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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Bhai hila dala...

ALFREEN-RAAZ ne kaha tha, itna kaafi hai..kyunki,

jahan logon ki gambhir dhamkiyan bhi kori BAKWAAS HOTI HAI...

wahin mere bhai ki kahi mamuli baat bhi bohot KHAAS HOTI HAI...



MAI-dar....



tere chehre ke ya dar RAAZ-E-KEHER ki NISHAANI hai...

gala tar karle,mujhe dekh sukh chuka tere sharir ka PAANI HAI...

yahi soch raha hai naa ki kyun maar raha hun sabko!!!

meri marzi,jo chaahe karun,aakhir ye meri KAHANI HAI...

Awesome bro
thanks for appreciating brother...saath bane rahiye
 

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behatrin update bro
to showhi ne apne mom - dad ki energy ko valdis se drain out kr liya
ab raaz k baki dost uska aasani se mukabla kr ske
whi AL bhi free ho gyi
or free hote ke sath hi uska apne bhai k liye dialog superb tha
raaz bhi apna beraham roop dikha rha h glako m
ek asli devil se unki mulakat krwa rha h
beraham logo ko jis berahmi se usne mara
usne to un kpti dil wale logo k mn m bhi khof baitha diya
emperor ko bhi apni maut nzr aane lgi
awsome as always bro
thanks for the review brother.. yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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Raaz had a great idea, two actions were done at once, Alfareen was also released from the cage and Valdis's white power was also stripped from him, now he has only black powers, which means That we won't have much trouble defeating him.
On the other hand, ever since Raaz has arrived on the planet Alium, everyone is surprised to see his power show and after killing Glekon in front of everyone there is hardly a fool who will fight him and Raaz made that place a marsh of death, wow, there was a wonderful scene. Well, the king also made a mistake by challenging Raaz because there is no question of competition here, all people are like ant in front of him, which is a minor thing to fuck them up, It was fun after watching the fight scene as I thought the planet Allum wasted.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...
🖤🖤🖤
thanks for the review and appreciation brother...be along
 

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Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Marvelous & Fabulous & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah raaz ne to kehar la diya sb k upr aankho k sath na jane kya kya fatt gyi hogi hahahaha

Wah showhi ko b fight m la diya aate 6 de diya yr


tere chehre ke ya dar RAAZ-E-KEHER ki NISHAANI hai...

gala tar karle,mujhe dekh sukh chuka tere sharir ka PAANI HAI...

yahi soch raha hai naa ki kyun maar raha hun sabko!!!

meri marzi,jo chaahe karun,aakhir ye meri KAHANI HAI...


Last line k liye kya kahu hr bar ki tarh lekin kbi kbi to super se upr hoti h jese aaj thi



Waiting
thanks for appreciating brother...saath bane rahiye
 

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Adbhut shaandaar update bhai ji aur alfreen bhi aajaad ho gayi..mahi filhaal gayab hai abhi..ladai jabardast rahi maja aa gawa
Superb update bhai...
Killing update
Awesome Update
Mast shaandar update
LAJAWAAB UPDATE VJ BHAI
ACTION SE BHARPUR UPDATE THA
Tariff karne ke liye mere pass shabd nahi hai
The divilish update

Ekdum kadak
Ni

Nice updates bro
Sat sat naman mitr



Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai
Gajab........ ........
mindblowing superb update bhai
waiting for next
Awesome Marvelous update Bhai
Bohat he shandaar update bro
Finally devil 😈 daddy's work ko karny ma laga huwa hy
And
Alfreen azad ho gai am sure next update ma Showhi ka truth samny at ga
Mast update bhai
You are the best
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Fantastic update bhai
Absolutely Fabulous update
Super update hai Bhai
Dhamakedar update hai bhai maza aa gaya
Zabardast update
Wow bhai kamal ka update tha aur yeh line aur bhi kamal ki thi


Waiting for new update bhai
KYA BAAT HE VJ BHAI APKI PANCH LINE BHI UPDATE KI TARHA DHAMAKA KARTI HE........... .....
JABARDAST UPDATE BOSS...
Awesome update bro
Faad ke rakh di hai sabki... Maazaa aa gaya.... Ise kahte hai devil... Agar yaha par videous rahta to sayad... Wo bhi yahi kar raha hota... Apni satta jamane ke liye..... Maat aahe
Bahut hi shandaar update hai bhai maza aa gaya
Tujhy itna marun ga to seh nai pay ga
Tujhy itna dard dun ga tu ro nai pay ga
Dar mujh sy tery samny tera kaal hai
Videous tery samny raaz ik kaal hai...
Suoer magical outstanding ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Bahot khoob superb fantastic
Excellent update mitr
Zabardast awesome very good very nice update
Bahut acche bhai........

keep it up...
thanks brothers...be along..
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SHOWHI VALDIS KI WHITE ENERGY SOKH USSE KHUD ME SAMA LETA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ BRAWL OF LEGACY KE BAAKI PAANCHON WARRIORS KO KHATM KAR DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-164



PLANET-GOLETH


PLACE-THE DARK DIFFUSION







HAAN,WOH TOH HAI..BUT AB ISKA KYA KAREN..??


RAAZ ke baare me jo ALFREEN ne kaha,uspar sehmati jatayi HIDA ne jiske baad VALDIS ko dekh sawal pucha usne jispar...


MABEL-karna kya hai,saanp hai ye,kuchal dena hi sahi hoga...

VALDIS-haan, saanp hun mai,par mujhe kuchal dene ka dum tum sabme nahi hai..


MABEL ki baat par koi kuch kehta,usse pehle hi VALDIS ne ek jhatke apni jagah par khade hote hue apni baat kahi..

ENERGY restore ho chuki thi uski,par WHITE ENERGY ka aakhri kan bhi jaa chuka tha uski body se...

iska ehsas ho chuka tha VALDIS ko aur isiliye apni dehekti aankhon se SHOWHI ko dekh raha tha VALDIS...

aur isse pehle ki koi uski baat par kuch kehta...


SAMPURN SHAKTIYEM JAAGRATAM


khudke andar beh rahi BLACK ENERGY ko feel karte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya VALDIS ne jiske baad..


DDHHPPPPPP..

uski puri body kaali shakti ki urja se naha si uthi..

us urja ki shakti ko ALFREEN aur baaki sab bhi mehsoos kar rahe the...

bina WHITE ENERGY ke bhi VALDIS kitna strong tha,ye jaan chuke the woh sab..

aur isiliye VALDIS se nipatne ke liye ALFREEN thoda aage badhne ko hui par tabhi...


ACCHUTA-ALFREEN...isse mai ladhunga...


ALFREEN ke side me aate hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar woh kuch kehti,usse pehle...


ACCHUTA-bharosa rakho..is pure safar me bas baisakhi ke sahare hi chale hain hum..

par ab bas...ab pair kamzor nahi rahe mere aur agar phir bhi kahin ladhkhada jaaun,toh khudke dum par sambhalna chahta hun mai...


aankhon me determination ki aag liye kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jiske baad ALFREEN ek kadam piche hath gayi...

wahin is dauran VALDIS ne bhi apne puri kaali urja shakti ke roop me samet li thi...

aise me is ACCHUTA ki baat sun muskuraya VALDIS aur...


VALDIS-mout teri bohot taklif deh banane waala hun mai...

ACCHUTA-chalo,kisi baat par toh ek dusre ke liye hamare khayal milte hain...


KADKADKAD......


apni baat bol bilkul VALDIS ki hi tarah apne dono haath faila diye ACCHUTA ne aur uske aisa karte hi uski GOD GIFTED POWERS se bani BOW aur ARROW ki urja uske AMPLIFICATION modes ki shaktiyon ke saath merge hote hue uske pure sharir me circulate karne lagi...

sirf aantarik bhaagon me hi nahi,balki us urja ki chamak aur taakat ACCHUTA ke bahari sharir ke har ang me chamakte hue dikhne lagi thi jisse dekh jahan ek taraf ALFREEN bhi usse kaafi impress ho gayi thi wahin dusri taraf VALDIS ki aankhein hairat se badi ho chuki thi..

ACCHUTA ne jab kuch der pehle BOW aur ARROW prakat kiya tha,tab uski taakat mehsoos ki thi VALDIS ne par is baar AMPLIFICATION modes ke saath merge hone ke kaaran ye urja aur uski taakat kayi guna badh chuke the...

aur is badhi hui taakat ko saaf mehsoos kar paa raha tha VALDIS...

kuch seconds pehle tak uska woh dikh raha confidence bhi ACCHUTA ke body se generate ho rahi shakti ko feel kar damadol hone laga tha..

khair,jab ACCHUTA ko apni AMPLIFICATION aur GOD GIFTED POWERS ki merged shakti se bani depth ache se feel hone lagi toh chamakti aankhon se dekha usne VALDIS ko aur...


ACCHUTA-tujhe MABEL ke liye galat bolna roh door,galat sochna bhi nahi chahiye tha...


BOOMMMM....

SLUNDER-woooo..good shot buddy...


apni baat kehne ke dauran hi ACCHUTA ne apne dono haathon ko ek saath aage karte hue ek clap sa kiya..

ye ek rub-of power amplifier tarika tha energy release karne ka jiska asar wakayi kamal ka hua..

ACCHUTA ke clap karte hi uske dono hatheliyon ke beech se ek shock wave sa nikla jo bijli si tezi ikhtiyar karta hua VALDIS ki taraf badh gaya..

waise VALDIS kisi bhi attack ke liye taiyar hi tha aur isiliye ACCHUTA ki shock waves ko mehsoos kar usse block karne ke liye usne apne haath aage ki taraf lehraye aur uske waisa karte hi uske saamne ek strong dark barrier ban gaya aur theek tabhi ACCHUTA ka released shock wave us dark barrier se takraya aur jaise hi ye contact hua,ek tez dhamaka hua jiske asar se naa sirf VALDIS ka barrier kisi taash ke mehel ki tarah deh gaya balki saath hi saath ACCHUTA ke shock wave ne VALDIS ko bhi apne chapet me le liye..

barrier break karte hue usne VALDIS ko bhi hit kar diya jiske baad ek jhatka khaate hue VALDIS kayi feet tak udta hua peeche ki taraf jaakar gira...

aur yahi dekh SLUNDER ne taarif ki thi ACCHUTA ki...

khair,barrier ki wajah se bas jaan hi bach paayi thi VALDIS ki baaki haalat kaafi kharab ho chuki thi uski..

shock wave me nihit ACCHUTA ki merged AMPLIFICATION aur GOD GIFTED power ke lagne ki wajah se sharir ke kaafi parts fath gaye the VALDIS ke aur un saare parts se khoon ris raha tha....

par ye sirf external damage tha..main damage uske VALDIS ke internal parts me aaya tha..

AMPLIFICATION mode ko shakti hone ki wajah se ACCHUTA ki shock wave me chuppi rays sidhe VALDIS ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me sama chuki thi..

aisa hone ke kaaran VALDIS ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes jinme kaali shaktiyon ka waas tha,woh unstable aur restless hote hue ACCHUTA ki rays ko consume karne ki koshish kar rahe the and in the process,woh khudko aur apne saath VALDIS ko bhi unbearable pain pahuncha rahe the..

honth bhi kaafi fath gaye the uske jinme kinaro se is waqt uske body ke andar ho rahe pain aur push ki wajah se khoon nikalne laga tha..

body puri kaampti hui apni bigdi halaat bayan kar rahi thi..

aur in sabke beech uske theek saamne khada tha ACCHUTA jisse VALDIS ki bigdi haalat dekhkar koi daya nahi aayi thi..

infact,abhi bhi uske dimag me VALDIS ki MABEL ke liye gandi niyat hi ghum rahi thi aur yahi wajah thi ki aankhon me dikh rahi chingari ko barkarar rakhte hue is waqt ACCHUTA ke haathon me ek complete dissaray beam ki light chamakne lagi thi...

is beam ke hit karte hi VALDIS ki body completely fath jaani thi aur yahi ACCHUTA ka irada bhi tha..

kuch der us beam ko apne haaton me circulate karte hue uski shakti ko mehsoos karta raha ACCHUTA aur phir..

ek jhatke me apne haathon ko neeche gire pade VALDIS ki taraf kar diya usne aur uske waisa karte hi uski haathon ki beam tezi se VALDIS ki taraf badh gayi...

ek taraf thi woh beam jiski gati light se bhi zyada tez thi aur uske nishane me tha VALDIS jo abhi aisi haalat me pada tha ki kachhua bhi usse agar race lagaye toh jeet jaaye..


SWWWWSSSS.....


woh BEAM sidhe VALDIS ke chest ko penetrate karne hi waali thi ki tabhi woh achanak se VALDIS ki chest ke bas ek inch paas pahunch rook gayi..

aur ye dekh ACCHUTA aur uske sabhi saathi hairan ho gaye..par agle hi pal unki hairani aur saath hi saath dard bhi thoda aur badh gaya reason..


BOOMMMM.


ek jhatke me hi us beam ne u turn le liya aur double speed ke saath khudko kuch rays me divide karti hui ACCHUTA aur uske sabhi saathiyon ko jaakar hit ho gayi..

aisa hote hi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL aur SHOWHI neeche gir gaye wahin ALFREEN ke kadam bhi piche ki taraf dagmagaye par usne khudko girne nahi diya..

khair,girne ke agle hi pal woh sab wapas khade ho chuke the aur isse pehle ki woh abhi hue humle ki jadh talashte,woh 3 jadh un sabke saamne khudhi prakat ho chuke the...


HEMINE...AROZ...TIFER..


prakat hokar kuch der wahan moujud sabhi ko ghurte rahe woh teeno jiske baad...


HEMINE-ab tak saans le rahe ho,kya hamari itni udaarta kaafi nahi hai tum logon ke liye...!!!!

ALFREEN-kadh zaroor badh gaya hai tera par mat bhool ki abhi abhi paida hui hai tu...

aur daiper pehenane ki umr me apne badon ko unki chaadar ke size naapne ka gyan nahi diya karte...

HEMINE-ALFREEN... apne bhai ki hi tarah moohfath par kamzor ho tum....

sirf zubaan chalana hi aata hai,par koi baat nahi,aaj dhadkan ke saath saath zubaan bhi band ho jaayegi tumhari...


ALFREEN jaanti thi ki HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER kya cheez hain..

un teeno ki taakat asal me VIDEOUS ki taakat se bani hai jisse jeetna aur woh bhi tab jab woh teeno saath ho,uske aur uske saathiyon ke liye filhal naamumkin hai,par apne bhai ki hi tarah challenge se back out karna aata nahi tha usse aur isiliye khudko hone waale battle ke liye taiyar kar chuki thi woh..

wahin apni baat keh HEMINE ne ek sharp look diya ALFREEN ko jiske baad uske sharir se ussiki shakti se bana ek bada sa DARK JAVELIN numa astr nikal ALFREEN ki taraf badh gaya....


SNSNSNNN..


ye awaaz us vibration ki thi jo us DARK JAVELIN se nikal rahi thi..

ye koi mamuli vibrations nahi the..is vibration se lagatar release ho rahi shakti ki pravah itni zyada thi ki woh DARK DIFFUSION ki jagah jahan woh sab moujud the,woh bhi halki halki shake karne lag gayi thi..

darasal HEMINE ek jhatke me hi ALFREEN ko khatm karna chahti thi aur isiliye usne apne hi body ki taakat se bane astra se humla kiya tha...

wahin ALFREEN bhi us javelin se nikal rahi immense taakat ko feel kar chuki thi aur usse bachne ke liye khudko taiyar kar rahi thi but woh jaanti thi ki ye mushkil hone waala hai..

khair,apne haath aage kar us javelin ki speed aur asar ko kam karne ke liye apni AGATHOKAK powers ko circulate karne lag gayi thi ALFREEN.

uske aisa karte hi ek GREY ray uske haath me chamakne lagi thi..

ab tak woh energy se bhara JAVELIN ALFREEN ke kareeb pahunch chuka tha aur usse takrane hi wala tha ki tabhi...


SOOBBBBHHHHHH...


us JAVELIN ke ird gird ek aisi tez hawa chali jisse uski ab tak ki bani hui bhayankar speed naa ke barabar ho gayi...

is drastic turn of event ko dekh HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ke face par halka sa shock dikhne hi lage the ki us hairani ko aur badhate hue....

woh hawa ka tez jhonka dheere dheere shaant hone laga aur aisa hote waqt us hawa me ek aakruti banane lagi jisne us JAVELIN ko hold kar liya aur aisa karte hi woh aakruti apne asal human form me ALFREEN ke theek saamne khadi thi jisse dekh..


ACCHUTA/ SLUNDER/ BRAWNY/ HIDA/ MABEL/ SHOWHI/ALFREEN-

.......MAHI......


khush hote hue apne saamne khadi ladki joki un sabki dost aur is kahani ki mukhya naayika MAHI thi,uska naam liya un sabne jispar ek baar palat un sabko dekh muskurate hue wapas saame sir kar HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ko dekha MAHI ne aur..


MAHI-missed me...

SOOBBBHHHH...

woh JAVELIN jisme ab bhi HEMINE ki released shakti ke kaaran kampan ho rahi thi,uspar apni ungliyon ki giraft thodi tight ki MAHI ne aur agle hi pal tezi se us JAVELIN ko HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ki taraf fekh diya usne...

double speed liye woh JAVELIN theek HEMINE aur uske dono saathiyon ke saamne zamin par dhas gaya.

aisa hote hi us JAVELIN se release hui HEMINE aur uske saath saath MAHI ki AMPLIFICATION mode ki power joki ab HEAVENLY thi..

HEMINE aur uske dono saathiyon ko apne ird gird ki zamin par bhukamp sa feel hue jiski wajah se un teeno ke pair halke hi sahi ladkhada gaye the...

jahan un teeno ko ladhkhadata dekh MAHI muskura rahi thi wahin HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER MAHI ko apni jalti hui aankhon se dekh rahe the..

wahin in sabke beech ALFREEN jo waise toh MAHI ko dekh bohot khush hui thi,par woh khud ek baar un teeno se bhidna chahti thi aur isiliye..


ALFREEN-kya yaar MAHI..???i wanted to fight them...

MAHI-and indeed you will...is HEMINE ko tu hi sambhalegi,baaki dono ko mai dekhti hun...

ready guyzz...the real game starts now.......





PLANET-ALIUM


PLACE-THE GRAVE





TUM WAKAYI BOHOT ZYADA SHAKTISHAALI HO...



apni jagah se uth meri taraf badhte hue kahi ye baat us EMPEROR ne...

uske piche piche woh AUGMENTOR bhi chal pada tha..

khair, apni baat ko jaari rakhte hue...


EMPEROR-sadiyon se hum ALIUM waasiyon ko ye bataya jaata raha hai ki hum bramhaand me base ek aise planet me rehte hain jahan baahri planets ke logon ka aana pratibandhit hai..

aur saath hi hamara bhi is planet ke daayre se bahar jaane par rok hai..

par aaj pehli baar tumhare roop me koi bahari vykati is pratibhandhit grah ke andar hai..

issi baat se tumhari bejod shakti ka andaza lagaya jaa sakta hai...

kintu,ek sach aur bhi hai...haan,ye sach hai ki mai tumhe maar nahi sakta,maarna toh door,tumhe haani bhi nahi pahuncha sakta par haani tum bhi mujhe nahi pahuncha sakte...

apne peeche chal rahe AUGMENTOR ko dekh kahi ye baat us EMPEROR ne jisse sun ek smile naach uthi mere face par aur mai bhi chalta hua theek uske saamne jaakar khada ho gaya..

aisa kar usse chhune ke iraade se haath aage badhaya maine par mera haath uske body se bas 2 inch door aakar hi rook gaya yaa phir ye kahun ki AUGMENTOR ke banaye kawach ke kaaran rok diya gaya aur ye dekh..


EMPEROR-kaha tha maine..haani pahunchana toh door ki baat hai,tu chhu bhi nahi sakta mujhe..

MAI-you know the thing is ki confidence tab jaayaz aur sahi lagta hai jab woh apne dum par dikhaya jaaye..

bhaade me mili taakat aur suraksha naa toh apni hoti hai aur naahi permanent..

prove karun...!!!


apni baat bolte hue hi maine apne andar nihit bohot si shakti ke sources ko apne moothi me channelize karna shuru kar diya tha aur jab woh saari shaktiyan aur unse bani ray mere moothi par ikattha hui toh..


BOOMMMM.....

ek tez punch maara maine apne saamne bane invisible shield par aur mere aisa karte hi ek dhamake ke saath woh shield toot gayi..

waise toh woh EMPEROR abhi bhi apni jagah par hi khada tha par mere mookke ka jo asar hua tha,usse feel kar liya tha usne..

woh jaan gaya tha ki uski sochi hui IMPENETRABLE SHIELD toot chuki hai aur isiliye ab tak jo confidence uske face par dikh raha tha,woh ab dar me convert ho chuka tha..

hadh se zyada kaampte hue woh do kadam piche hath gaya tha aur ab gayab hokar bhaagne ke firak me tha..

wahin SHIELD ke break hote hi maine bhi apne kadam EMPEROR ki taraf badha diya the par tabhi...


MAAF KIJIYEGA YOUR HIGHNESS...PAR MUJHE AAPKE SHARIR KI ZAROORAT PADEGI...


ye shabd bole the us AUGMENTOR ne jo is waqt us EMPEROR ke just piche khada tha aur jisse sun mere badhte kadam rook chuke the..

wahin us AUGMENTOR ki baat sun woh EMPEROR kuch bolta,usse pehle hi AUGMENTOR ne uske back ko touch kar diya aur uske waisa karte hi...

AHHHHHHHH.....

ek hriday vidarak cheekh us EMPEROR ke mooh se nikal chuki thi...

REASON....

jaise hi AUGMENTOR ne uske back ko touch kiya toh uski peeth beech se tear hoti hui do hisso me bat alag hone lagi...

aisa hone par uthe asahaniya dard ki wajah se cheekha woh EMPEROR..

wahin uske back ko do hisson me alag kar ek raasta banane ke baad AUGMENTOR aage badha aur agle hi pal woh us EMPEROR ki body me tha..

aisa hote hi us EMPEROR ka joki ab AUGMENTOR me badal chuka tha,uski back puri tarah theek ho gayi jiske baad..


AUGMENTOR-yaa toh SWORD mujhe de do yaa hamesha ke liye yahan rook ALIUM ke forever EMPEROR ki padhwi sweekar karo...

MAI-to tum ho is planet ki chuppi taakat...

AUGMENTOR-jawab do RAAZ... what's it gonna be...???

MAI- option three chununga mai..i will cut your throat,end this PLANET and then leave...


apni baat kehte hue hi mai tezi se AUGMENTOR ki taraf badh chuka tha...

fraction of a second se bhi kam waqt me uske saamne khada ho chuka tha mai aur aisa hote hi uske gale ko ghumane waala tha mai par tabhi...


DHABBBBBBBB.....


us AUGMENTOR ne ek strong push kiya mere chest ko jiski wajah se mai udta hua sidhe us battle BEDROCK ke edge par jaakar gira..

wahin pehle maine jo taakat dikhayi thi aur un paanch champions ke saath bheed se bhi paanch logon ko involve kar unhe marwa diya tha,ye dekh baaki sab toh bhaag khade hue the siway ek ke.

KLERA...jo mere dar se abhi bhi wahin moujud thi...

par jahan mujhe yun girta dekh AUGMENTOR shaant hi khada raha wahin KLERA ke face par itne waqt ke baad pehli baar smile naach uthi thi...

itni der se woh aisa hi kuch toh dekhna chahti thi jo ab finally uski nazaron ke saamne tha.

khair,girte hi mai turant uthkar khada ho gaya aur mujhe khada hota dekh...


AUGMENTOR-

JADHDHAMITEH...

STATUE...


mujhe dekh apna haath lehrate hue uccharit kiya ye ancient SPELL usne aur uske waisa karte hi meri body akadte hue sthir ho gayi..

mai apne body parts hila nahi paa raha tha..

mujhe ek living breathing statue me badal woh AUGMENTOR meri taraf badha aur ye dekh...


KLERA-yes AUGMENTOR.finish him..tear him apart...


chillate hue kahi ye baat KLERA ne jispar itni der me pehli baar smile naach uthi AUGMENTOR ke face par..

ab tak woh mere saamne pahunch chuka tha jiske baad...


AUGMENTOR-give me the SWORD RAAZ...

MAI-bheek maangna chhod aur mujhme ghus khud nikal le...

AUGMENTOR-hahaha...tumhe kya lagta hai RAAZ...tumhare chuppaye secret aur usse banane ke tarike se anjaan hun mai...

jis pal tumne ALIUM me apne kadam rakha tha,tabse hi meri nazar tumpar hai..

woh bhi inside out...

HIRO BHAVATI,SIRO BHAVATI...aur in do SPELLS ke mixture se bana HISIRO BHAVATI....

issi SPELL ki madad se tumne apne SWORD ko HIDE kar sab kuch normal SHOW kiya hua hai, right...!!!!


AUGMENTOR ki baat sun mere face par jo shocking expressions aaye,unhe dekh uski muskurahat aur gehri ho gayi jiske baad..


AUGMENTOR-

tum taakatwar toh ho RAAZ par itni shakti ke saath jo buddhi honi chahiye,woh nahi hai tumme..

tumhe kya laga ki tum HISIRO BHAVATI ke spell se mujhe dhoke me rakh paaoge...

NO ONE CAN MASTER ANY SPELL THAT CAN CHEAT ME...


ye bol AUGMENTOR muda aur sidhe KLERA ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya aur...


AUGMENTOR-you want me to tear him apart,right..???

KLERA-yes...

AUGMENTOR-hmm..par uske liye tumhe ek kaam karna hoga..

KLERA-anything to make him suffer...

AUGMENTOR-very well then..from the middle,tear yourself into two parts...

KLERA-what...???


hadbadakar chownkte hue kahi ye baat KLERA ne jispar...


AUGMENTOR-karna toh nahi chahta mai par is RAAZ ne mere paas aur koi option hi nahi chhoda...

jaanti ho tumhe ab tak zinda kyun chhoda hua tha isne..???

ek SWORD hai iske paas...ek aisi SWORD jisse hamara ye beautiful planet khatm ho sakta hai...

isiliye perfect time aane tak isne us SWORD ko kahin chuppane ki sochi..

HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL se SWORD ki shakti ke asar ko chuppate hue ye waisa kar sakta tha..

jaanti ho kahan chuppaya isne us SWORD ko...???

KLERA-mere andar...


aankhon me hairat aur mere liye nafrat liye mujhe dekhte hue kahi ye baat KLERA ne jispar..


AUGMENTOR-smart girl...haan,isne us SWORD ko apni kuch ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ki barrier ke extra protection ke saath tumhare andar chuppa diya taaki jab woh waqt aaye jab is planet ki main shakti joki mai hun,iske andar samaye toh theek ussi waqt tumhe maarkar us SWORD ko tumhe cheer kar nikaal ye ALIUM ko khtam kar sake...

KLERA-but why me...???mai hi kyun...???

AUGMENTOR-is dharti par kadam rakhte hi tumhara hunar jo dekh liya tha isne...

tum ek POWER SUCKER ho..aur aise vyakti me apni chizen chuppana baakiyon ke mukable zyada asaan aur kaargar hota hai...

smart move but not smart enough for me...

so the thing is ki tumhara marna toh ussi waqt nishchit ho chuka tha jab tum iske radar me aayi thi...

toh aise me apne PLANET ko bachane ke liye marna apne dushman ke liye marne se toh zyada hi accha hai naa...

KLERA-please,i beg you.. leave me.. koi toh aur raasta hoga mujhse us SWORD ko nikalne ka...!!!

AUGMENTOR-common KLERA..woh koi maamuli SWORD nahi hai..

agar hota toh kya mai tumhe kurbaan hone deta...

KLERA-but phir bhi..
AHHHHHHHH...


aage KLERA kuch keh nahi paayi kyunki AUGMENTOR turant ek ray me badal uske andar sama chuka tha..

aur aisa hote hi KLERA ki tez cheekh nikli jo har guzarte pal ke saath badhti chali gayi...

REASON...

AUGMENTOR ne andar ghuste hi SWORD haasil kar liya tha aur aisa hote hi KLERA ki body centre se fathne lagi aur kuch hi soconds me uski body beech se tear hote hue do parts me left right gir chuki thi..

aur ab mere saamne tha AUGMENTOR jiske haathon me thi surya si chamakti SWORD..

us SWORD se nikal rahi urja itni zyada thi ki uski shakti ko mehsoos kar AUGMENTOR apne ghutno par aa chuka tha...

woh EMPEROR ka sharir jiske andar woh is waqt tha,woh SWORD ki urja aur taakat ko jhel nahi paa rahi thi aur isiliye jagah se jagah se woh sharir fatne laga tha..

par is dard ko bhi AUGMENTOR khushi se jhel raha tha..

aur woh isiliye kyunki uske haathon me is waqt woh ek maatra chiz thi jo uske PLANET ko khatm kar sakti thi..

waise bhi,usse SWORD haasil toh karna tha nahi balki usse hamesha ke liye khatm karna tha..

aur isiliye apne ek haath ko joki kamzori ki wajah se kaamp raha tha,usse neeche floor ko touch kiya AUGMENTOR ne aur...


DASHANAMGRAHAM SHAKTIYEM PRAKATAM

10 PLANETS POWER APPEAR


is SPELL ko uccharit kiya usne aur uske aisa karte hi jahan usne haath rakh SPELL bola tha,woh jagah vibrate hone lagi aur dheere dheere us jagah ki mitti galni shuru ho gayi..

kuch hi palon me AUGMENTOR aur mere beech ek 10 metre lambi aur utni hi chowdi JWALAMUKHI prakat ho chuki thi jisme beh rahi lava ki garm aanch normal lava ki garmi se 1000 times zyada thi...

wahin jaise hi woh jwalamukhi prakat hui toh behadh khush hote hue mujhe dekha AUGMENTOR ne aur...


AUGMENTOR-jaante ho ye jwalamukhi asal me kya hai RAAZ...???

jin 10 PLANETS ke khatm hone ke baad unke kano se ALIUM bana,unhi PLANETS ki mili hui taakat hai ye..

ye jwala mukhi aur isme behne waala lava pure bramhand me ek matra aisi taakat hai jo GOD ke banaya is SWORD ko galakar khatm kar sakti hai..


AUGMENTOR ki baat sun khudko free karne ki naakamiyab koshish karne laga mai aur mujhe yun zor lagate dekh muskurakar apni kaampte haathon se SWORD ko aage kiye AUGMENTOR ne aur agle hi pal..


CSSHHHHHCSSHHHHH....


woh SWORD us jwalamukhi ke andar sama chuki thi aur aisa hote hi usne galna shuru kar diya tha aur ye dekh face par ek vijayi muskaan liye...



AUGMENTOR-



kiya tera sara joddojahad BEKAAR GAYA...

jeet hi jaayega tu,ye atti aatm vishwas tujhe MAAR GAYA...

tu akela naakam nahi hua hai RAAZ....!!!!

tere saath aaj tera KHUDA bhi HAAR GAYA....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....

















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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SHOWHI VALDIS KI WHITE ENERGY SOKH USSE KHUD ME SAMA LETA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ BRAWL OF LEGACY KE BAAKI PAANCHON WARRIORS KO KHATM KAR DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-164



PLANET-GOLETH


PLACE-THE DARK DIFFUSION







HAAN,WOH TOH HAI..BUT AB ISKA KYA KAREN..??


RAAZ ke baare me jo ALFREEN ne kaha,uspar sehmati jatayi HIDA ne jiske baad VALDIS ko dekh sawal pucha usne jispar...


MABEL-karna kya hai,saanp hai ye,kuchal dena hi sahi hoga...

VALDIS-haan, saanp hun mai,par mujhe kuchal dene ka dum tum sabme nahi hai..


MABEL ki baat par koi kuch kehta,usse pehle hi VALDIS ne ek jhatke apni jagah par khade hote hue apni baat kahi..

ENERGY restore ho chuki thi uski,par WHITE ENERGY ka aakhri kan bhi jaa chuka tha uski body se...

iska ehsas ho chuka tha VALDIS ko aur isiliye apni dehekti aankhon se SHOWHI ko dekh raha tha VALDIS...

aur isse pehle ki koi uski baat par kuch kehta...


SAMPURN SHAKTIYEM JAAGRATAM


khudke andar beh rahi BLACK ENERGY ko feel karte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya VALDIS ne jiske baad..


DDHHPPPPPP..

uski puri body kaali shakti ki urja se naha si uthi..

us urja ki shakti ko ALFREEN aur baaki sab bhi mehsoos kar rahe the...

bina WHITE ENERGY ke bhi VALDIS kitna strong tha,ye jaan chuke the woh sab..

aur isiliye VALDIS se nipatne ke liye ALFREEN thoda aage badhne ko hui par tabhi...


ACCHUTA-ALFREEN...isse mai ladhunga...


ALFREEN ke side me aate hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar woh kuch kehti,usse pehle...


ACCHUTA-bharosa rakho..is pure safar me bas baisakhi ke sahare hi chale hain hum..

par ab bas...ab pair kamzor nahi rahe mere aur agar phir bhi kahin ladhkhada jaaun,toh khudke dum par sambhalna chahta hun mai...


aankhon me determination ki aag liye kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jiske baad ALFREEN ek kadam piche hath gayi...

wahin is dauran VALDIS ne bhi apne puri kaali urja shakti ke roop me samet li thi...

aise me is ACCHUTA ki baat sun muskuraya VALDIS aur...


VALDIS-mout teri bohot taklif deh banane waala hun mai...

ACCHUTA-chalo,kisi baat par toh ek dusre ke liye hamare khayal milte hain...


KADKADKAD......


apni baat bol bilkul VALDIS ki hi tarah apne dono haath faila diye ACCHUTA ne aur uske aisa karte hi uski GOD GIFTED POWERS se bani BOW aur ARROW ki urja uske AMPLIFICATION modes ki shaktiyon ke saath merge hote hue uske pure sharir me circulate karne lagi...

sirf aantarik bhaagon me hi nahi,balki us urja ki chamak aur taakat ACCHUTA ke bahari sharir ke har ang me chamakte hue dikhne lagi thi jisse dekh jahan ek taraf ALFREEN bhi usse kaafi impress ho gayi thi wahin dusri taraf VALDIS ki aankhein hairat se badi ho chuki thi..

ACCHUTA ne jab kuch der pehle BOW aur ARROW prakat kiya tha,tab uski taakat mehsoos ki thi VALDIS ne par is baar AMPLIFICATION modes ke saath merge hone ke kaaran ye urja aur uski taakat kayi guna badh chuke the...

aur is badhi hui taakat ko saaf mehsoos kar paa raha tha VALDIS...

kuch seconds pehle tak uska woh dikh raha confidence bhi ACCHUTA ke body se generate ho rahi shakti ko feel kar damadol hone laga tha..

khair,jab ACCHUTA ko apni AMPLIFICATION aur GOD GIFTED POWERS ki merged shakti se bani depth ache se feel hone lagi toh chamakti aankhon se dekha usne VALDIS ko aur...


ACCHUTA-tujhe MABEL ke liye galat bolna roh door,galat sochna bhi nahi chahiye tha...


BOOMMMM....

SLUNDER-woooo..good shot buddy...


apni baat kehne ke dauran hi ACCHUTA ne apne dono haathon ko ek saath aage karte hue ek clap sa kiya..

ye ek rub-of power amplifier tarika tha energy release karne ka jiska asar wakayi kamal ka hua..

ACCHUTA ke clap karte hi uske dono hatheliyon ke beech se ek shock wave sa nikla jo bijli si tezi ikhtiyar karta hua VALDIS ki taraf badh gaya..

waise VALDIS kisi bhi attack ke liye taiyar hi tha aur isiliye ACCHUTA ki shock waves ko mehsoos kar usse block karne ke liye usne apne haath aage ki taraf lehraye aur uske waisa karte hi uske saamne ek strong dark barrier ban gaya aur theek tabhi ACCHUTA ka released shock wave us dark barrier se takraya aur jaise hi ye contact hua,ek tez dhamaka hua jiske asar se naa sirf VALDIS ka barrier kisi taash ke mehel ki tarah deh gaya balki saath hi saath ACCHUTA ke shock wave ne VALDIS ko bhi apne chapet me le liye..

barrier break karte hue usne VALDIS ko bhi hit kar diya jiske baad ek jhatka khaate hue VALDIS kayi feet tak udta hua peeche ki taraf jaakar gira...

aur yahi dekh SLUNDER ne taarif ki thi ACCHUTA ki...

khair,barrier ki wajah se bas jaan hi bach paayi thi VALDIS ki baaki haalat kaafi kharab ho chuki thi uski..

shock wave me nihit ACCHUTA ki merged AMPLIFICATION aur GOD GIFTED power ke lagne ki wajah se sharir ke kaafi parts fath gaye the VALDIS ke aur un saare parts se khoon ris raha tha....

par ye sirf external damage tha..main damage uske VALDIS ke internal parts me aaya tha..

AMPLIFICATION mode ko shakti hone ki wajah se ACCHUTA ki shock wave me chuppi rays sidhe VALDIS ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me sama chuki thi..

aisa hone ke kaaran VALDIS ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes jinme kaali shaktiyon ka waas tha,woh unstable aur restless hote hue ACCHUTA ki rays ko consume karne ki koshish kar rahe the and in the process,woh khudko aur apne saath VALDIS ko bhi unbearable pain pahuncha rahe the..

honth bhi kaafi fath gaye the uske jinme kinaro se is waqt uske body ke andar ho rahe pain aur push ki wajah se khoon nikalne laga tha..

body puri kaampti hui apni bigdi halaat bayan kar rahi thi..

aur in sabke beech uske theek saamne khada tha ACCHUTA jisse VALDIS ki bigdi haalat dekhkar koi daya nahi aayi thi..

infact,abhi bhi uske dimag me VALDIS ki MABEL ke liye gandi niyat hi ghum rahi thi aur yahi wajah thi ki aankhon me dikh rahi chingari ko barkarar rakhte hue is waqt ACCHUTA ke haathon me ek complete dissaray beam ki light chamakne lagi thi...

is beam ke hit karte hi VALDIS ki body completely fath jaani thi aur yahi ACCHUTA ka irada bhi tha..

kuch der us beam ko apne haaton me circulate karte hue uski shakti ko mehsoos karta raha ACCHUTA aur phir..

ek jhatke me apne haathon ko neeche gire pade VALDIS ki taraf kar diya usne aur uske waisa karte hi uski haathon ki beam tezi se VALDIS ki taraf badh gayi...

ek taraf thi woh beam jiski gati light se bhi zyada tez thi aur uske nishane me tha VALDIS jo abhi aisi haalat me pada tha ki kachhua bhi usse agar race lagaye toh jeet jaaye..


SWWWWSSSS.....


woh BEAM sidhe VALDIS ke chest ko penetrate karne hi waali thi ki tabhi woh achanak se VALDIS ki chest ke bas ek inch paas pahunch rook gayi..

aur ye dekh ACCHUTA aur uske sabhi saathi hairan ho gaye..par agle hi pal unki hairani aur saath hi saath dard bhi thoda aur badh gaya reason..


BOOMMMM.


ek jhatke me hi us beam ne u turn le liya aur double speed ke saath khudko kuch rays me divide karti hui ACCHUTA aur uske sabhi saathiyon ko jaakar hit ho gayi..

aisa hote hi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA, MABEL aur SHOWHI neeche gir gaye wahin ALFREEN ke kadam bhi piche ki taraf dagmagaye par usne khudko girne nahi diya..

khair,girne ke agle hi pal woh sab wapas khade ho chuke the aur isse pehle ki woh abhi hue humle ki jadh talashte,woh 3 jadh un sabke saamne khudhi prakat ho chuke the...


HEMINE...AROZ...TIFER..


prakat hokar kuch der wahan moujud sabhi ko ghurte rahe woh teeno jiske baad...


HEMINE-ab tak saans le rahe ho,kya hamari itni udaarta kaafi nahi hai tum logon ke liye...!!!!

ALFREEN-kadh zaroor badh gaya hai tera par mat bhool ki abhi abhi paida hui hai tu...

aur daiper pehenane ki umr me apne badon ko unki chaadar ke size naapne ka gyan nahi diya karte...

HEMINE-ALFREEN... apne bhai ki hi tarah moohfath par kamzor ho tum....

sirf zubaan chalana hi aata hai,par koi baat nahi,aaj dhadkan ke saath saath zubaan bhi band ho jaayegi tumhari...


ALFREEN jaanti thi ki HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER kya cheez hain..

un teeno ki taakat asal me VIDEOUS ki taakat se bani hai jisse jeetna aur woh bhi tab jab woh teeno saath ho,uske aur uske saathiyon ke liye filhal naamumkin hai,par apne bhai ki hi tarah challenge se back out karna aata nahi tha usse aur isiliye khudko hone waale battle ke liye taiyar kar chuki thi woh..

wahin apni baat keh HEMINE ne ek sharp look diya ALFREEN ko jiske baad uske sharir se ussiki shakti se bana ek bada sa DARK JAVELIN numa astr nikal ALFREEN ki taraf badh gaya....


SNSNSNNN..


ye awaaz us vibration ki thi jo us DARK JAVELIN se nikal rahi thi..

ye koi mamuli vibrations nahi the..is vibration se lagatar release ho rahi shakti ki pravah itni zyada thi ki woh DARK DIFFUSION ki jagah jahan woh sab moujud the,woh bhi halki halki shake karne lag gayi thi..

darasal HEMINE ek jhatke me hi ALFREEN ko khatm karna chahti thi aur isiliye usne apne hi body ki taakat se bane astra se humla kiya tha...

wahin ALFREEN bhi us javelin se nikal rahi immense taakat ko feel kar chuki thi aur usse bachne ke liye khudko taiyar kar rahi thi but woh jaanti thi ki ye mushkil hone waala hai..

khair,apne haath aage kar us javelin ki speed aur asar ko kam karne ke liye apni AGATHOKAK powers ko circulate karne lag gayi thi ALFREEN.

uske aisa karte hi ek GREY ray uske haath me chamakne lagi thi..

ab tak woh energy se bhara JAVELIN ALFREEN ke kareeb pahunch chuka tha aur usse takrane hi wala tha ki tabhi...


SOOBBBBHHHHHH...


us JAVELIN ke ird gird ek aisi tez hawa chali jisse uski ab tak ki bani hui bhayankar speed naa ke barabar ho gayi...

is drastic turn of event ko dekh HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ke face par halka sa shock dikhne hi lage the ki us hairani ko aur badhate hue....

woh hawa ka tez jhonka dheere dheere shaant hone laga aur aisa hote waqt us hawa me ek aakruti banane lagi jisne us JAVELIN ko hold kar liya aur aisa karte hi woh aakruti apne asal human form me ALFREEN ke theek saamne khadi thi jisse dekh..


ACCHUTA/ SLUNDER/ BRAWNY/ HIDA/ MABEL/ SHOWHI/ALFREEN-

.......MAHI......


khush hote hue apne saamne khadi ladki joki un sabki dost aur is kahani ki mukhya naayika MAHI thi,uska naam liya un sabne jispar ek baar palat un sabko dekh muskurate hue wapas saame sir kar HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ko dekha MAHI ne aur..


MAHI-missed me...

SOOBBBHHHH...

woh JAVELIN jisme ab bhi HEMINE ki released shakti ke kaaran kampan ho rahi thi,uspar apni ungliyon ki giraft thodi tight ki MAHI ne aur agle hi pal tezi se us JAVELIN ko HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ki taraf fekh diya usne...

double speed liye woh JAVELIN theek HEMINE aur uske dono saathiyon ke saamne zamin par dhas gaya.

aisa hote hi us JAVELIN se release hui HEMINE aur uske saath saath MAHI ki AMPLIFICATION mode ki power joki ab HEAVENLY thi..

HEMINE aur uske dono saathiyon ko apne ird gird ki zamin par bhukamp sa feel hue jiski wajah se un teeno ke pair halke hi sahi ladkhada gaye the...

jahan un teeno ko ladhkhadata dekh MAHI muskura rahi thi wahin HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER MAHI ko apni jalti hui aankhon se dekh rahe the..

wahin in sabke beech ALFREEN jo waise toh MAHI ko dekh bohot khush hui thi,par woh khud ek baar un teeno se bhidna chahti thi aur isiliye..


ALFREEN-kya yaar MAHI..???i wanted to fight them...

MAHI-and indeed you will...is HEMINE ko tu hi sambhalegi,baaki dono ko mai dekhti hun...

ready guyzz...the real game starts now.......





PLANET-ALIUM


PLACE-THE GRAVE





TUM WAKAYI BOHOT ZYADA SHAKTISHAALI HO...



apni jagah se uth meri taraf badhte hue kahi ye baat us EMPEROR ne...

uske piche piche woh AUGMENTOR bhi chal pada tha..

khair, apni baat ko jaari rakhte hue...


EMPEROR-sadiyon se hum ALIUM waasiyon ko ye bataya jaata raha hai ki hum bramhaand me base ek aise planet me rehte hain jahan baahri planets ke logon ka aana pratibandhit hai..

aur saath hi hamara bhi is planet ke daayre se bahar jaane par rok hai..

par aaj pehli baar tumhare roop me koi bahari vykati is pratibhandhit grah ke andar hai..

issi baat se tumhari bejod shakti ka andaza lagaya jaa sakta hai...

kintu,ek sach aur bhi hai...haan,ye sach hai ki mai tumhe maar nahi sakta,maarna toh door,tumhe haani bhi nahi pahuncha sakta par haani tum bhi mujhe nahi pahuncha sakte...

apne peeche chal rahe AUGMENTOR ko dekh kahi ye baat us EMPEROR ne jisse sun ek smile naach uthi mere face par aur mai bhi chalta hua theek uske saamne jaakar khada ho gaya..

aisa kar usse chhune ke iraade se haath aage badhaya maine par mera haath uske body se bas 2 inch door aakar hi rook gaya yaa phir ye kahun ki AUGMENTOR ke banaye kawach ke kaaran rok diya gaya aur ye dekh..


EMPEROR-kaha tha maine..haani pahunchana toh door ki baat hai,tu chhu bhi nahi sakta mujhe..

MAI-you know the thing is ki confidence tab jaayaz aur sahi lagta hai jab woh apne dum par dikhaya jaaye..

bhaade me mili taakat aur suraksha naa toh apni hoti hai aur naahi permanent..

prove karun...!!!


apni baat bolte hue hi maine apne andar nihit bohot si shakti ke sources ko apne moothi me channelize karna shuru kar diya tha aur jab woh saari shaktiyan aur unse bani ray mere moothi par ikattha hui toh..


BOOMMMM.....

ek tez punch maara maine apne saamne bane invisible shield par aur mere aisa karte hi ek dhamake ke saath woh shield toot gayi..

waise toh woh EMPEROR abhi bhi apni jagah par hi khada tha par mere mookke ka jo asar hua tha,usse feel kar liya tha usne..

woh jaan gaya tha ki uski sochi hui IMPENETRABLE SHIELD toot chuki hai aur isiliye ab tak jo confidence uske face par dikh raha tha,woh ab dar me convert ho chuka tha..

hadh se zyada kaampte hue woh do kadam piche hath gaya tha aur ab gayab hokar bhaagne ke firak me tha..

wahin SHIELD ke break hote hi maine bhi apne kadam EMPEROR ki taraf badha diya the par tabhi...


MAAF KIJIYEGA YOUR HIGHNESS...PAR MUJHE AAPKE SHARIR KI ZAROORAT PADEGI...


ye shabd bole the us AUGMENTOR ne jo is waqt us EMPEROR ke just piche khada tha aur jisse sun mere badhte kadam rook chuke the..

wahin us AUGMENTOR ki baat sun woh EMPEROR kuch bolta,usse pehle hi AUGMENTOR ne uske back ko touch kar diya aur uske waisa karte hi...

AHHHHHHHH.....

ek hriday vidarak cheekh us EMPEROR ke mooh se nikal chuki thi...

REASON....

jaise hi AUGMENTOR ne uske back ko touch kiya toh uski peeth beech se tear hoti hui do hisso me bat alag hone lagi...

aisa hone par uthe asahaniya dard ki wajah se cheekha woh EMPEROR..

wahin uske back ko do hisson me alag kar ek raasta banane ke baad AUGMENTOR aage badha aur agle hi pal woh us EMPEROR ki body me tha..

aisa hote hi us EMPEROR ka joki ab AUGMENTOR me badal chuka tha,uski back puri tarah theek ho gayi jiske baad..


AUGMENTOR-yaa toh SWORD mujhe de do yaa hamesha ke liye yahan rook ALIUM ke forever EMPEROR ki padhwi sweekar karo...

MAI-to tum ho is planet ki chuppi taakat...

AUGMENTOR-jawab do RAAZ... what's it gonna be...???

MAI- option three chununga mai..i will cut your throat,end this PLANET and then leave...


apni baat kehte hue hi mai tezi se AUGMENTOR ki taraf badh chuka tha...

fraction of a second se bhi kam waqt me uske saamne khada ho chuka tha mai aur aisa hote hi uske gale ko ghumane waala tha mai par tabhi...


DHABBBBBBBB.....


us AUGMENTOR ne ek strong push kiya mere chest ko jiski wajah se mai udta hua sidhe us battle BEDROCK ke edge par jaakar gira..

wahin pehle maine jo taakat dikhayi thi aur un paanch champions ke saath bheed se bhi paanch logon ko involve kar unhe marwa diya tha,ye dekh baaki sab toh bhaag khade hue the siway ek ke.

KLERA...jo mere dar se abhi bhi wahin moujud thi...

par jahan mujhe yun girta dekh AUGMENTOR shaant hi khada raha wahin KLERA ke face par itne waqt ke baad pehli baar smile naach uthi thi...

itni der se woh aisa hi kuch toh dekhna chahti thi jo ab finally uski nazaron ke saamne tha.

khair,girte hi mai turant uthkar khada ho gaya aur mujhe khada hota dekh...


AUGMENTOR-

JADHDHAMITEH...

STATUE...


mujhe dekh apna haath lehrate hue uccharit kiya ye ancient SPELL usne aur uske waisa karte hi meri body akadte hue sthir ho gayi..

mai apne body parts hila nahi paa raha tha..

mujhe ek living breathing statue me badal woh AUGMENTOR meri taraf badha aur ye dekh...


KLERA-yes AUGMENTOR.finish him..tear him apart...


chillate hue kahi ye baat KLERA ne jispar itni der me pehli baar smile naach uthi AUGMENTOR ke face par..

ab tak woh mere saamne pahunch chuka tha jiske baad...


AUGMENTOR-give me the SWORD RAAZ...

MAI-bheek maangna chhod aur mujhme ghus khud nikal le...

AUGMENTOR-hahaha...tumhe kya lagta hai RAAZ...tumhare chuppaye secret aur usse banane ke tarike se anjaan hun mai...

jis pal tumne ALIUM me apne kadam rakha tha,tabse hi meri nazar tumpar hai..

woh bhi inside out...

HIRO BHAVATI,SIRO BHAVATI...aur in do SPELLS ke mixture se bana HISIRO BHAVATI....

issi SPELL ki madad se tumne apne SWORD ko HIDE kar sab kuch normal SHOW kiya hua hai, right...!!!!


AUGMENTOR ki baat sun mere face par jo shocking expressions aaye,unhe dekh uski muskurahat aur gehri ho gayi jiske baad..


AUGMENTOR-

tum taakatwar toh ho RAAZ par itni shakti ke saath jo buddhi honi chahiye,woh nahi hai tumme..

tumhe kya laga ki tum HISIRO BHAVATI ke spell se mujhe dhoke me rakh paaoge...

NO ONE CAN MASTER ANY SPELL THAT CAN CHEAT ME...


ye bol AUGMENTOR muda aur sidhe KLERA ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya aur...


AUGMENTOR-you want me to tear him apart,right..???

KLERA-yes...

AUGMENTOR-hmm..par uske liye tumhe ek kaam karna hoga..

KLERA-anything to make him suffer...

AUGMENTOR-very well then..from the middle,tear yourself into two parts...

KLERA-what...???


hadbadakar chownkte hue kahi ye baat KLERA ne jispar...


AUGMENTOR-karna toh nahi chahta mai par is RAAZ ne mere paas aur koi option hi nahi chhoda...

jaanti ho tumhe ab tak zinda kyun chhoda hua tha isne..???

ek SWORD hai iske paas...ek aisi SWORD jisse hamara ye beautiful planet khatm ho sakta hai...

isiliye perfect time aane tak isne us SWORD ko kahin chuppane ki sochi..

HISIRO BHAVATI SPELL se SWORD ki shakti ke asar ko chuppate hue ye waisa kar sakta tha..

jaanti ho kahan chuppaya isne us SWORD ko...???

KLERA-mere andar...


aankhon me hairat aur mere liye nafrat liye mujhe dekhte hue kahi ye baat KLERA ne jispar..


AUGMENTOR-smart girl...haan,isne us SWORD ko apni kuch ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ki barrier ke extra protection ke saath tumhare andar chuppa diya taaki jab woh waqt aaye jab is planet ki main shakti joki mai hun,iske andar samaye toh theek ussi waqt tumhe maarkar us SWORD ko tumhe cheer kar nikaal ye ALIUM ko khtam kar sake...

KLERA-but why me...???mai hi kyun...???

AUGMENTOR-is dharti par kadam rakhte hi tumhara hunar jo dekh liya tha isne...

tum ek POWER SUCKER ho..aur aise vyakti me apni chizen chuppana baakiyon ke mukable zyada asaan aur kaargar hota hai...

smart move but not smart enough for me...

so the thing is ki tumhara marna toh ussi waqt nishchit ho chuka tha jab tum iske radar me aayi thi...

toh aise me apne PLANET ko bachane ke liye marna apne dushman ke liye marne se toh zyada hi accha hai naa...

KLERA-please,i beg you.. leave me.. koi toh aur raasta hoga mujhse us SWORD ko nikalne ka...!!!

AUGMENTOR-common KLERA..woh koi maamuli SWORD nahi hai..

agar hota toh kya mai tumhe kurbaan hone deta...

KLERA-but phir bhi..
AHHHHHHHH...


aage KLERA kuch keh nahi paayi kyunki AUGMENTOR turant ek ray me badal uske andar sama chuka tha..

aur aisa hote hi KLERA ki tez cheekh nikli jo har guzarte pal ke saath badhti chali gayi...

REASON...

AUGMENTOR ne andar ghuste hi SWORD haasil kar liya tha aur aisa hote hi KLERA ki body centre se fathne lagi aur kuch hi soconds me uski body beech se tear hote hue do parts me left right gir chuki thi..

aur ab mere saamne tha AUGMENTOR jiske haathon me thi surya si chamakti SWORD..

us SWORD se nikal rahi urja itni zyada thi ki uski shakti ko mehsoos kar AUGMENTOR apne ghutno par aa chuka tha...

woh EMPEROR ka sharir jiske andar woh is waqt tha,woh SWORD ki urja aur taakat ko jhel nahi paa rahi thi aur isiliye jagah se jagah se woh sharir fatne laga tha..

par is dard ko bhi AUGMENTOR khushi se jhel raha tha..

aur woh isiliye kyunki uske haathon me is waqt woh ek maatra chiz thi jo uske PLANET ko khatm kar sakti thi..

waise bhi,usse SWORD haasil toh karna tha nahi balki usse hamesha ke liye khatm karna tha..

aur isiliye apne ek haath ko joki kamzori ki wajah se kaamp raha tha,usse neeche floor ko touch kiya AUGMENTOR ne aur...


DASHANAMGRAHAM SHAKTIYEM PRAKATAM

10 PLANETS POWER APPEAR


is SPELL ko uccharit kiya usne aur uske aisa karte hi jahan usne haath rakh SPELL bola tha,woh jagah vibrate hone lagi aur dheere dheere us jagah ki mitti galni shuru ho gayi..

kuch hi palon me AUGMENTOR aur mere beech ek 10 metre lambi aur utni hi chowdi JWALAMUKHI prakat ho chuki thi jisme beh rahi lava ki garm aanch normal lava ki garmi se 1000 times zyada thi...

wahin jaise hi woh jwalamukhi prakat hui toh behadh khush hote hue mujhe dekha AUGMENTOR ne aur...


AUGMENTOR-jaante ho ye jwalamukhi asal me kya hai RAAZ...???

jin 10 PLANETS ke khatm hone ke baad unke kano se ALIUM bana,unhi PLANETS ki mili hui taakat hai ye..

ye jwala mukhi aur isme behne waala lava pure bramhand me ek matra aisi taakat hai jo GOD ke banaya is SWORD ko galakar khatm kar sakti hai..


AUGMENTOR ki baat sun khudko free karne ki naakamiyab koshish karne laga mai aur mujhe yun zor lagate dekh muskurakar apni kaampte haathon se SWORD ko aage kiye AUGMENTOR ne aur agle hi pal..


CSSHHHHHCSSHHHHH....


woh SWORD us jwalamukhi ke andar sama chuki thi aur aisa hote hi usne galna shuru kar diya tha aur ye dekh face par ek vijayi muskaan liye...



AUGMENTOR-



kiya tera sara joddojahad BEKAAR GAYA...

jeet hi jaayega tu,ye atti aatm vishwas tujhe MAAR GAYA...

tu akela naakam nahi hua hai RAAZ....!!!!

tere saath aaj tera KHUDA bhi HAAR GAYA....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....


















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