhbhut nazara mila. Choot par beshaq baal bhi maujood the.

Sonali ek aam ladki thi aur use khud ko groom karna itna nahi aata tha. Ya yu kahe ki woh inn cheezon pe zyada dhyaan hi nahi deti thi.

Aur de bhi kyu bhala? Use kaha pata tha ki aaj woh Veer ke sang sex karne waali hai. Veer ne kuch shan dekha aur fir bola,

Veer (smiles) : Tumhe Ragini Bhabhi se classes leni chahiye.

Sonali : Huh? K-Kis cheez ki?

Veer (smiles) : Apne gupt-ang ko saaf suthra kaise rakha jaaye... uski!!

Veer ne jaise hi ye kaha. Sonali ke gaalo ka paara itni tezi se chadha ki uske perr ek jhatke me aapas me band ho gaye aur usne apna sharm se bhara chehra apne dono haatho se chhipa liya.

Sonali (blushes) : Nahiiii!!!!!!

Veer hasa!

Sonali (blushes) : T-Tum-! Tum kitne gande ho yaar!!

Uske haatho ko chehre se hata ke Veer ne jab firse use chooma toh Sonali ki saari sharm dheere dheere khatm hone lagi.

Badan ko lagataar choomte hue, jagah jagah pyaar ke nishaan chhodhte hue jab Veer neeche aaya toh uski choot ko pehle haule se usne sehlaya.

"Nnnggghh~"

Jis se Sonali bed par hi jhatka kha ke reh gayi. Aur Veer ne jab ekdum se apna muh uski choot par lagaya toh woh toh jaise uss duniya se hi uth gayi.

Uski kamar poora arch bana ke bed ke upar ho chali. Kya tha yeh sab? Yeh ehsaas! Kahi use Veer se pyaar toh nahi ho gaya tha? Shayad haan!

Woh iss prem roopi samundar me giri toh giri magar itni gehrayi me jaake giri, ki iska abhaas use abhi khud bhi nahi tha.

Veer ka uski parvah karna. Yahi toh chaah rahi thi woh itne dino se. Yahi toh use sukh pahuchata tha.

Dheere dheere ye chaahat ki lat use lagne lagi thi.

Shayad aaj raat yahi beetne waali thi uski...!

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Mumbai...
Kaera's house...
Evening ~ 7:34 PM

Karan apne gale se tie ko dheeli karte hue apne kamre me aaya.

Ek meeting se woh abhi chhoot ke aaya tha aur ab uski ek aur meeting kuch hi derr me scheduled rakhi hui thi.

Usne AC set kar, TV on kiya aur apne kapde change karne laga.

Pehle uske mann me ek quick bath lene ka idea aaya. Magar, usne woh khayal fauran hi mann se nikaal diya. Deri jo ho jaati aisa karne se. Abhi woh nayi shirt daalne hi wala tha jab achanak hi uske kamre ke khule hue darwaze par ek khat-khat hui,

"May I come in Sir?"

Usne sarr utha ke dekha toh paaya ki, uske ghar ki ekmaatr khubsoorat Russian maid khadi hui thi.

Karan : Julia???

Julia muskurayi aur bina Karan ki permission liye hi kamre ke andar chali aayi.

Julia : Done with the meeting?

Karan : Y-Yeah! That went well! Time for this next one-!

Julia : Sir, don't need to worry.

Karan : Huh?

Julia (smiles) : Young Miss has already dealt with it. You don't have to go.

Karan : Wh-What!!!??

Woh taajub me Julia ko dekha. Kya abhi abhi Julia ne jo kaha, woh sach tha? Kaera ne agli meeting already sort kar di thi? Iska matlab ab use kahi jaane ki zaroorat nahi thi?

Usne ek raahat ki saans li.

Karan (sighs) : Ahhhh! That's a relief!

Tabhi, TV par Veer ki khabar jhalki. Uske France me kiye gaye karnaame. Khabar purani ho chuki thi par abhi bhi kuch channels par barkaraar thi.

Karan : Tch! This guy-! Aise hote hai dost Julia. Itna bada kaand kar ke aaye hai janaab par abhi tak ek call nahi aaya hai. Aur ye log mujhe apna dost kehte hai. Hmph-!

Woh apni shikaayte rakh raha tha. Julia bas muskurayi aur uske kamre se nikal Kaera ke room ki orr chal di jaha Kaera khidki se khadi baahar ki orr dekh shaant khadi hui thi.

Julia : Karan Sir is back home, Miss!

Kaera : Hmm!

Julia : Are you perhaps thinking of young master Veer!?

Kaera (glances) : Huh!!?? Why do you think so?

Julia (smiles) : Call it my intuition. Am I right?

Kaera : Th-That's not it!

Julia : You love him. Don't you-!?

Kaera : N-Noooo-!!!

Uska jawab aaya. Par awaaz me woh aakramakta nahi thi. Awaaz ladkhadayi hui si thi.

Julia : I'm sure that you have feelings for him. Then, why don't you approach him? Young Master Veer is indeed not from a haughty rich family, he's tall and handsome, loyal and protective for you. He doesn't flaunt his money, he loves kids and pets, isn't he a kind hearted gentleman? Basically, he passes all your standards.

Kaera : ...

Julia : Then? Why don't you give any sign to him? Wouldn't it be late of someone else hogs him for themselves?

Kaera : S-Stop!!! *sniff*

Julia : Huhhh!!?

Jab Kaera ki sisakne ki awaaz Julia ke kaano me padi toh woh hairat me reh gayi. Woh ye jaanti thi ki uski Miss Kaera ab pehle jaisi nahi thi. Ya yu kahe ki ekdum hi pehle jaise ho gayi hai. Jo emotions ko feel kar sakti hai.

Aur isliye aaj woh itni baatein keh rahi thi. Woh nahi chaahti thi ki Veer ko koi aur ladki leke jaaye aur uski Miss Kaera haath par haath dhari baithi reh jaaye.

Magar-!

Kaera ki sisakne ki awaaz ne jaise use achambhav me daal diya.

Woh ro rahi thi? Magar kyu-!? Iska jawab Julia ne nahi jaanana chaaha. Jo sabse pehla kaam tha uske liye iss waqt woh tha maafi maangna.

Julia (kowtows) : I-I'm sorry Young Miss! I spoke too much. I shouldn't have-! I-!! I was just curious why young Miss wasn't approaching young master Veer?

Kaera : That's because- *sniff*

Julia : !!????

Aur Kaera fir achanak hi khidki se uski orr palti. Julia ne jab uska chehra dekha toh bechari ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Itne aasu usne aaj tak apni Miss Kaera ke chehre par nahi dekhe the.

Uske hontho par ek majboori waali muskaan feli au
r woh ahista se boli,

Kaera : because I want him to claim me!!!

Julia : Ahhn!!!

Aur Julia ka badan woh sunte hi hairat ke maare sihar utha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update late hai. I know. Aur aap bhi jaante ho ki kyu late hai. Veer aur Sonali ka scene abhi khatam nahi hua hai toh ye mat sochna use beech se hi kaat diya gaya hai. Agle update me unke beech kya hua woh sab dikhaya jayega. Agla update ek mega update bhi hoga aur sirf sex based nahi hoga. Kuch unn characters ko bhi dekhenge hum jo story me kaafi time se nazar nahi aaye hai. Anyways, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai guys. 150. And, btw ye update 5.6k words ka hai.

Dhanyavaad. ✨
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