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Update 2: ( Two unwavering eyes )
Pichle update me aapne padha ki devki aur Ravi ko ek metallic box milta hai jise kholne ke baad wo shock reh jaate hai. Box kuch aisa dikh raha tha.
Ab aage -
Devki aur Ravi uss metal box ko gaur se dekhte hai jo bilkul alag tarah se khul rahi thi bahar ka tala tutne ke baad. Jab box bich me se khula to dono ko do pyaari gehri neeli aankhein dekh rahi thi. Baccha bilkul shaant tha uske sharir par kaafi saare jakhm the lekin wo ro nahi raha tha sirf devki ki taraf dekh raha tha.
Devki - ( kuch pal ke liye bilkul kho gayi. Jis dhyan se wo baccha use dekh raha tha bina palke jhapkaye aisa lag raha tha maano devki ki aankho se uske ruh me jhaankne ki kosis kar raha ho. Devki se jab sehan naa hua to usne apni palke jhapkayi aur fir mann me ) - Hey Narayan iss bacche ko ghane jungle me kisne chora hoga? Kitna pyara baccha hai. Iske chehre ka bholapan to dekho.
Ravi ka bhi yahi haal tha bacche ko dekhkar kuch pal ke liye sab kuch bhul gaya tha. tabhi uska dhayn uss bacche ke sarir pe lage jakhmo pe jata hai.
Ravi - Hey narayan ye kitni chhote lagi hai ise.
Wo bacche ko uthane ke liye jhukta hai lekin usse pahle Devki jhuk kar jaldi se bacche ko utha leti hai. Bacche ko chute hi uske pure sharir me current sa daudne lagta hai. Esa maano pura sarir bhot jyada sensitive ho gaya ho.
Author’s POV - “Ye aisi feeling thi maano aapne kisi ko bhot dilo jaan se chaha firr wo dur chala gaya aap usse kabhi mil nahi paaye uski ek jhalak dekhne ko din raat taraste rahe aur firr wo kisi din mile aur aapse saamne se haath milaye uss waqt aapki jo halat hogi thik aisi hi kuch halat Devki ki thi.”
Ravi - ( Devu ki halat ko dekhte hue ) - Devuu ye kya kar rhi ho? Bacche ko chot lagi hai. Aaram se pakdo use.
Devki - ( Jo ki bilkul hosh me hi nahi thi. Wo bss uss aseem anand me dubi hui thi. )
Ravi - ( Devki ko kandhe se pakad ke hilate hue ) - Devu…Devuuuu…Kya ho gaya tumhe?
Devki - ( Hosh me aate hue ) - Haann.. Mujhe …Mujhee kya hoga? Kuch nahi ..
Ravi - Ye iss bacche ko kisne aise ghane jungle me chorr diya hoga. Wo v box me tala band karke.
Devki - Pata nahi ji , Dekhiye na kitni chot lagi hai ise. ( Dhire se bacche ki peeth sehlate hue ) Suniye ji, kya hum ise apne saath le jaaye?
Ravi - Kaisi baat kar rahi ho Devu, Hume nahi pata ye kiski amanat hai agar wo wapas ise yaha dhundhne aaya to.
Devki - Lekin itne ghane jungle me koi kyu chhodega ji. Aap to jaante hai duniya kaisi hai. Dekhiye na lalla ko kitni chhot aayi hai.
Ravi - ( shock hote hue ) - “Lalla”
Devki - ( cute sa face bante hue
) - Apni gardan haa me hilati hai.
Ravi - ( Thoda udaas mann se ) - Lekin Devu tum to jaanti ho ghar ki kya halat hai.Mushkil se hi humara guzara ho pata hai, aise me iss bacche ki jimmedaariya hum kaise utha paayenge.
Devki - ( Puri udaas ho jaati hai use aisa lagta hai jaise kuch bhot khas usse chin raha ho )
Ravi - ( Apni biwi ka aisa udaas chehra usse dekha nahi gaya. Use mann hi mann nischay kiya ki chahe jitni mehnat karni pade wo karega lekin iss bacche ki saari jimmedaariya acche se nibhayega.) - Devu suno.
Devki - Hunnn….
Ravi - Hum ise rakh lete hai.
Devki - Lekin…( Apne pati ki or dekhte hue wo puchna chahti thi paiso ke baare me )
Ravi - ( Apni biwi ke chehre pe aaye bhaawo ko padhte hue ) - Uski chinta matt karo mai sambhal lunga
Devki - ( Khush hokar apne pati ko halke se gale laga leti hai )
Ravi - ( Bacche ki or dekhte hue ) - Waah barkhurdaar aaj hi aaye ho aur meri biwi ko romantic bana diya.
Devki - ( Kohni se Ravi ko maarte hue ) - Aap v naa !
Firr Dono bacche ko liye aage badhte hai, dono kaafi der se chal rahe the samay 4:30 ka ho chuka tha. Devki apne aanchal me bacche ko chupaye hue chal rahi thi. Taaki use thandh naa lag jaaye. Dono iss baat pe kaafi hairaan the ki baccha ek baar v roya nahi. Lekin abhi ye sab naa sochte hue dono aage badh rahe the. Tabhi unhe ghaat nazar aa gaya.
Devki - Aji ghaat to pahuch gaye. Kyu na bacche ke jakhmo ko thoda saaf kar de.
Ravi - Haa Devu…Tum bhi thodi thak gayi hogi…aaram karlo…mai saaf paani le ke aata hu.
5 baje ka waqt the kuch log apne apne kheto ke kaam karne ke liye nikal rahe the. Kuch young ladke daud laga rahe the. Tabhi usne ek bujurg aadmi ko khet ke taraf jaate dekha ek bade plastic ke bottle me pani le jaate hue. Aur unse kuch paani ki vinti ki.
Devki - ( Ravi ke jaane ke baad bacche ko apne aanchal se bahar nikal karr dekhti hai. Baccha ek tak use dekh raha tha. Jisse devki fir kho si jaati hai. Ek gehre sunyata ( emptiness) ka bhaav dikhta hai Devki ko uss bacche ki aankho me. Itna gehra khichav ki koi v khud ko rok naa paaye ) - “Lalla” ( Bss itna kehti hai aur halka sa muskurati hai )
Tab tak Ravi pani aur ek saaf kapda le ke aa jata hai. Devki bacche ko saaf karne lagti hai aur jab v kisi jakhm par kapda lagati hai baccha halka sa hilta hai lekin rota nahi lekin usse hisse ke dard Devki ko mehsus hoti hai wo bhi iss kadar ki. Jakhmo ko pura saaf karne ke ant tak uski aankho se aansu beh chale the.
Dono firr ek auto me baith karr apne sehar ke chaurahe tak jaate hai. Auto ke paise dete waqt Ravi thoda chintit tha. Kyunki uski cycle tut gayi thi aur jo thode paise the wo bacche ke zakhmo ke ilaaz me kaam aate. Lekin firr apni biwi ki or dekhta hai jo uss bacche ko bade pyar se sehla rahi thi. Ye dekh kar Ravi v halka muskurata hai.
Dono jab apne ghar ke saamne dekhte hai to hairaan reh jaate hai. Darwaaze ke paas hi 2 ladkiya soyi hui thi. Unki aankho ko dekh ke hi lag raha tha kitna royi hai aur Intezaar karte karte darwaaze pe hi so gayi.
Ravi - ( Ghabrakar ) - Sandhyaaaa…Shivanniii …Bhaagte hue unke paas jata hai..
Sandhya aur Shivani awaaz se uthti hai aur apne papa ko saamne dekh kar jorr se gale lag kar rone lagti hai.
Sandhya - ( subakte hue ) - papaaa…aap kidhar gaye the ?
Ravi kuch bol pata usse pahle Shivani
Shivani - ( jo thoda shaant ho chuki thi ) - papaa mumma kaha hai?
Ravi piche ki or ishara karta hai… Jaha Devki ek bacche ko haatho me uthaaye khadi thi. Bacche ka face aanchal se covered tha. Shivani sirf bacche ke pairo aur haatho ki ungliyo ko dekh rahi thi. Unn chhoti chhoti ungliyo ko pairo ki harkat ko dekh ke Shivani sabkuch bhul gayi.
Tabhi Sandhya jo ki apne papa ke gale lagi thi ab chup ho gayi jab ravi ne bataya ki wo uske liye ek khilona lene gaye the. Wo khush hokar puchti hai
Sandhya - Kidhar hai papa mera khilona?
Ravi Devki ki god ki taraf ishara karta hai. Sandhya v shivani ki tarah tukur-tukur uske pairo aur hatho ki ungli ko dekhti hai. Tabhi hawa ke halke jhoke se aanchal sarak jaata hai.. Aur sandhya aur shivani ko pehli baar unke khilone ka chehra dikhta hai…
Aage kya hoga ? Kya Sandhya aur Shivani ko pasand aayega unka khilona? Ravi Kaise sambhalega iss bacche ki zimmedaariya..?
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Pichle update me aapne padha ki devki aur Ravi ko ek metallic box milta hai jise kholne ke baad wo shock reh jaate hai. Box kuch aisa dikh raha tha.
Ab aage -
Devki aur Ravi uss metal box ko gaur se dekhte hai jo bilkul alag tarah se khul rahi thi bahar ka tala tutne ke baad. Jab box bich me se khula to dono ko do pyaari gehri neeli aankhein dekh rahi thi. Baccha bilkul shaant tha uske sharir par kaafi saare jakhm the lekin wo ro nahi raha tha sirf devki ki taraf dekh raha tha.
Devki - ( kuch pal ke liye bilkul kho gayi. Jis dhyan se wo baccha use dekh raha tha bina palke jhapkaye aisa lag raha tha maano devki ki aankho se uske ruh me jhaankne ki kosis kar raha ho. Devki se jab sehan naa hua to usne apni palke jhapkayi aur fir mann me ) - Hey Narayan iss bacche ko ghane jungle me kisne chora hoga? Kitna pyara baccha hai. Iske chehre ka bholapan to dekho.
Ravi ka bhi yahi haal tha bacche ko dekhkar kuch pal ke liye sab kuch bhul gaya tha. tabhi uska dhayn uss bacche ke sarir pe lage jakhmo pe jata hai.
Ravi - Hey narayan ye kitni chhote lagi hai ise.
Wo bacche ko uthane ke liye jhukta hai lekin usse pahle Devki jhuk kar jaldi se bacche ko utha leti hai. Bacche ko chute hi uske pure sharir me current sa daudne lagta hai. Esa maano pura sarir bhot jyada sensitive ho gaya ho.
Author’s POV - “Ye aisi feeling thi maano aapne kisi ko bhot dilo jaan se chaha firr wo dur chala gaya aap usse kabhi mil nahi paaye uski ek jhalak dekhne ko din raat taraste rahe aur firr wo kisi din mile aur aapse saamne se haath milaye uss waqt aapki jo halat hogi thik aisi hi kuch halat Devki ki thi.”
Ravi - ( Devu ki halat ko dekhte hue ) - Devuu ye kya kar rhi ho? Bacche ko chot lagi hai. Aaram se pakdo use.
Devki - ( Jo ki bilkul hosh me hi nahi thi. Wo bss uss aseem anand me dubi hui thi. )
Ravi - ( Devki ko kandhe se pakad ke hilate hue ) - Devu…Devuuuu…Kya ho gaya tumhe?
Devki - ( Hosh me aate hue ) - Haann.. Mujhe …Mujhee kya hoga? Kuch nahi ..
Ravi - Ye iss bacche ko kisne aise ghane jungle me chorr diya hoga. Wo v box me tala band karke.
Devki - Pata nahi ji , Dekhiye na kitni chot lagi hai ise. ( Dhire se bacche ki peeth sehlate hue ) Suniye ji, kya hum ise apne saath le jaaye?
Ravi - Kaisi baat kar rahi ho Devu, Hume nahi pata ye kiski amanat hai agar wo wapas ise yaha dhundhne aaya to.
Devki - Lekin itne ghane jungle me koi kyu chhodega ji. Aap to jaante hai duniya kaisi hai. Dekhiye na lalla ko kitni chhot aayi hai.
Ravi - ( shock hote hue ) - “Lalla”
Devki - ( cute sa face bante hue
) - Apni gardan haa me hilati hai.Ravi - ( Thoda udaas mann se ) - Lekin Devu tum to jaanti ho ghar ki kya halat hai.Mushkil se hi humara guzara ho pata hai, aise me iss bacche ki jimmedaariya hum kaise utha paayenge.
Devki - ( Puri udaas ho jaati hai use aisa lagta hai jaise kuch bhot khas usse chin raha ho )
Ravi - ( Apni biwi ka aisa udaas chehra usse dekha nahi gaya. Use mann hi mann nischay kiya ki chahe jitni mehnat karni pade wo karega lekin iss bacche ki saari jimmedaariya acche se nibhayega.) - Devu suno.
Devki - Hunnn….
Ravi - Hum ise rakh lete hai.
Devki - Lekin…( Apne pati ki or dekhte hue wo puchna chahti thi paiso ke baare me )
Ravi - ( Apni biwi ke chehre pe aaye bhaawo ko padhte hue ) - Uski chinta matt karo mai sambhal lunga
Devki - ( Khush hokar apne pati ko halke se gale laga leti hai )
Ravi - ( Bacche ki or dekhte hue ) - Waah barkhurdaar aaj hi aaye ho aur meri biwi ko romantic bana diya.
Devki - ( Kohni se Ravi ko maarte hue ) - Aap v naa !
Firr Dono bacche ko liye aage badhte hai, dono kaafi der se chal rahe the samay 4:30 ka ho chuka tha. Devki apne aanchal me bacche ko chupaye hue chal rahi thi. Taaki use thandh naa lag jaaye. Dono iss baat pe kaafi hairaan the ki baccha ek baar v roya nahi. Lekin abhi ye sab naa sochte hue dono aage badh rahe the. Tabhi unhe ghaat nazar aa gaya.
Devki - Aji ghaat to pahuch gaye. Kyu na bacche ke jakhmo ko thoda saaf kar de.
Ravi - Haa Devu…Tum bhi thodi thak gayi hogi…aaram karlo…mai saaf paani le ke aata hu.
5 baje ka waqt the kuch log apne apne kheto ke kaam karne ke liye nikal rahe the. Kuch young ladke daud laga rahe the. Tabhi usne ek bujurg aadmi ko khet ke taraf jaate dekha ek bade plastic ke bottle me pani le jaate hue. Aur unse kuch paani ki vinti ki.
Devki - ( Ravi ke jaane ke baad bacche ko apne aanchal se bahar nikal karr dekhti hai. Baccha ek tak use dekh raha tha. Jisse devki fir kho si jaati hai. Ek gehre sunyata ( emptiness) ka bhaav dikhta hai Devki ko uss bacche ki aankho me. Itna gehra khichav ki koi v khud ko rok naa paaye ) - “Lalla” ( Bss itna kehti hai aur halka sa muskurati hai )
Tab tak Ravi pani aur ek saaf kapda le ke aa jata hai. Devki bacche ko saaf karne lagti hai aur jab v kisi jakhm par kapda lagati hai baccha halka sa hilta hai lekin rota nahi lekin usse hisse ke dard Devki ko mehsus hoti hai wo bhi iss kadar ki. Jakhmo ko pura saaf karne ke ant tak uski aankho se aansu beh chale the.
Dono firr ek auto me baith karr apne sehar ke chaurahe tak jaate hai. Auto ke paise dete waqt Ravi thoda chintit tha. Kyunki uski cycle tut gayi thi aur jo thode paise the wo bacche ke zakhmo ke ilaaz me kaam aate. Lekin firr apni biwi ki or dekhta hai jo uss bacche ko bade pyar se sehla rahi thi. Ye dekh kar Ravi v halka muskurata hai.
Dono jab apne ghar ke saamne dekhte hai to hairaan reh jaate hai. Darwaaze ke paas hi 2 ladkiya soyi hui thi. Unki aankho ko dekh ke hi lag raha tha kitna royi hai aur Intezaar karte karte darwaaze pe hi so gayi.
Ravi - ( Ghabrakar ) - Sandhyaaaa…Shivanniii …Bhaagte hue unke paas jata hai..
Sandhya aur Shivani awaaz se uthti hai aur apne papa ko saamne dekh kar jorr se gale lag kar rone lagti hai.
Sandhya - ( subakte hue ) - papaaa…aap kidhar gaye the ?
Ravi kuch bol pata usse pahle Shivani
Shivani - ( jo thoda shaant ho chuki thi ) - papaa mumma kaha hai?
Ravi piche ki or ishara karta hai… Jaha Devki ek bacche ko haatho me uthaaye khadi thi. Bacche ka face aanchal se covered tha. Shivani sirf bacche ke pairo aur haatho ki ungliyo ko dekh rahi thi. Unn chhoti chhoti ungliyo ko pairo ki harkat ko dekh ke Shivani sabkuch bhul gayi.
Tabhi Sandhya jo ki apne papa ke gale lagi thi ab chup ho gayi jab ravi ne bataya ki wo uske liye ek khilona lene gaye the. Wo khush hokar puchti hai
Sandhya - Kidhar hai papa mera khilona?
Ravi Devki ki god ki taraf ishara karta hai. Sandhya v shivani ki tarah tukur-tukur uske pairo aur hatho ki ungli ko dekhti hai. Tabhi hawa ke halke jhoke se aanchal sarak jaata hai.. Aur sandhya aur shivani ko pehli baar unke khilone ka chehra dikhta hai…
Aage kya hoga ? Kya Sandhya aur Shivani ko pasand aayega unka khilona? Ravi Kaise sambhalega iss bacche ki zimmedaariya..?
Janne ke liye likes or comments karte rahe
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