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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Extraordinary update bhai......😲😲😲😲

Woww superb dialogues, excellent fighting, awesome moves,


Excellent update....
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Kya yuddha aur usaki yojna batai.
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Suppper fantastic updates bro
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Wah wah wah aaj raaz ne ek sec k liye sahi videous ki us power ko esi takkr di h jisse usne hajaro saalo ki mehnat se hasil ki h super

Aaj fir raaz sword real power dikh god ki power dikhaya h sath y b btaya h usne kuch nhi jana h

Kahani ka mod esa aa gya sb jante huye b raaz na mare sahi kehna hoga sbi ka lekin y haqikat pehle baya ho chuki sbi ko Super Story



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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI YUDH JAARI HAI JAHAN EK TARAF ACCHUTA DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL AUR TRISTEN KO APNE ARROW AUR RAAZ KE RAY KI MADAD THE PERSISTENT VEGETATIVE STATE ME PAHUNCHA DETA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ VIDEOUS KO EK SUPER STRONG PUNCH MAARTA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



MEGA UPDATE-172



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-BATTLE GROUND

PART-3





MAI-NOW....


jaise hi VIDEOUS mere punch se blank hua,man hi man jaise cheekha mai aur mere aisa karte hi MAHI, ALFREEN, WOOGER aur SLUNDER ki bodies turant harkat me aayi...

SLUNDER ke haath turant HEMINE, AROZ, aur TIFER ki disha me ghume aur...

SAMPURN SHAKTIYEM KAWACHAM PRAKATAM

COMPLETE POWER SHIELD APPEAR

man hi man uccharit kiya SLUNDER ne is SPELL ko jiske baad uske pure sharir ke 100's of beam nikle aur aage badhte hue MAHI,HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ke chaaron taraf circle sa banate hue tezi ae rotate aur revolve lagane lage..

HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER joki MAHI ki PEACE MAKERS ability ray ki wajah se half dull senses ke saath ek dusre se chipke hue the,jab tak woh kuch samajhte aur VIDEOUS se mind to mind kuch kehte,usse pehle hi un chaaron ke ird gird ek opaque SHIELD ban chuka tha...

aisa hote waqt mere haathon se bhi ek beam nikal joki meri ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON se bani thi,us diwaar numa SHIELD par chipak si gayi..

ab VIDEOUS tab tak us shield ko nahi tod sakta tha jab tak mai nahi chahta yaa phir jab tak mai mar nahi jaata jo hone hi waala tha but uske baad us SHIELD ki zaroorat bhi kaha padne waali thi..

khair,jab woh opaque shield ban raha tha,theek ussi waqt ALFREEN aur WOOGER bhi harkat me aaye..

ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON waale cut ki wajah se VIRAAZ waise hi neeche ek sunn body aur saath hi non thinkable brain ke saath gira hua tha jispar chalang si lagayi thi WOOGER ne..

ALFREEN WOOGER ke upar hi baithi hui thi.. khair challang lagate hi ek baar phirse WOOGER ka panja VIRAAZ ke skin ko pierce karte hue uske sharir me dhas chuka tha jispar VIRAAZ ki sunn padi body ek jhatke me defreeze hui aur aisa hote hi woh chillane hi waala tha par woh aisa kar paata,usse pehle hi WOOGER usse liye hue ek aur baar challang laga chuka tha...

ye challang maamuli nahi thi..ek hi pal me LIMITLESS SPEED ke saath liye us jump ki wajah se WOOGER,uske upar baithi ALFREEN aur neeche WOOGER ke panjo me fasa VIRAAZ FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar pahunch chuke the aur woh bhi us jagah jahan kabhi ESPRIT CRYSTAL hua karta tha...

us exact point par jahan kabhi UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS BOOK chhupayi gayi thi..

bhale hi woh book ab wahan nahi thi but uski kuch urja ab bhi wahan moujud thi..

aur issi wajah se ye ek aisi jagah thi jisse yunhi search nahi kiya jaa sakta tha..

iske liye VIDEOUS ko bhi ek second bhar ke liye hi sahi,par apna complete focus VIRAAZ ke upar karna padta aur mere uske saamne rehte woh ye nahi kar sakta tha...

jo maine kaha tha,woh mere saathiyon ne kar diya tha..us ek spared second ke liye banayi gayi planning successful ho chuki thi..

but in sabke beech ek shaksh tha jo SLUNDER ko joki apni puri power se SHIELD ready karne par kaafi weak ho gaya tha,
usse target kar maarne waala tha..

VALDIS..

par isse pehle ki woh kuch bhi kar paata..

SOOBHHH...

ACCHUTA jinki nazar uspar hi thi, uski ARROW tezi se aage badh chuki thi jiske agle hi pal..

AHHHHHHH..

ek hriday vidarak cheekh VALDIS ke mooh se nikli..

REASON..

ACCHUTA ke ARROW ne uske dono pairon ko bhedhte hue uske baaki sharir se alag kar diya tha...

aisa hote hi jahan ek taraf tezi se chhatpatate hue VALDIS zamin par khudko ragad raha tha wahin dusri taraf ek second ka waqt khatm ho chuka tha jiska matlab tha ki naa sirf VIDEOUS wapas apne pairon par khada ho chuka tha balki saath hi saath maine is beete ek second me kya kya karwaya hai, mera pura plan woh samajh chuka tha..

CLAP.....CLAP...CLAP.....

mujhe dekh clap kar chalte hue mere paas aaya VIDEOUS aur..


VIDEOUS-well i must say,i am really very very impressed....

sabse pehle tune mujhse battle toh kiya but apni full potential hide karkar rakhi....

is beech tere logon ne mere logon ko pehle hi ek baar injure kar diya..

aur phir last moment par jiske liye tune apni taakat sambhal kar rakhi thi,mujhe successfully hit karna, woh kiya tune jisse mila tere logon ko ek second ka window jisme unhone tere pure plan ko execute kar diya..

VIRAAZ ALFREEN aur WOOGER ke kabze me yahan se door jaa chuka hai aur woh bhi kisi aisi jagah jisse mera bina focus ke janana mushkil hai aur tere mere saamne rehte toh impossible..

HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER joki pehle hi MAHI ki power ki wajah se ek dusre se bind up hain, sense less hain aur most importantly,weak hain,woh SLUNDER ki is OPAQUE SHIELD me fase hue hain and i am sensing even your protection power on that barrier...

again i say,really impressed..aur isiliye,i will grant your guyz a free hand....

go on,guyzzz,ek hi waqt me maarna hai tumhe un sabko,maar do..

mai rokne ki koshish bhi nahi karunga... RAAZ,apni behen ko bhi meri baat bata de but haan,saath me ek aur info bhi de dena...

ye chaaron sirf isiliye khaas nahi hain kyunki ye mujhse jude hain aur ye meri AMPLIFICATION MODES ki taakat se bane hain..

naa...ek aur speciality bhi hai inme jo tumse judi hai RAAZ..

aur woh speciality ye hai ki in chaaron ki bodies LONSDALIETE dhaatu se bani hai..

rung a bell...!!?!


VIDEOUS ki baat sun mai toh shaant hi khada raha par SHIELD ke andar khadi MAHI ki aankhein badi ho gayi..

REASON...

LONSDALIETE DHAATU wahi cheez hai jisse mera sharir bana hai...

ek aisa sharir jispar ghaav toh diya jaa sakta hai par usse pura khatm karna,is next to impossible...

aisa karne ke liye VIDEOUS ya mere jaisi taakat honi chahiye aur tab bhi ek hi baar me teen teen LONSDALIETE se bane shariron ko puri tarah khatm karna,aisa karne me toh hum dono se bhi chuk ho sakti thi...

HEMINE, AROZ, TIFER aur VIRAAZ ke body ke baare me jaan MAHI ke kandhe halke jhukne lage the...

same condition mere baaki doston ki bhi thi but tabhi..

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...

zoron se has pada mai jisse sun jahan MAHI aur mere dost thode hairan ho gaye wahin VIDEOUS aakhon me sawal liye mujhe dekhne laga jispar..


MAI-tere VIRAAZ ke saath meri behen aur WOOGER dono hain...uski sharir ko mitana un dono ke liye badi baat nahi hai...

same goes for MAHI...teeno ko naa sahi,teeno me se kisi ek ko toh woh ek baar me khtam kar hi sakti hai...

meri baat sun ek pal mujhe dekh VIDEOUS firse muskuraya aur..

VIDEOUS-dimag zyada chalate chalate kahin tera brain corrupt toh nahi ho gaya..

kya bake jaa raha hai tu...???HEMINE, AROZ, TIFER...VIRAAZ ke saath in teeno ka bhi ek saath khatm hona zaroori hai....and the most important part...

MAI-woh part meri zimmedari...uski tention tu naa le...


ACCHUTA, SLUNDER BRAWNY HIDA AUR MABEL ke saamne mere anth ki baat, jab tak uska waqt nahi aa jaata joki aane waala hi tha, nahi disclose karna chahta mai isiliye VIDEOUS ki baat ko kaat apni baat kahi maine jiske baad apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAI-aur rahi baat tere in teen namuno ki toh VIDEOUS,tere DIL ki chuppi baat RAAZ nahi jaanega toh bhala aur kaun jaanega..

maine DIL shabd ko stress karte hue kaha tha jisse sun VIDEOUS ke face par itni der me pehli baar halki chinta ki rekha dikhi jispar muskurate hue...


MAI-GOTTA, RIGHT....


HEMINE=HE

AROZ=AR

TIFER=T

teeno ke naam ke first initial jote hue ek karkar bolo toh banta hai.....HEART.....

ab tak jhooth dikhata aa raha tha tu..ye teeno tere AMPLIFICATION MODES se nahi balki REFINER POWER,tere HEART se bane hain...

ab AMPLIFICATION modes chaar ho sakte hain,par dil toh ek hi hota hai...

conclusion,in teeno me se kisi ek ke dil ko bhi agar bhedh diya jaaye toh uske saath saath baaki dono bhi mar jaayenge...


meri baat joki bilkul sach thi,usse sun jahan ek taraf mere sabhi dost surprise hote hue khush hokar ucchal pade wahin VIDEOUS ke maathe par dikh rahi chinta ki rekhayen kuch aur badh gayi jisse uski limit tak badaya agle pal ne kyunki..

SOOBHHHHH....

SOBBHHHHH...

FORBIDDEN FOREST me khade WOOGER ke mooh se nikli HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki aag aur uske saath khadi meri behen ALFREEN ke haathon me chamak rahi thi uski PURE DARK AMALGAMATE VIGOROUS SWORD jisme maine apni SWORD ki madad se apne ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ki urja ka bhi samvesh kar diya tha..

is waqt us SWORD ki nok VIRAAZ ke taraf thi jisse ALFREEN ki AGATHOKAK POWERS aur meri ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ki urja ka mishran ray nikal VIRAAZ ke sharir par padh raha tha..

wahin SHIELD ke andar moujud MAHI ka ek haath bhi HEMINE ki taraf pointed tha aur is waqt uske haathon se uski ANGEL aur HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki mishrit shakti aur saath hi saath uski PEACE MAKERS POWER ki urja ray bhi nikal HEMINE ke heart point ko dheere dheere pierce kar rahi thi...

ye sab feel karte hi VIDEOUS turant SHIELD ki taraf jisme MAHI aur uske teeno numainde the,palta aur usse break karne ke liye apne haath aage kiya par tabhi...

IT WAS ANZU'S & GRIFFIN'S time to do their part.. wahi khaas kaam jiske liye maine unhe taiyar rehne ko kaha tha...

jaise hi VIDEOUS ne apna haath SHIELD ki taraf kiya toh theek ussi pal ANZU uske theek upar mandrati hui apni jagah par tez ghumne lagi....

ANZU ki main power toh yaad hi hogi aap sabko...WATER & FIRE...

ANZU ke tez gol ghumte hi aag ki tarah garam paani uske wings se hote hue neeche VIDEOUS ke chaaron taraf girne lage..

ye garm paani sadharan nahi the..ANZU MAHI ki destructive power se bani thi aur isiliye us paani me bhi maarak tatv the..

khair,jaise hi ANZU ka paani VIDEOUS ke chaaron taraf barasne laga toh theek ussi pal GRIFFIN un baarish ke just bahar land hui aur usne us khoulte paani ko touch kar diya..

GRIFFIN MAHI ki ANGEL'S URJA se bani thi..woh urja jo uske pitah ki dharohar thi aur isiliye GRIFFIN ke paas HEAVENLY gateway tha..

ussi gateway ka faayda uthate hue GRIFFIN ne HEAVEN'S PURE WATER ke AURA ko feel karna shuru kiya aur uske waisa karte hi ANZU ke dwara barasta paani bhi HEAVEN'S ACCESS DOOR me convert ho gaya...

aisa door jisme fark nahi padta ki koi kitna shaktishali kyun naa ho,but bina kisi ANGEL ki swikriti ke koi bhi usse paar nahi kar sakta aur naahi uski koi bhi vidhwanshak aur maarak shakti wahan kaam aati hai..

aur aisa hi kuch VIDEOUS ke saath hua...uski har maarak shakti temporarily banned ho chuki thi..

jabde bheenche woh haath neeche kar khada ho chuka tha..

waise ANZU ki ye baarish aur GRIFFIN ka usse HEAVENLY PURE banana zyada der tak nahi chal sakta tha but jitna bhi space mila tha,utna kaafi tha..

kyunki is beech ab tak HEMINE ka LONGSDALEITE body halka halka pierce hona shuru ho chuka tha..

same cheez VIRAAZ ke saath ho rahi thi..jaise hi ALFREEN ko uski body ka pierce hona feel hua,uski aankhein chamak gayi but usse completely ulat MAHI ki aankhein har guzarte pal ke saath bheegti chali jaa rahi thi.

REASON...

THE SACRIFICE...jiska waqt aa chuka tha aur isiliye..


MAI-its time MAHI... stop mourning..baad me bhi kar sakti ho ye...filhal do what is essential and must...

and do it right now....

uske dimag se jud chillate hue kahi ye baat maine aur aisa karte hue maine us shield ka halka sa hissa,jisse ki MAHI ki LIFE KEEPERS ray paas ho sake, open kar di maine aur aisa kar apne dono haath kholte hue apni LONSDALEITE BODY ko thoda sa soft hone ka aadesh diya maine...

wahin jaise hi MAHI ne apna sir left ki taraf kar SHIELD me woh naya bana hole dekha toh kaampte hue apne left haath ko us hole ki sidh me uthaya usne aur aisa kar..


SAMPURN VINAASHAKAM..

COMPLETE DESTRUCTION..

ladhkhadati awaaz ke saath uccharit kiya ye SPELL MAHI ne aur uske waisa karte hi..

AHHHHHH.....

ek halki but grunting cheekh nikli mere mooh se...

MAHI ki DESTRUCTION RAYS se meri body dheere dheere jalne lagi thi aur ye dekh jahan ek taraf mere sabhi dost hadbada se gaye wahin VIDEOUS jaan chuka tha ki mai aage kya karne waala hun aur isiliye usne apni aankhen band ki aur kuch budbudaya...


ACCHUTA-ye ho kya raha hai...?? SHIELD ke andar se ray nikal rahi hai, RAAZ ki body jal rahi hai,what the fuck..????


ye bol woh aur baaki sab meri taraf badhne ko hue par tabhi GRIFFIN ki gardan unki taraf ghumi aur aisa hote hi un paanchon ke pair apni apni jagah bandh chuke the..

woh hil bhi nahi paa rahe the.. aankhon me vismay liye har sach se anjaan woh bas kabhi GRIFFIN ko dekhte toh kabhi meri dheere dheere jalti body ko...

badi tezi se jal raha tha mera sharir jisse mujhe asahaniya pain ho raha tha par tabhi jaise woh pain mere jalte hue body me hokar bhi gayab ho sa gaya..

REASON..

as promised,mere aaju baaju mera haath thaame mere dono PAIN KILLERS jo khade ho chuke the jinhe is waqt sirf mai dekh sakta tha..

mere mom dad...un dono ko dekh meri aankhein brightly chamkane lagi..

woh dono bhi kuch nahi keh rahe the,bas chupchap mujhe dekhe jaa rahe the..

wahin dusri taraf VIRAAZ ki body bhi kaafi hadh tak jal chuki thi..aur ye dekh kaafi khush ho rahi ALFREEN par tabhi VIRAAZ jo ab tak ho rahi taklif se cheekh raha,woh halka sa muskurane laga jisse dekh ALFREEN ke face ubhri hairani jispar..


VIRAAZ-tujhe kya laga ALFREEN ki tu jeet rahi hai..is waqt tu apni zindagi ka sabse bada gift kho rahi hai..

tera bhai...

ALFREEN-ab ye kya nayi bakwas kar raha hai tu..tu kuch bhi bol le,bachega nahi...

VIRAAZ-hahahaha.. bewakuf ladki..kya socha bhi hai tune ki kyun RAAZ ne tujhe yahan, apni sight se door bhej diya..!!!??

sirf isiliye kyunki tu uski mout naa dekh paaye...par fikr mat kar,mai hun naa..mar raha hun toh kya,kabhi DEVIL'S HAVEN ki queen thi tu,tere liye itna toh kar hi sakta hun..


ye bol apne kaampte haathon ko halki si jumbish di VIRAAZ ne aur uske waisa karte hi uske aur ALFREEN ke saamne jo yahan mere saath ho raha tha,uska chalchitra chalne laga jisse dekh ALFREEN ki aankhein badi ho gayi...

mere sharir ke beecho beech ek destruction ray sama rahi thi jiski wajah se mera sharir aadha se zyada jal chuka tha..

par ye sab dekh kar bhi ALFREEN ke face par ek avishwash saaf nazar aa raha tha jisse samajh..


VIRAAZ-agar ye chalchitra jhootha lag raha hai toh apne side me khade WOOGER ko dekh le...

dekh,iska sharir bhi iske MASTER ki tarah aadha jal chuka hai..


VIRAAZ ki baat sun ALFREEN ki nazar turant WOOGER par gayi jo isiliye taaki ALFREEN ko kuch pata naa chale, chupchap apne jalte hue sharir aur ho rahe dard ko jhel VIRAAZ par constant ray release karta hua khada tha...

ye dekh haath kaampne lage ALFREEN ke aur uski nazar wapas chalchitra ki taraf gayi jahan ka nazara ab aur zyada negetive ho chuka tha..

apne mom dad ko dekhte hue hi mujhe ehsaas ho chuka tha ki mai marne waala hun aur isiliye ab waqt tha VIDEOUS ka anth karne ka..

dad bhi ye baat jaante the isiliye unhone mera ek haath chhoda aur unke aisa karte hi woh haath aage kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi meri SWORD mere haathon me aa gayi...

ye scene MAHI bhi dekh rahi thi..aansu ab uske face ko kuch aise dhake hue the maano unhone MAHI ko odh liya ho..

meri nazar bhi uspar padh chuki thi aur meri mom ki nazar hum dono par aur isiliye..


MOM-usse bol do beta... dil ka parda bina khole jaana theek nahi..


mom ki baat sun muskuraya mai aur MAHI ko dekh...


MAI-MAHI....tumhara toh pata nahi,par tumhe pehli baar maine SOVES OFFICE me dekha tha..

us waqt meri peeth tumhari taraf thi but jaate hue ek mirror ke through tumhara face meri aankhon ke saamne aaya tha..

aisa face jisne pehli baar mujhe ehsaas karwaya tha ki i too have a heart..

tumse lagatar rude rehne ka reason bhi yahi thi ki tum woh pehli shaksh thi jisne RAAZ ko urja hote hue bhi insaan hone ke ehsaas dilaya tha..

mujhe dar lagta tha tumhare kareeb aane se..kyunki jab bhi tum mere paas hoti thi,mere wajood ki asliyat badal jaati thi...

mohobbat ka matlab nahi pata tha mujhe, par jab bhi ye shabd yaa isse juda shabd sunta tha, tumhara chehra zehen me ghoom sa jaata tha....

jab pehli baar mujhe pata chala ki mai anath nahi,mere bhi maa baap hain,toh ek ajeeb si feeling ne janm liya tha mere andar..

phir mere haathon un dono ko marwa diya gaya jisse mai ek zinda laash ban gaya..

aisa lag raha tha jaise phir kabhi apni saanson ko mehsoos nahi kar paaunga mai..

par jab tum mere saamne meri dhaal bankar khadi hui,toh aisa laga jaise apni zindagi ko dekh raha hun mai...

har baar,tum jaise dekhti ho mujhe,aisa lagta hai jaise aayna dekh raha hun mai...

aur aaj, abhi jab zindagi mout ke hawale hone waali hai,tab bhi tumhari ye aankhein mujhe unse hote hue tumhare dil me utaar khudme zinda kar rahi hain...

kehna toh aur bhi bohot kuch hai,par saala ye waqt aaj apna dushman hai...

MAHI.....I LOVE YOU TOO...tabse jabse LOVE sirf ek word tha mere liye....

waqt ke saath bhale hi mujhe bhul jaana,par kamsekam mera naam yaad rakhna..

yakin maano,abhi bhale hi ro rahi ho par mera naam hamesha muskaan laayega tumhare face par...


jahan meri baat MAHI jo ab tak pathrayi aankhon ke saath shocked khadi thi,par meri aakhri baat par ek baar phir aakhein bheeg gayi uski,mom dad smile karne lage wahin dusri taraf MAHI se apne dil ki baat kar mera face wapas VIDEOUS ki taraf ghuma aur aisa hote hi ANZU aur GRIFFIN ko ishara kiya maine jiske baad un dono ne woh RAIN aur uska HEAVENLY EFFECT band kar diya...

VIDEOUS ek baar phir mere saamne tha jiske baad usse smile diya maine jispar woh tezi se badha meri taraf lekin isse pehle ki woh mujhtak pahunchta..


KHACHHHHH...

apni SWORD theek us VOID waali jagah par jahan VIDEOUS ki soul thi,insert kar diya maine jiske baad..

AAHHHHHHHHHHH..AHHHHHHHH......

RAAZZZZZZZ...BHAIIIII........

ek taraf MAHI jisne HEMINE ko khtam kar diya tha aur aisa hote hi uske baaki dono saathi bhi automatically hi khatm ho chuke the, chillayi mera naam lete hue,same cheez mere doston ne bhi ki jinke pair ab free the aur woh sab mera naam lete hue bhaage meri taraf wahin dusri taraf thi ALFREEN jo mujhe marta dekh ladhkhadate hue mera naam cheekh neeche gir chuki thi par phir turant gayab hokar woh prakat hui mere paas...

par tab tak aur bhi der ho chuki thi...SWORD RAAZ ke sharir me ghuste hi VIDEOUS toh ladhkhadate hue neeche gir gaya aur uska sir ek taraf ludhak gaya par RAAZ ki toh puri body hi jal kar raakh ho chuki thi...

RAAZ ke raakh me badalte hi uske mom dad bhi jaa chuke the...

GADGADGADGAD...

RAAZ ke marte hi pure CHOSENS me ek tez lightning hui aur agle hi pal CHOSENS ke saath pure ELYSIAN me barsaat hone lagi....


saare PEACE MAKERS WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS bhi aankhon me nami liye meri raakh ko dekhe jaa rahe the..

aur MAHI,woh sisakti hui us raakh ko chunne ko hui par tabhi....


CHATAKKHHHH..CHATAKKHHHH...CHATAKKHHHH...

ek ke baad ek teen zor ke tamache maare ALFREEN ne MAHI ko jiske baad....


ALFREEN-you bloody bitch..haath mat laga mere bhai ki raakh ko...

pyar karti thi naa tu mere bhai se..pyarrrrr...maar diya isiliye....

apne dil ki baat,woh baat jisse sunane ke liye tu hamesha se tarsi thi,aaj bol di woh baat tujhse mere bhai ne aur badle me tune jaan le li uski...

BHAAIIIIIIIIIII...BHAIIIIIIII....


us geeli raakh ko apne face aur body me ragadte hue upar akash me dekh pagalon ki tarah chillane lagi ALFREEN...

taklif toh sabhi ko thi,par ALFREEN ki cheekh aur uske dard ko mehsoos kar khudki taklif ko bhula sabse pehle HIDA badhi ALFREEN ke paas par tabhi..

DHAKKK..

haath uski taraf kar ek beam release kiya ALFREEN ne jispar woh udte hue piche ki taraf jaakar giri..


ALFREEN-koi paas nahi aayega mere..mujhe bas apna bhai chahiye... abhi chahiye..

BHAIIII.... turant louto mere paas...abhi,issi waqt nahi toh aapki kasam,har duniya ko jalakar raakh kar dungi mai...

GRIFFIN-shaant ho jaao ALFREEN..aur samajhne ki koshish karo...

VIDEOUS ne apni soul RAAZ ke andar chhupa di thi..aur VIDEOUS ke marne ke liye RAAZ ka marna..

ALFREEN-chup...bilkul chup....bhaad me gaya VIDEOUS,aur bhaad me gaya sabkuch...

VIDEOUS jeet jaaye, har planet par raj kare,iske dad haar jaayen,har planet ka har banda mar jaaye,i dont give a fuck...

mujhe bas mera bhai chahiye..aur agar aisa nahi hua,toh i will bloody make it sure ki VIDEOUS ka kaam ho kar rahe..

mere bhai ke khoon ka harjaana is bramhaand ka har shaksh dega...


WOW...NOW THAT'S MORE LIKE IT..BUT TUM TENTION MAT LO... VIDEOUS KA KAAM VIDEOUS KHUD KAR LEGA...


ye thi VIDEOUS ki awaaz jo araam se ALFREEN ke baaju me khada tha..

VIDEOUS ko sahi salamat dekh sabki haalat kharab hi gayi..

MAHI ki toh saansein hi atak gayi thi..jisse khatm karne ke liye usne apne pyar tak ko maar diya tha,woh zinda tha...

kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha MAHI ko aur ye baat VIDEOUS jaanta tha aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-arre, tention kis baat ka..saare jawab mai deta hun.. actually,mere zinda bachne ka kaaran dikha hi deta hun...

VIDEOUS ka aisa bolna hi tha ki tabhi uske baaju ke prakat hua VIRAAZ jisse zinda dekh sabhi ki aankhein badi ho gayi aur woh samajh gaye ki kyun VIDEOUS nahi mara...

uske marne ke liye HEMINE, AROZ TIFER aur VIRAAZ ka saath me marna zaroori tha..

HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER toh saath mar gaye but VIRAAZ bach gaya tha..

aisa hone ke kaaran VIDEOUS ki REFINER power,uska HEART bhi dobara intact hokar uske andar sama gaya tha..

aur ye sab hua ALFREEN ke distraction ki wajah se...apne bhai ko marte dekh uske sword se nikal rahi DEATH BEAMS kamzor padh gayi thi,natija,us exact moment me,jisme HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER mare,RAAZ ne SWORD apne chest me pierce ki,VIRAAZ nahi mar paaya aur RAAZ ke marne ke baad toh ALFREEN ne VIRAAZ ko khtam karna zaroori hi nahi samjha aur yahan CHOSENS chali aayi.

hence,VIRAAZ bach gaya aur uske saath VIDEOUS bhi..

kuch der pehle jo us HEAVEN gate ke andar fasa tha VIDEOUS aur aisa hote hi kuch budbudane laga tha woh, VIRAAZ ko ussi distraction ka plan samjhaya tha VIDEOUS ne jo kaam kar gaya tha...

VIDEOUS ko dekh jahan baaki sab hairan aur dare hue the,wahin ALFREEN ko toh kisise kuch matlab hi nahi tha..

woh bas apne bhai ki raakh ko ektak dekhe jaa rahi thi...

but MAHI,ek ajeeb si ghutan aur bhaaripan feel ho raha tha usse...

khair,ek pal un sabko dekh VIDEOUS ki nazar upar akash ki taraf gayi aur..


VIDEOUS-mai jeet gaya..


halke par super confident awaaz me kahi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jiske baad sir sidha karte hi uski aankhein gayi RAAZ ke X-SWORD par..

aur kyunki RAAZ us SWORD ka SOLE owner tha jo ab nahi raha, isiliye ab woh SWORD naa sirf anath ho chuki thi balki saath hi saath accessable bhi...

isiliye chalte hue us SWORD ke paas aise pahuncha VIDEOUS jaise koi jeet ke baad prize lene manch par pahunchta hai...

kuch seconds SWORD ko dekh..


VIDEOUS-abse tu meri hui..


ye bol uske POMMEL ki taraf haath badhaya VIDEOUS ne aur usse hold karte hue utha liya..

GAGADGADGAD...

jaise hi VIDEOUS ne SWORD uthayi,ek baar phirse pura ELYSIAN tez bijli ki gadgadahat se gunj utha jispar ek badi si muskan naach uthi VIDEOUS ke face par...


VIDEOUS-ye bramhaand mera hua...


apne aage jhuke sabhi DARK WARRIORS aur VIRAAZ ko dekh kahi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jiske baad apne makers VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se milne ki khwahish jaagi uske dimag me aur aisa hote hi woh upar uthne ko hua par lekin...

VIDEOUS upar uth hi nahi paaya yaa phir ye kahun ki SWORD ne usse upar uthne hi nahi diya..

aur jab VIDEOUS ne dobara try kiya toh..

KRRRRRKRRRR...

ek tez current flow release hua SWORD se jo sidhe VIDEOUS ko hit hua aur aisa hote hi uski pakad SWORD ke POMMEL se chhut gayi aur woh udta hua sa piche ki taraf gira..

jahan ye dekh wahan moujud sabhi log hairan ho gaye wahin MAHI ki ankhen sochne waali andaz me pehle choti hui aur phir thodi badi ho gayi jiske baad woh turant pahuchi ALFREEN ke paas aur..


MAHI-i want your blood....


MAHI ki baat sun usse ghusse se kuch kehne ko hui ALFREEN par tabhi..


MAHI-dont you dare to talk any shit..just give me your blood..


ye baat bol MAHI ne khud hi ALFREEN ka haath hold kiya aur ek cut bana thoda sa blood apne finger tip par lete hue usse rub karna shuru kiya..

wahin SWORD HIT ke baad khade hote hi VIDEOUS dobara SWORD ki taraf badhne laga tha but is baar woh SWORD ko touch karna toh door,uske paas tak nahi pahunch paaya.

SWORD ne apne ird gird ek INVISIBLE BARRIER create kar diya tha jiski wajah se koi bhi uske paas nahi pahunch sakta tha..

VIDEOUS is naye unknown change ko samajhta ki tabhi usne suni MAHI ki baat jispar woh bhi usse dekhne laga joki is waqt ALFREEN ke khoon ko rub karte hue jaise kuch feel karne ki yaa phir ye kahun ki kuch match karne ki koshish kar rahi thi aur jab kuch seconds baad uska blood rub karna band hua toh..


MAHI-how is this even possible...???

ACCHUTA-kya baat hai MAHI...???

MAHI-ALFREEN ka blood,same blood mai is waqt kahin aur feel kar rahi hun...

but jahan se woh feeling aa rahi hai,woh jagah toh door ki baat hai,us jagah ke aas paas bhi koi living planet...

OH SHIT....


apni baat bolte hue hi MAHI ke brain me RAAZ ke dwara boli gayi do lines gunj uthi...

ek jo usne WORLD TREE ke saamne jab woh ek astral projection ke roop me aaya tha,tab kahi thi"KYA TUM KABHI KISI DEAD PLANET ME LIFE FEEL KAR SAKTI HO"!!!

aur abhi kuch der pehle kahe gaye uske woh shabd"MERA NAAM HAMESHA MUSKAAN LAAYEGA TUMHARE FACE PAR"...

aur jaise hi ye do lines uske dimag me gunje...


RAAZ,YOU STUPID,IDIOT, SCOUNDREL.... koi baat seedhe seedhe nahi bolni hai tumhe...

aankhon me ghussa but face par dher saari khushi liye kahi thi ye saari baat MAHI ne jispar ALFREEN turant uske paas pahunchi aur..


ALFREEN-kya mera bhai zinda hai.. please,chaaho toh jitna maine tumhe slap kiya hai, tum mujhe uska double, tripple slap kar lo,but please say ki mera bhai zinda hai...!!!!

MAHI-nahi..he is dead...


MAHI ki baat sun phirse udaas ho chali thi ALFREEN jispar..


MAHI-BUT WOH DOBARA ZINDA HONE WAALA HAI...

VIDEOUS-dimag thikane toh hai MAHI..kya bake jaa rahi hai..???


MAHI ki baat ka matlab toh koi nahi samjha but ALFREEN aur uske saath uske taraf ke sabhi log behadh khush ho chale the but dusri taraf man hi man boukhlate hue kahi thi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jispar...


MAHI-kyun...???dimag aur jugaad sirf tu hi lagana jaanta hai kya..???

VIDEOUS bhale hi ab tak puri kahani me teri taakat zyada rahi ho,par buddhi ke maamle me har waqt RAAZ baap raha hai tera...

aur thodi der me tujhe bhi is sach ka andaza ho hi jaane waala hai...

MABEL-MAHI,please saaf saaf bolo.. tum keh rahi ho ki RAAZ dobara zinda hone waala hai...

how...???ye kaise possible hai...

MAHI-jab BHAVISHYAVANI ne mujhe bataya tha ki VIDEOUS ko maarne ke liye RAAZ ko marna hoga, aur is baat par maine RAAZ ko uske khudko bachane ke liye koi tarika pucha tha,tab RAAZ ne mere aage ye tark rakha tha kya mai kisi dead PLANET par life feel kar sakti hun..

tab mujhe uski baat nirasha waadi lagi thi jabki asal me woh mujhe ek hint de raha tha..

kyunki abhi,is waqt mai ek nahi,balki 4 dead planets me alag alag tarah ki LIFE feel kar paa rahi hun...

kuch der pehle mai soch rahi thi ki ye bhala kaise mumkin ho sakta hai but tabhi marne se kuch der pehle RAAZ ki kahi ek aur baat ghumi mere dimag me..

"ABHI BHALE HI RO RAHI HO PAR MERA NAAM HAMESHA MUSKAAN LAAYEGA TUMHARE FACE PAR"...

uska naam.."RAAZ"..joki asal me ek acronym hai..

RENAISS...

ANGIS....

ANJJAYA....

ZEAL.....

in short,RAAZ....joki hain toh dead planets par unme ek life formed hui thi aur ab bhi hai.....

RAAZ ki...

aur is waqt mai ussi life ko,RAAZ ke BRAIN,uske BLOOD,uski BODY aur uski SOUL ko in chaaron planets par feel kar rahi hun...


jahan MAHI ki baat sun sabhi ke face par ek aisi muskaan thi maano RAAZ ki nahi,unki life ressurect hone waali hai wahin MAHI ki baat sun VIDEOUS ka dimag pura ghum chuka tha par woh jaanana chahta tha ki jo theory MAHI ne diya hai,woh sach hai yaa nahi aur isiliye woh filhal ke liye shaant khada raha..

is beech MAHI ne apni aankhen band ki aur apne PEACE MAKERS power ke har katre ko apne BRAIN aur HEART me circulate karne lagi aur jab uska woh power uske BRAIN aur HEART me apne full potential me pahunch ek dusre se merge hua toh MAHI ko apni theory sahi feel hone lagi...

RENAISS,ANJJAYA,ANGIS aur ZEAL ko woh puri tarah feel kar paa rahi thi yaa phir ye kahun ki she was now completely feeling RAAZ on those four planets..

band aankhen bhi chamak sakti hai,aaj MAHI ne ye bhi saabit kar diya tha..

uski dono aankhon ki putliyon me is waqt ek light jagmaga rahi thi aur agle hi pal uske dono haathon se uski PEACE MAKERS LIFE SUSTAINABLE BEAM nikal chaar alag alag disha me jahan woh chaar planets the,chali gayi...

light se thousand times fast time karti woh BEAMS kuch hi palon me un planets par pahunch chuki thi aur aisa hote hi woh BEAMS un planets ke CORE ki taraf jahan RAAZ ke human body ke VITAL parts chuppe hue the,wahan reach hui aur SOOOOBBHHHHH

suck in karte hue un BEAMS ne un LIFE PARTICLES ko khudke andar kheenchna shuru kiya..

jaise jaise woh LIFE PARTICLES un BEAMS ke andar suck in ho rahe the,waise waise MAHI ke sir ke beecho beech ek aur chakra ban raha tha jisme woh saare LIFE PARTICLES gather hote chale jaa rahe the aur jaise hi woh pure PARTICLES us chakra me jama hua toh...

KRRRRRRRR....

MAHI aur VIDEOUS joki usse 20 metre door straight aage khada tha,un dono ke centre point par woh sabhi beams ek saath zamin par hit hone lage...

aisa hote hi us point se shuru hote hue pura ELYSIAN roshni se naha utha tha...

kisiko kuch bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha par sabko ek cheez zaroor mehsoos ho rahi thi...

TAAKAT...avishwasniya taakat joki ussi centre point se jahan woh saare beams hit hi rahe the,paida ho rahi thi..

aur us taakat ko feel kar VIDEOUS samajh gaya ki MAHI ne jo theory batayi thi, woh bohot jald practically sach hone waali thi..

saath hi saath us taakat ko mehsoos karte hue VIDEOUS ye bhi samajh chuka tha ki RAAZ ne jo SACRIFICE diya tha,uska hefty return gift usse milne waala hai..

khudko SACRIFICE karne ki wajah se RAAZ ko ek unimaginable power ka bhandar milne waala hai jisse woh filhal toh compete karne ki condition me nahi hai...

par ye galat tha..kamsekam VIDEOUS ki nazar me toh galat hi tha aur uske paas waisa feel karne ke liye ek valid kaaran bhi tha...

jabde sakhti se bheenchte VIDEOUS bas us infinite power ko feel kar RAAZ ke formation completions ka wait kar raha tha...

khair,kuch hi der me VIDEOUS aur baaki sabka intazar khatm hua...

woh tez roshni kam hone lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte,jab nazara clear hua toh sabke beech khada tha RAAZ....

BHAI......RAAZZZZZ...


chillate hue ALFREEN, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MABEL RAAZ ki taraf bhaagne ko hue par tabhi..

SOOOBHHHH..

VIDEOUS ke haathon se ek ek ray nikal un sabko padi jiske baad naa sirf woh sab piche ki taraf udte hue gire balki saath hi saath un sabka conscious brain bhi kuch aisa hinder hue ki un sabko halke halke chakkar aane lage..

neeche gire pade hi woh sab khudko theek karne me lag gaye the...

wahin apne beams se un sabko girane ke baad VIDEOUS aage badha aur upar akash ki taraf dekhte hue...


VIDEOUS-ye asambhav hai...ye RAAZ ki body hai, koi maamuli mortal ka sharir nahi..

isse dobara banane ke liye,iske purane sharir se is naye sharir ko create karne ke process bhar ke liye jis taakat ki zaroorat hoti hai,woh naa toh khud RAAZ ke paas hai aur naahi mere...

aisa karna bramhaand me sirf do logon ke bas me hai...

aap dono ke...


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se kahi thi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jiske baad apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


VIDEOUS-par agar aapne ye kiya hai toh ye galath hai... sharth ke khilaaf liya gaya kadam hai...

aap dono ne sidhe tour par RAAZ ki madad ki hai aur aisa kar is RAAZ ke saath aap dono haar chuke ho...

aur aapke saath haar chuke hain aap dono ke FATHER...GOD....


KRRRRR......DHABBBBB....


VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS tak toh theek tha,but jaise hi VIDEOUS ne GOD ke liye apne shabd bole toh RAAZ ki SWORD se nikli ek beam jo sidhe strike hui VIDEOUS ke chest par jiski wajah se ab baari thi uski peeche udte hue girne ki aur saath hi saath uska bhi brain ek pal ke liye hinder ho gaya tha..

but is push ke saath bina bole bhi ek chiz bata di thi SWORD ne VIDEOUS ko..

aur woh ye ki sirf VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS hi nahi,ek aur CHIZ bhi hai jo RAAZ ki body ko ressurect karne ki taakat rakhti hai..

WOH KHUD...THE SWORD....

is sach ko samajh jaise hi VIDEOUS wapas utha tabhi..

SWORD ke POMMEL se ek ke baad ek kayi rays nikle aur is waqt wahan CHOSENS ke battlefield me jitne bhi log khade the,un sabke maathe se hote hue woh rays unke brain me ghus gaye aur aisa hote hi unke dimag me chalne laga ek drishyam...


A SMALL FLASHBACK:-

(UPDATE-165....AFTER RAAZ ENDED ALIUM)


SWORD-AUR MERE TRUE OWNER HONE KE KAARAN AAJ SE MERI SHAKTIYAN AAPKI HUI...

MAI-kuch aur bhi hai jo mujhe chahiye tumse...

SWORD-kuch bhi...bas,aadesh dijiye...

MAI-pehle ye batao ki kya tum mere AMPLIFICATION MODES,mera ye pura sharir recreate kar sakti ho...???

SWORD-bilkul...aapke naye sharir ke liye uske har hisse ka pratidarsh(sample) aapke issi sharir se mil jaayega..

siwaye ek chiz ke...SOUL...it cannot be reincarnated...

baaki sab karna mere liye mamuli baat hai..

kehne ka arth hai ki jaisa aapne chaha,waisa ho jaayega...

bas ek pareshani hai..mujhe pata hai ki aap apne is sharir ki dobara rachna kyun karna chahte hain...??

par us pal ke aane me abhi thoda waqt hai..aur agar aapke sharir ki rachna abhi hui, toh uski urja itni zyada hogi ki VIDEOUS usse sense kar lega..

aaj bhi bramhaand ka har planet usse mehsoos hota hai aur jab tak MAHI ko uski asli shakti nahi mil jaati,tab tak aapke sharir ko kisi bhi LIVING PLANET me VIDEOUS se chuppaye rakhna naamumkin hoga...

saath hi saath kyunki aapke sharir me jeeven tabhi aayega jab woh sabhi AMPLIFICATION MODES merge hote hue ek life form karenge, isiliye COURIOUS me bhi aapke unborn sharir ko nahi rakha jaa sakta..

MAI-living planets me naa sahi,par DEAD PLANETS me toh meri body chuppayi jaa sakti hai...

SWORD-living planet's sharir ke liye waisa hi kaam karte hain jaisa fruits aur vegetables ke liye fridge..

LIVING PLANETS ki LIFE ENERGY ke bina body puri banane se pehle hi decompose.....


apni baat kehte kehte hue hi rook gayi thi SWORD..kyunki woh mere DEAD PLANETS kehne ka tark samajh gayi thi aur isiliye bina aage kuch kahe kuch beams nikle uske sharir se jinhone sidhe mere AMPLIFICATION modes ko pierce karna shuru kar diya jisse mujhe asahaniya pain jhelna pada but it was worthied...

kuch pal chala ye process jiske baad RAAZ ke AMPLIFICATION MODES ke samples ko kheench kar bahar nikala SWORD ne aur aisa hote hi usne apni energy un samples me inject karni shuru ki..

dekhte hi dekhte woh sabhi parts ek nayi urja me badal tezi se alag alag disha me aage badh gaye aur kuch hi palon me RAAZ ke AMPLIFICATION MODES uski rachne se pehle waali jagah,woh planets jinke ACRONYM se RAAZ ko naam mila hai,sama chuke the..




FLASHBACK ENDS:-



scene complete hote hi SWORD se nikal rahi rays gayab ho gayi aur aisa hote hi sabki aankhein khul gayi siway MAHI ki...

flashback dekh jahan PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS, SAVENTS aur RAAZ ke sabhi dost khushi se ucchal hi pade the,uska bhai zinda hai jaanane ke baad ALFREEN ki aankhein ab bhi bheegi hui thi par is baar woh nikal rahe aansu khushi ke the.

ataha khushi ke...

wahin VIDEOUS ka pura khema shaant tha..aisa lag raha tha jaise woh sab wahan moujud hai hi nahi...

saath hi saath ek dar bhi dikhne laga tha un sabke faces par...

bina RAAZ ke uske log lawaris se the,toote hue se jinhe harana aur maaran un sabke liye bacchon ka khel tha but RAAZ ki is naa sochi hui waapsi ne unhi bacchon ko in sabka baap bana diya tha..

wahin unke saamne khada tha unka GOD.. VIDEOUS,jiski aankhon me krodh ka laava panap raha tha..

but ye ghussa RAAZ ya MAHI ke liye nahi balki khudke liye tha..

aur aisa hona jayaz bhi tha..aakhir ye ladhayi uske aur RAAZ ke beech thi jinme un dono ke pramukh hathiyar the unki shakti aur dimag..

aur aaj RAAZ ne VIDEOUS ko dimag ke maamle me pathkani de hi di thi..

khudko bachane ke liye apni SOUL ko RAAZ me store karna,agar ye VIDEOUS ka MASTER STROKE tha toh jo RAAZ ne kiya tha,woh sabhi MASTER STROKES ka baap tha..

khair,pura flashback dekhne ke baad jaise hi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL aur ALFREEN ki aankhein khuli toh saamne RAAZ ko dekh khushi se ucchalte hue woh sab uski taraf badhe par uske paas pahunchte hi naa sirf unke kadam rooke balki saath hi saath un sabki hairani ek baar phir apne charam par thi..

REASON..

RAAZ unke saamne zaroor khada tha par is waqt woh ek HUMAN EFFIGY ki tarah,ek maanav putle ki tarah khada tha..

bilkul steady,bina hile dule...ye dekh hairan hote hue woh sab usse touch karne lage.

aisa karte hue ALFREEN ka ek haath RAAZ ke chest aur dusra uske haathon par jahan navs hote hain,touch kiya aur aisa karte hi badi aankhon ke saath usne apne sabhi doston ko dekha aur...


ALFREEN-guyzz.. bhai ki toh navs aur heart beat dono hi gayab hain..


ALFREEN ki baat sun un sabki hairani bhi badh chuki thi...

anyways,sabko dekhte hue is baat ko bolne ke baad ALFREEN aur uske saath sabhi ki nazar bhi is sawal ke jawab-e-shroth as in MAHI ki taraf ghum ghumi aur aisa hote hi ek baar phir woh sab chownke...

REASON...

MAHI ki aankhein abhi bhi band thi aur uski body lagatar halki halki shake ho rahi thi..

ye dekh woh sab turant MAHI ke paas pahunche jiske baad uske kandhe par haath rakha ALFREEN ne aur..


ALFREEN-MAHI....MAHI....


uska naam kete hue halke zor se usse hilaya ALFREEN ne jiske baad ek jhatke me aankein khuli MAHI ki jinme pareshani saaf dikh rahi thi..


ALFREEN-kya hua MAHI..??aur dekh,BHAI wapas aa gaye hain but bilkul kisi statue ki tarah..

unki heart beat aur navs bhi gayab hain...

MAHI-woh isiliye kyunki uski SOUL ab bhi uske body me nahi samayi hai..


tezi se aage badh RAAZ ke paas pahunch uske face ko pyar se chhute hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar FLASH BACK SCENE me SWORD dwara SOUL ke baare me kahi baat yaad kar ek anjane dar ne gher liya ALFREEN aur sabhi doston ko jiske baad ashankit bhaav se...


ALFREEN-kya bhai ki SOUL....!!?

MAHI-nahi... it's contained... RAAZ ki SOUL bhi sahi salamat hai aur woh bhi ZEAL me...but...

HIDA-lekin kya MAHI...???

MAHI-ZEAL gayab hai..

SAB-what...??

MAHI-haan,jahan ZEAL thi,ab wahan nahi hai..infact maine bramhaand ka har kona dekh liya hai,par ZEAL kahin nahi hai...

but i can feel it..and that too very strongly...aisa lag raha hai jaise RAAZ mere behadh kareeb hai..

mai mehsoos kar paa rahi hun usse..theek waise jaise THE LAND PLANET me feel.....


bolte bolte achanak rook gayi MAHI.. aankhon ki putliyan tez idhar udhar hone lagi uski aise jaise uska dimag reverse mode maare hue ho aur jaise hi uski woh putliyan shaant hui,unki chamak hadh se zyada badh chuki thi aur...


MAHI-OHHHH...MY....GODDD.....

ye bol VIDEOUS ki taraf jo usse hi ghur raha tha,dekha MAHI ne aur..


MAHI-VIDEOUS...RAAZ ne teri chaal ko bohot pehle hi kaat diya tha...

exact time bolun toh theek ussi point par jis point se tera plan successfully implant hua tha..

tune apni soul us SHIELD me lagayi thi jisse CHOSENS pahunchne ke baad RAAZ ne apni temporary use ke liye mili ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON se toda tha..

uske waisa karte waqt teri SOUL uske andar ek VOID banate hue sama gayi thi..

but pata hai, us exact moment me jab teri soul uske andar sama rahi thi,kuch aur bhi hua tha...


MAHI ki baat par aankhon me sawal liye VIDEOUS usse dekhne laga jispar...


MAHI-VABHIDHI SAMASTAM SHAKTIYEM (update-136)

yahi tha woh SPELL jisse RAAZ ne tere SHIELD ko toda tha..but jab usne ye SPELL uccharit kiya aur us SPELL se generate hue ray ne tere SHIELD ko toda,toh us impact se mai piche ki taraf giri thi..

us waqt maine RAAZ ke SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki taakat ko feel kiya tha..

mujhe laga tha ki itne strong barrier ko todne ke liye RAAZ ko apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki zaroorat padi hogi par asal me aisa kuch tha hi nahi..

RAAZ ne us SHIELD ko apne ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON se toda tha jinhe SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki zaroorat nahi padti..

aur jo maine feel kiya,woh bhi SOUL AMPLIFICATION nahi thi,balki RAAZ ki SOUL thi jisse SHRINKED ZEAL PLANET ke saath RAAZ ne mere andar chuppa diya tha..


MAHI ki baat sun ek baar phirse VIDEOUS ko ye ehsaas ho gaya tha ki dimag ke is shatranj me RAAZ ne usse pehle hi maat de di thi..

jis waqt usne apni SOUL RAAZ ke andar implant ki thi,ussi waqt RAAZ ne bhi apni SOUL MAHI ke andar implant kar di thi....

matlab jaise VIDEOUS ne khudko bachane ka intazam pehle hi kar diya tha, waisa hi kuch RAAZ ne bhi apna jugaad laga liya tha but thode zyada risk ke saath.

apne plan ko successful karne ke liye woh actually mara tha par jiska ab usse gift bhi milne waala tha...

SOUL ke uski body me samate hi aur adhik shaktiyon ka maalik banane waala tha woh..

jahan ek taraf ye sab soch raha tha VIDEOUS wahin dusri taraf MAHI ne apne heart me jhaanka shuru kiya aur uske waisa karte hi wahan moujud ek invisible VOID usse visible hoti hui dikhayi di aur us VOID ke andar tha ek chote akaar ka PLANET...

ZEAL..

MAHI ek PEACE MAKER thi aur ye sach RAAZ ko THE PAN-OUT VAULT me apni temporarily mili ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ke saath pata chala tha aur isiliye hi usse pata tha ki ek pure PLANET ke SHRINKED version ko sirf MAHI hi thi,jo apne andar chuppane ki kaabiliyat rakhti thi...

yahi wajah thi ki marne se just pehle MAHI ki propose karte waqt RAAZ ne ye kaha tha ki"TUMHARI YE AANKHEIN MUJHE UNSE HOTE HUE TUMHARE DIL ME UTAAR KHUDME ZINDA KAR RAHI HAIN..."

DIL ME UTAAR...ye bhi ek hint tha RAAZ ka MAHI ko ye batane ke liye ki woh uske andar zinda hai...

khair,jaise hi MAHI ne apne andar jhaankna shuru kiya toh ek blocked view unblock hone laga jiske agle hi pal MAHI ko dikha ek urja ki shape liya PLANET..

but MAHI ke dekhte hi woh planet transparent hone laga aur dekhte hi dekhte uske andar se ek dhuen se bani beam circulate karti hui bahar aayi joki thi RAAZ ki SOUL..

SOUL ke bahar aate hi ZEAL gayab ho chuka tha...heart se hote hue woh SOUL MAHI ke chest ke raaste bahar nikal aaya aur aisa hote hi..


SOOOBBHHHH..

ek limitless speed se aage badhte hue woh SOUL RAAZ ki body me sama chuka tha aur jab aisa hua toh..

ek daath do chizen hui..

pehli...

RAAZ ki body ek baar phirse tez roshni se naha uthi...

dusri...

GADGADGADGAD.....

ek baar firse pure ELYSIAN ka akash asankhya bijli ki gunjo se jagmaga utha par is baar ki ye bijli ki gadgadahat kuch aisi thi maano HEAVEN RAAZ ke resurrection par khush ho raha tha...

khair,kuch der tak RAAZ ki body ke ird gird aur upar akash me chamchamati bijli chamakti hi rahi aur phir ye dono hi chizen ek saath khatm ho bhi ho gayi aur jab aisa hua toh...


BHAI.....KRRRRRR...

ek taraf se gunji ALFREEN ki khushi bhari cheekh jiske baad woh ek disha ki taraf bhaagi aur dusri taraf thi SWORD joki ab tak neeche zamin par dhansi hui thi,par ab jaise woh bhi ek tez chamak ke saath apne harsh ko dikha hawa me uth gol gol ghumne lagi aur phir achanak se hi tezi se badhi woh SWORD aur agle hi pal woh uske OWNER ke haathon me thi...

aur theek ussi pal meri behen bhi apne bhai ke paas,mere paas aakar mujhe kas kar gale laga chuki thi...

apni behen ko mehsoos karta hua,infact, khudko ek baar phirse zinda mehsoos karta hua mai apni chamakti hui aankhon se dekh raha tha saamne jahan mujhe hi ghurte khada tha VIDEOUS...

ye pal apne saath ek defination lekar aaya tha jisse woh bhi jaanta tha aur mai bhi ki...




kaala gehra chaaya hua baadal ab JAA CHUKA THA....

waqt ka pahiya mere dushman ko apni peeth DIKHA CHUKA THA....

jiske anth se apni jeet ke sapne dekhne laga tha VIDEOUS....

us jeet ko haar me badalne ke liye RAAZ WAAPAS AA CHUKA THA.....




















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V....J....
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI EK TARAF RAAZ KI VIDEOUS SE,DUSRI TARAF MAHI KI HEMINE,AROZ AUR TIFER SE, TEESRI TARAF ALFREEN AUR WOOGER KI VIRAAZ SE, CHOWTHI TARAF ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA AUR MABEL KI VALDIS, DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL AUR TRISTEN SE AUR PAANCHWI TARAF GRIFFIN,ANZU,PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS AUR SAVENTS KI DARK WARRIORS SE BATTLE SHURU HO CHUKI HAI..


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



MEGA UPDATE-171



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-BATTLE FIELD



PART-2




BACK TO RAAZ & VIDEOUS








VIDEOUS-IMPRESSIVE

MAI-ALWAYS...


maine VIDEOUS ki ek shabd ki baat par apni ek shabd ki baat rakhi hi thi ki tabhi VIDEOUS ki nazar padi apne chaaron taraf..

ek taraf HEMINE,AROZ aur TIFER ki senses MAHI ne dull kar un teeno ko apne apne ghutno par laa diya tha,dusri taraf VIRAAZ ko ALFREEN aur WOOGER ne neeche gira diya tha,teesri taraf ACCHUTA,MABEL aur unke teeno dost death ray ke saath VALDIS aur baaki chaaron ke saamne khade the..

wahin chowthi taraf GRIFFIN aur ANZU ki madad se PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS DARK WARRIORS par bhaari padh rahe the..

ye sab dekh sir ko halka sa shake kiya VIDEOUS ne aur mujhe dekh..


VIDEOUS-socha tha kuch waqt khelunga tere saath magar haalat thode bekabu ho chale hain..

sorry,tere bache waqt ka waqt kaat raha hun mai...


LOGARDHAKARAHAANIYEM...

HOLOCAUST


haath failate hue man hi man is SPELL ko uccharit kiya VIDEOUS ne aur uske waisa karte hi uske sharir se bas ek inch door DARK FLAME se bani ek asadharan urja ne janm liya..

us urja ki shakti itni zyada thi ki pura CHOSENS hilne laga tha..

is beech us urja ko feel karte hue maine bhi VIDEOUS ki taraf apna haath kiya aur...


OGIABHARIKE

QUOSH..


us urja ko jo VIDEOUS ki body ke bahar glow kar rahi thi,usse khatm kar VIDEOUS ke senses ko dull karne ke liye man hi man uccharit kiya maine ye SPELL par tabhi....


SOOBHHHH..

CHATTTTTT...


VIDEOUS ki body se limitless speed ikhtiyar karte hue ek DARK ETERNAL CANE jiski lambai kareeb 6 metre thi,bahar aayi aur sidhe mere haath par jisme SPELL ki urja create ho hi rahi thi,padi aur aisa hote hi naa sirf woh SPELL ki urja gayab ho gayi balki saath hi saath mera haath bhi numb padh gaya..

ye DARK ETARNAL CANE asal me VIDEOUS ki BLOOD AMPLIFICATION ki shakti se bana tha..

isme saamne waale ki har AMPLIFICATION mode me straining aur agony laane ki taakat thi..

saath hi saath iski movement environment ki fluidity ko bhi solid banakar apne pratidwandi ki movement ko slow kar deti thi..

in short, VIDEOUS ka ye astra DARK ITERNAL CANE ek super rare aur incredibly strong weapon tha jisse woh tabhi use me laata jab uske saamne koi uski shakti ko takkar dene waala banda ho joki sirf mai hi tha...

hazaron saalon ki BLOOD AMPLIFICATION nourishment ke baad taiyar hua tha ye DARK ITERNAL CANE aur yahi reason tha ki naa sirf usne mere SPELL ki urja ko supress kar diya balki saath hi saath uski movement se mera woh haath bhi pura numb padh gaya..


aur tabhi..

MUKHARUMARDHATE...

DEFACING.....

apne andar chhupe kaali shakti ki urja ko use me laate hue uccharit kiya is SPELL ko VIDEOUS ne jiske agle hi pal ek kaala dhuen ka ghera sa bana mere face ke paas..


DWAJULE HIMAGUNA..

WHITE AURA CLEANSING


us kaale ghere ko dekh aur usse release ho rahi immense power ko feel karte hi ye spell uccharit kiya maine jiske asar se woh kaale dhuen ka ghera turant hath jaana chahiye tha aur aisa ho hi raha tha ki tabhi..

SOBBBHHHH...

jitna ghera empty hua aur aisa hone se ek khaali spot bana,ussi spot me apne ITERNAL CANE ko ghumaya VIDEOUS ne aur uske waisa karte hi mera face movement slow ho gaya..

jaise hi ye hua toh VIDEOUS ne apne ek hand ko halka sa wave kiya jiske baad BLACK ENERGY se bane us kaale dhuan ka jitna bhi part empty hua tha,woh dobara bhar gaya aur aisa hote hi woh mere face par kisi view block mask ki tarah fail sa gaya jiski wajah se mera view blind ho chuka tha..

mai kuch bhi nahi dekh paa raha tha aur tabhi...

VIDEOUS ne apne chest par haath rakha aur uske waisa karte hi uske peth aur peeth se kul teen aur astra joki ETARNAL CANE ki hi tarah uske kisi na kisi AMPLIFICATION mode ki hi taakat se bane the,prakat hue...


1st-THE DARK CRESCENT BLADE

2nd-SHARUR (the sentient mace)

3rd-FRAKIR (sentient garotte)


ye teen super deadly weapons the jinhe filhal sirf mai hi kaat sakta tha but ek baar me ek hi..

par is waqt ek toh mai khud VIDEOUS ke jaal me fas temporary blind ho chuka tha aur saath hi saath usne ye teeno weapons ek saath nikale the..

khair, jaise hi woh teeno weapons nikle, VIDEOUS ki body se ek baar phirse black energy ke kan chain ki shakal liye bahar aaye aur unhone un teeno weapons ko hold kar liya..

aisa hote hi VIDEOUS ne un teeno weapons ko teen alag alag disha ki taraf badhne ka ishara kiya.

THE DARK CRESCENT BLADE sidhi gayi MAHI aur HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ke beech aur jaise hi woh us jagah par pahunchi,woh tez rotate hone lagi...

THE DARK CRESCENT BLADE jaise hi speedily ghumi,usse release hue VIDEOUS ki shakti se bana ek DARK GALE...

par ye DARK GALE sirf MAHI ke direction me hi flow hua..

ye sab bohot zyada sudden hua tha jisse MAHI dekhna toh door ki baat hai,feel bhi nahi kar paayi aur woh DARK GALE usse hit kar gaya.

AHHHH....

ek grunting awaaz ke saath apne unbearable pain ko feel karti hui woh udte hue piche jaakar giri..

MAHI ke girne aur uske sharir me pain ke uthne se woh roots jinme HEMINE,AROZ aur TIFER fase the,woh bhi kamzor padh gayi aur woh teeno usse free ho gaye...

khair,us DARK GALE me sudden PYSICAL power drainage ki bhi shamata thi yahi wajah thi ki MAHI ki puri energy ek pal me hi suck out ho chuki thi aur woh kamzori ki wajah se halki halki thartharane lagi thi..

AHHHHH..

tabhi ek aur dard bhari grunt har taraf gunj uthi joki ALFREEN ki...

REASON...

SHARUR uske aur VIRAAZ ke beech hi jaakar rotate hone laga tha jiske baad usse nikle kuch KAALI paani ke bunde jo sidhe jaakar VIRAAZ ko lapete un HEAVENLY ROPES par pade...

ye black water asal me VIDEOUS ke BRAMHAAND ke liye corrupted iraadon se bane liquid the jo HEAVENLY ROPE jaisi paak cheez ke liye acidic the..

jaise hi woh black water us rope se takraye,toh woh rope puri ashudh ho gayi aur usme DARK FLAMES create ho gaye.

ye dark flames bhi VIDEOUS ki hi shakti ka hissa the jo us rope aur
SHARUR se hote hue ALFREEN aur WOOGER se takraye aur aisa hote hi WOOGER ke senses halke dull hue aur woh neeche baith gaya par ALFREEN ko kuch zyada hi effect kiya us black water ne aur uski body ke kayi bhaag jhulas se gaye..

piche ki taraf palat kar giri woh aur aisa hote waqt hi uske mooh se cheekh nikli thi...

AHHHHHHHHHHH...

par ALFREEN ki cheekh ko 5 nayi cheekhon ne daba diya...

aur ye paanch cheekhen thi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA, BRAWNY aur MABEL ki jinhe FRAKIR se nikle INKY PERILOUS ORE ne joki chote chote sui ki tarah thi,usne un paanchon ki body ko pierce kar diya tha.

aisa hote hi un sabke nerves heart valves ki tarah open shut hone lage jiski wajah se sudden blood flow kam hua un sabki bodies me aur woh paanchon ek jhatke me neeche girte chale gaye...



IVASHINAHAM TIGARIHONAM

UNWRAP WITH HELL'S BLAZING FIRE..

AHHHHHHHHHH...


us opaque mask ki wajah se mere face ke saath saath meri brain functioning bhi jaise covered ho gayi thi jiski wajah se mai concentrate karte hue SPELL nahi bol paa raha tha..

kuch seconds khudke SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN ko control aur relaxed karne ke liye maine aur jab aisa ho gaya tha apne HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki shakti ke through apne face par fire create kiya maine aur jaise hi woh FIRE CREATE hua,woh OPAQUE MASK gayab ho gaya.

par aisa hote waqt mujhe ek saath kayi hazar cheekhen sunayi di jiske baad jaise hi woh mask hata,meri aankhen us cheekh ki disha me ghum gayi aur aisa hote hi jo drishya meri anakhon ke saamne aaya,usse dekh aankein khun se bhar laal hi gayi meri...

MAHI, ALFREEN, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MABEL toh VIDEOUS ke teeno astron ke waar se neeche gire pade hi tha but woh FRAKIR shastra jisse ACCHUTA aur baaki chaaron par use kiya tha VIDEOUS ne,woh in paanchon ko ghayal karkar bhi nahi rooka tha.

un paanchon ko zamin par patak woh tezi se aage badha aur badi tezi se PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS ke upar pahunch ghumne laga..

aisa hote hi usse nikle tez dhar BLACK ENERGY ki takaat aur VIDEOUS ki AMPLIFICATION shakti me dube pins..

waise toh GRIFFIN aur ANZU ne dekh liya tha FRAKIR aur usse nikal rahe pins ko aur usse dekh ek strong shield ke saath kisi chaadar ki tarah apne apne shaktiyon ko un dono ne sabhi WHITE ENERGY ke dhaarakon ke upar bicha sa diya tha but VIDEOUS ki shakti se bane shastra ko dhoka dena itna bhi saral toh tha nahi..

FRAKIR se nikle woh pins GRIFFIN aur ANZU ki chadar roopi shield ke paas pahunchte hi intangible ho gaye aur unhe paar karne ke baad wapas tangible..

waise toh is change ko GRIFFIN aur ANZU ne bhi mehsoos kar liya tha par jab tak woh wapas PEACE MAKERS ko jinki taraf woh pins move kar rahe the,cover de paate,woh dono thoda late ho gaye...

ek hi jhatke me 1000's of pins utne hi numbers of PEACE MAKERS ki body me sama chuke the aur aisa hote hi woh hazaron PEACE MAKERS jalkar raakh ho gaye...

jahan is scene ko dekh ek khamoshi si chha gayi thi SAVENTS, WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur baaki bache PEACE MAKERS ke beech,wahin sabhi DARK WARRIORS aur VIDEOUS ke khaas numaindon ke faces par smile naach uthi..

is beech jab VIDEOUS ki nazar meri jalti ankhon par gayi toh..


VIDEOUS-arre,ghussa kis baat ka...jung hai,jaan toh jaayegi hi...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun ek pal ke liye dekha maine usse..

is jung ko lamba nahi kheench sakta tha mai..jitna zyada waqt ye sab chalega,utne maasumo ki jaan jaane waali thi..

jo bhi karna tha yaa phir ye kahun ki jo bhi mere saath hona tha,usse jald se jald hona tha taaki mera anth baakiyon ki jaan bacha sake...

but having said that,sabse pehle VIDEOUS ne jo abhi kiya,uska jawab toh dena hi tha mujhe aur isiliye...


MAI-MAHI....


bas itna hi bola maine jisse sun pehle hi ghusse ki aag me jalti MAHI ne apna haath zamin par ek jhatke me dhasa sa diya aur uske waisa karti hi...

AAHHHHHH.....

planet ke mantle aur crust me chippa telluric current 1000 times AMPLIFY hote hue turant activate ho gaya jisne ek hi jhatke me sabhi DARK WARRIORS ko jinki sankhya ab bhi 1.50 lakhs se zyada thi, apni chapet me le liya..

unki bodies us telluric current ki roots ke andar kisi azgar ke shikar ki tarah fas gayi jiske agle hi pal woh sab bhi jo haal PEACE MAKERS ka hua tha,theek ussi tarah jal kar raakh ho chuke the...

ye dekh VIDEOUS ne ek baar phirse apne teeno shastron ko ek saath bache PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS ko khtam karne ke liye istemal me laane ke iraade apna haath un teeno shastron ki taraf kiya par tabhi..


BOOMMM.BOOMMMM.
BOOOMMMM....

mere chest se ek baar phir meri HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki aag ke teen beams nikle jo sidhe VIDEOUS ke teeno astra,THE DARK CRESCENT BLADE,SHARUR aur FRAKIR se takra gaye..

waise toh kyunki woh teeno hi shashtra kyunki VIDEOUS ki AMPLIFICATION urja se bane the,isiliye HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke hit karne ke baad bhi unka completely destroy hona impossible tha but haan,woh powerless zaroor ho sakte the aur wahi hua..

jaise hi HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki beams ne un teeno ko touch kiya,unki shakti nishkriya ho gayi aur woh teeno neeche zamin par gir pade..

pehle apne sabhi DARK WARRIORS ki mout aur phir apne khaas shashtron ka yun powerless hona,ye sab dekh ab baari thi VIDEOUS ke mujhe ghoorne ki...

wahin uske yun ghoorne se mile extra kuch palon ka faayda uthathe hue maine is khel ke antim bhaag ka plan apni behen aur doston ko share karna shuru kiya...


MAI-guyz,its time...

jaise hi mera agla waar VIDEOUS ko hit ho,you all will start implementing the plan...

bohot kam waqt ka window milega jisme pure plan ko execute karna hai tum sabko....

ALFREEN,WOOGER,VIRAAZ ko lekar yahan se,VIDEOUS ki eye sight se door jaao...

yahan rahi toh woh VIRAAZ ko exact time me maarne nahi dega....

he will derail the timing....

SLUNDER..apni SHIELD ke full potential ko realase karega tu aur MAHI ke saath HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ko us SHIELD me kaid karega
...and make sure ki the THE SHIELD ki opaque..

SHIELD ke opaque hone ki baat maine isiliye ki thi kyunki VIDEOUS bhale hi un teeno ko tab bhi sense kar lega par sense karne aur dekhne me fark hota hai jo uske action time me jhalkega.. par us moment ke liye bhu kuch khaas socha hua tha maine..

anyways, apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAI-and most importantly,get up guyzz...ek waar bhi agar bina pain dikhaye nahi jhel paaye toh matlab hi kya is yudh me bhaag lene ka...


meri planning sunte sunte VIDEOUS ke shastron se mili chot se ubharte hue woh sabhi dheere dheere uth rahe the but meri aankhri baat sun jaise khudke us pain ko hi jhatka un sabne aur ek jhatke me khade ho gaye..

khair, man hi man sabko plan samjha ab mera focus wapas VIDEOUS par gaya aur is baar bina kuch kahe maine bas apna haath aage kiya aur mere aisa karte hi mere haathon me meri sword aa gayi..

wahin mere haathon me SWORD ko dekh VIDEOUS samajh gaya ki ab mai usse aar ya paar waali ladhayi ladhna chahta hun aur isiliye ek pal apni deadly smile dene ke baad..


VIDEOUS-tujhe lagta hai ki tu is SWORD se mujhe beat kar sakta hai..

koi baat nahi..teri saanson ke saath teri ye galatfehmi bhi kuch der me door ho jaayegi...

aaja..pehla waar tu hi kar le...

SOOBHHHH..


VIDEOUS ki baat khtam hui bhi nahi thi ki usse pehle hi SWORD zor se feki maine uski taraf aur theek ussi pal mai bhi gayab hote hue theek VIDEOUS ke piche pahunch gaya..

ye sab ek hi waqt me hua tha aur isse pehle ki VIDEOUS joki limitless speed aur unimaginable force create kar uski taraf aate SWORD ko bhi dekh paa raha tha,woh SWORD ko dodge karta,mai joki uske piche pahunch chuka tha,maine peeche se uski gardan pakad li taaki VIDEOUS hil bhi naa paaye aur SWORD uske seene me sama jaaye...

is waqt mere haath me MAGICAL barrier ki roshni chamak rahi thi jiski wajah se VIDEOUS bhi tab tak koi SPELL nahi bol sakta tha jab tak woh roshni numa barrier uske sharir ke kisi bhi bhaag se connected tha...

par tabhi....

VIDEOUS ne apna haath piche kiya aur khud mere haathon ki grip apni gardan par aur sakht karte hue woh ghum gaya.

VIDEOUS ki pysical taakat bhi itni zyada thi ki meri body bhi uski movement ke saath ghum gayi aur aisa hote hi ab meri peeth SWORD ke raaste par thi..

but SWORD mujhe aur mere body AURA ko pehchanti thi aur isiliye mere paas aate hi woh rook gayi aur tabhi..

maine hold kiya apni SWORD ko aur tezi se VIDEOUS ki taraf ghumta hua uspar SWORD slash kiya jispar..


TANNNN......

VIDEOUS ke haathon me ek baar phirse thi uski DARK ITERNAL CANE jisse takrakar meri SWORD me hui tez kampan aur woh rook gayi..

aur ye dekh mere saath mujhse thoda door khade mere sabhi saathi bhi hairan hue...

wahin unse ulat VIDEOUS ke sabhi saathi jo unpar hue WHITE ENERGY ke humle se ab bhi effected the aur dheere dheere khudko theek kar rahe the,woh sab khush...

WOH DARK ITERNAL CANE bohot shaktishaali thi,ye feel kar liya tha maine par itni shaktishali ki meri SWORD ki dhaar ko bhi araam se bina kisi cut ke jhel jaaye,ye wakayi astonishing baat thi..

mere chehre par uthe bhaavon ko badi asaani se padh liya VIDEOUS ne aur...


VIDEOUS-hahaha...kabhi socha hai tune,tere is SWORD ko laakhon saalon tak apne seene ke aar paar ghusakar rakhne ka maksad kya sirf ZEAL ke VIKRAM ko,LORD OF ANGELS, CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ke ansh ko chhal dwara khtam karna hi tha..!!!

mujhe maalum tha ki der sawer mere pratidwandi ko koi na koi tarike se,chhal dwara meri nazaron se bachakar dono LORDS is SWORD ko usse sahi salamat soump hi denge..

is SWORD ki taakat jaanta tha mai... mehsoos kiya hai maine iski apaar shakti ko laakhon saalon tak..

ab is SWORD ki replica toh nahi bana sakta tha mai par iski pysical strength ko wield karte hue iske waaron ko jhel sake,aise hathiyar, shashtra ka nirman toh kar hi sakta tha jo maine kiya..


us DARK ITERNAL CANE ko swing karte hue kahi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jiske baad...


VIDEOUS-mai toh teri SWORD ki taakat se waakif hun,par tu meri is DARK ITERNAL CANE ki shakti se aparichit hai..

chal, mehsoos karata hun tujhe mai iski shakti..

TANNNNN.....

apni baat bol badi tezi se ghumaya VIDEOUS ne us cane ko jispar apni SWORD aage ki maine aur mere aisa karte hi CANE aur SWORD aapas me takra gaye jispar VIDEOUS toh apni jagah par hi khada raha par CANE aur SWORD ke takrane se create hue impact se mere pair kuch steps piche chale gaye the.

aur ye dekh smile di VIDEOUS ne aur agle hi pal...


SOOBHHHH...CHHHATTTT.....SOOBHHHH..CHATTTTT......

VIDEOUS ki body meri taraf itni tezi se move hui ki ek ILLUSIONISTIC DEFLECTING SHADOW create karte hue VIDEOUS kab mere paas pahunch gaya,ye dekh bhi nahi paaya mai..

aisa laga jaise waqt ko rokte hue mere paas pahucha ho VIDEOUS aur jab tak mai usi moujudgi samajh bhi paata,uski woh CANE chal chuki thi meri body par..

pehle double cross aur phir alag alag zigzag pattern banate hue kayi baar apni cane chalayi usne meri body par aur uske waisa karte hi bohot se gehre cuts meri body par chhap se chuke the..

jabde bheenche sharir par uthe pain ko bina awaaz nikale jhelte hue aage ki taraf mooh ke bal gira mai...

ye scene MAHI mere dost aur meri behen dekh rahe the..

jahan aage jo hone waala hai,usse jaan MAHI bas ek sakth face ke saath ektak mujhe dekhti khadi thi wahin mere doston ki aankhon ne mere liye pain saaf dikh raha tha aur ALFREEN,mere sharir se riste khoon ko dekh uski aankhein bheeg chuki thi but phir bhi naa woh apni jagah se hili thi,naahi MAHI aur naahi mere dost..


REASON....

FARK NAHI PADTA KI VIDEOUS KE KITNE WAAR MERE SHARIR KO CHALNI KAR RAHE HON,KOI BHI MERE AUR USKE BEECH NAHI AAYEGA..

JISKO JO KAAM SOUMPA GAYA HAI,WOH USSI PAR FOCUSED RAHEGA...

mere ye lines is waqt un sabke dimag me gunj rahe the aur isiliye un sabke pair jaise apni apni jagah par bandh se gaye the..

wahin jaise hi mai aage ki taraf hote hue neeche gira toh VIDEOUS bhi araam se chalta hua mere saamne aakar khada hua.

apni CANE ko mere gale me rakh face ko upar kiya usne aur..


VIDEOUS-tututututu....kya RAAZ...!!!!itni jaldi dhul chaatne lag gaya tu...

khair,ye toh hona hi tha...tujhme taakat hai par mai toh khud hi taakat hun..

mere saamne khada rehna shobha bhi nahi deta tujhe...

aur naahi tere saathiyon ka mere logon ke aage...


VIDEOUS ki ye baat puri hui hi thi ki tabhi...

SOOBHHHH....

ek ek behadh shaktishali ONRUSH RAY jisse ki body VAGUE STATE me chali jaati hai, attack kiya VIDEOUS ke pramukh logon ne mere sabhi saathiyon par..

VIRAAZ ki ONRUSH RAY meri behen aur WOOGER jinki aankhein is waqt meri taraf thi,badh chuki thi..

HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ki ray MAHI ki taraf aur VALDIS, DORAIN, GASTON, UBEL aur TRISTEN ki ONRUSH RAYS ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MABEL ki taraf..

ye sab meri taraf hi dekh rahe the aur issi distraction ka faayda uthathe hue ye attack kiya tha VIDEOUS ke sabhi logon ne par tabhi....

isse pehle ki woh ONRUSH ray meri behen,WOOGER aur mere baaki doston ko touch bhi karte...

woh sab gayab ho chuke the..aur kyunki mere sabhi saathiyon ki nazar meri taraf thi,isiliye un sabki is sudden move ke baare me VIDEOUS ke logon ne socha bhi nahi tha aur isiliye naa sirf unki ONRUSH RAYS nirarthak saabit hui balki unka casual hona un sabpar bhaari bhi pad gaya...

ALFREEN gayab hote hue theek VIRAAZ ke piche pahunchi aur aisa kar usne VIRAAZ ko ek forward push kiya..

aisa hote hi VIRAAZ aage ki taraf ladhkhadate hue badha par jab tak woh sambhal paata, WOOGER uske saamne prakat ho chuka tha jiske baad limitless speed ke saath usne apna panja VIRAAZ ki chest par chala diya..

WOOGER ke bade bade naakhuno me meri ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ki urja doud rahi thi jiske VIRAAZ ke body ko touch karte hi VIRAAZ ki puri body sunn padh gayi aur woh kate pedh ki tarah neeche gir gaya..

wahin dusri taraf MAHI jiski nazar bhi meri taraf hi thi,par dhyan pura HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER par tha,jaise hi usne apni taraf badh rahe un ONRUSH RAYS ko feel kiya,gayab hote hue woh theek un teeno ke saamne prakat hui..

MAHI ko yun achanak apne saamne dekh woh sab hadbadaye aur us hadbadahat ko dard me badalne ke liye MAHI ne haath aage kiye aur...


SWAHA SHAKTIYEM BUDIJOTIHA

ADJOIN WITH MY POWERS...


apne dono haathon ko jod unhe halka shrug karte hue uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne aur uske waisa karte hi HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ke ek ek shoulder par MAHI ki LIFE KEEPER urja create hui jiske agle hi pal un teeno ko apne shoulders par ek magnetic AURA feel hua aur aisa hote hi..

AHHHHH...

woh teeno ek dusre se apne shoulder ke through chipak chuke the...

aur MAHI ki WORLD TREE waali power ki wajah se jo un teeno ke liye painful thi,un teeno ko apne shoulders ke through puri body me ek tez pain gush feel hua aur unke mooh se ek cheekh nikal gayi..

ye pain un teeno ke brain cells ko bhi dull kar chuka tha jiski wajah se woh sab sirf half conscious state me jaa chuke the...

aur bache VALDIS, DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL aur TRISTEN toh jaise hi unke chhode ONRUSH RAYS mere baaki paanchon saathiyon ke paas pahunche aur woh sab gayab hue toh theek ussi pal wahan prakat hue GRIFFIN aur ANZU jinhone badi tezi ae apne apne wings ko lehraya..

unke waisa karte hi un ONRUSH RAYS ki forward movement naa sirf rook gayi balki woh rays wapas moodte hue double tezi aur saath hi saath tripple shakti ikhtiyar kar sidhe jaakar VALDIS aur uske saathiyon ko hi hit ho gaye..

aisa hote hi woh paanchon piche udte hue gire par girte hi woh sab wapas khade bhi ho gaye the lekin tabhi..

ACCHUTA aur uske chaaron saathi ek baar phirse unke saamne prakat ho chuke the aur is waqt ACCHUTA ke haathon me uski GOD GIFTED BOW and ARROW chamak rahi thi jiske baad..


ACCHUTA-DORAIN,GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN...good bye...

SOOBHHHH...

apni baat bol ACCHUTA ne apne dhanush ka pratyancha kaan tak kheench chhod diya..

WHITE FIRE se chamakta hua woh ARROW aage badh chuka tha aur aadhe raaste tak pahunch woh sab kul 4 ARROWS me divide ho chuke the..

waise toh ACCHUTA ki ARROW me pehle se hi bohot zyada vidhwanshak shakti thi par us shakti ko aur ghaaatak banaya uske chaaron saathiyon ne..

BRAWNY ne apne external pyscical force ki shakti us ARROW me mila di thi.

SLUNDER ki SHIELD power ke asar ko ulta kar diya tha usne jiski wajah se ab koi bhi SHIELD us ARROW ka rasta nahi rok sakti thi..

HIDA ke paas thi uski healing ability jisse woh reverse bhi kar sakti thi aur usne kar bhi diya tha...

us SWORD me usne REVERSE HEALING WAVE jod diya jiski wajah se ab us ARROW se mila koi bhi wound death LESION me convert ho jaane waala tha..

aur bachi MABEL..usne toh BOW ki shakti ko 10 times AMPLIFY kar diya tha...

saath hi saath itne saare GOD GIFTED powers ke judne ki wajah se ARROW ki gati itni zyada tez ho chuki thi ki DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN aur VALDIS bhi usse dekh tak nahi paa rahe the..

ye saara kuch chand palon me hi ho chuka tha..

HEMINE, AROZ, TIFER aur VIRAAZ ke maamle me toh kuch nahi kar paaya VIDEOUS yaa phir ye kahun ki usne try hi nahi kiya kyunki un par sirf normal hits hue the but abki baar jo hit uske khaad logon par hua tha,woh jaanleva tha aur isiliye ARROW ko jisse uski taraf se sirf wohi dekh paa raha tha,rokne ke liye haath aage kiya usne aur ek HOIST gush ray release kiya par tabhi...

ek haath aur utha tha VIDEOUS ke haath ke saath joki mera tha aur mere aisa karte hi mere haath se bhi ek LANCINATE GUSH RAY nikal VIDEOUS ke ray ke saath hi aage badha aur jis waqt VIDEOUS ki ray ARROWS ko hit hui aur aisa hote hi uski movement rookne ko hui toh theek ussi pal meri ray bhi us ARROWS ko hit ho gayi jiske baad uski theherti movement ko ek dhakka sa laga aur wapas speed pakadte woh chaaron ARROWS DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL aur TRISTEN ke chest ko bhedh chuke the..

awaaz bhi naa nikal paayi un chaaron ki aur woh neeche gir chuke the...

haan, VIDEOUS ke rays ki wajah se naa sirf ARROWS ki movement kuch micro seconds ke liye kam hue the balki unme ghum rahi mere paanchon doston ki shakti bhi kam hone lagi thi..

yahi wajah thi ki ARROWS hit ke baad bhi DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL aur TRISTEN ab bhi zinda the but unki ye zindagi mout se badtar thi..

REASON...

mere ray me bhi sirf ek forward movement ki shakti nahi thi balki ek poisoned gush bhi tha joki ab un chaaron ke brains me sama chuka tha..

aur isiliye filhal woh chaaron pahunch chuke the THE PERSISTENT VEGETATIVE STATE me..

wahi state jisme kabhi DORIAN aur GASTON ne ACCHUTA,SLUNDER aur un dono ke MOM DAD ko pahunchaya tha..

aaj un dono ko unke dono saathiyon ke saath apne hi medicine ka taste mil chuka tha...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko bhi un chaaron ki condition ka pata chal chuka tha aur isiliye is waqt un dono ki aankhon me mere liye thanks ke bhaav the..

aur smile karte hue hi ACCHUTA ki nazar wapas VALDIS ki taraf gayi jo aankhon me halka dar liye apne neeche gire pade chaaron saathiyon ko dekh raha tha jispar...


ACCHUTA-ye mat sochna ki bach gaya tu...tune meri jaan par galat nigaah daali hai..

beta teri toh woh haalat karunga mai ki mout bhi tujhe lene se pehle teri haalat dekh tujhpar mutegi....


ACCHUTA ki baat par VALDIS ne toh dara hua hi raha but do aankhein aisi thi jinme chingaari dikh rahi thi..

ye aankhein thi VIDEOUS ki jo ACCHUTA ki baat sun usse khatm karne ke iraade se DEATH SPELL bolne hi waala tha ki tabhi...


SOOOBHHHH...

meri body tezi se aage badhi aur agle hi pal mai VIDEOUS ke saamne tha..

mujhe apne saamne dekh VIDEOUS kuch bolne ki hua par tabhi...


MAI-nanananana... apne kote ki bakwas kar chuka tu...ab meri baari...

ye sach hai ki buddhi bohot hai tujhme...par dimag ka stock mera bhi hamesha full hi hota hai...

aur jab mere dimag ke ghode doudte hain toh bina race jeete woh rookte nahi...

aur rahi baat taakat ki toh yaad hai kuch der pehle kuch kaha tha maine..

mera 1 tere dus ke barabar hoga..but eventually,tune ab tak 12 waar kar diye hain mujhpar...

matlab soodh ke saath byaaj bhi loutana hai mujhe tera...

shuruat byaj se karte hain...


SOOBHHHH..TANNNN.KRRRR....

apni baat bolte hue apni SWORD ke POMMEL ko pakad tezi se usse slash kiya maine usse VIDEOUS par.

lekin VIDEOUS jo pehle se hi satark tha, mere SWORD slash karte hi usne turant usse block karne ke liye apni DARK ITERNAL CANE apne saamne kar di jisse takrate hue TANN ki awaaz ke saath SWORD rook gayi..

SWORD slash ke rookte hi ek halki si smile taiyar hone lagi thi VIDEOUS ke face par lekin woh muskaan puri ban hi nahi paayi..

REASON...

jaise hi meri SWORD aur VIDEOUS ki DARK ITERNAL CANE aapas me takraye toh aisa hote hi meri SWORD ki blade me halka sa vibration hua aur us slightest of the vibration me itni taakat thi ki usne VIDEOUS ki DARK ITERNAL CANE ko makkhan ki tarah beech se kaat diya...

KRRR ki awaaz ke saath woh DARK ITERNAL CANE beech se kaththe hue toot chuka tha...

aankhon me hairani ke samandar ko laate hue VIDEOUS ne apne us damaged DARK ITERNAL ko dekha aur phir mujhe aur jaise hi uski aankhein mujhpar tiki toh...


MAI-ye tha BYAAJ....waise kya bola tha tune,tu is SWORD ki shakti ko jaanta hai...

VIDEOUS, VIDEOUS, VIDEOUS...ye kisi aag ki bhatti me tapi hui aur insaan ,ya phir kisi ANGEL ke haathon bani SWORD nahi hai...

iski taakat ka andaza tu laga hi nahi sakta..tune iski utni hi taakat mehsoos ki,jitni ye tujhe mehsoos karana chahati thi...

anyways,as i said,BYAAJ ho gaya,ab baari hai SOODH ki...

ye bolte hue hi mera left haath mutthi ki shakl liye VIDEOUS ki taraf badha aur aisa hote hi VIDEOUS ki hairangi thodi aur badh gayi..

REASON..

mere haath ki movement lagbhagh utni hi tez thi jitni thodi der pehle VIDEOUS ki mujhpar ki gayi attacks ke waqt thi..

it was like waqt rook sa gaya hai aur us paused samay me hi mera haath VIDEOUS ke peth ke paas pahunch chuka tha..

but VIDEOUS bhi toh tha hi super sharp aur utni hi sharp thi uski nazarein...

yahi wajah thi ki barely hi sahi,usne mere left haath ko uske peth ke paas mehsoos kar hi liya aur aisa hote hi usne ye bhi calculation kar liya tha ki woh mere left fist ke daayre se apni body hata nahi paayega.

he has to block it...

aur isiliye apni lightning se bhi hazar guna zyada speed ka parichay dete hue usne apne left hand ko modte hue block ki shakal di aur mere fist ke uske peth ko hit karne ne just pehle hi usne mere fist ko apne moode hue hatheliyon se pakad liya par tabhi...

ek hi pal me teen cheezen hui...

pehli...

mere fist ki overwhelming power ko feel kiya VIDEOUS ke haathon ne..

mere fist ko bhale hi VIDEOUS block karne me kaamiyab ho gaya tha but mere us punch me itni zyada taakat thi ki uska woh haath jisne mere left fist ko roka tha,woh jaakar uske peth par padi jiske baad VIDEOUS thoda piche sarak gaya..

dusri...

aisa hone ke kaaran VIDEOUS ko apna dusra haath bhi use me laana pada aur usne apne right hand se mere left hand ko hold karna pada jiski strength ab bhi itni zyada thi ki usse ho rahi kampan se VIDEOUS ka left haath jhanjhana gaya tha..

aur lastly jaise hi VIDEOUS ke dono haath mere left haath par kaam me lage,theek ussi pal mere right hand me hold kiya hua SWORD badla ek puncher ke roop me aur aisa hote hi..

left hand se bhi tez ghuma mera right hand jisse jab tak VIDEOUS samajh bhi paata..

BHAAKKKKKK...

ek aisa punch uske face par lag chuka tha jiske hit karte hi VIDEOUS kareeb 50 metre piche udta hua jaakar gira..

honth side se fath gaye the uske aur most importantly,hit ke impact ki wajah se sir pura bhanna gaya tha..

yahi reason tha ki ek second,sirf ek second ka open window mila hum sabko jisme socha hua sab kuch implement karna tha hume kyunki ab mera...



waqt pura ho chuka tha is zindagi ke MAHAL ME....

apne saath apne mrityu ke kaaran ko bhi dubana tha ussike banaye DALDAL ME....

yudh ka ek ehem mod aa chuka tha ab....

khudko aur VIDEOUS ko khatm karne ka intazam karna tha mujhe,mile hue is ek PAL ME....




















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





















AAPKA APNA V....J.....
Gazab bhai, padhte jao padhte jao par maan hai ki barta nahi.awesome great update VJbhai
 

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Assalamwalakium bhai Asha karta hoon ki aap aur apke pariwar kushal hai aur rahi baat kahani ki bolun toh agar tareef karun shabdon mey toh kam hojayenge agar tareef karoon bhawnaon mey toh zindagi kam hojayengi agar kuch aur karke dikhaaon toh waqt nikal jayega lekin tareef kam hojayegi. KHUDA ney apko ek aisi taakath ya Yun kahun toh ek NEKI di hai brammand nikal jayega lekin Teri soch kabi nahi jayegi ek aisi niyamth hai tere zehan key andar aur mai sochne key liye baite gaya lekin shabd aur soch dono kam padgaye ki kya likhoon apki tareef mey bas dua karta hoon ki aap kush rahe swasth rahe aur kya bolun mere dost jaise kahani mey kaha gaya ki RAAZ ka dimag VIDEOUS kya CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT bhi thik nhi paye toh socho usko kirdaar ko banane wale ko kya kahoon woh toh brammand ka ROOP KARTA key baad hoga.
 

Rahul

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hum khus hue kyunki raaz jinda hai warna hum bhi alfreen se shamat hote ki jab raaz hi nai to usko koi khusi nai chahiye aur wo sahi bol rahi thi ek aadmi jiski puri family mar jaye wo kiske liye jinda rahega jish bhai ke liye wo bachpan se tarsi ma baap ki maut ke baad mila uska wo akhiri sahara bhi usse cheen len to usko to marna hi tha fir mahi bhi kaise jinda rahti ishiliye raaz bapach aa gaya wo bahut achcha hua
 
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